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/wg/ - Writing General - Boton Edition Anonymous Sat Jul 31 03:42:39 2021 No.7313293 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>7239245

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 03:45:14 2021 No.7313336
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>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 03:46:10 2021 No.7313350 File: 39 KB, 554x554, fox.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] STORY ANCHOR POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 04:29:25 2021 No.7313937 >>7313293 Boston my beloved

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:26:39 2021 No.7314855 question for the dead hours: what are you writeanons working on? Also, what works are you expecting/excited for?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:28:22 2021 No.7314899 >>7314855 Do you really have to ask this every thread?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:30:13 2021 No.7314939 >>7314899 Nyart but why not?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:30:41 2021 No.7314950 >>7314855 Waiting for the several FBK fics in the works. Feels like waiting for Christmas.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:30:53 2021 No.7314952 >>7314855 I'm working on my final chapter of My sunshine, my warmth. All the words in my head wants to come out immediately, but my damned fingers are too slow.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:31:31 2021 No.7314964 >>7314939 Because the answers won’t change from the old thread

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:34:50 2021 No.7315043 >>7314899 because it serves as a way for writeanons to give updates on their works, and I always slightly change up the question for different input.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:36:10 2021 No.7315070 >>7314855 i'm workin' on sunshine whoooooooooooa

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:37:16 2021 No.7315090 >>7314855 Working on a fic based on Suisei's most recent cover and as for what I'm excited for, any of the long fics.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:38:33 2021 No.7315107

>>7314952
Here's where I'm at so far on the chapter.

>Gura released Amelia’s waist to go explore. The smells were at once both salty and earthy, as if this were somewhere only animals had frequented. Not a trace of human influence to be sensed anywhere. Fresh ocean air flooded Gura’s human lungs, bringing wonderful memories of home. Gura wanted to jump in the water and swim her fishy heart out. Amelia watched Gura run straight into the water, kicking up sand in her excitement.

>The water felt cool on her skin, crystal clear at this depth despite the sea foam. Her gills opened up from contact with seawater, making Gura noticed how easy it felt to breathe water again. Each gulp lasting far longer than usual. This was the most oxygen rich water she’s ever tasted.

>There were very few waves at this coast, calm winds and waters all the way out into the ocean. She dove her head down to see a densely forested body of seaweed just below the surface, teaming with colorful life. Some small, most colossal. Just beneath the plant life were enormous arthropods skittering in the sand. Which was pretty creepy, Gura didn’t want to fight anything so armored.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:38:56 2021 No.7315117 >>7315043 They can post updates by themselves.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:41:07 2021 No.7315167 >>7314855 I've had a kernel of an idea rolling around in my head where (You) are the latest recruit to the Mythbreakers cell and engage in chuuni monster-hunting bullshit and maybe romance one of the girls. Or Watoto.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:43:27 2021 No.7315218 >>7315117 maybe writeanons are a bit shy...

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:43:39 2021 No.7315222 >>7315117 No, I will literally not ever post an update without that question being asked.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 05:47:04 2021 No.7315310 File: 190 KB, 470x427, 1627361621249.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7314855 I'm drawing up the concept for 'A Lion who pounced through time'. Should I go full chunni, or full operator or a mixture of both? Who knows.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 06:03:22 2021 No.7315655 >>7313336 JK Nene's first time doing enjo kōsai where you take advantage of her dorky naïveté to use and abuse her, starting with forcefully holding her to you/making her touch you, groping, etc. all the way up to rape ending with heart eyes.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 06:17:07 2021 No.7315985 >>7315655 >rape ending with heart eyes If it ends with heart eyes it's not rape

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 06:31:48 2021 No.7316333 File: 242 KB, 1500x1057, E7POg4vVgAAyJ6E.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Chapter 18 of my long-ass GurAme fanfic is finished. The next chapter will probably the final. https://archiveofourown.org/works/32559157/chapters/81739798

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 06:36:11 2021 No.7316425 >>7315985 Yes, that's where the rape ends. Then it becomes consensual rape.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 06:46:43 2021 No.7316632 >>7315222 This.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:31:50 2021 No.7317339 File: 308 KB, 753x424, 1627726543689.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7316425 That's mind break you shit. Its still hot, but its a different thing entirely.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:47:38 2021 No.7317576 >>7315310 Not gonna lie a story that goes full chuuni would be a first for wg. Kind of interested in seeing where that would go.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:51:51 2021 No.7317661 >>7313937 Button...

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:55:34 2021 No.7317733 >>7313937 Bosom…

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:56:38 2021 No.7317761 >>7313937 Bunyan...

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 07:59:03 2021 No.7317802 >>7313937 Bottom >I'm disappointed I'm the first that typed this.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:03:25 2021 No.7317901 >>7313937 Boobies...

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:04:30 2021 No.7317928 What does Botan's butthole taste like?

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:20:10 2021 No.7318290

Thinking of writing a proper series focusing on the imposter syndrome that most of the Holos seem to suffer from. Having some thoughts whether I should put a self-insert MC aka (You) or using one of the Holostars boys. If I use (You) as the MC, was thinking that you would be an ex-boyfriend of one of the Holos and abit of a loser, since I want to show the contrast between the Holos self perceived problems and (you)r actual, tangible problems. Also, your ex? It's Suisei.

Would love to hear your suggestions and input, as I'm keen on the core concept, but can't seem to flesh it out much.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:22:59 2021 No.7318358 >>7317928 gunpowder and disappointment in you.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:27:04 2021 No.7318452 >>7318290 (You)'re not going to die this time, are (you)?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:32:03 2021 No.7318556 >>7318452 hopefully not, I wouldn't want it to end in a similar fashion to the Menhera Wrangler Series which I recently wrote.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:35:08 2021 No.7318633 >>7318290 I think I just read this story the other day

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:40:07 2021 No.7318730 >>7318556 GOOD.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:47:49 2021 No.7318897 >>7318633 yeah I wrote that, but I felt it could do with more exposition and expanding on it so I can truly capture the turmoil of it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:51:50 2021 No.7318994 >>7318358 oh god yes

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 08:55:03 2021 No.7319074 >>7315107 Nice detail seems really good so far

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:10:16 2021 No.7319518 >Shion's back I swear as soon as I'm done with my current project I'll write that brat again.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:12:34 2021 No.7319596 >>7319518 Give it a week or so, she'll be gone again.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:17:35 2021 No.7319751 >>7319518 Ayame is here too, so write about that oni as well.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:18:04 2021 No.7319759 >>7319751 Who?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:22:41 2021 No.7319918 >>7319751 I've never written her before and have no idea how. Please describe her personality in 20 words or less.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:24:01 2021 No.7319966 >>7319918 Whore

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:25:03 2021 No.7320000 >>7319918 Cute and sweet girl with an amazing voice.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:25:56 2021 No.7320029 >>7320000 You just described like 90% of hololive.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:26:04 2021 No.7320036 >>7319918 Massive far-right nationalist that lives on daddy's money

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:27:48 2021 No.7320098 >>7319918 You'll get a lot of jokes in here but the truth is that she's Yagoo's daughter. All her actions and the lack of associated consequences can be explained by this.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:29:57 2021 No.7320178 >>7320000 quads dont lie

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:31:50 2021 No.7320255 >>7320178 I wouldve called her a selfish lazy airhead with a heart of gold, and a korean soap opera addiciton.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:32:17 2021 No.7320276 >>7314855 Im wondering if "rain makes the heart grow fonder" will be finished

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:33:28 2021 No.7320321 I am somehow even less sure of how to write Ayame than I was 10 minutes ago.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:33:58 2021 No.7320338 >>7320321 I fucking laughed so hard at this

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:35:14 2021 No.7320384 >>7320321 We're helping.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:37:28 2021 No.7320469 >>7320321 The one thing that you can be sure of, at least, is that she's one of the polarizing chuubas.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:38:50 2021 No.7320527 >>>7312915 Anon please I need a link, im fucking diamonds rn

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:40:06 2021 No.7320595 >>7320321 Watch some of Ayame's vids and get a feel for her. Im watching Botan play payday two and its pretty fun.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:41:57 2021 No.7320677 >>7320595 This, but don't forget that half her personality is in what she 'doesn't' do

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:46:33 2021 No.7320841 >>7320595 I was doing that for a Lamy thing and now I'm a Yukimin!

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:46:41 2021 No.7320845
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Sister Claire gets real tired of Aquas tomfoolery in church school.
Tired enough to force her to stay afterschool and pound her ass to get it through her simplistic mind who's in charge here.
https://files.catbox.moe/i0w7ql.png

And yes this is the same church school where Marine experiences her sexual awakening

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:48:48 2021 No.7320916 >>7320845 >futa nope

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 09:53:37 2021 No.7321073 >>7320841 That's good. That's a good point you could find out you actually like the tuber your researching. Hopefully Ayame decided to exist if he does.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:07:58 2021 No.7321679

>>7313336
Watching Fubuki's ASMR stream, I got overwhelmed by a mighty need...

(You) are Fubuki's younger shota brother.
You pretty much live in Fubuki's shadow, since she is much more popular, talented and overall better in anything than you. Despite that, she loves you more than anyone else and does not hesitate to show it - spoiling you, hugging you, buying you your favorite candy, cheering you up whenever she thinks you have to be, etc.
One day, after a particular hard day at school, you get home. The moment you set foot in, Fubuki is already at the door, as if sensing that something is not okay. A long "session" of spoiling follows - hugging you, petting your head, telling you that everything is okay, stuff like that.
However, as time goes on, the "session" gets more and more intimate - tighter hugs, light cheek kisses, her nibbling on your ears, telling you what a good little brother you are, carressing your whole body gently, etc.
(You) can tell it's wrong, yet you don't have it in you to tell your lovely older sister off.
And so, your older sister leads you to her room...

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:10:00 2021 No.7321769
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>>7313350
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTAmEc3FLkRPCuN_QAGw2-ZIem6r8HvVH0P5BUCm97BhEpiIy3ilCbGzdpIrZC16ZmgkgbqMjZ2NMQo/pub

After a few weeks of trying to write this, it's finally done. Incest fic sequel to Fox Family! I just hope you guys enjoy it and it was worth all the wait and hype.

I kinda want to make a bad end for this fic with Miyuki getting rejected and falling into a rabbit hole of corruption by her managers but that's already just an OC fic since it has nothing to do with Fubuki anymore.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:10:12 2021 No.7321775 >>7321679 So are (YOU) a foxboy or just a human in this case?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:10:22 2021 No.7321780 >>7312915 >>7320527 Seconding this, please I need a link to that I'm actually on my knees

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:11:05 2021 No.7321816 >>7321769 oh god i'm scared to click this because you can only read things for the first time once and i'm not horny atm

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:14:25 2021 No.7321965 >>7321775 Either works, so up to writer. (You) could be adopted, too, so who knows.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:17:57 2021 No.7322093 >>7320527 >>7321780 PER-351. Don't get your hopes up though. Just enjoy the show.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:18:33 2021 No.7322115 File: 53 KB, 955x671, 1627740600051.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7321679 I like it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:20:10 2021 No.7322182 >>7320916 I bet Sister gives em a whack with her schlong like it's a ruler.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:20:17 2021 No.7322189 >>7321769 Nice! Right after her monthly ASMR stream! Good timing.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:22:01 2021 No.7322248 >>7322093 Thank you, Anon! I skimmed through it - not as good as I thought it would be, but not nearly as bad as I feared, either. Overall, I think it'd make for a good wank material. Thank you once again!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:32:41 2021 No.7322678 I nutted so hard my hands are shaking and my brain isn't working properly Jesus christ

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:33:42 2021 No.7322710 >>7322678 fuck >>7321769

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 10:49:05 2021 No.7323279 >>7322678 The best kind of nut is the ones you can’t walk away from

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:17:10 2021 No.7324241

>>7313336
Considering how much /wg/ loves Fubuki, how about a Kurokami fic.
>Fuck Fubuki so hard she shifts into Kurokami.
>She starts dominating you
>Milks you so hard you don't have the opportunity to fuck her back.
Start of a comedy smut fic about trying to fuck Fubuki back to her regular self.
Could also be a fluffy drama piece about fubuki's repressed feelings towards you that she could only release in that state, aka the hidden Menhera side

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:18:16 2021 No.7324281 >>7320841 Make sure it goes no further than this

>>	Lamy Sat Jul 31 11:23:20 2021 No.7324420 >>7320841 Become....

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:28:06 2021 No.7324571

>>7321769
Ok I'm pretty sure I just fapped my way into a carpal tunnel diagnosis but it was worth it. Typing this one handed because it's too painful to use both hands.

Good job anon. A bit of repetition here and there but otherwise incredibly hot and hits all the right kinks.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:37:59 2021 No.7324843

>>7321769
Excellent work, anon. The sex scenes are top notch and erotic as hell. I only have one very subjective quibble, and that is... why does Miyuki speak like a prepubescent? "papa, please look at me", "mmph...wuv...wuv you...", the whole referring to herself in third person thing - given who her mother is, I expected her to be a little bit more teasing and assertive, but she basically guilted daddy's cock into her and mentally regressed 15 years during the whole thing. This is the only part that bothered me, but it was enough I couldn't get off.

But don't let that fool you into thinking you did a poor job because it's a seriously well-written work, with ample service given to each sex scene. Faves were all the oral scenes - the first BJ and Fubuki's cunnilingus in particular.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:41:22 2021 No.7324929 >>7324281 Well it was research for a Becoming Lamy story. One of my endless incompleted fragments of stories which never gets past outlines due to realizing it's become far too ambitious and never could be finished.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:46:00 2021 No.7325067

>>7324843
My reasoning behind the way Miyuki talks like that is because her dad is her most favourite person in the world. She'd want to get his attention all the time and acts cutesy and shit around him but not around others. If I end up becoming full degenerate and make the bad end story, I'll show off how she sounds like when talking to others.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:50:02 2021 No.7325210

>>7321769
Anon… god this was absolutely fucking amazing.

There’s some issues with repetition and weird wording but that’s all stuff that’s easy to look past, especially with smut.

Overall 12/10, the second blow Job especially was incredibly sexy and well written.

>spoiler
Just don’t go the metamorphosis route please.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:54:05 2021 No.7325343

>>7321769
I like it. Concept is kind of inherently flawed since it stretches being a chuuba fic due to miyuki being an OC that's by necessity the focus of the fic but the execution is actually pretty good for what it is.
Considering you're the same anon that wrote marathon and ryona play it's kind of expected that you'd make some more good smut so good job there.
Though I do think due to the whole flawed concept it just doesn't hit as good as marathon sex or ryona play.
I guess working on context and concept is the bit of criticism I can give since while the smut is good the setup did feel a bit off.
>>7324843
Anon. A shitload of hololive refers to themselves in third person.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 11:58:12 2021 No.7325480

>>7325067
'Bad end' story?... Godspeed, anon. If you choose to do so, I will be eagerly awaiting the output of your depravity.

Also, Miyuki's adult figure didn't have much to go on in terms of appearance. Do you have a better description, a pic ref, or is she perhaps a Fubuki clone with different-coloured hair?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:04:54 2021 No.7325745 Archive anon I'm not sure if you haven't woken up yet but the archive hasn't been updated with last thread's stories. Just mildly concerned about ya.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:09:14 2021 No.7325933 >>7325745 likely hasn't woken up yet.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:12:49 2021 No.7326063 >>7325933 >Ywn never make breakfast in bed or tuck archive anon in for a job well done

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:26:41 2021 No.7326481

>>7326063
>you will never kiss his forehead goodnight before going to sleep next to him
>ywn wake him up with a sloppy bj, and milk him dry before he's even showered
>ywn spoil him rotten with diverse and complex breakfasts such as bacon, peanut butter and eggs or 2 minute ramen
>ywn kiss him goodbye on his way to work at the /wg/ shitposting factory
>ywn greet him at the door in nothing but a mankini with a french kiss and a handjob
>ywn feel this happiness
jesus fuck why am i on this planet

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:28:06 2021 No.7326517
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>>7320845
Catholic school with Sister Claire!
>Risu forced to hold two buckets filled with Sister's nutjuice until her arms give out!
>Towa's dirty mouth getting "cleansed" by Sister's blessed penis!
>Marine convincing Subaru to join her school so she can receive "blessings" too!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:29:21 2021 No.7326546 >>7325480 I completely forgot to describe Miyuki. I guess it's up to the reader what they want Miyuki to look like, maybe she has big fat tits or is a mini Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:54:09 2021 No.7327162 >>7326063 >>7326481 y’all getting into the anon x anon pretty early this thread

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 12:55:55 2021 No.7327221 >>7327162 it's ok because it's archive anon. We all love him here.

>>	Lanomymous Sat Jul 31 13:11:31 2021 No.7327600 >>7314855 waiting for the hags story and the continuation of the loli polka sex fluff fic

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:11:43 2021 No.7327603 >>7327221 maybe too much

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:13:15 2021 No.7327639 >>7314855 Luna's assistant part 2

>>	Lanomymous Sat Jul 31 13:19:36 2021 No.7327783 >>7324929 Finish it anon...

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:38:27 2021 No.7328391 >>7327639 UOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:42:12 2021 No.7328534

>>7327639
>>7328391
No wait, were you replying to the >What are you working on, or the >What are you expecting/excited for? Since nothing ever goes like I want in life, i'm going to assume it was the latter and I misunderstood. Sorry for causing a scene

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:54:48 2021 No.7328992 File: 57 KB, 522x525, limmy.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7325745 Yeah I was dead asleep. I think I missed one or two so I gotta do a double check, but it's been updated. Sleep has been all over the place. >>7326063 >>7326481 pic rel

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:55:43 2021 No.7329025

>>7328391
>>7328534
Sorry anon. Luna's assistant author left very long ago. You do realize they've been mentioned pretty much every single thread for the past 30 threads without ever responding, right? Luna's assistant part 2 will never come, much like Half Life 3

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:58:25 2021 No.7329128 File: 44 KB, 627x671, Ed8DSk5VAAIjT6j.jpg large.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7329025 It was the first story I read from here that got me to nut, and inspired me to go back to writing. That's a sad realization.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 13:59:03 2021 No.7329151 >>7329025 They mentioned they were a horny thread poster. Maybe try there?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:01:56 2021 No.7329266 Wait huh? EN2?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:07:53 2021 No.7329460 >>7324241 Please I need this

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:11:23 2021 No.7329590 ANON! Where is Cold Steel Part 3?!?!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:11:42 2021 No.7329602 Haven't been here in months. Any new abuse stories?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:12:14 2021 No.7329628 >>7329025 Why are we still here? Just to gosling? Every night, I can feel my dick and my arm, even my fingers... the dignity I've lost... the cum I've lost... won't stop hurting

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:12:38 2021 No.7329647 >>7329590 Right here https://store.steampowered.com/app/991270/The_Legend_of_Heroes_Trails_of_Cold_Steel_III/

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:12:54 2021 No.7329666 >>7329602 check the archive

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:13:11 2021 No.7329678 >>7329602 Go to archive, Ctrl+F abuse, go from bottom to top.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:18:06 2021 No.7329865

Alright, anons I've decided to put my writing efforts into a new series focusing on the holo girls imposter syndrome, as mentioned here >>7318290, so give me a list of the girls who suffer from imposter syndrome the most, other than Suisei and Polka. It's gonna be another painful ride, boys.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:19:15 2021 No.7329909 File: 188 KB, 318x269, 1626192865883.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7329647

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:19:58 2021 No.7329936 >>7329865 that's kinda sus anon.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:20:46 2021 No.7329968 >>7329865 Gura

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:21:07 2021 No.7329978 File: 1.41 MB, 900x1200, 1627077964256.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7329865 Poruka! Write about Poruka! Write ONLY about Poruka!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:21:38 2021 No.7330000 >>7327162 parasocial releationship with archiveanon LETS GOOOOOOO

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:22:08 2021 No.7330021 >>7329865 Fubuki, It's always Fubuki.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:23:06 2021 No.7330054 >>7329865 Kanata

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:27:57 2021 No.7330211 >>7329865 Shion, if only because I want to see that fucking brat break under the pressure

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:31:23 2021 No.7330330 >>7330211 I want to see that brat with a mouth full of cock.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:33:47 2021 No.7330424 >>7329865 maybe Rushia? I think so far she hasn't gotten anything besides porn or tragedy-porn

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:33:49 2021 No.7330425 >>7330211 >"Dirty Oji-san's expectaions of me are too high!" >You're at most 18 months older than her

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:39:21 2021 No.7330597

>>7329968
>>7330054
>>7330211
great suggestions, will mull over on how to include them in. For context, (You) are quite apathetic towards them and the whole idol culture(thanks to depression and being a black goat of society), and don't really give them any excuse to wallow in self pity. I want to focus more on (you) being the "bad guy" and the contrasts between the tangible problems you have and their supposed issues. Just think of a constantly tired man with eternal eyebags and a heavy smoking problem having to deal with these girls.

>>7329978
don't worry, I plan to make her a major character in this series.

>>7330021
sorry, but honestly not really feeling like including her in this, especially after all I wrote her in.

>>7330424
Not really sure on how her imposter syndrome manifests, enlighten while I do more viewing reps.

>>7330000
witnessed. The numbers don't lie, archive anon, we love you.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:41:47 2021 No.7330673 >>7330597 honestly I wouldn't consider "I cannot relate to your e-girl problems" anon to be a bad guy, but they might not feel the same way

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:45:14 2021 No.7330810

>>7330597
>>7330673
actually this occurred to me moments after hitting enter, but maybe at some point (You) could be faced with a chuuba with actual serious problems (Kanata's abusive family and poor upbringing for example) and have an "oh shit, this girl might actually have worse problems than me" moment.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:50:03 2021 No.7331003

>>7330810
yeah don't worry, some parts will actually focus on that some of them have actual problems that needs your assistance, but whenever it's bullshit like "oh I'm not good enough" you're not afraid to give them a verbal whipping, which is why you were the "bad guy" in the beginning.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:51:48 2021 No.7331067 >>7330810 >Kanata's abusive family I blame clippers for this but her mother is NOT abusive

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:57:30 2021 No.7331235

>>7330810
also chuubas who came from shitty backgrounds (i.e. Watame being abandoned by her dad) and still doing their best, encouraging (You) to improve (you)rself rather than wallowing in your own mediocrity like all the girls you keep talking shit to

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 14:59:52 2021 No.7331316 God, Marine's new outfit does things to me. I want to lift her up, pin her against a wall and breed her nonstop.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:02:06 2021 No.7331397 >>7331067 Yeah, her mother is a pretty standard Japanese mother. It mostly just comes off as 'abusive' to western audiences through culture shock.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:02:45 2021 No.7331421

>>7331067
I always wondered about this. Whenever she brings up her mother during streams it doesn't seem like there's any huge beef at all. Plenty of funny stories too. She does seem like a bit of an asshole, but so is mine and I don't hate her.
I just assumed people saying this knew more than I do, since I only really started paying attention to Kanata a few months ago.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:03:05 2021 No.7331440
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>>7330597
Well I'm not really an avid viewer myself,
but the main thing I feel about Rushia is that there's something oddly genuine about her.
Moments like this are obvious
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7VehnJmF14

But even when she's playing up her rage, or pretending to act like a yandere. It feels at least partially like she's letting out some real emotion.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:04:38 2021 No.7331484 >>7331397 is it standard to refer to your mother by her name instead of "my mom" or something like that?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:07:57 2021 No.7331604 >>7331484 Sayuri isn't her actual name, she just use it so peoples don't get confuse on whether she's talking about Oshio-mama or her real mother

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:50:39 2021 No.7333017

>>7313336
Would it be considered bad form for a writeanon to complete one of their own prompts that no one asked for instead of a prompt from the archive, especially since there are so many
quality submissions (some months old) that haven't been taken up yet?

I ask this only because I am absolutely gagging for a Iofi story and unless I take it up myself I don't think anyone else will write one in my lifetime. I would LOVE to be proven wrong though. Literally anything to do with that ayy lmao angel would be a godsend.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:53:10 2021 No.7333118 >>7333017 Why would anyone care? Write what you want to write. Don't worry about if other people think it's fair or whatever.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:53:25 2021 No.7333131

>>7333017
1) it’s anonymous, literally no one would know unless you said something
2) the promos are mostly there for writers who need a seed to get going. You don’t have to do any of them.

Most of the stories here are not based on promps. Do whatever the fuck you want

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 15:55:22 2021 No.7333200 >>7333017 I use my own prompts all the time since most of the ones in the archive are anons wanting some flavor of fuck

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:04:45 2021 No.7333535
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>>7313350
Finally decided to write and post this Flare fic that's been on my mind for a while now.
It's an amnesia fic where Flare lost her memories and it's up to Anon to help her find it while uncovering why she lost it in the first place.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTK5rL_HXk7lbtT4z-Ccecmwf-cbHd51Lwmfy6bZntxnZk1Lwms0p7Ki_Flbhc85sPVAK3zgamKQr62/pub

Tags: Flare, Fluff, Amnesia, SFW

I wanted to write Flare for a while now but nothing inspired me until I read some anon's Knife Ears story and decided to write something similar with less racism and more fluff.
I wanna know what you guys think about it so I'd like some criticism if you guys feel like giving this story a try.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:05:14 2021 No.7333562 >>7313336 (Already submitted on the prompt collections, but asking again in here just in case). A Sanbaka threesome with futa Ange impregnating Lize and Inui. Lovey-dovey stuff very much preferred.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:25:14 2021 No.7334419 >>7333535 Good to know my terrible story inspired such an excellent piece.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:29:45 2021 No.7334628

Damn, reading this kind of shit brings back old memories. Good ones though.
I might even attempt to write something...
Also props to the guy who wrote Menhera Wrangler (And all anons really, I liked all the ones I read at least).
Really liked it but I hate those kind of endings because they always make me cry.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:37:30 2021 No.7334973 >>7334628 Yeah that stories pretty inspirational, it gave me some ideas for a few of my fics and inspired me to try out writing time shenanigans in a multi chapter fic instead of a goddamn short story.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 16:50:17 2021 No.7335468 >>7329590 The fact that I'm a very slow writer and that I've been quite busy as of late does not mesh well at all. It's gonna take some time for sure. Apologies in advance.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 17:08:04 2021 No.7336083 >>7333535 I really like it so far, Anon. I'm looking forward to the next part! Is Jaqcue Mullen a Disco Elysium reference?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 17:27:12 2021 No.7336839 >>7334419 Hey, I'll have you know that I enjoyed that story and I'm glad you like what I wrote. >>7336083 Glad you liked it dude Perhaps...? but in all seriousness, yes. That game is amazing and I will continue to shill it until the day I die

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 17:49:02 2021 No.7337601 >>7313336 Either of these is fine >>7335285 >>7335614

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 18:22:21 2021 No.7339480 >>7333535 This is really good so far, Anon! I don't watch Flare that much, but the set-up and the situation you have written out are really pulling me in. Looking forward to chapter 2!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 18:23:37 2021 No.7339551 >>7333535 Finally someone writes more Flare! Looking forward to the next part anon!

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:43:17 2021 No.7344071 File: 411 KB, 1000x1333, IMG_20210714_110631.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Sex With Polka

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:43:35 2021 No.7344083 >>7314855 I want to write about Shion inviting you and Aqua to hang out just to flex on Aqua that Shion has a boyfriend. Sounds fun, but my confidence in writing has been extremely low.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:44:21 2021 No.7344125 >>7344083 I would like to see that anon, have confidence in yourself

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:47:00 2021 No.7344261 >>7314855 >what are you writeanons working on? Nothing, but the urge to write degrading sex with Polka is rising. >ass to mouth >rough slapping >cumming hard on her face >pinching her belly and calling her fat

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:50:49 2021 No.7344497 >>7344261 As long as there is a scene where Polka is almost crying while you jerk off on her face and intentionally blow your load on her eyes/nose, all is good with the world.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 19:55:38 2021 No.7344775 >>7344261 Do it anon

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:02:40 2021 No.7345330 bump in case of shitstorm

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:07:05 2021 No.7346028 >>7345330 Something going on in the board? All I know of is Fubuki oversleeping big time.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:08:25 2021 No.7346200 >>7346028 nevermind, absolutely nothing happened

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:34:48 2021 No.7347975 >>7315090 >a fic based on Suisei's most recent cover Hasn't she suffered enough? I'll still enjoy it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:35:38 2021 No.7348020 >>7347975 What is her most recent cover about?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:37:34 2021 No.7348122 >>7348020 https://youtu.be/z9tsfkdgByA Shoujo Rei https://vocaloidlyrics.fandom.com/wiki/%E5%B0%91%E5%A5%B3%E3%83%AC%E3%82%A4_(Shoujo_Rei)

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:38:30 2021 No.7348167 >>7348122 Thank you anon

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:43:50 2021 No.7348451 >>7348020 The song is about wanting her friend to only look at her so she engineers a situation where her friend get bullied and has no else but Suisei in this case. However her friend just ends up committing suicide because of all the bullying.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:47:15 2021 No.7348613 >>7348451 god damn

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:48:08 2021 No.7348661 >>7348451 Then why does it sound so cheerful?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:49:07 2021 No.7348712 >>7348661 Irony

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 20:53:39 2021 No.7348940 >>7348661 Suisei endorses suicide and the culling of the weak.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:35:32 2021 No.7350880 >>7348451 Oh... fuck

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:38:40 2021 No.7351039
File: 1.07 MB, 1000x1000, MarineHappy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

Here's a short little thing I couldn't get out of my head while I worked on something else.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSBM3_HVd08tA2yDoAx2X6JpSHoR5i3fFwV72QKdGrrJhr9vQpvC-00oN7k2TKSrJXqcruHrT4orK8D/pub

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cF5WAMSZ1xw&list=LL&index=3

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:38:58 2021 No.7351058

>>7321769
Hey dude, this was amazing and definitely worth the wait. You're a real dab hand at writing blowjob scenes.

so is miyuki open source material here? i just had the slightest inkling of desire to write smut of her just now. nothing concrete, might fade away in thirty minutes, but asking just in case.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:40:12 2021 No.7351115 >>7315090 >>7348451 So which one is Suisei going to be in your fic?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:43:34 2021 No.7351267 >>7351039 Ouch. This one kinda hurt

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:47:28 2021 No.7351423 >>7313350 >>7351039

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:48:05 2021 No.7351446 >>7351115 The one behind the bullying

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:49:49 2021 No.7351509 >>7351446 Ah, yes, more psycho Suisei to add to the pile, as if she doesn't have any other traits to her character. Why not have her be the victim for a change?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:52:00 2021 No.7351593 >>7351446 Is she gonna kill herself in the end?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:54:09 2021 No.7351671 >>7351446 So is she bullying (You)?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 21:59:16 2021 No.7351829 Whatever happened to the anon writing for the hag orgy? They've kind of been at it for a while that I'm wondering how far along it is now.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:00:17 2021 No.7351868 >>7334628 Hey man, thanks for enjoying the series I wrote, always glad to hear kind words for it and that it touched your heart.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:01:21 2021 No.7351908 >>7344261 All I ask for is one paragraph of aftercare, no more.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:02:28 2021 No.7351961 >>7351829 He's been suffering from real life and his motivation is flagging. He posted so a couple threads ago. He's still working on it though

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:05:21 2021 No.7352062 >>7351039 That was good. write more.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:05:45 2021 No.7352078 >>7321769 I feel kinda gross for enjoying this as I did. I think I need a break from smut.

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:07:23 2021 No.7352137

>>7351509
I'm not really writing her to be a psychopath as fucked as the whole thing sounds. What I'm trying to write is a young girl so desperate for attention from her friend (who she also doesn't want to share with anyone) ignorantly resorting harmful ways to garner that attention. I want to focus on the grieving and the realization of just how bad her actions were.

>>7351593
You'll see when I finish it

>>7351671
Yeah but it will be from Suisei's perspective.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:08:50 2021 No.7352201 >>7352137 I mean garner instead of gamer. I don't know how I fucked that up

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:09:32 2021 No.7352229 >>7352201 An r and an n look like an m, boss, don't worry about it.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:30:06 2021 No.7353220 >>7333017 I think frustration at the lack of a particular scenario is how most people end up becoming writers in the first place

Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:36:22 2021 No.7353526

That hololive error trailer made me need a yandere sora fic.
Like I guess entirely because of that gap moe she gives off while being yandere of being completely hinged, sane and perfectly in control of herself. Which is a pretty good contrast to the usual unhinged psycho type that most yanderes do.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:39:01 2021 No.7353636 >>7353526 What made that trailer so good was how vague it was. Fear of not knowing what she'll do is always better than her going lol stab.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 22:39:52 2021 No.7353671 >>7352201 Had a real gamer moment there, pal.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:01:07 2021 No.7354622 >>7351058 Sure! Go ahead and use her. I'd be really flattered if someone used an oc I created for their fic.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:03:58 2021 No.7354759 >>7352229 Wait i just read your post again and finally realized that I didn't make a typo. I am not alright.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:09:40 2021 No.7355148 >>7354622 Will keep it in mind. Haven't seen enough of her to have a definite grasp on her personality so it might come off as pretty OOC as I fiddle around with her.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:22:44 2021 No.7355893 >>7333535 Goddamn this is really good and slight touch of disco elysium feels kind of apt for a mystery story. I hope you can continue this.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:23:05 2021 No.7355909 >>7351267 yeah, that's just kinda what came as I wrote. >>7352062 Thank you! I am working on other stuff that should be done soon.

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:41:56 2021 No.7356915 Haven't been able to keep up with threads for the past few days, any particular fics in the past week or so that I should catch up on?

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:43:45 2021 No.7357024 >>7356915 check archive

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:47:15 2021 No.7357222 >>7315107 Link? Sounds pretty awesome

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:47:29 2021 No.7357233 >>7356915 check archive

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:48:55 2021 No.7357288 >>7356915 check archive

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:49:29 2021 No.7357317 >>7356915 W I N C E S T >>7321769

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:49:52 2021 No.7357332 >>7355893 >Holo Elysium is happening VOLITION BROS WE WON

>>	Anonymous Sat Jul 31 23:50:13 2021 No.7357346 >>7356915 archive check

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:09:36 2021 No.7358344
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>>7356915
Read Deja vu and give me a critique already.

I swear people open it and think its porn and then get bored or leave or something.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:12:21 2021 No.7358477 >>7358344 ahem... it's, uhhh, actually because it wasn't porn or my favourite chuuba that i closed it...

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:14:01 2021 No.7358568 >>7358477 I knew it!

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:15:58 2021 No.7358689

>>7339480
Thanks man, I hope the upcoming reveals would satisfy the setup I've written but I've never written anything like this before so keep that in mind as you go forward

>>7339551
Thank you, I've already thought out what to write in the next chapter, The only thing left is actually writing it down and fleshing it out.

>>7355893
Yeah, I actually finished that game right as I started thinking about this fic. I actually had it so Anon would be a cop or a detective instead but decided that it might be too much for me at the start but kept the whole mystery thing since it would be interesting

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:20:59 2021 No.7358930 >>7341340 # >>7344991 # >>7351338 # They ain't coming so i might as well post here

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:23:16 2021 No.7359055

>>7357332
Now imagine one of the Holos playing through that game and reacting to the absurd bullshit you can say and do as well as the excellent writing and storytelling

Actually don't because Cover probably won't allow anyone to stream that due to the nature of the game itself. Which is a shame since Ame expressed interest in playing through it but decided against it when chat warned her of the contents of the game as well as her current backlog of games to play.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:28:09 2021 No.7359295 >>7357332 >>7359055 Mr Yagoo is helping me find my gun

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:37:53 2021 No.7359726

>>7358568
i went ahead and read it, anon. it has the makings of a good read, but its deliberate ambiguity doesn't work in its favour here; the story itself is just hammering polka for no well-established reason and the emotional impact relies on a tragedy that in turn relies upon the complete absence of logic or rationality in management's decision making.
overall i got a strong feeling you were trying to coax a response from the reader, and that's why it completely failed.

on the technical side, your dialogue is a bit stiff but otherwise no issues; a few punctuation errors here and there but nothing dealbreaking.

if you do write more of this, i might suggest laying actions out in a sequence that makes blame a little less clear-cut; in this fic, polka is apparently being demonised for no adequate reason apart from a messy break-up. go more in-depth as to how the break up happened, how her girlfriend sees it, or describe polka's negative spiral.

sorry if you think i'm nitpicking; you asked for feedback and i wanted to earnestly respond to that out of respect.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:42:56 2021 No.7359936

>>7359726
I was trying out dream sequences, and working under the idea that things can go from bad to worse at the drop of a hat, and nepotism rules the work place I guess.

And yes I did ask for it, and I'm happy you took the time to give me your honest opinion. Thanks Anon.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:46:50 2021 No.7360090 Ok, I guess linking writing from others threads doesn't get archived. RIP all those many texts I've sent here. Fuck, there was one I liked too...

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:47:55 2021 No.7360124 How do you write natural relationship dynamics and dialogue? Especially when you've never really had one

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:48:42 2021 No.7360149 >>7360090 Link it to the anchor post at the top of the thread, it'll get archived.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:49:28 2021 No.7360172 >>7360124 We can go on a date if you need the experience

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:55:58 2021 No.7360441

>>7360124
the best way i can describe such a relationship is the ALMOST complete lack of natural barriers between people. you feel completely comfortable speaking, with no need to watch what you say, no feeling like you're boring them... you just exist and complement each other perfectly. this isn't always a romantic relationship or even a friendly relationship; you can be ideal colleagues but dislike each other outside of one specific area of work, or be grudging rivals.

as to how to write them... i have no tips beyond if you're actively thinking about what they say, it's probably not a natural relationship.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 00:56:12 2021 No.7360452 >>7360124 Anon, my current project is like 99% relationships and dialogue and even I couldn't tell you. Just wing it and see what happens.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 01:23:18 2021 No.7361493 >>7358930 >Polka It's all I want in life, really.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 01:29:22 2021 No.7361735 >>7328992 I think you missed the HoloFuta descriptions? Also there was a Gura nut jar story which was linked but never stored. I'd fetch it but mobile and all, can't go back that far.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 01:39:51 2021 No.7362114

>>7360172
I-I'm shaking in my boots. Where would you take me?

>>7360441
Thanks for taking the time to write all that out. I think it'll be really helpful, hadn't really thought of it being so comfortable like that before.
I wish I could talk to people and be able to think up decent responses without thinking on them for hours.

>>7360452
Thanks for the motivation. I'm just GONNA DO IT!

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:00:19 2021 No.7362826 >>7358930 >Mio - only the most plain missionary positions for the sole purpose of reproduction >missionary >plain >hag sex >plain >breeding Mio >plain retard

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:13:43 2021 No.7363211

>>7313336
Hell is going through a slight depression right now, so all succubi have been ordered to either start working again, or increase their earnings if they are working. Hearing of this Choco needs to get back to work, and (You) happen to be the only male in her territory that either hasn't been claimed or won't immediately die from having some of your vitality taken. So she's chosen you to be the one that helps her make her weekly quotas. Choco wasn't expecting that she would inadvertently break the rules of being a succubus and fall in love with the one she feeds from.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:17:22 2021 No.7363328
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>>7313336
Suisei successfully gets a boyfriend in high school.
She comes over to his house and greets his parents with a most pleasant smile.
And they let her go to his room without worry.
They've already talked extensively with their son about the dangers and responsibilities of such a relationship.
They were more worried about him than Suisei of course. To them she seemed like such an intelligent and mature, albeit physically undeveloped teenager. They have no idea she's in her late 20's.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:27:46 2021 No.7363630 >>7363328 writeanons onegai.............

>>	Lanomymous Sun Aug 1 02:37:45 2021 No.7363864 >>7363328 god i think i have a painted nail fetish, cuz that is one hot suisei hand

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:39:34 2021 No.7363906

>>7313336
Noel is summoned back to her small hometown by her family. Thinking it's something like yet another cousin or neice/nephew she happily arrives expecting to greet a cute new baby member to the family. That happiness quickly fades when she realizes her parents are arranging her marriage to a small noble family in the area. Her family stresses the importance of the marriage because Noel would be marrying into a higher caste. At a small practice dinner (You) and Noel meet for the first time. Not knowing that you are just as opposed to the arranged marriage as she is, Noel decides to take out all of her frustrations out on you in front of both your families. This culminates in Noel challenging you to a duel for her own hand. Which you promptly win. You're quickly married to each other and must resign yourselves into either building the relationship, or being stuck in a loveless political marriage for the rest of your lives.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:48:28 2021 No.7364146

>>7313336
(You) are an avid fish owner. A few months ago you got the opportunity to get a baby shark with an absolutely huge tank to keep it in. The shark grew and grew to the point where you feared it would get too big for its tank. Then it grew a human face and body, with only its tail being a reminder of its original form. And she started to look really lonely in her tank, and you felt bad watching her in her tank. One night you get woken up by a loud shatter, followed by what sounded like dozens of gallons of water flowing, finally followed by a cold wet object pressing into you. You open your eyes to find the girl cuddling up to you. How will you live with your "new" pet/daughter/potentialmate?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:52:35 2021 No.7364250 >>7363906 This is Konosuba inspired, isn't it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:53:33 2021 No.7364276 >>7361735 Last thread or the thread before? I wasn't sure if the HoloFuta descriptions should be archived but I can grab it. Gura nut jar though has completely eluded me; I don't remember that at all.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:53:48 2021 No.7364283

The final chapter in my AmeSame fic is finished, chapter 19. Please let me know what you think.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32559157/chapters/81789169

Here's a taste:
>“Nnng…” Gura’s free hands needed to feel something. She reached behind her, over her head, and found Amelia’s hair to fist. Turning her head far to one side, Gura sought out Amelia’s lips. Their kiss was messy and wet, unfocused lust driving them to find tongue and mouth. Gura’s tail curled up as her bottom arched into Amelia. She could no more control this instinct as she could not control her own shark, the begging gesture escalating their foreplay rapidly.

>“You’re so fucking hot, Gura.” Amelia exhaled into Gura’s mouth. Her feverish rubbing losing coordination when she felt Gura’s need. When Amelia’s hand – which was holding the hoodie up – retracted, it came back to unholster the long black dildo from against Amelia’s thigh, having been folded to the side there by a buckle.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:56:51 2021 No.7364372 >>7364250 Y'know it wasn't even in my mind when I was writing it, I just liked the idea of being forcibly married "against my will" to an autistic girl with huge tits. But now that you mentioned that I can't help but see the comparisons.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 02:57:45 2021 No.7364397 >>7363864 Suisei gave me a fetish for gloved hands. Help. >>7364283 >she strapped the dildo to her leg KEK I love it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 03:41:26 2021 No.7365424 File: 262 KB, 335x401, 1627318496954.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7364397 Tactical dildo.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 03:54:36 2021 No.7365670 >>7364397 >Suisei Ina for me. That JOI stuff Anon wrote - while admittedly kind of lacking in some respects, as JOI expert Anon critiqued afterwards - made me imagine a silky gloved handjob. Pretty substantial explosion.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 04:36:56 2021 No.7366539

>>7313336
Senchou uploaded this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BfC21ksAUzM&feature=emb_title
Anyone wanna write a story about how Marine keeps annoying you with small talks and request that arent annoying itself but she keeps asking in times where you're very busy until one day you snap and hit her like that. But to your suprise she keeps asking for more slaps and for you to hit her

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 04:41:09 2021 No.7366633 >>7348661 There's an entire genre of cheerful depresive menhera music in japan. Like Yaosobi and Ado works. A lot of Hololive's covers are like this

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 04:47:44 2021 No.7366792

>>7331604
>>7331484
That's not true how will people confuse about that? She'd call Oshio her mama while saying Okaasan to refeer at her mother. And japs almost never use their familiar's name just look at how even brothers dont call each other by their names. She refeer her mother by her name because she doesnt have a relationship with her

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 05:07:01 2021 No.7367261 >>7363906 This gives me an idea... Though in a Monkeys paw kinda way

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 05:09:32 2021 No.7367308 >>7367261 Just remember Writeanon that marriages like that have to at least produce an heir due to noble lineage

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 06:05:19 2021 No.7368685 >>7367308 >Will never be made to marry Lamy and produce a suitable heir

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 06:15:25 2021 No.7368946
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A Mio fluff after not writing for a while. I'm blaming the government nanobots for making me sleep more than usual.

Sugar Sweet Nightmare
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRlsubLFg44mjfNU9_s5Gq8TDKHctvqrcEXUmzvaN_ncd405g5hJyEIutuyK8aJ5NVMXjcGnoWBigBd/pub

Do let me know what you think about it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 06:18:30 2021 No.7369038 >>7368685 Friend you know what site you are on right?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 06:24:09 2021 No.7369181 >>7369038 By God, you're right! I've got snow elves to woo!

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 07:14:10 2021 No.7370167 File: 336 KB, 750x744, mio joi.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7368946 that was lovely, anon. thank you IM GONNA GOSLING AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 07:57:11 2021 No.7370855 >>7363328 Does Suisei's boyfriend know her real age?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 08:16:53 2021 No.7371360 >>7370855 Yeah, and she loves me anyway

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 08:19:08 2021 No.7371423 >>7368946 >>7313350

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 09:36:52 2021 No.7374460 >>7314855 >what works are you expecting/excited for? I expect nothing and am still disappointed

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 09:53:59 2021 No.7375332 >>7374460 Then write something that won't disappoint you.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 09:55:21 2021 No.7375385 >>7374460 i love it when you abuse me

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 10:07:40 2021 No.7375918 >>7368946 Very sweet. Capture's Mio's caring side perfectly.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 10:20:51 2021 No.7376302 >>7368946 Thanks, I really needed this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:06:25 2021 No.7377548 >>7375385 >Will never mindbreak a writeanon into only writing abuse based off what they want you to do to them >The longer it goes on the more and more horrifyingly depraved the writings become Abusechads...

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:07:56 2021 No.7377587
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>>7370855
she doesn't explicitly mention it, but she does make it pretty obvious to him that something's off
>talkes in her lower voice when they're alone
>makes comments about her "hypothetical" age, like "would you still like me if I were a few years older than you?" "...but what if I was a lot older than you"
>is obviously very jealous of the younger girls that are bustier than her, and refers to them all as shitty brats
that kinda thing

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:11:45 2021 No.7377739 >>7377587 >Deep voice Suisei My dick is diamonds.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:21:21 2021 No.7378062 File: 244 KB, 464x461, comforble.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >my story is tagged as calm in the archive made me smile and glad I didn't turn it into Mio shower sex like I originally planned.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:23:45 2021 No.7378153 >>7378062 Does this post count as abuse? Because I feel an inexplicable sense of excruciating loss reading it

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:36:18 2021 No.7378563

>>7375332
>"write something to avoid disappointment"
>cringe more at my own writing than the most self-absorbed fics
Doesn't help, chief.

>>7375385
I wasn't even thinking about you, just posting BS to keep the thread bumped.
You are literally irrelevant to me.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:36:32 2021 No.7378565 File: 79 KB, 649x962, 1627832192578.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7368946 The transition between the dream and last part is golden the umbrella kiss hurts

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:40:18 2021 No.7378673 File: 86 KB, 197x197, 2021-08-01 11_01_56-Home _ Twitter.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7378062 >picrel

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:44:23 2021 No.7378800 >>7378563 belittle me any more and i might just start masturbating to your posts

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:54:33 2021 No.7379145
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>>7313336
Filling in for Matsuri's manager, she runs you ragged until you pass out from exhaustion. Turns out, she was deliberately overowkred you so she could molest you while you sleep.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 11:57:59 2021 No.7379242 >>7379145 How did the person I dictate my posts to fuck up "overworking" that bad?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 12:01:17 2021 No.7379339 >>7379242 How did that person feel when you dictated this post?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 12:08:40 2021 No.7379598 >>7379339 They know what a mistake costs them

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 12:16:50 2021 No.7379856 >>7313336 Sora's fuckin balling, and she's damn good at it

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 12:18:50 2021 No.7379905 >>7379856 i wonder if anyone here watches sora you may be out of luck

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 12:56:17 2021 No.7380802 >>7351039 This broke my heart, anon. Thanks a lot for writing this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:06:38 2021 No.7380979 >>7377587 That's way too hot. I love this pedophile idol!

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:36:50 2021 No.7381404 >>7380802 You're welcome. For some reason, Marine really makes me think of tragedy stuff.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:41:51 2021 No.7381516 Which Hololive would seduce a middle/high schooler? So far I have ideas for Suisei and Aqua, might greentext them later.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:43:00 2021 No.7381544 >>7381516 Most of them

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:46:17 2021 No.7381629 >>7381516 All of them except Miko

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:50:42 2021 No.7381742
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>>7354622
I will definitely use her if I need to scratch that oyakodon itch.

>Fubuki double anal dildo with Miyuki while (you) fuck them one at a time!
>Fubuki punishes her daughter's bad behavior by tying her arms and legs and forcing her to spend all day with a vibrator in her, while waiting for papa!
>Miyuki displays some interest in abuse play and Fubuki takes it upon herself to train her dauther for you!
>Giving Fubuki a strap-on and spitroasting Miyuki while you kiss your fox wife!
>Miyuki's first live concert and she's nervous, she needs Papa's semen inside her to calm down - Fubuki knows the feeling and comes in to help!

And other shenanigans.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:50:57 2021 No.7381750 File: 425 KB, 629x884, E6lpYO5UUAYWe00.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7381516 >with Aqua's stunted development and love of video games, she easily and unintenionally befriends a young boy >they even got married in Roblox

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 13:56:51 2021 No.7381900 File: 1.06 MB, 900x900, E69tyVjVcAQrYSe.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7381516 My wildcard pick is Kiara going "well I have been alive for thousands of years, but technically I died and was just born 10 minutes ago"

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:01:13 2021 No.7382042
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>>7381742
That is so degenerate. I'm on the verge of saying "but it's fucking great" but I'm held back by my last strand of sanity.
If it was anyone but Fubuki I'd just scroll through it.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:01:20 2021 No.7382045

>>7381750
Funnily enough, that was my idea for her story.
(You) are a middle school boy who plays an online game, and you befriend a girl who happens to live in the same Tokyo area as you. You decide to meet up in a park IRL when you meet a shy, stuttering mess of an onee-san.
>>7381900
Kiara /ss/ would be very cute, but I've got to find a good starting prompt.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:03:01 2021 No.7382090 >>7313336 VTubers playing SS13

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:20:32 2021 No.7382617

>>7381750
>>7382045
That could be an incredibly cute story. Would be interesting if (you) don't know she's a girl at all. You're just really good friends in-game for a good while and you've always thought it was a guy - so you invite your friend for an offline meet for a while, until after much insistence they finally agree.

But (you) get there and find out your friend wasn't a guy at all... it's the onion.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:29:21 2021 No.7382912
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>>7382045
what comes to mind about Kiara is that she's the type of woman that, after a lost child came to her for help, she would immediately shower him with lots of affection and care
like all he wanted was to use her phone, but she's focused on making him feel safe, making sure he's healthy, telling him everything will be alright and he can sleep at her house, even going so far as to suggest that she adopts him if they can't find his parents
and at that point she's just stuck on the fantasy of keeping him and forgets all about his actual parents

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:30:16 2021 No.7382944

>>7382617
After one afternoon of being together with the shota anon, she confesses to him and says she wants to marry him. Confused, anon accepts, and they kiss. Seconds later, he has to comfort Aqua who's sobbing and crying because she's afraid she got pregnant, and has to take her home to his mom because he doesn't know what to do.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:39:46 2021 No.7383176 >>7382912 so basically https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ccpyqgXVNmo

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:40:55 2021 No.7383215 >>7382090 Plot twist: Polka ISN'T that fucking clown.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:54:14 2021 No.7383594 >>7377587 I want to be groomed by Suisei so badly

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 14:56:02 2021 No.7383659 >>7382912 Do you think her standards for physical affection are completely off-base? Would she believe french-kissing is an acceptable display of affection for a young boy she just met?

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:01:30 2021 No.7383836

>>7382944
> his parents are really fucking confused
> and suspicious at the same time, is she a pedophile?
> they tell her one on one that she isn't allowed to contact their son anymore or else they call police
> she disappears from his life
> the shota is really sad and angry at her, parents aren't answering any questions
> years pass, shota grows up into a fine shounen, then - a fine otoko with higher education and a high-paying job
> they meet again
> first, a shouting match, then both are bawling their eyes out together
> former shota introduces his girlfriend to his parents again

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:03:39 2021 No.7383910 [SPOILER]

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>>7364283
I'll be honest with ya I've only read chapter 9 and 10 cause sex. It was decent, the humping stuff was a breath of fresh air, don't see it often; though it could have used a humping cumshot before the blowjob, that may be just my fetish. The writing style indicates that you're pretty new to this, but ultimately I don't think it's terrible. Just needed to be longer, I had to jump from chapter to the other roughly 4 times before reaching... ahem... satisfaction. If you were to invest in a shorter series where you can focus more on one part instead of having to jump to the next for the sake of completion, I believe you could pull it off well. Overall, good work.

Don't take it personally, I simply don't read SFW works here. If I wanted to I'd just read a book.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:06:36 2021 No.7383984

>>7382944
I'm only into age play when it's Male > Female, so I don't like /ss/ at all. Otherwise I might put this in the idea bucket, could be a sweet fluffy

>how to grow up together with your womanchild wife

or

>discovering the pleasures of sex with your womanchild wife

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:14:53 2021 No.7384182 >>7383659 I could see if Shotanon asked her like "how do I get girls to like me?" and Kiara goes way too deep into it, from like how to be nice on a date to how to make her cum.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:26:04 2021 No.7384461 >>7383910 But anon, there's more sex after that. Ina's tentacle sex and then the double-penetration sex at the end. Just Ctrl+F for "Warning: Sexual content" and you'll find the chapters

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:26:57 2021 No.7384481 >>7384461 Yeah but I skimmed through it and saw no signs of a dick so I stopped.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:27:25 2021 No.7384496 >>7383836 I think it'd be way cuter if shota anon doesn't listen to his parents and meets up with her in secret. He'd have to find ways to prevent this klutz from blowing their cover to his parents, too!

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:32:32 2021 No.7384640 >>7384481 Chapter 19, finale, has dick.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:34:36 2021 No.7384707 >>7383984 Shame you're not a /ss/ fan, anon, but to each his own. Something sexual would definitely please me but fluff is great too. >>7384182 This sounds very cute! Kiara is such a great teacher!

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 15:47:55 2021 No.7385145
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>>7383659
>>7384182
after only a few days she already forgets to put on some clothes before walking around the house, and when she gets caught, instead of getting embarassed, she decides to assure the boy that a woman's body is nothing to be afraid of while holding him close to her own body

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:03:24 2021 No.7388596 File: 1.80 MB, 1654x2677, 1627400902620.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] bump

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:06:00 2021 No.7388788 >>7388596 The thread is near the bump limit, couldn't you just let it die?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:06:50 2021 No.7388836 >>7388788 This. Holy fuck. This. I don’t understand why people bump a thread that’s already near the bump limit.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:09:20 2021 No.7388983 >5k words for the chuuba to appear AAAAAAA WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:11:31 2021 No.7389077 >>7388983 You're a good writer, Anon. You care. That's what's wrong.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:13:12 2021 No.7389149 >>7388983 Trim it down, that's a sign of a bad writer

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:20:37 2021 No.7389502 >>7388983 do whatever you think is right anon it doesnt necessarily mean you are a good or a bad writer

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:21:51 2021 No.7389564 >>7388983 >>5k words for the chuuba to appear Yeah, a sign of a bad writer, stop writing and check what you wrote because I can assure you there’s paragraphs that can be removed.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:22:08 2021 No.7389568

>Have two fics in the works
>The inspiration to write a continuation to another comes rushing in.

Never thought that being hot, with my water turned completely off because of a leak and bored would light a fire in my loins this badly.

>>7388983
Entirely dependent on the story in my opinion. Some stories need a lot of exposition up front to make sense, and to not be completely out of character. As long as you make it interesting so that the reader wants to continue on until the big reveal, keep at it.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:24:45 2021 No.7389690 New thread >>7389666

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:27:47 2021 No.7389853 >>7389690 obligatory ree at the early thread

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:36:01 2021 No.7390196 obligatory post about wanting to fuck a lamyfied anon

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:38:44 2021 No.7390326 obligatory post about how much I want to make gentle, babymaking sex with Fubuki

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:39:51 2021 No.7390402 >>7390196 If wanting to fuck a Lamyfied anon is your first desire instead of actually fucking Lamy herself, then you have 0 right to deny being a raging homosexual.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:42:18 2021 No.7390515 >>7390402 Fucking TF victims into becoming the perfect representation of who they got TFd into is actually super hot and you're a fag if you hate it

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:44:44 2021 No.7390618 >>7390402 I like both as long as I'm topping, Anon. As >>7390515 states, it makes my brain itch good and my dick ache. I've no qualms about this.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:46:54 2021 No.7390736 File: 62 KB, 221x227, 2021-04-01 21_59_55-Window.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7390515 >>7390618 I never thought about it that way. I have been enlightened.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:50:22 2021 No.7390851 File: 65 KB, 1280x720, 1469147598523.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7390736 Welcome to the club, fellow cultured anon.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 17:57:39 2021 No.7391176 >>7390736 You were blind, yet now you see. So go and procure Your own Lamy.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:08:00 2021 No.7394137 >>7383215 Polka is HoS. She actually tries to follow Space Law.

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:20:31 2021 No.7394637 >>7383910 >spoiler But Anon, don’t you want to gosling?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:46:30 2021 No.7395661 What does Okayu like to watch in her spare time? TV shows, videos, etc? Has she ever given hints?

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:47:11 2021 No.7395692 >>7395661 me

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:48:43 2021 No.7395754 File: 333 KB, 525x632, yodazo.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7395692 THIS IS SERIOUS ANON IF I CAN'T FIGURE THIS OUT THIS STORY JUST ISN'T GOING TO WORK OUT I'll just ask the resident Onigiriya then.

Anonymous Sun Aug 1 19:57:11 2021 No.7396204

>>7382617
Popping your first boner when you find out the person you've spent hundreds of hours playing an MMO with is actually a girl much older than you! Jacking off for the first time and having your first sexual thoughts about this girl! You have a sleepover together and you sheepishly touch her tits while she sleeps! The next morning she catches you jacking off in the bathroom and has no idea what you're doing! She asks you if it's because of her and if it hurts! You convince the onion to help you and get your first blowjob at the ripe young age of 1x!

>>	Anonymous Sun Aug 1 20:14:01 2021 No.7396946 File: 2.13 MB, 236x226, 1623243419209.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>7396204 Tfw that will never be me...

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