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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>54643028

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Balsa, Chapter 18:tags: (you), Ciyana, Iroha, Mel, Civia, medieval fantasy:>>54651847

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

The Advent girls, but they come from actual prison. You know, like ADX Florence.:>>54664120

Picking up furball from a box off the street.:>>54672660

Sloppy stoner sex with Kronii.:>>54693170

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So since Shiori might not be a residential fic writer/reader for here, who are you hoping out of the next batch will let it slip that they're into chuuba fanfics? Honestly, with Bijou's own hologirl and gaming autism, she's a contender for having read some fanfics about her oshis.

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/wg/ is holding a writing contest for the whole board!
Submissions close on 08/25. If you’re interested, you can find more information here:
rentry.org/WGWC

>> No.54697810

>>54697763
Shit, wrong blonde!

>> No.54698016

>>54697753
It would feel better to assume that all of them are residential fic readers/writers here until proven otherwise. Glass half-full and all that.

>> No.54698303

>>54698016
I mean, we're a pretty niche part of /vt/. Chuubas that have been caught here often just go to their own generals.
Then again, the probability of anything happening is always above 0...

>> No.54698383

>>54698016
>>54698303
I like the way you both think! So who would be brave enough to admit to a work they've read from here?

>> No.54698388

>another dead thread
I wonder how many threads we've made in the past month and how many of them hit bump limit

>> No.54698457

Iroha owes me sex

>> No.54698512
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>>54698457
And what did you do to earn it?

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>>54698303
The chance is always non-zero, anon. You'll never know.
>>54698383
Now THAT'S a tough question. I would imagine Kronii, though she'll pretend that it's one of the fics from her #HoloFic contests.
Other than that, maybe Risu (who admits going to /vt/ on the reg). The rest of the girls would just keep it to themselves. Don't ask, don't tell and all that.

>> No.54698806

>>54698552
SHIORI GET BACK TO WRITING

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>>54698016
>>54698303
>>54698383
>>54698552
This is really embarrassing coping and if you want them to read something (you) wrote you have to submit it to a reading.
Anything less is sophistry.

>> No.54698830

>>54698388
>thread gets bumped to stay alive
>"wah wah what's the point when another thread is made instantly"
>thread dies and another one is made instantly
>"another dead thread. pathetic"
It's getting old, Sasuke.

>> No.54698871

>>54698512
I've mastered the ten thousand folded something stance.
We will breed only the strongest goofballs

>> No.54698953

>>54698830
Kisama! We're leaving....

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>>54698811
Because of how long my fic is, I'd feel awkward asking anyone to read it on the spot. It feels almost inconsiderate since I know the general fanfic space practices much shorter stories and oneshots. If I knew a chuuba that wanted to read long shit that was ongoing, I'd consider submitting it.

>> No.54699035

>>54698811
Yeah, it is. But then again, the possibility is just a nice thing to think about.
Plus, I think that some writers here might not actually want their oshi to read what they've submitted to /wg/. But it'd be nice if they stumbled upon it by chance

>> No.54699399

>>54698512
If she doesn't give it to me I'm going to earn it through rape without lube

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>>54699035
>Spoiler
Yeah I think Flare would want to have some very choice words with me if she read mine. If not already, but ESPECIALLY after what's coming soon.

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>>54698871
>>54699399
M-Masaka!

>> No.54700331

>>54699860
How would your chuuba react to your fics?
>Mio
>"I appreciate that I wasn't written with a perfect body, I love those little details in which the author described my curves, the moles, hell even my stretch marks sounded nice in his prose."
>"The sex scene had a nice tone, I like being in control in bed, specially when a young man tries his hardest to please me. His reactions were absolutely delightful, those of a young man learning the ropes, I love it."
>"One thing I must criticize, is that my genitals are unshaven since a long time, as opposed to the stated in the fic in which I have just an average bush, but this is mostly nitpicking."

>> No.54700530

>>54698830
I'm not that guy, I'm just saying.

>> No.54700968
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>>54697550
A fic about being assigned to the same group as Aqua and her dumb friends in drama class and trying to carry them all to a passing grade.

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>>54700331
>Flare
>"You moron. I HATE the people expect me to use bows. What the hell were you thinking? Just because I'm an elf huh!?"
I...I get rid of it in chapter 21...
>"I'm stuck with this thing for 19 chapters!? And why the hell does Noel think she's my keeper or something!?....You did an alright job making me look cool though."

Watame
I don't know what type of specific critique she could have, she might just be tickled pink to be included and get to be written doing things like kicking demons and casting magic spells alongside her friends.
>"You should write more about everyone's wakapai. I wanna read more of that. I also wanna cuddle with Flare and Botan more."

>> No.54701877

>>54700530
It's hard to see you fuckers as different when it's clearly going down the tree of
Complaining about bumps to complaining about it not making it to bump limit to complaing about even keeping the thread around. Even if you're not that guy specifically it's like the difference between marineschizo shitting up the thread and someone larping as him.

>> No.54702094

>>54701877
That's right, keep up the schizo bitching about completely innocuous posts, I'm sure that will stop the thread dying in the long run.

>> No.54702217

>>54701877
Anon, you're being unfair. All he did was wonder how many threads we've had die early. I'm interested in that too.

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>>54700331
I imagine Flare may take some exception to Brown Black and Blue Because I Love You

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>>54700331
>一体これは何と書いてあるんだ?

>> No.54702838

>>54700968
Like gen 2 as the group?
>Make Aqua be a tree so she stops fucking throwing up at the idea of public speaking
>Trick Shion into thinking she has a leading role so she shuts the fuck up.
>Ayame: She doesn't show up
>Suburu will likely pull her weight
>Spend the rest of the project hiding a boner because Choco keeps flaunting her fat fucking ass at you.

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>>54702681

>> No.54704967

>>54702838
Kinda? The prompt was inspired by this post I vaguely remember from here a couple of months back about an anon talking about being assigned to a highschool drama class group filled with retards, with one of them being a retarded girl.
Though if you want go with whatever group of chuubas you want to tell a story with.

>> No.54705085

>>54697753
Who are her oshi, do we know?

>> No.54705219

>>54705085
She hasn't said. She did have "collab with every holomem at least once" as one of her goals though, and said she'll play literally any game in existence to make that happen.

>> No.54705449

>>54702838
>>54704967 (me)
Actually I remember the exact posts that inspired this prompt now
>>40537555
>>40540597

>> No.54706301

>>54701348
How would flare react to getting gobbed?

>> No.54707351

>>54701348
>>54702573
>Flare reads First Summer Memories
>Complains that the chance encounter and the amnesia are just a convenient excuse to pair her up with the self-insert without having to deal with everything else in her life
>Keeps reading anyway until the end
>Ends up crying
I'm still hoping that it will be continued...

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>>54707351
We should all strive to write the words that would make our beloved half-elf weep. I'm gonna give her the best date I can muster!
And then back blowing sex in a seaside hotel resort suite.

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>>54705449
Hey that's me!

>> No.54711169

Anya with big tits or no? This is important for a joke

>> No.54711551

>>54711169
Her 3D is pretty flat, but I prefer big dagger tits.

>> No.54712246

>>54711169
Big tit anya kind of only exists because of rigger fuck up and the fact that it's pretty hot.
Honestly if you're going for a joke go for it.

>> No.54723891

>Idol into mecha
Nerissa seems fun

>> No.54724230

>>54723891
I mean, macross is alright, but wake me when she's on that G Gundam kick.

>> No.54724517

>>54724230
Anon, she namedropped the UC timeline
you silly billy

>> No.54724646

>>54723891
Confirmed right of the bat that she's nopan as well so Mio gets a W

>> No.54725197

>>54724517
But G Gundam is in the FC timeline i thought?

>> No.54725470

>>54711169
Humongous chest Anya will always be canon to me.

>> No.54726013

It's hard finding the right battle theme to fit the feel of the scene...

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Please don't be a disappointment... please be good...

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>>54726714
THESE ARE MY DOGS FOR REAL

>> No.54730271

>>54726714
NGL the gimmick isnt hitting for me.
Also they speak hachameeese

>> No.54730853

>>54730271
I had to close the tab. It was too cringe. I'm pretty sure they're the twins that graduated though, so I might give them a look later when they chill with the bau bau shit.

>> No.54731230

>>54726714
I was hoping for two sisters that could easily argue and play off each other but this feels just so bland. Bijou is easily my favorite of EN3 so far, and her lore is top notch to work something fun in. Advent as a whole can get their appearances in, but I'm less inspired by the group as a whole.

>> No.54731578

>>54726714
It's pure weeb CGDCT, really. Quite polarizing

>> No.54733338

>>54726714
>yosuga no sora in their anime likes
word?

>> No.54733353

>>54731578
I mean what >>54730271 said isnt too far.
They sound a bit like chammers, at least for now

>> No.54733992 [DELETED] 

>>54733353
They are Canadian hafus, but they have been acting like Japanese ESLs for a long time after all.

>> No.54736251

Futata and Mococco...

>> No.54736819

>>54736251
miss me with that shit
we can finally write the Paparat X Perochino XTaiga alliance.
No chuuba will score on their watch

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>>54736819
those FAT FUCKS don't stand a fucking chance. These kemo's WILL be collared by ME

>> No.54738319

Shout out to that one anon that told me they wouldn't reincarnate several threads ago.

>> No.54738591

>>54738319
Add it to the pile >>54728674

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Do you accept the pledge?

>> No.54741157

>>54740145
Yes. I will let them guard my smile.

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>>54740145
No. i have my own pledge

>I close my eyes and seize it
>I clench my fists and beat it
>I warm my food and burn it
>I love the rat I worship

>> No.54742153

So bros, what do you think happens if you rub their ears and tails?

>> No.54742335

>>54742153
They take a screenshot

>> No.54742480

>>54742153
Instant orgasm.

>> No.54744789

>>54742153
Biting

>> No.54745665

>>54742153
Disembowelment.

>> No.54746531
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"Hello Anon. The council you once knew is no more, its membership have all sworn loyalty to the Advent administration"

>> No.54747672

>>54698811
The ones i'm writing about don't know english and i'm not about to trust a machine translation

>> No.54750354

>>54746531
Man holoAdvent really does have that perfect energy for being midbosses
I can see them being like the chosen in a theoretical crossover/off brand XCOM fic.

>> No.54751423

>>54750354
>I am Nerissa, demon of-
>BLOW IT OUT YOUR ASS
>Repeater Banish reaper blows her ass off

>IM BIJOU THE-
>YIPPIE KAY YAY!
>volatile mix grenadier with talon rounds dabs on her

>FUWAAAAMOOO
>I CAN HEAR THE COLORS
>Reaper Blademaster ranger skins them alive

>Shioriiiiin!
>Move bitch, i dare you
>Killzone sniper

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>>54697763
https://rentry.org/t9nz5c
>mumei, fauna, /meat/, still SFW
I reworked this substantially today, and so I will be submitting it.
>but it's pre-existing
Not in the archive
>that's against the spirit of new authors releasing new work
Moot point because I'm not a new author, either. When the time comes I will be double-dipping this into any applicable scary story reading stream as well.
If no one else submits, I win by default, so you better get writing :^)

>> No.54752278

>>54742153
>they’re sensitive and only “that special person” is allowed to touch them
Now I’m imagining a fluff story involving those two where they let you touch their tails/ears once they’ve fallen for you

>> No.54752637

>>54750354
>The lore reason they're streaming is to pay off debts to Cover after crashing into the office during their escape
Total midboss goobers

>> No.54753648

>>54751851
I don't know why you're treating this like a gotcha moment, we already said it's fine for veteran writers to submit any works that don't exist in the archive.

>> No.54754677

>>54752637
>writing them like they are as broke as the Baka to Test MC
>They have to fight HoloX for super market deals, but their heavy hitter, Nerissa, absolutely jobs to any cute girl
they have a lot of potential for goofy shenanigans

>> No.54755479

>>54753648
I didn't get an answer the last time I asked, but the obvious heelposting :^) at the end should've made it clear that it wasn't meant to be taken completely seriously.

>> No.54756037
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>Advent has a "break from the system and light the fire" motiff song
damn, they fit the cyberpunk trope to a T

>> No.54756279

>>54754677
Man holoX really is the perfect pair to advent lore wise due to them being goldfish poop gang to their midboss/miniboss squad. Perfect off fanfics too due to the language barrier making "canon" interactions difficult.
...
Man, cover really is nailing the perfect amount of lore for their 5 man gens not so much as council that it's dumb but just enough to bait fic writers.

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>>54754677
>At the top of a great tower, you wage a bloody battle against the entirety of Advent
>They go all out, unleashing their full, monstrous powers in order to kill you
>It goes on for hours
>By a fraction of a second, a millilitre of blood, you're able to come out on top
>Advent lies there defeated as you limp away, their curses of pain ringing out into the stormy night
>A week later you find them at the supermarket, hunting down the cheapest deals on eggs
>They spot you with the last carton in your hand
>You feel kind of bad
>"Uh... you can have it."
>"T-Thanks..."

>> No.54756559

Ranking new EN's on fic potential:
>FuwaMoco
Kemenomimi's with ear and tail weakness
Shy onee-chan, bratty imouto, perfect for incest
Will try to get you to sign a three way marriage contract on the first day you meet them
>Nerissa
NoPan
Tradwife
Hag energy
>Shiori
Likes books
Fujoshi
Tries to be your crazy goth gf -- actually just a nerd
>Bijou
is a rock

>> No.54757279

>>54756464
Thus starts the slice of life comedy as you grudgingly take in advent as housemates as losing on their first job has cost them all their credibility in being midbosses.

>> No.54759401

>>54756464
>Beating a demon in single combat is akin to a marriage proposal so Nerissa, Fuwa, and Moco instantly kneel because you beat three demons + two of their friends at once
>Shiori goes along with it for 'Archival Purposes' and has nothing to do with her screaming "BEAT ME UP AND KNOCK ME UP" in the middle of the fight
>Bijou is most cautious, but is placated when you promise that you don't own a pickaxe and the threat you made to crack her open like a geode was only said in the heat of the moment.

>> No.54759966

>>54751851
I don't know if this was the intention, but I found this funny.

>> No.54760447

>>54759401
>BEAT ME UP AND KNOCK ME UP
Oh fuck that's making me imagine her being the bad influence that tries to get you to spread her fetish to her friends
>BREAK HER OTHER HORN
>SPLIT HER WIDE OPEN
I can't think of doing violence on the dogs. Sorry.

>> No.54760864

>>54760447
Like Watame but with violence instead of breeding

>> No.54761736

>>54760447
>She’s made of gemstone, Anon. She can take it. Go on. Give her the rough treatment. Do it now.

>> No.54761780

>>54760447
>PULL THEIR TAILS
>TUG ON THEIR EARS
>...B-BUT ONLY A LITTLE THEY DON'T LIKE IT THAT MUCH

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>>54761736
Are you brave enough?

>> No.54763940

>>54761780
>Fuwawa and Mococo are actual pervs but no one takes their requests seriously
I mean it has potential.

>> No.54764219

>>54763922
>BIJOU BRAND FLESHLIGHT

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It's kind of tough juggling six different people in a fight from a single perspective.

>> No.54765395

>>54764775
Okay I know you probably mean juggling seeing what everyone is doing in a fight but this wording just made me imagine holoX getting juggled and styled on like they were in a COMBO MAD.

>> No.54765623

>>54765395
HoloX getting juggled by a giant or something like that sounds hot.

>> No.54765663

>>54764775
It is, my fighting Holox fic has kind of stalled due to wanting to work on making each of them feel different and interesting.

>> No.54766411

>>54764775
Just write that La+ is doing some kind of magical incantation that takes like 5 minutes to use and then give Lui and/or Koyori long range weapons so that they only get involved when you have down time.

>> No.54767575

>>54765395
Oh there'll be some of that, don't worry. It might be tough selling it as realistic but Chloe is getting fucking clapped midair.
>>54765663
Action's not the main focus of my story, so I'm hoping I'll be able to get away with giving each character a moment to shine and then moving onto the group battle.
>>54766411
I've already given Lui her whip, but you're right about Koyori and Laplus. I'm still struggling to think of a good weapon for Koyo though. She can't exactly have a futuristic beam cannon since this is set in a post-medieval fantasy setting, which leaves her as an alchemist tossing potions at you... which doesn't work very well. Maybe I can give her a semi-modern crossbow that uses those magazines (I think those exist), or a classic pistol that (somehow) can shoot multiple times.

>> No.54768551

>>54705085
She's used "beeg" a few times, but that's not a great indicator

>> No.54768676

>>54768551
Doesn't that make it super obvious?

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>> No.54769251

>>54767575
Koyori should go through a number of single use early gunpowder weapons, each one getting progressively more advanced, until her ultimate weapon is a hwacha.

>> No.54770523

>>54768905
That's a cute smile. And some nice waki.

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>>54769251
>"the fuck's a hwacha?"
>google it
Holy.

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>>54767575
What if Koyori just had a normal gun? In the story it's treated like it's some highly advanced weapon but when you describe it it's straight up just a fucking Glock.

>> No.54772148

A bit of a semantic question, but in a fic with multiple chuubas, how "heavy" does a scene with a chuuba need to be to warrant a tag? A page? or a paragraph?

>> No.54772427
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>>54771070
God, that sounds tempting. I've given her an entire lab and factory for her experimenting, so I could weave some genius-scientist bullshit into the story and give her a fucking gun. Maybe not a glock since that would have to involve plastic, but a handgun modelled after the 1911 could be plausible.
Time to do my research on how smokeless powder is made.

>> No.54772624

>>54772148
Whatever feels right to you anon. Our tag system isn't really formalized. Although I do think your tagging priorities will differ based on whether it's smut or not. If it's a smut fic you should probably tag it like you would porn. If it's sfw then you should just go with your gut.

>> No.54773923

>>54697550
oh damn, someone already wrote a prison one...
well my idea would be that you're a new prison guard assigned to all the holo girls in prison, trying to romance them, but something dark and twisted may be hidden behind the cute smiling faces. Yes, I partly drew the idea from Gokusotsu Kraken

>> No.54774362

Anyone can understand the fresh aspect, but why is local produce automatically better?

>> No.54774602

>>54771070
SMTIV lol

>> No.54774752

>>54772427
>Koyori uses God's chosen caliber .45 ACP
Based.

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>>54774752
I'll make it AKP, Automatic Koyo Pistol.

>> No.54775583

>>54774362
There's different reasons you can mix and match.
- It avoids supporting oligopols, and bigger companies in general
- You can see where your food comes from
- The smaller and closer the source is, the more leverage you have as a consumer when there's a problem
- The producer of the produce will spend the money locally, which helps other businesses in the area that you want to stay around

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>>54774752

>> No.54775804
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>>54770523
I love this artist's style. Lots of little details, and the way he draws skin is fantastic.

>> No.54776014

>>54775583
I posted this in the wrong board, let alone the wrong thread, but thanks for such a detailed answer. I was completely focused on taste but of course it makes the most logistical sense.

>> No.54776166

>>54776014
Hah, I just assumed you needed to know for something you were writing. Almost anything about how the world works can be relevant here, after all.

>> No.54776373

>>54776014
>>54774362
Another reason not mentioned is the fact that the vegetables that can best survive transport to the grocery aren't always going to align with what actually tastes the best, especially as a lot of them are artificially ripened rather than given the time to actually ripen on the vine..

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>> No.54778274

>>54773923
What prison fic are you referring to in that first sentence?
Also why are they smiling in prison? Are they in the fucking matrix to serve out their sentence?

>> No.54778573
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>>54772427
If you're doing a gun with bullet cartridges, I have some pretty shortform data on bullet primers I've used in my own (definitely writing related) research.
A primer is the little button that sparks the powder in the bullet, in case you didn't know. It's also the main barrier to using bullet cartridges instead of just flintlocks/blackpowder, since bullets obviously need manufacturing behind them to be worthwhile to sell.
Apologies if it's unrelated to your writing, but it might *spark* some inspiration in some other way.
https://patentimages.storage.googleapis.com/60/43/de/684e3bbad4d406/US2027825.pdf

>> No.54778616

>>54778274
>Also why are they smiling in prison?
Probably to entice the men watching them. So not too different from how it is in reality!

>> No.54779108

>>54778573 (me)
Forgot to mention, anyone can reload spent bullet casings with a reloading bench and some (frankly, they could do it with less). Bullets can be easily smelted, and powder is non-specific if you'reina pinch and don't mind corrosion. Loading rounds with powder isn't the filter, but all reloaded bullets need a fresh primer, because the primer is expended when the bullet fires and cannot be reused.
Thus, if you had lab skills want to to capture the market on bullets, you would go for the essential part everyone needs but nobody knows how to make.
Not even people trying to reverse engineer could work it out easily unless they had modern day equipment.

>> No.54779224

>>54777946
Those are some broad boobies.

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These are Matsuri's boobs

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>>54778573
>>54779108
Oh shit, thanks for this. Knowing the chemical composition will help for when Koyori is talking mumbo jumbo. I could definitely use it since I'm /k/ illiterate. I know that making the actual gun won't be the hard part for Koyo, but rather the ammunition. Aside from the primer, she'll need the slug, brass casing and powder, which would be pretty hard to gather the materials for even with the required knowledge (but as you said, easier to make). I have a scene in mind where Koyori will be complaining to Anon that ammunition is hard to make and she had to waste it all in order to defeat him.
Speaking of primers, I have a really dumb (but plausible in theory), DMC-level bullshit idea for a scene where someone doesn't have a gun and only ammo, so he throws a bullet into the air and hits the primer really hard with the tip of his sword to ignite it. This scene doesn't really belong to any story I'm writing, but I'd like to insert it into a story someday.

>> No.54780227 [DELETED] 

>>54779342
no they aint

>> No.54780372

>>54780087
>*BANG BANG BANG BANG* "THESE BULLETS ARE COMING OUT OF YOUR NEXT PAYCHECK, CHLOE!"

>> No.54780567

>>54780087
>DMC-level bullshit idea for a scene where someone doesn't have a gun and only ammo, so he throws a bullet into the air and hits the primer really hard with the tip of his sword to ignite it.
Anon...
That's not how bullets work. At all. The actual fucking bullet wouldn't go anywhere. It would just be an explosion.

>> No.54780762

>>54780227
Yeah they are

>> No.54780929

>>54780567
Just add Magic and stop being a pussy.

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>>54780567
R-Really? Wouldn't the explosion at least propel the bullet in a random direction?

>> No.54781222

>>54780762
Uhhhhh, sauce?

>> No.54781621

>>54781222
Her fantia

>> No.54781818

>>54697550
Lolibaba Mio nursing (You) back to health after you fall ill.

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>>54780567
You lack imagination, Anon. How are you going to tell a story with that attitude?

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>>54781993
getting constrained by logic or putting a limiter on the chuuni makes weak anons
its far far away but when i write the cyberpunk chuuni shit im gonna have Mori grab suisei from behind in a bear hug, and activating the bomb in her new metal armAs suisei tries to break free while cursing and screaming, Mori will mutter just one thing "Excuse me Senpai...could you please rest in peace?

>> No.54783128

>>54780567
>The actual fucking bullet wouldn't go anywhere.
NTA but it would. It’s why ammunition boxes that get blown up will sometimes have bullets shooting out from within. There won’t be any barrel let alone rifling so the bullet would probably get hit by the sword and go flying in a random direction, especially if it isn’t held in place, but it’s not like the explosion would magically make the piece of metal disappear. It would be a lot easier to do if the bullet was being held in place as opposed to falling through the air, for the sake of both accuracy and force.
As that other Anon said it is plausible in theory. It would just take the equivalent luck of winning three lotteries in a row to actually ignite it, then another ten for it to hit its target. But if it was fucking Dante doing it, there’d be no issue.

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>>54782781
Anon if you could pull that in a series my fucking knees would kneel so hard even if my heart dies of cringe.

>> No.54783346

>>54778274
>What prison fic are you referring to in that first sentence?
not a fic, but a prompt from last thread
and >>54778616 is right, a girl acting all cheerful and cutesy in front of the new prison guard, potentially to pull of some kind of scheme

>> No.54783539

>>54752637
My initial impression is that they're midboss tier, but Narissa and Bijou's inherit powers are just way above that in stature. FuwaMoco are easily midtier jobbers, and Shiori is terrifying in a sense that she can turn you into bookmarks, but I think Narissa is the actual powerhouse and might easily be above what La+ is capable of with the exception of her being unbound.

>> No.54784000

>>54783539
I think it would be funnier (and more realistic) if only Nerissa had some actual fighting capabiliies
FuwaMoco fit the jobber archetype perfectly, specially if they prepare some complex dual attack and someone trips them or you hypnotize one twin and she wants to molest the other
Shiori has her turn you to bookmark stuff, but if it only works if she touches and she's not a superhuman, then you can have something fun where she'll run behind someone and then get out of breathyou can also make a "gotcha" by baiting someone in her range
Bijou, while "powerful" would require either too much power or would just swing wildly because she has no idea how to fight, being a princess-like gem and stuff.
Thus leaving Nerissa as the only "capable one" which will only make it funnier if she gets canned by other heavy hitters for dumb reasons

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I broke into CHAnon's house. This was on his desktop under the filename "finale inspiration". What did he mean by this?

>> No.54784251

>>54783539
>>54784000
Okay I know this is getting into lorefaggotry but isn't nerissa hypernerfed from having a broken horn?
Though hanging onto the thought of nerissa still being strong with a broken horn makes me think she COULD hit above her weight class but she has terrible accuracy/control due to her magic being out of balance.

>> No.54784357

>>54784000
im waiting until they settle down but i have the impression Nerissa is going to be a disaster lesbian so all of her jobbings will be because she cant stop thinking about her opponent's ass

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>>54784000
That's more or less how I might handle them for the most part. FuwaMoco would actually be dangerous and know how to fight, but their power wouldn't be too unreasonable for the group to handle considering what they've fought before. Nerissa will be the true queen bitch of that gang. I also just wanna protec and be friends with the Bijou. Shiori actually invites a really powerful and fun tool to work with for my story. An archiver who has seen things no one else has might be the best shot Anon has to find some answers to his own book related mysteries. Too bad she's batshit insane, but we'll see if we can't get things to work out for once.
>>54784113
Probably exactly what I meant when I put it under "Hag breeding references".

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>>54784357
>Can't stop thinking your opponent's asses and breasts
>lose
Rookie mistake. True warriors know how to want to fight AND fuck at the time. You gotta keep your eyes on the prize; the ass. How can you even get to touch the ass if you don't win? It's really that shrimple.

>> No.54784650

>>54784572
>t. AA

>> No.54784686

>>54784357
>>54784572
>Smoke cloud clears, Nerissa is on the floor, hurt
>Kiara lands and puts her hands around her neck, she's finishing this fight
>"HHHNGGGNOOOOOOOOONGNGGGGFUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK"
>Kiara freezes
>"D-Di-did you just fucking cum?"
>"N-nnoo m-mmomy"
>Nerissa wins by creeping her out, asking for more choking while Kiara runs away

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>>54784113
I think you know exactly what I meant by that.

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>>54784686
That got me good, anon. It also fits how my interpretation of Kiara would react to a T. It'll probably make sense to have her help out with the Advent gang when the time comes, since her power scale is also naturally on the higher end.
>Kiara storms out and spots Anon tending his wounds or doing whatever else is going on that he wasn't involved in that fight
>"Oh good! You're alright Kiara! I knew none of these girls would be a match for you! Wha-"
>"I'm out. You're on your own summoner. You can deal with these fucking degenerates."
>"H-Hold on! Our job isn't done here! We gotta-"
>"A GIRL JUST FUCKING CAME ALL OVER THE FLOOR BECAUSE I WAS CHOKING HER! THAT'S FUCKING SICK. YOU DO NOTHING BUT ATTRACT SICK THIRSTY NUTJOBS TO FIGHT LATELY. YOU DEAL WITH IT."
>After Kiara stomps away, you just look around confused, and then to the doorway where Kiara just came from. "Jackpot."

>> No.54785240

>>54784113
I dunno how I’d feel about the mother being there…

>> No.54785330

>>54785240
>She makes sure you treat her baby right so she knows you'll treat HER right when you fill her pussy right after she makes sure her daughter gets the freshest and strongest sperm to knock her up

>> No.54785533

>>54785240
Her being there is an essential part of the process

>> No.54785558
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>>54785240
At least on my end, I'm going to touch on that initial awkwardness. The fact that Pekomama has already been bred herself previously will make it go a little smoother, but the idea of a mother watching anon bang her daughter will be a bit to take in at first.

>> No.54786025

>>54785330
>>54785533
>>54785558
For a regular Pekora story? Oh, absolutely, let me clap those hag cheeks. But for CH specifically? After all that development with Pekora only for transfer student to go after her mom?
If the author goes all in it would be a hilarious twist reveal that he’s actually really fucking slimy and has a secret identity as a hag hunter, but it would feel like a waste of development if he did her mother too.

>> No.54786317

>>54786025
>Ms. Usada. I'm HHD.
>"Ehhh...HHD...?"
>Hag Hunter Division. You're CUMMING with me...

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>>54786025
Jokes aside, if he ever does her mom, it'll be in a non-canon bonus chapter. As hot as Pekomama is, her daughter's the only bunny he'll ever have eyes for.

>> No.54786420

>>54786025
Then the transfer student betrays Pekora by locking her up in the hyberbolic time chamber, her last sight of the outside world being the transfer student kissing her pregnant mom as the doors close in front of her.

>> No.54786612

Any gokkun enthusiast working on something?

>> No.54786813
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>>54786025
I'll have nothing on the pure love and devotion CH anon and peko have for each other, that's for sure. Also in mine Pekomama is gonna go after Anon first. A capable and vitriol showing up just when she and her daughter need his help most will make any older woman with a dry spell weak at the knees.

>> No.54786875

>>54786400
You're working on that Security Division story right? Might need to change some things up...>>54786317

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>>54786400
That's cute as fuck anon.

>> No.54786961

>>54786875
That division doesn't open until Act 2.

>> No.54786991

>>54786813
>>54786400

How many stories are currently being written about Pekora/Pekomama right now? I count at least three, not complaining in the slightest just curious.

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>>54786961

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>>54786991
I wouldn't call mine being written exactly. Technically I'm writing to get to it, since it's gonna be the next arc of HJ. There's a few other rabbit related surprises I got in store for that arc that I'm super excited to write.

>> No.54788219
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Speaking of chuuni fights and the strongest chuubas as we were before, I'm not usually autistic when it comes to power levels but I'd like to list out the Hololive members and how strong they would be in a fight. There's some obvious ones like Kronii, unbound Laplus and Ina acting as the Ancient Ones' vessel being near the top, but it gets confusing when we try to consider semi-canon lore that comes from streams, and other stuff.

Take Nene for example. Her official lore is just "Girl from another world who wants to become an idol", but do we need to consider her hyper ultimate giga Nene form and increase her power level? Or does she stay as a regular girl?
Then there's Moona. Her lore is just "Model and idol", but isn't she a goddess of the moon? How powerful does that make her, if it's true?
And what about Aqua? Her lore is just "Clumsy maid", but she's crazy good at FPS games. Does that mean we increase her power level by giving her a gun, or does she stay at the bottom as a retarded maid?
Hell, even Amelia's time travelling lore is semi-canon, since she made that up during a fall guys stream. She was originally just a regular detective, but the time traveller gimmick just exploded and now everyone assumes it's canon.

>> No.54788716

>>54788219
Id say that,unless its lore that gets SOME recognition by the fanbase and staff, you have to ignore it.
Like yeah, super nenechi forma blanco is a meme, but it never got direct references and in her Holo Alternative trailer she didnt turn into SSJ and killed the snake.

>> No.54788879

>>54788219
Anon just go with what's cool and makes a better story.
Otherwise you'll just be stuck arguing power levels and if Nene achieving La Blanca can truly be a power above the Gods, or if La Grande Madre de Fubuki can win against Fuwawa and Mococo's secret third sibling.

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>>54788879
ok but real talk "La vieja lobo" can absolutely win against Kiara forma de caballero

>> No.54789036

>>54788219
>And what about Aqua? Her lore is just "Clumsy maid", but she's crazy good at FPS games. Does that mean we increase her power level by giving her a gun, or does she stay at the bottom as a retarded maid?
https://omniversal-battlefield.fandom.com/wiki/Minato_Aqua
you have to dig through this spic website to determine accurate power levels, who else but dbzfags are most knowledgeable when it comes to power levels?

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>>54788879
>Esto es fin la hermana!
>>54788219
You really just gotta do with the other anon said, do what's fun and makes sense for your story. That's pretty much what I did with Nene. I worked with the fact that she can have bear hands and made her a punchy strong barbarian.
She's one of my favorites to have fight.

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>>54789036
Holy fuck, what the shit?

>> No.54789836

>>54789639
it's canon, hologra really beats dbz when it comes to power creep

>> No.54789947

>>54788968
Okay but what if Kiara had Anya in her "Espada del Cazador de Gura" form with her?

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>>54789639
powerlevel autism takes all media as canon, which is why gag characters are utterly overpowered.
Technically, El chapulin colorado, the mexican gag character can beat 99% of fiction characters because its a gag.
Then again, my wife made them REALLY mad several times
>>54789947
she still loses to Mori Homosexualidad maxima

>> No.54790424
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>>54789639 (me)
>Law Manipulation
>Memory Manipulation
>Conceptual Manipulation
>Regeneration (High-Godly; Scales to V-Tubers like Uruha Rushia and Sakura Miko, whom of which could come back after being turned into a tetris block and reduced to nothing.
>Korone is capable of coming back after being IMMEDIATELY ERASED BY MIO
My fucking sides are in orbit. According to this site, Hologra makes every Hololive member a literal god.

>> No.54790457

>>54784113
I'm not CHAnon, but...
Please hang on a little longer, i'll be done soon

>> No.54791357

>>54790424
>According to this site, Hologra makes every Hololive member a literal god.
because that's canon, here you can see Akutan fly to space in seconds using her hair, also she's breathing and speaking there no problem despite lack of oxygen https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fzIeI3YjWAI

>> No.54791415

>>54789639
>>54790424
There is a dumb horror fic to be made about trying to survive against the sheer power of Minato Aqua. Maybe with the ending being hit my Aqua using her forget beam as she reassembles the world to try wooing you again.

>> No.54791674

>>54788219
You can find a lot of power level dicussion and similar things in >>>/vt/log and its predecessors.

>> No.54791877

>>54789172
>spoiler
>fight

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>>54791877
Yeah, that's what I said. Just what are you implying there, buddy?

>> No.54793281

I kind of want to see HJNene and Corrupted Nene duke it out now.

>> No.54793527

>>54793129
I was implying that she is also one of your favourites to have talk.And fuck.

>> No.54794002

>>54786612
Yes, but for some reason that WIP in particular causes me to autistically rewrite the same 10-15k words over and over instead of finishing it.

>> No.54794796

>>54791357
I know that, but Hologra being technically “canon” is hilarious because it trivialises everything. What’s the point of Hololive Alternative? Why didn’t Ayame just phase Iroha from existence during their duel? Why can’t Marine will a pirate ship into existence? In fact, if so many of these girls are dreaming to become idols, why can’t they warp reality itself to make it so they’re the best idol in the world?

>> No.54794959

>>54793281
>On tonight's episode of Dream Arena...

>> No.54794992

>>54794796
Because godmoding is boring and doesn't make for good content

>> No.54795439

>>54793281
See this is why we need to go with what makes a better story. Corrupted Nene would get her ass handed to her so fast it wouldn't even be funny if we go by power levels.

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>>54793527
You'd be right about that. I adore her simplicity while having the ability to be profoundly insightful at times, her unconditional trust, and her fun loving nature.
I do want to fuck her desperately, but it hasn't happened in canon yet. Haven't planned that one out yet. It'll likely be spontaneous since that's a trait both her and anon are able to exemplify freely within their relationship.
>>54793281
I hadn't actually read the corrupted Nene fics before. I'm glad I just fixed that though, it was chilling in a good way. A clear contrast to the one I've written but with a shared obsession with strength and being the strongest. That would be kinda wild to see the two go at it.

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>>54794796
>Why can't Marine will a pirate ship into existence
She has though. Pic related.

>> No.54797673
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To whom it may concern,
Matsuri uses a vibrator 5 times a day, fucks herself with a dildo once a day and uses a special dildo once a month because it's too "dangerous". Source, from her fantia.

>> No.54797785
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Anyone working on something dumb/comedic? How's it coming along?

>> No.54798068

>>54794959
>More Dream Arenas
Those are fun

>> No.54798450

>>54781079
Yup, but there would be significantly less force since the explosion isn't concentrated within the chamber
That said, it's anime, so I say go for it.

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54798608

>>54795651
I'm glad you liked them, they were fun to write! Makes me feel a little bad for not starting HoloJourneys yet, but it feels like every time I turn around you add another five chapters so I'm probably just gonna have to buckle down and read it in the near future.

Not making any promises for anything, but how observant is the protagonist in HJ? Like, if the Corrupting Anon and Corrupted Nene got isekai'd and bumped into the other Anon and Nene, how quickly would he think something was up with them? Cause I figure the Nene's would be more curious and interested in each other but the bad Anon would pretty quickly start 'subtly' trying to get them to fight.

>> No.54798720

>>54798068
What other matchups would make for an interesting fight?
>HCanon vs. HoloslaviaAnon
>HFanon vs. HJanon
>HBTanon vs. Cover Job Anon vs. Bodyguard-san 3-way battle royale

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>>54798608
Don't feel bad at all that. I don't want anyone to feel pressured to read the stuff I put out there. Like with writing, you read what feels good to and what strikes you at the time, and most importantly at your own pace. If/When you do get around to it, I hope you enjoy it! The super Nene is a great bean and I'm really happy with her include in my own story and looking forward to giving her more time to shine.
>Spoiler
He is pretty observant to the people and things around him. First off, he would probably entertain quick thoughts about how the other Anon is possibly an actual relative of his, and then try to initiate a conversation immediately, but after he saw a near identical Nene, he might start getting confused and little a paranoid.
>Did Koyori somehow fucking clone me from the jar of blood she stole from me? Did she get some Nene's too?
I would like to say he would be able to pick up on how the corrupted Nene lacks a certain spark that he sees in his own, and how that Nene is sticking to her anon like he was her handler would concern him somewhat.
Would he stop a fight? Probably not at first. HJNene is just as fightarded as HJAnon is, so if the two Nene's wanted to test their strength against MY OWN CLONE, he would be cool with it. The second corrupted Nene starts going for clear kill blows without relent, he would start getting nervous.

>> No.54800072

>>54798720
I thought HFA and HJA were at a really weird power standoff where HJA on his own isn't as strong as HFA due to the latter being forced to defend himself by himself on more occasions and HJA having a lot of party synergy

>> No.54801291

>>54800072
HJA did actually manage to win a 1v1 recently, so he's slowly coming into his own.

>> No.54802010

>>54797673
Now I'm seeing in my mind Matsuri meeting other holomembers while still smelling like girl goo, and the others politely ignore it.

>> No.54802323

>>54794796
they're holding back

>> No.54803271

>>54798720
>definitely insane veteran-turned-vigilante
>sociopathic career killer
>medicated but well-meaning security guard with military training
I think it'd be more interesting to see them try to work together without ending up at each other's throats

>> No.54804446

>>54803271
>HFA and HJA work together to subdue a hag level threat
>HFA finds resolve and the strength to bounce back through wanting to go back home to his dragon and loved ones
>HJA finds resolve and strength to bounce back through wanting to breed that hag afterwards
>HFA looks at him with a disappointed look at his face and HJA adds on "and to get back to the girls I love of course! If you got a sheep of your own back home, I'd totally recommend taking her for a ride. Let me give you some advice, use the horns."

>> No.54805187

>>54803271
>"Stay out of my way, both of you. I work alone."
>"Oh sod off. How many wars have YOU been in, hotshot?"
>"I am going to fucking die here."

>> No.54806289

>>54797785
Nothing at the moment, sorry friend. It's all sex and serious

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>>54803271
>The universes merge when they all happen to be after the same stalker in the same place
That could be pretty fun yeah

>>54805187
>"Wait, you served? Where?"
>"The Second Korean War."
>"The SECOND!?"
HBTanon doesn't talk with the mask on but we can pretend he does for the sake of good banter

>> No.54806693

>>54804446
>Meeting HF Watame and immediately fighting off urges of hag correction lingering

>> No.54807499

>>54806633
>"Alright, there he is. How do we handle-?"
>"I'mma kill him."
>"What."
>"I'll get the acid bath ready."
>"WHAT."

>> No.54807507

>>54806693
Is HJanon really that much of a horndog?

>> No.54807810

>>54807507
I get the feeling that he's always down for hags, but his self-control and his friendships let him retain control quite firmly.

>> No.54808014

>>54806633
They seek an interdimensional threat, something straight out of Persona 2

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>>54807810
Yeah that's about how I would describe it. As a guy just getting to become sexually active, he's becoming extremely more aware and accepting of his urges. Although, he's not really at that point where he wants to roll around with any woman he comes across. He still wants that deep intimate bond to be present before he's ready to plunge into a sexual experience with them. Some friends also do a good job at keeping him focused, but others might become enablers.
Pic surely not related, she can do no wrong.

>> No.54809253

>>54809165
That kind of characterisation makes for an interesting conflict if someone was trying to seduce him in a manipulative way.

>> No.54809668

>>54808014
>CJanon and HBTanon have directly killed so many people combined that it caught the attention of a cosmic being who decided to mash their worlds together to see what would happen
>Bodyguard-san caught along by pure bad luck

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>>54809253
And who would be so dastardly as to manipulate a trusting hero using sex appeal?

>> No.54811859

>>54811309
Shiori, maybe.

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>>54811859
Not a bad option, but I'm not sure what Shiori would try to get out of him. In Lui's case, she has a clear goal, and she can use the young man as one of her pawns. I'm a long ways off from thinking about how to properly include advent.

>> No.54814734

Ah!

>> No.54816311

>>54807499
>"C-Can we at least come back later? There's like a dozen guys between him and us!"
>"Not a problem."
>"Even better, I'd say."
>"Oh, for fu-WAIT WAIT WAIT YOU GUYS ARE JUST GOING IN!?"

>> No.54818027

>>54816311
>a dozen guys
Yab

>> No.54818182

>>54697550
Fucking your hag girlfriend with a condom on and being completely unaware she's already poked a hole in it.

>> No.54818550

>>54818182
I don't mind abuse and torture fics, but fucking a hag with a condom on is too cruel.

>> No.54818812

>>54818550
Hence why there is a hole in it, anon. She's aware that you are using a condom and she wants you to do it raw and get her pregnant.
If you want to make it even more nasty, you can agree to do it raw with her but she "still" cannot get pregnant. Hence why she decides to keep you prisoner in her own home and will only let you out again when you do manage to get her pregnant.

>> No.54818971

>>54818812
Sure, it's just tough for me to self-insert when the second person POV character is the villain.

>> No.54819413

>>54818971
Oh I wouldn't go that far and say she's a villain, anon. She's just really desperate to become a mother and she fears its "her" fault that she can't get pregnant and that she's afraid that you'll leave her and go for someone younger. That's why she'll keep you prisoner but rather restrain you to the bed, she'll just lock you in her room and only let you out when you have to use the toilet.
You also wouldn't be abused or starved.

>> No.54819557

>>54819413
I think he was making a joke that (You) are villainous for having the gall to even consider fucking a hag with contraception

>> No.54820032

>>54819557
Oh. That's my bad then as I have difficulty trying to read between the lines.
My reason why you in the story is using protection is because you aren't ready to have children and you want to have a stable income despite your hag girlfriend making much more money than what you do. You DO want to get her pregnant but you want to wait till you are ready because you don't want to make a hasty decision and get her pregnant and then she has difficulty coping with it.
But you are completely unaware that she's desperate for a child and you are also unaware that her eggs are close to expiring. If you don't get her pregnant then she WILL make you get her pregnant even if it means you never get to set foot outside the house ever again.
And while I was thinking this prompt up, the only hag I can think of who'd fit this scenario would be Polka.

>> No.54820182
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>The ultimate evil
>Worse than soul crunching demons
>Worse than a secret society plotting to take over the world
>Worse than people who use their money and power to oppress and enslave others
>Worse than a group of misfit demons escaping their cells and causing mass destruction
>A man who is unwilling to attempt to impregnate a hag during sex
I've written some pretty deranged shitheads so far, but this guy takes the cake. He won't even go raw on cakes either! And that's terrible.
This madman has to be stopped. Anyone who wants to see a world where no hag's eggs go unfertilized, follow me.

>> No.54820505

>>54820182
I'll follow you anywhere, chief hagfriend. Even on X, if I must

>> No.54822039

>>54820182
When you make a post like that and add a Mio image along with it, it makes me feel bad and it also makes me want to completely rewrite my prompt so that instead of using a condom, you just incredibly horny and you keep hounding your hag girlfriend for sex because you need to satisfy your sex drive and put a baby in her ASAP.

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>>54822039
Well now you're just putting good ideas in my head.
>During the Mio arc, Anon gets his shit fucking slapped. The wolf gives him a homemade remedy as a last resort, unsure of all the side effects
>Anon's primal lust is cranked to 11 and he has a MIGHTY NEED TO BREED, like consciously wanting to put babies in women
>He makes the week of lion hag breeding look like a fucking softcore makeout session

>> No.54825096

>>54794002
What's so bad about that stretch of words that you can't show it to other people without feeling the need to rewrite it?

>> No.54825339

>>54822662
That situation sounds like it could lead to Anon actually taking charge of his hag harem in a sexual context for the first time, telling them that they're going to get bred tonight and ordering them to make out or to present their their asssets while he breeds them one by one.
When the effects wear off he feels bad about what he did even though he enjoyed it personally, but the girls tell him that they liked it and want to see that side of him from time to time.

>> No.54826401

>>54825339
That's good. Why that's very good. Up till that point he would have been very private about the sex between him and each individual girl, even if they share the facts with each other anyway. Likely where this would take place in the story, a certain snow elf would get a fun hazing in a sense, since she's not gonna be fully on board with the whole "sharing" thing at first.

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How are you wips going bros? Are ya writing? Outlining? Reading? Editing? You can even post that word count or anything else you have to show for how your current progress is going.

>> No.54834624

>>54831046
Writing one, outlining parts of another. Both going well, but the writing one is coming along faster.
Wordcount? Idk, like 4k? Haven't really checked

>> No.54840411

>>54825096
What's written is, in my opinion, pretty good. But for some reason my brain has decided that this - and only this - WIP needs to be perfect.

>> No.54842596

>>54840411
Nothing wrong with striving to make your story the best it can be. That just shows how much you care about it, but also try to recognize if you are reaching for levels of perfection beyond what you already achieved. We can be our own worst enemies in that regard sometimes and we need to know when to take a step back and accept what we have made when we feel we have done all we could.

>> No.54842996

>>54831046
So far so okay. I'm currently editing my WIP. Later, I'll write a few words for the contest fic.

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>>54842996
A few words is another step closer! Just getting that pen to paper is a win.
>>54834624
Good to hear it's smooth sailing for you right now! Keep it up.

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>>54831046
Right now I'm just trying to survive my job. I might try to get some writing done on the weekend, but this month's probably going to be pretty sparse as far as progress goes.

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>>54848508
Hang in there anon. If you get some time to write and feel like itll help you relax and recharge, go for it. Make sure to keep doing what is best for yourself. You can make it.

>> No.54852654

>>54845303
Thanks for the encouragement. The contest fic is a bit of a pain to write since I've been experimenting with something. Hopefully it turns out good in the end.

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>>54852654
That's part of what the contest is all about! Try something new and give it your all.

>> No.54857283

>>54831046
Getting back to writing for my contest fic after recovering from a wisdom tooth extraction. The dumb chuuni powerlevel discussion from earlier in the thread has gotten me inspired.

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54857388

>shiori is just a massive fujo nerd
I NEED TO SMELL HER PUBIC JUNGLE so please someone write about her im busy

>> No.54857449

>>54857388
How about you write about her instead.

>> No.54857592

>>54857449
im busy

>> No.54857780

>>54857592
Then write it when you're not busy.

>> No.54857883

>>54857388
>Work at Cover Corp.
>Go to her archive to learn about some arcane shit you need for work.
>Ask Shiori.
>Listen to her sperg about about it for an hour straight.
I love it.

>> No.54857927

>>54857780
i will but i also want someone else to write about her because she's cute

>> No.54858863

>>54857883
>"hey uuuh... i need some grimoires on space control?"
>"Space control? woooah that takes me back! yknow years ago there was this spellcaster.."
>2 Hours later
>"And yeah, that's why testicular torsion is banned on most spellcasting sites"
>"Listen...i huh...i was gonna use it to move a blanket and simulate it was a ghost but im not extremely fucking hard. Can i get your number?"

>> No.54859101

>>54857388
I will in 6 months when she loosens up.

>> No.54859569

>>54857388
>Gave herself a choking fetish due to suffocation from hiding out of autistic fear of bloody mary
I love this fucking autist.

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>>54857283
Let the over the top magic fueled by friendship and guts inspire you further! That's where the good shit is.

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>>54859569
cannibalism in her first stream sure is a thing

>> No.54862505

>>54861140
It was just for a game anon... right?

>> No.54865589

>>54862505
>He doesn't know

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>>54859569
>>54861140
>pre-debut: everyone thinks she's going to be a psychopath
>debut: she's just some fucking nerd, scissors thing notwithstanding
>one (1) stream later: she's more of a psychopath than anyone could have possibly imagined

>> No.54866312

>>54866075
That's it
im writing something for the rumble with her.
her being dirt poor growing up resonates with me

>> No.54866842

>>54866312
Careful anon. She's quite literally jumped up the ranks of Holos most likely to read a fic about her.

>> No.54867080

>>54866842
Someone should really send a superchat to her telling her to check out /wg/ on 4chan.

>> No.54867123

>>54866842
She's gonna be my beta reader.
im gonna bag the menhera

>> No.54867129

>>54867080
anon no

>> No.54867132

>>54866842
I'm going to write her taking fan dick (mine) in excruciating detail and I'm going to relish the fact that there's a non-zero chance she's rubbing her clit to it.

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>>54867080
anon yes
mfw I've decided at some point, if a chuuba I know about is doing some fanfic related content and wants recs, I'm gonna shill my shit with a fiver.

>> No.54867610

>>54867080
>>54867451
fuck off containment breaking asshole

>> No.54867949

>>54867610
I was just gonna direct them to where they can find all my shit.

>> No.54868565

>>54866075
>"Oh, and speaking of dissection..."

>> No.54869976 [DELETED] 

>>54867610
Fuck off, leech piece of shit. It'd be great to have the chuubas themselves here reading stories about them. They could even participate - not that we'd ever know. Hell, there could be chuubas here right now.

But anyway, hang yourself. You're not part of this community.

>> No.54870365

>>54867080
No, they shouldn’t.

>> No.54870994

>>54869976
NTA but I don’t want a chuuba to come here and see all the rape. That wouldn’t be great at all.
>Hell, there could be chuubas here right now.
I think you’re being a bit hopeful.

>> No.54872695

BEHOLD
>>54872449

>> No.54873072

>>54872695
Fics dead and the bit has been dead since about a week after it came out

>> No.54873175

>>54870365
Yes, they should.

>> No.54873233

>>54873072
I know, and yet somebody still made it. It's beautiful.

>> No.54874113

>>54873072
No anon I'm pretty sure that's referring to a bit from the stream where young shiori played doctor to dead flies because she didn't have friends to play it with.

>> No.54875121

>>54874113
So this means Shiori is going to be the protagonist of Shrunken Troubles 2: Buzzed and Bothered, right?

>> No.54875188

>>54875121
What happens to her in it?

>> No.54875457

>>54875121
Anon, it's over. Pekofag finally got fed up with us and left. We're never getting a sequel to that.

>> No.54875700

>>54875457
We've ALREADY got a sequel to it - Shrunken Blessings...

>> No.54875723

>>54875188
That's for the writer to figure out!

>Nobody wants to collab with Shiori, so she does one of her trademark insect dissection streams
>Camera cuts to her microscope
>"Okay everyone! So this here is a fly. Under the microscope, you can see it's still buzzing..."
>"Now, we'll have to apply a solution to put the fly to sleep! I have to be careful, though..."
>It's actually Shion's shrinking potion.
>She applies it. Smoke fills the screen. Now we see Shiori and the fly under the microscope.
>"Wh-What? What happened?!"
>"Bzzzt bzzzt bzzzt bzzzzt!"
>[Fly Subtitles: "So you're the bitch who killed all my friends!"]
>"Wh-What?!
>"Bzzzt bzzzt bzzzzt!"
>[Fly Subtitles: "Correction is needed!"]
>"NOOOO!"
>Unironic fly sex happens under a microscope while 50k viewers watch in shock and arousal.

>> No.54875955

>>54875723
Yeah, that could work! All depends on how much I like Shiori. I'll watch her debut later, see if her personality tickles my fancy - then I may just get it commissioned.

That is, if Pekoanon ever finishes his current commission...

>> No.54876172

>>54875955
Better to watch the recent stream; I think it's a more accurate presentation of what she has up in the ol' noggin (read: she's actually a bigger psychopath than anyone expected)

>> No.54876479
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54876479

>>54697550
Fretting over Pochi when her old lady problems flare up

>> No.54876606

>>54875188
The Metamorphosis meets Bear (1976)

>> No.54876797

>>54875700
Wake up anon. It doesn't exist. You're remembering a hallucination.

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>>54697473
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS01WVyRDf-KXbnz6gBcQWMvSnzOLyrZwlIhTH4v8LWkfmCnJlNTDvIWrZDMjszdTENyyEblDroKwH5/pub

Moth to a flame
TAGS: Shiori Novella, SFW, Fluff,

I just shat this, im shaking because im falling asleep and i barely checked. Might correct mistakes tomorrow but i just had to write this.
enjoy

>> No.54877101

>>54876797
Wish the change in my bank statement was a hallucination, too...

>> No.54877208

>>54876606
Could you, uhh, give a little more detail? For someone that has no idea what you're talking about.

>> No.54877388

>>54877208
Both of those titles are things you can google, because this joke is only funny if you look it up yourself.

>> No.54877418
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>>54876919
That was a shitpost and a half. Got a few sensible chuckles out of me. Good job anon

>> No.54877496

>>54876919
Anon, you should submit this to the writing rumble. I think we have a winner here. This was perfect.

>> No.54877568

>>54876919
This fic was nice. I like the buildup and the reactions of the different chuubas, especially Roberu and Miko's. Good job, anon!

>> No.54877767

>>54877208
Imagine Baldur's Gate 3 but it was written by the poet Ovid.

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54878029

>>54876919
I saw the joke coming, but it was still pretty funny. Nice work!

>> No.54881444

>>54876479
Breeding Pochi then panicking when she turns to dust after cumming inside her!

>> No.54882143

>>54826401
>Lamy is uncomfortable with sharing so she wants to go first and then leave
>she is there way before the time the girls were ordered to appear and acts like there's going to be a queue
>before she can get on anon's dick, some of the veteran harem members pull her aside
>"You think you can just claim dibs, newbie? You'll get your turn eventually, but first you'll show us what you're made of."
>she looks to Anon, but he's already getting busy with the first breeding of the night and tells Lamy to follow her senpai's guidance if she wants to belong
>Lamy watches Anon breed other girls and comes to find it hot as she's getting pleasured and pleasuring others
>she's getting increasingly excited for her turn as she sees the other girls melt under Anon in his primal lust mode

>> No.54882773
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54882773

>>54876919
I laughed, some real banger lines in that one. I love Oga's role in this.
Definitely needs some polishing grammar and readability wise but otherwise well done.

>> No.54883174

>>54831046
Thinking of cutting losses and just pushing a good segment I have done as a stand alone to work on the rest separately. Only twelve pages past that point.

>> No.54883198

>>54882773
I like the idea of Chloe having the power of turning into an actual Orca... even if I have no god damn clue how you'd fit that into a fic outside of a small joke.

>> No.54883226

>>54876919
meh

>> No.54883802

New thread
>>54883569

>> No.54886080

>>54876919
As the other Anon said it could use a quick once over for grammar, and I got confused for a moment at the sequence break since it wasn’t clear but besides that this was funny. The entire class cringing at it with each other was great, also
>Ougaman
kek.

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