/wg/ - Writing General - Corporate Cogs Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>53157919

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

PD, PT: Nina:Tags: NSFW, Nina, Lactation, Analingus, Nursing Handjob, Nakadashi:>>53209238

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Rape correcting Magni and Vesper.:>>53170518

Kuro forcing (You) into a sexual relationship with her and allowing you (willing or unwilling) to do whatever you please with her body. The reason? she doesn't want you lusting after her sister and she will do ANYTHING to keep her pure and innocent.:>>53193411

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Gomen, I forgot to bump because I was reading and making this response.
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>>53209238
I think I've said this for literally every PD:PT chapter I've commented on that's been released recently but...
It's hot but genuinely needs to either go full "Plot? What Plot?" and abandon any pretenses of being a coherent story even the prelude to sex or at least give something more to actually make the smut mean something because man I really haven't been able to nut to these newer chapters. Which is weird given that as far as I can tell the quality is still the same it's just that its taken the series concept of rushing straight to sex with barely any setup too far that I can't really get into it even if I find it erotic. I guess a better way to phrase it is that the smut is good but it's not good enough for me to nut to without any investment in what's happening.
Genuinely I think like half of the PD;PT smut scenes/chapter would have worked so much better if they were in their own one-shots or mini series since they are objectively hot to me. They've just been saddled with the baggage of being in this series.

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I'd like to lick her butthole, is what I meant. In case anyone wasn't clear on that.

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>>53209238
I liked the title drop, it was funny because of how clearly unnatural/forced it was.

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>>53238721
Taking a bite out of Laplus' horns and living to regret it.

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>>53238857
I agree with your criticism about the plot, but I do have to ask: Have you ever heard of anthology? Or does my series not fit the definition of one? Literary definitions can be confusing some times.
>>53239357
The thread was discussing it so I had to shoehorn it in somehow.

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>>53238875
And I hope that's exactly what I get to do in tonight's dream. I have that feeling.

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>>53240848
What would her horns be made out of?

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>>53243616
Cheese. Like the moon.

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>>53238721
Having your secretary Suisei preform certain "favors" for you

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>>53242370
Usually anthologies are for stories that are related to each other by say theme instead of straight up being sequels.
Even then, it's not like the latter chapters would be good stories on their own even if I pretended to think of them as independent stories rather than one whole story due to the whole "not even barely minimum amount of setup". The only chapters that manage that plot setup would be the ones that actually made the attempt to link to previous chapters (the intial pregnancy to preg sex chain + the Lui arc). Outside of those the little bit of plot is basically like the plot here, not enough to make the following sex scene actually meaningful/substantial but just enough to make the reader want for there to have been more to set it up.
Like again, your smut writing is still the same hot stuff but it's not really enough to carry the chapter through the series fatigue. Genuinely think this would have landed better had you had gone for either extreme and either jumped straight to it like "Run" and focused entirely on making it a hot scene or making it a fuller one-shot about impregnating Nina in a love hotel.

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>>53243160
I like this format change >>53238689

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>>53243616
That one food that you can't stomach and tastes rancid.

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>>53243616
It's made from only the purest most concentrated Evil in the known universe. Fondant

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>>53247328
Sounds like a decent agreement to me.

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>>53206983
You're probably thinking of when Ayame said that Anon had cured her loneliness.

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>>53248776
Oh yeah it's right there
>“You ever feel lonely again, let me know straight away. I’ll talk to you, even come over if I have to. I won’t let you be alone anymore. I'll be your Our Cures”
How did I miss it?

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>>53249517
>I'll be your Our Cures

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Since this feels like the most relevant thread, I'll ask: which vtubers do a book club? Like, give a book, and a week or a month to read it, and discuss it at the end.

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>>53250868
I haven't heard of any. The closest thing I can think of is Polka, who sometimes does streams where she reads books to her viewers. Which isn't quite the same.

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>>53250868
Polka likes to read stories to chat. I think that kinda counts don't it? Fauna is a pretty avid reader as well. Reine likes to read fanfics.

>gotta write a fluffy bed time scene now where Polka reads a book while Anon rests his head on her chest
>it's a wonderful and soothing read for a while, but then a shocking realization hits, it's a book recommended by Pomu

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>>53250868
It's not the exact thing and not much, but hey
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PL_36PeBLiASl6fuccncM0i8VCJ0VtPbZo

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>>53250868
Fauna have book clubs with her members occasionally

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>>53250868
Hell if we know being generous 90% of us are Holowriters and as far as I know no one in the holosphere does anything like that. Maybe there is an indie out there that does it but you're better off asking the indie chuuba threads rather than us since this is a fanfiction writing thread... Even if we occasionally double up as a community for guys writing for their creative projects (VNs and such)

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>>53251088
I love her reading streams, glad she is doing them more often now again! Also she looks sooo adorable with the glasses

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>>53250868
I heard that someone from Production Kawaii might have done something along those lines, but I wouldn't know anything beyond that, unfortunately. Seems like quite the niche.

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>>53251271
It's one of my favorite looks for her. I should write them in at some point. Though I kinda made it apparent that her eyes are sharper than anyone else's, so it'll more be so for her clowning around than for functional use. Unless the functional use is exposing Anon's fetish for eyewear.

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>>53251412
>spoiler
Smut Summer has really gotten you going, huh? I'm really looking forward to the future of HJ and the hags' happy pregnant endings.

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>>53251303
Found her. Her name's Namiji Freesia, but from the looks of it those 'book club' streams are members only.

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>>53251545
It was always the plan to breed these wonderful hags, but the story just didn't build up to it until this summer coincidentally. The setting is also super fitting right now, so I gotta get my butt moving. Aiming to get this next chapter done and ready for editing today.

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Hey AA, I just realized this but Auntie's Little Secret isn't archived as a series. I know that it was recently confirmed to be going under a hiatus while the author tries to figure out how to continue it but it has 4 parts wasn't 3 the minimum agreed on when the series archive got established?

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>>53245503
I understand now, thanks.

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>>53251757
I'm looking forward to it! Hopefully the competition will remain friendly and they can live with the polygamy and orgies

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>>53251214
*has

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>>53251986
I thought I put it there. I'll handle it when I'm home.

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>>53253302
>Spoiler
Not gonna lie, I'm not sure my skills as a writer are up to snuff to pull that off just yet. Hopefully I can keep improving and when the time is right to put one of those in, I'll have the stuff to make it enjoyable. I'll just need to work my up one by one if you catch my drift.

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>>53256020
Clearly the answer is to have a hag tournament arc to resolve all the competition.

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>>53251986
Doesn't it usually need a summery for it to be archived as a series?

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>>53256364
But they all deserve a baby.

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>>53256586
The results of the tournament are merely to decide the order of breeding and the amount of inseminations a day, of course. Even the losers will get some action.

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>>53256364
Only thing they'll win by competing is getting a bun in their oven sooner than others.
>>53256586
They do, and they will get what they deserve.

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>>53256020
Hey, harem-style where they just have sex with the one guy together is way easier to write than a big free-for-all at least.

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>>53256951
True, but I'd still have to juggle what other girls are doing with each other while the D is currently buried in someone else. A man can only be split in so many directions, even with a mouth and two hands to spare.

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>>53257577
Oh, I was thinking the others would be mostly caressing some body part of his, saying something encouraging, lending a hand, preparing themselves with a finger or two, relaxing and watching, bringing food drink and other supplies...maybe gently occupying his mouth or a free hand for a short while at most.

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>>53258240
I like the idea of one of them doing a snack run after they got a little worn out. All that other stuff is good notes too. Thanks anon. I'll remember some of that!

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>>53259226
You're welcome! I'm a big fan of romantic harem sex with a focus on the current lovemaking pair, and an attentive supporting cast. That way there's also more freedom to show the personalities of all the people around the pair and what they think and feel, rather than having everyone busy with sex (which still allows for individuality of course, but in a more constrained way).

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>2800 words and three scenes
>dont know how to finish the chapter or if to make it longer
i dont like writing anymore

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>>53261368
I sometimes think about things like that this way: Did I get the story far enough along as I planned? Is there more I want to tell in this segment? Is the last scene enough of a wrapper? Could I add more to the previous scenes?
Usually if I'm not sure if the chapter's finished, it means I want to add more stuff.

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Ah!

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>>53264378
Mr. Koro.... so kawaii.

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>>53268330
Mr. Koro? More like Mr. Sexo.

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I can't remember much of last night's dream, but basically I kept trying to sell life insurance to Marine. As if that wasn't strange enough, she kept trying to explain to me how she was never going to die and I was taking it super seriously and trying to think of sales tactics to go around it.
Side note, this picture had to be reduced in size to post, because Fubuki's ass was too dummy thicc.

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>>53269144
You should gather these posts of yours and make a dream journal-like collection out of them. That way it will be easier to find for others (because it can be archived) and be more appropriate for the thread, too

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>>53269144
You're welcome >>53238689

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>>53238721
I want more horror and spooks

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>>53238721
Lui, friend of your mother adopts a 5 year old chuuba of your choice because her parents passed. Dedicating her life to her adopted daughter, the days pass her by and she finds herself entering her 30's single.
She's cared for you in the past, and both you and the chuuba are childhood friends/friendly neighbors .
One night, as you're ready to get into college, Lui and her daughter celebrate with you because your parents are out of town.
There Lui begins to ask about why you don't have a girlfriend, etc.
Buzzed with wine, you tell her you've been in love for the past 10 years with the same woman, but that there's an age gap and you're not sure she sees you that way.
Lui assumes you're talking about her daughter, none the wiser you've been in love with her since you were a little shota.

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>>53270894
One of the extremely intelligent counterarguments I used against Marine was "no no, you're going to die, probably soon."
Dream logic is funny.

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>>53271960
>You and the chuuba work together to make Lui happy because the daughter just wants to see the woman who gave her a home and a mother happy and with a man that will treat her right

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>>53273188
I thought of Lui setting you up with her daughter and then you just tell her "Look, I'm in love with your mom, like super head over fucking heels." and helps you confes, and then she has to passively accept that her childhood best friend is going to be banging her mom every night.

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>>53273188
Okay, but it would be more interesting if you treat her wrongly. Like, she sets you up for a fairytale relationship and 1 month in you flip out and beat the shit out of her for burning the casserole.

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>>53274437
The hell is wrong with you bro?

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>>53271960
Anon. This is very clearly a Laplus and Lui prompt.

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>>53274928
The problem is that I've read too much in my time and want to be exposed to something fresh, or at least fresher.

Your problem is that you've read too little, and thus are happy sitting in your tiny bubble.

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hello writing frens, a few days ago I asked if you guys wanted to write anything miori related and I remember an anon saying he would if he could, I have been off the internet a few days so I just wanna know if he did
If not please I beg, she deserves more than one entry in the archive

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>>53275165
>tries to gaslight someone for not wanting something "fresh"
>pulls out a wife beating trope that's been used since the 50s

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>>53275165
Okay dude.

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>>53275211
If you love her so much why can't you write it yourself?

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>>53276770
I am esl and I suck at writing stories! I very much enjoy reading them here tho
I can jerk off to something I wrote

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>>53277014
Can't*

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>>53275525
>>53275558
Fluff fags seething because abuse chads are back in the room.

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>>53277212
If you're such a chad, why don't you write the fic yourself then?

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>>53275211
Got any suggestions for a story

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>>53281169
NTA but didnt Miori get a prompt including bae once?
I, personally, would love a threesome

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>>53275211
We've had ESL writers, you know.

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>>53281169
I posted them a few threads ago, when I first asked, I'm on my phone and kinda busy I'll re post them tomorrow

>>53281415
I don't like doing bad stuff, like if I know I'm not gonna be good at something I don't like doing it
Outside of me being ESL writing is just not for me

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>>53278961
Same reason neither of you will, because I'm just discussing prompts. Your choice to get bitchy because someone had a different idea.

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>>53282343
Oh my mistake. I didn't know you were in the middle of writing something else too. I just wanted to know why you wanted to commit domestic abuse on this cute hag.

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>>53282670
Why the fuck wouldn't you?

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>>53238689
This is more of a proof of concept fic if anything. The 4kids dubbing from a few threads ago piqued my curiosity so I gave it a go. AA, don't bother archiving this. A fun game to play to whoever reads this would be to see how many americanizations you can recognize. Only one should be kind of tricky.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSNn3jy7GgciISnsYXORAAyJEvqi99hqKu2dXdSppfj3IOnr7mNuxcIXsmtaPmDUrtSmq5lNiVBrmBQ/pub

Tags: SFW, Olivia Felina Okayu , Kimberly Baker Korone , Fionna White Fubuki , Antonio Arururan , Iris IRyS

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>>53284939
Excellent stuff. Had a couple smiles. I laughed at the rin gummy part.

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>>53284939
The fucking censorship is what got to me. I laughed, well done.

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>>53284939
It's an amusing jab at 4kids style Americanizations. Though I think it would have been funnier if you went for either having it be super serious despite the ridiculous censors or had it be a complete shitpost that amps up how it's censored to ludicrous extents.
Anyway it's a fun proof of concept. Taking a guess its censor sources wehre mostly from 4kids pokemon and one piece with a but of other anime localization here and there.

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>>53284939
That was some dumb fun. I love it.

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>>53284939
>My favorite 4kids butchering joke didnt make it in
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RRNRQXtDits&ab_channel=Blackavar
Still i liked it a bit, it was dumb and silly, loved it.
Now im gonna eat my hamburgers

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>>53286382
It definitely leans in the shitpost category but I didn't want to go too overboard as it would become too referential. The dbz and mega man references are pushing it in my opinion.
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>>53287025
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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>>53289222
Damn, I completely forgot about that one. Checked.

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bump

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>>53244768
I know what you mean by this but his just makes me think that (You) have hired Suisei, an assassin to pose as your secretary with the hits your ordering on the other execs being phrased as depraved sex acts.

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>>53244768
>Ah, Suisei do you think you could finish this Oreo Milkshake for me? I had a sip but didn't like it
>S-Sir that's like over two thousan-
>I'd hate for it to go to waste

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>>53293735
Sounds like you're an important member of a construction project.

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>>53294364
Building the Great Wall of Anal

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>>53294364
My greatest work...my masterpiece...a bottom-heavy comet that does whatever I want...

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>>53294364
They're not called architects for nothing.

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So how's the writing going anons?
I've somehow picked up another wip due to a lack of self control but how about you?

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>>53298418
>I've somehow picked up another wip due to a lack of self control
So have I brother, I hate myself

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>>53298418
Also picked up a new wip. About 1.5k in and just throwing in whatever pops into my head and hoping I end up with something readable

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>>53298418
I haven’t picked up a new WIP, but the fact that I’m currently working on four at once and have even more waiting to be finished says a lot, I think.

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>>53298418
I dropped a WIP to focus on other writings.
My wordcount has gone up drastically, I think that one was dragging me down.

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>>53298418
Still chugging along

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>>53298418
It's coming along slowly but surely I've been saying that for half a year

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>>53298418
Managed to get the first act down but end up procrastinating really hard right now.

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>>53304406
>Will never use your finger to rub a fairy-sized chuuba's pussy
WHY LIVE

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>>53304899
>still no pomu cleaning your smegma fic
Sad!

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>>53306111
>Will never watch Pomu use your smegma as butter for her tiny pieces of toast
Bros...
That's a gross idea someone is probably into

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>>53304406
What kind of fic are you working on that you can't release it serially?

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>start marine wip
>its too jarring
>delete a good part
>now its too horny
curse you sexo pirate, i want to make you happy, stop triying to suck my dick

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>>53306616
Is Pekora about to get raped in that image, again?

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>>53306704
Marine would never rape peko, she loves her cunny bunny so much she's willing to go the normal route

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God, I want to sex Foob so bad.

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>>53307128
Please someone write a fic about destroying a chuuba's pink starfish in analpreferably Mori

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are you guys underage?

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>>53307328
No. I'm over-aged...

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>>53306737
So she is slowly corrupting Pekora?

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>>53307328
What if I am?

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>>53307235
Why Mori?

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>>53307507
i would give my life to fuck her asshole

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>>53307528
You a fart fetishist?

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>>53307623
Imagine its speed when her fart has to get through the tiny canals between her anus walls and your dick

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>>53307623
Not really, i dont find them as disgusting as some people, but seeing a girl fart doesnt exactly make me go AWOOOGA .
Its like the guys who are not really into piss, but get off to the girl's lack of control that leads to a piss scenario, in my case its the same

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>>53307714
Imagine if she farted whilst you plow her ass and the fart reverberates down through your urethra and balloons your balls.

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>>53308003
It's never the plan, sometimes things just work out that way.
I'm going to sleep. I'll be meditating on this image in an effort to influence tonight's dream.

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>>53306444
Eh, did I use "first act" wrong? It's just the opening sequence of a short two-parter.

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>>53308366
Kinda? The word 'act' is more associated with larger stories even if it's mostly synonymous with 'part', so without context it makes me think of you getting through writing an entire story arc rather than just the first part of a shorter fic.

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Bump

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>>53310851
Aqua! No! You give that back!

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>>53304406

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Read
>A Wish Cum True
I was just randomly rolling for a fic and read this. It's a dumb joke that's aged better as a non-sequitur than whatever context could have birthed it.

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Any ideas on which chuuba would give the best footjob? I want to write a short one-shot where (you) receive some top of the line foot action but cannot decide who'd be best for it. Currently I have Gura as the top candidate.

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>>53313834
Mel

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>>53313834
Botan. I have never watched her streams but I have cum endless buckets to Casino's artwork of her so it must be her.

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>>53313834
I mean is there even any competition to this?

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>>53313834
I feel like it should be a chubba who is barefoot by default.

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>>53314065
Love Mel's design, but don't watch her streams unfortunately so wouldn't be able to write any dialogue.
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>>53314137
Both of these are good options that would be fun to write. Leaning more towards Roboco just because it'd be a novelty and that gif is good fuel for the imagination.
>>53314435
Can't think of any off the top of my head but I'm still all ears.

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>>53314559
>Can't think of any off the top of my head but I'm still all ears.
I could only think of Fauna and Roboco myself, to be fair.

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>>53314559
Only one I could think of off the top of my head.

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>>53315029
Anya is built for (p/n)aizuri, depending on your preferences.

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>>53313834
Give me gura footjob

NOW