/wg/ - Writing General - Nene Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>52939418

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted in the last thread.

No place like home: Tags: Shirakami Fubuki, NSFW, incest, netorase.:>>52984923

Compilation Anthology:tags: NSFW and (predominantly) smell fetish. Some just straight, others lesbian, one futa:>>53051702

Since the day my sun died.:Tags: Momosuzu Nene, SFW, depression.:>>53066884

COVER Corp. Talent Security Division, Prologue:Tags: Yagoo, SFW:>>53112751

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Korone snowballs you:>>52941373

Korone's new outfit has got me craving a story about her being a delinquent/bully:>>52955088

After Ina finishes working from a hot and sweaty day, (You) reward her with intense and passionate lovemaking:>>52956967

Councilrys collab that starts as a joke and ends in a messy orgy: >>53009464

After much deliberation, Suisei finally decides to dye her hair black. (You) are her manager and try to convince her to undo it since the blue hair is part of her brand.:>>53036810

Reverse corrupting a slutty chuuba and making her appreciate platonic vanilla things couples do.: >>53037605

A story based on Black Souls were Leaf is Mori and she's called Mori Sue.:>>53077014

In the old wild west, poor Houshou Marine is dying to get laid. A sexless marriage with a closeted gay man leads to a divorce and working at a whorehouse lends her no customers after an eastern oni made her leave with nothing between her legs. She drowns her sorrows at the saloon, until she overhears talks about a dangerous man, Anon. An Outlaw from arizona who robbed a few trading caravans. Marine misinterprets what she hears about him having "A massive gun." and "Leaving people in wheelchairs.":>>53148826

You move into an almost unbelievably cheap house on a nice cul-de-sac, and your bros surprise you with a party after you get settled in. Unfortunately, the HOA doesn't like that and the party quickly turns into a massacre. To avoid becoming a victim as well, you are forced to do their dirty work in the high turnover neighbourhood.: >>53155324

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>>53131647
You're always making me excited for the hag harem sex with these posts!

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>>53157919
What a poignant thread edition.

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>>53158530
/wg/ editions are connected to current drama more often than you'd expect.

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>>53159142
Yeah its one of those things that are pretty consistent with the anon that runs the thread making. Though I think this might be the first time we've had one that's about internal drama rather than a yab... Even if we have had thread editions for fics before.

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Huh doing a double check based off of this post where they revealed what fics they've written >>21431055 it looks like pekofag went and requested for all of his fics to get taken down.

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>>53160010
He was one of the most prolific writers here at one stage.

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>>53160010
Wow, what a repertoire.... I don't know if I can even achieve half or even a quarter of that

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That "since the sun died" fic from laat thread was awful. You tried so hard to tug away at my heart strings but couldn't put in the effort to create anything more than contrived crap for drama. What did the shrink do? Lobotomise her?

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>>53160010
>CocoGura MoriShion Futa FuckFest
waitwaitwait What! I have to save that one!

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>>53160290
Good thing there's a hard archive!
It also has Girl of Emptiness.

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>>53160421
whew, thank god... Got worried there for a second.
I hope whoever wrote that survives the menhera moment though, that's some good shit.

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>>53160421
Now THAT'S a fic that deserves a spot in the inevitable /wg/ hall of fame

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>>53160283
NTA but
>surely they'd take off of those horrible meds!
It's literally stated in text she was on some kind of medication.

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>>53160475
He's had menhera outbursts before iirc.
I don't know if all the fics will be restored but he'll definitely be back.

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>>53160475
I think his recent offerings have been treated pretty unfairly and the only vocal responses have been insults from people that care more about who wrote the fic than what is in it.
Pekoanon's mental defenses are like a fortress, but even he's vulnerable to being chipped away at.

That's my opinion, mind. I haven't heard from him for a couple days, so it's total conjecture on my part.

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I thought Pekofriend was cute and I'd miss some of his stories. Don't let the seething get to you, you matter!

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>>53160658
A magical medication that removes all traces of personality, so strong it resembles a lobotomy? That's even less inspired.

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>>53160919
Not really a magical medication but I get the sense you just want to shit on the story no matter what.

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>>53160275
If you count by number of titles sure, but it shouldn’t be too hard to match that word count based on how short a lot of those are.

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>Pekoanon
>Pekofriend
You couldn’t be more obvious.

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>>53161726
I'm unsure about calling him fag, because a shitposter was insulting him under that name and because he's a cigarette irl. I think friend works better here because I do appreciate the frequent contributors.

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>>53161726
Pekoanon is pekoanon. No ifs or buts.

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>>53162475
Cute fubuki

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>>53163854
That's every Fubuki.

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>>53163892
True

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Word of the Thread
Use them to inspire whatever you want as long as it's chuuba related
>Divide
>Ruin
>Strange
For extra context the table these come from is called Legends

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>>53166915
Legends of what?

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>>53168361
Maybe it's referring to Three Miles of Legends.

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Have you ever mistaken a chuuba's general thread for /wg/? Because I came dangerously close to making a writing post in /nene/

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>>53157978
Rape correcting Magni and Vesper.

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>>53170497
Same....

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>>53170497
There was that series of thread headers that were straight up just taking the opening image of another general while putting that general's name in the title to add confusion.

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>>53161538
And I get the sense you're a stupid fanboy who claims shitposting whenever valid criticism appears.

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>>53173257
So you think it would have made more sense if Nene was lobotomised instead of being on meds?

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>>53173257
>>53174211
Please don't sully the thread with this pointless arguing. The anon didn't like and that's okay.

T. The author

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post a sneak peak, a wip, a word count or just something you wanna share

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>>53175390
>Sneak Peak
fuck me, im sorry /wg/ i failed

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>>53175390
Cute

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>>53175390
>A Bae sneak peek
Well, all right then. Here's mine
I'm finishing the last chapter. After that, I'll have to copyedit the whole thing. Should take roughly a month

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>>53160010
Finished reading Super Date with Nenechi this morning and as expected with such a premise it was perfectly grand overall if not a tad bloated. All the beats of a good smut were hit.

Further still having been in a similar position to Pekoanon, and to an extent other writeanons, where people start judging works more on who wrote it rather than the content, I can understand why the stories were pulled after flak was received (if indeed that is the reason).

Now there is the whole box of frogs associated with separating art from the artist etc and I'm sure there's some lovely interesting things to be said there but I'll leave it at that for now lest I risk myself being tainted with the miasma involved.

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>>53175390
Here's a little smeckle. I do love me some women in competition.

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>>53176787
This is that ame thing right? You've been working on it for a while if my memory is correct

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>>53176787
Okay unrelated, but does anyone else find it weird to see Bae get referred to as Baelz in any context? It's just one of those things where she gets referred to as Bae 99% of the time that it feels weird whenever it's in full like this.

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>>53175390
This portion is still rough and unedited so it really is just a sneek peek. Or uh, peak.

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>>53178877
I like Sneek Peek.

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>>53178683
Yup. She's been Bae since day one, since she wanted a cutesy name and the jp girls cant say baelz so they end up blurting "bells".
The only person who calls her baelz, to the point that is a cutesy nickname in itself, is Kiara

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>>53178527
Oh no, the story behind that is a bit more complicated.
The Ame thing is already done at 30k words, but I haven't edited the first draft yet. I feel that it was total shit and writing it burned me out, so that's why I worked on Holoslavia for the meantime. Once Holoslavia is done, I'll take another stab at it.
>>53178683
I was debating with myself over this, actually (along with how to handle characterization) since the setting is basically the Balkans with chuubas. I decided to stick with Baelz just to be safe and since it kind of sounds like a Kosovar name
On an unrelated note, wrangling AI image prompts can get tedious. Please have a weird looking Gura drawn in the style of Kenichi Yoshida.

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>>53178919

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>>53175390
Began writing the Marine wild west prompt I posted yesterday. Went with the serious dork angle.
Comedy smut.

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>>53176787
Is that the story where you are hired to kill Pekora?

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>>53179222
Yes, that is correct

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>>53170497
I haven't always put my fics in /wg/, they go wherever I feel like posting them.

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>>53179334
kinda based ngl

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>>53179076
Thats pretty neat, didnt know you were writing both.
Excited for more Holoslavia

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>>53178941
Suppose that is why she's always Bae in my head.
Though the fact that she basically has two names one cute and one serious does mean Bae can also be used in more 'serious' stuff by way of referring to her by the longer name, case in point the sneak peek.
Perhaps in a more fantastic setting you could also use it as a way for her to have final boss gap-moe between the cute rat Bae, and the Lord Of Chaos Baelz... There's also the whole name anagram of Khaos Blaze you could probably use for something chuuni as fuck.

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>>53178683
I think it carries the same weight as a parent calling you firstname lastname because you are in deep trouble, but my narration will always refer to her as Baelz.

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>>53179410
Thank you for your support, anon. I'm excited to finally get it out too; just gotta spend a little bit more time on it.

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>>53175390
I'm not at my writing computer now but i picked up an old wip and did some 2k words on it over the weekend

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>>53179076
I have to ask are you thinking of integrating all of these side material into the work itself via like links or embedding into the fic?
I remember that news post you did and I think that deserves a place you can find from the work itself so people can see it.

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>>53180848
That's a good question!
For the side material like videos, I was planning to include the news webms with the chapter posts I make here. As for the songs and other side material, I would put them in the beginning and ends of the chapters themselves.
Later on when the fic gets archived, I'll make a YouTube channel and embed the links into the fic itself just as you suggested.

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>>53175390
Pathfinder's been a double edged sword of re-igniting my interest in some fantasy stuff while being too much fun that it's been a major distraction from writing and doing VSPO reps for another fic

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>>53179102
Normal wild west or space western?

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>>53183218
Regular wild west. Not really into space stuff.

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>>53184886
Well you can't win them all. Hope you can write good misunderstanding dialogue for the the comedy part.

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>>53127726
>when HF Anon has specifically referred to Argomery as his turf with regards to women when he was drunk
A brawl is surely brewing

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>>53187557
>HF Anon is just Rance now

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>>53187752
I wouldn't mind a smut CYOA fic

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>>53187752
That pirate is a bad influence on him

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>>53187919
Anon... That's a shitload of work even if you use VN tools/Twine to handle the branching and choices.
It would be fun though, a short scenario with just a couple of choices that lead slight variations sounds doable at least.

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>>53188831
Oh, I wasn't thinking of an actual visual novel, just writing. For the start you could also reduce the amount of necessary branches a lot if you let the thread vote on what to do next and just write that.

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>>53188786
And guess who she gets to influence next.

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>>53188893
I tried that a while ago, my great shame.

Requires a fair bit of time if you want to keep things engaging and regular, which turned out to not be feasible for me personally.

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>>53188993
CH Anon, in the eventual crossover?

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>>53189553
I think he's too pure of heart to fall for Marine's wiles. He's hardcore rabbitsexual. But if HF Anon met CH's Marine...

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>>53189553
It's gonna be HJanon's turn soon to learn how sexually forward a person can be. And maybe some of the girls will learn a thing or two from this degenerate pirate hag as well.

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>Cap off a fic with the cheesiest possible title drop ever.
Now that's what I call fucking KINO.

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>>53157978
Kuro forcing (You) into a sexual relationship with her and allowing you (willing or unwilling) to do whatever you please with her body. The reason? she doesn't want you lusting after her sister and she will do ANYTHING to keep her pure and innocent.

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>>53193411
You can't force the willing.

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>>53181923
have you been playing wrath of the righteous
i like making holos in its character creator

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>>53196122
That's the one, it's been a blast so far. Don't care for the shitty Heroes of Might and Magic thing too much though

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>>53197590
God pregnant chuubas are just so hot to me.

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>>53196992
Why are her legs so tiny?

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>>53199477
She's been skipping leg day

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>>53181923
>>53196122
And here I thought this was about the Pathfinder TTRPG at first. Writing for the weekend game is where most of my writing efforts go these days.

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>>53191682
Have we ever actually had a fic go for a title drop? I remember there were a couple of jokes thrown out at one point about it but I don't remember it ever happening in a fic from here.

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>>53205470
The only one I remember is Our Cures.

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TETAS
NENE
TETAS

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>>53205552
No it doesn't? I double checked all 7 chapters with "our cu" and just found the one consistent match being the title from gdocs. Is there something I'm missing?
What chapter was this in

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>>53202760
I used to DM too, but flakiness from my friends ended that quickly.
Writing solo is more efficient and less constraining, but I do miss the social interaction and having fun playing around the system.

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>>53206686
Huh, you're right. Maybe I'm just misremembering things because I remember reacting to something akin to a title drop when I first read it.

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>>53206828
>having fun playing around the system.
I mean if you still want that experience you could write with the help of a solo rpg. Pick a game system you like, create a party based off of some chuubas, then run the game yourself with the aid of an oracle system. /tg/ has a general filled with resources for this if you want to give it a shot.

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>>53207105
When is a /wg/ gonna run a quest?

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>>53207177
We got a few series about (You) going on a quest(s). We already there.

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>>53207274
It's not a real quest unless you make anon roll a dice for a result with his post ID.

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>>53207177
I mean one of us did do that once. It was about getting locked up in hospital and having to escape, we picked Korone as our partner and then the quest died because the qm got busy.
>>53206983
I mean, I half remember someone making a joke quote around the time after "Our Cures" got released that was aping cheesy movie title drops but I'm gonna be honest I could be making that up.

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>>53207456
>The love we have for each other really was what we needed for our cures the entire time...

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>>53207771
I'm going to vomit

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>>53207771
>I guess Auntie's Little Secret was with us all along

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>>53205470
Let me feel your pain

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>>53207105
Tbh, I'm just playing Pathfinder: Kingmaker right now and enjoying it. I've had enough work DMing for the time being, I just want to relax as a player where all the math is done for me. I write for the day, and then take it easy with the game.
That said, I would kill to DM a playgroup for this system. I even have the book.

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>>53157935
Better late than never. You'd think after three years of watching chuubas I'd pay closer attention to the time zones but I guess not. Anyways, this chapter is a return to form. Enjoy!


Tags: NSFW, Nina, Lactation, Analingus, Nursing Handjob, Nakadashi


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTd-sbhiTkzwnq4l109Vn2abIA3Ngntkiexc1rG8OSOmTBPXABkbXThhvyPtQlYiWHdfLXigaDvcvfD/pub

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>>53209120
3.5 systems suck ass man, I swore it off as soon as 2e came out

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>>53210000
Wait, is Kingmaker 1e? It seemed to have come out relatively recently.

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>>53211859
Yeah it's still using the same system underneath with owlcat staying that they aren't interested is developing a.game for 2em

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What's a fic that you find yourself coming back to?

For me, it's childhood hag.

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Hey AA the link for "Untitled (Chuuba) Story" is dead for the ones hosted on that wacky pastebin alternative. (Elliott, Letania, Halbernacht).

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/wg/ is dying.

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>>53191682
I am unironically going to do this

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>>53220166
Yeah man, I couldn't find any decent wallpapers there either

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>>53214968
At risk of getting dreadfully off-topic, what are the changes? I find 1e quite similar to DnD, just with better multiclassing.

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>>53220191
As maligned and memed on as title drops are. They are pretty great when they're done well, even beyond the "they said the thing" part of it.

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>>53220191
>Sat upon his throne of hags, Anon looked at the defeated peasant, once king, at his feet
>"I'm sorry" Said Anon. "But no one was to stand in the way of my HoloJourney(s) Chapter 104."

I literally came to death out of pure kino.

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>>53221300
I actually name my fics around the title drop I want to give it, it's usually the capstone or the moment of the peak.
I can't fucking help it man, I just love cheesy title drops.

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>>53220166
It's always been like this. It slows down at times, then it spikes up when major series are updated, then it dies again while everyone is writing.
What we need is fresh blood.

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>>53207771
>Well Bae, we were Lost and Found

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>>53205470
I got Heartbreak Tokyo's out of the way quick

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>>53222495
I mean we have that skeleton of a plan to start a writing contest in order to raid other threads for new blood. I think the overview for it was
>500 words minimum, no maximum
>Two categories, non-smut and smut
>No theme decided yet
>Winner decided via polling website
All it needs is for someone to step up and take the reins of running the contest and making up the rest of the rules.
>>53223370
I'm going to honest, while I do remember that I actually forgot that it did the title drop since I was thinking of title drops in the sense of "they said the thing".

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>>53220166
Seems to me like at least one fic is getting posted every thread. That wasn't the case a while back.

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>>53224786
Running the contest is one thing, the question is how we'll advertise it.
I am against stepping into other generals with blatant shilling

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>>53225357
Too fucking bad, dickweed, there's no other way to advertise. You want a banner ad? Pay for it yourself.

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>>53225357
Lord of the board did that. As long as we don’t overdo it I don’t think it’ll be a problem. Just one quick mention of our competition to the major threads and then we dip.

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>>53225357
I think they'd be welcoming. We have way worse schizos than most generals.
Just step into the generals, make a mention of it once, don't overstay the welcome.
>>53224786
I'm still a proponent of a wordcap maximum. All entries need to be read by those judging and some contestants (me) may push the limit if given the opportunity.

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>>53224786
Do we need a theme? It might better to let people write whatever they want for now and see how things go.
>>53228269
In that case, what do you suggest for the max word count? I think it should be pretty high, so as not to limit any contestants. 8k-10k or something.

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>>53224786
I believe we already had two categories in the earlier discussions:
>NSFW
>SFW

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>>53229013
Anon…

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>>53229079
Oh yeah, my reading comprehension failed me yet again. Welp.

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>>53228523
I'm fine with any maximum. 10k is 20 pages and 5k is ten pages. I'd like to say 5k, but that seems just under the limit of a well constructed short story, so maybe 10k is best.

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>>53228269
I mean practically the "softcap" of the word count is going to come out from how long whoever runs the contest decides to keep submissions open. No one's going to be able to straight up write an entire fucking novel in two weeks probably. Though honestly having a sanity word count max would probably be for the best. Something like 10k sounds mostly unreachable while still keeping it free for creativity.
>>53228523
Honestly for this first one, probably not. This entire thing is a scheme to get new blood and I'm honestly curious at what kind of fics come out of poking the entire board and seeing what comes out.

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>>53234655
>Bae sealing away Baelz in her cringe compilation in order to seal her other self away forever.

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I'd like to tongue-punch this fox's fartbox.