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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>50840185

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50889688

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

>> No.50889726

This thread should stay dead

>> No.50889746
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Coco Sexo rico caliente:>>50850617

Requesting a series of professionally written reports: >>50868248

Telling Bae about all the cryptids you know about.:>>50873456

>> No.50892395

we need a waki fic.
that will save us

>> No.50894577

why do you guys keep letting autists kill the thread?

>> No.50894704

>>50894577
a mega autist is controlling the thread so it may as well die

>> No.50894724

>>50894577
As opposed to what? Deleting their posts and banning them with all the mod powers we don't have?

>> No.50894788

>>50894724
>As opposed to what?
just...ignore them and don't give them what they want

>> No.50894923
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I'm not really sure who is killing what, but I want to hear about how your current writing project is going. Tell everyone anything you want about it. Got a scene you're particularly jazzed about writing or just finished? Got a problem you need to work through? Let me hear about it.
My own writing is dealing with the snails pace I go at when writing about a particular type of scene. I've gone back and forth on the next transitional part about four times now. It's rough when that happens sometimes, but I know when I land on the right way to go, my heart will know it.

>> No.50895008 [DELETED] 

>>50894577
Pls undastand SEA morning/NA night just doesn't have many of the usual suspects active.

>> No.50895357

>>50894923
I have written almost 16k words in the

>> No.50896093

>>50895357
...A-Anon!?

>> No.50897448

>>50895357
16k in how long!? Either way, that's pretty rad.

>> No.50897659

Gonna start working on the "Haachama dying in the hospital as she reflects on her career and happy moments and slowly falls asleep" short story.

>> No.50897790

>>50894923
We're gonna be Haavhama cooking in my fic so the OP imsges are quite the coincidence

>> No.50898013
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>>50897790
You love to see it. You have no idea how much it fuels my own writing bullshit when something like that happens to me, or I spot a part of a stream involving a chuuba I'm writing talking about something kinda fantasy or even related to their preferences that tie to a scene I'm gonna work on. The good shit is when I get new songs with lyrics that coincide with what I'm going for next. Oh and when new outfits drop. Inject that inspiration right into my fucking veins dude.

>> No.50898443

>>50889672
>>50889688
>>50889802
>>50889871
I want to travel to the timeline where this is the canonical Chama.

>> No.50899080

>>50898013
>when new outfits drop
This inspires me too. It's like seeing completely different take on a familiar character. Like they're acting in something different, or maybe gone through an reincarnation with different lore surrounding them. It's cool

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>>50899080
This literally helped spark the entire concept for the Usada kingdom arc I got waiting to cook.
Also Mio's card suit outfit has inspired a lot of ideas, mostly sexual. Suisei's battlemaid outfit is gonna get some use too, especially the halberd. It's all great.

>> No.50899398

>>50899265
Is this real?

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>>50899398
Yes. I'm pretty sure it debuted during that year of the rabbit event she had.

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>>50894923
I have a self-imposed time limit of a week to finish two of my stories, but it's not looking very plausible at the moment. Too many other entertaining things are taking up my time.

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>>50901348
Don't bog yourself too much on time limits, even if they are only self made. You need to take the writing as it comes and is fun. The more you enjoy those other entertaining things you mentioned, the more you can come back to your writing fresher and might even have new ideas thanks to those other things you did. If you want both, I bet you can strike a good balance. Keep at it, and keep having fun, with all things.

>> No.50901589

>>50901505
How would Kaela educate her children? through a excel sheet?
just a thought

>> No.50901601

>>50894923
I need to find my motivation to write again. what do some of you guys do when you fall into a slump?

>> No.50902338

>>50901601
I give myself a day or two and decompress from thinking about my writing too hard. Usually if I let myself focus on something different for a while, I can mull over different ideas that might get me over that hump. If that fails, I'll try searching for some new music, that can usually help my mood and set my imaginative juices flowing. Ultimately though, I've found that just talking with others about my slump helps the most. A few of my friends have been amazing in just listening to my ideas and helping me form them into what they truly were meant to be.
>>50901589
Excel sheets, and repeated practice. Nonstop. She would encourage her kids to follow their own passions, even if they are not the same as hers, but she will want them to do it right.

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>>50894923
Stuck on some dialogue that I just can't seem to get down right.

>> No.50902651

>>50902338
I was always told that you shouldn't tell people, this is interesting. Thank you for the advice over all.

>> No.50902753

>>50901601
i start another wip if i have a ''runaway idea''. it doesnt matter if i finish it or not, but it helps get the brain flowing. Of course this is after taking a step back and relaxing for a day or two
>>50902338
Now i have the mental image of Kaela carefully planing her pregnancy by calendars and excel sheets and i find it both cute and hot

>> No.50902950

>>50901601
That doesn't happen. So long as I sit in front of the PC, with some alone time, and have music playing, I can write for as long as I'm not distracted. Maybe... just write?

>> No.50903185

>>50902565
Give it a few more passes. Struggling dialogue sometimes means for me that the scene isn't right overall, or that I'm missing an exchange before hand that will make what I'm trying to write flow better.
>>50902651
Shouldn't tell people what? About what you're writing?
>>50902753
The more I think about this penguin blacksmith, the more I want to give her some babies. The list is getting rather long, but I think she can help with that.

>> No.50904832

>>50902565
Take some time considering the tone. Go after lead sentences that lead down dialogue rabbit holes and try to restructure them in a way that the following conversation will change.

>> No.50904963

>>50903185
>Shouldn't tell people what? About what you're writing?
NTA but I half remember that telling people you're going to write something pings off the exact same space in your head as actually writing so it's actually something you shouldn't do if you're just bragging but I think bouncing ideas off of people does more than just satisfy your ego so it's probably not bad to do.

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>>50904963
It doesn't apply just to writing. You shouldn't tell people you're going on a marathon, or that you're going to start a diet, or go to the gym. You should either let them notice it, or tell them after you've did it/been doing it. That's when the affirmative dopamine you get from their response will be a good one. The problem is exactly that, if you tell a person that you're about to do something, and the person reacts positively, your brain acts and rewards exactly the same as if you had already done the thing.

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A curse upon ye, a curse upon ye. You who promised you would read them!

>> No.50908440

>>50907787
What fic do you want me to read haachamage?

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>>50908440
Roll a random number between 1 and 10, then a random number between 1 and 5. The first number will mean going down the archive list of fics by that amount, and the second number will be how many fics you'll read above that first fic, afterwards. One paragraph feedback for each fic at the very least.

>> No.50909277

>>50908616
>The first number will mean going down the archive list of fics by that amount,
Do you mean page downs? Because going by literal fics would still leave me in the initial AA section of the archive.

>> No.50912172

>>50909277
No

>> No.50912225

Where do you guys post your fanfics? I figured Ao3.

>> No.50912275

>>50912225
To the thread.

>> No.50912455

>>50912225
Its explained in the archive but your main options are ao3, google docs publishing and/or rentry.
Ao3 needs an account, and the wacky tag system but outside of that is a pretty good archive site.
Gdocs lets you fully anonymously publish fics but has limited formatting options.
Rentry has decent formatting and a view count.
Just pick a site you like and use it.

>> No.50913055

>>50894923
I got farther today.
I'm really struggling with some stuff. Nothing even specific, just in general. Like I'm grinding against sandpaper on a conveyor belt. It should only be a few dozen pages more past this but I'm barely getting in a paragraph a day and that's only recently.

>> No.50913178

>>50912225
Everywhere.

>> No.50913279

>>50913055
Progress is progress.
Though if you're really struggling to get past a scene you could write 'ahead' pick a scene you've already wanted to write and write it. This is a hobby after all, so its better to have fun with it.

>> No.50913561

>>50885232
eh so that's how it was. Don't worry anon, sometimes it do be like that, but i still did enjoy the previous ending. What matters is that you did changed the ending for the better after reflecting upon it

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DEADLINES
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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>>50894923
I'll have to rewrite some past chapters though, but otherwise it's all good.
Also, please have a greentext.
>"That'll be... 1500 yen. Is there anything else I can help you with?" the convenience store clerk asked politely.
>Marine flashed a sly smile before replying in a mischievous tone, "Oh yeah, why don’t you tell me where all the hot studs hang out so I can finally get some action?”
>The clerk responded calmly with sage-like wisdom, "You are not really seeking hot studs. What you're actually looking for is validation. You believe that by being desired by others, especially men, then it will prove your worth as a person."
>Marine's expression suddenly changed from smugness to confusion as she tried to process what he just said. "H-Huh…?"
>The clerk continued speaking in a soothing voice, "You’ve been hiding behind an image of a pirate princess because deep down inside, you don’t feel that the real you is good enough. You think that by pretending to be someone else who is more desirable or cooler than yourself, people will like and appreciate you more. But no matter how much external validation or attention your fake persona might get, it won’t change how empty or unhappy you really are. The real 'hot stud' you should be looking for... is self-acceptance.”
>As Marine listened attentively to the clerk's words of wisdom, she felt her shoulders shake as tears welled up in her eyes.
>“It’s true...” she exclaimed while choking back tears. “It’s all true!”
>Suddenly overcome with emotion, she broke down into uncontrollable sobbing which drew sympathetic glances from other customers nearby.

>> No.50914775

>>50914728
And then the clerk pulls out his dick and tells her to suck it?

>> No.50914844

>>50914775
That would be funny, though I think he'll just smile and say
>"Thank you for shopping at Lawson! We hope to see you again."
as this plays in the background https://youtu.be/vZa0Yh6e7dw?t=76

>> No.50915012

>>50914728
Anon why do have a novella's worth of words? What are you working on?

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>>50915012
The rest of "Holoslavia: Operation Nimrod".
I'm 60 percent through it. I think.

>> No.50915150

>>50914487
Why have you set yourself a deadline? It takes as long as it takes. Don't hold yourself to arbitrary time limits.

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>>50915150
Several reasons:
>because i have the freetime, and if i let myself slack off then i will slack off A LOT
>because i made promises to people that they would have it by a certain date
>because my speed at writing is one of my charm points and sets me apart from most in the creative writing sphere
>because the quicker i get through the rough bits like what I'm currently doing, the more time I'll have to work on the fun stuff

>> No.50915758

>>50915471
Have you thought about just giving up writing entirely?

>> No.50915789

>>50915758
No way. Writing is fun as fuck. I just wish I had more time in the day to do it and still play vidya/read my books

>> No.50915929

>>50915789
I give up. In that case, you should be writing full time. Bills and mortgages are just excuses, you need to be at your writing implement of choice fulfilling your obligations to online strangers.

>> No.50916058

Damn, you sure are creative with your bait, I'll give you that

>> No.50916071

>>50916058
It's not bait, anon. It's ridicule.

>> No.50916158

>>50916071
Tomato, tomato. Whatever comes off the tip of your fingers has the same intent anyway
So long, amigo~

>> No.50916192

>>50916158
Talking to me is getting in the way of your deadlines, anon. You wouldn't want the rest of the thread to get angry with you, would you?

>> No.50916211

>>50915929
>In that case, you should be writing full time.
I wish. Somebody, please, find me and chain me to the radiator in your basement with only a pencil and a notebook. I'll put out kino beyond belief, I promise.

>> No.50916227

>>50916192
>thinking I'm actually him
Not only are you autistic, but you're also a schizo lol
I hope you have fun with your shitposting, anon~

>> No.50916257

>>50916227
Why are you deflecting so hard? Can't you just come out and admit you're wrong? This is an anonymous forum, remember.

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>>50916257
ogey~

>> No.50916358

>>50916320
It's terminal, I'm afraid. Tell the thread what works you've written?

>> No.50916386

Two faggots are actually derailing the thread with their stupid bullshit. Fucking hell.

>> No.50916396

>>50916386
Tell the thread what works you've written.

>> No.50916448

>>50916071
Ridiculing someone for stupid reasons makes you look worse than them

>> No.50916544

>>50916448
https://youtu.be/RpkQEq75y18

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Hey you anon. Have you ever read chuuba fic from outside the thread? Would you recommend them?

>> No.50916846

>>50916770
No, I haven't read any chuuba fics outside of this thread. Now that you mentioned it though, I ought to look in Ao3 and see what other writers there came up with...

>> No.50916865

>>50916770
Something here...it's...it's not right. I can't pinpoint it, but...
I usually don't like things on AO3 but some of the shit posted in the horny thread (exceptionally rare) or other chuuba's homethreads can be pretty good. That one Luna fic was from the hornythread iirc. It's never anything really elaborate but it can be enough to get the job done, you know?

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Y'all niggas need Fubuki.

>> No.50917315

>>50916770
I tried reading some of GrandLeviathan’s stuff once. It didn’t really do it for me. His characterization seemed kinda meh.

>> No.50917452

>>50917315
What else can you expect from a guy that shits out a multi-thousand word fic every single day? I've read his works for other fandoms before and they all end up being kinda samey after a while. Only really read their fics if they have a hot enough premise.

>> No.50917508

>>50917315
I enjoy his works. I don't go out of my way to read them because they're posted on AO3 rather than the thread, but the few I've come across whilst curious as to his proficiency as a wordsmith were quite solid. Much like my cock, after reading his (if I recall correctly) sole Fubuki work.

>> No.50917603

>>50917315
Funny enough, one of GrandLeviathan's works were the first result when I searched 'Hololive' over there

>> No.50917659

>>50917315
I wonder if he knows about this thread.

>> No.50918197

>>50917659
I don’t see why he would. We’re not exactly popular, Koreans notwithstanding.

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The more I look the more I'm brainrotted. I NEED to destroy her

>> No.50918511

>>50918457
The solution's sitting right here.
>>50844216

>> No.50918737

>>50918457
>local penguin sentenced to one week in the public-use stockades

>> No.50918780

>>50918737
God stockades are fucking hot, but I also flipflop a lot between "a girl (chuuba) should be cherished" and "a girl (chuuba) has no use beyond satisfying as many men as she's able regardless of if she wants it or not because it's her fault they want to fuck her" a lot

>> No.50918880

>>50918780
She wants it so it’s fine

>> No.50918954

>>50916865
What Luna fic are you talking about anon?

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It's time to dream.

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>>50919261
UWOOOGH!
TOWAAAAAAA!

>> No.50920086

>>50918780
Sounds like you would enjoy masochistic girls being treated to some BDSM fun.

>> No.50920491

>>50918954
Luna's Assistant.

>> No.50920615

>>50920491
Oh yeah. I forgot that fic wasn't a /wg/ native thing.

>> No.50920618

>>50919261
>That animation of Towa being violently fingered to orgasm as she covers her face in embarrassment
>Now this
...I want to eat Tower out...

>> No.50920670

>>50918780
What better way to cherish a girl than to rape and abuse her in a way that she didn't ask for, but loves?

>> No.50920676

>>50920618
Post a link to the animation

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>>50920618
You'd have to be gayer than a pride parade to not want a piece of this.

>> No.50920757

>>50918780
my friend once told me that the ''wake up horny'' version of girls is ''one day you wake up and you feel like you want to be used like an onahole for exactly three hours''.
difference is that happens to girl like, twice a month instead of everyday.
So what am i saying is that she's okay with it and should get in the hole

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>>50920676
https://litter.catbox.moe/26fjw9.mp4

>> No.50920993

>>50920772
Ho, mama...

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>>50914728
Nice to hear bro. Keep up that passion!
>>50913055
What another anon said to you, progress is progress. I've had days where I only could get maybe a few lines or paragraphs at a time. Just keep it going, and you'll break that mental dam soon and find yourself writing a couple pages each day!

>> No.50922272

>>50920772
Fingers don't look like that.

>> No.50923000

>>50889746
Chuuba girlfriend can take an ungodly amount of pain done to her body and she wants (You) to go all out because she feels she's in dire need of correcting and wants to see how far her human partner can hurt her. You are against all forms of violence (you don't have a bit of violence in you) so she starts throwing harsh insults, bullying you, making fun of your bedroom skills (and your dick size) and anything she can think of that'll hurt your pride and make you snap and give her the beating (or rape) that she deserves. Will she succeed in her goal and make you snap and "awaken" something in you and give her a beating so bad she has an orgasm? Or will she fail and be surprised that all the bullying she's doing to you makes you break down and sob uncontrollably and in dire need of comfort because you are really sensitive to bullying and don't like it when your girlfriend picks on you. And will that last part (should it happen) awaken something in her that she didn't believe she had makes her instead change her mind about being beaten and instead decides to verbally bully you instead because she gets off to seeing your crying face (so she can then comfort you and be nice to you again when she feels she goes too far only to do it again).

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>>50894923
>>50902565
I figured it out.

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>>50923316
No you haven't. This is a dream and you're actually typing on a Fubuki.

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>>50923316
That's the shit I love to hear! Punch through the walls in your mind and write to infinity.

>> No.50924511

>>50916770
I like this Laplus fic but that's pretty much it
https://archiveofourown.org/works/40760988/chapters/102136233

>> No.50925268

>>50918457
She needs to walked around outside naked as punishment

>> No.50926360

>>50889746
Another fic like moonshine blues about a chuuba going through pregnancy.

>> No.50928081

>>50912225
Aside the thread, I've been putting my stuff up incrementally on Ao3, and ff net. Both have their quirks, but those are just the only other places I know so far that seem to get any traffic for this stuff. The tag system on ff net is complete ass though.

>> No.50928083

>>50923316
>The last thing most chuubas see before they're kidnapped and brainwashed into fulfilling a role in a story

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>>50929572
Boy howdy do I want to breed this meaty choco half-elf on a moonlit beach.

>> No.50929768
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>>50929572
I want to nibble on her ears

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>>50929768
Me too, so much so that I think I'll write about doing that.

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>>50929719
I'd prefer to do it in a room that's just a little too small and a little too hot

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>>50931011
Ah, a man of culture. A place that really gets the sweat going. I can appreciate that.
I had a segment of making out with Flare in Pomu's dress closet for a perceived "seven" minutes, but ended up cutting it out as it was little TOO self indulgent and wasn't really adding anything or impactful to the chapter itself.

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>>50931181
>Steamy make-out session with Flare
>Suddenly Pomu starts pounding on the door yelling that you've been in there for four hours

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>> No.50931709

>>50931529
>she flings open the door to reveal you with kiss-marks all over your face and Flare clutching you by the collar
>"..."
>she slowly closes the door again

>> No.50931769

>>50931591
>No HoloNibbleableEars featuring Lamy, Flare, Ina, Choco, La+, and IRyS

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>>50931709
>>50931529
That's more or less how I had it ending anyway. Not the part about it being four hours, but while Flare thought she snuck into the closet while you were changing without Pomu noticing, she noticed. She calls through asking what's taking (You) so long, and after a bullshit excuse, shes likes "okay! But if you don't mind could BOTH of you bring my stuff downstairs when you're done?" While she comes off as a dorky little fairy that doesn't seem to mind anything raunchy, I think it'd be fun to make her not entirely ready to see the real thing in person.

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50933089

God, I hate you fucks. Especially you, Dullachan. You've made it so I constantly find myself wishing for more /wg/ written VNs. It was so damn good. I pray for more content.

>> No.50933901

>>50933089
Commission pekofag for one.

>> No.50933963

>>50931591
kill marry fuck
irys is the only EN i like, but i like her a lot

>> No.50934047

>>50933901
Who?

>> No.50934896
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>>50933089
More people here should try their hand at VNs. It's fun stuff, and I could use the company.

>> No.50935146

>>50934896
I would try it, but I'm by no means talented and wouldn't be able to properly portray the talents. On top of that, I only watch JP ones, so it's infinitely harder to capture them.

>> No.50935727

>>50934896
I'm not funny. I can make people cum but I can't make people laugh. VNs need to have humor or else they sink

>> No.50936055

>>50934896
I'm not lewd. I can make people laugh but I can't make people cum. VNs need to have porn or else they sink

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>>50935146
>portray the talents
That's definitely one of the harder parts when it comes to writing about fanfiction characters.
Though it applies to all of our writings here, the tension is more palpatable when you know it could be read by people outside of here, even the talents themselves.
It ultimately comes down to watching streams. Stock phrases are handy to distinguish dialogue, but harder to come by is an understanding of the character's personality. You can naturally do this putting them in unfamiliar situations and seeing how they react, or if you wanted to have a little fun, you could take a personality test and pick the answers you think they would choose.
Others in this thread could probably help you more in this aspect, since this is something I struggle with too

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>>50935727
>>50936055
Me in the middle, making you two collaborate

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>>50936857
Your POV a couple minutes later:

>> No.50937286

>>50936857
I would never subject someone to the agony of working with me. I'm prone to becoming extremely depressed and unable to do anything for days/weeks at a time. It's better I do things on my own so the only person who is inconvenienced is myself.

>> No.50937301

>>50937066
>not a manzai comedy session
I dub the lewd writer Project Lead

>> No.50937703

>>50937286
Honestly, it's good of you to recognize that. And you can bet working at your own pace is healthier for you too.

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>>50936632
To be honest, I don't know if anyone here would be good at translating JP personalities to EN. Also, what personality tests do you think would be good to use? Not entirely sure how they'd help me, but worth doing anyways.

>> No.50938110

>>50935727
Big talk. Go on then, make me cum. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938173

>>50936055
Big Talk. Go on then, make me laugh. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938261

>>50937874
Isn't that what most of try to do when writing stories with JP chuubas in them? Capture the personality and write how they might react to the stories we put them in?

>> No.50938282

>>50935727
Big talk. Go on then, make me cum. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938318

>>50936055
Big Talk. Go on then, make me laugh. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938337

>>50935727
Big talk. Go on then, make me cum. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938372

>>50938261
Anon, you’re talking to someone who is just going to keep on making excuses. Just ignore them.

>> No.50938376

>>50936055
Big Talk. Go on then, make me laugh. I bet you can't.

>> No.50938419

>>50935727
Big talk. Go on then, make me cum. I bet you can't

>> No.50938544
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Okay. If you are threatening someone to make you laugh or cum, wait for them to attach a fic to the story anchor. THEN you can decide if they're all talk.

>> No.50938546

>>50938173
>>50938318
>>50938376
I went away from the computer for 10 minutes. What in the hell happened? Are you having some sort of dissociative identity disorder + schizophrenic episode?

>> No.50938598

>>50938544
>>50938546
It's threadshitters, for God sake how can you not know this already.

>> No.50938635

>>50937874
Certain personalities are easier than others, I hardly think it's a language barrier thing. For instance, I bet everybody in this thread can write a Pekora that wouldn't bat an eyebrow, but writing Rushia would be a more medium level of difficulty, wholly dependent on how much you watch her.
Also, in terms of personality tests, I use anything. 16 personalities, DnD alignment, political compass, which Shrek character are you, etc.
One I really happen to like is the Dark Triad/Light Triad test, because they have very variable results depending on the person.
https://www.idrlabs.com/light-triad-dark-triad/test.php

>> No.50938645

>>50938546
>What in the hell happened?
What do you think? People are shitting up the thread.

>> No.50938930 [DELETED] 

>>50938546
Waaaaaah! Threadshitters! Waaaaaaaaah!

>> No.50938952 [DELETED] 

>>50938546
Waaaaaah! Threadshitters! Waaaaaaaaah

>> No.50939035

>>50938546
Waaaaaah! Threadshitters! Waaaaaaaaah

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>>50938546
funny, I was just making a silly joke, but someone sure jumped on that

>> No.50939116

>>50939059
>I was just making a silly joke
Don't, you're not funny.

>> No.50939118

>>50939059
Your joke wasn’t funny.

>> No.50939144

>>50939059
Well, I made you laugh in an extremely roundabout manner.

>> No.50939154

>>50939059
Where's the joke?

>> No.50939175

>>50939059
Not funny, kill yourself

>> No.50939188

>>50939144
true lmao, now all that's left is for you to make me cum, clearly.

>> No.50939212

>>50939188
I was the one who can make people laugh, but not cum. You experienced my specialty.

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If you still think this thread isn't rife with samefagging, I don't know what could convince you.

>> No.50939334

>>50939237
They’ll just blame it on the earlyfag and nothing will change.

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>>50939237
I have no idea why anyone would choose to shit up /wg/ in particular. Usually shitters target generals of specific chuubas/branches due to being antis of them. What reason would someone have to shit up /wg/? Are they antis of the English language?

>> No.50939408

>>50939237
> I don't know what could convince you.
The last three threads convinced me that /wg/ is pretty much creatively dead and bankrupt.

>> No.50939717

>>50939382
I don't know. Probably autism.
>>50939334
>>50939408
Why have you shat up the general so long?

>> No.50939730

>>50934896
How's the sequel going so far? I know it's nowhere near done, I'm just curious what you've been up to and how far you've gotten in this short time.

>> No.50939844

>>50939237
I don't know what else to tell you, people in the past have complained and tried to improve the thread multiple times, even encourage others to do their due diligence and they get told to leave and never come back. It's a never-ending spiral to the descent.

>> No.50939902

>>50939212
oh pardon me, guess I have to wait for the other guy to make me cum

>> No.50939981

>>50939237
This general does not like reporting shitters for some reason. And whenever people have tried to encourage others to start reporting you get post like >>50846825 that frown upon it

>> No.50940012

>>50939212
oh pardon me, guess I have to wait for the other guy to make me cum

>> No.50940070

>>50939382
It's gotta come down to some sort of writing complex. Like, they hate that we productively work on fanworks or something because they don't have the motivation, so they tear down others instead of improving themselves
But it's weird, because we're just writing wacky fanfiction of fuck vtubers of all things.

>> No.50940090

Just report for spamming and otherwise ignore it. Simple stuff.

>> No.50940125
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Half of the posts getting mad are just the shitposter himself, but I feel like making a comment anyway

> Saying something very similar to old posts from someone but in a more inflammatory way
> Saying something upsetting and immediately following it up with someone either agreeing or disagreeing in an upset manner
> Complaining about the state of the thread after shitposting, pretending like they are done with the state of the thread

This is all done by the same person. Half of these posts aren't real. If you reply to any of these you're a retard. If you complain about them, you're also a retard. Picture the person that's doing these in your head. Imagine that you're getting mad over someone that pathetic making comments on some weird fanfiction post. You're still mad? Then that's your problem.

>> No.50940516

>>50940125
> Saying something very similar to old posts from someone but in a more inflammatory way
> Saying something upsetting and immediately following it up with someone either agreeing or disagreeing in an upset manner
I thought that was aggro-schizo. Is he the one doing this shit?

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>>50939730
Working on Millie right now. She's so fun to work with. I definitely didn't take full advantage of her in the original, though there are a lot of characters I could say that about.
Also taking Selen in an interesting new direction that I think more people will enjoy.

>> No.50940877

>>50940714
Sweet. How far in are you into production? If I remember right, you estimated it'd take you about 10 months (give or take). Curious to know how that's coming along and if the release window is likely to change.

>> No.50940976

>>50940714
I'd like to take Selen in a new position, if you know what I'm saying.

>> No.50941101

>>50940976
That's not how you do it. You should say "I'd like to point Selen to an interesting new direction, if you know what I'm saying." with an image of a guy pointing to his crotch. You can't just change the words of the original post to fit your... ugh, what an amateur.

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>>50940714
I don't watch Nijisanji, but Millie was my absolute favorite character in Ninisanni Scenario. She was so incredibly laid back, both in personality and her scenes. It was a major vibe and I hope to see more of that in the sequel.

>> No.50941325

>>50941101
True, I shouldn't have added the second part on a whim. It requires a different format, as you said.

>> No.50941355

>>50939981
Reporting is for mouth breathing retards. Grow some thicker skin

>> No.50941388

>>50940714
Millie should wear her hat more. It's the most sexy part of her model.

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> want to do research for an anal scene, so open AO3
> browse with anal tag
> open one of the more popular works
> look at hundreds of tags
> look at 20 chapters
> close AO3

Guess I'll just wing it.

>> No.50941413

>>50940125
Absolutely, 100% spot-on. He also makes the thread.

>> No.50941545

>>50941388
NTA, but I disagree. It's a fun accessory, but I feel like it distracts from her body itself. It gets in the way and makes it harder to connect with her.

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>>50941392
THIS. Most of Ao3 is just garbage. Even with their invite system. Though if anything, it should serve as a challenge. If people are happy posting their retardedly written Holo fanfics, I should have the balls to post too. It's just sad because I wanna write about Phase Connect and people here are 89% Holofags.

>> No.50941992

>>50941923
If you've written them already it costs you literally nothing to just post them here. The hell you're afraid of? That people won't read it? I write Holos and people don't read my fics either. That they'll shit on it? Oh please.

>> No.50942217

>>50941923
>It's just sad because I wanna write about Phase Connect and people here are 89% Holofags.
Sadly, you’re not the first to have this worry. Don’t know what to tell you, since people here are extremely dismissive of anything that isn’t Hololive.

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>>50942217
I'm just gonna post anyways. fuck em. But maybe i'll try and pick content to write that doesn't take watching 300 hours of streams in order for the writing to make sense to fans. That's the ultimate concern. Do i need to watch 800 hours of Ina streams in order to write a fanfic about her?

>> No.50942394

>>50941923
You should just write about Phase if you want to. You're not alone in that. You might see a few Phase characters show up in the future as well in other stories.

>> No.50942485

>>50942388
>Do i need to watch 800 hours of Ina streams in order to write a fanfic about her?
Yeah, pretty much.

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>>50940877
I stand by my original deadline. Around March, April 1st at the latest, I'm estimating.
The rough draft is coming along easy in the parts I know, but I need more time on plotting out certain girl's arcs. 10 new arcs, 10 new character dynamics with the MC based on their deepened relationship... it's crazy, but it's super fun and fresh
>>50940976
Noted.
>>50941204
It's nice to hear that. I may have said this before, but Millie caused me a bit of trouble early on in nailing down her character.
I eventually decided to exacerbate the charming subtleties I find in her, like her coolness, her kindheartedness, her hardworking nature, her unease.
Only then did I realize I could add her gremlin energy as an underlying subtlety and the result I'm pretty happy with.
It's not a 1:1 of the Millie that's on the screen, but it still is all Millie, I didn't make up anything new about her
>>50941388
The bigger the hat, the more powerful the witch

>> No.50942806

>>50942599
>ages making a rough draft
>a year of work to finish the game
How in the unholy fuck do you stay motivated through the slog?

>> No.50942820

>>50941923
>It's just sad because I wanna write about Phase Connect and people here are 89% Holofags.
99%. Don't give yourself that much credit, rat.

>> No.50942890

>>50942820
10% is obviously Nijisanji, and exclusively because of the VN

>> No.50942893

>>50942388
>Do i need to watch 800 hours of Ina streams in order to write a fanfic about her?
No, not at all.

>> No.50942899

>>50942820
>I wanna write about Phase Connect
Do you have any idea how many people actually enjoy Phase? They're not people's #1 choice, sure, but they would thoroughly enjoy it.

>> No.50942980

>>50942899
Do you, even? You're seriously overestimating yourself. You and the retard writer are the only indiefags here. And you shouldn't even be here.

>> No.50943051

>>50942980
But I don't watch indies...

>> No.50943104

>>50942980
idk man. pcg moving pretty fast these days. Holo is a little oversaturated and I think people see that. Hence why I want to write for Phase instead of just pissing into a giant ocean of urine.

>> No.50943156

>>50941923
/pcg/ is just active enough that I'm sure you will find some readers there as well as here! And ultimately writing is for yourself, isn't it?

>> No.50943241

>>50943104
NTA but if you want people to sympathize with you for receiving hate, maybe don't talk shit about what people like too

>> No.50943397

>>50942806
It's because it's fun and unique at every stage.
The rough draft is easy for motivation, because the draft is so new.
First, second, and third draft are motivated solely through opening the word document and instinctively seeing all of the mistakes, awkward phrasing, or boring conversations.
Scripting is a little brutal, but since I do asset acquisition alongside it, it's not so bad. I listen to podcasts and video essays around this time.
Staging (making sure the characters move how you want them to) is more tedious than scripting, but you FINALLY get to see how everything looks, and that's really clutch for keeping the drive to finish the project.
And then the final playtesting usually coincides with making extras, which is where I get to breathe a sigh of relief and lighten the mood a little.
Since all of these stages are unique in their challenges, it keeps things fresh.

>> No.50943464

>>50943241
only absolutely retarded Phasefags shit on other communities. Niji is fair game though.

>> No.50944254

>>50943397
But spending ages and ages on any individual project should burn you out, no? When you first start, it's new and you're really excited. As time goes on, however, it stops feeling so new and it feels like you're just doing more of the same thing every day.

>> No.50944643

>>50944254
>As time goes on, however, it stops feeling so new and it feels like you're just doing more of the same thing every day
Yeah, that's writing for you.

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>>50944254
Oh, I see what you're trying to say.
I try to schedule time each day on a relaxation pursuit. Watching streams, video games, anime, just something calming and unintellectual.
On weekends I always go back to my hometown to stay with my family (gotta show love to the family!) and visit my friends, so the change in environment is like a mini-respite to look forward to every week. After two days of idle relaxation though, I start to feel lazy and want to get back to it.

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>>50944728
>After two days of idle relaxation though, I start to feel lazy and want to get back to it
Well, that explains it. I've spent the majority of the past decade being lazy and not doing anything. It's a matter of lifestyle and general habits.

>> No.50945225

>>50941392
Their tagging system is fucked but a bit of tag wrangling (No crossovers, English Only, Setting Category and Rating) at least makes it much easier to browse for specific fetishes.
Now their casual browsing for new fics is fucked because of this but searching for specific shit isn't too bad.

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>>50944643
I've been working on the same fanfic for like 3 years now on and off because of this terrible cycle of being in the mood for it vs not being in the mood. It's only 30 something pages too. why the fuck is writing so hard.

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>>50944254
I don't know bro, I personally get get excited for the next chapter as I finish the last one. I suppose I get a similar feeling of laziness like VNanon there if I take a few days where I don't even outline anything.
>>50945295
It ain't always easy, but you can persevere dude. I know you can.

>> No.50946198

>>50943156
Also, there's already a phasefic in the archive which got good reception.

>> No.50946213

>>50941355
Then don’t complain when they shit up the thread.

>> No.50946461

>>50918511
Not averse to it but I don't have a specific enough idea in mind. Or at least, not a tame enough one for here I usually architectpost about her in this context

>> No.50946812

>>50946213
I don't but I need to tell you how much of a permavirgin loser you are

>> No.50947154

>>50946461
nta but plenty of writeanons here have made stories that would not be considered tame by any stretch. Don't think that should be the reason to stop you from making a request

>> No.50948493

retard here. What makes a fanfiction fanfiction? Do you just make the characters have sex? Or can it be something as simple as having any two people do something simple together? I like to think about lame things like a vtubers who would never meet going to an arcade together? Is that even worth writing?

>> No.50948524
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>>50946461
It wasn't me who made that post, but since you're interested, I can help you come up with something if you don't have any ideas. It's part of the process, I've done it a lot. If you're interested, you can open Blowing Off Stellar Steam in the fic archive and send an email to the one at the bottom of the fic.

>> No.50948578

>>50946461
Architecture is relatively tame for /wg/. I'm sure you won't put off all writers with any request, with the possible exception of the worst that /meat/ had to offer.

>> No.50948675

>>50948493
Write about anything you like as long as it's about chuubas. It's usually considered good etiquette to go through prompts and try to fulfill some of those before you start any vanity projects.

>> No.50948746

>>50948493
>What makes a fanfiction fanfiction?
googled the answer for you.
fan fic·tion
[ˌfan ˈfikSHən]
NOUN
fanfiction (noun)
fiction written by a fan of, and featuring characters from, a particular TV series, movie, etc..

>> No.50948787

>>50948493
The only requirement for fanfiction is that it's made unofficially and that it doesn't just document real events.
You should primarily write for yourself, so you can give whatever scenario, that you like to imagine, structure and vibrancy by writing it down.

>> No.50948834

>>50948675
i'd argue that its better to start with something he wants to see, and THEN move on to prompts

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>>50948524
Incidentally would you be up for attempting architecture? I know by this point you've zero scruples but it's still kind of hard to say what motivates you. Is it like, curiosity if you can pull X or Y off, a collectathon of fetishes, something else? Also I've commissioned you before for something completely unrelated and am unsure if I'm comfortable connecting the dots

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>>50949551
I think it's fun, trying out new things. I do get quite excited actually when I see some new prompt from a client that is something I've never done before. I've never written architecture, but that's never stopped me before.

>> No.50949935

>>50948493
Write whatever the hell you want as long its chuuba relate (real chuuba not made up ones) you can post it here.

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>>50949551
And you don't have to worry about me connecting the dots, in the sense that there's no reason to be ashamed of it. I've proudly presented Mori having her futa cock being impregnated by a horse to this thread. You really think I care? It's not like I'm one to talk.

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>>50949737
Although I heavily judge the fact that you're willing to write architecture, I approve of your taste in chuuba.

>> No.50950621

>>50950130
Architecture isn't even all that bad. It's true there are some fetishes out there I'd ask for more, or maybe not even write, but as far as weird goes, architecture is on the more harmless side of the scale.

>> No.50950913

>>50950621
How much would you charge for scat?

>> No.50950975
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>>50950913
Wouldn't you like to know, weather boy.

>> No.50951087
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50951087

Share your comedy prompts

>> No.50951250

>>50951087
Mio tries but spectacularly fails at raping you

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50951696

>>50950003
It's less (You) I'm worried about so much as other folk. But you've proven fairly amicable thus far so I think I'll send something your way in a bit. This is something I actually have a good bit of experience writing myself, so I'm quite curious how something with virtually none might go about certain types of descriptions and tropes

>> No.50951727

>>50951087
Koyori invents a shady new drug that makes her irresistible.
Unfortunately it makes her irresistible to everyone and now she must survive X hours without getting fucked to death by literally everyone.

>> No.50951757
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>>50951087
i abandoned a prompt where the whole ideas was a bunch of chuubas triying to get in the building, and failing, getting thrown out of the window or being blasted.
The POV chuuba, which i think i wanted to be A-chan, would then finally go in, only to see Korone crouching. When she would get near, Korone would yell FLASHKICK and A-chan would go out of the window
I ran into a series of problems
>The joke is lost on people who dont understand the Guile reference or dont play fighting games
>While the joke was born from Korone triying SF, there was no one else that could roll the alternative ending of whiff punishing her by walking back
>it was a hassle to write the fic without giving away the joke
>even if i managed, the joke wasnt as strong as it initially landed
>Korone doesnt like Guile and a Psycho Crusher joke wouldnt work

>> No.50952181

>>50951757
In theory I think you could convert the gag into one of the idol showdown zoners but yeah, this is absolutely a gag fic reliant on building up and landing a single joke about fighting games so if you can't make the core joke work then its kind of doomed.

>> No.50953296

>>50952181
I feel like it could work if more girls had Fighting game knowledge and the joke was structured about how they are dogshit.
Mori triying to Wild Throw her and getting stuffed, or someone triying to use DBFZ super dash and getting stuffed could work there, but at that point the dowback joke is stretched far too thin

>> No.50953846

>>50941923
Having more fics about different girls is always good. Though you might get pushback by tribalfags, so always ignore them.

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50953964

>>50941923
>>50953846

>> No.50954069
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50954069

>>50953964
>Will never make Pippa make this face as she realizes she's being creampied raw

>> No.50954359

>>50953964
Tenma, you're a fucking kitsune. You are gonna be part of UNITY and you're going to fucking like it.

>> No.50954713
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50954713

>>50954359

>> No.50954778

>>50941923
I wouldn't mind having phase connect fanfics, but yeah, as the others said, others would be shitting on you for it due to it not being hololive.

>> No.50954994

>>50954778
The Airi fic was well received. Why do you lie?

>> No.50955070

>>50954994
>Why do you lie?
Lie about what? A few tribalfags don't like it when others try to talk or write about other girls and get vocal about it.

>> No.50955178

>>50954713
She sounds like a spooky vaguely European witch.
Who's jerking you off.

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50955297

>>50955178
So you're saying her insanity makes her perfect to star in a fan fiction.

>> No.50955470

>>50950975
What the fuck is a weather boy?

>> No.50955527

>>50954713
You're gonna need those meds when you're slap dab in the middle of the kitsune village I got planned, you office lady, ab obsessin, weak health havin, majong gachin, maldin, femcel, NINNY!

>> No.50955628
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50955628

>>50955470
Wow, you just refuse to use any search engine to find out

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50955676

>>50955527

>> No.50956198

>>50955628
I’m surprised by by the fact people here are not willing to even consider it.

>> No.50957014

>>50954713
>>50955297
>>50955676
ogggh plap plap plap plap

get pregnant

plap plap plap plap

>> No.50957112

>>50955297
She did already star in a fic though, I remember liking it a lot

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50957186

>>50954713
>>50955297
>>50955676
>Hating You, Hating Maemi

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50957192

>>50941923
I wouldn’t mind having a Panko fic

>> No.50957922

>>50933089
I'm pretty sure the only way we'd get a '/wg/ written VN' would be if thread regulars actually teamed up to write it but as we all know that would be doomed to failure unless they actually form up out of thread.

>> No.50958176

>>50957922
Anon, it’s never going to happen. Just let it go.

>> No.50958291

>>50958176
Along with the thread. Stop making the thread.

>> No.50958561

>>50958291
What are you talking about?

>> No.50958568

>>50958176
I already have. The thread can't make a VN but the writers that remain probably still could.

>> No.50958701

>>50958561
He's a schizo just ignore him.

>>50957922
>>50958568
The VN is never going to happen because it's too much commitment for a single project

>> No.50958818
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50958818

>>50958701
If each person makes one route, it really isn't. I just don't have much interest in contributing because I think VN makers, along with RPG makers, are the bottom of the barrel when it comes to fanmade content.

>> No.50958989

>>50951087
>>50889746
Kanata trying to deny she's gay, even with increasingly mounting evidence

>> No.50959091

>>50958818
This. Anybody who does anything except write in traditional google docs format is scum and should be excluded from the archive. In fact, I'm not too sure we shouldn't be reserving storage for scanned copies of stories written on parchment with a quill.

>> No.50959139

>>50958989
Change Kanata to Anon and it'll be your biography

>> No.50959493

>>50958818
>If each person makes one route, it really isn't.
Lmao, you might think that. People get strange when it comes to group projects and deadlines though. The only ones you should trust in this thread for that kind of stuff are the series writers.

>> No.50959572

>>50959493
with their upload schedule I wouldn't trust them either

>> No.50959740

>>50959493
Don't even trust them. Look at the Holocalypse fag, the Cover High fag, the Holofantasy fag. All of them were once constant writers and all of them make excuses for their lack of discipline now and blame things other than themselves. Holocalypse fag doesn't even write anymore. All three need to kill themselves.

>> No.50959824

>>50958818
That's a rather big thing you're simplifying into no big deal. Especially since the writing is probably only 1/3 of the problem in making a VN. Yeah in theory there's VN making tools and ai art to make the rest of it easier but the writing would still be the main problem.

>> No.50960097

>>50959740
Your right, the only person we can trust to write a vn is pekofag.

>> No.50960235

>>50959824
Also direction. Once you have your writers and artists and musicians all on the plantation, you still need them to write, and write in the right direction. It can't be tonally weird, if a writer strays too far off the plantation and starts writing weird shit, you need to whip them back into the right direction. This causes conflict. Compounded with inherent laziness, virtually all group VN projects are doomed to fail

>> No.50960256

>>50960097
Stop with the shilling/advertising already. It’s annoying

>> No.50960334

>>50960256
Its not advertising its the truth.

>> No.50960387

>>50960256
Warcry of the Poorfag

>> No.50960512

>>50960256
Anon please notice that its not even advertising at this point it's the threadshitter samefagging out bait and responding to their own bait. Just ignore it, and maybe report it if you care enough.

>> No.50960577

>>50960512
Why are you responding to yourself?

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>>50960512
I don't think he realizes he gave me a new commission that I wouldn't have gotten by trying to shitpost yet. I have no problem if he wishes to continue free advertisement for me, personally.

>> No.50960856

>>50960747
You expect anyone to believe it's not you?

>> No.50960974

>>50960856
Just ignore him and report him. Don’t respond to him anymore.

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>>50960856
Why should I care if anyone believes me? Btw, I haven't thanked you yet, so here. Thank you for giving me a new commission peko!

>> No.50961090

I don't know why, but I'm having more dreams about chuubas these days.
Perhaps I'm stealing them from Fubukianon.
This one was with Fauna. We were in a stadium sitting next to each other. She started off pretty icy and tsunderic, but as time went on, she began to warm up to me, touching me more and more and laughing as if we were old friends.
Once she had her thighs in my lap, as I was touching them, I realized that this was probably a dream.
I asked my conscious brain if it was a dream, and he said "Of course it is, dipshit, since when have women been into you. You wanna stay or go?"
I chose extraction. Fauna was kind and all, but there's no point enjoying illusory pleasures.

>> No.50961105

Oh, great. He's going to keep up the shilling because one of you tards is enabling him.

>> No.50961216

>>50961090
I would've stayed.

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>>50961090
Just enjoy the dream anon. They can be just for fun. I will say I've had an influx of chuuba dreams recently too. There was one with tenma, another with Iroha, and I think even another with Flare recently. They are pretty much things like you had, sitting or just hanging out in a public place.

>> No.50961334

>>50961216
As I would have, haven been given a dialogue yes/no option, but it was my unconscious mind deciding, and he decided to leave. Interpreting that decision is as challenging as interpreting the dream itself

>> No.50961692

What is one of your favorite aspects or moments of a fic that have really stuck with you?
Ayame and Anon's dynamic in Our Cures is one of my favorite duos. Their little back and forth was super fun. I would've read 100 chapters of nothing but them being dicks to each other and yet being in love with their company.

>> No.50962015

>>50961692
Do people here only like Ayame when she is a major bitch?

>> No.50962951

>>50962015
Rrat!Ayame has always been in a weird position where she's simultaneously an exaggerated stereotype but also much more grounded than Ayame's usual persona. Thus the rrat personality is bizarrely really good at being in a drama since the gap moe of massive whore/lonely girl hits like a truck.
In theory there's nothing stopping base Ayame from being able to work in a drama/romance piece but the fact that she's naturally kind of 'floaty'/cartoony in personality makes it harder to imagine.

>> No.50962984

>>50962015
Rrat Ayame is a strangely compelling character. Regular Ayame is good, of course, but...

>> No.50963216

>>50957192
I want to write a fic for her but i literally know nothing about her. Panko manko or something. ehh? I wish there was a way to get a TLDR on all the memes and lore.

>> No.50963283

>>50962951
>>50962984
Have there been any regular Ayames that got as much attention?

>> No.50963293

>>50963216
>I wish there was a way to get a TLDR on all the memes and lore.
Yeah, the way you can get an understanding is by watching Panko's streams

>> No.50963367

>>50963283
Probably no. Our Cures and subsequently Rrat!Ayame got a lot of attention because it was an entire fucking series dropping at once with a good buildup and establishment of a relationship in the vein of enemies to lovers that had incredibly satisfying payoff, good supporting characters, drama, etc. Normal ass Ayame has had nothing like that.

>> No.50963373

>>50963216
Why would you write a fanfic about a chuuba you know nothing about?

>> No.50963417

>>50963293
yeah right let me just consume 100s of hours of content no big deal. Nah but I am already watching backlogs all the time. it's brutal..

>> No.50963648

>>50963283
No, rrat!Ayame has kind of overtaken the idea of regular Ayame in 'modern day' settings. Like yeah, there have been regular Ayame fics that have gotten pretty good reception but all the exceptional ones have some influence taken from rrat!Ayame.

>> No.50963794

>>50963417
Anon, come on. This isn't scripted material where you need to watch everything if you want to understand their character.
Watch a few streams, make a couple of notes, and if you like them enough see if you can make a fanfic with their characterization.

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Name, off the top of your head, all Ayame stories you remember in spoilers. Imma check if any of them are regular Ayame.

>> No.50964087

>>50963936
Lazy Oni
…That’s it

>> No.50964140

>>50963936
Ok
Our Cures, Shadowlive, Cold air Hot Blood + sequel, A Hedonist's reckoning, Absolutely Annihilating Ayame's Anus.

>> No.50964199

>>50963936
A boatload of hapiness and hazy days?

>> No.50965737

>>50963936
Blood bound, Oni delivery, True color, Porcelain doll, Fire remnants

>> No.50965830

>>50964087
>>50964140
>>50964199
>>50965737
Now rate them.

>> No.50965881

>>50965830
No

>> No.50966722

>>50965881
S-Sorry...

>> No.50967795

>>50963936
Two of the ones already listed are tagged with rrat!Ayame so the answer is pretty clear there. Would still recommend reading them, of course

>> No.50967940

>>50957192
Panko Manko

>> No.50967941

>>50966722
It’s okay.

>> No.50968206

>>50957192
t. Panko

>> No.50968209

New thread
>>50968013

>> No.50968741

>>50965830
I don’t know, I never read it

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