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/wg/ - Writing General - Dark-Skinned Elf Edition Anonymous Mon Apr 10 08:25:46 2023 No.47035329 [Reply] [Original]

This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

previous thread:>>46848898

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 08:26:30 2023 No.47035354 File: 1.89 MB, 1500x843, __shiranui_flare_hololive_drawn_by_somebody_leiking00__62cc24cd9c235f73b735f7312c7a6716.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Story anchor. Post 'em if you got 'em

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 08:27:33 2023 No.47035386
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 08:28:33 2023 No.47035420
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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

There and Back Again: Tags: NSFW, Flare, rape, goblin, orc, paizuri, naizuri, anal, gokkun:>>46880568

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 08:30:46 2023 No.47035493
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Greentext prompts:>>46861001

Anon discovers he has the ability to stop time and move within it. With his newfound ability he....will have to endure with the stick in the mud Kronii, who is also able to move within Anon's stopped time and is constantly getting on the way of his fun.:>>46875951

Suisei and Lui rape mori:>>46876552

You, a fresh-faced new addition to the workforce, are hired by Cover as a manager:>>46881198

I would like to request some lovey-dovey Iroha sex. I don't usually read smut but I am in the mood for some gozaru.:>>46901607

Marathon sex but with Koyori.:>>46909028

This picture makes me want an action story where you take on all five members of holox at once in a fight, and only just lose by a hair’s breadth.:>>46963044

as you lie there on the floor, broken and bleeding, they're quite pissed that you came so close to defeating them. In the middle of debating the most painful way to dispose of you, Koyori suddenly suggests that you're untapped potential and could be made into their "little helper" with some chemical manipulation.:>>46966776

Liar Game but with chuubas.:>>46967992

botan sex:>>46970808

Anon is a student trying his hardest to impress the girl he has a crush on by being a straight A student but one day accidentally gets mixed up in shenanigans with a bunch of troublemakers (Shion, Gura, Laplus and Kobo) so he ends up stuck in detention with them.:>>47030297

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 09:33:40 2023 No.47037241 File: 538 KB, 750x523, 1681099151864607.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Goddammit, Easter really isn't good for me... Also, we got nothing Easter related. Way to spit in Jesus face.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 09:36:46 2023 No.47037329 >>47037241 Write something yourself, leech.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:00:33 2023 No.47037880
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>>47035493
>This picture makes me want an action story where you take on all five members of holox at once in a fight, and only just lose by a hair’s breadth
I just had the craziest idea. In fact, it's probably a stupid idea that would never work and is doomed to fail. But what if I were to write a non-linear story, told out of chronological order, using only prompts that are discussed in the thread (that gain a fair amount of traction)? It might sound idiotic since the prompts would have no connection to each other, but maybe part of the challenge is to connect those prompts into a coherent story, adding small changes and tweaks.
There was already some discussion about doing this with my previous work, where a story is told out of order, but what if I restricted myself to only using thread prompts to craft the narrative? Could be a difficult yet entertaining challenge, or a completely retarded idea. What do you guys think? Yay? Nay?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:03:42 2023 No.47037962 >>47037880 The best way to coordinate a group work is to take the first step yourself. People discuss working on fics as a collective all the time, but it will never go anywhere so long as no one actually starts writing it.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:12:38 2023 No.47038194

>>47037962
I'm gonna be honest, the idea of making it a group project didn't occur to me. The only 'collaborative' aspect of the story I had in mind would be me taking prompts that are interesting and could be tweaked to fit into the story. Even then I'd rather the thread continue on as usual instead of making prompts catered to the narrative I'm writing.
The premise of a collaborative /wg/ fic is extremely tempting, but as a wise anon once said,
>Trying to make /wg/ cooperate is like trying to herd cats.
As great as it'd be, I don't think a collaboration would be possible with more than two, maybe three anons.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:13:17 2023 No.47038215

>>47037880
This sounds like a creative project you probably should have started before 'revealing' to the thread given that you're basically asking if you could make a story out of a prompt collage.
I'm not sure it could actually work, but honestly this seems like something where the result is going to come out janky even if it somehow manages to tell a story. If you're committed to it go for it, this is going to be more on the 'art' side even if it's working with text anyway so it's not like the writers here can give much advice.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:13:35 2023 No.47038225 >>47037241 Sorry, I couldn't figure out how to turn searching for eggs on easter and hags running out of eggs into an actually funny piece.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:20:16 2023 No.47038408

>>47038194
The only kind of collaborative story telling that this thread has really done has been in the form of bored writers chaining together greentexts while building up a concept like in that Ina swat4 idea or this
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTABmUKo34wCWWgLExZ9kFAGlOgS7ESVVcvpDeNkfsO8DAligNPFDzoyIGv22tOgQmEX5Ijx5hVNEFV/pub
Ina romance idea or that fujocast concept.
This is pretty much the most you can get out of in-thread anonymous collabs. The only way you'd make a bigger wg Collab would be via writers here emailing and working together on something big.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:22:32 2023 No.47038473

>>47038194
>>47038408
I think bigger collaborations without coordination outside of the thread are possible, you just have to be flexible with who does what because you can't count on anyone in particular to do a certain job. But everyone can come up with a concept /here/ and then start writing until it's finished.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:25:05 2023 No.47038546 >>47035386 Having a libido that never goes away and the only way to calm it down (even if its temporary) is to fucking a hag.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:27:36 2023 No.47038612

>>47037880
Using prompts for that sounds like a lot of work just to most likely end up with something not fully coherent. You could make it a lot easier by editing existing stories, that kind of fit together, until you've made them part of a bigger whole.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:29:33 2023 No.47038669 >>47038473 It would have to be something like "each person has to write at least 500 words and at most 1000" to weed out shitposters and also force the writers to get creative without diverting too much of their time into it.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:30:20 2023 No.47038690

>>47038473
In theory I could see a fic becoming a 'full round robin' with every chapter effectively being a random anon picking up and continuing the story with each anon continuously picking up the next chapter, but the problem is that there's no real way to come up with a strong open concept that can sustain a chain story like that.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:38:30 2023 No.47038964
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>>47038690
How about instead of a single continuous story, each entry is a different story with a framing device that ties them all together? Think the Canterbury Tales, with each tale focusing on a different chuuba.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:40:21 2023 No.47039010 >>47038964 What do these 5 people have in co- Oh, Rust gamba...

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:48:26 2023 No.47039200 https://youtu.be/dv13gl0a-FA We tried this before, /wg/. It didn't take off, and likely never will.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 10:53:37 2023 No.47039345 Question for the VNanon: How did the VN grow to 9 gb?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:09:45 2023 No.47039839 >>47039200 It never took off because no one gave it a shot, the hardest part is always going to be on the guy making the first pitch on the concept

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:12:11 2023 No.47039917
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>>47038215
Technically, if I use a story I already wrote, I've written the first chapter. You're probably right in that I should've worked on it some more though, but I guess I'm wondering if I should go through with it or not.
>this is going to be more on the 'art'
Maybe, I feel as though there's potential for a proper script in there based on how I handle it. The main obstacle would be finding prompts that actually fit into the story without forcing it.
>>47038612
You have a point, but taking on the challenge seems like a lot of fun. I could treat it like AA's dice rolling mechanic and have the narrative change based on the prompt I choose to pick up, although that might add a whole extra level of chaos. Even if it turns out a little incoherent, I do want to mix things up with my writing.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:15:13 2023 No.47039997 >>47039839 Someone did try and get some anons on board, but nobody wanted in >>14809649. I can't talk since I didn't reply to that post either but there wasn't any interest in a collaborative fic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:17:42 2023 No.47040083 >>47038690 Sounds like a CYOA adventure with short segments would be a good fit. Like the Goosebumps CYOA books, I loved those as a child.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:29:27 2023 No.47040477 >>47038669 >>47040083 So in theory how would this get organized? I can see the story being done via either hyperlinked Google docs or made with twine but how would it actually get done?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:37:08 2023 No.47040755 >>47040477 Bro do you ask your friend how to fuck your girlfriend too?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:43:12 2023 No.47040962 >>47040755 How is that in anyway related? Why are you obsessed with being cucked?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 11:44:28 2023 No.47041011 >>47040755 Of course not, he's the only one that gets to fuck her. But I'm the only one she wants to cuddle with.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:16:41 2023 No.47042233 >>47040477 I mean, you don't have to write it in the same document from the start

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:34:29 2023 No.47043047 >>47040755 What.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:38:38 2023 No.47043261 Does the google script usually take time to update? I can see stories in the rentry that aren't in the script.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:43:06 2023 No.47043518 File: 167 KB, 1080x790, Screenshot_20230410-074211_Samsung Internet.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47039345 Where are you seeing 9 gigs? F95zone?

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:47:55 2023 No.47043827

>>47043261
AA has been busy with stuff so he hasn't really been on the ball with updating the archive. From what I remember updating the script archive requires AA to update a Google sheet while updating the rentry is just using their edit code and adding the links to the bottom and top of the rentry page.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:49:48 2023 No.47043916 >>47043261 My bad. Some stuff is missing. Thought I added it and I didn't. I'll add them when I'm back home alongside updating the rest of the archive.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 12:54:56 2023 No.47044246 >>47043916 No rush, I was just wondering.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:07:03 2023 No.47044869 >>47042233 But what about when you're 'handing it off' to the next group of anons to write the follow-up choices if you're doing group written CYOA thing?

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:15:26 2023 No.47045312

>>47040477
Take a top-down, authoritarian approach. Invite people to join the project, have them contribute their work within a reasonable timeframe
Then be the one to put things together in Twine, balance out the disparities in personalities from different authors.
Group projects don't work well if everyone is treading on each other's toes. It leads to infighting, which demotivates people. There needs to be a centralized authority that says 'okay, i'm making the call, we're gonna go with this for X reason'.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:17:50 2023 No.47045437

>>47044869
The least coordination heavy way would be to write an intro sequence that opens a lot of possibilities and then end with a choice of what to do next.
Then anyone can write a piece on what would happen after making a certain choice and end that with their own set of choices, which would be elaborated on in another piece.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:28:27 2023 No.47045959 >>47045312 >>47045437 Authoritarian mindset vs Libertarian mindset, what a classic.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:32:46 2023 No.47046193
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>>47035386
Orphans anon and his sister Suisei are in an unhealthy, codependent relationship with each other where anon has to constantly bail his sibling out of trouble she causes and his sister is constantly sabotaging his relationships with other people so he spends more time on her.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:42:22 2023 No.47046662 >>47046193 What is the appeal of Suisei incest?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:49:27 2023 No.47047027 >>47046662 Suisei good. Incest good. I think incest with Amelia works best though. God that sweat fic did things to me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 13:58:05 2023 No.47047478 File: 1.08 MB, 850x1202, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47035386 ANY chuuba submiting (consensually) to the big C

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 14:38:29 2023 No.47049808

>>47035386
Can be any chuuba, but basically
>(You) were formerly a Cover Corp manager, but the restructuring of the company (and a scandal involving your alleged molestation of the idols) got you fired. So you ended up on the streets as one of Japan's many homeless men.
>One day, you cross paths with your former talent. She's all grown-up now, and is a proud mother. She's also grown up in... All the right places.
>You immediately fly into a rage, blaming the chuuba for your misfortune. In reality, you're just blowing off steam, but the chuuba begs for your forgiveness.
>So, in the darkness of your homeless man hut, you force the chuuba to wear her old uniform (which you, being a pervert, saved for all these years). Both of you fuck, with her trying her best to roleplay as the chuuba she once was.
>But slowly, you notice that she's adopted the more experienced, more veteran techniques of older women. That's not what you want. You wanted the innocence and purity of an idol, not the skilled ways of a slattern she-wolf. So you end up slapping her with your dick and criticize her performance with the same caliber you did when you managed her
>Her performance disappointed you so much that it single-handedly re-ignites your passion to manage talents, and you emerge out of homelessness as a new man

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 14:52:31 2023 No.47050620

>>47049808
I'm having trouble seeing ANY chuuba in this scenario. It just seems so reliant on them being 'aged out' of their characterization that I can't really think of anyone that really fits.
It's a hot scenario mind you, but I think this might be a case of a prompt/idea being more suited for original fiction/work rather than fanfic.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:02:49 2023 No.47051226 >>47050620 Wouldnt it be better with a time travel angle? >Anon is a hobo >Sees one talent across the street and tries to reach for them >Truck-kun or sewerhole-chan >Anon jerks awake on his first day at the company >Time to fix this shit

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:28:31 2023 No.47052703 >>47049808 Feel like I just see a doujin with this scenario a few days ago lol

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:32:03 2023 No.47052889

>>47051226
Anon who wrote the prompt here. I like this idea. An isekai back to the past fuck-em-all scenario would be hot
>Cover Corp, the company that ruined your life is now in the palm of your hand...
>Finally... REVENGE!
>>47050620
Haha, yeah I was just thinking maybe it could be a hag version of a chuuba? Like, extrapolate on how that chuuba would be after a husband and kid? Like, Marine or something, but older?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:36:01 2023 No.47053096 >>47052703 I wouldn't be surprised if it feels familiar since I vaguely remember reading a doujin with a homeless guy too recently

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:50:11 2023 No.47053936

>>47052889
I guess if you're running with the 'wanted an idol but got a she-hag instead' thing it would have to be one of the four brats (Shion, Gura, La+, or Kobo) aged up for maximum contrast. Other than that you're basically running on them being the same in name only due to how much you'd have to extrapolate.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:50:58 2023 No.47053981
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>>47052889
>anon goes back in time to RUIN the black compamny who wronged him
>First he makes a man flee from his family
>then he sets fire to a man's home (and accidentally burns the one next to his target)
>then he gets one man into bankrupcy
>has an affair with a woman so she leaves her family
and just like that he creates current hololive by accident

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 15:58:41 2023 No.47054448

>>47053981
Oh god that would be a fucking twist.
Especially if it was foreshadowed by (You)r memories of the past being slightly off enough that a reader catches on.
Stuff like them monologuing about it feeling wrong that hololive only has 5 person generations, or how weird it is that they're letting this Suisei girl into the company roster, etc.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:00:40 2023 No.47054572
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>>47035386
>Your new life as a human exchange student in a school of goblins, has been pretty chaotic and alien, but at least the art tutor, Miss Honey is friendly towards you.
>It also hasn't escaped her notice, that you're looking at her for reference when drawing sexy goblin girls in your sketchbook. She might have some 'homework' for you.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:01:52 2023 No.47054655

>>47053936
A filled up La+ would probably be good
>"I had so much hope for you, La+!"
>"Those shackles we put on you! They weren't shackling your power; they were just shackling how slutty you are!"
>>47053981
>(You) are actually Yagoo, thus creating a stable time loop
Lmao now that's a backstory fic if anything, only the reader doesn't know who the tomato is until the end

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:06:45 2023 No.47054935 >>47054572 try to sell the goblin nigga, no one in this thread except you knows her

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:09:37 2023 No.47055104 >>47054935 NTA, but I watched her a few times. The voice and vibe, at least when I checked her out, was not really what I was hoping for when it comes to a goblin avatar. I think she also just did drawing streams which don't do anything for me.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:10:35 2023 No.47055164 >>47054655 >stable time loop How the fuck would this be a stable time loop? Do you fire your other self for the scandal because you don't recognize them?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:16:50 2023 No.47055503 >>47055104 Wow, looked her up. That is the exact wrong voice for someone with a goblin model.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:19:27 2023 No.47055650 >>47055503 i like her voice and energy but that model is too weird like its good, but its so overanimated that it loops back into looking bad?

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 16:28:17 2023 No.47056134

>>47055503
I could deal with the voice since your voice is your voice after all, and if you wanna be a goblin on the computer, go for it, but the energy is also way too low imo.
>>47055650
Also raises a good point, they somehow found some weird middle ground rigging similar to Irys 1.0.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 17:24:52 2023 No.47059388 >>47043518 I dunno

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 17:40:14 2023 No.47060294 File: 281 KB, 1122x1049, AmeBites.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47047027 I really gotta work on that sequel...

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 18:02:24 2023 No.47061583 Any gokkun fic in the works?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 18:43:06 2023 No.47063701 >>47061583 I think someone said they were working on one, but I might be making that up I'm not sure.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 18:44:42 2023 No.47063772 >>47061583 >>47063701 I remember someone saying they were going to do a gokkun fic that involved Fubuki. But this was a couple of years ago so take that with a grain of salt.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 19:19:29 2023 No.47065627

>>47054935
I don't know what I could say that would be as good as the writer knowing her themselves. It's a shot in the dark, but she's still pretty popular in the western vtuber space.

>>47055104
>>47055503
>>47055650
If I wanted a generic goblin, I could use request one with her name or something. Also, after seeing so many praise her tracking, it's weird to see it brought up as a negative. All those cheap corpo models have hurt you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 19:23:15 2023 No.47065811 >>47045959 I've seen both fail. A group of fragile egos stepping on each other's toes and getting nothing done vs a group of people doing well but nothing gets done because the single point of failure in charge is a shithead.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 20:09:13 2023 No.47067952

>>47065627
>Also, after seeing so many praise her tracking, it's weird to see it brought up as a negative. All those cheap corpo models have hurt you.
Well here's the full review for your ''soulful'' indie
Its decently rigged, but her hair constantly clips because it cant keep up withe head animation which makes her looks like she's a spazz despite the fairly normal movements she's doing. She very clearly is aware of this because she has to overcorrect her model, which has good expressions.
TLDR: your oshi's model looks like one of those 60fps anime clips, it has too much going on because the rigger is not aware of stop and go motions so she has to constatly readjust her movement
Now regarding your fic, since you are clearly a bitch that wont even sell his oshi properly (and cant even take criticism), no one will ever write you anything unless you pay them

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 20:34:19 2023 No.47068936 >>47067952 >your ''soulful'' indie Yeah, that's really what all this is about, isn't it?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 20:43:02 2023 No.47069309 >>47068936 What are you suggesting, anon? Is it actually about... the Illuminati!?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 20:46:21 2023 No.47069461 >>47040962 >>47041011 >>47043047 The idea is theirs, the concept is theirs, yet they can't do anything on their own and need anon's help.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:21:01 2023 No.47071059

>>47069309
Nah, just holofans doing their "we are the Grand Keepers of the Board!" bit and getting overtly nitpicky at anything they think is intruding.
Like, fair enough if you think Honey's model moves too much. I think most corpo vtubers look like cardboard cutouts. Just don't call your opinion a 'review' and add a bunch of jargon to make it sound official. I know enough from Honey's talk about her model to know a lot of that, was bullshit.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:24:09 2023 No.47071190 >>47065811 Which is why some form of democracy usually ends up as the best option. Alas, it's not really organizable purely /here/.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:24:50 2023 No.47071225 >>47071059 Uh, okay. I'm stupefied and left sleechless by this post, so I'm going to try and forget it exists.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:31:29 2023 No.47071560

>>47071059
I think you just can’t take criticism. People casually put forth their opinions for the discussion, all of which are relevant, then you started acting passive aggressive out of nowhere. The “corpo enemies” are all in your head, nobody said anything in regards to that except you.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:33:50 2023 No.47071676 >>47071225 Well, I wish every post in the conversation, up to my request, didn't exist. I just wanted to leave a request for anybody who'd know the girl, but >>47054935 just couldn't help himself, with his fake authority act.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:34:51 2023 No.47071725 >>47061583 Which chuuba should be put on a cum-only diet?

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:37:53 2023 No.47071899 >>47071676 >his fake authority act. What the fuck are you talking about?? It’s reasonable to assume nobody here knows her so you’d have to tell the thread about her to get something written, what does that have to do with authority? Genuine schizo.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:40:50 2023 No.47072032
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>>47071676
You kinda gotta read the air in the room that if you suggest a prompt with a non-holo or well known niiji, you'll need to give potential writers something to work with and make them WANT to invest their attention on your chuuba. It wasn't exactly a slight against you or your gobbo oshi when the dude asked you to sell her to everyone. A few anons also chimed in and said she wasn't really for them or that interesting due to a number of factors that have nothing to do with being corpo or not. I mean, by virtue of being a goblin she COULD land an npc slot in some stories. If you present her good points and how she could be interesting to write about, that might be much more well received.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 21:42:02 2023 No.47072098 File: 2.87 MB, 498x350, 1674972790071356.gif [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47072032 >well known fuck meant less known. Teach me to post after my workouts.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 22:21:22 2023 No.47074364 >>47071725 I'd say Suisei, but she lacks brothers.

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 22:46:14 2023 No.47075612

>>47055164
Exactly! Something like
>With your domination of Cover Corp complete, all that's left is to do away with the old guard -- the shitters who are behind the company's decline.
>This particular shitter in the management department really has to go because he fucking harassed the talents, apparently. So you have A-Chan deal with it.
>"Don't worry, sir, I'll take care of Anon Anonson."
>The mere mention of the name makes you freeze. You've been living under an assumed identity for so long that your old name has slipped your mind.
>You... you were the bastard who fired you in the first place!
This is possible using modified time travel rules from the movie 'Primer', and will serve as the fic's final twist

Anonymous Mon Apr 10 23:04:48 2023 No.47076540

>>47071676
listen buddy, its easy to forget when you are a pathetic gosling that thinks his oshi is special but let me remind you that you are in a board encapsulating EN, ID, JP and even spanish speaking chuubas.
not only does the writer have to know who the fuck are you talking about, but also given a reason why she in particular should be picked up upon the sea of ideas
unless, you do what other people have done and write a fic to drum up enthusiasm. Kaela didnt have a fic until someone wrote about her, despite multiple calls for a fic.
Hell, you could have apologized for chimping out and im sure someone here would have heard you/given you feedback if you decided to write something, but since you doubled down while peeing and shitting, enjoy paying someone to write about your oshi, because i doubt anyone will pick your idea just to spite you

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 23:19:42 2023 No.47077326 >>47076540 >apologize Oh fuck off, you neckbeard.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 23:24:07 2023 No.47077557 >>47077326 fuck off back to /v/, there you can be a seething faggot that thinks everyone is out to get you

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 23:32:51 2023 No.47077992 I like to think that the goblin chuuba made the prompt then went into butthurt mode after some criticism.

>>	Anonymous Mon Apr 10 23:36:35 2023 No.47078184 >>47077992 nah its just a faggot. i watch her from time to time and she's pretty comfy

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 00:04:28 2023 No.47079671 >>47077992 Pretty sure if the chuuba herself wanted smut made of her taking advantage of one of her students, she could just mention it on stream and she would have probably 5-6 finished fics in her email by the end of the week.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 00:17:48 2023 No.47080412 >>47077326 >neckbeard as an insult Ah, so you came from Reddit. That explains a lot. You should reply to the other two posts as well.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 00:19:11 2023 No.47080487 >>47075612 Damn, the problem with discussing twist fics in the thread is that it’s spoiled.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 00:26:23 2023 No.47080848 >>47080487 I know... but I guess you can just save the prompt for future use or release it outside of /here/ first then post it in /wg/ after a few months have passed

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 01:00:51 2023 No.47082724 >>47079671 >>47078184 I want to beleeb

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:31:21 2023 No.47087985
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> want to continue post apocalyptic series
> want to continue dark ages fantasy series
> have cool ideas for both that would require rebuilding the plot from the ground up
> too divided on which one to do
> do neither

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:38:00 2023 No.47088327
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>>47087985
when I'm faced with a similar struggle between two choices, I flip a coin. If I don't like the outcome, I obviously wanted whatever choice lost, and I just go with that. Worst case in your scenario, you start on the one you think you wanted, realize you didn't and go back to the other. Flip the coin writeanon, put it in destiny's hands, and if you hate what destiny has in store for you, make your own destiny.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:39:52 2023 No.47088416 >>47087985 Solution: write a romcom

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:40:47 2023 No.47088456 File: 44 KB, 590x557, 1680875174423834.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47088327 I don't have a coin.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:43:59 2023 No.47088627 >>47088456 Just search for “coin flip” online.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:47:09 2023 No.47088804
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>>47088456
I don't care what you flip. You flip that shit and get going on your passion you little shit. If I hear one more excuse outta you, I'm gonna flip you onto the table.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:49:58 2023 No.47088943 File: 164 KB, 392x416, 1676041081846495.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47088627 >>47088804 It just landed on heads 8 times in a row, but I wanted to write the other one...

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:54:43 2023 No.47089197 >>47088943 Then write the other one. This is getting ridiculous.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 02:56:17 2023 No.47089271 File: 39 KB, 720x810, 1677195018841162.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47088943 That's literally what I explained to you...you DOUBLE WRITER. Since you hated the outcome that won, you WANT the other one.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:00:49 2023 No.47089516 File: 113 KB, 556x448, slepbabu.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47089271 >>47089197 I'll write it tomorrow.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:02:18 2023 No.47089588 File: 513 KB, 1920x1080, 1676600405288276.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47089516 Oi! Unless you're on east coast fucking hours, you put something on paper tonight. I don't care if it's one line, or 500 words or more. Do it.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:14:03 2023 No.47090284 >>47080487 It's all a matter of execution anyway. Even if the twist changes everything about the storyz what matters most is if it's done well not if it's spoiled to the dozen or so posters that may have read this discussion.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:37:39 2023 No.47091491 >>47087985 Alternatively, consult the I-Ching. The oracle shall show you the way. https://www.onlineclarity.co.uk/reading/free-online-i-ching/

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:43:38 2023 No.47091782 File: 2.74 MB, 2508x3541, 106808444_p0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47035386 Catching Sora mutilating one of those ballistic gel heads and her getting super embarrassed at her sadistic tendencies being seen

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 03:47:53 2023 No.47092009 File: 2.85 MB, 2508x3541, 1680578228075426.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47091782

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 04:50:58 2023 No.47095382 File: 531 KB, 1500x2000, 1680821119928571.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:06:26 2023 No.47096017 File: 317 KB, 1000x711, SoraErrorChalkboard.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47091782 >>47092009 SchizoSora has me feeling some type of way

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:07:47 2023 No.47096082 File: 1.09 MB, 850x1356, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47096017 Same but AltSuisei

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:15:04 2023 No.47096408 File: 1.24 MB, 1043x611, SuiseiBed.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47096082 I want to save that hardworking but unrewarded menhera comet

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:36:25 2023 No.47097275 >>47095382 I don't know why it's only her, but when Moona talks about her weight gain it makes me understand fetishes I've never had any interest in.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:41:02 2023 No.47097446
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I am posting to say that I just read 'Run', and I like it. I wish the author has them screwing while Ame does her darndest effort to keep the Myth girls from entering the house in the sequel

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:49:04 2023 No.47097719 File: 1.06 MB, 3413x4096, AmeSweat.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47097446 It'll be her office/stream room but yeah

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 05:53:07 2023 No.47097843 File: 3.53 MB, 3035x4299, 2abd348c72da4ed9e78888a77c43aa7b.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47097719 More power to you, anon. Looking forward to it! and sweaty sex in the Smol Ame costume AAAAAAAAA

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:22:04 2023 No.47098783 >>47097446 >>47097719 Fanart like this makes me really wish I could find Ame attractive. But her personality has 0% sex appeal for me.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:29:16 2023 No.47099023 >>47098783 Understandable. For me, personally, I just like blue-eyed blondes That's why Haato and Aki are also on my radar, though I don't know about them as much as I know about Ame

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:30:56 2023 No.47099077 File: 737 KB, 854x1225, AmeSweat2.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47097843 Maybe in another part on that one Semi public sex and incest are a perfect storm of fetishes holy shit

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:31:55 2023 No.47099100 >>47097719 The things I'd do to have my head sandwiched in between those tits. >>47098783 Too stubborn?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:35:25 2023 No.47099196 File: 684 KB, 2240x3150, ChamaLingerie.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47099023 God I need to write another Chammers fic at some point

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:40:21 2023 No.47099340

>>47099077
My suggestion: Set it during HoloFes
>"Bro... don't... ugh, we're gonna get caught at this rate..."
>"Just one more lick," you beg. "Come on, please..."
>As you lick the skin on Amelia's collar, someone knocks on the costume room door. It's A-Chan!
>"Watson-san! Are you in there?" she asks. "You have to come out; they're looking for the Smol Ame mascot on the convention floor."
>"Quick!" Ame whispers. "Get in the costume."
>"Wh... What?"
>"Just get in, damn it!"
>"B-B-But--"
>"Watson-san!" A-Chan yelled from outside the door once again. "You'll be late for the HoloFes mascot shoot! Come out, please!"
>"Stop bellyaching!" your sister tells you. "Oh yeah, strip down to your boxers; we won't fit if you get in here with all your clothes..."

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 06:59:53 2023 No.47100015 File: 632 KB, 2481x3508, AmeSweat3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47099340 >Ame getting creampied by her brother in front of thousands of people while they're both in a stuffy mascot outfit OH BABY

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:06:04 2023 No.47100185 >>47100015 You know what you gotta do. Godspeed, anon!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:11:40 2023 No.47100362 >>47100015 OOC for Brother Watson.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:17:21 2023 No.47100548 File: 540 KB, 1868x2555, AmeSweatMascot.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47100362 Brother Watson in the RunVerse is borderline addicted to the smell and taste of his sister's sweat. Also didn't put a barbie in the microwave that one time

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:18:57 2023 No.47100605 >>47100548 I'm going to hit a heroic dive into that costume to lick that belly sweat

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:19:28 2023 No.47100619 >>47100548 Wait a minute...are you Brother Watson writing about his fantasies here to cope with the fact that he's in love with the anime avatar of his sister?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:22:37 2023 No.47100716 File: 1.29 MB, 1758x1506, MoonaSweaty.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47100619 No, but I think only Moona's brother has that problem anyway

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:23:07 2023 No.47100731

>>47100619
>inb4 Run 4 is where Brother Watson finally gets caught writing erotic sweatfics by Detective Ame.
>"So you're into that kind of stuff, huh...?"
>You close your eyes, waiting for the inevitable slap to the face. But instead, nothing happens. In fact, instead of the whoosh of wind that comes from a slap, all you hear is... a deep slurp behind your sister's lips.
>"You're a terrible brother," she says. "I gotta fix that."

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:28:56 2023 No.47100907 >>47100619 Replace the Watson siblings with an original sibling duo and you've got the makings of Japan's hot new incestbait anime "I Can't Believe I'm In Love With My Annoying Sister's VTuber Persona!"

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:31:02 2023 No.47100968 >>47100907 I swear there's a doujin with that but with their mom

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:35:00 2023 No.47101077 >>47100968 >Mom I am torn between asking for a code or not

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:40:45 2023 No.47101251 >>47096082 There's literally nothing alt about a psycho suisei

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 07:48:31 2023 No.47101499 >>47101251 It's pretty established that a core part of the alt!Suisei is that there's only one real difference between our timeline and hers. She never got into hololive this causing her to be (a bit more) unhinged.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 08:07:00 2023 No.47102097 >>47100716 I’d have that problem too if Moona was my sister.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 08:07:43 2023 No.47102112 >>47101499 God, you actually have "established canon" around your little AUs. Gotta remind myself to ignore these discussions harder

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 08:47:45 2023 No.47103242 File: 1.96 MB, 1440x1435, 1670757118523240.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47102097 sus

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 08:51:45 2023 No.47103361 File: 193 KB, 1280x1280, Fhv4ZYcVIAAktu7.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Free me

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 09:00:56 2023 No.47103598 >>47103361 A fic about you being a young lad who gets sold to Pekora through the underground slave trade, so you and Jill-kun team up to escape.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 09:10:27 2023 No.47103835 >>47103361 Koyori kidnaps the little fecker and does experiments on him. When he is returned to Pekora's house before she wakes up, the monkey just ain't the same.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 09:12:42 2023 No.47103882 >>47103598 Is this going to be a twist fic that hides that the both of you are animals until the end? Presumably with that detail hidden by making it seem like it's an usadaken operation instead of just Pekora buying pets.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 09:20:50 2023 No.47104112 >>47103882 Perhaps. The only thing I'm certain of though is that Goro and Mimi are minor antagonists. Evil looking cats.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 09:43:05 2023 No.47104718 >>47103361 >>47035386 Teaming up with Zeta to free Jill-kun.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 10:39:00 2023 No.47105934 File: 344 KB, 500x500, 1680904945728659.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Pagman I wrote 1.2k words today I have done literally nothing of worth for the past 5 days besides writing

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 10:41:53 2023 No.47105996 File: 208 KB, 1062x1394, 1666784706394226.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47105934 This had better be homosexual intercourse involving Vesper.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 10:50:31 2023 No.47106188
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>>47105934
Not entirely unrelated but I went to AO3 for reference on something I'm writing and it's crazy how good some people are at writing smut, or just in general. I don't particularly doubt my skills, but I do know that when compared to some of them, there is still MUCH room for improvement. I really need to focus on diversifying actions in-between long dialogue scenes, and also to write out more paragraphs that don't reference any of the characters directly, just describe the scene and the feelings of the moment without any "you" or "she".

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 10:54:43 2023 No.47106292 >>47106188 >diversifying actions in-between long dialogue scenes This is the bane of my existence.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 10:57:00 2023 No.47106346

>>47106292
I fucking wrote variations of "she laughed" like 30 times, and the worst is I have no clue how to fix it. "She chuckled, she laughed, she giggled", I can only hope it isn't as grating as I'm making it out to be, but I'm still going to have to restructure it in some way or else I won't be able to sleep at night.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 11:01:02 2023 No.47106443 >>47106346 You can use direct speech to express the laughter also, and combine some instances by referencing that she'd been laughing a lot after the fact.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 11:06:26 2023 No.47106592
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>>47105934
I just passed 2k words for the outline of my current story. Just the outline. There are so many scenes I want to include, but at the rate I'm going this thing is going to be a Frankenstein's monster of events and I have no clue how to string them together in a way that has good pacing and builds towards the climax.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 11:17:42 2023 No.47106935

>>47106188
>I really need to focus on diversifying actions in-between long dialogue scenes
In theory there's two ways out of this hole, either get better at framing dialogue scenes such that 'talking head syndrome' doesn't set in from the other things happening in the scene or git gud at making interesting dialogue such that you can actually get away with having the characters be talking heads since the dialogue is flowing well enough that the reader is kept interested by the back and forth.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 12:11:29 2023 No.47108508 >>47105934 Ganbatte

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 12:57:32 2023 No.47110124 Bump

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 13:15:07 2023 No.47110772

>>47035386
This is a stretch but oh well. There's this Rwby fanfic called ''Not this time Fate'' where a timelooper character gives up. they tried time and time to fix the loop but they failed, and now are jaded and tired.
So i was wondering if that type of history could work here. Anon is a jaded timelooper, one that has looped for years triying to save the company of ''the nuclear yab'' but he keeps failing, so fuck it! its now time to do his own thing

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 13:44:16 2023 No.47112136 >>47110772 Sounds interesting. Does he control when time rewinds, or does a certain event that he can’t prevent trigger the loop to return to the beginning?

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 13:54:37 2023 No.47112702

>>47112136
in the original story, he's ''locked in'' in a loop until he dies, but he always comes back to the starting point, it being the start of his schoolyear.
With that logic here, anon starts at say, his first day in the company. I actually like it this way so he cant save scum progress and adds to the idea that this jaded individual cant just use their knowledge to fly through the loop

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 13:57:59 2023 No.47112885

>>47110772
So this would be a no/minimal powers variation of the usual tokyo chuubas setting? Cause as interesting as the loop would be I'm pretty sure having Ame and Kronii be real time travellers kind of fuck with the concept since then it turns into "Give them loop knowledge so they can fix everything".

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:00:07 2023 No.47112982 >>47110772 Isn't that basically the plot of Palm Springs?

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:03:06 2023 No.47113146

>>47112885
actually i was wondering how both variations could coexist
the first one, the non powers one, would pretty much play out with anon saving the company from the nuclear yab thanks to a healthy dose of acceptance, his own handiwork, the relationships he managed to not fuck up and a dash of comedy

The second one tcould use the ''checkpoint'' system for slapstick deaths/suicides (as people previously discussed here) and feature one of the two time travelers. Could be that Kronii sent you to stop the nuclear yab, but she cant remember and you have to fill her in, and Ame is putting her two cents in but she's not as prominent. Or viceversa, Ame sent you and Kronii is too depowered to make it work
>>47112982
i had to google it, i didnt know there was a movie with that premise

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:14:15 2023 No.47113691

>>47110772
>>47113146
In theory I think it could work. It's just that it has the 'baggage' of being a timetravel fic in that you need to at least plan out/have an outline for the key events of the timeline then plot out the necessary info/character growth needed in order to 'fix' it while also having to have the 'goof off/fuck around' timeline be the ultimate key to ending it since it needs to be the 'key timeline' for the story to work narratively.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:25:57 2023 No.47114243
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>>47112702
>until he dies
So he has to live his whole life (until like 80 years old) before he can try again?
This also reminds me of the brief prompt discussion we had a while ago where Anon's oshi dies and he's sent back a week the night after her death every time. To break out of the loop and save his oshi he travels to Japan to find her.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:34:51 2023 No.47114640 >>47114243 Maybe the 'nuclear yab' really is nuclear and causes everyone to die a few weeks/months after it happens. Makes it so that the loop is only a couple years at most.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:37:12 2023 No.47114754 >>47114640 That's bigger than Cover Corp then, Anon needs to save the fucking world.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:38:08 2023 No.47114793

>>47114243
>So he has to live his whole life (until like 80 years old) before he can try again?
in the original story? yes, but he would eventually commit suicide because his ultimate goal was to save everyone
Here it can work the same, Anon's life after the nuclear yab is just a downward spiral so there's just nothing he can do but keep triying
>>47114640
>>47114754
kek
>''Pekora listen to me, you CANT adopt that monkey, otherwise you will unleash a global pandemic''

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 14:40:00 2023 No.47114872
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>>47114754
Yes and the only way anon can save the world is to make sure this idol company doesn't have a nuclear yab and releases a song using their christmas spirit that can bring world peace.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 15:01:06 2023 No.47115750 >>47114872 How about multiple songs to pacify different countries? Botan for Russia, Aqua for China, Glumbo for the USA

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 15:12:00 2023 No.47116149
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Ninisanni Scenario VN writer anon, are you here? I've been going through the Selen route and I want to make a request. Please go deeper into the events of World War 3, the nuking of Washington DC, and the Chinese genocide. I genuinely love this lore and want to see it expanded upon. I also want to know if it's responsible for the conversion of Japan into a communist government that allows private gun ownership.

I NEED THE LORE, DULLA-CHAN.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 15:29:44 2023 No.47116913

>>47069461
Anon the entire point of a /wg/ mass collab fic would be to gather as many willing writers into contributing into a story that gets passed around round robin style. To butcher your metaphor, you kind of need other dudes in the orgy in order for it to be more than just a normal fic.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 16:28:48 2023 No.47119519
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Let's collab on a short story! I'll start.

>Anon didn't necessarily expect the Hololive office to be empty even this late in the evening, but he certainly didn't expect what he saw after entering.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 16:47:27 2023 No.47120333

>>47119519
>Sprinting forward and diving, the hail of 9mm narrowly missed as he scrambled into cover, landing on his sore ribs with a whoof of discomfort as he moved to cover, even as the deafening cacophony of gunfire continued. The sound reverberated in the closed space, making every shot far louder - far more potent in making clear the threat posed.
>The knuckles of his fingers ached. The cut above his eye had stopped oozing long ago. The gore covering his shirt was only partially his.
>He had come this far. YAGOO waited for him at the top of the offices - Anon knew he wouldn't flee, not after the man fought his way across the city to reach this point. He thought himself...invincible, perhaps. Or maybe he was curious to see if this lone warrior's mettle was truly unbreakable.
>As the mixture of blood and saliva dripped from Anon's mouth, he pulled the pin on the flashbang he wrenched from the hands of one of the policemen YAGOO had on his payroll, tossing it down the hall as a scream of warning rang out from down it. He would not, could not die here. Not until he had his answers.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 17:20:12 2023 No.47121820 File: 1.56 MB, 932x1465, GuraPanties.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47115750 Getting Gorbino to play along would require the most work I think

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 17:21:28 2023 No.47121861 File: 338 KB, 695x628, Patriot Shark[sound=https%3A%2F%2Ffiles.catbox.moe%2Fusl1pr.mp3].png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47115750 >>47121820

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 17:43:40 2023 No.47122744 File: 1.45 MB, 1158x1637, GuraBurger.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47121861 I wanna feed Gordola as many burgers as she wants. Which would probably only be like one or two but still

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 18:15:53 2023 No.47124145 File: 642 KB, 1200x859, 1681233612208702.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] I hope the anon who wrote Out of the Blue is still around. I'd love to see more Gooba stuff from him someday.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 18:39:57 2023 No.47125355 File: 2.66 MB, 2094x1488, Next.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47106592 My biggest outline ever which was for an almost 20k words fic was around 150 words at most

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 18:43:10 2023 No.47125504 File: 36 KB, 286x461, 1677592693806.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47122744 Funny, I want to feed her more burgers than she wants.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 18:46:59 2023 No.47125669
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>>47125355
Found it. There's some ideas here that I never really used for whatever reason that may have been. It's honestly more so dialogue that I came up with while I was away from my work station so I just wrote it like this.

THANKS FOR HELPING ME AS USUAL. GOTTA TEND TO BUGS. BUGS? I HAVENT TOLD YOU ABOUT THEM? I HAVE BUG ROOM. WANNA SEE? TERRARIUMS. DANGEROUS HYBRIDS. WANNA DO IT WITH BEETLE NO IT WOULD RIP ME IN HALF WHAT NOTHING. CAN I BE ON FEEDING DUTY? SURE THAT WAS A PAIN ANYWAY. FUBUKI CLEANS THE POTION ROOM, LOOKS AT POTION, GRABS IT AND RUSHES TO INSECT ROOM. PICKS RANDOM INSECT WITH ENEEY MINEY, DRINKS POTION AND ENTERS ENCLOSURE. NOT BIG GUY FIRST, SOMETHING SMALL.

ANY FLIES? NO THEY DON'T LIVE LONG. CANT YOU MAKE THEM LIVE LONGER. IM NOT NECROMANCER. VACATED SPOT. KOYORI POTIONS. THEY GO PLAY. FUBUKI ABSENT MINDED. SHION NOTICES BUT DOESN'T COMMENT. NEXT-DAY FUBUKI CLEANING HOUSE. SHION SAYS SHELL BE GOING FOR A WEEK. FUBUKI WAVES GOODBYE. IMMEDIATELY GOES TO INSECT ROOM BUT NOT BEFORE GETTING THE POTION. FIRST MATE WILL BE ONE DAY RECOVERY PERIOD. SECOND MATE TWO DAYS. THIRD MATE WILL BE ONE DANGEROUS. OUT OF IT ALL WEEK LONG. SHION FINDS HER IN DESPICABLE STATE.

FUBUKI SPILL POTION ON GROUND MONSTER KNOCKS DOWN TERRARIUM ALL INSECTS DRINK IT

FOXES AREN’T CATS!

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:03:11 2023 No.47126405 >>47125355 God I want A-Chan to suck me off while I have a very serious business meeting with Sora

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:08:15 2023 No.47126634 >>47126405 > A-Chan squeezes your balls after you playfully got too friendly and said something flirty with Sora > resumes sucking as normal afterwards as you apologize to Sora for making a weird noise out of nowhere

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:34:38 2023 No.47127864

>>47120333
>as he reloaded his gun, he took a second to catch his breath and think of his oshi
>his memory was the only thing left after the nuclear yab, the thing that left only Japan, Argentina and part of chile standing, the two polar opposites in the globe

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:39:08 2023 No.47128083

>>47127864
>Anon runs for the stairs, not trusting the elevator to still be in service
>Two guards block the entrance, though they draw slower than he does and pay with their lives for it
>Sprinting up the three dozen flights of steps to reach Yagoo's office he pauses to check inside his jacket for the thing that started him on this whole insane escapade
>JILL-KUN

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:42:36 2023 No.47128237 File: 594 KB, 680x999, GuraBracesTummy.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47125504 Based UOHrchitect?

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:44:05 2023 No.47128294

>>47128083
>Anon stops, brow twitching
>''A FUCKING MONKEY?'' THATS THE PLOT TWIST?
>the fantasy distorted as anon threw the dice in anger at the door of Lamy's room
>''Well if you dont like it then dont play'' said botan, her pride hurt that the campaign she spent hours writing was shittalked

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:50:57 2023 No.47128637

>>47128294
>"YOU TOLD ME THIS WAS A SERIOUS SESSION!"
>Botan looks offended at the implication
>"I-It is!"
>Looking around incredulously, Anon finds that both Polka and Nene look rather disappointed
>They both were apparently extremely invested in what was going to happen next
>Lamy is misty-eyed, pouring another drink from her third bottle of sake
>"I-I'll take Jill if Anon doesn't want to..."

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:55:02 2023 No.47128852

>>47128637
>Anon rolls his eyes
>''Fine, you can get the monkey''
>The sake bottle hits the table a bit too hard
>''Its a bushbaby''
>''I think its an adult lamy''
>''Nene shut up or i will beat you up''
>Anon crosses his arms
>''Apologize to Nene or i wont hand the baboon''
>Lamy's eyes narrow
>''ITS.A.FUCKING.BUSHBABY''

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 19:59:27 2023 No.47129058

>>47128852
>"Quite frankly Lamy I don't believe Jill is either a bush or baby. Certainly not both, in any case."
>"At least call it a Galago!"
>"Gesundheit."
>Anon ducks as the sake bottle is whipped at his head, the half-empty glass shattering against the wall
>Nene shouts in terror, not because of the violence, but because the sake is dripping down into the tank holding several of her most cherished beetles that she couldn't trust the confused babysitter to watch while she was out

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:03:45 2023 No.47129258 File: 40 KB, 1154x719, 1678145150615111.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >one fag is just samefagging and spamming low-effort greentext.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:05:56 2023 No.47129375 >>47129258 Don’t even know why he started derailing the thread. Was pretty slow and comfy before his spam came along.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:06:26 2023 No.47129400

>>47129058
>''LAMY'' she yells in horror ''YOU KNOW JURGEN IS RECOVERING FROM HIS ALCOHOLISM! HE WAS TWO MONTHS SOBER''
>Polka takes a look and cringes
>''oh god he started beating his beetlee wife''
>Lamy shrinks a little in her seat, cheeks flushed in embarassment at her outburst
>''im sorry Nene''
>A tank is shoved in her face
>''And im sorry too Jurgen''

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:06:29 2023 No.47129404 >>47129258 You write something.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:07:42 2023 No.47129464 >>47129258 no one cares about your goblin man, you have to let it go

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:08:46 2023 No.47129504

>>47128637
Thank you for continuing the story, but the shift from longer sentences to shorter and shorter, one-clause sentences (greentext style) feels a bit jarring. Maybe I should've just started the story without putting it in greentext, to make the idea that it was supposed to be written like a regular story clearer.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:10:38 2023 No.47129577 >>47129375 >derailing >when people (or guy if we follow your schizo train of thought) are actually writing >in the writing thread why do you use words you cant understand?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:13:00 2023 No.47129697 >>47129375 >comfy >retards fighting over goblins >comfy

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:13:15 2023 No.47129713

>>47129577
It's all good, the angry posts are all the same person trying to start shit. Better to not reply and just do your thing; given the circumstances posts that consist of 1-2 inflammatory sentences can't be considered to have any value in /wg/ as far as I'm concerned.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:21:42 2023 No.47130133 >>47129697 in pagpag language comfy means ''people were coomposting once every 2 hours''

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 20:55:34 2023 No.47131568
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>>47116149
Glad you're enjoying it. The Selen epilogue is my favorite out of them all. NODShunting is something you don't see a lot in fiction, but it's one of my favorite hobbies. Sad thing is, you don't get to do it much with friends, cause the barrier to entry is so expensive. It's a little lonesome, seeing how beautiful it is and not being able to share it with anyone. To do it with Selen would be a dream come true.

As for the deep lore in the sequel, I'm trying really, really, really hard not to spoil the setting, because I think it will come as a fun surprise, much like some of the routes.
That said, I will clarify. The sequel takes place after all of the 'ends' but doesn't involve any of the epilogues (barring one, for obvious reasons). The way I see it, the epilogues are concentrated on a specific girl, whereas The Harem End is a canonical, VN length 'end' for the Super Seducer achievement. So because of this, the events in Selen's route haven't happened, at least not yet, because the kids are still in school.
I will say this though. The school setting is done with. I physically cannot write another scenario for the school setting. There's only so much you can do in one building...
There will be a setting change that you won't anticipate (genuinely, even after reading this post, you won't see it coming), and it will stem from... well, call it societal changes. Societal changes in line with what interests you about the Selen route. And obviously everyone will have their opinions on said societal changes. So to answer your question, yes, there will be more setting building.

Nevertheless, the vibe will remain the same romcom, if not a little more ecchi, since the MC has canonically had sex with all nine girls. Specifically ecchi too, not hentai. I'm hearing a lot of feedback, and it seems people prefer ecchi over hentai. That's not to say there won't be any hentai, just the normal amount.
But I'm overexplaining now. All you need to know is It'll be fun as fuck, as twisty and irrational as the first, and pretty beautiful too.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:02:46 2023 No.47131954
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>>47131568
Thanks for the info, anon. I hope those lore bits from the Selen remain canonical. They sent my sides into orbit and came out of nowhere. The Chinese deserved it anyways.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:04:02 2023 No.47132024 >>47125669 This reads like a fever dream. This was your outline?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:05:25 2023 No.47132096 >>47131568 >Anon and his Harem get caught up in a anti-communist revolution >Instead of Affection levels, how White or Red you act dictates who you wind up with

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:07:27 2023 No.47132195 >>47131954 Thank fucking God. The VN was well done and all, but I am so sick of school settings. Everything is a god damn school setting.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:52:18 2023 No.47134478 >>47132024 Honestly, if he wrote it out like a greentext it would be comprehensible and clean.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 21:56:56 2023 No.47134735 File: 20 KB, 258x258, 1667975048113392.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47131568 It'll be done next week, right?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:01:06 2023 No.47134928 >>47132024 The entire plot/outline I came up with while I was kayaking for an hour out in the sea. So I had to keep repeating the key points in my head so I wouldn't forget, and that's exactly what I ended up writing down.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:25:41 2023 No.47136109
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>>47134735
Give me a year. It'll probably be sooner than that, but I wanna give future me some leeway. Having most of the assets and code structure I need this time around will really help things along.
>>47132195
It's funny you say that. What I initially typed in the draft of my reply was "If I have to write another scene set in school setting, I will kill myself on national television", but then I decided to restrain myself for propriety's sake, opting for the "physically cannot..."
School, especially Japanese school, is by and large, boring and tedious. The only merit people find in it is through nostalgia, shared experience, and the sentimentality of youth.
I don't know about you, but I don't have nostalgic memories of learning math. Rather, what's nostalgic is the experiences that surround it, like sports clubs, instigating fights at recess, skipping class to play magic the gathering in the hallways, and flirting with girls during the break periods.
>>47132096
Just in case I haven't mentioned it, affection points will be done away with. You've already won, this End is your reward.
Though I am considering another gameplay related stat. It might be a little trivial, but it will be amusing. Depends on how well it can be implemented.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:30:24 2023 No.47136323
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>>47136109
I went to a school that didn't have clubs, didn't have recess, had functionally no nerds who socialized outside of classes, and I was too awkward to flirt with girls. Maybe that's why I dislike the setting so much.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:33:00 2023 No.47136426 >>47136323 Sounds like a literal shithole

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:34:17 2023 No.47136485 >>47136323 Schools are supposed to have clubs? Is this a first world country thing or something?

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:34:19 2023 No.47136489 >>47136426 It was. It was where the mentally unstable or misbehaved/criminal kids got sent.

Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:35:58 2023 No.47136550

>>47136485
>Schools are supposed to have clubs? Is this a first world country thing or something?
It depends on the country. Where I'm from schools do have some clubs, but most hobbies like sports, games, music etc. happen in clubs that have nothng to do with school.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 22:46:31 2023 No.47137027 >>47136489 >spoiler That explains a lot.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 23:35:08 2023 No.47139336 File: 69 KB, 739x415, 1681196916688110.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google]

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 23:36:32 2023 No.47139406 >>47125669 If this really is the biggest outline you've made for your fics I can see why I've given up on reading your commissioned smut.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 23:37:08 2023 No.47139429 File: 1.87 MB, 1417x2000, __yukihana_lamy_and_daifuku_hololive_drawn_by_muneshiro_hitsuji_kikaku__55c3e8958e47547163701a8506c6e9c3.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47139336 BIG MONEY BIG MONEY NO WAMY NO WAMY STOP

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 23:40:18 2023 No.47139588 >>47136109 >a year What do you spend most of your time working on it on that it takes you a year? I'm not shitting on you, I'm just genuinely wondering what takes up so much time.

>>	Anonymous Tue Apr 11 23:46:12 2023 No.47139884 >>47139588 NTA but I thought their time estimations were because they're writing and scripting a VN.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 00:04:08 2023 No.47140819
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>>47139588
>two months vacation
>three months to write rough draft
>one month to edit first draft and final draft
>one month and a half on asset gathering and scripting
>one month and a half on staging
>one month to playtest and mess around with potential extras.
Adds up to ten months.
That's if I go with the same length as last time. Extra length will make virtually everything take longer. The length really just depends on what scenes come to me, I intend to write as much as I can without sacrificing quality.
But the timeframe could be a lot shorter too, since I've gotten used to writing in script and already have the framework, so I won't be wasting days on UI, fonts, the option menu, positioning imagemaps.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 00:08:53 2023 No.47141103 >>47140819 Ah, alright. It was the 2 month gratuity window and 2 month vacation time that threw me off so much.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 00:57:14 2023 No.47143707 >>47140819 What do you do for a living?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 01:25:49 2023 No.47145591 >>47141103 I find it best not to overpromise. >>47143707 Coal mines

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 01:27:31 2023 No.47145718 >>47089197 >This is getting ridiculous. Bro, he was never going to write to begin with, you have to stop giving people like that attention.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 01:28:31 2023 No.47145770 >>47139336 >>47139429 NEEDS to stop shaving and to get raped

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 01:38:47 2023 No.47146418 >>47145718 I don’t know why those posts always get responses. It’s always some guy whining and making up excuses to not write.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:14:28 2023 No.47148709 File: 282 KB, 969x1555, KurokamiGun.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] Any gunbros around? I want something cool and concealable for a fic, maybe a little uncommon too.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:16:35 2023 No.47148871 >>47148709 MP5K Briefcase Gun.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:16:41 2023 No.47148881 >>47148709 >Any gunbros around? Have you tried asking /k/ for pistols that are cool and concealable?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:18:20 2023 No.47148979 File: 269 KB, 693x480, S4M_(С4М).png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47148709 >Derringer >S&W Model 442 Airweight >Korth Sky Marshal >MSP Groza >The S4M

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:19:12 2023 No.47149040 >>47148709 C O N T E N D E R O N T E N D E R

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:20:04 2023 No.47149106 >>47148709 Still going with S&W 642

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:20:24 2023 No.47149127 >>47148979 (me) The S4M is especially notorious because once you pop it off on someone and that corpse is autopsied, many coroners will conclude that the victim was shot with a rifle round from a few hundred meters instead of a pistol at close range.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:20:38 2023 No.47149137 >>47148709 Zip 22

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:23:55 2023 No.47149351 >>47148709 Black Mamba

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:25:56 2023 No.47149463
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Any bakingbros around? I want something tasty and crunchy for a fic, maybe a little sweet too.

Stop pretending like you're not just feeling lonely and want to discuss your loner hobbies with the only place that you feel a sense of community and friendship in your pathetic life.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:29:06 2023 No.47149649 >>47149463 Canelé is a good choice even if they are not crunchy. Thick crust, soft inside and a bit of alcohol works wonder >Spoiler i dont mind discussing hobbies as long as they are relevant to a story coming out in this millenium

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:29:33 2023 No.47149676 >>47149463 Can't go wrong with pumpkin pie and whipped cream.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:31:10 2023 No.47149774 File: 60 KB, 1536x1015, yum.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47149463 Have some Ensaymada, my friend.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:31:41 2023 No.47149816

>>47149463
>Stop pretending like you're not just feeling lonely and want to discuss your loner hobbies with the only place that you feel a sense of community
I have my book club and gaming group for that, don't know why you think anyone here would feel a sense of community here when trying to talk about Nijisanji or western corpo vtubers is frown upon here.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:33:59 2023 No.47149975 >>47149676 Oh god I'm so sick of pumpkin treats I can't even take the smell of pumpkin anymore. Also, whipped cream is really American, I think you should only ever use it if you're a beginner to compensate, because it's really not that great.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:36:52 2023 No.47150165

>>47149816
What are you smoking? People haven't stopped talking about the Nijisanji VN since it came out, and multiple anons are vocally horny for Hoshikawa. Threadshitters LARPing as tribalfags to poison the threads shouldn't be seen as representative of /wg/.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:37:25 2023 No.47150196

>>47149975
>Also, whipped cream is really American, I think you should only ever use it if you're a beginner to compensate
what the fuck does this even mean? it's a very light, slightly sweet topping with no real equivalent. any sort of thick icing or topping otherwise completely changes the character of what you're eating

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:40:53 2023 No.47150404

>>47150196
Icing is purely decorative but it is extremely easy to just pour icing on your dish so no person who actually knows how to bake uses icing, they instead decorate it with other, more edible ingredients. Also icing is extremely unhealthy. In 2006 some scientists did a stuff where they put whipped cream next to an ant's nest, and the ants didn't even touch it. Apparently, that thing is basically plastic to them from how processed it is. That's why I avoid using it myself.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:41:57 2023 No.47150480 >>47150165 > Hoshikawa Time to go jerk off to her first blowjob story stream again

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:43:21 2023 No.47150552 >>47148709 Jericho 941 Px4 Rex Zero

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:44:16 2023 No.47150597

>>47150404
Not him, but I'll have to say that whipped cream is a hell of a lot different from icing. If you get it from a can, maybe it can be that dangerous. But if you make whipped cream by yourself (whipping All Purpose Cream or Heavy Cream), that's much healthier.
I do agree that it's a buff for beginners, though. I know this because I dabble in baking and it's my go-to whenever I want to spruce up a dessert.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:45:03 2023 No.47150640 >>47150480 Is this members-only, or can I get a link?

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:46:15 2023 No.47150726
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>>47148881
The War in Ukraine is to /k/ what the 2016 election was to /pol/ and I avoid that place like a bad neighbourhood after dark now.

>>47149040
Not really what I had in mind, but I have always really liked the same sort of look that competition type guns tend to have. I have separate fic in the works featuring a trap-shooting shotgun for that reason

>>47148979
>>47149106
J-frames look so fucking nice, I might pick that.

>>47149137
I wonder what chuuba would have fallen for that piece of shit's marketing.

>>47149351
I don't know if you're talking about that Rhodesian pistol that was a flop or pic related, because pic related is actually really kinda cool.

>>47149463
Coffee Cake

I'll talk about mecha and cars next too you little bitch just wait

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:51:14 2023 No.47150991

>>47150726
hickok45 has really nice videos on both the 642 and 442, as well as other rare guns. I suggest you watch him to see the pistols in action, as well as how they look like up close
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=74qgns7KkXE
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nKYrNwNgZcc

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 02:55:02 2023 No.47151234
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>>47150726
>I don't know if you're talking about that Rhodesian pistol that was a flop or pic related, because pic related is actually really kinda cool.
Nah, your pic is right. Though I actually meant the mini-mamba, I forgot there was an original larger version.
I considered getting one. Probably the best .22 for silence and concealment. Threaded barrel for silencing, extremely short barrel, picatinny rail for optics/flashlight, built-in iron sights seem servicable, extractor is good (important when using subsonic rounds).
Only problem is the price point and availability. It's way more expensive than any other .22 pistol.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:28:51 2023 No.47153167 >>47150726 >I'll talk about mecha Favorite Gundam desgin. For me it's Syd Mead's Turn A Gundam.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:32:40 2023 No.47153378 File: 22 KB, 112x112, PepeY.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47153167 >>47150726 >>47148709

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:51:48 2023 No.47154473 >>47153378 Frogposters should be hung from London Bridge.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:55:24 2023 No.47154686

im really on the mood for a prompt as old as time itself so what the hell
>A young girl shows up, claiming to be anon's daughter from the future
>there is a problem however. she doesnt remember her mother
>and now anon has to find out who is the true mother of this kid so she wont dissapear

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:56:25 2023 No.47154744

>>47113691
>>47110772
Okay I just thought about how the 'fuck around' timeline could be the key/end timeline for the loop.
For every loop before this one (You)'d push yourself and everyone around you trying to find the answer for why it happened and why the 'nuclear yab' was so bad for everyone.
Now in this loop you just fuck around, cut everyone some slack, and try to make the best of it before the yab happens... Then it doesn't. Turns out the real solution was just to be a good friend/manager, and maybe use a bit of time knowledge to change some things.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:56:42 2023 No.47154762 >>47154686 I think it'd be pretty easy to narrow things down just based on whether or not the kid has animal ears.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 03:59:37 2023 No.47154941 >>47153167 I really like Unicorn

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:02:46 2023 No.47155123 >>47154762 But what if she doesn't?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:04:56 2023 No.47155235 >>47155123 Then we can rule out all the kemono girls and elves, which is like half the candidates.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:16:18 2023 No.47155899 >>47145591 >Coal mines This is a meme, right? ... Right?

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:29:22 2023 No.47156587

>>47154686
>Plot twist, it's all of them.
>She's actually an artificial human Koyori made from the DNA of you and every holomember
>She was sent back in time in order to make sure someone wins the anonbowl and isn't in the perpetual stalemate it ended up being.
>Her 'phasing out of existence' is actually just a chemical trick Koyori packed into her to make her future daughter gimmick work better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:35:12 2023 No.47156857 >>47155235 Anon, why are you assuming the guy in the story knows the entire Hololive cast? Unless the anon who posted the prompt has a different idea in mind, it's probably fine for the reader to know who it might belong to but not the protagonist.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:46:32 2023 No.47157420 >>47155899 God, it must be depressing to be a zoomer and not know when people are being sarcastic.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 04:59:44 2023 No.47158064 >>47157420 Zoomers really are the cursed generation. They're too detach from human interaction to even function correctly

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:06:08 2023 No.47158375 >>47157420 It's text, anon. I'm a millennial. We were the first to discover it ain't easy to understand sarcasm via text a lot of the time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:09:13 2023 No.47158510 >>47157420 Being a zoomer must be a fate worse than death at this point. >>47158375 Him telling you that he works at a coal mine didn’t tip you off?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:09:54 2023 No.47158546 >>47158510 Coal mines still exist.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:10:57 2023 No.47158596 >>47158546 Zoomers really are brain dead at this point.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:11:23 2023 No.47158619 >>47158375 >>47158546 Anon, just take the L quietly. This is getting way too sad for me.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:13:02 2023 No.47158703 >the next generation is truly messed up, it's over Every older generation, ever

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:15:55 2023 No.47158844 >>47158703 A tale as old as time itself.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:16:14 2023 No.47158858 >>47158703 Baby boomers and Generation X were the only good generations. Everything that came afterwards has been nothing but a slow decline in human civilization.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:18:39 2023 No.47159003 >>47158858 >Baby Boomers >Generation X >being any good I won't say anything else about this lest I start a flame war. The Greatest Generation (the ones before the Baby Boomers) is probably the best generation we've seen so far.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:19:42 2023 No.47159064 File: 1.04 MB, 1000x620, file.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] i think all of you guys suck lmaooooo

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:22:35 2023 No.47159231 >>47158858 And yet the Greatest Generation and the Silent Generation thought of them as degenerates that only like drugs, sex and Rock'n'Roll. The problem isn't a specific generation, it's young people being retarded. They will get better.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:22:41 2023 No.47159236 >>47159064 Truly the greatest of all generations. >progenitor of modern writing >writers of the oldest pieces of literature >all stories and concepts stem from them

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:25:52 2023 No.47159392 >>47159231 It's both young people being retarded and old people thinking of the past as "normal". Times have always been a-changin' and there's little point to be angry about it.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:27:20 2023 No.47159465 File: 1.28 MB, 1410x791, 1675913422421381.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47158596 >>47158619 I give up. Keep up your self-hating behavior all you want.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:44:22 2023 No.47160218 >>47158858 Generation X gave us home computing. So they're better by default.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 05:53:12 2023 No.47160537 >>47159465 Wise words from Marine, and particularly applicable to present /wg/.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:04:16 2023 No.47160940 File: 55 KB, 680x383, Marine_Houshou_33.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47160537 Shit, only glanced at the thumbnail. Thought it was pic related.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:29:52 2023 No.47161812
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Quick friendly reminder to all anons. No matter how shit you think your story may be, there are 7.888 people in the world. It is a statistical impossibility that there isn't a single person who wouldn't love your work and want to see more.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:31:44 2023 No.47161871 >>47161812 Most of them don't browse 4chan. So who cares?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:33:07 2023 No.47161924 >>47158858 >Generation X The only good thing about them is the music they produce.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:34:44 2023 No.47161984 >>47161871 You can care.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:34:52 2023 No.47161988
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>>47161812
>There's only 6.8 other people in the entire world, let alone this thread
Bros? I've gotten more (You)'s than that on fics before. Anybody wanna explain themselves?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:36:06 2023 No.47162029 >>47161984 Why would I care about an objectively worthless post?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:38:25 2023 No.47162127 File: 828 KB, 1067x1433, 1680647204631934.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47161988 Please be kind. I'm tired. I forgot the word "billion."

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:39:22 2023 No.47162164 >>47162029 Oh, look at that, the thread's nearing bump limit.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:40:24 2023 No.47162193 >>47161812 Yea but... they won't ever read it or tell you that they liked it and want more. I don't think your post works, Anon.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:40:36 2023 No.47162207 >>47161812 I'm fairly sure we already passed 8 billion. Crazy to think that in 2005 we had just barely reached 6 billion.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:41:39 2023 No.47162253 >>47162164 Anon, don't get bitchy and start accusing people when they don't care what you post. That's such a childish behavior.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:41:41 2023 No.47162254 >>47162164 Yes, and? What does that have to do with my post?

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:42:36 2023 No.47162293

>>47162193
Sure, they likely won't read it and express their love of it. They're still out there, though. Your work is no less valuable for it.
>>47162207
Holy shit. I was looking at an outdated thing. Wonder how long it'll take us to get 10 billion. I feel like I'm starting to view this like a Youtuber views subscription milestones.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:42:42 2023 No.47162299 >>47162207 Lmao yeah me and your oshi have really been hard at work

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:42:50 2023 No.47162303 >>47161812 I believe that, anon. Especially since I plan to post my shit outside of /here/ as well

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:45:49 2023 No.47162433 >>47162293 Current predictions say 11 billion by 2050, 11 billion, by the way, being the current estimated number of people our contemporary situation (word slipped my mind) can handle.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:47:09 2023 No.47162491 >>47162433 The word was infrastructure

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:51:00 2023 No.47162639 >>47161812 >the world's population fucking exploded i haven't looked outside what the fuck

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I wish a benevolent god came by, snapped his fingers and erased every single person in India, China and Africa. Russia and North Korea too, I guess. That would fix our population and political issues for the next 500 years.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:54:01 2023 No.47162725 >>47162657 >visits /pol/ once

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:54:39 2023 No.47162749 >>47162657 I wish it were that easy, but other countries will just take up the helm of 'le big bad geopolitical enemy' in the vacuum. Look at Germany, or Persia, or Britain (if you're American)

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 06:59:34 2023 No.47162952 >>47162725 Surprised he didn't mention Israel or the Middle East.

Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:00:22 2023 No.47162984

>>47162293
>Your work is no less valuable for it.
Anon, I really think it is. Just because it can be appreciated, that doesn't mean it will be. That's like hosting an art gallery with your paintings displayed and when nobody turns up you go "Oh but I guess some people out there would enjoy it" in the middle of an empty venue. You'll never get recognition or gratitude. In fact, I can probably compare it to starting up a shop and when nobody buys your products going "Oh but I guess some people out there would buy it". Like sure, that's possible, but you're now bankrupt.
I appreciate trying to cheer up the thread and motivate the writers, but your reasoning just doesn't work.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:01:27 2023 No.47163029 >>47162984 Are any of you posting here with the intent of getting famous?

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:02:50 2023 No.47163082 >>47163029 AA is writing a book about his life I'm pretty sure.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:02:58 2023 No.47163087 >>47163029 If I ever see something I wrote self-published on Amazon with the names changed I'm going to fucking murder someone

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:05:45 2023 No.47163207 >>47163029 No, it's anonymous, but if everyone was "writing for themself" then nobody would post their stories here. (You)s are our only currency.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:10:07 2023 No.47163387 >>47163082 Big if true. I want to learn how he has grandkids at 51.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:16:17 2023 No.47163638 File: 169 KB, 960x1143, 1681194213973715.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47163207 > (You)s are our only currency Ya couldn' be more wrong, kiddo!

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:16:41 2023 No.47163650 >>47163387 He had children and his children had children. Not a hard concept

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:17:16 2023 No.47163690 >>47163207 >(You)s are our only currency No wonder people here don't write anymore.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:18:28 2023 No.47163737 >>47163690 Ironically enough the people who get paid in lots of (You)s are the ones who write the most.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:26:11 2023 No.47164003 New thread >>47163830

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:29:37 2023 No.47164117 >>47163638 Oh, I'm talking to the comission guy. What a waste of my time.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:38:44 2023 No.47164406 >>47163082 I don't think it's legal to publish a blank book without calling it as such

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 07:43:07 2023 No.47164499 >>47163650 Anon, your reading comprehension reps.

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>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 08:14:07 2023 No.47165305 >>47163387 Being a red-blooded American male runs in the family

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 08:53:55 2023 No.47166318 >>47165305 Like bowel cancer

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 08:55:29 2023 No.47166354 File: 8 KB, 249x243, 1680795856402803.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47166318 So much for Doctor/Patient confidentiality...

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 09:08:43 2023 No.47166627 File: 3.11 MB, 2000x2829, 99663617_p0.png [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] sluts

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 09:11:20 2023 No.47166694 >>47166627 Why is there so much glue on her

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 09:14:26 2023 No.47166783 File: 1.59 MB, 1013x1433, 99071950_p0.jpg [View same] [iqdb] [saucenao] [google] >>47166694 It's not glue.

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 09:37:24 2023 No.47167437 >>47166783 Haachama looks weird in that image. Since when is her skin colour so dark

>>	Anonymous Wed Apr 12 09:41:13 2023 No.47167543 >>47167437 And her eyes a different colour?

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