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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>37619040

>> No.37664581
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.37664639
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STORY ANCHOR
POST EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Is Fox Family Christmas gonna come out on Christmas?

>> No.37665272

>>37664581
Impregnating sex with any chuuba except Roboco

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>>37665272
I choose to interpret this as "Roboco is made for anal" and I agree with you, more anal sex with Roboco, please

>> No.37665560

>>37664542
the writing general really is dying. That's another thread that died before the bump limit.

>> No.37665676
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>>37665560
I let it die.

>> No.37665711

>>37665560
It’ll help if the people who bump the thread have some sort of prompt to foster discussions rather than just wait every half an hour to bump the thread again.

>> No.37665989

>>37665560
I was at uni, pls andastand.

>> No.37665998

>>37665711
Didn’t someone already try telling them that before and they got really defensive and mad for no reason? Besides, I don’t think they care in the end.

>> No.37666047

>>37665560
Idk about everyone else but for me, I've got family here for Thanksgiving so I don't really have time to sit down and write

>> No.37666180

>>37665560
I'm letting it die on purpose to shut up le comfy thread posters

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>>37665140
Hopefully before so anons have time to spend with their families instead of masturbating all day.

>> No.37666408

>>37665480
Man, I wish Let me Feel your Pain hadn't scope crept itself and just kept itself to being a fucked up Roboco romance, with an very flawed protagonist getting comforted by Roboco.

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>>37666408
I just wish more people would write(or draw) anal sex with Roboco

>> No.37668649

>>37665560
I didn't like the previous OP so I wasn't bumping when I post.

>> No.37668771
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>>37664542
>>37664581
Forcing Fubuki to cut off that ghastly looking thing on top of her head

>> No.37668796

>>37668649
Same, I don’t know how anyone could ever love Noel, she’s basically a camwhore with no redeeming qualities.

>> No.37668932

>>37668771
Ears?

>> No.37669004

>>37668796
>I don’t know how anyone could ever love Noel
People think they can save her from herself or some stupid shit like that.

>> No.37669176

>>37668796
There's two big reasons why I like Noel.

>> No.37669404

>>37668932
Those also go away when you cut off her ahoge.

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>>37668932
I said thing singular. I mean that ugly little protrusion sticking right out of the top of her skull. a few other chuubas share that deformity but hers is really disgusting

>> No.37670921

>>37669417
The nerve ending?

>> No.37671121

>>37670921
hehe yeah can I touch it?

>> No.37671845

>>37671121
Uhm...no

>> No.37671918

>>37671845
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2ofBiqCfiA

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>>37568534
>turning into the worlds biggest gigaslut because of a few daddy issues isn’t to most realistic premise to begin with.
I guess you're right, but I needed an initial reason for Ayame to try it out and realise she loves having sex, I didn't want to say "she started inviting guys over and became a slut just because". Maybe some more in-depth reasoning and a slower build up to her circumstances would have helped.
>the Aqua arc felt a bit castrated
Yeah, I'm starting to see that. As I said before, she WAS going to play a larger role in the other versions of the story and only ended up being a little useless because of the direction the fic went. That's not really an excuse, though, I probably should have given the onion drama some more attention.
>The smut might not be the most ball-busting piece of erotica in the archive
I'd expect so. If you don't mind me asking, can you pinpoint anything I could do to make it hotter? I might find myself writing Towa sex in the distant future.
Anyway, cheers for reading and enjoying, it's pleasant to hear.

>>37576684
>>37604251
Nah, I'm neither a good writer nor a fast one in comparison to most of the thread. The last time one of my series had a proper update was August LAST year.
>>37577478
No problem man, just you saying you liked it is more than enough, thank you. I'm not even sure how a prequel would work. Wouldn't be about Anon since he's had a boring life, so it'd have to centre around Ayame.
I don't have any plans to open an AO3 account but shit, if someone who has one wants to upload it and say it's from /wg/ in /vt/ I'd be cool with that.
>>37617502
Gracias.
>>37618024
Yup, tried squeezing all the rrats I knew in. Might have forgotten some but I think most of the ridiculous ones are there.

>>37631663
>I gotta say the dialouge by far my favourite part of the fic, everything flowed so well and Anon's and Ayame's interactions were always such a treat.
Bless, I'm glad to hear that since I worked pretty hard on the those. Even I as the writer found myself liking the dynamic between the two characters I had created.
>Spoiler
I was originally going to have that be way more in your face, but decided to tone it down. Good to see you noticed. It also ties into the STD joke.

>> No.37673444

>>37664639
From Your Lips To God's Ears - a Potential Prelude

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRlEAUeJftGKlfge2q0ql0AaAhVN42oYtBcUPEqLZRuDJKrk0nulohNmTsvYUkNPpaYa5Rgj7TG37Nh/pub

I'm the guy who wrote Say, Can You See? I been trying to figure out how to write that story without it going full polshit but I've been finding it almost impossible to do so, so I decided to try and make another potential series that is more character driven, and maybe more dark but also relatable. This is a sort of "treading the water" short story, trying to figure out the atmosphere and whatnot.

I will probably go ahead and do the sequel to Say, Can You See, but I think I accept at this point that it'll be a niche story and not everyone's cup of tea, and that's fine, but I personally liked the story alot, so if I can do it for anyone, I'd do it for me and the few who can look past the bullshit.

>> No.37673507

>>37673444
Tags?

>> No.37673637

>>37673507
Fuck. Uh.......I mean....I don't know what snuff is....I guess snuff....Maybe depression. I wonder if it can be considered noire. I might have to google that

>> No.37673676

>>37673637
character tags would also be a good idea, dude

>> No.37673699

>>37673676
Mio. Mio is the sole notable character. I haven't done this shit in ages dude

>> No.37673936

>>37673444
Extremely short. I can't say much for about four paragraphs, as it isn't long enough to establish a decent hook.

>> No.37674071

>>37673936
Right. Back to the drawing board. Thanks for honest input

>> No.37674753

>>37673444
>Story
It's short, and I can't really say much other than that it's compelling enough that I'd read more of it if you wrote more.
>Say Can you See
I liked it as it was being released, found the ending 'arc' rather unsatisfying since it didn't really explore the Tokyo characters enough while setting the potential sequel somewhere else entirely.
I'll probably read the sequel though I'll stop reading if it goes the direction of dumb political bullshit rather than chuuba drama.

>> No.37675371

>>37673248
Someone posted "AYAME RAPES YOU" at the end of the last thread and now I have a crippling need to see an alternate outcome where Ayame DOES rape you but it's the most powerful and fulfilling nut of her life, so she keeps doing it. Of course no one believes you, etc.

>> No.37675440

I can't find the two greentexts about becoming Lamy and being impregnated by Shishiron. They're in the /vt/ or /jp/ archive, and may or may not be on my computer

>> No.37675587

Can someone scour through this thread for all the greentexts and stories posted I'm busy
>>37517791

>> No.37675630

>>37675440
I vaguely remember /become/ having their own archive. Maybe it could be there?

>> No.37675676

I really liked Surprise Visit. That is all.

>> No.37675686

>>37675440 (me)
Seems like it's the Botan hornyposter but half of the puush links are dead. This is why stories should be plaintext with a bit of CSS and the pages backed up on the internet archive, I can't have porn I like just disappear

>>37675630
It was at some point, and then link rot happened

>> No.37676034

>>37675686
This is also a huge reason why you should SAVE STORIES YOU LIKE.

>> No.37676038

>>37673444
I like it, it makes me want to read whatever comes next. One remark is that the text switches between being a slog to get through (not in a bad sense) and something more rythmic, almost like poetry. That lead to my reading speed switching constantly, which was a bit disorienting. Also it reminded me of Come Up and Get Me for some reason.

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>>37676034
Saving is the easy part, having everything readable on all my devices with correct formating and not everything disappearing when a HDD decides that its life is over is a bit harder. Ensuring that you can actually find what you look for is sometimes not trivial too. Things would be easier with plain text

>> No.37676713

>Have you ever had a dream where you died? And you're stuck, unable to speak to anyone, or be seen...?

Uh, not specifically, no. But I have thought about it and dreams where you're the only one aware somethings very wrong is particularly common, and I had one of those recently.

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>>37676274
Uh, thanks for backing up my stories.

>> No.37677085

>>37676832
Thanks for writing and sharing them! Disk space is cheap and I don't want to lose them. Especially Balsamic Vinegar

>> No.37677168

>>37676832
It's difficult to say what makes a great writer - too many variables in usage of expression, styles of prose, adherence to rules of language and the coherent conveyance of unique ideas. I don't know whether or not your stories are well-written, but I do know one thing; be it morbid or repulsive, your stories are at least consistently interesting to read.

>> No.37677222

>>37668796
Noel is fun kind and likeable.
Matine is a horrid bitch and a fake otaku

>> No.37677723

>>37677085
I forgot I even wrote that.
>>37677168
Thanks for the kind words.

>> No.37677837

>>37677723
>Thanks for the kind words.
I could give you a kind $30 too, how about it?

>> No.37677849

>>37675686
Welp, looks like your only hope is hoping on old become threads and hoping they were thread posted before they were a puush link.

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>>37677723
Looked up Balsamic Vinegar after that Anon posted it.
>“I’ve had enough of your bullshit. I’m going to give you rape correction now.”
What the fuck. I snorted.

>> No.37678211

>>37677879
It's a great brat taming fic, and I like how there's a genuine connection between the characters. The way they know when to respect each other's limit and when to go overboard is very very nice too. It's like, if you always know everything that's going to happen, it's boring. Not knowing exaxtly if the person that's choking you is really going to stop adds a lot, especially if you can't physically defend yourself. It's not exactly healthy but when you're into getting hit and choked and raped you're usually way past that

>> No.37679011

>>37675686
Oh... Sorry. I really should have made a backup for the catalogue, rather than just collating the links.
>>37675440
I don't think they were ever posted directly to /vt/, only as puush links.

>> No.37679079

>>37679011
>I don't think they were ever posted directly to /vt/, only as puush links.
Some of them are on /jp/ from what I remember

>> No.37679388

>>37679079
Found this one on /jp/. Not what you're looking for, but I'll keep looking through the archives to see what else I can find.
>Everything is calm and hazy, all you can hear is mom's heartbeat
>You're snugly curled up inside her womb, hooked up by umbilical cord. You kick a little
>She caresses her belly as her nutrients stream into you, making you grow and putting you to sleep
>Her traits are gradually and irreversibly manifesting in you, you're inheriting everything from her
>Time passes rapidly as all you experience is a drug-like comfy darkness, your mom's genetics are finishing up the final details
>Eventually your head is bumping into her cervix, it's time to go
>Your blue hair comes into view, finally your elf ears are flopping free of your mom
>You're swept in a towel and Lamy takes in the sight of you, you're such a cute elf
>You instinctively latch on to her big chest, Lamy's sweet milk is rushing down your throat
>Time passes rapidly again, you drink happily, growing bigger and more energetic
>One day as she's dressing you in a cute fluffy coat and brushing your hair
>Mom says you look a lot like her when she was a young teen, you're a spitting image
>You look in the mirror, your own golden eyes staring back at you
>True enough, Lamy's blood is running strong in your veins, for some reason it's making you really happy
>Remember the deal you made that day, to give up an old life
>You don't remember any specifics, you've never been anything but a Yukihana snow elf
>You dispel the thought and try to tame your cowlick again, why'd you have to inherit that too?
>You need to look nice after all, this will be your appereance the next few centuries
>A sudden memory rushes across your mind, as if awoken
>"I became.. Lamy?"

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>> No.37679856

>>37679705
Nice ass. I'd like to see more.

>> No.37680102

>>37679856
>Mel getting this from her manager on Discord at 3:17am

>> No.37680286

>>37675371
You, my friend, may have struck gold.

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>>37680286
Show him the power of pussy correction/corruption.

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Post Progress.

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>>37681518
Out of a three day weekend I've only managed to eke out another 8 pages.

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>>37681940
>8 pages.
>Slow
Tell the secret of writing fast.

>> No.37682621

>Our Cures
This is a whole lot of words that I'm not sure I want to read. Can I at least masturbate to it at some point in the story?

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>>37682157
That isn't fast. That's a shit pace for me.
Either way, I don't know what to tell you. Autistically daydream about what it is you want to see and happen in your time away from the document and formulate what chunk you want to write out. I've been thinking about this bit for a month+ and am only now getting around to it, so maybe that's why.

>> No.37682721

>>37682648
If that's a shit pace, what's your usual pace? 20 pages a week?

>> No.37682831

>>37682621
There's a smut scene at the end but it's more about emotional catharsis than pure smut. Closest equivalent of the smut scene in chapter 6 is the smut in "I Thought You Wanted To Dance" where it's something that pulls double duty.
At least give it a chance but don't go in entirely for that smut scene.

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>>37682721
If I'm actually devoted to writing more, yeah, probably closer to 15 with 20 being the outlier. I've just been dreading this for a while and I'll probably spend a great amount of time in editing hell over it either way, but once I'm past it, it'll be like passing a kidney stone.

>> No.37683379

>>37682831
I appreciate that it's an emotionally-charged character drama and all that, but the tension and suspense has to have a payoff and that payoff needs to be me creaming my pants and the way you've described that smut scene makes me think it's more of a token thing put in half-heartedly rather than a serious attempt at fondling my heartstrings via my wrinkled gonads

>> No.37683974

>>37682621
There's sex at the end after the date. While it is more centred around the emotional pay off I think the second half with the cowgirl was hot on its own.

>> No.37684140

>>37683379
I mean the chapter 6 smut scene is an actual smut scene it's just that it does the same thing as the other fic I mentioned where it does double duty at being both the emotional climax of the fic and a smut scene. I'm willing to vouch that it's pretty good.
Again, give the first chapter a shot and if you dislike it then just drop it.

>> No.37684250

>>37683974
>>37684140
Aight I'll give it a shot, sounds good. I have very limited free time so 60k+ words is a really intimidating commitment

>> No.37685431

>>37682621
Based coombrain

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I still have that prompt about an Ina x SWAT 4 / Ready or Not fic from a few months ago. Some anon said he tried to write that, wonder what he's up too?

>> No.37687172

>>37686840
Oh, can you post that again?

>> No.37687993
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>>37687172
Dang, I can't seem to find it in my folder now that I really need it but I remember it, just not word for word...

You're a SWAT officer task with breaching and clearing a decrepit compound hosting a potentially armed and dangerous cult. In a nighttime raid you and your team breach and clear as normal. The reports were right, these cultists are armed and deranged- almost all of them are wiped out in the confontration, all except this one girl who definitely does not belong here; is she perhaps an unknown hostage? And she is also holding a particular book that sometimes makes your head hurt when you give it glances but you pay no mind.

The kicker? This was supposed to something normal, you go in and breach, clear, save the hostage, and be the hero etc etc... but when you get out of the room with the girl in tow, you're in a different part of the compound entirely. The walls are shifting, you can hear faint noises, sounds of skittering, sounds of footfalls and hushed whispers... and there are noises that are definitely not made by a human, you will spend hours fighting tooth and nail for your life against horrors you cannot comprehend, and whatever is left of those crazy cultists, all the while caring for this seemingly normal hostage.

>> No.37688205

>>37679388
Thanks, that's one. I've managed to find most of the others, I'll do a compilation when I can get out of bed

>> No.37688379

>>37687993
I think this is the original prompt and discussion you're referring to.
>>27515857
>>27516661
>>27517493

>> No.37688774

Has anyone tried to tackle a groundhog day style of fic? i was thinking the concept has potential for both a cute fic or even a depraved fic where you do fetish stuff to the girls knowing it will loop back

>> No.37688931

>>37688379
Whoa, how did you manage to find these? But yes that's the prompt and discussion if I can remember correctly

>> No.37689111

>>37688774
We've had discussions about it before but no one's written one yet.
I vaguely remember a prompt about the concept that was basically.
>Your oshi is going to die/have a career ending yab in X days/hours can you save her from her fate?
I think the concept overall is always fun fanfic material but plotting it all out sounds kind of hellish since the cyclical nature of a loop means you need to have a way out in order for it all to have a point.

>> No.37689283

>>37688931
nta but the archive probably?

>> No.37689532

>>37688931
I searched "Ready or Not" in a 4chan archiver until I found it since I vaguely remembered that it was in the same thread. It wasn't but going back a thread got me there since generally /wg/ only talks about recentish prompts unless they get brought up again.

>> No.37689712

>>37689283
Yeah... anon was right, he used the archive

>>37689532
/wg/ doesn't talk much about old prompts, doubt they even look at the prompt archive as well

>> No.37690000

>>37689111
You can take the alternate way and make it end on a random day, just because. Maybe this could be a fun experience, write a few days and at some point roll a dice, on a 6 the loop end on this day. Deal with the consequences, or don't

>> No.37690359

>>37690000
>(You) go through the inevitable stage of just fucking around and doing whatever you want since it's all just going to be reset anyways
>wake up the next morning to find yourself free from the loop
>now everyone thinks you're completely insane

>> No.37690407

>>37689712
I'm gonna be honest when I want to look at old prompts I pick out an old thread and read from there rather than picking up from the prompt archive.
I'm sure the only time the prompt archive finds success and gets an old prompt written is when a tourist writer comes around and picks one up like that one vesper fic.
The old strategy of 'keep reposting your prompts' works better anyway since even that one perpetual tourist that comes around every months or so to shill their obscure fetish prompt eventually got some of them written.

>> No.37690556

>>37690407
>The old strategy of 'keep reposting your prompts' works better anyway since even that one perpetual tourist that comes around every months or so to shill their obscure fetish prompt eventually got some of them written.
Good old tragedy of commons

>> No.37690676

>>37690000
Yeah but that's like one-shot twist ending material rather than the real appeal of a 'groundhog day loop' story. I'm sure it would be a fun twist ending to build up to but if you're a groundhog day loop you kind of want to do that narrative arc of asshole slowly learns to gain humanity and respect despite living in an unchanging loop/ arc about trying to get all the information and actions need to get that perfect loop of the day.

>> No.37690901

>>37690676
That's what you would think, but in the end both are about accepting reality as it is and trying to do your best in it, trying to go forward, regardless of the rest. If the loop breaks at one point where you do questionable things, you're going to "relive" this day mentally until you find a way to heal/go past that. The loop itself doesn't really matter

>> No.37691168

>>37689111
i mean its not that hard
>either you go the comedy route with say, mori, where you have to ''save her'' from the biggest yab in history, you come to like her and realize that the way to end the loop is to let her admit the yab... and she just gets a slap on the wrist
>Or the tragedy route with their death
>Or the porn route where you have to impregnate/awaken something in particular

>> No.37691590

>>37691168
nta but it's kinda boring. There are the loop and the Hololive parts but it's missing something else

>> No.37691726

Sequel to new magic wand onegai

>> No.37691849

>>37691590
its missing the writing dumb dumb. Any concept sounds bad/great on paper but ultimately is up to the writer to make it interesting. I can totally see a competent writter tackling a good loop comedy

>> No.37692056

>>37691849
That's not my point, my point is that if you only have that as a base it'll be harder to make something interesting, regardless of the skill of the writer. I'm judging the idea, not the execution, since there's no actual fic written

>> No.37693484

>>37682648
>autistically daydream

literally me. I'm glad I'm not the only one doing this.

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37693855

>>37681518
Hoping to finish up my current chapter over the long weekend (likely won't since the wife will want to do things, and I'm sure as fuck not revealing my power level on this, vtubers alone are a hidden hobby)

It's already a monster of a chapter though so it will likely be split into three so, I'm just gonna keep it in the same doc for now and once the plotline is done I'll see where it makes sense to split it.

>> No.37693997

>>37693855
This more HJ?

>> No.37694091
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37694091

>>37693997
Yup. What gave me away?

>> No.37694385

>>37694091
Polka and mentioning a huge chapter. That narrows it down to either you or me, and you can't be me, since I'm me.

>> No.37694611

https://twitter.com/amanekanatach/status/1595790103871651840

Kanata femdom onegai..

>> No.37694881
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37694881

>>37694385
I think I'm still me too so you're probably right.

I had considered using a different Holo, but all my Polka images are usually good for conveying how I feel.

>> No.37695362

>>37681518
18 pages, 7k words, a little over half done.I might end up cutting a section to keep it under control.

>> No.37695656

>>37693484
nta but I've been doing basically that for all my life. It was quite a shock to realize that some people don't do this

>> No.37695724

>>37664581
Stuffing the turkey’s asshole with cum for Thanksgiving

>> No.37695766
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>>37695724
Forgot picrel

>> No.37696055

>>37695656
Same, I always had an active imagination as a kid where I would just make up stories using figures and toys. Also having a 40 minute bus ride to and from school gave me a lot of time to just daydream every day.

Like my wife literally cannot comprehend how you do it. But maybe the combination of depression, ADHD, and anxiety make it tough to do that kind of thing.

>> No.37696493

>>37696055
>depression, ADHD and anxiety
What did you do to her

>> No.37696679

>>37696055
None of those have anything to do with daydreaming. Are you wanting sympathy points for your wife?

>> No.37696770

>>37696055
Nah I’ve got all 3 of those too and I autistically daydream all the fuckin time

>> No.37696898

>>37696055
>Like my wife literally cannot comprehend how you do it. But maybe the combination of depression, ADHD, and anxiety make it tough to do that kind of thing.
Depends, I did it to cope with school and suffer from these three things things. I would do it on the bus, and then during class. People are different for lots of reasons, some we understand, some we don't

>> No.37697446

>>37696679
>>37696770
>>37696898
It was mostly just a guess since she was always into the same kind of fantasy stuff I am, so I couldn't understand how you just not daydream.

>>37696493
all that shit was budding before I even met her. And it all just came to the surface harder once her family started falling apart.

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>>37664581
Anon often daydreams about having sex with a prostitute and sometimes browses the most popular local escort website but isn’t really seriously considering to actually hire one. That is until one day when Anon notices that the newest ad is by a Marine cosplayer – someone cosplaying his oshi.
The twist of course is that the escort is the real Marine. She made the ad in horny desperation but almost immediately regretted her action and deleted the ad. Anon was the only one who managed to write down her contact info during the time the ad was up.
After a long deliberation Marine decides to accept Anon’s request after all anyway. Anon meets a stuttering and red from embarrasment Marine and they enter a love hotel together. Before things advance any further though, Marine’s brain overloads and she faints. Anon sighs and puts the telly on. When Marine wakes up she sees Anon, with french fries and a coke, watching snooker.

After that ~the greatest love story ever told~ begins.

>> No.37697744

>>37697484
Very cute. I like this prompt, although I think it'd work equally well as a one-shot as it would a series.

>> No.37697941

>>37697446
>It was mostly just a guess since she was always into the same kind of fantasy stuff I am, so I couldn't understand how you just not daydream.
There are some people that discover at 20 that they can have food preferences or a personality or that they can think through their problems. And not complete morons, people that haven't been exposed to that before. It's one of the reasons stuff like wikihow is popular, lots of stuff seems obvious but some people have never learned it

>> No.37698736
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Fact: Bunny Trap doesn't mention it, but some spiders (particularly tarantulas) actually have two small phalluses above their fangs tucked under those legs they have to drag things into their mouth. Those phalluses can't produce sperm but kind of look like dog penises. The male spider lays its sperm onto his web, then extracts the sperm into the bulbous phalluses in front of his mouth. He then proceeds to basically give the female spider oral sex in order to impregnate her. Very cool. Unfortunately, Pekora didn't get to experience that.

>> No.37699951

>>37697941
It still baffles me how wikihow is an unironic source of truth for some people.

>> No.37700011

>>37698736
sometimes you just don't know

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>>37698736

>> No.37700211

Damn you two mechafags, you've given me a hankering to to do my own fic

>> No.37700245

>>37699951
It is good for some things, especially the simple ones. For everything a bit complex/hard it's not good

>>37698736
That's pretty cool

>> No.37700296
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>>37700245
I really like the wikihow art.

>> No.37700358
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37700358

>>37700296
And this one.

>> No.37700578

>>37700245
Pull up the wikihow for how to write good smut.

>> No.37700850

>>37700296
I like it too. It's not beautiful but compared to the soul-sucking corporate memphis it's at least humane

>> No.37700935

>>37700578
It's not half bad: https://www.wikihow.com/Write-a-Fanfiction.. It's probably good advice, if you have shit for brains

>> No.37701839

>>37700935
This didn’t tell me how to write Aqua using dating apps to get jack hammered after she played through her VN and felt crushing loneliness.

>> No.37702658
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>>37698736
Bro what

>> No.37702957

>>37664542
Why is this thread without edition tagline? I know the prompt and story recap are a fair bit of work, but you could at least name the edition if you're using themed pics anyway.

>> No.37703040

>>37702957
>I know the prompt and story recap are a fair bit of work
Not for a bot-using faggot lol

>> No.37703092

>>37703040
It's a pretty helpful bot. I like being reminded about the prompts and stories

>> No.37703310

>>37703092
t. earlyfag

>> No.37703447

>>37702957
was probably made in a rush since the last one died prematurely

>> No.37703523

>>37703310
I haven't ever made a /wg/ thread, if that's what you're implying. I'm not often in this general. Can't the person with the bot just make them a bit later if it's an issue?

>> No.37703550
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37703550

>>37703523
>Can't the person with the bot just make them a bit later if it's an issue?
Oh boy.

>> No.37703605

Not long enough for the anchor but >>37694534 was a fairly well-constructed shitpost that made me laugh.

>> No.37703932

>>37689111
I thought that prompt was more along the lines of
>The news comes that your oshi has died in an accident/homicide case
>Feeling depressed, you go to sleep
>Wake up a week earlier, your soho is alive
>Baffled, you spend the week on edge, all the events of that week happening the same way
>Your oshi dies again
>One week back
With your job being to travel to Japan, find out how she dies, find your oshi herself and then somehow save her life to allow time to flow forward again.

>> No.37704152

>>37701839
By writing instead of complaining about others not doing the work for you

>> No.37704226

>>37664581
Taking your pet Mori out for a night time stroll

>> No.37704272
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37704272

>>37704226
Is she clothed or naked?

>> No.37704460

>>37703932
>soho
Fucking autocorrect. This is why I hate using my phone.

>> No.37705597
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37705597

>>37704272
Pets don't wear clothes

>> No.37705993

>>37705597
Hey, my doggy has a cute little sweater for the winter. But I get your point.

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37706356

>>37705993
Hey so does mine! You probably don't have freaky sex with yours, though

>> No.37706420

>>37706356
That's a very cute doggy! And yeah, I don't have freaky sex with her. We just do vanilla missionary a few times per month when we feel like it.

>> No.37706520

>>37706356
Fur King-sama... your naughty bits are showing...

>> No.37706869

>>37706520
Hey it happens with pets it's no big deal. If anything YOU'RE the weird one for thinking so much about it

https://twitter.com/R1883661920/status/1578026669859696640?s=20&t=FYtTenGU7dTkFfCiC3XLXA

>> No.37707240

>>37704226
>>37704272
dunno why bimbo Mori is so hot for me, the idea of her degenerating into a toughtless cockslut just gets me diamonds, despite the fact she isnt haughty or mean in any way

>> No.37707936

>>37707240
>Decidedly unsexual mega-autist
It's like the opposite end of the spectrum of what Luna did to Subaru and just as depraved

>> No.37708327
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>>37707240
Convincing her to let loose and succumb to the pleasure? Making her agree to follow your commands no matter how degrading they are? I like the idea of Mori having her professional life, but off the clock she lets out stress by being an obedient fuckpet who doesn't have to think, just obey orders and have sex.

>> No.37708522

>>37706869
That's exactly the image I was thinking of

>> No.37708958

>>37700358
>>37702658
Two pictures one after the other that have a takodachi version. This isn't a councidence.

>> No.37709183

>>37707240
There's a good contrast between "I came to a foreign country to search for myself, try to make it big, connect with the people making the things I love, try to express myself through my song" and "the only thing on my mind is cock". By degrading her, you're taking all of that she's built over her basic female function and burning it as fuel for your sex engine.

>> No.37709461

>>37707936
This makes me think of the fic being like the text equivalent of one of those corruption/bimbofication sequences. With each section skipping time to the next milestone of corruption.

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>>37664581
You ask Polka for advice on how to ask a girl out. Despite normally being tremendous at reading people, she mistakenly believes you're asking to try and be sly about your interest in her and plays along. After it comes crashing down when you use her advice to score a date with another girl, Polka kidnaps and rapes you.

>> No.37709992

>>37709461
my favorite type of corruption is when you take someone with an attitude/tomboyish nature (Mori) and rebuild her as a happy frilly-dress wearing wife
call it wholesome corruption or whatever

>> No.37710207

>>37708958
I hate EN, so I assure you it is a coincidence.

>> No.37710471

>>37710207
Do I really need to go through the classic love and hate rant on a writers thread?

>> No.37710839

>>37710471
Don't care. Whatever you've got to say undoubtedly isn't going to change my mind.

>> No.37713100

>>37704272
I'll always hate this image for making Mori hot to me. I've lost too much to her as a result.

>> No.37713913

>>37701839
Are you sure?
The planning out your story section is pretty much the scope of things you want to do when turning a rough idea into an outline to make your fic out of.

>> No.37714410

>>37713100
>I've lost too much to her as a result.
Too much what? Money? Time? Cum? Pride?

>> No.37714565

>>37714410
Cum and pride. I may have been tricked into cumming to her well over twenty times by this point but that doesn't mean I'm giving her cash

>> No.37714580
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>>37714410
You forgot one. All of the above.

>> No.37714832

>>37664581
For some reason, after every single company party, you wake up in bed with Mori Calliope. Its up to you to resolve the mistery of your lost semen

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I gotta say. I've browsed through Pixiv looking for hentai of basically every single Holomem at this point. Usually all of them have at least one or two good images. Mori has nothing.

>> No.37715259

>>37714580
Think checkboxes, not radio buttons. With 4 options this would be I don't know how much, I always forget those formulas, but way too much.

>> No.37715345

>>37715259
This comment is odd.

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>>37715177
that's both a mori has very little porn issue and pixiv is dogshit issue. I've found better things in r34 and danbooru

>> No.37716919

>>37715345
Here's a visual representation of what I mean: https://losttomori.neocities.org

>> No.37717044

>>37716919
man you are weird
and im the one who cum tributed a mori pic

>> No.37717335

>>37717044
It is what it is

>> No.37717588

>>37716919
Tags?

>> No.37717682

>>37716919
I clicked this and just realized I'm going to die
I heard a car door just close outside my windo

>> No.37717807

>>37717682
>What you picked on the website is what Mori will come to collect from you

>> No.37718154

>>37716919
Why do you think "all of the above" belongs on radio buttons and not on checkboxes? And why do you think I meant radio buttons?

>> No.37718265

>>37717807
hah! jokes on you, i just wanked it a lot of times to her

>> No.37718385

>>37717807
I heard a snippet of her maid ASMR which sounds like she's giving a lubed handjob and frankly I wouldn't fight her on it if that was the case.

>> No.37718456

>>37716919
Did you pay for that URL?

>> No.37718717

>>37717588
Mori, autism, interactive fiction, HTML, set theory

>>37718154
We're dealing with a set. There's two ways of saying what part of it you want, either you list the elements you want, or you indicate the subset you want. Checkboxes allow you to list the elements you want. If you want the whole ser, check a of them. Radio on the other hand indicate the subset. "All of the above" is the subset that contains all elements of the set. Which makes me realize I forgot the empty set which should be "Nothing"

>And why do you think I meant radio buttons?
Because there's no reason for a "all of the above" button to exist if you can pick multiple answers, hence you can pick only one answer, hence it's a radio button

>>37718456
No, neocities allows you to set up a very basic website for free, and you can have a custom subdomain like here. They ask for a mail and check it, you can use temporary email services or email aliases. I'm too garbage at anything involving security and too paranoid to use my own servers

>> No.37719782
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>>37718717
Alright. I concede to your autism. You win.

>> No.37722031

>>37700211
I'm at least making good progress on the Aqua one. Realized I could cut down on the more awkward infodumping by way of doing more showing rather than info dump conversations.

>> No.37722880

>>37700211
i wanted to do one too. about having steamy sex inside a cockpit

>> No.37725695

Irys new outfit reveal was fucking sex I need some fics ASAP

>> No.37726409

>>37725695
What, the teaser trailer? Or something else? I’m confused to what exactly you’re talking about here and how one would write a fic about it considering the design isn’t even out yet

>> No.37726479

>>37726409
Check the live tab, Youtube got updated

>> No.37727072

>>37726479
Yeah still don’t know what the fuck you’re talking about exactly, the return stream? Which part of it?

>> No.37727139

>>37727072
Are you stupid? The outfit reveal stream

>> No.37727213

>>37726479
Wait
You’re talking about the members only stream, aren’t you

>> No.37727267

>>37727213
Ah, that makes sense. The fucking dumbass isn't a member

>> No.37727489

>>37727267
>giving boring EN girl #6 money for more boring content
I’ll pass

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>>37727489
Honestly, of all the EN girls, Irys is the one I have the least of a problem with. I don't really like any of them that much, and I hate EN Vtubers as an idea, but Irys doesn't really deserve hate. At least from what I've seen

>> No.37728095

>>37727648
>ens bad
>b-but the half jp is okay

>> No.37728552

>>37728095
I guess that makes sense

>> No.37728842

>>37728095
unironically this

>> No.37729688

>>37728552
>>37728842
unwriter cope from unprincipled shitposters

>> No.37729963

>>37729688
typical eop

>> No.37731958
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> 4AM
> Turn on Sweet Home Alabama
> Take sip
> Crack fingers
Yerp, time to write.

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>> No.37734382

>>37664581
>>37734234
Getting drunk with college student Aki, and cheating with her in a night of passion.

>> No.37734522
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37734522

>>37734382
Built for Netori

>> No.37736014

>>37664581
Polka keeps buying Lamy extremely lewd underwear for her birthday.
The real reason is she's trying to hit on the half-elf and very much wants to see her wearing them.
Possibly involving Lamy doing a poledance? Optional: And with how little those panties are going to cover, giving plenty of muff peek

>> No.37736199

>>37736014
>Spoiler
that reminds me of that picture of Polka and Nene using an x-ray app to get a peek at Lamy's pubes only to see it's a total rainforest.

>> No.37736285

>>37736199
Source?

>> No.37736370

>>37736285
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/5707300

>> No.37736435 [SPOILER] 
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>>37736199
I mean we got and it looks like Lamy got the most

>> No.37737727
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AAAGAHHH I WANNA SQUEEZE THE SOFFTEST SWEETEST CAT IN THE WORLD AND MAKE HER MY WWIFE

>> No.37738901
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>>37694611
God I NEED more Kanatan in my life.

>> No.37739520

>>37738901
What kind of Kanata fic do you want more of?

>> No.37739844

>>37739520
One where she grows a massive futa cock and fucks me up the ass.

>> No.37740801
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37740801

I better not be the only one writing

>> No.37740920

>>37740801
No, I'm writing too.

...it's this post, but it's still technically writing.

>> No.37741726

>>37739520
Action, romance and of course smut.

>> No.37742059

>>37741726
Violently raping Kanata until she develops Stockholm Syndrome?

>> No.37742328

>>37742059
I was more thinking along the lines of trying to fight an angel because you disagree with god's ways. Failing miserably because she's an angel and you're just a human. Expecting death for such blasphemy, Kanata instead takes you as a slave. Then comes the Stockhold Syndrome and sex.

But your idea works too.

>> No.37742475

>>37742059
Kanatan violently raping (You) by using her futa cock to dock with you, except she penetrates your dick through the urethra and inseminates your balls. Subsequent Mpreg is not necessary but encouraged, baby half-angels curled up inside your balls until the day you have to give birth to them and they're slowly pushed up through your balls and out your urethra

>> No.37742556
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37742556

>>37742059
Gently loving Kanata only for a series of mishaps to make it seem like you violently raped her until she developed Stockholm Syndrome

>> No.37742626

>>37742475
Damn, her dick and babies must be very thin...I hope

>> No.37743074

>>37742626
No way, it's a foot long with 6 inches of girth, you're getting stretched out and stuffed like a thanksgiving turkey and you have no say in the matter

>> No.37743312

>>37697744
Thanks. I'm having an internal debate whether I should just do it myself. I dread the amount of time that it'd take to make my English readable. ESL problems.

>> No.37744928

bump

>> No.37745073

>>37664581
Pandra, But with hololive characters.

>> No.37746012
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>>37664639
Hey, Suicest!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR8z2cfqGFxmbU0UcFd_R986zHzvZEesVbqf0JY6o6VwTbjCCVS4rY1NbwPxRdGklCZZgks9gNoBmS1/pub

Cranked this one out quickly because I was feeling it, so it may be rough in some places.

Tags: Suisei, NSFW, Incest, Implied Impregnation, Light Netori(?)

>> No.37747095

>>37746012
The beginning being in something like third person threw me off a bit when (You) entered in but that's minor. I personally find incest kinda hot (it probably helps that I don't have a sister so its easier to fantasize) so the build up in the train and elevator was some good shit, I now want to see Suisei subtly trying to make her brother cum through his clothes in public. The smut was a bit short and felt a touch laconic, but as I said I'm a fan of incest so it was good in my books.
>“I thought…you didn’t get why people do that.”
Not this again... Suisei mentioned it once and now everyone seems to want to force it into their story regardless of context or character circumstances. It admittedly feels less shoehorned than the Suisei family fic but that being a thing in the story still makes zero sense and does not come off naturally.

>> No.37747633

>>37746012
Much like your other incest fics, I feel two things. The first, Damn this is hot. The second, Damn do I wish this was part of a longer was a part of a bigger incest romance fic.
Other than that my only nitpick is that you probably should have leaned harder into the 'fakeout' third person segment in the beginning rather the weird in-between pov it is right now.
Anyway this was hot despite the roughness. I kind of wish you'd make a longer form chuuba incest romance.

>> No.37749046

Bump

>> No.37750477

Jesus it's going fast today.
>>37742556
How would this even work? Rube Goldberging your way into domestic abuse?

>> No.37750732

>>37734382
But Anon, how could you do that to her boyfriend? Imagine how betrayed he's gonna feel when she comes home sweaty and drunk the next morning

>> No.37750791

>>37750477
I mean it depends on what tone you're going for.
A pure comedy would absolutely go for something like a comedy of errors always occurring when you're doing romantic/sexual things to Kanata that make you look like a violent thug.
While playing it for drama would have it be so all of these 'accidents' are a plot by Kanata/her friends to entrap you into being stuck with her.

>> No.37750903

>>37750791
>all of these 'accidents' are a plot by Kanata/her friends to entrap you into being stuck with her.
How would this work? Like you're blackmailed into staying with her?

>> No.37751152

>>37750903
I mean that's one way to write the scenario.
I can think of like two other ways. The first would be her guilt tripping you over all of these violent accidents happening to her like that one rushia fic about her being happy that your domestically abusing her. The other would be a softer blackmail via social pressure ala the initial situation from that punchwhore greentext.

>> No.37751996

>>37739520
Nurse Kanata playing with your prostate so that she can messily drink a beaker full of cum

>> No.37752473

>>37739520
This one

>You get admitted to the hospital for breaking your leg
>You expect it to be an absolute bore but you meet a nurse
>Her name is Kanata
>Instantly hit it off with her
>She brings you all your meals, does most of your checks-ups
>Almost always with her
>The doctor does tell you that you're recovering at a oddly slow pace
>You don't really care because it means you get to hang out with Kanata more
>Time passes, you bond more
>It's a day before your discharge
>A little sad that you have to leave hospital and Kanata but you gotta get back to your life
>Day of discharge
>Wake up with a severe fever, leaving you bedridden
>Discharge postponed as doctor tries to figure what caused the fever
>Kanata continues to care for you

>> No.37755137
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Anyone wanna talk about their WIPs?

>> No.37755187

>>37751152
The latter sounds more interesting. Allows for more subtle manipulation.

>> No.37755879
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>>37755137
I drafted out something I was dreading and got half done writing it.

>> No.37756355

>>37755137
I've been stuck on the same conversation for the past two months.

>> No.37756837
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>>37755137
decided to scrap and completely redo an entire few sections for the first time since I started writing. I was completely blocked on the scene I was currently on and as soon as I decided on how it SHOULD play out, it meant redoing a big chunk of what comes before. It ultimately feels better once I jotted the ideas down, and it should ultimately give a lot more substance to what I'm trying to convey.

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>>37664581
I need story about depressed suicidal emoona gf
https://youtu.be/LXRSp8QbOeg

>> No.37757170

>>37736199
>>37736370
that artist is so based
we need to save the rainforest anons

>> No.37760763

>>37755137
Got started on chapter 3 of Holoturismo on my spare time just to get the juices flowing. Switching a few things up I thought I was pretty set on, but I think it's for the better and will make a pretty major relationship flow more naturally.

>> No.37763808

>>37755137
It's coming along, but I'm worried about the exposition. Starting the fucking thing in media res is only gonna complicate me, I can tell, even if it'll be gone past the second chapter. But I've come this far, so sod it, it'll be what it wills itself to be.

Aimed to push it out before the end of the month, just in time to get hit by a cold and lose potential days of working on the damn fic. Fuck my life.

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>>37664542
Losing control and masturbating using Chloe's unwashed underwear when she briefly leaves the room during your home date only for her to catch you in the act and learn about your slob fetish

>> No.37764485

>>37757170
>You start a protest to save the rainforest and get Fauna involved because she thinks it's like the actual Amazon you keep talking about

>> No.37765413

>>37755137
I am debating cutting a section of my current WIP. It's already 18 pages and I'm only halfway done. The problem is I haven't even written said section yet, so I'm not sure if I want to do it and see how long the overall fic is first, or just skip it.

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This is why scat fics are so popular

>> No.37767383

>>37746012
mmmmm incest with suisei. Smut was hot but just like the other anon said, wish it was longer and more expanded. Either way, good job anon, can never have too much Suisei.

>> No.37768384

>>37764485
>A comedy fic where everyone keeps missinterpreting stuff while you were just talking about pubes

>> No.37768860

>>37764485
>>37768384
>Fauna wants to shave
>Tiny gnomes/kobolds/whatever occupy her forest and cling to her pubes in an pro-preservation protest

>> No.37770458

>>37765413
Why do you want to cut it out?
If you're still in the first draft generally it's better to have more than less. Cutting shit out is for when you start editing.

>> No.37771425

>>37765797
I feel like the argument is invalid the second a wojack is used.

>> No.37772082

Any new rape/impregnation fics?

>> No.37772329

>>37772082
Check the archive

>> No.37772771

>>37770458
>Why do you want to cut it out?
More or less to keep the fic under control. I have a tendency to write more than is necessary, not in the sense of the text being purple, but more in the sense of just unneeded detail. So with the fic already kinda long and shaping up to be my longest yet, I am a bit self-conscious about it. I also am still uncertain if the section itself is necessary to convey what I want to get across that I cant do elsewhere or bridge using a single paragraph.

>> No.37772923

>>37755137
I think I’m done with writing for a bit, I feel kinda drained. I’ll read some books, chill and get back to it hopefully soon.

>> No.37772994

>>37772771
Anon, don't preemptively cut shit out.
I said it before, but that's for when you're editing.

>> No.37777201

Bump

>> No.37777236

Bump

>> No.37777248

Bump

>> No.37777270

Bump

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>>37664581

>> No.37779042

>>37778841
nice prompt dickhead

>> No.37779142
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>>37747633
>Suisei mentioned it once and now everyone seems to want to force it into their story regardless of context or character circumstances.
Yeah, I kinda get what you mean. I had wanted to try and have Anon tease Suisei a bit in return, but I suppose I could have built on him actually doing it during the seggs as opposed to that. Thanks for reading!

>>37747633
Thank you! I'm still fairly unconfident in my smut, and tend to only really try and write it after a couple of drinks, so that's usually why I tend to focus on the stuff around it if it's there. I wouldn't mind doing a longer-form incest romance once I have a bit more confidence in writing relationships better. The opening wasn't really meant to be a fakeout, and is kind of a holdover from me originally having the idea of (You)r and Suisei's relationship viewed from outside parties (Like the cashier at the pop-up shop thinking you're a cute couple and even seeing Suisei give you a kiss only for her to then overhear the two of you are related).

>>37767383
Appreciate the compliments!

>> No.37781685

>>37779142
Your smut is generally quite fine, no need to be worried over it. Plus the plot lines usually help amplify it in my opinion

>> No.37781744

>>37779142
>I wouldn't mind doing a longer-form incest romance once I have a bit more confidence in writing relationships better.
Please do. Your incest smut is hot but those hints of forbidden love from them make me want to see more from them.

>> No.37783813

>>37779042
I think he just wanted to bump the thread, anon

>> No.37784661

>>37779042
Thank you

>> No.37786095

>9 in 23
Oh boy, here we go.
>>37781744
Seconding this. All your incest fics have been deeply attention grabbing.

>> No.37788386

>>37664581
walking into a bathroom and accidentally seeing Mio's untamed wild bush

>> No.37788575

>>37788386
Why is Mio growing a plant in the bathroom?

>> No.37788606

>>37788575
Are you 12?

>> No.37788648

>>37788575
she ate watermelon seeds anon...

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>>37664581
Someone please make this into a fanfic >>37771108 >>37771526

>> No.37790576

>>37790329
Sounds like just one of the many generic smut fics

>> No.37790673

>>37790576
I hope so

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>>37781685
>>37781744
>>37786095
Gee, I'll be sure to keep that in mind then! Thank you.

>> No.37792018

280

>> No.37792042

>>37790329
Tying down Botan post tranquilizer to rape her sane again!

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Speaking of Botan, the fact that she basically said she wants to tie up Watame and fuck her and it didn't get clipped is very sad

>> No.37792412

>>37792305
timestamp?

>> No.37792570

>>37792412
It was around the 1 hour mark I think
https://youtu.be/2HQhBjii3fI

>> No.37792937

>>37792305
>it didn't get clipped is very sad
That's a good thing though.

>> No.37793097

>>37792305
Watame is made for gentle bondage loving.

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>>37793097
Yeah

>> No.37793807

>>37792570
I will never get tired of how cute that outfit is

>> No.37793886
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>>37793807
Cute AND Sex

>> No.37794301

>>37778841
That's hot

>> No.37794315

>>37794301
Women with dead eyes are always appealing.

>> No.37794366

>>37794301
She made a post on Reddit with that image saying "Did I make it sound like I said you guys were cute??Well... you guys were cute, but...lol And by "cute" I mean "RIP”~~(^^)" Whatever that even means

>> No.37794444

>>37794366
DO you have a link?

>> No.37794487

>>37794444
It's on hot on r/hololive rn, first post

>> No.37794521

>>37794487
Sorry if I didn't believe you, just wanted to make sure.

>> No.37794539

>>37794521
No one here can type like the JPs can, especially their Deepltism

>> No.37794624

>>37664581
(You), a professional music critic, mercilessly ripping apart Mori's work straight to her face.

>> No.37794645

>>37794624
Her music is good. Well, some of it. Red, End of a life, etc...

>> No.37794661

>>37794624
>Anonthony Fantano

>> No.37794679

>>37794645
no, it isn't that's like saying Suisei is a good singer

>> No.37794694

>>37794679
I see

>> No.37794728

Anya thread next?

>> No.37794762

>>37794624
Why do people hate Mori?

>> No.37794810

>>37794762
She made Gura have sex with frat bros in her sister's party and antis won't shut up about it as if it was the end of the world.

>> No.37794821

>>37794762
>Why do people hate Mori?
Strong independent woman who doesn't need chat or /vt/.

>> No.37794872

>>37794762
I just think her music is ass.

>> No.37794956

Can we get new thread already? I hate the feeling of the last posts in this thread

>> No.37794981

>>37794956
Can you stop riding my cock already? I hate the feeling of your loose whore ass

>> No.37794992

>>37794872
Her music is good.

>> No.37795012
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>>37794981
Ok!

>> No.37795025

>>37794762
She kind of inherited all of Kiara's schizo anti types since had all of those yabs and shit while Kiara didn't. So all the shit stirring went to her since the material is (relatively) fresher.

>> No.37795037

>>37794992
Rumao

>> No.37795256

new thread
>>37795023

>> No.37796085
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ANYA RAPE

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