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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>32166959

>> No.32257304
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>> No.32257366
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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32257507

Story recap! There... were four stories posted in the last thread.

Kronmei masochism:tags: kronmei, bullying, wedgie, swirly, yuri, domestic(?):>>32167708

Life with a lion isn't easy y'know? Chapter 6:Tags: Botan, Vanilla, SFW:>>32194636

Holofantasy Chapter 7, Pt. 3.:Coco, Marine, Polka, Fubuki, Ina, Fantasy Adventure, SFW/NSFW inside:>>32201046

Troubled Fox:Tags: Fubuki, SFW, Mystery, Thriller:>>32236914

>> No.32257588

American Suicopath

>> No.32257635
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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Luna RapeAnon Rape!:>>32176809

awkwardly bumbling your way through your first time with your girlfriend Fubuki:>>32222993

Calliope Mori has to run, hide, and fight for her life as a fugitive from a near-omnipresent mob with the coordination of a hivemind as well as a special clandestine government agency equipped with some of the most advanced weaponry in the world.:>>32226447

bestiality fic where fubuki doesn't just fuck the horse, she marries it.:>>32231131

government enforced loli scissoring:>>32232679

a combination of >>32231131 and >>32232679. fubuki (as a loli) is forced by her parents to marry a mare and to rub her pussy all over the horse's pussy.:>>32235343

>> No.32259138

>>32257255
Brilliant move, this edition definitely won't attract crazies

>> No.32259781

>>32257255
Imagine how hairy her cooch is

>> No.32260072

>32201046
Glad I helped roll enough to hang with the boyz. That was a fun chapter.

>> No.32260876

>>32259876
Every thread is a bump limit thread anon

>> No.32261449

>>32259991
...Buttfag?

>> No.32261863
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Requesting your SFW Ina prompts

>> No.32262097

>>32261863
How SFW are we talking?

>> No.32262201 [DELETED] 

>>32261863
Answer me

>> No.32262233 [DELETED] 

>>32261863
Why do you type so slowly

>> No.32262539 [DELETED] 

>>32261863
This Ina greentext but adapted as a full fic.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTABmUKo34wCWWgLExsv2kjkZ9kFAGlOgS7ESVVcvpDeNkfsO8DAligNPFDzoyIGv22tOgQmEX5Ijx5hVNEFV/pub

>> No.32262676

>>32261863
This Ina greentext about how the ancient ones love you but Ina doesn't.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTABmUKo34wCWWgLExZ9kFAGlOgS7ESVVcvpDeNkfsO8DAligNPFDzoyIGv22tOgQmEX5Ijx5hVNEFV/pub

>> No.32263267

>>32262097
Kiss x sis to at the mountains of madness

>> No.32263438

Have any of you visited the world building general's archive? Shit looks like a D&D book. Why can't we be like that?

>> No.32263474

>>32263438
Sounds like you should go back and stay there.

>> No.32263729

>>32261863
I want to see a tanned Ina and how she'd handle being hit on at the beach whilst wearing that swimsuit Mori made for her.

>> No.32264143
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>>32263729
Sounds more like an art request, but Calli actually had that idea

>> No.32264149

>>32263438
Yes.
We can't be like that because we may be of the same breed of autism but fanfiction
autism is different from world building autism.

>> No.32264480

>>32264143
???? That's literally what I'm... you know what? Never mind

>> No.32264549

>>32264480
Don't worry, no one was going to write that anyway, it sucked.

>> No.32264626

>>32264549
And

>> No.32264656

>>32264626
And blew.

>> No.32264686

>>32264656
So

>> No.32264932

Oh, I only just noticed, Hiroshimoot managed to get actual banner ads. I wonder how long that's been around

>> No.32264981 [DELETED] 

>>32264932
Report for off topic and move on

>> No.32264989

>>32264480
Sorry I misread "hit on," I read "I want to see a tanned Ina and how she'd handle — at the beach whilst wearing that swimsuit Mori made for her".
My eye must have dropped the line, no worries

>> No.32265086

>>32264989
I don't forgive you.

>> No.32265221

>>32264989
I dont think I can make that a story but I could include it in a different story easily I think

>> No.32265767

>>32263438
Why would you want to be like that?

>> No.32266105

>>32263438
laziness.

>> No.32266545
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>>32265086
Sometimes I try to do things and it just doesn't work out the way I wanted too
And I get real frustrated, and its like
And I try hard to do it and take my time
And it just doesn't work out the way I want it too
It's like I concentrate on it real hard but it just doesn't work out
And everything I do and everything I try, it never turns out
It's like I need time to figure these things out
But there's always someone there going
Hey Chat: You know we've been noticing you've been having a lot of problems lately
You know, maybe you get away, and like maybe you should talk about it,
You'll feel a lot better
And I go: No it's okay, you know I'll figure it out
Just leave me alone I'll figure it out
You know I'll just work it on myself,
And they go: Well you know if you want to talk about it I'll be here, you know
And you'll probably feel a lot better if you talk about it, so why don't you talk about it
And I go: No I don't want to, I'm okay, I'll figure it out myself
And they just keep bugging me and they just keep bugging me
And it builds up inside
So you're gonna be institutionalized
You'll come out brainwashed with bloodshot eyes
You won't have any say
They'll brainwash you until you see their way
I'm not crazy - institution
You're the one who's crazy - institution
You're driving me crazy - institution
They stuck me in an institution
Said it was the only solution
To give me the needed professional help
To protect me from the enemy - myself
I was in my room and I was just like staring at the stream thinking about everything
But then again I was thinking about nothing
And then my mom came in and I didn't even know she was there she called my name
And I didn't even hear it, and then she started screaming: CHAT! CHAT!
And I go: What, what's the matter?
And she goes: What's the matter with you?
I go: There's nothing wrong mom
And she goes: Don't tell me that, you're on chuubas!
And I go: No mom I'm not on chuubas I'm okay, I was just thinking you know,
Why don't you get me a Pippa
And she goes: No you're on chuubas!
I go: Mom I'm okay, I'm just thinking
She goes: No you're not thinking, you're on chuubas! Normal people don't act that way!
I go: Mom just give me a Pippa, please
All I want is a Pippa, and she wouldn't give it to me
All I wanted was a Pippa, just one Pippa, and she wouldn't give it to me
Just a Pippa
They give you a white shirt with long sleeves
Tied around you're back, you're treated like thieves
Drug you up because they're lazy
It's too much work to help a crazy
I'm not crazy - institution
You're the one who's crazy - institution
You're driving me crazy - institution
They stuck me in an institution
Said it was the only solution
To give me the needed professional help
To protect me from the enemy - myself
I was sitting in my room and my mom and my dad came in
And they pulled up a chair and they sat down, they go:
Chat, we need to talk to you
And I go: Okay what's the matter
They go:
Me and your mom have been noticing lately that you've been having a lot of problems,
You've been going off for no reason and we're afraid you're gonna hurt somebody,
We're afraid you're gonna hurt yourself
So we decided that it would be in your interest if we put you somewhere
Where you could get the help that you need
And I go: Wait, what are you talking about, we decided!?
My best interest?! How do you know what's my best interest is?
How can you say what my best interest is? What are you trying to say, I'm crazy?
When I went to your karaokes, I went to your zatsudans,
I went to your institutional streaming facilities?! So how can you say I'm crazy?
They say they're gonna fix my brain
Alleviate my suffering and my pain
But by the time they fix my head
Mentally I'll be dead
I'm not crazy - institution
You're the one who's crazy - institution
You're driving me crazy - institution
They stuck me in an institution
Said it was the only solution
To give me the needed professional help
To protect me from the enemy - myself

>> No.32266710

Are there any stories with council using their aspect powers for lewds? Like Kronii messing with time to make you orgasm dor minutes, Sana going total size fetish, Fauna entangling you with roots, etc?

>> No.32266847

>>32266710
I think most EN2 stories are on the /infinity/ general but they are all very low quality over there so the answer is probably not.

>> No.32266993

>>32266710
No but when Sana debuted there was kind of mini debut for the whole of the Council, and I briefly thought itd be really cool to make a harem fan fiction where a guy gets tormented by the HoloCouncil and has to date them and reaffirm their existence to keep them from ending the world.

Kind of like Date a live meets... not it's pretty much just like Date a Live.

>> No.32267121

>>32266710
>Fauna entangling you with roots
Oh yeah, there's one like that.
You might not like it though.

>> No.32267248

>>32266993
Never got off the ground and I scrapped it because 1. Ina is actually low key part of the council via Sanas lore about her connection to the ancient ones and I wasnt sure whether to include her to stay true to lore

2. I thought wed eventually find out what Omega was but that never happened

3. I could not figure out a way to put the protagonist in the position that he needed to convince space and time that reality is worth existing

>> No.32267362

>>32266993
Honestly I'd fucking read a shameless chuuba harem fic if the character dialogue was good and sounded enough like them.

>> No.32267974

>>32267362
So would I I'm surprised it's not really a thing.

Looking back at it now I guess the easiest way to resolve problem 3 is to use the "girl moved into my house for no fucking reason" trope. Maybe Mumei (civilization is the only optimistic holo council member) or Bae.
Honestly the lore of council feels fucked up now that Sana graduated. A hole in space

>> No.32268070

>>32266710
i remember a fic where kronii froze her entire body except her pussy in time and got fucked by an entire line of her fans so when she unfroze herself all the pleasure hit her at once.

>> No.32268287

>>32267248
I mean if you want "quick fixes" to those problems then...
1) You can probably finagle Ina into being the "Kotori" /mission control character that helps (You) seduce all of these concepts.
2/3) Omega could probably be dealt with by either making her the final boss/ source of the council ala "Mio" or have Omega actually be (You)r previous incarnation which is why you could survive long enough to convince them to saty their hand.

>> No.32268372

>>32268070
I'm pretty sure that was fic made in clockgen during like debut week/month.

>> No.32268807

>>32268372
I think it was done pre-debut because I remember being perplexed or mad at it. I then went on to write a Laplus fic 1 hour before she debuted.

>> No.32269035

>>32268287
>You can probably finagle Ina into being the "Kotori" /mission control character that helps (You) seduce all of these concepts.

Hmm. Probably the best crypto reply to my >>32261863 I'll ever see.


>>32268807
What was the story?

>> No.32269234

>>32269035
Something elixir, I don't remember.

>> No.32269330
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>>32269035
Ina doesn't really give me Kotori vibes

>> No.32269484

>>32269234
Found it I think
https://rentry.org/zyoxd

>>32269330
She doesnt give me any vibes at all, the most basic uncharismatic girl with the cutest model in hololive. Maybe all of Vtubing

>> No.32269495

>>32267974
Mumei would move into your house with the excuse that she wants to watch you

>> No.32269589

>>32269484
I recall that fic being notorious in my mind for not getting a single fucking (You) in all of it's existence, which is why it was the last cunny fic I wrote for a long time. As per Ina, I thought she was going to be my EN oshi, I watched her first stream where she gives drawing tips for like 3 minutes and then never touched her channel again

>> No.32269915

>>32269589
I've been trying to engage authors more after reading their shit after that thread where anons talked about writers not being thread celebrities because the only (you) they get is when is the next sequel

>> No.32270081

>>32269915
Pity (You)s used to be a problem, believe it or not. I was greatly against them. If the fic is good it will naturally generate attention. If it doesn't get attention, I will still be mad about it, but it just means I failed in doing something. Probably in pandering but sh let's ignore that

>> No.32270289

>>32270081
Pity (You)s are a necessary evil to prevent frustration, dejection and a sense of hopelessness. Authors have been driven to suicide over a lack of (You)s before.

>> No.32270503

>>32270289
RIP those yuri writers... Except for that one anon that wrote that pavonashi fic, apparently that's the one yuri pairing that /wg/ likes.

>> No.32270771

>>32257255
nothing but her being raped and abused can satisfy the cuckroines now

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>>32270503
It's a weird thing. Finana said something that made me think. If you want to pander to girls you need to do yuri, but people who aren't interested in yuri don't have the slightest clue (or the interest) on how to make it work. Do you pander anyway, or do you just sacrifice a chunk of your audience by ignoring it? I wouldn't write yuri, personally I have no interest at all in clam slammers. I like art of them kissing but that's about it. However I do feel bad for the occasional femanon who wanders into this thread and asks for yuri because I know no one but them would ever write it, and having to write it yourself sucks. I've been there with futa.

>> No.32270895

>>32269589
Hey if you checked the Korean translation of it, it got 10 replies there at least.
So that's pretty decent.

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>>32270895
I don't care about those dogs.

Yeah I saw. Most replies are kind of non sensical due to Google TL and slangs not going together.

>> No.32271023

>>32270895
We should throw that Korean TL link into our archive desu

>> No.32271048

>>32270973
God I hope the korean worm in our threads sees and translates this post

>> No.32271085

>>32270973
DeepL needs to hurry up and incorporate Korean. It does a way better job than Google.

>> No.32271294

>>32270781
I dont know if I agree with that. Finance is a horny bisexual, who by all appearances seems to be the least "rotten" member of Lazulight

>> No.32271318

>>32270781
I mean in theory you could just have it be 'pure' yuri by way of having it just be romance and no smut with some wacky shenanigans in between the yuri. That's pretty much every ao3 F/F chuuba fic.

>> No.32271528

>>32271318 (me)
That isn't a smut fic obviously. There's plenty of smut on ao3, not going to deny that.
Just saying that yuri is more than just slamming clams.

>> No.32271599

>>32271294
Finana said she would pander to girls through lewd ASMR but she's a bottom and only sees herself as a bottom when it comes to girl on girl, so she's unsure if she can do it well. She also said she's never been with a girl, as she says she's never been with a man either though you can take it with a big grain of salt. She also said she kissed the tip of her dildo to simulate the kissing sounds in her ASMR, figured I should add this detail.

Her first countdown was pretty bland, but I still nutted. I'm hoping her next countdown will have some dirty talk. In short, I can't wait for her to become a full blown slut, because that's the way she wants to go. She was even encouraging chat to be honest with her during the R18 ASMR, which I'm assuming is because she enjoys them telling her they came too early because they couldn't resist, and stuff of the sort.

>> No.32271723

>>32271318
>>32271528
I loved Bloom into you, still one of my favorites, if not my favorite romance of all time, but I don't think anyone here can reasonably pull off a non smut yuri fic.

>> No.32271992

>>32271723
Eh how hard can it be, it's not you'd WANT to actually write realistic gay romance. In fact omegaverse shit exists only because women didn't want to write actual gay romance but still wanted to ship boys.
So just write a normal romance but without a penis.

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>>32271992
> just write a normal romance
> just

>> No.32273417

>>32266710
Requesting prolapseAnon to include something like this in your time is gonna come. His fetishes are way fucked up as is, Kronii time stop or Mumei strapped to be a fucking machine should be borderline vanilla to him.

>> No.32274106

>>32271992
A realistic lesbian romance has more domestic violence than the average cop family, so I would want to write it

>> No.32274182

>>32274106
Anon we already have Brown, Black, and Blue Because I Love You.

>> No.32274251

>>32274182
Anon a single fic doesn't lay claim to an entire theme and just because a certain element has been done before doesn't mean it can never be attempted again.

You STUPID motherfucker.

>> No.32274294

>>32274251
nta, but that was a joke.

>> No.32274343

>>32274294
It definitely wasn't.

>> No.32274372
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>>32271599
>virgin
>owns a dildo

Real talk though we dont want arepeat of Polka

>> No.32274435

>>32274294
Doesn't sound like one to me either given we've constantly got people thinking stories can't have overlapping themes.

>> No.32274470

>>32274372
What happened with Porka?

>> No.32274552

>>32274435
It's absolutely ridiculous, isn't it? A particular idea could be identical in concept to something someone else has done, but with a change of cast, setting and author, it'll be completely unique. Yet still we've got folk worrying about whether or not something has been "done before."

>> No.32274666

>>32274470
Forced to do lewd stuff she wasn't comfortable or happy doing in her PL

>> No.32274758

>>32274552
We have about 20 copies of the exact same Fubuki story in the archive, so I’ll never understand why people don’t want to to write a story about a prompt/idea that’s already been used when doing so is pretty much the basis of /wg/.

>> No.32274768

>>32274251
It's a joke anon that fic isn't even a romance.

>> No.32274907

>>32274758
I can't think of a single one that is identical to another, so it sounds more to me like you're just another shitter mad Fubuki is more popular than your 2view.

>> No.32275050
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>Had an idea for Pekora fic involving her fucking monke
>Decide to do a bit of research on them and find a YouTube channel of a Japese person that owns one
These things a weirder than I thought I really don't like them. The entire fic was gonna be a joke about how (You) are so paranoid that Jill somehow nefarious while Pekora and her mother don't understand what the problem is but these bushbaby things are just so off-putting to me know that I think I'd be nervous around one in real life even if it didn't pee on everything

>> No.32275092

>>32274907
Anon every Fubuki fic is just Omelas in another universe.
Yes, even that bestiality fic.

>> No.32275115

>>32275092
Even the fly fic?

>> No.32275163

>stopped watching porn
>stopped reading doujin
>stopped masturbating
>dick starts shrinking
>beat off to finana
>my cum literally looked like jam.

Now I have to figure out how often I need to jerk off to prevent my dick from excusing itself up my mancervix.

>> No.32275201

>>32275115
Yes but in that universe (You) were Fubuki while Fubuki was the Fly.

>> No.32275217

>>32275163
Once a day keeps the doctor away

>> No.32275241

>>32275163
Why the fuck are you telling us this, you sick fuck. Keep that shit to yourself. We don't care.

>> No.32275244

>>32275050
I didnt understand a word of this post.
Peko owns a monkey? I knew she was menhera irl but

>> No.32275256

>>32275201
I have an insane desire now to see a horrific Fubuki/housefly hybrid

>> No.32275273

>>32275241
>we

>> No.32275285

>>32275217
Once a day is too much, you want to cum a good amount or it tends to get stuck on the way out and you have to force yourself to pee it out

>> No.32275306

>>32275244
Anon, it's nighttime, the only people who are posting at this hour are people who have no life whatsoever. No posts at this hour will make sense.

>> No.32275426

>>32275285
I wank like once or twice a day and I've never experienced that issue. I've only experienced that when I've ended up jerking it like 4 or 5 times in a single day (out of extreme boredom)

>> No.32275457

>>32275256
Sounds like you need to commission pekofag for a shrunken troubles sequel.

>> No.32275499

>>32275457
I meant a picture. I had an image of Fubuki with the face of a fly in my head when I read >>32275201

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>>32275241
Welcome to internet.com, what website did you get here from little guy?

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>>32275457
Oh, wait. Fubuki/housefly hybrid.
Now I realize what you meant.

>> No.32275571

>>32275426
Must be a problem with my narra' urethra.

>> No.32275609

>>32275571
Dude, are you squeezing the life out of yourself? Don't wank with a death grip hey

>> No.32275647

>instead of talking about chuubas, its literally one faggot and his enabler talking about his masturbation habits
Just nuke the entire general at this point Janny. No point of having it if they can't even keep it on-topic.

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>>32275647

>> No.32275686

>>32275534
What.
Do you not want to see Fubuki having Incestous sex with her brood of foxflies?

>> No.32275746

>>32275678
I had this cup as a kid

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>>32275686
>her brood of foxflies
Jesus Christ.

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>>32275686
Hot shit right here

>> No.32276086

>>32257366
a story about kronii being spanked by some kind of parent figure for her recent PR blundering would be a good mixture of funny but also NSFW. Could even be kinda wholesome like you're correcting her because you care about her

>> No.32276119

>>32275507
I thought this story was going to be about him beating a deer to death with his bare hands but I should have realized, it being a 4chan story, that it would take this turn

>> No.32276568
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>>32257366
Noel forcing you to snort coke with her

>> No.32277823

Listen to my wife Ars singing
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyL6bhHsNhQ

>> No.32277836

>>32276568
I will snort the shit of out that if she dip her nipples on it

>> No.32278371

>>32277823
Shit, I haven't seen anything of Ars since the EbiMaru Minecraft clips back in 2020. Forgot she existed. Where the fuck was she hiding this singing voice? This is great.

>> No.32279901
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gals

>> No.32281310

>>32279901
Ugly as the first sin.

>> No.32281362

I'm horny. Which fic do I jerk off to?

>> No.32281459

>>32281362
Onion Layer

>> No.32281531

>>32281459
There's something I haven't read in quite a while. Right you are!

>> No.32281636

>>32281310
homosexual hands typed this post

>> No.32281839

>>32279901
Hot.
Unfortunately a gimmick that's probably really hard to make a fic out of due to the "visuals" being core to the idea.

>> No.32282095

>>32281839
I still sometimes think about the prompt where Gyaru Okayu colors her hair black on a whim, just because you mentioned off-hand that you like dark haired girls better.
Could make for a good story a la Dress up Darling, where Gyaru Okayu and you stumble across each other by chance and find out that you have a common nerdy hobby - maybe retro games or something.
god, I just love unlikely couple shit

>> No.32282153

>>32279901
Do gyaru swear?

>> No.32282443

>>32281459
Fantastic nut, that was. Aqua really feels more retarded than usual and Anon comes on kinda strongly, but the smut is so fucking good. The cunnilingus alone had me edging for the rest of the fic and as Anon blew a fat load between Aqua's cheeks I blew a fat load all over my shorts. Kudos to MWanon, that's a really good smut story.

>> No.32282716

>>32282095
I think it could work, it just needs to hammer into the reader that Okayu looks different than 'our normal' and that the gal look is what she usually wears in the context of the fic... Either that or just say fuck it and open the fic with Gal Okayu fanart embedded somewhere in the opening so the reader knows without you the author having to spend like three paragraphs establishing this so the reader doesn't miss it.

>> No.32284126

>>32282153
not excessively, but they don't NOT swear

>> No.32284162

>>32284126
your mom swore in bed last night

>> No.32284241

>>32284162
probably

>> No.32284311

>>32282095
>spoiler
I fucking get you, those are the best couples. I’ve been meaning to write a story about delinquent, F grade student (You) and a nerdy, art girl honour student stumbling across each other and eventually dating, much to the surprise of your friends and hers, as well as the whole school.

>> No.32284354

>>32263438
because I ain't got time to wiki dive their shit. Also they utterly forgot my oshi exists so fuck em.

>> No.32284439

>>32284354
s'truth m8

>> No.32284699

>>32282095
A romance story about a school delinquent/ gangster and Watame sounds amazing honestly as an unlikely couple.

>> No.32284755

>>32257366
Vesper has to tie up and Baelz in order to fix her horrifically bad cable management. The Rat is expecting something completely different after being tied up.
Of course when asked why he's not fucking her the answer is simple I don't fuck Skaven

>> No.32284800

>>32284699
>gangster and Watame
Wasn't there a fic that was supposed to have that but never got a second part?
I half remember discussion about this.

>> No.32285539

>>32284311
hm, (you) being the delinquent could be a refreshing twist now that you mention it. Who would be a good nerdy chuuba besides Watame?

>> No.32285612

>>32285539
agua or fubuki

>> No.32285705

>>32285539
Mio

>> No.32285770

>>32285612
>Aqua
>nerdy
nah. Maybe as a pure innocent contrast to your character but definitely not nerdy lol

>> No.32286136

Is their a fic where different versions of the same chuuba interact?

>> No.32286157

>>32285612
Aqua could certainly work when playing up her retardedness (as usual, kinda boring). But from the interactions with the other mems she seems almost too popular with her cute bimbo shtick to be the nerdy loner.
Fubuki strikes me more as the strict class-rep that tries to set you straight - seems interesting as well, though.
>>32285705
Mio... somehow the first thought about her was "girl getting bullied for having the biggest tits in class". Kinda hot.

>> No.32286317

>>32285539
I had Ina in mind for this particular story. She’s really quiet/calm and I can’t see a hot-headed troublemaker being into painting or art, which would all make for a nice contrast.

>> No.32286353

>>32285539
Roboco?

>> No.32286383

>>32286157
I was thinking more about her tarot hobby, but that works too

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>>32257304
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRNwPpHklPzgtf21EqfeTpKwinZitP2O54W3HomXrywF1D78NEj13vp79VURiGU_Gf07F9alMaPcIJk/pub

Brown Black and Blue Because I Love You: Chapter 7
Tags: Noel, Flare, Lamy, abuse

>> No.32286834

>>32286157
But Mio doesn't make sense because her breasts are medium but premium. Noel would be a better choice in that regard because she was bullied for having gigantic cow tits.

>> No.32287081

>>32285539
Koyori would be interesting

>> No.32287502

>>32287081
I dunno, Koyori gives off energetic popular girl vibes.

>> No.32287623

>>32287502
Koyori gives off sex vibes

>> No.32287673

>>32287502
yes, but a very SMART energetic popular girl
I'm a sucker for the 'idol of the school pairs up with a delinquent' angle

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>>32287623
Smooth throat.

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>>32287777
smooth tongue

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>>32287673
>I'm a sucker for the 'idol of the school pairs up with a delinquent' angle
Shit, yeah, you make a good point. Now I'm stuck at a crossroads.
Hot-headed, loud delinquent (You) and quiet, nerdy Ina? Or moody, brooding delinquent (You) and cheerful, popular Koyo? I'm still slightly leaning towards Ina because I'd personally prefer that dynamic but both could work well.

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>>32287777
>>32288001
God damn it this stupid sexy coyote

>> No.32288417

>>32287081
>be you, kinda tall and muscular for your age
>kid of divorced parents, your mom is sick or some shit, so you're forced to work (insert shady job here)
>don't come to school that often because of that - just barely enough to not get kicked out
>today is one of these days
>commotion going on in the hallway, popular kids throwing around books or something
>they spot you and excitedly greet you
>everyone calls you "boss" because you once beat the shit out of the main school bully
>he had stumbled into you and made you drop your lunch
>it had been taco tuesday and you were treating yourself for once - something you couldn't afford that often.
>Your brain just shorted out. Couldn't help it. Everyone loves you now for some reason.
>Turns out the books belong to Koyori, the class' science nerd
>she just sits on the floor, dejected.
>you're not impressed, call your classmates fags for touching science books
>they are dumbfounded and give the books back
>you had been serious and your grades show it.
>another straight "F" for an essay you hadn't handed in.
>teacher takes pity on you, gives you another chance to hand the essay in tomorrow or else you'll fail the class
>you have no intention to take the offer. Today's training at the boxing gym and after that you'll have to work.
>next day, Koyori approaches you.
>hands you a bunch of papers and nerds out about how she had analyzed your handwriting to write the essay due in your stead.
>what a freak.
>you take it anyways and hand it in. Teacher is kind of suspicious.
>approaches you later in the day and gives you a B-, still not convinced you wrote it yourself.
>"Fine, but I want you to join a school club, or else you wont pass the grade"
>Explain you already visit the boxing gym
>"No, no - a SCHOOL club!"
>fuckthatguy.jpeg
>go through the club list, nothing interests you. Your mom would freak out if you got the boot though
>what's that? One member science club?
>That whack Koyori girl is the club president and only member
>she seems like a pushover, easy way to get your stamp for the record
>the rest is history

>> No.32288697

>>32288417
This is good, only thing I'd change is have both you and Koyori be extremely well known in school, so that there's a large reaction to the strange couple when you start dating.

>> No.32288722

Which JP homo would make the best delinquent? The ones I do watch are a far cry from being a delinquent.

>> No.32288771

>>32288722
Suisei was a delinquent in her school days.

>> No.32288820

>>32288722
Shien

>> No.32288823

>>32288722
Wasn't Shien literally a delinquent all throughout school that lead a gang until they all went to college and he didn't?

>> No.32288866

>>32288722
>>32288771(me)
Whoops you said homo. Axel is en but he's pretty much half jp, he spoke about his delinquent days before.

>> No.32288886

>>32288722
None of them, really. Some are closer to a 'deliquent' to others but none of them would really fit as a delinquent in a story.

>> No.32288944

>>32288820
Shien is a genuine retard who wouldn't harm a fly.

>> No.32289044

>>32288722
Towa

>> No.32289144

>>32289044
Towa is a girl!

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>>32289144
Anon this is very obviously a boy.

>> No.32289438

>>32288823
Fuck, I vaguely remember this but it easily could've been one of the others. Time to dig through the archive.
>>32288866
>>32288944
>>32289044
>>32289144
Checked.

>> No.32289446

>>32289044
>>32289144
Towa pretending to be a boy, but everybody knows the truth!

>> No.32289448

>>32289363
What's with the cleavage then?

>> No.32289690

>>32288211
Koyori pls. We don't get enough fics of newer chuubas and Koyori has such a cute and sexy design that isn't used enough

>> No.32290007

>>32289448
Man-boobs

>> No.32290276

>>32288211
To make an argument for Ina.
I think the loud delinquent and quiet nerd dynamic fits Ina really well and could be a really cute romance.
That, and Ina hasn't actually gotten a big romance fic yet. The best fics she's gotten here are the two Ina horror fics.

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>> No.32291771

>>32289690
>We don't get enough fics of newer chuubas
I think Koyo’s been treated pretty well, she’s got 15 fics including a mini series.

>> No.32291872

>>32286136
/become/ has the potential. And some have brief Lamy / Lamy encounters. Naturally after some fool has BECOME

>> No.32292128

>>32286136
There was one fic here, Ame The Detective: WIP which runs with the wattropolis setting of everyone is Ame or Gura. It had potential.

>> No.32293458

>>32281839
I agree, books are notorious for being unable to describe visuals. That's why most readers will just picture a blank white void in their head whenever they read anything

>> No.32295221

>>32293458
I understand your point that an author CAN describe the visuals, but the key difference with a gal fic is that you have to describe visuals while also breaking the preconception that they look 'as normal ' and make it clear what they look like without doing ye old fanfiction cliche of overly describing the outfit.

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chikin

>> No.32298241

>>32295221
I see your point, but it's essentially an alternate outfit. I don't think it'd be that much of burden to get across. The change in personality and dialect would do most of the heavy lifting for their characterization anyway

>> No.32298893

>>32286786
hot

>> No.32299374

>>32257507
>>32236914
This was cute and pretty well written for your first fic.
I agree that in terms of characterization there needed to be more touches of Fubuki in order to make it feel like her. Still a good first attempt at making a chuuba pov fic. We don't really get much of those.
In terms of writing, I think you may have overused the word anon especially in the begining.

>> No.32300253

>>32299374
I really must have blanked hard on that. Only ever used Anon, lover, or pronouns and I somehow didn't catch that while editing.
Also I enjoy chuuba pov most, so my future fics will probably all be like that.

>> No.32301073

>>32286786
This honestly felt kind of rushed.
With the most egregious part being the 'Beating scene" that just went by way too fast for what should be a climactic event... Like the two events portrayed here (The confrontation and the party) feel like they should have been separate chapters with the events depicted getting expanded since as it is the events that happen rush by too quick.
As it is right now the two events getting rushed feel like missed potential for what could have been two great chapters getting condensed into a kind of mediocre edging on bad chapter.

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Thinking of 4 way gang bang with Holo star guys.
Thoughts or suggestions?

>> No.32301524

>>32301300
don't neglect the balls. there should be at least 1 scene where one person shoves a second person's face into a third person's balls, and at least 1 scene where 2 people rube their balls together.

>> No.32301583

>>32276568
What was the context to this?

>> No.32301905

>>32301300
Two dicks inside her pussy while the other two guys eiffel tower her.

>> No.32302078

>>32301300
Two guys balls touch and the the gang bang comes to a screeching halt as everyone stops to figure out who's fault it was and if it was gay enough to require a "no homo"

>> No.32302138

>>32257366
Suplexing Watame through a Table!

>> No.32304822

Rise up.

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>>32304822
Yes! Rise up!

These Myths, this Council, they will come for you now. They will savour their foul power to the last drop. It's who they are. But, these god-pretenders are nothing compared to the indomitable will of humanity. Civilization's inexorable march will see even them crushed beneath our feet!

Magic is a pale imitation of the human spirit, you need only show them.

>> No.32306448

>>32305641
>has the personality of a basic bitch white girl

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>>32306448
Basic bitch white girls sometimes are completely psychotic I'm not even kidding around

>> No.32306950

>>32306795
This picture is doing things to me. I want a yandere Mumei fic now.

>> No.32307604

>>32306950
Old Yeller

>> No.32307932

>>32307604
Hey this is just bestiality! Not even yandere.

>> No.32309513

>>32307932
It's good bestiality though.

I wonder how that other anon's chocobeast fic is coming along...

>> No.32311764

>>32201046
Always a joy to read to read more Holofantasy. You managed to nail Shien's and Roberu interactions pretty, felt nice and organic. Also nice to see stuff with Coco resolved.. I guess like that other anon said, the only little peeve is that Shien is farthest thing from intimidating but other than, great chapter!

>> No.32311770

>>32306795
You gotta be somewhat sociopathic to be the alpha bitch of a high school, just look at Mean Girls

>> No.32314843

>>32311770
Isn't that how people describe her to be? I wouldn't know since I don't watch her.

>> No.32317532

if only someone was writing chuuba fanfiction right now...

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>> No.32317899

>>32317532
I already did my part. I can only do a chapter a day. You guys are on your own

>> No.32318161

Finally thought of a good ending today for a fic I've had a good beginning for for a while. Now if only the damn middle didn't exist...

>> No.32318300

>>32317782
I want to kapu kapu Towa's tail and vagina

>> No.32318854

>>32318161
what's the problem?

>> No.32319387

>>32318300
I want to spank Towa's butt

>> No.32319634

>>32318854
I wanted to try writing something with multiple main characters, so mostly coming up with things for all of them to do that are both interesting and still contribute to the main plot. I have some ideas, but it'll probably just need to be trial and error.

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32321123

Just deleted the first 500 words of my WIP, story was getting so boinked it needs rebuilt from the ground up. Anyone else know about this pain?

>> No.32321189

>>32321123
It's a common occurrence

>> No.32321399

>>32321123
Anything I'm that far in just gets moved to another folder to keep for future reference. Even if I plan to reuse the title.

>> No.32322940

>>32321123
Yeah. Recently had to cut 1.4k words of femdom since the scene didn't fit in with the story.

>> No.32322950

>>32319387
I want to sink my tongue in her butthole and hear her go "HAHAHAH" in that squeaky voice of hers.

>> No.32323180

>>32322950
Training Towa's butthole...

>> No.32323245

>>32322950
God I can hear her my head.

>> No.32325401

>>32275244
Yes, Pekora owns a monkey, a bushbaby. It’s basically some lemur type thing

>> No.32326369

>>32321123
I've only ever done that a few times. I've never really struggled with making a chapter I'm dissatisfied with, I usually just get large droughts of inspiration instead.

>> No.32326903

>>32321123
Yes. I started a WIP only to leave it sitting for months, and when I finally came back to it I hated it and had to redux the whole thing

>> No.32330632

Clear

>> No.32331054

>>32257255
*BBrrrrrrrrrAAAAAAAAAPPPPPppppp*

>> No.32331059

>>32257366
Independently, over 30 ojisans die in truck accidents and are reincarnated into the bodies of their oshis during Hololive's peak popularity, replacing every single member. They all awkwardly attempt to fit into the role, unaware that the others they're trying to fit in with are all doing the same thing

>> No.32331830

>>32257366
Sex.


With Fubuki.

>> No.32332071

>>32311764
I was more wanting to convey the idea that even though he's a 'mob boss' in lore, when he tries to act anything like tough the facade immediately crumbles - even if he doesn't realize he's acting tough at all, given how quick he was to say "what the fuck are you doing, I was just talking". But I'll keep it in mind; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

>> No.32332337

What chuuba would make a good judge in court?

>> No.32332801

>>32332337
Luna

>> No.32333098

>>32332337
Ayame

>> No.32333216

>>32332337
Risu because her juniors described her as the scariest senpai and she seems like the type to actually scold someone if they mess up

>> No.32333854

>>32332337
Haachama because she'll go out of her way to punish you

>> No.32334461

>>32332337
Lui or Sora

>> No.32339118

>>32332337
In professional wrestling whenever they had a disagreement with eachother in the locker room they had a makeshift court system in the WWE where the undertaker or stone cold were usually the judges because they were considered impartial and most people liked them in the locker room. Itd be cute if they did something like that with Sora or something as the judge. Itd have to be someone from Gen 0 who has been around forever

>> No.32339551

>>32339118
Sora's an idiot, though

>> No.32340128

>>32339551
You've never had to go to court have you?
she's perfect

>> No.32340535

>>32261863
Ina has her magic blocked by a young lovecraftian mythos detective/wizard/whatever the main characters in the Cthulhu RPG are

>> No.32340724

>>32261863
>>32257366

>Ina has been watching you from another dimension, develops a crush. Tries to get the elder gods to help her win your heart, they give her her chuuba form and they send her over. Little did she know it was a ploy so they could unleash their power on our realm

>> No.32343154

would a hellhound be able to get Choco pregnant

>> No.32343374

>>32343154
Do whatever you want beastanon, though I do think it would be a nice epilogue to have choco nursing her half-dog babies while kissing the hellhound.

>> No.32343456

>>32343154
Who cares about the logistics of it at this point, that sounds hot as hell

>> No.32343501

>>32343456
Pun unintended

>> No.32343655

>>32343154
I'd say no but only because I dont remember what choices race of animal girl is

>> No.32343909

>>32343374
>>32343655
they'd just be puppies
pokemon egg group rules no crossbreeds

>> No.32345429

>>32343909
Then wouldnt they take after the mother?

>> No.32345853

>>32345429
choco is a ditto

>> No.32345970

>>32343909
What's the point if her babies don't inherit her horns and tail even a little?

>> No.32346527

>>32345970
I mean
I'm writing that hellhounds have horns and a pointed tail anyway
I guess the puppies' ones could be specifically Choco-shaped

>> No.32346602

>>32257366
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V3Z-FjaF9lI
Sexually frustrated Okayu taking it out on you in private

>> No.32347317

>>32346602
Theres this move japanese women do in JAV I've never seen in the west, this kind of leaned over cowgirl position but they're on their feet not their knees just riding the hell out of the guy. It's a very cat in heat looking move.

>> No.32347662

>>32347317
Perhaps I shall use this in my upcoming story.

>> No.32347995

Any ideas for a BaeXKaela fanfic?

>> No.32348021

>>32346602
This but she takes her sexual frustration on you with violence! Okayu Abuse?

>> No.32351119
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>>32343909
>newborn pups wriggling out of choco's vagina, her screams indicating a mixture of pain and pleasure, and her mind completely consumed by arousal

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>> No.32351159

>>32340724
A depressing story for a depressing chuuba.

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>>32351119
you're free to imagine that if you wish but I'm not writing the details

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>>32351263
>I'm not writing the details

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>>32351263
What, you don't want to write about Choco orgasming as she lays dog eggs while holding the hellhound's paw?

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>>32352139
no
no I don't

>> No.32352616

>>32352533
weird that's where you draw the line when you're still writing about her getting raped by a dog, but more power to you

>> No.32352652

>>32352616
>raped
the dog sex is fully consensual

>> No.32352731

>>32352652
Sorry.
Choco raping a hellhound, since as we all know Animals can't consent.

>> No.32352775

>>32352652
oh, my mistake, that makes it completely OK, i'll read it to my kids

(i'm poking fun)

>> No.32352805

>>32352775
(as am I, you're good anon)

>> No.32353384

>>32352805
>>32352775
Very cute, you two. Now fuck.

>> No.32354641

>>32302078
But they literally are homos

>> No.32354685

>>32319387
Same, but playfully so she squeals and giggles. I don't want to make her cry

>> No.32354899

>>32302138
I want to put Watame in a Boston Crab ever since Subaru did it in Hologra...

>> No.32355086
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>>32354685
>I don't want to make her cry
Coward.

>> No.32355520

>>32355086
I don't know why, but a crying Towa is not attractive to me. I wouldn't mind spanking the shit out of most holos, but with Towa's dorky cuteness I just want her to have a fun time being teased and toyed with.

>> No.32355588

>>32355520
Reiterating his point you're a coward

>> No.32355621

>>32355588
I guess I am.

>> No.32357677

>>32257255
Nice ass

>> No.32358927

C'mon... Do something...

>> No.32359066

>>32358927
I'd like to do some vtubers

>> No.32359097

>>32358927
Soon.

>> No.32359209

>>32359066
I'd like to molest Miko while she takes the train to the Hololive office. Rub her butt for a bit, hand down her panties, massage her clit and slip a finger in while pinching her tits. Get her all sticky before dance practice, you know?

>> No.32359438

Why does inspiration only come to me when I’m about to do something? Like when I’m just about to go to work, go to sleep, see some friends... and then when I have all the time in the world motivation takes the kids and leaves.

>> No.32359488

>>32359438
Coz life is a fickle bitch. Just get your mom, friends or your boss to help you write your fanfiction, make it a group activity

>> No.32361285

>>32359209
miko is surprisingly underwritten here, given how SEX her outfits are and how suitable she is for fluff. i wonder if it's because of her speech impediment

>> No.32361360

>>32361285
Her speech impediment is fun as fuck to write, though.

>> No.32361651

>>32361360
it's fun? why is that?

>> No.32361760

>>32361360
How do you write it? I've just been changing any words with the 'ne' sound into 'nye'

>> No.32362088

>>32361651
Because you get to misspell the words she says every now and then. For example if she were to say: “I’m letting you go” you could change that to “I’m ledding you go”, or whenever she says ‘long’ words like “antiseptic” you could change that to “andisebtick”. I dunno, I just find it fun to throw that in every now and then when writing her dialogue.

>> No.32362375

Watching Ayame's live right now and I cannot, I repeat: CANNOT (!) cope with the incredible, absolute sex-laden-ness of Mio's every dance move. Good god, help me. HNNNGNHHH!

>> No.32362617
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>>32362375
Sex. Incarnate.

>> No.32363183

>>32362088
Its something most asians overdo when they learn english, instructors have to tell them american Ts sound like Ds in certain words (Americans dont say Water they say Wadder) and they always overdo it.

>> No.32364652

I finally found it

(You) hit it off with Matsuri in a bar and get hot and heavy. You go to a motel and start making out, Matsuri gets on her knees and lowers your pants. After all the anticipation, the moment your dick springs out of your underwear, you immediately blast your load on her face just from feeling her hot expectant breath on your dick. You try to get it up again but to no avail. Matsuri gets mad and ditches you in the motel. You cry yourself to sleep and leave early in the morning. (Bonus if the dick is small)

>> No.32365300

>>32363183
It’s obvious that Japanese people are taught American English, at least in my experience, because every Jap that has tried to speak English to me has spoken in a pseudo-American accent.
Another thing I notice is they have trouble pronouncing our vowels and sort of subdue them. It’s especially profound in vowels that end with and “r” sound, for example “world” will become “wrrld” and “car” will become “crr”. You can sometimes hear this when A-chan speaks English for the EOPs. At that point I’d honestly prefer they just say “waarudo”.
Anyway, I could go on about the strange nuances of Japanese people and their struggles with speaking English but I doubt anyone is interested.
>>32361760
I do this too, but there aren’t a lot of words “nye” fits into very well.

>> No.32365705

>>32362375
>>32362617
I want to have sex with mama Mio and her daughter Ayame so bad

>> No.32365869

>>32365705
Oyakodon with your girlfriend Ayame and her lonely mother Mio...

>> No.32366053

>>32365869
Good idea
Alternatively, you hook up with single mom Mio and there's oyakodon after her daughter(s?) notice how happy spending the night with you makes her.

>> No.32366883

>>32365300
>It’s obvious that Japanese people are taught American English
Why learn English 1.0 when English 2.0 s out and won't get you mistaken for a Hong Konger? Besides, Japan and America have had a unique relationship since Matthew Perry.
Its the tongue, compared to english japanese involves a lot of weird tongue tapping, even the letter R isnt an R. Like if You say "Car" your tongue will probably end up trying to touch the roof of your mouth, but if you say "Roundabound" you'll dig in for the R, japs always dig in for the R because that's the only R they have, a kind of silent R. That little shift disturbs the tongue placement for the vowel. I read somewhere that this is a learned behavior that basically becomes subconscious and permanent by the age of 11 source trust me bro I'm a Cunnilinguist

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>>32366883
I agree. The American rhotic is the hardest part about pronouncing words correctly in American Enlgish. It isn't learned until around six which is why kids in America often pronounce their Rs like Ws.

>> No.32367786

>>32366883
I think you’re pretty much bang on the money, never knew eating pussy was so educational. It’s always interesting seeing Japanese people (or any foreigners) trying to speak English words that contain unfamiliar sounds. “Year” and “ear” is another one, as in Japanese the only traditional sounds that start with “y” are “ya”, “yu” and “yo” so it’s hard for them to differentiate between “yi-ah” and “ii-ah”. I think that’s English being retarded though, even I can barely tell the difference.

>> No.32369065
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Don't give up. You can do it. You can.

>> No.32369356

>>32369065
I'm almost there. Soon. Soon...

>> No.32372318

You WILL die a natural death, not be murdered by laziness.

>> No.32372508

>>32372318
I'm waiting for the new thread before I post my story.

>> No.32372601

>>32372318
I don't know why you bumped this thread, would have better if you just let it die. There's what? 16 posts left before a new thread is made?

>> No.32372692

>>32372508
Why not post in both threads?

>> No.32372785

>>32372692
Not him but feedback. Threads last about a day or two on average. Having everything in one space is nice.

>> No.32372845

>>32372692
I don't like to double-post.

>> No.32373022

>>32372692
Why would he post his story in a near dead thread when he could post it in a pristine new one?

>> No.32373121

>>32372692
NTA but posting anything prompt or fic after like 250 is kind of pointless since no one will really see it. The recaps help to an extent but anyone posting here kind of wants feedback since the most discouraging thing to an author isn't getting shat on for what you wrote but indifference from no one reading their work.

>> No.32373251

>>32373121
>NTA but posting anything prompt or fic after like 250 is kind of pointless since no one will really see it.
It's not pointless, it allows people to discuss things.

>> No.32373413

>>32372508
>>32372845
Can you at least tell us what's your story is?

>> No.32373447

>>32373251
also NTA but while it may not be completely pointless, it provides diminished rewards compared to posting in a fresh thread. people are more willing to scroll up than they are to read the 'stories posted in the previous thread' post and retroactively reply to that

>> No.32373629

>>32373447
I'm just saying it'll be better to have something to discuss, and not you know, languish for hours on end with post like >>32369065 >>32372318 barely keeping it alive.

>> No.32373737

>>32373413
I could, but I don't want to spoil the surprise.
Don't worry, you'll see soon enough. This thread's just about done.

>> No.32373758

>>32373629
>languish for hours on end with post like >>32369065 >>32372318 barely keeping it alive.
NTA but those post should have something to discuss, instead of just necrobumping. Don't know why writers have to do it.

>> No.32373858

>>32373737
Alright, better be worth the wait.

>> No.32373904

>>32373629
Honestly in terms of shit to discuss past 250 it really should be something like a question getting asked, shit like asking to brainstorm an idea, or the old reliable ask to go to a random story and share what you think about it question.

>> No.32373990

>>32373904
I'm not disagreeing with you; I just think it'll be overall better. But maybe you're right.

>> No.32374356

New thread
>>32374024

>> No.32374531

>>32373737
>Don't worry, you'll see soon enough. This thread's just about done.
Where is it, anon.

>> No.32374862

>>32374531
It's done.

>> No.32374977

>>32373737
Wow you weren't kidding, that is a suprise.

>> No.32375004

>>32374862
Good lad. I wanted to post something but I feel it's appropriate to give it a berth now

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