/wg/ Writing General - Rosenthal Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>31137671

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Koyori fic: Tags: Koyori, (you), fluff, nsfw:>>31150959

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dumbshit fucking OP

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>>31261311
Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

FUCKING HAACHAMA'S FAT TITS IN HER SWIMSUIT I'M DONE TRYING TO COME UP WITH A WAY TO PHRASE THIS POIGNANTLY PLEASE I JUST NEED THIS DUMB BLONDE FATTY TO GET DICK CORRECTED AAAAAAAA:>>31138881

several loli chuubas attend a loli school for sluttification.:>>31144641

Something involving Silvervale, since the recent drama's put her on my radar. Don't really care what it is beyond that.:>>31145552

Lui-Lui masterfully employing the carrot and the stick to turn you from an innocent intern into a devoted boy-toy, all unbeknownst to the other HoloX members.:>>31146304

A fic where you are Pekora's childhood bully.:>>31151309

Making a wish that you could stay with OkaKoro for eternity, except when it's gifted the two are violent sadists.:>>31153962

A chuuba of your choice has to contend with an unfortunate series of wardrobe malfunctions that gradually render her with less and less of her outfit as she streams.:>>31156639

Think this idea might work as a CYOA style story or a basic text adventure or game.:>>31163841

Please make this a story:>>31170110

Miko finally having the courage, born of hornyness and love, to go and fuck Suisei regardless of her consent but ending up being dominated by a psycho comet that's more than ready for her.:>>31180972

Reine tries to fuck Kaela but Kaela proves to be the more dominant hag.:>>31182734

Dracula/SCP style of writing where Watson tries to recruit all of HoloMyth alongside Ina. Ina is still a mere human that was thought by her family the arts of the depths. Both of them go on a journey to try and summon and contain each of the myths with the help of Ina's power and Ame's time stopping watch.:>>31185367

ame goes to the zoo and tries to have sex with every single animal in it.:>>31186504

Kaela pounds Anya on an anvil (yuri, no futa):>>31204316

Fingering Okayu to help her deal with her Heat and trying to not get seduced!:>>31243168

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

FUCKING HAACHAMA'S FAT TITS IN HER SWIMSUIT I'M DONE TRYING TO COME UP WITH A WAY TO PHRASE THIS POIGNANTLY PLEASE I JUST NEED THIS DUMB BLONDE FATTY TO GET DICK CORRECTED AAAAAAAA:>>31138881

several loli chuubas attend a loli school for sluttification.:>>31144641

Something involving Silvervale, since the recent drama's put her on my radar. Don't really care what it is beyond that.:>>31145552

Lui-Lui masterfully employing the carrot and the stick to turn you from an innocent intern into a devoted boy-toy, all unbeknownst to the other HoloX members.:>>31146304

A fic where you are Pekora's childhood bully.:>>31151309

Making a wish that you could stay with OkaKoro for eternity, except when it's gifted the two are violent sadists.:>>31153962

A chuuba of your choice has to contend with an unfortunate series of wardrobe malfunctions that gradually render her with less and less of her outfit as she streams.:>>31156639

Think this idea might work as a CYOA style story or a basic text adventure or game.:>>31163841

Please make this a story:>>31170110

Miko finally having the courage, born of hornyness and love, to go and fuck Suisei regardless of her consent but ending up being dominated by a psycho comet that's more than ready for her.:>>31180972

Reine tries to fuck Kaela but Kaela proves to be the more dominant hag.:>>31182734

Dracula/SCP style of writing where Watson tries to recruit all of HoloMyth alongside Ina. Ina is still a mere human that was thought by her family the arts of the depths. Both of them go on a journey to try and summon and contain each of the myths with the help of Ina's power and Ame's time stopping watch.:>>31185367

ame goes to the zoo and tries to have sex with every single animal in it.:>>31186504

Kaela pounds Anya on an anvil (yuri, no futa):>>31204316

Fingering Okayu to help her deal with her Heat and trying to not get seduced!:>>31243168

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So this is how /wg/ dies.

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>>31261311
Poor Aki, even when she’s the OP here, no one wants to talk about her. She really does have the worst luck ever

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>>31264549
I don't want to talk about Aki, I just want to have hip shattering sex with her.

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The Towa Mumei collab seems pretty cute. I wish I could collab with Towa using Google Translate...

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ass

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Goddamn Rushia just keeps on pushing me towards making an NTR fic. I look forward to her male collabs just to feel more outraged

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>>31268754
Oh yeah? What's the latest yab? Hit me with the juiciest gossip you've got, tourist.

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>>31268914
Nazuna basically said "I was talking with a guy off stream but was afraid to bring it up to not upset you" then the entire EOP chat said it was fine and that they aren't incels who care about stuff, so she said stuff about male collabs. Something which Mikeneko said she'd never do.

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>>31269046
Ahh, another nothingburger. Figured as much.

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>>31269118
> biggest GFE streamer on the globe announcing male one on one collabs
> nothingburger
Come on now

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>>31269158
>biggest GFE streamer
It's been almost half a year. She's gone. You need to bury the body and move on.

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>>31269158
Don't care, you've already gotten burned once. If you still went back to her afterwards, you're the fucking problem, not her.

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>>31269259
>>31269377
I haven't watched her since she became Mikeneko because it was clear she was going to go right back to being manipulative as soon as she announced it. Am just an unicorn who is very sad to see the current state of Hololive and its former talents. It makes me seethe so much that if I had to get an NTR fetish to cope with it, otherwise I'd run into Cover building screaming how they've wronged me and burn the whole place down

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>>31270000
> if I had
Ignore "if"

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>>31264549
I want to talk about her. The gap between her soft, vulnerable outward attitude and the immense sex drive she possesses is the most erotic thing I can imagine. Everything belly dance or swimsuit stream or verbal insult she agrees to throw out feels like a perversion of the sweet girl she otherwise presents itself as, like a neverending corruption arc undulating back and forth in a sine wave. It feels like (You) as her boyfriend could convince her to agree to nearly any degenerate fetish as long as it were in aid of pleasing you, and not only would she naturally fall in-line whether it put her in a dominant or submissive position, but she might even end up getting into it even more than *you*. She's a succubus.

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>>31270000
>Am just an unicorn
Aight

Waste of quads

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>>31270273
This hobby was ours before you people came along

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>>31270485
It really wasn’t. Everyone in Hololive (that’s right, even people like Aqua and Miko) collabed with males at one point. It was only after the fall of .Live that they switched things up to pander to lonely men and you losers moved in. Don’t try to claim you were here first.

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>>31270572
They collabed with males to grow their channel. Miko who hates men did it and as soon as she got comfortable, she dropped it forever. It's almost as if they were forced to collab with males. Oh wait, they were.

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>>31270647
At least you're not one of those insane fancucks who think she did nothing wrong and suing people over mean words on the internet is hecking awesome.

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>>31270647
>Miko who hates men
>He doesn’t know about the online boyfriend
>He doesn’t know about the friend group

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>>31270726
>suing people over mean words on the internet
What?

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>>31270647
lol

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>>31270762
NTA but she's been very vocal about how she's been on a suing crusade, the most recent was an old man, like 50 who she sued for a fuck ton.

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>>31270817
wtf

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>>31270647
Holy fuck, this is ENORMOUS cope. You're even changing your original argument.

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>>31270875
The way she spoke about it was so unbelievably smug in a bad way, it's like she's asking to be kidnapped or raped

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>Two threads without new fics
/wg/ is dead.

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>>31270894
People who collab with males on their free will:
Sora, Fubuki, Subaru, Matsuri is special case but sure, her too. The rest don't want to and if they did they were forced. No, ID or EN is not part of Hololive culture

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>>31271000
you say that but kaoru got miko preggers which was the reason for her big break in 2020

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>>31271000
Uh huh, sure. "Forced". Whatever you say.

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>>31270762
Japan has strict anti defamation laws (your rapist can sue you in some scenarios) so Rushia laywered up and went after as many people as she could. The most recent was an old man who had to pay millions of yen in damages. At least he didn't apologize which made her upset in some way so that's some victory I guess.

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>>31270947
All of our writers are either dead or busy. And everyone else would rather complain than pick up the pen themselves.

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>>31271066
The laws on Japan for suing are batshit insane. People meme about murica but it's nothing compared to Asian countries.

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>>31271144
Yup, can't even leave bad reviews on restaurants in Japan and in China if you interact with anybody in a car crash you become liable.

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>>31270947
Something big's coming... I can feel it.

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>>31272010
You're right! It was me. I just came. I nutted so hard and in such a voluminous amount that it got on my chest and arms, too.

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>>31272123
cool
tell us which story you jerked off to
you DID jerk off to a story right?

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>>31272232
Blowing Off Stellar Steam... technically.

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>>31272404
Pekofag made this post

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>>31272425
Not quite, no.

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>>31272425
Thanks for mentioning me every thread. I read over every mention of my name while jerking off and it helps me immensely

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>>31272404
>technically
what did he mean by this

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>>31272742
Was reading the smut but actually pretending it was (You) and Pekora

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>>31273098

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>>31273098
how did you manage to do that?

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>>31273273
I started off wanting to beat it to Suisei but after binging on Pekora Rust clips, she just naturally slipped into my mind and I imagined rawdogging her ass using the anal smut
We really don't have enough Pekora smut

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>>31272010
You're not wrong.

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>>31273489
hint?

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>>31273434
>We really don't have enough Pekora smut
Hmmm, I wonder why.

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>>31273831
Well now, the most verbose Pekora smut we have that isn't queer is Rabbits and Habits, an NTR fic. I suppose she isn't seen as a target for dramatic romance and steamy sex to many - and the Cover High bloke isn't finishing anytime soon.

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>>31274030
What about Bunny Trap?

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>>31273544
It's something other than writing.

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>>31274058
I suppose, but that's another extreme example. We don't have any good ol', bring-home-to-mama one-on-one sex between man and woman with the goal to inseminate.

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>>31274221
I like Pekora but I feel like I get everything I need from her to jerk off from art. She has so much hot art, I never felt the need to make a regular sex fic about her. God, I've nutted to that bunny so many times. I don't actually remember why I chose her specifically for the NTR fic though

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>>31273434
https://youtu.be/k_hGl5qn9so
Her ASMR with Noel, although honestly quite scuffed made me quite infatuated with Pekora because god damn this rabbit can be quite sexy if she tried. We really do need more Pekora smut.

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>>31274392
Shit, I forgot about that. She's actually got quite the voice for good ASMR. Wish she'd do some more, I watched that vid a million times

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>>31273434
This is somehow the second time someone jacking it to a Suisei fic changed it to Pekora.

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>>31275009
What was the first?

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>>31274066
Oh. So nothing, then.

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>>31274066
Finally going to kill yourself?

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>>31275084
A few threads back someone said they jacked it to safety spats (the femboy Suisei one that was focused on romance) but replaced replaced Suisei with Pekora.

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>>31275146
>>31275262
Incorrect. No further hints.

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>>31275490
Huh. I don't recall that. That's a funny coincidence.

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>>31275897
This is either a fic that people have been waiting for, or a fucking text adventure/VN.

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>>31274392
>>31274599
What do you wish to see from a Pekora smut fic?

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>>31276241
Her Clark Gable impression.

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>>31276241
Fluffy romance with a bunny girl.
Smut is kind of so dime a dozen at this point that "plot, what plot?" style smut fics need to be really fucking good if they want to distinguish themselves from the pack.

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>>31276460
This. Quick smut is good, but a good plot and build up is way better.

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>>31276460
>>31276588
I think the main plot with Pekora fluff smut has already been done. Cover High, was it? The trickster who slowly falls in love with you. There's no way to do Pekora without doing basically that

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>>31261367
You are a rich business man and decided to check out this exclusive club where you can fuck VTubers.

You see Aki and immediately want to turn her into a mother.

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>>31276050
Or just, you know, he's fucking LARPing.

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>>31276241
Smut-focused with the plot existing to provide context for the sex, rather than the sex being worked into an otherwise innocuous story.
Think up a contrived scenario - say, sex with Pekora backstage, putting a collar on her and forcing her to walk around the park naked like a dog, raping her in front of Moona or public sex during a date, and then develop a set-up to make it work.

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>>31276241
oyakodon

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>>31276833
Good thing it was never done then!

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>>31276833
I mean that's AN aspect of hers that's been covered, there's still other kinds of scenarios and aspects of the character to mine for fics.
An interesting one might be the romance with a shut-in NEET aspect if you want to go for something other than surface characterization.

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>>31277284
It happened somewhere, didn't it? I'm pretty sure I remember something like that being mentioned. Maybe it was just a what if discussion

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>>31276833
...Did Cover High have smut? If CHAnon went full insane and wrote a bunnycunny stuffing side-chapter THAT would be fucking stellar. That'd be like, it. That's the best Pekora smut we can get that covers the fluff/plot build up to bumping uglies.

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>>31276392
Seconding this

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>>31277344
He planned on including sex as a culmination of their relationship, IIRC.

Obviously never actually did it

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>>31277344
>He cannot perceive the skeins of fate and read Chapter 7.5 of cover high that has been released in alternate timeline
NGMI

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>>31277344
What >>31277428 said. I remember some schizoid freaking out and saying he will never read CH again if it has sex, and CHanon told him to fuck off.

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>>31277580
>CHanon releasing anything
That's not cross-dimensional clairvoyance you've got, anon, that's just plain old schizophrenia

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>>31277721
Based
>>31277732
Why are you trying to neg an anonymous user

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>>31277786
Cuz he's a fag that raised everybody's hopes only to deliver vaporware

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>>31277721
Based

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>>31277786
Whose neghole needs pozzing?

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>>31277907
I hate you

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>>31277732
Nah in that timeline someone else picked up the series and started to release new chapters.
No one really noticed anything was different until someone started asking why the new chapters were published in rentry rather than gdocs.

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>>31277877
Nigger he doesn't owe you anything. And if you do believe that he does, I doubt you've even written as many words as him.

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>>31277974
He may not owe anything to anyone but he's still a fag for doing it. Oh, whoops. You're still a fag for doing it.

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>>31277877
People have lives, and they can get hectic. A promise you made one day could be impossible the next. Stop being a fag. When it comes, it'll come.

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>>31277877
HCanon won't stop talking about how he wants to torch his whole series, FSManon died in Donbas, and Haganon is too busy with his car to write anything. What's your point?

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>>31278098
>he's still a fag for doing it
A fag for doing what? Making vtuber fanfiction secondary in his life's priorities?
>You're still a fag for doing it
?

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>>31278170
>When it comes, it'll come.
It isn't coming and he doesn't deserve to have this kind of blind faith put in him. But hey, in the mean time, can I interest you in some cure-all snake oil?
>>31278229
Only one of those is logically relevant and Hagfag is a dipshit too

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>>31278385
I think he's implying you wrote cover high.

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Man, I wish I had a schizo that spends this much time thinking about me.

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>>31277958
There needs to be more bugchasing fics.

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>>31278416
I get that, I just fail to understand why he would assume so.

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>>31276241
Unbirthing

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>>31278494
No other reason for you to defend an anonymous user so vehemently.

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>>31278433
There really doesn't. I seriously don't get how people find that attractive, at all. I used to clean toilets back in the day and the idea of someone getting hard from imagining all the fucking nightmares they could contract in there is such a baffling thought. That shit is foul.

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>>31278412
Oh. So you're jealous. Now it all makes sense.

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A third of the way through and this thread has been nothing but arguing over stupid shit.

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>>31278589
Yep, you've caught me, it's jealousy. Go back to ritualposting and blogging about your mental health, you hack.

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>>31278546
I'd rather take the side of people who actually write than schizos who do nothing but complain.

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>>31278698
>I'd rather take the side of people who actually write
Clearly not, kek

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>>31278425
This. Wish I had a dedicated schizo.

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>>31278757
You're saying you've written more than him?

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>>31278846
I've written more than he has in the last 8 months just by posting in this thread

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>>31278760
It’s probably the Miss Sakura schizo that’s jumped onto a new target as an excuse to shit up the thread. I doubt they have strong feelings one way or another towards the actual stories.

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>>31278904
Actually, that's a half-truth, he does stop by to ritualpost and tell everyone "ooh, I'd write more but my life sucks so much, you guys don't even know"

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Oh hey the banner's back.
Looks like catbox managed to unfuck itself.

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>>31278412
...So you agree that he doesn’t owe us any writing and simply don’t like the amount of recognition he gets? Then why are you going after the author himself if you’ve got no qualms against him but rather the thread?

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>>31278760
if i had to have one i would want a pekofag level schizo where he just posts about wanting to fuck me

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>>31279110
Neat.

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>>31278904
So you haven't written any stories. Thanks for answering my question, he's done much more for the thread than you ever have.

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>>31279110
Oh, cool. Good to know.

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>>31279140
Why are you getting so offended over shitting on someone who isn't even here to read it?

>>31279210
Lol, I'm not telling you what I've written

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>>31279174
I thought that was subjectionanon

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>>31279280
I thought that was bugfag

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>>31279351
It's pekofag that wants to fuck bugfag.

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>>31279278
>Why are you getting so offended over shitting on someone who isn't even here to read it?
I’m just curious, genuinely. Getting mad over someone for not posting vtuber fanfiction is just such a strange concept to me, like, of all places to direct your anger, that’s where it goes?

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>>31279278
>Lol, I'm not telling you what I've written
I know you won't, because it's most certainly less than his word count.

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>>31278962
I'm the one who hates miss Sakura so no

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>>31279485
He's a blogposter, which is enough reason alone to hate him, and the opportunity to shit on him arose so I took it. I'll keep doing it too.

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>Cover High Anon's schizo is back
>Thread celebrity discussion is starting up again
We're in for one hell of a thread.

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>>31279664
I don't think that one or two posts with the equivalent of "I haven't been feeling so great" constitute blogposting. Otherwise even AA would be guilty of it.

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>>31279664
>blogposter
That’s half our writers, though.

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>>31279855
At least the car talk is mildly interesting.

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>>31279664
Iirc he made a couple posts about not being in a good mental state and going to hospital. If that's what you consider blogposting, I expect to see you do this for all our writers.

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Sigh, I wish AA was still here with us. He would never allow the thread to become like this. Not ever.

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>>31279976
>>31277344

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>>31279770
Was Ultimate Mio always 3 kilobytes? I thought it was 2.

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>>31279848
>>31279949
A couple posts is enough, and other authors actually write to make up for it

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>>31279557
Based, Miss Sakura was irredeemably cringe. Author is clearly a virgin.

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>>31279770
We could have been discussing Pekora smut ideas, but nooo. Apparently this was a more interesting topic.

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>>31279770
The thread is already derailed. No point even visiting it.

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>>31280267
One more thing you can blame the CHfag for.

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>>31280176
So blogposting is not allowed... while making multiple posts every time an author is mentioned is?

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>>31280366
Off you go, then.

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>>31280395
Correct. Don't like it, maybe 4chan isn't for you. Try reddit.

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>>31280372
>let's blame the guy who isn't here instead of the guy shitposting about him
Your brain works in interesting ways.

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>>31280267
I don't like her face in this image. Looks off.

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>>31278631
What the fuck is even going on? Why is the thread even zooming? This shit was made at the dead of night, there’s literally no reason it should be at 150 posts.

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>>31280556
It works to bring arrogant blogposters down to their ordained social level, which is under my feet after I've stepped in dog poo.

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Anyone wanna brainstorm/talk about ideas they have for chuuba fic to get out of the schizophrenia?
Cause the concept of persona-inspired chuua fic has been bouncing around my head ever since that smt discussion.
The idea is pretty much grab a cast of chuubas you know how to write good enough, translate all of their vtuber problems into teenager problems then shove them into a highschool setting.
With the persona part being the summoning of mythical figures as a mask to physically fight those teenager problems. With each chuuba in the team getting an arc alongside highschool shenanigans, with like a greater threat thrown in for good measure.
At least that's the barebones skeleton I've been mulling over.

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>>31280635
Handful of people having a discussion.

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>>31280759
No. Maybe in the next thread.

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>>31280635
>What the fuck is even going on?
Shitposter are running the thread for everyone. Again, no point in staying here, anon. It’s going to be a pointless thread about nothing.

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>>31280759
Mio's mythological creature would be Fenrir.

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>>31280759
Which mythical figure would go with each chuuba?

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>>31280905
The ESL in this post is disgusting. Fuck off, indog.

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>>31280976
Why don't you fuck off, mutt?

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>>31280759
A lot of Anons say it's impossible for males and females to be in a tight-knit friend group without any romantic feelings involved, but the persona series does that just fine which is why I'd like to take inspiration for a story. Because let's be honest, if you're a guy with only female friends, that's kinda like all the gay guys in high school. You need some bros in your life for realism + being straight.

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>>31281042
Because this is an English-speaking board and I know how to speak English. You don't.

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>>31281102
That's what holostars is far.

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>>31281102
I refuse to write the Homos, but nice try.

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>>31281356
you aren't writing anything anyway, nice try

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>>31281356
You refuse to write anything but shitposts.

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>>31280759
I want to include the Homos more but holy shit it's hard to find anything TL about them.

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>>31281435
Axel fits the "male best friend" persona archetype pretty well.

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>>31280922
Well Mio already has a stand, the hatotaurus, even if it isn't technically an actual mythological creature.
>>31280947
The hard part about this is there's more historically significant males than females, while Hololive obviously has a lot more females. I've only played P4 and 5 but iirc women have female personas while men have male personas, which makes this difficult.

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>>31281621
>women have female personas while men have male personas
I'm pretty sure Hatotaurus is male, so that's pretty much out the window already.

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>>31280947
If I can't find a theme to tie the group together I'd probably just go the lazy route of connect character concept to mythological figure via a chain of logic like (this is an example) Fubuki-> Fox -> Tamamo no Mae.

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>>31261367
Silvervale is forced to breed new talents for Hololive after her latest yab.

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>>31281583
I was looking into Shien and Roberu specifically since I'm planning on including them in something. I can get a pretty decent bead on Roberu since I used to watch him frequently and he became sort of a meme, but Shien is harder besides the Shiendown painting him as a lovable dumbass with a propensity to get himself into trouble.

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>>31281621
Who says you gotta follow the games? Just do whatever you want. Hell, give Korone fucking Muhammad Ali as a Persona if you want.

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>>31282243
What? Korone would be Mike Tyson.

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>>31282171
Yeah I get you about Shien. Pretty much all clips his more crazy side but there's definetly more to him then that. In some streams he can a lot more quiet and calm. I also think he quite a few qualities of a male wife (I don't know to put that in less gay terms).

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>>31282243
I mean the inherent problem of doing that is, well, the whole persona thing. If you're not going to pick a relevant mythological creature/being then it's kind of missing the point.
I mean obviously characters come first, but not picking a good persona to fit them is gonna stick out...
Unless you make that a plot point, then it could be interesting.

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>>31282440
>I also think he quite a few qualities of a male wife
I'm asking you to share in the most straight-faced, nonmocking way possible.

[Anonymous No.]

We went from discussing how to best breed the bunny NEET cunny to homoStars. That, in my opinion, is the biggest tragedy of this thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31280947
Botan: Artemis
Lamy: Dionysus
Nene: Hymen (yes, really)
Polka: Apollo
Aloe: Aphrodite

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>>31281621
I mean P5 did open the flood gates for fictional characters, so at least the pool's open to use public domain characters to base a persona off of.
I don't think picking a persona is going to be that hard since the chuuba design already gives you an easy 'out' by way of following the source of where the character concept came from then adjust it as necessary.

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>>31282964
Yeah yeah, boys have cooties or whatever.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31282440
>I also think he quite a few qualities of a male wife
I can think of a few ones too

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>>31270726
It's a fucked up law and she's wrong in suing, but the shittalkers knew that the law exists and did it anyway. Can't really feel sorry for them.

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>>31282964
No, the biggest tragedy was that this thread was ruin by shitposters.

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>>31282585
Honestly he acts pretty gay with some the other stars, Oga and Robe (more in the past) in particular. He's cracked at cooking. He's also pretty open, kind and caring to his fellow stars. I know those traits aren't specific to a 'wife' but it feels more like with him, just the vibe from him my limited nihongo.

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>>31282964
I mean the biggest obstacle to a smut fic about breeding Pekora as a bunny NEET is building up to how you break into the cocoon called her room.
Right now the only scenario I can think of is (You) are Pekora's brother tasked by pekomama to help bring your sister out of being a shut-in. This leading to cure slice of life shenanigans as you try to break her out. Maybe with some incestous romance thrown in.

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>>31283531
I can't believe Pekora got a fucking monkey

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>>31280947
Flare: William Tell
Noel: either Sir Gawain or Joan of Arc
Pekora: Guy Fawkes
Marine: Anne Bonny
Rushia: Morgan le Fay

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>>31282243
Alright, if we're gonna go a little wild...
Suisei - Galileo Galilei (maybe have Suisei believe something to be the truth and get branded a heretic as well)
Roboco - Thomas Edison
Mel - Count Dracula
Korone - Mike Tyson
Subaru - Donald Duck
Marine - Ryuji already took Kidd, so Edward Teach? Although Marine's personality screams Jack Sparrow
Noel - Alexander the great? Siegfried?
Watame - Duttur, I guess
Luna - Princess Pingyang? Maybe a fictional princess?
Kanata - One of the archangels
Polka - Jester. Or McDonald's clown.
Lamy - Snow White
Botan - ...Dean Schneider?
Iroha - Sakamoto Ryoma
Koyori - I don't know, Einstein?
Ollie - Dr. Frankenstein
Anya - Gimli? Or would that be Kaela?
Ame - Sherlock Holmes
Kiara - Phoenix, or is that too on the nose?
Bae - Captain Cook
Fauna - Are there any famous vegans?
Aruran - Wyatt Earp

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>>31282964
Talk about something else then, nobody's stopping you.
Oh, that's right, all you want to do is complain.

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>>31283775
I can't help but feel would Rushia would be that traitor character who would change her persona later on to an evil figure like Mephistopheles or something

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>>31283505
I see. Thanks, Anon. These are good qualities to note down. Definitely need to keep researching, so this helps.
>>31283085
>Shien gets an ass pic but the actually girly Homos don't
Bullshit.

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>>31283885
>giving Roboco that hack Edison instead of the real OG Nikola Tesla
Come on now
>>31284003
Morgan le Fay is already pretty evil in some versions of the Arthurian legend

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>>31284003
I mean if you want the obvious villain change... There's always the chain of logic that goes Rushia ->Rushifer ->Lucifer if you want to give her a big role as a traitor. Maybe with the 'persona design' taking cues from smtiv if you don't want her to be the main villain since Lucifer in that game wasn't the real one from other smt games.

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>>31284065
It's kinda bullshit yeah

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>>31280947
Okayu: Bastet
Korone: Heracles
Ayame: Enma Daiō

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>>31283018
That sounds like they'd be their tier 2/ultimate personas
I guess you can probably use lesser Greek figures for their tier 1s
Something like the nemean lion, pan/faunus, Helen of Troy, Icarus, etc.

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>>31284172
>>31284338
I mean if you want to be cheeky and reference her different incarnations, you can have her start out with something like Nitocris and with her deteriorating sanity and morals, her persona changes to like a lesser/trickster demon like Mephistopheles and with her full betrayal and fall from grace as Lucifer. Or give her a redemption arc like a certain other character in P5R

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>>31280947
Sora: Gilgamesh
A-chan: Enkidu

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>>31285053
>Rushia has a redemption arc causing Demon Lord Lucifer to turn into Archangel Michael.
I mean it sounds trite but executed well it would be fucking amazing.

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>>31261476
He got good taste though, that Aki Rosenthal pic makes me diamonds

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>>31280947
Kobo: Leviathan
Kaela: Hephaestus
Vestia: Hasan-i Sabbāh

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>>31271092
I'd do it, but idk where I'm supposed to make it and also I feel like people are gonna shit on me despite me never making one before

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>>31285795
Just use Google docs if you want to publish anonymously.
Don't worry about getting shat on for your work, generally the only people that respond to a fic are those that you've managed to at least get to care about what you've written to give out feedback.

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>>31280759
Yeah, being put in consensual chastity by the OP chuuba

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>>31261367
I do genuinely want >>31260493 as a fic

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>>31283018
Last one is... bizzarre, to say the least
> Sweet but traumatized menhera girl who worries very much about others' opinions
> Hot-headed menhera bitch who will kill for their favourite OTP and who will curse anyone who doesn't subscribe to "love"
How are they... compatible?

[Anonymous No.]

alright so last night I had an absolute stroke of inspiration and so I'm gonna start writing a noel/shotamag fic
already have a basic outline written out and even an idea for a second chapter down the line, haven't written in a while but I consider myself pretty alright at it
someone help me with a bit of logistic details, though, what's the way to go with stories like these, Japanese honorifics and titles or standard Western ones(-danchou vs captain, -sama vs master, etc)
I'm leaning Western myself but figured I'd ask

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>>31293423
Don't use Western it sounds incredibly stupid

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>>31293423
Write whatever you want.

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>>31293423
Anyone in this thread will understand basic Nip honorifics, and anyone reading a Noel fic will understand danchou.

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>>31293423
I'd stick to Japanese honorifics because most of them sound weird when translated to english, especially if said a lot (it ends up sounding unnatural). But regardless of which one you choose, only stick to one. Don't start switching up in the middle of the fic.

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>>31294281
I mean, I'd have the sense to use them in a more western capability, I wouldn't be a fucking dumbass and just use them in the same vein as honorifics where they're used alongside every mention of a person's name, that sounds terrible in English
But it seems people are generally leaning towards honorifics so I'll probably go with that. Maybe I'll make two versions and see what people like better when I get a first draft done

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>>31290329
So would this be a journey about Laplus trying to seek you out and getting you to accept her as your daughter or (you) finding out that you suddenly have a demon chuuni daughter? Either way I want it too.

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>>31294281
>Don't start switching up in the middle of the fic.
I don't agree with this. I AM against trying to cram Western-equivalent titles into the same mold as honorifics ("Noel-captain") or mixing them in the same context (saying Noel-danchou in one scene and then Captain Noel the next), but you should still just be able to say "captain" to refer to her position when not directly addressing her, or use "Captain" as a substitute for her name when you are

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>>31261334
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTGapqxIjMNIPVMxoBwLpo_x4gwduS_E1It9Flk1kMZ7AzFbpTdgTM1erDvbUItbcoXDDD1GDAYlViM/pub

First Train and Kafka Stop Six: I Am A Loop
tags: anthology, multiple chuubas, abuse, extreme themes, tragedy

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>>31294898
>I AM against trying to cram Western-equivalent titles into the same mold as honorifics ("Noel-captain") or mixing them in the same context (saying Noel-danchou in one scene and then Captain Noel the next)
I guess I should've clarified more but yeah I just mean this. Refering to positions by whatever seems more natural is fine.

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>>31294974
it's been 4 days since this thread wrote anything. i'd almost forgotten this is a writing general. amyways, i enjoyed this chapter. survivours going through "the system" for lack of a better word after thier abuse is something that doesn't get explored a whole lot. and by "a whole lot" i mean i can't remember another time where i've seen that. maybe that's just me being uncultured though.

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>>31298274
Thank you. I'll be sure to continue this plot thread then, god fucking knows I've got ample experience with it. It'll be a hell of a lot less dark as well.

Thank you.

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>>31294898
>>31295347
I think switching it up is fine, but you also have to pay attention to grammar differences, as in English the title usually goes before the name, so it would be "Noel-danchou" or "Captain Noel"

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>>31261367
Fucking Sio in her fat ass while Towa watches.

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>>31303465
Sio...

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>>31303465
Idk who that is but have this instead

[Anonymous No.]

>>31303465
I wouldn’t touch that woman unless it was with a closed fist.

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>>31304799
sauce onegai

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>>31304799
Kusunoki Sio. She was a God at mahjong and friends with Towa. Currently on an indefinite hiatus after it was revealed she shit talked her coworkers on 5chan.

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>>31305642
roboco IS shit at apex though

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>>31305423
I think an anon on the drawthread made it?

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>>31305423
There's a Towa x her mama follow up panel that is to die for

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>>31306266
>>31306580
what little is in that picture is fucking great, but sauceNAO has nothing. rip

[Anonymous No.]

>>31303465
Can't it just be fucking Towa's fat ass instead?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31269118
Yeah, you Twitch tourists are pretty big into the cuckoldry after all.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31307278
>likes rushia
>calls others cuck
lol
lmao

[Anonymous No.]

>>31306957
Sio is famous for her fat ass.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31306714
https://holo.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=9300

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>>31307668
you are a fucking god, thanks anon. i am going to bust one off to this

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>>31294974
Had to skim this chapter since I'm going somewhere shortly, but I'm glad you wrote this, I was beginning to think no one in /wg/ writes anymore.

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>>31306580
I couldn't find the follow-up picture, sadly

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>>31305642
how do chuubas keep getting their 5chan posts leaked? isn't that place supposed to be anonymous like here?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31310687
visible IPs or something, think it was a mod. never kept up with the sio yab coz idgaf about her beyond the porn

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>>31310687
5chan uses your ip whenever you post and hers got leaked so people very quickly found about all the stuff she was saying. Same thing happened to Laplus except in her case all of her posts were heckin' wholesome.

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>>31310687
https://virtualyoutuber.fandom.com/wiki/Kusunoki_Sio
The write-up in the comments of this explains her situation pretty well I think. First i've heard of her as well and damn she's probably even worse than Rushia if all this is true

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>>31311444
Jesus. What a cunt.

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>>31311444
That was a pretty good write-up although I think that part about .LIVE is a little sensational seeing how Nijisanji once overshadowed Hololive by a large margin, but I guess that would be one of vtubing's biggest what-ifs. Would be cool if someone translated all the stuff that Sio said. I know she shat on Roboco's APEX skills but I wonder what else she shitposted about. Also, checked.

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>>31294974
I was about to ask you about the new chapter. Glad you delivered. Shame it got ignored. But if it makes you feel better, it’s good.

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>>31309186
Glad I can keep writing. I've got a lot of stories like this left in me. I'll keep this up till I die.

I don't say it, but /wg/ is one of the reasons I wake up in the morning. This general allows me to indulge in my greatest passion and I am thankful it exists. Thank you for reading my stuff.

>>31313074
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Always makes me happy to hear that I'm writing stuff people want to read.

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>>31313888
>Always makes me happy to hear that I'm writing stuff people want to read.
Kee at it and don’t be discouraged if you don’t get any replies. I personally, am really poor at giving critique so I wish I could do more.

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>>31311305
>Same thing happened to Laplus except in her case all of her posts were heckin' wholesome
Huh. Anyone have a writeup of that somewhere? Sounds like an interesting read, assuming it's not literally 100% Towa sperging.

>>31311444
Holy shit, what a bitch.

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>>31313888
Hmm. Really like your writing style and have followed many of your works, but I personally can't stand anything involving EN so I'm not reading this. Not meant as a schizo post or anything, you're just a favoured writer of mine and I wanted to just say I'd be reading your works too if not for my own bias.

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>>31314552
NTA but don't feel pressured to give serious critique. It's nice to get feedback, but even something as small as "I liked it" is good.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31314640
Iirc, it was Laplus just trying to dispute false accusations about herself and promoting herself or something along those lines. It's really damn cute and it probably did ended up boosting her number of fans. This girl is just really genuine.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31313888
Ignore the fags that don't want EN, they usually shit up the thread and its safe to ignore them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31314753
As far as the anthology series goes, the characters will change from chapter to chapter so I hope you keep with that one.

As far as EN goes, I only really know Kronii and Fauna well and I think they can be used for some interesting stories. I'd urge you to give them a shot in my works but, naturally, I can't force you. Thank you for reading all the others likewise.

>>31314552
Just knowing people read it and enjoy it helps honestly. Even just saying that you liked it is great. But I'm always open to tweek things if something didn't land right.

>>31314832
It's a shame because there are EN characters with a lot to offer certain stories, Kronii of course being very suited to some of the content I write. But that's their loss. I'll write whatever character I think is best suited for the role.

Thank you.

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>>31294974
Damn, caught up on this and chapter 5.
Your descriptive skills for painful things are getting really good because these last two mel chapters have used those aspects really well.
Especially as your laconic style really does fit for the 'traumatized and can barely think' perspective.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31279770
>>31280098
I raise you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31316548
I couldn't tell if that was Choco or Watame at first

[Anonymous No.]

>>31316548
I counter with this gif.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31316204
>It's a shame because there are EN characters with a lot to offer certain stories, Kronii of course being very suited to some of the content I write. But that's their loss. I'll write whatever character I think is best suited for the role.
It's just fags who think Japanese women are pure or something, either way, just ignore them and keep on writing.

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>>31316204
>Thank you for reading all the others likewise.
I've probably stated it a thousand times now but I loved In Hushed Whispers and would love to read more on that front, should inspiration ever strike you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31316808
Nah. EN brought in trash like you. That's their sin. This fandom was far better with a filter to keep garbage out.

[Anonymous No.]

Please forgive me for my sins. This is an Altare Regis fic of him gutfucking a human corpse. Obvious mentions of gore, again, please forgive me or rightfully don't, its fine

https://rentry.org/gutfucker

[Anonymous No.]

>>31316744
sugoi

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374
bro what the fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318583
im so sorry i was possessed by the spirit of "not the holy ghost" and his recent streams were giving me ideas

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374
Damn, son. My own fetishes are fucked up, so I ain't throwing no stones in this glass house of mine, but... yeah, damn.

It's very well-written. Your mastery of the English language is good. I can offer no feedback on the content beyond... damn. The Magster got magged.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374
wow

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374
forgive me if I refuse to open this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318953
thanks anon, im actually an ESL but ive gotten better since i started living in the states.
>>31319089
you're forgiven, but please know that what you don't know of this fic will eat at you

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>>31318374
That was an interesting read to say the least. I liked the twist at the end. As for criticism, well you mentioned you're an ESL so I can look past faults with grammar/wording. You should do a miniseries where Regis kills then fucks all of Tempus.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374
If you want the story to go into the archive so people can find it, you should anchor it by replying to the anchor post with link, name and tags.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31319291
>im actually an ESL
I could guess as much, which is why I complimented your proficiency. It wasn't perfect, but was still pleasant to read. Excessive mistakes are like... bumps or potholes on the road; too many and it's a very unpleasant experience.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31318374

[Anonymous No.]

>>31261334
https://rentry.org/gutfucker

Thrill
tags: guro, extreme gore, graphic descriptions of bodily harm, masturbation

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322146
bro what the fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322262
>copying my entire post down to the filename
for what purpose

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322596
Why are you pretending to be me?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322980
that's my line

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322146
Masturbation? It's more like necrophilia if anything.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31322146
hot

[Anonymous No.]

>>31290329
Honestly that just screams a mystery/fluff fic about helping Laplus look for her father with the big twist at the end being that the father was (You) all along.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31323981
you could chalk (You) not knowing up to amnesia, but how would Laplus not recognize you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31324980
oh no wait, I just reread and realized she never actually met you. nevermind

[Anonymous No.]

>>31323981
Not really a twist, feels like that’s a given at this point. The real twist would be that you’re not the father.

[Anonymous No.]

Did Sio ever reincarnate?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31327027
Who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31327042
Apparently yes, but it didn't help her at all. Not sure if she's on indefinite hiatus or graduated again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31326640
I mean it would be a twist if you hide what prompt you sourced the idea from, maybe trick the reader into thinking it's going to be a romance about helping her deal with her deadbeat dad... only for the twist to come out that you were her 'papa' all along.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31261311
God, Aki is such a dirty whore. I love her so much.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31329224
i bet she wears a machine in her pussy that regularly injects cum into her womb throughout the day.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31306957
>>31307443
Fucking Towa's petite ass!
Towa using the powers of hell to make your cock as giant as she likes it!
Biting down on Towa's tail to enhance her orgasm!
Towa slapping you for biting her tail!
You giving Towa spanking correction and her enjoying it!

[Anonymous No.]

>>31329694
No, she only does it naturally, for its the best for her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31327819
Or you figure it out from the beginning, but you try to have Laplus realize it for herself. And use the various hijinks she gets into trying to figure out who her "dad" is as bonding to try to get to know more about your new daughter.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31329224
Aki is my second favourite Holohag (and probably the most sensual)

[Anonymous No.]

>>31329946
Working on that second kid?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330034
Who's first?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330086
Watame
I like blondes

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330001
That sounds rife for comedy with Laplus misunderstanding the hints you're dropping and thinking you're hitting on her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330226
Respectable.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330226
>>31330395
Drinking Watamilk from the Watamilkers while breeding the sheep...

[Anonymous No.]

>>31261311
>https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec
I just realize there's a fanfic called Blood Meridian or the Evening Redness in the West. Is that a homage to Cormac McCarthy?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330377
>>31330001
>>31323981
Now it starts to sound like a CYOA story with multiple routes and endings

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331075
>"Teach me, Koyori-sensei" scene after every bad end telling you how to avoid it the next time through

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330987
It's dogshit don't read it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331565
The fanfic or the McCarthy novel?

[Anonymous No.]

so not gonna annoy people with progress updates each time but made progress on the noel /ss/ story today and I decided to look at flare's outfits(because I never payed much attention to them) for the eventual chapter 2 I'm gonna do with her and
why is her original outfit so much more fucking sex than her updated one
the current one feels so generic and boring compared to her original, fuck

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331772
Is it really sex? Never really noticed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331772
Because it has soul, anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331677
The fanfic. Read the actual Blood Meridian instead.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331869
that loincloth does things to me, man, fuck
and the one-side stocking, too
plus the whole sort of traditional eastern garb feel it's got going on? it's great

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332100
stupid sexy knife-ear

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331075
Ohh

Endings:
A grievous loss
Strife and loneliness
Adventures in ignorance
Father, daughter, wife
Father, daughterwife
The brat, her stepmother and you

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>31332258

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330377
>>31331075
>>31332489
The real mystery of the story is finding out who the mother is

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332100
Why did the redesign happen again was it China or was it because she didn't like it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31331772
>why is her original outfit so much more fucking sex than her updated one
>the current one feels so generic and boring compared to her original, fuck
The face on the very first iteration of Flare looked weird. Also, Flare was pegged as the cool one in her gen but she didn't like it, she wanted to be cute. That's why her new default which she had input on has that cute dress instead of the Japanese fantasy elf look.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332702
She didn't like it. Nene was the one who had to redesign because of China.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332657
..Koyori?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332657
The mother's probably Towa. That's why La+ became such a fan of hers, instinctively.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31332807
If only IRyS would follow suit.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31333761
If only.
At least her fanartists can make her look good.

[Anonymous No.]

LUNA RAPE

[Anonymous No.]

>>31330987
It's a mess of ideas and half jokes that didn't really work out, also known as weirdanon2 at his worst.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31335078
Who is Luna raping?

[Anonymous No.]

>>31335248
herself

[Anonymous No.]

>>31335248
Laplus, for taking her spot as the shortest Holo

[Anonymous No.]

>>31336198
Stupid brat, stealing the princess' spot. She needs milk correction.

[Anonymous No.]

i just realised two of first train and kafka's chapters are called "stop 5". so the most recent chapter is actually stop 7.

[Anonymous No.]

>>31336726
Huh, missed reading that chapter.
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It's actually properly disturbing. The lack of description save when necessary and mass use of dialogue to make what could be seen as a sexual situation disturbing is actually really well done.