/wg/ - Writing General - Mito Edition

[Anonymous No.]

Post both abuse and general fictions of your favorite Chuubas in this thread

Collective works so far:
https://pastebin.com/asvcqDLL
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r_e1ah3KTvhBMhclgbvKbLzhCBw7xF-b6yqoeOx8dug/edit - Compilation doc by kind buddy with links to previous threads

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous Thread:>>2787842

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>You arrive at Aqua's place with her Green Tea Frappuccino with chocolate sauce, chocolate chips, with more whipped cream, in a tall size
>You enter her house and follow the directions that lead to her room
>You stop outside of her door
>Protocol states you cannot speak to Aqua, touch Aqua, or even see Aqua. You begin to wrap the blindfold over your eyes before you knock on her door
>Her voice answers your knocks
>She's busy at the moment and cannot come to the door
>She makes an exception because you are her favorite and allows you in her room to bring her her order
>Carefully, you take your first step forward
>The smell of day old Redbull immediately hits your nostrils and overwhelms everything else in her room
>As you shuffle forward, your foot strikes an empty can that was left on the floor and rolls away
>An embarrassed Aqua sheepishly apologizes for the mess you cannot see, but can very well feel
>You extend your hands cupping her Green Tea Frappucino with chocolate sauce, chocolate chips, with more whipped cream, in a tall size
>Aqua thanks you for the drink
>You feel two warm, soft hands only just graze yours.
>You want to continue holding this Green Tea Frappuccino with chocolate sauce, chocolate chips, with more whipped cream, in a tall size, for just a bit longer
>In this moment, you are experiencing the closest you will ever come to holding Aqua's hand
>Just before you're able to truly appreciate what is happening, Aqua pulls away with her Green Tea Frappuccino with chocolate sauce, chocolate chips, with more whipped cream, in a tall size
>She thanks you once again and bids you farewell
>You shuffle your feet backwards, careful not to trip on another empty can of Redbull, and exit her room
>The door closes and the locks go on
>You remove the blindfold and sigh
>You make your way to the exit of the house feeling confident that you'll meet her again soon

[Anonymous No.]

What the fuck happened? Was there a huge series of threads getting bumped? We were fine an hour or so ago.

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>>3017670
No idea, I left to do a few things and the thread had been archived by the time I came back.

For prompts, however, I've had a small idea kicking around in my head recently: (You) and a couple of other Holos of anyone's choice are on a mission to spring Pekora from prison. Could tie into the Black Ops AU.

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>>3017603
Tbh I wouldn't expect anything less of this autistic onion

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>>3017670
Idk, but since you asked

You went to highshcool with a holo that would bully you constantly. The bullying can be as bad as you want or tame(hitting, stealing your money, fucked with you school work, etc). Years after highschool you run into her again and she is sorry for bullying you and wants to make it up to you. The way she makes it up to you is up to the writer anon. Could be nsfw or fluff i dont care.

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>>3019082
I might make one based on this with Shion. No promises though, kinda burned out after writing the previous Aqua fluff

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>>3019082
You have been making this request for the last three threads
I like it though

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>>3019082
I thought about this but an alternate idea I had was that you were in school and was getting bullied but got saved by one of the holo girls and as such become friends with her. I though of Kanata being a good pick for but I could also see Korone or other physically strong ones too. Might do this but if anyone else wants to work on it go ahead

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>>3017670
Gen 5 is doing a promo for a blood clinic. Imagining a fan of each of the gen5 girls getting their blood taken by their idol sounds fun.

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>>3024194
Is this real? Why wouldn't they use Mel instead?

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>>3024227
doesn't like blood

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>>3024312
Neither do the gen 5 characters though. I only suggest it because a vampire makes more thematic sense.

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>>3024378
>Neither do the gen 5 characters though.
afaik that's actually not true, as they've never stated their views on it, whereas mel has openly and repeatedly stated her character doesn't like it

ergo the choice in this context is a bunch of characters with no stated position on red sauce or a character stated to dislike it

also they're probably saving mel for when they do a donation drive for a sperm bank

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>>3024539
>sperm bank fic
h-hot

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>>3017670
One of the holos that likes muscular guys watches (You) lift weights and becomes increasingly more aroused.

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>>3025063
iirc Coco has stated macho men are her thing

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>>3024194
>>3017670
(you) try to get your blood taken by your favorite gen5 holo, but end up in the treatment room of another. Frustrated, you keep coming back to don more, until you collapse from blood loss. All girls see this and the jinx is up, your oshi is impressed, because its a story, so of course she fucking is.

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>>3025063
If i'm not wrong fbk is into muscular men too

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Holofantasy chapter 2. Procrastinated a bit, but I'm happy with it. The circus is in town! What could go wrong? Probably a lot. Actual spoilers in the spoiler. As always, the rolls will be at the bottom, for those curious and desiring more flavor-text.

I was fucking terrified. At one point I yelled 'OH, FUCK, ANON LOST!' and was worried I'd have to write a (probably NSFW) bad end scenario, but I quickly realized I was retarded and didn't account for damage reduction.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQDRwLUNQaqvXoFFYkh48znZ6vxjKm9T2hfsSJI-fOsjky1NH6uWmGutE7zIwPBzFGLrieE7-P_uVtM/pub

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>>3027060
I'm slightly disappointed that Coco was kind enough to call Anon "sleepyhead", instead of "motherfucker".

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>>3027060
Thanks writeanon, I love this series so much especially with the way you worldbuild

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>>3021869
I haven't caught up on the last two threads, so i guess another anon on here has excellent taste.

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I am gonna die of an overdose of fluff one day reading this thread.

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>>3027264
I'm trying to have her open up and become more vulgar as time goes on - this is only their second day together and she's worried (You) will be put off by her foul mouth, though it still comes through when she's stressed or angry. She notices (You) don't seem to care too much, at least.

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Cautionary life pulse. After the last thread doomspiraled seemingly out of control it won't hurt.

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Anyone would like to request any prompts? Perhaps a writer anon would give a shot at it

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>>3027060
Been a while since I've looked forward to reading something this much, chapter 1 had me hooked. Thanks anon

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>>3031100
How about an abusive fic about Aqua being bullied by Sasaki and forcing you into being in a relationship to hurt Aqua?

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does anyone know if the sequel to this aqua fanfic is still in the works or is finished?
It's play in the rain and you get wet

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQnUv3-LTEqRQYq5oeEMPomq-LVE0vZBlF9Ny8aZocWRtUKwDauBAOEXrfxJKitzs7eC7kGthsCO30e/pub

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>>3034739
It says fin at the bottom so by the looks of it, it's finished.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRQRhFRd8cpd1YtTMAHyphO4pzJITO-Pxi-nYN5AgAhgiI695hFfheeO2VOMpPfFFsxUoHancAd0Fs8/pub

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>>3034739
>>3034829

>play in the rain and you get wet
authorfag here - yep, it's finished in my book. I'm working on a FBK-fic right now... which was supposed to be a shorter one, but its turning into a fucking novel (again). So not quite sure when it'll be ready

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>>3034829
>>3034923
I realised I linked the wrong one. I interpreted the message at the top to mean it would be a multi story work but it was actually referring to when the story was in progress. it's probably my favourite story on here so well done authoranon

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>>3034923
Always love a long fic so I await it eagerly.

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>>3033457
I don't watch much Nijisanji, the only thing I know about Sasaki is she can piss really quickly. What's her personality like?

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>>3017670
Cheating on your oshi with one of her cute female fans

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>>3017670
Being incessantly pranked by Pekora because she has a huge crush on you

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>>3017670
All the girls that start showing interest towards you after a while just flat out call you a faggot and leave your life for good, luckily your childhood friend Rushia is always there to comfort you.

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>>3032061
>>3027418
Thanks. I'm always worried about longer things because of the build up to stuff, since it isn't a short, hardline crackhit of nsfw or fluff and that can turn people off. I'm glad someone enjoys it at least.

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>>3027060
I just finished reading all of it. And once again I absolutely loved it, good job Anon.

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>>3042187
Anon I can at least assure you that you're skilled at your craft and you've already got me super hooked. You're doing a great job.

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>>3027060

Absolutely fantastic. Long fics are the best fics, can’t wait for what the dice gods roll next

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>>3027060
>spoiler
Is it because you don't have experience with that sort of thing? Could always leave it open for others to write omakes and what-if spinoffs, or mulligan a particularly bad roll once per chapter or something like that.

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>>3027060
I ended up binge-reading both chapters back-to-back and good lord do I want more.
I’m glad my oshi gets to be a permanent addition to the cast. Even if Coco’s basically won the Anonbowl already.

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>>3045659
In the pastebin directory, I'm responsible for at least 75% of the NSFW pastes. I'm no stranger to writing pussy slamming. I was just a bit anxious because of how early it would've been, but I'd have done it anyway and just passed it off as a timeline split or something. Still may write out the what-if scenario detailing a very harsh crash course sex-ed session and life with Polka wife.

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>>3046183
YOU
DON'T
SAY

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>>3046183
Oh, interesting. Then I guess this series is an exercise of flexibility, then?

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>>3046464
Suppose so. I've written out some combat stuff before under various other aliases over the years and I always have a good time with it. Wanted to do something different after a lot of other things, especially when I was struggling to keep going with the basic stories I was going following burn out from pumping out 40 or so chuuba stories. Figured I'd try dice stuff since I'm doing TTRPGs and the idea was in my head, and now I'm writing /ss/ bait Anon fighting off various Holos. The idea was also exacerbated by that post awhile ago about one anon doing a DND game with a Hololive Pantheon that I thought was really interesting. Essentially I'm running a single player RPG that I just turn into a story as it happens.

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>>3027060
Anon, this is amazing..... What the hell? It's so good...

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>>3027432

It was a slightly different request where you were bullying someone until they snapped and fought back

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I'm sorry for writing this. This was supposed to be the a story about bullying Towa, but I couldn't bring myself to do it. This is the leftover scraps I had put together.

https://pastebin.com/mMWT6BG8

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>>3055716
Super hard in the feels department, I actually shed a tear by the end. Which is a good thing. Maybe a sequel with a happier ending is in order?

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>>3055716
Anon. Why would you do this? It's so perfect, but it's so painful at the same time.

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>>3055716
What a gut-shot anon, great work.

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>>3055716
Having cared for someone following a major health event this is somehow incredibly relatable and depressing. Christ.

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>>3027060
I really love how Polka's ASMR and charming eyes have been adapted into some of her signature magic.

I would have taken Polka's offer in a heartbeat, but I guess that's why I'm not the protagonist.

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>>3027060
>but don’t try and turn the house into a goddamn apartment building, y’hear!?
foreshadowing

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>>3060137
Foreshadowing of the inevitable holohouse

[Anonymous No.]

Matsuri piss fic. Saw this prompt a thread or two ago and decided to try it out. Hope you guys enjoy.

¥15000 is ¥15000

“For fuck sake Matsuri! I am not going to drink your piss. So how about you and your piss ‘piss’ off!” You rub your temples in annoyance.

“Ehhhh” Matsuri puts on a pouty face “It would be super funny though.” Your head sinks further into your hand, cradling it as the words she speaks cause nothing but pain. “No I refuse to believe that you would find this funny. If you truly do, you’ve got one hell of a fucked up sense of humor.” She doesn’t say anything but she somehow pouts even harder.

You’ve know Matsuri to be one hell of a weirdo but that doesn’t really bother you. You’re used to all the weird shit she does, at least you thought you were until she came up to you with a bottle her of own urine and asked you to drink it as a joke. At first you thought it was an actual joke. You thought she filled it with some beer, so you played along but as soon you unscrewed the cap you were assaulted by the waft of actual piss. You retched and dropped the bottle, spilling in on the floor and your shoes. Matsuri moaned how wasted her ‘precious juices’ but you couldn’t care less as you felt the vomit rising out of your throat although you somehow managed to suppress it then and avoided making even a larger mess. It’s been a week since that incident and every day since then, without missing a beat, Matsuri has brought a bottle of piss to work and harasses you to drink it, always saying it would be funny, which it so definitely wouldn’t. Honestly she’s got you on the brink of reporting her ass to HR, her silly gross jokes may have been funny before but this is just downright piss-taking.

You try to shoo her away but she speaks again, bringing up an interesting proposition “How about I pay you to drink it?” You stop shooing her, your ears perk up. You also hate how you considered drinking her piss even for a split second just because money was involved. What are you? Some kind of whore? And even against your better judgement and pride, you ask her how much she’s willing to pay.

“I’ll pay ¥5000 if you take a sip but if you chug it, I’ll triple it. But also you can’t spit it out or vomit.” Basically ¥15000. Fucking ¥15000, it will be the easiest ¥15000 you ever made. Just have to chug some piss. You certainly don’t have a piss kink and this is insanely gross but ¥15000 is ¥15000. Fuck it, you’re a stupid bitch whore. You don’t say anything but you snatch the bottle of Matsuri’s hand. She’s surprised but a lecherous grin spreads across face quickly, Jesus Christ what a creep. You knew this wasn’t a matter of being funny, she gets off from this shit probably.

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>>3060586
For the second time, you unscrew the cap and the same exact stink assaults your nose. Again you retch and almost drop the bottle. You got this. It’s only piss. It’s gonna be the fastest ¥15000 you’ve ever made. You steel yourself, close your eyes and bring the bottle to your lips and tilt it. Dread settling in. The golden liquid first makes contacts with your bottom lip and then rushes into your mouth, touching down on your tongue. It’s revolting, it’s sickening, absolutely horrible. It’s salty and rancid, she definitely doesn’t drink enough water. You want to spit it out, throw the bottle away, puke it out all simultaneously but you hold fast. ¥15000 is in reach, don’t give in now! You open your eyes to gage you progress but to your dismay, you’ve barely made a dent in a dent in the bottle. There is still at least 4/5 of the bottle left. You internally groan and continue to tilt the bottle further up to get over with faster. The piss going down your throat makes squirm and shiver. And in your peripheral vision you spot that little freak Matsuri. Her face is completely flushed, she watches with great interest and that smile is full of nothing but pure unadulterated lust with drool leaking from the sides. You also swear that her hand is reaching down through her skirt, pleasuring herself in your pain and misery. Fucking bastard.

Still chugging, you hear nothing but the sound of your gulps and Matsuri’s heavy panting. You were wrong. This isn’t no easy money; this is absolute hell, easily the worst experience you’ve ever had to endure and you’re not even done! But you can’t give up yet! You’ve come so far; you downed what seems like ¾ of the piss. Home stretch! You tilt the bottle even further upwards, it’s almost done now.

And It’s DONE! There is no more piss in the bottle. You’ve somehow managed to chug the 16oz whole bottle. It hasn’t even been a minute according to your phone but that felt like an eternity. Why the fuck did you do that? That was easily the worse experience of your life, you’re a dumb slut that drank piss for money. You don’t think you can ever see yourself in a good light anymore; this has to be newest low for you. The taste still lingers in mouth and the urge to puke is strong but you resist; it would be even worse if you drank all that piss just to vomit it out and not get any money.

You throw the bottle on the ground. “Well Matsuri, It’s time for you to pay up you freak.” She doesn’t respond. She’s just looking down at the ground, you can’t see her facial expression. “Oi you better not flake on me. I didn’t just have the worst experience of my life just for you bail on me like this.” You complain. It’s only then she starts to giggle, it’s not cute at all, rather creepy in fact. How can she get any worse? She then pushes you over. “Hey what the fuck is your problem asshole?” She still doesn’t respond but she raises her face and makes direct eye contact with you. That face of hers is the textbook definition on absolute lust. It’s terrifying.

She then deftly unzips her skirt, rips her tights and throws her striped panties off. It all happened in an instant. She stands before her clean shaven pussy on full display, dripping with total libido. “Ay what the fuck?” Is she insane? Getting naked in the company office, sure it’s late at night and it’s just the two of you in the building but there is still something wrong about it. You hate to admit it but seeing her bare sex causes you pitch a tent, painfully stretching your work pants and she notices. She finally speaks. “If you enjoyed drinking it so much… you should drink it straight from the source.”

“What no! You’re misunderstandin- “You’re cut off with a mouth full of muff. She so swiftly planted herself on your face. “You’re so lucky to drink straight from the tap!” Matsuri moans. You try to get up but she has arms pinned down and use that support to grind against your nose and mouth. Feverous moans escape her lips. While she gets off, your suffocating. Panic and terror starts to spread across your whole body. Eyes darting left from right looking for any form of help, flailing hands and legs. Is this how you die? You don’t know if this a good way to go out.

She suddenly brings hips to a stop, a moment of relief washes over, you’re still suffocating but hopefully she will get off now? Realize what she did wrong and pay you even more for compensation? Nope. “Here it comes! All just for you!” The relief is quickly washed over with anguish as you continue to thrash even harder but nothing stops Matsuri as she lets out sighs of pleasure as she relief herself into your mouth. It’s not as sour as the bottle piss, rather surprisingly sweet but it’s still really fucking gross and it doesn’t stop! It’s like she’s pissing a fountain. Vision is blurring, you’re choking. “Drink up!” is the last thing you hear before your eyes roll back and your vison fades.

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>>3060605

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>>3060605
>Scat
Can't say I'm into that but it was pretty funny to read

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>>3060586
Why is everyone a fatag or a piss drinking here

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>>3061392
That wasn't scat, just piss.
>>3061410
I blame Matsuri. I was normal before her.

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>>3061392
There's scatt in there to now I know to not read it

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>>3046183
>75%
Anon please be aware you are reaponsible for liters of cum being spilled.
Pretty gay ngl.

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>>3017670
You're hired as Nene's manager and she keeps trying to give you a blowjob because she read that all female idols with male managers are secretly in a relationship, so she wants to live up to it like a proper idol

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>>3046413
I got your back, bro.
>>3063162
Time to pump up those numbers.

Hololive Fantasy ~ BAD END
Anon was struck down in his duel vs. the ring mistress, who seeks to do good on her word. NSFW ft. Anon's first orgasm.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTGzAXAOEmHNOdl7xw1Int332JVjFoZl9Hd-vYj8EbcuM5eEBQROiEM1F9uius1jIZuhI1ivTBApOYJ/pub

https://youtu.be/lV0KmZKyUzA

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>>3064260
This is the best "Bad" End I've ever seen.

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>>3064260
Thank you for all you've done writeranon, you truly are a hero.

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>>3017670
Kanata and Towa act as the two aspects of your conscience and constantly fight over each other for your attention.

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>>3064260
THANK YOU CHEF

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>>3055716
>https://pastebin.com/mMWT6BG8
anon please, please, please please make a part 2 where we talk about it with Towa, i dont like her feeling guilty

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>>3064260
Holy shit anon I was just about to sleep fuuuuck

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>>3060605
h-hot
maybe a part2 where she pays you to piss on her?

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>>3061480
there isnt scat, just piss

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>>3017670
Yandere Himawari, where she pretends to be stupid so you can lower your guard so she can abuse you.

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>>3066922
I learned I'm not really good at writing sequels. I'm afraid if I dare try to push the story any further, it would get much worse considering I actually ended up cutting out a lot of stuff from the story to make it slightly less bad.

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>>3055716
thanks for this anon. makes me remember this though

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>>3060605
Wow great job anon make me want to vomit

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>>3055716
>I couldn't bring myself to write about bullying Towa.
>So I shattered her soul instead, leaving her a husk of her former self, forever wracked with guilt for her friend's injury.
Fantastic story, but I don't understand your explanation at all.

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>>3068332

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>>3068378
You know it's been 7 hours since I posted that and I've read through it twice. I think I'm starting to feel the same way about my own work. I don't remember why I made it so gross despite me only writing it yesterday. All I can do now is laugh about how I wrote it with a straight face.

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>>3068614
I had a familiar feel after writing a bunch of the abuse/torture stories, like:
>"Wow, looking back why did I actually look up torture techniques to write fanfiction about vtubers on some message board"

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>>3055716
Nice work anon, seeing chuubas suffer bring me joy

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>>3068614
Dont feel bad anon, im not even into pissing but it was still pretty hot, i think i just like femdom kek.

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>>3064260
The Cover Kingdom needs to get their Sex Ed programm up and running, poor Anon barely knows what a dick is

Also, nice, very hot, thanks.

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>>3067207
I'm sorry anon. If I decide to make a sequel, it won't be for a long time.

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>>3017670
Ina trying to be a yandere, but failing because she's too innocent

[Anonymous No.]

Matsuri performing oral before narrator-san announces the need to go to the restroom, only for matsuri to force you to pee in her mouth

[Anonymous No.]

I'm thinking about writing a fic about having Coco Kaine as your alpha bitch gf in high school. Would anyone be interested in seeing that?

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>>3078032
Yes, that sounds hot

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>>3078032
Please do

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>>3078032
God I want to get my hands on Coco Kaine. Yeah, do it.

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>>3078876
Adding onto this to get the horny out of my brain I want Coco Kaine to pull her shorts forward enough to expose her pussy and stroke me to completion into her panties while she dirtily shit talks me between kisses.

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>>3063655
>>3066286
Both of these seem great. Kanata and Towa sound particularly cute and I'd love to see that done. May try my hand at Nene at some point.

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(You) are a new member of Hololive in a dysfunctional gen. Can you save them before everyone else graduates?

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>Page 10 after a mere 2 hours
OH NO YOU DON'T

The journey the hero’s journey will pit him against...Pirates?!

Somewhere, in an oceanic hovel far, far away, a galleon pulls into ‘port’ within a cave, evading capture from authorities for the fourth time this week. The captain wipes the sweat from her brow as she disembarks from the vessel, looking at the odd cave they find themselves in. Something about it screams to her, inviting her deeper. There’s something here - she can feel it in her heart. A treasure hunter’s intuition, one of her greatest assets besides a deadly sword arm. The crew, exhausted, take collective a deep breath, welcoming the respite. The captain, however, takes her time to explore the cave, seeking any leftover plunder from criminals past, left behind in haste. Deeper in, the ward designed to attract seafaring monsters falters...and the pirate captain finds a long waterway down into the abyss below. A gleeful smile crosses her face as she imagines the riches below. The order is given, and the sails descend. Hopefully the airship parts hold. As the massive city below comes into focus, gasps and shouts of surprise leave the crew men's mouths. The captain merely crosses her arms. This is the haul of a lifetime - and she intends to profit severely.

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>>3083468
I-
I kneel

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>>3083468
Good one, damn. Go on!

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>>3083468
YES YES YES

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>>3042187
thanks anon for your work, really enjoyed it

[Anonymous No.]

Which girl you think needs more attention in writing?

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>>3090394
The request earlier about Towa and Kanata would've given attention to two girls that don't get much.

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>>3090394
Miko has none so far

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>>3083468
>the virgin anon vs. the horny pirate
MARINE NO

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>>3060605
>ywn chug idol soup

[Anonymous No.]

Bump so this thread doesn't die

[Anonymous No.]

why are basically all of the friend stories abusive? maybe it's my fault for being a clipnigger but she doesn't seem like she would be like that at all. is it just because she refuses to appease goslings?

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>>3097095
It started in the abuse thread with a pretty well-known story by an Anon called Omelas, which then started a whole lot of other ones, some based directly on it, others not. Essentially the only people who were writing Fubuki for awhile were into the idea of abusive friend, sort of became something like tradition. There's a few non-abusive stories with her, at least - the trend of abusive Fubuki hasn't been as prevalent since the shift to more broad writing but no one's really writing her for some reason.

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>>3097095
This is basically the reason why i started writing non abusive fbk fics. I really can't see her as the abusive type.

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>>3097095
speaking as someone whose oshi is fubuki

she teases her fans pretty frequently, it's a sign of her affection. abuse fics from her perspective are just a flanderisation of that characteristic, so they don't smash my willing suspense of disbelief

conversely, fubuki is quite a mentally strong woman, one of the many traits of hers i admire. naturally, fubuki being the abusee is therefore an attractive option if you're into that.

personally i can't stand fluff but enjoy "abuse" - mostly the psychological stuff, from either perspective. i am quite uncomfortable with GFE and detest parasocial shit, and fluffy romance stories feel along the same vein

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did that one writeanon ever say if he would do the bully botan follow up to the nene and polka one or did I just miss it?

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>>3099439
I didn't, no. I got burned out on it and branched to other things for awhile, then never got back to it. I'll try to work on it after I finish up the Marine chapter of Holofantasy. Sorry for the delay.

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>>3098835
I get that. I hate gfe but the fluffy romance shit is fine imo. maybe it's dangerous for some anons who are more gosling though. even the abuse stories tend to say something about the people who enjoy them

[Anonymous No.]

Why does this thread keep almost sliding?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3103126
Writing takes a lot of time.

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>>3103126
>why does this thread keep almost sliding?
>>3103195
This

Also i feel like alot of writer anons got bored or burned out of writing so they stopped.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3105206
Or they're struggling with writer's block like me

[Anonymous No.]

I've had writers block for over a week now

[Anonymous No.]

Five Nights at Polka's

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>>3103126
There usually isn't much in the way of discussion that isn't immediate feedback. It's just people waiting for stories for posting requests.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3107069
Ok I find this interesting. I've never written horror before but i'll try my best with this.

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>>3105206
I get writers block. I can easily churn out 2/3 of a story but that last bit is rough. Plus I want to try to do ones for the girls that don't get much lovin'

[Anonymous No.]

>>3107668
This is similar to what I go through, yeah. Writing simply takes time which is why we keep accidentally falling to page 10 while Anons are either hard at work or screaming in agony as they try to finish their works. There's also probably a lot of lurkers just quietly waiting for something.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3099791
Take your time, we'll be happy to see it whenever it's finished. Keep doing what you're doing and we'll wait patiently. Nice job on Holofantasy btw, it's super interesting to follow so far.

[Anonymous No.]

...Fuck I have an idea. Pekora falls alseep mid-stream, pekomama comes in, hijacks the stream, and from chat suggestion does a "Teaching you how to cook ASMR" with a portable stove.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3113715
Or teaching you sex education with guest star Matsuri-mom

[Anonymous No.]

>>3017670
Yandere Kanata literally sending you to heaven so the two of you can be together for eternity.

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>>3105206
I just chill out until a prompt catches my eye. Prompt well has been a little dry as of late, at least for things that are up my alley.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3121229
what are prompts you'd be interested in?

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>>3115316
Desires for you turns Kanata into a fallen angel

[Anonymous No.]

What we REALLY need is pseudo-rape fics with insects subduing and laying eggs in holos

[Anonymous No.]

>>3121654
What the fuck, man

[Anonymous No.]

>>3121654
I mean, I get it, but...

[Anonymous No.]

>>3121654
Take your meds and get some help anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>3121767
>>3121964
Exactly the response I wanted. Howled with laughter, cheers.

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>>3121555
It's the kind of thing I can't really lay a finger on or I'd just write it myself. Stuff that delves into the lore of a particular Holo usually gets me interested.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3017670
Marine slips an aphrodisiac into Noel's drink and has her way with her. Flare bursts in and attacks Marine, but also gets dosed leading to a frantic threesome. The next morning they tell Marine they'll both kill her if she tries it again, but neither Noel or Flare sound particularly sincere in said threat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3124059
Amelia using time travel to steal you away from a popular girl who bullied her when in highschool. For added bonus, you two were friends during a school club.

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>>3017670
(You), a 3rd prince of a prestigious kingdom, are having a semi-arranged marriage to strengthen potential alliances between your kingdom and its neighbors. Do you choose the Candy Kingdom, ruled by the Himemori family? Or the Kingdom of Pekoland, ruled by the Usada family?

[Anonymous No.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vCXsRoyFRQE

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[Anonymous No.]

Howdy. Have a balancing question for something related to Holofantasy. Our brave hero managed to go down a secret path that leads to treasure. I've four of the things drafted, with a plan to get two of the items, but I feel like they may be a bit too strong. Should I limit it to one? Or leave how many you get up to fate? In case you were wondering, here's what (You) potentially got.

1. Powerful Coat - +5 Damage to attacks if dodged perfectly. For some reason, you want to call people 'scum' more.
2. Deadly Duelist's Ring - +5 Damage to ripostes. If riposte is a critical, add +10 instead: at the time of writing, this means if Anon is lucky enough, he could land 30+ damage in a single attack.
3. Tome of Technique: Flash Step - Once per fight, ignore a critical failure OR a failure to dodge and parry an attack by relocating behind an enemy. Force an enemy to roll a 1D4; if lower than two, the enemy simply catches the movement and the fight continues. If higher two, the enemy has no idea where you've gone, allowing an immediate attack of opportunity.
4. Tome of Sorcery: Vampiric Blade - Enchants your weapon further. For every attack that connects, heal 1D4 damage.

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>>3130458
My vote goes to letting fate decide how many, but only 1 should/could be easily identified and the others would need someone to explain or fiddling with to try and figure out.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3130458
Let fate decide. That way there is a chance (you) get all 4 of them and end up overpowered as hell, and I'm all for the power fantasy.

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>>3130396
Don't get my hope up by posting things like this anon... please... I'm already too far down the gosling hole...

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>>3126370
This sounds like a fun prompt, but I don't know shit about Luna. I can try writing an opening but I can't do anymore than that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3130458
Leave it to fate.

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>>3130458
Leave it to the whims of the dice.
Also, you could give some of the loot to your other party members. Unless Polka's just going to be hanging out back at HQ.

[Anonymous No.]

life pulse

[Anonymous No.]

Hey guys, I wrote this Suisei murder story https://pastebin.com/Gu8vn2EA.. I was wondering if there would be an interest in seeing something like this (aka something akin to "The Most Dangerous Game" where you have multiple holo's hunting you down and you have to survive the night/multiple days

[Anonymous No.]

>>3140711
Hell yeah anon. That sounds real interesting and I would love to read it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3140711
I like your style and the concept of a Holo murder hunt sounds really interesting. You have my support.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3130458
Honestly? You might want to nerf the ring a little bit, 30 dmg in a single attack is a bit ridiculous. The other items seem about right for early game, but the ring is...yeah.

[Anonymous No.]

I wanna wish all the writeranons in uni good luck with finals coming up soon

[Anonymous No.]

>>3140711
You could do something like what this thread is about

[Anonymous No.]

>>3140711
I'd be up for that. Outsmarting some holos, outrunning others.

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>>3135999

[Anonymous No.]

>>3140711
I'd be very interested in reading something like that

[Anonymous No.]

"Hahahaha, I'm NUTS! Get it!?"

[Anonymous No.]

>>3125730
This

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>>3161808
>You are just the son of a bakers when the nation of Pekoland invades your small and neutral nation.
>The officer in charge of the city you live in takes interest in you.
Is it doable?

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>>3140711
The Most Dangerous Zatsudan: Opening Night

>Gassed and kidnapped, you find yourself in an unfamiliar place...

You were a fool.

You were a damned fool.

You should’ve known that deal was too good to be true. ‘A once in a lifetime Chance’ as it was advertised. You were an avid watcher of vtubers, specifically the hololive girls. They were funny, they made you smile and laugh like nothing else in your life. It came to the point that your entire life had begun to revolve around watching their streams. So when you got an email from COVER that you had been picked for a all-paid trip with your favorite idols, you accepted with not hesitation!

But then everything went south. You went to the Hololive office and waited with the other people who had been selected for the trip. A few dozen or more fellow NEETs and vtuber enthusiasts. But as you all waited, some sorta of gas began to pour from the vents and knocked you all out. When you woke up, you were laying face first into… snow? You pulled yourself up and wiped the white dust from your coat. Wait… coat? You don't remember wearing a coat. You checked your pockets. It was all gone! Everything you had! But you had a combat knife? What the hell was happening? Looking around you saw that everyone else was waking from their induced slumber. It was pitch black so you couldn’t see much outside of the general area. But you could at least tell you were in some kind of forest.

“Good evening, everyone! A-Chan here!” you heard a voice boom. You were all startled, but even as you all turned around you could see nothing but trees and snow.

“This trip is a special one! In order to satiate our girls bloodlust, you’ve all been brought on this trip to participate in battle to the death! For three days and nights, all you have to do is avoid getting killed by our lovely, sociopathic idols! If you manage to survive, you get to pick one of them as your wife! Good luck, everyone!”

The manager's voice went silent at that. You heard one of the other scoff, breaking the unbearable silence as a smug look took to his face.

“Battle to the death? HA! There's no way my oshi would ever-”

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>>3166584
Before he could finish a loud bang was let out that reverberated throughout the forest. Faster than you could process a bullet pierced the man's head and splatted the bits of blood and brain matter across the crowd of ‘participants’. You panicked and moved away from the group while you heard the thud of the man's body hitting the snow.

“FAQ YOU!!! Minna! Everyone! FAQ YOU!” you heard a familiar high pitch voice giddily screech from a distance. Wait… was that Miko? The Sakura Miko? Another gunshot rang out. You heard the same voice begin to let out a fit of giggles as the bullets were now impacting all around you. Another body hit the ground. It seems that the time for thinking was for later. For now you needed to find somewhere safe. You ran as fast as you could away from the crowd and deeper into the forest. The adrenaline carried you as the sounds of the previous massacre slowly faded away and silence took over.

If what A-Chan said was true… then you would need a plan. Somewhere to hide? To sleep? You also had to worry about food and water on top of being hunted by the hololive girls. Your body felt tired and you decided to stop for a while. There were three days left of running after all. You decided to look through all your pockets. They gave you a knife, maybe there was something else as well? After prodding around, you found a small tablet tucked away in a pocket inside your coat. Turning it on, you began to scroll through the listed pages.

“Congratulations! You’ve survived long enough to use your holoPad! Make sure you keep this, as there's all sorts of useful information recorded here!”

Tapping through the other pages you came upon one peculiar screen.

1 of 5 Girls Encountered!:

1.Elite Sakura Miko!
2.?
3.?
4.?
5.?

There were four more killers on the loose? At least you didn’t have to deal with all fifty-two girls at once. With five, at least you had a fighting chance. Looking through the tablet again, you noted there was a map. You spent a bit figuring out where you were. Apparently this ‘game’ was taking place in some sort of peninsula. Using local landmarks, you discerned you had run north of the starting position. And by the looks of it, there would be a wooden cabin if you kept going forward! Food, weapons, shelter, all the things you needed! That would be your destination. Using your best judgement, you could get there just as dawn would break.

You put away the tablet back to the pocket where you found it and sighed. Looking back at the direction you came, you clenched your fists and steeled your resolve. Not only was your life on the line… but marrying your oshi! The thought of that would keep you in this game. You would survive not just for yourself, but for her as well! You began the long trek north, a newfound fire burning in your heart.

But you would not be prepared for the horrors that soon awaited you…

And we're off to the races! Will you survive and win your oshis hand in marriage or will you be butchered and left to rot!? Which other holos are playing in this game?! Find out soon! https://pastebin.com/YKwBBnPs

Also sorry to those looking forward to the hag-harem and aqua/manager-san fics, need to take a minute to enjoy writing some good old abuse after writing so much fluff

[Anonymous No.]

>>3166598
Hey, nice! Looking forward to more of this!

[Anonymous No.]

>>3163917
Is the officer Pekora or someone else?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3168992
Yeah, I thought it was implied.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3169627
Oh I was just a little confused because she's meant to the princess of Pekoland.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3169699
Princess can have rank in the Army. Besides,, she's more of an administrator.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3166598
It's fine to take a breather anon, we eat up everything you write so no harm or foul.

[Anonymous No.]

Made a little Nene fluff piece based on her Holofightz performance yesterday. She's usually one of the most brutal fighters, but this match was something else.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTIeu9JTxUyBUmuNaZuCDp1tNM9eOFko9hDzWxvzpaPkZcc07s8rabxQUFQXk6cD9LZmBFP3f4gzktt/pub

match timestamp:
https://youtu.be/_EjVx88AXZk?t=7189

[Anonymous No.]

>>3171726
Got a big grin, Anon. Thank you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3166598
Very exciting! I can't wait to see where this goes.

[Anonymous No.]

Oops. I was walking down the stairs, tripped, and accidently wrote a thing again.

This time staring Towa. The best angel of Hololive. School setting and Towa has been performing dastardly deeds against you. The hololive seating chart kind of inspired this.

This is one is a long one. I believe it was like 9 pages in the google docs I was using to write shit in. Kind of a lot of extra shit added into paragraphs that mentions other members. Not necessary but I wanted to add that shit in. I'm thinking the next story I might be will be a Watame fluff or maybe Miko. I feel like doing a Miko vigilante story where she dawns the mask and become Mikoler would be fun to do. Probably wouldn't be a fluff one and more of a comedy thing if I do that. Who knows. I'm flippant on what I decide so whatever. Enjoy

https://pastebin.com/3n9f51QG

[Anonymous No.]

>>3177342
I mean, I really liked the setting but fucking hell the protag is a sensitive little bitch

[Anonymous No.]

>>3177920
Aren't all high schoolers a bunch of sensitive little bitches? It's been a hot minute but I remember a lot of emo bullshit and "my life is ruined" over nothing being toss about

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>>3166598
im the one who requested the hag harem, its ok anon, the most important thing of writing is enjoying doing so. This one looks nice

[Anonymous No.]

just rename this the hololive writing general, what's the point in pretending anybody gives a fuck about shitty indies or nijiniggers, the writing archives certainly don't lie

[Anonymous No.]

peeing on matsuri

[Anonymous No.]

>>3177342
Very cute, but damn i wish Anon would give Tenshi a hug already.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3180924
That's just arbitrarily limiting, is the issue. What if someone does? Why stifle them because they aren't as popular? Doesn't make any sense.

[Anonymous No.]

Yo, anons! From what I can tell, the new story is going to clock in at about (at least) the same length as 'play in the rain and you get wet'.
What's the general opinion on here - do you want it published in multiple chapters, as I did before, or all in one go/doc?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3184033
If it's all done then throwing it out all at once is good. Multiple chapters is good if you want to help put the thread on life support with content bumps.

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>>3183977
>What if someone does
they won't, nobody gives a fuck about vtubers outside of hololive here and rightfully so, even the most popular indies and nijiniggers have 0 (zero) fics written, this isn't a bad thing but there is no point letting nijjers decide the OP and letting them feel welcome by not narrowing down the general name when nobody gives a fuck about their chuubas

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>>3184192
>Zero fics written
Here's the Honma greentext someone requested a few threads ago, for starters, if you really want to go into semantics
https://pastebin.com/66aA6AqL
There's also the Lulu WIP posted a while back that got put on the back burner for other projects for a bit that received generally positive feedback, alongside the odd request or two for Niji content showing that at the very least there's people who are interested in it, even if it's not taken since writefags are in short supply. Now fuck off. Go be a faggot somewhere else. Just because they aren't nearly as popular doesn't mean they aren't welcome here. Yes, Hololive dominates, but that doesn't mean there isn't room for other content. Don't be such a spiteful cunt that you'd literally tell potential content creators to fuck off just because you dislike the group. Thanks for the bumps though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3177342
Nice very cute work anon, but damn when (you) ignore her and she start to be a mess really like that part

[Anonymous No.]

Wake up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3180924
I think there were a few request for nijisanji.

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[Anonymous No.]

>>3180924
There’s no downside to just keeping it as all chuubas.

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[Anonymous No.]

I procrastinated and agonized over it a lot, but the Marine chapter is done. May take a small break to try and get my head back on my shoulders properly. Next chapter or two will probably be more exploratory and character-centric.

Coco keeps getting cucked a bit but her not being in the party proper made sense in the context I gave it, I hope. Marine's fight went on 17 fucking turns somehow. I liked toying with the idea of Marine being just as much of a flirty dom when given a position of power over someone as she is a barely-contained sub. I'm not sure if I'll fuck around with a Bad End with her because it'd essentially just be group /ss/ with Marine leading the charge. To be truthful, though, I'm not sure how happy I am with Marine in this - I feel like I did better by a landslide in Landlubber Lover but eh. Hopefully you enjoy it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ab_91hzpU27zwhK_DnaLFnvm0TG-viNCGDO6gI_8Qxk/edit?usp=sharing

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205176
Permissions seem to be incorrect.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205220
Y'know, I thought that URL looked fucked.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTJvr00qRTCtA7lrV7WFbgGn71j4rKbPp8dfgkvo1mOQTJf1ak5_ouOczqdKgsDkj5uVPnmQL9kVike/pub

This should work, my bad. Hit the wrong button.

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>>3205239
By the way anon, what license are you putting your Holofantasy story under? I was curious if I could have your permission to use it as the basis for the story of a game. It won't be anything extravagant, just something I'd like to make as a game-jam style personal challenge.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205375
By all means, go crazy. I was imagining a CoC-style text adventure game the other day during a break. If it inspires you to create something, be my guest. Same goes for fanfiction or whatever else set in the world - it's up for anyone to do stuff with. The only thing I'd ask for is a shoutout or whatever, maybe a link to the pastebin account that hosts the current archive. I'm excited to see what you come up with.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205176
WRITEFAG LOVE!

[Anonymous No.]

>>3204796
>>3184387
Speaking of lulu we need more lulu fics. We need her exploiting (You)r fearboner to most efficiently extract your genetic material and propagate her species.

[Anonymous No.]

>Coco, Polka, and Marine all hang out but get exceedingly drunk in the process
>Try to coax (You) into drinking as well but you refuse, say your goodnights
>They form a coalition against your virginity

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205239
Great work as usual anon, lovin this series so far

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205176
You should definitely do a Bad End for this chapter

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205176
>>3205239
Finally finished reading. Fantastic as always!

[Anonymous No.]

>started on three story ideas
>all three end up involving spanking

for fuck's sake

[Anonymous No.]

>>3027060
Do you have a link to chapter 1?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3209121
Seconding this

[Anonymous No.]

>>3225219
I fail to see the issue

[Anonymous No.]

>>3225614
in op pastebin near the bottom of "Stories I've authored"
>>3017360
>https://pastebin.com/asvcqDLL

[Anonymous No.]

>>3226049
i don't want for that to be my, like, sole thing

[Anonymous No.]

>>3226112
spanknon

[Anonymous No.]

>>3226308
maybe i should get it out of my system before i get back to writing about psychological abuse

[Anonymous No.]

>>3225699
Thirding this

[Anonymous No.]

"..haah...haaaah..cough..haah" You feel your insides burning and your legs can barely hold you up, how long have you been running? Are you still being chased?
You press your palm against the wound on your shoulder as look around, but it doesn't look like anyone is approaching. Why is this happening to you?
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A few hours ago...
"Gotta admit, wearing expensive clothes really do make you look good" you say while looking at the mirror. They might have cost you more than you'd normally spend on clothes, but it will be all worth it for today.
Why? Because today you get to meet your favorite idol, not only that, you'll get to enjoy a date with her! You got this chance because you randomly signed up for some online contest and somehow managed to win.
You look at the time and joyfully rush out the door. Today is the day. You finally get to meet her.
You showed up at the meeting place 10 minutes earlier, soon your biggest dream will come true. While anxiously waiting, all you can hear is how fast your heart is pounding.
"Heyyyy, you're Anonchama, right?" You jump up a bit when a voice calls out to you and quickly turn around, as you do, you are greeted by a smile from beautiful blode girl, it's Akai Haato, your one and only oshi.
"H-hello, yes, I'm Anon, n-nice to meet you" you quickly try to regain your composure and greet the girl standing before you.
"Nice to meet you, Anon. Well, shall we get going?" the girl says as she grabs your arm and drags you to the mall.
After a few hours of going through the stores, you stop to get something to eat. You sit down and start ordering. You both decide to order some pizza.
As you're eating, you notice something strange, "Don't like the pepperoni?" you ask the girl who for some reason is removing pepperoni slices from her pizza.
"I'm just picky about what I eat" she answers giggling a bit. Why did she order the pepperoni one then? you ask yourself, but decide to not ask.
It's already pretty late when you both finish your meals, you feel a bit sad, knowing that this wonderful day will soon end, so you decide it's time for you to gather all your courage and tell her how you feel, after taking a deep breath, you open your mouth:
"H-"
"Anonchama, will you walk me home?" the girl cuts in, gazing at you with her beautiful blue eyes.
"Y-yeah, ofcourse I will, haha" You say as you look away, you can feel your heart trying to jump out.
You walk for about 20 minutes, talking about various subjects, going from her streams, to games, to movies. It seems she too likes most of the things that you do and you couldn't be happier.
You were so passionate talking with her that you didn't even notice your surroundings, "Umm..Haachama, do you really live here?" you ask her, seeing that the streets are poorly lit here and many of the buildings look abandoned.
"Yeah, it might look scary, but I can walk around here without any worries, it looks a lot less spooky during daytime"
"I see" guess can't judge a book by it's cover...
"Anon, thank you for today, I had lots of fun"
"I-I had lots of fun too"you say blushing.
"Let me thank you, close your eyes"
"Huh?"
"Please, no looking" the girl says while looking at the ground, her cheeks a shade darker.
You immediately comply, your heartbeat once again going off the rails. You feel her get closer, the smell of her shampoo hitting your nostrils, oh she's really close. Her hands wrap around you and you feel her head to your side, oh is she giving you a kiss on the cheek?
However your hopes are put to a stop by a sharp pain in your shoulder.
You open your eyes and fall on your behind, before you stands Haachama, chewing something as blood streams out of her mouth.
"Anonchama, you promised, no looking~"
You look at your shoulder and when you see that a huge chunk is missing: "AAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaAAAAAAAAAA" youscream and start running down the street.
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You run into what you assume is an abandoned building.
You should be safe here, there's no way she has chased you he-
"Found you" you hear her voice followed by loud footsteps.
You run towards the door and grab the handle.
"Anonchama, why do you run?"
"Huh?" your hand slid off the handle, it seems it's covered in something slippery.
"Anon, you're already inside Haachama's mouth"
"Wha-?" Is all you say before something warm and moist crushes you from all directions.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3226472
fourthing this

[Anonymous No.]

>>3227649
Hot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3227649
>"Umm..Haachama, do you really live here?" you ask her, seeing that the streets are poorly lit here and many of the buildings look abandoned.
It's because you said "Haachama" anon. This wouldn't have happened if you didn't say that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3204796
Kinda curious but what is this from? I'm guessing a short comic? Do you have a link?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3227724
>farting this
haha

[Anonymous No.]

>>3206277
Koopa love.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3205239
This stuff is an embarrassment of riches, anon. Thank you for your hard work.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3230255
Ah, a jokester huh? You have 5 minutes to run before I tell Coco you made fun of Kanatas hearing.

[Anonymous No.]

A prompt: Yandere Ame goes back in time and undoes your gf's pregnancy or something like that

[Anonymous No.]

>>3228486
This one is just a two page thing.
This guy Xiel translated a few comics a while back. You can check his tweets for the original artist.
https://twitter.com/saxielsa/status/1239345533178843137?s=20

A meeting between Debi and Lulu
https://twitter.com/saxielsa/status/1239953640862908416

The fantasy tournament finals (made by the Goblin Slayer mangaka who's a big vtuber fanboy)
https://twitter.com/saxielsa/status/1237881237848481805?s=20

[Anonymous No.]

>>3232173
Lot of requests of this nature, huh?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3232173
>Remember all those times when you failed to get your gf pregnant?It was me Anon, *hic* I took all your semen right before you came inside her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3234923
>what did you do with it all?

>What do you think goes into my con-COCK-tion? *gremlin laughing sounds*

[Anonymous No.]

>>3017670
Your girlfriend Fubuki begs you to knock up her best friend Mio.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3235795
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P5N1munYDnI

>Suddenly Pekora remembered that fateful night
>The night that her best friend betrayed her trust
>Miko and Pekora are sleeping next to each other in separate futons
>Suddenly Miko whispers: "Pekora...I..."
>Pekora being a sperglord says nothing
>"I've always loved you Pekora, in fact every waking moment I lust for your bunny cunny"
>"Please let me make love to you.."
>Pekora's sperglord mind starts racing she has no idea how to react to this because she's superstraight and hates gays
>awkwardly mutters "O-Ok"
>Miko is overjoyed
>Miko opens Pekora's legs and starts eating her out
>Pekora starts moaning
>Pekora's body is enjoying it but deep down she feels this is wrong
>"Mikochi, stop. I changed my mind"
>Miko starts aggressively fingerbanging Pekora
>Miko whispers in Pekora's ear: "shhhh just let it happen, it'll feel good in a moment."
>Pekora doesn't understand why she's feeling pleasure, she's not attracted to women
>after a few minutes of fingering Pekora, Miko presses her shaved pussy against Pekora's hairless bunny cunny
>Pekora feels a wet sensation enveloping her crotch
>She realizes it's Miko's love juices
>The feeling of Miko's hot skin rubbing against her clit is making her incredibly wet too
>She looks down and the entire futon under them is soaked in their nectar
>They scissor
>Suddenly Pekora cooms
>She tries her hardest to stay quiet but lets out an incredibly load moan
>Miko is overjoyed and french kisses Pekora
>The taste of her own juices mixed with Miko's saliva make her nauseous
>Miko embraces Pekora and falls asleep next to her
>Pekora is wide awake the entire night and is disgusted with herself
>Morning comes and Miko wakes up and kisses Pekora on the cheek
>"I love you Peko-chan"
>Miko is the happiest Pekora has ever seen her
>Pekora just acts like nothing happened
>Pekora goes home and showers for 5 hours straight
>Ignores Miko's calls and discord messages for months on end
>Suddenly Miko joins Pekora's mario party game
>ALL THESE MEMORIES COME FLOODING BACK INTO HER MIND
>HEART RATE SKYROCKETS
>IT'S A LIVE STREAM FUCK FUCK FUCK FUCK
>ACT LIKE EVERYTHING IS NORMAL

[Anonymous No.]

>>3236335
Big need

[Anonymous No.]

>>3236929

[Anonymous No.]

>>3232173
Wasn't there another prompt of Amelia going back in time to cuckquean your wife because she was her bully in highschool and you were her friend in a club??

[Anonymous No.]

>>3240809
Just need a story of Amelia fixing all of (Your) problems in a Butterfly Effect style story.

[Anonymous No.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCKEeoI8zts

[Anonymous No.]

>>3240809
Still not sure on how that one would work. Is it like, going back in time to key points she knew you weren't happy with her (your wife) in to try and weasel her way into your heart after she figures out that your wife was her bully?

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>>3242247
Like I said, anon, Amelia cuckqueans the wife, by starting an affair. What's so hard to understand?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3232173
Shut up, we need more ame Zoomposting.
>IT WAS ME ANON, I GRADUATED YOUR OSHI

[Anonymous No.]

>>3242390
I really don't understand the time travel aspect, I guess. Couldn't she just do that without needing to time travel?? Or is this like, a savescumming thing to experiment and sees what works to tempt you?

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>>3205176
I definitely enjoyed it! This story you're writing is the crown jewel of this thread for me, and I really enjoyed this chapter. I get characterization can be rough, but you've got a lot of grey area to go with due to the fantasy setting and English/Jp differences, so I definitely didn't notice any issues that way. Great job!

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>>3242619
Anon, it's obvious savescumming.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3232173
I'm working on this one now. Tinkering with the concept a bit, but you've piqued my interest.

[Anonymous No.]

Here's the Yandere Amelia I promised! Obviously a little out of character since I had to change so much to make out sweet detective insane, but just chalk that up to her being a different timeline's Amelia. I call this one "The Broken Girl from the Broken World"


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It was the perfect evening to spend with your soulmate, and you knew it. That's why you were sat so comfortably on a mundane park bench, with your girlfriend nestled up against you looking up at the night's sky. It seemed like an evening so normal yet magical that it felt like it was made just for the two of you to enjoy together in your perfectly normal life. It even had those memorable little imperfections, like when you cut your thumb helping her make tonight's date night dinner and she spent a few tender moments patching up your hand. It was that moment you realized there wasn't a single girl in the world that would make you happier than your girlfriend. But there's a certain anxiety that can well up when everything is going right: things can only get worse.

It took only a minute or two from beginning to end, but the process started slowly. Your girlfriend suddenly remarked about feeling a sudden wave of coldness. You buried her deeper in your embrace in hopes of warming her, but suddenly her body grew all too stiff. Her eyes seemed to bulge out of her head as she bent over in pain, letting out an ungodly shriek that quickly went from crippling pain to inhuman, as if her voice was distorting as she wailed. Trying to stand, she struggles to make it to her feet, only for them to be taken out from underneath her in an unsettlingly literal way. One of her feet entirely disappears, while the other seems to rot into an iridescent substance like half melted lime gelatin. All the while her voice continues droning, frantically changing both pitch and speed, as if she was a cassette player desperately trying to play an opera as a child mashes the buttons, fast forwarding and rewinding her agony with glee. This is like no sickness you have ever seen, and you look on in horror, unable to do anything but hold her and try to dial for an ambulance with shaky fingers. Before you're even able to finish the call, her voice stops ringing out, and what remains of her body falls limp. Despite her loss of consciousness, the process continues on, eventually leaving you with only her clothes in a pile, her body evaporating from human to slime to nothing at all. As if this situation had not been sufficiently supernatural already, her clothes disintegrate into smaller and smaller pieces until they too vanish into the night.

Lacking a proper response to the nightmare, you howl out in pain, suffering from a despair worsened by the inexplicable terror of it. Your cries seem to catch the attention of a passerby who quickly jogs up to you, an expression of pure concern on her face.

"What's wrong? Are you hurt?" The blonde girl stretches out her hands, giving you a quick pat down and checking for any wounds. She wears a brown trench coat, short plaid skirt that has a simple white blouse tucked into it. A stethoscope hangs around her neck, which she then places on your chest. You contemplate whether she might be a med student of some kind, your mind fixating on mundane details as it desperately tries to restore your sanity. You are able to choke out an explanation that your girlfriend just died, and that she was right here just a moment ago. The rational part of your mind notes that any sane person would never believe your story, but the emotional part of your self is too busy incoherently shouting to pay it much mind.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3246289
"N-no. That can't…you shouldn't be able to remember that. Even though the timeline just shifted, you should have shifted with it already."

The girl mumbles nonsense to herself, but you are too stricken with sadness to actually comprehend what she is saying even if it did make sense. Suddenly, she wheels around on her heel, her eyes widening.

"SHIT! Chrono-resistance. The odds are 75 billion to one of you having that! Wh-what do I do!?" She looks to you with a panicked expression, though it seems she is still talking more to herself. She dumps out the contents of her purse on the street, most of it appearing to be differently colored powders or small ampules of fluid. Sifting through them, she grabs a few, and then stares deeply into your eyes.

"I'm sorry. I'm sosososososo really really really REALLY sorry. I didn't want to cause you any pain, but luck wasn't on my side today. I messed up, but I can fix this. I WILL fix this. And then I'll make it up to you. First we need to stabilize your body so we can get you to my office, okay?"

Before you can ask a single clarifying question, you are suddenly wracked with inexplicable pain. Your vision blurs and your muscles spasm as blood begins spurting from your nose, which quickly becomes a fountain. Trying to remain conscious, you stare at your clenched hands and note a curious phenomenon. The bandaid on your hand from your injury in the kitchen, already seeming like a lifetime ago, appears to be…flickering. One moment you focus on it and see a bandage, slightly reddened with a small amount of blood that seeped through, the next you see your thumb naked to the night air with no wound in sight.

The girl starts mixing compounds together into a vial while she explains your condition in a rushed tone.
"Normally when a timeline gets altered, it pulls everyone with it, and their memories and bodies shift as things change. But some people have a talent for holding back those changes. That's Chrono-resistance. But it's a talent, and you don't have much experience with it, so both your body and your memories are hopping back and forth. You didn't have this-"

The girl freezes mid sentence, almost dropping the vial as she clutches her head. Despite this, she continues on a moment later.

"…Before, so there was no way for me to know until right now. Almost there, though. Almost." She hisses a series of breathless "c'mon"s as she frantically stirs her mixture with a small stick. Satisfied, she reaches to her upper thigh, where several pre-prepared syringes sit. Most of them are full, but she pulls out an empty one and pours the mixture inside before sealing it.

"This one will stop you from tearing yourself apart." She confidently states as she slides the needle into a vein on your neck. Almost immediately the crippling pain ceases as she steadily brings the plunger of the syringe lower and lower. You can tell exactly where the mixture is going, as the relief spreads out from its source in your neck. She then reaches to her side again and pulls another syringe, this one a full one, the sea blue substance glittering in the moonlight.

"You've lost way too much blood, so this will give it back to you and ease up the pain. My special concoction, though you know that already, right?"

You muse on what exactly she meant by that as she jabs you in the shoulder with the syringe. Though the first injection stopped the pain from worsening, this seems to silence your pain entirely. With the tension keeping you propped up removed, you can feel your consciousness waning. She tousles your hair affectionately as she collects her items and places them back in her bag.

"It's okay if you need to take a nap. I'll get you back to the office just fine. Good night!"

Eventually exhaustion wins out over confusion, and you let your body drift off into sleep.

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>>3246304
You awake on a couch in a warmly decorated room, which from the looks of it seems to be a living room. Immediately across from you is a table, which is absolutely covered with medical equipment, which in turn are covered in no shortage of blood. Vaguely remembering the context which brought you here, you assume it to be your own, but physically you feel excellent. No residual pain wracks your body, though your anxiety levels still remind you that something is very, very wrong. Despite this, the blonde girl standing directly behind where your head rests on the couch seems so serene she orders on euphoric. Her presence startles you, and you jolt slightly before she puts a calm, steady pressure on your chest with her delicate hands. She then pulls out another syringe and injects it into your arm, cooing softly.

"It's okay. I know, I know. You're still scared about what happened. I can explain everything. I'll tell you a story. Our story."

"Right now, we are located in timeline 61033. But that's not where our story starts. Our story starts in timeline 705342. I was a private investigator, and you were my everything. You were the stay at home part of the dream team, and I worked cases to pay for our comfy little apartment. It looked a lot like this one, actually." She wistfully looks around the office before her.

"But there's a problem with being an investigator. Holmes only taught me how to deal with cases once the crime has already been committed, not before. So I didn't see it coming when Ina-…when the Ancient Ones decided that the stars were right to take control of Earth. Every one of those stupid little purple monsters turned into something that could devour a city in a night. Anyone who slept more than a half hour at a time would die in their sleep from fear of what they would hear in their dreams. The worst part of all is that they shattered the timeline, so I couldn't rewind, my only option was to jump away."

Though the girl before you appears to be trying to give enough exposition for you to follow her, she offhandedly mentions names and details that she seems to think you know despite this being your first meeting. But your sudden recovery from the mysterious sickness you were afflicted with leads you to believe she isn't insane. Or…not *just* insane.

"But I couldn't jump just yet. I needed to find you, bring you to a safe timeline. But I searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched and searched…." As she drones on this single phrase all emotion seems to drain from her voice, and the pinkish tint to her blue eyes seems to swell and darken, eventually becoming a dark tide of nothing but blackness punctuated only by an unnatural shade of some color that you struggle to find a word for.

Snapping out of her stupor after a few moments, she claps her hands to her mouth in horror before running over to a nearby cabinet. She pulls out a pill bottle and a filled breaker, the latter of which she swirls quickly before grabbing an eye dropper. She dry swallows a handful of pills and then administers a single drop of the liquid inside the beaker into each eye. Turning back to you, she smiles sheepishly before sitting herself down on the couch.

"Sorry. I spent so long in that place looking for you I got sick. I forgot to take my medicine because I was busy looking after you. I'm sorry if that was scary." She smiles sadly and pats your chest.

"Anyway, I couldn't find you at all, which could only mean one thing: One of the other Amelia's I signalled for help must have rescued you. But going in and out of a busted timeline like that is hard, so there might have been some complications, which is probably why she wasn't able to call and tell me where she hid you. She probably dropped you by accident when she made the hop."

You consider a much more reasonable explanation to why she was unable to find you in the midst of the hellish apocalypse she is describing, but you decide to hold your tongue. Convincing this girl that her lover must surely have died in this alternate timeline strikes you as a bad idea, as she seems to shake like a leaf even while describing the narrative where you come out of this ordeal alive.

"Time stuff can get weird, so you probably just ended up getting some memories from this world's version of you when you landed, and that got your head all fuzzy, and it made you think you were single. Don't worry, I don't mind about the cheating, I'm just happy you're alive. Besides, I took care of that bitch."

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>>3246323
Noticing your expression of horror, she immediately begins damage control.

"I did it again! I'm really sleepy, that's why. I forgot that you still have memories from this timeline instead of your real ones. That girl's several times great grandfather was a serial killer in Victorian England. He made Jack the Ripper look like a poser, but I got him arrested after his very first murder using time travel. I saved a whole bunch of people, and got rid of that girl too, since they guy never got to have kids. Now I've finally got you back, and the memory serum is almost done. With it I'll be able to fix your amnesia, and everything will be back to normal!"

You try to sit up and begin raising concerns, but you realize very quickly that your body no longer has the strength to move, nor can your tongue move in any coherent pattern. The girl worriedly looks to you before explaining.

"Shoot, I forgot to mention the injection I just gave you! The memory serum has to go right into the brainstem, so I gave you something so you don't squirm when I insert it. The memory serum took a lot of science to make too. It's some pretty fancy stuff, but basically I can use my own DNA, which came from our timeline, to overwrite all of your fake memories and give you back your real ones. Pretty impressive stuff, huh? Aren't you proud your girlfriend is ALSO a doctor?"

Panic overtakes you as you realize the severity of your current situation, but there's nothing you can do as the girl stretches, hops off the couch and goes to take a mixture from the work table and place it into another syringe. She sits you up and takes the needle in one hand, the point sitting at the back of your neck as she stares dreamily into your eyes. There is a bit of fear and something darker darting across them, but it seems like her love for "you" has drowned out most of those other feelings. Positioning you so you are sitting upright and seated normally on the couch, she straddles your lap, her folded knees on either side of your hips. She takes your chin in her other hand and brings you in for a soft yet heavy kiss as the needle pierces flesh. Your mind swims with thoughts, and as you lose consciousness again you get the distinct impression not all of them were your own, as the embrace of this stranger suddenly seems a tad familiar.
It was the perfect evening to spend with your soulmate, and you knew it. That's why you were sat so comfortably on the couch with your girlfriend, watching an episode of an anime you were re-watching together. It seemed like an evening so special yet so mundane that it felt like it was made just for the two of you to enjoy together in your uniquely perfect life. It even had those memorable little imperfections, like when she accidentally ruined the tension in a scene with her distinctive hiccup, causing the two of you to burst into laughter. It was that moment you realized there wasn't a single girl in the world that would make you happier than Amelia Watson.

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>>3246323
Noticing your expression of horror, she immediately begins damage control.

"I did it again! I'm really sleepy, that's why. I forgot that you still have memories from this timeline instead of your real ones. That girl's several times great grandfather was a serial killer in Victorian England. He made Jack the Ripper look like a poser, but I got him arrested after his very first murder using time travel. I saved a whole bunch of people, and got rid of that girl too, since they guy never got to have kids. Now I've finally got you back, and the memory serum is almost done. With it I'll be able to fix your amnesia, and everything will be back to normal!"

You try to sit up and begin raising concerns, but you realize very quickly that your body no longer has the strength to move, nor can your tongue move in any coherent pattern. The girl worriedly looks to you before explaining.

"Shoot, I forgot to mention the injection I just gave you! The memory serum has to go right into the brainstem, so I gave you something so you don't squirm when I insert it. The memory serum took a lot of science to make too. It's some pretty fancy stuff, but basically I can use my own DNA, which came from our timeline, to overwrite all of your fake memories and give you back your real ones. Pretty impressive stuff, huh? Aren't you proud your girlfriend is ALSO a doctor?"

Panic overtakes you as you realize the severity of your current situation, but there's nothing you can do as the girl stretches, hops off the couch and goes to take a mixture from the work table and place it into another syringe. She sits you up and takes the needle in one hand, the point sitting at the back of your neck as she stares dreamily into your eyes. There is a bit of fear and something darker darting across them, but it seems like her love for "you" has drowned out most of those other feelings. Positioning you so you are sitting upright and seated normally on the couch, she straddles your lap, her folded knees on either side of your hips. She takes your chin in her other hand and brings you in for a soft yet heavy kiss as the needle pierces flesh. Your mind swims with thoughts, and as you lose consciousness again you get the distinct impression not all of them were your own, as the embrace of this stranger suddenly seems a tad familiar.

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>>3246418
It was the perfect evening to spend with your soulmate, and you knew it. That's why you were sat so comfortably on the couch with your girlfriend, watching an episode of an anime you were re-watching together. It seemed like an evening so special yet so mundane that it felt like it was made just for the two of you to enjoy together in your uniquely perfect life. It even had those memorable little imperfections, like when she accidentally ruined the tension in a scene with her distinctive hiccup, causing the two of you to burst into laughter. It was that moment you realized there wasn't a single girl in the world that would make you happier than Amelia Watson.

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>>3246437
this was actually kinda wholesome, in a twisted way

nice work anon

[Anonymous No.]

Here's one. You won a contest to have a hangout with the idol of your choice! Quantities are limited, not available in all prefectures!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRcgNIoPKRIeNETCt6Y_krSYMguBleXi1HRC2J3scAmikdxqhBIGzS_e9L0ehRVeYv4hhyRbDwAm0Dd/pub

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>>3246437
I love and hate when a story has those "Fuck the fireworks factory, show me what's in the background!" moments.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3246771
Oh shit.

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>>3246437
>tfw a girl won't inject her DNA inside you
why live?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3111964
>>3099439
For you, my friends.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRTh5df1faYRNRi4QTPtBBfv_L_htfCMgjQp0paWwJsvPro-rbf1nIqTW4UdMRufIMNajQJECRbFdmL/pub

[Anonymous No.]

>>3248013
It's all fun and games until someone gets addicted.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
Bravo! I'm very happy with this conclusion, thank you so much for your work.

I'm rock hard holy shit dude

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
>Botan takes you to her home to play vidya on the promised date
>She lives with her alcoholic aunt Lamy who hits on you every chance she gets
NEED

[Anonymous No.]

Wrote a sequel to the ayame fluff/ lore fic that I wrote a while back. I believe the fic is named "An Ayame Story" in the pastebin archives.As if my writing was ever good xd.That fic was the second time I ever wrote something so I apologize if it isn't that good.
Also I just wanted a conclusive happy ending so I came up with this sequel.

https://pastebin.com/afbjHqkL

Ayame in the new hologra is way too fucking cute I swear

[Anonymous No.]

>>3256128
Fuck the message was scuffed as hell. I meant to apologize if "An Ayame Story" was mediocre and add As if my writing was ever good xd

I'm a peanut brain

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
Holy shit my dick hurts.

[Anonymous No.]

Sweet, all the writeanons doing good work

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
>filename
No worries, I'd also "forget" to pull out of Botan.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
thank you writeanon

[Anonymous No.]

The car, carrying a young woman streamer and her friend, I struck head-on. The friend, an assistant for Rushia with a Japanese company, was killed instantly, propelled through her windshield like a mattress from the barrel of a circus cannon. She died on the bonnet of my car, her blood sprayed through the fractured windshield across my face and chest. The firemen who later cut me from the crushed cabin of my car assumed that I was bleeding to death from a massive open-heart wound.
My chest was severely bruised against the steering wheel, my knees crushed into the instrument panel as my body moved forwards into its own collision with the interior of the car, but my only serious injury was a severed nerve in my scalp.
The same mysterious forces that saved me from being impaled on the steering wheel also saved the young streamer.
Apart from a bruised upper jawbone and several loosened teeth, she was unharmed. During my first hours in Tokyo Hospital all I could see in my mind was the image of us locked together face to face in these two cars, the body of her dying friend lying between us on the bonnet of my car. We looked at each other through the fractured windshields, neither able to move. Her friend's hand, no more than a few inches from me, lay palm upwards beside the right windshield wiper. Her hand had struck some rigid object as she was hurled from her seat, and the pattern of a sign formed itself as I sat there, pumped up by her dying circulation into a huge blood-blister - the triton signature of my radiator emblem.
Supported by her diagonal seat belt, Rushia sat behind her steering wheel, staring at me in a curiously formal way, as if unsure what had brought us together. Her cute face, topped by a broad, intelligent forehead, had the blank and unresponsive look of a madonna in an early Renaissance icon, unwilling to accept the miracle, or nightmare, sprung from her loins. Only once did any emotion cross it, when she seemed to see me clearly for the first time, and a peculiar rictus twisted the right side of her face, as if the nerve had been pulled on a string. Did she realize then that the blood covering my face and chest was her friend's?

The young woman was carefully steered from her car by an olive-skinned man in the midnight-blue uniform of an Arab airline pilot. A thin stream of urine trickled involuntarily between her legs, running down on to the roadway. The pilot held her shoulders reassuringly. Standing beside their cars, the spectators watched this puddle forming on the oil-stained macadam. In the fading evening light, rainbows began to circle her weak ankles. She turned and stared down at me, a peculiar grimace with tears on her bruised face, a clear confusion of concern and hostility. However, all I could see was the unusual junction of her thighs, opened towards me in this deformed way. It was not the sexuality of the posture that stayed in my mind, but the stylization of the terrible events that had involved us, the extremes of pain and violence ritualized in this gesture of her legs, like the exaggerated pirouette of a mentally defective autistic girl I had once seen performing in a Christmas play at an institution.


The draped body of the dead friend was lifted from the bonnet of my car. Seated like a demented madonna between the doors of the second ambulance, her friend Rushia gazed vacantly at the evening traffic. The wound in her right cheek was slowly deforming her face as the bruised tissues gorged themselves on their own blood. Already I was aware that the interlocked radiator grilles of our cars formed the model of an inescapable and perverse union between us. I stared at the contours of her thighs. Across them the grey blanket formed a graceful dune. Somewhere beneath this mound lay the treasure of her pubis. Its precise jut and rake, the untouched sexuality of this intelligent woman, presided over the tragic events of the evening.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3258983
What the fuck anon. I am not sure what emotion i feel

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
Fantastic

[Anonymous No.]

>>3027060
forgive me, i dont really understand tabletop games, but do you write the story first, then translate that into how it would appear in-game? or do you roll first, and write the story to describe what happens?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3256128
's good shit anon.

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>>3262837
I usually roll as it happens but sometimes I roll ahead of time. I'll finish one encounter, think about how I want things to progress from there, fill that out and then gather rolls to see what happens next. The rolls can change things on the fly which is really wacky - see when Anon almost fucking died fighting Polka because she crit

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>3256128
>ywn be Ayame's past, present and future lover

Why live

[Anonymous No.]

>>3268950
>nurse danchou drugs (You) and takes (You) home to be unga bunga'd by her and Flare

[Anonymous No.]

>>3281078
>lesbian couple bring home a man to knock them up 'naturally'
>end up keeping him around as permanent component of their relationship
That's my fetish.

[Anonymous No.]

I wish Lulu wasn't so hard to get right. She isn't even particularly hard, but I can't do reserved and quiet well.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3258983
Isn’t this a copypasta that’s been going around all the threads lately?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3286682
YES

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>>3282848
I support this as long as the man is exclusively used as a sex toy and not included in any other part of the relationship.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3252639
Need Botan gf, and a tissue

[Anonymous No.]

>>3292826
Whenever someone says they get hard/get off to the smut I write I'm not sure how to feel. I wonder if this is how actual drawing-artists feel. Either way, I'm flattered.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3286682
yeah, paraphrased from some story online

[Anonymous No.]

>>3290013
What about both girls thinking they are going behind the others back by showing actual affection to the guy but when they're all together they just treat him like a living dildo?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
Hot

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
I can get behind that. It has the same "forbidden" appeal as infidelity, but maintains the relationship.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
That's hot as fuck.

[Anonymous No.]

That outfit reveal got me craving some chicken lewds

[Anonymous No.]

>>3295803
Yeah. Took a break from it but will consider.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
W-Writeranons........please............I beg you...

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
How would this work exactly? Trying to get a good idea for it. Cold/dismissive of you when together (and in bed) but very warm and caring/apologetic for how they acted outside of it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3298551
So when all three are together the girls keep up an act of disregarding you/how you feel, only using you for the peen. But when it's one on one with either of them they're very warm and loving mixed with guilty because they think they're going behind the other girls back

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>3298665
I hope someone gets around to it. I tried, but my brain couldn't conceptualize it properly and it felt like I was forcing it. Sorry.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>3301893
>Anon hits 0 hp in the Holofantasy fanfic
>Meets Kanata and somehow gets her to bring him back kazuma style
This might remove all tension from Anon dying though and I can only give prompts since I suck major ass at writing

[Anonymous No.]

>>3302789
>Anon hits 0HP
>Gets /ss/'d and abducted to various different life paths
>Kanata is the one who helps (You) out by offering a redo
Truthfully I've been wanting to add Kanata as another housemate who is only introduced when asking why the house is so noisy since she's been cooped up in her room, but I don't want to have her in as a one-off because that'd be cheap. Yet at the same time I feel like she's one of the ones I can't write without slipping on a banana peel and fucking it up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3303424
Guardian angel, but not omnipotent, and can only res you if/when she can find you. Penalties for time spent dead.

[Anonymous No.]

[Anonymous No.]

>>3017670
Marathon sex with Fubuki, If you manage to make her cum more than a certain number of times, she becomes your wife

[Anonymous No.]

>>3306117
>Graduation from Friend to Husband requires no less than ten orgasms minimum

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494

[Anonymous No.]

>>3306117
God i hope someone picks this up

[Anonymous No.]

>multiple story ideas tumbling around in my head
>work kicking my ass so hard I have no energy to write at the end of the day
pain peko

[Anonymous No.]

>>3312512
I feel your pain, I've been struggling like this for a while.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3294494
Now that's the good stuff right there.

[Anonymous No.]

>>3312512
>>3314244
Don't worry Anons, it'll get better, r-right?

[Anonymous No.]

>>3323683
Eventually, yes.

retail is a real bitch, they know they're draining your soul so you can't do anything with your free time

[Anonymous No.]

>>3323967
>Come home every day to go straight to bed five days a week
>Too exhausted to do anything on the first day off
>Try to catch up on all the hobbies you missed out on during the second day off to try and keep up
>Repeat
Best of luck. It is a dark cycle.

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>>3323967
It will get better anons you just have to put in effort. You got this anons, not just writer anons but all anons

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>>3324777
>>3325117
I want to get better for her. I want to make her proud because I love her.

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>>3324777
>come back home at 7-8 pm every weekday
>keep telling myself to not procrastinate on fics
>procrastinate and watch comfy streams till i sleep

I swear i'm not lazy i think

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>>3325145
I approve of your shameless goslinging, manly because I hope more of those wild Botan fics will be born from it. They are a true blessing to this board.

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>>3326668
I was super happy that people liked the first one. The sequel will be a lot more relaxed and comfy, but I'll squeeze a good lewd scene somewhere in there for the horny anons. Might drop a little preview next week depending on how far I get.

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>>3326744
The Black Ops sequel, right? Looking forward to it!

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>bump limit

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>>3330385
Thread survived. Live to die another day.

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>>3328706
Yep! Chipping away at it, bit by bit.

Years ago, I never thought such a cute hag roleplaying as a lion would rekindle my love for writing.

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>>3331163
Oh anon I so totally get you. Never would I thought that internet idols of all things would spark my writing interest again.

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>>3306117
Alright the horny has taken over, i'm gonna try to write this one. Any anons wanna give suggestions before this thread dies?

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>>3331908
Have Fubuki slowly become more and more into it as the orgasms wrack up. Going from usual Fubuki but maybe a bit teasing, thinking you won't be able to keep up with her, melting down into a drooling, convulsing mess

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>>3331163
It's strange, isn't it? I stopped writing for a year or two and suddenly it's like the font of dumbass bullshit is open again. It's magical

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>>3331908
At the end of the story, have Fubuki reveal she never thought you'd be able to do it, and cannot marry you because she's already in love with somebody else - just before the reader's head is crushed by a figure declaring that this is his swamp