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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>24238821

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were zero stories posted last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

A threesome between You, Kurokami and Fubuki:>>24245709

Nina drinking the night away with Luxiem, which progresses into a drunken gangbang:>>24247743

Mio isn't just a wolf, she's a fucking werewolf!:>>24247806

Reine being curious and takes an interest in Kaela:>>24268359

Towa learns the hard way that its true; no good deed goes unpunished:>>24283398

Suisei going mad with power after waking up one day with tits:>>24313594

Two months go by, but Pekora's voice doesn't show any signs of improvement at all:>>24325439

Finana gets mistaken for a prostitute in her second outfit and gets shoved into a gloryhole:>>24334075

>> No.24345908

>>24344545
Reine-sensei sensually punishing or rewarding you based on how well you do on her quizzes

>> No.24345939

>>24340251
>I don't think them having horror elements jokingly really lends itself to horror.
I mean, I disagree. Taking a joke or offhand comment and playing it straight can make for great drama or horror, I feel. Of course, YMMV.

>> No.24347713

A nigga can't even sleep without you fuckers bungling something

>> No.24349002

>>24345939
I guess like in most things the problem would lie in executing the idea. I still stand by my initial stance that you need some sort of fear or desire to exploit in order to have a good base for a horror fic but I guess a dumb thing taken seriously can be that with good enough execution to the idea.

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>>24344594
>>24347713
wg is dying.....

>> No.24349211

>>24349002
It helps to have a fear be exploited ala GoE with your memories being exploited and people close to you dying, but the elements with which to exploit basic fears exists within the girl's abilities and in different flavors. It's all just planning.

>> No.24349218

>>24349158
already dead. AA gone and the thread can't even stay alive. no reason for this place to exist anymore

>> No.24349659

>>24349211
I suppose you are right. I mean in a way the abusive chuuba thing that started this whole thread did come from a combination of desiring their affection but fearing something hidden in that.(Alongside the inherent hotness of the concept obviously. No one was writing the abuse smut thinking about horror... Or at least I hope not, would be kind of weirdly fucked if their horror scenario somehow got viewed as being hot)
Though I suppose this does ask the question for the thread.
Anyone got horror prompts/ideas you want to brainstorm on?

>> No.24350419

>>24349659
I was thinking because of the discussion something that would exploit the niche fear of developing mental disorders (niche as in not exactly a fear a lot of people think about frequently like being murdered etc) that involved Haato and some sort of corrupting presence around her, but that's only a very barely thought out concept off the top of my sleep-deprived head. As much as it's played for laughs I still think her insane schizoid nonsense has a lot of really good potential, but I'm weak to stuff like that to begin with, I guess, so bias exists.

On the EN side of things, weird scary shit is definitely more prominent, at least in memory. The example provided earlier with Fauna turning people into fucking trees is very much a terrifying concept, at least to me. Rushia WOULD have been a good candidate for exploiting the fear of living past all your loved ones if done in a subtle way (an interaction with Rushia goes well until you realize one day years later that while everyone else around you has begun to show signs of aging you're still in your mid 20s, only to realize that as it goes on you're going to have to watch everyone you love or care for die), but y'know, that shit happened and now they've been isekai'd into a cat. A lot of good horror, in my opinion, doesn't just rely on 'HOLY SHIT LUNA HAS A GUN' as was already discussed earlier by >>24340251. Horror in writing has its strengths primarily by sticking you with ideas that unsettle you and fester for awhile. An example off the top of my head would probably be and I don't care how much flak I'm going to get for this fuck you is the ending to Stephen King's Revival, which still lives rent free in my head five+ years after finishing it by building up the entire book with the question of "What happens after you die?", a common question that almost everyone has thought about in the past and then giving an incredibly grim answer.

This sort of turned into a rant about horror stuff but it's something I'm passionate about, I guess. Horror in writing, while gore and stuff is fine, is really good at picking at stranger, more esoteric fears. Being forgotten, losing yourself, all that. You could probably do a darker take on the Marine with Alzheimer's fic from (You)r perspective and it'd make at least one person recoil in fear and worry about their future.

>> No.24351302

>>24350419
>Rushia WOULD have been a good candidate for exploiting the fear of living past all your loved ones if done in a subtle way (an interaction with Rushia goes well until you realize one day years later that while everyone else around you has begun to show signs of aging you're still in your mid 20s, only to realize that as it goes on you're going to have to watch everyone you love or care for die), but y'know, that shit happened and now they've been isekai'd into a cat
...
Honestly if writing Rushia isn't taboo to you this still sounds like it could work. Especially since now real life has provided a spicy ending of (You) outlive everyone even your necromancer master but before you can move on a certain cat comes back insisting she knows you. Now it's a fucked up reincarnation romance or more likely if you play it for horror a story about a yandere cat chasing you through her nine lives.

>> No.24351621

>>24349002
>I guess like in most things the problem would lie in executing the idea.
True. Honestly, bad ideas are rare, bad executions are far more common.

>>24350419
Haachama is definitely fertile ground for that sort of thing.

>good horror, in my opinion, doesn't just rely on 'HOLY SHIT LUNA HAS A GUN'
>Horror in writing has its strengths primarily by sticking you with ideas that unsettle you and fester for awhile
I can't agree hard enough. That's why I brought up Fauna. I mean, she's warm and comforting, she's Mother Nature. She'd never do anything to hurt you. And then she goes and turns you into a tree, for your own good. It's kind of the idea the overly-controlling, smothering authority figure taken up to 11, which is one of the things King did in Misery. "You can't be trusted to make the right choices, so you won't make any. Ever. Again." But rather than going the parasocial angle, doing it with Fauna is more body horror focused.

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>>24351621
That reminds me of pic related I saw on twitter recently which had the caption

>"the weirdest thing just happened...you just got some free sample tea from this nice flower lady and now some leaves are sprouting from your hands...strange "

>> No.24351923

>>24351302
You could also play it off as Rushia in disguise so that you don't recognize her as the person who most likely put some sort of curse on you, since my understanding of MN is that she's essentially the fucking same

>> No.24352448

>>24349659
>would be kind of weirdly fucked if their horror scenario somehow got viewed as being hot)
I mean, erotic horror is a thing.

>> No.24352452

>>24351923
No she's definitely much more unhinged as Mikeneko. I wouldn't put it past her to finally go off the deep end and start doing amateur porn one day after another mental breakdown.

>> No.24352650

>>24351865
>it's getting harder to move. your body feels 'rigid' somehow
>your joints have started to make odd creaking noises when you move
>your neck feels itchy. as laborious as it is to reach up and scratch at it, you can't stop yourself
>one day you scratch too hard and accidentally tear the skin
>there's bark underneath
>what's happening to you...?

>> No.24352976

>>24349659
Dumb idea: Dream Quest of Unknown Kadath, but the abomination is replaced with the V-Tuber version: Nyanners.

>>24352452
I doubt it, given that Rushiagate was caused partially because she was afraid people might think she wasn’t “pure.” Going from that to showing off the lack of it is one hell of a leap.

>> No.24353045

>>24351865
That "Return to Nature" poster is incredibly menacing in this photo

>> No.24353323

>>24352448
I could never find a good example of erotic horror.
Closest thing I can remember is Monster Girl Encyclopedia having really fucked up early fan translations that made the monsters and the world way more darker than it was supposed to be due to fan translators misunderstanding the exaggerations made for effect into being literal. Which made the entire setting be way more grimdark than intended.
>>24351621
Honestly a pure horror version of that Fauna takes in people's life energies before turning them into trees concept does seem like it would have potential. Especially if it's used as a twist after lulling the reader into thinking it would be fluff.
>Haachama
Honestly I think that one at least has an explanation for why no one's really made much in the way of horror in that vein since I'm pretty sure even the hardcore haatons got bored of haachama horror.

>> No.24354534

>>24353323
Well, Haachama horror is played out by Haachama's own hand. It's her story that she finished and the concepts brought up were given closure. There's not much you could add that wouldn't be treading familiar ground if you ask me. The best would be to take the concept, (cute vtuber is not what she seems) and extrapolate it to someone else, (eg Fauna).

>> No.24355972

>>24353323
>I could never find a good example of erotic horror.
I’ve read some good ones in the past. Want a link?

>> No.24356245

>>24355972
Sure.
I could always use more inspiration/ shit to steal ideas from.

>> No.24356672

>>24353323
>Honestly a pure horror version of that Fauna takes in people's life energies before turning them into trees concept does seem like it would have potential. Especially if it's used as a twist after lulling the reader into thinking it would be fluff.
This literally already is a story that everyone wrote off because muh unsexy

>> No.24356853

>>24356245
https://mcstories.com/Gospel/index.html
Give this one a try.

>> No.24356901

>>24356672
I'm going to be honest with you I wrote off/don't like that story because it was too unfocused on whether it wanted to be smut or horror and couldn't make it so that it mixed together well.
Like I'd still read it if the author wrote more since I'm at least interested in the plot they're making but the smutty aspects are really half-baked while the horror aspects are too out of focus.

>> No.24357120

>>24356901
What story was this?

>> No.24357264

>>24357120
Deer Season
https://archiveofourown.org/works/37554799/chapters/93735385
It's honestly fine but the aspects of horror and smut it tries to mix in aren't too well implemented despite that I do enjoy how it reads.

>> No.24357368

>>24357264
I get the name and all, but it honestly makes me think of Haruka first.

>> No.24357807

>>24344545
The Doom Slayer continues to rip and tear his way through Hell, and finally enters Satan’s inner sanctu... WHY ARE THERE RABBIT PLUSHIES EVERYWHERE!?!?!?

>> No.24357953

>>24351923
I mean in fairness of the one Miguel Gato fic that we have, i.e that unnamed one from two threads back, the fic basically treats MN as a more unhinged rushia under a new name and form.

>> No.24358430

>>24357953
Is Michael Cat any different than Green Whore?

>> No.24358904

>>24358430
She honestly hasn't streamed enough to show how different she is from her previous persona.
Current assumption is pretty much she's just rushia without someone to tard wrangle her.

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>>24358904
>she's just rushia without someone to tard wrangle her.
Good god how terrifying

>> No.24360800

Oh hey the main archive hit 100k views.
We had a pretty good run in all honestly.

>> No.24361081

>>24360800
yup, did okay. everything comes to an end though

>> No.24361316

why does this general have dedicated antis?

>> No.24361548

>>24361316
Anon, only the most autistic are ever attracted to fanfiction. That's why every fandom usually has one fic that for some godforsaken reason is an order of magnitude larger than every other fanfic in its fandom.
This is pretty universal, even the women that write fanfics inevitably have some weird high concept Alternate Universe shipping shit in their fandoms.
Fanfiction just attracts the weirdest people.

>> No.24361737

>>24361316
where are the antis?

>> No.24362285

>>24361737
Doomposters trying to push "/wg/ is dying" every few posts. They've been at it over half a year now, where have you been?

>> No.24362430

>>24362285
oh, i see. another man's shitpost and all that.

>> No.24362846

>>24361316
doesn't every general have at least one dedicated anti?

>> No.24362907

>>24361316
No moderation

>> No.24364038

>>24359083
How sexy*
No management to stop her! Mikeneko pussy photos in DMs!

>> No.24364349

>>24364038
There's something sexy about Mikeneko becoming an amateur pornstar or slut after graduating. It's like rrat Ayame.

>> No.24364391

>>24364349
Sorry not graduated. Terminated. A fic where she fell off the deep end and became the very thing she tried to deny would be great

>> No.24364615

>>24364349
Honestly can't see it, like I get why it would be hot but a lot of the appeal for rrat!ayame was the inherent comedy and 'gap moe' of ayame being an absolute stereotype of a whore. Mike kind of needs more to distinguish herself outside of being 'formerly known as rushia' if you want that same effect.
Though I'm not gonna lie something like >>24364391 would probably be really hot as a moral degeneration fic. I could see it being a slow descent into her becoming that 'manipulative whore' rrat characterization that came about from discussions at the time of her getting fired. Maybe with a start of it being ambiguous that maybe she was innocent before it slowly progresses into her fall with her losing everything as she gets devoured by pleasure.

>> No.24364742

Sluts are so fucking hot... I have no idea why, they just are.

>> No.24364943

>>24364742
It's the fantasy anon, it's like with yanderes and menheras. You know it would be a bad idea to go for them but fantasizing about it makes your dick hard imagining what you'd do or what would happen.
I fucking love sluts edited with tattoos, but fucking hate that the only people that do that are blacked or bleached edits.

>> No.24365520

>>24364943
There was a bona fide slut I knew in high school; dressed like one, acted like one, etc. I have yet to find anything I want to fuck more, she was unbelievably hot. Too bad I was shy as fuck back then and didn’t make a move.

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>>24364742
They are, but only if they're also kind. I'd absolutely destroy the slutty feesh, but wouldn't touch Vei with a ten-foot pole because she's an asshole.

>> No.24366339

>>24366169
What, you wouldn't hatefuck her?

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>>24366339
Hatefucking isn't for me. If I'm going to fantasize about fucking a cute slut, I'd rather actually like her. That said, I won't kink-shame.

>> No.24366615

>>24366169
Feesh would probably make fun of my small dick, I ain’t into that.

>> No.24366648

>>24366615
She may be an admitted size-queen, but she's not Risu.

>> No.24366674

>>24366648
true, feesh actually pulls the numbers

>> No.24367042

>>24366339
NTA but I can't untie sex from a romantic relationship. I still find the idea of having it with a hooker or a slut repulsive. Nevermind actually having sex with someone I explicitly hate in a context other that fantasy rape.

>> No.24367421

>>24367042
That's a shame, dude. There's so much great sex to be had outside the confines of a relationship. Don't get me wrong, sexual gratification from intimacy is a powerful aphrodisiac, but so is no-strings-attached sex.

I can't say I've ever hatefucked someone though, no. I don't even know how it would work in real life (without being rape) - I think it might exist solely in fantasy.

>> No.24367663

>>24367421
I blame the media and the upbringing for this. Now the only thing to remove my oneitis(es) is physical removal of the corresponding part of the brain with the aid of 7,62

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What are you working on writeanons?
Bonus Question: What are some ideas you've had that you really don't want to make.

>> No.24368367

>>24368268
Turning my fictional fox daughter into an idol slut/ having her hire some men to mindbreak Fubuki so that she can have you all to herself.

>> No.24368563

>>24368367
Honestly I'd fucking love to read that. Absolutely love reading fucked up shit with an emotional edge.

>> No.24368633

>>24368268
Trying to relax.
So many ideas which I know is so far beyond my skill that even attempting to work on them is depession.

>> No.24368748

>>24368367
I, too, would greatly enjoy reading that.

>> No.24368754

>>24368633
What kind of ideas are those?

>> No.24368821

>>24368268
>some ideas you've had that you really don't want to make.
What do you mean? As in a really bad idea that you randomly thought up of that you’d hate to write?
Well I once had an idea for a comedy NTR story where (You) go around meeting a lot of chuubas throughout our your life and falling for each and every one of them only to get cucked because the men in video games come to life. For example Gura and Dante, Pomu and Sam, Fubuki and Cliff, Pekora and Raiden, etc.. Would be funny but NTR in any form just isn’t for me.

>> No.24369414

>>24368821
Honestly this reminds me of a dumb idea I once had for a loosely connected series. Basically the first 3/4ths of the fic is a super fluffy scenario with a chuuba that's created specifically to get the reader to lay down their guard, then the last fourth of it hits the reader with NTR that ends with You running away, with hints dropped about another girl
It then continues with the next girl in the chain, repeating the process ad nauseum. The purpose of the series of course being to create a bunch of suprise NTR fics.
Never going to write it of course since the format seems doomed to suck having to balance doing it in a series. Like I know PD;PT managed to have a formulaic series work but I'm reasonably certain I'd get tired of writing it unless I make it a schizo plot about cucking yourself.

>> No.24369923

>>24369414
I also feel like the reader would catch on at latest the third time and from there it would probably become predictable and you'd know each girl is just there to cuck you.

>> No.24371270

>>24368268
>Working on
Hopefully something again soon. It's been 2 weeks since I've done anything on the pretense of not forcing myself at gunpoint.
>An idea you've had that you really don't want to make
Sonic Adventure 2 Sonic vs Shadow shitpost but with 2 chuubas who look very similar. It's stupid and only appeals to my autism.

>> No.24371423

>>24371270
I have never played a Sonic game in my entire life but I would love to see that.

>> No.24371439

>>24369923
Yeah, in all honesty thinking about the concept I'm pretty sure there's two ways to take it. Either fully lay into the shock fic aspect and make it about getting chain cucked... which I'm reasonably certain only the Netorasefag would honestly enjoy; or go full fucking schizo plot with it... which I'd genuinely only do for something I'd enjoy writing and this concept doesn't seem like it.
>>24371270
AA?

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>>24371439
How the fuck did you know? Yeah, I just got home. Slapping the archive into shape as we speak. Not like I ever left all, but y'know.

>> No.24371728

What perfume would Ayame wear to hide the scent of ojisan cum?

>> No.24371819

>>24371728
Essence of Suipiss, drawn directly from the source

>> No.24371860

>>24371491
I'm pretty sure you talked before about not forcing yourself to write out the matsuri chapter, the similar wording made me connect the dots as it were.
Also I'm pretty sure you missed archiving that MikeNeko short fic from two threads back.
>>24371728
Yours, not for any reason except to fuck with you.

>> No.24371921

>>24371860
I thought they didn't want it archived because it was them just practicing dialogue and asking for feedback?

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>>24371860
>Yours, not for any reason except to fuck with you.
That is a brilliant fucking idea. Not what I was initially after but I will be using this. Thank you my friend.

>> No.24372104

>>24371921
eh, I don't mind it being archived, just thought it may have been too short for it to be archived

>> No.24372364

>>24372104
I'll grab 'er then, standby.

>> No.24374005

>>24371819
>Purified and concentrated Suipiss smells strongly of apples but with very very slight acrid undertones

>> No.24375253

>>24368754
Multichapter things or even going beyond having THREE characters in a scene without devolution towards floating head disorder.
Of course I write outlines and shit and when I get to the next mark on the list I've gone so off course that the tracks aren't a little misaligned they're barely in sight

>> No.24375704

>>24375253
>floating head disorder
That's a new term to be afraid of

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>>24368268
>working on
Detective story
>bonus question
plane and tank autism

>> No.24376316

>>24375704
It's more that characters lose any details of actions and behavior and could just be static portraits set on a screen just saying things with no noticeable changes to anything.

>> No.24376501

>>24375253
>Multichapter things or even going beyond having THREE characters in a scene without devolution towards floating head disorder.
Anon... you're not going exactly going to get better at doing those things if you don't even try.
As embarrassing as it is to fail at doing something you're not gonna improve if you don't risk it and try writing it out.

>> No.24376759

>>24375253
>floating head disorder
I always saw it called floating head syndrome.

If you want to fight it, I'd suggest describing their body language first and foremost. Beyond that, work on character voicing; the authors who are really good at that can make clear who's speaking without saying it.

>> No.24377475

>>24368268
catching Suisei masturbating as your first time meeting her as her new manager. I'm planning to lean more in romance and plot instead of straight up smut.
>Bonus Question: What are some ideas you've had that you really don't want to make.
Crossovers with bunch of different games and such, it'd be nice do but also seems like a massive pain the ass.

>>24375956
>plane and tank autism
One day we will have an Ace combat-esque fic and it will be beautiful.

>> No.24378584

>>24377475
>Crossovers with bunch of different games and such, it'd be nice do but also seems like a massive pain the ass.
Honestly I think chuuba crossovers with games and other stuff kind of has the same weird problem as a crossover fanfic made of a gacha game with a weak setting but strong characters and something else with a stronger setting.
Where I'm reasonably certain the only plot that you could conceivably make is either throw character/chuuba into the setting isekai style and hope a good plot comes out of it, or try your hand at a fusion fic and see if it doesn't crack at the seams before you can tell your story.
Though honestly chuuba isekai sounds like something dumb I'd read.

>> No.24379047

>>24378584
I'd love to see a Hololive x Sonichu crossover fic.

>> No.24379297

>>24379047
Yes this idea is awesome, especially it it went balls to the wall with them breaking chris-chan out of prison.

>> No.24379738

>>24375253
>floating head disorder.
I don't think I've ever had a problem with this, just throw in the occasional action that a character does like "she says, shifting uncomfortably on her feet" or "she mumbles as she adjusts her tie". Obviously don't do it too often because that'll create too much noise but enough to paint a picture.

>> No.24379987

>>24379738
Yeah pretty much this, as long as the reader can keep track of who's talking and the dialogue that's occuring is interesting enough the characters just talking and doing nothing isn't necessarily a bad thing.

>> No.24380106

>>24378584
Given the "reincarnation in another world" thing, isn't Kiara already an isekai protag?

>> No.24381089

>>24344545
Having a nice fluffy date with Laplus that's stalked by holoX making sure you don't fuck up.

>> No.24381184

How hot would it be to fuck a phoenix? Like logistically, would she be able to control her temperature and not severely maim the one she is having sex with
> someone is trying to rape Kiara
> dick is just gone on entry
> without pain - the nerves died faster than any sort of pain impulse escaping them

>> No.24381392

>>24381184
Her insides would probably be like a hot sauna if she keeps control. Her tongue would be similarly warm. Eating her out or kissing her would be an exercise in endurance.
You'd probably have to drink more water than usual to replace all the extra sweat you'd perspire just by being in such close contact.

>> No.24381424

>>24381184
Unless all of her clothing is made of Nomex, I'm guessing she can control how much heat she gives off.

>> No.24381701

>>24381184
That's rape. She'd probably fucking vaporize you. Actual sex? She can 100% control how much heat she goes off.

>> No.24382472

>>24381184
I've read a ton of kiara fics, some authors make kiara's flames to be harmless unless she wants to hurt her partner. In others it's literally like fucking a oven and the partner ends up with multiple burns. In the kiara futa fics she ends injecting boiling cum into any girls, multiple descriptions of how hot the phoenix cock is

It basically *boils* down to the preferences you have for the story. I like the idea of phoenix sex increasing on temperature the longer it goes

>> No.24382683

what's the hottest work you've ever read here?

>> No.24382697

>>24382472
Sounds hot

>> No.24382809

>>24382683
FoS, ¥15000 is ¥15000 could've been great if it continued, Matsuri's Baby Carrot...I'm noticing a pattern here.

>> No.24382871

>>24382809
All of those works have dicks involved...

>> No.24383657

>>24382472
>kiara futa fics
i need a source anon

>> No.24384005

>>24383657
https://archiveofourown.org/works/33810478/chapters/84052978
https://archiveofourown.org/works/37911586

>> No.24385247

>>24382683
definitely "that's the way fubuki crumbles"
we need more nigger rape in the archive

>> No.24388499

Sometimes I think the archive is very tame aside from the same 2 stories someone keeps bringing up and then I reroll to find that aqua centaur fic. weird thought process must have gone behind that one

>> No.24389368

>>24344545
Gura shrinking you down to the size of a northern prawn and crunching you beneath her foot

>> No.24389922
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24389922

There's sometimes talk and stories about loli versions of vtubers, but what about the reverse?
Young women being turned into hags and cougars?

>> No.24389961

>>24344545
Shion shrinking you down from a big man into a cute little shota so you no longer have a physical advantage over her

>> No.24390157
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>>24389922
I feel like it'd be kind of lame because we don't have much in the way of loli fics as is, though in a vaccuum I think the idea could be good.

>> No.24391025

>>24389922
>>24389961
>>24344545
shion uses her magic to absorb your height and strenght, turning you into shota while she becames a hag

>> No.24391333

>>24382683
Lies come to Light remains a gold standard for good ryona with its use of emotions giving it such great impact.
Festival of Sensations, what can I say about this that hasn't already been said? Unironically one of the best works of smut produced here.

>> No.24391484

>>24389922
Turning a young fertile idol into a hag and see how the depression sinks in when she realizes she is too old to be an idol and a mother

>> No.24391700

>>24391025
This but it also makes you naive and trusting in this strange onee-san in front of you.

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24391941

I found these new audios for cgl stuff and I'm going to try to incorporate those ideas into Building Block Doll. So many good ideas. Look forward to it. I'm super inspired now.

>> No.24392062

>>24382683
I'm biased because Suisei is my oshi and I'm ass man so I gotta say High Density Comet. Honorable mention to Petting your Fox.

>> No.24392094

>>24392062
>high density comet

I like it just from the title kek.

>> No.24392132

>>24391484
>Raping Shigure Ui's dusty womb and making her an actual mother after turning her into a hag.

>> No.24392245

How autistic do you recommend the lore for a multi-chapter story should be?

>> No.24392325

>>24392245
it's your story, you be the judge. It won't be my fault when you cringe later about how needlessly autistic the lore got

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>>24390157
I see it as a case by case thing. Some girls would be interesting to see aged up, and some aged down.

>> No.24393340

I really need some futa fics, possibly futa on male

>> No.24393527

>>24381184
Ok near me out: the fire is constantly damaging you but healing you at the same time, putting you in a constant state of burning without dying.

>> No.24393568

>>24393527
So something like Agni from Fire Punch?

>> No.24393718

>>24393568
No clue what that is, I was just reminded of the kiss from that one story about kiara taking you prisoner in world war 2. How’s that coming along anyway?

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>>24393718
Really nigga?

>> No.24393946

>>24393854
Bro I don’t know what I don’t know.

>> No.24394697

>>24393340
shoot some prompts then

>> No.24395086

>>24394697
Fubuki being a good friend and helping you practice taking Mio's red rocket via training your ass with her fox cock.

>> No.24396109

>>24391941
Eren lost
/qa/ lost

>> No.24396113

>>24392062
>High Density Comet
Still surprised this got as good reception as it did, I'd never written an extended sex scene before and rushed the rising action.
I have other fetish shit to be doing first, but what specifically about it appealed to you? Got any prompt suggestions in a similar vein? Kinda wanna try and make a more refined version of the same general type of scene.

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>>24393340
>>24394697
I really wanna see something where like, Choco is teaching Towa how to use demon magic to give herself honka donka badonas.
But an accident occurs that gives her absolutely huge tits and Choco a big throbbing cock. And they gotta have sex to release the energy from their bodies.

Alternatively, it could be that Choco transforms herself intentionally because she wants test Towa out.
Like she acts all strict about teaching her the proper techniques to giving paizuri. Not stopping until she's succeeded at making her blow her load.

>> No.24396878

>>24389922
Sounds like Matsuri's worst nightmare.

>>24391941
cgl?

>> No.24396952

>>24396113
I'm not the best at articulating stuff like this but I pretty much liked everything. The interactions before hand, the supreme affixation on her ass along with the descriptions and the sweet after-care. It all comes together to make something absolutely wonderful.
As for prompt suggestions in a similar vein, I can think of doing such things with different girls. Kiara is my top pick but I certainly wouldn't mind seeing Suisei again.

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>>24390157
I just want more hags. There's not enough variety yet.

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>>24393718
It's chugging along. Kind of on the back burner so I can finish my year anniversary fic in time, though my hours at work have moved around so I have less free time to write so its been slow

>> No.24403766

>>24396878
>Sounds like Matsuri's worst nightmare
I dunno Matsuri waking up with a sexy bdoy with tits one day sounds like a dream for her.

>> No.24404517

>>24399345
I mean, how do you define hag?

>>24403766
For herself, maybe, but where other loli's are concerned... youtube.com/watch?v=vM-3rq6vZds

>> No.24404691

>>24368268
Feeling extreme withdrawal from lack of Koyori anal brain drain, so I've been halfheartedly scrambling together an outline. I'm not sure I could best do it justice, but if no one else steps up to the plate, I might put it together eventually

>> No.24404844

>>24404691
>feeling withdrawal from something you've never experienced

>> No.24404845

>>24404691
>Koyori anal brain drain
I can think of several ways to interpret that, and don't know which one is intended.

>> No.24405099

>>24404844
The hornyposts putting forward the idea were enough
>>24404845
think this was the first thread it popped up >>22159541 , happened a few times since

>> No.24405115

>>24404691
I'm actually curious, what the fuck did you mean by anal brain drain

>> No.24405542

>>24405099
is turning someone into a retard with your dick a fetish?

>> No.24406911

>>24405542
if some guy wanting to be treated as an egg sac by spiders is a fetish then fucking someone stupid definitely is, and much milder in comparison

>> No.24407014

>>24405542
Mind break/corruption is a popular fetish, yes

>> No.24407033

>>24405542
Yes, actually.
Intelligence Drain and bimbofication are fetishes.
t. /d/tard

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>>24404517
Something like a mix of physical and mental maturity + desperation?
At least I think that's why hags are hot.

Though with someone like Kiara, it's definitely leaning more toward desperation.
She really suits this kinda high-strung character that tries to present herself as mature and professional before the cracks show.

>> No.24408004

>>24406911
I wish we had a spider chubba so I could write some good horror egg sac fic. I mean i think there is one tsunderia spider girl, but she seems too cute for that. I could only write a fluff about watching star wars with her

>> No.24408403

>>24400088
>so I can finish my year anniversary fic in time
>in time
Anon I...
Jokes aside I’m looking forward to reading your take on it.

>> No.24409535

>>24405542
i enjoy corruption of many sorts. limiting it to intelligence/sluttiness is fairly tame

>> No.24410433

>>24405115
It was a prompt and greentext from the same thread that >>24405099 linked. In short the concept is Koyori makes an Anal Lube Aphrodisiac for use in anal sex that works way too well and makes a drooling retard after getting fucked repeatedly by (You). The concept has cropped up a few times again but outside of a few greentexts non one has really picked it up to write as a fic.

>> No.24413939

>>24382683
Biased since my oshi is Roboco, but Robophilia. If bias aside, it'd have to be "Unnamed Lui Oneshot" , that shit awakened something in me

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>>24408403
Oh, sorry no I meant the anniversary of me posting fics here. I'm writing a sequel to the first fic I wrote here

>> No.24414318

What's the chuuba equivalent of blue methamphetamine? I was thinking an idol prostitution ring or something but that's not nearly as easy to make sympathetic as selling drugs.

>> No.24414341

>>24414137
That’s actually a good idea. Too late for me but a sequel to one of my really old works might be something I want to write.

>> No.24414488

Got a favorite author? Who and why?

>> No.24415009

>>24414488
this question can only end badly.

>> No.24415213

>>24414488
I don't even know the authors' names I just call them by what they wrote (i.e "author of "Slowly")

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>>24415009
Yeah that's why I'm not gonna answer it, also it's kind of hard to pin down a lot of authors anyway

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>>24414488
My favorite author is You, the anon reading this.

>> No.24415559

>>24414488
me
i write the stuff i most want to read

>> No.24415753

>>24415486
A-Anon...

>> No.24416065

>>24410433
>non one has really picked it up to write as a fic.
I wonder if it's because of the anal, don't see that many stories with that

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>>24414488
Not really. I like all of the authors here for different reasons.
Except the authors that only write futa.
Fuck futafags.

>> No.24418375

>>24414318
>Someone's actually making chuuba breaking bad.
Based.
Though to actually answer your question you need to think of it in terms of how it serves the story you want to tell.
Blue meth in breaking bad is an illegal substance that the main character can make better than anyone else. The key aspects here are illegality, and better quality.
So I think it absolutely needs to be based on who your main character is as it needs the X-factor coming from them that makes whatever illegal thing they make have such better quality than anyone else.
I can't really think of any one thing that's universally applicable, unless it's something like those personal messages rushia allegedly sent to her biggest donors. Though that's more grey line against the company rules not against the law.

>> No.24418787

>>24407971
there's something poetic about a phoenix trying to cope with old age
probably tries to convince you that she's technically only a few days old after her last rebirth

>> No.24419004

I wanna smash Flare while Noel watches us

>> No.24419152

>>24419004
and then she smashes you

>> No.24420051

>>24419152
With a mallet?!

>> No.24420418

>>24420051
yeah definitely
https://twitter.com/MakinaKid/status/1500690277186605061/photo/1

>> No.24420592

would the jannies hit me if I wrote a fic involving Mikeneko and Kson

>> No.24420735

>>24420592
no. both have their own threads...actually i haven't checked mikeneko's since her debut so maybe it doesn't exist rn but still
i doubt jannies even know this place exists

>> No.24421097

>>24420592
Why would they?

>> No.24421599

>>24420592
Not really, MN and Kson are both vtubers so there's nothing to bonk you over.

>> No.24421994

>I can't really think of any one thing that's universally applicable
That's what kind of ends up being the problem, right? (You) drag post-graduation Rushia into a criminal hellworld where you both make tens of millions and live it large, which is cool and all but all of a sudden interacting with (getting revenge on) other chuubas doesn't really make much sense because you make more laundering Kson's yakuza money in a month than all of Hololive is worth. It's left me stumped so right now I just have a bunch of cool setpieces in my head that aren't quite going anywhere.

>> No.24422043

>>24421994
Gah, damn, meant to reply to >>24418375.

>> No.24422271

>>24421994
This Uruha "If I kill myself I want you tell everyone what I've been saying" Rushia we're talking about, right? And if this is in the vein of Breaking Bad, it'll very quickly stop being about the money anyway.

>> No.24422431

>>24405099
I still like the idea of the HoloX birds attempting to assassinate (YOU) for getting too close to the girls

>> No.24422618

>>24421994
Yeah the blue meth equivalent probably doesn't actually exist because the parallel of it being a shitload of money but peanuts to what the actual establishment has really doesn't work unless you scale down the money to something comical like a tens of thousands of dollars since the main vtuber industry isn't actually that large.
Suppose you could for purposes of narrative "scale up" the industry and make it so that even if they're making millions laundering Yakuza money it's still peanuts to what they were making before.

>> No.24423714

>>24422271
This. Money quickly becomes secondary.

>> No.24423978

>>24344496
Say, Can You See? Chapter 7

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTb1xa9dxEoX2hooYRO-0o2BSKf7HTMWvphDpH5Q4J3v_Qx2hMb4p9J1U9QSPBzCUPj8FzeIGvvmyeL/pub

Tags: Shion, Okayu, Korone, sfw, fluff

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24425778

Don't die on me just yet.

>> No.24426195

>>24425778
Took a nap. I'm not fired, right?

>> No.24426613

>>24423978
I feel like I comment this every time this story gets an update but goddamn do you have a great narrative voice that is just a joy to read through. Honestly have no clue where the plot is headed other than that I'm reasonably certain the story up to now is sort of foreshadowing his future loss.
Either way, I really like how this story is written and what's happening is really compelling

>> No.24426684

>>24423978
I was thinking when the next chapter for this was coming and here it is. Great job as usual, it always an interesting and entertaining read. Can't believe Trump put a little fear in me when he was talking. Also I really can't tell what's gonna happen next, is Tom really leaving for New York?

>> No.24427173

>>24426613
I don't want to spoil anything but let's just say the outcome of that event is the be all end all of the story. Having little short stories of the MC interacting with the girls cannot go on in perpetuity so it has to come to an end at some point. It won't be a very long story and if I can work it out in my mind, I very well may do a part 2 if I can find an equally restrained point A to point B for the second part as well.
>>24426684
Lets just say there are Holos on the other side of the ocean that I could make a story about too

>> No.24427335

>>24427173
>Lets just say there are Holos on the other side of the ocean that I could make a story about too
You could make a story about them, yeah!

You shouldn't, though.

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>>24427335
But its so enticing

>> No.24427645

>>24427473
Mumei is my girlfriend.

>> No.24427781

>>24427645
i'm happy for you anon

>> No.24429351
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Do you guys try to write the personality of the current chuuba or the chuuba at debut? For example Towa in the beginning of her vtuber career was really shy and scared of things but she's grown in her time in Hololive and is a much stronger person who makes new friends pretty easily. Of course she's still a dumb chuuni and parts of her personality will always remain the same, but this just got me thinking about writing a story of her developing as a character like she did in real life.
>Captcha: MGRR0

>> No.24429516

>>24429351
I think trying to capture them as they are currently is the best option. Although it's a lose-lose option, people and their situations change so it's not like it'll be accurate forever.

>> No.24429778

>>24429351
Debut is supposed to be when they're supposed to be the most akin to a character, I guess, so usually that? Though you'd be foolish to dismiss growth along the way.

>> No.24430095

>>24419004
>Noel watching while Flare literally gets murdered right in front of her while she does nothing because she finds it hot.
That sounds like it has potential as like a corruption/moral degeneration fic.

>> No.24431309

>>24430095
It'd need to be the conclusion to it but yeah

>> No.24432237

>Pg. 9 in 30
Something's happening

>> No.24432302

What setup do you guys use to write your fics?
I've been trying to use gdocs and just writing it in browser but the fact that it's on a browser and thus only a few clicks away from fucking around and doing something else has cause me to not really be able to write much.
Is there a better setup?

>> No.24432421

>>24432302
I write using LibreOffice and just that really.
I set quotas for myself (i.e. write 1k words) before allowing myself to do something else.

t. dumbass who is over 1 month past self-imposed deadline

>> No.24432789

>>24432302
>the fact that it's on a browser and thus only a few clicks away from fucking around and doing something else
What do you mean? As in you might accidentally copy and paste the entire document then send it to your mother?

>> No.24432819

>>24432237
A combination of US East coast waking up and SEA getting fully home.

>> No.24432835

>>24432789
Pretty sure they mean distractions, which is a problem if you've got ADD or other shit. Speaking from experience.
>>24432302
If you've got the space or some shit go to a different part of the house like an office and dedicate it fully to 'work', don't fuck about.

>> No.24433822

>>24344545
Reine anonymously staying at random resorts for someone to have fun with, a trail of unworthy broken hearts behind her. Maybe (you) will be the last, or just one of the many.

>> No.24435416

>>24433822
I'm going to fuck the money out of that bitch

>> No.24435586

>>24435416
Is that a declaration that you're going to rob her, rape her, or show her a good time? I can't tell.

>> No.24435605

How do you guys come up with good titles?

>> No.24435662

>>24435605
That's the secret - we don't. It's only others that think our titles are good.

>> No.24435698

>>24435605
I don't

>> No.24436546

>>24435605
Anon...

>> No.24436737

>>24435605
My titles usually suck imo

>> No.24436868

>>24344479
When you guys write how far do you go into storyboarding before you start your work?

>> No.24436957

>>24436868
I just write as I go, honestly.

>> No.24437332

>>24436868
General layout, scenes I really want highlighted, then fill in the blanks with a piece of red yarn

>> No.24437487

>>24435662
>>24435698
>>24436546
>>24436737
Alright, let me rephrase. How would one go about coming up with a good title? What process do you guys usually go through to think of one?

>> No.24437536

>>24437487
>What process do you guys usually go through to think of one?
I don't

>> No.24437576

>>24436868
I make a story based off a few disjointed, unconnected scenes I want to write. Most of the writing is choosing what order the scenes happen in and then connecting them naturally by making up more scenes to do so as I go.

>> No.24437587

>>24437487
Just pull out the first thing that comes to mind and slap it on. The title doesn't really matter.

>> No.24437860

>>24437487
I mean I came up with a practical title. You don't want to spoil the story with the title especially if you have some sort of twist or some wacky shit later on. I would say the best kind of title is one that is fun and alludes to what the story is about but not spoiling.

>> No.24437938

>>24436868
I mean I work out what I want out of the fic first; usually this means thinking up further ideas from the initial idea or prompt. Then I write out a loose outline of events and other stuff I want to see from the fic.
After that I usually start writing unless I feel like the idea is still missing something.

>> No.24437959

>>24437487
I wrote a one-shot about fucking Fubuki in the ass, so I called it fucking Fubuki in the ass.

>> No.24438041

>>24437959
>Do Foxes Dream of Anal Pleasure?

>> No.24438213

>>24438041
now that's good, my title for a fanfic that I'm not really proud of anymore for a Teen Titans futa starfire robin fic was "Tameranian Trouble, Robin has it double" a stupid team rocket pun

>> No.24438272

>>24438213
...Did Starfire have two dicks or was Blackfire involved?

>> No.24438290

>>24436868
Extremely thoroughly. I've heard I do more than most folk, at least when it comes to longform stories as opposed to quick little shorts (which I don't plan at all). I write two distinct outlines before beginning any writing proper:

First, I'll make a very general shell of the plot, determining how many distinct scenes I want and including a short description for each. At this level, I leave a lot of details vague because I'm wont to change them as I actually get to writing and feel out whether or not I like the direction the narrative's progressing. Oftentimes the blurbs I plan for later scenes will get edited or nixed entirely by the time I actually get to writing their associated sections.

Next comes the more important bit. The previous, more general outline is written in a sort of matter-of-fact shorthand, more for refreshing my memory than actually being a useful foundation to begin writing from. But for this section, I try to describe every basic action that is taken and the gist of everything that's said, in as much detail as is necessary to understand exactly what will be going on. The point is to identify every "thing" that serves some intentional purpose in driving the plot, so that I'm comfortable with how things are progressing and come together. The specifics of these "things" along with all the descriptive fluff and transitional text linking them all together are only to be pondered when I begin actually writing, because I don't want some dumb semantic phrasing revision bullshit getting in the way of the plot.

The result of all this is something that ends up having ~0.25-0.5 times the word count of the final product, but since it's just stream of consciousness without regard to formatting or pacing, it probably only takes a twentieth the time to make, and it saves me a hell of a lot of thinking later on. I usually make this "level 2" outline scene by scene, because I often end up contradicting details from the general outline when I actually think through the specifics. This allows me to make each in turn with a fresh slate rather than putting in a bunch of work ahead of time only to have to keep scrapping and redoing it.

>>24437487
I try to think of a clever thematically-relevant pun or double entendre that's five words or less, fail 90% of the time, and then just go with some generic forgettable bullshit

>> No.24438374

>>24438272
No, I tweaked the universe by including a second transformation for tameranians, also the part that I am not proud of is the alien-esque parasitic abdominal impregnation that is the double part of that title.

>> No.24438416

>>24438374
And to think that was my first time writing fiction as well

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>>24438374
Jesus Christ. The Team Rocket pun got a giggle out of me but...

>> No.24438464

>>24438374
>alien-esque parasitic abdominal impregnation
What the ever-living fuck?

That...sounds hot.

>> No.24438590

>>24438464
It was incredibly detailed too, I had read a lot of documentation on C-sections so that I could get the surgery/birthing scene perfect, it's a shame that I had writer's remorse and got rid of the final drafts. still have an early draft that I can pull from a friend's dms who helped proofread it.

>> No.24438728

>>24438590
I'm vaguely interested, but I can't say I know Teen Titans very well. Or... at all, really. Outside of that one old Zone animation. Shit, I'd still give it a read.

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>>24438213
>looks it up
>isreal

>> No.24438873

>>24438728
Let me brush it up a few minutes. The dialog is mechanical because it was my first work and it was before I started reading a lot of books. the inspiration was a dream I had and I needed to write it into smut. :)

>> No.24438923

>>24438730
wait you found it? Where? I thought I deleted all the copies. please link.

>> No.24439000

>>24438923
I looked up the full title in quotes.
Returns a google result of one page that looks like a fanfiction dot net mirror site.
It's still up there.

>> No.24439053

>>24439000
>Can't see the reviews
Aw, bullshit.

>> No.24439074

>>24438923
not him but also did this >>24439000 and then wayback machine'd it for good measure

>> No.24439201

>>24439000
I actually have screenshots of my reviews because I sent them to my friends that said, "This shit will never get views" then I got about 2000 combined fanfiction/Ao3. I'll post a compilation

>> No.24439218

>>24438290
That sounds complicated as fuck, but maybe not a bad idea. I always write my shit as I go so if I have ideas for a scene and know how it'll pan out but don't know how to write it, I'll be stuck on it for ages.

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>>24439201
I guess there weren't as many comments I found as I though but these are 2 of about 3 or 4 positive comments, I think I got a few WTFs and that is about it.

>> No.24440092

>>24437487
Come up with a working title while you're still working on it/before you've published it, then if you come up with something better while you're writing it; you change it so that you have a better title.
Sometimes you'll land it perfectly first shot and don't have to replace it, and sometimes you go through a couple.

>> No.24440129

>>24368268
Tarkov /k/ autism with a chuuba

Bonus: Shion rape correction

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>>24440129
>he doesn't want to rape correct Shion

>> No.24440369

>>24440129
I was going to make a Tarkov prompt earlier but couldn't think of who would survive in the Norvinsk region/who would even be a good pick for the fic at all besides the meme pick of Botan.

>> No.24441127

>>24440369
How about the meme pick of Botan?

>> No.24441355

>>24410433
Having looked into it some, it's fucking hot and I wish I had the skills to write it.

>>24415753
Don't eat that!

>>24420051
Mace.

>>24421994
I mean, crazy doesn't care about money. In this case, Rushia would, presumably, be willing to lose all that money in exchange for revenge. It's all-consuming, irrational compulsion, like Captain Ahab and the White Whale.

>>24436868
Normally, I'd say you should have a loose outline, a leads to b leads to c, and then write. Don't be afraid to pivot away if you get a better idea, but come up with a new outline then.

>> No.24441422

>>24441127
She'd definitely work but the issue is I primarily feel she's like...too safe? Too stereotyped in the role? It's hard to describe. It just feels like the brainless answer even though there's inherently nothing wrong with her. Feels like the same thought process as "I want to write fluff, but who? Obviously Fubuki!"

>> No.24441860

>>24441422
I mean there's nothing wrong with taking the 'safe' choice here since the only other choice is pretty much, your oshi, Botan, and maybe some random indie you've never heard about.

>> No.24442468

>>24440369
Imagine Watame running some sort of shelter in the post-apocalypse, and she is seemingly the same fluffy sheep with heart of gold
But when her shelter is threatened, she turns into a predator and fucking kills everyone who tries to endanger her and her little piece of heaven

>> No.24442519

>>24441860
>Some random indie you've never heard about
The JP Tarkov chuubas are so fucking cute. I think there's a KR one as well but her name eludes me.

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>>24440129
>Shion rape correction
Damn Bratty Witch!

>> No.24444030

>>24440301
More on the lines of I'm not good at writing smut yet. Trust me, I'd slam my dick in Shion in an effort to discipline the brat

>>24440369
Botan is a fair pick for very obvious reasons, but baring her and the likes of Myth and Council, I'm convinced most (if not all) chuubas won't survive for very long.

>Suisei dies because she's incapable of taking care of herself
>Kanata too deaf to hear a scav sneaking up on her with grandpa's double barrel
>Marine probably drowned somewhere along Shoreline trying to get a boat
>Rushia can't magic away a 5.56 round
>Shion can't magic away 7.62 NATO
>Magic is cute and all but that shit pales in comparison to the magic of smith and wesson

Though someone probably the likes of Flare and Noel could hold out for longer and survive

>> No.24444722

>>24444030
Marine's the trader on Lighthouse with her new crew.

>> No.24444992

>>24371921
Always archive unless explicitly told otherwise

>> No.24445646

>>24444722
Hag's "leaked" naked pictures destablized the Tarkov Economy

>> No.24446396
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>>24440369
I had thought about writing a Whiskey Project Tarkov fic but unironically got too distracted playing the game

>> No.24446596

>>24445646
>Everyone cooming so hard it caused a crash of the ruble from everyone selling all they had to buy what they thought were Mio's nudes, violence in Dorms skyrocketed 500%

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>> No.24448946

If a girl called you cute, what would be your most likely response? I feel like mild embarrassment and feeling flattered is the norm but I'm not every man

>> No.24449611

>>24448946
Unless it's someone I really like, I usually don't have too much of a reaction. I just thank them for the compliment.

>> No.24449671

>>24448946
I instantly fall in love with them and think about the compliment for the years to come, bragging about it and adding her to my list of women who've showed interest in me. Currently sitting at 12 btw.

>> No.24449921

>>24448946
Write a musical that alludes to me getting molested as a kid.

>> No.24450408

>>24449921
what

>> No.24451395

>>24432302
I use Microsoft Word then I copy paste it into gdocs
>>24432835
>distractions
I do get distracted kek thats why it takes me 2 weeks to write 3k words. Occasionally I go to the county library to write but people in my state are all suicidal retards that drive like drag racers so I'm scared to go out

>> No.24453202
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Fucking whore, flashing her panties live on stage

>> No.24454750

>>24453202
Showing off spats is not only acceptable it is encouraged

>> No.24454793

>>24454750
To be fair, showing off panties os also celebrated and preferred

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24455300

>>24454793
Yeah but they don't have them anymore...fucking dumb bitch Susan I bet if they showed what they'd get from their slice of supas they'd have changed their tune real quick

>> No.24456377

>>24455300
Stop being a retarded coomer.

>> No.24456901

>>24450408
Always Sunny reference.

>> No.24458521

>>24453202
God that outfit continues Sora's tradition of being made for clothed sex.

>> No.24459684 [DELETED] 

>>24458521
do we have clothed sex fic yet?

>> No.24459730

>>24458521
do we have a clothed sex fic yet?

>> No.24459845

>>24459730
Well I don't remember jacking it to one, so clearly we don't have one of those yet.

>> No.24460121

>>24459730
>>24459845
Clothing is an entirely visual stimuli that cannot be transfered into writing unless it is directly utilized in the act, much like pulling on hair or cumming into a glove. It's also why cunny fics fail

>> No.24460190

>>24460121
That sounds like cope about not being able to transcribe the feeling and sensation well enough.

>> No.24460479

>>24460190
Shows us big boy

>> No.24460519

>>24460121
>It's also why cunny fics fail
idk man,if you start to write a long description about how fucking gura is like a fucking a kid. It gets a bit sus

>> No.24460868

>>24460519
This is why lolis make for good fluffy fics because lolis are cute and are not meant to be lewded.

>> No.24462591

>>24344545
(You) die and go to hell, where Towa is set to torture you. As it turns out, she’s not very good at it. Like, at all.

>> No.24462734

>>24462591
>I believe you human men feel great pain from having your penis abused, hm? How about I pull on it until it comes off?

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>>24438213
>tameranian trouble, robin has it double

>> No.24463556

>>24462863
Retarded forgposter

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>>24463556
>retarded frogposter

>> No.24463902

>>24462734
I was thinking more comedic. Slamming her trident on her foot, putting her back out dragging an iron maiden, tripping into a lava pit, etc.

>> No.24464038

>>24463902
but.....where is the towa sex.....

>> No.24465977

up

>> No.24466383

>>24465977
Just let it die, we’re near the bump limit.

>> No.24466688

>>24462591
>She keeps killing you, but not in the torturous way. More by quick accidents.
>As someone already dead your soul just pops up after a few seconds, right in front of Towa.
>Honestly it was scary first but the fact that it keeps happening has gotten you used to it.

>> No.24467070

>>24465977
Up like my cock. Quick what's the last story you nutted to.

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>>24467070
I don't remember...

>> No.24467470

>>24467070
The Cursed Dagger

>> No.24468185

>>24467070
It’s been too long... I haven’t nutted since the WIP curse...

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>>24467070
Oha-yo dayo~

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>>24468185
Every time I think about abstaining from masturbation I go back to Risu's NNN videos and hear her encouraging me to jerk off and saying not nutting is not allowed, so I jerk off immediately after.

It's kind of crazy to think that I've been jerking off 1-4 times a day for the past... 10 years or so, every single day... that's... a lot of time spent jerking off...

huh...

>> No.24468722

>>24468357
Would look way better if her finger didn't cut off

>> No.24469052

>>24468409
Damn nigga wtf. I nut like once or twice a week.

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>>24468185
Anon, I think it's pretty clear what you need to do to break that curse.

>> No.24469281

>>24468409
And now I have a dumb idea for a fic. The NNN stuff is so Risu can gather all the tributes to make an army of homunculi. Suppose I should link >>24344545

>>24468722
No, her fingers are actually like that. She had a run in with an angry dog.

>> No.24469313

>>24469192
Brother, I’ve written about eight thousand words in the last three days. That’s about five times faster than I usually write. I’m trying but they’re some long fucking stories.

>> No.24470448

>>24469281
But why would Mr. Koro do that?

>> No.24470779

>>24469052
I've wasted 2/3 hrs a night trying to cum the past two weeks. It's hell

>> No.24470919

>>24470779
>trying to cum
Are you also afflicted by the wip curse?

>> No.24470947

>>24470779
We really don't read this, fuck off.

>> No.24471205

>>24470919
Just picky
>>24470947
Boohoo nigger maybe if you suck my dick it'll be over quicker until then cry me a river so I can go white water rafting to go fuck your momma

>> No.24471310

>>24344545
A terrible storm sinks the ship, leaving Anon as the only human survivor. However, Anon is not alone; a fearsome white leon(Botan) accompanies him in the lifeboat. Days turn into weeks and months, and Anon and the Leon must learn to trust each other in order to survive.
Botan's character should be written like in Lion's Den

>> No.24471341

why are you like this

>> No.24471563

>>24471310
I thought Pekofag picked up this prompt.

>> No.24471645

>>24344545
Roboco gets an upgrade from Koyori: turns out she should have paid attention to the more attention to the “evil” part of the coyote’s “evil genius” status. Koyori prepares for HoloX’s takeover by giving the gynoid a backdoor/second personality, Manchurian Candidate style, and then tests it out. Via sex.

>> No.24471656

>>24471563
They admitted that they dropped it the other... Week?

>> No.24472103

>>24471205
Lmao holy shit no way you're an adult

>> No.24472146

New thread
>>24471678

>> No.24472747

Incomplete Rapture pt.2 is a dead link now.

Man I wish that got continued

>> No.24473092

>>24472747
There's so many stories I just assume are dead now.

>> No.24473318

>>24472747
Speaking of fics I wish got continued, 'Funny Uncle'; mostly because I was archive trawling and found the anon writing it gave it's initial idea as Matsuri rapes you in your sleep and the child was yours.

>> No.24473569

>>24473318
Oh yeah that seemed to be the idea. That would have been cool to see more of.

>> No.24475224

>>24473318
AAAA I WANTED TO SEE THAT ONE COMPLETED. I remember reading it ages ago and fuck, that’s such a good concept. Maybe someday I’ll pick it up.

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Here's your ticket to the next thread, head on over!

The mating press train is down for repairs, by the way.

>> No.24476210

>>24475944
Is the throatfuck car still open
Why is Astel so fucking hot. Stupid sexy twink. Look at that wink. Look at those 'fuck me' eyes.

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