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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>23822579

>> No.23921969
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

>> No.23922008
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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were three stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Hazy Days: Tags: Ayame, Asphyxiation, NSFW :>>23845483

Building Block Doll Chapter 14: Tags: Sora, Suisei, Lamy, Roboco, cute, ageplay, light omaroshi, omutsu, fluff:>>23876158

Juniper Berries: Tags: Juniper Actias and nsfw:>>23898477

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Ollie invites Reine, Moona, Anya, Kobo and Risu after a studio recording to play a board game. As they set up the game and begin playing, it turns out Ollie unwittingly took a cursed board game and now has to play an NSFW version of Jumanji.:>>23840837

Sex with the mentally ill Neko!:>>23843776

Reality will always beat fiction but holy fuck the whole thing with Nyanners has got me in the mood to read some emotional gut punch NTR like this. I actually feel sick to the stomach:>>23845297

Having a frustrating, depressing day and Polka jumping at the chance to take care of you to finally return the favour.:>>23845508

Someone has to write a nyanner ntr story:>>23859693

Being the foster house for the otherworldly and isekai'd chuubas to acclimate them to normal life and streaming:>>23870371

Fixing Shion with love and affection and rape.:>>23871073

Marine or Choco has (You) in a chastity cage for a month and endlessly teases you.:>>23872928

You've slaved away for a long time at Lune genetic research as a lowly intern just barely surviving the companies rather dangerous experiments but now you've been assigned to there most volatile work yet. Project Activas or "Juniper" at least she seems nice aside from her occasional homicidal outbursts.:>>23875279

>>23879895 :>>23879895

After seeing one too many of her animal coworkers go into your office, Nene decides to pee in there to mark her territory:>>23883547

Dead Hours has personified and Ame and Kronii is nowhere to be found. Its up to Mori and Gura to hunt it down:>>23885687

Yandere Kanata onegai:>>23890370

Fauna accidentally eating a weird psychedelic mushroom and now has the urge to both extract breast milk from, and impregnate her fellow Holos in plant-based tentacle-bondage action:>>23904102

Hate sex, free choice of chuuba. You can't stand each other and get into confrontations all the time, but you secretly also think the other is incredibly physically attractive. One day you end up having wild, rough hate sex on every piece of furniture imaginable:>>23912234

I just had a dream of meeting Lamy, taking her to her knees, interrupting her mid sentence and face fucking her full power. Still have a raging hard on 15 minutes later after waking up:>>23914849

Calliope Mori has a secret:>>23921434

>> No.23922861 [DELETED] 

> not watame
https://litter.catbox.moe/01bcj0.jpeg

>> No.23923568

Stuff that I wrote about mind control

UI being corrupted by mind control collar:>>23872256

Scamming Aqua with Mind control visor:>>23881692
>>23881737

>> No.23924390

>>23923568
>>23921969

>> No.23924983

>>23922008
Abusing Kronii. Doesn't matter how.

>> No.23925659

>>23924983
forcing her to stream while showing off her big milkers

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>>23925659
That's Anya tho

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>>23921969
I wrote this for /ag/ but I was told the gaslighting and abuse would go well here so I'm cross posting. It's definitely architecture but I hope you will like it too.
https://docs.google.com/document/u/4/d/e/2PACX-1vRutKROrIxj1rmgO8RBxvhlLz_u66lIXUvIO32bUQrVoD4nujgwEKoKgTapGfbzQdcxTYsU_QAod8FN/pub
tags: Subaru, Weight Gain, Denial, Abuse (Mostly Emotional)

>> No.23928337

>>23922311
are there any chastity stories in the archive already?

>> No.23928449
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Cheeky fucking smug professor... needs rectum-stuffing brain-drain correction!

>> No.23928553

>>23912234
Mikeneko, please. I am not at all familiar with her character and behaviour, but I can imagine her playing up her cuteness/instability for the public, which somehow really annoys (You), the manager that ended up with her.

>> No.23928645

>>23928449
Cringe

>> No.23928763

>>23928449
Scientifically engineered for assjobs

>> No.23928866

>>23926670
I want to tie this sultry brat down and rape her by just fucking her tits and streaming it on her account as she sobs and screams in despair from watching her subscriber count fucking skyrocket as her chat is just people shouting "boobs! Finally boobs!"

>> No.23929171

>>23928553
Why is this general so obsessed with Michael Feline?

>> No.23929314

>>23926674
Explain to me why some people like actual obesity. I don't think every /ag/ fag is a four hundred pound landwhale whose low self-esteem leads them to only find other fattys attractive. What is it about fat chicks that you people like so much? Do you not have a sense of beauty standard?

>> No.23929514

>>23929314
They're black

>> No.23929550

>>23929314
Have you considered that not everyone's beauty standard is the same as yours? As for me, softness. If any part of the girl's body feels muscley it's an instant turn off to me. But the girl going from skinny to fat is the real appeal rather than the girl just being fat already in my opinion. Nothing beats the humiliation and eventual despair of a traditionally "hot" girl ruining herself.

>> No.23929620

>>23929314
NTA but I find chubby girls cute in a way, more to hug you know. Really fucking fat girls, now that is something I don't enjoy, specially the fetish of making a girl get fatter for your amusement. If she is naturally built like a tank, I can get behind that but shaping them to the size I want is kinda creepy yo

>> No.23929710

>>23929171
She's hot + any potential actual Rushia lover holdovers. Rushia had a small but good amount of stuff here.

>> No.23929771

>>23929171
Eh, not really this general
Doubt she even has a story written about her ever since, you know, the rebranding
I had a chance to look at her design just now, and my god she is perfect for aggressive sex.

>> No.23929937
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>>23929314
I think it generally comes in two categories:

First is people who find fat to be a sex/cuddle enhancer. It's warm, soft, provides more surface to grab/mandle/be enveloped by, etc. I could understand not seeing the appeal if you're a lolifag and/or being larger than your girl is important to the experience for you, but for pretty much everyone else, it's a straight improvement, and you see as much in the "thicc" movement and people fetishizing big tits and ass. This category of architecture is just that taken to the extreme, where people are willing to overlook some of the negatives of obesity to focus on the positives. There's a wide spectrum here of just how fat a girl can be before the fatfag sees diminishing returns relative to the increasing amount of negatives.

The other is just your standard subgenre of corruption. They recognize that it's socially/physically undesirable to be fat and are aroused by the taboo of it. Same root cause as moral degeneration, slut/bimbofication, brain drain, nerd/slob TF, etc. These people are generally also in the first category, but there's definitely a faction (that a lot of Nips seem to fall in) that go hard-in on the negative aspects of weight gain.

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>>23929620
This. Tummies are cute and hot and made for groping and maybe cumming on. But extremist shit is not at all for me. Picrel is like, peak architecture for me. When you turn them into fucking meatballs is where I draw the line.

>> No.23930240

>>23929771
Mikeneko's design is actually so perfect for any sort of rape or yandere fantasies because of how wild and unhinged she looks. God I want to fuck her so damn bad.

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>>23930240
Rape is kind of a turn-off with her, I feel. Maybe, an unwillingness to resist/egging you on is better
Just imagine being stuck with her in the middle of a heat wave with almost no cooling/air conditioning. Both dazed and not really all there in the head. Nothing to really do. She begins to egg you on, as usual, but you start acting on it. She doesn't really resist as you go further and further - even starts encouraging you somewhat, and soon both of you are having sex like rabbits.
I doubt it really works like that, but this is one of my many fantasies.

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>>23930545
Dizzily making the bad choice to risk losing everything by succumbing to both lust and heat stroke and pumping the mentally unstable cat full of your cum, burning her insides even further...
Goodness. You might be onto something mister.

>> No.23930730

>>23930545
??? Have you ever been in the heat? No one is horny during the heat. Especially since making out warms you so fucking much

>> No.23930869

>>23929937
>ere people are willing to overlook some of the negatives of obesity to focus on the positives. There's a wide spectrum here of just how fat a girl can be before the fatfag sees diminishing returns relative to the increasing amount of negatives.
>The other is just your standard subgenre of corruption. They recognize that it's socially/physically undesirable to be fat and are aroused by the taboo of it. Same root cause as moral degeneration, slut/bimbofication, brain drain, nerd/slob TF, etc. These people are generally also in the first category, but there's definitely a faction (that a lot of Nips seem to fall in) that go hard-in on the negative aspects of weight gain.


Yes, I didn't get the appeal of /ag/ until I actually looked into it. I like the idea of some stacy becoming completely undesirable. It basically hits a hate boner angle.

>> No.23930926

>>23930730
t. has never been to a beach.

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>>23930631
>Hot, sweaty mating with the menhera street-cat you've been taking care of
There's something there for sure

>>23930730
>No one is horny during the heat.
One of my hardest orgasms was jacking off to Coco under the covers while I had a fever. I haven't been that sick since but the deliriousness combined with the sweaty heat really made something special that I want to try next time I get ill.

>> No.23930978

>>23928337
No, not yet.

>> No.23931124

>>23930730
One of the hardest orgasms of my fucking life was in the summer of '09 when I ended up doing some sort of ritualistic stalking and rape RP with some random I kept encountering that we never discussed outside of it. In a 8x8 room at 95 degrees I had the hardest erection of my life and when I came it felt like some sort of primal, carnal heat surged within my breast that was unrelated to the actual temperature outside. You've just never been THAT horny that temperature is irrelevant.

>> No.23931288

It's very difficult to type with one hand on the keyboard and the other in my pants

>> No.23931368

>>23929171
I’m certainly not. Bitch is a liar.

>> No.23931369

>>23931288
That's what you get for being a weirdo and not using your feet like the rest of the world

>> No.23931374

>>23931288
Do you all really jerk off while writing sex scenes? I obviously get a bit horny but not enough to just nut to the cringe stuff I'm making

>> No.23931397

>>23931374
Some people can. It's weird as fuck to me but I guess if you're fully mentally immersed in the scene it wouldn't be that hard. It's just typing and fantasizing at the same time, which must take some skill. That or it's absolute fucking gibberish shorthand that they need to correct after they nut.

>> No.23931434

>>23931374
I've only ever written one thing that I thought was actually hot enough to personally masturbate to. I've been told that other things I've written were good fap material but I just can't do it, knowing that I'm the one that wrote it is some sort of strange mental block for me.

>> No.23931550

>>23931434
I can relate to this. Like if somebody else wrote this I'd all fired up but since it came from me it becomes kinda weird

>> No.23931644

>>23930926
>>23930957
>>23931124
t. has never been in 45°C heat waves and likes to pretend a little sunlight is heat

>> No.23931647

>>23931550
Yeah. Just feels weird if I knew I wrote it. I write things I find really fucking hot but then I can't actually nut to it because I just see things I could've done better or some such. A curse.

>> No.23931653

>>23930240
Honestly miguel's character just seems perfect for an unhinged yandere reincarnation romance fic.

>> No.23931681

>>23931374
NTA but for me whenever I'm in the middle of writing a sex scene I get unimaginably horny and go jerk off, but the moment I finish the story/scene I can no longer get off to it. It's strange.

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>>23931644
>Whoa pal, you may have been set on fire but you haven't fallen into an active volcano so uh...don't act like you know anything about heat
It'll be hitting 32 Celsius in like a month and a half for me and I'll be jacking off under a comforter with my AC off while you sit there and seethe so...

>> No.23931839

>>23931813
Since you haven't experienced what real heat is like, just some minor sunlight, you can't honestly have an opinion on how being in a heat wave feels like. Plus the fact that you're using an AC like a pussyfag only makes it worse

>> No.23931845

>>23931813
Hot. You should go into great detail on how you do that.

>> No.23931865

>>23931813
I noticed earlier that Ame just has a fuckton of porn. Why her specifically? Personality? I'm not complaining, I think Ame is a sexy whore who I'd love to get my hands on, but...

>> No.23931943

>>23931865
Blonde and big boobs. A classic combo

It helps Ame has the most girl next door personality in EN so the porn just flows naturally

>> No.23931966

>>23922008
Korone taking you to the vet with tears in her eyes as she lies about where the two of you are going.

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>>23931839
Sorry your mud hut doesn't have electricity so you don't even have a fan and have to charge the cellphone you use to post here at an internet cafe, but I live in a first world country that offers me certain amenities that I'm gonna take advantage of.

>>23931845
No

>>23931865
Like the other Anon said big boobs and blonde with a nice personality that people gosling over. Also they've seemingly gotten bigger with every outfit so people are noticing as much.

>> No.23932024

>>23931966
This but the other way around.

>> No.23932029

>>23931966
what?

>> No.23932037

>>23931986
>That Kiara outfit
I would drop 5k just to have Kiara watch me masturbate and encourage me.
Kind of want more JOI stories desu.

>> No.23932071

>>23931966
wait. Am I her pet in this scenario?

>> No.23932113

>>23931986
Why not?

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>>23931966
>Tell Korone you think you may have a stomach flu
>She thinks it the same thing as a stomach flip so she treats it like you're dying

>> No.23932225

>>23932071
Life for humans drastically changed when the animal girl revolution happened.

>> No.23932306

>>23932037
pretty much all of her outfits are pure sex
except the kimono. the kimono is just weird

>> No.23932362

>>23932306
I like it, she gets a cute haircut with it

>> No.23932384

>>23932362
the haircut is cute
but those shoulders...

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>>23932306
Yeah, Kiara in general is just...unf. The definition of unf. Even her Stacy voice gets me going now. But I love her hair in this one.
>Source?
Say no more. Chicken is for sex. https://files.catbox.moe/uupr02.png

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>>23931644
If you say so third-country subhuman

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>>23932362
She gets two! The twin tails and the straight hime cut!

>>23932384
It's part of the bow and she can take it off

>> No.23932666

>>23931986
>>23932574
t. wastes money on air conditioning because too pussy to handle heat

>> No.23932817

>>23932666
t. Takes pride in enduring starvation, Malaria and child mortality

>> No.23932873
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>>23932666
>Wastes money on bed because too pussy to handle bare concrete floor
Comfort isn't a waste, Poorfag Satan.

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Third-world-kun seems to be upset.

>> No.23933005

Jesus Christ, are people here really that fucking retarded that they can’t tell what’s obvious bait?

>> No.23933022

>>23932873
I want sweaty Ame to gargle my nuts. She'd probably make that teasing squinting face she likes to make as she does it.

>> No.23933220

It's gonna stay WIP forever, I feel
I will regret it and cringe at it in the future but just maybe it will catalyze something a lot greater than, uhh, whatever this is

Calico Cat in (Summer) Heat, WIP
rentry/p5w4w

>> No.23933435

>>23933220
it's a decent start but there's not enough characterization to really get behind the new persona and there's not enough narrative to get hooked; it's half a lead-up to something that might have been good, but in its current state, falls flat. your prose is great, though; i was really enjoying reading this and i lost myself in anon's internal monologuing.

>>23932666
existence without A/C is suffering. my ancestors did not barely scrape by for thousands of years just for me to ignore modern conveniences now that we have them
well, i say "we"; clearly you don't, lol

>> No.23933779

>>23921969
>>23931966
Only request I've taken that actually fucked me up. I miss my dog.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTlFpFL1VJFDiZFvVkgvb0NVd5hgTcjFEswXfaKZrGDvHtaHnql6koGIdiw6YxAfDdywLo6vki-D_SX/pub
Tags: Korone, (You) as her dog, Sad

>> No.23934075

>>23933779
Well that was... an experience. Certainly unique, and pretty sad but definitely not what I'd expect a chuuba fanfiction to be about.

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fuck it, I'm adding, hot, sweaty sex in the sweltering heat to the Hoshikawa smutfic. that shit is unironically hot.

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>>23934173
Now we're talkin'. Looking forward to it.

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>>23921969
Let Me Feel Your Pain

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQipJvRwPXdgEWqGwJSU6CVyPHeZqBEuFNqrCxXRF2Tt07H8Z1EmF3mJWvZw8R_EcksBumcYpztE8uX/pub

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>>23921969
Femboy Suisei. I don't know what fucking pronouns use for this Edition

I actually thank that crash that killed my previous try, cause the story came out way better than it was before. It's been a week since I started this jesas.

I'll finish the peko femboy fic later, probably will be more homo since I couldn't imagine Suisei as nothing but a top.

Title: Otoko ja nai, Suisei desu!
Tag: NSFW, Suisei, Femboy
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSXS4i1zSZZNrJrbqY6H6tV09MmpFDmGG1KtTWJdJ3drW95RFY_moDS0gwtw8iLiAyUsJ_vV4M9nz9f/pub

>> No.23934563

>>23934362
Anon, please. How do you keep writing such painful chapter endings?

>> No.23934656

>>23928449
But that's where Koyo poops from!

>> No.23934842

>>23934656
The only purpose she was born onto this earth with that hole for was to wrap it around my shaft and thrust back and forth. And maybe to put some more meat on her bones so she can take a smack or two and give a good hotdogging inbetween. If she thinks otherwise, that degree of hers was a waste of time, and that fact needs to be violently plowed into her

>> No.23934917

>>23934533
Now type that in kanji

>> No.23934921

>>23934362
Jesus Christ bro what the fuck

>> No.23934975

>>23934533
Im barely a paragraph in but let me say now, reading a story when its justified messes with the "flow" of the story

>> No.23934978

>>23933220
I'm kinda interested in seeing where this goes honestly. Clearly the two characters in these have some sort of hate relationship and it would no doubt lead to some hot steamy hate sex.

>> No.23934993

>>23934362
I just read the whole thing, and I think your pacing is a little too fast sometimes. Events happen too quickly and I feel like there could be a lot more color and emotion to your story if you added a few more sentences of descriptions and character feelings. Also the story very occasionally switches to third person out of nowhere like
"You put your hands in your pockets and walked down the sidewalk. All around he saw happy women, some with other men, some alone. It made you sick." Which is probably just a minor error.
Seeing Anon slowly change is nice after his horrible past, and the emotional parts were good even if they could sometimes use more length as I said.

>> No.23935032

>>23934533
There's a few punctuation errors that really jump out at me since I'm a stickler for that kind of stuff. It's also a little hard to read at times with the constant breaks, but that's really just preference. It messes with the flow for me. The pacing is also a little quick. As in, it's more like a sprint. It could've done with a bit more meat, I think. Ultimately, though, I think if someone is into this sort of thing, they'd find something to enjoy. I'm not particularly into being a bottom, personally.

>> No.23935089

>>23933435
Yeah
It is pretty much a stub but I intend to add more before all hell breaks loose.
Stray ideas that I might intend to add:
- having her lay on your lap, feeling something rising and calling you a pervert, adding another wound
- she orders you to wipe her down, trying to get under your skin. You (to her surprise) agree, but you insist of wiping down the entirety of her body
- her having a call for which she immediately changes her tune (so that characterization wouldn't be completely barebones)
- her stripping completely nude and ordering you not to look at her, while you sneak a peek in a reflective surface, of course getting another battle scar in the process.
As everything progresses, you begin to focus more on her body, all of the art on the Internet you have jerked off to that looked suspiciously like her etc.

To be honest, I am trash at dialogue and never written any actual smut. Help me god.

>> No.23935157

>>23935089
> so help me god
Sentences like these make me want to go full chuuni and write something but unfortunately my vocabulary is not diverse enough for me to do such a thing

>> No.23935226

>>23933779
That one hit hard. Good job anon.

>> No.23935410

>>23917489
That was honestly who I had in mind. Or another chuuba who can be abrasive and rude, like Kiara or Shion.

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Tokino Sora desu, watashi wa juuhasai desu.

>> No.23935433
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>>23933779
Damn.
Never had a dog, but damn this hit hard.

>> No.23935447

>>23934842
I bet you would also enjoy hearing her loud high-pitched coyote noises while you pleasure yourself with her literal shit hole, you degenerate.

>> No.23935460

>>23934993
Yeah sorry for the switch in tenses. It's easy to get mixed up. I'll fix it.

You think it's going to fast? I have been trying to decide if it's too fast or too slow. I want to lengthen it but I worry I'll bore readers if it moves too slow. I'll take it just a bit slower then, see if people respond well to it. Thank you for telling me, was genuinely bugging me.

>>23934921
>>23934563
This is going to be a real fun story. Just you wait. I've got plans. Oh have I got plans.

>> No.23935786

>>23935089
>To be honest, I am trash at dialogue and never written any actual smut. Help me god.
you only think you're trash at dialogue. everyone thinks their work is trash. i, as a neutral second party, am telling you that your dialogue is not trash - at least from what i've read here.
i sure hope you do decide to continue this anon, because it was a fun read. all of those ideas seem to be centered around voyeurism rather than actual smut; is this a preference of yours?

>> No.23935906

>>23934362
>>23935460
Not him but genuinely I think your fics sometimes need to slow the fuck down and let the reader feel the events happening more, like take the rape and ryona in this chapter. The blows and rape barely go through the reader as it moves past it with barely any detail save for declaring it as it happens, especially as it perspective jumps to the abused rather than the abuser when ostensibly this is a 2nd person fic.
You make great endings since you always seem to find the best wham lines but the in-betweens need more work. I believe you were also the writer for AC: Hololive and the added fluff to try and slow down that fic really wasn't the kind of details we mean when we ask to slow down the events happening. I think you need to work more in extending the feelings present in each scene, make hits have more impact, make penetration have more feeling, make humiliation sting deeper.
Because I understand the intent of that Roboco """forgetting""" to charge herself scene but without that humiliation leaving that feeling into the reader the event just doesn't hit as hard. The abruptness of your prose does not do it favors when it comes to the events in the middle even if the abruptness does work in its favor when it comes to chapter ends.

>> No.23936069

>>23935906
I see, I see. I will try to incorporate that into my next chapter then. I always thought it would seem like I was dragging it out.

Thank you. That was genuinely helpful. I can do a lot with that.

>> No.23936317

>>23935460
Yeah pretty much what >>23935906 said when I talked about the pacing. The overall story pacing feels fine but certain scenes could have packed more punch if they were more detailed.

>> No.23936546

>>23934533
It reads kind of weird, and the way it's formatted makes it look terrible on mobile (Had to switch to reading this on my PC). Also FYI, you can just copy and paste in emojis into a gdocs page and it would have shown up.
As for the story itself, it's cute, I like how suisei was characterized here and I'd have loved to see more of the budding relationship. This is somehow less gay than the other femboy suisei fic, I guess it's because it's just a one-shot femboy sex thing rather than the other one which is basically the short form summary of a multi-chapter gay romance but it's weird how the one with (You) as the bottom is somehow less gay.

>> No.23936658

>>23936546
>he doesn't want gay in his femboy fic
Nani?

>> No.23936669

>>23935786
To be honest, I never saw it that way, but now that I think about it. Nah, I think I/my character are trying to distance themselves from sex.
Is it just about maintaining some sort of distance from what is supposed to be an idol, before that distance rapidly closes and complicates things? It's easy to call someone a spoiled bitch - it's not at all easy to admit that she is your type in all but personality.
All of that talk and a nonchalant rape threat, is just some sort of front that he has to ward her off, fighting mental illness with mental illness? He is mostly paper tiger and counts on her being too scared/angry/grossed out to call his bluff.
Having a proper incel moment of having any sort of delusions about a woman who specifically harvests money from sad wankers (not unlike himself), and then trying to overcompensate for it? Probably.

>> No.23936963

>>23934533
Ah I was waiting for this. I enjoyed, I liked the interactions and the characterization was nice. I do feel it's very fast paced, just like zooming into the meat of it, which I do understand. But even the smut, though nicely written, feels too short. Also didn't expect top Suisei but I ain't complaining.
Either way it was a fun read, my main gripe being it's just not long enough.

>> No.23937102

>>23936669
this particular attitude always drives a big fat nail into my suspension of disbelief, though; it's like the harem anime protagonist attitude.
why does he ward her off? i feel his disposition could be better explained; he complains about her constantly yet escalates to sexually-charged threats immediately, suggesting that he's got an interest in her body. everything about the narration suggests that we're heading into the territory of a hatefuck or even a rape, but the way you describe his personality here suggests that he actually has little to no interest in it.
if the fic were continued, i feel it'd be a real lurch for the protagonist to pump the brakes and declare disinterest in her; i would personally remedy this by explicitly stating in the protagonist's internal monologue his lack of desire to actually carry out the suggestions he's making. or something of the sort.

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>Holofantasy Chapter 5

>> No.23937687

>>23937102
That's pretty bad. I don't want to ruin suspension of disbelief.
I feel like he is knee deep in his own bullshit about not liking "absolutely everything about her".
I may want him to come to a conclusion - he likes her body and wants it. He feels so easy making rape remarks because it sort of aligns with his what he really wants - take her body. He also feels easy verbally abusing her or "knocking her down a peg" in other aspects because he hates her personality. Now I say personality, but she is sort of a doll of easy-to-hate stereotypes rather than a character. Need to at least expand her lore and their relationship before the events that happen right now - god knows how many inconsistencies I will make without that.

>> No.23938204

>>23936658
Anon, I want more gay in my femboy fanfic not less. It's why I wanted more romance out of this rather than more sex.

>> No.23939286

You. Give it to me. That thing. Your WIP list.

>> No.23939529

>>23937687
>but she is sort of a doll of easy-to-hate stereotypes rather than a character.
yes, that is so; but with that being said, this isn't riveting high-brow existentialist literature, it's low-hanging smut. point is, i didn't feel put off by her caricature at all; rather, i treated it as a sort of 'what-if' version of her.
>Need to at least expand her lore and their relationship before the events that happen right now - god knows how many inconsistencies I will make without that.
i'm all for seeing more of your writing, anon, but before expanding on smaller details, i think you should complete a rough version of it first. you've already got a functioning introduction, so before branching off and elaborating further onto her character and the nature of their relationship, try writing out a barebones middle (the event this story is focusing on) and conclusion. that way, it's no longer another WiP squatting at the back of your mind like a frog.
you can go back afterwards, re-read it, and expand on areas that you feel need more exposition. protip: whenever a fancy idea strikes your whimsy whilst you write, add a footnote to that sentence and outline the idea you've had at the top or bottom of the page, then put it to the back of your mind and continue. that way, you don't lose track of your mental storyboard.

>> No.23939641

>>23939286
I'm not talking about my WIPs until they're done.

>> No.23939772

>>23939641
They're never going to be done, though.

>> No.23940095

>>23938204
I'll write you a romantic femboy suisei fic after I finish my current story (might take a while but I'll get to it).

>> No.23941070

>>23939772
Exactly. This way nobody will be disappointed.

>> No.23941088

>>23934917
翠星の大竿
>>23934975
>>23935032
>>23936963
I do admit I rushed it by the end. That last scene was a last minute thing and it shows. I got the inspiration for it and had to add it despite my instincts telling not to.

The flow of the narration is something I need to work on, writing in first person fucked me up. I'll stick to second person or third person

>>23936546
Googledocs fics always look terrible in mobile for me, it kinda sucks.
>you can just copy and paste in emojis into a gdocs page and it would have shown up.
Need to try to this in the future
[>it's weird how the one with (You) as the bottom is somehow less gay.
The gender of the self insert is left vague on purpose so I can cope it isn't gay. It's easily believable it could be a female hoshiyomi POV and vice versa. Male is canon to me cause it's funnier how the dude just shows rides suisei's dick with no fucks given, like true homies do

>> No.23941099

Need advice from the lewd posters. Do you rile yourself up, so to say, before writing smut? Does finally caving to your needs, so to speak, impact your ability to write smut, or do you write other parts with a clearer mind instead?

>> No.23941144

>>23941099
I started to work on smut when I was horny, got a couple of paragraphs in, finally said "I need to take care of this" because I was tent-pitching for 3 hours off and on beforehand, jerked off for an hour, came, and then lost all motivation to do anything. This was 2 hours ago.

>> No.23941217

>>23941099
>Do you rile yourself up, so to say, before writing smut?
Nope. Being horny actually gets in the way. It's distracting. Rely on natural perversion. If you're not a massive pervert, well... don't write smut if you find it too difficult to do while you're not nursing a chub.

>> No.23942173

Did Holocalypse Anon die again?

>> No.23942310

>>23934362
Is... is this the end? It seems like we went from 0 to 100 in the blink of an eye.

>> No.23942335

>>23941099
It's weird. Not being horny actually helps keep me focused to finish the scene as intended, but I end up feeling like if I didn't get horny then the scene is bland.

>> No.23942913

>>23934173
Sounds hot as fuck, dude. Pun unintended. Can't wait.

>> No.23943439

>>23942310
No. Not even close. If I had to guess, I'd say I've got the plot about 1/4th of the way through assuming of course I don't get any new ideas further down the track.

Long way to go yet.

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>>23942173
No, I'm good. What's up?

>> No.23943647

>>23943617
How's being dead treating you?

>> No.23943735

>>23943617
Some people were asking about a cover job a few threads ago but you didn't reply

>> No.23943919

>>23943647
Better than being alive, that’s for sure.
>>23943735
Shit, I must have missed that, sorry. As for an update, I don’t have much I can give unfortunately. I’ve been having way too much fun writing rrat!Ayame that all my other stories are on hold for a bit. I’m also struggling a little to write Watame, but I’ll get chapter 2 out eventually.

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>>23943617
That gif is stupid as hell but really funny, glad you're still about

>> No.23944056

>>23943919
>rrat!Ayame
God I fucking love the rrat!ayame concept. It's such a dumb simple twist of what if X was a an absolute whore but X being Ayame somehow makes it more than with anyone else.

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>>23943968
Thanks, here's the video I made it from if you're interested:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VBeu3rlx7Y
>>23944056
I'm over 10k words into this slut correction story and it is seriously a fucking blast, can't wait to share it.

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>>23944980
Holy fuck, I can't wait.

>> No.23945289

>>23944980
>over 10k words
>10k
Anon I know you write massive stories but how far are you to finishing it? You should make it a series at that point

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I bet Iroha's butt is so soft

>> No.23945559

>>23944980
>Shitty bitcrushed voice samples
>Sound in only one ear
Kino.
>>23945289
...Is 10k a lot? It doesn't really feel like it.

>> No.23945577

>>23945468
i bet her asshole is a soft, warm pink and ever-so-slightly parted enough to just dip your tongue straight in there

>> No.23945642

>>23944980
Good god, that shitty fucking voice acting...

>> No.23945671

>>23945559
Well by definition it is no longer a short story.

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IM PUTTING MY DICK BETWEEN HER SQUISHY THIGHS AND YOU CANT STOP ME

>> No.23945816

>>23944980
That mod is pure S O V L

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>>23945289
Like... a third of the way done? Maybe a quarter? Plans always change no matter how hard I try and enforce them, so I avoid releasing chapters for minor stories because then I can't go back and make major changes. Unless it's something really fucking big (like the dumpster fire that is Holocalypse) I prefer releasing everything at once. I think I could've even made the cover job a one shot, I never planned for it to be too long. Maybe once I finish the whole thing I could split it up into chapters for easier readability, but that's about it.

>> No.23946467

>>23946114
Damn you’re cracked

>> No.23946584

>>23946114
What little I can make out behind that blasted word count is tantalizing....

...please release it now.

>> No.23946607

>>23945468
With how fit she is, she probably has a runner's butt. Toned, but still soft enough to squeeze.
Chloe on the other hand probably has the softest butt of holoX. With Koyori in close second.

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>>23939286
Maybe by airing out my shame in public I'll have the motivation to actually light a fire under my ass to go back and work on them.

Omarun is cute and Funny part 2 - 8200-ish words
Foxfamily Christmas - 11000-ish words
What happens in the Hot Springs part two, Irys focus - 6100 words
Hag Orgy part 2 - Outline, not much written at all.

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>>23946467
If you think I'M cracked, you should see every other author here, especially the absolute beast that is AA. I'm probably one of the slower writers in comparison to everyone else.

>> No.23946842

>>23946631
>five-digit word count for a holiday special
bro what in the fuck

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>>23946631
Author-kun... your WIPs are so large...
You really went hard on FFC too, especially considering and this is not at all a stab at you how long Omarun's been in the works.
>>23946653
It'd be nice if I had the same energy I had when I was a WFH borderline NEET but man that shit's hard now. I've slowed down substantially. And it just occurred to me I forgot to update the fucking archive.

>> No.23947062

>>23946631
>Foxfamily Christmas
Ah holiday/anniversary fics overstretching the thing thing they're celebrating just sucks doesn't it. Fuck me I need to finish up that anniversary fic
>Hag Orgy Part 2
Man... I hate that I was dumb enough to believe that your apartment got hit by a missile back then.

>> No.23947199

>>23947062
>The stories and information posted here are artistic works of fiction and falsehood. Only a fool would take anything posted here as fact.

>> No.23947253

>>23947199
WHAT THE FUCK DO YOU MEAN? ARE YOU TELLING ME LUNA DOESN'T ACTUALLY HAVE A GUN???

>> No.23947291

>>23947253
And Nene has never, in fact, committed murder. Probably.

>> No.23947303

>>23947253
I will never recover from this discovery.

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>>23946631
Patience, my friend.
>>23946631
>Hag Orgy part 2
>pic
>>23946847
Man, covid lockdowns made so much time for writing, I almost miss them.

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>>23946584
Patience, my friend.
>>23946631
>Hag Orgy part 2
>pic
>>23946847
Covid lockdowns made so much time for writing, I almost miss them.

>> No.23947776

>>23945577
Damn Female Ninja! Requires Brain Draining Anal Lube Correction!

>> No.23948275
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So, updating the archive. Counting the series archive, we're at 1006 entries.
We breached 1k.

>> No.23948336

>>23948275
Okay?

>> No.23948448

>>23946847
>>23946842
To be fair I was already incredibly excited to write an oyakodon story since the first ones came out so all that repressed energy just came out for the Christmas story. But I had a few hurdles during the holidays and the beginning of the year was rocky, so here we are.

>how long Omarun's been in the works.
I know, chapter one came out almost 10 months ago now. I really hate being so inconsistent; one day I can pump out 1500 words in an hour, other days 50 words in 8 hours. It's ass.

>>23947062
Kek, I didn't show up for a few days and came back to find out I died.

>>23947629
And now we have even more hags after Holox debuted how will I handle this predicament?!

>>23947776
Where's the "you're the last man standing against HoloX, an organization hellbent on releasing the demon La+ into this world. Armed only with your fat cock and a special high impact anal aphrodisiac, you infiltrate their organization to take them out from within" prompt we deserve?

>> No.23948481

>>23948275
Man I still remember when the archive reached 100 last year. wg has come far.

>> No.23948570

>>23948275
Wow, and still no [INCREDIBLY NICHE FETISH] fics? This place blows.

Impressive milestone. Kinda wish we knew across how many writers that was.

>> No.23948628

>>23948275
Holy fuck. That is amazing. Like if you just take a step back and think about it, that's a lot of fucking words. We are a special breed of autism.

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>>23947062
>I hate that I was dumb enough to believe that your apartment got hit by a missile back then.
Still laughing at that, by the way. Never stopped.

>> No.23948749

>>23948628 (me)
So hold on, if we count the quick greentexts and the massive series chapters it's probably an average of around 4k words per story right? Is our archive 4 million words strong?

>> No.23948784

>>23948448
Do you think that at this point you should rebrand FFC not as a christmas fic anymore? Especially since it's not even anywhere close to Christmas. Or would that change the story too much?

>> No.23948892

>>23948784
Fox Family Christmas (In July)

>> No.23948979

>>23948892
Well here in Australia some people celebrate a mini Christmas in July because it's winter...

>> No.23948991

>>23948979
There's another Aussie in here??

Fuck off.

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>>23945577
>>23922008
Convincing an apprehensive Iroha to sit on your face only for her to lose herself in the pleasure and not give you the chance to breathe as she humps your face.

>> No.23949096

>>23949055
I lost myself in ass-lust for a moment there, but then I remembered Iroha is really boring and got turned off. Give me Koyori instead.

>> No.23949674

>>23948570
My rough estimates is that we have like a dozenish regular writers (From that question asked during the anniversary that needed at least 3 fics written in order to answer with different fics for each question) that make up a majority of the archive and who knows how many writers that have just written one fic and not much else.

>> No.23949833

>>23922008
A fic of using mind-control devices on Mori that starts off as a way to force her to behave properly but is eventually used to take advantage of her, slowly and systematically destroying her pride and stubbornness.

Ideally the mind control something like
>>23866695
>>23872256
>>23875155
>>23881692
>>23881737

>> No.23949912

>>23949674
>who knows how many writers that have just written one fic and not much else.
God bless 'em. It takes effort to contribute, especially for a hobby you're not a regular part of in the first place.

>> No.23950019

>>23948784
It wouldn't be the worst thing in the world to make that change, but a few scenes specifically work around the Santa suits that the girls got during Christmas season, so it would be odd to rework them.

>>23948275
Incredible, very nice.

I want to know if the table is going to break once we get past 1000, but I guess we'll cross that bridge when we get to it.

>> No.23950078

>>23950019
>Santa suits that the girls got during Christmas season
FINISH THE THING GOD DAMN IT

>> No.23950245

>>23950019
They got Santa suits for Australian Christmas that the Fox family is celebrating because they were too busy during the actual holidays. They planned to use them for regular Christmas but because of reasons they had to delay it to July.

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>>23950019
>Santa suits
Please finish this.

>> No.23951313

>>23950266
>>23950078
FBK is not for lewd.

>> No.23951639

>>23946653
I'm writing 200 words every 1 or 2 days

>> No.23952078

>>23951313
yeah she's for shitting in the mouth of

>> No.23952271

>>23952078
Word on the street is, she shits in people's mouths for a quick buck...

>> No.23952367

>>23946653
At least you get somewhere.

>>23947629
>TFW Lockdown didn't impact you due to your job so no time to write

>> No.23952518

>>23950078
>>23950266
I want to, trust me I have a lot of depraved things to make those two do for my own personal enjoyment.

>>23950245
That... might work if I make a few changes here and there.

>>23951313
Sorry anon, you'll read about Foobs going ass to ass with her daughter and you will enjoy it.

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>>23952518

>> No.23952833

>>23952518
>Sorry anon, you'll read about Foobs going ass to ass with her daughter and you will enjoy it
I am not perturbed because I don't think I'll ever read. I don't think anybody else will either, for that matter. But by all means, keep reminding everyone of your vaporware.

>> No.23952999

>>23948275
Adding on to the celebrations, MW got 3k hits on ao3 and funnily enough the Holostars works I did got enough traction that a dude on a starsfag fb group gushed all about it. Was weird seeing it honestly, but I guess they liked it. I'm sure that their are plenty of other stories that catch the eyes of those outside here, and I wish for all of you to keep writing, and keep reading.

>> No.23953316

>>23952999
Hey, congrats!

I wish there was a good way to see if people are talking about my stuff outside of here because this is really the only place I'm particularly involved in.

>> No.23953538

>>23953316
NTA but it's weird. I google some of the titles I've written from time to time and get nothing, but the story I dropped on FF.net years ago was posted on a bunch of places somehow...

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>>23952833
Thank you for this

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>> No.23956270

>>23956073
put that down, you don't know where it's been

>> No.23956437

>>23956073
no
NO

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>>23956270
But...she's so cute!

>>23956437
Just making sure people are paying attention

>> No.23956739

>>23956560
Now whip out the dick for some minigirl action.

>> No.23957072

>>23956073
Harder~

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>>23957072

>> No.23957427

>>23957370
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.23957490

>>23956739
Bae can canonically shrink herself based on the cooking review stream. She would be perfect for a living onahole fic

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>>23956739
and big girl action

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>>23957490
>>23958930
Irys playing with the tiny rat on her hands, irys not stopping until the rat is squealing due to the pleasure.....

oh god this scenario got me acting up and i don't even have a thing for shrinking

>> No.23961308

>>23957490
tiny Bae exploring every part of your dick, searching every nook and cranny because she's hungry forcheese

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>> No.23963832
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23963832

How did it end up this way?

>> No.23963899
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23963899

>>23963816

>> No.23964328

>>23963832
I was taking my cat to the vet.

>> No.23964478

>>23963832
I was the cat

>> No.23964627
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>>23959501
Bae being fondled by Irys's tongue, while hearing her moans and giggles all around her

>> No.23965357

>>23963832
Was too busy checking out this guy's cat. Little shit was scared and scratched me, so as soon as the guy looked away I falcon punched its stomach. Won't be causing anyone any more problems, I tell ya - and that's what being a vet's all about. Solving problems.

>> No.23965579

>>23964627
This Irys art makes my dick hard. I want her to look at me like this. Please.

>> No.23966095

>>23964328
>>23964478
>>23965357
I meant my life desu

>> No.23966327

>>23966095
Didn't have a cat to take to the vet

>> No.23966342

>>23966095
You should ask the cat about it.

>> No.23966372

>>23966095
Oh that's easy, you got too invested emotionally in a fanfiction thread for vtubers

>> No.23967342

>>23957490
Onahole Bae fic sounds like a great idea, has there ever been a onahole fic before?

>> No.23968824
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23968824

>>23939286
Let Me Feel Your Pain- Chapter 8 (sitting at 1k words now)

Building Block Doll Chapter 15 (sitting at a paragraph)

Secret unreleased work (sitting at 2k words)

>> No.23969506

>>23966095
You didn't finish your WIPs, get to work now

>> No.23970508
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>Fubuki retweet
Do we now have an official design for her daughter??

>> No.23970641

>>23970508
No, that's me

>> No.23974483

>>23970508
>her daughter??
it straight up says sukonbu

>> No.23975293

>>23970508
EOPchama...

>> No.23975395

>>23974483
>>23975293
NTA but it could definitely be used as a stand-in for lack of other options.
Unless someone was crazy enough to pay for an interpretation of Miyuki - oil baron, this means you. Would be kind of weird for someone other than the actual author to do, though.

>> No.23976139

>>23975395
I thought miyuki's design is intentionally vague from every fic (well the three that exist) that's described her due to her being (Your) daughter.
Besides no one is that autistic to commission a design for an OC daughter with a chuuba. That's a bit too much even for this thread.

>> No.23976879

>>23952271
Well that's an interesting idea for a paradise lost sequel.

>> No.23977143

>>23975395
The oil baron was the one who wrote Miyuki's fan chapter

>> No.23977278

>>23958930
>>23959501
>>23964627
>>23922008

>> No.23977832 [DELETED] 

>>23977143
What? How do you know that?

>> No.23978009

>>23977832
It was revealed to me in an ancient manuscript found in an Egyptian tomb

>> No.23978514
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23978514

Towa reaction to me proposing to her. A classic. She said yes btw

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This is where our baby threw yogurt at her face while she was taking pictures! Haha that was amazing

>> No.23978812

>>23978514
>>23978752
Fuck off already.

>> No.23978838

>>23978514
>>23978752
So, do you do this for attention?

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>>23946631
>What happens in the Hot Springs part two, Irys focus - 6100 words
>Irys focus
my knees...i cant...move

>> No.23979236

>>23978514
>>23978752
Wholesome

>> No.23979727
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>>23922008
mea is actually obsessed with roberu
he has to put up a facade every stream, pretending its just a joke
in reality, he has changed his door lock twice last month and got a preventive vasectomy

>> No.23979975

>>23979727
this but when Mea finally manages to break in he finds Roberu getting his dick ridden by an Animare girl

>> No.23980375

>>23979975
While Irys gives him a rimjob and Hoshiwaka plus Haachama lick his pepperoni sized nips

>> No.23980528

>>23979975
>>23980375
Why are you fags like this? Why can’t it be a story about Mea and Roberu?

>> No.23980623

>>23980528
Why are you, a faggot, like this? Why can't it be a story about Mea getting cucked by Roberu?

>> No.23980655

>>23980528
that IS a story about mea and roberu

>> No.23980826

>>23980528
Mea does not deserve a happy ending after all she's done

>> No.23980903

>>23979975
>>23980375
This bit got tired ages ago, either make your own prompt or something but stop trying to hijack other prompts, you creatively bankrupt hacks.

>> No.23981009

>>23980903
this but you get a life instead of whinging on the internet

>> No.23981022

>>23981009
This but you don't reply to bait

>> No.23981245

>>23980903
not this time because my son Roberu has been hitting it off with the ladies extremely well. Mea is but another footnote in the long line of women trying to dogpile him in their sweaty, lust-fueled bodies.

>> No.23981254

>>23981022
This is /wg/ or did you forget?

>> No.23981315

>>23981254
probably some newfag or something.

>> No.23981562

>>23980826
Mea did nothing wrong.

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>>23981562
> he doesn't know

>> No.23982124

>>23981655
I prefer the gura anya edit desu

>> No.23982443

>>23975395
>>23976139
I was pondering setting up ye olde tablet and giving it a shot myself. Very rusty, but if anons want to see my take I might give it a shot.

>> No.23982579

>>23982443
Not needed

>> No.23982862

>>23982443
Well it'll be fun to see at least.

>> No.23982975

>>23982443
I do want to see your take. I'm quite interested.

>> No.23982979

>>23982443
How about no.

>> No.23983022

>>23982443
You're going to do it no matter what we say

>> No.23983061

>>23982443
Ignore the shitposters. If you want to give it a shot, go for it. I'd love to put a face to the name, personally.

>> No.23983096

>>23982443
Go for it

>> No.23983264

>>23982443
oc is always good

>> No.23983530

>>23980903
Honestly monkey's pawing prompts is a bit lazy but there's nothing inherently wrong with the process of 'rough idea getting built up by shit getting thrown at the wall' we've gotten some pretty decent prompts built up from shit getting chained into each other.

>> No.23983532

>>23983061
What shitposters?

>> No.23984654

>>23982443
Yeah, I’m gonna say no. I don’t get why you choose to draw an oc but not an actual chuuba.

>> No.23984869

>>23982443
If you're gonna draw her, I'd suggest re-reading the original story first. I remember the author gave her some specific descriptions.

>> No.23985078

>>23984654
I’m assuming attention.

>> No.23985676

>>23983532
Going to guess is the people who don't want the OC.

>>23984654
>I don’t get why you choose to draw an oc but not an actual chuuba.
Probably because unless it's a literal no-view chuuba, every chuuba has some decent art.

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>>23922008
Dealing with Ina's bouts of insanity that stem from The Ancient Ones being mad that she's been shirking her Preistess duties to spend time with you

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>>23922008
raping Marine in a non-consensual manner

>> No.23986097

>>23985676
>Going to guess is the people who don't want the OC.
How is not wanting an OC shitposting? I come here for the chuubas.

>> No.23986253

>>23986097
Look, we had this argument before and all you need to know is that they get extremely defensive. There’s no point in arguing.

>> No.23986843

Honestly this entire argument has been completely superfluous because Miyuki is described as looking just like her mother in the second paragraph of the fic.

>> No.23987081

>>23986253
It’s only an argument because the people who don’t want OCs are labeled as shitposter.

>> No.23987103

>>23986843
I thought some of her features where vaguely (You) sourced which is where the difficulties of making a design for her would come from.

>> No.23987257

>>23986843
It's just a couple of retards bickering. Their opinions are ultimately irrelevant for the same reason as fetish fics - you don't have to look at or read it.

IIRC the author said he didn't think about her appearance much when writing her. I hope he sees this and weighs in so a more concrete appearance can be determined.

>> No.23987765

>>23985810
This but it's not a bout of insanity, it's the Ancient Ones possessing her body because they want a turn to be able spend time with you.

>> No.23987825

>>23987765
No, just stop.

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>>23987765
God, don't remind me of all that. I really wish that got written

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>>23987825

>> No.23988473

>>23987765
Would rather have the story be about Ina.

>> No.23989108

>>23988473
We all want the story to be about Ina.

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>>23988473
>>23989108
we can do better than Ina

>> No.23989623

>>23966095
Try leaving your house and touch grass. Also stop coming here if this is all what you do with your day.

>> No.23989897

>>23989589
Literally who?

>> No.23990012

>>23987257
Jesus I did not expect an OC I created for a wholesome family fic to be this popular. It's like the other anons said, I didn't really have a concrete appearance in mind when I made her but if I guess I'll make up some right now.

Fox-like features like her Mom Fubuki

She has shoulder length hair and it's two-toned with White and (your) hair colour but I guess the second colour could be black.

Her bust size is C(Something she feels proud of because it makes her bigger than her mom.)

She would have (your) eye colours.

The tip of her tail would be white while the inner part of her tail is (your) hair colour.

Hopefully this would paint a clearer picture of Miyuki.

>> No.23990130

>>23989897
....
Someone just outed themselves as not watching streams.

>> No.23990177

>>23990130
Some people have lives nigger you're bound to miss something or not watch the chuuba in question

>> No.23990189

>>23990130
You do know you’re on /wg/ right?

>> No.23990187

>>23990130
Anon, no one in /wg/ watches streams, that's been proven multiple times now. So, again, literally who?

>> No.23990343

>>23990012
Saved, might get something done of her for shits and giggles. We've only got the one fic of her, though; have you considered doing any more quality bonding time between you, her and Foobs?

>> No.23990525

>>23990130
Sorry, I only watch 2views. Cool design tho

>> No.23990737

>>23990130
Not everyone watches Hololive, you idiot.

>> No.23990759

>>23990343
>the one fic of her
Which of the other two miyuki fics did you forget?

>> No.23990825

>>23990343
I honestly don't mind doing more fics for them but I haven't got the inspiration to write fics in a long while. I did have an idea but it's pretty dark. NTR fic where Miyuki pays off some men to rape and mind break Fubuki so that she'll have you all to herself . It's probably not a good idea lol. Maybe in the future I'll write more fluffy fox family fics

>> No.23990858

>>23990825
>NTR
Already garbage.

>> No.23991003

>>23990825
That could sound pretty hot, although it'd definitely have an impact on reading through the other fics where it just looks like she's really jealous.
IIRC you had the idea of having Miyuki become an idol like her mum and being forced to sleep her way up or something?
Regardless, I'd welcome any new additions, however dark they may be.

>>23990759
Ah, I actually even forgot the original; I was only thinking of Fox Family Bonding. I don't count the fan sequel.

>> No.23991050

>>23990825
Whatever happened to your old idea for a 'bad end' to miyuki where (You) reject her idea of incest? Did that get killed by thread feedback about it being too far from being chuba fic?

>> No.23991147

>>23990825
>NTR fic
Why? Just why?

>> No.23991392

>>23990525
>I only watch 2views
Same, I just watch indies at this point.

>> No.23991424

>>23990525
>>23991392
Names? I’m tired of just watching corporate vtubers.

>> No.23991437

>>23990858
>>23991003
>>23991050
>>23991147
Like I said, it's an idea I had a while ago. I'm not gonna act out on it but it's a fun thought. Most of the things I wrote for this thread is fluff anyway. I love moral degeneracy stuff so I often have thoughts of putting dark twists in my fics.

>> No.23991633

>>23991437
>moral degeneracy
Honestly I'd love to see a moral degen fic, always love those doujin plots and would love to see a fic about it.

>> No.23991685

>>23985676
>Probably because unless it's a literal no-view chuuba, every chuuba has some decent art.
Then maybe draw the chuubas in the scenarios of your stories? I still don’t get why the OC is your go to choice.

>> No.23991723

>>23991685
Why do we do anything?
Because they want to do it anonchama.

>> No.23991741

>>23990187
>proven
When?

>> No.23991867

>>23991685
Not the person wanting to draw the OC, just giving a possible reason as to why he might do it.

>> No.23992131

>>23991424
I like Terumi Koizumi despite her mental illness.

>> No.23992160

>>23991741
If you haven't noticed by now that no one here watches streams then you haven't been here long enough. It's self evident that /wg/ barely knows what we're writing about and just hope no one calls us out.

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>>23992160

>> No.23992284

>>23992160
yeah sorry busy watching your mom bounce on my dick
keep seething dumb ritualnigger lmao, YWNBJ and will perpetually scream into the void

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>>23992160
>we're
>us

>> No.23992480

>>23989897
The Watcher from Beyond the Void. Something that Ina drew.

>> No.23992567

>>23992480
>EN
Ahh, that'd be why

>> No.23992571

>>23992480
They look like they give the kind of handjobs where they put your cock up their oversized sleeves and make you cum in them...

>> No.23992675

>>23992160
I haven't watched a single full stream in the last 7 months or so

>> No.23993020

New thread
>>23992706

>> No.23993075

>>23993020
Great, even more whores. Why couldn’t it be a pure woman like Marine?

>> No.23993216

>>23993020
None of those images look like Noel

>> No.23993580

chapter 20 leak https://youtu.be/tONWPvYG_EM

>> No.23993633

>>23992160
I do watch streams though. Watching right now. Eat shit bitch.

>> No.23993667

>>23993633
This radiates a lot of "I'm not racist, I have black friends" vibes

>> No.23993741

>>23993667
How? You said all of /wg/ doesn’t watch streams. I’m part of /wg/ and am currently watching Miyabi and pizza dad. Do I need to break it down further for you?

>> No.23993800

>>23993741
Yikes

>> No.23993841

>>23993741
careful, you might hurt his feelings

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>>23993020
NoeFlare is perfect for NTR

>> No.23994078

>>23993741
Why are you taking bait seriously

>> No.23994258
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23994258

I've consoomed it, I've consoomed it all. All the porn, all the fics, all the audios...

There's no more wank material for me in the chuuba world. I think... I think it's time I get a life?

>> No.23994280

>>23994258
There is another path available to you.
You can create your own wank material, manifest your fantasies into reality by writing it out.

>> No.23994316

>>23994258
you uh, still got those Suisex AXL35 vids? I need them.

>> No.23994336

>>23994280
No... The next step is... The next step is getting a hooker to dress up as my oshi, and asking for tail pics

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>>23994316
I don't save videos unfortunately but I did wank to it

Do save a lot of images though

>> No.23994469

>>23994438
...What's in the last one

>> No.23994494

>>23994469
You don't want to know

>> No.23994500

>>23994494
I asked bitch.

>> No.23994554

>>23994500
Traps, futa, random crossdressers and cosplay selfies of mine

>> No.23994658

>>23994554
One day.

>> No.23994693

>>23994554
gonna need some links

>> No.23994757
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>>23994658
Nope

>>23994693
https://mobile.twitter.com/xixiyaxixi1

>> No.23994786

>>23994757
Oh, I know this one
Time to cum

>> No.23994903

>>23994786
I wanted to find more like him but it's a gamble whether you'll get a tranny, a SFW crossdresser or someone like him. Blew many loads to his public stuff already, but wish I could find more

>> No.23994941

>>23994903
It never gets any easier so it's all just hoping, but god if SFW crossdressers aren't blueballs central

>> No.23994985

>>23994941
There's this one too which is how I found the other above
https://mobile.twitter.com/9797san
But his stuff is mostly just prostate hands free orgasms and cock pics

>> No.23995098

>>23994985
Yeah I stole all these from that thread so i've been hoarding them, good shit though

>> No.23995187

>>23995098
Man, once I get a girlfriend again and marry, the post nut clarity is gonna hit so damn hard that I did all this gay stuff from lack of female attention

>> No.23995235

>>23995187
y-yeah, I'm sure you will, I'm sure you will...

>> No.23995236

Oh I found a Pekora one... not sharing

>> No.23995318

>>23995236
i will fuck you
up

>> No.23995430

>>23995318
https://spankbang.com/69oqq/video/porn

>> No.23995452

>>23995430
oh, the JAV. already had this one saved. i'm deep in this crossdresser shit jesus fucking christ

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>>23995318

>> No.23995473

>>23995430
>>23995452
Not me, the JAV is old news

>> No.23995532

>>23995453
i cant believe pekofag is finally posting their twitter

>> No.23996011

I hate you faggots.
Luna rape.

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>>23995453

>> No.23996217
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Luna RAPE

>> No.23996467
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>>23996217

>> No.23996487
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23996487

You do want to rape the princess. Right, anon?

>> No.23996508

>>23996487
Making Luna drink bitter semen!!

>> No.23996540

>>23996487
You do know what rape means, right? What kind of physical and emotional trauma you'd inflict on her?

>> No.23996731

>>23996540
Making her eat sugar free candy.

>> No.23996749

>>23996540
taking away her crane game privileges

>> No.23996755

>>23996731
Fuck man. That's messed up. You seriously need mental help.

>> No.23996792

>>23996755
She WILL eat slightly less than serving size of sugar free gummi bears and she WILL want more despite her tummy being uncomfortable, and there's nothing you can do about it!! Say 'goodbye' to your precious princess' sugar kick!!

>> No.23996951

>>23996792
>sugar free gummi bears
Don't those give people the shits?

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