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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>22999469

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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em!

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were four stories posted last thread. Take a look at them if you didn't in the last thread:

Assassin's Creed: Hololive: Tags: Chole, Amelia, Mumei, Suisei, Kaela, Flare, Mio, crime drama, crossover:>>23001037

Split Heart: Tags: Akai Haato/Anon, highschool setting, romance, SFW, yandere, abusive chuuba, kidnapping :>>23008756

Lazy Oni: Tags: ryona, Ayame, (you):>>23065284

Red in the Abattoir: Tags:Gura, Gore, Vore, SFW:>>23104774

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Anya has a raging boner, big enough to visibly tent her dress, and it's Ollie's turn to crawl underneath the table and suck her dry:>>23020127

Marine announcing that she's going on hiatus and Mio confronting demanding she tell the truth and that she's pregnant. She's not and it's just Mio's paranoia over not having a family yet:>>23025077

Having your senpai Botan force you to drive out to secluded place so she can rape you:>>23032697

Suisei doing a naked dogeza with her clothes arrayed before you, apologizing for a slight against you that you barely remember.:>>23047946

Gradually making Fubuki addicted to your cum by making her give you daily blowjobs and making her gulp it down everytime.:>>23049178

Mori and Bae are just hanging out at Mori's place while her awful wigger music blasts on the speakers:>>23097730

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>> No.23110617

Bump

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The board...!!!

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Since this board's zooming due reasons how about an activity.
Go to the prompt archive, browse it for a bit and pull up a prompt you think is interesting.
I'll start
>>23108133
You recently graduated from university and today you start working in a hospital. The hospital is currently understaffed due to the pandemic and so you are following a nurse around and helping with basic tasks as she is explaining how everything works. Suddenly an emergency, an older black haired wolf lady arrives to the emergency room. MY GOD, she will literally die if someone doesn't impregnate her right now and you're the only male around. ANON, WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR? WILL YOU JUST LET HER FUCKING DIE?

>> No.23111986

>>23111670
>"ANON, WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR? WILL YOU JUST LET HER FUCKING DIE?"
"Fuck you Yagoo! Not this shit again!"
>"ANOOOOON!"

>> No.23112203

>>23111670
>Written from one of the girl's perspectives (maybe multiple), a man she has never met before keeps appearing in her dreams, and reassuring her of any worries or insecurities that she has (about life, streaming, etc.). This mysterious man introduces himself as Anon, and even cured her when she was sick one day while she was dreaming. She doesn't know why her brain picked such a specific and detailed face... until she sees him in public one day.

>> No.23112877

>>23111670
>Requesting a story about (You) training the super bratty Gura into being your sex slave, and being the samegaki she is, she ends up getting a lot of punishments.

>> No.23113092

TIL that AA has good taste in dark souls armor sets. That is all.

>> No.23113111

>>23111986
>Hospital falls apart.
>Entire building was actually a cardboard set, even the nurse.
>YAGOO comes to punch you as the cardboard wall in front of you falls..
>You dodge out of the way, and run off into the streets of Tokyo.
>YAGOO and Mio are left alone in the ruins of the set.
>Millions of Yen gone to the wind as another scheme to get You to impregnate Mio fails.

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>>23108100
A real brief story I wrote just tonight because I needed to get it out of my system. A few threads back we talked about hugging Miko every time she makes a noise so I wrote about that, because I really wanna fucking do that.

Miko noises (~1k words):
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQZ-aAYmR5ix6DmhAdZba0-MoG4CyqH-zuxWgL8-LvzP8i7L8cCsqz4ClXLjiqA2io_rwz_7L1ahrZY/pub
Tags: Miko, SFW, fluff, abuse(?)

>> No.23113914

>>23113111
>Mio, Choco and Matsuri form the Desperate Baby Alliance scheming to wring the precious semen from your body

>> No.23113946

>>23113885
Even though she's gay and would hate you for touching her?

>> No.23114116

>>23113885
Cute
>>23113946
How do you know (You) aren't a cute girl in this?

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>>23113885
This fic is way too cute for how short it is.
Great work.
>>23113946
She's clearly resigned to her fate by the time the story takes place.

>> No.23115472

>>23113946
>falling for rrats
Miko isn't gay, dumbass.

>> No.23115748

>>23115472
Then why did Miko do it?
Why would she rape Pekora in the hot summer of 20XX.

>> No.23116088

>>23115472
>falling for rrats
>falls for a rrat
Like pottery

>> No.23116155

>>23116088
>falls for a rrat about a rrat not being a rrat
Your right to ogey is forfeit.

>> No.23116293

>>23115748
Sometimes, when confronted with things too hot to comprehend, you do stupid things before your mind can remind you of your preferences. For instance, put me in a room with Kagami Kira and I'd be balls deep impregnating his asshole before I remember I'm not gay.

>> No.23116435

>>23113914
Why is Choco there?

>> No.23116455

>>23108197
Red in the Abattoir's tag should be cannibalism and not vore, sorry about my initial mistagging

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>>23116455
Hey, it's cool. I put it in tagged as cannibalism, no worries. Thanks for the contribution.

>> No.23118572

This water girl sure is cute

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>>23116435
She's lamented her bad luck with men and feeling of getting old before, even though she's not a hag yet.

>>23113885
Super cute!

>> No.23121120

>>23112877
Damn, I remember when this was posted and had hoped someone would pick it up.
Making a bratty kusogaki submit to (you) sounds lovely. The Shion story is still one of my favorites.

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Forget about that menhera, anon~

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Waki Bump

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>>23122645
I prefer the Sui-chan version.

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>>23122809
>

>> No.23122924

>>23122854
Face it anon, she's the superior blue woman.

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>>23122924

>> No.23123436

>>23112877
You'd have to put a ring gag on her early on. That way whenever she acts up you can just shove your dick down her throat until she calms down

>> No.23123736

>>23122645
>>23122809
I want one on my dick and the other on my face.

>> No.23124109

>>23115748
Nousagi cunny would tempt anybody

>> No.23124143

>>23124109
Nousagi is her fanbase. Usagi means rabbit.

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>>23122809
Holy shit.

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>>23122809
>>23108133
Being Aqua's manager and having a jealous Suisei coming on to you!

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Apparently Subaru's first love was a dog. I guess it only makes sense

>> No.23125809

>>23125734
Who is she jealous of?

>> No.23125959

>>23125809
aqua

>> No.23127279

>>23123436
>Human cum acts as an Atlantean depressant

>> No.23127910

>>23108100
Footsteps Across Time: Aquila Aquilam Parit

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTe5x6NX_6UzGbtGi8tG81FMoNDmsFNDHrGazjqBJ7mT3FrwYnrq0PydvKme6jD4x7jnCiLb61JG8Ij/pub

Rentry catalog for the previous chapters and other stories: https://rentry.org/footstepsandstories

Chapters are slower now since I'm in finals season for college. Other than that, I hope you enjoy.

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What did Irys mean by this?
https://files.catbox.moe/n6sfeo.mp3

>> No.23129148

>>23127910
I remember reading a single doc that contained multiple chapters. Is the rentry series the same story or is it new?

>> No.23129295

>>23129148
Rentry has a few different stories under it, the Footsteps chapters are all the same story as this one though.

>> No.23129513

>>23129295
That's not what I meant. I remember reading this story when it first came out, it was a single doc but contained multiple chapters, it went up to the American revolution I think. I'm just asking if I should pick up the series from that point on or if the serie has been rewritten and then divided into proper chapters

>> No.23129610

>>23129513
Oh, sorry. Yes the series was rewritten completely, the new chapter 1 is just Rome. The chapter you read was split into all the chapters you see now and completely rewritten.

>> No.23130466

>>23127910
nice addition as per usual, anon.
ill be honest, im not the biggest fan of the fact that florus has stopped being fully human. Part of his charm was being able to fight alongside mystic beings while still being human but I understand it wouldnt be feasible in the long run.also, would it be possible to also have the old story back up? it would be nice to contrast it with what you've made up to now.

>> No.23130777

>>23130466

Trust me the demon stuff is just as unpleasant to him, that plot thread will eventually be resolved. Whether or not he becomes fully human again remains to be seen.

Also I tried to see if the old story was in the archive but the archive link to the series is broken, AA will have to update it to the new rentry link since I retitled it after adding new stories to that archive.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRrIyAzDuweQfzNmBw_-YI9pUDiYZBzDggaH2wX79wSD6h1ogNqtfcSDr19zMq_fjmNnXxMOgNDQpEC/pub

Here's the OG story that I used as the 'outline' of the rewrite. I'll stick it in the rentry catalog for archival purposes.

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>> No.23133015

>>23132760
10/10 would nibble from behind all those ears

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>>23127279
>You're a fisherman, and one day during a storm, hear a ruckus outside on your boat
>Get your gun and find Gura, aggressively gnawing on the fish you caught, almost feral
>She's bloody herself, full of bite marks and lacerations
>She gets entangled in a net trying to run away, have to muzzle her and tie her up
>Take her home out of pity and deal with her injuries
>She's still a menace wreaking all sorts of havoc
>One day you snap and force yourself on her
>Fill her sharkunny with your cum
>Her eyes turn from red to blue, and she becomes more human than animal
>Next few days are peacefully spent with your adoptive sharkdaughterwife
>Until she starts acting up again, her eye color switching back to red
>Realize your semen is some sort of atlantean pacifier
>Have to spend the rest of your life making Gura swallow your cum, injecting it in her pussy or ass, anywhere really as long as it makes it into her bloodstream

>> No.23135332

bump

>> No.23135582

>>23132760
Eugh...I feel sick looking at such disgusting knife ears.
Towa and the middle-right aside, the rest look simply awful.

>> No.23136206

>>23113885
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Now I really want my own Miko to hug and squish

>> No.23136256

>>23135582
Damn Racist Anon, Require Knife Ear Correction!

>> No.23138515

>>23135582
Elf pride world wide

>> No.23138594

>>23125734
This but it ends with Aqua humiliated and masturbating like that greentext.

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>>23135582
Fuck you, my wife is perfect and her ears are perfect

>> No.23139846

>>23138651
Are Laplus' Ears Sensitive?

>> No.23140922

>>23139846
All pointy ears are sensitive by default.

>> No.23141520

>>23125809
Both you and Aqua. She wants a threesome, but is unsure how to sell it you both.

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>>23108100
This chapter is on the shorter side but it's still a good one. Don't know what to say other than that. Anyways, enjoy more seggs with Mio.

Tags: NSFW, Mio, Nakadashi, Lactation, Prostate Massage

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR96nvIdViu3471hadzuP2PwOM2ShZVYrw4R1yvgT_Btva1s_xWLRcahaBEsH128BGDlsmOlh-1k6aU/pub

reentry link: https://rentry.org/ogz8n

>> No.23148274

Good morning/wake up

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Now Risu will finally get fics here!!!

>> No.23148396

>>23148310
>Sora and Gura get 30 new fics
>Risu is mentioned in the background of one

>> No.23148732

>>23144237
step on me more, Kanata!

>> No.23150255 [DELETED] 

>>23108100
>>23148979

>> No.23150519

>>23150255
Too small

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>>23108133
Gawr capturing you at see and forcing you to be her sex slave

>> No.23152499

Why no talk

>> No.23152577

>>23150689
why does adding sharp canines instantly make a girl sexier

>> No.23152696

>>23152499
>inb4 /wg/ is dead post
Reading and/or writing takes time man, that and outside of those the other thing that drive discussion is well discussion of fic ideas and stuff.

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>>23152499
Sorry I finally have a see an entry point for a lot of stocks I have been watching so I needed to prep a few things, transfer money etc.

-75% by mid-year incoming.

>> No.23153109

>>23152696
>Reading takes time
Not... really? Writing sure but I don’t think it takes much to read a story

>> No.23153181

>>23152499
I dunno man I don't got a lot to say. I just got a cool poster frame for a poster though.

>> No.23153695

>>23108100
>>23125848

>> No.23154313

>>23127910
Man. I think this story is suffering from like three things right now half baked ideas, scope creep, and blowing its narrative load during the Japan/Vienna chapter.
Though I guess in some ways they're all sort of tied to the story expansion done when expanding the initial chapter from a rough concept into something bigger with expanded looks into the slices of time that were initially presented in that (for lack of a better word) 'demo' chapter. Since the thing kind of needed those ideas and scope expansion in order to actually have stuff to populate the chapters with since the story wasn't running on the Kiara fight slowly burning into a romance anymore... especially since the Vienna chapter has basically made them a couple now. It's still interesting enough to keep me reading but damn are cracks starting to show.

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Hey is it just me or is the google script page not showing the newest stuff at the bottom of it?

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>>23154656
I was so tired after work I forgot to update the spreadsheet that the script draws from, whoops. I'll get right on that.

>> No.23155901

>>23127910
>>23129610
Got up to the Germany chapter so far. It's a nice comfy read, a definite improvement over the draft. I know the scope increases in the future and I look forward to seeing more characters, same for the plot, if it picks up to something more than a historical piece between two immortals.

>> No.23156559

>>23144470
This continues to be hot, Holy shit that fucking prostate massage scene was really fucking good. God damn.; but I think you're suffering from overuse of you here. I get that it's the easiest way to envision and write it but that is something I've noticed.
What the hell is Mio planning with wanting you to fuck all of her old friends.

>> No.23156570

>>23155901
I'm glad you like it, and I hope it won't disappoint in the future. The scope will certainly increase and things will evolve, as we get closer to modern times there's a lot of things I want to try and do.

>>23154313
I appreciate the feedback, I certainly feel part of the problem is that I've been meandering towards bigger payoffs again. It's a bit of a narrative dive, from the high of Japan/Vienna back down to the setup with the Revolution. I had initially planned a 'padding' chapter after this one in the form of the Civil War, but truth be told I've opted to skip it and maybe include it as a side chapter if I ever decide to write it because the next narrative beat I want to hit is in Victorian England. I can tell you that it's not going to stay that way, and I hope it's worth it to you when all is said and done.

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>>23108133
Suisei successfully gets a boyfriend in high school.
She comes over to his house and greets his parents with a most pleasant smile.
And they let her go to his room without worry.
They've already talked extensively with their son about the dangers and responsibilities of such a relationship.
They were more worried about him than Suisei of course. To them she seemed like such an intelligent and mature, albeit physically undeveloped teenager. They have no idea she's in her late 20's.

>> No.23158157

>>23157686
W-wait, so 2x Suisei with a HS bf?

>> No.23158793

>>23158157
Yes, Suisei is grooming a 'Shounen' by pretending to be a highschooler.

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>>23108133
High Impact Moon
aka pounding Moona's fat ass

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>>23156559
Noted. I'll try not to spam 'you' and 'your' in the upcoming chapters. Have a hag.

>> No.23160508

So, fellow non-native english, how do you write your stories and how to overcome the language barrier? Am an ESL myself and I kinda hard stuck on which word should I use to depicts some scene in my fic

>> No.23160804

>>23160508
Just read and write more.
Practice makes perfect maybe an overused expression but writing is something where a good feedback loop of writing and getting feedback for it will make you get better at it naturally.
As for word use... just read more. A dictionary helps but you need practical experience in knowing how a word is used, and reading is pretty much the best place to learn.

>> No.23161351

>>23160508
wordhippo.com is one of my best friends while I’m writing. Even though I’m a native English speaker I still find myself drawing blanks when looking for descriptive words every now and then. This’ll help increase your vocabulary if that’s what you’re after.

>> No.23161426

>>23161351
NTA but that's an instant bookmark, cheers

>> No.23161526

>>23161351
Thanks anon, usually i just rely on rhymezone or thesaurus, but an additional option still helps nonetheless

>> No.23161692

>>23158964
This but her ass is so thick that your dick can't even get past it.

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>> No.23164031

>>23163651
Holy Shit! Watame has a gun!

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>Fucked up Matsuri's battle math
>Another critically low HP turn
>MFW

Oh God what the fuck am I supposed to do with this

>> No.23164379

>>23164260
...
Do I still need to make that Matsuri fan alt chapter or is it happening in canon now?

>> No.23164410

>>23122809
s-sauce? onegai?

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>>23164379
I rolled a D100 to discern what the fuck happens to Anon in this situation and I think I accidentally cucked Coco out of her chapter by inadvertently speeding up the arrival of a new arc into this one. The arc that was supposed to be its own chapter.

>> No.23164733

>>23144237
There is something strangely erotic about seeing Kanata that angry.
I want her to beat the absolute shit out of me while she looks that pissed.

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>>23164589
Did... I fucking call it last thread? >>23095528
...
Holy shit...
>Matsuri winning her encounter was predicted at first as a joke, then as a hope by some anons in thread.
>She fucking wins
>Matsuri cucking Coco out of her chapter was predicted
>It happens
>Matsuri is themed around destiny and fate in story
We are reaching levels of kino that shouldn't be possible.

>> No.23165105

>>23164589
>Coco finally gets to do something after being repeatedly blueballed out of the main plot
>gets cockblocked by a teenage girl
The dice gods must be Chinese.

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>>23165050
>>23165105
I'm actually a genius and remembered something of critical import that ended up working, so it's okay.

>> No.23165406

>>23165260
Ah yes, the +5 dice roll of gm fiat.
People always seem to forget that.

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>>23165406
More along the lines of (actual spoilers again)
>"Wait, if she's down, her skills are deactivated too. That means...if this roll succeeds, then--"
>"Oh thank FUCKING God."
What would've happened was NOT Matsuri rape, so no, that isn't being stolen out from under the people who wanted it. It would've actually have fucking sucked and taken out any bite from this chapter if it happened, so I'm glad I remembered that.

>> No.23165693

>>23165600
....
Oh my god it was the roll to make sure Coco didn't fucking murder Matsuri wasn't it?

>> No.23165786

>>23165600
Out of curiosity what's your process for coming up with what to do with a story? You're very skilled at keeping things engaging from start to finish, so I guess I'm looking for advice to better myself at writing engaging stories, even just small stuff.

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>>23165786
Ah, thank you. very much. I wish I had a satisfying answer for that. There's not really a process involved. It's just stuff I think would be cool to see in a story or things I visualize while working/walking around and opt to put in the thought cabinet and obsess over until I get the chance to write. This one was in my head since last November and was being thought about in tandem with the last chapter, but a scene I wanted to happen in this one would've required chapter six to have happened first, so it did. I guess it's making characters endearing alongside an interesting world? I'm not really sure what's 'engaging' about my own writing, but that's because it's not something I've experienced as a reader outside of reviewing.

>> No.23166137

>>23165939
That's fair, still, it's a good piece of advice relying on just what you think'd be cool to write and for people to read. I think maybe my own writing was suffering writing what I felt wasn't that interesting! Sometimes I convince myself a story -has- to hit a certain beat and if there's some drudgery in the way that can really bog it down.

>> No.23167342

>>23166137
That's one way to shoot it in the foot. Certain situations could call for something needing to hit a beat, but else it isn't worth it if it feels like it slows things down too much.

>> No.23168243

>>23166137
In fairness if a certain concept/beat is what your initial idea is centered around then I can see why you'd want to make sure you get it right since that would in fact be your 'money shot' that you've been building everything around, as one-shots really aren't that type to change forms while reading so what you were already writing was building up to that idea.

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>>23157686
>>23158793
need

>> No.23171241
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We need more Kurokami stories

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>>23171241
Well, do you have any ideas starring/revolving around foxenemy?

>> No.23171484

>>23171375
Breaking down Kurokami's defenses and turning her into a blushing mess through showing her affection and love!

>> No.23172407

>>23171241
Agreed. Sequel to Paradise Lost when?

>> No.23172725

>>23172407
i wonder if that scatfag still browses here.

>> No.23172848

>>23172407
>Kurokami goes to Brazil because Fubuki was too scared to do another one of these fanmeeting things after that incident.
>Has a fun day with (You) enjoying the sights and sounds of Brazil.
>All the while eating so much of the local food.
>Nothing bad happens.
>(You) see her off after the day ends
>Unfortunately Kurokami drank some dirty water.
>It gives her the shits but the hotel doesn't have any bathrooms at all.
>Every room is just a room and the doors to the bathrooms are painted on.
>She can find nothing to do her business in, and when she tries to escape the hotel finds the doors locked and the windows jammed tight.
>A voice comes from an intercom
>"I think Fubuki informed you about what you need to do to get out of here"
Can Kurokami escape the hotel without shitting in a man's mouth?

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>> No.23175126

Damn male Anon, not posting...bump correction is needed!!

>> No.23176398

As I was trawling through the old threads I saw a story I'd never read before.
It was Exposure Theraphy, and fuck me I can see why that story is so highly recommended. It tugs at the heartstrings so good. I wish I read it sooner.
If the author of that is still here, I want them to know they made something great.

>> No.23177055

Why aren't you writing RIGHT NOW?

>> No.23177237

>>23177055
Uni and wageslaving has got me on lock, man.

>> No.23177277

>>23177055
fortnite

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>>23177055
Because I stopped to take care of the 30+ tabs of bunny cunny I had opened throughout the week before my dick took direct control of my body and killed me. It still did and I lost an hour or two to carnal sin, but yeah.

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>>23177055
Because I have 9 unfinished projects with a combined word count of 15Kish words and if I write now I'm going to start another one

>> No.23177638

>>23177283
AA... your masturbation reps...

>> No.23177716

>>23177283
How the fuck can you stand having that many tabs open?
More tabs than 10 make me question why I have the ones on the left open and not in a bookmark.

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>>23177055
Because I have like 6 meetings today and instead of preparing for those I need to explain to a senior developer who makes double what I make that if he requests a certificate in .pem format, and the client gives us a certificate in .pem format, he's not going to get the certificate in .cer format.
Which is even worse because all he has to do is rename the file and voila, they're the same fucking thing.

>>23177716
I have like 90 tabs open on my work computer at most times. It's nightmarish but sometimes I don't have time for proper tab management.

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>>23177716
I was really, really fucking horny but also didn't want to masturbate until I was off work. Except that I uh...just kept going. That fucking rabbit turns me into an uncontrollable mess when the time is right.

>> No.23178016

>>23177807
>90 tabs
Please tell me you have that fucking firefox extension that lets you have them be grouped up... Because I question how you'd even remember what any of those even were.

>> No.23178111

>>23177716
I'm too lazy to use bookmarks so I just have everything open. I think I have around 30 tabs open now.

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>>23177807
If my tabs start getting squished I instantly go on a nuking spree. Never more than 5 tabs at a time and even that is rare. Yeesh, you people are messy

>> No.23178251

>>23178016
>Because I question how you'd even remember what any of those even were.
You'd be definitely right, but in the rush to resolve an issue I need to do research on if I find the solution in a different tab I just move on to the next task and kinda leave things hanging until I have no other option but to close things out.

>> No.23178384

This is kind of a meta question but, do writeanons need that "what are you working on question" in order to to talk about what they're working on or is it unnecessary?

>> No.23178500

>>23178384
It's mostly just an excuse for anons to vent on why they are NOT writing desu

>> No.23178507

>>23178384
No. That question's just a sorry attempt to stir up discussion when there's nothing, in fact, to talk about.

>> No.23178579

>>23108133
Giving Kobo swimming lessons

>> No.23178622

>>23177638
Leave me be.
>>23178384
Not at all. Just talk about whatever it is you're writing if you wanna.

>> No.23179073

>>23178384
i think it's usually used mainly as a bump that's less pointless than just saying "bump" and leaving it at that.

>> No.23179122

>>23179073
So basically like those 'give X ideas questions"?

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>> No.23182068

>>23179073
speaking of which.
writeanons, what'cha workin' on?
bonus question: would you rather lick your oshi, or be licked by your oshi?

>> No.23182397

>>23181981
I have no clue why but this picture makes me want to strangle polka from behind while she tries to struggle; only stopping once stops trying to fight.

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>>23182068
>would you rather lick your oshi, or be licked by your oshi?
You bastard, I have never been presented with a more difficult choice in my life.

Considering my oshi is a dog though I'd imagine she would be very good at licking. At the same time the thought of giving her playful licks from her shoulder up her neck makes me gosling like nothing else. Stop making me think of Koone sexually goddamn it.

>>23182397
So you HAVE ever wanted to strangle a fennec.

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>>23182068
That tongue can lick bones clean. I'll lick instead.

>> No.23183046

>>23182068
Currently writing a fluffy yuri Hoshikawa/Anon fic.

I would rather lick Ui-mama though won't protest if she wanted to go first.

>> No.23183228

>>23181981
>"Cum down my suit, Anon."

>> No.23183299

>>23183046
>fluffy yuri Hoshikawa/Anon
Is this going to be one of those fics that uses 'You' to hide that (You) are a girl?

>> No.23183371

>>23183299

The anon in the story will be female. No, I am just a guy really into yuri. Sorry to disappoint.

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>>23182068
Matsuri more or less forcing someone who barely knows her into hanging out with her because she's starstruck.
Sweet fucking Lord alive I want this fennec to slobber all over me.

>> No.23183868

>>23182068
Working on Footsteps Across Time, as well as a couple other side stories. Brainstorming new plot points for all of those.

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>>23182068
I'm finishing up the naked dogeza Suisei prompt and I want to lick Suisei's sweaty armpits and hands. I wasn't like this year ago, this thread really changed me

>> No.23184062

>>23182068
I'm about three-quarters through the first chapter of Human Behavior, my cyberpunk fic with robo-anon.

>> No.23184466

>>23182068
Stars thread got me working on a Fuma/Astel story
I saw a picture of Astel with his collarbone exposed and the urge to run my tongue over it has stuck with me for days

>> No.23184688

>>23184466
I eagerly await this.

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>>23122809
>the way she uses her index finger to rim the bottle

>> No.23185508

>>23122809
Christ

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>>23122645
>>23122809
> Wamy gets two (You)s
> Literally the same but Suisei
> triple the (You)s
Why do (You) hate Lamy?

>> No.23186945

>>23186886
I want Lamy to cover me in sloppy drunk kisses but you should know DAMN WELL by now that /wg/ holds Suisei in high regard. Lamy doesn't get much here...yet.

>> No.23186952

>>23186886
>>23122924

>> No.23187212

>>23186886
Because schizos put me off her long ago. Schizos that still browse this thread.

>> No.23187439

>>23187212
/become/? if that's the case then you're a faggot lol

>> No.23187534

>>23187212
Imagine being put off a chuuba because of her fans. Not gonna lie, kinda retarded.

>> No.23187894

>>23186886
I think Wamy appeals to a different type of fan than the majority of EOPs. Her content and the games she plays are fun, but her personality's not the most colorful which I think is necessary to have a big follower base that simply can't understand the chuuba. I really love all her noises and whines, but I miss a lot of what she's saying since >JP vocabulary of a preschooler. But I love softspoken girly girls like her.

>> No.23188075

>>23187212
Still want to fuck Lamy, still want to fuck Pekora, would fuck the posters who "ruined" both for you. Cope.

>> No.23188267

Brace for le impact xD

>> No.23188389

>>23187439
>>23187534
>>23188075

t. buttmad schizos

>> No.23189046

>>23188389
t. faggot

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>>23186945
It's weird because this whole thread has mommy issues so Lamy should be the perfect chuuba for them, yet Suisei gets more attention.

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This reminds of the time I saw someone saying Lamy wasn't GFE and was more just a female bartender, which only makes me question what female bartenders he's seen are like.

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>Be (you)
>See Gura outside your house
>You ask her what she's doing
>She says she's just passing by, then presents you with some food
>You think she's being nice, but then she starts screaming at you saying you should be grateful or that you're an idiot for getting the wrong idea.
>She gives one last scream before running off, leaving you mentally broken

>> No.23194758

>>23193056
tbf most female bartenders flirt with patrons

>> No.23194779

>>23190999
because suisei is both funny and sexy whereas lamy is dogshit

>> No.23194860

>>23144470
>Korone in next issue
God yes

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>>23194741
>You hear three of your seniors begin to laugh at this interaction
>As if this day couldn't get any worse.
>You couldn't take it anymore and just began to cry right there on the spot.
>The three immediately approach (you) and try to calm you down
>All while they bring up how Gura has a crush on (you)

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>>23194741
>>23195026
How come you're trying to pass a scenario that already happened as a prompt you're making up on the spot?

>> No.23196320

New major Mori drama, brace for impact

>> No.23196485

>>23196320
SELL SELL SELL

>> No.23196539

>>23196320
God would it kill her to stay out of drama for more than a few days?

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>>23196485
We're already waking up to a sea of red tomorrow morning in the markets, NASFAQ won't be any different.

>> No.23196631

I wrote this in the /nijiEN/ thread, people seemed to like it so i'll repost it here
>Going on a date with Rosemi
>She has a nice red dress and black tights
>You sit at the table and she tells you that her feet kinda hurt so she takes off her shoes and stretches her legs under the table
>The tablecloth is covering her feet touching yours
>The waiter comes and asks for your order
>You suddenly feel something pressing against your dick
>You try to speak your order but are too aroused to say it
>"I want a sausage with creamed potatoes" Rosemi says with a smug face "what do you want, darling?"
>You finally say your order
>"And the wine, sir?" asks the waiter
>You feel a sudden liberation in your pants, your cock is breathing air and somehow your zipper is down
>Something is entering your pants, fondling your balls and playing with them like they were marbles
>Your penis is being caressed in a gentle way
>You tell the waiter you want a Malbec wine
>"Malbec is too strong for me, darling" Rosemi says while reaching for your hand
>The rythm is faster, her fingers are enveloping your shaft and playing with your frenulum as if it were a toy
>"CABERNET SAUVIGNON" you yell as you're reaching your limit
>The waiter leaves thinking you were mad at him
>You look under the tablecloth and Rosemi's sparkly toenails are drowned in pre-cum
>The scene of her feet playing with your dick while strings of pre-cum connect both of them fills you with the imperative need to release your seed
>Rosemi looks at you and says "why don't you give me the entree?"
>You empty the content of your balls over her tights, her toes massaging your balls make sure you release every single drop of semen you had stored
>Her legs become white with your semen
>She reaches for some bread and then puts some of your seed from her legs into the bread and eats it
>"Delicious" she says as she devours your seed as if it were butter

>> No.23196848

>>23186886
Lamy just appeals to people different than a lot of people who come here and write here. I have nothing against her personally, I just write mostly about ENs and IDs because I don't speak Japanese and thus can only know so much about them through their TV Tropes page and translated clips.

>> No.23196919

>>23196539
This time it was her mom. Not surprising to anyone who remembers giri choco.

>> No.23196964

>>23196320
Good thing my Mori fic is on the shelf for now... I don't even care about the person behind the avatar but damn if she makes it hard to separate the two sometimes.

>> No.23197082

Is rentry broken for anyone else or is it just my internet being a bitch? Trying to look at the series page and it says the website isn't working.

>> No.23197108

>>23197082
Nah it's broken for me too.

>> No.23197329

>>23197082
the ".co" extension seems to be failing for some reason, but ".org" still works fine. even carries over document codes from things saved under .co

>> No.23197589

>>23196320
>he thinks the "drama" is going to be major
Roru. Rumao even.

>> No.23197695

>>23197589
The deadbeat janny is working overtime. Sure hope he gets paid.

>> No.23197961

>>23197695
We all know jannies do it for free, but that's besides the point. Point is, the "drama" (if we can even call it that) is just a bunch of schizos trying to resurrect a necrorrat with so little evidence that even the other shcizos in /hlgg/ laughed at them. They've been shitting up /morig/ all day now.

>> No.23198112

>>23197961
What did she even do this time?

>> No.23198182

>>23108133
Request a crossover fic with Mori and Fake Type. Feel free to include Mr Top Hat

>> No.23198231

>>23108091
She said she's legal?

>> No.23198774

>>23198231
When has being legal stopped anyone here before? We've got at least one underage possible-grooming fic in the archive.

>> No.23198792

>>23198112
Nothing, her mom just teased her by calling ao her "boyfriend" a few years back in an instagram post. That's it. Literally nothing else.

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>>23198792
>just teased her
Do cuckbeats really?

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>23199046
>cuckbeat
Ogey. Take this and fuck off.

>> No.23199710

deadbeats do be malding fr fr

>> No.23199805

>>23199710
>malding
Go back to Twitch.

>> No.23199851 [DELETED] 

>>23199805
>>23199710
XqcL

>> No.23200858

>>23197082
Their .co is broken but the .org one still works. Man I hope that they can fix that, manually changing all the .co to .org would probably suck.

>> No.23203078
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Bump

>> No.23203132

>>23203078
Just let it die.

>> No.23203538

>>23203132
When anon's mom found out her child would be a 4chan user.

>> No.23203727

>>23203132
Why? This thread doesn't exactly zoom like the rest of the board, and unless someone pitches a really good idea that sparks a discussion/an anon tries to explain their niche fetish this thread should last the day.

>> No.23205826

>>23194860
and Okayu

>> No.23206332

Other than Okayu, which Chuubas would best fit the Gyaru archetype? It's kinda hot not gonna lie.

>> No.23206810

>>23206332
>which Chuubas would best fit the Gyaru archetype?
Flare?

>> No.23206924

>>23198792
>teased
Lol

>> No.23207854

>>23206332
Sana, Marine, Korone
Teenage rebellion Sora

>> No.23207886

>>23206332
Gura

>> No.23208051

>>23206332
There was a post turned prompt a while back that said Bakatare was a Gyaru bully gang with Fubuki as the leader, Flare as the muscle, and Watame as the Bait/Honeypot.
>>23207854
>Teenage rebellion Sora
That's a hot image to imagine.

>> No.23209572

>>23206332

>digging around some old boxes because (You) are currently moving stuff into the new house (You) and Mio, your wife, bought together
>You find a rather old yet ornate looking book
>wiping off the dust of what seems to be at least 5 years worth you find the faded print
>"Mio's daily diary"
>out of sheer curiosity you open the diary
>the first thing that slips out is an photo of Mio in high school
>tanned skin, enough make up to emphasize her endearing facial features, somewhat revealing clothes with an emphasis on legs and cleavage and then some
>the full gyaru package

what will you do with this information?

>> No.23211720

>>23208051
>That's a hot image to imagine.
>Sora and A-Chan forcing you their kouhai to buy them snacks
>Getting molested when they see you bend over
>They force you into a threesome a day before they graduate
>Don't see them again until after you graduate college and you get a job at Cover

>> No.23212191

>>23209572
Cry after realizing I missed Mio's gyaru phase

>> No.23212211

>>23211720
This made think of that fic 'graduation day' except you never wish to see those girls again.
So you work your ass off in college, deliberately making sure that every bit of information they could use to find you is scrubbed off the internet, and land yourself a job in an industry you're sure such vulgar girls would never find you in; but then on your first day you find them.
Have those two cleaned up their act as well, or are you in for a repeat of your highschool days?

>> No.23213486

>>23212211
This would be a very interesting read I think. It can devolve back into despair or be something cute. But God I want secret slutdom Sora to order me to me to jerk off to her while she watches.

>> No.23213802

>>23209572
>>23212191
>Bully Kronii or Ame into showing you what would have happened if you met her during her gal phase.
>Think to do it because of tv, after all those always show how the world would be worse off if X had happened.
>Witness a textbook wholesome Gyaru romance that develops into her softening up as you go to the same college.
>It eventually culminates into You and Mio having the same relationship as now except a few years earlier.
>Ask when the other shoe will drop.
>They spoil that there isn't one.
>It seems that the two of you are that compatible.
>Cry about missing out on those moments
>Go back to Mio with the diary and ask her if she wants to live out a highschool fantasy.

>> No.23214230

Do you want to rape correct or be rape corrected?

>> No.23214272

>>23214230
I don't like being raped

>> No.23214494

>>23214230
Damn Abusive Anon, Requires Rape Correction!

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>>23214230
Having been in both situations in RP you fuckers I think I'm a lot more comfortable in the corrector role. Getting corrected super depends on setting/who it is...but if the stars align it's probably the hardest cum ever. It's just really inconsistent, which is why stories about it are better.

>> No.23214690

>>23214230
I've sexually harassed but never raped so idk

>> No.23214858

>>23214690
Same, but I'd only ever want to be raped if it was an attractive woman doing the raping.

>> No.23214871

>>23214230
I just want to be loved

>> No.23215317

>>23205826
AAAAAAAAAAAAA SEEEEEEEEEEEEX
How long until we reach Hag Clussy?

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>>23108100
Everyday Someday
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQtWq8qsrob1H4X3cBCGmVD-2OdMyOIbXeXs5Pprk0RYBBIIlv6GQDNspL-7c7766GGVjIm6vC-JUlJ/pub
Tags: Oozora Subaru, Yuzuki Choco, mild angst, erotic scene, fluff

Not sure I nailed what I set out to do but it's gotta come out of the oven at some point. Feedback is appreciated.

>> No.23215454

>>23214858
Perhaps you misunderstood my words

>> No.23215792

>>23214542
>AA has been corrected

>> No.23215952

>>23215792
> AA has corrected someone in RP

>> No.23217088

>>23213802
damn it now I want to get this idea written down properly

>> No.23217199
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>>23205826
It's been so long since a crumb of cat sex...thank you anon...

>> No.23217419
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>>23215447
This story didn't feel like it had a proper direction or goal but it was still really nice, I very much enjoyed the duck fluff. Aside from a few spelling errors your writing is pretty high level. Thank you for the meal.

>> No.23217839

>>23215317
At the latest it'll be two chapters from now. Unfortunately the planning for the series has essentially boiled down to which hag I want to fuck on a given day so plans change often.

>> No.23217965

>>23108100
Suiyuan
Tags: Suisei
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQdzktEQWpLTMN0MF9W7J5dNloHTHj434-5GTZ09xaFKBfBol35UwJDcFBYYGrtdJbhojMxmjqS9AsD/pub

>> No.23218207

>>23217965
garbo

>> No.23218220

>>23215447
Well this was a really cute fic coming out of nowhere. It's some very nice fluff, and the angst was used pretty well to have something tying all of it together. Honestly the only thing I feel is missing is something to tie up the theme.
Other than that, the only thing nitpick I have is that the flashback paragraph stretched on for a bit too long without a new paragraph.

>> No.23218442

>>23217965
Eh, it's a bit too short to really give out any hard criticism, it's reads pretty well and is at least interesting enough that if you're planning to continue it I'd probably read it, but it doesn't really have much of a hook.

>> No.23218873

>>23217965
I quite liked the letter and the line breaks, they were really creative. The story switched to first person a couple times which was weird, and it's hard to discern where you were trying to go for with this so maybe some expanding and more writing could help.

>> No.23219251

The script archive should have working Rentry integration again. Something is fucky with their .co domain it looks like, so I switched it over to .org and it seems to be working. Let me know if it's exploding or something.

>> No.23219414

>>23219251
According to their twitter there's something wrong with their .co site, but it should be up soonish.
https://twitter.com/rentry_co/status/1518696732741230596
...
Also I notice that at the bottom there As the Roads Flow is listed twice on the script page.

>> No.23219623

hope all you writeanons are hanging in there

>> No.23219705

>>23219623
writing at 3 am let's goooooooooooo

>> No.23219712
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>>23219414
Move in haste and die I guess. Thanks.

>> No.23220033

>>23219623
Wishing I could write more than shitty greentexts and write an actual full fic.

>> No.23220184

>>23220033
Give it a try. You'll never improve if you don't start.

>> No.23220341

>>23220033
Just write whatever is on your mind, I don't think i have written anything good but hey you get better

>> No.23221461
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23221461

>>23108133
Doing Marine and Chammers a favour and them rewarding you with their freshly worn bras

>> No.23221596
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23221596

>>23219623
Forcing myself out of an apparent burn out, not as hard as I expected it to be.

>> No.23221644

>>23221596
Sweaty bunny body...
What are you planning on writing?
>>23220033
What are you having difficulty with? Time restrictions?

>> No.23221712

>>23196320
>cucked by a w*lshman
>cucked by a chink
Jesus Christ (LORD of the World, Savior of Mankind), deadbeats really just cannot catch a break.

>> No.23221820

>>23221644
Pekora being thrown into heat due to aphrodisiacs and falling off the deep end

>> No.23221897

>>23221644
>Time restrictions?
Pretty much, I get those bursts of inspirations that let me put out a greentext occasionally but the actual WIPs I have, have barely been touched on.
I atleast have the time to plan and write out some rough ideas but nothing much in regards to making progress with what I'm writing out.
>>23221820
>Pekora mindbreak drug sex
Hope you can write it out well, the fucking drug sex ideas from a few threads back reignited that fetish for me so I'd love to see this.

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>>23221820
Now we're fucking talking. Don't let me down Anon. I need this.
>>23221897
Maybe you could try rerouting the burst into WIPs? Unless the bursts are incredibly subjective and prompt based. What are you working on if you don't mind my asking?

>> No.23222022

>>23221820
Take all the time you need.

>> No.23222161

>>23221941
Only thing I'm 'actively' writing right now is the 'winter chills' fan sequel where holox 'corrects' you and like on and off writing wips for some series ideas I'm cooking up. Also the holofantasy matsuri fan alt chapter but that one's entirely in planning until AA releases the matsuri chapter.

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>>23222161
>Spoiler
Hi, that's me. It'll uh...be a while. Maybe Friday, maybe next Mon/Tues when I'm free to devote hours to nonsense again. I don't think I can get it wrapped up just tonight unless I dick to the grindstone for 10 hours. Matsuri's combat hasn't even been started yet, and I still need to make it feel like this is reasonable and not just a hard tonal from what occurred immediately prior to it since angst-to-comedy feels weird. If you want to start it but are just waiting for this to come out, go ahead and get started. It's better that way, I think.

>> No.23222394

>>23222022
100 days is all I've got.

>> No.23222453
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>>23221820
Consider my neurons activated.

>> No.23222548

>>23222394
Is this Pekofag on summer break or someone dying of cancer

>> No.23222549
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>>23222394
Take all the time you need up to August, then.

>> No.23222857

>>23222548
Pretty sure Brazillian summer breaks are upside down due to being on another hemisphere.
...
Could be another anon on summer break.

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23224259

You aren't getting away that easily.

>> No.23224453

>>23224259
Sorry I was busy jerking off to Leonardo Da Vinci

>> No.23225255

>>23224259
not now anon I’m on the verge of inspiration

>> No.23225720

>>23224259
You know a new thread can be made right? There’s no reason to bump this.

>> No.23226003
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23226003

Never forget what has been taken from you

>> No.23226231

Holo High Lotus guy, where you at? I need more of the Matsuri fluff.

>> No.23226299

>>23219623
Finally managed to break out of block so I'm doing good.

>> No.23226825

>>23226003
Nothing?

>> No.23226842

>>23226003
fuck you talking about, she's giving that away for free

>> No.23227970

>>23226003
god I want to fuck that cute slutty oni

>> No.23227977

You now cannot cum until you finish your WIP pile.

>> No.23228045

>>23227977
wtf dude I can never cum again then.

>> No.23228080

>>23227977
th-the whole pile?

>> No.23228267

Is this the right thread? I want to make a doujinshi (with art and all) starring Takane Lui. I want to know what you guys think of the setting
>Vanilla
>You are her husband and she's a housewife
>Secretly she is part of a secret society(HoloX)
>One day you approach her on wanting a child
>Emergency secret meeting with the rest of HoloX
>The gang agrees getting pregnant is a problem but don't want to make you upset
>Koyori gives Lui a drug that would prevent fertilization but also a drug to make you have a hazy memory
>Sex
>Later in the morning you mysteriously have a new child (La+) and Lui convinces you that she was always your baby
>The end.

>> No.23228402

>>23228267
I think the drawthread is what you're looking for >>22947315

I hope your doujinshi works out.

>> No.23228882

>>23196631
>>23108100
Hot, I need to write a Rosemi story someday

>> No.23228940

>>23226003
I fucking love rrat Ayame. Sluts turn me the fuck on.

>> No.23228976

>>23227977
Anon I have 12 WIPs some of which are planned to be 10k+ words. You cannot do this to me.

>> No.23229033

>>23228976
You should just commit to one first.

>> No.23229156

>>23229033
Don’t worry, I am. But now I have to finish all of them before I can nut to fatto catto H-ASMR

>> No.23229232

>>23228267
I don't understand what you're asking for here.
Are you asking for an artist? Or are you asking for plot advice?
Because if it's the latter, you don't really need more than that for a doujin plot, since the actual 'plot' both you and the theoretical audience want is in the pages of sex. Since pretty much all you need is a vague greentext outline like that for hdoujin plot as anything more complex will not fit in the pages you'll have.

>> No.23229789

>>23229232
I think he’s looking for the draw thread.

>> No.23229948

>>23229232
nah I can draw, I just wanted to know if that setting is good. but to be honest, I also wanted to know if that sort of setting is somewhat believable and accurate by making use of their lore, on stream personality and shit.

>> No.23229991

>>23229948
>making use of their lore, on stream personality and shit.
Nobody here cares about that.

>> No.23230275

>>23229948
Sounds like a good plot to me.

>I also wanted to know if that sort of setting is somewhat believable and accurate by making use of their lore, on stream personality and shit.

Its not necessary, but to me, it certainly adds to the flavor of your creations, like a good sauce on a good steak.

>> No.23230879

>>23229948
If you check the archives, no one here cares about staying true to character so go all out.

>> No.23230910

>>23229948
You're being targeted by schizos.

>> No.23230960

>>23226003
Maybe you should pay the fee, anon.

>> No.23231089

>>23230910
How so?

>> No.23231156

>>23229948
Oh then, it's a perfectly workable plot that you can probably fit in however many pages you're willing to draw.
I'm not sure about the process going from 'a' to 'b' but I think the next thing in the step to turn that idea to doujin is probably planning out how you're going to split the pages and or write a more detailed outline with how you're planning on telling the story.
Right now you're at the stage of making high level decisions about where you want to take this so get a feel for what kind of story you want to tell first then draft out the skeleton of the doujin.
>>23231089
Some schizos here think the writeanons don't give a shit about characterization, and as new blood you're 'vulnerable' so there's 'blood in the water'

>> No.23231213

>>23231156
>Some schizos here think the writeanons don't give a shit about characterization,
Oh that, aren't they right though?

>> No.23231268

>>23231089
Whenever somebody makes it clear that they’re new our resident shit-stirrers come crawling out of the woodwork. You see it all the time when an anon asks if they can post a story here or something. Just don’t let them bother you.

>> No.23231354

>>23231213
Shit bait

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>>23231213

>> No.23231493

>>23231354
>>23231469
Name a few fics that are in-character with the chuuba

>> No.23231560

>>23231493
This is the only fic that's in-character in the archive.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRfpoeJlfT_SOLYnZI1EIoduksIm5BylWNoWaEnIeecTVEXODYeZPLxaiQ0q51iuOQx7Td_-JZn4rAO/pub

>> No.23231624

>>23231156
yeah, I'd like to write a script on it first, which I think posting in this general is where it's most appropriate? Having someone call out if they behave too much out of character would be helpful

>> No.23231866

>>23231560
I don’t think Haachama suffers from schizophrenia.

>> No.23231939

>>23231493
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzPueCcfE9xWAYLSZxCMsJ7VdnEvx4NaElqEof7asl5IeDhPoc4-MkTNX5WFLqm1ghPWS_WP-mPblY/pub

>> No.23231968

>>23231866
Looks like you're mischaracterizing her, then. You'd best stop coming here.

>> No.23232006

>>23231866
Are you forgetting the schizo arc?

>> No.23232103

>>23231493
I think moonshine blues is well done with Lamy’s tantrums and alcoholic kayfabe. I was about to keep listing stories but realised you’re going to say they’re not “in character” regardless. So I’ll pose a question to you instead, what would you consider “in character”? Why don’t you write a story and show us oh how superior you are at getting it right?

>> No.23232144

>>23232006
You mean the act she did for months?

>> No.23232199

>>23231624
Yeah something like that would probably be for the best, even something like an expanded greentext would probably help you in visualizing and having a better idea for the kind of story you want to tell. As even from the initial pitch you gave you I could see it being mind breaky or fluffy depending on you want to go with the plot/sex.

>> No.23232216

>>23231866
Lol

>> No.23232334

>>23231624
I'd also recommend checking with the specific chuuba's general as well for that kind of feedback. (Assuming their general exists and isn't overrun by shitposting and shizos like Mori's)

>> No.23232417

Guys, come on. The guy just baited you all to bump limit with the weakest bait possible. You’re better than this.

>> No.23232741

>>23232417
Anon, we'd have reached bump limit from that other anon asking about how to write their doujin anyway.

>> No.23232753

>>23232417
Are you that fag that calls everyone the earlyfag?

>> No.23232762

New thread
>>23232178

>> No.23232872

>>23232741
Good point, I guess.
>>23232753
...no?

>> No.23233456

>>23232762
Well that's a brave thread edition choice given current yab.

>> No.23233583

>>23233456
Most likely intentional.

>> No.23233631

>>23233456
oh what the fuck now

>> No.23233718

>>23233631
Her mum posted a photo of mori and her boyfriend.

>> No.23233732

>>23233631
Mamamori's instagram got found.
A certain post from there has gotten the catalog zooming.

>> No.23233762

>>23233718
>>23233732
So just unicorn sperging then?

>> No.23233813

Big brain play to make sure this new thread is full of tourist schizos or just bad planning? Who knows.

>> No.23233830

>>23233762
Pretty much and a lot of shitposters to add as well.

>> No.23233859

>>23233456
Probably a deadbeat that wants a safe space/

>> No.23233872

>>23233762
More like deatbeat bullying honestly. I think the mori antis have gotten so burnt by yabs they're no longer angry about her just apathetic and now just like bully deatbeats.

>> No.23233959

>>23233813
Almost tempted to not use it.

>> No.23234042

>>23233959
Then be a unicorn somewhere else. It’s not like any of the vtubers will ever love you.

>> No.23234307

>>23234042
>NO, YOU NEED TO USE THE THREAD MADE TO INCITE SHITPOSTING FROM TOURISTS
Bite the end of a revolver and pull the trigger.

>> No.23234536

>>23233959
Ah old game of write, wait and hope no one bumps it come the time you check back on it.

>> No.23235008

>>23234042
Please learn the definition of “unicorn” before attempting to use it in a sentence.

>> No.23236252

Watching Marine dancing with Polka and Mel has reignited and reaffirmed my desire to fuck them both. That's all.

>> No.23236471

>>23236252
Cool blog, man!

>> No.23236870

>>23236471
You too, faggot. Make sure to give me my patreon bucks.

>> No.23237072
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>>23236252
It was the MV for me. Damn horny pirate, needs pregnancy correction.

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