/wg/ - Writing General - Ars Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>11832913

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>11936231
A story based around this image

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>>11936723
Hey, we very recently had something like this, taking a chuuba out to eat at fast food restaurants. Perhaps a sequel is in order?

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>>11937009
At first I was like what story but then I remembered ;_;

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>>11937009
What's it called?

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>>11937525
Paradise Lost

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>>11937611
Thanks


but im not reading that

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>>11937747
Goodness, the nerve of some folk. It's exactly what you wanted - eating fast food - just with a different chuuba. Gosh, the state of millenials, eh, chaps?

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>>11936231
Kiara having hatesex with a schizophrenic anti.

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>>11936723
Could do, provided you'd enjoy her being morbidly obese by the end

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>>11937611
NO

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>>11936231
Tungsten Rat beats the Monke in a boxing match and finally brings the destruction of trash taste
He deserves it for his shit takes on food

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I love picking off smegma from under my musky foreskin while watching Fubuki. Which chuubas do you think would enjoy smegma?

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>>11942613
What the fuck.

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>>11936231
Upgrading >>11932035 from shitpost to genuine request.

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>>11936189
>>11885778
Nice prompt.

Tags: Ayame, SFW, Fluff
Fire Remnant [1,7k words]
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSIfm96K6RovIHCQVDr12yQLopXttkrvZR2fxunerlYDt5Vlb827JMsJaA3FnEIgVLzIAjc2ybLWaR5/pub

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>>11945763
God I fucking love Ayame. Good story anon.

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>>11925599
See, the thing is, I don't trust AA's judgment anymore to actually bother with writing it. There was some sense of urgency before, but now that he removed it, there's no current problem to be solved anymore. If I did write it now, what's to stop someone from slightly changing their complaints and AA from taking it down all over again? I don't really care if it's a fallacy, ultimately I've lost faith in him. He says it's about a promise, what about going back on your words then? Purely spineless. I could very easily just add a single line into that story to change it into a chuuba story you know? But I didn't because I believed it deserved some effort. Not anymore. Not because of the story but because of he who holds it.

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>>11936231

Kiara discovers a secret discord hate club composed of some of her fellow hololive chubbas. To her horror, the club's sole design is to discuss and consider how much they all fucking despise Kiara as a person.

Or any story revolving around Kiara receiving verbal abuse from her friends.

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>>11946384
Shut up nerd, nobody cares.

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>>11946392
>Kiara being hated by the other
Intriguing due to how completely untrue it is.

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>>11946384
Calling your bluff. You had plenty of time. Shut up.

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>>11946384
knew it. i don't know why you bothered trying to save face with the flimsiest excuse ever - apart from your excuse of an existence - but you aren't fooling anyone

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>>11946384
>Story is kept in archive because it was made out of allegedly good faith for the thread
>Remains despite tons of arguing because a crux of the complaints are over the author as a person rather than the story itself
>Say you'll make it chuuba related
>A week+ later it's not only not done when you've shown you can pump it out at insanely quick speeds given the proper reason to do so, it feels like you're actively avoiding doing it
>The entire time you're more content to engage in fights rather than finish it
>Shocked when story is removed
>Throwing a minor bitch fit to try and get someone to suck your dick to soothe your damaged ego
Just stop being a niggin for all of ten seconds.

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>>11936180
Why is she so hungry though?

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>>11947967
Big face requires big energy.

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>>11937611
This and Inferno were some of the earliest modern fanfiction (I am aware the Aeneid was fanfiction too but that's ancient fanfiction).

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>>11947916
Haven't written anything this week other than a short Risu greentext which I didn't even finish. But go on about giving an artist a timeframe to work with and then complain how forcing yourself to write always turns out with a bad product later. If anything you'd realize that the fact that I took one month to make another pekofag part was indicative of "something".

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>>11948115
notice how it's explicitly stated that the story will be readded if you finish it?

you have literally no ground to stand on. if it matters to you, go finish it instead of bitching here

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>>11948115
I'll reiterate. Stop acting like a fucking asshole and work on your shit if you care about it so much.

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>>11948205
>>11948212
It's not about the story, it's about sending a message.

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>>11948233
ok, well, i'm done. go talk to a wall

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>>11948233
The only 'message' that matters is that the good will extended towards you on the basis that you stop being a fucker has run out given your continued bullshit. I'm done with this stupid fucking discussion after this, but again; if it matters to you, stay true to your word.

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>>11946384
If you do ever bother finishing it instead of soapboxing, could you make it about Fubuki? Thanks in advance.

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>>11945763
Damn, comfort fics are always the best, even when it’s Ayame

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>>11948233
Kek, nobody cares

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Well, guess that's the last time I come here.
What thread isn't on fire in /vt/ nowadays?

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>>11949668
They take whatever opportunity they get to shit fling instead of having a proper discussion. The only winning move is to not play. There are no threads that you'll find other than maybe the /become/ and /yubicraft/ ones that are peaceful.

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>>11949668
see you tomorrow

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>>11945763
This was a nice break, Anon. Thank you for the story. There's some capitalization issues but there's nothing incredibly distracting.

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>>11949668
Oh nyoooo please don’t leave! We really need you here! Stay with us!!!
Fuck off, nobody cares about your blog

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>>11950617
> And so died the writing general. Not with one final whimper, but with thunderous applause.
You don't care about a writer leaving the thread, you are, in fact, encouraging it. He is not the first and won't be the last. I hope you don't take the same attitude you have here in your life, because what you'll get is a very lonely and pathetic existence, after driving out everyone that shared the same interests as you away.

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Fellas. Shut the fuck up and post about chuubas.

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>>11945763
Extremely well-written. It may sound strange, but I was actually compelled to read more purely by your diction as I'm not too much a fan of Ayame.

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>>11950962
This, to be honest.

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>>11950855
He’s obviously just looking for attention. This thread has been through much worse and on way more fire but THIS is what causes him to leave? Not to mention if he’s here for for fan fiction and writing stories, why is he asking about what threads to migrate to? It’s not a good thing for people to leave, but if they announce it to the entire thread then they’re an attention-whoring faggot and the general’s better off without them.

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>>11951213
shhh

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>>11936231
I humbly request a Fubuki rape story. Normally I would just write it myself, however I can’t jack off to my own smut. So please, I ask one of you fine gentlemen to do what many others have failed to do in the past, and force the fox to take the cock.

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>>11951289
Ok.

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>>11951397
I thought you meant Fubuki rapes (you). That'd be hotter.

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>>11945763
Thank you. It was a good read. I almost wish someone could do the same for me, but I am not someone worth saving

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>>11951595
NTA but that's hot too. Frankly, though, I think Fubuki's overdue for a real rape story. If you feel bad about making it you can just have it be that (You) die at the end from someone catching you, I dunno. But headlocking Fubuki while railing her tight fox pussy and berating her for always friendzoning you? Good.

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>>11951595
in case you haven't read it already, Remembering how to love her is exactly that

>>11951397
tried and failed, but would still like to see it happen
kinda want to try again

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>>11951758
I believe in you, anon!

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>>11951703
We already have enough stories of the chuuba "raping" you, there's no stories of you raping a chuuba. But it's no use anyway, faggots can't bear the idea of ACTUALLY writing rape when they say they'll write rape and even put it in the tags. It's always a story where both parties feel good and everyone is happy in the end.

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>>11951758
>Remembering how to love her
Absolutely incredible story, that. Thoroughly recommended to anyone who wants to be abused.

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>>11945763
This is very well written, with the narration and flow being really compelling. This is a very sympathetic portrayal of Ayame, I like it

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>>11951397
Honestly I think the hard part of getting the fubuki getting raped fic is the fact that writing a 'realistic' rape is a bit distasteful especially when for the most part a lot of this general love her.

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>>11936723
>>11937009
>I sorta binged writing this for half the day at least. Heh. Enjoy. Maybe don't read it at work ;)
https://www.wattpad.com/1146105613-my-first-date-with-mumei-a-day-at-mcdonald%27s

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>>11936723
>Thought this was the Nene pic
I want Nene to join me as I'm sitting alone pathetically in a restaurant and declare me her husband as we begin to hit it off.

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>>11936189
Prompt from this thread. My first contribution here. Might open a drive / mega later, who knows.
Tags: NSFW, Mumei, date
A day at McDonald's [4.2k words]
https://www.wattpad.com/1146105613-my-first-date-with-mumei-a-day-at-mcdonald%27s

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>>11956198
scat?

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>>11956647
nah i just skimmed it, no scat.

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>>11945763
We need more Ayame fics.

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>>11956647
No, it's basically vanilla

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>>11956079
Public sex is always hot, so I enjoyed this. The sense of trying to hide it from everyone else sort of got lost towards the end though so that was a bit of a killer, and you could definitely be more descriptive about everything you did with her. Might also want to think of more words to describe “boobs”. Overall pretty good tho

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>>11956079
>>11956198
Why did you post this twice?

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>>11958684
?? It's two different chapters anon. Read before writing

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>>11959428
They're literally the same link

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>>11959428
No, you're retarded

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>>11951758
I literally just read that yesterday and forgot because I genuinely have Mumei level amnesia.

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>>11959898
Cute memory loss Anon getting sexually abused by his oshi but always forgetting!

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>>11958684
Sorry. I just forgor.
Also I wanted to link it to the anchor post

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>>11945763
Well this was an incredibly comforting fic, great job dude, made me really sympathetic of Ayame. Like the others have said, the writing and prose made this incredibly compelling to read even if I'm not that much of a fan of Ayame so good on you for that one.

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You're not getting many fics per thread, so you gotta make sure you don't miss out on the ones that do get posted eh?

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>>11945763
Really liked this one. It's refresing reading an Ayame story that isn't written by someone who exclusively know her through rrat.

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>>11936231
(You) brutaly rejecting your oshi's heartfelt confession, even though you love her just as much because you're afraid you'll ruin her career.

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>>11963584
this has suisei written all over it

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>>11963584
This is a good prompt.

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>>11936189
I wrote that Fubuki fic that some anons were talking about last thread. It's definitely worth reading I think and it's probably my best work so far, lol. So please enjoy it if you read it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRXb-u6h5tH7AycctUmmdOOvxH39SMB1rb86b616G4YFcZORU-S6RGNiVR_Ys_XPMztgWFUXONH8dKT/pub

Tags: Fubuki and NTR

:)

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>>11963584
I think about this a lot, being in a situation where you have to make the hard choice where you have to be exceptionally harsh to a person you really care about for their own good. Will they grow from this pain and blossom into the person they were always meant to be? Are you willing to be forever painted as a villain in their story, although you only had their best interests in mind? Is this just some misguided choice that will only ruin them in the long run? Are you strong enough to make that choice and live with the consequences?

I may write this prompt sometime in the future. In fact, I have a draft of sorts already half-written, so with luck you must see something.

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I NEED to be abused by a chuuba.

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>>11956079
As another anon said, the biggest drawback here is descriptiveness in smut; it's quite plain and wasn't arousing.

Apart from that, this was good, anon. I'd like to read more from you.

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>>11964979
Same here. What did you think of Mumei as a character?

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>>11964680
Oh my goodness, Christmas came early this year, huh? Reading it now.

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>>11965132
That was something I avoided mentioning, actually.

She's retarded. It sort of felt like Anon fucked a retard. That, or she's 6 years old.

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>>11956079
Thanks

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>>11965241
Awesome. I wasn't sure if I was portraying her correctly. I'm going to take it as a compliment.

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>>11965662
Sorry, I haven't watched a single stream of hers apart from her debut. Didn't appeal to me, so maybe she acts like that on stream? But goodness gracious, it felt like she was doing a 1 intelligence playthrough.

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>>11964680
Friday, you had the day off which you spent walking at a park with Fubuki. You held each other’s hands the entire time. Her warm, soft hands felt no different though you knew that they had stroked plenty of cocks and had probably been inside an asshole.

I laughed so fucking hard. The narrative is so nonchalant in describing Anon's thoughts that it feels like he's getting made fun of by the universe, too.

I have no idea how to feel about this. Poor, poor Anon, but at the same time, I like how you've given context behind the NTR and suddenly it no longer seems black and white, which was only compounded by the happy ending.

I skipped through the smut because I wasn't horny so I'll comment on that next time I read it, but honestly, I really enjoyed this. Despite Fubuki being my oshi, I never felt enough of a connection with Anon to self-insert, so it didn't feel painful.
Rather, it felt like I was reading a story about the world taking a fat shit on some poor dude, and I laughed at it. Probably makes me a horrible person, too.

Regardless, thanks for the read, Anon!

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>>11964680
It should have ended with you murdering Fubuki and the man she cheated on you with followed by you blowing your brains out before the cops can take you in.

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>>11966479

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>>11965888
It's difficult to find clips that accurately portray her. You can get a glimpse, but you can't really understand the true depths of her autism in such a short time. People think she's faking it, but she's not. If you go into this clip believing everything she does is unironically her, with minimal or no acting, you can probably get the full picture.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7XlhaDNo9ww

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>>11965888
I didn't like her until I saw her more in collabs. I recently took a small interest, not enough to watch her regularly, but I'll check her out here and there from now on. The prompt just pushed everything to another level for me, especially after I had to get into her headspace for half the day, lol.

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>>11966797
>>11966905
Holy fucking shit. Anon's portrayal of Mumei suddenly makes sense.

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>>11966797
The more I watch, the worse it gets. This is cringe on another level.

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>>11967226
>>11967339
It's so fucking funny to laugh at her if you can get into it. I do recommend. She is kinda like a living B-movie.

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>>11964687
Really looking forward to this Anon.

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>>11966797
It's my first time watching a clip of the new EN and I gotta say it feels really fake at some points. Sure she probably forgot her birthday but she exaggerates it for comedic effect (duh she's an entertainer). People don't act like that in situations like these. I'd know because I forgot my birthday many times in the past.

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>>11945763
It was very nice. Her actual reasons for not streaming much may not be so dramatic, but this was still a good read.

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>>11967930
>Her actual reasons for not streaming much may not be so dramatic
I love just how much depth this statement has, and the meaning changes with just how far down you go.

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>>11968091
Well, her given reason as of today is that she's worried about her voice. Marine's gone through the same issue lately so it's understandable, though it doesn't excuse being so uncommunicative with her fans.

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>>11967794
I agree the birthday thing is fake. But just imagine this level of autism for literally everything. And then she has solo zatsudans where she says she's practicing how to hold a conversation. Everything she says is deadpan, but she has a singsong voice too. It's amazing.

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>>11936231
(You) found a stranger passed out in the middle of the road and nurse her back to health. This stranger turn out to be Shirogane Noel. Because of her code of honor as a knight, she has to repay you for your kindness in some way. (You) are now stuck with her until she's able to repay you.

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>>11964680
Fuck. I came so hard you have no idea. Thanks for the story anon, this was amazing.

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>>11967794
Another thought about Mumei. If she's faking everything for comedic effect, imagine the effect it would have on her mind. She would then be method acting a deadpan airhead retard for a significant portion of every month. Acting that much can change your personality. Eventually, she will merge with the character, and then the faking will completely end, and what we'll be left with is the embodiment of the character herself: a mentally broken retard who understands this about herself, and tries to use it for comedic effect to cheer herself up, usually unsuccessfully.

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>>11970454
Y'think she'll end up pulling a Heath Ledger?

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>>11970557
Being remembered as one of the greatest method actors, her commitment to character being talked about even years later?

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>>11970973
Doesn't sound that bad when you put it that way. I remembered him as the guy that committed to his character so unbelievably well that the character's personality - intense self-hatred and all - became his own, leading to an "accidental" overdose.

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>>11970557
Nah.... she seems to be trying to improve herself. Heath was playing a nihilist who coped with chaos and dark comedy. Mumei is just a slightly witty person who woke up one day inside the mind of a hopeless autist. She doesn't really drive toward implementing collapse. Good joke though, lmao

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>>11964680
Kinda disappointed that you went with a happy ending for this but good job either way.

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>>11964680
Ugh, just feels like cheating and not really the kind of pain and corruption I associate with something tagged as NTR. It's decently good smut watching from an outside pov but it doesn't have the raw emotion I was looking for.
Basically what I'm saying is that you need to hit harder, the punches thrown by the ntr here doesn't even sting that much that it just feels unsatisfying. I think this is due to you holding back the punches for the ending. Making the ending hurt would probably have involved making it a shaggy dog story about you not even getting the job or Fubuki getting truely stolen away/actually killing the relationship. As it is it feels like an unsatisfying finish, since there wasn't any big emotional climax.

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>>11971383
Damn, you really wanna get raked through the coals, huh?

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>>11964680
I absolutely fucking hated this. It's not a bad piece of writing, and might float the boat for some people, but reading this has reaffirmed my hatred for NTR, especially when there's no confrontation or anything. Reading this just made me angry. Good job writeanon.

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>>11972340
We're all explorers of the further regions of experience here.

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>>11971383
I understand where you're coming from but I really wanted to write a happy ending so I did.
>>11972462
Yeah it was hard to write some parts because it was NTR but that challenge is a part of what makes writing fun for me. Glad you hated it.

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>>11972462
>>11972737
I guess some of us are explorers of the kiddie pool regions of experience.

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>>11972781
Do you want me to write another scat fic?

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>>11972964
Ahem.

You're talking to the scatfag.

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>>11972964
I'd rather have more NTR instead of scat

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>>11973001
Two enter. One wins. We all lose.
This winter...

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>>11964680
I hate this.
Don't get me wrong, it was well-written, I like the fact it's mostly focused on Anon's POV and thoughts, that was a nice touch.
I just absolutely hate NTR and cheating in general. Given that Fubuki is my oshi, it felt even worse to read about her cheating with some random no-names.
If nothing else, I at least appreciate that you chose to end it on a positive note. At least the ending was a happy one so kudos for that, I guess.

Again, nothing personal towards you specifically, I just really hate NTR stuff in general. If you ever write a Fubuki story again, I hope it will be a much more fluffy one, as I like tour writing style a lot.

That's all. I hated this one, but I'm looking forward to reading more stuff from you.

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>>11973038
Feel free to write more any time. I promise you'll have at least one eager reader here.

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>>11972781
Hey man, if you're into getting cucked knock yourself out. Just don't bring me into your weird fetish

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Just wondering, is there still a demand for futa stuff? Haven't seen any requests of it ina while

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>>11975618
Sort of. I hate having to share a fetish with HIM.

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>>11975618
There's not really a demand per se, but it's not as shunned as some may like you to think.

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>>11975618
Some people won't read it while some love it. Go nuts.

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>>11975658
>>11975692
>>11976135
Different line of questioning then, if applicable:
> last futa story you've read
> last futa story you've nutted to
> top 3 futa stories in your opinion
> what do you look for in futa stories?
I think this will be helpful.

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>>11976293
Only two I've ever read and nutted to were Matsuri's baby carrot (the original author, I believe, who was very reserved about his smut's quality) and the AquShio fic by, uhh...buttstuffanon. Both of these times were in spite of futa rather than because of it though.

I don't shun it like some others here do but I tend to think of it like brussels sprouts - it's food, I'll eat it, but I won't go out of my way to obtain them

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>>11976293
>Matsuri's Baby Carrot
>don't really nut to them, just enjoy reading them if that makes sense
>do we even have that many?
>Futa being teased and shamed for their cock, preferably by (You)

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>>11976451
>>11976473
It seems like most of the thread hates futa and those that do like them treat it with indifference. It's likely that this thread could go on without ever seeing a futa story ever again and no one would really care. That is a bit sad but I suppose it's just how it goes. I don't feel like writing futa to an empty crowd and I'm sure any other potential futa writers probably feel the same desu. Doesn't help that your example of a good story comes from pretty much the highest quality anon in this thread. Doesn't leave much room for new writers to breathe.

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>>11977022
Sorry that you feel that way, but as you've pointed out, that's the way the cookie crumbles. We are getting closer to dead hours so you might get a few more responses if you wait a good 12 hours to make a judgement call.

I will interject regarding the "highest quality anon" in the thread bit - you shouldn't ever compare yourself to other writers, it will cause you nothing but grief.

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Stay motivated.

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>>11977022
Nigga it’s a sub genre of fanfics in an obscure thread on a Mongolian basket weaving forum about writing said fanfics about women who are technically real. Is it really something to be so sad about?

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>>11977022
Anons have read some of my poorer fics so someone will definitely read yours. Just write futa if you want.

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>>11977022
Just write it, dude.

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>>11977376
She'd look a lot better there with her index finger and thumb forming a ring around a gaping mouth.

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>>11976293
I've only read two futa stories, PPTenshi vs Tenga, and One Thursday Night (a Finana and Selen fic) and nutted to both. Smut in both was hot, and I thought the latter was just well written overall.

Former was hot because of the smut + how Kanata was flustered from having a cock vs. succumbing to how good it felt. Latter was just good smut overall.

I haven't read much, but something I like in futa is when the girl gets flustered over having a cock and hides it, but someone tears down her walls and gives her an incredible first time. From there, they warm up to each other and start fucking like rabbits. There's a few other things I look for, but that's the one that I like the most. I've thought about writing something to satisfy those urges, so I think it's best for you to just go ahead with it if a part of you wants to write futa for the sake of writing it. I think there'll be people reading it.

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>>11936231
(You) trying to bring back Peko Miko by any mean necessary. (You) capture them both in the basement. (You) lock Miko in a cell where she can only watch Peko being tortured. Miko insult (You) but only make Peko receive more punishment. When (You) are not torturing Peko, (You) watch the camera to see Miko trying to comfort Peko but Peko keeps sobbing. More and more abuse make them cry in pain, emotionally and physically. The day has come when Peko pees herself just from the sight of men. That day (You) pretend to be drunk and disgusting, then dropping the key into Miko's cell. After that (You) back to the camera watching the event unfold. As expected, Miko uses the key to release Peko and she cry on her shoulder like a baby. Then they start to escape, avoiding the cameras as they walk. (You) will do the final act, screaming and chasing them like a horror movie villain. But (You) don't intend to catch them again, (You) already call the cops on yourself. Even though (You) see Peko's legs cramped just from the terror of seeing (You), (You) just humitilate them at the spot to bring more time until the cops arrive. PekoMiko is saved.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11977946
yes, though anon's two favourite chuubas now have physical scarring, possible disabilities, and extreme mental trauma that results in further degradation of their social abilities to the point where they won't be able to function in society outside of a computer screen - at least his precious ship is saved

[Anonymous No.]

>>11978239
At least until Suisei comes along, Miko remembers why she fell in love with the pride of Hololive, and they both pimp slap Pekora to the curb.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11978239
The end justifies the means

[Anonymous No.]

>>11977946
>>11978239
Honestly this sounds like a prompt that seems like it would unironically be good if done entirely sans a (You) PoV except as part of a reveal at the end of the fic so that it's entirely a horror fic for PekoMiko that seems perfect for October.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11964687
Eyyyy, thanks for picking up my prompt.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936231
(You) are the boyfriend of Hoschimachi Suisei, a talented aspiring idol. She was the love of your life, the one who is always there for you, the one who keep pushing you to be better, she was your everything. Until one day, after waking up from a night of sex, she completely dissapear without a trace. Five years later, you got a new job as the manager of an idol who happens to be none other than Suisei herself.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11980902
Sounds like the hook here is unanswered questions, but without any prior investment in the relationship beforehand, I can't see the reader having a reason to care.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11964687
Matuli.......

[Anonymous No.]

>>11980971
mate festival doesn't need the help, she's doing a good job of fucking up her own career

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981091
Yeah she's too busy sucking my dick to care about being an idol anymore.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11980933
Yeah this feels like the kind of thing that needs something lengthy/ a series to give it the depth to make the reader want to see the questions answered. Especially since it's by necessity going to be dialogue heavy so you'd have to make sure suisei's characterization hits right as you can't really rely on smut or action to carry it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981305
Slurp slurp.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11980902
What another funny coincidence. I've actually drafted a series where you're Suisei's ex-bf where you end up working for Cover(but not as a manager) and the whole journey is filled with awkward sessions of you never really wanting to see her again and plenty of arguments about unresolved questions, depression fueled apathy towards the issues of idols, tackling impostor syndrome, and somewhat bonding with the other Holos that have severe depression related issues.

Some scenes I've thought of is helping Polka when she sprained a leg due to practicing her dance routines too much and subsequently sharing dumb discussions about all the shitty things in life, one scene where you're assigned to Gura but instead of helping her you just join her in countless alcoholic stints where you both drink yourselves till you pass out, and of course, plenty of confrontations with Suisei over what you want with each other, even when you told yourselves whatever was between you was over.

The only reason I'm saying all this is because I'm already writing a different series so this won't be worked on anytime soon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981698
What series?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981698
Damn that sounds mighty interesting. I hope you go back to it some time later.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11964680
Man this is great but it isn't really what you would call a good NTR story. A good NTR story would focus on the slowly deteriorating relationship between (you) and (Fubuki) here. It would capture her slow corruption from forcing herself to fuck other men in order for (you) to get a promotion to enjoying fucking other men to the point of no longer needing (you). I guess this is just me enjoying seeing women turn into major sluts in porn but this doesn't really satisfy that urge but good job nonetheless. I did enjoy the smut in this. Just wish there was more 'pain'.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11982265
based pain enjoyer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981713
Holorealm. It's less depressing to write and scratches my shonen itch.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11982555
Ahh. I personally enjoy that series. Weird shonen shit is super fun to write, I regret not starting it sooner. I'm glad you're having a good time with it and look forward to seeing more of it in the future.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11981698
That sounds like menhera wrangler, but like with tackling the issue seriously rather than memetically exaggerated. Which honestly sound like a good series concept especially since Suisei would be the 'main heroine'. I'd read it if you ever decide to go back to writing it.

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>>11983371
funny, because I wrote MW. You're right in that this is a more grounded concept, and if I do get round to doing this it will be different because the MC has no real intention of helping the Holos, it's just something that happens coincidentally. Still gonna have the same levels of pain though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983681
nta but you really are an angel dressed as a demon
really cannot express how uplifting it is to hear you're still here and still planning on delivering pain

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983681
'Ey bro. Glad to see you still knockin'. Can't wait to have my teeth kicked in.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936189
Yet another part of the story that makes me want to kill myself. Enjoy.

>>11787199
>You got almost no sleep that night, staying hidden in your room
>Suisei had give you food but you'd not touch it
>Everything in your mind felt broken, warped
>You could hardly put a coherent thought in your head
>Suisei, however, wasn't going to let this prevent her from her final day of fun
>Your grace period had ended and it was time for her to really get crazy
>It was time to really make this boy into a man
>"Come on to my room, we're going to have a lot of fun, you and me."
>You felt fear again
>"I-I don't wanna..."
>"Remember the last time you refused me, Anon?"
>"I don't wanna! Please don't!"
>Suisei let out a deep sigh and slapped you again as hard as she could
>"D-don't..."
>"I'm going to keep slapping you until you do what I ask. You want that?"
>"N-no..."
>"Then get in my room. *Now.* Or you will be sorry."
>You hurried into her room
>Suisei smiled
>"If this goes well, and you're a good boy, I'll give you a toy. We also have to have talk when this is over. But first~"
>Suisei pulled off her shirt and dropped her pants, keeping her cute blue thong, letting her tiny breasts loose
>"It's time you experience what most men can only dream of. Sex with Hochimachi Suisei."
>You shook your head wildly
>No more
>Why was she torturing you like this?
>Didn't she love you?
>Didn't she care about you?
>Why was she doing this?
>"Take your PJs off."
>You hesitated
>"You really want me to slap you, don't you? Do it now. If you refuse me one more time, I'm not going to ask you twice. You'll do what I tell you the first time, are we clear?"
>You shut your eyes tight and removed your clothing, covering your area
>Suisei gave a gentle smile
>"Don't be scared. I promise I'll be very gentle with you."
>She put her head by your ear and whispered
>"I'm a virgin. You'll be my first, just like I'll be your first. You should only be so grateful."
>She nibbled your ear lovingly and you felt that sick feeling again
>It was like treading through sewage
>"Look at you~ so hard already and we've just barely begun. Let's see if I can be your first orgasm too."
>She lifted herself up and opened her flower, putting your small dick inside
>Suisei's expression was that of pure pleasure as you entered her, not just in that it felt good that she had her first real penis inside her, but that it was the dick of none other than her best friend's son
>That fact alone was more arousing than any vibrator could be
>No man on earth could give the sensation that came with defiling her best friend's pride and joy, the apple of Sora's eye
>"Now"
>She breathed hard, hardly able to contain her lust
>"I want you to-"
>She bit her finger
>She wanted you so bad she could barely form sentences properly
>"I want you to move your hips with me. Just like this."
>Sui-chan began gyrating her hips back and forth across his waist and you did your best to join in the movement of her body
>Sui began to moan and thrust faster
>She attempted to calm herself
>She wanted to enjoy her apple for as long as possible
>She thrust wildly
>She couldn't contain herself, she need him
>In no time at all, her fluids coated his penis and she moaned loudly at the orgasm
>She didn't stop
>She kept going and going until finally, after her second orgasm, you had your very first
>You exploded into her as any sexually pent up boy would, filling her ovaries with your love
>Suisei moaned so loud she yelled
>She could feel your love explode into her and she thrust so hard you felt she might break your pelvis
>She grabbed your cheeks and furiously made out with you
>She was like an animal in heat
>This was everything she'd ever dreamed off
>Her sexy boy releasing his love into you
>No matter what he after this, you would always have to cope with the fact that she was not only your first sexual experience, but your first orgasm to
>No amount of therapy would ever remove that scar
>Suisei fell to the side, your semen dripping out of her and she panted like a worn out dog
>She wanted more
>Wanted to fuck you more
>But that one moment made her fuck you so hard her muscles ached
>Her pussy begged for me
>It wasn't satisfied, not by a long shot
>She placed her fingers against her clit and began to rub passionately
>She looked at you, then your dick, covered in her fluid and some of your semen as well
>Just the sight made her orgasm so hard her walls ached
>Even after all of this she wanted more, so much more
>But she didn't have even a drop left in her
>After her body began to cool down she felt overcome with love from the afterglow
>She spooned you, hugging you close
>You whimpered and she kissed the top of your head
>"I love you so much, Anon. Do you love me too?"
>You whimpered again
>"Tell me you love me."
>"I... I love you."
>"Good boy. I think we should get married one day, what do you think?"
>You said nothing
>"Just think: when we get married we can do this every single day."

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>>11983858
>You trembled violently at the thought
>Every single day, this torment
>”I love you so much cutie boy.”
>She began to lick your neck and play with your balls
>”How are you this sexy kiddo?”
>She smiled
>”So how about it? Did it feel good? Did it feel good having your first orgasm inside me?”
>You hid your face in your hands
>”I know you did.”
>She squeezed your balls playfully
>”You know what it means when a boy does that, right? It means you want to marry a girl. We’re basically already married now.”
>She began to grope every inch of your body, paying special attention to your chest as if you had boobs
>”I think we need to take a shower. I know I really worked up a sweat. Then we can eat and do it again.”
>Sui-chan hopped up and motioned you into the bathroom
>Reluctantly you followed
>The only thing you hated more than this was the back of Suisei’s hand
>Suisei, still exhausted, turned on the shower head
>With each step she took inside the bathroom, a large drop of your milk plopped on the floor
>She savored the feeling
>The feeling of a boy’s fresh semen, the first to ever exit his penis
>All for her, all inside her
>Suisei’s horny began to awaken again
>It was like her refractory period took a day off
>She had half a mind to simply pin you to the floor and get the second orgasm of your life
>She thought how naughty it would be
>Not only would it be the second, but if she didn’t clean herself out, she’d have both loads wedged further within her
>She turned off the shower
>She didn’t care about UTIs
>Didn’t even care about pregnancy
>All she wanted was the contents of your full balls
>She pushed you to the floor and put your penis within her, thrusting hard and quietly moaning
>Her muscle ached with each movement but she couldn’t care less
>She turned on her back, lifting you ontop her in the cowgirl position
>”Do… do what I did anon. Fuck me. Fuck me.”
>There was a certain forcefulness to the words “fuck me” like she was demanding it
>You clumsily moved your hips back and forth and she leg locked you
>You squirmed at the feeling of her fluids and your five minute’s old nut still inside her, coating your penis
>Unlike an older boy, you were so virile that you could get it up again mere minutes after the last orgasm
>Suisei hugged you tightly against her boobs
>Due to your size, your forehead just barely crested above them
>She was panting like a track horse after a race
>She started moving her hips up and down, unable to control her impulses
>In just a few minutes she got what she wanted: the second orgasm of your life
>It was considerably more cramped inside her slot this time around, allowing her to feel a pressure against her walls
>She orgasmed as well, letting you go
>She was so tired she could sleep right then and there
>That was four orgasms in 5 minutes
>Finally, her hungry pussy had been satiated, growing fat on your love
>She was too tired for the shower now
>She lazily reached for a rag and cleaned herself, tossing it to the side and almost instantly passing out
>You were far less exhausted than she, having done maybe 20% of the effort in the exchange
>You cleaned yourself off as well and returned back to your room, opting to sit in the corner
>The empty, hollow feeling came back
>Did you really enjoy it?
>Did that really mean you wanted to marry her?
>If your body said you wanted to marry her, why did you hate the idea?
>You thought of your mommy again
>Sui-chan said she’d hate you if she found out
>She’d hate you for fucking her best friend
>Your eyes welled with tears
>The one thing that was more painful than any of the events that occurred over these three days was the idea that your mom could hate you
>You hugged your legs
>Every part of you felt dirty
>From your head to your feet there was a sense of filth on you that was invisible
>You had to get it off
>There was a second shower across from your room and you quickly hurried inside
>You scrubbed your arms and legs yet the feeling of disgust wouldn’t go away
>You dug your nails in and began to scratch yourself
>By the time you had finished, your arms, legs and penis were covered in scratch marks and blood
>Yet the feeling of filth remained
>No amount of scrubbing seemed to remove it

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983914
I'll read it in a bit but are you the guy who owns your own google doc or is someone else compiling it for you? Because they never bothered to put in the last two parts. If someone else is doing it would you like me to step in for them and handle it? Or will you?

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>>11983914
>The day was finally here: Sora-chan’s return
>You were anxious all day
>Thankfully, Sui-chan didn’t make a move on you, in fact she barely spoke to you at all
>By the time afternoon arrived, Sora-chan had pulled up to Suisei’s house
>Sora got out of her vehicle and before she could ring the doorbell, you were out the door and in her arms
>Suisei came out soon after
>”How was my little man?”
>She smiled
>”He was *very* good. Was a bit disobedient at times, but he quickly corrected.”
>”That’s good to hear. I’m proud of you for being so good.”
>Tokino turned her head, inspecting your cheek
>”Oh no, what happened? Your cheek has quite the welt on it.”
>Suisei spoke before you could
>”He was running and not paying attention. He smacked right into a lightpole.”
>Sora giggled and patted your head
>”Silly boy, you need to pay attention. Thanks a lot for taking care of him, Sui-chan. It was good to see you again.”
>”It was entirely my pleasure. Bye Sora. And bye Anon.”
>”Don’t you want to give Sui-chan a hug?”
>You quickly ran behind Sora’s leg, hugging it tightly
>”He’s just shy I guess. Well, I will see you later.”
>Suisei walked back to the house and Sora’s mom sense began to tingle
>She didn’t know what it was, but she could feel her son’s fear
>She just had a feeling that something happened he wouldn’t say in front of Suisei
>She walked back to the car, allowing you to sit in front
>”Hey?”
>She looked at you sympathetically
>”What’s wrong, Anon? You look really shaken up.”
>Your lip began to quiver and you shook your head
>Sora frowned
>”What’s got you so upset? You can tell me.”
>Tears began to stream down your face
>”I… I c-can’t. Y-you’ll hate me.”
>Once you reach the words “hate me” you broke down into loud sobbing
>Sora tried to keep herself from crying
>She drove a few blocks away, just on the off chance being anywhere near Sui-chan was what caused this
>”I would *never* hate you. No matter what you did. You could murder someone, you could destroy the world and I will *always* love you with the entirety of my heart. Please tell me what’s wrong.”
>You shook your head again
>”Here. I think I’ve got something that will help.”
>She reached beneath her seat, pulling out a stuffed bear
>”Look. It’s Ankimo!”
>You screamed and flung yourself into the backseat, the memories of Marine rushing back into your mind
>Sora was in a state of disbelief
>She unhooked her seatbelt and opened the backseat door, squatting down
>”Anon. Please come to mommy. I want to help you. I love you so much and you could do nothing to make me hate you. Noth-ing. You understand?”
>You crawled over to her and she hugged you tightly
>”You’re safe, ok? Cry it all out.”
>You cried so hard you thought your lungs would burst and your eyes would fall out of their sockets
>Sora rubbed your back gently, quietly and gently “Shh’ing” you
>Finally you stopped
>”So can you tell me what happened?”
>You shook your head again
>”Can I guess?”
>You nodded
>”Did Suisei hit you? Is that how you got that bruise?”
>You nodded
>”Alright. Did she…”
>She loathed to even have the thought
>”Did she touch you in a way you didn’t like?”
>Your eyes welled with tears again and you broke down
>Sora felt her eyes become hot and watery
>If what you said was true, and how could you be lying with a reaction like that, she had just failed as a mother
>Sora had heard rumors
>Supposedly she was a “shonencon” and not a “shotacon”
>She wanted to put it out of her mind
>Wanted to believe it was nothing but rumors spawned of jealousy from Sui’s success
>Sora had put her child in the lion’s den for three days to fend for himself
>”Anon”
>Sora could barely choke the words out
>”I love you… so much. You understand me? I love you so, so much and I am so so sorry.”
>Sora’s iron wall, meant to protect Anon from her own emotion, came crumbling down
>She cried along with him

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983371
Pretty sure >>11981698 is Menhera Wrangler anon as well

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983995
>”We’re going to put this right. We are. I’ll do whatever you want. Whatever you want just name it and I’ll do it. We’ll go to the park and play and snuggle w-whatever you…”
>Sora couldn’t finish
>She broke down into a flurry of sobs
>The boy she loved so dearly, even more than being an idol, was now traumatized beyond belief
>And all because she ignored her motherly intuition
>She cried how sorry she was
>She cried how she didn’t hate you
>How she loved you more than you could ever understand
>Nothing on this earth could hurt her more than what had just taken place
>You both stopped crying and Sora wouldn’t let you out of her arms
>She reasoned that maybe if she could just hug you long enough, all the pain and trauma might go away
>She gently brushed her hand through your hair
>”We’re going to make this right ok? I promise with all in my power. But first.”
>She sniffled and picked you up in her arms, cradling you
>Her eyes filled with tears again
>Just like she held you when you were a baby
>Before you were traumatized
>When you were innocent and pure
>Before she failed you as a mother
>Her baby boy
>She bit her tongue and began to dry cry, hugging you tightly
>She silently begged the universe, god, satan, anything that was listening to turn back time so she could make the right choice
>Sora-chan pulled herself together
>She couldn’t turn back time, but she could make him happy again
>”Come on sweetie. Let’s go have fun, just us. Whatever you want.”
>”I wanna go home.”
>”Ok sweetie. We’ll go right there.”
>She drove home was quickly as the law would allow
>Once inside her house, she hugged you again
>Her arms felt welded to you
>It was like she felt as though the moment she let you go, you’d be abused again
>You needed the same
>Just to feel mommy close to you
>Feel her warm, safe touch against you
>Her protecting arms and her soft voice
>Nothing could hurt you inside her arms
>The entirety of that day you hugged
>You both slept together and hugged even more
>It was time to figure out what to do next
>What was she going to do?
>Just ask her friend why she fucked her kid?
>She couldn’t go to the police
>Suisei’s fame was such that she may as well be immune to any legal accusations
>She doubted even Yagoo would take action
>There was only one choice then
>A choice as rational as it was a fitting punishment for her negligence
>She’d graduate Hololive
>She couldn’t possibly spend another minute being an idol alongside Suisei
>Nearly five years of her life devoted to this and it was a phone call away from ending
>She took a deep breath and dialed Yagoo
>In short order she resigned, not telling him a single reason
>Sora finally returned to what she had been: the gentle, loving mother to her child
>She sat down with you
>”You don’t have to tell me anything you don’t want to. If you want to tell me you can. I’m going to get a therapist and maybe you can tell them. This next week we’re just going to have fun, ok? No school, not veggies, nothing but fun and games. Does that sound good?”
>You nodded, cracking a smile for the first time in four days
>Sora smiled too
>There was nothing on earth that made her happier than you smiling
>”Good. Let’s go get some icecream and pick out a toy. Sound fun?”
>you giggled a bit
>”Yeah.”
>”That’s what I like to here.”
>Her expression turned serious again
>”I love you, Anon. Never, ever forget that. You’re the apple of my eye.”

Sorry for the wait there. Got banned for speaking the truth on this board. Am back now.

>>11983981
I'm the one who does. Completely spaced it. I'll add all the rest of these parts shortly. This post wraps it up. I don't think I have it in me for a bad end

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936189
>>11983981
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTtEm3gcVnCbzdQxEOLlAvgIO_hEEXfK1w0FIljjxNrF8AsaIM1NShNMOiEOj7PEm1w7ACoiC-lJjag/pub

And that's that done.

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>>11984091
on the off chance you are banned and have a story you want to submit, you can e-mail it to AA and he'll post it either straight away or at the beginning of the next thread, depending on what you want

couple of us have had to use this service before as the mods are overly friendly and frequently insist on sending random people away on vacations to the bahamas

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984091
Jesus Christ. If that what rape is, fuck fantacizing about it

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984232
Thanks bro. Just wanted to make sure the archive had it all. >>11984234 has the right of it; should anything ever happen and you want to post a story or some such, just shoot me an email and I'll handle it for you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984253
It is. I know from experience. This was a "write what you know" story.

Rape can be a nice fantasy but the reality is beyond horrible.

>>11984234
Who is AA? But I will remember that next time, should I be silence by the mods for speaking what they know is true

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983858
>>11983914
>>11983995
>>11984091
also: maybe you found this difficult to write and don't necessarily want to be praised for it, but fucking hell, this is absolutely incredible. the thought of being sexually abused as a child by suisei makes me weak at the knees and shiver in excitement, and frankly, the fact that anon didn't like it makes it all the hotter

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984405
i'm super glad i haven't experienced the trauma you have then, else i might not have been able to enjoy your writing as much

i've gotta ask, though; given you've experienced abuse, what makes you want to write a parallel about it in such vivid detail?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984405
>It is. I know from experience. This was a "write what you know" story.
A-Anon?

[Anonymous No.]

also, a thought occurs to me; most fics about suisei in the archive portray her as crazy and sometimes sexually abusive too. why's she such a popular character for this?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984405
AA is short for ArchiveAnon, the anon that archives all the stories. His email address is at the top of the archive itself.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984405
Anon, point to where the bad man touched you on this doll.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984550
> That one collab of Project Winter that got clipped to no end
Acting a little too well

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984742
She acts it up a few other times as well, and she doesn't seem to mind so it's sort of stuck with her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984742
it's weird that, given all of her accomplishments and the age of those two clips, everyone always goes back to the suicopath
not badmouthing anybody for doing it of course

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984550
>crazy
it's from the memes from that project winter collab.
>sexually abusive
Suisei is Suisex, how is this a hard concept to grasp. Hoshiyomis want her to do something like that to them.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984472
I'm glad people enjoyed it at least. Glad something good can come of it.

Catharsis I think. Hurt like hell to write that, yet, at the same time, I feel relief as well. I gave him the person, Sora-chan, that I didn't have then and that was something that felt good.

>>11984602
Awesome. I'll be sure to remember that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11984405
I'm sorry that you went through something traumatizing like this, Anon. People cope differently with trauma, so I hope that writing it down helped you somewhat.
That being said, it was a really good story. Thank you for writing it.

[Anonymous No.]

That's it. No more Suicopath fics. I want HiHoney!Suzy fics.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11986355
ogey

[Anonymous No.]

>>11983779
lol, I've been actively writing and contributing to these threads for the past few months and I still intend to for the near future. As much as this place has been shitting itself, I still enjoy being here and I'll still be writing about chuubas how I like it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11987306
It's really good to hear that. Sometimes you wonder, you know.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11980933
I didn't really allude this promt to having any mystery element but feel free if you want to add it. Suisei here leaves you to pursue her idol career.

And about the point of it needing to build prior investment in (your) relationship, I don't really agree to this. Most stories here basically just jump straight to the most emotional part of their story and still manages to hit hard. It will certainly makes it hit harder (like in Omelas), but it isn't required. A short prologue will do just fine in setting up the story.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11986355
The fuck would that even entail? Hi honey is just a regurgitated meme, and for Suisei to be Suisei she has to be a "shooting star" either aspiring to be an idol or being one. So what does HiHoney!Suisei even mean?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11989026
greetings, dear

[Anonymous No.]

>>11989026
I'm gonna assume he meant housewife Suisei but in Retarded Reddit Speech.

[Anonymous No.]

Bump.

[Anonymous No.]

Give me something to write about that isn't ryona

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
Wholesome Fubuki fluff with cuddling and sleeping side-by-side with her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
Write something to do with this.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
what are your preferred genres? are you open to smut? do you prefer short self-contained scenarios or open-ended prompts with no obvious resolution?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
Corruption

[Anonymous No.]

>>11989292
Yes.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991974
Apparently my best writing is romance, fluff and smut. I write some adventure/fantasy stuff as well but it's typically not as well received. It's not bad per say, just not as well received as my romance shorts.

>>11991832
I could, but I've also watched Fubu like twice. I could write her as best I can from memory but it's probably going to be far from being perfectly Foob's personality.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
>>11992028
Chuuba corrupting (You)

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
Lesbian sex between MiComet except Suisei says "Hi, cunny!" before eating Migo out

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992109
It's pretty difficult to actually mess up Fubuki's personality because she has portrayed so many different characterisations in her streams, usually via viewer request. She can be almost anything.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992109
Smut is like junk food, it has blanket appeal and goes down easy. It's usually not as fun to write though because it doesn't flex creative muscles

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992109
>I could write her as best I can from memory but it's probably going to be far from being perfectly Foob's personality
I don't think anyone can get her personality perfectly, Anon. The good thing about her is that you can mess up her personality only if youreally, really try to do so. She's portrayed a lot of different personalities and mannerisms, mostly to viewers' requests and her own will, so she's always a safe bet. She can be almost anything she wants, which is why I like her so much.
So with that said, if you feel like writing Fubuki fluff, please do so. I'll definitely read it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11991789
Might I get a crumb of Okayu fluff, sir?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992109
prompt i posted months ago, replace mio with whomever if you so wish

https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/91545183
You're on a date with the lovely Mio, window shopping around the plaza. While Mio is bending down to breathe in the fragrance of the recently-bloomed roses outside a florist's, she trips and falls, clothes fluttering in the wind, and in a moment of weakness, you snatch a glimpse of her forbidden cloth, giving you an increasingly uncomfortable boner.

You resolve to put the fall behind you and add the sight to your internal bank of treasured memories, but from then on, her smile, her scent and the simple feeling of her skin against against yours while holding her hand drive you wild.

Mio notices your flushed cheeks and general disconcertion, and leans in to check your temperature, asking if you're alright. As she does so, one of her legs bumps against your third, making your condition perfectly clear. One panicked explanation later, a flustered Mio agrees to help 'relieve' you in the changing room of a nearby clothes store.

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>>11991789
Do you regret asking yet?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992141
fucking lol. stupid as this is, i'm backing it too - would fit a short comedy greentext, maybe finished with walk the dinosaur
>>11936231

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>>11992403
That's my feeling on it. It's fun at first but it quickly gets stale and stagnant. My fetishes are really fucked up too so I tend to stick to lighter stuff.

>>11992208
>>11992511
Then so it shall be. I will get to work on it.

>>11992618
yes. I tried to go through that long prompt sheet but I can't be fucked to do it right now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992951
Example of a fucked up fetish you have?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992951
Don't suppose you're into insects laying eggs in girls? Cuz that'd be just peachy.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993014
AB/DL and ageplay stuff mostly, mixed in with abuse. I'm reasonably confident that I won't have a lot of takers for that one. The sky is the limit as far as that goes, thought I can write just as good fluff on that as well.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993098
>huh, i've never heard of ab/dl before. i'll just google it qui-
oh

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993048
dude how do you even acquire such a fetish

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993208
I made the same mistake. I knew what it was but never knew there were acronyms for it

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993312
I really, really want my innards to be turned into one long egg sausage by something terrifying and incapable of reasoning.

There's more to it but I already went through this recently-ish in the thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993483
What the fuck is an egg sausage?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993483
oookay
i still have no idea how one acquires that desire but hey, you do you

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992951
>I will get to work on it.
Bless you Anon. I'll be looking forward to it!

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993547
I'm glad you asked!
https://e-hentai.org/s/777603db99/670937-19

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993654
I shouldn’t have opened that

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993654
Huh you really weren't kidding when you said you had some fucked up fetish.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993713
Did it get you all hot and bothered?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993654
Well it's not the worst thing I've ever seen

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993759
Well I am certainly bothered.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993804
Ahhh, fuck. I always get a good laugh out of being roasted for my fetish. Thanks for being a good sport.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993846
You're masochist on top of everything else? Geez louise, dude.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11993483
I have several questions, none of which I think I want an answer to.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936189
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTxLpdx9O7DXCwsUN4Zs04lsTfSm5XWt432X1RKED0jCRG9hyb_YeSP3jc0VJzaufjE7_13W1m8Hzbe/pub

A bit short, perhaps a bit cheesy. But I hope you enjoy it all the same.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11994752
short and tooth-rottingly sweet. very pretty, anon. you didn't screw up her personality either

[Anonymous No.]

>>11994752
That was so unbelievably cute. I can feel myself beginning to really like this fox, despite the fact that this is all fanfiction and she isn't really like this

[Anonymous No.]

>>11995417
Just remember the fact that she had to suck Yagoo's big sweaty cock and balls and swallow his old man jizz to get her friends into Hololive and that she will never ever be nice to you because in her eyes, you're just another nameless drone to shill Hololive products to. That should do it.

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>>11995763
>Just remember the fact that she had to suck Yagoo's big sweaty cock and balls and swallow his old man jizz to get her friends into Hololive
Thank god for that, otherwise my oshi wouldn’t exist.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11995763
Ogey

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936231
I would like the punch whore greens turned into an actual story

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992572
NTA but I've been really trying to work on part two of Nursing Catto, unfortunately taking longer than I'd like but making slow progress.

Probably 80% done with it, and I think once I get past the "How do I initiate sex?" question it should flow much faster.

It is quite fluffy.

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>>11994752
Short, cute, sweet Fubuki fluff. It's what I can never have enough of. Just so unbelievably cute.
I love it! You did great Anon, you didn't mess up her personality either, despite your worries.
Great job! I'll be looking forward to any future stories of yours, especially if they're as fluffy (if not more) as this one.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936231
Turning the tables on Rushia and acting like a yandere after she streams with Tamaki

[Anonymous No.]

>>11996609
As ever, I await your story

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936231
In spirit of Halloween, you decided that the best way to celebrate the festival was to do some grave robbing. Late at night in the graveyard while everyone was trick or treating, you spot a sword sticking out of a red rock in front of a grave. Little did you know, the moment you tried pulling off the sword, a girl would start screaming for you to stop and then emerge from the ground, revealing that the red rock was actually a cute zombie girl's hair with a sword stuck in her head! She punishes you by having hot rough sex inside her own muddy grave!

I don't have any Ollie images

[Anonymous No.]

>>11999582
>She likes it

[Anonymous No.]

>>11994945
>>11995417
>>11997469
So happy you all enjoyed it. Makes my day to hear stuff like that. Glad I could capture her personality adequately.

Any other prompts you'd like to see? Or should I just make an anthology of shorts featuring viewer and Fubuki?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12000227
I'm glad the feedback made you happy. Good job once again.

>Any other prompts you'd like to see?
Sadly not, when it's not about my oshi, I can hardly think of anything.

>Or should I just make an anthology of shorts featuring viewer and Fubuki?
This, however, I would like. If possible, I'd be very glad to read it.

[Anonymous No.]

bump

[Anonymous No.]

Who's the best Holo for gentle femdom?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12003351

[Anonymous No.]

>>12003351
Risu for gloved prostate massage and milking handjob.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12003533
I don't think the squirrel would really do the gentle part right.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12003351
Mori for gentle cowgirl with lots of passionate kissing and handholding.

[Anonymous No.]

How many regular writefrens do we have? I only see like three

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006162
Used to have a couple more but they got bullied away

[Anonymous No.]

>>11996562
Punch whore is legit my favourite greentext in the entire archive. And that’s counting all the other really good ones like Mioposting, holoevil, Metal gear kaichou: Revengeance, etc.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006162
I think we have a fair few actually. Considering how many ongoing series there are and most stories mentioned being claimed by a writeanon, I think there’s more here than people assume.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006578
The weirdest part is I've contributed to every one of those, but I just can't get it together to write a full story off of one of them. Writeanons.... onegaishimasu.....

[Anonymous No.]

>>12004733
The stench of her farts certainly isn't gentle

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006937
The ending of a story I’m writing right now is very loosely based on the metal gear kaichou greentext

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006162
At least 7

[Anonymous No.]

>>12003533
I want Risu to milk my balls completely dry

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008214
That's some pussy shit. I want to milk Risu's balls completely dry.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12007359
>he fell for the brap meme

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008618
>meme

[Anonymous No.]

>>12006162
Definitely more than three. Most writeanons just prefer to remain anonymous unless called out. We can do a headcount if you want

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008839
Sure.
> Have you released a story
Yes
> Have you released a story in the past 30 days
Yes
> Have you released a story in the past week
Yes
> Have you released more than 1 story in the past 30 days
Yes

This should do. Doubt a lot of people will join in though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008839
There's me, Holorealm, ShadowLive, the new greentext author, Holocalypse, CH, MW is confirmed to be around still, and an unknown number of writers posting smaller stories

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes, no, no, no

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>Yes
>Yes
>No
>No

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Shit I just looked at my last released story and it's almost been 2 months.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008423
Faggot

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>Yes
>Yes
>No
>Yess

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>yes
>yes
>yes
>yes

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>yes
>yes
>yes
>yes

[Anonymous No.]

>>12009022
Anon... holorealm Anon is MW anon

[Anonymous No.]

>>12009456
oh yeah? didnt know

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes, yes, no (I think), yes

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008705
>happened exactly once
Yes, meme. It's just a stupid fucking meme at this point.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12010473
>he doesn't know

[Anonymous No.]

>>12010473
ollie...

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes, Yes, No, No

[Anonymous No.]

>>11992578
The only thing I don't like about this prompt is how restricting it feels. Maybe you should write it yourself?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12009518
>>11983681
They literally said it this thread.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12013829
Completely misread it when it was posted then, my bad

[Lanomymous No.]

>>11942613
Marine being so desperate to stop being a virgin that she will suck off and eat your smegma

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes
Yes
No
No

I'm slacking. I want to go back to writing 40 hours a week boys.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes
Yes
Yes
Yes

>>12009456
Also yes, although progress has been slow with the chapters due to work piling up and motivation to write it going down yet I still get horny bouts to write smut

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>Yes
>No
>No
>No
I hate this more than words can properly convey but things only seem to continue to get worse.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12017757
Might be genuine burnout.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12017912
I have a lot of ideas I'm very interested in conveying. I even commissioned a friend to make some small art pieces for me for something in the story. I've been suffering through several PC hardware related issues and other RL obligations have devoured my time. I've only been able to get anything remotely resembling progress done via fucking phonewriting since I've been ripped away from my usual work station and that's a nightmare. Shit sucks.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018016
Ganbare, writeanon...

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018016
Holy shit. I assume you don't have a bluetooth keyboard then, cause that's pretty much the only way I've found writing on a phone to be half tolerable.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018123
Sadly no. HoloFan 6 would probably be a lot further along if I did, so I should look into it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>Yes
>Yes
>No
>No

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018123
Dear Diary, Today I learned about the existence of Bluetooth keyboards.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018701
There's even Bluetooth chargers bro, Bluetooth fridges, Bluetooth everything. You're behind the times grandpa.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018262
You might also look into the simpler option, a USB OTG cable for your device and just plug in a regular keyboard to it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019222
This. There's even Bluetooth dildos out there that you can live vicariously through while your wife's bull rails her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019222
>wireless good
ok zoomer

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019488
Nigga, wireless stopped being bad a decade ago. You're basically a dinosaur.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11936231
After years and years, you finally manage to get a job as a manager in Cover Corp. However, you end up as Kiara's manager, which is very unfortunate because you absolutely hate her. This would be a story of how you slowly start to fall in love with her the more you work with her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019555
This but instead of falling in love your hatred of her grows deeper and deeper until you're eventually driven to commit multiple heinous felonies against her that end with brutal dismemberment.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019631
based

[Anonymous No.]

>>11946927
Yeah, that's what the fiction part of fanfiction means.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019549
zoom zoom

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019700
Alright boomer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019700

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019700
Time to get your hearing aids.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019700
I'm going to get a wireless chip in my head before 2030 to speed up my thinking capacities and people will be living in Mars together with fully automated AI while you'll still be using Nokia phones that can't do more than play snake game and sometimes pick up calls.

[Anonymous No.]

New thread
>>12019950

[Anonymous No.]

Since we hit bump limit, I'll pose a question. Personally I'm against this because I tend to slack off on stories that are serialized (see Omarun), but seeing as the Hag Orgy story has been in the works for months now and I haven't made much progress, should I release it in two parts?

Where I am right now feels like a good "cut off" point where making it into a chapter would not feel forced or out of place, so it wouldn't take much to make it work. I also have no problem releasing a 20k+ word smut behemoth in one go either.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020698
If you reached a good stopping point and want to split it into parts, then go for it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12019971
Nokia phones are pretty reliable desu

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020698
Yes, absolutely. Releasing a 20k+ story would be far less digestible than something split into chapters

[Anonymous No.]

I have gathered us all here today to gaze upon this image. It's truly divine, wouldn't you say? It really has something for everyone. The gentle curves on her ass, the little beads of sweat that drip down her legs, and the way her panties bunch up in a daresay inviting manner. Not to mention the way her areolas peak out a tiny bit. "Art" is generally not a term I would use to define hentai, an illustration perhaps, but not art. However, this image is a true artistic masterpiece that I enjoy very thoroughly as a well trained enjoyer of the arts with discerning taste. That is all I have to add, but I would ask you take a moment to bask in the finer details of this piece in hopes that you will see what I see in it, not just an erotic illustration, but a work of art.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020972
i would like to shove my head between those cheeks and lick her sweaty gamer arsehole

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020698
I personally don't mind either, but if you feel like you're not going to work on it anytime soon and would like to get it out, releasing it in chapters is fine.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020972

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020972

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020972
aqua's ass is art and needs to be breeded

[Anonymous No.]

>>12018701
They're not actually that good of a typing experience but a shitty keyboard is still better than typing on a phone for anything longer than a paragraph.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
>Yes
>No
>No
>No

[Lanomymous No.]

>>12020698
Yo I am down with anything dog

[Anonymous No.]

>>11945964
>>11948927
>>11950116
>>11951004
>>11951619
We're gonna make it, anon :)
>>11953056
>>11957309
>>11962302
>>11962726
>>11967930
Thanks for reading, anons. Guess my Dr K reps are paying off. See you next thread!

>>12008971
Also Yes/Yes/Yes/Yes

[Anonymous No.]

>>12020822
>>12020900
>>12021170
>>12023037
Alright, thanks for the feedback. I'll consider doing that, then.

>>12020972
Akutan sit on my face

[Anonymous No.]

I will tell Luna my cock is a lollipop and there's nothing you can do to stop me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026722
I will beat the shit out of Luna and leave her in a dumpster located in a back alley and you can't stop me

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026758
Don't do that. Too far.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026788
As I said, you CANNOT stop me. Say goodbye to your hime.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026799
Anon. This isn't a joke anymore. I WILL have to rape you if you keep this up.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026841
Not if I rape Luna first

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026867
I'll rape you then her.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026901
I'll rape you first and make Luna watch.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12008971
Yes
No
No
No

[Anonymous No.]

>>12026867
>>12026901
>>12026964
I'll rape everyone including myself.

[Anonymous No.]

>raping luna
>implying she doesn't want to be raped

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027101
Once I'm done with her she'll wish she didn't want it earlier.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027101
I want to creampie short haired Hime until I can't anymore and show her how sexy of a lady she is.

[Anonymous No.]

I hope for more Ina horror in the future

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027481
Rape is horror to its victim

[Anonymous No.]

Why are there so many goblins in this thread?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027549
^(•<•)^

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027549
Probably something to do with the recent spread of ligma.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027549
post bump limit shitposting. the thread is healing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027549
Luna is too rapeable. We come out of our caves past bump limit as it's much safer now.

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027635
What’s ligma?

[Anonymous No.]

>>12027967
ANON RUN

[Anonymous No.]

Damn that was the worst blowjob of my life. Still came tho. Couldn't after I promised hime that the lollipop had cream inside if she licked long enough. I probably should've said "well enough" instead.