/wg/ - Writing General - Nui Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
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>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>11596355

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

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Any tips on writing a chuuba with a countryside dialect? I think I may be doing things the wrong way. I'm pretty sure people don't say twats...

It's for Okayu.

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>>11710279
There's no standard country dialect, but you could either make the speech more drawn out, or a bit faster than normal. You can just describe the former in prose, maybe extend a few vowel sounds. The latter, make a few more contractions and use some slang or tic from wherever the hell you're from. A glottal stop, for example.
I guess you could also make 'th' sounds into 'd' or 'f', especially if you want that bumpkin or don't give fuck kind of feel. Honestly, I'm content with grouping country dialects as either southern American or something like a scouser.

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>>11710279
Just do what subs do and add a bunch of contractions

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>>11710279
For okayu, you can probably just get away with mentioning that she has an accent and then just have her written with just normal english dialogue with a bit of countryside flavor occasionally added.
With the level of 'flavor' being inversely proportional to how much dialogue she has so that it's clear she has it but it doesn't affect reading too much.

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>PG. 10
>3hrs
Wake up.

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>>11713401
so close to sweet release

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>>11709546
Kiara having hatesex with a raging anti.

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>>11713678
Check the archive

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>>11713770
I'll check your archive, bitch. Bend over.

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>>11713770
After checking the archive.
No, there isn't actually anything with that concept in it, it's all either Kiara as KFP manager over you, Kiara as Girlfriend, and, Just Kiara, and like 2 Takamori fics.

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>>11713770
That doesn't exist yet.

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Recommend me an Aqua fic, something that isn't just her being autistic. I'm having trouble writing her into a role in my story where she is a competent XO without stripping her character

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>>11713979
>competent XO without stripping her character
not possible

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>>11713928
>>11713837
Sorry I just assumed the kiara rape quadology fit that description. There's also an ametori fic btw

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>>11713979
One of many thousands is a pretty good Aqua fic that shows her as a supportive XO without her just being autistic.

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>>11709546
So when is young vibes getting a sequel?, it's been a while

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>>11714019
The closest thing Kiara Anon was to being an anti was "I absolutely fucking hate my job, my boss is a literal cocksucker, I fucking hate my life", not schizo hatred towards her online. I definitely want to see Kiara getting hatefucked by an anti, though.

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>>11714109
Like I said I just assumed it because I've never read it

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>>11713997
>>11714085
Just read one of many thousands, it pretty cute and comfy, but the tone is pretty contrasting to my story. I guess it explains why I'm having trouble writing her. I need her to be legit good at her job in a serious environment, maybe she's not the best pick for Marine's XO. But she's the most relevant Holo for that position.

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When will Hololive get a skeleton vtuber

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>>11714093
That story ended on a perfectly good note though, I don't think the author intends to make a sequel. Why would he?

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>>11715696
My bad, read that earlier and turns out it's wrong

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>>11710279
>countryside
>okayu
A... Anon, is that a gyaru okayu fic? cause i love gyarus.

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>>11710279
Depends on what nationality, I suppose. British West Country would sound extremely different to southern USA, for example.

Just make absolutely sure that she's highly promiscuous. It's a fact that being in the countryside makes you ridiculously horny.

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>>11709522
Why are there so many ones tagged with "abuse"?

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>>11717054
because this used to be the abuse thread.

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>>11717054
>so many
There aren't enough

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>>11709546
Stalker incidents have increased. Menhera attacks are on the rise. To combat this, Yagoo has hired you as the muscle behind Hololive to do the dirty work and keep the talents safe from both the outside threats and themselves. You are placed under the guidance of Botan, who through hot steamy sex, fine tunes your cock into a weapon of massive semen destruction. Through bedroom training, she hones your dick into a rifle firing bullets of cum able to take a person's head off clean. In between your missions to protect the girls at Hololive or subdue any sex-crazy talent, you have sweet love to the lustful lion. Hell, maybe some of the other girls will join in on the fun after seeing your conjugal cannon save their lives.

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>>11717989
So basically you want the Anon from Exposure Therapy to somehow swap places with the Menhera Warngler one, but instead of Fubuki being the main chuuba it's Botan.

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>>11717054
It's because it's an umbrella term for any kind of chuuba abuse, either by them or on them, meaning it naturally kind of accumulates a lot of stuff especially since as >>11717105 mentions, this thread used to be the abuse thread until it became a writing general.

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>>11718078
tfw MWanon could've been a bedroom beast to the girls but he chose to be a nice guy instead.

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>>11718421
Suisei and Fubuki did mellow out after the deep dickings they got

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>>11718421
Honestly it's kind of a miracle we haven't had a 'serious' harem/fucks their way through hololive fic yet considering how much the thread goes absolutely horny for any kind of well written smut.

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>>11719214
hag orgy doko...

but if i get amazingly horny again I am probably going to write about making these hags feel like women again.

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>>11714543
I don't the aquamarine pairing works if you need one of them to be 'competent'. Their dynamic is idiot leading another idiot, with which one being which depending on the situation.

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>>11709546
Aqua has a loud and embarrassing nose whistle, and you - being the veritable master orator you are - convince her that the quickest and most effective way of dealing with the issue is by sucking your cock.

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>>11718421
Kurokami called him out on it and he proceeded to fuck her like there's no tomorrow.

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>>11716474
Anon, Okayu is actually a countryside bumpkin who lived with her grandma. I dunno what involvement with the story she'll have yet but I don't think it's to be a gyaru...

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>>11709546
Coming on Festival's forehead

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>>11725654
I wanna absolutely devour Kanata's pussy until she's practically catatonic.

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>>11725727
I want to fuck her until she can't walk while Coco and Suisei watch

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>>11725820
>Suisei watches in Morbid fascination and mold arousal
>Coco is hyped waiting to go next

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>>11719683
Omarun is Cute and Funny Chapter 2 doko...

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>>11726745
anon...

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>>11726835
Oh hey it's Gilbert! I love that lil' fella look at him go!

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>>11726745
>ywn get the circus daughterwife you desperately need

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>>11727966
I'm not dead yet, neither have I dropped the story!

I'm just majorly depressed, off my meds and up to my eyeballs in dealing with shitty real life problems, lots of 'em. Wish I could say I made some progress since the last time I gave a report, but I can't relax long enough to put down more than a hundred words at a time.

>Released 4 months ago
I'm legitimately sorry frens.

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>>11728624
Yeah, I understand. I was just playing around. I hope things get better for you, man.

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>>11728624
>spoiler
Well shit, sorry to hear that. Hope things get better for you, my guy.

Take as much time as you need before coming back, we can wait. Take care of yourself first and foremost, okay ?

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>>11728624
We bitch because we care, of course. Make sure to take care.

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>>11728624
Drink some milk with lemon, honey and a small bit of salt every day after waking up, it will help cure your depression. Better than those happy pills at least.

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>>11728624
What is it with writers in particular that they always end up using these made up excuses for not doing their job? It's always burn out this depression that. You never see this shit with other professions. Hell, IT gets SO much more shit on a daily basis and they never experience this so called "burn out" or "depression". I have a theory that these people have been so privileged growing up that they never realized the fact that all adults feel tired and sad sometimes and it doesn't mean you have to put a label on it to feel special.

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Remember to ignore obvious bait.

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>>11733317
Meds, pekofag.

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>>11724012
Coming on Festival's Forehead While She's having a menhera attack.

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>>11737296
>ancient Chinese menhera treatment

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Psycho Killer Sequel doko?

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>>11739729
Supposedly in the works

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>>11743290
I know it's why I was asking. Last time the author was here they updated the thread about the progress they were doing in making it with them supposedly having trouble since the sequel was about the rest of Myth investigating and discovering what was happening.

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>>11709529
>>11709522
>no "taking Nui to a horse race and then treating her to dinner" story
Sad.

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They're doing it on purpose fellas, ignore them

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>>11744792
I fucking love her stupidly oversized hat__

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yo, trying to find a story (can't remember the name) about meeting aqua at a conbini

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>>11750200
Play in the rain and you’ll get wet?

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>>11733317
Anything requiring creative input requires inspiration, otherwise you end up with shit. Some people take this fact better than others.

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>>11751278
Why are you taking bait seriously?

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>>11750300
Thanks!

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>>11751278
I actually do much worse when I listen to criticism because I'm not writing what I wanted to anymore. I'm actively changing my vision into something that I never intended to do.

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>>11744792
if i knew more about horse betting, sure. I fucking love her goofy hag attitude getting excited at every little thing and her fat fucking tits. I need to do more reps on her.

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I miss Selen

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>>11739729
Anon, I...

don't wanna say never, but at the same time I'd hate to lead people on when I've been having trouble writing much of anything for the last little while. You're interest means the world, truly, but unfortunately I don't have any progress to offer.

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>>11709529
I am getting a bit stumped with the Moona robot story so I wrote something else until I figure out how I want to proceed beyond what I've written. Do tell me if you enjoy this one:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQalW14YQ8oAvChgA-DbH8EB2s9nA8WIGErwxSCZOqPw_uvzLqk6aBsJfnTdGIC97nGZ1DJV2yrlwEK/pub

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>>11756430
Sure does. If it did you wouldn't say that

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>>11757325
I know your bait is to be negative and hostile but that doesn't even make any sense

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>>11755375
you miss her? me too. especially since it was my fault she's dead.

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>>11757614
GIVE HER BACK

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>>11757614

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>>11757614
Y tho

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>>11756661
Eh kind of a bit too short to make any kind of judgement, it's a new concept at least so I will at least give it a few more chapters to see how I feel as it develops. Only real gripe is that some of the paragraphs are bit too big that my eyes start to glaze over them but that's entirely a style thing that I can't really throw fault at since it is pretty well written.

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>>11756661
Not feeling as much about this one as I did Moonabot, chief, sorry. It's better written this time around, although there are a few typos here and there ('who's' is a contraction of who is/who has, whose is possessive).

While the premise is somewhat cliche, I have faith in you after reading your Moonabuse fic. If it's ordinary fluff... I fear predictability in

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>>11760152
>I fear predictability in
plot might be your biggest weakness.

I accidentally clicked post while trying to expand the quick reply box, fuck this thing.

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>>11756661
Given your chosen setup, it's hard to find a fresh way about it, but Reine has got me curious to see where it goes.
I think first line, second sentence is inconsistent with tense (should be "It was"). Also, the dialogue about your parents passes quickly, making Reine come off as a bit insensitive than it feels like she should be. Maybe adding an ellipsis or prose before to convey some sort of hesitation?
Other than nitpicking, not much to say. Need a few more chapters to see whether it clicks, so I'm looking forward to more!

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>>11760152
>>11760198
Interesting. I will try to throw some curveballs in there if I can, shake things up some. I think I have some ideas already.

I'll try for the Moonabot story as well. I know how it'll end I just need to figure out how best to get there. Thank you for being patient with me.

>>11759491
I should probably break them up a bit more. Wasn't sure if people wanted more blocks so I decided to try and see what the opinion was. I'll slice them up a bit more next time around.

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>>11757791
>>11758339
>>11758656
You think I wanted this? You think I genuinely wanted her to end up the way she did? I wanted a happy ending for her, one where you would share a long life with her and your daughter. Had I not lain my eyes upon that request, had I not listened to the voices in my head to do it to her, we would not be here. I can't even write about her anymore at this point.

But thanks for reading and enjoying my works!

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>>11760659
You're a bastard but thank you for it eitherway.

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>>11760558
No worries. Throw as many ideas around as you like.

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>>11760659
I didn't read it I just wanted to know why

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>>11709546
Botan would be the most fun chuuba to smoke pot with.

Getting high with Botan, doing stupid shit that anyone else would look down upon but to stoners is the funniest fucking thing - like sticking cherry bombs and sparklers in glass bottles and watching them blow up, ordering a MILLION FUCKING CHEESEBURGERS from McDonalds and falling asleep after like 10. Maybe confessing to her, too.

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>>11765180
Why are you a junkie?

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>>11765651
Why do you ask?

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>>11765863
For malicious intents. But for knowledge as well. I want to know if someone who has partaken in such acts is self aware enough to know why they've fallen so far down in the first place.

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>>11765934
I'll tell you after you finished that getting-buttfucked-by-Oga story.

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>>11766096
The inner machinations of the mind of a junkie are an enigma.

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>>11766367

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God, I'm so happy I get to write Okayu. She's such a sweetheart and I'm loving exploring her odd manners of speech, even if I'm leaning a bit too heavy on it due to inexperience. I hope it won't be too hard to understand. Exploring the different personalities of each character is really what writing is all about.

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>>11766720
This is going to be snuff, isn't it?

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>>11766720
This is gonna be a fic based on that picture of Korone filming Okayu having sex with a particularly swarthy gentleman

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>>11766720
If it's not snuff, can you make it snuff? Like, have her all happy and pregnant and shit then get hit by a car?

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>>11766730
>>11766789
>>11766791
What's wrong with you? Okayu would hate to hear you say these things. Actually, she wouldn't care, but I'll care in her place!

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>>11766932
You're saccharine post unnerves us, as does the lack of denial.

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>>11766791
lol

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>>11767049
I still haven't decided the full role of Okayu in the story, so she can go in many ways. I don't think that... her getting pregnant and being hit by a car is one of those ways tho...

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>>11767350
thank god

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>>11767350
Doesn't have to be a car, there's lots of things she could get hit by

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>>11760659
Though honestly I don't think you'd have made something as memorable than if you had just played it straight and given it a normal happy ending... well perhaps other than that story getting used by Selen goslings more

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Can someone tell me what makes people turned on by piss? Most I can gather is the implications that the chuuba is unable to get cock off their mind or being fucked senseless, to the point of not being able to think about things like holding their bladder. A bit like letting their voice out. Hell, sometimes it's supposed to be some pheromone for the chuuba if they're an animal. Drinking it or becoming a 'human toilet' I really don't get though, unless domination plays some part in it.

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>>11771282
What, you aren't turned on by piss? You a faggot or something?

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>>11771282
You know the ringo thread exists right?
The people with that fetish are probably the better people to ask. Especially since it would be as it exists for chuubas.

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>>11771903
That reminds me, what happened with the guy that was developing piss that tastes and smells like Suisei's?

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>>11772393
Never heard back. Presumably he was hunted down.

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>>11772393
Honestly I was just hoping it was some high effort shitpost.

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>>11773047
I know, right? Can't stand others having fun without harming anyone, especially when it's something that disgusts me. Frankly, anyone who has differing tastes to me should be put into a camp, maybe gassed too.

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>>11773088
Are you actually autistic?
I was hoping that suisei ringo guy was like the moguyacht and was just some bored retard that mixed some liquid to look like piss and spun a yarn to troll.

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>>11773308
Yes, you were heard the first time. You don't need to keep repeating your retardation. You'll lower the general IQ.

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>>11760659
>>11755375
I regret requesting the idea. At the time when i requested it i wasn't really watching Selen and i thought she was just another bland vtuber out of the thousands that already exist, but the more i watched her i saw how amazing and entertaining she really is and the more my parasocial relationship grew with her. I wished i never requested it. I'm sorry

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>>11773897
now, just like me, you must suffer the consequence of your own actions. May you live to forever regret it.

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>>11773308
Now that you've mentioned it...
What happened with the moguyacht? Did he carry it out?

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>>11774139
Yep, was on the news a while back

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>>11774139
Given the sheer logistics of organizing something like that.
Probably hasn't happened yet since it would involve a lot of moving parts that'd get slowed down by the meme flu.

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I posted these in the nijiEN thread but i'll might as well share them here too

Oliver doesn't want to play with Petra:
>Oliver and Petra finish their collab
>Oliver sighs because of Petra's poor gaming abilities
>Finana notices it
>"Hey big guy, you seem bored, want a fun partner to spend the time?"
>He gulps, he knows this is wrong but he's also interested
>He begins playing with FInana off-stream
>He collabs again with Petra but seems more exhausted and bored until Finana sends a message on chat
>"Hope you're both having LOTS of fun ;)"
>Oliver can't think about anything more than collabing with Finana in that moment, he's bored to shit and wants SOME GOOD ACTION
>The same night he asks Finana for a guerilla RE6 stream, he wants it NOW
>Finana teases him
>"Aren't you scared about Petra knowing? She really likes to collab with you...i can't do that to a branch partner hehehehe"
>Oliver doesn't care anymore, he wants to play with FInana now even if Petra walks in during the stream
>They begin to play and reach chapter 3 of Leon and Helena campaign
>Petra enters the stream as Oliver resurrects Finana
>"O-Oliver i didn't know you were having a guerrilla w-with Finana! I'm s-so happy for you"
>Oliver reads the message and this just activates his gamer senses to the max, he quickly unloads his healing supplies right on Finana's mouth
>Petra leaves the stream crying as she cancels the "It Takes Two: Part 56" stream

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>>11774970
Reimu doesn't want to play with Petra:
Ok this one calls for a new one
>Reimu and Petra try to play Minecraft together but Reimu is having problems
>"Don't worry, i can still try to find you and give you some cookies that Finana gave me!" said Petra
>Finana arrives
>Minecraft goes down for Reimu
>"Oh i was gonna watch but we could play phasmo together since Minecraft is down" says Finana with a smug face
>Reimu also proposes Apex as a good game to play
>"Sorry, Reimu, i get motion sick with Apex but i'm up for some phasmo runs!" Petra exclaims enthusiastically
>Finana sends a PM to Reimu
>"Hey, mami, if you wanna play Apex i could arrange something ;)))"
>Reimu really wants to shoot, she wants to shoot it all with Finana's help in Apex. Her ectoplasm is accumulating and needs to release it by gaming
>"Ok" a short response but Reimu knows what she wants, and that Petra doesn't have the means to provide it
>"Hey Petra!" says Finana with a devilish smile "adjust your settings like this for phasmo, it's the GAMER way!"
>Petra thanks her, oblivious that this will just get her to an eternal black screen
>Finana and Reimu open Apex and hop into a pub
>They start dropping, looting and shooting. Reimu is getting excited but doesn't want to say anything because petra is still in the VC
>"I can't seem to get this to work, Finana..." sighs Petra while trying to make phasmo work
>"Oh, maybe try getting a better computer! Hehehehe JK, how about you close and open the game again?" the smug Finana says while asking Reimu for some batteries
>Reimu gives the batteries to Finana, she wants to fill Finana's armor to the fullest so bad
>Finana begins to use the battery, then stops, does it again and stops again, she's just teasing Reimu at this point
>"FILL YOUR FUCKING ARMOR, BEESH!" yells Reimu wanting to stop the edging and teasing
>Petra hears this. "A-are you guys playing something?"
>"Just a Phasmo test run" says Reimu nervously as they're attacked by a team
>"I-i'm gonna watch you while i wait to get my game fixed" says Petra while going to Reimu stream
>Finana gets downed in the fight and Reimu begins to revive her
>Reimu doesn't care anymore, she needs to release her pent up ectoplasm on gamer activities. She knows Petra is coming but needs to revive Finana and shoot the remaining gut from the other team
>Reimu revives Finana and turns around, shoots the last guy and a huge portion of her extoplasm is spent on this as she shakes with spasms from the adrenaline
>"O-oh, you were playing Apex...i...hope you're having fun!" tears run down Petra's cheeks
>Petra leaves the stream crying and throws up on the floor due to motion sickness from watching an Apex stream for more than 6 seconds

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>>11774970
>>11774991
Based, Petra being put in her place will never cease to be satisfying

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>>11774155
you can't claim that and not give a link

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>>11775511
Is this some cringy roleplaying or are you actually retarted? >>11773897 this goes to you too.

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>>11775565
Yes

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>>11775565
What?

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>>11775835
Good to know the second one isn't aware at all, this one is definitely retarted. Assuming you're the Selen one, you and by extension the as well writer are being extremely cringy to what could only be described as roleplaying around the creation of stories.

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>>11776107
Cool

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>>11777229
Me on the right on top

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>>11777229
Me on the left

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>>11777229
Me on the right on the bottom

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>>11777229
Me straight across holding the other three up

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>>11776107
Wouldn't wanna be cringey in the fanfiction thread on the vtuber hobbyist board

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>>11728804
I don't know whether to be flattered or upset that you didn't change my autistic file naming system when you saved this.

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>>11709546
Risu COMMANDS all her prisuners to nut in her new outfit for her to wear and enjoy.

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>>11779747
looks like we got another one added to cumhat gang. Which raises the question, is Nui part of this gang?

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>>11779571
Kek. If it makes you feel better, I use the same file naming system.

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Which chuubas believe in fate and which believe in free will?

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>>11783168
Mio does tarot card readings, though I don't know how seriously she takes those.

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>>11783493
What about Okakoro?

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>>11785536
Okayu is a godless heathen and Korone is doing her best to put her on the Lord's path

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>>11709529
Continuing "Apple of Her Eye." Please forgive me.

>you followed Sui-chan and Marine down the hallway and out the door into an onsen
>Outside was a larger pool where naked women freely roamed
>Inside the onsen a few boys around your age also mingled, completely naked
>Unlike you, they seemed to have no shame in their nudity, in fact, they seemed to be enjoying themselves
>Sui motioned to a doorway
>"Let's get one of the private room. Little boy here is nervous."
>Marine licked her lips
>"Good. Means we can have even more fun, can't we?"
>You felt fear wash over you
>You wanted mommy back
>You didn't want to go inside that room with Suisei and her strange friend
>You tried to back away and Suisei grabbed your wrist
>"Don't be nervous. Just think: after this you'll be a big boy."
>"What do you mean?"
>Marine gave your shoulder a tender squeeze
>"You'll see little boy. Now follow us."
>Suisei pulled you into the room and shut the door
>It was a circular enclosure with vents on the ceiling
>At each of the corners was a shower head
>Suisei got an evil grin on her face
>"You know what Marine? I'll let you take this one. I have something that needs tending to first anyway. Have fun."
>Your heart stopped
>Despite Suisei's abusive behavior over these two days, she was at least a familiar face
>This girl, Marine, it was the first you'd ever seen her
>You reached your hand out
>"Don't go! I want mommy!"
>"Aww how sweet. He wants his mommy. Well, you'll see her in two days. And see me in a few hours."
>Suisei winked at Marine
>"Have fun. No limits. Make my boy into a man, won't you?"
>Marine chuckled and massaged your shoulders as the door closed
>"Don't worry sweet boy. I promise I don't bite."
>You couldn't help but begin to cry
>Marine became overcome with desire
>She turn you around and began kissing your neck
>It was like a former alcoholic having his first taste of vodka after being straight for years
>There was no rational thought, all she could think of was satisfying her most base desires
>She panted, looking you dead in the eye as a panther eyes its prey
>"Get away from me!"
>You rammed into the wall and Marine pinned you
>The lustful pirate was going to have her way with you, like it or not
>She kneeled down and put your tiny dick into her mouth, sucking like her life depended on it, only to take it out almost immediately
>It was a bit... pedestrian
>Why go to all this trouble for mere vanilla sex? If she had Sora's kid all to herself, probably for the first and only time, why not go all out?
>She'd been given the golden ticket and she ought to use it well
>She wrenched away the teddy bear from your tightly clenched hands
>She had just the perfect idea
>Using her fingers, she wormed her way into the seam of the bears backside, opening it into a slit
>Before returning the bear, she made a suggestive gesture with its newfound opening using her two fingers
>"Now,"
>She could barely talk in between her panting
>"I want you to take your peepee, stick it in this whole and thrust, just like this."
>She thrust the bear against her abdomen
>You couldn't stop your crying
>You'd imprinted sora onto the bear as a way to feel comforted during this scary event
>And now, this strange woman was asking you to rape it
>With shaking hands, you took the bear and pushed back and forth as Marine watched, rubbing circles around her enlarged clit
>She silently chuckled to herself
>If she had a penis, it'd be hard enough to deflect bullets
>"That's right. Keep going."
>Marine climaxed several times just from this alone
>A shame
>Hours alone with this boy and already she'd released her horny
>She plopped down on the bench, sighing with relief
>"You did good kid. Though you won't be a big boy until you cum."
>You didn't listen, didn't hear a word she said, didn't even register she had sat down
>All you could do was cry
>Even Marine, senselessly horny as she was, felt pity
>She wasn't so heartless as to not see how traumatic this was
>You yelled
>"I want mommy!"
>"Shhh.There, there."
>You were inconsolable
>The tears would not cease, no matter what anyone did
>The only thing that would put a stop to this crying, this wailing, was your mother's loving, tender arms
>Marine let out a sigh
>"C'mon kiddo. Let's go get your dressed. I think we've done enough."
>Marine escorted the crying child back to the locker room, leaving the violated bear behind
>She began to question if what she did wasn't evil
>She knew it wasn't technically right to do it as a start but this... how could anyone look at this and not at least feel some sense of pity?
>Marine got you dressed and held your hand
>"Follow me. Let's get you something fun. Do you like icecream? Toys?"
>Finally, the tears subsided for a moment
>"Y-yeah."
>"Let's go get some. I know a few good places. You can pick whatever you want."
>"I-I want-"
>Here we go again
>"I want mommy!"
>Marine gently brushed her fingers through your hair

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>>11786763
>"Mommy's not here right now. She'll be here in two days, like Suisei said."
>The waterworks just kept going
>She knew from her vast experience with children that all there was to do is let him cry till he couldn't anymore
>She stared at him with a frown
>Normally in this situation, the appropriate response would be to hug the child until he stopped
>But after what she did, she knew that would only make it worse
>Marine let you cry for a solid hour straight
>By the time you finished, your eyes were so red and puffy they looked like they may fall out of the your skull
>"All done?"
>You silently nodded
>You felt empty, physically and emotionally
>Just as you were about to suggest that icecream and toy, Suisei returned
>"My god, what happened?"
>Marine walked up to Suisei and whispered into her ear
>"I think he's been through enough today. Can you not do anything to him, just for today? For me?"
>"Well... alright."
>"Thank you Sui-chan. He's been crying for almost an hour now."
>Sui-chan knelt down and brushed her fingers through your hair
>You didn't want her to touch you, but you hadn't the energy to oppose her
>Despite Suisei's demented actions, she still cared about you
>"Yeah, he's been through it, huh? C'mon kiddo. Let's get you home? We'll do whatever you want."
>Suisei held your hand, leading you back to her home
>"Do you need anything? You look like you could use a nap."
>You nodded, not saying a word
>"Let's get you to bed ok?"
>It was like dragging a sack of grain up the stairs
>You barely interacted at all, just staring blankly into the distance
>You were looking, but you weren't seeing anything
>Susei put you in bed and you lay there limp, like a corpse
>She made sure to flick the nightlight on and quietly closed the door
>You fell asleep nearly instantly, but it would be short lived
>In just an hour, you were awoken by a nightmare of Marine doing her deranged sex acts towards you
>Only instead of the bear, it was Sora-chan
>You sat on the bed shaking
>You couldn't cry a tear more
>All you could do was wait for mommy
>Then everything would be ok

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>>11783493
I think I tried that about 11 years ago, back when I was a kid and massively into the occult (bless my chuuni self from back then). Shame that I lost my tarot deck, I'd like to try again sometime.

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>>11786763
>>11787199
Jesus this wasn't nearly as fun as Marine made it sound like it would be

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>>11709529
Some Risu stuff to celebrate her new outfit and make the anti futa/lewd fag diehard risuners in that thread seethe.
>>11789313
>>11789499
Dunno if I'll continue it. I didn't even proofread it so I don't know if it's long or good enough.

[Anonymous No.]

Worldbuilding is hard. I've considered just putting a glossary but that feels extremely cheap

[Anonymous No.]

>>11789995
>futa
Didn't read lol

[Anonymous No.]

>>11789995
>futa
YEA-
>dom
oh. nevermind then

[Anonymous No.]

>>11789995
>dom
Oh, SWE-
>futa
in the bin

[Anonymous No.]

>>11786763
>>11787199
You've got nothing to apologize for. This is fantastic. God I wish I was that kid

[Anonymous No.]

>>11792942
>>11793095
>>11794016

[Anonymous No.]

>>11789995
Please don't tell me you made it futa just to piss off that one guy. Why can't it be normal Ayunda dom...

[Anonymous No.]

>>11789995
I'm glad you finally wrote some Risu.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794951
Now that I think about it, this place actually doesn't have much full on dom at all. People here always back out on the last second. Honestly I don't know what they are even doing in 4Chan in the first place.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11795163
Does it have any dom?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794152
I fucking hate this retarded treerat

[Anonymous No.]

>>11787199
Oh damn now I just feel bad. Good job anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794152
I fucking love this retarded treerat

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794152
I'm fucking apathetic towards this retarded treerat

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794152
Tree rat is cute! CUTE!

[Anonymous No.]

>>11794016
>>11794951
Bro how the fuck is she gonna dom without a cock?
> oh yeah bitch fuck my pussy real good.
Like bitch stfu you're 1,50cm + you're a woman + Indonesian. What the hell do you think she can do to do you???laughing crying face emoji

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>>11709529
Wrote that Ollie fic someone requested last thread. It's mostly comedy but it has some smut that might be nice for some people. Might make a sequel to this because I ran out of time but I don't know.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzoDO8KXnF7YMKNDwcIRgapg5ZVVbwCaEsD-fFjj5SLb73OKVLSJr94u7F21nicGOf2qZdAr98dw7r/pub

Tags: Ollie, Comedy, Gore

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797479
The existence of the phrase "power bottom" implies the existence of submissive tops.

Like me.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797479
>What the hell do you think she can do to do you?
Anything she wants

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797555
I sure hope nobody is fixing to watch Zeta Gundam. This was funny but also the literary equivalent of being flashbanged.

Thank you(?) for filling my prompt

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797585
Would you let her peg you?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11798355
Sure
If I had to draw a line on what I wouldn't agree to, it would be scat or any permanent damage.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11798497
Then how come futa (assuming you were the original one I replied to) is too much? Futa is quite literally pegging but both parties receive more pleasure and it's an all and all more fun experience.

[Anonymous No.]

This convo is really gay jesus

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797978
Thanks for reading but yeah it's definitely lacking in smut and as I said before I might continue it.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11798577
How should I put it? Futa feels kinda unimaginative? Like, "I conjured myself a dick, lol, I guess I'll just fuck you with it". Can't say I'm against it on principle, though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11799005
Not the same anon but if there was a little backstory for the dick, would it be different?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11799083
Nah. It's more about how a girl without a dick would actually manage to dominate you. Maybe there is futa, but it comes into play later as a finisher?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11799005
Yea but isn't Risu's new outfit a literal Witch? Which means magic is real and so Magic can happen.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11798620
https://youtu.be/pjOOKb-DFZs

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797555
Kek this is fucking great. I don't know if Gundam was part of the original prompt but it was pretty funny to read through. I couldn't take the 'smut' seriously enough to get hard with how you went about it, but I had a good laugh. Thanks writeanon.

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>>11802383
Gundam wasn't a part of the original prompt but I misread the 'being mistaken for an anituber' as 'being an anituber' which is why Zeta Gundam is talked about because it was the first thing that came to mind. But was the smut good enough? That's an area I've been working to improve on.

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>>11803417
It's pretty short, but I think it works well and could be even better. Zombie descriptions aside, the smut was pretty nice for how short it was. Having her family members burst in takes you a bit out of the smut, but they don't stay in the scene too long so I think it's okay. In terms of getting a nut out of someone, I think it was a bit too short, but I think that was also because some comedy was being fitted in. If it was drawn out and with less zombie bits, I could see it being pretty hot. That said, I wouldn't want you to lose any weird descriptions of the chuuba and ditch your style since that part definitely stood out. In fact, they probably wouldn't be too much of a distraction in a longer smut scene.

In short, yes it was good enough and I can see it getting better while still being pretty funny.

[Anonymous No.]

Given the choice, would you take the stairs and explore a new place a bit, or just say "fuck it" and take the elevator?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804218
Got trapped in an elevator once before so I always take the stairs now. Pretty sure lots of people besides myself are no longer trustful of those metal boxes of death.

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>>11804218
In a video game, I'd be motivated by sights to see, maybe some background lore to discover, and of course the possibility of loot.

In real life I'd take the elevator. There's nothing interesting to learn about another high-rise apartment building or office block, and you can't take anything there.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804333
Mmmhmm! Lots of people refuse vaccinations too, and think the world is flat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804398
False equivalence

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804460
Dunno what you're talking about. I was just stating some observations, that's all, like lots of people say sugar makes you fat.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804380
>>11804333
Thanks for the input.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804218
On my own apartment I always take the stairs, but when it comes to being outside, generally I don't know where the stairs are, if they are even usable outside of emergencies, so it's more convenient to take the lift.

[Anonymous No.]

You WILL stay motivated.

[Anonymous No.]

I'm surprised that there actually hasn't been any Watame smut in the archive. No I'm not counting the Watafag shit or the futa. There isn't any smut with Watame and (you).

[Anonymous No.]

>>11795000
What do you want to see with Risu?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11805801
> it doesn't count b-because... it just doesn't okay?!

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806217
Hi pekofag. Reminder nobody likes you.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806442
I was considering starting a Watame titfuck story tonight since I do actually like Watame a lot but ok. Guess that's not needed.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806612
Don't you have a story you should be working on involving Oga buttfucking you? Get to that instead of wasting time here where you're not wanted.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806715
>

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806811
You backing out on it?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806217
Which part of Watafag is Watame? Last I checked, Watame doesn't have a dick nor is she a bratty bitch.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806842
I need you to tell me more about BBC before I can do it. You seem to be so obsessed with it I'm sure you'd know some useful stuff.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11807201
You could also get fucked by Roberu if you’d prefer.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11807201
Hey, I'm not the one constantly writing about getting fucked by other dudes. That's your forte.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11807321
zing

[Anonymous No.]

>>11804218
I've always taken the stairs. They're quicker.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806612
Yes, it's not. Thank you for understanding.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806040
At this point I'm starved enough for Risu content that I could go for anything (that isn't mean-spirited). Probably lewd Ayunda x Risu would be my ideal, but a fluff or nsfw story with (You) or even just solo Risu would be fantastic, too.
Sorry that I can't give you something more specific if it's a prompt that you're looking for.

[Anonymous No.]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ACJJMiID5AI

[Anonymous No.]

>>11811089
Shut down so hard he ran away.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11810848
What's the difference between ayandu and risu?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11812288
ayunda is what she calls her deep voice, i believe

[Anonymous No.]

>>11812356
Similar to Shirakami and Kurokami?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11806612
Stop being a confrontational faggot and write the fucking story if you want. You know full and fucking well you only care about the dopamine hit as a result of people responding to it. You'd be making one Anon's day, at least, so there's that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11812288
It's basically how she differentiates between her high voice (Risu) and her low voice (Ayunda). I think the "official" lore is that Ayunda was witch with a squirrel familiar, Risu, and they somehow ended up sharing a body.

>>11812373
Kinda, except that Ayunda is less of an anti-Risu than Kurokami is the anti-Shirakami. It's more that Risu is generally happy-go-lucky and squirrel-like, while Ayunda is more relaxed or down to earth.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11812510
Anon it's called a bluff. If they double down on my bluff, I lose. If they kneel I write. That anon I'd be "making his day" would probably not even read it if I actually wrote it purely out of spite anyway.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11812715
>would probably not even read it if I actually wrote it purely out of spite anyway.
Hey, you're finally right about something. Good for you. Now fuck off.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11797555
Eh, a bit too much of the anituber stuff and way too little Ollie, both in the smut department and in the chasing the anituber cock department.
The cynical, jaded anituber shtick would probably be a good 'base' in regards to a character if this were a longer work since it has a distinct character but with the short length of the actual story it's kinda bloating the start without sufficient payoff.
Honestly this seems like you needed to have made it longer in either the Ollie trying to get anituber cock or the actual smut.

[Anonymous No.]

Anyone feel like the board has been really fast recently? Even without people talking, I think the thread was already heading to page nine within an hour of being made.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11814789
I think we've just slowed right down, bucko.

[Anonymous No.]

Kroniis will defend this

[Anonymous No.]

>>11814789
Somethings occurred. It is zooming more than usual. We've been hitting pg9 in under an hour.

[Anonymous No.]

Been reading the archive and good job all writers except the stupid fag who writes those para-military stories.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11816715
What the fuck is a para-militar story?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11816715
lol
i'm curious as to why, of all the silly shit in the archive, you're singling out that particular concept?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11816715
You mean that girl-boss watson and her paramilitary army or something (forgot the exact name)? You chose that as the worst story out of all the scat, maggots and cannibalism? I think it was pretty good, especially compared to some of the shit in the archive.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11814789
>>11814828
I think it may be a combination of the two since the board's gotten faster, and the shitstirrers have moved elsewhere such that the thread doesn't have to have a new thread every day or so.
Honestly it reminds of a proposal some anon gave around the time the fake OPs with broken links stopped happening where we should merge the thread with the drawthread to become the vt fanwork thread, with the general response around the time being to just let the thread stabilize first before it gets brought up again.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11817308
I remember that. I'll give the same answer as I did back then - I come here to write and read what others have written. Couldn't care less about the art side of things, especially since drawthreads are usually just filled with requests, since drawing isn't as readily accessible a skill as writing is.

[Anonymous No.]

Do I write some more, play BTD6 or sleep? The sun is almost rising.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11786763
Food stuff Anon.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11817998
Delicious, even. A delectable treat, some might say.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11817577
Write

[Anonymous No.]

>>11818212
Oh, damn. I was just about to boot up BTD. Guess I'm writing.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11709546
You're an overly obsessive fan of Suisei. In order to prove you're love to her, you stalk and find out where she lives so that you could confess to her directly. Once went inside her house though, you found her in the middle of trying to stuff a dead body inside a bag.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11709546
You're an overly obsessive fan of Suisei, to the point of fanaticism. You love everything about her, including the very idea of her, and live with an unquenchable fire in your gut to BECOME her, burning hotter each passing day.

Your hobbyist stalking turns into scheming a takeover. Slipping into her apartment before a RingFit stream, you quietly wait inside a closet for her to finish and take a shower. Using a screwdriver to unlock the shower door, you wait outside until you hear the telltale thud of soap hitting the floor; wrenching open the door, you behold a bent-over bewildered Suisei - and quick as a flash, you wriggle straight up her butt and take over her body.

Thus begin's Anon's new life masquerading as Suisei to Anemachi, Kanata and Coco.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11816715
Show me on this tactical Marine exactly where I hurt you. Just don't point out the pistol brace.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11819898
Mr. Author ur story bad because no ame sex please fix then best archive story

[Anonymous No.]

>>11819898

[Anonymous No.]

>>11819898
haha that gun looks like something straight out of tarkov

ie garbage

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820156
No heterosexual Ame sex, but five full chapters of futa Ame plowing Gura's tight shark pussy and anal soonTM
>>11820198
Upcoming goru story featuring (you) cutting off Marine's titties when?
>>11820234
The barrel and receiver is mostly alright, but it looks like the gun is added in post. Japs just can't draw guns, pic related. Sometime I can't blame them, but trigger where?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820491
tacticool guns are hideous tbqhwyf

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820491
>futa
Wait no Mr author I take it back
Please I'm sorry your story best now please

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820564
Is this an expression of desire, or disgust? I can't tell.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820519
Unfortunately that is a shit take, Anon. Have a Towa gun with proper Picatinny and adjustable buttstock to mend your mistakes.
>>11820564
Too late Anon, now Ame will have massive futa cock like the ones on Deviant art that can inflate Gura like a balloon with her cum

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820984
I implore you to reconsider.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11709529
This chapter is more rushed than I'd like to admit. I could've fluffled things up but it's late and I reached a point where I was comfortable with ending it. There aren't too many lore implications on this one so it could technically be a half chapter, but I'm releasing it as full. I'll say, prepare for a headache trying to understand my bad attempt at an accent. All in all there's mot much to be said about it but I'm glad I got to introduce this character. Potential future partner I guess?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjqgv0SbNC4CiU8YB0JuKsOkFKOWyu6HNJ6hTV3CgF0yF58XHpzvs3ijdHX24URcpT0OhvB0YcUTp_/pub

Tags: Ayame, SFW, post-apocalyptic, Okayu

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820929
Personally I don't care for futa but I'm not vehemently against to either. I'm sure there's more than a few people who would enjoy it but they get drowned out in the vocal half screeching about something they can just ignore

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821130
Why ignore it when you can demean people for it, like fat people or men with tiny cocks?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821001
Forgot to add the song I had in mind for her to be humming.

https://youtu.be/v7F-dBuc34Y

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821261
Because I'm an adult and have the necessary agency to understand that what I like isn't the be all end all for taste and realize I have the power to not let things get to me unless I go out of my way to allow them to bother me

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821441
That's cool and all, but your taste is still shit and you're still a faggot.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821460
And you need to hurry up and finish that Oga story before you get a taste of my dick

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821474
See? Knew it, and called it. You're a faggot. Probably a Holostars fan too.

[Anonymous No.]

Thought this was the write thread not the futa derailment thread

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821001
When you were asking for advice about writing Okay's accent you really should have specified, since I'm pretty sure most of the advice given was for "characeters are speaking japanese with the text being 'translation'" and not they're speaking english straight up, that's kind of a different case entirely that having her with that kind of accent feels weird in the fucks with trying to read it kind of weird.... especially since you added WAY too much country flavor that it's past flavoring and into hard to try and read.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821536
I want to fuck Miyabi.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821474
Honestly I feel sorry for you. You legit got PTSD from him didn't you? Everyone around you that you disagree with must be him. Always him. I don't think you've gone a single thread without mentioning his name. Literally living rent free.

[Anonymous No.]

Oh dear, we've summoned the pekofaggot.

>>11821634
Go finish your Oga assfuck story, wank stain.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821634
Who, Miyabi? I just want to fuck him while calling him cute names

[Anonymous No.]

>Thread near bump limit
>Shitstirring and bad faith shit starts
Many such cases

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821599
Yeah I'll probably do a lot of editing on this one, I want to add some more talk to give her character more personality before I let it out onto the wild. I'm sure I can take it much easier on her accent. It would be awful to keep her as a character anyway like that because it takes a lot of mental power for me to write speech like that. Until I refine it which will probably be done by tomorrow already, I'll hold onto it.

I can't unpublish it right now so I guess people can still read it through your post.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821767
They can read it through this link instead!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjqgv0SbNC4CiU8YB0JuKsOkFKOWyu6HNJ6hTV3CgF0yF58XHpzvs3ijdHX24URcpT0OhvB0YcUTp_/pub

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821789
Mendokusai... I've unpublished it.

[Anonymous No.]

That's fucked up man

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821725

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821977
Now why'd you have to go and do that? Well, easily fixed.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR7BlaX0bh-bdMnIoN22Lx0gAMItgT1jAFG0bsa8curEHYLXqVUZHWvfx9d7dpFuOAEUOJPDrENReLs/pub

[Anonymous No.]

>>11821977
Just fucking finish it before posting it

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822048
Wasn't gonna read this but since the author is so embarrassed about it, I took a look and can see why

[Anonymous No.]

https://xoyondo.com/ap/hMqnQ7XTdtQdxQ4

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822306
Is it who?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822306
Who are you talking about?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822306
yeah, it's him.

it's rod stewart.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822341
>>11822365
contextualize current happenings and draw a conclusion
>>11822410
it suddenly all makes sense

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822451
I knew archiveanon would betray us after all this time. Die a hero, or live long enough to become the villain, and all that.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822451
>contextualize current happenings and draw a conclusion
I still don't get what you're talking about. Is the person publishing the story that the author tried to hide Jeff Bezos? What the fuck are you asking?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822547
I think they're implying it's pekofag. Maybe.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11822547
>>11822573
have you ever seen them in the same room at the same time?

[Anonymous No.]

>>11820984
Holy fuck just realized I forgor to post pic, retarded

[Anonymous No.]

>>11823669
The general, the board and the world at large is worse off for it. What a hideous gun. Cute Towa, though.

[Anonymous No.]

>>11823669
The fuck is that? Some sort of M4 but man what the fuck is going on up top, that a top mounted laser and then a flash on the side? And that magazine looks super baby

[Anonymous No.]

>>11823766
Yep, don't think that's a standard handguard either.

[Anonymous No.]

All these /k/ fags pointing out parts of guns that just look like regular parts of guns while I'm here thinking Towa's tits are a little too big in this picture.

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>>11817398
Honestly thinking about it some more, and actually browsing the drawthreads... Yeah there is no fucking way the two threads would merge in a decent way without one pushing out the other with /wg/ probably having the advantage due to how much more active this thread is. It would just lead to a worse /wg/ with more art requests.

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>>11823733
>>11823766
>>11823821
I honestly don't know if my standard is too low or all you guys are bigger /k/ fags than me. I see her way of holding the gun as pretty good, the grip looks tight and good trigger discipline. The receiver and magazine lacks detail but the optic is a EOtech. The handgurad is aftermarket with a vertical grip. The laser module is a bit fat, but it might be dual purpose, and the flashlight is fine. The forward assist also looks wacky but maybe it's just the angle.
That's my verdict, it's like a low 8/10 for a jap artist. You Anons think differently?

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>>11792439
Bring it up as it's needed or make side stuff
HF has that world knowledge side thing that I don't think ever got posted into the thread but is in the archive

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>>11824298
I do think differently. I think if you want to play dress-up, do it with dolls, not guns.

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>>11824362
Not into guns but that rant is hilarious

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>>11824362
To that I'll say 'die puritan die' as I shoot you from eight hundred meters out with my night vision IR thermal smart targeting optic.
I personally don't think there's a disadvantage to adding modern attachment to guns other than the weight and being cumbersome, but with time the gear of the same caliber is only gonna get lighter and you can get used to a scope sticking out.

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>>11824926
That picture was hand crafted to piss someone off
Like the rainbow dash k98

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>>11824298
They're just being cosplay spergs. Real military men just slap the shit on the rails and move on. The true measure is in the knives they have.

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>>11792439
That's because it kind of is, especially since it doesn't actually fix any problems in worldbuilding such as in introducing or having it all make sense. It's only kinda helpful in bigger more expansive stories that need stuff like that to keep it all in track.

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>>11824926
what will be legal to shoot after 10 years of new ATF regulations

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I want to fuck this hag so fucking much.

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>>11709546
"Dom" fic with a drunk and horny Fubuki coming to your place and forcing you to eat her out as she rides your face, among other things.

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>>11829509
i just can't think the same way of her after that last fic, sorry

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>>11829726
What last fic?

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>>11829726
Holy shit I fucking memoryholed the fucking fubuki scat fic. I was thinking for a solid minute, wondering how the feral fubuki gets shot would sour your idea of her.

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>>11830202
>fubuki scat fic.
What the fuck?

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Oh my goodness.
Lord have mercy on this profligate's soul

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>>11830202
kek. yeah, i regret saying anything. no offense to the good writeanon who filled the request, it's just that particular work had a lasting effect on the psyche

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>>11830222
For your viewing pleasure.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSzPueCcfE9xWAYLSZxCMsJ7VdnEvx4NaElqEof7asl5IeDhPoc4-MkTNX5WFLqm1ghPWS_WP-mPblY/pub

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>>11830556
Yes, I quickly checked the archive, hence >>11830368; apparently I missed this when CTRL+Fing Fubuki. Perhaps my brain just refused the information my eyes were feeding me.

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>>11819253
I'm so sad this didn't get a single (You).

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>>11821725
I'm still surprised people don't just ignore it at this point.

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>>11832284
I’m just convinced people are just that retarded.

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>>11832337
Just wondering why people even bite at the bait.

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>>11829509
Seconding this. I need a plate cleaner after the last Fubuki fic.

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>>11832588
Some are doing it deliberately for attention and because it makes the thread interesting in their eyes.

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>>11832622
So a bunch of threadshitters?

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>>11832670
Yeah, basically. Which is a shame since it ruins these threads.

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>>11832702
>Which is a shame since it ruins these threads.
Why can't they just fuck off?

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>>11832752
>Schizos
>leaving

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>>11832766
Don't they have better things to do than trying to shit up threads?

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>>11832786
We have a faggot who tried to bait whenever the thread reaches the bump limit. They’re here to stay.

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>>11824170
You don't own a gun?

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>>11832819
I also like to point out that it’s basically routine at this point.

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>>11832786
We only have one or two people stirring the pot. Nothing too bad.

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New thread
>>11832913

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>>11829726
>changing your opinion of a chuuba because of a made-up story
I genuinely feel bad for you

With that said
>>11829509 I need this story

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>>11822231
I'm not really ashamed of it I just took it down because I want to add some more conversation between the two. Maybe I'll even write it into 4k words and give it more of a full chapter feel even, which would delay the posting. But if I got some criticism on the accent of the chuuba then I'll also take a look at it since I was indeed asking for ideas on how to write dialogue with one.