/wg/ - Writing General - Yuri Edition

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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>10854784

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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>>10992539
based Yuri lover OP.

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>>10993700
Tell us more about her.

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How many chuubas actually read their stories from here? I’m counting two, it is there more.

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>>10994834
Those two are pretty much the only ones unless you want to believe risu is /here/. We can never confirm anyone outside of someone mentioning shit on stream/twitter so pretty much it's just rrats if you believe any chuuba comes here to read their fanfics.

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>Yuri in the OP
based.

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>>10993700
>>10994990
Would you guys care to explain who is she? I wouldn’t mind knowing a bit more on who she is.

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>>10992575
How about a short story about the HoloMyth girls just playing ttrpg? Or other /tg/ related things?

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>>10994986
I’ll like to point out that both vtubers read their stories immediately after they were written. Suspiciously quick, if you ask me.

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>>10992539
What's the decorum? Disconcerting stuff okay?

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>>10995981
Anything goes, just be civil about it.

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>>10992575
any of you writing fags interested in depicting Yuri as a loli/lykoi?

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>>10996126
Post a few videos so we can get an understanding of her.

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Are there any fourth wall break stories in the archive? If not what would everyone think of one?

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>>10996185
okie doke
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KgBnXzd8wys&list=PL_nO_eDPN9Km_BcXDuoFoogzWeilSC7s6
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=z4TxirpG93s&list=PL_nO_eDPN9Km_BcXDuoFoogzWeilSC7s6&index=5

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>>10992539
MY LIFE FOR YURI!!!

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>>10996185
She can also do this really cute but accurate dog bark. Like a throaty german shepherd. Funny to see it come from her.

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>>10996347
Shit. She's actually kind of cute.

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>>10996340
None that I can think of. If you did write one, which way would you take it? Comedic, psychological? Either way I'd be interested if it's executed well.

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>>10996435
She's super cute. I don't remember if the clips had her giggle in in- that's a strong selling point. I was thinking about a story where her soft unassuming loli form turns into a wild man eating werewolf, but as a white cat.

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>>10996593
samefagging- I might just take a crack at it after i get done with work but i'm pretty shit at horror/ suspense.

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>>10996646
It's ridiculously difficult to get horror done right in story form. You can't make the reader scared in the normal sense - the best you can do is psychological discomfort, which is something Lovecraft works... didn't really do either, now that I think about it? I dunno. Either way, good fucking luck.

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>>10996466
Definitely comedic. I think that's where 4th wall really shines. I don't have any ideas for one yet but maybe I'll try writing one in the distant future if I ever think of something.

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>>10996347
Her ear twitches a little too much and her rigging seems a little weird, but she seems pretty cute. Not my taste because I'm not a huge fan of high pitched voices but I can see why people might like her.

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>>10996851
her rigging seems incredibly good to me

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>>10996883
Is it really?

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>>10996883
I dunno, the way her body moved when she sneezed at the end of the second clip was unholy

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>>10997254
Yes it’s good don’t be self conscious Yuri

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>>10997294
it looks like she lost tracking, dont think that is a rig issue. But yeah, that was pretty frightening

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>>10995981
Pretty much anything as long as its vtuber related can be written and thus archived.
Despite the sheer amount of them in the archive, 2nd person anon-insert isn't even 'required' it's just prevalent due to board culture.
Though fair warning, anything too 'unconventional' probably isn't going to get much of a response.

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Just a friendly reminder to the jealous deadbrap who shit up the last thread with conspiracy theories of corporate viral marketing because Uruhulk read someone else's story request on air.

Mori will never read your story request on air.

That is all.

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>>10995981
Literally anything goes. We even have scat in there. Just make sure it's related to vtubers.

I strongly welcome emotionally disconcerting materials, myself, so if you're planning on making something others might find disturbing, you've got a guaranteed reader in me.

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At last, the Migo fic is done. "Miss Sakura" (18k+ words).
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRjJJzV1ps2n05l_V99czVCplFuF-Wq8mQgWRoWWqtAjl2rgJX5x2LPH9w-Of-B9i0A_hVHQxGD9P0s/pub
Tags: Miko, Fluff, NSFW (only at the end)

This was originally supposed to be shorter, but I felt like (You)r relationship with Miko would've felt rushed if it ended too quickly. As promised there is a bit of smut right at the end, but don't get your hopes up because it's not my forte, most of this story is just fluff and turning Miko straight without dick. I also obviously had to take some small liberties with her personality because Miko doesn't hate men THAT much. Other than that, I hope you all enjoy.

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>>10999509
And I always forget the anchor>>10992551

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>>10999509
aw yiss

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>>10999509
uuuooOOOOOOHHHHHH

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>>10999509
You have no fucking idea how long I have waited for this fic Anon. Bless you for finally finishing this fic.

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>>10999509
Poor marine…

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>>11001045
Ah, but this story is actually a prequel.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTi8auPEeuTgvnkAbUEtoo_3QDyc3pexw1cuDpbrF4h7Bc5CiSCRNd8uwghdJ95YRmYvtOOsSw7GqCV/pub

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man all the sadness over chuuba graduations rings so hollow when they all keep coming back under different names or in 3d streams

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>>11001168
Now we need to give everyone husbands and tie it all together in this one universe

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>>11002006
Let’s take it a step further. Lets tie every story in the archive together and make them all connected in the same universe

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>>11002841
well, HF and HC are already canonically in the same multiverse, so fuck it why not

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>>10992575
I know I posted this prompt a lot, and that some of you might be sick of it, but I really wish for someone to give it a go. Hopefully, it's not too ambitious and the image will give it more attention:

(You) died young from an exceptionally severe pneumonia (or tuberculosis, up to author) and go to the afterlife. Or at least, that was the plan. Fortunately, the Grim Reaper's apprentice offers you a deal: She would give you a new body in exchange of becoming her assistant for her side gig as a live streamer.

After your reincarnation, you decide to hold a journal to chronicle your thoughts and experiences about this new occupation, the rather colorful coworkers you now interact with, as well as your growing feelings for the pink-haired beauty who gave you a new lease on life.

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>>11002841
This could end either very well or very badly. I'm interested either way.

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>>11002916
perhaps the real question we should be asking is... who's Fubuki's husband? Omelas anon? MW anon? Or basically 3/4 of this thread?

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>>11004649
me, i'm her husband

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>>11004649
It's me. It's always been me.

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>>10999509
I'm not much of a critic so I can't much in the ways of feedback, but what I can tell you is that I loved it. I'm glad you the time to flesh it out because it turned out real good, Also the smut was super hot.
Really good job anon!

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>>11004649
I was going to ask. Will Fubuki get even a single moment of each day where she's not getting railed by dozens of guys in all sorts of situations?
That's a bad idea, we should stop here.

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>>11004967
kek, the queue would be a mile long, if it didn't just devolve into frenzied murder immediately
also, vaginas chafe after extended periods of 'use', and i don't even want to imagine the pain she'd be in even if she was actually willing

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>>11004649
It's me. I'm sorry you had to find out this way.

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>>11004649
It's everyone. We are the gestalt husband.

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>>11004725
>>11004786
>>11005214
>>11005381

it's almost too easy to find the foxfriendfuckers in this thread.

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>>11005618
i will openly declare my love for fubuki at any and every opportunity
i am barely containing the need to proclaim it in excess right now

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>>11005618
I'm her best friend, lover, fucker AND husband, Anon. But yes, I make no effort in concealing myself.

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>>11005381
The ultimate wifeform...

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>>11005885
AYAYAYAIIII

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Bump.

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ok, but seriously. Amongst the MANY Fubuki fics in the archive, who would best qualify as her "husband"

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>>11007563
me

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>>11007563
Why not just read them all and determine that for yourself?

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>>11007563
Me.

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>>11007766
because at the end of the day it would only be his opinion who is the most suitable husband for fubuki, when the reality is that it's me

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>everyone fighting over the fox
>meanwhile I get to have the rabbit all to myself
nyehehehe

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>>11009262
Enjoy. Always found her annoying.
Not to mention the Pekoanon ruined her for me forever, so...
Yeah, have fun. All I need is my fox wife.

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>>11009390
this, can't see pekora without faggotry now, just like the phrase 'the cake is a lie' is forever ruined

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>>11009390
>>11009422
you shouldn't let one crazy guy influence you like that

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>>10999509
Good shit. How long did it take you to write all that?

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>>11010055
you shouldn't touch yourself because you'll grow hair on your palms, go blind, and god will be angry with you, but here we are

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>>11007563
Matthewanon has shown his dedication to the fox. I believe he should take this one.

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>>11010055
It's not just because of the Pekofaggot.
While Pekora does have good and fun moments every once in a while, I've never really seen her in a way in which I see, for example, Mio or Fubuki.
I could never see her as a gf/wife material. Hell, I could not even see her as a fap material.
Sorry Anon, she just ain't my type, I guess.

Have a picture of my wife.

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>>11009390
>>11009422
Tbf I see Ayame as a shitty person now because of this place so I don't blame you, but come on now, at least that one had arguments for it. What arguments do you have for pekofag ruining it for you?

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>>11011263
I don't see Pekora as gf/wife material because honestly her character doesn't really give off those vibes. She'd be a fun friend to have around when she's not making you miserable by being obnoxious.

Sexually, though? I want to pound that bunny cunny so hard my thrusts compress the ground in such a way that by the time I'm done we'll be laying in a crater made entirely of diamonds.

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>>11011938

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>>11009390
>>11009422
Rent free

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>>10999509
BASED BEYOND BELIEF THANK YOU FOR THIS

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>>11011938
The fact that he's a fag who accurately roleplayed Pekora. That's it.

>that one had arguments for it
Yeah? Such as?

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>>11015366
Bottom part of text

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>>11015434
This is why I say she's extremely inconsiderate, because the bottom half is all true.

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>>11015434
Those are all terrible things, yes, but I'm willing to forgive it all if I can hear her cute giggles while she bounces on my cock.

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>>11015503
Unfortunately her fanbase is content with just the cute giggles part

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Bump.

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>>11015434
Ah, I see. Well, it does sound plausible, but I'm a bit of an optimist, so I'd like to believe she has some sort of a reason for behaving the way she does and doing the things she does.
Naturally I could be a complete fucking gullible idiot and just unwilling to look at facts and all, but given the place we're in - I'll stick to my belief. If it turns out the bottom part of the text is 100% accurate, well... it'd be a shame, but I wouldn't really care.
Besides liking Ayame's design, there was pretty much nothing else about her that I really cared about.

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>>11017498
>Naturally I could be a complete fucking gullible idiot and just unwilling to look at facts and all
This

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>>11015434
Yeah but she's cute so I still like her.

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>>11017522
Ah well, won't be losing any sleep over it.
At the end of the day, it doesn't matter.

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>>10999509
That was well worth the wait. Thanks anon. Only thing is that there's a weird perspective change that happens about 1/4 through the story. I might just be retarded and it's completely intentional, but other than that I really enjoyed it.

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>>11018881
True. Nobody here has any control over the outcome, and so there's no point in arguing over it.

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>>11009262
>still no deerfic
I genuinely am the last Sapling. Feels good.

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>>11020952
you shouldn't be proud of your ntr fetish

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>>11021010
I actually despise NTR as a fetish. Deer lust is just that strong.

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>>11021010
not him but i am very proud of my ntr fetish and sad it gets no love here. might try and rectify that if the other stuff in my backlog ever clears up, though i have no experience attempting the genre yet

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>>11021303
I AM him and kys.

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>>11021303
There's definitely a desire for more ntr fics, as you can see prompts requesting it crop up from time to time. I'd say around 20% of regulars here would happily read ntr, myself included!

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>>11020952
>no content
>feels good
Where is this unwarranted sense of self-importance coming from? Even ignoring doxfag shit you literally don't have anything to be proud of.

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>>11021432
>I'd say around 20% of regulars here
That's a rather substantial claim you're making.

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>>11009262
Considering that you've written around 70k words (I'm assuming you're CH Anon) then yeah, your story probably deserves the right for being the "canon" Pekora fic if we're gonna connect everything to a single universe(multiverse?)

Of course that means I'm laying claim on Flare and no one's gonna stop me

>>11021303
Well, "Grab As Much (As You Can)" is a pretty good NTR fic if cheating on your GF for a chuuba counts as one

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>>11021473
>self importance
The exact opposite of how I feel about myself, but okay,

Having an oshi that's unpopular means fewer autists giving us a bad name.

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>>11021520
NTA but about 4 users, including me, would read NTR. That's 8% at the very least. It's not far fetched for a 15-20%.

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>>11021650
Ah, but it only takes one dingleberry to ruin a trifle.

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>>11021664
What, you all on discord with each other? Regardless, that'd be about a 250% increase, meaning 10 regulars here.

Typing this out now, I've suddenly completely lost interest in where this thought experiment could have gone after remembering there's no way to accurately gather data on this so fuck it
I reckon we've had tourists that have requested it, as they come and go every thread, but I don't reckon anywhere near 20% of the 'regulars' are into it

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I would rather read 1000 scat fics then ever read a single ntr fic

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>>11022003
I'd... probably rather just read the NTR fic, to be honest.

In fact, I'd probably just read it over having to read two scat fics. Not because I'm disgusted by scat - although I am - but because it just seems like more work otherwise. 1000 scat fics? You've got your whole month planned out there, bud.

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>>11022003
That says a lot more about you than it says about us.

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>>10992575
Reposting from last thread
Fauna is concerned that you aren't eating properly, specifically that you aren't getting the nutrients you need. So she decides to give you the most nutritious food of all, milk from mother nature herself, whether you like it or not. (Fauna forced breastfeeding)

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>>11022003
Unlike you I'd rather read neither

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>>11022116
>1000 Greek epics about scat VS one greentext about a chuuba cheating
To be fair I can't fault him... To a point. The only NTR I can stomach is if it's a girl cheating on her gf for a guy or whatever. I actively hate NTR otherwise.

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NTR is significantly better than futa. At least cuckolds know they're lower than worms in the grand scheme of things.

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>arguing over which degenerate fetish is the least retarded

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>>11023679
Yes. We all know the correct answer is bush.

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>>11023828
No real argument as to why bushes are better than shaven. It's 100% more retarded than the others.

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>>11023917
Speaking as someone who has had their face in a bush, shaved is easily the best choice. Landing strip could also be acceptable, although I've never had the pleasure of having my face near one.

You know what's the worst, though? Stubble. Make sure your girl shaves properly, for fuck's sake, because you do NOT want to go down on chicken-skin that chafes like sandpaper.

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>>11023917
Because arguing with a fuckwit like you isn't worth the effort. The late 90's ruined irl porn with the trifecta of shaved pubes, thongs, and asses.

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>>11024271
Thank god for the late 90's, then. Stay in the 60's with your flare-bottom jeans, grandpa.

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>>11023173
That's hot as fuck, and the fact that Faumama will never do this to me hurts my soul.

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>>11023173
What is Fauna's entire deal, anyway? Because I've never bothered to watch her stuff and the only thing I've seen here is
>NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR NTR
So I know next to nothing of this woman.

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>>11024325
I wish I could but I was born in 88.

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>>11024396
Rrat is she has a bf.

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>>11024396
>>11024412
This. Her actual onscreen fetish is yandere.

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>>11024408
Nice, a kid talking about something he was never a part of. Even better, totally respect you more now.

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>>11024458
>Yandere with a rrat that she has a boyfriend
Oh. I can absolutely see why this would set people off, now. That's a shame. Is she at least good at the shtick? Or is she diet Rushia?

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>>11024461
Porn from the late 80's and early 90's was readily available on the web in 2005. Go fuck yourself.

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>>11024537
Very much so. I don't even like yanderes but she does weird things to me.

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>>11024562
Yeah, I'm sure your browsing history indicates you're erudite on the subject. About the only thing believable about your drivel is that you watch excessive amounts of porn, you sad little man.

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>>11024718
I haven't looked at porn that isn't static images in over a decade. That phase of my life is behind me.

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>>11024831
Kind of like your dreams and any hope for the future?

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>>11024621
I have a hardcore yandere fetish so maybe I'll give her a shot. I just want a cute girl to stab me to death.

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>>11023828
>>11023917
>>11024271
>>11024325
>>11024408
>>11024461
>>11024562
>>11024718
>>11024831
>>11024870
Can you faggots stop shitting up the thread? If you want to have an argument over something petty like opinions, go back to discord and message each other on there or some shit

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>>11025548
No,
fuck you,
and bush is shit.

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>>11025548
> I feel called out and have ran out of arguments so it's buzzword time!
> "G-go back to Discord you... you tranny! "
> Yeah that will show em who's boss!

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>>11025548
I genuinely did stop. It's the other retard who kept going.

>>11025633
Look at this shit.

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>>11025548
Now do you see why some people post their prompts more than once? They get buried in this shit.

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>>11024249
this is the most based opinion in this thread desu. bush doesn't just tickle your face and get in your eyes but it also traps smells and pinches skin if a hair for whatever reason gets pulled

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>>11025874
I (bushfag SSRB) genuinely apologize for letting that autist get to me.

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>>11026061
Nobody asked who you were.

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>>11026061
It's fine, it happens to the best of us. Just don't do it again, okay ?

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>>11026089
Go fuck yourself.

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>>10992575
You frequently attend Polka's circus because you secretly harbor a deep love for her. One night, you finally cannot take it anymore and you conduct an elaborate ploy to sneak past every form of security to get to her and confess your love. Unfortunately for you, Polka feels the same way as you, to an unhealthy degree. The collar snaps around your neck before you have a chance to act.

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>>11026127
Put a trip on, faggot.

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>>11026144
>actual writing prompt
Thank fuck. Let's forget all that previous autism.

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>>11026101
I'm trying to do my anger management reps and am seeing a therapist. But yes, let's actually get back to writefaggotry.

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>>11026260
Clearly neither of them are helping.

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Why can't we get non crazy chuubas man... all prompts have the same feel to them every time. Especially this stuff >>11026144. If you erase the part after "confess your love", the story could actually go in an unique direction. But fucking no, it's all obsessive this menhera that.

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>>11026304
I feel that. It's hard being a hoshiyomi.

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>>11026288
It actually is. I was much worse a year ago. Now less bullshit, more writing.

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>>11026304
Because that shit also exists? Where the fuck have you been?

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>>11026410
Pretty hypocritical to act so dismissive of something you started.

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And so the new samefag schitzo arc starts

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>>11027211
looks like an everyday 4chan argument to me, both sides having long forgotten the original topic and devolving into shitflinging

i know everyone's got ptsd but this doesn't look like the same seanigger to me

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Is there even a Peko Miko rape fanfic? That would be super hot

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>>10999597
>>10999654
>>10999747
Sorry for the wait, I hope I didn't disappoint.
>>11004944
Thanks, just telling me that you liked it is more than enough feedback. Glad you enjoyed.
>>11010379
A while, if I did a thread dive I could probably pinpoint exactly when I first got the idea for this story but it was definitely a long time ago. I think this is the longest fic I've ever written (although only by a few hundred words) and it took a lot of rewriting because I wasn't satisfied with some parts. Glad you liked it.
>>11014192
No, thank YOU for reading.
>>11018902
Yeah, the occasional switches to Miko's perspective was so that the reader could get an idea of how she felt and what she thought about certain things, because Anon has no way of knowing that.

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>>11027588
Nay, 'tis not fanfiction.

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>>11027347
The SEAs (perpetually butthurt because someone said their grammar sucked) are content to shit up the thread to make the usual posters leave. This particular faggot is the kind that insists on derailing the thread out of sheer autism. It's unfortunate that anyone ever replies, but it's still his own fault and unfortunately isn't bannable until he puts on another shitty avatar.

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>>10996593
Reminds me of bakemonogatari.

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>>11027588
There's "Pekora hates gays" in the archive, I guess.

>>11021631
seeing someone recommend a fic of mine is pretty cool, I'm glad you liked it and remember it enough to do so.

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>>11028130
NTA GAMAYC was a pretty wild ride. I'm surprised anything good could come from that prompt, but you did it.

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AA, i'm gonna need you to do me a solid. A couple of things:
> Remove Death will (not) die from the archive
> Remove Chief executive of making girls cry as well
> Erase everything inside the "Last moments of a friend" story that comes after "peck on the cheek."
> Change the title to "Last moments with a friend"

That's all. I only own the Aqua story so you'll have to take my word for it I suppose. I'll edit in my tag on that story for credibility.

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>>11028491
Which Aqua story exactly?

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>>11028669
Anon... it's right there.

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>>11028491
Not AA, but why?

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>>11028735
oh man i forgot that was an aqua story.

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>>11028802
> Death will (not) die
A story that gets no interest means I've failed as a writer. Not here to put out bad content or content that no one cares about. If there's not even a single (You), it shouldn't go in the archive.
> Chief executive of making girls cry
Just terrible, I have no excuse for putting out something that bad at my level, even if it was rushed.
> Last moments with a friend
I pondered for a while on what to do with the story and ultimately decided that turning it into a shitpost is a stupid idea, so I'm leaving it as it was since I don't care much about it anymore. May it have some impact on future readers.

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>>11029053
Updated to reflect desires.

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>>11027962
I'm one of those two autists and I've literally never left North America. I do genuinely apologize for ruining the thread.

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>>11029053
"Last Moments..." is the fubuki cancer fic right? I've reread it now that it's mentioned again.
I have to say it. Works significantly better with the shitpost cut out and not being serialized via thread. The impact does actually hit like its supposed to... even if it does feel rushed outside of the two initial scenes.

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Stay motivated, lads.

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>>11029053
Pekoanon showing remorse? That's surprising.

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>>11031048
I want to breed this bunny brat to give her children she can dote over.

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>>11031137
Not sure what that's supposed to imply

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Bump.

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>>11034833
Bump

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>>11038224
Seriously, though, where did everyone go ?

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>>11038699
Sometimes there's just not much to talk about. Or they could just be sleeping.

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>>11038875
Good point LMAO.

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>>11038699
I'm playing Oxygen not included at cycle 154 with 21 dupes and everyone is starting to die because I'm being self-destructive in order to restart from scratch with a better plan but if I can make it to day 200 I get a steam achievement so I'm holding on half heartedly and I've played 20 hours in the past 2 days!

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>>10992575
A story about Risu, who, being Indonesian, absolutely cannot resist jumping onto Omegle or some variant of it to watch people masturbate for her, occasionally showing them a bit of her body to coax out bigger and bigger nuts.

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>>11042384
How do you even write a story that is almost exclusively visual?

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>>11042601
Detailed use of descriptions written from a perspective that isn't necessarily (You). Potentially dipping into fantasies as the mutual exchange goes on and Risu continues flashing parts of her body to the viewer. It's not exactly difficult to describe something as seen on a tape or some such.

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>>11042601
The same way you would any other story.
Please don't say you fell for the second person perspective meme.

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>>11038875
Yeah, the latter. I was rudely awoken by a phone call which turned out to be a wrong number. Gonna go back to sleep now...at 4 in the afternoon. Don't die!

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>>11028226
Glad I could exceed expectations, it means a lot.

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Something going on? Board's movin' awful fast.

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>>11046612
SEAnigs just got home and are ready for a long night of schizophrenia induced shitposting.

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>>10999509
finally finished reading this, and as expected, it is a masterpiece. I have no real gripes with it, just that I can't help but feel like writing a melancholic/angsty fic now.

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>>11049382
MWanon, you are damaged

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>>11049382
>I can't help but feel like writing a melancholic/angsty fic now.
Why's that? Was it too fluffy or something?

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>>11049382
I know what you mean. Whenever I read a really fluffy fic I realize that my life will never be that happy so I just want to write something way more depressing than my life so I can feel better about my self.

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>>10992575
Brutally raping Towa. Like really raping her hard. I want her to suffer.

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What's the opinion on fan-made fics here? As in making sequels or something based on an already existing fic that isn't yours? Or maybe a fan-made chapter for one of the series'?

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>>11050262
Ask the author and if they give permission, you're good to go. Omelas got a few and fox-family bonding got one.

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>>11050262
Generally accepted, best if you ask permission.

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>>10992551
A short fic written while procrastinating on another. This was supposed to be horror so do tell me if it managed to spook you in any way.
The First Tako (~900 words) Tag: Ina, SFW, Horror.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT6NKl46aHaCYr_6dJ7VlzmehT9jbQljNdmIGQpvWlYgtbmvKuByUb7N9AhTRQL15EP5FHQ6eob5FtE/pub

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>>10999509
Finally got through reading this.
I have to say this, I fucking loved reading through this and it was totally worth the wait. The beginning was a bit awkward with Miko's dialogue feeling a bit too, for lack of a better word, 'streamer persona' when she's supposed to be 'offscreen' but as it went along it got way better as I feel like you got more comfortable writing her way of speaking.
Honestly only peeve is the use of 'Miss' as your to way to dodge Japanese honorifics. It feels a bit weird when the setting is explicitly japan and the viewpoint character is explicitly fluent in Japanese.

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>>11051247
seethe, weeb. honorifics don't belong in english script

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>>11050754
This feels like a good concept for a bigger horror fic but the short length really is to its detriment, this seems like the kind of horror that needs a bit to seep in with the whole jist of it just getting put out at the end kind of feeling unsatisfying.
Still, it does have potential if you want to expand it.
>>11051321
If you want to cut out honorifics that's on you, but you need a better way to convey it then the method used there. Shit feels like the worst compromise between the Localization style and Translate it style.

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>>11049382
I wouldn't call it a masterpiece but thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
>>11050754
(You) being really comfortable with her in the middle of the story and trying to cheer her up made me a bit confused when (You) were supposedly trapped there, but I could just be retarded and not understand the point of the story. As the other anon said it could be longer and a little more fleshed out, but I think the last couple lines were pretty effective and impactful.
>>11051247
Thanks for reading. I totally agree with you in terms of the beginning. As I was proofreading I felt a bit iffy about it but everything I tried to fix it just didn't change it that much. As for honorifics, I speak Japanese with my Mother so seeing "-san", "-kun", "-chan", etc. in an English paragraph just somehow doesn't feel right for me because I've separated the two languages from each other, if that makes sense. Using "-san" in English feels like a combination of the two languages, so although the dialogue is spoken in Japanese, it's been translated to English and such honorifics don't exist in English so it feels weird to put them in. But I get where you're coming from, this is simply my preference.

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I don't know what got into me but I wrote a fic about Lumi from cyberlive getting dominated from her POV. I don't normally write things like this and i'm sure its pretty weak but maybe one of you fuckers will get some enjoyment out of it and that would be cool. obviously its NSFW work

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTnaFz0oZOZI4GECipHzTe_9f2gRELRpJXSXohfhDDBguQM7mtmx6O2JsrQHChAW4HtDERiE_gE8RNJ/pub

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>>11050754
As others have said, this sort of horror could really benefit from long form to show some kind of descent from reason of anon. Concern shown by anon also felt a bit off given how he wants to get out of the situation. Could sell it better as some solace that makes him forget his current struggle.

The story did have me on edge, knowing what exactly was with Anon just lying there and reacting to things. I feel like less description and more of getting into anon's headspace, as well as giving some hints into his life before could make his current predicament spook the reader much more. Still an interesting read, o so I'm looking forward to more of this kind of thing if you continue it.

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>>11052763
Didn't know who Lumi was so I checked some clips of her and... shit, she seems great. Really great. Might start watching her on top of every other chuuba I'm already watching.
As for the story I wasn't sure if I could get aroused from being told that a guy is fucking me but I actually got a semi chub on so you did something right. Or I'm gay. Not sure. I think you should put line breaks whenever a different persons speaks and try make your sentences sound less repetitive, but if you don't normally write things then this is a pretty good effort.

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>>11042384

>time to hop onto omegle
>oh hey found a match
>who the fuck is this
>some anime chick? Probably one of those vtubers or something
>"Hey, I'm looking for some of those nuts"
>
>Nuts nuts?
>"Yes, nuts"
>look, as much as you want to nut, you arent going to do it without the feeling being mutual
>"Ok, fine, here you go.."
>she strips out of her jacket to reveal a sundress
>"... Not budging? Okay~"
>she began to slid out of her sundress to reveal
>nuts
>
>
>"Nice desu, got all this on camera"
>what
>"Alright now bring me some nuts, preferrably some walnuts, before I release this to the internet"
>"You have around 24 hours~"
>mfw you have no idea on where the fuck this anime lady is so you have no idea on how to send deez nuts to her

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>>11053419
thanks for the feedback. yeah this is my first time writing anything like this and my first time attempting to write anything from a female pov. Glad you at least found a bit of enjoyment from it

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>>11049416
that easy to catch me, huh?

>>11049694
It's not that I want to write something to make me feel better, but a part of me somehow always envision scenes of melancholy and heartbreak, and it fuels the itch to write. Even after writing plenty of fluff, the draw to write angst is irresistible.