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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>7795042

>> No.7855205
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>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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story anchor

>> No.7855378
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>>7855205
This but with (You) and Botan.

>> No.7855570
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>>7855205
Luna watching you jerk off and blowing it on her face!

No i don't want you to secretly make Luna's Assistant spiritual successor, where did you get that idea from?

>> No.7855667

>>7855570
Luna is incredibly erotic yet I find myself paralyzed when trying to write her convincingly...

>> No.7855721

>>7855667
A woman who desperately wants to be treated like a woman even though everyone treats her like a child because she acts like one. That's just the basics though.

>> No.7855980

>>7855721
It's more stuff like her verbal ticks and the like, I guess? I know she's spoiled and prone to tantrums but ultimately sweet at heart.

>> No.7856077

>>7855667
Every other page should be filled with んんああああああああ

>> No.7856139

I shouldn't have made a story about Marine milking your prostate... now I can't stay away from prostate play porn and I feel more and more like trying it out. I swear to god if this place is what ends up making me lose my anal virginity...

>> No.7856245

>>7856139
Do it, anon. Get on all fours with your ass to a mirror. Do it.

>> No.7856261

>>7856139
Anon I pray that you don't have any cucumbers, carrots, or other phallic shaped objects in your home. F-for your own good.

>> No.7856268

>>7856139
Make one about Marine pegging you. Maybe have an implied ending where she's trying to get you more and more into ass stuff to do with her after you get used to having your ass used. Monkey's paw it by having Marine try to get you to take it in the ass from a guy because she wants to see BL stuff in real life.

>> No.7856305

>>7855205
Culturally freshening (ethnically cleansing) SEA under direct order from your beautiful princess of the peacock royal famile Reine.

>> No.7856335

>>7855667
>>7855980
That's because Luna's in a weird place where her kayfabe can give you lots of different potential interpretations of her "real self" that you can go with that can range from full candy kingdom princess, to rich heiress playing dumb, to adult woman trying to act young. It's ironically kind of like Fubuki where for fanfiction purposes there's a lot of different ways to take her character except there's also a lot of characterization choices that are all equally viable, from how childlike she's (un)intentionally acting, to how hard you lean into uwu speech into putting her speech into prose.

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>>7855205
Coco has a Yakuza-like encounter where some little punk tries to mess with her, so she absolutely demolishes his dick to make him learn some respect.

>fight-sex, a very serious look into the world of japanese crime, PAIZURI STYLE, PELVIS SHATTERING STYLE, DRAGON HEAT ACTION

>> No.7856553

>>7856464
Then like a true Yakuza she nurses him back to health (both literally and figuratively) and falls in love with him, r-right?

>> No.7857082

I wrote a new story, this time with Selen and her pet dragon Ember fucking. "Isn't this just you trying to write bad dragon dildos into existence?" Yes.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/33219058

>Selen’s own dragon claws dug into the hard stone floor while her other hand gripped at the soft feathers atop Ember’s head. She was letting out sounds of every pitch, needing to feel the final climax on Ember’s clumsy tongue but not quite able to. He dragged the licking out for long minutes as Selen’s body arched up and down off the floor with her need. She tried pushing her clit against the hard, thick part of his tongue as it extended, but each time he would pull away, wanting to lick instead at her wet folds beneath.

>...

>She was leaking cum all over the floor, and it was soaking into her shirt. In hindsight, maybe this was smarter than doing it in bed. The sheets would be drenched. She lied on the floor, body spent and heaving for breath as Ember licked himself clean.

>>7855252
Anchoring.

>> No.7857114

>>7856553
Yes, redemption through ass-whooping is the Yakuza way.

>> No.7857958

>>7857082
that sounds hot as hell. i'm definitely checking this out for the evening wank

>> No.7858100

Quick! You meet the woman of your dreams while riding the night train! You hit it off with casual conversation, but the time where you have to get off and leave her behind soon comes.
How will you make sure it wasn’t the first and only time you met? Give me something creative!
No, stuffing her into your suitcase and making her your cockslave is not creative, Tyler.
Also, ever since I came back from my week-long hiatus, my regular IP-range‘s been blocked on here. Dunno if that’ll ever get fixed…
still working on Petting your Fox 2, though - t. matthewanon

>> No.7858155

>>7858100
>Meet unknown female in train
>Hit it off with casual conversation
>Make sure it isn't the only time you meet

Anon, um... Do you even realize where you're posting this question?

>> No.7858226

>>7858100
The fuck did you do, Matthewanon? Worse come to worst, you can always email me the stories and I'll post them on your behalf.

>> No.7858295

>>7857082
... Why did the equivalent of Selen fucking her dog get me had?

>> No.7858312

>>7858100
Well in real life I would do something like:
“Hey, I think you’re pretty cute. Can I grab your number?”

But this is fiction so I feel it’d need to be something more creative and dramatic

>> No.7858332

>>7858295
Because I'm really good at writing

>> No.7858337

>>7858295
Anon? Anon, what are you doing with Korone? ANON?

>> No.7858346

>>7858332
Can't argue with that

>> No.7858493

>>7858337
Wasn't this literally a fic in the archive?

>> No.7858494

>>7858100
Pickpocket her wallet and return it at her house, obviously, or just use airtags like a normal person.

>> No.7858507

>>7858493
Yep. Was a damn funny one, too.

>> No.7858607

>>7858100
perhaps your phone had accidentally been left in her bag/pocket, or you accidentally took some of her items. That's usually a good reason to have to contact them again.

>> No.7859063

>>7858226
no idea, man. Probably some German falseflagging KFP faggot who got the whole IP range banned. I‘ll keep your offer in mind, though phoneposting seems to work for now.

>>7858494
>>7858607
yeah, those seem like the most likely scenarios. I’ll keep them in mind!

>> No.7859171

>>7855378
goodness, i don't think i'd survive a night with botan.

>> No.7859331

>>7856139
Make marine proud

>> No.7861557

The fuck you doing on page 10? Get back to your works

>> No.7861607

>>7861557
Pretty early for the US posters and still a work day at that, plus the other thread is still up, though it's also on Pg. 10. Not unexpected.

>> No.7861908

>>7858295
Well, when you say it like THAT..

>> No.7862584

>>7858100
yeah, that happened to me a while back. straya IP. forced to buy a pass to circumvent it. last i checked, still active.

>> No.7862729

>>7859373
I say go for it, I want to see what kind of other dumb, crazy shit Anon pulls off. Who cares about being realistic? It's fanfiction.

>> No.7862782

>>7862729
Adding to this, more than just fanfiction, it's operating within the rules of an RPG universe so it's an opportunity to explore the limits of what a character can be there without stretching disbelief

>> No.7862783

You ever write something then look back it later and go "why the fuck did I do that"? Jesus.

>> No.7862833

>>7862783
yes, all of my stories. but i keep going anyway
my goal is to rebuild some of the encyclopaedic vocabulary i used to have as a teenager

>> No.7862856

>>7862782
Nah I'm replying to Holocalypse anon, not Holofantasy anon

>> No.7862892

>>7862856
I'm a fucking idiot and didn't read your post quote

>> No.7864297

the usual's up, anons. What's in the works, writeanons?

bonus question: for readanons and promptfags, do any of the works in the archive inspire you to write, or are you content with just waiting and begging for writeanons to do something?

>> No.7864341

>>7864297
As a readanon, it's half my own insecurity and half not really having time that's kept me from trying to write my own stuff. I made a really short greentext prompt many threads ago as an exercise to myself and I hated looking at it again.

>> No.7864463

>>7864297
as a reader the lack of kanata x coco nsfw fics disappointed me, so i decided to try and take matters into my own hands. no promises that it will ever see the light of day though

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>>7864297
Not to fear anons, Miko is being straightened as we speak.

>> No.7864661

>>7864297
Debating writing Matsuri being gangraped and brutalized/disfigured on stream but I feel mildly disgusted at myself for even considering it.

>> No.7864712

>>7864661
>I feel mildly disgusted at myself for even considering it.
That feeling does go away. Couldn't tell you of any particular tipping point, but it does. You realize that the words aren't harmful despite what they portray.

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>>7855205
Noel has the irrational fear that a man, any man, will try to take Flare away from her.

Ironically, this has made her unable to think about anything other than penis. Its ability to penetrate and impregnate is disturbing... yet also enviable.
Its soon clear to her that she must bear the responsibility the deflowing her girlfriend, with the help of a witch curse.
Her wish was misinterpreted. So it goes with this kind of thing. Her wish was "I want to be the one to take Flare's penile virginity", and it does come true in a way.

>Futa, NoeFlare, wholesome lovemaking, big dark elf cock
https://files.catbox.moe/dajova.jpg

>> No.7864723

>>7864661
Did the Matsuri yab really hit everyone so hard or is it just drawing on current events?

>> No.7864772

>>7864723
Drawing on current events, I think.

>> No.7864805

>>7864723
Definitely the latter in my case. It left a sour taste in my mouth at worst, but not enough to go full gigaschizo anti and shit up the board over it.

>> No.7864895

>>7864297
Contemplating whether to release the next Cover High chapter once Wednesday is done or keep going until I've gotten through the rest of the week. Thursday and Friday only have a few scenes planned, but the same was true for Wednesday and it ended up being way longer than I initially planned because my "improvise as you go" approach led me to keep throwing more and more shit in.

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>>7864538
Is it just Miko sex or does her never being interested in a man before come up in it? Either way I'm waiting patiently.

>> No.7865018

>>7864712
Maybe. I reread the ryona last night and felt a twinge of something like remorse. Something like "oh, God, I did this?", I guess. It didn't really hit me at the time but it made me feel a little guilty for some reason. Yet at the same time, despite those feelings, I think making Matsuri watch a red hot brand that says "WHORE" being brought up to her cheek in between beatings and sexual torture while the camera watches and her chat explodes into a mix of cheers and horrified shouts to stop would make for an emotional tale.

>> No.7865201

>>7865018
There's no need to feel guilty. You didn't do anything, after all. The worst that can happen is you garner more interest in the chuuba through your works - which isn't bad at all.

As for content, it sounds like you're crossing from simple anger-induced violence to genuine torture porn. It would make for an emotional tale, but have a think about exactly what emotions you want those to be beforehand - horror and sympathy, or sadistic pleasure?

In any case, I greatly enjoyed last thread's direction. Variety is the spice of life, after all.

>> No.7865378

>>7865018
>making Matsuri watch a red hot brand that says "WHORE" being brought up to her cheek in between beatings and sexual torture
thats fucking hot good lord

>> No.7865479

>>7855252
Archive anon you forgot to archive this from last thread
>>7825050

>> No.7865484

>>7865378
yeah, it is
red-hot, in fact

>> No.7865513

>>7865479
Ah fuck you're right, I even have it open. Give me a sec. Thanks for the heads-up.

>> No.7865523

>>7864999
I still haven't decided whether or not I'll add smut, but if I do it'll be right at the end after lots of fluff of Migos falling for (You) properly.

>> No.7865650

>>7865201
Probably sadistic pleasure, it's meant to be separate from the other one if I ever do get around to it. 'Fans' taking matters into their own hands.
>>7865479
Got it. For reference, however, I don't make the anchor posts. Just call me gay wherever and I'll probably see it. Good catch either way; thank you again.
>>7865523
>Right at the end after lots of fluff
That sounds so nice it's not even funny. No pressure, as I'm looking forward to it either way.

>> No.7865758

>>7865523
Sounds great, Anon! Sure would love to see that smut, though. No pressure.

>> No.7865786

>>7865523
Maybe make it a two parter and have the first part be fluffy and ends with migo truly falling in love and the second part being the smut so you don't fuck with the kind of tone you're going with since I feel like this might stretch on too long as a one shot if you include the smut as well

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>>7865523
>after lots of fluff of Migos falling for (You) properly.
EVEN BETTER!

>> No.7866037

>>7865650
>>7865758
You guys help keep me motivated, thanks.
>>7865786
Maybe, but I don't think sex has to be seen as vulgar or dirty, it can be plenty wholesome and fluffy too; although I've only ever written one smut before so what do I know? And yeah I feel like it's going to become a relatively long story, but most of my one-shots are over 7k words anyway.

>> No.7866076

>>7866037
>I've only ever written one smut before so what do I know?
What was it?
>asks Anon, dick already in hand.

>> No.7866269

>>7865523
You got my attention.

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>>7866029
>>7866269
>pic rel
>>7866076
Just a little crazy, a Suisex story. Don't get your hopes up, smut is not my forte.

>> No.7866471

>>7866360
>Just a little crazy
Oh. Yeah, that's my favourite one. I think I already mentioned in a previous thread that there's one line that inevitably makes me nut. I've probably cranked one out to it around 8 times now.

>> No.7866541

>>7866471
Oh hey, I remember you. Thanks as always, I'm really glad you like it.

>> No.7866635

>"Do you like the smut I made for you, Anon?" the writer whispers into the reader's ear from behind, watching the twitching erection in the man's hand ooze precum as he works it
>"I-It's so good, Anon," he whimpers, stroking himself furiously. The author behind him lets out a small laugh of appreciation. "I'm gonna cum so fucking hard..."
>"I'm so glad you like it," the author teases, watching the cock he's made so erect get milked, the reader drawing himself closer and closer to yet another explosive orgasm. "Enjoy it all you want."

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>>7866541
No, thank you. Please be more confident in your smut - it was marvelous.

>> No.7866668

>>7866635
this is exactly how i imagine the relationship, lol.
can confirm this is EXACTLY the way i want you to feel when jerkin it to my smut

i also think this way every time a japanese developer adds feudal japan themes to a game

>> No.7866778

>>7866668
Whenever I hear that someone got off to my smut it fills me with both a great deal a pride and also a great deal of lust. It's a double-edged sword.

>> No.7866784

>>7866668
>>"Do you like the katana I made for you, Anon?" the game dev whispers into the players's ear from behind, watching the blade in the man's hand ooze weeb-ness as he works it
>>"H-hai, Game dev-san" he whimpers, swinging it furiously. The dev behind him lets out a small laugh of appreciation. "I'm gonna cut things so easily..."
>>"I'm so glad you like it," the dev teases, watching the sword he's made so strong (by folding over 1000000 times) get used, the player drawing himself closer and closer to yet another perfectly cut enemy in the game. "Enjoy it all you want."

>> No.7866799

>>7866784
actually it was more like a game dev whispering into a japanese bloke's ear

>> No.7866938

>>7866635
Not sure if I want it to be that detailed but yeah it is nice when someone says they nutted to your story

>> No.7867031

It's not gay to get hard when someone says they nutted to your smut, r-right?

>> No.7867064

>>7867031
That's right. It isn't gay at all, anon. You shouldn't feel scared of these desires welling up inside you. Embrace them.

>> No.7867071

>>7867031
I just pretend it's the stalker who love's my stuff so much she'll track me down and force me to impregnate her. I'm sure she's here.

>> No.7867073

>>7867031
Of course not. So long as you're not fucking them yourself, it's fine.

>> No.7867149

>>7867073
Well, if you want to romanticise it, writing a smut story is essentially reaching out your extraneous, digital limbs and jerking off many guys at once through the power of the internet.

>> No.7867176

>>7867071
God please. Holy shit.

>> No.7867561

>>7867031
I'm more surprised of their choice of which smut they nut to. Apparently the Suisex chapter I wrote in the menhera wrangler series is a favourite of at least one anon here.

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>>7867561
it is a bloody good chapter

>> No.7867662

>>7867561
It was great. Also because it was released and read way before the latter parts of the series, it's free from the retrospective discolouration given by the ending.

>> No.7867709

Before I try to rest once more, someone roll a D4 for me. If - and only if - you roll 3 or 4, roll a D8 after that. Thank you.

>> No.7867719

>>7867601
hahaha nice reference to the fact she was a virgin in that chapter, right?

>>7867662
even in sex, you cannot escape the sadness, huh?

>> No.7867743

>>7867709
rolled 3, and then 8

>> No.7867756

>>7867709
rolled a 2

>> No.7867792

>>7867719
Sort of, yeah. I had to mentally push aside invasive thoughts in order to concentrate on the Fubuki smut. Last time I felt this was probably reading a Steins;Gate doujin

>> No.7867803

>>7867743
>>7867756
Perfect, 8 becomes 2. Thank you! Good motivation for later.

>> No.7867860

>>7867803
i've got a foreboding feeling that i may have sentenced someone to red-hot branding

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Archive anon, I just wanted to say, you're absolutely incredible. You consistently write some of my favourite works in these threads, from Relapse, HoloFantasy, Bully Girls, and Landlubber Lover.
But I have to say, Hematolagnia is far and away my favourite. I don't even watch Mel, but her speech, her actions, the incredible descriptions of everything. You did an excellent job at depicting how it actually feels, and it's one of the few stories I go back to regularly. I know you'll never write a sequel, but thank you so much for giving me the chance to experience, through your words, the sensation of Mel capturing and enslaving me for the sake of drinking my blood.

>> No.7867971

>>7867860
I won't disappoint you with silence; no, not that. It's something for HF.
>>7867918
You were in the Lamy thread, weren't you? If so...that's hilarious. I was going to make a post asking if you were the blood Anon I was thinking of, but decided against it, yet here you are. I'm glad you enjoy my works so much! Thank you!

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>>7867719
>hahaha nice reference to the fact she was a virgin in that chapter, right?
I didn't even connect the two until you mentioned it

>> No.7868602

>>7857082
That was really hot. Nice work, anon.

>> No.7868910

>>7857082
i have never watched selen and have no idea what her character is like, not really into bestiality either; despite this, your story was erotic as fuck and the sheer... immorality of it, for lack of a better word, coaxed a furious cloudy-white eruption out of me

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>>7855205
Inseminating the egg of a wolf and then shrinking yourself to carry the egg into the womb of a sleeping Mio's pussy. While you're there you ejaculate another load directly inside the egg by fucking it for good measure, then you leave her slit. 4 months later, Mio has an abortion of a half-wolf half-human hybrid abomination.

>> No.7871094

>>7871009
still not quite as weird as the butt-suit prompt

>> No.7871104

>>7871009
What the fuck?

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>>7855205
Haachama haves sex but then she is like
> Nooo don't shot youre milk.... inside!
But its late and youre milk is already inside. And Haachama feels like
> No way... You just cum inside...
And like
> what if i... get pregnant??? What you do then??
But then let more milk in face! Haachama stop talking and cry. 2 month pass and she say
> you don't listen until just too late and now look what happen...my time of month not coming! OMG you idiot! what i gonna do?? Noooo!

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>>7871397
>Haachama requesting a prompt about herself

>> No.7871504

>>7871397
>>7871484
Writeanons get to work! Haachama herself has requested a story about (You) impregnating her!

>> No.7871718

>>7871504
If I had any confidence in being able to properly write how she speaks I would

>> No.7871803

>>7871718
She just did a full stream of nothing but Haachamaenglish last night

>> No.7871812

You can repost it, rewrite it or claim ownership... but never try to make it real.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR1e-NrT6TOv9Z4bnPfNMEOYD5MZDE-njMMYP203Qlz8CvIcSAsUOP03dxd6zvFRAa_6tV4uJZWeEhs/pub

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>>7871397
based prompt

>> No.7872251

>>7871397
I can hear it in her accent

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>>7871397
>>7871484
nah mate that's like Kiara levels of esl
you gotta awaken your mind to reach Haachama level

>Haachama is gleefully enjoying sex with her boyfriend, the pleasure somehow making it even harder for her to communicate than usual.
"Ahhhhhh yay I'm feeling, I'm feeling it. Please do it more, I need it so much "
>"Haato I'm gonna cum!"
"Huuuh? Come where? Where you going? Wait- NOOOOOOO STOP IT THATS BAD"
"You stupid. You don't know how to make babies? You're gonna be in trouble now"

>> No.7873151

>>7867031
Just imagine it's the chuuba you wrote saying they cummed to your work

>> No.7873244

>>7872873
>that's like Kiara levels of esl
orange womans english is actually good though

>> No.7873274

>>7873151
I haven't reached depths of schizophrenia that low yet

>> No.7873316

>>7871812
Uhhh.... what's going on here?

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>>7872873
WHATS! noooo! you do it... wrong! You gotta make - you gotta do it like... take the English... away! Face reality... yes you gotta face reality. Haachama English is good? Noooo OMG!!! why you- why do you think like that... FAQ!!!!!

>> No.7873737

>>7855252
Finally finished the second chapter of the Flare amnesia fic. I'm not really fully satisfied about this chapter but after spending a week revising it nonstop I just want to get it out there.

Tags: Flare, Fluff, SFW, amnesia/lost memories
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTQ2Hsm4aBUoZeEdjhquMf4p0hVHt65OBzyE8lCT74gi7WqO7vXqkLEIAcHLIndPJZVPtE74z6zYldZ/pub

As always I'd like to know what you guys think of this and, if possible, to give some criticism as well.

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>>7873244
yes because even if she messes up words or phrases, she's still able to produce coherent sentences that you can follow along with


true esl is not being able to tie up all your thoughts with a pretty bow, so it all comes out like broken and disconnected islands floating in word soup
its like the vocal equivalent of a boomer typing and constantly having to look down at the keyboard to search for the right key

>> No.7874200

>>7873765
> coherent...pepperoni
Anyway, as someone that's been through 2 ESL's, I don't think your analogy works well. True ESL is either knowing the word but forgetting what it was so you stay stuck for a second, or just substituting it with something else that gets the meaning across. For example, instead of saying:
> Turn off the breaker before the storm burns the lights.
An ESL (Me :)) would say
> Turn off the... uhhh... the power switch or the storm will burn the lights.
Or an example in Polish formy second scenario since I'm learning that. I want to ask for chocolate milk, but I don't know the word for chocolate milk. I do however know what chocolate is and what milk is, so I just combine the two.
> potrzebuję mleko i czekolada
Which would translate roughly to "I need milk and chocolate" but it still gets the meaning across.

>> No.7874433

>>7873737
Ooh, the plot thickens! It was as good as the previous chapter for sure, and I'm excited to see where you take this.

I'm surprised the apartment had no evidence of Noel, or maybe Anon just wouldn't know to pick her out in photos?

The harbor strike didn't slip by me either, you little fiend you.

>> No.7874532

>>7873737
Ah another chapter of Holo Elysium

>> No.7875127

>>7871009
i don't get the 'lack of eggs' joke going around miofa. she hasn't even hit menopause yet, she's still got a perfectly good baby factory going

>> No.7875229

>>7875127
Women are born with every single egg already there anon, they don't produce any. The moment she has her first period she will be on an extremely slow albeit steady decline. The closer to menopause a woman is the less eggs she has. That's why hag lovers (like myself) say things like "I NEED to fertilize the last eggs she has!" "SHE ONLY HAS SO FEW LEFT! THIS COULD BE OUR LAST CHANCE!".

>> No.7875523

>>7868602
>>7868910
Thanks for the positive reception of my fic, anons. It really means alot, Selen is too new and Niji EN is too obscure for many people to actively search fics for, so I knew I wouldn't see many customers at all. But the few of you who have read and responded kindly to it, I'm grateful. Makes me want to keep writing.

>> No.7875622

>>7875229
yes, i'm aware. she's not that old, buddy, there's still plenty left

>> No.7875819

>>7875622
I'm sure that's what your mother told you to hide the shame of having a child at the age of 37 but it's simply not true.

>> No.7875865

>>7875819
ogey

>> No.7876359

>>7875622
>Not that old
a-anon..........

>> No.7876515

>>7876359
She's only in her late 30's, she's old but not THAT old

>> No.7876925

>>7876515
Ok grandpa, cope harder. The clock is ticking.

>> No.7876996

>>7876515
i think they actually fetishize her age and get upset if you tell them she's not actually old

>> No.7877733

>>7876996
I prefer my women tight, fresh and fertile. Tight JK pussy is the best. Marine gets me so unbelievably aroused, if she had a cock I'd suck it.

>> No.7877944

>>7877733
Shion fan?

>> No.7878411

>>7875523
i read almost everything that gets posted here, so if you're looking for feedback or just to get your ego stroked, drop by

unless it's futa. i'll read scat before i read futa

>> No.7878956

>>7878411
> least degenerate anti-futa warrior

>> No.7879333

Archiveanon, I can't seem to find some stories from the Nene edition thread, particularly ones titled 'Wanted' and 'Unfortunate Soul'. I remember seeing them in the recently added section though so you probably just forgot to move them to the actual story section.
>>7735362
That thread's anchor.

>> No.7881381

>>7879333
I'll get around to it when I stop being facedown in a puddle of drool, thanks for telling me

>> No.7881716

>>7873737
God I love the slow burn mystery and fluff. It's also really compelling as a vehicle for romance.
Also I listened to the whirling in rags theme from Disco Elysium and I have to say it fits quite well.
Kind of feel like Noel is going to show up doing her own investigation into flare's disappearance and there's going to be a big misunderstanding that'll force Noel and Anon into an adversarial relationship is that the 'fight' they have over flare actually has some backing unlike the original fic that inspired this

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>>7855205
Mel needs blood to get hard. Literally. Literally literally. She needs to suck your blood and fill her dick with it.

>> No.7886030

>>7885595
I wish there were more Polka biting stories. I'm not going to formally request one for risk of being monkey's paw'd, but it's just a casual observation. I was hoping her cover would generate more desire for vampire stuff.

>> No.7886172

>>7877733
Okay I have to ask has there been a fic that's written marine as being an actual high school student?
Like I know old, pirate, and horny are like her three surface level characterizations but has there been one that has her being a JK?

>> No.7886473

>>7886172
I think it would butcher her character too much to actually make her a JK. Her personality is wise from having lived a long life full of hardships, horny from her lack of love in her teens and self degrading humor from these two combined. These 3 make up a lot of who she is and making her a JK would throw them out the window.

>> No.7886602

>>7886172
Cover High has her as a side character, but decently close.

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>>7874200
Its just about my own experience about living with ESLs. As in the thing most likely to confuse me is when they structure their sentence in a strange way.
I don't really how to describe it exactly, beyond just talking about how disjointed it feels.
Like even if the words logically make sense together, it takes some context and imagination to figure out what the intention is.

Like "Pepeloni" is obviously hard to understand because of the limited vocabulary.
But it goes right into indecipherable tier because each and every sentence basically adds nothing to the previous one. It'd make just as much sense if you'd rearrange the order.
>pepeloni! i like pepeloni, yeah.
>ahh how can i explain?
>i always, i always order the, the domino.
>and then i eat the cheese pan pizza
>but i pick up these... away! cause i don't eat it.

>> No.7887272

>>7886172
I had the prompt idea with futa Sister Claire teaching at catholic school, and had a funny thought about it also being the school where Marine gets corrupted.

>> No.7887604

>>7887272
Other than Marine which other girls went to a catholic school? Migo?

>> No.7887616

all this talk of ESLs and haato got me reading that haachama anal fic in the archive. goodness gracious, what a sinful nut that was

>> No.7887691

>>7886473
It's not impossible, some people live exciting lives. By the time I was in high school I had been to multiple places on my own, worked a few jobs, slept on the streets, been to county lockup and seen people OD in front of me.
Saying a high school kid has some experience in an office work force is fine, just "my mom/aunt got me a job here and no one questions my age." and she adapted to all the office ladies around her so she acts the way she does, including the horny and how willing she is to chit-chat about sensitive stuff even though she doesn't have any real experience

>> No.7890608

>>7886473
>>7887691
Yeah thought so too.
Even if you lean hard into the cosplay pirate lore the most generous interpretation for her age (in character obviously) still puts her at best like a jaded 20-something that feels like they blew their high school youth and are chasing it by 'being a pirate'.
I guess you could stretch it a bit by having her be a 'born in the wrong generation' type but that's still running into the fact that she needs the 'experience' to be how we know her.

>> No.7892154

>>7855205
FLAT BITCHES

>> No.7892176

>>7876515
>>7876996
I know this was hours ago but I just wanted to say: Women usually hit menopause around their 40's-early 50's and pregnancies are considered at risk at any age past 35. So yes while Mio most likely does have more than a decade of time left that she could be bred, the chances of that happening become astronomically less each year. And the chances of conceiving a literal tard, if she does at all, go way up. So once again the whole "she only has so many eggs left" thing is still completely viable.

>> No.7892225

>>7892154
Anything else or do you not want to give writers something to work with?

>> No.7892273

>>7892225
If I wanted to write the story myself, i'd write the story myself.

>> No.7892283

>>7892225
No

>> No.7892323

>>7892225
I think he was plenty clear with what he wanted, that being FLAT BITCHES

>> No.7893060

You know what time it is Anon! Look through the prompt archive and reply with a prompt you'd like to see turned into a story! Fucking do it right now faggot! You lazy piece of shit!

I love you

>> No.7893067

>>7892154
>>7892323
He laughed maniacally as he rolled the steamroller over the hounds. They had been euthanized beforehand, but that didn't make the sight any less absurd.
"AHAHAHAHAHHA" his maniacal laugh echoed throughout the empty hockey rink, even over the diesel engine and the exploding cadavers.
"So, what do you think?" the talent scout asked the Japanese businessman. "He's definitely unique, and this is just one of his many skills!"
Yagoo turned to the younger man and responded, "I'm not sure he's a good fit, but let's see what else he's got." He made a mental note to fire this guy later, he was clearly as defective as the 'talent' on display.
Squish. "ANOTHER FLAT BITCH!" the driver cheered enthusiastically as he rolled along. 20 more to go.

>> No.7893107

>>7893067
Another prompt successfully fulfilled!

>> No.7893110

>>7893067
gotta love that monkey's paw

>> No.7893181

>>7893067
Fucking kek

>> No.7893208

>>7855205
FLATCHESTED HOLOS

>> No.7893256

>>7893067
"HEY, YAGOO, WANNA SEE ME SMASH SOME PUSS!? WHOOOOOO!!"

>> No.7893276

>>7893208
Why can't you just be grateful for what you have? You asked for flat bitches and you got flat bitches, but now you have the audacity to ask for more? People like you are the reason society is going to shit.

>> No.7893433

>>7893060
>(You) are a U.S. soldier stationed in post war Japan around 1945-52. The specific area you occupy is a small village with almost no modern technology that is being plagued by a single, frankly quite rude problem. An imperial nationalist Oni barges into town every few days and attacks any non-japanese in the area, driving off any protection and/or aid the poor townsfolk have.

>> No.7893872

>>7893208
Anon picks up the hatchet, walking into Hololive's office.
> I'm here to see some flat bitches!
He screams, terrorizing the staff. They call the police as he enters the elevator to the top floor where all the memebers stay in. Upon getting there, he sees Rushia on the couch. She sees the stranger with a machete and gets up in a panic.
> If i can't get some flat bitches...
> I'll just have to make some flat bitches!
Anon screams at Rushia as he swings his machete in front of her chest. However, it hits nothing as she didn't have any boobs to begin with. Anon grumbles, mumbles and tumbles away, looking for a better target. That's when he suddenly feels a sharp pain in his back as air leaves his lungs. Looking back, he sees the green-haired girl standing behind him with bloodied hands and a cold stare. Anon falls down to the ground, sinking the knife deeper into his body and piercing his heart. His body goes into shock and he gazes at Rushia's panties from below, only to see a bulge. Anon dies with tears, snot, piss shit and cum coming out of his orifices. He got some flat chested Holos...

>> No.7894013

>>7893060
The story begins with the readers life being utterly turned upside down following the death of your family. Thankfully Amelia is there to provide support, and becomes one of the few things keeping (you) sane while in the orphanage. Once you turn 18 Amelia offers you the opportunity to move in with her, but you refuse, not wanting to leech on the one person to treat you nicely. You then get move to another state, get a job, and even develop a crush on a coworker. But tragically the coworker dies in a particularly brutal home invasion, a series of events leads to the company's bankruptcy, and to top it off your apartment catches fire. Amelia shows out of nowhere at your lowest point and rescues you from homelessness. Things go smoothly, and over time she gets more flirty, but you still find it hard to see her in a romantic light as you still hold feelings for your now deceased coworker. One day when Amelia is away you end up stumbling into a secret room filled with seemingly otherworldly technology, and a single journal. Through this journal you find out that Amelia has been stalking you across several timelines, and that every event in your life was orchestrated to ensure your undying love for her and only her. Just as you close the book, you hear the door open, and Amelia calls out your name.

I fucking love the concept of Amelia abusing her time travel to be with (You) and want more stories in that vein.

>> No.7894092

>>7893208
A sickening crunch rang out in the small dimly lit room. Noel let out a sound more like a gasp or the sound of air leaving her lungs even though her motioning was more as if she was trying to scream. Her limp body crashed to the floor. Anon, the one who accosted her in such a way, let out a sickening laugh.
"AHAHAHHAHHAHHA FINALLY! HER CHEST IS COMPLETELY FLAT!" Anon screams out while flailing a sledgehammer.
Flare, tied to a rusty pipe that runs up the wall, let's out a scream through the ducktape muzzle over her mouth. Poor thing had to watch as this madman had taken a hammer and used in to cave in the chest of Noel.
Pekora has gone completely silent at the sight, trying to scream and cry before the assault had started, but now not even a whimper is able to leave through her muffled mouth. Rushia is sobbing and breathing heavily through her nose, her eyes are nearly glazed over and constricted, poor thing must have receded into her mind from the trauma. Marine seems to be trying to vomit, though the gag prevents her from actually expelling anything from her mouth.
"You, you're next!" Anon says while pointing the head of the hammer at Flare.
She screams out while shaking her head side to side trying to deny Anon's advances while her feet scramble backwards even though her back is already to the wall.
Anon walks up to her and first merely taps her on the head with the hammer to daze her, stopping her from struggling. He then grabs the chocolate skinned elf girl by the ankles and pulls her away from the wall, laying her flat on her back. He then raises the hammer like an axe overhead and waits. He waits until she finally comes to. Flare stares straight up and is met with the sweaty, disgusting face of the man who killed the love of her life, and next will kill her. Before Flare is even able to let out a peep, with a strong practiced swing. Anon swings downward with the hammer, slamming it directly in the middle of her sternum. The hammer caves in her ribcage, bringing her breasts inwards and flattening her chest out.
"Th-there, haha. I-I've made you, AND that silver haired whore JUST AS BEAUTIFUL as Pekora and Rushia!"
Anon then turns to the rest of Hololive's third gen.
"And YOU Marine. YOU'RE NEXT!"

>> No.7894159

>>7855205
A GOOD WRITER

>> No.7894258

>>7894159
Seethe

>> No.7894795

>>7894013
Consider yourself banned from the creative process and being near women with a cup size larger then A

>> No.7894864

>>7894795
Did you mean to reply to >>7893872
>>7894092 ?

>> No.7894888

>>7894795
Anon no... Don't leave him with the lolis, that's worse!

>> No.7895437

>>7858100
>Petting your Fox 2
GGGGGGAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHH SSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXX

>> No.7895511

hag orgy anon, onegai

>> No.7895570

>>7893433
>Ayame was not expecting to meet her match
>The casual racism of the average white U.S. male in the 1940's is more than enough to overwhelm her
>She becomes completely helpless when you call her and oriental chink female who couldn't hurt a fly, let alone a man

>> No.7895606

>>7895511
patience tardanon, onegai.......

>> No.7895991

>>7895606
patience is a virtue anon, and i want to defile fubuki's virtues

>> No.7896319

>>7895570
>hardcuts to naked dogeza

>> No.7896360

>>7895570
>hardcuts to your wedding

>> No.7896616

>>7895570
>hardcut to you pinning the weak whore racist to the wall and fucking the love of the US of A into her slut pussy.

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>>7886030
There's one vampire story kicking around the archive, at least.

I know because I wrote it. But I also made it a self contained oneshot, so I'd need to come up with a new reason for Polka to get chompy.

https://pastebin.com/pVNiQPwm

>> No.7896916

>>7896805
Ah, I loved this one. Thank you for reminding me of it, and thank you moreso for writing it!

>> No.7896986

>>7896805
Isn't there also one about Aqua accidentally getting turned into a vampire and she has no choice but to sneak blood from (you) at a blood bank?

>> No.7897048

>>7895570
>hardcuts to cutting off her arm, forcing her to transform herself into your grandma to steal it back and fly out into the night sky, rejoining her kin and disappearing without any traces after the invasion of Rashomon went horribly wrong and all of them but her were brutally slaughtered by the prefect.

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>>7855205
Calm people getting mad is either cool or terrifying, depending on which side of things you're on. After the rest of Gen5 gets kidnapped during their dance practice by a shady organization banded together against demi humans (and Nenes) Botan has to rescue them by any means necessary. And it seems the only thing Botan has on hand to help her is enough firepower to topple a small country, and her brutal hunter's instincts.

>> No.7897440

>>7896616
>Impregnate her with superior white man seed
>She has no choice but to carry a disgusting hafu baby
>Gives birth to healthy baby girl
>Looks at it
>Vomits
>"She's the most beautiful thing I've ever seen!"

>> No.7897622

>>7874433
Thanks man, glad you enjoyed this chapter

>>7874532
Eyyyyy

>>7881716
Oh don't worry, I have a plan for Noel later in the story...

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I know futa is a niche taste, much more so futa on male. So before I continue this, would there be any interest in a Futa x (You) story? (Risu). My prostate stimulation one kinda flopped so I'm assuming the only way to get off through writing is full on immersion which describing you sucking off someone else might not quite do it. Though my options are probably to trash it or abandon it, I'd like to ask anyway.

I wish I could say that I could change it to Risu x another ID but not only do I not know the other ID's well enough but also that would be basically redoing the entire thing

>> No.7898961

>>7898787
I'm into futa but only when (You) are the penetrator not the penetrated. The prostate stimulation was fine though but probably the furthest I'm willing to get into with that sort of stuff. That said you still should release it. Any and all writing you do will make you better.

>> No.7899075

>>7898787
>Prostate stimulation one flopped
Did it? I certainly enjoyed it. Just because it didn't get a thousand a half (You)s didn't mean it flopped. I hope. I'd feel very bad about most of what I write, if that was the case.

>> No.7899115

>>7897440
>Keep her suppressed with your superior seed till the day of your death
>She falls into depression, and flees back to Japan
>Only pulled from it by an old she has, a white fox youkai
>Gets convinced to join something called hololive
>Be reborn
>Feel a strange connection to an oni streamer

>> No.7899134

>>7898787
>>7898961
Should've added that I very much did like the prostate stimulation fic. 10/10 did cum and would again.

>> No.7899577

>>7898787
Do it anon, male on futa is top tier

>> No.7899661

>>7898787
i'm not about to tell you no, because i value your freedom in writing above all.

but i personally have no interest in futa

>> No.7899685

>>7855205
Helping both sides in the Kiara-Moona Cold War over Pekora

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You grab me by my blue hair, forcing me to my knees in front of you. Staring at your crotch with my golden eyes, I can see a pronounced bulge in your pants, pleading to be freed. I look up at you, your eyes that of a predator looking at its prey; I begin to become wet, my juices flowing down my thighs as a heavy blush appears on my face.
>Well? Don't you want it? Get it out.
You say with a dominant voice as you point to your crotch. I fumble with your zipper, feeling your hard cock through your pants while doing so. Pulling down your pants, I audibly gasp in my cute elf voice, as the bulge shows itself to reach all the way to your leg.
>It's... It's huge...
I say, staring at it dumbfounded. I get back to doing what I was told to do, grabbing your underwear and pulling it down, your cock comes out like a spring, hitting my wrist with great force. There's a trail of precum on my wrist now, but I ignore it as I look directly at the 9 inch veiny cock dribbling precum in front of my eyes. I begin rubbing my elf slit as I breathe heavily onto your dick, captivated by it almost to the point of drooling. You grab my head and press me against your crotch, your huge cock pressing onto my cheek. I take a big whiff, letting myself feel the aroma of sweat and manliness that your member exuded. My toes curl up, grabbing your hip with my hands and pressing myself further against it as an orgasm hits me. I begin spraying into my blue yukata as shockwaves run through my body. You notice that I had orgasmed and slap your thick, meaty cock against my cheek, leaving a red mark.
>You whore, cumming just from that? I oughta punish you.
Another intense orgasm hits me, a pool of my juices forming at the floor below me as I struggle to breathe, continuously inhaling your dick's smell
> I-I'm SoorRyy HNGH!
Through my orgasm, I'm barely able to speak. You grab my chin and force open my mouth. I instinctively let out my tongue, as you position your cock directly onto it. Licking your hard cock, I taste the sweat and salty precum that left your urethra in anticipation. I could feel your dick pulsating inside my mouth as I licked around the head, wishing this experience would last forever...

>> No.7899964

>>7899950
>posting it here too.
Tell me, Anon, you already made me erect in that thread; are you an author?

>> No.7900012

>>7899964
Yes, I'm an author. Though I'm not the one who posted here. I don't mind but there's no real point given that it's not big enough to get archived, and it isn't too much of a serious work of mine.

>> No.7900038

>>7900012
Was there anything else you've written and shared? Or am I misinterpreting this post?

>> No.7900057

>>7900038
I've posted 5 stories in here. Though I won't tell which ones they are. One of them even is a Lamy one, but it isn't particularly great nor is it smut. It was my first work after all.

>> No.7900119

>>7900057
Understandable. I will say that if none of them are smut, for one reason or another, please reconsider your writing is very good at conveying erotic sensations. Thank you for this snippet.

>> No.7900241

>>7898961
I want to write you fucking Risu but it would break character so I simply can't it's such a shame. I can probably do it after Risu already fucked you but before that? It's virtually impossible, especially with the plot centering around you not knowing she was a futa and then she basically rapes you.

>>7899075
Perhaps I was spoiled by my previous releases that got much more attention. Though I usually judge if it did well by the "criticism/I blew my load" comment ratio and that one got mostly criticism which is fine I'm not a bitch, it helps me see what this thread wants or doesn't want.

>>7899577
I actually don't like male on futa lol but for some reason I feel compelled to write this one.

I'll see what I can do about this story. I don't think I'll release it soon but given that I've written nearly 3k words of it already and it's all just building up to the smut, I dunno if i could drop it.

>> No.7900332

>>7900241
Go for broke. I believe in you and will read it either way. Futa ain't my cup of tea either but I can stomach it.
>ratio of "criticism/I came" comments
>rarely get either
Pain

>> No.7901853

>>7898787
that is one fine-looking risu
god damn squirrel's nightie doing bad things to my unicorn

>> No.7902998

>>7855205
A delinquent drama but with holos

>> No.7903229

>>7902998
>Oozora Subaru is a cynical, down-on-her-luck detective with a personal vendetta against tyrannical crime boss Coco Kiryu and her expansive narcotics empire

>> No.7903266

Whatever happened to that anon writing saviourfag? Are they still here?

>> No.7903309

>>7903266
I hear he got captured by Duvlakian slavers and is currently labouring in an off-world sulphur mine. Shit way to go.

>> No.7903501

>>7903266
Not sure if we're talking about the same anons but there were two people saying they would stop saviourfagging around several (maybe more) threads ago.

>> No.7904093

A question for those most versed in Luna. Who would you say is someone you could see working with her in an official sense? A witch hunter captain, to be process. Thank you in advance!

>> No.7904150

>>7899950
why my pp ard

>> No.7904168

>>7904093
Subaru or Choco

>> No.7904252

>>7904093
Dude, what are you saying? Working with her as a witch hunter captain, you mean? Or is she the captain, and has to hire witch hunters? Subaru fits the bill in that case

>> No.7904347

>>7904252
>>7904168
The former; sorry, only realized how badly I fucked that up after the fact. Though the idea of Subaru fitting that slot makes me interested, if you want to go with the tough cop persona from the Oozora police streams. Funnily enough, prior to this, Subaru was on the list of characters I doubt I'd ever get to touch for this. Though if you have any other suggestions for the former (since it seems more like you were gearing for Subaru being in the latter role), don't hesitate to say as such. Thank you, either way.

>> No.7904514

>>7903501
I'm talking about this story, the one where Kiara is saviourfagging (You). I was wondering if they're still here and moved on from that story or have disappeared like that hag orgy anon.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTRrYCVflbvo6nWmLK63yRya5Y4EPY0j4jaehyTOP5zxTt3YCaCethauqJHT_y7r1CoYW2VB3T4jqhe/pub
>>7904093
Like in a which chuuba would fit working under her in like a fantasy setting? Subaru, both in terms of character concept of being an everywoman able to put up with her and in terms of actual interactions they've had off and on stream.

>> No.7904556

>>7904347
Subaru could fit in both slots me thinks. There was that one hologra where Subaru and Choco were (pretending) subjects under the command of Luna. Except Choco was a foreign spy. Other than those two, I suppose Noel and Flare would sort of fit the theme with their lore.

>> No.7904660

I'm having to open the hololive talents list to remember and figure out which chuubas to include in the story. Is this what the early onset of dementia feels like?

>> No.7904682

>>7904556
>>7904514
Subaru it is! It'll be a bit, though.
>>7904660
I hope not. I really, really hope not. I've had to open that list a bit more than I'd like to admit.

>> No.7904780

>>7904682
Everytime I open the list, I go, "Oh yeah, AZKi was part of hololive too."

>> No.7904863

>>7904660
Don't worry about it. It's most likely just forgetfulness born of an increasing desensitization to a repeated stimulus... and if it is early onset dementia, then there's nothing you can do about it, so might as well accept it.

>> No.7905051
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Fox Family Bonding gave me an oyakodon fetish.
I did not fap to it, I just read it in the middle of my online lecture, but holy FUCK is my loin feeling like a hydrogen bomb and a half.

>> No.7905069

>>7905051
Admittedly, it's hotter when the male isn't related to the other two I feel.

>> No.7905146

>>7905051
it's fucking great hey
incestanon really made something sweet and cuddly while still being dick-torturingly erotic

>> No.7905336

Do you guys have routines to keep motivation? Have certain time periods set aside each day exclusively for writing, or have a set goal of words that you can work over the course of a day or a week?

I've got ideas I want to share but no desire to put them to word and it's frustrating

>> No.7905439

>>7905336
Nothing like that. Sometimes it comes and I feel an inferno in my fingers. Other times I struggle to do even a sentence.

>> No.7905607

>>7905336
I try to do at least one page a day, quality be damned. Then I go back later and edit until I feel satisfied.

>> No.7905621

>>7905607
>Then I go back later and edit until I feel satisfied.
even if this means deleting everything you've written to that point?

>> No.7905697

>>7905621
That generally doesn't happen. If I delete something, it's either because I decided it isn't necessary, or because I want to replace it with a better idea.

>> No.7905703

>>7873737
Amazingly based Anon, was really looking forward to this

>> No.7905781

>>7905051
>>7905069
>>7905146
I'm glad you guys enjoyed it because I literally channeled all my efforts into writing the fic like I was charging up a fucking Spirit bomb and now I'm struggling to write again because of burnout. I'll try to write another fic by next week though.

>> No.7905822

>>7905781
>I'll try to write another fic by next week though.
only try if you want to bro
don't think you owe it to fans of your work to continue writing, that'll just eat you

you have to keep posting here though, would suck if you left

>> No.7905843

>>7905336
no real routines, but I'm always workshopping ideas in my head on what I wanna write, which helps when I actually get down to write.

>> No.7905996

>>7905843
when you say workshopping an idea, what does that generally entail? moreover, with constant revisions to the original scenario, how do you keep track of the direction of the thought train?

>> No.7906128

>>7905822
This is some of the best advice you can give. Never, ever write just because you feel like it's owed. Take breaks if you need to. Take entire hiatuses. When it's done, it's done. When the mojo returns, it returns. Posting stories because you feel like you need to - either out of some sense of pride or "OH NO THE THREAD'S DYING" - is a fast track to burnout, speaking from experience.

>> No.7906260

>>7906128
>"OH NO THE THREAD'S DYING"
guilty. trying to force words out to saviorfag for a community eats you alive.

besides, it's been comfy as fuck here recently. i am very slowly but happily working on a fubuki yandere/hurt short, figuring out where i want it to go as i go along

>> No.7906896

>>7905336
I just try to finish the story before my motivation runs out, usually in 2-3 hour bursts which is why everything i wrote has <2k words...

>> No.7907040

>>7906896
brother

it's actually mind-boggling how some folk here can put out 5k+ in a single fic

>> No.7907316

>>7906896
>>7907040
Just let it sit instead of pushing it. When the motivation returns, write more. According to a character counter, I pumped out 2k words today and feel like that's a good place to stop. I'll try to get more done later/tomorrow. Pacing helps a lot.

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>>7898787
>>7900241
honestly all I want is more wacky situations with futas
>one of the more seiso idols having to deal with hiding their dick, but also having to secretly relieve their urges
>one of the more degenerate ones turning into a hopeless coomer, not even a rapey futa, just mindlessly jerking off on stream

>> No.7907579

>>7907316
it's difficult to come back to a story spurred on by a swing of emotion

>> No.7908049

>>7907433
>>one of the more seiso idols having to deal with hiding their dick, but also having to secretly relieve their urges
God dammit I’m horny already and it’s not not even 8am

>> No.7908348

>>7905703
Thanks man, hopefully this chapter was worth the wait. The next chapter will probably be shorter than the previous two cause I don't think I have what it takes to write another long one as is

>> No.7910296

>>7905996
I usually envision a particular scene I want to incorporate into my works and revisit it in my head to flesh it out further. I did this a lot when I was writing the menhera wrangler series, and when there's a scene/dialogue that I feel satisfied about I write it down in a note to insert in the story when I actually sit down and write the full chapter. Helps me remember the core of the idea at least.

>> No.7910470

>>7905996
Write outlines, think about things you want to happen in the story, contemplate dialog in your head, envision it in your head, that sort of thing. Get it all out somewhere, somewhere you can go over it, storyboard it. Leave notes for yourself in the future. Think about it in your spare time if you aren't actively working on it/are on a break. I do a lot of my thinking about stories while out on a walk or in the shower.

>> No.7910811

>>7855205
note to self in my sleep addled state, but anyone can feel free to yoink it

A Fubuki pseudo-rape scenario where she completely submits and goes alone with her captor's desires. At the end of the fic, a short paragraph describing her sitting in her chair, panties 'round her ankles and her inner thighs covered in her love juices, breathing heavily as her body relaxes into post-orgasm bliss

>> No.7910862

>>7907433
Honestly even as someone that likes futa in drawn stuff. As written, futanari on male and vise versa is just gay sex.
Like seriously, male on futa either becomes trap yaoi with a vagina or just normal sex with an unused penis. Futa on male meanwhile is straight up just gay sex, there is no way to write that in first or second person that isn't just girl topping (You) but gay since there's a dick going up your ass.
Futa on female at least just has it so you don't have to have a man to have pentrative sex that feels 'real' for SOD sake.
Seriously I'm trying to think up a helping a futa with her problem scenario, and none of it really goes in a way that isn't either gay as fuck or where the futanari part feels justified enough to include.

>> No.7910972

>>7910862
With the way you put it seems like go gay or go home

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>>7908049
>Suisei doesn't even try to show it off but when it gets hard, it somehow always makes a visible bulge even in her most modest outfit
>worse is when it tries to escape from its binding and threatens to create an obscene incident for Suisei
>ironically this has all made her streams even more erotic than the girls that shamelessly jerk off in front of everyone

>> No.7911076

>>7910862
It's because it IS gay. The only difference between futanari and ordinary sex is the addition of one or more penises. Ergo, futa is for people who just can't get enough cock in their lives.

>> No.7911136

>>7910811
Let me try to add on to the prompt too. One of the members gets into some sort of debt with (you) and they have to pay it off with their body. Fubuki offers to take the fall and goes along with your demand. She did not expect your skills in sex to be good and she was very wrong. By the end of it she is your mind broken sex slave.

>> No.7911384

>>7911136
it wasn't meant to be actual rape or blackmail, it was supposed to be a sort of twist at the end where she's just getting off to the thought of it and you've been reading her fantasies

>> No.7911552

>>7905051
I was planning on doing a fan sequel myself yesterday, just kind of felt like it. It's a great story and very hot in fiction.

>>7905336
Problem with my life is that I have never been able to keep a routine, ever. Things are too hectic, and I have too many people dependent on me to make plans of my own. I'm more tied down by their schedules and needs than my own, so I end up just writing when there's time and peace of mind to do so. Which isn't always.

>> No.7911592

>>7911552
TWO fan sequels!? Oh, momma.

>> No.7911937

>>7905822
I'm not leaving this thread anytime soon. This thread is one of the only things that actually brings me enjoyment in my life other than chuubas themselves.

>>7911552
Go for it! I feel really honored that anyone would want to even consider writing a fan sequel to one of my works! The guy that did a fan sequel to the incest fic did an amazing job and I'd love to see more if it's not too much trouble to the thread.

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Here we go again

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>>7910862
>>7911076
i don't know what you expected

I like futa because dicks are a more relatable and visible representation of sexual arousal and pleasure.
Also because its fun in the sense of "woman taking up a masculine role".
That's why I don't really care for trap stuff it goes in the other direction of "man taking up a feminine role"

>> No.7912109

>>7911384
Oh dam I really like that

>> No.7912169

>>7911552
Adding to the others, I'd like to see more of it too.

>> No.7912210

Slowly grooming your oshi to be attracted to you even though right now she's repulsed by you!
Being the only competent person around to help her!
Lacing her drinks with small doses of aphrodisiacs to make her horny each time she sees you!
Throttling her internet speed whenever she accesses porn sites so she remains sexually frustrated!
Nipping her relationships in a bud, because she's incredibly naïve and keeps hooking up with abusive deadbeat morons!

I feel like this prompt is a stretch, but I've seen more ridiculous scenarios written, sooooo

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I do not like this arc

>> No.7912392

>>7912283
I don't like futa too but I sure as hell ain't complaining about it.

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No matter how hungry you are, you must not eat the food attached to the fisherman's hook

>> No.7912459

>>7912409
I rather find my own food

>> No.7912476

>>7855205
Rushia getting you addicted to orgasming as you die since she keeps killing and reviving you during sex.

>> No.7912714

>>7912210
Using addictive drugs like nicotine or cocaine to make her suffer harsh withdrawals whenever she's away from you!

>> No.7912920

>>7912283
Just don’t read it if you don’t like it, that’s that I’m doing and it’s working out fine

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Stay motivated, writeanons.

>> No.7913705

>>7913632
Don’t worry Pekoraposter, I’m more motivated than I’ve been in ages

>> No.7913772

>>7913632
Hard to when the majority of the general actively despises the tags you like working under.

>> No.7913843

>>7913772
If this is about futa, it's a few shitposters. Look back when Matsuri's baby carrot came out, people were all about it.

>> No.7913844

>>7913772
>letting other people influence you
Write what you like to write. If random anonymous faggots on a Mongolian basket-weaving forum don't like it, then fuck 'em.

>> No.7913885

>>7913772
Just go for it man. I'll support you no matter what.

>> No.7913913

>>7913772
You're probably someone working on the stuff I despise, but if you can't just shut up and write it anyway out of spite for the hate, you're only proving yourself to be an even bigger faggot. Just do it and get it over with.

Also stop being a (You) sympathy whore because you 100% know there's people here who enjoy it. Victim mentality is for faggots

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>>7912283
>>7912409
woah I'm not the guy trying to pointlessly argue that everyone should like futa
I'm literally just saying its rather futile to avoid the gay part of futa

Like, you can't write about a fetish and try make it palatable to people that don't like it the first in the first place.
That just guts out what people actually like about it.

>> No.7914475

>>7912210
>Throttling internet speed whenever she accesses porn sites
This keeps happening to me, what are the chances I'm being stalked by the qt dork in my uni classes?

>> No.7917069

remember anons, it doesnt matter what other people want to see, write what makes you horny/ happy. Thats what creativity is about, making something YOU are happy doing

>> No.7917333

>>7914475
None. Cease your investigations.

>> No.7917340

>>7917069
That's not how the world works. It doesn't give a damn about your "creativity". You supply what is in demand, simple as. As social creatures, it is virtually impossible to "do something for yourself", no matter what it may be. You may try to convince yourself that it isn't true but it is; your body is literally programmed to make you want to kill yourself if you don't fit in. Accept the reality before it consumes you, anon...

>> No.7917464

>>7917340
Damn, I'm sorry you decided to look at things this way, Anon.
I just do what I like whenever I like, simple as. Outside of work, no one can tell me what to do and how to do it.
If I want to write a story about having, nice, gentle sex with Fubuki without a trace of abuse, dgeneracy or anything else, literally no one will stop me. I don't care if people will read it, because my heart WILL be happy and I WILL have a boner.

I refuse to accept your reality, Anon.

>> No.7917811

>>7917340
>not being an Egoist
ngmi

>> No.7917885

>>7917464
I do still do what I wish to do, having very niche tastes in many things, I had to take into my own hands to make what I want to come true. However, I would be lying if I said that I'd still do it if no one took interest in it. Simply put, making other people happy is what makes me happy and tells me that my efforts were not in vain. No matter how hard I worked for something, if I get one person to tell me that they enjoyed deeply what I put out, it makes it all worth it. Words, gifts, transactions of money, compliments; all forms of validation are what pushes me forward in life.

Not accepting the fact that people seek validation from others is purely denial. Ignorance is bliss, but are you really alive if you are simply turning your eye away from what reality really is?

>> No.7918243

>>7917885
>are you really alive
nta but i literally haven't felt alive in years anon, at this point i'll literally try anything

>> No.7918754

>>7855205
Suisei steals an apple from (You)r apple orchard and begs you to punish her in some way for her transgressions! Instead of taking advantage of her like it seems she wanted you to you just make her work in the fields! Even Suisei is defenseless against the alluring charms of a simple farmer!

>> No.7918944

>>7918754
And then you make the horses, pigs, bulls and dogs take turns raping her.

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>>7918944
Boy, that escalated quickly

>> No.7919209

>>7918754
>Be octanillionare farmer with thousands of acres of land
>24/7 grindset
>Dumb whores keep trying to steal your semen to get your wealth
>Trying to suck your dick in your sleep, 'accidentally' getting stuck in the apple trees, trying to steal the cum from the apple jar
>Sigma farmer does not care, continues to farm apples
>Eventually threaten legal action against them because of their constant harassment and trespassing
>Blackmail them into working the fields
>Free slave labour
>Profit

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>>7919046
She asked for it
https://files.catbox.moe/2kr832.mp4

>> No.7919393

>>7919209
>the cum from the apple jar
'Scuse me????

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>>7919209
What is the correlation between the apples and cum?

>> No.7919661

>>7919393
>>7919463
Maybe he leaves apples inside cum jars to marinate and add more taste?

>> No.7919975

>>7919661
Let's stop this discussion right here right now lest we summon the Ringo piss engineer.

>> No.7920004

>>7919975
I'm actually curious how far he's gone.
If he's here, please report.

>> No.7921018

>>7873737
I was waiting for this and you delivered it well! Good job and I await the next chapter.

>> No.7921025

>>7917464
For the record, I will absolutely read it if you do write this.

>> No.7921211

just a small, hopefully motivational post, but my wedding fic is almost done, and I should be able to post it in the next thread.

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>>7921025
Thank you, Anon. I've never written smut before, and right now I got inspired to write another Fubuki story, but if my hornyposting ever reaches criical levels, I'll try my best to write some nice, fluffy smut.
Have a Foobker.

>> No.7921409

>>7921211
Remind me, who's the bride?

>> No.7921495

>>7921409
(you), obviously

>> No.7921557

>>7921409
Archive Anon

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>>7921409
she said she wasn't your wife, but only a friend. now the tables have turned and you see her smile. Here's a small excerpt.

>With a soft exhalation, you lifted the veil and just like the first time you met her, your heart skipped a beat. Soft, aquamarine eyes stared at you as you unveiled her. Those eyes, gentle like the sea invited you to drown in them. Her soft cheeks were given a pinkish tinge as her eyes met yours, and her lips curled into a smile as you take in the view of your bride, Shirakami Fubuki. Your own eyes glisten, and your hands tremble as you're overwhelmed by your own sensations. What did you do to deserve someone as beautiful as her? What did you do in your previous life that allowed you to be with a woman as great as Fubuki? Did you sacrifice yourself, promising to meet in this life, to always be a part of her, as her you? You don’t know. But in those ocean green eyes, you saw your present, future, and forever with her. You loved her, more than anything in this world.

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>>7921896
Anon, I... I kneel...
This is what I've wanted to read for so long...
Thank you, Anon!

>> No.7922507

>>7855205
this thread has been lead astray, we must return to our roots. Therefore, I request a story about (you) abusing Fubuki

>> No.7922628

>>7922507
Only if said "abuse" involves petting her head, stroking her ears, hugging her gently, kissing her and telling her how much (You) love her.

>> No.7922666

>>7922628
then punching her in the gut and giving her a black eye while your children watch

>> No.7922695

>>7922628
Don't be that guy.

>> No.7922797

>>7922695
I can't be anyone else, that's who I am baby.

>>7922666
Literally Satan. Nice trips though.

>> No.7922830

>>7922797
>I can't be anyone else, that's who I am baby.
Hijacking a prompt because you don't like it is literal faggot behavior

>> No.7922871

New thread
>>7922846

>> No.7922978
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>>7855205
Link is going on a big and arduous adventure as usual, but for some reason a big tittied human (and other women) have decided to do all the work for him, while constantly calling him cute.
and being the silent protagonist, he can do nothing but comply with this

>> No.7923057

>>7904514
I've been here! Don't kill me off just yet!

>>7895511
Sorry anon, I'm incredibly horny for continuing the story but just in a rut bigger than my horniness. I'll snap out of it, eventually.

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