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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>7651138

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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.7690903
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>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.7691010

stories posted last thread
https://docs.google.com/document/u/1/d/e/2PACX-1vT3ixtXiytdMjRS14YJdx5r0sD2HLLN9MU7jGoJUcpyKLDftbDiTrNWajPqFdVKfORmcwbUJsYrJOHX/pub (already in archive)

>Imagine being friends with an certain arctic fox that teases you at every turn until you finally snap
You collapse to your knees, tears streaming from your eyes. You couldn't take it anymore. Every day, every goddamn day you'd go to class and she was there to torment you. Mocking you, teasing you, bullying you. You tried asking her to stop, asking her why she was doing this to you, what you did wrong to her, but she would just laugh in your face and prance away.
It was too much, it was all too much. You didn't want to face it anymore. You made sure the makeshift noose was nice and tight on the doorknob before slipping the other end over your neck.
You could feel the sleeping pills kicking in. Just once you wish someone had been nice to you, but it's probably for the best that you end it here. Clearly the world hated you, so all you could really do is leave it all behind.
You feel a tightness around your throat, but don't mind it so much as you drift off to sleep.

Your limp body hangs silently in the room. It would be hours before anyone came looking.

It was 3 days before the school announced the passing of a student. The name was withheld at the request of the family and all classes observed a moment of silence at the tragic loss of a young life.

Fubuki stared at the empty seat. She had never seen him hanging out with anyone and always looking glum, which is why she did her best to interact with him. And now he was gone. If only she had been more open? She wondered how it happened, maybe she should take flowers to the family...

That night she was lost in thought, thinking of how she'd never see him again, how fragile life was, every moment precious. Her childish daydreams about him confronting her, asking her out, romantic dates and stolen kisses. All of it, smoke blown away in the breeze. Then in her pointless web surfing she came across a news story. "Young Student Commits Tragic Suicide."
Were things really that serious for him?

The following day the school held an impromptu assembly.

"Hello everyone. My name is Kathy, and I'm here to talk about bullying. Has anyone here been bullied before?"

The stream starts. She shakes the thoughts of the past from her mind as her loading intro plays. Some days were harder than others, and she knew that was true for her audience as well. To bring respite to their weary lives, to give them a smile. To pay penance.

She shakes her head again. Dwelling on things doesn't change them. One can only move forward. She switches from the loading screen to her room and greets the viewers warmly. Chat responds back kindly, bringing a smile to her. Donations with greetings come in, wishing her well, asking how her day was.

"Will you be my wife today?" one asks, and she reads it out.

"No, no, no, no wife..."

I don't deserve love

"...only friend! Friend!"

Please be my friend...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbjfyhUGcRs

>> No.7691050

which chuuba would have a horsecock though?
Snuffy is the only one I ever seen with an equine avatar

>> No.7691193

>>7691050
Comedically?
Take your pick of the flatties.
I'd say rushia if only because the logical conclusion to the pettan jokes if she was a futanari would either be her having an absolutely tiny micropenis or if she had an absolutely monstrous one

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>>7690903
Kanata finally gets her hands on one of those TENGA things that Holomems keep mentioning to her. She examines it thoroughly but can't quite figure out exactly what it is for. (You) decide to help her understand how it works by making her clumsily masturbate you with it.

Alternatively, Kanata is a futa and decides to stick her dick in the enticing hole, and experimenting around with it.

>> No.7691298

>>7691244
Kanata is a futa but also your GF and you opt to share the TENGA by DPing it together while kissing.

>> No.7691320

>>7690903
Kanata goes on a rampage, punching people who think she's a futa and screaming about how her vagina belongs to Coco.

>> No.7691350

Here's an Ametori fic that I've been working on
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT0Vdk8qD-rw2a84S-EF4VvFnGXWl9KAjWE9Cav-wIEuv7wdVCRJoSDqMI7wGO2-B0Vg0mECcFMcAhO/pub

>> No.7691373

>>7691350
>>7690897

>> No.7691394

>>7691320
Nuh uh her vagina belongs to me. Her ASS belongs to Coco.

>> No.7691486

>>7690903
>>7691394
Anonoshlong and Cocock team up to destroy tiny Kanata

>> No.7691521

>>7691486
the massive cocock towers over your pittiful excuse of a dick and kanata instantly decides to kick you out so she can have fun with a truly impressive mast

>> No.7691522

>>7690903
trying to rape a chuuba but she's way too into it. So cool forced sex quickly turns into okay consensual sex. She gives you her number but you don't plan on calling her back.

>> No.7691565

>>7691521
You see, with Coco's cock being so big and strong, it loses out on speed and maneuverability. My smaller cock is sure to succeed with its superior speed and dexterity.

>> No.7691685

>>7691565
dont kid yourself anon, coco's monster cock is the true pinnacle of dicks. hard enough to shatter diamonds, large enough to gape the ass of gods, and thrusts powerful enough to pierce any cervix (even that of a pure, virgin angle). no amount of speed or dexterity can compare to the sheer pleasure brought about by cocos thrusts

>> No.7691713

>>7691685
and with that final horny post i must retire to bed, it is late and i must rise early. goodnight lovely anons, wherever you may be.

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>>7691320
>>7691394
>>7691521
>>7691565
>>7691685
Cocock will always win

>> No.7691849

>>7691751
>Dismissing the viability of dex builds
C'mon now anons

>> No.7691911

>>7691849
This is just a roundabout way of admitting you have a small cock

>> No.7691945

>>7691193
>tfw Rushia is literally incapable of jerking herself off with her small hands
>she's so prone to rage because of blueballs
>she leaves cracks on her desk after slamming it with her dick

>> No.7691990

>>7691849
Dex builds are for major faggots. The only way to go is full strength till you can one hand your massive Fume Knight Ultragreat Sword

>> No.7692118

>>7691849
>>7691911
>>7691990
When will you STR and DEX fags learn that Faith is the only true build that the player is intended to play

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>>7692911

>> No.7693578

I dont like the smug look of the story anchor desu

>> No.7693597

>>7693578
I thought it was one of the most tender and loving pics of her which is why I chose it

Better than the cropped porn the other bloke started posting in my absence. Not that I don't appreciate someone taking over.

>> No.7694056

Fubuki is overrated

Make more Ko'one stories

>> No.7694125

So what are we working on writeanons?
Bonus question: what story do you anons think has had the best plot twist or shocking plot development?

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>>7694056
Hmmm....

No. No, I don't think I will.

I love her and being in this thread for so long has only made it worse. A month ago I would never have said something like 'love'. It's difficult for me to focus on writing anything else now.

>> No.7694307

>>7694172
Letting Fubuki nuzzle into your chest as she hugs you! Feeling her fox ears tickle your nose as you hold her close! Kissing her forehead and telling her you love her!

Don't you feel that way when you think of your foxfriendwife?

>> No.7694318

>>7694125
The best plot twist or most shocking development? I couldn't possibly answer that in good faith, as I've read a LOT of excellent stories in the archive over the months, and undoubtedly many of them have partially faded from memory.

I can answer that the most interesting idea recently was Ride - the non-smut half, anyway. It was gorgeous.
Some of the fics that I can clearly remember feeling pain over were the marine tragedy fics - Hidden Sea Buried Deep, Salt and Shadow, Sail into the Night - and of course the Menhera wrangler ending.

I'm most looking forward to Cover High, that Coco smut archiveanon is working on, and anything from the Holopocalypse anon.
If Hag Orgy anon finds his motivation amidst his sea of troubles, I'd love to read that too.

>>7694307
This post has done critical damage

>> No.7694624

>>7694125
Attempting to smash through my writer's block through sheer stubbornness.

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>>7694125
I should really get started on Holocalypse part 5, but lately I've had this burning desire to make Migos straight. I might get that out of the way first depending on how I feel.
>>7694318
Hey man, I'm really glad you appreciate my works.

>> No.7694939

>>7694125
Head empty, brain stuck, rotted think, brain dry, imagination scatted, no thoughts, processing ovened, 4head pied, Frontal lobes back blasted, skull cummed, Medulla unmedullad, Anal-expulstion

>> No.7694951

>>7694939
anon...?

>> No.7694973

>>7694878
Of course, dude. You're a great writer. I really enjoy the Holopocalypse series and Just a little crazy, and about anything you submit I enj--
>lately I've had this burning desire to make Migos straight
LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.7694994

>>7694939
oh no... he's been watching vshojo...

>> No.7695306

Someone do me a favor and roll a D6. It'll be awhile before this comes into play, but it's been on my mind.

>> No.7695312

>>7694125
slowly slowly doing the Shion hatefuck fic(feat Aqua later on), but general lethargy/burnout has been overtaking me. need to find the motivation to get it up again, as much as the idea of manhandling the kusogakis turn me on.

>>7694318
Thanks for the kind words on the menhera wrangler series. hopefully the smut parts hold up just as well as the sad parts.

>> No.7695327

>>7690844
>Saruei Edition
>go to rentry
>ctrl f Saruei
>no results
I'm going to murder all 20 IPs in this thread.

>> No.7695328

>>7695306
2

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>>7695328
Oh, that'll be fun. Thanks.

>> No.7695404

>>7694125
Decided to actually go back and work on 'Captive' again (The Ayame sex dungeon one). Adding a prelude and fixing up the story as a whole.

>> No.7695465

>>7695312
>hopefully the smut parts hold up just as well as the sad parts.

I nutted hard to the Fubuki smut you released. It was sort of difficult at first, though, since I couldn't associate lust with the series given I know how it ends.
Nutted plenty hard to the Suisei smut though and still re-read it occasionally, last time being 5 days ago. It was released way before the rest of the series so it gets a pass on the emotional wreckage check.

>>7695327
Don't be so hard on yourself. It's not us, anyway. We've just got one very dedicated bad egg. Still, if you want to contribute a fic of your oshi, feel free. I can guarantee I at the very least will read it and it might even generate interest in her here.

>> No.7695494

>>7695404
Oh, wow, that's piqued my interest. I'm not familiar with this work - is she your captive or are you hers? Either way sounds hot as fuck.

>> No.7695511

>>7695494
You're her captive.

>> No.7695540

>>7695511
Can't wait to see it when it's done, anon!

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>>7690903
Your this poor sod, and your mother is forcing you to go to the family reunion. You do your best to avoid her, but eventually your mom drags you over to meet your "famous" cousin. Leaving you two alone, your cousin asks why you're acting so weird and you blurt out everything.

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https://youtu.be/9BAz3-E96fs

>> No.7695843

>>7694973
Thanks, you help keep me motivated Anon. In case you missed it I posted an Amelia story a couple threads back if you’d like to read that as well.
Also uh, it’s Holocalypse; no ‘po’ in there.

>> No.7695860

>>7695306
5

>> No.7695888

>>7695327
Blame OP, not us

>> No.7695907

>>7695843
Sorry, I shit you not I mess it up every time I try to spell it. This time got past the internal quality filter.

>>7695809
I don't know why Cover sees swimsuits like Jews see pork sausages from Germany yet they let stuff like this through.

>> No.7695931

>>7695907
>been messing it up every time i mentioned it
FUCK

>> No.7696016

>>7695907
>>7695931
Nah don’t even worry it’s fine. My fault for picking such a weird name

>> No.7696072

>>7695860
Sorry Anon, it'll have to wait. Strange bedfellows await in the future, though. Actual spoilers.
I was bored one night and decided I wanted the next chapter following this to make use of the party system again, this time without a chance to roll none by including Ina as a potential choice for a 1D6 system now that she's been introduced. Strange circumstances make strange alliances. Anon just so happened to roll Ina.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTnq8qn2PpwNzyw_mGs7Sd8m144UxZoPCKV_AunO_kcNnkuE-z9-h5cGwe31VccXvQr25WflgkEkkkD/pub

>> No.7696138

>>7696072
Now there's a twist.

>> No.7696188

>>7696072
Damn. From a leader-based perspective I would've taken Coco.

Of course from my own biased perspective I would have immediately taken Fubuki

>> No.7696299

>>7690903
Reposting these Kurokami prompts from last thread.

Your constantly friendzoning childhood friend Fubuki introduces you to her new roommate - her cousin from far away, Kurokami Fubuki! She seems cold at first, but theres something about her that draws you in... as if she's promising something that the arctic fox refuses to give... A week later, Fubuki peeks through the crack of Kurokami's door, and makes awkward eye contact with her, currently riding (you) like a race horse.

Fubuki reaches a breaking point from constantly having to fix the other Holomems messes and turns into her alter ego, Kurokami - not giving a fuck about anyone or anything anymore. It is up to you and your willy to show her that she is not just needed, but loved, too!

Alternate spin on the first one: Your friend Fubuki has a secret: she really wants to get into your pants, but is too shy and pure to actually go for gold. She tries to game the system by cosplaying as her *cough* supposed cousin, Kurokami, and seduce you that way. Shenanigans ensue, as she tries to uphold the character while impaled on your massive member!

>> No.7696326

>>7696188
Coco's not had much in the way of luck. Even now, Ina gets to get her grubby little tentacles all over her man. Cocobros, this can't be happening...

>> No.7696377

>>7694307
Focfriendwife love!

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ok i wrote Ride and that was fun
but what do I write next

>> No.7696927

>>7696893
Take a look through the prompt archive and see if anything interests you.

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>>7696927
thanks Anon

>> No.7696981

>>7696893
Typically I don't start writing until I feel like writing something. However, if you're hurting for ideas, you can always ask the thread. After all you get is requests for Fubuki, try checking the prompt archive for new ideas.

>> No.7697047

>>7696893
Aqua

>> No.7697145

>>7696893
Anon is picked up from school by a mysterious scarlet haired woman who insists she's a friend of your mothers. Seeing no reason to doubt her, she takes you with her...though the hotel you find yourself outside is very much not your house. As you're taken inside and the woman - Ms. Houshou, if the receptionist is to be believed - manages to get you in her room, you're forced to endure every single bit of innocence you have being forcibly ripped away as you're graduated into an adult prematurely by means of her fucking you senseless.

>> No.7697627

https://youtu.be/4zXwfvv8fdY

Prompt:
Matsuri gets a cumbath in 600 thousand people's worth of semen.

Or:
Matsuri makes you jerk off in front of her while she touches herself.

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>>7697627
>That audio
MATULI PLEASE
PLEASE GOD MATULI FIVE ME TEN MINUTES
NOT EVEN TEN I'LL CUM AS FAST AS YOU WANT JUST PLEASE! PLEASE!! I CAN'T FUCKING TAKE IT ANYMORE
MENHERA EROTIC! MENHERA SEXY!
GOD FUCKING DAMN IT THERE'S NEVER ENOUGH MATSURI TO SATE THIS LUST

>> No.7697797

>>7692118
> miracle builds
Yeah, for some people it may be more cost effective to wait for a miracle.

>> No.7698045

>>7697627
As usual, Matsuri lights the fires of my loins when nobody else can.

>> No.7698333

Aqua 3rd Anniversary and new song really giving me the urge to write a fluff fic about her now.

>> No.7698391

>>7698333
Funny you should mention that, it's giving me the urge to read a fluff fic about her

>> No.7698953

>>7698333
please do

>> No.7699090

what if
and just hear me out
what if
chuubas in fighter jets

>> No.7699168

>>7699090
But Anon, Ace Combat already exists.

>> No.7699176

>>7699090
Ace Combat with chuubas? I would profess my undying love if a writeanon picked this up.

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>>7695465
Gee, I guess Suisex really does activate a hidden desire within us all. Thank you once more for your kind words.

>> No.7699183

>>7699090
YES LIKE ACE COMBAT FUBUFOX CONCURS

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>>7697627
god, the part about her asking if they fap to her, gives off strong /ss/ vibes to me

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>>7698333
I have never goslinged so hard for Aqua before but fuck tonight is making me feel things for her. Even more than Fubuki in fact.

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>>7699208
I NEED TO MARRY THIS RETARD

>> No.7699238

>>7699090
Ame uses a fighter jet to bomb a small village in Africa, and is eventually found and arrested. You are the detective assigned to interrogate her. She tells you that she did nothing wrong, and that the bombing was for the benefit of humanity.

>> No.7699251

>>7699238
lmao, this sounds hilarious

>> No.7699394

>>7699168
>>7699176
>>7699183
yeah, I may have been watching fubuki's AC7 playthrough

>> No.7699446

>>7699208
Even the dislikes went from 400 to 178.
The antis just wanted their Aqua GFE again.

>> No.7699478

>>7699446
Why did she even have antis in the first place?

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>>7699090

>> No.7699560

>>7699478
Nothing special, no super yabs. She's popular, weak-minded, and has a bad habit of giving her detractors too much attention.

>> No.7699624

I like being able to write fucked up smut then turn around to make cute fluff with no one knowing what crimes I've committed

>> No.7699656

>>7699624
please release the fucked up smut
please

>> No.7699666

>>7695404
Holy shit, forgot about that one.
From what I remember it was pretty good, but I can see where adding more to he begining of how the Anon ended up in Ayame's sex dungeon as well as more to the ending would make it a better story overall.

>> No.7699760

>>7699197
matsuri and /ss/, can you imagine how hot it would be?
even better, rushia
god i cum

>> No.7699837

>>7699760
I've been desiring Matsuri /ss/ for ages. Maybe our time has finally come, bro...
I'd write it myself but I'm already in other projects, please undastan.

>> No.7699935

>>7699208
How do I write a marriage scene? I've literally never attended a wedding before much less a japanese one.

>> No.7699991

>>7699935
Have them crush some glassware underfoot, then ride into the sunset on the back of an elephant.

>> No.7700053

>>7699935
Don't worry even in Japan they just fuck that to doing their own wedding ceremonies and do it western style.
Like seriously there's a reason there's an idiom over there of Born Shinto, Married Christian, Buried Buddhist.

>> No.7700165

>>7699666
Yeah I remember it was well received but that's why I wanted to do it properly this time. I feel like I wrote that fic very lazily and it was a surprise that people even liked it.

>> No.7700190

>>7691350
This was really sweet. Though it could've been better with more breaks, and you fucked up the grammar a bit. AmeTori zoo date was a very good idea!

>> No.7700430

>>7691486
But Coco has two of them because she's a dragon. She doesn't need you to DP Kanata

>> No.7700440

>>7695907
>why Cover sees swimsuits like Jews see pork sausages
The issue is with YouTube being a little virgin bitch. Cover has no issues with it but they can’t risk youtube slapping down channels

>> No.7700538

>>7695907
Cover literally allowed the fucking young jump swimsuit cosplay. They ain't afraid of swimsuits they're afraid of youtube.

>> No.7700588

>>7700440
Especially since you know Marine did eat two utterly out of nowhere bans in the last year+

>> No.7700631

>>7700588
I think that's irrelevant - the bans were totally out of nowhere and they strike chuubas regardless of popularity or affiliation, so it's unlikely that they're content-related as well.
In short, they'll happen regardless of how family friendly Cover aims to be.

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>>7699760
>come on you can tell me if you fapped to me, no one's gonna find out
>I noticed the way you stare at me and immediately look away when I turn my head
>I even know its you who lives right across from me, hiding behind the window to peek on me in my bedroom
>I was purposefully putting on a show for you. So I think its only fair if you show me something too right?

>> No.7700769

Miko screamed against the gag and, despite being tied to the chair tried to get away from the burning hot brand. Moona just smiled as she touched it to the flesh of her arm. "Now, ladies, what did I tell you? Pekora is mine. Stay away from her. Or else." She plunged the brand back into the coals and turned back to Kiara, sitting on the Spanish horse. Weights were tied on her ankles that painfully pulled her down into the triangular piece of wood. Tears filled the phoenix's eyes and her breaths came in shallow gasps. She squirmed, trying to stop the pain in her crotch and hips "What's wrong, bird? A little uncomfortable? Well, all your talk of 'I love you Pekora-senpai' made my little Peko uncomfortable." She picked up a spiked paddle and slapped her across the face with it. It clanked off the bridle that Moona had fashioned to keep Kiara from trying to bite her tongue off again. Blood splattered into the nearby brazier and sizzled. "Disgusting bird, you're making such a mess!" Moona slapped Kiara's exposed torso and breasts a few times with the smooth side of the paddle as punishment. A rattle from behind caused Moona to turn and see Miko had slumped, fainted again. "Faq!" Mocked Moona and rose, going to a small refrigerator. She removed a syringe of steroid and approached the Shrine 'Maiden' grabbing her forearm. Miko jolted awake before the needle pricked her skin and screamed around the gag, shaking her head. Moona dropped her hand. "No?" Miko shook her head again and Moona slapped her. "THEN STAY AWAKE!" Miko sobbed and looked through blurry eyes at Kiara, her nude form writhing in pain atop the wooden torture device. 'Why?' she asked herself again 'Why do we deserve this? For loving Pekora?' once again she wailed and, this time, Moona punched her in the gut. "Shut up! Filthy bitch!"

>> No.7700801

>>7700769
Paragraphs

>> No.7700929

>>7700801
Yes it is a paragraph! I'm glad your English studies are going well, ESLchama! Any a distinct section of a piece of writing, usually dealing with a single theme and usually indicated by a new line, indentation, or numbering. Is a paragraph! Good for you! But, unfortunately you did pluralize it. It is not a paragraphs, it is a paragraph. It's ok, you'll get accustomed to writing in English eventually!

>> No.7700801,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>7699446
Aqua does GFE? when even? She is so fk autistic to do something like that

>> No.7701006

>>7700929
ogey

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>>7700929

>> No.7701089

>>7700929
Your spiteful retorts always make me chuckle, whoever the fuck you are. HoloEN abuse story guy, right? I just wish you'd put as much effort into making your stories readable as you do shitposting.

>> No.7701108

>>7701006
Actually, ESLchama the word is okay. It's pronounced OH-kay. Try it out loud, and don't be embarrassed! OH-kay! Okay! You can do it I know you can! You're smart, you already know what a paragraph is!

>> No.7701162

>>7701089
They actually are very readable, you just need to be able to move your eyes properly! However, if you

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>> No.7701273

>>7700190
Thanks for reading it! The reason why the grammar is fucked is because I was really drunk when I wrote it and I didn't proofread lol.

>> No.7701308

Okay, my head isn't so empty now. The shota in an apocalypse story I mentioned in the previous thread is turning into a shota in a Lamypocalypse story. That is, if I don't get another bararinga moment

>> No.7701330

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Miko

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>> No.7701333

>>7701308
Will said shota be wriggling up Lamy's butt?

>> No.7701362

>>7700929
>Any a distinct
>...or numbering. Is a paragraph!
>unfortunately you did pluralize it
Projecting SEA

>> No.7701403

>>7701330

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>> No.7701495

>>7701308
Acquire bunch of Lamy Mommys.
[straight shota intensifies.]

>> No.7701505

>>7701403
Abayo!

>> No.7701532

>>7701403
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>> No.7701616

>>7700929
Well it's funny when ESLs fight each other.
Although I Think the guy who made >>7700769
is a phoneposters and needs to be relentlessly mocked for being one

>> No.7701635

>>7701532
NO! STOP IT TAKESHI! YOU CAN'T KEEP REDDIT POSTING, ALL YOUR IPS WILL BE BANNED!

>> No.7701640

https://youtu.be/ODTxNmp3VMk

>> No.7701751

>>7699837
I swear every time I see Matsuri involved, there's urination somewhere.

>> No.7701775

Jannies cleaned that up pretty quick, didn't they?

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>>7700929
Typography is an art afterall, and you're the one submitting diarrhea to an exhibit.

>> No.7702090

>>7694624
Doesn't work, only hurts and makes you feel bad. Kick back and relax, it'll come to you another day.

>> No.7702091

>>7701829
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>>7701899
I'm only making it diarrhea because you insist on it. Tell me, what did you prefer? Your reddit way making each word it's own paragraph and separating it with 'Le' or the proper way of making each post a paragraph so one doesn't need to worry about indentions that don't work on this website to begin with? Because, and I'm going to be honest with you, you're the one one bitching about formatting because you're the only one stupid enough not to be able to read it.

Though, to be fair, I am more stupid than that because I'm actually paying you -a troll from reddit- mind and giving you attention. So, fuck, jokes on me, isn't it?

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>>7700664

>> No.7702224

>>7701899
So, basically what I'm getting from you is that you're an ESL and incapable of reading properly unless something is formatted in the incorrect way, yes?

>> No.7702412

>>7702091
jesus christ they weren't lying when they said you turned into a bitter piece of shit

>> No.7702618

>>7702412
I didn't turn into anything, anon, I was always like this. I write abuse fiction for Christs sake. Never had any fluff. What the fuck makes you think I wasn't bitter? If it makes you feel any better, It's because I'm pissed off at myself and just lash out at whoever troll or shit poster. I take bait easily and willingly because I just don't care about my appearance or how off-putting I come across; I already know I'm a piece of shit so I may as well act it.

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>>7699760
>>7702220
>>7699197
There's a burning flame beneath my skin. I need to get this out. A rough outline of a story I may or may not write. This is a two parter. God forgive me. Matsuri DO NOT read this.

>The story begins with a journal entry - there are several throughout the story, indicating the passage of time. Anon, a Xnd grader, aged X, is to write a journal over the summer vacation.
>Anon excitedly writes that he’s very glad that summer is here, as it means he gets to spend much more time with ‘big sis’ Matsuri, his highschool-aged caretaker who often babysits him due to his parents working long, long hours. He more or less lives with her, at that point.
>He describes in awkward, innocent detail about how happy she makes him. He even sheepishly admits that one day he'd like to marry her. He told her as such and she said okay.
>The entries go on to describe Anon's days with Matsuri. Playing, sleeping together, bathing together. He even got to kiss her. It was an 'adults kiss', she said.
>The journal entries abruptly stop a few days after that, after Matsuri had gotten more and more handsy, as indicated by his entries. They pick up three weeks past, the only hint being one phrase.
>"Matsuri did a bad thing"
>Cut to the day of said bad thing. Matsuri asks Anon if he wants to play a game called 'rope escape'. Anon is of course interested in a game, especially if it's with his lovely big sis!
>Anon is taken to his bedroom, where Matsuri hurriedly ties him down to the mattress by his wrists and ankles. Anon gets to work trying to escape them, but finds the ropes far too tight. He insists Matsuri is cheating...and is stumped when he sees her beginning to disrobe.
>As he questions what she's doing and why she's getting naked, Matsuri roughly lunges at the boy, kissing him deeply. Violent, violent /ss/ occurs. For three hours, Anon is subject to the whims of Matsuri - every single dark desire she's ever harbored is unloaded upon the boy, using him as a dummy with which to pleasure herself. His cries of confusion and anguish eventually go silent. She continues to abuse him long past this. It isn't until she's caught in the act by Anon's mother that she finally ceases.
>Matsuri is sentenced to fourteen years in prison for her crimes. Anon, mercifully, is given access to a therapist to try and work through his feelings, and is given back his journal. It was confiscated and copied for use in court against Matsuri.
>Life proceeds. Anon's grown quiet and terrified of the world. But, luckily, he's finally made a new friend. Her name's Aqua. She's nice...and what's better, the niceness feels genuine. He can relax around her.
>Cut to early highschool. Aqua has finally confessed her feelings to Anon, who awkwardly reciprocates them. He admits that he does love her in the same way she loves him, even though he has trouble expressing it and letting her in. His heart has been closed off since Matsuri. Gradually, he learns to open up more and let her in, feeling a genuine attachment to the girl.
>Everything is fine until they have sex.
>Despite his best efforts, Aqua simply cannot make Anon cum. Everything just reminds him of Matsuri, though he keeps this to himself. Months and months of railing Aqua mercilessly without proper, soothing release begins to grate on him. She's too submissive. She's too quiet, she's too...willing. Something is missing. He begins to think he has a problem, sexually. Matsuri crosses his mind.
>It isn't until he thinks of Matsuri's attack on him during sex with Aqua that he's finally able to cum; a breathtaking, leg-shaking orgasm at that. Aqua is glad.
>Except he said Matsuri's name at the climax.
>Aqua knows exactly who Matsuri is. When confronted with what he's done - what he's said - Anon has a breakdown. In the arms of his lover, he goes over every excruciating, nightmarish detail of what he's been dealing with, his struggles, and finally his perceived impotency. Aqua quickly becomes overwhelmed. At a loss for words, she merely holds the crying boy in her arms, which only makes him feel worse.
>Aqua desperately attempts to become more dominant in the bedroom, but fails miserably. When Anon realizes it's her attempt at trying to appease him despite it not being at all in her nature, he feels sickened to his stomach. Eventually, he resolves to break up with her. Aqua is adamant that she can do better for him, that they don't have to separate, but in his heart, Anon knows that this is for the best. That she doesn't deserve to need to do this for someone.
>Rumors spread throughout the school of the break up. How Aqua was inconsolable for weeks. It doesn't take much thought to peg you as an abuser, even if Aqua always rushes to your defense. The rest of high school is a nightmare.

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>>7702772
>Move on to college. Anon has become estranged from his parents, living in an apartment a city over to attend school. Deep down, he resents his mother for finding him that night. If she hadn't, Matsuri would still be out. What's more, he's become the sort of 'college bicycle', turning to cheap flings to try and find anything resembling an emotional or sexual connection. Nothing clicks. It always comes back to Matsuri.
>The idea strikes him, then. Matsuri. It's been years and years since she was incarcerated. He never once thought to try and find her.
>He uses his connections as the victim of the crime to track the woman down. Uses the excuse that he wants to confront her in prison as a way of closure, some stupid shit like that. With the address to the prison she's in, he quickly makes his way there. At the visiting area, he waits patiently as she's called and brought out.
>Natsuiro Matsuri - notably more mature - is brought to her end of the plexiglass, escorted by two guards. She looks tired. More than tired - the spark in her eye that she had as a teenager has all but been snuffed out completely. When she sees exactly who's there to visit her, it takes a moment or two of processing to realize exactly who she's looking at. The clarity washes across her face in waves of deep horror. She sits, and shakily reaches for the receiver. She has trouble meeting Anon's eye.
>Expecting to be berated, Matsuri is instead spoken to in a soft, gentle voice, much to her surprise. Anon asks her how she's been. The response she gives comes out as an agitated whisper, something along the lines of 'what do you think?'. Still too scared to be fully angry. It isn't until Anon mentions how beautiful she still is that she becomes completely flabbergasted.
>Confused, she asks him what he actually wants. She expected him to just yell at her for twenty minutes then leave, like his mother does every so often. Anon, having already come this far and having dedicated himself to this path, quietly and carefully explains how badly he needs her. He tells her of his relationship struggles. His inability to connect with others, his inability to cum...everything leading back to her in his mind. He tells her how he thinks about what she did to him every single day, and how he hates her - not for what she did, but for showing him a glimpse of heaven before leaving his life forever. Matsuri sits in silent shock as Anon continues to explain his feelings towards her - for her - until he finally, for the first time in years, feels at peace. He asks her when she'll be released. She tells him it's a manner of months away - she's managed to get some of her sentence reduced for good behavior.
>Anon makes her a promise. He renews his promise to marry her - much to her furthered confusion - and tells her that when the time comes, when she's free, he'll be there for her, to take her away from this nightmare. Matsuri agrees in a daze.
>The months fly by. The day of Matsuri's release comes. Her own parents abandoned her long ago - no one besides Anon is there to greet her. Shuffling out in boring plainclothes, far from the orange she donned in her youth, Matsuri is swooped off her feet by Anon, who brings her into a tight embrace almost immediately. The girl lets out a confused yelp as she pounds at his back in embarrassment, and as he lowers her, he can catch a tiny glint of life back in the girl's eyes. He offers to let her live with him, should she want, until she can find a place on her own. Matsuri reluctantly agrees, and the two depart.
>Anon, however, cannot wait that long. He stops at a hotel roughly halfway between his home and the city and beckons Matsuri inside. Confused - and admittedly a little afraid that this will be her (in her mind deserved) end - she follows him in. As soon as they entire the room, Anon attacks Matsuri, pulling her into a deep kiss that mimics the first one he ever shared with the woman. Though Matsuri makes an attempt to fight it, to tell Anon what she did was wrong and that he should hate her, he questions her own feelings. When faced with the prospect that she's been imagining it since that day as well, Matsuri freezes on the spot, unable to defend herself against the claim.
>Almost step for step, Anon and Matsuri take their time, carefully recreating their shared 'romance' from years past with no mistakes - the acts burned into their mind so clearly they don't need reminding. For hours, the pair of them are able to vent their years and years of frustration in one another's arms.
>The story ends with one final journal entry a year after Matsuri's release. He wonders if it would be in poor taste to send Aqua a wedding invitation.
Fin.
I don't care. I want to be fucking destroyed by Matsuri. Irreparably damaged in a way that only she can do, that only she has use for after the fact. Fucking slit my throat.

>> No.7702939

>>7702772
>>7702809

anon, I remember this prompt. this is exquisite, to say the least. the sheer torment oozes from it. I hope that this comes to fruition, and I eagerly await it.

>> No.7702940

>>7702772
>>7702809
Honestly, this doesn't necessarily even need to further writing. I was mesmerized from the word go. Poor Aqua, poor Anon. I shouldn't feel happy for the ending but I'm relieved there is, at the very least, peace of mind for Anon, even if the abuser does technically win in the end.

This is how a lot of actual sexual abuse victims feel, isn't it? It's kind of scary to think about.

Excellent read, anon. Thank you for writing this out. It was great.

>> No.7702957

>>7702809
I like this but I hate that Aqua has to suffer for Anon to find his happiness.

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>>7702939
I was revisiting it again in the shower with a sleep deprivation boner. I figured I should at least make some sort of outline. That 'did you fap to me?' clip really, really fucked me up.
>>7702957
I love Aqua too, which is why she has to suffer for this. Aqua is the perfect example of the type of person who would be hurt by someone with such horrible trauma. The idea crossed my mind and I initially felt horrible, then committed to it. I'm sorry, my little onion. You don't deserve this.

>> No.7703397

>>7702809
>He wonders if it would be in poor taste to send
Aqua a wedding invitation.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH you bastard, everything up to here was totally fine. I'm mad, why am I so mad?

>> No.7703416

>>7702772
>>7702809
God I want to read this so badly. The outline is already great.

>> No.7703455

>>7702772
>>7702809
Holy fucking based. Writeanon if you somehow manage to write this out you'll have a made a fucking legend of a fic. This expanded prompt/plot summary sounds amazing. I hope you can actually write this. Matsuri bless.

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>>7702772
>>7702809

>> No.7703545

>>7703397
Because it feels insulting. Anon still cares for Aqua as a friend and she feels the same, but even he knows inviting her woukd probably be a bad idea. At the same time, she IS his only friend.
>>7703455
Maybe in the future when I finish with Holofantasy or need a break. It'd be a fucking long one.

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>>7702772
>>7702809
woo boy....that's something.

>> No.7703872

>>7703545
Anon... If you aren't able to write this out, allow me to take the torch in your stead. It may not exactly be up to your standards, but I'll try my best.

>> No.7703903
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It's a day late, but I got some unexpected shit in my life come up, which killed my motivation to write for a few days. Luckily, it's good now.

Here's the third and final part of Grab As Much (As You Can)!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSmx0X3bcD3c3ELemMg7T4B95URB7DtLVk-BBOF0cUddtpCBb5HX9HiH2pPlU36l5_F2icRohr6m3we/pub

>> No.7703955

>>7703903
>>7690897

>> No.7704032

>>7703545
Oh yeah thinking about it; this fic would have to be like 5 chapters, at like bare minimum.
Splitting them content wise it would be like, Diary prologue, Matsuri's ruining, highschool and aqua, the confrontation with Festival, and the big fucking smut scene. Writing this will be a tall order but goddamn does it sound amazing.
Best of luck to you.

>> No.7704103

>>7703903
Absolutely degenerate
I love it

>> No.7704737

>>7704103
The first scene was the one I genuinely thought I might die because of

>> No.7704811

>Investments actually are down 25%

God gives his silliest battles to his funniest clowns I guess.

Guess I gotta let out some steam by wanking to one of the new stories.

>> No.7704840

>>7703903
Looks like they were wrong in saying the third is always garbage cause this one was an incredible end to the story. My only complaints is that it stopped right when things were getting interesting but I'm fine with that since it ended on a great note

Love the NTR scene at the end of calling the (girlfriend?) over the phone while Anon was balls deep in Mori. Also I really liked the wholesome...? ending of Mori and Anon staying together even after the concert. Though I am curious as to why the (girlfriend?) decided to put up with raising the kid with Anon, maybe she got mindbroken by the call?

>> No.7704862

>>7704811
It's a temporary loss and as long as you haven't hit rock bottom, you can stand to make it back with a little luck.

>> No.7705007

>>7704811
Also, remember to declare what you've nutted to, since all authors apparently enjoy the knowledge other men are jerking off to stuff they've made.

>> No.7705050
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>>7704840
Thank you! I was worried it'd be disappointing so that's great to hear.

Originally, Mori was gonna call the gf up to her room and confront her there, saying how she's lost Anon but since (You) are such a nice guy, you wouldn't want to leave her out in the lurch so she can stick around if she wants. But I felt that was little too mean-spirited for the finale I had thought of, though I guess you could imagine she had that conversation off-screen.

>> No.7705481

>>7705050
The girlfriend looks over in horror as the man she loves plows another woman with all his might while confessing his love for the other woman. Eventually the girlfriend gets turned on at the display and she eventually masturbates while crying as she helplessly watches, unable to comprehend why a girl like her is getting off on this. As Anon empties his balls in Mori she's completely mindbroken to the point of agreeing to take care of the child in Mori's place, even agreeing to act like the mother in front of others[/spoilers]

Y-yeah who would want that...

Nah but seriously great job on the finale

>> No.7705855

>>7705481
Oh, I had meant for the character to do, not for the reader, but thanks again!

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>>7690903
Matsuri is live, being lewd and asking for viewers to fap to her while throwing in that she is not getting many superchats today; the chat is flooded with akasupas and she pretends to be overwhelmed with joy. Later in the stream, her boyfriend comes in and starts fucking her while live, Matsuri cuts the camera to above her torso so you can't see what's going on but she is clearly bouncing up and down while moaning. The viewers think it may be a stalker and warn her that she may be in danger! She cums many times in a row and after the stream she says she is in fear for her life and that she called the police, changed the locks to her apartment and that she never had a boyfriend!

>> No.7706735

>>7705050
Does the daughter know who's her real mother?

>> No.7706895

>>7706735
Yes

>> No.7708008

>>7706895
Would have been better if she thought anon's ex-girlfriend was her mother

>> No.7708533

>>7690903
I am once again asking.
Suisei has been on edge lately because she's gained weight, and none of it has gone to her chest. (You) don't think it's that bad though, because it's all gone to her ass instead.

>> No.7708575

>>7708533
Didn't know Pierce Brosnan visited /wg/.

>> No.7709323

>>7708575
Considering what /wg/ can also stand for, it's no surprise.

>> No.7710164

>>7703903
Great story! I love the turn from semi-forced sex to actual love, it was good to see Mori actually cared about >You.

That girlfriend though, Christ. I dunno if she deserved this, even if it was in the prompt. And are Mori and Anon happy?

>> No.7710315

>>7710164
Thank you!
Yeah, it was a little rough for her. Mori and Anon are quite happy, though the distance does hurt a bit, as it obviously would.

>> No.7710453

>>7708575
Ah hell nah. Don't lump me in with those architect fags. I just want to imagine Suisei exactly as she is aside from maybe like 10 pounds added to her ass.

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>>7690897
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS44P_dWwZkeS8Zye55UGn1C__Rw2FhBZyld2mOUDEJ1mvNDIHGvy3E0uFk6h-2FKn6gVxEaYQSPw5Q/pub

Horse cock time! Human on Aqua no horses. Picked up from 'Fucking Aqua in The Ass'. I need to improve my smut so criticism would be great

>> No.7711854

>>7711100
thats an interesting way of setting up the story

>that ending
ouch anon, ouch

>> No.7711883

>>7711100
Do I read it now or is this intended to be full on smut? Cause I'd rather save it for a wank later and then comment on it if it's smut.

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Hey readanons, what am I working on?

And what chuubas out there in the big wide world are the least deserving of a story?

>> No.7712235

>>7712208
How should we know? We aren’t mind readers. Either write the story or don’t.

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>>7690903
Matsuri is streaming but her black boyfriend walks in by accident, notices she is streaming and walks out. After the stream, Matsuri completely snaps on him saying that he should be more careful and that he could have ruined her career. He quickly shuts her up by slamming his 12 inch BBC down her throat, turning on her stream and filling her with his black seed many times while the fans watch.

>> No.7712312

>>7711883
it's smut

>> No.7713023

>>7712208
Every chuuba deserves a story, in the sense that I can't think of one that shouldn't be written about. Whether we can find a writeanon who also happens to be infatuated enough with x chuuba to write a story is another question.

>> No.7713246

>>7713023
Chris? Not the one who fucked his mother, but the one who screwed someone out of money and made a big drama
We just don't know anything about her to properly write a story.

Also, you can't write a story about something that doesn't yet exist.

>> No.7713582

>>7713246
It's also really hard to write something about someone like her that wouldn't be in bad taste. Whatever woukd be written would either be based off the incident or be something entirely fabricated without knowing who she is.

>> No.7713712

>>7713582
>that wouldn't be in bad taste
lets be honest, has anyone here ever cared about that?

>> No.7713735

>>7703872
I fell asleep more or less immediately after that post. You've my blessing if you want to do it.

>> No.7713797

>>7713712
Especially if it's written about Chris as well. I'm sure someone could write the most deplorable shit about her but no one would even care enough to contest it because no one cares about her.

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>>7708533
>>7710453
at least post some ass to intice writers

>> No.7714024

>>7713951
Man if you're gonna say that you should've posted an actually nice picture.

>> No.7714124

>>7713953
bros we are getting called out...

>> No.7714185

>>7714124
>we

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>>7714124
>no anon vtuber roleplayer gf (male)
bros...i...i'm not gonna make it...

>> No.7714285

>>7714124
Oh no fellow /vt/posters, We got too cocky bros.

>> No.7714302
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>>7714193
You just have to try harder anonchama.......

>> No.7714347

>>7714124
oh no... how are the lamys taking it?

>> No.7714563

>>7714302
One day bro. One day...
>>7712208
Lulu paizuri for the sake of extracting your DNA.

>> No.7714679

Im sorry for this. It didnt have to be Korone, but it fit the theme.

https://pastebin.com/WGcFLPe8

>> No.7714718

>>7714679
403 forbidden. Is this NSFW, Anon? Pastebin automatically hides NSFW pastes.

>> No.7714744

>>7714718
ah damn, didnt know that. Never use the thing. Any other similar thing I can use?

>> No.7714759

>>7714744
Use google docs and use the publish function.

>> No.7714764

>>7714744
If you put it into a Google Document and use the Publish function under the file tab and copy the link therein, it creates a small page for it we can see that can't be traced back to you, afaik. It's what most people here use.

>> No.7714909

>>7714759
>>7714764
Thanks. Lets see how you like it.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSLf5cwUa-nroqplj-7tQFKc3TRYBWZuG4M3gyRiH2LAqrBda8ixx_qYyk8rhtBYUVPsjgEHyoJFyY0/pub

>> No.7714963

>>7714909
Good story anon, I hate it

>> No.7715024

>>7714909
Mayhaps I'm a bit confused. Was it out of mercy? Or was Korone going to attack him for some reason?

>> No.7715026

>>7714909
But why?

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>>7714909
good story anon. How many mental illnesses have you been diagnosed with?

>> No.7715121

>>7714909
Is this based on the prompt that went something like "Having to kill your animal chuuba after she loses control of her animal instincts"?

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>>7714909
>>7714963
>>7715024
>>7715026
>>7715039
No clue what it is but it may be a good to post this

>> No.7715215

>>7715121
I would like to add to that prompt: Bloodborne but with beast chuubas.

>> No.7715224

>>7715024
Mercy kill.
>>7715039
As free as air, baby.
>>7715121
Actually, no prompt, but If its so similar consider it fulfilled.

Maybe ill write some for the other chuubas. I shall see.

>> No.7715357

>>7703903
Nice, you finish it. If you don’t mind me asking, any progress on tainted love.

>> No.7715409

>>7715215
Which girl would be the doll that lets you level (fuck)?

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>>7715357
I wish, man. Every time I open it I just stare at the paragraph I've written and blank out.

>> No.7715474

>>7715409
Your oshi, to everyone but you. She only lets you level (Lovemaking).

>> No.7715503

>>7715409
Fubuki.

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>>7715409
Is there any doll joints art of Hololive chuubas? That shit is hot. Or maybe something like pic related?

>> No.7715541

>>7715503
No she's an animal chuuba so she'd have lost herself to her bestial instincts during the hunt. She'd definitely be a boss you have to (s)lay though.

>> No.7715560

>>7715541
No, she'd be the doll that lets you level (fuck).

>> No.7715561

>>7715540
I'd assume there's Roboco art like that

>> No.7715571

>>7715409
Whoever is most stoic.

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>>7715409
I mean... who do you think would be most fit to take care of a baby squid

>> No.7715759

>>7703903
I had just assumed the other girl in the car was like J-chad or management or something . Thats kind of fucked up making her help raise the kid. Maybe the ex-gf can get her revenge by making the daughter like her more.

>> No.7715825

>>7705050
I had just assumed the other girl in the car was like J-chad or management or something . Thats kind of fucked up making her help raise the kid. Maybe the ex-gf can get her revenge by making the daughter like her more.

>> No.7715957

>>7715825
Even though I was one of the ones trying to workshop the prompt's ending into making more sense back then, it's still definitely hard to reconcile that she would ever stick around.

>> No.7716298

>>7715540
Roboco. While often only just having it being arms and knees down she's the one you got. Just check her official models Even her latest wedding dress design has that

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>>7715561
>>7716298
Yeah but Roboco doesn't get much in the way of good lewds and even if they are made, nothing close to what can be considered doll porn.

>> No.7716751

>>7716606
Well outside costume reveals Roboco's like 100% YOU WILL PLAY APEX and has just godawful numbers.
Numbers is directly tied towards number of fanart and R-18 content. Or just make her a straight up fleshie which is sad.

>> No.7716833

>>7716606
Wasn't this one snuff or something? The guy dies in the end after getting gangbanged by like 20 dolls.
>>7716751
Fucking shame. Roboco is hot as hell but her content isn't that great to watch and she gets little R-18 as a result.

>> No.7716848

>>7690844
i don't watch her but i do want hentai of her

>> No.7716880

>>7690903
Ui mama walks in on (you) and your gf Subaru trying to have sex. Instead of putting a stop to it or anything like that she feels like it's her obligation to join in because, according to her, Subaru is doing such a terrible job at it. Include Ui criticizing Subaru at every single thing she does and maybe have (You) react way better when Ui shows Subaru how to do something properly, making Subaru feel like she can't do anything right.

>> No.7716909

>>7715453
What's holding you back.

>> No.7716920

>>7716880
Oyakodon onegai...

>> No.7716928

>>7716848
Hey buddy, I think you got the wrong door, the horny thread is 3 pages down.

>> No.7717040

>>7716928
We're practically sibling threads, come on. This is for written horny rather than visual. Luna's Assistant was done by someone who makes their home there.

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>>7716909
Just don't have the motivation to really start rewriting it again, sorry. Maybe I'll get the passion back for it soon, but in the mean time there are other things that I do actually have the drive to work on.

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>>7710453
Based. I'm imagining pic related, maybe slightly bigger.

>> No.7717309

>>7717040
anon literally half the archive is sfw

>> No.7717344

>>7717052
Hey didn't you say you would make a epilogue for Grab As Much (As You Can)? Or am I misremembering it?

>> No.7717369

>>7717309
>SFW is still dominant
Wow, color me surprised! And I know, I realized I worded that rather poorly after the fact.

>> No.7717396

>>7717344
I don't remember saying that, no. The prompt said something about an epilogue, which was the time skip with having a daughter.

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>>7715453
>>7717052
Jesus Christ, just fucking kill me. I’ve been waiting for that fic.

>> No.7717497

>>7717430
NTA but that's just how it is sometimes, man. Sometimes that drive, that spark, just goes poof. Up in smoke, evaporated. It's fucking awful. At least they've still got the drive to write, if not that; give it some time. The spark can be reignited just as easily as it's lost - it was there to begin with. Sometimes a change of scenery - of works - is enough to let the creative juices marinate a bit.

>> No.7717888

>>7717052
Take your time Anon, you aren’t obligated to write anything you don’t want to write

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>> No.7719032

>>7718739
>Tfw you'll never milk Watame's "way too big for her height" shortstack tiddies and make a fine sheepsmilk cheese out of it
I'm at my fucking limit

>> No.7719068

>>7719032
wallacechama...

>> No.7719087

>>7719032
The next best thing is writing a story about it anon

>> No.7719163

>>7719032
I want to be pressed into Watame's fluffy breasts as she pets the back of my head and tells me that everything will be fine in sweet, intimate whispers.

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>>7702772
>>7702809
IT'S NOT FAIR
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
IT IS NOT FAAAAAAAAAAAIR
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
WHY WASN'T I BORN A YOUNG BEAUTIFUL BOY IN THE NEIGHBORHOOD OF NATSUIRO MATSURI
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
MATSURI PLEASE
UUUUUUUWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>> No.7720197

>>7719966
You never had a chance to begin with. Matsuri has a black boyfriend and he fucks her with his BBC every night, your tiny white cock would never compare. The game was rigged from the start. He comes in mid stream and gives her kisses and fondles her small almost non existent breasts while you bunch cluelessly send her superchats and talk about how much you love her.

>> No.7720248

>>7720197
this is /wg/ not /israel/, fuck off racemixer

>> No.7720255

>>7720248
Don't respond.

>> No.7720528

>>7714909
jesus, I said a while ago I wanted another doog fic but I didn't mean like this

>> No.7720560

>>7719966
It may be picked up sooner than you think, Anon. That other Anon expressed interest in doing it if I couldn't get around to it fast enough. Hold onto hope. I've been wanting to get around to writing at least the journal portion but I should probably finish the story I'm working on first.

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>>7720560
I'll try to flesh it out too. I know fuck all, but I'll try. I have a deep, burning, screaming, unhinged and uncontrollable passion for /ss/

>> No.7721282

>>7720560
I've got my own Shion hatefuck fic to write, but I've saved your outline so it may be a little longer, but there is a chance it will be done, just needs some patience.

>> No.7721345

>>7690903
(You) are just an average Australian teenage boy. You like to eat vegemite by the jar, throw boomerangs at koalas and kangaroos, and playfully unlatch people from their ground harnesses causing them to fall into space. One day your parents tell you that you'll be hosting an exchange student from overseas. They tell you that you'll need to treat her like a sister, since she doesn't speak the language very well and will probably have a hard time making friends. They also tell you not to be mean to her since she's most likely at least a little bit autistic, so no classic Australian bants. When you finally get to see her for the first time you're met with a short blonde girl with a pretty big pair of booba. Everything goes fine at first, she seems shy and very polite, and of course she has a little trouble with the language. The two of you even do develop a little bit of a sibling relationship. That is until one day she walks into your room without knocking and catches you in the middle of jacking off. Turns out the shy and polite thing was all an act, and unless you follow her orders to a T she'll make your life a living hell.

>> No.7721629

>>7721345
>Stealth femdom tsundere Haachama
Writeanons PLEASE I BEG

>> No.7721767

>>7721260
I believe in you!

>> No.7722767
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brain, I beg of you
let me finish this story

>> No.7722829

>>7722767
sure

>> No.7722888

>>7690903
Begging and pleading with *insert chuuba here* to please just suck your dick once and after hundreds of times she finally agrees. What she doesn't know is that you dusted your cock in cocaine and that she's incredibly susceptible to addiction.

>> No.7723885

You are an intern or low level staff at Cover, and due to all the shota lovers that comprise the Holotalents, all males have to have beards so as to appear as old as possible. You fuck up while trimming your beard and have no choice but to shave, revealing your babyface. You go into work the next day as normal and find out why the beard rule had been implemented...

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>>7716606
if you seriously think that RBC can't get any lewder you need to rewire your horny energy. I think she's perfect as The Doll insert for a Holoborne fic, with fully "upgradable" parts, should you wish.

Also Ina as Moon Presence?

>> No.7724344

>>7724190
>Ina as the Moon Presence
>Not Moona
Come on it's in her name.
Besides Ina has always been the priestess.

>> No.7724532

>>7724344
Ina would probably work better as the Micolash replacement. But yeah Moona as the moon presence seems obvious.

>> No.7724555

>>7724344
ah shit you're right. sorry my head's not in the right place recently. I guess she could be someone related closely to Kos(or some say Kosm)

>> No.7724610

>>7724532
>Sprinting around chasing a terrified Ina through a school trying to rape the madness out of her

>> No.7724714

Please anons, I haven't played BloodBorne yet (fudging PlayStation...), let's keep all discussions to Dark Souls 1-3 only! No Sekiro or Demon Souls either. Thanks :)

>> No.7724765

>>7724714
you should at least play Sekiro, it's really good

>> No.7724783

>>7724714
Do you have a pc with good internet connection? If so get psnow and play it.
also
>Extremely popular game thats been out for like 6 years
>Still afraid of spoilers

>> No.7724792

>>7724714
Sekiro is a huge inspiration for stuff for me. It's a really fun game. Try it out.

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>>7724765
>>7724783
>>7724792
Brazilian, buying any of those games would literally be the same as paying rent, please undastando... It was a miracle that I even managed to get Dark Souls 2 and 3 with all DLC's honestly.

>> No.7724877

>>7724845
Do you have a decent PC, at least? You can just pirate Sekiro. It has no online features (that you should sincerely care about) so you won't miss out on anything.

>> No.7725010

>>7724877
Hahaha... yeah... decent PC. I have an Intel Core i5-3210 that can't run anything that isn't more than 11 years old. That's good enough for Sekiro right?

I have an Xbox One, that's literally the only way I get to experience big games. Getting a good PC here is virtually impossible.

>> No.7725043

Alright so
The Doll = Roboco, pretty obvious why
Cleric beast = Fubuki, the one that introduced you to all of this
Father Gascoigne = Noel maybe? fellow hunter/warrior that has succumbed
Vicar amelia = ??? idk amelia because same name would be funny though
B.S.B. = Mel because vampire
Witch = Shion/Rushia

>> No.7725068

>>7725010
Poor Brazilchama...at least you have quality entertainment at a decent price (free*) here.
>>7725043
Vicar Amelia is obviously Korone. They're literally both dogs.

>> No.7725110

>>7725068
>Korone
Ah yeah why didn't I think of that? I was hyperfocused on the whole nun aspect that I couldn't think of any Holo connection.

>> No.7725150

>>7725043
Oh I forgot
Micolash = Ina
Moon presence = Moona
if anyone else wants to think of other ones go ahead, I'm sweepy.

>> No.7725711

>>7725043
Arianna = Choco

>> No.7725917

>>7725043
I'd say make Rushia Adella and with Choco being Arianna like >>7725711 said it would work.

>> No.7726232
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Here's another big one, courtesy of me, the guy who did The Girl of Emptiness, that big horror story about Ina.

This one is heavily inspired by the trailer for Hololive Error, so be sure to give it a watch.
https://youtu.be/iHekCdRagR8

I tried to adapt as much as I could and wrap it around as coherent a plot, which was pretty difficult, especially because I wanted to include (You) in the story as well. I had a bit of trouble moving this one from my word processor to google docs, so if any phrases seem to be missing, be sure to say something. Otherwise, please share your thoughts on the story if you have any! I'm often too sheepish to reply, but commentary on my stories really makes me happy.

Anyway, here you go! Your Endless Summer With Sora

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTHVCkUKZCDoGHYbFIT-_HNKyWW9-Uv6zAgQ7S6_L6SPKLwH-ARFKnFujUR5oYxNvoVdO1UfiLW2slP/pub

Post story (spoilery) comment:
I know you were expecting a horror story (so was I, honestly) but the more I looked at Sora at the end of the Error trailer, the more she felt like a tragic heroine rather than the monster. I hope you were able to warm up to her, even while you were waiting for her to pull a knife out on you.

>> No.7726454

>>7726232
>>7690897

>> No.7726575
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>>7726454
Oh yeah, I knew I was missing something. I get overexcited when it comes to making the post.

>> No.7726911

>>7726232
Poor Sora. That was fun anon, it was creative and kept me hooked till the end. I just have to mention a tiny spelling mistake. subleached desks

>> No.7726938

>>7717430
Same

>> No.7727548

>>7715715
Ina, definitely Ina

>> No.7727558

>>7715715
probably the one that knows how to take care of children.

>> No.7727595

>>7727558
So none.

>> No.7727611

>>7727595
Yeah.

>> No.7727832

>>7722888
Eating cocaine is much less effective than snorting, and given how little you could dust on your cock before it would become visible isn't much. How about something like injecting a drug into your prostate, so she gets addicted to your cum? Would that even work?

>> No.7727904

>>7727832
Why not just smash her in the head with a hammer? Similar effects to long-term narcotics addiction and none of the time or money wasted.

>> No.7727915

>>7711100
It was a very fun read. I feel bad for Anon though, he didn't even get to fuck Aqua.

>> No.7727930

>>7727832
Wouldn't nicotine be a better idea? People use nicotine patches, so if even skin surface application is effective, surely oral consumption would be sufficient.

>> No.7728031

I can feel my 8k futa smut is coming to a close, probably willl end at 9.5k. I have no idea if it it's gonna be wankable as there is no (You) but hopefully it can serve for something at least, even it's just to better my future writing. I wonder if I can drop it tonight or if I should go through it to write in more descriptions.

>> No.7728035

>>7727930
But we need to get her addicted from just one blowjob, and nicotine isn't addictive enough for that.

>>7727904
That would defeat the purpose of getting her addicted. If all we wanted was to simply fuck her, we could just slip in the rape drug/tranquilize her and fuck her. There's no point in that. We want her to be hopelessly addicted to our cum, we want her to come back to us by her own choice. Also preferably without getting caught by the police because she went missing and they traced it back to us

>> No.7728518

>>7728035
I mean coke nowadays is laced with all kinds of stuff so I think the coke bj idea is good

>> No.7728567

>>7727558
Pekora?

>> No.7728588

>>7726232
Anon this was fucking beautiful.
Sora being cursed to be unable to make new friends is such a good nod to her daisenpai status. Also I kind of read the spoilery comment first and that kind of colored my reading into thinking that Anon was going to die from opposing the curse after sora gave the explanation of the curse. Glad it didn't end like that.

>> No.7728643

>>7726232
that was very wistful, anon.

Sora's dilemma reminds me of Monika

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>>7690897
Well then, it is finally done. 9K words. My second smut, so it might not be perfect especially with fluffing out certain parts with more description and less dialogue, but I think I did a decent enough job. I hope you can enjoy Coco and Mori fucking the shit out of the cute and funnies. To think it all started from this single post...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSUy87d6vSzO4QZdmIy00yIz_LtYIf9Zo3PAFKWWkGf6fMtCqTC_2h-BhfU2lguvUHP2XigMJSkX39m/pub

Tags: NSFW, Coco, Gura, Shion, Mori, Futa, Long(?), non-con at parts.

>> No.7729650

>>7728859
That was a good read. I gotta ask, cuz I wrote something at a similar word count, how long did this take you to write?

>> No.7730829

>>7690897
>>7714909

>> No.7731255

>>7724610
> chasing Ina down the corridors of the school, trying to not get mad from her puns

>> No.7731311

>>7726232
That was a very nice story there anon, I really liked it. My only complaints is the lack of dialogue for (You)r part but I could see being an it artistic choice to not do so.

The ending of continuing the dream even after knowing that it could not last was incredibly bittersweet. It makes me wish that Sora would somehow overcome the curse to live a normal life even though it's probably impossible. Let's just hope that Sora gets to have her fun before it all eventually ends.

>> No.7731376

>>7731255
>Ahh, Pekora, or as some say Pekola. Do you hear our rrats?

>> No.7731459

> to ascend as a hunter and then as an infant Ancient One you should screw everyone to get more sex echoes

>> No.7731522

>>7731459
Yes, and the giant pig will be Haachama. Woeful Fatty, therefore time for Visceral attack

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>>7726232
This almost caused Sora to become my oshi. Good read anon, thank you for your contribution

>> No.7732925

I didn't know this was a thing. I used to write shit all the time but I didn't save any of it, just spammed links in threads. It's usually not sincere, if that matters, but here's the only one I've found so far.
https://pastebin.com/atTaZWsW

>> No.7733164

>>7732925
really testing my limited JP reps here. still made me chuckle though.

also
>>7690897

>> No.7733291

>>7732925
Watashi wa nihon wo wakaranai desu

>> No.7734193

I wanna get raped by a cute girl!

>> No.7734246

>>7734193
I want to get raped!

Don't really care by who!

>> No.7734285

>>7734246
getting raped by a middle aged land whale wouldn't be fun

>> No.7734314

>>7734246
That one anon is gonna dress you up as a chuuba and go to town on you then.

>> No.7734319

>>7734285
Yeah, didn't really think about that. I take it back, at least while burgerland still exists.

>> No.7734344

>>7734314
Don't just tell them my plans

>> No.7734411

>>7729650
It was created June 25th with a "steady" 500 words every couple of days to 1k words, and then two days with 1.5k. Then again I'm no standard, i just finished a drawing I had in the works since September of last year.

>> No.7734432

What are some good (reverse) rape stories in the archive? There doesn't seem to be a tag for it

>> No.7734470

>>7734432
That's subjective. Generally anything with abuse and nsfw tends to be RR. At least an 80% chance, anyway. It would be good to have it tagged though, I suppose.

>> No.7734505

>>7734432
It's under the tag 'noncon'.

>> No.7734545

>>7734505
Nah, noncon is a fairly newer tag in comparison to some of the shit there since March if I remember right. The older stuff needs to be updated to have the tag.

>> No.7734828

>>7724190
Those feet I'm not a footfag but dam that's some solid action on those feet.

Might be more the entire robofucker aspect though getting me going.

Also did the Hag Orgy ever get finished?

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