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This is the writing thread, for all things VTuber fanfiction. Our works cover a wide variety of different stories ranging from greentext shitposts, full-length adventure novels and smut that’s been tuned to capture (almost) every fantasy. You can check out the three years' worth of stories we’ve written in the archive below: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>75175182
(Where we discussed Oneeshota Fauna, Lappy GF, and lots of advice on improvement)
/wg/ rentry: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.75298726
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Story Anchor
Post em if you got em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap. There were two stories posted last thread:

Squirrel in Heat >>75207935
Tags: Risu, heat, greentext, insert pov, wedgie

Part of the Crew, Part of the Ship >>75285158
Tags: Marine, Aqua, bondage, fantasy, wedgie

>> No.75299111

this bread is plain, but it's also warm and fluffy. the type of bread mom would bake. a type of bread anyone can return to and still happily enjoy with butter or jam

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Ahhh. Perfection.

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>> No.75301107

>>75300696
Shiorin!

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We had some productive discussions last thread. Keep the ball rolling. Say a thing about a fic you've had on your mind.
Ask to workshop some fantasy or other story elements you might be working on.
Talk about that WiP, ask for motivation, advice, or even just vent about it.

>> No.75302457

>>75302008
Will maybe continue mine tonight

>> No.75302750

>>75298716
Hell yeah.

>> No.75304516

Today, I shall write.

>> No.75306103
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>>75298754
A fic where you are constantly sexually harassing Suisei to put her in the most embarassing situations you can find.
Meanwihle, she holds onto her pride with bleeding fingertips

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>>75306103
How about instead you are her weapons training partner, or instructor if you need a power trip or something, and through your exercises you always do things like
>Flipping up her skirt with your weapon whenever you find an opening
>Smoothly navigating through her defenses and placing a flat hand on her breasts that you hold just a second longer than you need to before pushing her flat on her ass
>Unclasping a button or buckle every time she fails to land a hit on you
>side stepping to come behind her and comb your fingers through the back of her hair
Every deliverance of punishment makes her red hot with both embarrassment and disappointment in herself for not being able to match you. Outside of the training you are a normal, respectable guy to her through your daily lives and jobs.

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>>75306705
>I assure you Suisei this is all a part of our training.
>My interest in you is purely as a fellow weapon wielder.
>That time I embraced you as we kissed under the stars, then proposed we elope together while we were out on patrol was absolutely just a part of training.

>> No.75307389

>>75306705
But i don't wanna be a respectable guy.
I want to be a sexpest so She's even more confused when she likes it

>> No.75308131

>>75306103
How the fuck is she balancing on her off centered hand?

>> No.75308225

>>75308131
With a lot of effort

>> No.75308245

>>75308131
She has a weight attached to her foot on the other side

>> No.75308271

>>75298716
Missed opportunity to say Miograte when ready

Can’t find the last thread to reply to but the suggestion makes sense. I’ll rework the story since I have more ideas now. Writing on the phone on a business trip is not the ideal way to get words down.

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>>75308131
She's just that powerful

>> No.75308342

>>75308271
The previous thread is linked in the OP

>> No.75308527

>>75306705
You could make it training for weaponless combat to get your hands on her more often.

>> No.75308814

>>75298754
Something involving

- (You) being a premature ejaculator
- Drugs that'll help "enhance" your sex drive and not make you cum too quickly.
- Drugs may or may not have two drawbacks that while they aren't life-threatening, it REALLY is bad for your dick and balls.

>> No.75309703

>>75308342
Driving, anon.

>> No.75309816

>>75308814
>bad for your dick

Yesterday I learned that cumming back to back in the same whack-off sesh fucks with your urine flow.

>> No.75309834

>>75298754
Lonely hag chuuba gets a young, naive assistant and pushes the boundaries of professionalism and his duties to train him into the perfect husband.

>> No.75309925

>>75298754
>>75298800
Requesting another Risu wedgie fic since Wedgieanon is the only one writing and squirrel ass got me acting unwise

>> No.75310085

>>75309925
Yeah sure in a bit. What do you want to see?

>> No.75310547

>>75310085
Bikini.
Rip the bottoms off.
Shove in her mouth.
Stuck the rest of the day covering her pussy with her tail.
Kobo gives?

>> No.75310832

>>75310547
Kobo eh? What’s the motivation for it?

>> No.75311120

>>75310832
Ate her ice cream? Something childish. Kobo is a child.

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>>75308527
Hand to hand is part of basic combat training. So yes, you could land a grope or two more easily during that training too. I might as well spit out a setting for this too while I'm at it.
>Employed by the noble house Azki, whose heir fancies herself a savior of sorts, finding you and several other street urchins at a young age and offered you a chance at a better life. The catch? Eternal loyalty and servitude to the house under the guise of willing employment.
>All things considered, it was probably the best life you could have drawn; you were educated, fed, and got a roof over your head
>Suisei was another street urchin taken in later out of pity or some long term investment plan no one could truly pretend to understand
>While she didn't have your natural aptitude for combat, she was blessed with a wonderful voice, perhaps Azki was able to see that somehow? They say she is quite the songstress herself.
>Regardless, you and Suisei are molded into the ideal servants, but it is a never ending road to make sure you are both ready to answer any call to action you must

>> No.75311663

>>75311120
Can Risu also be a bit of a brat here so she deserves it? I’m imagining she’s deliberately pushing Kobo‘s buttons cause she can

>> No.75312070

>>75311663
Stealing someone's ice cream is mean.
Risu taking an obnoxious, exaggerated lick in front of Kobo sounds funny though

>> No.75312075

>>75311500
AZKi commanding you and Suisei to breed so that she can spoil your child as an aunt

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>>75312075
Can we at least make it a little more cute than that?
>Despite all your NOT-flirting with one another, neither you nor Suisei admit to your feelings, and are actually outspoken about how your only aspirations lay in serving Azki to the best of your abilities
>Suisei finally breaks down during some girl time with Azki, in addition to her ordering her to be truthful with her, and admits that even if she were willing to enter a relationship with you, that it could get in the way of her duties. If it came down to choosing to stop a blade coming for your throat or Azki's, she's not sure she would choose to save her master.
>This actually delights Azki to hear, but she doesn't show it outright, instead she makes it a personal mission/hobby to push you and Suisei together
>Suddenly ALL of your errands and chores are done alongside Suisei, forcing you to accompany her on some of the tasks designated for the women, something that frustrates you to no end.
>[Insert some overarching conflict that brings you and Suisei to finally admit how much you adore and respect the other]
>After officially entering an relationship, Suisei is the one sexually harassing YOU on the daily
>Light taps against your ass with her foot as she walks by
>A gentle cup of your sack under the feint of preparing to throw you during combat practice
>Stealing your underwear
>Meanwhile Azki admires her handiwork with a smug smile and looks forward to meeting the next generation to serve her proud household

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>> No.75312964

>>75298716
She will never be young again. She's an old, hairy, saggy hag.

>> No.75312984

>>75298754
Nerdy femcel Mori agrees to tutor you so you don't fail your chem exam- but only if you eat her out after every study session.

>> No.75313223

>>75312928
Cute swimsuit

>> No.75313626

>>75312070
“Senpai tax” would make for a funny inversion later on of “kouhai tax”

>> No.75313781

>>75312984
And both Mori and her untamed bush stink!

>> No.75314490

>>75312984
>>75313781
>manage to make Mori cum with your tongue
>ask her to shave or at least shower for next time
>she gets flustered/pissed off and shoves your face back between her thick thighs for an immediate round two

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>> No.75316177

Live

>> No.75317200

>>75312916
that does sound pretty cute

>> No.75317232

>>75316144
slipping into the dimension where noel is a DEXfag and Flare goes
>Ok but BOWS though???

>> No.75318115

>>75317200
It is pretty cute. We can always use more of this kind of fluff.

>> No.75319998

>>75317232
Back in the bizzaro dimension again...

>> No.75320067

>>75311500
It's a fine setting, but I'd rather have Suisei in a position of power if she's going to be groped and humiliated. It's no good kicking those already down.

>> No.75320181

>>75312916
>After officially entering an relationship, Suisei is the one sexually harassing YOU on the daily
By god I am sold. I need this.

>> No.75320432

What if there was a sexual harassment circle where A goes after B, B goes after C and C goes after A (assuming three participants)?

>> No.75320636

>>75320432
Could do this with a hag, anon, and a lesbian. Anon harasses the lesbian, the lesbian harasses the hag, and the hag harasses anon. Climax of the story is them all figuring out their feelings together before having a big threesome

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>>75320432
>(You) molest Suisei
>Suisei takes it out on Aqua sexually
>Aqua takes it out on you while you're napping on the couch in the break room

>> No.75320801

>>75320636
I'm up for that

>> No.75321835

>>75314734
The fuck you staring at?

>> No.75322220

>>75320181
>Suisei unchains her libido and you suddenly have to eat a lot more red meat and drink more water

>> No.75322323

>>75320067
I'm not sure where you got the impression that you both were rock bottom. Go find a story about slapping your CEO's ass then.

>> No.75322434

>>75322323
It's not rock bottom because you have economic security, that's fair. But eternal servitude doesn't sound great.

>> No.75322869

>>75322220
>Suisei only acts chaste and modestly because her sexuality is sealed inside a magic charm
>Accidentally break the charm during a sparring match

>> No.75323890

>>75322434
It's better than starving in the streets. Anon and Suisei likely wouldn't see the binding of themselves to the house as much of a negative, seeing as they are living a better future than they could have realistically gotten if they didn't accept the position.

>> No.75324067

>>75323890
I guess it's an issue of judging by my perspective, rather than the characters'. I feel bad for unfree characters, even happy ones.

>> No.75325054

>>75322869
I mean, that implies the existence of magic. Do you want the setting to be fantastic for a one-off gag?
I mean, it could be

> you break Suisei's talisman
> she is way more mad about it than usual, it's was probably some relic passed down by her real parents
> you go and apologize and offer to repair the talisman, but she gets even more mad
> cuts all contact with you outside of strictly necessary work, acts really paranoid
> call for mistress Azki, offer your pay to be docked to repair it or something, just so she would at least talk to you
> she investigates and gently probes Suisei
> she spills everything to her about how her "desire" was sealed in there by powerful magic and now it's about to run rampant
> Azki finds the woman who swindled and traumatized Suisei into not expressing sexual desire
> about to torture a confession out of her and throw her to the religious zealots for witchcraft but returning the money to Suisei and confessing that she is a fraud would set her free
> Suisei is shocked, and Azki gently reaffirms her that feeling that is normal and even wonderful at times, wink-wink
> status quo restored, but now Suisei has to deal with the feelings by herself, without the help of a magical placebo
>Anon is just glad that the problem was solved and is none the wiser

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>>75325054
I like it as both a concept for a big ass quest, and something one-off oriented. I think the idea of restoring a woman's emotions that had been sealed away somehow is a really neat idea. You could set up almost any antagonist for it
>Swindler witch like you said
>Big shapeshifting dragon with lots of magical artifacts and just enjoys being a bitch
Or even
>Bijou at the behest of Shiori
That just got something else turning
>Have a good relationship with the local blacksmith who has been helping keeping your gear in top shape since you moved there
>This strange little gem girl shows up from time to time, they seem rather close
>Without knowing it, Bijou sapped Kaela's sexual desires from her, and the bottled emotions end up as physical gemstones that she likes to decorate simple rocks with for selling
>One look at one of those jewels is enough to tell you that there is something magically powerful about them, and any mage half worth their salt would have fucking jizzed themselves to get their hands on one
>local dickass wizard is actually using the vast magical fountain that is Kaela's silent autistic sexuality to fuel a magic that could summon a demon big enough to step on a town, or just flat out turn it into a glass floor
>Work with silly rock girl to right the fuck up she did
>Get blacksmith's sex gem back
>Breaking it near Kaela is enough to let her groove seep back into her soul
>use the rest fashion a simple ring
>propose, and before you get halfway down to one knee, kaela lifts up you from your underarms and proceeds to rock your world
>Bijou is mortified

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>> No.75327725

>>75327441
screw that suisei idea.
i want to be walmart master roshi and just molest Iroha every single day while also teaching her fantastic techniques, so she has no option to endure me sniffing her butthole or groping her tits inbetween lessons

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>>75304516
Hell yeah you shall.

>> No.75328190

>>75326304
For some ungodly reason this just makes me imagine those bottled up sexual gems being kidney stones Kaela has to painfully pass through.

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>>75328190
You're right about one thing, that was fucking ungodly.

>> No.75329243

>>75327773
>buh bubh molesting girls is bad
she can walk away or kill me if she learns sword skills.
So she doesnt do it so im free to touc

>> No.75329287

>>75329243
So if she doesnt do it im free to touch*

See? that's why im touching her

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>> No.75331514

>>75327441
Iroha's secret job was working a bakery

>> No.75331816

>>75298754
A chuuba trying to bully and tease you but failing cause she is too short and weaker than you

>> No.75332032

>>75329243
>if you want to learn my sword skills you gotta polish my sword

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>> No.75335957

>>75334632
Why so angry Marine? Some people like hags! Somewhere....Can't blame a guy for choosing a younger gal that's cute (and funny).

>> No.75336370

>>75325054
It felt like that set up implied some level of magic/fantasy to me.
>>75326304
Anon and Suisei going on a long quest to restore her emotions and desires back sounds like a fun one

>> No.75336881

>>75329243
>iroha gets molested by the swordsman that challenged her to a duel
>Lui gives him the best advice: Just fucking kill him
>But he's too strong
>So now she has to endure his pervy ways while she learns how to kill him
Make the MC an unhinged pervert and that's a good ass fic
>Iroha shaking in anger and shame as her "chair" keeps sniffing her bum

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>>75336370
I feel like you would want to be very specific about which emotion or desire it would be. I think the simplest option would be her capability to romantically love. Taking away more than that would have resulted in her being a completely dysfunctional person. It definitely offers a lot of good opportunities for heavy introspection and questioning if it is truly something she needs.
She would ask herself if the struggles are even worth it. The stories of people you meet who have both loved and lost can bring an aspect of hope and fear of the quest's completion.
>Would Suisei even still be her?
>What if she is just opening herself up to a pain that will make her wish for death?
Depending on your actions both with Suisei and with others, she will come to find her own answer to these questions and more.

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>>75327441

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>>75327441
Iofi absolutely mogged

>> No.75339641

>>75339416
train alone in the mountains for three years if you want a chance with her plush ass

>> No.75340583

>>75298726
Part of the Crew Part of the Ship V2
Tags: wedgie (that's all anyone needs to see anyway)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTajSgcOe9tVRbQmL0x-xb7XCaRS-urboYnc9f2WLoS3vBqvtOrR_wOfLuFJ3cbFdx_NsakAYzGle9r/pub

>> No.75341729

>>75340583
Way better

>> No.75342153

>>75341729
cool

>> No.75343676

>>75336881
That just sounds like Rance with extra steps
But you know what? I like it

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>>75340583
Well that was certainly something. It was easy enough to read and your setup was creative.
>Part of the crew, part of the ship
That line was probably my favorite thing in the fic.

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>>75343676
perver MC's were everywhere in the 90's but they were overhunted and are now pretty much extinct.
We HAVE to save them! We have to write molestation and then follow it up with cartoonishly violent slapstick! AAAAH I WANT TO LICK IROHA'S ARMPIT AND THEN BE KICKED INTO THE SKY UNTIL I BECOME A SHOOTING STAR AND SHE CLENCHES HER FIST WITH A RED FACE

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Can't the MC just have a strong libido and be very open to getting kinky with the girls around him? Also getting distracted by tits and ass during inappropriate times also works.

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>>75344864
I like fantasy because i can do and read about things i wouldnt do.
I dont wanna be nice, i wanna be a huwehehehe pervert that might have a heart of gold or not, who cares. Its not like this supposed mc is walking around unscathed, extreme cartoon violence is his comeuppance.

Or what? are you gonna argue that Tom and Jerry isnt beyond peak, reaching zenith media? bro they hit the cat with the hammer and he vibrated and broke into bits. Imagine Suisei and iroha doing that to me after i evaded both of their lethal strikes and i licked their navels.

Funniest shit i've ever seen

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>>75344864
No we need a scumbag type MC with a hentai power like hypnosis, or stopping time, or cum that corrupts.
Like some embodiment of pure ID that enacts his bizzare erotica fantasies on the cast of vtuber the author finds hot.

>> No.75346232

Sexually harassing Polka but all she can do is mewl, whimper and bang her fists weakly against your chest as you grope her ass and tits.

>> No.75346345

>>75346232
Reality…

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>> No.75346489

>>75346232
Polka sexually harassing you, but all you can do is mewl, whimper and fluff her ears

>> No.75346519

>>75345435
kinda offtopic but i realized why i dislike the rape revenge genre of manga/anime.

They always pull back at the last second because "oh no our poor perfect MC isnt a scumbag! they are just enacting their revenge!" instead of letting it ride. redo of a healer has, for example, him mindbreak a girl so she's his submissive waifu and author doesnt have to deal with writing something that isnt mc fellatio.

So if i were to translate it to a fic, i would say something like
>MC gets bullied and tormented by Towa and other demon chuubas
>Until he somehow gets a womb crest on towa
>its now his time to enact his revenge.
>sex with towa who is powerless against you
>she doesnt instantly fold into a shitty submissive non character, remains annoyed and mad at you but the crest compels her to obey you can also turn it on so she goes in heat
>work your way up the demon scale and make yourself a harem of devils who will FINALLY learn their place

>> No.75346669

>>75346489
>Polka gets close enough to touch you
>"Is that a banana in your pocket or are you just happy to see me?"
>she does a magic trick and it's actually a banana she pulls out of your pocket

>> No.75346752

>>75346669
>your penis is gone
>she’s turned it into a banana
>she eats it in front of you

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>>75346752

>> No.75347174

>>75346519
This is why my favorite in that genre is Bullied revenge hypnosis since it actually committed to the full mind break even when it makes the MC look really bad from a non-horny pov.
Now to pull this back to chuubas.
>Nepolabo gyaru bully gang hypnotized into thinking sexual acts are bullying for you.
>Then it becomes a mystery about finding out why they've stopped sex bullying because they've actually started to fall in love.

>> No.75347185

>>75346232
I do have Polrape in the pipeline, but it's dramatic not horny.

Though in my experience that hasn't stopped people before

>> No.75347640

>>75347174
eeeeh hypnosis takes the fun of the pushback for me.
That's why i said a horny crest.It allows for that dubious consent area that works wonders for a horny bastard.
Imagine having the girls try to shove your face away as you plap them because they dont want a kiss (since they hate you) only for you to kiss them and that making them cum

>> No.75348389

>>75347640
>horny crest
Okay this is basically unrelated but this topic of Towa, and horny crests is making me imagine the inverse scenario.
>Towa implanting a horny crest on your balls
Mostly because it make me imagine Towa trying to 'train' you into being their sex slave, and getting flustered trying to make lewd commands.
Also makes me imagine other demon chuubas being your master during "training". Like Laplus trying to do her best but driving you so horny you mating press and breed her. Or Ayame just making you cum and giggling at you.

>> No.75348564

>>75347640
I hate hypnosis shit so much, I have no idea why anyone likes it. 99% of what it does can be accomplished through mind break plots or other scummy stuff. Zoomers are too lazy to do things the hard way baka

>> No.75350099

>>75348564
Zoomers are almost in their thirties...
You're probably one.

>> No.75350431

>>75350099
Zoomers this zoomers that what about the coomers

>> No.75350717

>>75298754
sorry am a faggot (metaphorical) and delirious from meds so i will be posting a schizo prompt for the wedgiefaggot i will request. please do not mind this post
>Be (You)
>in a relationship with Botan
>Polka comes over for gaming
>funny ecchi anime moment happens
>you are laying the couch with Polka on top of you
>you have lost your pants, dick out
>handful of clown boob, her skirt riding up
>your boner against her panty-clad crotch
>haha awkward
>Botan sneaks up
>pushes Polka against you
>close enough your noses nearly touch
>your boner now pressed against her pelvis
>Botan gives Polka a wedgie
>jerking her panties rubs against your dick
>you can see Polka tearing up and going cross-eyed from pain
>your dick actually just a stretched thin cameltoe from inserting
>Botan pulls Polka's panties over her head and down to her lips
>you can smell the sourness of sweat on the fabric you're so close
>the name tag on them is right in front of them
>Polka arches her back
>hips against yours
>you splooge against her crotch
>you can only hope to God that Botan doesn't notice you just came on another chick
>Polka gets up and waddles off, most of the mess on her, not you
>look at Botan
>she knows
>she grabs your balls
>straddles you
>you gotta fuck her like right now or she'll bust your nuts like the lioness she is

>> No.75350986

>>75350717
that’s nice, anon

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>>75350986

>> No.75352261

>>75350717
The problem with the wedgie fag is that he doesn't write porn. He writes about wedgies and that's it. If you can't jerk off to fabric riding up a girl's ass crack, there's literally no reason to interact with him.

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>>75352261
yeah but what if tho

>> No.75353346
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>me, writing the dumbest bullshit prose that /wg/ has ever seen
It’s a trainwreck, but it’s MY trainwreck.

>> No.75353514

>>75353346
No truer words have been said, anon.

>> No.75353892

>>75353346
What mediocre fantasy setting are you possibly making?

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>>75333996
>Ultrashinzo Abe turns Japan into a dictatorship again
>Bruteforces laws and measures to ensure the survival and the vitality of the Japanese race
>Homosexuality becomes illegal and lesbians like Micomet are sent to prison and then to re-education camps where they're greeted by a sign with Napoleon quote "Women are nothing but machines for producing children"
>When they're released they're assigned by the state as wives to anons
>You suspect that your state-assigned holo wife is secretly trying to establish contact with her former partner

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>> No.75356073

>>75354950
Report her to the Ministry of Reproduction as she is obviously a dissident in need of further education. Then I get another state-mandated wife, I hear this one has fox ears!

>> No.75356152

>>75356073
>Hello, this is the breeding inspector. Why isn't that fox pregnant yet?

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>>75356152
She's too old...

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>>75356152
Well, inspector, I'm TRYING to make a kid but every time I bend her over, well.. let's just say I always attend our Family Planning sessions through the rear entrance.

>> No.75357193

>>75352699
I'll tame this one

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>>75357193
Taming a wild hag.

>> No.75357318

>>75356497
>>75356678
>These are not a satisfactory reasons. Orders by the Ministry of Reproduction should be fully clear, you must breed and fulfill your duty to this great nation. You'll get a 20000¥ fine this time, next time it's going to be double that. There won't be a third time, you'll be considered traitor to the Yamato race and I'm sure you're well aware what that means. Whip out that dick and get it done.

>> No.75357439

“Do your Duty, Pound that Booty”
That dumb slogan stuck with me

>> No.75357524

>>75354950
This is just making me imagine a tragedy of trying to help your state-mandated chuuba wife (let's say pekora) find their former partner only to discover it's a sting operation, and Marine was used to catch lesbians and lesbian sympathizers.
The I don't know, maybe You and Pekora get drugged up with aphrodisiacs and get locked up in a room while both of your minds melt from the heat.

>> No.75357614

>>75357524
Can that operation expand to America?

>> No.75358131

>>75357614
Why do you want Marine to catch lesbians and lesbian sympathizers in America?

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>>75357524
You get sent to Room 101, where you are forcibly made to impregnate everyone except your wife, and your Peko gets banged by the entire MiniRep
>Under the spreading chestnut tree...
>I sold you and you sold me...
>There lie they, and here lie we...
>Under the spreading chestnut tree.

>> No.75358554

>>75358131
Kill off external help for dissidents.
this is also my burning hatred of unicorns speaking

>> No.75358676

>>75358131
It's the only way to catch a certain Ordinary Sharkgirl that's evaded capture for years.

>> No.75358916

>>75354950
It finally clicked with me that the general idea of this is the perfect plot for a Helldivers H-parody. Giving Abesan the Super in his name did it for me.

>> No.75359276

>>75358916
>perfect plot for a Helldivers H-parody
I have to ask what faction would the lesbians be a parody of?

>> No.75359304

>>75358916
>Giving Abesan the Super in his name did it for me
Kek, that was unintentional ("What if Shinzo Abe was even more extreme ultranationalist on this timeline? Ultrashinzo Abe!"). The only IP was thinking about when I wrote that was V for Vendetta.

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>>75357318
Fine me if you wish, but you can't stop my pioneering spirit. I'm spearheading research into the possibility of butt-pregnancy and I'll stop for neither man nor woman.

>> No.75359749

>>75359276
I...admittedly not know much about Helldivers 2 save for that one time I hopped into a not-TSB stream. I did hear there was bugs and bots aa enemies.

Maybe the /u/ faction are terrorists/branded terrorists?

>>75359304
I had a much simpler thought process: UltraShinzo=Super Earth.

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>>75336370
>going on a long quest to restore her emotions and desires back
This is the main motivation in Horizon in the Middle of Nowhere.
The main plot is about LARPing world history of the 1600s. The two plots tie together to prevent the end of the world, since said emotions have been made into weapons of mass destruction with superpowers.
You might enjoy the author's particular brand of autism.

>> No.75360640

>>75358554
Kill yourself Rider you Schizo fucktard

>> No.75360665 [SPOILER] 
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>>75354950
>Interfering with the purest form of love

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>> No.75361767

>>75360665
>"PRIME MINISTER -SAMA, LOOK OUT!"
>Anon leaps in front of Abe and takes the bullet for him
>Anon is dying in Abe's arms
>"Anon, we'll get you help. You're gonna make it, Anon! ANOOOON!"
>Suddenly you hear a distant voice
>"What was what?"
>As your vision is getting hazy, you see a black-haired woman telling you something
>SURVIVE!

>> No.75362100

>>75352261
Well, for what it’s worth, , I haven’t had sex and I don’t watch porn, so I feel like I’d do a pretty poor job of writing sex.

>> No.75362368

>>75362100
>I don’t watch porn
wtf

>> No.75362388

>>75362100
I haven't either, and I write some pretty decent smut

>> No.75362423

>>75362100
You don't need to give details beyond where the dick is going and how it's thrusting. Just focus on the emotions and sensations, you roughly know those from jerking off.

>> No.75362508

>>75362368
Is it that hard to believe?
>>75362423
Not for months

>> No.75362524

>>75362100
You should tell that to the guys who wrote Half-Life or Halo, creativity matters more than experience.

>> No.75362603

>>75360640
Why, triggered, little manchild?

>> No.75362664

>>75362368
I stopped watching porn a long time ago, my fantasies are vivid enough (especially when imagining chuubas) and can be as specific as I like.
>>75362508
No worries, that's not long enough to forget it all!

>> No.75362839

>>75362508
yes it is

i'm going to go out on a limb and say you probably don't count written pornography because half the archive and 95% of these threads is porn

>> No.75362990

>>75361767
>A yell was heard along with the shot
>"FREEDOM FOR THE PUREST FORM OF LOVE!!!"

>> No.75363240

>>75362839
the 5% will rise up. Our goal is to take up at least 15% of the thread by the end of the year.

>> No.75363284

>>75350717
replying to myself now that my meds have worn off. Can't believe I posted this where it will stay on the Internet forever, maybe someone will do it then or wedgieguy can do just the stuff before the sex

>> No.75363467

>>75363284
Put it in complete sentences, add some prose, clarify the setting. You clearly have a mind for the scene, why to write it?

>> No.75363589

>>75363467
Because I don't think I'd be able to jerk for to my own writing. I would just end up hating the idea by the end

>> No.75364726

>>75363589
Go for it anon. I want to see your writing

>> No.75365962

Scumbag MC along with Rance tropes sounds pretty fun
>RanceAnon and his dumb servant he uses to relieve himself, Aqutan, are bumbling into town
>Come across some raiders about to abuse a poor foxgirl, Fubuki
>Anon defeats the raiders, and instead of letting them go he just fucking executes them all
>Fubuki is thankful, until Anon overpowers her and rapes her himself
>Stroll into town with Aqutan
>People are searching for a way to defeat the evil overlord Laplus
>Anon has to fight with multiple chuubas, whom he will fuck with varying degrees of consent
>Iroha is hired to stop him from defeating the evil lord
>Whole gag fight where Anon strips her of her clothes and is ready to rape, while Iroha is on cloud 9 because of Anon's skills
>"Heavens! Less weight! How come I didn't think of that?"
>Anon tries to rape Iroha, but can't, ends with him tripping and accidentally holding her hand which makes Iroha scream
>These two will form a bond with that will end with Anon's first (recognized) child
>Crescent Axe Suisei is after them because there's good money to be made from Anon's head
>Iroha jobs, her arc is based around defeating Suisei
>Fightsexual Ayame comes along, and after she's defeated by Anon and he's ready to rape her, Anon gets amazon pressed by a frenzied Oni aching for a strong child
>With Iroha and Ayame at his side, Anon faces off against Laplus
>Lui serves the chuuni brat, gets defeated, raped
>Laplus is next, gets mindbroken by dick
>Next day, Anon is sitting on a pile of gold and surrounded by his women
>Somoene knocks on the door
>It's Laplus
>"Anon! I've been reformed by your sword of love! Let us join in union and be together for the rest of eternity!"
>Lui is crying to her side, happy for her master
>Anon bolts away with his newfound party.

>> No.75366839

I enjoyed the Comet Cooking Trilogy, it was very cute.
Cynical part of me does think however that there's no woman in this world who wouldn't go "You made your choice, you chose the job over me. It's too late, Anon." I'd tweak the endind to have Anon tell Suisei that he's staying but before he's able to inform his boss of his choice, the boss tells him the news, and the rest goes as it does originally. But then again, anime girls are idealized beings that exist to provide escape from the harsh reality.

>> No.75366866

>>75361767
"Survive."

>> No.75368027

>>75366866

>> No.75368036

>>75365962
This is the Scumbag Anon side for the scumbag Hero defeats holox and cucks Laplus away from her childhood friend Anon

>> No.75368059

Uppity

>> No.75368309

>>75366839
Technically it's four parts if you count the epilogue. I'd recommend it as another part since it kind of provides the extra push the ending of part 3 needed to get the 'ordinary fluffy life cooking with suzy' thing it was going for. Though it's a bit hard to find since it's on page two of the rentry archive...
Pretty sure AA should have made this miniseries into a series archive entry at this point.

>> No.75368561

>>75368309
Oh, alright, didn't notice it before. I'll go read it.

>> No.75369084

>>75364726
Kills my libido just thinking about it

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>>75298726
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRYr9VDeQ7wRJfVRzt0AatSOQIaEpDXcznU4a4Xh0NX4wrjA0oAmkY5RgS21kdv9CEaY1ub-TnIpGj6/pub

Stray cat
Tags: Takanashi Kiara, Mori calliope

>> No.75369694

>>75363284
If wedgieanon writes the part before the sex, I'll write the sex.

>> No.75370240

>>75369343
Hot

>> No.75370296

>>75369343
Nice work, stacey Kiara and thug Mori poke at my brain in a good way!

>> No.75370427

>>75369343
You know I get that this is meant to be a femanon but I'm pretty sure this could have been Shiori with like only a bit of tweaking.
Outside of that, it's an interesting concept for a larger fic but it's not much to write home about since it's basically a prologue.

>> No.75370750

>>75370427
But would it be immensely funny if they were swapped for nerd Fauna and all instances of dialogue and monologue were changed to include a lisp?

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>>75370427
Nerissa*
But then again you could also write the same type of lesbian brainrot with Nerissa and Shiori

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>>75298754
Bae inviting IRyS out for crepes turns into her getting fingerblasted by IRyS in her room

>> No.75371876

>>75371771
This, but then you show up and IRyS helps you rape Bae anally like that one pic

>> No.75372819

>>75369694
holy kino idea

>> No.75372843

>>75370940
I got curious as to what Shiori and Nerissa’s dynamic looked like so I checked out a few clips and now I have the overwhelming urge to make out with a loaded gun. God when will it be my turn.

>> No.75373021

>>75369084
Writing a perfect scene on your first rough draft is more pleasurable than masturbation.
I also think you underestimate how little time writing a simple scene takes. Couple hours at most.

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>>75372843
Talk to the weird girl. it works
disclaimer: it wont work and you'll end up stabbed
Disclaimer 2: it might work and you'll end up stabbed

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>>75265982
>>75267233
sorry for the late response. I'm just glad my stories left such an impact that people still have them in mind today.
Match-Made was originally planned to be more shitpost-y and far shorter due to the nature of the prompt. I then got a bit carried away and it got more dramatic, so it turned into that sorta hybrid, not-one-and-not-the-other, it ended up as.
I briefly mentioned it back then, but I never thought Suisei would actually have people rooting for her, for me it was always supposed to be "just" a Koyori fic.
Suisei was supposed to be a throwaway character to get the plot going. I realize that was really dumb and kind of lazy on my part, considering Suisei IS a well liked, established character by the nature of it being a fanfiction on its own. I'm even fond of her myself. Actually wrote the original prompt for "your sister Suisei catches you lusting after maid Aqua and decides to seduce you by dressing up as her to keep the bloodline clean" - still hope someone picks that up. So... my bad on that.
Besides that, I'm quite aware that my endings often seem... lacking. Ironically, I hate rom fics that end immediately after the "resolve", when the characters get together. Mine almost always do just that. Well, except Match-Made... and that attempt seemed rather polarising.
I also love rom fics that end in steamy, loving smut. Mine almost never do.
I just... don't know what to write? And my smut always feels a bit... vanilla and boring. I only ever tried with Petting your Fox, but it just seemed to lack the raw sexual energy of "foxfriend and overly nice boyfriend" for example.
Don't quite know how to tackle these problems... and it's been keeping me from getting a otherwise like 90% finished piece out for a while now.
Anyways, sorry for blogging and thanks for reading my stories!

>> No.75373599

>>75369694
I mean sure? We need to coordinate more to flesh this out but that’s a reasonable idea

>> No.75373611

>>75373176
If someone loves me to the point that they’d stab me, I’d consider that a success actually. Hrm, I should probably get insurance.

>> No.75373642

>>75373599
I mean we can, but I'm fine with whatever you serve within that outline.

>> No.75373903

Oh sure, when tolkien writes Lord of the Rings he's a visionary and one of the best authors ever.

But when I write it, I'm a plagiarist and a conman trying to pass of other people's work as my own. Such hypocrisy.

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>>75373903
Huh? You alright, anon?

>> No.75374138

>>75374072
it's joke

>> No.75374211

>>75370240
>>75370296
thanks a bunch for reading.
>>75370427
>>75370940
This was initially kind of a shitpost? i just wanted to write a "surprise you are femanon" and i remembered the first femanon discussions and from there kept going. Kiara and Mori just fell into the role and now that i see it, yeah nerissa kinda fits

Then again i have some yuri brainrot thoughts and ideas so i might write a sequel if it ever comes up.

>> No.75374396

>>75373445
A 90% finished piece? What's the fic about? Also I just want to let you know that your fic is the reason why I started watching more Koyori and why she's my wife now

>> No.75374484
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Pekora and Marine would be the perfect Frodo and Sam in Lord of the Blue Dorito

>> No.75374524

>>75374396
Why isn't your wife pregnant yet? Ultrashinzo Abe will get angry.

>> No.75374585

>>75374484
Who's the master and who's the servant?

>> No.75374698

>>75374585
Marine is funnier as the bickering sidekick so Pekora will be the master

>> No.75374802

>>75374484
>>75374698
pekomari will NEVER be as gay as Frodo and Sam

>> No.75375021
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>>75374802
Then why is there a picture of them holding hands?

>> No.75375102

>>75375021
Saruman shitposting

>> No.75375543

>>75373445
>Actually wrote the original prompt for "your sister Suisei catches you lusting after maid Aqua and decides to seduce you by dressing up as her to keep the bloodline clean"
Did you ever try your hand at it?

>> No.75376654

>>75375102
Who's Saruman in this AU?

>> No.75376669

>>75374396
glad to be of service, be sure to name at least one male successor after me!
>What's the fic about?
It might be about collars. Hope to finish it someday...
>>75375543
Nah, I like Suisei, but I don't really feel like I can get into her character for a fully fleshed out story. I do post every idea I can't do myself as prompt though... sometimes even successful

>> No.75376769

>>75376654
Flare the Brown

>> No.75377363

>>75373445
Anon, your smut was exceptional. I used it as reference for my own.
Maybe I just really like 'lively' smut instead of raw Ponos in Vagoo, but those quips of back and forth that feel like an extension of the characters presented in the story is infinitely hotter to me than vivid smut descriptions. That's what made Petting your Fox so good.
Sure, stretching out the scenes where Anon fucked Fubuki's Foxhole filling her to the brim would've been great, but it wasn't the strong point of the smut, it was how you made the characters feel like themselves while having sex.

As for the thing about romance resolving after the characters get together, it's something I'm guilty of as well, but there is a fix.
Either the characters have to face new problems that they solve through their relationship, or they get some time to just enjoy their relationship.
Something like 'you can rely on me, you cute, hardworking wife/husband!' or 'I don't care what happens, we'll pull through'

I thoroughly loved Match-made besides the Suisei subplot, and I think you're doubting yourself in your ability to write smut.

I will also advice you to seek help from beta readers. Even I was reluctant at first because of my pride and whatnot, but seriously, sometimes you're doing things right without realizing, sometimes you're doing them wrong without realizing. I'm sure many of them would be thrilled to get a peek at your works.

>> No.75379033

Uppy!

>> No.75380132

write about this stupid thread dying when not arguing about shitty fetishes

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>>75380132
The holos who post here just want to talk about their weird fetishes, is that so wrong?

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Then instead of not writing about fetishes, I'd be thinking about them anyway. Be the change you want to see.

>> No.75381969

>>75380132
the thread had too many girls and girls are icky.
You know all about avoiding them, sasuke

>> No.75382026

>>75380991
I fear the day a bilingual JPanon finds us and the JPs get access to all the monstrosities I've written about them.
The thought of one of them schlicking it to my work thought? It keeps me going, man

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>>75382026
I welcome the day.

>> No.75382248

>>75382026
I'd even take a DM or callout tweet calling me scum from one of the JPs for writing the sins I've written
>uwah white men are degenerates
From Marine

>> No.75382476

>>75382248
I'll fucking choke my cock with a death grip the day I get a distressed ASCII emoji from Fubuki

>> No.75383188

>>75382026
I think some of the ENs have read my work. I know for a FACT that some phase members and an ex Vshojo have

>> No.75383525
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>>75382026
We need to write ririka so she can finally be surprised

>> No.75384127

>>75383525
Ririka knows English, so it'd be nice to get a fic she'd enjoy ready for her. Maybe bondage.

>> No.75384151

>>75383525
>Write a ririka gangbang
>Get golly monkey shit in my dms
AAAAAH I'M GONNA CUM

>> No.75385070
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>>75377363
thanks anon, it really means a lot. I'll try to focus on the strong points you mentioned stood out to you even more in the future.
Introducing a "new challenge" after getting together makes sense, but seems like a headache if I were to treat it as a new whole story arch I'd have to grind through start to finish. I'm curious what you'd consider good examples for stories that play the angle of "time just for enjoying the relationship" well. I'd wager I've probably read them, but I'm curious what you consider "hitting the spot" in that regard.
I'll also keep the beta reader thing in mind.
>used it as reference for my own.
so what did you use it for?

>> No.75385474

Squirrel ass.

>> No.75385683
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>>75237127
>>75237859
Fauna and shota live in the same neighborhood and ride the same bus/carpool
Shotas parents don't come back from work until after the bus drops them off
Fauna walks shota from the bus stop back to his home, and babysits until parents come home. Either for money or bc fauna is a family friend.
please write this anons, I'm a /ss/apling dying of thirst and I don't know how much longer I'm gonna last

>> No.75387088

>>75385683
>Calls herself your 'big sis'
>Insists on sitting next to you on the bus every day
>Goes over to your house after school every day to 'help you study'
>'Accidentally' leaves behind study materials that look suspiciously like onee-san doujins in your room
>Sneaks into your room on weekends to play video games together and drink beers she got from 'her friends'

>> No.75387746

>>75385070
>"new challenge"
It doesn't 'necessarily' have to be a new challenge, it can be an old one that the characters have been dragging, and after they get together they realize they needed outside help.
For example, imagine Koyori was doing some research about fertility pills or something, the breakthrough of the century on curing erectile dysfunction. Day and night she spends it in her lab while you bring her coffee, blankets, and take over for her when you can.
The day of her presentation, she's sweating bullets, and then she realizes she fucked up and missed a crucial part of the experiment just as she asked if there were any questions. One hands lifts almost immediately, it's yours, and you ask her just what she forgot to say, and she salvages the entire experiment
Then, as soon as you're in the car, she rides you so hard the suspension snaps
Overall it can be just showing that the characters have grown to depend on each other, to care for each other, and that even now that their honeymoon phase is over, there's no one else they'd spend their time with.
This could be the same about enjoying their relationship. The time skip was cute, and seeing your children play around was adorable. Me personally, I would've capped it off with something like, after the children are asleep, Koyori drags you to the bedroom, and then she pulls out a chocolate so you too can eat without being bothered by your little human-coyote gremlins. Things that show they're still in love.

>so what did you use it for?
Well, reference might be the wrong word. It influenced my style of smut a lot. Auntie's Little Secret took a lot of inspiration from your works, and it continues to be the angle I like the most for when the sexy time arrives.

>> No.75388734

>>75385474
Squass

>> No.75389459
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>>75388734
I prefer Squits myself

>> No.75389992
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>>75298726
Sex with Fuwawa short. I'll call it "Fuwawa is an acquired taste". Previously posted in /baubau/ by myself - a bit more refined here.
Tags: short, Fuwawa, Mococo, seduction, fluff, SFW

It took a while for you to realize, but it has finally dawned on you what it was that drew you towards Mococo Abyssgard when you first laid eyes on her. Simply put, she was just the prefect "first love" type of girl - one of those you always read about in books or saw in the movies. She was sweet, innocent... and very, very insecure. Every crumb of attention you gave her, she ate right up, always coming back to ask for more in cute little roundabout ways with her big puppy dog eyes and little pout on her lips.

She loved your constant affirmations, your gentle headpats, and you loved giving them to her, although you had to admit that progress within your relationship did not come easily. Hell, even holding hands was a huge deal to her at first!
Everything, and you mean EVERYTHING, from the mood to the moon had to be absolutely right for you to ever even think about getting to third base. And when you did, it was just like everything before. Sweet, gentle... and thoroughly vanilla flavoured.

It was nice for the most part and you were in no particular hurry to make big strides, but after a while, you couldn't help but start to feel a little irked.
Just why did Mococo not believe you when you told her you love her?
Why did she always have to go brush her teeth before giving you a kiss - even if it was just for a simple farewell?
And why couldn't she be just a tiny bit more spontaneous and cheeky?

...

Amidst those little doubts festering in your head, that's where SHE struck. Her sister. Fuwawa Abyssgard. The older one. The one you'd always thought a bit mean and distant.
But maybe she'd just been like that to give her little sister the spotlight? To try to push her to be a bit more confident and open? If it were so... you'd basically be on the same team. Was she actually... kind of selfless?

Not to mention that bantering with her was really fun! You quickly found out that you could go back and forth with her for hours without getting tired, her sweet giggling ringing happily in your ears, her teasing touches making your skin tingle.
And what about Mococo? Well, she'd just start to cry if you went at her like that.
Not walking on eggshells was really... refreshing, you had to admit.
And oooh did she know what she was doing! Which ultimately led to that fateful day. The day you crumbled like a cookie.

It started innocent enough, by Fuwawa "accidentally" bumping into you, like she'd done so many times before.
"Ooooh, sorry Wuffian~! Did I mess up your line work? Did you spill your drink?"
She asked in a teasing tone and then went to do it right again, her hips gently bumping against yours, just enough to slightly throw you off balance.
"Eheheee~! Ohhh, you look angry! Whatcha going to to about it, Wuffian? Hm~? Are you getting annoyed? Is Fuwawa annoying you? No way, riiiight~?"
And that's where you faltered. Where you gave in. You grabbed her by the shoulders. You pulled her into a sloppy, open-mouthed French kiss. You tangled your hands in her long, blonde tresses, while she mewled and moaned into your mouth, greedily sucking on your tongue.
And then... you dragged her to the bedroom, where you had the most ungodly, bedbreakingly rough sex with her this world has ever seen.
Surely, this was where it was supposed to end for you, right? Game over. You had bitten off more than you could chew.

Except you didn't, because the situation was very easily explained away by Fuwawa:
>Eheheeee, you know, Wuffian... you don't have to worry, because Moco-chan and I... we share everything! And I mean EVERY. THING."
And so the next day, instead of out on the street, you and your ass found themselves in the living room, where Fuwawa gleefully told Mococo that you're going to be both their boyfriend from now on. Mococo shot a few unsure glances your way, but being the pushover she was, she ultimately "un-unned" and accepted, no further questions asked.
Fuwawa winked at you and happily skipped out of the room, giggling happily as she went along. Just when you were about to follow, you felt a weak tug on your shirt.
"H-hey... Ruffian. Uhn, you- you'll still love Mococo just the same... right? It's not... not because Mococo is not enough for you anymore... r-right?"

>> No.75390211

>>75389992
Mococo is the introductory model and Fuwawa is the enthusiast model. Eventually everybody drops the training wheels...

>> No.75390679
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>>75389992
The alpha dog takes her sister's cake, and eats it too.

>> No.75390698

>>75384127
(You), Ririka's assistant, are pressured by her to give her massages. You can't exactly refuse her - not only she can replace you in a second, but she is also has you ensnared with her antics and neediness. As you get better and better at making her relax (from her own words), she is demanding more and more contact, exposes her body more. You feel your grip on yourself loosening as you try to not think about screwing your boss.
One night, as she lies nude on a table, covered in essential oils, she beckons you towards her. You comply, and she whispers into your ear: "How much longer do I have to wait for you to violate me?"

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>>75389992
Cute. Probably a bit too risqué to call SFW but this was a pretty hot one-post scenario.
More?

>> No.75391058

>>75390679
She got that dawg in her

>> No.75391182

>>75389992
Not bad.
Now make it a 10 chapter emotional drama

>> No.75391660
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>>75391182
Gimme that longform meal! Inject the chapters right into my veins!

>> No.75392692
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>>75390211
worst post ever made really

>> No.75392718

>>75383188
Proofs? I got my fic read on stream once.

>> No.75393000

>>75392718
If I remember right this might be the Anon that wrote that buff uruka multi-chapter shitpost that got read on stream once.

>> No.75393286

>>75392692
Puppy-bearing hips!

>> No.75393779

>>75392692
She looks like her sister prostitutes her for high amounts of money

>> No.75394392

>wedgieanon took my risuquest
>now checking /wg/ daily

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>>75389992
>Today's the day you let your sister fuck your boyfriend!

>> No.75394918

>>75387746
Ah, I see what you mean. Cute ideas, really. The chocolate one especially. Eating it together in bed after making another batch of quintuplets would've been a nice conclusion, you're right. Also,
>spoiler
ultra based. Love your works! And thanks for giving ALS that somewhat happy end, fellow friendlover!

>> No.75394938

>>75390698
>>75384127
Would she enjoy a fic about sex with her from a male self insert POV?

>> No.75395017

>>75392718
https://youtu.be/LmWN2gmvnKA?feature=shared

>>75392692
Mococo is made for marriage

>> No.75395038

>>75366839
Hey thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it.
Thats an interesting idea, considering how conflicted Suisei was about wanting him to stay, I wonder how she would react. I suspect she'd actually get mad.
I think there's merit to Anon being more vocal in his resolution, one if the things I'd improve in a potential remaster that will never happen.
Also yes please read the epilogue if you haven't yet.

>>75368309
It's up to AA. I don't know what the criteria are for a series landing or if there's even any to begin with.

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>>75387088
>Fauna will never take out her sexual frustration on you and never groom you into her perfect little sapling boytoy
Why even live at this point

>> No.75396610

>>75373445
>>75265982 here. I think the first misstep with Suisei was writing her with the intention of her being throwaway because whether unintentionally or not, she ended up being positioned in a role that was never meant to come in to, as I more or less said here: >>75277906 It was obvious she wasn't a contender, but it wasn't obvious that she was never possible if that makes sense. I don't think you needed her to get the plot rolling, as Anon brustling against the system would have sufficed. Some people might not believe it, but having a government-assigned genki hag gf might not be welcomed by some people (idk who though).

As for the endings, I would say you have the right idea, but you seem too eager to get to the end. There needs to be more falling action. Kintsugi for example, ends basically right after the climax. I think you improved on that in Match-Made. It was a bit long perhaps but looking at it objectively and in isolation. it was a move in the right direction. It's just hampered by other aspects of the fic.

That said, I love your works and I'm glad you're still here. I owe Kintsugi a lot. I hope to see more of your work soon.

>> No.75396704

>>75395038
I mean he does have an email. You can ask him there.

>> No.75397957

>>75396704
Shouldn't have to send him an email regarding aspects of a thread he chose to maintain

>> No.75398066
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A series is usually regarded as a fic that has at least 3 installments to it, and AA also appreciates that you provide a short summary to be included within the series entry. If you are currently working on a fic that you plan to be a series, you can also request that it be made into one on the series page even when you share the first installment.

>> No.75398359

>>75395846
It's Faunover

>> No.75399675
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>HAEH?! FUWAWA, THAT'S MY BOYFRIEND! WHAE ARE YOU SHRLURPING ON EEZ BALLSACK?!

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Mother fuck. Not again!

>> No.75399958

So we know Fuwawa would backseat (You) having sex with Mococo, but would she let Mococo watch while you fuck her or would she lock her out of the room?

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>>75399958
>Sorry Moco-chan, we'd let you in, but what were gonna do is not a game for puppies~!
>Sounds of a wall getting drilled by the door frame
>AH! AH! OH MY FUCKING GOD YES! YES!
>Mococo sitting outside, too stupid to know her sister's about to turn her into an auntie.

>> No.75400522 [SPOILER] 
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>>75399757
Cuckqueaning is too strong!
Quick, we must revert things to their natural order, bring out the cucker!

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I reject the natural order! It's diseased, rotten to the core. We need to wipe the slate clean. BURN IT DOWN!

>> No.75401038

Enough of the cuck shit, write something really depraved, like consentual lovemaking in the missionary position or holding hands

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>>75401038
Now THIS, this is what a new golden era will be born from. I'm on it!

>> No.75401706

>>75399958
I am thinking of the exact inverse situation, Mococo keeps walking in on (you) and Fuwawa but it's never you two having sex. Bed creaking? It turns out you two are just repairing it. You two spending a long time in the bathroom while splashing? Doing laundry. Rhythmic slapping and squeals from the kitchen? Fuwawa forgot to put milk back in the fridge again and it went bad, so she's getting a spanking.

>> No.75402287

>>75397957
>he lacks critical information

>> No.75402956
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>>75387088
I'm staying with the 'This kid somehow woo'd a girl 7 years older than him and now she wants his tiny shota cock BAD' take from last thread

>> No.75403291

>>75401038
This

>> No.75403770

>>75382026
"Oi, looks like manipulating images arent the only things foreigners can do."

>> No.75404341

>>75403770
>Foreigners like to put Fubuki in situations like this

>> No.75406368
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squisho

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>>75402956
Me and the bad bitch I pulled by being whimsical and with boyish charm

>> No.75410277

>>75402956
Just like her senpai.

>>75404341
Feeling deja vu lol

>> No.75412415

live

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>> No.75416061

How do I cope with people saying my writing goes "too far" or is "too mean"? I feel like I'm writing only for my own desires and everyone else views my smut with disdain.

>> No.75416338

>>75416061
>I feel like I'm writing only for my own desires and everyone else views my smut with disdain.
I mean that's kind of just the reality of some fetishes anon there's really nothing to say other than don't let it bother you.

>> No.75417156

>>75416061
Ignore it and do as you please. I used to write some edgy stuff but I grew out of it and now I write chiller stuff. But if I didn't have that edgy period where I could just let my creativity flow in a world of my own design, I think my ability at writing would have been seriously stunted.
Always write what you want.

>> No.75417506

>>75404341
Why did my first thought go to Fubuki eating shit?

>> No.75417587

>>75417506
Because you have an incredibly refined palate.

>> No.75417745

>>75417506
because you have no morals or belief system, you have no spirituality or anything that gives your life meaning or structure. They asked you to shoot, you do it. You have no character.

>> No.75417998

>>75417745
t. nijisister

>> No.75418897

>>75417745
Who's your oshi? I'll write a fic where I shit in her mouth and she swallows it and she enjoys every second of it. Faggot.

>> No.75419564

>>75416338
man with my fucked up cocktail of fetishes, it just feels like a waste of time

>> No.75419596

>>75399958
She would make Mococo assist in some way and then backseat her.

>> No.75419732
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>>75417745
What if his belief system is based on scat?

>> No.75421011

>>75298754
Koyori develops an aphrodisiac for canine girls, but a scumbag uses an overdose to turn her into his horny collared slave and has her produce more in exchange for sex. He might also use it on other canine chuubas to create a dog harem.

>> No.75421187

>>75421011
>scumbag
I call him "businessman".

>> No.75421226

>>75419732
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VaqLk1YCv-s

>> No.75421310

>>75421226
Shit, I forgot about that. It all connects now.

>> No.75421963

>>75417745
Following a religion is not a moral system, idiot, it's just a set of things not to do. You have no capability of determining what's good or bad on your own.

>> No.75422187

>>75394938
In all honesty, imagine yourself just doing your job and then finding out your coworker is elaborating on how strong your arms are, how much she wants you to carry her to bed and how weak she would feel in her legs after the act on some private Tumblr account. It would feel fucking weird but but give you a huge ego boost at the minimum. It might scare you off from ever exposing your body. I can't truthfully imagine someone getting legitimately horny over someone writing about their public-facing shell in compromizing situations. It seems like an extension of hentai logic.

>> No.75422244

>>75421963
Isn't everyone's idea of right and wrong influenced by their circumstances and experiences? It's hard to say that anyone truly has a moral system of their own.

>> No.75422523

>>75422244
Circumstances, experiences, teachings.

>> No.75422621

>>75422244
I agree, it doesn't matter where you get your morals from. It doesn't even matter what they are, really - it only matters how they make you act.
Any belief you don't act upon is meaningless.

>> No.75423140

>>75422187
So long as the lady wasn’t repulsive, I think I’d see that as my opening.

>> No.75423300

>>75422523
circumcisions

>> No.75423345

>>75423140
Unfortunately, in this metaphor we are all repulsive
We're also not coworkers

>> No.75423523

>>75423345
But I am not repulsive :(

>> No.75423621

>>75423523
Oh, you poor, poor boy...

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>>75396610
yeah, I definitely could have done more with Suisei, although I feel that the story wouldn't have had the same impact with no "adversary" at all, like you suggested. That's just my opinion though.
I'll try to build up on all your feedback for the next piece and hopefully hit the sweet spot between Match-Made and Kintsugi. Funnily enough, I did have a little epilogue planned for Kintsugi, which I never got around to write. That's another problem of mine that probably skews the readers view on my stories:
The stories with the shorter / cut short endings are the ones I actually MANAGE to get out - I have a whole lot of works that just hang in limbo... where my creative juices fizzled out near the end. Like that 10k Hoshikawa fuckfest fic... fuck...

>> No.75424102

>>75423925
You have slut sex close to ready and you're withholding it from us?

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>>75423925
>10k Hoshikawa fuckfest fic
Oh fuck, I remember that now. I had completely forgotten you were working on that. Matthewanon! Get it done!!!!!

>> No.75425221

>>75424473
Sex till she smells of me

>> No.75426465
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>>75423925
You can finish it, I believe in you!

>> No.75427915

>dying

Will drop a review link later if I get to 1k words(currently at 600+).

>> No.75428436

>>75427915
Of what? Gura's futanari cumflation adventures?

>> No.75428486

>>75428436
No, I'm reviewing Paradise Lost

>> No.75428729

>>75428486
What even is there to go in detail on with that fic?

>> No.75428852

>>75428729
Don't worry, I'm almost done.

>> No.75429190
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>>75298754
Aqua decides that she must get over her introversion so she starts consuming a lot of sigma male grindset content. But no matter how she tries, she cannot put itinto practice. In her desperation she starts praying and accidentally summons the Sigma Male Grindset Fairy who casts a magic spell on Aqua that lasts until midnight. Incidentally that day she's meeting with a bunch of holo friends. When she arrives there, she realizes the actual nature and power of the spell she is under. No one can contain their lust in the presence of Aqua and she gets completely ravaged by a horde of horny holos.

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700 words tonight. Maybe more. I can feel the inspiration for the first time in ages.

>> No.75429483

>>75428436
Wrong blue holo elmao
Reine /ss/

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>>75429190
That's pretty damn funny. Although, until the last few words I was picturing that the spell would make her a true grindset chad and she would become an investment tycoon in the course of a few hours.

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>>75429524
Yeah, that's actually better. I'll revise my prompt: the Sigma Male Grindset Fairy doesn't cast any spells but instead becomes Aqua's personal business/investing/fitness/PUA etc. coach.
>"Are all these cold showers really absolutely necessary?"

>> No.75430179

Is it even /ss/ if the boy's almost an adult? /ss/ to me is puberty.
Also, less shilling, more writing.

>> No.75431302
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>>75429885
>"I don't understand why I need to take Sui to this fancy expensive restaurant, and why do I need a watch? My phone tells the time."
>Fairy Sigma Mother slaps Aqua on the back of the head
>"That's how a loser thinks. You're a winner, the peak of the food chain. You need to show your next blue conquest how much of a catch you are. The food may not even be the best in the city, but people will SEE you there. They will SEE that you appreciate only the best things in life. Don't bother packing the condoms, the blue bitch is clean, I checked."

>> No.75431538

>>75431302
>Fairy Sigma Mother
I was thinking more something like a tiny winged Andrew Tate in speedos

>> No.75431681

>>75431302
>fancy expensive restaurant
>Aqua starts doing content like this https://www.youtube.com/@alexandertheguest/videos

>> No.75431925

>>75431302
Would Aqua want Suisei?

>> No.75432269

Is there a baker in the house?

>> No.75432558
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>>75431925
I mean, it's not about if she WANTS her outright. It's about the status. To nail the diamond in the rough, to plow the blue comet, is a statement, a testament of your own prowess. She never settles for mediocrity, so if she chooses to settle on your crotch, you're the best.

>> No.75432943

>>75432269
I can bake in like an hour if no one else can

>> No.75433439

>>75432558
Is it futaqua?

>> No.75433560

>>75433439
The fairy just keeps forgetting her gender.
>Don't bother packing the condoms, the blue bitch is clean, I checked.
>C-c-condoms?!?!? But I'm a girl

>> No.75433715

>>75433439
This >>75433560
It's funnier that way if the fairy keeps imposing male grindset values onto aqua.

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