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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>7145271

>> No.7200644
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>Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.7200710
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STORY ANCHOR

POST 'EM IF YOU GOT 'EM

>> No.7200810

>>7200516
>Rosemi Edition...

>> No.7200970

>>7200516
OPchama…

>> No.7201329

>>7200644
(You) hit it off with Matsuri in a bar and get hot and heavy. You go to a motel and start making out, Matsuri gets on her knees and lowers your pants. After all the anticipation, the moment your dick springs out of your underwear, you immediately blast your load on her face just from feeling her hot expectant breath on your dick. You try to get it up again but to no avail. Matsuri gets mad and ditches you in the motel. You cry yourself to sleep and leave early in the morning. (Bonus if the dick is small)

>> No.7201721

>>7201329
SPH *and* premature ejac?
We’re getting spicy in here, and this is the first request this thread…hope someone picks it up.

>> No.7201847

>>7200710
Repost from last thread for archive anon.

https://pastebin.com/BPk1V52H

I also noticed it got some attention, so comments and criticisms are appreciated.

>> No.7202232

>>7201329
>>7201721
These Anon's have small dicks.

>> No.7202308

>>7200644
Aqua thinks that (You) don't have many friends and wants to change that by becoming your friend. So you convince Aqua that the best way for her to become better friends with you is to "play games" with you. These games involve you taking advantage of the fact that Aqua doesn't know what sex is and then ravenously fucking her. Aqua doesn't really know what she's doing but she knows it makes you happy and feels good, and she feels like the two of you are becoming better friends. So, excited to help you make even MORE friends, Aqua unknowingly tricks another Holo into fucked silly by you.

>> No.7202610
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>>7200710
Before I forget, I should also grab these for archive anon huh.

Necromancer's Miasma
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQoHTUxp7dOHoqHY9TJgQmo0tkRZ1w8PzDEvVNalxR2vu6oqPRq_aEZq6Q8Umu7a3Kq0tlvvSoF5h1H/pub

Matsuri's baby carrot
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSovXzvlQAyHrCs2C1hU74k26UYaC-wmXHZ4W7HFCTxd8UFFBVNGaD8SfgQTjVBJ_B1zkkUQKp84q3d/pub

A Deal with Death
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSA5byjqy3B0EIdK-zs3-KnFcgDLRLcTqVpoDAuXlZUPF1Q1H3ppbLfb8L2FklsqgsCr2IlkslScT2-/pub

Do let me know if I missed anything.

>> No.7202644

>>7200644
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KvorR_Bc2XI
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rHRVGd7a2_U

Sister gets real tired of Baquas tomfoolery in church school.
Tired enough to force her to stay afterschool and pound her ass to get it through her simplistic mind who's in charge here. https://files.catbox.moe/i0w7ql.png

Also this is the same church school where Marine experiences her sexual awakening.

>> No.7203242

>>7202232
I used to be proud of my dick until one of my girlfriends said it was small. From then on i was never the same. Doesn't help that i always thought it was 6 inches (i once measured it and was sure it was 6) but no matter how many times i measured it again, my pecker didn't go past 5.5

Sometimes life ain't fair... I got good genetics, decent looks, money, etc. Why did i have to be stuck with a 5.5?

>> No.7203321

>>7203242
5.5 is slightly above average, you’re fine

>> No.7203435

>>7203321
>5.5 is slightly above average
Damn, really? And here I was feeling insecure about 7.

>> No.7203513

>>7203321
Yeah but i don't want to be slightly above average, i wanna be big! I wanna swing it around and boast about it. I want girls to gasp when i pull down my pants! I want to be able to fill the whole cunny, not just rely on technique. I'm tired of being "the slightly above average" guy. When i was in school, slightly above average grades; slightly above average height; slightly above average dick; english, writing, drawing, cooking, no matter what i do...it's all so tiresome... I'm not special at anything, just fucking average.

>> No.7203755

>>7203513
anon you want to be better but you can't just wish to be better. You need to work at it and actively improve to be more than slightly above average. Don't lump your height and dick size with talents either, those are two things we have no control over so there's no point crying about them. Now write me some futa porn and improve your writing right now faggot

>> No.7203828

>>7203755
Motherfucker you better have just said futa by chance and not because you recognized me. Guess I'm revealing too much. That was a joke btw my dick is like 9 inches and I'm super smart.

>> No.7204020

>>7203828
Futanon all futa fanatics are joined by shared lust of course I know it's you

>> No.7204305

>>7203513
It's aight anon. Porn isn't real sex. Did you know I went almost 20 years not knowing that the vaginal canal of a woman (the part that your dick goes inside) is on average around 3-6 inches long? It sort of proves that the average dick sizes are actually slightly on the larger side compared to what a woman's body is built to handle. Anyone who says otherwise is either a sizequeen or a coomer.

>> No.7204389

>>7204305
yeah i've met women who have said that they dont really want anything more than 7 inches because it can hurt their cervix

>> No.7204641

>>7204305
>>7204389
My oshi is Risu tho... the ultimate size queen of Hololive.

>> No.7204764

>>7204641
ah then you're fucked. Risu will not allow any dongs below 10 inches to get anywhere near her cunny and even then she probably won't feel it unless its about 12

>> No.7205061

>>7204764
Risu cunny.........
UUUOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHH

>> No.7205163

>>7200644
Holding Risu captive and making her love your micropenis

>> No.7205488

>>7205163
Risu will never break to your weak excuse of a manhood! she will not allow such pitiful genes to enter her womb or the gene-pool

>> No.7205528

>>7202610
I appreciate it, I was just asleep. The archive's been updated. The story anchor's been a massive help.

>> No.7205554

>>7205488
Nice try Risu, but I'm already on my way to your straw hut

>> No.7205788

>>7205554
dont worry anon, if you do manage to find me I'll mind break you into a cute little femboy maid, cock cage and all, maybe I'll even let the other members play with you when they stop by

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Oh god I shouldn't have brought up Risu. Please don't ERP with my oshi...

Risu would never submit btw, you should fear and respect her just as much as Korone. Keep that advice in mind.

>> No.7206032

>>7205939
It's ok risu, we're only erping as you because your sexy as fuck and we love you

>> No.7206053

>>7205939
Everyone breaks eventually anon, even Korone and Risu

>> No.7206060

>>7205939
>Please don't ERP with my oshi...
*Pushes Risu down on the bed and cockshocks her with his massive penis*

>> No.7206121

>>7206053
anon korone and risu would break you before you could get close to breaking them

>> No.7206154

>>7206121
I'm going to break Risu's ass

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Normaly The local bully girls target today she decides to take it easy on (you)

>> No.7206366

>>7206060
After you blow your load, Risu pulls out a cock bigger than yours and says:
> Is that all you got? I'll show you what a real cock can do.
You wake up in a bathtub full of nuts missing your left kidney a few hours later. Risu is nowhere to be seen, only a note with some cash saying
> Use this to buy some birth control, you're gonna need it after i made you my bitch

>> No.7206464

>>7206366
someone please make this out into a full story, im hard as fucking diamonds right now

>> No.7206643

>>7200644
(You) manage to convince your oshi to (somewhat reluctantly) sleep with another man so you can get off on it. You set a few ground regarding what is and isn't okay and send her off in the evening, expecting her to come back late at night. She ends up not returning until morning the next day and is too tired to tell you about it, but when you get to bed with her that night, she strokes you off while she sheepishly and gradually reveals that she got overwhelmed by the dude's charm and broke every single rule, getting less embarrassed and more into it as she realizes how well you respond to the humiliation.
>>7201329
I approve of this prompt

>> No.7206693

>>7200710
thanks for posting this while i was asleep but
>cat
you're a monster

>> No.7206761

>>7206643
We have a prompt archive for a reason cuckchama..

>> No.7206845

Aaaaaaaabhhh I had another holo dream where I was married to Rushia but I couldn't meet here because I went to some sort of prison and mow Vin Diesel wants to fuck my ass.

Wtf guys Rushia isn't even my oshi but I dream of her as my wife????

>> No.7206944

>>7206845
who cares, dude? let vin diesel fuck your ass
honestly that dream started good and got much better to be quite tbqhwyf with you family

>> No.7207250

>>7206845
So...did Vin Diesel end up...?

>> No.7207357

>>7206761
Serious question, do most authors here regularly browse through it for ideas?
I don't mean to come off like that Mori guy, which is why I try and add some discussion to the thread at the same time as I repost, but I think there's a significantly higher chance of it being taken if it generates some buzz in the thread as opposed to molding in the archive.

>> No.7207408

>>7207250
>Sleeping Beauty, but Vin Diesel is MC and Anon is Rushia

>>7207357
I do, I tend to eye the prompt archive pretty regularly as long as I don't have a story in the works, or multiple. Although at this point I already have enough ideas to last a while from sticking around enough.

>> No.7207417

>>7207250
I was ready to accept my fate if it meant I could go back to my wife Rushia sooner.

But then I woke up

>> No.7207514

>>7207357
Nah, I don't.
Can't speak for other writers but I just want to write dirty fantasies about my oshi.
However, I do look at prompts in the thread and if they're interesting, I take elements of them and use them in writing.

>> No.7207584

>>7207357
I often do, it's just hard to navigate because there's so many prompts

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Holy fuck some anon wrote basically an entire short story for a promp The mating part is fucking hot

>> No.7208081

>>7207939
unless there's someone really into gurame i can't see that getting used

at this point he or she should have written it themselves lol

>> No.7208551

>>7207939
>>7208081
I wrote that lol. I turned it into a story, read it here if you want.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/32559157

There's lesbian sex, gura grows 2 cocks, tentacle sex, and I'm almost finished writing.

>> No.7208552

Whoops promptanon I did some work on the climax scenes. If you get the chance to check them out I'd appreciate more feedback.

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>>7208551
Here's a paragraph from my fic where Ame is getting off on Gura's tail.

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>>7207939
>>7208551
Also, if you liked the mating part, here's some mindless mating fuck I'd written in that same fic, on chapter 10.

Although her mouth was occupied, her brain still wanted to devour. Gura reached a hand up to remove the scarf. Amelia could sense the danger. She was both scared yet aroused by the site of the ravenous beast before her. So, before Gura pulled the scarf out of her mouth, Amelia launched herself at Gura first and bit down hard on Gura’s pulse point.

Gura’s demeanor switched immediately, old instincts telling her that this was a mating bite. Her bloodlust was normally much too powerful to overcome, but her throbbing erections were sending her mixed signals. She started to breathe faster, foggy exhales misting her sight. Then Amelia bit down harder, drawing hot, steamy blood.

Gura let out a groan, still seeing red but not trying to do anything about that, yet. She started gnawing on the scarf in her mouth as her hands snaked up Amelia’s body. Finding skin. Gura’s hips pumped absently in the air as her hands groped feverishly all over Amelia. Then she pulled herself against Amelia in an attempt to merge their bodies together somehow, the powerful embrace almost squeezing the breath out of Amelia. Hands now groping at Amelia’s sweat-covered back. One hand clawing to dig her trimmed nails into skin. The other hand rubbing down under Amelia’s pants to squeeze her buttocks.

Amelia felt uncontrollably hot, both metaphorically and physically. The body squeezing her was cooking her alive in a delicious hell. She was determined to keep her mouth locked onto Gura’s searing hot neck as long as it takes for her to snap out of it.

Now that her cocks made contact with something finally, Gura began to thrust in earnest. Against Amelia’s pants-covered crotch. It was the hottest dry humping Amelia had ever been a part of. The insistent pressure against her pussy was sending her mad. Each thrust was accompanied by Gura’s muffled grunts, drool soaking into the scarf as she went on.

[Sorry I meant to greentext don't know how to, I'm still new to 4chan.]

>> No.7209242

>>7209158
green text just put > before the line with no space
>like this

>> No.7209316

>>7209242
Thanks anon
>٩( ᐛ )و

>> No.7210536

>>7206643
>Cuckchama also has a small dick
Like pottery. Color me surprised.

>> No.7210589

>>7200644
Lamy publicly turns down Anon's confession of undying love yet again. The crestfallen Anon is cheered up by the rest of gen 5 after his public displays of love awaken their pure maiden hearts.

>> No.7210870

>>7210536
It's slightly over 7 inches as a matter of fact. I think my interest in being bullied over it is sort of a counterreaction to how much pride I have in it, like, imagining myself in a position where I lack this thing that gives me security is more emasculating than it would be if I had a tiny dick from the start

>> No.7210916

>>7210589
I think that'd be fun if only because I too have been scorned by (a) Lamy.

>> No.7211186

Cuckchama had his dick in hand, the veiny shaft pulsing against his fingers. "It's slightly over 7 inches as a matter of fact." He said with pride. Anon kneeled for a better look, appreciating the subtle coloring of it, the nice thickness, and the glistening precum on the tip. "Impressive, very nice." Cuckchama let his fingers stroke the shaft. "It gets bigger when I pull on it." Anon's eyes widened at this revelation. His breath caught in his throat, Anon and Cuckchama's eyes met; lightning sent shivers running through their spines. Anon licked his lips and said, "Can you show me?" Cuckchama grinned. "I'd be right happy to."

>> No.7211299

>>7211186
I like how Cuckchama is inexplicably british.

>> No.7212039

>>7200644
You have been poisoned and the poison will spread to anyone near you. You opt to spend your last moments alone but your oshi/lover chooses to spend it with you, knowing it will lead to her demise as well.

I just rewatched HxH and saw that scene with The king and Komugi and came up with this prompt. I'd do it myself but I'm currently busy with other fics. I'll probably pick this up myself when I'm less busy but hopefully someone does this as well.

>> No.7212138

>>7212039
This is incredibly similar in premise to Necromancer's Miasma from last thread.

>> No.7212345
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The more I edit and add to this story the more I realize how badly out of my comfort zone it's turning out and I'm starting to worry that it'll end up disappointing some people the same way it's disappointing me.

It's autistic because realistically it's not that much different, but I feel like it's missing a personal attention to detail that's difficult to maintain when there's so much going on at the same time.

>> No.7212541

>>7212345
For fuck's sake just release it.
Bad writing is better than no writing because at least with bad writing we can tell you what went wrong.

>> No.7214129

>>7212039
>Nuclear fallout
>Poison from the bomb is contagious
>Fubuki is more resistant but not immune
>Chose to spend your last miserable moments alone
>Begged Fubuki not to follow you
>At her apartment playing mario kart
>At some point the lights have went out
>You two have long since put down the controller
>Keep asking for Fubuki to assure yourself that she's here
>"I'm here"
>You can feel yourself fading away with each passing minute
>Eyes are getting tired
>"Fubuki, i'm sleepy. I'm gonna go take a nap"
>"Fubuki? Will you be here when I wake up?
>"Mhm, I'll be by your side always"
>"Fubuki? I'm...I'm scared"
>You felt tears instead of blood flow from your eyes
>You felt them get brushed off by her fingers
>Smile for the last time as you passed away peacefully, comforted by your fox wife
>"Rest well dear, I'll be joining you soon.."

>> No.7214239

>>7214129
Do you normally cry blood? Or perhaps that's just worded weird...

>> No.7214560

>>7214239
Sorry, meant to word it like, you're used to blood leaking from your eyes due to the poison

>> No.7215655

>>7204389
>>7204305
All facts. I'm around 8 (8.5 at my absolute max) and fairly girthy. I've had girls decline me right away, and the 2 I've done it with asked me to be really slow, or it'll hurt them. There is definitely "too big", and it's closer than you think.
Lets also factor in "girl inches", They are real and will kill your self esteem. Usually adding 2-4 inches to your length is the conversion rate

>> No.7215868

What happened to Cold Steel? Was it abandoned?

>> No.7216161

>>7200891

If you're asking about the Astel x Olivia fic, I haven't gotten round to it. I still have a few other fics I want to write first, and currently suffering from Apex brainrot, so don't expect it anytime soon.

>> No.7216625

>>7212039
That scene with king and komugi made me cry...

>> No.7216650

>>7216405
>>7216445
NTA, just posting em here for now. Don't archive these, i think the anon doesn't want to save it before he does the last couple gens.

>> No.7216810

What chuuba would make for the best lewd teacher for her horny, failing student Anon? My gut says Kiara.

>> No.7216846

>>7216650
I... I kneel

>> No.7216863

>>7216810
Choco

>> No.7216904

>>7216810
I mean that's literally the actual character of Choco... I think Ollie would do a nice lewd teacher if she wanted

>> No.7216937

>>7216863
>>7216904
Time to do my Choco-sensei reps.

>> No.7216979

>>7216810
>horny, failing student
In like a "This will encourage you" way, or a "I'll pass you if you do something for me" way?

>> No.7217086

>>7216979
The former, I guess? I want to write a story about Anon doing a make-up test that gets lewder and lewder. Haven't figured out a proper plot, but it's gonna involve sex as "removing the distraction," so to speak.

>> No.7217147

>>7217086
Then the other Anon's have it right. Choco 100%

>> No.7217223

>>7207852
Is this some old copypasta? Found it lying around in horny thread

>> No.7217383

>>7217223
Seems to be new, I can't find anything in the archive.

>> No.7217431

>>7217223
Wow that's a hot as fuck premise

>> No.7217489

>>7217223
Are these fics from outside the writing general even saved? I understand from outside of 4Chan is an obvious no, but let's say hypothetically this one was made here in /vt/. Would it get saved?

>> No.7217541

>>7217489
As long as it gets linked here in these threads, it seems to be archived.

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>>7200644
Ok so to make it more clear this time, I think Knight Kiara is a total hottie and need a fic about her saving a german lad in battle and promptly fucking his brains out and spending the rest of HIS life with him
I don't know how to explain it but something about her seems very warm and kind, and grossly incandescent, like a magnificent mother

>> No.7217670

How do you feel about people posting the same prompt every thread?

>> No.7217723

>>7217670
It's better than throwing them into the prompt archive which is not only massive but also quite the mess. All the prompts of mine that got picked up was from me asking here. Though i can see anons like femanon here >>7217633 being annoying by posting a list of images as their prompt.

>> No.7217733

>>7217670
I don't care. A lot of the time nothing better is being posted and sometimes I'll end up getting inspired after seeing the same thing multiple times.

>> No.7218025

>>7217670
I mean usually I post like two threads in a row and then just pray a writeanon looks through the prompt archive and likes it.

>> No.7218093

>>7217723
uh ok, I guess posting four images is enough to leave a bad impression

>> No.7218334

>>7217670
it will always be a luck of the draw whenever you submit a prompt, regardless whether it's in the threads or the archive. your best bet is making sure your prompt is interesting, and has enough details to be worked on. Even then, you can only pray one of the writeanons pick it up. Wanna change that? Do your own writing reps.

>> No.7218503

>>7217723
Out of curiosity do you have any suggestions for how the prompt archive may be handled better?

>> No.7218616

>>7218503
Categories, always. Categories are one of if not THE most important thing for keeping things organized in an archive. But then again, I'm not sure what the limit of a google doc is and if it can even do that. This foolish man dreams of an archive with a category/tag system much like any hentai site, like Nhentai. Then again, that's more of a coding feat than organizing, isn't it?

>> No.7218619

>>7218503
I really only have two.
1. Organized by fulfilled and non-fulfilled prompts
2. Organized by chuuba

>> No.7218648

>>7218503
Honestly, I'd sepreate SFW, NSFW and Up to author. Mabe on diferrent tabs, changable at the bottom

>> No.7218752

>>7218616
Eventually I'd like to get the rentry to have a category separation but it gets really iffy when a story prominently features more than one character. Does it belong in both categories or get put into its own category of 'multiple chuubas', which then poses its own problems if it's part of a series or some such and it's scattered across four different character tags, etc. It'd be nice but I've been struggling with how to do it. The G. Sheets thing, I'm not exactly sure if I could set up the published thing to include buttons for tabs and the like? I need to look into it.
>>7218619
Being able to tag a prompt as fulfilled would be nice, but I think that would require open editing/suggested edits so someone who's done the prompt could tag it as such. Honestly, if there's a better system than sheets, I'd love to know about it.
>>7218648
See above. A nice idea but I don't know how it'd work out, would require some testing.

>> No.7219142

Fuck's sake... how do I write myself out of a accidental rape story. This is plaguing my mind too much. The situation was by surprise, the girl is being fucked very roughly, mostly against her will... how did I get myself into this. It was never meant to be rape, I tried keeping the personality and have Gura give off a reasonable response of being suddenly fucked and that's biting me in the ass because she would totally be against it.

>> No.7219156

>>7219142
That's hot. Keep writing it. I want to read it. This is my fetish. Please.

>> No.7219182

>>7219142
Alternatively, post-hoc justify it with "Wow you're really good at rape play, Anon" "anything for you, Gura" *snuggle*

>> No.7219237

>>7219142
the usual, "I didn't know you were such a monster at this" at the end of the sex scene. similar to what>>7219182 said

>> No.7219285

>>7219182
>>7219237
That seems like a cop out. I guess my question was a rhetorical rant. I'll just continue with the half-rape story for now until I can finally start writing about her feeling good. If it even happens. The story is controlling me, I'm its little bitch at this point. Going with the flow i guess.

>> No.7219303

>>7219142
I guess go with what the other two anon's said but sprinkle in stuff throughout the entire act about how much Gura's enjoying it. Just the basic stuff like her screaming her head off (in pleasure) or orgasming many times more than whoever's fucking her.

>> No.7219333

>>7219142
just mention heart eyes - it's not rape if there are heart eyes or pull a Rance. It's not rape if she falls in love during it. :^)

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>>7217633
and some nice Amazon Kiara

>> No.7219401

>>7219333
Unless the Writeanon is going for comedy absolutely do not go the Rance route.

>> No.7219532

>>7219142
Coming from someone who almost wrote myself into a rape scenario:

Don't be afraid to re-write, anon. Move the clearly rapey stuff down until you can't see it anymore and write the scenario again with a fresh perspective, knowing how it might turn out badly. Write in some consentual foreplay at the start of the sexual encounter.

Then scroll back down to the rapey words and pick out what intensely sexy thing you like and put that back in. It can be forceful, but so long as the context is consentual from the start, you can make it seem like both parties enjoy what's happening.

>> No.7220124

>>7219142
Don't fight it. Accept it. Embrace it.
If you struggle, it'll only hurt more!

>> No.7220406

I've managed, somehow. I turned my story into a goddamn romance from rape, and I think it fits Coco's personality well enough. The story has officially passed 5k words. I was hoping I'd be done by 6k but I haven't even written a single ejaculation yet, when I am planning for multiple. Hopefully i don't have to pass 10k words for my first smut, oh god. Shion is still getting railed, but I'm totally ignoring her. She is passed out from Asacoco anyway. I'm focusing on Gura and Coco for now. This is pretty fun to do once I actually manage to get into the writing zone, maybe I'll finish this story sooner than predicted.

>> No.7220520

>>7220406
I went 30k for my first, bro. It happens. Glad you got it turned around, best of luck wrangling it in the future.

>> No.7220534

>>7219383
Kiara erotic...

>> No.7220630 [SPOILER] 
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I was working on this until I realized I didn't know what I was doing and decided that I should think the story through more before continuing. I'm still not sure about the tone and pacing, especially with the first bits.
I want to rewrite this as many times until it's actually good, but I'm also still considering getting someone else to write it if that won't work out. Apologies for the lack of narration this time. I tried to record it on my phone but I think my earbuds messed it up and none of it was recorded. It was a sleepy and very flat voice anyway...
https://pastebin.com/UMwV4W9B

>> No.7220695

>>7220630
Dustbunny? I thought you were a casualty of the nightmare threads. Good to see you.
Linking to anchorpost
>>7200710

>> No.7220717

>>7220630
Stil can't open pastebins after a whole month. Is this a voice story? A narration? Is it to train for becoming a chuuba?

>> No.7220762

>>7220717
It's a personal recount of her slaughter of the angels of heaven. Ends with growing a penis and skullfucking Michael. It's written entirely in Latin.

>> No.7220783

>>7220762
Damn, DustBunny, didn't know you had it in you. Brutal.

>> No.7220793

>>7220717
it's just scatfiction. we know how much of a fan dustbunny is

>> No.7220855

>>7220630
Boy, can I relate to the narrator. It’s pretty nice so far dustbunny, I hope you can finish it.

>> No.7220892

>>7220630
Look. I did read this whole thing, and apart from a couple grammatical improvements, I thought it was good. I WOULD like to read more, but I have to ask - what does this have to do with chuubas?

>> No.7220921

>>7220892
If it is DustBunny as I'm guessing, she is going to be a chuuba in the future. At least that's what I've gathered. It's a gray area kind of.

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>>7220695
Good to see you too anon!

>>7220717
Would it be better if I posted these in google docs instead? It's a story I'm planning on featuring on my channel with visuals and everything.

>>7220762
>>7220783
Prepare for sore throats.
I do wish I were that EPIC [/SPOILER] though.

>>7220793
I mean you're not wrong there is peepeepoopoo in the title.

>>7220855
Thank you anon! I tried a bit harder to make it more relatable both to me and others. May we get unstuck out of this if you're still in it.

>>7220892
I appreciate you taking the time to do so. I'm planning on using this story for my future time as a chuuba, but I don't really know where else to get feedback. I'd understand it if you'd want me to not post it here though.

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>>7221074
>Messing up spoilers this much even after all this time

>> No.7221248

>>7221200
DustBunny please... It's [*spoiler] to start and [*/spoiler] to finish. Without the asterisks of course. It's in the FAQ of 4Chan. They are spoon feeding you this information... DustBunny... Please...

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>>7221248
Apologies anon. I'm just really tired and forgot to turn off capslock after EPIC. I should probably get some sleep. Thank you for being kind regardless of when I'm dumb.

>> No.7221475

>>7221248
Even easier, you can highlight the string you want to spoiler press ctrl+s to spoiler it like this.

>> No.7221640

>>7200644
You are in a purely physical relationship with the bratty witch Shion, where she teases, insults and degrades you for the specific reason to rile you up so you manhandle and brutally fuck her. Soon enough her friend Aqua finds out and her curiosity gets the better of her. Will other bratty, short girls join in? Who knows, but a pair of red eyes peek through the slightly ajar door as you vent your lust on the little garlic and her onion friend.

I'm sorry but I'm so fucking horny rn and I can't get that shitty kusogaki out of my head along with Baqua's fat meaty ass.

>> No.7221652

>>7220921
Yeah, it belongs here because she's planning on becoming a chuuba. Sort of like an origin story. It would also be fine to post it on the /asp/ thread, but I reckon the Anons there don't care as much as us about writing/story, so makes sense to post it here instead

>> No.7221973

>>7215868
I'm still writing it. Just very slowly.

>> No.7221975
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Dreams of her.

We were in our own little world where time seemed to stand still.
She lounged before me bathed in a pillar of silvery moonlight that washed over her creamy skin causing her to seemingly glow, and her snowy white mane to be illuminated as if it were under a black light. She shifted her position leaning back upon the quilted leather couch, her luscious chest strained visibly against her Adidas branded halter top, the friction of the fabric causing two small nubs to pop into sight.
In a smooth motion she ran her hand across her belly and rolled her band aid skirt up her thigh and parted her legs bearing herself to me. Despite being the one clearly in need she had a air of authority about her, her silvery eyes glowed, and she smugly pointed at her dripping crotch.
Under her spell I found myself falling to my knees and crawling towards her like a needy puppy, my pounding heart mixing with her soft ragged breaths washed away my reason like a hypnotic trance. It seemed like I crawled forever until she finally reached out and pulled me on to her, I felt her wrap her fingers around the back of my skull, and slowly guide me downwards, smearing my nose against her toned stomach, inching downwards towards her needy core.
The closer she got, the quicker and more ragged her breaths became, small whimpers mixed in, until she pressed my nose into a sopping wet mass of fabric, marking me and causing my mind to go blank. She then grabbed a handful of my hair and yanked, forcing me to look up at her. Her eyes twinkled mischievously, and her lips parted...

*BEEP BEEP BEEP BEEP*
My eyes snapped open as I was jolted back to reality, weakly I flailed around for my evil alarms snooze button and hit it with more force than necessary to express my displeasure. I wasn't too shocked though, those typed of dreams always ended before they got good.
I was still trembling when I realized I was laying on a wet spot, that thankfully wasn't too large, and didn't require any immediate cleaning. Grumbling I rolled out of bed and wandered off to the shower, making a sleepy resolution to not to go to bed commando anymore.

>> No.7222011

>>7202610
>>7200710
You missed the other matsuri's baby carrot sequel that got posted last thread. I think this was the one posted by the original author.
>7154075

>> No.7222109

>>7222011
I'll go ahead and dig that up then.

'Matsuri's baby carrot' with a short fellatio scene.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR0vI_-vejHB5Cwhz9yHZJuSC2qnK4EHqKusbeN32NUXx_6Wyh3xTZWh9TlxXcgaNJtlJU46O98_Yce/pub

>>7200710

>> No.7222337

>>7200644
You wriggle up Lamy's ass and wear her like a suit.

>> No.7222352

>>7222337
It puts the lotion on its skin?

>> No.7222460

>>7222352
Uhh, not quite, Bill. That's a pretty weird fetish you've got.

>> No.7222508

>>7222460
Your one to talk mr butt suit.

>> No.7222868

Do you have a backlog of stories you've been putting off reading?

>> No.7223084

>>7222868
Yes, I haven’t done my daily re-reading of the Holofantasy series if that counts

>> No.7223222

>>7200644
(You) conduct the ancient ritual of cumming in a jar of creamation ashes in order to summon a dust bunny

>> No.7223373

>>7223222
That's rather vague don't you think? What vtuber do you want to summon?

>> No.7223484

>>7223373
A-anon- Did... Did you not read the thread?

>> No.7223502

>>7223484
Apparently I didnt.

>> No.7223544

>>7223373
it's our beloved dustbunny, who seems to have her own streak of degeneracy.

also, >>7223222 witnessed, make sure to contribute an extra steaming pile of shit as well.

>> No.7223597

>>7223084
The actual stories or just the two smut chapters? Those things get pretty long.

>> No.7223694

>>7223597
All of them. My daily routine is to eat, read HF, jack off to the side stories, and sleep.

>> No.7223859

>>7223694
Then I raise you a better question. Have a favorite chapter/character?

>> No.7224037

>>7223544
fucking kek
i love how a single comment pretending to be her has scarred her as being a scat fetishist here

source: was the original commenter

>> No.7224250

>>7223859
In all seriousness I actually really liked the first chapter and continue to read because of the overwhelming first impression I got from it.

>> No.7224299

>>7224037
such is the culture of these anonymous boards. Still, feels like it's an accepted characteristic of dustbunny by now, even though it's a lie.

>> No.7224355

>>7224250
Hopefully it's still good and you're enjoying yourself. I worry about these things.

>> No.7224598

>>7224355
I do! I really enjoy these fantasy settings because you don’t have to think much of stuff being implausible in the real world but the descriptions of the happenings around the MC are really smooth and it makes it so much easier to visualize for me at least.

>> No.7225070

HEART EYES

>> No.7225106

>>7225070
whoops wrong thread

>> No.7225152

>>7225070
No, no, you've intrigued me. Go on.

>> No.7225206

>>7225152
it's our local cock beggar, Marine. her new outfit is HAWT

>> No.7225334

>>7225152
Chuubas with heart eyes!
Chuubas in heat!
Chuubas thirsty for (YOU)R cock!
Chuubas overwhelmed by the urge to have their wombs filled with baby batter!
Chuubas begging (You) to fuck them until they can't walk straight!

>> No.7225754
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>>7225206
>new Marine outfit
>Sex personified
FUUUUCK
BEACH SEX WITH THE BOOMER PIRATE! EXHIBITIONIST PLAY WITH DUMB HORNY SEAFARING SLUT!!!!!!! PUBLIC CREAMPIE UOHHHHHHHHG! FUCKING IN THE CHANGING BOOTHS! FUCKING BEHIND THE ROCKS! FUCKING IN THE SHOWER! FUCKING EVERYWHERE POSSIBLE! DEFILING MARINE AND FORCING HER TO WEAR THE SKIMPY SWIMSUIT BOTTOMS TO TRY AND HOLD IN ALL YOUR CUM

>> No.7225771

>>7225754
ARCHIVEANON YAMERO

>> No.7226053

>>7225754
>defiling marine
is this theoretically possible?

>> No.7226540

>>7221074
Nah, if you're becoming a chuuba, I've got no qualms. Go for it. As I said, it was a good read and you're a good writer. I'd like to see more!

>> No.7226580

>>7226053
Friend you don't get it. Marine DEFILES YOU.

And your body is NOT ready

>> No.7227197

>>7225754
Takeshi, stop! Your body won't survive! You can't!

>> No.7227560

>>7226053
I'll die trying if needs be.

>> No.7227936

>>7225754
That's it. I was already mulling on a gyaru holo doujin but holy shit this maririn new costume making me feel strange

>> No.7227973

>>7227936
*fic, not doujin. Although technically doujin is still the correct term

>> No.7228158

>>7227936
I know, right. Kind of reminds me of FFXV's Cindy.

>> No.7228328

Thread been moving so fast these day

>> No.7228463

>>7228328
It's more a less a chatroom for writers to discuss and post ideas right now, which is a more presentable way of saying talk about which chuubas we'd fuck. I love this place and the people in it.

>> No.7228527
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>>7227936
You've certainly got options

>> No.7228554

>>7228328
Im torn. On one hand its been slow as fuck. But on the other its been friendly in here and devoid of shitposts.

>> No.7228733

>>7228554
Is slowness actually bad? I've noticed discussion can pick up really quickly when a topic is posted that piques the interest of many people, so it's clear we have a lot of watchers. This is also quite possibly one of the few if not only places for genuine discussion on /vt/.

>> No.7228749

Alright writeanons, what are (you) working on?

>> No.7228769

>>7228527
gyaru okayu rubs me up the right way but gyaru korone i could do without thinking of

>> No.7228801

>>7228554
Sometimes slow, sometimes not. Nice thread so far, though!

>> No.7228817

>>7228749
Working on the courage to ask you on a date.

>> No.7228899

>>7228817
A-anon, I... We can't! That's forbidden love!

>> No.7228979

>>7228899
Oh, really? Aww. Alright, I'll ask someone else.

>> No.7229122

>>7228979
W-wait, hold on... M-maybe that's okay... Just don't tell anyone else, alright?

>> No.7229170

>>7228979
Switching that easily? Your a massive hoe anon.

>> No.7229281

>>7228769
Every proper gyaru needs a best gal pal

>> No.7229598

>>7229170
Mm-hmm. Say, you single, anon?

>> No.7229641

>>7228749
Mentioned it last thread but I'm still writing that story where Kiara steals (you) from IRyS, it's going slowly, but I'm thinking of making it a two-parter. I wonder if anyone would be interested in it?

>> No.7229653

>>7228769
Didn't Koone herself say that she used to be a Gyaru? Or was that a rrat?

>> No.7229663

>>7229641
im excited to read it, authanon

>> No.7229700

>>7228749
probably gonna smash out the Fubuki smut fic, then move on to gyaru holo fic. this will test the limits of my smut reps but I'm willing to give it a shot

>>7228554
it's fast at times like now, but it can be really slow, especially during dead hours.

>> No.7229705

>>7229598
Hehehe, Anon, why don't you leave that wuss and come with me instead? We'll have a great time together

>> No.7229811

>>7229700
Ganbatte, anon...

>> No.7229940

>>7228749
Still working on boning Aqua. Did some more today, last time was a few days ago. It's progressing, although slowly. The intro is much longer than I had in mind when I started, and I have a mini panic attack every time I think of getting back to it and forcing myself to think of more Aqua/Anon dialogue that isn't primal, animalistic grunting and the sounds of wet meat being slapped. I had such a developed vocab as a teen. I wonder where it disappeared to. Probably replaced most of it with semen on my brain

Coincidentally, last time I spoke of progress I said I was around 1k words - this was eyeballing it. I am now using gdocs when writing and am actually up to 1k words. I expect pace to pick up significantly when the hard bit is over and the easy bit (the sex) begins.

Worst part of this is thinking to myself I could just sit down and finish it in one long, painful sitting if I wanted to. It's starting to weigh and I might be stuck guilt-writing soon

>> No.7230124

>>7200710
Alright im calling it quits, I've spent a week trying to find a way to wrap up the end to no avail so you get this
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTGvTvZVFsQ2zT057DXaBxnoFLSMqUhiMjBpWVvONSgJZkcJ66wgVNlnGstvuaDlkcqv96yOSzDKVME/pub
Inspiration taken from Okayu's PH cover

>> No.7230231

>>7230124
When in doubt, death and suicide, anon. Death and suicide. Good read, by the way. I think the destructive effects of drugs is something a lot of people can relate to, particularly people not the direct subject of them. I know it hit close to home here.

>> No.7230434

>>7230124
That was pretty good anon, I liked it a lot

>> No.7230488

>>7229663
Thank you anon, I hope it'll be enjoyable to read despite my ESL

>> No.7230640 [DELETED] 

>>7230124
>>7200710

>> No.7230761

>>7228749
A Deal with Death part 3
Ina sucks off Futa Ame
Haachama cooks Gura
Iname fluff based on the summer festival (indefinite hiatus)
Love bites 3: tastes like chicken

>> No.7230774

>>7230124
was a really, really sad read, anon. drugs are terrible things. okayu's dialogue really made me want to slap the shit out of her but of course that does nothing for an addict, who usually hate themselves for doing it too

>> No.7230802

>>7230761
>haachama cooks gura

wat

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>>7230124
Why does my oshi inspire such pain

>> No.7230949

>>7230774
yeah i originally planned for korone to let off and hit her but i couldn't make the story flow into that scene naturally

>> No.7231049

>>7230802
Haachama picks up Guras heavy tail with both of her hands to show it to the camera.
„Wow, look at how much meat this shark has here! Let's prepare this part first.“
She then grabs a giant tuna knife and checks the sharpness of the enormous blade with her finger. You can barely call it a knife, it looks more like a katana.
Gura begins to bawl like a kid in preschool and wets herself in fear. Piss runs down her legs as she tries to beg for mercy.
„Not my tail! Please, please! I need my tail! I can't swim without it. Pleeeeeheeaase don't take my tail!“
Haachama pays no attention to the pleas of her victim.With one smooth slice, she rids Gura of her appendage. The shark girl let's out a heart wrenching shriek and bloods pours over her buttocks, giving them a shiny red polish.
With Gura's sobs audible in the background, Haachama puts the tail on her kitchen table to cut off fat slices of shark meat.
„Ta-da! The first dish for today: shark tail steaks. Itadakimasu!“ Haachama picks up one of the chunks and takes a big bite out of it. The bloody piece of meat stains her hands as she chews Gura's flesh with a pleasured expression on her face.
Gura continues to cry in the background. „My tail...*sob*...I can never go back to Atlantis...“


No idea when I will finish this one. I keep starting new stories.

>> No.7231102

>>7231049
jesus fuck, sounds like this one if gonna hurt to read, can't wait

>> No.7231330

>>7230928
she's the original friendzoner

>> No.7231483

>>7231049
This is so cute, I love the way Gura reacts. Totally in character for Haachama too

>> No.7231514

>>7231483
That's cute to you!?

>> No.7231692

>>7231514
It's super cute, the way anime girls react when that stuff happens definitely is the best. I don't care much for the gore or violence so much as that kind of reaction. Don't worry though, I only think that way about anime violence, RL stuff has no appeal to me.

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>>7200644

Well that was a dream that i just had. Quite emotional too, but unfortunately I'll have to skip over most of it. including the bit with my father


School setting, writing general is a club. Friends with Lamy transformation club. School day ensues as normal, your club is suggesting new ideas on how to fuck chuubas which actually are just teachers from your school, there are many Lamys walking around school, setting up panflets "To become Lamy", everything is going fine, everyone is happy, but a troublemaker appears leaking the stories of the club to the chuubas and opening the club doors too early which annoyed the club members, this starts a massive argument within the writing club which sparks a fight. The jannies (school directors)get involved. The next day as you get to school, you see some of your friends along with bookshelfanon (archiveanon) from the writing general, standing in front of a new mural, freshly painted. The mural is a graffiti of the writing club, next to another graffiti with of Lamys having fun together in a pretty blue background. The club members are sad. You ask what's wrong, bookshelfanon replies
> "The jannies... they decided our club was inappropriate and caused too much trouble after yesterday's fight. The Lamys tried to help us but they ended up getting disbanded too... "
Your body freezes with rage. You clench your fists and start running into school, up the stairs to the last floor where the jannies stay. It's time to confront them and sort this out. As you reach the rooftop, you find one of the jannies alone sitting at the edge of the building, you strike up a conversation with him, probing him about his opinions on what happened and about the writing club
> "They had it coming... every last one of them. I enjoyed dismantling that club very much so"
> "I see... " You say
> "Then fall" As you kick the jannie of the rooftop
His face is one off surprise, but as he falls he starts laughing maniacally. A tentacle comes out of his back, and grabs onto the rooftop's edge, which he then uses to propel himself up to the top again. He laughs at you
> "Did you really think you could kill me? "
He starts clawing at his face whilst laughing, as his flesh is teared off, spikes start coming out of the wounds, revealing a demonic and deeply disfigured appearence .
> "You're gonna need a lot more if you wish to kill me, BOY!"
You're gritting your teeth so hard that they may snap at any moment. If you could, you'd be crying tears of blood. You let out a cry of war that came from so deep within your gut that you may as well have puked out pure rage.
"JANNIESSSSS!"
You lunge forwars towards him, the fight that will ensue will determine the fate of the clubs.

That's it. That's the dream. Though there was some backstory and (you) already knew the jannies were demons, and you knew how to exorcise them, but i had to improvise by turning it into some surprise reveal. It was quite the dreams, many feelings were felt.

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>>7231952
>ywn be bestfriends with the neighboring lamy club
why even bother at this point
also holy shit lmao nice one

>> No.7232095

>>7231952
man you have quite the peculiar dreamscape, normally i just dream about fishing with fubuki

>> No.7232178

posting a small excerpt from my Fubuki smut fic, please let me know if there's anything else I can add to it. For context, you are in your shower when Fubuki creeps up behind you, obviously naked.

“Fubuki-“ You call out once more, before you sharply inhaled. Fubuki kissed your neck from behind, while her hands moved down to your crotch, one hand wrapping itself around your cock. Her soft fingers felt warm as they enveloped sensually around your shaft.
“Anon-kun, I’m sorry, but I really need this.” She breathes into your ear. Her voiced was soaked in a honeyed tone and an animalistic instinct.
“We shouldn’t do thi- Aaaaah~” Your words get cut off by a frankly lewd moan as her fingers squeeze your cock. Her hand starts to move, stroking it slowly before picking up the pace, the water from your shower easing its movements.
“Oooooh, you’ve got quite the size, Anon-kun.” She growls into your ear as her stroking increases in its pace. You shiver in response to her warm touch, lasciviously wringing your member like it was the only thing she knew. Her other hand reaches out from around you, grabbing onto your throbbing cock. She purrs in satisfaction as her fingers wrap around your swollen shaft. With one hand, she presses the head of your glans into the curve of her palm, rocking it in slow, circular motions, while the other continues to steadily stroke your shaft. Your body involuntary moves forward, your own, degenerate base instincts taking over for a moment, pushing your hips into the wall. Your motion causes your body to collide with the shower lever, turning the water off. Now you could clearly hear Fubuki’s labored breathing as she strokes your erect penis. It didn’t help that you were letting out your own lewd, soft moans in response to her indecent handling.
“That’s a good boy,” She whispers, pushing her hips into yours, and you find yourself leaning into the wall, your hands supporting you up. You look down at your own painfully hard cock, hypnotized by the deft movement of her hands and fingers. You try to hold back a moan, but you supposed she noticed as she starts picking up the pace of her strokes, and instead of just letting your glisteningly wet cock simply move between her fingers, she squeezes down on your cock as she moves down the shaft, only easing up once it passes the head. You let out another shuddered whimper as she cups your balls in her free hand, her fingers individually pressing into the sensitive folds of your scrotum, feeling up and massaging the turgid twin ovoids within, her other hand maintaining the pressured strokes on your shaft. She wasn’t simply jerking you off, she was milking you.
You lock your knees as your toes curl inward, the pleasure shooting down your whole body. Fubuki leans over your bent back, her own erect nipples trailing thin tracks across your back as she lets out another low, animalistic growl.
“Cum for me.” She instructs. Her tone stern yet encouraging. You were not sure how or why, but some primal part of your brain activated upon hearing her words, as more and more precum starts spilling from the slit of your cock, coating her fingers with more of your viscous liquids. You shudder once more, as the need for release travels down the core of your body, settling down within your loins. Her stroking increases in both pace and pressure, as your brain spams signals to your body to cum, ejaculate, nut, jizz, spew, release.
“I said. Cum.” She says, this time directly into your ear. You obey. Your core tightens and you feel the sensation travelling down the whole of your cock as you let loose thick, pearly ropes of your seed. Your knees shake with every spurt of hot jizz being spewed from your cock, pooling on your bathroom floor, swirling around your feet before disappearing into the drain pipe. It goes on for what seems like forever as you moan out the sweet pleasure of release, but finally it ends. Your legs buckle, and would’ve fallen had it not been for Fubuki who held you in place, giggling lightly as you orgasmed from her molestations.

>> No.7232240

>>7232178
ahh no oh god damn it

>> No.7232324
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>>7232178
holy shit

>> No.7232347

>>7232178
Fucking Christ I’m hard. Good shit anon, can’t wait to see the final product

[Spoiler]dom fubuki isn’t really something I’ve seen in fics but it’s dam hot[/Spoiler]

>> No.7232373

So uh why does everyone seem to post first person only? I just physically seem unable to write first person and lean towards third but that's often tied towards the problem of that I must make the MC very much unlike me because Self Inserts suck ass.

>> No.7232382

>>7232347
Sigh... Phonepostinganonchama...

>> No.7232421

>>7232240
>>7232178
i fucking came god damn it
i came in FOUR FUCKING MINUTES, a new low
this general is doing terrible things to me

for reference her telling anon to cum for her got me good
jesus fuck anon this is dangerous stuff you've got here

>> No.7232441

>>7232373
Anon, most of us write Second Person, cause that's the perspective that lends itself best to selfinsert smut
First Person: I see Fubuki
Second Person: You see Fubuki
Third Person: He sees Fubuki.

>> No.7232476

>>7232441
Second person is a myth. There's only first and third person in this world.

>> No.7232481

>>7232324
>>7232347

For additional context, this is just the first of a number of scenes I plan to write out, with the dom/sub roles switching depending on the situation

>> No.7232497

>>7232481
I am obligated to kneel

>> No.7232530

>>7232481
My knees, anonchama...! My knees are kneeling on their own!!

>> No.7232576

>>7232178
Holy shit. This was too damn good. Also proves once again that the Fox Friend is versatile and can be used for anything.
God this makes me want a Dominant Fubuki abuse fic where she bullies and rapes You while forcing You to do humiliating shit

>> No.7232628

>>7200644
Ahem....Coco amazon position (the sex one not the job one).

>> No.7232650

>>7232178
Fuck how will my hand job scene ever compare to this, it's got everything... Writeanon... I... I KNEEEEEELLLL!

>> No.7232664

>>7232628
Amazon position with your overbearing Amazonian boss who works at Amazon

>> No.7232871

>>7232664
>Forces you into the cry booth just to milk your dick for productivity reasons
>Hourly

>> No.7232975

>>7232871
That just reminds of the Kiara rape quadrilogy.
God I love that little series.

>> No.7233094

>>7232975
>Working For a Raise ALT; Pirate's Life For Me

>> No.7233295

>>7228527
It's not always there, but despite myself I occasionally get the most overwhelming desire to rail Mr. Koro into the fucking earth.

>> No.7233313

>>7228749
Juniper Actias kidnaps you, shota anon. Inspired by the anon that wants egg laying but I won't make this a smutfic.

I don't watch juniper so hopefully I don't mess this up

>> No.7233321

>>7230761
>>7231049

Consider me hyped

>> No.7233408

>>7231049
Consider working in Gura's sense of balance being completely shot as a result of her tail removal and her falling all over the place

>> No.7233625

>>7233408
she won't get the opportunity to walk in this story

>> No.7233701

>>7233625
oh

i, uh...

i see

>> No.7234033

>>7232650
it doesn't have to compare. more cake, remember

>> No.7234735

What's the percentage of fics written here being posted in other threads/generals, and how are they received, according to your own observations. I know that Psycho Killer was posted in the Mori threads and are loved, as well as the Lamy hive mind ones. My own Selen fic was posted to NijiEN thread(much to my surprise) and received mixed reviews.
Do you writeanons care about it if it happens?

>> No.7234756

Not sure if anyone else here feels the same way, but I really want to have sex with Fubuki.

>> No.7234801

>>7234735
I don't have the time to lurk in other threads so I wouldn't know if people were talking about them.

>> No.7234841

>>7228749
recovering from my first dose of nanobots

>> No.7234869

>>7234735
foob's thread is for the most part a pretty dead place, so nah. i don't like it there anyway

i'll be honest and say i've considered posting smut to r/hololewd before, but i never went through with it.

at the end of the day, there's a core group of regulars here whom i've been posting with for months and you guys are the ones i write for.

>> No.7234926

>>7234841
Hey dude, government here, just wanted to know I can see inside your mind now. One fucked up place. Can't get you to obey just yet, but that's what the second shot's for

>> No.7234977

>>7234756
Get a load of this fag. He JUST wants to have sex with Fubuki! NO impregnation? NO abuse? NO growing old together? NO marriage? WHAT A FAGGOT!!!!

>> No.7234984

>>7234926
don't you dare spoil my WIPs

>> No.7235007

>>7234841
hope you get better 5G reception. I didn't. Fucking scam.

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>>7234735
It doesn't bother me, it's a sort of a compliment really, but I am worried that people think it's me posting my own stuff being an attention whore. Some of those posts are worded in a way to make it seem like I am the one posting it when I never have.

>> No.7235340

just a shower thought, but the word 'musk' has been completely ruined for me as an arousing sexual descriptor because i always think of elon

>> No.7235376

>>7235340
I mean you could always bust out a trusty internet thesaurus to find synonyms for it.

>> No.7235428

>>7234869
Do you think at this point this general posts more love for our fox friend than her dedicated general?

>> No.7235445

>>7235376
i use scent instead
sometimes aroma, but that's more food related
sometimes fragrance as well, but again, cosmetics related
musk is specifically body-related and it has been ruined because i start thinking of space travel

>> No.7235471

>>7235428
her general died early for the first time in memory the other day so yeah, probably

>> No.7235500

>>7235445
I mean under the right circumstances 'stink' can work as well. IpromiseI'mnotafartfagit'sjusttheclosesttomusk.

>> No.7235547

>>7235500
i would probably use stench before that. stink is... i dunno, a juvenile word

>> No.7235571

>>7200644
Whenever you sit down anywhere Amelia does a running jump and lands ass first while screaming something about "ground pounds" on your lap. You're starting to think she might like you.

>> No.7235681

>>7235500
To me, stench and stink refer to bad smells, whereas musk just means natural smell. It's not an exact substitute.

>> No.7235764

>>7235681
yeah true, but stench is usually an apt descriptor in the same situation
like if you ever have doubts that feminine musk fucking stinks, have sex without telling her to shower first

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>>7235764
>have sex without telling her to shower first
I'll be sure to ask my girlfr-

Oh

>> No.7235902

>>7234735
I don't post my own stuff to other threads, if someone else were to then I wouldn't mind, as long as they're not taking credit (not that I could stop that either).
When I do browse around and see a story in another thread I'll grab it and post it here, but those are few and far between.

>> No.7236056

Half of the time I spend writing is me searching "X word synonym" and "X word meaning" to use in my story...

>> No.7236147

>>7235859
an unwashed pussy smells intensely of ammonia. it's acrid, cloying and every instinct in your body will tell you not to go there. smells similar to pre-production inks, the stuff they put in when making them uv curing

>> No.7236183

>>7236147
"I definitely shouldn't stick my penis in there.


However!"

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>>7236147
arent you verbose.

You could also just say it smells like piss and its gross.

>> No.7236309

>>7236241
i wanted to give the full justification of why i think feminine musk and feminine stench are one and the same

speaking of, i have no idea if dudes get the same problem, cuz i was cut as a baby

>> No.7236364

>>7236309
Nah with dudes I'd describe it more as a "funk" than a stench or musk. Think sorta like the stench of your balls after a workout.

>> No.7236438

>>7236147
>an unwashed pussy smells intensely of ammonia.

Thanks anon, this fact that I otherwise would have overlooked will be making a cameo in my story that will be posted next thread.

>> No.7236592

>>7236147
But what if i like it that way?

>> No.7236610

>>7236364
fair enough, that's not as bad although i wouldn't have expected an external organ to reach those dizzy heights

>>7236438
weirdanon, is that you? i'm... glad? i could be of service
it's a complicated feeling of warm fuzzies and sheer terror

>> No.7236618

>>7236438
Just so you know, Ammonia smells like piss and sweat. They get their smell from Ammonia in the first place. And... Females piss from near their vagina, so yeah, they would smell like Ammonia... What the fuck are we? Grade schoolers that just found out girls don't have a weewee?

>> No.7236687

>>7236618
i think it's probably common for people that have never had their face near a vagina to romanticize them a bit

>> No.7236996

>>7236610
it's a complicated feeling of warm fuzzies and sheer terror The feeling is mutual.

>>7236618

I was aware of this fact prior but anon^ kindly provided us with a refresher course in the nuances of smell. This descriptor simply would have slipped my mind otherwise so kudos to him.

>> No.7237123

>>7236996
As long as we're talking about that, and you're the type to write smut, keep in mind squirting is basically piss, and a girl can also have a thick white discharge as a climax.

Vadges are strange things.

>> No.7237418

>>7237123
At the end of the day, a vagina is just a hole made of flesh that our minds decided was hot

>> No.7237452

>>7237418
Stupid biology.

>> No.7237506

>>7237123
>squirting is basically piss
Is that not a good thing?

>> No.7237529

>>7237418
>our minds decided was hot
Speak for yourself.

>> No.7237561

>>7237529
fagchama!!! how are you?

>> No.7237580

>>7237452
We should rebel against our biology by looking at drawings of females and releasing our semen into tissues and disposing of them as far away from a womb as possible

>> No.7237592

>>7237418
>our minds decided was hot
Fagchama is that you?

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>>7237580
>as far away from a womb as possible

>> No.7237644

>>7237561
Desperate for Astel and/or Kanae, as always.

>> No.7237762

>>7237635
Sorry Mio, but my cum is only for Lamy when she finally realizes that she loves me back.

>> No.7237795

>>7237580
Interesting idea anon, how would reading stories about the (virtual) female form instead of looking at drawings fit into all this?

>> No.7237874

>>7237580
20 years ahead of you anon

>> No.7237922

>>7237762
Anon, seeing your extreme persistence... I might have fallen for you... Why don't we get a room so you can dick me down?

>> No.7237984

>>7232178
>>7232481
I can do nothing but kneel before you, Writeanon. I FUCKING KNEEL!!!
Thank you so much for your hard work.

>> No.7238016

>>7237922
This Lamy is looking pretty…
…pretty sus, that is.

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>>7232576
>spoiler
This but it's Kurokami-sama instead.

>> No.7238030

>>7238016
>It's Mio wearing Lamy's outfit

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>>7234756
Anon do you know which general you're in?
Also
>not wanting to marry and live happily for Fubuki until the end of your days
Haha faggot

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>>7238030
You fool, you thought it was Lamy finally relenting to you dick, but it was me, MIO! I've already got you trapped, you're not leaving until you fertilize my last surviving egg!

>> No.7238198

>>7238136
Mio I can respect that you've gone this long without having sex, but so have I. My seed and by extension my cock is ONLY for Lamy and ONLY when she realizes how much she loves me. Maybe if you had just gotten rid of your faggot cat a little while ago you could have had me. I'm sorry but it's Taiga's fault that my heart only yearns for Lamy now.

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>>7234756
Anon do you know which general you're in?
Also
>not wanting to marry and live happily with Fubuki until the end of your days
Haha faggot

>> No.7238254

And now you see why I always said penetration was overrated and that pussies and ass were gross. There's nothing hot about them. They are disgusting, you may as well be fetishizing a dog's mouth at this point. Why can't you accept that cocks are more appealing in not only appearance but smell, taste and ejaculate?

>> No.7238285

>>7238254
Based penis enjoyer blows pus pit fans the fuck out.

>> No.7238298

>>7238254
Dude, have you evem tasted your cum?

>> No.7238328

>>7238022
this but it's Kurokami bullying and raping Fubuki

>> No.7238370

>>7238298
Remove your name, you tripfag.

>> No.7238385

>>7238370
>tripfag
anonchaama... your 4Channel reps...

>> No.7238395

>>7238385
Attention seeking whore.

>> No.7238399

>>7238298
ok but are you really a guy if you havent tried to taste your own cum once?

>> No.7238404

>>7238370
Whoops- I mean, m-my stand is a cum extraction type, you will not get away!

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>>7238328
This but you end up dicking both of them down

>> No.7238445

>>7238254
Fagchama! I've missed you so much! Have you come out of the closet to your family and friends yet?

>> No.7238467

>>7238399
Are you really a guy if you haven't jacked yourself off in the mating press position so you can cum on yourself to know how it feels to get a bukkake?

>> No.7238588

>>7238404
Shut the fuck up you faggot

>> No.7238748

>>7238399
>>7238467
Next you gonna ask if you're a real guy if you've never taken it up the ass

>> No.7238838

>>7238748
You haven't?

>> No.7238889

>>7238748
>imagine never having taken it up the ass
Fuck off you sissy, come back when you're a real man

>> No.7238890

Jesus.... every fucking thread the same bullshit

>> No.7239023

>>7236147
and a washed pussy?

>> No.7239184

>>7239023
What ever soap she used with a touch of sweat.

>> No.7239208

>>7239023
retarded question

>> No.7239233

>>7202610
nice

>> No.7239240

>>7239208
shut up, this is important

>> No.7239304

>>7238254
Seeing people like you on 4chan is the reason I can't go out into the world, meet a new person and not immediately start wondering what deep personality disturbances they're hiding behind that friendly smile and well-adjusted outer persona of theirs.

>> No.7239315

New thread
>>7239245

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>>7238022
>>7238328
>>7238405
Since you brought this up, how come there are no Kurokami stories in the archive?
I know that Menhera Wrangler Anon technically included her for like, half a chapter but she didn't really do anything, and even then, I'm pretty sure that was the only time I ever saw her included anywhere.
So how come Dark Friend isn't getting anything? Do people find her boring or something?

>> No.7239349

>>7239240
Soap with a hint of skin and piss. Not really anything a girl can do to fully get rid of the piss but it can be minimized by quite a bit.

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>> No.7239768

Gonna be honest with you guys here.

I really want to eat out Aqua's ass. Like, really really badly.

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>> No.7239901

>>7239768
Anon her diet is almost entirely sugar.........I understand the retard has a humongous ass and fucking a stupid girl is great but with her diet analingus isn't a good idea.....

>> No.7239972

>>7239901
That just makes it better.

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The hardest part of posting images for the hell of it, is not wanting to use really interesting ones that could be used for stories/prompts/ideas.

>> No.7240027

>>7239901
I'm not one to eat da poopoo, but I'm so incredibly horny for the onion's juicy butthole that I'm willing to overlook any possible accidents as long as she squirts on my face from an analingus orgasm.

Nobody said glory came cheap.

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>>7239972

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>> No.7240256

>>7240224
Something is amiss here...

>> No.7240279

>>7240256
What do you mean? That's PerfectPaizuriTenshi, nothing's amiss.

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>> No.7240618

>>7240294
I'm working on a story prominently featuring Noel, which the first part of should be ready next thread, but I keep having to take breaks cause GOD SHE'S SO HOT!! SEX WITH NOEL! SEX WITH NOEL! HOT SWEATY PAIZURI WITH NOEL! UUUOOOOGHHHH PAINITNG NOELS FAT TITS WITH MY CUM! AAAAAAAAAAAA CUMMING IN NOEL DRIPPING KNIGHT PUSSY UUUOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHH GET PREGNANT! GET PREGNANT! GET PREGNANT!

>> No.7240656

>>7240618
I agree with this writeanon.

>> No.7240811

>>7240618
AAAAAH, SIT ON NOEL'S FACE AND FUCK HER TITS WHILE SHE LICKS MY BALLS
SPREAD HER SPIT ALL OVER HER FACE THEN FACEFUCK HER THROAT. UOOOOOH!
LESBIAN CONVERSION THERAPY. HAVE MY BABIES NOEL! GET PREGNANT! GET PREGNANT!

>> No.7240941

>>7240811
GETTING FUCKED BY NOEL IN THE AMAZON POSITION! GETTING LOVINGLY WOMANHANDLED BY HER RETARD STRENGTH! HER LIFTING YOU OVERHEAD AND GIVING A STANDING BLOWJOB! HER PUSSY MUSCLES SQUEEZING YOUR COCK SO HARD THAT YOU CANT PULL OUT UNTIL YOUVE BEEN FULLY MILKED! FALLING ASLEEP ON TOP OF NOEL WITH YOUR DICK STILL INSIDE HER!

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>>7240618
>>7240811
Have you tried -not- imagining laying down with her and pumping her full of baby batter until she is nothing but a quivering mess who won't release her leglock?

>> No.7241088

>>7240977
never.

>> No.7241206

>>7240977
I have, cause the story is relatively serious. There will be sex eventually but not for a while. It's just this knight and her stupid big tits make me SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX SEX

>> No.7241214

I swear gen 3 really hit it out of the park in terms of designs that are just pure sex.

>> No.7241263

>>7241206
Anon try not to think about the tasteful beauty mark she has on her tit.

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>Noel and Flare will never want to raise a child tgther
>they'll never choose you to impregnate Noel
>you'll never make Noel feel way better than Flare ever made her feel
>you'll neer make Noel fall in love with your cock
>you'll never see Flares face getting sadder and sadder as she realizes that she has lost Noel to you
>you'll never feel Noels legs locked around you as you cum deep inside her
>you'll never raise the child together with Noel that she was supposed to raise with Flare

>> No.7241339

>>7240941
>FALLING ASLEEP ON TOP OF NOEL WITH YOUR DICK STILL INSIDE HER!

Ok I was up for continued shitposting but this seriously got me depressed now and I'm gonna go get some whiskey to drown my sorrows. Thanks for the reminder asshole

>> No.7241376

>>7241275
Cucking Flare by fucking Noel anon is that you?

>> No.7241401

>>7241275
Ehh, I'd hate to leave Flare out in the lurch. Maybe Noel could convince her that a couple quarter elf kiddos would be nice

>> No.7241417

>>7241376
_no

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>> No.7242137

>>7241989
FUBUKI GOING WITH YOU TO THE BEACH! SHE ASKS YOU TO PUT SUNSCREEN ON HER BACK AND YOU JACK OFF AND CUM ALL OVER HER ASS! SHE FALLS ASLEEP IN UNDER AN UMBRELLA AND YOU FUCK HER TITS! SWIMMING WITH HER AND FUCKING HER ASS WITH THE RHYTHM OF THE WAVES SO HER FRIENDS DONT NOTICE! MATING PRESSING HER IN THE SAND IN A SECLUDED COVE YOU TWO FOUND!

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