/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>7103113
STORY ANCHOR

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your other thread is still on page 6 you fucking retards

>>7103276
Fucking Pekora's hair and covering it in cum!

>>7103276
(You) and Marine flirt very publicly with each other to the point it grosses out all the other Holo's. You both very clearly want each other. There's only one problem, you're both paper tigers. Someone needs to help these terrified virgins out.

>>7103276
A young Subaru has her house burn down to the ground. She is desperate for help as her parents can't afford to pay rent for 3 people. From here on out, one of two things may happen, (you) offer a helping hand, taking in Subaru under your wing to help you with chores and relieving yourself whilst you help her get back on her feet, possibly introducing her to the Vtuber world; or the other way, her parents give her up for adoption/sell her away to a slave dealer, where (you) find her, take her in and treat her much more as a slave than a helper.

I've played too much Teaching Feeling. Good game.

>>7104237
>Teaching feeling with Subaru
Writeanons onegai.......

Out of curiosity, anyone have a particular font they like to write in when making a story? Years of school have made it so it's basically uncomfortable to use anything but Times New Roman,

>>7105933
Im to lazy to change it so i just use the default Arial font in google docs

>>7103276
The hags find a condom in your dropped wallet and confront you about it. They say that's extremely gross and if you seriously believe you would be using protection with them you're awful.

>>7106353
>Hags teaching you the wonders of unprotected babymaking sex so you never make the mistake of using a condom again
Writeanons I beg

>>7106413
You then get HIV and end up spreading it from the main slut hag (Mio) to all the other whores. You all end up dying from the common cold 7 years later. Hololive catches on what happened and starts a pro-condom campaign with the talents saying funny catchphrases on the condom packaging.

>>7106890
>Mio
>Slut
Sorry Anon but Mio hasn't had sex in so long that she's reverted back to being a virgin. Nice try.

>>7107102
> reverted back to being a virgin
> her hymen regenerates as well

>>7103276
Polka goes on a menhera tantrum, whining to Botan about how she'll always be lonely and never experience the joys of motherhood, expecting emotional support from the hag who must surely understand what she's going through.

The solution-minded lioness instead declares that she has a way to solve Polka's problem for good.
Without anymore explanation than that she unzips her skirt, pulls down her tightly-fit underwear, and shows off her massive barbed cock.

>>7107734
that's kind of stupid.

>>7108170
well what would you do if a girl like this was so desperate for someone to love her and start a family with her

>>7103276
Someone in the Mogu thread brought up the idea of having an office romance with your gamer boss Okayu who bullies you at work
and I can't get it out of my head now.

"It would start out with small stuff, as she secretly gauges you. Making you run back and forth for documents that you know she doesn't need, teasing you in front of your coworkers, having you run out to get her some coffee. Then suddenly it ramps up, as she gets more confident, and she calls you in to help her with work on a mandated holiday, and forces you to be her chair. You know? Just silly stuff."

>>7109142
please!

>>7109142
I think you'll love the story "Nursing Catto", it's pretty similar to your prompt and very well written. It is NSFW tho.

>>7109266
>>7109142
I know its completely against her character, especially since shes admitted to wanting to be the one receiving the humilation but still this is hot as fuck

>>7109327
She may be a big M herself but she just loves teasing people, so it's not that outlandish.

>>7106890
>Mio has HIV
TTTTTTTTTAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIGGGGGGAAAAAA!!!!!!

>>7109361
thats a good point, hadnt considered it

>>7108964
I would simply be the one that impregnates her, not Botan.

>>7103276
Ahem......Gyaru Holo's.....that is all.

>>7103276
Giving Ninomae Ina'nis your big P'ena'nis!

>>7104051

I purposefully write in a maximalist style and often couple that with verbosity for humor. That's my modus operandi and it shouldn't be conflated with a "lookatmeimsosmart" sentiment but instead a stylistic choice. Some people like how I write, some people hate it.

and yes I agree that that abstract radiated pompousness but I hope you can respect the difference between that and my stories.

>>7103276
(You) manage to convince your oshi to (somewhat reluctantly) sleep with another man so you can get off on it. You set a few ground regarding what is and isn't okay and send her off in the evening, expecting her to come back late at night. She ends up not returning until morning the next day and is too tired to tell you about it, but when you get to bed with her that night, she strokes you off while she sheepishly and gradually reveals that she got overwhelmed by the dude's charm and broke every single rule, getting less embarrassed and more into it as she realizes how well you respond to the humiliation.

>>7111207
Thought as much.
I’m guessing it's partly a way of counterbalancing the weirdness in your works as well? Sort of an “I don’t take this all that seriously, and neither should you” sort of thing?

>>7103199
Not my story, but it was posted very late into the last thread so I'll do the Anon a favor and repost it.

Polka and Rain: https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQxFzsrqdtsfvuoTFCGmxlKIINB0ifyz3CcoNKylnIiM77RCRf_t_SDCsrOOHjNdF0uid6RdsqgAvr2/pub
Was this the only story posted last thread?

>>7111650
there's that anon making the ame story. I can go back and paste the story into a doc unless the author or archiveanon is already doing that

>>7111849
Honestly, I really hope that stuff ends up well-preserved. The guy behind it really knows what he’s doing.

>>7111849
Just updated it. The more characters they add the more invested I am. When it's done-done I could try and fix up the formatting since now it's copy-pasting and that doesn't convey well in the doc as well as it should, but I'm grabbing it as it's posted.

And then Mel was all like, "Yo, let me suck yo dikk." and I was all like, "for real cuz?" and she like, "hell yeah, you fine as f*#%".
And then she did, and it was da bess. Real shit, i'mma marry dat bitch.

>>7105933
I don't change it for my stories usually, but I really like Wild Words, if only for the implications.

>>7111650
Fuck man...

>>7109327
Teasing you until you snap! Okayu!
Wearing loose fitting and revealing clothing around the office and accidentally bumping into you! Okayu!
Wearing a shoddily buttoned shirt with no underwear! Okayu!
Calling you a filthy animal when you push her down on the break room sofa, only to leglock you! Okayu!

>>7112234
Shit you're taking it above and beyond here

>>7103276
I need more stories like nursing catto. Just lazy cuddly sex with one of the girls.

>>7111650

A story where one of the girls hugs you and pets your head while you drink her breast milk

>>7111487
Yeah pretty much, but I also like to leave enough wiggle room for readanons to take it seriously if they want to, but that's a very difficult line to thread. Anyway I've still a lot to learn and I hope to improve the quality of future stories.

I’ve been trying to improve my writing lately, because I feel like it hasn’t changed at all since I wrote my first story a couple of months back.
The thing is though, I have no clue about which part of my writing I need to improve. Do any writeanons get what I mean?

>>7113004
what have you written?

>>7111650
You forgot the other page where (you) wake up from that nightmare and snuggle up to polka in the middle of the night, hugging her a little tighter to remember the feel of her against your chest, and thank god that you get to spend another day with the love of your life. Right, anon?

>>7113415
The true ending is you waking up alone and getting ready for your job as a truck driver on a particularly rainy day

>>7113476
And then polka became a rpg protagonist in another world.

Its actually fun watching her play apex I didn't think an apex stream could be entertaining

>>7113004
My works include Golden duck, Just a little crazy, the Holocalypse series, She's not horny, she's lonely (and the happy family follow-up, She's happy) and Dramatic Miopost. I also wrote Dense treasure but I didn't take that one seriously.
If anyone's read even one of my stories, could you please give me some really brutal and nitpicky feedback? Because I haven't been satisfied with my writing for a while and only want to write the good shit for everyone to read.

>>7114386
Whoops, meant for >>7113110

>>7114386
I'm sorry anon I don't really have any criticism for any of your works because I love all of them.

>>7114523
Thank you so much man, I appreciate it. But really, even the tiniest bits of feedback like "this part had a bit too much dialogue" or "this part wasn't descriptive enough" would be super helpful.
Of course, I'm not expecting you to go back and read them, just from what you remember.

>>7114386
I was gonna call >>7114523 a fag and do my best to roast you, but I'm checking your Marine (Not h*rny just lonely) story right now and it's pretty good. If you absolutely must have criticism, not important but the MC learned Japan too fast(wasn't gonna add this originally), probably would've been better if the character didn't visit as many countries and actually had been planning on visiting Japan for many years, whilst i don't have much to say, maybe the relationship between you and her happened too fast, asking her out after she crashed in on your place. Also her personality seems a bit... off, maybe quite a bit honestly. If your intent is to do a more roommate kind of feel, it's perfect but as Marine, the character, it's not quite there. Maybe work on refining speech traits and characterization instead of just writing the person (you) think she is?

>>7115146
Now that i finished the story might as well add, the "calling in the mafia to beat up her boss" ending was pretty cringy. Didn't land very well after all that build up.

>>7114881
Uh if you really had me think. I read the latest chapter of Holocalypse recently and if I had to say, I think Rushia's character as a whole is tad bit one dimensional. I know it's her number one shtick but it's not her whole character. Maybe like half of it. I think she could do we with some more character in general. At least that's what I think.

I added a bit more to the Big HoloEN Abuse story, if anyone wants to check it out. It's not 'back on' or anything, but I will write on it here and there.

Anyway
>>7090478
Bumblebee finally finished explaining the Transformers exodus to Earth* when the skyline of Miami breeched the horizon. "Wow..." Said Ame softly. "Never gets old." "Just like Scrappy, huh?" Quipped the automobile. "Holy shit Bumblebee, what the fuck?!" She was absolutely blown away by the remark, so much so that she kicked the dashboard. "I'm sorry, Ame, I honestly don't know what came over me..." He said in a tone that implied that he'd have been shaking his head if he had one at the current moment. Maybe killing Wildrider was eating at him. He needed to suppress that better. Ame sighed. "Look, maybe death isn't the same to transforming robots aliens from outer space but here on Earth it's the end, ok? No more-" "I understand Ame, believe me. We may live for centuries but when we die that's it too." An uncomfortable silence dawned. After a while Bumblebee spoke. "So, Ame, where did we need to go first?" Ame pondered that. Originally she'd planned to go to the crime scene in Allapattah, specifically in Juan Pablo Duarte Park. But Little Havana was right across the river, and Wynwood was even closer. She decided that she'd need some protection, and she'd had to leave her gun back in Saint Louis. But she'd also need a base of operations, and to contact Fred, Scooby, and the gang. Ok, she'd made up her mind. Normally she didn't like dealing with any organized crime syndicate but the local leader of Bratva -the Russian mob- owed her a couple. She told Bee the front, place called Hotel Moscow. Time to pay Shishiro 'La-Lion' Boten a visit.

*Transformers cartoon, episode 1: More than Meets The Eye, Part 1 - 1984

>>7103276
Noel develops an irrational fear of men. Not because of what they can do to her, but because she believes they all have a desperate desire to rape her beloved elf girlfriend.
So she decides to take initiative by raping Flare first

>>7103276
Towa accidently drinks bibi's pee and gets addicted to drinking bibi's pee and triese to make bibi pee more than usual

>>7115981
Someone will pick it up one of these day anon

Sometimes I feel bad about my fetishes but then I see stuff like this ^
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>>7115981
Why would you want this? What's the though process here anon? And why have you been so persistent in posting it to every thread?

>>7115981
There’s a prompt archive, you know.
Spamming your request every thread is no way to get a writeanon to pick it up.

>>7116147
I don't think any writeanons would pick it up anyway, or at least I hope not.

>>7115467
>HoloEN abuse story Anon is also making Tommy Vercetti and Bumblebee Crossover
lmao

>>7116121
Autists reposting their specific shitty fetish for months on end is a universal drawthread mainstay, and it's no real surprise that they would inevitably shit up writethreads too.

I saw the anons listing their favorite stories, and I thought I would too. The ones that have stuck with me are the Kiara/employee arc, "Play in the Rain and You Get Wet," the Mio pregnancy one (love this, read multiple times), "She's Not Horny, Shes's Lonely", and the Mori/You cheating story. I'd love for that one to continue, if that author is out there.

But I read everything, and it's all pretty fun. Keep up the great work, writers!

>>7116121
>>7116147
yeah at least do the sensible thing and come up with like 20 prompts based on your fetish and hope at least one will stick
its what I'm doing anyway

>>7116867
Are you a futafag?

>>7116682
>Mori/You cheating story.
It's a little strange I have to ask this but, which one?

>>7116928
The one where Mori blackmails you into fucking her using your girlfriend's career. Hot stuff, but good story too.

>>7117007
Oh, so mine! Yeah I'm working on the third and final part. I hate being employed, but I have next week off with not a lot to do, so barring something unexpecetd, I'll be finishing it then.

>>7116682
I'm glad you enjoy my works so much, Anon. It means a lot.

>>7109301
It's my fav story in the archive but damn it, one can't be satisfied with only a single nice Okayu story.

So many stories in the archive, yet there's not a single one about fucking Kanata in the ass! Very sad!

>>7117528
Even the futa fags are less obnoxious and gay than you shit pipe shaggers. How many stories do you need where the plot is literally "Fucking X in the ass" before you're satisfied?

>>7115146
>>7115371
Thanks, roast me more if you feel like it, every bit helps.
>>7115411
Thanks for letting me know. Admittedly, I haven't done my Rushia reps so I can understand how that happened.

>>7117596
WOAH friend, you seem pretty upset! You should try reading more fics about fucking chuubas in the ass.

>>7117596
>shit pipe shaggers
Available now for the PlayStation 2!

>>7117596
Shut up nigger. The next time I write smut I will make sure it goes in their ass.

>>7117596
Anal is hot faggot

>>7117153
Great to hear!

>>7115840
Noel and (You) having a duel outside Flare's home for who gets the right to rape her!

>>7118097
Just when it looks like you're about to lose, you remember what's at stake and channel your inner Takeshi to knock Noel out with your massive erect cock.

>>7117596
>How many stories do you need where the plot is literally "Fucking X in the ass" before you're satisfied?
There can never be enough.
Also
>less obnoxious and gay
>Having sex with a woman
>Having sex with a penis
Are you the fag that comes back every now and then to talk about how much he finds women, specifically vaginas, disgusting? You're fagchama aren't you?

>>7118148
(You)r finishing move is raping Noel as the pregame for raping Flare.

Hey, is the guy working on the sequel to 'Matsuri's Baby Carrot' still around? Any progress? Not meaning to come across as rushing or anything, just remembered it after all the futa and anal talk. I want to see that menhera whore slammed in her ass while her two incher squirts.

>>7117596
if you don't want to rail Aqua's fat ass then you're a lost cause

>>7113004
I get how you feel, anon. Someday I want to write stories that are up there with the greats like Exposure therapy or menhera wrangler, but I honestly don’t know what I’m missing

>>7118436
God I NEED to prone bone that retarded ass so bad

>>7118501
It'd be nice. Exposure Therapy and Menhera Wrangler are such amazing stories that everyone loves, it's honestly a little disheartening sometimes. I know that comparing oneself to others is an unhealthy mindset that doesn't accomplish anything, but man.

>>7103276
Watame getting down on her hands and knees and begging you to either fuck her armpits or let her watch you fuck another girls armpits.

>>7118695
Watame gets really close to observe you fucking another Holomem's armpit and ends up getting cum on her face. Also, have you ever seen a double armpit fuck? Two Chuubas, one in front of the other with armpits connected, and your dick passes through both of them. I sure haven't. Would be cool to see it.

I wish i had a bigger dick to make this fantasy a reality...

>>7118501
>>7118580
Striving for greatness can be a good motivator to get better. And even if your stories aren't held up as part of "the greats," they're still making someone out there happy. Or sad. Or whatever it is you're trying to make them feel.
Plus, at the end of the day all we're really doing is writing fanfiction of virtual anime girls. The most important part is to have fun with it.

>>7118876
What about just have them stand side by side? So then you are getting both a double armpitfuck and a double titfuck? They'd have to hold their arms like straight up though.

>>7119049
I have no idea how that's supposed to work so I'll just illustrate my idea to sell it further. >>7118876

>>7119457
Hot

>>7119457
Absolutely incredible anon. This belongs in each and every one of humanities greatest museums. You're truly a visionary the likes of which we have not and will not see for at least centuries, no, millennia.

>>7119457
please post this in the drawthread

>>7118876
>>7119457
Stop baiting me into making the Hag Orgy even longer goddamn it.

>>7119457
Students of the fine arts will be writing about this piece for eons to come.

>>7115840
>Flare please, you don't understand how horribly horny humans can be.
>They'll take just one look at you and immediately want to rip your clothes off and touch your delightfully soft breasts and play with your cute little nipples and and and...
>>7118148
WIth kinda talk, Noel might just grow a giant "mace" herself to beat you and impregnate flare

>>7119986
>You and Noel have DBZ-esque and Takeshi-esque power up sequences, battling to see who is more horny at the idea of raping Flare

Comforting your moth God gf when she is Haveing self doubt about her humanity

Gura, having "fun" and taking it out on you after the stream

https://youtu.be/aeXM7Y83UOo

>>7120500
How about i just step on her instead?

>>7121547
look up "towas punching bag" in the archive. its basically that but tmt

>>7121559
NOOOOOOOOOOO

>>7121559
Haha what if instead of stepping on her you used her larva body like an onahole haha

>>7103276
Marine's needing to take time off and ACTUALLY not use her voice for a while and Fubuki has to convince her to do it or she might actually have her career shortened.

Although Fubuki herself is just as much a workaholic can she convince Marine that taking a week off won't be the end of the world?

>>7103276
Pekora was not a princess! she was only pretending and cannot even pronounce the name of the royal family, she's actually a low ranking commoner!

>>7105933
Roboto all the way

>>7103276
Pekora has to masturbate a horse with a horse semen collecting receptacle. She is inexperienced and gets tired very quickly, letting the tube fall off the horse's member, which causes it to pin Pekora down on the ground and use her to finish the job. Must involve at least one comment of Pekora talking about horse semen on her hands being gross!

>Mel thread
>no rape stories

>>7123367
horsefuckerchama.....

>>7123409
Make one yourself rapechama

>>7123409
Of Mel doing it to you?
Just look into her eyes, become enthralled and wake up two weeks later with no memory of what happened during that time, an incredibly sore pelvis and not able to get it up because you've been drained that much.

>>7123367
Adding to this, Miko can be in the story mocking Pekora while she does the job. In the end after the horse fucks Pekora's cunny, he is about to impale her by sticking it in her bum, but Miko saves her by getting the receptacle back on the horse's cock and finishing it off! I think this would make for a great and fun story with lots of laughs to be had! But like, write it as if it was regular smut, it will still be funny haha.

>>7123409
I understand what you mean

>>7123409
You are a disgusting pig.

>>7123586
Drained of blood or cum? Both?

I'm sorry everyone, I've decide to take a crack at the towa bibi pee fic

>>7118501
>>7118580
I'm, uh, genuinely glad to hear that you would put my menhera wrangler series up there with the likes of exposure therapy. It may come off as ironic, but everyone compares themselves to others at times, and so do I. Sometimes I don't think my works are as great as some of the better written stories here, but if there's anything I can advise is that, you just gotta channel your love for writing and the emotions you want the readers to feel. I think it's good to motivate yourself to improve, but when you have any sort of doubts when writing or posting it, just say "fuck it, if that anon can keep posting stories about fucking chuubas in the ass, so can I"

Now I must return to writing more heart-wrenching Suisei stories

>>7123843
Don't be sorry. That anon has been begging for weeks at this point. I see you as a hero for finally shutting him the fuck up.

>>7123843

>>7123682
Mel doesn't drink blood! She's said so. And Mel would never lie to you.
So what does that leave you?

>>7123620
melchama...

>>7123843
Intentional bait and switch please just to insult the begger

>>7123878
Appeasing shit prompts like that should never be done.

>>7123898
But anon Mel is a vampire, what do you think vampires drink? I'm so sorry you had to find out this way.....

>>7123620
It's okay Mel, let it all out

>>7123843
i do like knowinng that there will be really baffling and ocassionally fucked up stories in the archive, just leaves me with a big green grin

>>7123620
Bros. While this most likely isn't Mel it very well could be one of the Holo's that DOES come on this board. We've angered them bros....

>>7123867
>more heart-wrenching Suisei stories
I would have been hyped anyway because of your history, but this has me very excited for the next story.

>>7123620
Risu...

>>7123867
>Now I must return to writing more heart-wrenching Suisei stories
I'm ready for more pain

>>7123958
>>7124022
>>7124077
hentai!

>>7123981
>What do you think vampires drink?
CUM
ONLY MINE

>>7124229
f-fuck...I'm gonna cum...u-AH!

>>7124229
Mel I desperately want to eat your pussy like a man who's lived in the northernmost reaches of Siberia would hot food. You have no idea what sinful lust filled acts I would commit towards you and your coworkers.

the "grab as much as you can" one is amazing. my regards to the chef

>>7124302
Lamy! Are you getting off to something that isn't Botan or booze?!

>>7124302
>Will post this but won't let an Anon fuck them
Disgusting.

>>7114386
Hey I liked the miopost

>>7124433
It hurts honestly... I mean what does Mel have that I don't? A remotely feminine body? Tits that aren't made out of pure muscle? A vagina? When will Lamy learn that a man can love her just as much as a girl.....

>>7124504
It's okay, bro. I know that feel. I know that the Lamys will never love me like I love them without a great deal of effort. We'll make it, one day. We'll make it...

>>7124368
Thank you!

>>7123843
All the weird prompts and you pick this one

>>7124379
s-sorry...

>>7123843
You still have time to reconsider anon, please...

>>7123409
>Konkapuuuu exclaimed Mel as her stream started.
>As a tear of joy rolled from his eyes the coomer that wrote the garbage >>7123409 stepped atop his chair.
>foldingchair_crusy.png
>The coomer oinked in delight as Mel's giggle filled his room
>Falling_from_chair.gif
>I hope she reads my red superchat pondered the filthy coomer as he gained his balance again
>The piggy held the rope at his fingertips, it was tied around the ceiling fan, it was thick and the ends seemed to fray
>One last thing before my trip
>piggy pulled his phone and began to play his favorite song of hers
>Des-des-des communication sang Mel in the background
>Coomer kissed the screen leaving cheeto residue on it
>Again on the chair the coomer prepared to an hero with his neck tie snugly chaffing his neck
>regret.jpeg
>Fear and the will to live flooded the coomer as the chair skated across the room
>Squirming_fish.webm
>At his final moments of life the video was ending, the coomer was fucked and Mel never did see his super chat

>>7124770
I didn't know you were a writer Mel!

>>7124770
Nice writing Mel! You really showed that anon what for! Now, about me consensually and lovingly eating you out.....

>>7124504
yes

>>7124504
You know I'm sure a lamy would know a way to fix that.....

>>7125136
perhaps, that sounds like a good idea...

>>7125136
>>7125278
Is it a way for Lamy to love me without making any external or internal changes to myself, the way I look, or the way I act? It is, isn't it! Thank you so much Anon! And as for you Lamy...This relationship between us two will be consummated VERY soon...

Haha time to shitpost.

>You had heard it on good authority that Botan was more kitten like than Lion, and actually had that tucking instinct all cats have
>You found that so cute you had to see it for yourself.
>You found Botan walking a head of you the next day and you called out to her.
>She stopped and smiled at you and asked what was up
>You slipped around behind her and grabbed a handful of her white mane.
>She immediately tucked her arms and legs in till she became a easy to move torso sized object.
>She also regulated her weight somehow so she was easy to carry with one hand.
>You brought her up to and beamed at her cuteness.
>Botan looks at you nonplussed and smacks you lightly on the nose.

>>7125693
Haha then you use her like a hag shaped fleshlight, right?

>>7125774
Do what you will, I have already won.

>>7125693
This feels more like some good old-fashioned fluff rather than a shitpost.
And I love it.

This has probably been talked about before but you wake up in your oshis body what do you do?

>>7125929
Is this a "for one day" thing or what? If it's for one day I'm taking nudes and sending them to myself.

>>7125966
Ah good point so that if it one day what if it was permanent?

>>7125929
Convert others.

>>7119457
the image that saved /wg/

>>7125995
I don't fucking know. I can't be charismatic and funny. I don't want to fuck others. I find yuri to be offputting. I guess just fucking die or try to find a way back to normal.

>>7125929
I spent way too much time thinking about this some time back. Assuming i woke up in Risu's body, i would first try to get into her computer, or phone, whichever doesn't have a password (if both blocked by password I'll try asking Moona/Iofi but im basically fucked) . Now that I'm in, i would go to /vt/ and create a thread saying "Hello /vt/, it's me, Risu. I'll be granting any requests you make to me" In video format using her live2D. From then on, i probably would not spend too much time making videos for some random anons. I would go through her files and try to find more info about the Holomembers. I would also record myself in her body and send it to my accounts, probably masturbating or just nudes. After that, if there's no time limit, i would just shitpost in her body until Cover fires her. Try to talk with Moona and Iofi (they would probably wonder why I'm not talking in Indog and why i sound so different so that wouldn't last). Now, there's not much else i can really do other than try to rape those two before slitting my throat and hopefully waking up back in my old body.

>>7126089
I also should add that along with making those videos of nudes i would try out her voices. I guess i could even stream before doing all this shit and fuck around a whole bunch. That would be very fun. Probably would do a membership stream to avoid spreading too much the shit that i say. Seeing chat's reaction to me moaning in her voice or saying faggot would be amazing.

>>7126148
Now Risu is gonna see this....

>>7126148
>>7126089
jesus christ anon

>>7126089
>>7126148
Risu this is a pretty elaborate way of saying that you wish you could interact with us more and that you want me specifically to have sex with you but I understand that it can be stressful to deal with not raping your coworkers and committing suicide. You're a strong treerat Risu, ganbare.

Hmm maybe I should have also added the stipulation of their avatars body not roommate ...

>>7126318
Still nudes. I'd get infront of any mirror I could and spread the POLpussy wide for a picture.

I follow to many chubas its become impossible to pick just one

>>7126318
If it was only for a day I would do everything in my power to get myself in the body of Reine to my house and locked in my basement. Fat bird tits are just too good for me to lose out on. If it was permanent I guess I would just enjoy being a princess and sentence as many SEA's to death while ruling with an iron fist.

>>7126432
Now that's a good answer

>>7119986
Well in that case how about a deal. Noel gives you the Subaru Special with her mace and if you can last without blowing your load you can bang Flare.

Can your ass survive a pounding that hard or will you only be able to whimper and crawl as Noel fucks Flare right in front of you like the pitiful excuse of a man you are.

>>7126476
>No matter what Noel does to (You) you don't falter
>You didn't cum once from her milking your prostate, even though she gave you a reach around, blowjob, and even a titjob while doing it
>She gives up, and, with the taste of your cock still heavily noticeable in her breathe, starts fucking you with the mace
>Even then you refuse to give in
>She's in shock at how someone can be this resilient
>Noel decides to impale you on her mace and ride you
>Even Noel's retard strength pussy muscles aren't enough to make you give in
>Noel fucks herself on you until she faints
>Her unconsciousness is a sign of your victory
>Flare can only watch in horror (or arousal) (or maybe both) as you unimpale your ass like Dante from DMC

>>7126580
Is this a soft admission you've had thing up your ass before?

>>7126609
No. I simply hate gays so much that no amount of anal stimulation can make me aroused, unlike (You).

>>7126651
>not gay
You just wrote about a mans prostate being milked with a mace anon....

>>7126651
>Immune to anal sex through sheer hate
Sounds like the plot to a revenge story

>>7126318
> I wake up to see I've become Marine.
> I'm in a small apartment living alone. There's many bottles of rum laying around me
> Got tears marks on my eyes together with completely ruined make up
> I get off the uncomfortable futon that these Japanese people for some reason sleep in.
> My phone is buzzing, it's Kanata.
> I answer but i remember i can't speak Japanese, so I just let her talk and once she asks for a response i hang up.
> Turn off the phone to ignore the messages (I can't use it anyway, password and all)
> Look around the house for some cash + some basic documentation
> Leave her home and explore the area I'm in, possibly try to get a taxi
> Buy myself a phone with her cash, set it to English, plug in her chip from her other phone into it
> Google Translate my way through her convos, also talking to some Holomembers to pass the time

Now it's time to get gay

> Go to the nearest expensive bar, try to find a Gaijin
> Hit on him to the best of my abilities
> Get fucked (with condom, safety first)
> Record it all of course


From this point on, there's too many variables. Do i assume my real body still exists out there? Is this change permanent? Etc. Assuming I still exist and this change isn't permanent

> I send my bank account Marine's hard earned superchat cash
> Go to the airport
> Travel to my country, Brazil
> Get raped by a bunch of black men, turned into a cum dump for a few days
> Continue my journey, get a ride to my other self's home
> Enter it cause i know where the spare key is in
> Find myself(???)
> Rape my sleeping self
> Also recording this
> Get on my computer, upload all the shit I've collected to my personal accounts and get it on pen drive too for safety
> Buy some bondage equipment and a new PC, some nice food too to celebrate

By now, preparations should be mostly complete

> Take my sleeping self on a ride with my car to a secluded place I've rented
> Tie Marine (currently me) up
> Maybe release footage of Marine raping an unconscious men in his own home
> Safe from the law now, I'm the victim
> Switch bodies
> Enjoy unlimited raping of Marine's tight JK pussy + keep all her money

Problem officer?

>>7126651
Dude you're showing you're experienced taking things up the ass. Sounds like you're pretty gay right there.

>>7126732
And did I say he came at all? Not once was the Anon I wrote about aroused.

>>7126757
This is also an excellent answer
>Now it's time to get gay
its ok anon gender bender is the straightest fetish

>>7126840
I'm not actually into genderbender, i think it is pretty gross or just gay i guess (and that's coming from someone who already jerked it to two IRL traps fucking each other) . That being said, if i unironically were to be in this situation I'd probably be fine with getting dicked down to see what it feels. But i mostly included it to have footage of Marine getting fucked.

What aspects of a story do you think are essential in making it great?

>>7126757
This guy is professionally gay

>>7127031
Cumming in a situation that is not penetration. Penetration is overrated.

>>7127055
>Still no part 2 to Lunas Assistant

https://gdoc.pub/doc/e/2PACX-1vTdwN1vXuyLNHsvmz5zGi4KbEWRh_fdXyO_6v3t_42mzvNMVmawoNSC5w4Ep9INFHlacStLGSOKr-Jw

Towapiss...
Its short but I did it

>>7127098
Fuck yeeaaah brother, you read my goddamned mind. That stuff was godsend. Honestly even if it's a story that focuses only on a blowjob i still take it. No penetration is such a rare fetish nowadays, such a shame.

>>7127108
I was wondering how you'd get her to 'accidentaly' drink piss. Huh, it's a surprisingly plausible situation

>>7127108
You didn't have to do this anon....

>>7127108
writeanon...

>>7127108
He's going to demand more now.

>>7127108
If you're willing to write strange shit would you consider my juniper laying an egg story

>>7127108
>>7127484
See what you've done writeanon?

Midnight bump so the thread survives.

>>7128328
I'm watching. It's only quarter to six at night in straya. I'll bump off page 10 of needed.

>>7127108
I laughed, anon. Towa's sudden single-minded drive to partake of Bibi's metaphorical lemonade stand was amusing, and this story didn't even make my stomach turn. The ending was also funny; I particularly like how short and punchy it was, felt like the right move here.
Thanks for the read.

>>7127108
This could've been way worse. It came out was pretty comedic and good. Nice work.

>>7103276
A fic about Ame recruiting you to go back into the pass and screw up the lives of holomems so that they join hololive in the future, specifically via your dick

>>7128392
I'm watching too, it's 1pm here

>>7128430
Wouldn't your dick fix them instead?

>>7128430
>Rape every Holo through space and time
>Final Holo you need to rape is Ame so this all happens in the first place
>Ame that told you to do it knows you did it when she tasked you with this
>Ame didn't try and stop you from fucking her
>Ame created a time paradox to ensure that no matter what you always fuck her
>Gotdam time traveling gremlin stole your semen

>>7128472
You'd need to dick down the hags when they aren't old enough to be hags yet so well that they could never have sex again

>>7118436
I do want to plow her fat dumper but only if it's actually fat from weeks of lazing about like a hikki and I can grope her muffintop while I do it

>>7118436
God, do I ever.

>>7127031
I wish I knew. When I read some of the most liked stories on here, it's quite obvious that they're brilliant pieces of writing. What isn't quite as obvious is WHY they're so good. What exactly about some of the brilliant stories on here make them so good?

>>7127031
Oh, I think you know.

Smut. Meaty smut. Hot, sticky, smelly, sweaty smut, writhing around in pleasure like live loaches in a pan.

>>7123409
> (you) suddenly come down with a sickness
> your body is weak, you can't move a muscle sometimes
> WebMD says "ur fucked kid"
> at least you are free from work for the time being
> you start having vivid, hyperrealistic dreams of a girl squeezing your dick dry with her mouth and breasts
> you can't move during these dreams which is frustrating
> you can't move after these dreams which is strange
> you can't even masturbate afterwards which is more frustrating
> your strange illness persists
> one day you find a streamer that is a one to one copy of the semen demon from your dreams
> short blonde hair, gentle yet playful expression, soft well-rounded body barely covered by clothes and breasts that are worth dying for
> dick goes from straight to DEFCON 2 readiness
> tune in to her stream and bust the fattest nut to her silky voice doing the ASMR
> pass out from exhaustion
> same dream again, but somehow you become lucid and break the hold
> the girl is noticeably surprised and tries to resist
> the primal urge to do her on every surface of your house is rising as you find the rope you may or may not have bought previously with intent of ending it all
> you tie her wrists and ankles and prone bone her
> you tie her up to a table and do her from behind
> you tie her legs to her arms and mating press her
> you tie her legs and her arms behind her, leaving her in a begging pose for a while, then fuck her senseless
> you reposition and fuck her from below, she's visibly twitching and gasping for air
> you use her breasts and stain her body white
> you use her mouth and she doesn't resist, her eyes seem to have glazed over from the pleasure

> you end up in ER the next day

>>7103276
To get Ina to love you you've figured out the only way is to go through her pact with AO-chan. Basically you're gonna fuck the book to the point you get an eldritch being addicted to your cock, in turn getting Ina addicted too.

>>7128952
>like live loaches in a pan

possibly the least sexy expression i've ever read, and there are scat stories in the archive

>>7128991
based

>>7127031
well, coming from a writeanon, it's two halves of one whole that make a story truly exceptional. These two things go hand in hand and must both be fulfilled to have the story be great.
The first half is the idea of the story. Not just "I wanna fuck a chuuba in the ass", rather it is the completely fleshed out idea of "I have falled in love with this chuuba since childhood and only after years of going our separate ways I met her again by chance, which is why I will now fuck her in the ass". Think about light novel titles, and you've gotten your first half.
The second half is the harder part. It is the execution of your story. Writing it down, grammar and vocabulary reps, pacing, plot progression, etc. Making sure that not only your idea is brought to life, it is done in a way that feels natural yet exciting at the same time. To be able to write a specific scenes/moments where it really hits the readers. It will take a lot of reps for most writeanons to reach this level, but you can reach here, I believe.

That's my take on what makes a story great. You can see this in serials like Cover High and Holofantasy, as well as one-shots like Exposure Therapy and Sleeping Beauty. But of course, most importantly, write shit you like. Why do you think we're here in the first place?

>>7129214
>Not just "I wanna fuck a chuuba in the ass"
I feel personally attacked here

>>7118436
i don't want to rail Aqua's fat ass, I want to give her a really good, thorough spanking, so that when I'm ramming her every stroke stings a little bit. She will eventually have her pleasure and pain wires crossed to the point where regular sex will make her feel like something is missing, until one day when she's feeling horny she'll beg me to discipline her first.

>>7118380
I've near given up. I can't write smut to save my life. Sorry anon. Anyone else is free to continue it if they like.

>>7129965
Is it actually can't or is it can't as in can't bring yourself to immerse yourself in writing porn?

Because if it's the former, we've got plenty of smut writers here. Give us an example couple lines of your smut and maybe we can help.

>>7129965
I have belief in you Anon. Worst come to worst I can attempt my hand at railing her in the bathroom but I want it to be true to your vision.

>>7130028
The former yeah. I just can't think of a good way execute it. Maybe because it's my first time writing a smut centric fic but whatever I write I am just not satisfied with.

This is what I've written so far. I haven't touched it in a while. I know there isn't an actual penetration yet but I've rewritten and scrapped this so many god damn times.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR0vI_-vejHB5Cwhz9yHZJuSC2qnK4EHqKusbeN32NUXx_6Wyh3xTZWh9TlxXcgaNJtlJU46O98_Yce/pub

>>7129965
I'll try my hand. I've dashed this out so far. Let me know what you think. It'll end in Matsuri getting fucked against the sink as she has her ponytail yanked so she's forced to watch her own cock-drunk face as she gets claimed by the power of a REAL cock.

---

You hold the still-bare-down-there girl to your chest as you finish your fit of roaring laughter, idly stroking her back as the giggles welling up within your tummy fade away. Embarrassed, drunk, and angry, Matsuri fumes into your torso as she’s held, making no attempt to push you away despite her claims of hating you not even seconds earlier. Seriously, with that millimeter peter? If she stuck it in a Tenga Egg it’d ask her if it was in yet. You can’t imagine what’d happen if she got it anywhere NEAR an actual woman. Still pouting, Matsuri mumbles something into the fabric of your shirt.

“What was that? Speak up, I can’t hear you.”
“...igger th…”

Rolling your eyes, you pull Matsuri away from you by her shoulders, the girl gnawing her lower lip as her eyes are cast downwards, fists balled up tight. Hoo, she’s really mad! But it’s not your fault God cursed her with a quarter-inchworm, nor is it your fault that she chose to open her fucking mouth about your girlfriend!

“One more time?”
“It’s still probably bigger than yours!”

This bitch. She did not just go there.

“What was that, you two-pump chump?” you scowl, crossing your arms. You can feel her cum sinking into your forearms as you do so. Motherfucker. “You really want to try me?”
“You’re only acting like such an ass because you feel threatened by me!” Matsuri drunkenly retorts, face flush with both alcohol and indignation. “My cock probably blows yours out of the water! That’s why you got so mad, huh?? Worried I’m gonna…hic, gonna plow your girls brains out?!”
“Seriously?” you ask, flabbergasted at this turn of events. “You’re fucking serious. This is where you wanna go with this?”
“Prove me wrong then!” she slurs, jabbing her finger into your stomach. Right into her own cum. She winces. Motherfucker. “Go on, baby dick! You saw mine, let me see yours!”
“I...what?! I have a girlfriend!”
“Pussy.”

Your eyebrow twitches. This bitch!

“What.”
“Yoooooooou’re a pussy!” she laughs, shifting unsteadily on her feet. “You can deal it but you sure can’t take it, can you!?”
“Matsuri--”
“It’s okay! I’ll just let EVERYONE know that ANON has a little itty bitty BABY COCK!”

>>7130457
Ok yeah anon I like what you've written way more than what I had planned.

>>7130457
It is so fucking surreal to me that people here can make Matsuri arguing over her dick size still feel in-character

>>7130589
Better question is what flavor of futa do you prefer? I'm partial to newhalves myself if I had to pick (Dick, balls, no pussy). Is this a clit dick scenario, or is she a full package? (Dick, balls, pussy under balls). I've not got to penetration yet but I've got to the point where Anon's cock is hard.

>>7131095
There are subtypes of futa now???????‽

>>7131095
I'm in the same ball park as you anon. dick balls and no puss.

>>7131119
They've been around for ages. It's just terminology to distinguish what kind. I always found pussy under balls to be off putting because of
>IMAGINE THE SMELL (IT'S BAD)
And clitdicks are personally a turn off. There's arguments that new halfs are basically just traps but they're also the only ones I actually like.
>>7131138
Based.

>>7126580
>"I guess I underestimated your... abilities..."
>"(You) aren't human, are you..?"

>>7116173
Which means that this story may never be finished too

>>7115467
In the privacy of her soundproofed penthouse, surrounded by a dozen Cubin children Suisei wiped the thick sticky substance off her face, tears welling in the eyes of the young man. She stood up from the wooden chair, then, with expert grace, fell exaggeratedly as another coconut cream pie slapped her in the face. More laugher rose from the gathered children. Sui smiled to herself. Her slapstick routine was a success! Soon she could drop this business of killing and murder for hire and finalize her dream: becoming a children's birthday clown! There was a knock at the door and a buzz of the intercom, to which Suisei gruffly replied "What is it?" "Sorry to disturb you miss, Amelia Watson has entered Miami." "Excellent. Thank you." Tommy was paying her big bucks for this. If it meant having to take a fellow Hololive out so be it. Anything for her dream. "Do you want us to send a... cleaning crew up, madam?" Suisei scoffed. "No, I use my own." The last time she'd used Vercetti's men she had to kill them. For free. The blabbermouths squaked about her hobby of children's entertainment. Well, she showed them what happens when you laugh at her! The irony of that sentence hit her and a silly grin crossed her face. "I'll be down on half an hour." She said into the intercom. She called her cleanup crew. They'd take the children out of the hotel in rolled up carpets covered in fake blood -children would be alive of course- and pay them well, and remove all the signs of her act from the room. She removed the multicolored wig, the beagle puss, and then thick greasepaint makeup, got into her work clothes and went downstairs to a waiting cab that took her to Tommy's.

>>7130457
I'll finish this tomorrow, as it's late. Assuming this thread is still alive, it'll be posted here with the full G. Doc link thrown in the archive. If it isn't, I'll just post the link there when it's done.
>8752 characters with no actual sex yet
Fuck. I wanted to post a snippet.

>>7131840
>assuming this thread is still alive
It'll be here as long as you want it to be, anon.
Probably more after that, too.

>>7131224
>suisei turns out to be a childrens birthday clown
Holy fucking shit the mind games are intense

>>7126089
>>7126148
This is your oshi you're talking about, right? Risu's got some schizo fans

Cover High/Pekora Interlude

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRvnctuCO7h46XsnbRRX819QugeyP0HBgGJOC0qcaKAZAF5xp6jN20FZD2c1mBfg5axIjI_OEDCvMdP/pub

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=75_dkomdYlg

>>7132573
So, I have to admit, usually I'm not really interested in alternate universe stuff is it usually has wildly OOC subjects, but I opened this on a whim and your prose completely absorbed me from beginning to end. I can't comment on what's going on or anon's motivations, but it was such a good read that I'm going to go back and start from ch1.
Bless you, anon.

>>7132573
is this a dream sequence? Shit's really good and I can vaguely tell where this is headed

>>7132573
I hate you, Anon. That's the only explanation I can come up with in this moment. I despise you. Your existence has rendered mine meaningless. But that's okay. If it means we can get pieces like this, I'm fine. Everything here truly speaks to me on a level that can only render me green with envy. The description of how wrong the scenery became, how quickly the situation turned into one of panic, the description of Pekora outside of the cell...I hate you, if only because of the quality of your words. You're talented and I wish I could siphon even an ounce of that. Thank you for this.

>>7133184
Basically this, without the hate part. There's a rare mastery of descriptive language on display here, a stark reminder that there's always someone better.

>>7132573
as others have said, this is good shit anon. not much to say other than i really wanna read the continuation

>>7103276
https://youtu.be/Lgpw-hRQb9Q
Requesting a voyeurist piece on Nene's internal thought process as her reflexes fail her confidence, and she loses miserably, time and time again, coming face to face with The Tomato with each iteration.

>>7125929
Is this a Your Name situation where you two swapped bodies?

>>7103276
A story about NTRing Polka with her best friend, Nene, who has declared you her husband by force. Preferably heavily comedy based, exaggerated slapstick nonsense with a happy ending.

>>7134669
would you object to tragedy with a suicide ending?

>>7134826
Yes, don't monkey's paw me.

>>7134826
do it, staying true to the character is important

>>7134935
>polka is a suicidal
She's not THAT menhera.

i think

>>7134972
anon...

>>7134984
Show me on the doll where Polka cucked you.

>>7135010
Polka would definitely kill herself if someone cheated on her

>>7135057
Which is why it will be stopped before it could ever get to that point when Polka comes in to find you desperately attempting to wrestle Nene off of you while holding up your crucifix made of tomatoes.

>>7135057

>>7135242
Polka murders you for cheating on her then kills herself

>>7135010
Right here, anon.
>unzips dick

>>7127484
I can throw it into the prompt pile but don't get your hopes up.
any specific shit you want? does it need to be a specific genre?

>>7130353
Wtf this is actually pretty good, what are you on about.. For a wip it's actually decently hot and flows pretty well.

>>7137077
Oh, my goodness. We have someone potentially willing to write oviposition here. This is exquisite news.

>>7135291
More like
>Polka kills herself then haunts you forever
>Polka gives you a beyond the grave ghostjob and you cum with the force of 1000 suns
>Non-ghost women can't do it for you anymore
>Forever ruined by ghost Polka you have no choice but to kill yourself

>>7137726
>the polka won't stop sucking story but with a ghost clown going "WOO WOO WOOOO"

>>7137766
>Polka is able to spin 360 on your dick in midair
>Being a ghost she can change her size and how tangible she is
>Loli ghost Polka can trace her barely noticeable hands around your cock
>Milf ghost Polka can leglock you out of nowhere

>>7103276
Put it on the archives a few days ago but forgot to say it here
Akai Haato tastes your cum during one of your nights together and awakens something in her. The next days Haachama starts adding your cum to her everyday meal as the main ingredient and dressing to her already questionable dishes.

>>7137875
I shouldn't want Polka to die and be a ghost, but...

>>7103276
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/91545183
You're on a date with the lovely Mio, window shopping around the plaza. While Mio is bending down to breathe in the fragrance of the recently-bloomed roses outside a florist's, she trips and falls, clothes fluttering in the wind, and in a moment of weakness, you snatch a glimpse of her forbidden cloth, giving you an increasingly uncomfortable boner.

You resolve to put the fall behind you and add the sight to your internal bank of treasured memories, but from then on, her smile, her scent and the simple feeling of her skin against against yours while holding her hand drive you wild.

Mio notices your flushed cheeks and general disconcertion, and leans in to check your temperature, asking if you're alright. As she does so, one of her legs bumps against your third, making your condition perfectly clear. One panicked explanation later, a flustered Mio agrees to help 'relieve' you in the changing room of a nearby clothes store.

>>7132573
This is some good shit dude. Normally I ain't a fan of dream sequences in stories but the way you write and how to the point the descriptions are make it enjoyable to read.

Can't wait for the next big chapter. I'm interested as to where this story goes

>>7132573
Were you reading Little Busters! Refrain route while writing this?

>>7132573
just linking this to >>7103199 for when archiveanon next visits

>>7103199
and also this one >>7127108

>>7103199

Just another sad Suisei story. It's ok, she isn't hurt.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSLh74OHMeh4uYnKf1PKEt89Vd758MulkHM-jSqPpg3yXesolTa00wmxF99T9FMe2YqfJTELskcYONk/pub

Tags: Suisei, SFW, tragedy

I just wanted to write a story about a chuuba's impostor syndrome, and while this may not exactly encapsulate it all, it was quite fun to write down a different take on having a relationship with a chuuba

As always, let me know what you think!

>>7103199
linking these for when archiveanon next visits
>>7132573
>>7127108
and a potentially dead WIP
>>7130353
deleted my previous posts to combine them into one

>>7137093
I thank you for the praise anon but it's the sex part I can't write properly. I've tried multiple times but I just can't get it down.

>>7139346
see Anons, that's the problem, you have to get it up, not down

>>7139247
This haggard anon isn't just a reader insert, it's a critical observation of the vtuber audience as a whole, isn't it?

>>7139346
What part exactly are you having trouble with?
Like, what's making you rewrite it, that you're not satisfied with? What you got so far is pretty good.

>>7139247
Why were they meeting in the first place? Was it pure coincidence? Why is this cynical anon supposed to be tempestuously angry, but using mild-mannered language fit for a dining room debate?

I'm sorry anon, but this piece left me with more questions than answers and the suicide ending left me bewildered.

>>7137875
>Polka shifts into a gaseous cloud and floats down your urethra taking residence in your balls and not coming out
>Next time you're having a wank and cum, her face erupts from your tip screaming, "BOO!"

>>7139942
GHOST NUTTTTT
if you know, you know

>>7140046
i don't

>>7140095
that’s alright. not many do.

>>7140046
You referencing Joel?

>>7139780
The sex. It isn't in the WIP I posted earlier because I keep deleting what I write out disgust and disappointment. Maybe I'm being too hard on myself but I just can't get over it. Everything I write just seems so boring and repetitive.

>>7140178
didn’t expect anyone to actually get it.
i see you’re an anon of culture as well.

>>7140317
Hey dude, I feel the same when I write smut. I'd wager most anons do. Sex is, by nature, boring and repetitive to read if your dick (or vagina - not sexist!) isn't doing the mental processing for you. That won't change, probably. Know that your audience is going to have a very different opinion to you every time.

Rather than giving up, just post the smut here as a WIP and ask for advice or criticism. I read your earlier work and so far the only things I think you need to work on is your grammar and punctuation first, and vocab second.

>>7140317
Right, I get it but what is it about the sex you think is repetitive or boring? Are you having trouble describing actions?

At the end of the day sex is sort of a repetitive motion after all, so you'll have to get creative about writing around that to make it interesting. I think you've done a good job so far of getting the reader to enter (You)r skin and thought process.

If it were me I'd use of anon's monologue to describe how easy it is to make Matsuri melt at sex, since you've already established that anon is increasingly more attracted to her submission. Even if it's just a bathroom stall quickie you can try different positions nonetheless, if you think a single one is getting stale.

It's hard to give advice with little context but hopefully that helps.

>>7103276
You always thought that she was just embarrassed of her blood or something. I mean she's constantly mistaken for an actual monster, so it makes sense. But Flare was telling the truth. She isn't a dark elf.

She's Italian

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>>7138521
Glad you liked it. This was originally going to be the intro to chapter 5, but it's recently come to my attention that work's going to be pretty hectic this next month, and I don't know how much energy I'll be able to devote to writing. So I decided to release it as a standalone mini-chapter to tide folks over in the meantime. I'll chip away at the next proper chapter as my schedule allows.
>>7138561
Nah. It's been years since I read that VN. But that particular track always stuck with me, and it came to mind as I was writing. So I ended up listening to it on repeat while I worked.

>>7139247
It's an interesting take and concept. I liked the atmosphere you created and the overall tone of the story, but a part of the dialogue felt unnatural and the ending was too abrupt for me. It also felt like the whole imposter syndrome thing could've been expanded on instead of being brushed over by anon.

>>7139785
Yes, it was pure coincidence, and the choice of polite language was more so because the anger is directed at himself rather than Suisei. The meeting serves more of a tipping point for him rather than the cause itself.

Although I do agree that perhaps I could have done better with the exposition and frame the scene in a more natural way. In any case, thanks for reading and giving your comments. I'll work on it more in my future works

>>7140364
I could never miss a reference to that crazy swede.

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>>7140527
Yeah I think my problem is getting creative with describing my actions. Like you guys said, the act of sex is repetitive in it's self and because it is repetitive, I feel as if I have less leeway when describing the act, like I feel there's only so many ways I personally can describe 'dick in ass'. I just need to think more.

And criticism on the grammar and punctuation is duly noted. It's been my biggest problem ever since I picked up a pencil as a kid. Dyslexia is a fat bitch..

Thank you for the advice, I'll try my hand at it again.

>>7140917
Typically when I describe penetration I tend to fluff up around it with other sensory information - what are (your) hands doing? What are Matsuri's? Does she tighten up if you hit a particular spot, how does it feel? Do (you) change up your thrusts to target that spot and how does she respond?

Things like that give it some flavor instead of just repetitively "You bottom out, then pull out, then bottom out again. Then you rotate your hips, then bottom out. Then you cum."

>>7140892
Hey bro, looking back I feel really bad I didn't mention anything nice about it. The story was interesting enough that I was invested in it, and I would really like to see an expanded version, or the same themes carried on to future works. Thanks for the read!

>>7140917
If you're specifically looking for help describing anal play, you could check out "Doing Fubuki in the Behind" and "Sleeping Beauty". Both of these works focus on anal play, and imho Sleeping Beauty contains far better prose so you'll definitely wanna check that out for inspiration.

>>7140806
Mama Mia! That's a Spicy Meatball of a revelation!

>>7140885
As i mentioned here >>7140892 i agree that probably more exposition and like you said, more development on the conversation would be helpful. I might revisit this idea in the future for a more robust version, as this admittedly was more of a spur of the moment than a properly fleshed out idea. Thanks anyways for your comment!

>>7114386
This isn't the brutal criticism you're looking for but I wanted to mention I'm a fan of 'just a little crazy', and there's one specific yet tiny line which I now always associate with Suisei; "Cu- ah! Cum insi... Mmph!"

I cannot begin to describe how hot this was, but every time I read this work I always finish at that line, and I always nurse at least a semi after thinking of it.

Um, yeah. It doesn't really help in the slightest, and it's kind of weird now I'm reading what I'm posting, but I wanted you to know that there's at least one person here who is head over heels in love with that fic

>>7103276
Taking your lovely gf Ina to one of her peoples favorite pastimes, hockey.

>>7141898
I think 'her people' might be more appreciative of a ttongsul tasting

>>7141988
Ina may be gook in blood but she's canuck at heart

>>7141102
Ok wow that's really good advice, it's got me thinking a lot more.

>>7129214
Thanks very much for this anon! I think what I really need to work on is the natural yet still exciting part as well as the pacing. I'm grateful you took the time to write such an in-depth answer to my question.

>>7142426
Glad to help, looking forward to reading the finished product.

>>7144393
Man, I hope that anon working on Anya's >tease her huge oppailoli titties until she learns to like them prompt is still going.

Else I might have to take the mantle for that one...

>>7144687
I believe you will have to, cause he was doing his VOD reps for her and he found she was way too boring.

>>7144687
iirc he said in a previous thread that he had given up on it because Anya was too boring too watch

>>7144759
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>>7144687
Nothing stopping you from doing the same prompt if you like it. Remember, they're not requests, but liferings floating around in a sea of demotivation.

>>7144761
Yeah, think it was the anon working on the incestfic.

>>7144832
Yeah I would have, but I already have two other major stories in the oven so my bandwidth is limited.

But those tags are right up my alley. But if he's working on the Fbk Incestfic, then I support his choice.

>>7144761
That sounds about right

>>7145075
Yeah, even her threads die

>>7145115
I just don't think she has that many fans to begin with.

>>7145136
I’m honestly she even got a prompts.

>>7145159
Not all that surprising

>>7145136
I feel bad that she tripped so hard out of the gate with her scuffed rigging and getting overshadowed by her genmates being more immediately appealing and having better designs, but she really hasn't done much to grow her audience anyway.

>>7145208
Eh, kinda is

New thread
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>>7145285
Damn dude you must have had the thing ready to go hours ago

>>7145136
i wish i was interested in more vtubers in general, but Im too lazy for it

>>7145326
I'll bet a fair number of the last 10 posts about Anya were him quickly trying to get the post count to 310.

I just got off to 'Just a little crazy' again

I feel like everybody here needs to know

>>7145606
Gimme a sec I need some expert advice on this one

>>7145606
Not gonna lie I wouldn't mind getting a notification each time someone busted one out to one of my stories.

It's weird and probably a little gay but if you write smut, there's no greater honor.

>>7145671
It was a pretty thick rope, chief, I think I need to drink more water

>>7145786
Tell me what you wrote and next time I'm stiff I'll do one better than just notify you

>>7145905
If I have to tell you, anon, then what's the fun in that?

>>7146007
I'll marathon wank to every smut fic in the archive if I have to

>>7146086
Godspeed, may the friction gods have mercy on your dick.

How would you convince one of the holos to let you fuck her armpit for the enjoyment of a certain sheep?

>>7148655
I, uhh... what?

>>7148882
Come on anon, we've had so much more weirder stuff brought up here and this is the thing that stumps you?

>>7148957
Unironically yes. I just for the life of me cannot see how armpits are sexual, and certainly not how to fuck them. It makes less sense to me than feet, hands or navels. But uhhh, knock yourself out. Whatever gets you off in the end.

>>7149027
Just go look at some Watame fanart and you'll understand.

>>7149065
I mean, sideboob is fantastic, but armpit?

>>7149094
Yes armpits. I'll be honest I thought the same as you before but Watame did something to me man, changed me inside when I saw her go on about armpits and all that fanart with her armpits out.

>>7148882
Watame has an armpit fetish. I thought about fucking hers instead, but considering she's an old man at heart, she'd probably get better enjoyment from watching someone else.

>>7148655
imagine fucking Ollie's armpit

>>7149263
That's where all the maggots stay. The warmest place on the outside of the body. Imagine maggots burrowing into your dick after you finish fucking her armpit and pull out

>>7149263
imagine imagining fucking Ollie's armpit

>>7149355
Blowfly guy?

>>7149356
why cant you just fuck Ollie normally?

>>7149944
Zombies come with certain unique traits. Guy's just using everything she has to offer.