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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://rentry.co/VTCFFCD

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>6521730

>> No.6617240
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>>6617194
A love triangle prompt involving Ina and Mori.
>You fall in love with the most popular girl in the school, Mori.
>She's talented, beautiful, and you hit it off well with her
>But You realizes that Mori doesn't see you as a romantic option and just treats you as just another "friend", and Mori often has difficulty finding time for you.
>Meanwhile, throughout all this, You befriends a quiet, shy, introverted girl name Ina at the back of the class. You soon realize both of you have a really similar personality and sense of humor and start talking and hanging out every day.
>Mori continues to hang out with her clique of popular kids of school while You and her slowly drift apart
>Mori gets into a big yab and You save her from the incident
>Mori realizes she's in love with You and tries to mend the distanced between you and her. You don't mind but realize you realize you're no longer in love with Mori.
>Regardless, the three of you start hanging out with each other. But it's an tense dynamic - neither Ina or Mori likes one another and are just there for You.
>You realize you have to make a choice. And also realize your newly found, deep feelings for the shy introverted Ina... or reignite the embers of Your past love for Mori.
>Mori continues to be the most popular girl in the school and wins the student council elections to become president. She picks You to be Vice-President, respectively.
>You continue to deepen your bonds with the both of them. But at this point, Mori and You are getting closer due to the student council that Mori's popular clique propagate a "Mori and Anon are dating" rrat amongst themselves and the rest of the school that gives them a reason to bully Ina for being a "homewrecker,". But She still have feelings for You and hasn't given up on You. One night, during a school event, while Your is busy with council stuff, Ina tells Mori that she's going to confess to You and doesn't want her hanging out with You anymore.
>Mori, at first, is taken aback by this but decides to play this off as nothing more than a desperate act and just mocks Ina for thinking You will go out with her.
>That very same night, once the school event is over and all the students are packing up and going home, You are invited (thru text) by Ina to meet at the local park where you and her always hang out
>As you approach the park and reminisce all the times you spent with Ina, You see her in the distant looking out over the pond. There's a period of silence. And you can't be helped but be lovestruck by Ina's beauty, with the moonlight softly illuminating her.. it's almost a dream, almost as if she was some sort of perfect, angelic creature.
>Ina knows You are there, staring at her in silence. She heard you approach. Her heart is beating rapidly through her chest, to the point where she wants to run but she steels herself. She wonders if You realize why she called you here. The cold evening breeze brushes softly against her cheeks, and her bangs fall over her eyes. She shakily moves them aside and turns around, getting a full glimpse of the man she loves.
>She waits. You wait. They both know what's going to happen. It's going to happen. Ina opens her mouth, her throat dry and raspy, palms are sweaty, knees weak, her arms are heavy and before she can mutter the words...
>Mori comes from behind, barreling through some bushes. As those three magic words escape Ina's mouth, Mori says them at the same time.

I think it could make a very interesting Romantic Drama story. Hope one of you writer anons pick it ups.

>> No.6617245
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Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.6617615

>>6617245
cucking Flare by fucking Noel

>> No.6617673

>>6617245
>>6617615
Cucking Noel by fucking Flare

>> No.6617964

>>6617615
>>6617673
Flare or Noel cucks (You) by fucking the other one

>> No.6618072

>>6617673
(You) beat Noel in a fight over Flare's love, and as Noel lays defeated on the floor you fuck Flare right in front of her

>> No.6618096

>>6617245
Hugging Watame. That's it.

>> No.6618107

>>6617964
(You) cuck yourself because you are a devout christian, and cannot bring yourself to fuck homosexuals

>> No.6618118

>>6617245
Comforting Watame while she cries after she miscarried your guys' child.

>> No.6618126

>>6618107
So (You) are Pekora? I thought Lamy was the one with the transforming into her fetish

>> No.6618196

>>6617240
Adding this to the prompt requests and hope someone picks it up.
>>6617245

>> No.6618683

>Want to work on one story
>Stuck thinking about stuff for another
FUCK

>> No.6619249

>>6617673
I skimmed this really fast and misread it as "bare knuckle Flare" so now I'm just imagining intense fisting from Flare.
I'm very tired.

>> No.6619405

>>6619249
Sounds pretty fucking hot.

>> No.6620810
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You guys ever tear up when writing really horrible abuse fics or is it just me?

>> No.6620831

>>6620810
Only if I'm channeling something personal for the sake of the story.

>> No.6621024

>>6620810
Then why write them?

>> No.6621038

>>6620810
As said on threads past,

"If you wish to reader to cry, the writer must cry as well"

So yes, i explicitly write pain in my stories in a way that hurts me as well.

>> No.6621082

>>6620810
I've never teared up writing about that subject but have definitely gotten angry. Have teared up writing about nature though if that means anything.

>> No.6621093
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I think this slaps

>Ina and Mori has been shipped with a lot of holos (Takamori, Iname, Nene x Gen5 besides botan) and it doesn't help that the management promotes takamori while the fans strongly believe in Iname but the two has been secretly dating over the past months with no one suspecting anything about them, they can't let themselves be caught by anyone because relationship within coworkers are strictly prohibited by hololive. The staffs have been pushing them to collab more but they worry that they may slip up, How will their story progress?

>> No.6621311

>>6620810
Not really, when writing abuse I tend to feel a kind of perverse thrill through bringing such misery upon the characters of the story.

>> No.6621429

>>6621024
The pain feels good. Reading and writing abuse fics hurts me but I really enjoy it. I just find it weird that I'm crying over my own work.

>> No.6621729

What's in the works, writeanons?

>> No.6621792

>>6621729
Being an unwilling accomplice to Suisei murdering someone.

>> No.6621868

>>6621729
Latest chapter of the menhera wrangler series. I believe I can finish and post it by this thread, but don't get your hopes up too much.

>> No.6621898
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>>6621868
I'm not ready...

>> No.6622065
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>>6621729
Gonna try my hand at writing some Shion lewds. That little brat's got me feeling some type of way.

>> No.6622114

>>6621729
Trying to write about training Anya's Milkers and using her as an onahole but it's slow because I have no confidence with her personality.

>> No.6622148

>>6622114
dw about it, she doesn't have one

>> No.6622150 [DELETED] 

>>6622114
>I have no confidence with her personality
you could just make one up and no one would no since no one watches her

>> No.6622264

>>6622114
>I have no confidence with her personality
you could just make one up and no one would know since no one watches her

>> No.6622330

>>6621729
Looking at beginning Holofantasy Ch. 6 after I complete a shorter NSFW HoloAlt. Got the entire thing planned out conceptually, just need to see what fate has in store.

>> No.6622489

>>6622330
>more HoloAlt
yesssss

>> No.6622627

>>6618072
>>6617673
>>6617615
>>6617245
You, Noel and Flare all love each other, Your bond is eternally bounded by friendship and love

>> No.6622671

>>6622627
but there can be only one couple, so you all have a threesome that doesn't end until one of you is dead

>> No.6622829
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6622829

>>6621729
Amebraps. I'm struggling a little but hopefully it comes out good enough.

>> No.6623042

>>6621868
I ain't ready man. I just ain't...

>> No.6623268

>>6621729
Like a bunch of shit, dude

>> No.6624285

>>6617245
Kidnapping Ollie to try and resurrect Olivia.

>> No.6625199

>>6617245
It's a Lamy apocalypse and you and a few others are the only ones left. Eventually while gunning down hordes of Lamys running towards you, others fall leaving you alone. By the end the scenery looks something like this: rain is falling, there's smoke in the horizon and you're surrounded by mountains of Lamy corpses. You catch a glimpse of yourself reflected in the puddle, you're a Lamy now as well, your gun still has one bullet left in the chamber.

>> No.6625311

>>6617245
Haachama and Haato go out to have Pizza. They have a good time
Possible discussion on the nature of the Pepoloni

>> No.6625338
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>>6621868
At least give me an alt happy ending, anon. The wrangler deserves that much.

>> No.6625354

>>6625338
no

>> No.6625495

>>6625199
Save the bullet. Become the area's Lamy Boss. Kill the boss with that last bullet
Gotta look at the big picture man.

>> No.6625610

>>6625338
lol, don't worry, we're not quite at the end yet. There's still a few more chapters, but as I mentioned before, this is the last arc, so at least for now you can breathe.

>> No.6626473

>>6617245
Towa does devilish deeds with her futanari penis such as raping when she is doing sleepover with other chuuba or just raping, cumming all over other chuubas' stuffs and more

>> No.6626690
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>have been so busy writing fluff that I haven't written any smut in over a month
>try to start a smut story to shake off the rust
>how does sex work again?
this is the worst

>> No.6626831

>>6621729
I keep switching between writing Holocalypse part 4 and my Twap fluff; I’m not sure which one if going to be finished first.
Also part 4 is already at 8k words and I’m only about halfway. Bloody hell.

>> No.6626993

>>6617245
You fuck the Schizophrenia right out of Haachama so hard that Haato-sama comes out to discipline you.

>> No.6627120

>>6626690
the solution is to just keep writing fluff

>> No.6627351
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The more I watch Anya for research in the lewd fic, the more I get the urge to fuck the everliving shit out of her. Is this normal for any smut anons here?

>> No.6627371

>>6627120
I will soon enough. but right now my brain needs a rest from cover high, and the urge to put Shion in her place is too strong to ignore

>> No.6627456
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>>6627351
100% normal

>> No.6627464

>>6627351
>Is this normal for any smut anons here?
Yeah.

>> No.6627467

>>6626690
>how does sex work again?
I write virtual youtuber smut on a mongolian underwater basket weaving forum. How am I supposed to know how the fuck sex works?
I just draw from imagination.

>>6627351
Yes, especially if it's with the intention of doing research for that purpose. I brushed up on my Fubuki when I wrote a story, then Shion again recently and all I kept thinking was "SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEXXXXXXXXX"

>>6627371
Godspeed, we all have that urge, do us proud.

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>>6617245
Tamaki getting mercilessly, sexually abused by Rushia for the crime of talking to other girls
but in actuality he loves pissing her off so he can receive more punishment

>> No.6627516

How do you guys not get burnout from writing this much?

>> No.6627543

>>6627516
I fuck your mother for inspiration.

>> No.6627569

>>6627516
I enjoy writing too much to get burned out.

>> No.6627594

>>6627516
I pound your father for motivation.

>> No.6627600

>>6627516
willpower and unending need to turn the thoughts in your heads into words on your doc. or the need to vent the horniness.

>> No.6627610

>>6627516
I listen to Bury the Light whenever my motivation starts to dip

>> No.6627631

>>6627516
I got burnt from writing regular works so now I'm writing chuuba fanfics

>> No.6627649

>>6617245
Sora collapses during one of her performances, she is later diagnosed with Amyotrophic Lateral Sclerosis. She has to come to terms, that not only her idol carrier is over, but her life as a whole will become infinitely difficult. Oh how painful it is to look at her crumbling dreams and the looks of pity from her kouhais. Will those dimmed eyes shine again someday?

>> No.6627650

>>6621729
trying my hand at some Anya romance
Been writing it while traveling and I noticed writing on my phone makes me agonize less about each line

>> No.6627699

>>6627516
I rape you in your sleep for stimulation

>> No.6627750

>>6627477
...
got any more fanart of him?

>> No.6627769

>>6627516
lust

>> No.6627804
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>>6627516
but I am burnt out

>> No.6627846

>>6627543
>>6627594
>>6627699
The holy trinity

>> No.6627879
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SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEX

>> No.6627915

>>6627879
TAKESHI NO

>> No.6628168
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>>6627879
someday, anon
someday

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>>6627915
URUSE
ORE WA SEKUSU NI NARUNDAAAAAAA

>> No.6629535

>>6625338
If he won't, I''ll write an alt ending on my own.

>> No.6629755

>>6622829
Ooh, a progress report!
Are you an anon who picked it up last thread, or one of the two who saw it initially? I’m curious.

In any case, thank you.

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>>6626831
excuse me, pardon, but uh, ahem, LETS FUCKINGGOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO0OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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>>6627750
okay
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/77938746
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/82548162

>> No.6630167

Does anyone know what happened to the exposure therapy guy who also wrote other really good ones like that Miopost or the Aqua one? Is he still here?

>> No.6630933

>>6630062
god thats hot wonder if theres art of rushia raping him

>> No.6631339

>>6627610
Based

>> No.6631455

What's your end goal, writing anons? Sure, now, you may be doing it for fun; but is that all there is to it? What do you wish to accomplish from doing this? Money? A writing career? Making a game? Surely you don't write only to be able to hear how many times someone blew their thick load over something you created, right?

>> No.6631526

>>6631455
I do it because it's fun to me. Nothing more, nothing less.

>> No.6631536
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A polite reminder before you think of replying to anyone, anons.

>> No.6631581

>>6631536
I would overdose on meds so fast if Suisei was the one selling them.

>> No.6631587

>>6631455
Actually, someone blowing their thick load over my work is exactly what I want to hear. No greater complement for a smut writer, it's like praising the chef's cooking.

>>6631536
Fuck off.

>> No.6631632

>>6631536
Suisei hasn't taken the Anemachi killers for months

>> No.6631679
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>>6631455
>What's your end goal, writing anons?
To waste time on other work. Procrastination is my most effective motivator, and I always do my best work when I'm avoiding what I'm supposed to be doing.

>> No.6631709

>>6631455
>l'art pour l'art isn't a good enough reason

>> No.6631753

>>6631455
I write when im horny or depressed. this is just a way for me to get whats in my head out

>> No.6631808

>>6631753
I usually jerk off when I'm horny. It's probably more effective than writing.

>> No.6631875

>>6631526
I would also like to add that seeing people say that the pain in my works is exquisite does put a smile on my face.

>> No.6631888

>>6631455
>Surely you don't write only to be able to hear how many times someone blew their thick load over something you created, right?
Actually yes I do, otherwise I wouldn't go through the trouble of spending hours and hours of my day writing things down that I can much more easily visualize with my imagination alone, if all I wanted was blow a load. The best thing is being told someone busted nut after nut to my story, unironically.

My endgoal is to write the novels that have been churning in my head for the last 15 years or so, but that I never had the confidence, skill or determination to even get started. One day I guess.

Also what >>6631679 said. I have enjoyed spending my time doing something productive and fun over mulling over an endless number of stressors, some of which I can't do anything about except wait them out.

>> No.6631900

>>6631875
>smiling
fag

>> No.6631938

>>6631888
Writing porn is productive?

>> No.6632069
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>>6631938
A lot more productive than F5ing useless threads or browsing FB Marketplace for car parts I'll never buy, being sad due to family happenings I have no control over or stressing over the fact we've entered the fourth turning and there's fuck all I can do besides continue preparing for it with the resources I have on hand.

>> No.6632081

>>6631455
I haven't written anything in years, and these threads have led me to undertake the biggest writing project I've ever done. I'm committed to finishing it, if only to prove to myself that I can.

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>>6632069

>> No.6632312

>>6631455
There is no end goal. It is just something I do for fun in my otherwise boring life.

>> No.6632463

>>6632081
I'm in the same boat, these threads are the only thing in two years to give me enough motivation to write again

>> No.6632816

>>6632069
You're right, writing porn definitely sounds more productive.

>> No.6633211

>>6632816
I'm glad we could agree on something

>> No.6633389

>>6631455
I do it for fun.
Although, sometime in the future I want to make my own game or an anime. I'd also like to write a light novel or a manga/webtoon at some point as well.

>> No.6634114

>>6631455
I want you to masturbate to my stuff so I can live vicariously through that and feel sexually desirable for a few brief moments before reality kicks in

>> No.6634333
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Procrastinating a fic by writing another... ngmi.
A short one about you and Suisei's kid.
Ice cream
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTsIs-7pL0CFwbObLUdgDkBT4ME26b6jBYqqaLaDZlx7lUSL32HXstO__nZpxo_JN6An_M0YtteWKId/pub

>> No.6634525

>>6617245
Fucking one of the girls with horns doggystyle and holding onto said horns like motorcycle handles! Dicking her down so hard one of the horns breaks right as you both climax!

(You) and Kanata are a happily married couple. Everything is perfect save for one thing. Kanata's terrible luck has made it nigh impossible for the two of you to conceive. While creampieing your wife daily is absolutely amazing you can tell the chance of the two of you possibly never having children is weighing down. It gets to the point where Kanata asks if you would want to use a surrogate, since there isn't anything wrong with you and she blames herself. Kanata's closest friend, Coco, is glad to accept the role of surrogate so the two of you can finally start your family. (You) go and deep dick Coco like no man in all of history ever has before. Turns out the thought of you with another woman turned Kanata on as well so the two of you get frisky too. A few days pass and it turns out you successfully impregnated both women and happy or not will be the father of at least two children.

I shitposted about this one in the last thread a little bit
(You) are but a humble servant to the house of Pavolia, but you think something has happened between you and the princess. You don't know why but it seems the princess has developed a sort of crush on you. It started with her arranging staff order and such to make it so you were always around her instead of working your usual schedule. It eventually escalated one night when she asked for a drink before bed and you walked a glass of water to her room only to find her lounging naked in her bed. It also seems the dear princess cannot even feed herself anymore, preferring to be spoonfed by you herself, making uncomfortable eye contact the entire time. The beloved princess seems to get more bold with her affection and closeness every day.

>> No.6634652 [DELETED] 

>>6634333
Absolutely adorable. Anything including parenthood makes melt.

>> No.6634705

>>6634333
Absolutely adorable. Anything including parenthood makes me melt.

>> No.6634720

Is the writeanon that wrote the SchizoKiara x Anonchama stories still alive? Are you doing well writeanon?

>> No.6634728

>>6631455
To motivate other anons to write as well to create content for me to read and for me to write content for the other anons to get motivated by, creating an infinite cycle of people writing for each other.

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>>6634333
If nothing matters why does it hurt?

I swear I never wanted children before joining these threads but reading fluff stories like this or shitposting about impregnating Mio with quintuplets made my fatherly instincts kick in.

Cute story anon.

>> No.6634957

>>6634720
I'm still here. I stopped writing it for now because I just wasn't satisfied with how I was writing it. I may start it again from scratch but anyone else is welcome to try write is as well.

>> No.6634981

>>6622114
>Another of my prompts gets picked up
I am become sex, destroyer of anons.

>> No.6635211

>>6634981
destroyer of anons dicks*
ftfy

>> No.6635402

>>6631455
>What's your end goal, writing anons?
I want a cute girl to get off to my porn so much that she becomes obsessed enough with my posting style and schedule that she's able to track down my socials, stalk me IRL and rape my babies into her belly.

>> No.6635432

>>6617245
Convincing Polka that the best way to show her affection is by sucking your dick! Having a desperate fennec deepthroating you every now and then would be absolutely great! Polka goes overboard and practically attaches herself to your cock like a leech and sucks you dry every day! Even when you try to run away she always finds you! And when she does your balls won't be full for long! Anywhere on god's green earth you could go and she'd still track you down! Because she loves you (andyourcock)! Why do you keep running from her!

>> No.6635628

>>6634333
Very cute story, great work. It fuels my burning desire to raise a family with Suisei.

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>>6637396
But people don't hate you for no reason. They hate you because they hate YOU. It's pretty simple you talentless slut. Guess being smart isn't one of your talents either if you can't figure that out.

>> No.6638927

>>6634333
>suisei's kid
Is that my kid or Suisei is a single mother?

>> No.6639257

The latest chapter of the menhera wrangler series. The beginning of the last arc, and another girl to wrangle!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQBNF-u7dBI8iXDzRC4Dh0OZNlnvPKv_MKzkyQ50a0roD9y54Eubq57gTFPSE81GsMqobzNXi0ivcm0/pub

Not too much suffering her(comparatively), but I intend to end this in another 2-3 chapters.

As always, let me know what you think!

>> No.6639331

>>6638927
Literally the second sentence
>Your daughter

>> No.6639951

>>6639331
I don't have a daughter.

>> No.6640181

>>6639951
I HAVE NO SON

>> No.6641061

>>6631455
I just want to make something people enjoy. The praise is nice and a great motivator to keep going, but if I can make something people read and have a good time doing so, I'm happy.
>>6635402
Dangerously based and same.

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>>6635402
BASED AND SAME

>> No.6641756

(You) seach for Mori and find her. She is a little bit amused by the fact that someone would consider looking for death's apprentice directly instead of, you know, getting some lead injection via 12 gauge and meeting her that way. However, your request is a little bit different.
(You) have wealth and connections. You are relatively smart and had never had a problem with learning. You can read people fairly well and put yourself in their place. Your body is healthy beyond belief. You just can't emotionally engage with, well, anyone. Not for a long time anyways, and not in any meaningful way. You have tried the best that medicine, psychology and even esotherics has to offer to fix yourself, to no avail.
(You) do, in fact, want to die. But you don't want all of your fortunate circumstances just go up in smoke. You ask Mori to send your soul to the afterlife and have someone else's soul take your unrealized potential for happiness.

>> No.6641931

>>6617194
About Alice? Circle Hitori already made it. No translation for now

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>>6641756
Interesting prompt. Damn he's just like me.

>> No.6645385

>>6617245
(You) are a manlet in a loving relationship with Mori. Kiara fucking hates you for this. One of her favorite things to do is just pick you up and find things to fuck you on. One day she gets especially frisky while working and almost gets caught, so she has to leave you perched up on top of something that you can't get down from or else risk falling to your doom. While waiting up on your little perch you spot a large orange and green bird circling overhead.

>> No.6645474

>>6645385
>Kiara fucking hates you for this. One of her favorite things to do is...
I did a double take on first look thinking it was Kiara who liked picking you up to fuck.

>> No.6645534

>>6645474
Sorry I'm highly autistic and despite being EOP still make mistakes while writing things.

>> No.6645609

>>6645534
Nah I realised I was being dumb but I still thought it was funny.

>> No.6646341

>>6631679
This hits way too fucking close to home

>> No.6646807

>>6629755
Not that writeanon that posted earlier in this thread >>6622829 (godspeed whoever you are, I look forward to reading your version) but I am the guy who first said he'd take up the prompt. Got it finished earlier than expected.

Ame Braps : https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR2L5LbouzyIaMGDsIh_FBJ6w7iD5Q1RHb-r2bbxT3uA5xQYyevRCE841PfgZhTdeZ9w6CwusBgql2Y/pub

I'm both parts disgusted and proud of this one.

>> No.6647261

>>6639257
Nice to see this updated, kind of felt like a weak chapter overall as Polka felt like, for lack of a better term, a monster of the week to act as the chapter Menhera while actual plot stuff gets advanced. Then again they can't be winners even if I wish Polka got a better showing.

>> No.6647682

>>6646807
This…this is the greatest literary treasure I’ve ever laid eyes on…the descriptions, the onomatopoeia…it’s all to be immensely cherished and held in high regard.

I am forever in your debt, anon. You’re a master of the virtual pen!

And yet, there’s more Ame braps to come, from more anons…I feel so damned lucky right now.

And to the other writeanons trying their hand at some Ame braps, I look forward to your takes on the concept. Godspeed!!

>> No.6647780

Well, weirdanon, you seem to be free now. What do you plan on making next? Perhaps the fuTowa prompt you mentioned earlier? Fufufu~

>> No.6648372

>>6646807
>betwixt
Are you by any chance the anon who wrote "fucking fubuki in the ass"? thats the only other place ive seen someone use that word

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>>6647682

Thanks anon, glad you like it!

>>6647780

I'm taking a break from writing for a few days now. But yeah, that's next on my todo list. However, I would encourage other writeanons to pick it up in the meantime because it is also a prompt I would like to read.

>> No.6648433

>>6648372
Nope I've never written anything involving Fubuki before.

But I have used betwixt before in another story posted recently about Ina eating her genmates.

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>>6648386
> People make scat, braps, vore and cannibalism more than futa these days

At least you say you'll still do it, eventually.

>> No.6648580

>>6648433
ah ok, I havent read that one.
Now if you did happen to write something about fubuki involving some weird fetish or another I wouldnt complain.

>> No.6651115

>>6617245
(You) try to rape (Chuuba) but (Chuuba) is so into it you can't keep it up. (Chuuba) pushes (You) down and desperately tries to ride your flaccid cock while the two of you trade insults about how terrible at being a rapist/getting raped you each are.

>> No.6652546

>Want to write some quick smut just for fun
>The prompts that interest me would require me to write way too much to be satisfied with them

Dang it.

>> No.6652734

>>6621729
I wanna make something of the prompt. But english isnt my main language. So i think it will very cringey.

>> No.6652779

>>6651115
Marine, Rushia, or Polka are made for this prompt.

>> No.6652980

>>6646807
As another Teamate and brap enthusiast, I greatly appreciate this. Additional thanks to the anon who requested it in the first place.

>> No.6653360

>>6647261
I see. I was trying to aim for more of a sense of how it was in the earlier chapters, but I suppose some things have become a bit too grand. Nonetheless, thanks for reading it through, and I hope you look forward to the next chapter (s)!

>> No.6653411

>>6652980
Err…all I did was request it, but you’re welcome!

I just felt like it was long overdue at this point.

Please direct even further gratitude to weirdanon than you’ve already given him/her/egg, and any other anons who grace us with more Ame braps.

>> No.6654987

>>6652779
Yeah, they were on my mind. I think Finana, Fubuki, A-Chan or Gura would also work.

>> No.6655139

>>6617245
Executing Flare and Noel because homosexuality is a sin!

>> No.6655159

>>6648372
That's me! Know where I learned it? From Fable 1, back in... 2005, I think.

>> No.6655211

>>6617245
Fucking a chuubas armpits.

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>>6655211
I am fucking appalled by how little of this there is. By little I mean none.

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pettan gang

I need not say anymore

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https://twitter.com/pentad_prism/media

>> No.6656323

currently writing a fic where holoen all kill each other brutally

>> No.6656475

>>6656285
Who's the third from the left?

>> No.6656500

>>6656475
Matuli

>> No.6656503

>>6656475
Bro... it's Matsuri. How could you?

>> No.6656527

>>6656323
Make sure to include a steamy necro scene

>> No.6656536

>>6656503
The pose made me think of Marine, and then my mind blanked on Matsuri.

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>>6656500
>>6656503
In his defense, the lack of ahoge, the sunglasses, and singular sunflower with a face on it make it seem like someone else when uncolored.

>> No.6656672

>>6656319
>>6656285
must... lick... flat chest...

>> No.6656710

>>6656568
That's the ebifrion's face on that sunflower - if anything, that should make you recognize her instantly

>> No.6656711

>>6617245
Convincing Rushia you still love her even though her chest is flat

>> No.6656713

>>6656568
God Matuli makes me so fucking horny

>> No.6656716

>>6656285
>>6656319
NAIZURI ORGY

>> No.6656807

>>6656285
>>6656319
Convincing one of the pettan chuubas that if (You) massage her chest it'll grow! Playing with her nipples until she orgasms just from chest stimulation! Playing with her small tits to the point they lactate through any clothing she wears because they're so sensitive! Fucking her flat chest and reassuring her you love her even though she has tiny boobs! Eventually impregnating her and the pregnancy hormones finally make her go up a few cup sizes! After the pregnancy hormones go away they shrink back to their original size! So she constantly wants (You) to get her pregnant so they stay big!

>> No.6656861

>>6656807
That's like the Anya prompt but pettan

>> No.6656871
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>>6656536
True I guess
You rarely see girls proudly showing off their flat chests, except Matsuri

>> No.6656907

>>6656861
A foolish man criticizes a prompt because it's similar to another
A wise man realizes the same story with a different chuuba will fill his heart and harden his cock just the same

>> No.6656926

>>6656871
Matsuri is one of those girls that their initial design doesn't really incite any horny energy but her personality just bleeds into her design and made her so much sexier

>> No.6657067

>>6656926
NTA but man, same. I thought she was cute, but then it sort of spiraled out of control into insatiable lust.

>> No.6657135

>>6657067
Different anon, Her design itself doesn't do so much for me but the fanart portrays her SEX personality so well that I still end up loving it

>> No.6657273

>>6656871
There was one singing off collab with Kanata, Suisei, Aqua and Marine where Suisei starts beating on her flat ass chest irl. Shit was hot as fuck, now she just somehow got shoehorned into this whole ‘her der flat girls hate being flat’ joke.

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>>6656926
>>6657067
>>6657135
basically, petite girls that can go hard is the hottest shit

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>>6639257
Personally, I would have liked the final bit where anon was captured by Polka to stretch out a bit, rather than have Fubuki save the day for the second time in the chapter.
Overall though, it was pretty good.

>> No.6658629

>>6655422
>Polka rolls in on top of a comically oversized ball
>Bounces off of it doing multiple full flips in the air
>Lands with a roll that turns into cartwheels
>Executes a perfect roundoff back handspring
>Perfectly places your waiting cock in between her inner arm and sideboob

>> No.6658740

>>6617245
Beating your wife Noel because she floated the idea of getting a breast reduction!

>> No.6658984

>>6617245
Finally fucking your gf Luna and destroying both of your virginities but accidentally breaking one of her bones during sex. (You) freak the fuck out but your little cripple princess begs you to keep going because she's so desperate to survive having sex at least once.

>> No.6658994

>>6617245
Office Lady Okayu manages to forget to wear pants to work one day due to being in a hurry and tired from oversleeping and has to hide the issue for the day. She realizes she enjoys the thrill of being in such a lewd position in public without anyone knowing, and starts pushing the boundary of what she can get away with.

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>>6635432
OK, here's something to end the week on a good note. I wish I was faster at writing these things so I could have done more wacky situations, but I hope this scratches the itch for some POLlatio.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTkKGbFTrncbUcx3l0IFWaiVJUCzgsGSORn2IO0oLYAfeJO7Dk_QbaiBNhGD0gjFwlHNvmeFmYnVl7j/pub

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>>6659477
That was good, i wish i got to see her draining (you) multiple times in a row until your cock hurts tho. Due to it being so short it didn't quite get me to nut unfortunately... Maybe i should submit a blowjob and handjob until every single drop of cum of yours is coating the chuuba in front of you.

>> No.6659786

>>6659477
Based writeanon. Yet again one of my prompts is taken making me more powerful.

>> No.6660095

>>6659786
SEAmonkey hands typed this post

>> No.6660301

>>6660095
Anonchama I'm an autist from Ohio. Cornfieldtard hands type these posts.

>> No.6660353

>>6660301
The SEAmonkey can be taken out of SEA, but...

>> No.6660375

>>6660301
>Ohio
even worse

>> No.6660392

>>6660353
Anon I'm literally as pale as milk... I'm sorry that you want me to be a SEAmonkey so bad but I'm just not one of them... I hope you can forgive me..

>> No.6660422

>>6659786
don't make me write another amelia cockblocking your parents fic now

>> No.6660425

>>6660392
In a few more generations, the SEA will be bred out of your bloodline - if you've got siblings, of course, since there's no way you'll be continuing it

>> No.6660432

>>6660095
What would you feel... If a SEAmonkey wrote stories in this general?

>> No.6660441

>>6660432
Holy cleansing.

>> No.6660460

>>6660425
If I won't be continuing my bloodline then why are you flirting with me like this anon? Could it be you have something for an Ohio boy with astonishingly pale skin?

>> No.6660483

>>6660422
I only use my new power for the most autistic of reasons writeanon, nothing to worry about. I just like to pick up heavy things and put them down.

>> No.6660512

>>6660460
You disgust me. I hope there's stage 4 stomach cancer in your future.

>> No.6660535

>>6660512
I hope you know your tsundere demeanor only makes me more interested retard.

>> No.6660567

>>6660535
Redirect your interest to a noose, SEAmonkey.

>> No.6660593

>>6660567
Suicide is for the japanese, not an ohio boy with many ears of corn to eat still ahead of him.

>> No.6660780

GET A FUCKING ROOM

>> No.6660793

>>6660780
Can't you see I'm trying to do that? Anon is just being very difficult.

>> No.6661097

>>6660780
Jealous?

>> No.6661148

>>6661097
So you've finally revealed your "dere" side, Anon?

>> No.6661156

>>6621729
800 words in and I haven't even introduced my character.. maybe I should re think this.

>> No.6661177

>>6661156
Ganbatte writeanon.... I believe in you...

>> No.6661202

>>6661177
Arigatou anon. I'll keep at it!!

>> No.6661464

I'm feeling oddly motivated to continue writing the next chapter of the menhera wrangler series. Perhaps because this is the final stretch, and I want to give it my all to end this series with a very painful bang.

>> No.6661483

>>6661464
Hit me with all you've got wrangleranon. Better make it hurt. Better make it count. This feels train better kill me upon impact.

>> No.6662060

>>6660432
I'm from SEA and have written atleast 3 stories here. Tremble in fear as you wonder if you've busted a nut to something written by my hands

>> No.6662075

>>6661464
Don't hurt yourself.

>> No.6662081

>>6662060
w-which stories anon?

>> No.6662100

>>6661483
It's the last 2-3 chapters, depending if i want to split the last chapter into two halves. Painful can only describe part of what I intend to deliver

>> No.6665112

must...do...reps...

>> No.6665483

>Have never really cared for Luna
>See one mildly lewd image of her
>Suddenly get an idea for her being humiliated and degraded in a "princess licking someone's shoes clean" power loss type scenario
I will now pay attention to your idol. Someone that's not me, make it a quick warm up so I can enjoy the dumb baby being put in her place
And for those wondering what the image was:
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/82011201

>> No.6666088

>>6662081
You'll never know. But I know that there are people that confirmed that they busted a nut to them

>> No.6666333

>>6666088
So you haven't written anything.

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>>6666333
holy digits batman

>> No.6666798

>>6665483
Ask nicely.

>> No.6668876

>>6659477
Oh loved it

>> No.6669744

bump and also I just wanted to say I really like this thread

>> No.6669809

>Nijisanji OP image
>Ctrl+F Niji
>0 results
Why are you all like this?

>> No.6669826

don't respond to obvious bait guys

>> No.6669898

>>6669809
Not my fault OP is a Nijinigger.

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every other thread.

>> No.6670206

>>6669744
I really like you, Anon.

>> No.6670210

Just more proof Niggersanjifags are naught but tribalist cockroaches. We should permanently ban them from this thread and delete any Niggersanji stories in the archive.

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>> No.6670275

>>6670206
I really like you too, anon

>> No.6670346

Oh writer block my old friend...

>> No.6670392

>>6670346
write a smut fic about you and writer's block

>> No.6670602

>>6670346
write a fic about your oshi helping you with your writers block

>> No.6670661

>>6670210
This but unironically. Fuck Nijisanji.

>> No.6670666

I think writing this smut story is awakening something in me.

>> No.6670674

>>6617245
A possessive chuuba i.e. Polka/Rushia is following these threads and she very much enjoys (You) writing about being in a relationship with her. But then you move over to writing stories about other girls and she doesn't take that well. She breaks into your home and makes you write more about both of your lives together. If you complain about being out of ideas of what to write, she'll gladly do things that would give you inspiration, be it fluff or smut

>> No.6670714

>>6669947
WAIT I ACTUALLY REALLY WANT A GTA SAN ANDREAS THEMED VTUBER STORY

>> No.6670742

>>6670674
A possessive chuuba is in these threads and sees you write a story about a her making you write more stories about her so she breaks into your home to make you write more stories about her

>> No.6670785

>>6670714
Polka would be Big Smoke

>> No.6670834

>>6670785
Can't believe Polka would betray me like that.

>> No.6670862

>>6670785
Polka weighs as much as Big Smoke.

>> No.6670865

>>6670602
actually sounds like a fun idea.

>you're an aspiring writer/write as a hobby
>frustrated with your current writer's block
>your oshi comes to check in with you, preferably with coffee and snacks
>you tell her you've been having severe writer's block and nothing's been helping
>she throws wild ideas with bad plot, flat characters and cliche archetypes, likely from her interests in anime/vidya
>you entertain her nonetheless, throwing in your input/critique about her ideas, she pouts but still throws in more wild ideas
>either something sticks and you're motivated to write more or at the very least you appreciate her efforts in helping you.

just wanted some cute moments of your oshi basically telling you about her favourite anime/vidya and you giving elitist criticism

>> No.6670905

>>6670862
that was the joke, anon

>> No.6670968

>>6670865
who would work best for this prompt though?

>> No.6671013

>>6670674
This prompt speaks to me on a selfish level. I hope it gets picked up. I'm too deep in other shit.
>"Anon? Anon, I've been watching the archive! The series you wrote about us is on hiatus!? Why!? I know your writing style, Anon! Why did you write a story about Matsuri?!"

>> No.6671063

>>6670865
Ok, but how about instead of a caring oishi we have an oishi that vehemently admonishes you instead. Convincing you that you will never amount to anything and ripping up your 'garbage' notes before your eyes.

>> No.6671092

>>6671063
that's wouldn't be very nice

>> No.6671132

>>6670968
Nene

>> No.6671167

>>6671063
how cruel. also great idea. I am currently imagining Shion laughing at you with her kusogaki voice saying your works are crap and are kindling at best.

>> No.6671203

>>6671167
Exactly, this prompt basically writes itself.

>> No.6671244

>>6671167
but in reality it was just an act to get you mad at her so you would pin her down and aggressively fuck her

>> No.6671288

>>6671244
Already working on something like that.

>> No.6671304

>>6671244
it never fails to crack me up that whenever Shion is brought up in this thread it always ends up with (You) having to fuck the shit out of the kusogaki.

>> No.6671337

>>6671304
it's the only logical course of action

>> No.6671354

>>6671063
A nice plot twist would be that she doesn't actually mean it and she only wants you to improve by showing you tough love.

>> No.6671358

>>6671304
>fuck the shit out of the kusogaki
careful the scat writer might be watching

>> No.6671422

Speaking of Shion, wasn't there someone writing a fluff fic about her?

>> No.6671432

>>6671358
>(You) make shion cum so hard she shits herself
Writing now.

>> No.6671472

>>6671304
>>6671432
Do you see now that your actions have consequences?

>> No.6671475

>>6671432
You're doing god's work anon.

>> No.6671537

>>6671472
you are but a fool. I expect every and any kind of terrible works to be done. My only objective is to inspire something to be written. I do not care of the consequence, only the product itself.

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>>6671304
Everyone is thirsty for that brat.

>> No.6671667

>>6671422
You mean the sequel to "Genuine Fan"?

>> No.6671710

>>6671667
I think so, it's hard to keep track of all the stories being written

>> No.6672029

>have ideas for next entry in series charted
>can't tell if I want to do a more light hearted chapter first or a plot progression one right away on top of having issues actually getting words out
Fuck

>> No.6672182

>>6670714
>"Hololive, home. At least it was before I fucked everything up.
>Enters house
>Cries in front of picture of Mio
>"YOU PICKED THE WRONG HOUSE FOOL"
>Ey, eyeyeyey! Polka, it's me! Anon! Chill, chill!
>"Anon...? OOOOOOOOOO MY DAWG WHAT'S UP AHAHAHA"

>"Man, you a busta. Straight busta."
>"Fuck you Miko."

>"Heyyy Anon, keeping busy I hope?"
>"You know me, Officer Subaru."

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Since folks have Shion on the brain, here's a little sneak peek of things to come.
>You set down the bags on the kitchenette countertop and start fishing out the contents to be deposited in the refrigerator, freezer and cupboard. A pound of lean ground beef. An assortment of fresh vegetables. A couple cloves of garlic. Some vodka to replace the bottle that you polished off the previous night. One by one, the fruits of your errand are stowed away in their proper place, until the bags are all but empty. At last, you pull out the last of your purchases. The most important one of them all.
>A plain white paraffin candle.
>As you turn the wax cylinder in your hand, a grin spreads across your face. Truth be told, this was the only thing you actually planned on buying when you left the house. But midway to the store you decided to pick up a few things while you were there. Just to give her a bit more time to sweat it out.
>“I’m baaack,” you announce in a singsong voice as you retrieve a box of matches from one of the drawers and turn away from the kitchenette to address the bound girl in your living room. “And I got you a present.”

>> No.6672459

>>6657273
Suisei is comfortable with her chest size, even if she gets the same comments as Rushia. She actually asked Cover staff to make them less bouncy on her 3D model so the audience would focus on her singing.

>> No.6672499

>>6672350
sex

>> No.6672753

>>6656807
Flat chest nipple play is hot... Anyone please pick this up onegai

>> No.6672910

>>6672350
HOT

>> No.6673234

>>6672459
Based ssex

>> No.6673669

>>6659729
I just ended up going well into the middle of the night, and if I let the story grow too large it was going to turn into yet another behemoth. But maybe I'll expand on it later, since that's a very erotic concept to me.

>> No.6674078

>>6670968
Fubuki
The answer is always Fubuki

>> No.6674334

>>6674078
based and foxpilled

>> No.6675070
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6675070

Tags: Shion, SFW, Fluff

To be fully honest, I was going to trash this.

https://docs.google.com/document/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vTATeAdIZZZhfJlexuJ5C_8Py-BFA8nVkxaHhbQzyI6qi-iU0tIlzsol7B8CNq-px9pGWiE91w3Jq4-/pub

>> No.6675578

>>6675070
Thank you friend, I was eagerly waiting for a continuation of the first part.

>> No.6675874

>>6675070
very cute anon. Perhaps it's a little rushed, but all in all excited to see the next chapter(if any)

>> No.6676193

>>6659477
God I want to fuck this fox so fucking bad

>> No.6676704

>>6675070
>I was going to trash this.
It's a good thing you didn't then, it was quite nice.

>> No.6676761

>>6656907
words to live by

>> No.6677128

>>6675070
Garbage story. You should have trashed it.

>> No.6677264

>>6670968
Kanata

>> No.6677331

>>6656907
Fucking cap this, this is true wisdom.

>> No.6677347

>>6677128
stinky.

>> No.6677780
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Which chuuba would be the best for a night of drug-induced wild sex?

>> No.6677850

>>6677780
Fubuki

>> No.6677861
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6677861

>>6677780
Lamy

>> No.6677865

>>6677780
>drug-induced
Crackhead Mori

>> No.6677916

>>6677780
Coco

>> No.6677943

>>6677916
Who?

>> No.6677982

>>6677865
>taking advantage of Mori when she passes out at her first concert's after party
>getting her addicted to crack to make her dependent on you
>Making her pay with her body when she runs out of money
>dumping her when she starts looking like a skelly
>having to block her number when she won't stop calling you

>> No.6677994

>>6677780
you posted her

>> No.6678034

>>6677861
man, I kinda miss that lamy prime anon. He was pretty ok compared to that other schizo.

>> No.6678061
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>>6677780
Ame would make the most sense, she would have the best drugs

>> No.6678081

>>6659477
fuck dude, busted so hard my arms are shaking as i type this

>> No.6678125

>>6678034
I don't. Thread has been 10x better without him.

>> No.6678153

>>6677916
>Coco drugging (You), a random staff member, right at the beginning of AsaCoco and forcing you to sit there as your mind begins to melt until it's over and she fucks your brains out.

>> No.6678172

>>6678034
you know he's still in the lamy thread, right? although they've been having difficulty keeping it alive recently

>> No.6678217

>>6677780
Fubuki but only if there's aftercare involved on the next morning.

>> No.6678256

>>6678172
>although they've been having difficulty keeping it alive recently
While it was entertaining to witness it's kinda expected. You can only run on one gimmick for so long.

>> No.6678275

>>6677780
Kiara after she's gaslit into believing no one likes her but (you)

>> No.6678561

>>6678034
I think he's still here? He said before that he just takes off the trip and has written some stories here

>> No.6678610
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>>6678172
It is most unfortunate, the state of our threads at present. Many of our eldest members have abandoned us, whilst so few fledglings have entered into our embrace.
As this anon has stated >>6678256, we hold no apparent value to newcomers as we produce so little. I am willing, yet entirely unable, to remedy this state of affairs, as I am in no way artistically capable.
I hesitate even to ask given the abhorrence many of you hold for my kind and I, yet would any anon have any suggestions for what we may do to revive our threads once more?

>> No.6678761

>>6678610
Maybe try acting less like a bunch of degenerate freaks and more like people sharing a running gag? Although even so, a gag can only go for so long before it becomes puke

>> No.6678820

>>6678610
I'm gonna be honest Lamy anon, that thread ain't gonna survive if you keep doing the same stuff. You're gonna have to spice it up but I couldn't tell how exactly to do that because I ain't got no idea.

>> No.6678852

>a gag can only go for so long before it becomes puke

Homie over here spouting ancient proverbs

>> No.6678861

>>6678610
Your thread is based off one extremely niche idea. Frankly, it's a wonder it even survived past its first few iterations.

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>>6678081
Hell yeah anon.

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>>6677865
>*smokes pipe in dirty alley*
>h-hey kid do you wanna do a little r-roleplay?
>you just gotta breath in some of this pixie dust and we can go to magicland

>> No.6679261

>>6679099
Holy fuck my cock, I need /ss/crackhead Mori trying to attract middle and high school students to fuck her while tripping

>> No.6679302

>>6678610
Maybe change the way you fucking talk.

>> No.6679305

>>6679099
Mori would 100% be into cocaine or ketamine. Doesn't strike me as a psychedelics person at all.

>> No.6679640

>>6617245
All these pics of the girls wearing collars makes me want a story where (You) adopt a bunch of the animal girls and have to take care of them like pets.

>> No.6679743
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>>6679305
i don't know actual drug terms, its just her luring youths into her magical realm
>"...and suddenly, a tall woman with quite large breasts and pink hair approaches you"
>"she is seriously huge, she makes your character look like an absolute shrimp, I'm sure she could hold you down with little to no effort and do whatever she wants with you"

>> No.6679820

>>6679640
>you sit on the park bench, one hand holding a coffee while the other holds about 10 leashes being pulled in different directions.

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>>6679302
Perhaps you have a valid point. I can't say the way I write is quite so regular as many here. I am unfortunately used to this grammatical pattern by now though, which makes this task ever more difficult. I will take your advice under consideration however.
Thank you for your feedback.
>>6678761
This is something I had considered also. New anons have apparently greater interest in the light-hearted comedic aspect of the threads. As before, thank you for the feedback. I will endeavour to adjust my posting accordingly.
>>6678861
If we cannot regain reasonable interest within the next few threads, I will likely retire them in their entirety. As you and >>6678820 have stated, without new content, the threads simply will not attain any significant longevity.

My thanks for your advice, anons.

>> No.6680347 [SPOILER] 
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I wanted to try and get some feedback on this because I don't really have anyone to ask. I haven't really written or read much outside of school, so I don't really know if this should be entirely scrapped or not. I think I wrote it too much like a robot, and i even noticed things I would edit in the midst of reading it aloud. I also stumbled a lot on the reading, with my pacing, tone, and just getting the words out properly. I decided to just leave it as it is, but I will definitely practice reading more in the future.
Thanks again to the anon that wrote that blurb for me a while ago. It helped a lot.
https://pastebin.com/g0gX7Q93
https://voca.ro/1ldZqmNiQzef

>> No.6680464

>>6680347
Got spoilers working, huh? Good job.

>> No.6680699 [SPOILER] 
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6680699

>>6680464
Thank you anon. I properly used lowercase this time...

>> No.6681150

>>6680347
It is a touch robotic in the sense that some details are unnecessary. You don't need to specify which hand you use to open the door, for example. But other than that it's good.

You have a nice voice Dustbunnychama, I'm sure you'll do well.

>> No.6681379

>>6680347
hey there dustbunnychama(or whatever you're going by), the authanon that gave you the blurb here.

Firstly, I'm glad you managed to write(and read) out this piece, as it's the first step to you achieving your dreams. Secondly, in terms of the story(writing wise), I feel there's some small pacing issues and in some cases, past tense should be used instead of present tense, but you can use Google Docs to help point some of these out to you. And lastly, I felt it was a little bit hard to be interested in what's happening, perhaps due to the jarring feeling some things didn't roll off as naturally as I would expect in my head.

Nonetheless, there is potential in this. Keep writing, keep reading, and keep learning. Don't worry so much that you didn't write or read much since school, as this was the exact same situation I went through and now I'm churning out stories like no tomorrow, like the menhera wrangler series. I can't comment much on the voiceover as I have a knack of sounding monotonous(which is ironic because I do emceeing as a side-gig), but keep improving on your enunciation of things. Voice-over work is hard, I know.

In any case, just keep working at it, and I'm sure you'll make us(or just me), and more importantly, yourself proud.

P.S. putting up your story at the end of the thread makes it hard to gain traction, especially once we've hit bump limit.

>> No.6681520

>>6680347
Your cadence is really strange, not necessarily bad or anything you just seem to place emphasis in unusual places. Also speak with more confidence. The prose itself seems perfectly fine.

I'm curious if this is a personal fanfic sort of thing you're working on or something else? Looking forward to see where you go with this.

>> No.6681668

>>6679820
>Korone started chasing poor Risu again, she's hiding in a tree
>Okayu curled up on your lap
>Botan is rolling around in the sun
>Watame who was previously eating grass is now frozen in fear at the realization Botan is near her
>Pekora is running for her life from Fubuki and Polka
>Subaru is floating face down is a pond, She must be looking for something in there! haha
>Mio is howling at passing cars
>Nene is crying next to you because she got stung by a stingy bee that didn't want to share its honey

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>>6681150
Thank you for the feedback and kind words anon! I'll definitely trim a lot of unnecessary bits out when I'm editing.

>>6681379
Hello again! I didn't put the chama at the end myself, but I think it's cute LOL.
I did indeed write this in Google docs, but I did have trouble keeping track of staying in the proper tense and point of view (sometimes my brain would start churning out (you)s instead of Is). I probably tricked it into thinking those misses were okay somehow. I think I'll try and put it into grammarly. I was definitely thinking that getting to 1k words before even introducing the character was off. I think instead of editing what I have, I might just rewrite it or at least heavily redo parts to try and make it more engaging. I'm also planning on inserting key movie scenes/amv s to break up some parts to help with this. I have a very tough time myself slogging through boring text, so I really want to fix that.
I am very grateful for the encouragement. It's very motivating to hear that I don't need to trash it entirely and that it has potential. I wanna get good and make something cool!! I hope indeed to make at the very least myself proud by finishing it and seeing the project through.
I kinda waited till it hit bump limit because I was anxious about that heheh..It was a bit hard to know if my work will be received well, but it seems it was all constructive. I'm happy about that.

Thank you again for taking the time to write that whole response out!

>>6681520
I had a feeling I had weird emphasis. Thanks for the guidance! I'll listen more to others reading stories and practice more myself before I give it a go again.

I kind of want to bring the dustbunny character to life but a little differently than how most vtubers do it. I know I'd really suck at streaming as I'm very bad at making conversation. I'm planning on streaming a sort of preedited visual novel esque thing with animation and custom art to pair with it. I'll work on other content to disperse throughout too! Thank you anon!

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>>6682065
>It was a bit hard to know if my work (((will)) be received well

>> No.6682465

>>6681668
I wouldn't exactly say petwives > daughterwives, as the difference is minor, but it is an interesting idea.

>> No.6683877

>>6617245
Korone wants you to sniff her ass because she's a dog. Being presented with the shapely and muscular ass of Korone makes (You) lose control. You eat her ass and eventually move on to fucking the doogs ass.

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