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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>60331530, where people discussed Slut Nene's boyfriends, the word shirocummies, a war between promise (formerly council) and breeding Kurokami.

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Story Anchor!
Let me see them~

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap...!
There were no stories last thread.

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sleep tight writer-kun

>> No.60424619

>>60423497
Another link to the second to last thread (which wasn't linked in the last OP) so it doesn't get lost for future archive divers: >>60171799

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>>60423668
Im sorry i was too busing plowing my horse wife

>> No.60424939

>>60424619
Thanks for thinking of the archive Shiori

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>>60423611
Mel accidentally turns you into a vampire, annd now the pon girl has to coach you through living as one

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>>60427852
Cute goofy little idiot

>> No.60428244

>>60411659
>growling in your ear
>"cum when you want, I don't give a fuck. But you better stay hard until I'm done, boy."
Oh my fucking god. Diamonds. Please do a one-shot of the greentext you've made. Pretty please? Cherry on top?

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>>60427852
>>60428153
This reminds me. I need Deal with the Devil ch3.

>> No.60431100

it's so fucking over

>> No.60431700

>>60428244
You or anyone else are free to run with it, but I might write it as a short thing (plus a bit of what happens during sex) at some point.

>> No.60432138 [DELETED] 

So I kinda wanted to write a prelude to advent breaking out, this is a first draft(very raw), can anyone see if one can atleast make sense of what's happening:


A song was heard at the same time by every being on our planet.
No two beings however, heard the same song
They could only describe it as an interruption, as if it was inviting them to despair

At the center of the conflict, beats in which mankind have never dared to cogitate spawned and died, over and over again, their life force sequestrated

Deep underground, the first guard didn’t care about the song, as she only cared about her sister

At the epicenter of all trees order finally gave up, trees would be grow large, only to turn into saplings and sprout roots, sowing more seeds and growing again

Deeper still, the second guard dismissed the song, as she only cared about her sister, and maybe something about prisoners? She didn’t care, one-chan did the thinking anyway

Time wasn’t making sense in this place, beasts spawned and would grow into maturity then stop aging completely, who were taken down found themselves up again with no injuries

A rock wanted to make sense of this song, but alas, it did nothing for it was a rock

From the outside the madness a hooded figure could be seen carrying what could maybe be described as a nephilim, were it still in one piece

Deeper into the prison, a beauty did not hear the song, for her jailers made sure no sound could come in, or out, of her cell, so she kept drinking her soup

“Not again, I will not lose those who are important to me again, I promise”, cried out the hooded figure, as the nephilim opened her eyes

On the depths of the prison, a woman shifted her gaze from the book she was reading, with eyes that could pierce anything, if she bothered to look long enough

The flame from the hooded figure’s lantern snuffed. And the guardian was no more

>> No.60432190

>>60432138
just posted and noticed a couple typos, on it already

>> No.60433715

>>60432190
revised with a few corrections
A song was heard at the same time by every being on our planet.
No two beings however, heard the same song
They could only describe it as an interruption, as if it was inviting them to despair

At the center of the conflict, beasts in which mankind have never dared to dream of spawned and died, over and over again, their life force sequestrated

Deep underground, the first guard didn’t care about the song, as she only cared about her sister

At the epicenter of all order finally gave up, trees would grow large, only to turn into saplings and sprout roots, sowing more seeds and growing again

Deeper still, the second guard dismissed the song, as she only cared about her sister, and maybe something about prisoners? She didn’t care, one-chan did the thinking anyway

Time stopped making sense in this place, beasts spawned and would grow into maturity then stop aging completely, who were taken down found themselves up again with no injuries

A rock wanted to make sense of this song, but alas, it did nothing, since it was a rock

From the outside the madness a hooded figure,
carrying what could maybe be described as a nephilim, were it still in one piece

Deeper into the prison, a beauty did not hear the song, for her jailers made sure no sound
could come in, or out, so she kept drinking her soup

“Not, I will not lose someone important to me again, I promise”, cried out the hooded figure,
as the nephilim opened her eyes

On the depths of the prison, a woman shifted her gaze from her book, with eyes that could
pierce anything, if she bothered to look long enough

The flame from the hooded figure’s lantern snuffed. And the guardian was no more

>> No.60433761

>>60433715
only fixed half the formatting it seems

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Good thread.

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>>60423668
I'm sorry white fox that everyone seems to want to fug for some reason. Life just keeps taking potshots at me and getting up each time takes a lot out of me.

>> No.60439218

>>60436611
>for some reason
You know why.
Seriously though, I wish you all the best.

>> No.60440886

>>60433715
It's pretty clear what is happening in this intro to a story, but there are a lot of mistakes. If your English isn't perfect I recommend checking the text with Grammarly, it can help with quickly fixing basic errors and suggests improvements. If the mistakes are all just there because of lightning-speed drafting, I apologize.

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Ojou grinding her massive dumper on my pindick and causing me to prematurely burst...

>> No.60440981

>>60440904
is that also part of the fantasy or do you actually have a tiny dick

>> No.60441558

>>60440981
You can decide whether or not to believe it but I'm slightly above average actually. I really wish sometimes there were a way to shrink it over time without causing permanent damage to function. Something about comparison and inferiority really gets to me

>> No.60441660

>>60440981
NTA, but Yes. Part of the fantasy is them having an ass so thick your dick can't get past Ayame's probably not the best example but last thread had a scenario given out.

>> No.60441749

>>60441660
I don't know, Ayame is a decent fit for a big dumpy if you like that tits/ass contrast.

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>>60446155

>> No.60446697

>>60446155
>>60446433
repurposing that old Fauna as a horsegirl kemono but with shiori

>> No.60446877

>>60446433
Man this image is now in a weird uncanny valley. Shiori turned out to be deranged but not this kind of deranged. Ironically I can only see Nerissa and Fuwawa doing the "Get Me Pregnant" thing.

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>>60446877
>Nerissa making you loudly breed her the night you go and meet her family for the first time and her sisters got a bit too flirty with you

>> No.60448372

>>60447671
I still can't believe Nerissa described her sister as a shortstack and her mother as a milf. What am I supposed to do with this information?

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>>60423497
Use Fubuki

>> No.60448712

>>60448372
I'd recommend writing a smut fic about making the three into your harem.

>> No.60448803

>>60448372
she's a massive cuckquean and will shlick as you give her both nephews and siblings

>> No.60449530

>>60448677
I'd like to utilise her body as a wank sock.

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>>60448372
You're supposed to do the obvious dude

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>>60450428(me)
Shit, forgot there's the version w/ Mamarissa

>> No.60450934

>>60450833
even if the mom and shorstack sister are hot, i kinda wanna bait Nerissa into making her jealous, before i stuff her like a turkey because i love her

>> No.60451317

>>60440904
imagine she she prematurely burst (from her back pipe rather than her front).

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>>60430509
I'm still having trouble deciding on/coming up with the plot of the story. I wrote the first chapter because I liked the premise but didn't consider what would happen after that, so chapter 3 of Deal with the Devil is basically at the back of the queue right now. It's a problem I was struggling with while I was writing chapter 2 as well, but now that that's over with I really have to find a path to take it down, but I've got nothing right now.
I'm sorry Twap...

>> No.60456608

>>60455488
You have two options, either retcon the time length to be way longer so you can have a plot about breaking the bond early; or start introducing more fantastical heaven/hell characters like Kanata, Choco, and IRyS and turn this into a romcom about having wacky adventures with Towa at your side.

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>>60450934
>Acting completely clueless when her sisters and mom get all flirty and touchy-feely
>Don't act like it's weird when they suggest you sleep in the guest room on the other side of the house from Nerissa's room
>As soon as everyone goes to bed you immediately sneak out to Nerissa's room and find her in there seething
>Fuck her brains out while her family all sneak into your room at the same time and wonder where the hell you went

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>>60448712
>put a family of hot bird women into my harem
Don't mind if I do.

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>>60456703
>ALL her family
was her dad going to join too?

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Right in here - that's where I want to put it. Right into her buttgina.

>> No.60458309

>>60457763
>>60456703
there the joke is that the sisters/mom raid Nerissa's room thinking you double crossed her, but instead you went with her dad and brother to fish

Nerissa never scores!

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>>60457763
>Anerissa, Oneerissa, and Mamarissa all showed up to have sex with you independent of one another
>Paparissa showed up to give you 'The Talk' and threaten you if you don't treat Nerissa right
>Brorissa showed up to do something else maybe gay idfk

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>>60455488
>retcon the time length to be way longer so you can have a plot about breaking the bond early
I was thinking about this, but the "plot about breaking the bond early" is what I struggled to come up with. As for multiple characters, I intend to introduce Kanata, but I don't know what kinds of adventures I could put into the story. An adventure without action seems boring, so I could always grant Anon demonic powers because he's bound to Towa, but that might give whiplash to the reader since it's such a shift in narrative tone, and might also sideline the inital premise of staying within 5 metres of Towa.
I could also just go with a slice of life route, but would anybody want to read that?

>> No.60459530

>>60458913
>Anon demonic powers because he's bound to Towa, but that might give whiplash to the reader since it's such a shift in narrative tone, and might also sideline the inital premise of staying within 5 metres of Towa.
I mean you say that, but I think if you play it seriously there's a absurd/cool scene there of using your emotional/soul binding with Towa in order to activate a Devil Trigger that would be amazing.
Though... More seriously, you do need a plot even if this remains a slice of life thing since the romance does need room to breathe.
Maybe Kanata, Choco and IRyS are spies from Heaven/other part of hell/the fallen angels checking up on Towa's activities on Earth which leads to them getting dragged on your romcom with Towa as the 5 meter restrictions cause various wacky incidents.

>> No.60459882

>>60458441
Brorissa was the only one who had pure intentions.
he just wanted to know if you knew bionicle

>> No.60460994

>>60459882
would brorissa even know what Bionicle is?

>> No.60461946

>>60458197
Anon No! That fox is too thick there's no way you can get past her cheeks!

>> No.60462340

>>60460994
If he's older than Nerissa then he might remember them.

>> No.60462971

>>60458913
>I could always grant Anon demonic powers because he's bound to Towa, but that might give whiplash to the reader since it's such a shift in narrative tone
That’s what call of the night did. It’s mostly a slice of life but there’s some arcs that take off and have action. It works out fine imo.

>> No.60463590

>>60461946
You never know until you try! And even if I fail, get lost within her folds and absorbed into her body, I'll die happy chasing my dreams!

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Whoops, meant to reply to you >>60456608 earlier.

>>60459530
That DOES sound cool. Writing action scenes while keeping Towa within 5 metres sounds tough, but I could find a workaround. If I go with an action/adventure plot I might write a couple more fluffy, relaxed chapters to introduce some more characters then start getting into the meat of everything.
>>60462971
Funny you should mention Call of the Night, I got caught up to the latest manga chapter about two weeks ago. I didn't make the connection, but you're right. There's some inspiration to be found there.

>> No.60466960

>>60455488
How about fluff and romance and sex?

>> No.60467793

>>60466960
Anal sex, specifically.

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>>60423611
Alien spaceship stops to inspect the life on Earth. The only thing that doesn't displease them is Hololive so they kill all of humanity with a human killing death ray except the girls of HoloJP and (you) - the biggest Hololive fan on Earth.

>> No.60469336

>>60466960
I have a fingering scene planned.

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>>60423548
Balse Chapter 27: Onwards into Eternity

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ83GlPAaHACvRSITBQpmkTM0lNggh6qaK3oc3y2zT5UZhYHm4s8hoFR0nV-VET-N-9a3dWbujQwROu/pub

tags: (you), Ciyana, multiple chuubas, fantasy

I tried to go with a bit of a twist end to this so if it doesn't work, I apologize. It's only a small portion but I can see why if people don't care for it.

This is also my first time ever writing a fight with this many combatants so if it looks disorganized and choppy, I apologize. Please be gentle lol. Anyway, hope you enjoy it. I'd say that after this chapter, there is two chapters left in the story. Almost over.

>> No.60472472

>>60470358
Poor Iroha. She's become so irrelevant in her grief of losing her daughter that she magically somehow wound up in the spear's care (with a missing head and being told "she killed her own daughter") when there was no warning that she popped up there and that she only "stormed off" at the earlier scenario.

No this wasn't suppose to be an insult to your work, anon. Just that I'm the only one "annoyed" at this one error when all I could do (like everyone else would do) is just wave their hand and say "she stormed off and took an unseen path to where the spears are that we didn't need to know about).

>> No.60472554

>>60440886
Yeah it was a the equivalent of a half drunk scribble on a napkin version, Ill fix some redundancies and straight up nonsense “not, it will not happen again” besides the obvious pointless interjection, it was kinda shoehorned in to make a silly promise lampshade, prob won’t keep it in the final draft
I’ll probably get to fixing it once I get bacl home and have my pc back, really itching to write about the prison break

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>> No.60473761

Are there any fics in the archive that explore the concept of anal birthing?

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>>60472472
She hasn't been made irrelevant, I promise. Kronii reversed time.

I'm confused. Ciyana sent her to deal with the remainder of the Spears and The only place she could've stormed back to do that is the Cathedral of Return where they were all gathered before. I didn't think I needed to clarify that. Or was something else on that confusing you?

>> No.60474393

>>60473761
I can only pray there are not and never will be

>> No.60474410
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I miss FSM

>> No.60474452

>>60474393
Why? What's not to like? You feel good when you take a heavy shit, don't you? This is no different except you feel so good you cum, and you get to talk to the little shit afterwards if that's your jam.

>> No.60474561

>>60474452
So it's painless and without a ripped sphincter?

>> No.60474598

>>60474561
Yeah of course. That kind of stuff doesn't enter into fetishes. You don't imagine hot flashes and mood swings into your hag fetishes do you?

>> No.60474634

>>60474410
>Latest chapter was published in January 2022
This fucking sucks. I wish we at least had some closure on why the author left.

>> No.60474740

>>60473962
>Or was something else on that confusing you?
I think it really "is" the "time reserve" that's confused me because I genuinely don't tnink Iroha went back to the CoR at all. Yes, she did storm off to "deal with the matter", but the next scenario that happens Iroha doesn't appear at all infront of the spears. The time she does its I think time has already reversed because honestly thinking, do you really think the spears would have been "held off" by (You) when Watame really wants to kill Iroha?

I really, really need to stop trying to review stories I do not read but I just cannot help myself. I swear its as though Iroha pulled a "magic whistle" trick when she stormed off and that's why I was so confused in the first place when I skimmed the chapter.

>> No.60474821

>>60474598
AAAAHHH HAG CELLULITIS AND DEBT OOOOOHHH

>> No.60474867

>>60473761
This made me think of a story where you try to give Shion pregnancy correction but she uses her magic to redirect the pregnancy to your butt.

>> No.60475057

>>60474867
That would be unique but not altogether what I'm talking about. More like Shion using her magic or drinking a potion to allow pregnancy in her ass, then carrying it until birth.

>> No.60476670

>>60475057
Just her as a single mom?

>> No.60477728

>>60469336
I hope Towa gets to use her devil powers to make me happy.

>> No.60477827

>>60477728
What, you think she's going to be fingering (You)?

>> No.60478423

>>60477827
No, I just thought she'd repay you some day. And if you have a supernatural being like her it'd be a shame if she's just like a human in bed.

>> No.60478561

>>60423611
I want (You) to use whatever means at your disposal to break Flare (who has "unwillingly" became your prisoner) and you won't stop until she successfully stopped being a prude bitch and stop thinking she's "cute". But can you do such a thing when you have her in such a vurnuable state and you suddenly have a raging hard on that's physically hurting your crotch? Do (You) toss your plan out the window and force her to "satisfy" your sexual needs until you paint her insides white? Or does she suddenly somehow "charm" you with her elf magic that you end up becoming her boy toy and it is YOU that becomes her prisoner (in your own home at least).

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>>60477728
>>60478423
In terms of adding aspects of Twip's devil anatomy to the bedroom, I'm thinking of making the tip of her tail "sensitive" because it makes her feel "weird" when she rubs it. That's not exactly something she can use to repay you but I think it's quite hot.

>> No.60479185

>>60479077
If she folds the tail's tip it might fit in.

>> No.60479206

>>60479077
What if... what if she could get pregnant through her tail? Like, semen can absorb through the skin of her tail and creates tail-babies, so every time she gives you a tailjob she ends up growing another tail. Towa turns up to Hololive one day sporting 50 fucking tails out of her ass and gets knowing looks from everyone in the building.

>> No.60479237

>>60479185
What, your ass? You want to get fucked in the ass by Towa's tail? That's a weird fetish.

>> No.60479664

>>60478423
What if...
During sex a womb tattoo magically began glowing on Towa's belly? And then lined appear on your hand and you become a half-demon, half-human because Towa unknowingly chose you for marriage

>> No.60480723

>>60479237
I don't think it's a specific fetish of mine, but if you have tailed girl it should be utilized and mutually pleasuring each other is fun.

If you want to tone it down you could do it orally instead.
>lick and rub Towa's tail
>she shivers and covers her eyes
>"Ugh, this is so...aahh!"
>"Should I stop?"
>"No! This can't last or I'll lose my...hah...mind..."

>> No.60482441

>>60479077
>>60480723
What about Towa giving a tailjob?

>> No.60482534

>>60482441
It could work, but her tail is pretty thin so it might not be that exciting - more like jerking yourself off with two fingers. Maybe if she coiled it around your dick as much as possible?

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>>60482441
>Tailjobs
>Anon will one day have a comprehensive list of how each type of tail feels
>hfw Botan is gonna be the first to give Anon that kinda experience

>> No.60482953

>>60482848
Would it work well with the more rigid and furry tails, like Polka's?

>> No.60483131

>>60482953
Are you doubting the pleasures capable of being given by Omaru "Roundtail" Polka?

>> No.60483232

>>60482953
I feel like the tickling of the fur would be pretty stimulating

>> No.60483370

>>60482953
>>60483131
>>60483232
Unless you grab the fleshy core of her tail and desperately rub against it, it'd be somewhere between fucking a pom-pom and fucking a broom.

>> No.60483845
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60483845

>>60482953
Polka's will definitely be a fun little experiment. She herself will be experiencing a mix of nervousness and excitement from it, since she puts a lot of pampering into her tail. She will be glad that her man gets some pleasure from it, but if he cums in it, there might be hell to pay.

>> No.60484495

>>60483845
But what if the other tailed girls who love milking Anon with their tails tell her how much he likes it, and dare her to let him do it to show her love?

>> No.60484633
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>>60484495
Believe it or not, this will be one of the earlier things Anon is actually forward about and requests. He already loves how fluffy and soft Polka's tail is, so when they do start getting a little more physical with one another, it's gonna be on the top of his list of things to ask for.

>> No.60486170

>>60484633
So her tail prudishness is like a hurdle their love has to overcome?

>> No.60486391
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>>60486170
A little bit. Their relationship is built up a little differently and certain things will be brought out in the open soon enough. Her tail is a strict expressive privilege zone though. Her ears are also gonna be another one of those spots once Anon finds out how sensitive Polka is to having them rubbed, and the absolute puddles it makes her create.

>> No.60486832

>>60486391
Oral: Five weeks
Vaginal: Seven weeks
Anal: Thirty weeks
Caudal: Fifty weeks

>> No.60488228
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>>60486832
Damn that's a while.

>> No.60488329
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60488329

>>60486832
>Aural: Six days

>> No.60489813

>>60488329
I never got the appeal of fucking ears, but gently rubbing them to the point of eargasm is romantic.

>> No.60489991
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60489991

>>60489813
Yeah I don't think about sticking my dick in them either, but I just want to rub them for Polka's pleasure. Romance with this cute clown fennec sounds great.

>> No.60490052

>>60489813
What about the esophagus?
https://www.sexylosers.com/comic/047/

>> No.60490091
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60490091

>>60489813
Even outside of sex stuff, I like the idea of animal-eared chuubas enjoying being pet/rubbed/scratched as an act of intimacy

>> No.60491625
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60491625

>>60490091
Me too bro. That's why I make a point to showcase that with Watame whenever I can. And also with elves.

>> No.60492815

It's me. The author of that story you're waiting for. I'm canceling it and making it public domain. It's up to you.

>> No.60493374

>>60492815
I'm going to have it do a crossover with the most entry level /co/ and /a/ things then.

>> No.60493454

>>60492815
Can authors make their vtuber stories public domain even without the rights to use that vtuber character?

>> No.60494397

>>60492815
No! Not Gura's Futanari Cumflation Quest!

>> No.60494873

>>60494397
That story sounds... smelly. And not the good smelly.

>> No.60495752

>>60482848
How's that Botan fic coming along?

>> No.60495935

>>60495752
Last update about HoloJourneys was here >>60436611

>> No.60496033

>>60423611
Cheating on your ex-gyaru turned nurse girlfriend Choco with the otaku gyaru Ririka.

>> No.60496428
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60496428

>>60495752
Actually started to get some writing done today along with some much needed rest among other things, so I feel pretty great about that. I'd love to say I could post the next chapter tomorrow which marks the 1 year anniversary of HJ, but that would be overly ambitious considering where I am in the current chapter. I'll see how things go.

>> No.60496566
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60496566

>>60423611
A fic about Lui's days working for a black company, where she's the free-use office toy to get dicked down at any time.
Including a scene where she gets anally fucked through her black booty shorts.

>> No.60497206

>>60496033
Choco was a gyaru once? Damn thats hot.

>> No.60497752

>>60497206
That's just an assumption of mine but I do recall Aki admitting to being one in her youth.

>> No.60499673

>>60490091
I want to surprise Pekora by grabbing her ears from behind only to softly rub them until she relaxes.

>> No.60499741

>>60489813
I would like to stick my fingers into the earholes on top of their head, but not far enough to hurt them or make it dangerous.

>> No.60503488

>>60499741
I will insert my dick down her ear canals and literally mindfuck her, impregnating her mind with my sperm until she can't do anything but birth thoughts about me.

>> No.60504793

>>60503488
Impregnating a brain to have literal brainchildren sound freaky. I like it.

>> No.60507635

>>60482848
>lying on your bed with a circle of women kneeling around your crotch, facing outwards
> all try to make you cum with their tail while fighting off the others
I call it a jerk-off.

>> No.60512004
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>> No.60514848

>>60512004
What is sex with Aqua like?

>> No.60515353

>>60514848
so good it unleashes two years worth of semen

>> No.60516430

>>60515353
Which makes a glopping sound as it fllows endlessly forth.

>> No.60518343
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60518343

This stream is an order of magnitude more autistic than it seems

>> No.60518628

>>60518343
what da shiori doing?

>> No.60518688

>>60518628
streaming your daily life

>> No.60518743

>>60518628
Yandere sister roleplay apparently. Incestfags, look!

>> No.60518809
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60518809

>>60518628
Pic related but she's currently asking about putting make up on (You) or a mannequin

>> No.60518984

>>60518343
w-why is she smiling at me like that...?

>> No.60519049

>>60515353
What would getting locked in VR with Aqua be like?

>> No.60519093
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60519093

>>60518743
>>60518809
stay strong novellites

>> No.60519192

>>60519093
She's moved on to dresses and is asking if we'd wear one for her HELP

>> No.60519376

>>60519049
She will unironically try to live out her fantasies of being Kirito.

>> No.60519542

>>60519192
>shiori giving you the most debauched and mindblowing blowjob after putting you in a dress

>> No.60524638
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60524638

anyone working on something Zeta related? i started watching her a bit and she's great

>> No.60524900

>>60524638
She's a spy cat person right?

>> No.60524951

>>60524638
Most people in this thread probably forget Zeta exists. Myself often included.

>> No.60525181

>>60524900
She's a spy, the cat is a meme but i like it because it fits her. She's very soft spoken and nice, but can get in some bratty streaks. There's not a single braincell there however
>>60524951
hey at least its not iofi or mel! but im always surprised how unknown she is. she's part of a really strong ID gen, rolls off a lot of people, does ASMR, etc

>> No.60525405

>>60514848
She requires guidance and practice, but she's very eager to make you happy and will be amazing once she has learned to enjoy herself, and to utilize her shortstack body.

>> No.60525513

>>60525181
She definitely has correctable little sister vibes, but she's completely overshadowed by hagsmith and Kobo. Neither of which get fics here either...

>> No.60525722

>>60524638
When my accept my inevitable fate as a writer here and write a fantasy series I was planning on her being a party member to fill that rogue spot.

>> No.60525895

>>60525181
I think she's only really unknown for the EN fandom. Iofi is the one people actively forget, and Anya can't be forgotten here because of the fat tits of her first model.

>> No.60525974

>>60524638
I watch her from time to time, but I had no inspiration to really write her so far. She's so pon and hot that I'd mostly consider her a candidate for smut...but what role would be better filled by Zeta than by another holo?

>> No.60526026

>>60525181
I can work with the spy angle. Thanks bro. I like the ID girls as a whole, but just haven't had much exposure to zeta yet.

>> No.60526044
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60526044

>>60525895
God I miss Anya's fat tits

>> No.60526202

>>60525513
i have a soft spot for that Kaela fic we got. Its cute, even if really short
>>60525974
>>60526026
Well maybe how something like
>You try to capture Zeta, but she's one step ahead and reverses the situation.
then maybe femdom? of the cuddly kind

>> No.60527081

>>60525722
What if you write it as a standard fantasy setting but Zeta inexplicably just has a gun for her weapon?

>> No.60527225

>>60527081
i mean, hand crossbows were the OG guns

>> No.60529438

>>60526202
The spy angle could use some clothed sex.
>Her teasing you because you cant see anything despite riding you

>> No.60529604
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60529604

>>60518743
Honestly the post RP Zatsudan tickled the incest nodule of my brain more than the actual stream idea.
>Staying up late at night to listen to your sister talk about old-school YouTube drama before she kisses you goodnight

>> No.60532953
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60532953

>>60529604
Hopefully your other sister won't be too jealous.

>> No.60533124

>>60532953
I remember seeing these image sets and assuming it was the step-sister trying to get the actual sister jealous enough to drop the tsundere act and make a move. Artists paywalled stuff revealed they are totally fucking behind the real sister's back

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>>60532953
>tfw I have a setup similar to this
Oh yeah, it's time for the pseudo-sister vs real sister deathmatch for anon's dick.

>> No.60534053

>>60533697
The real winner will be their aunt that was fucking him behind both of their backs

>> No.60534272

>>60534053
>"Well folks, it seems Shiori has her brother in the bag... What's this?! IT'S FUBUKI WITH A STEEL CHAIR!"

>> No.60534338

>>60532953
In fifth and sixth grade I often daydreamed about my crush (a transfer student) being adopted my family and having a secret relationship with her.
My brains were on anime wavelength even before I was exposed to anime.

>> No.60534520
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>>60533124
His "stuck with an enemy soldier who doesn't speak your language" set makes me think of Botan

>> No.60534540

>>60526202
If anything it might end up the reverse, where Zeta is trying to capture (You), and might be up to intercontinental shit.

>> No.60535676
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60535676

>>60423611
Waking up as a Cover employee in a reversed gender role world and immediately using your new existence to whore yourself out to all the horny chuubas

>Did you hear!? Anon-san will sleep with any girl for only 3000 yen!
>and let you suck his dick for FREE!!!

>> No.60535785

>>60535676
You read that one BNHA doujin, didn’t you

>> No.60535936
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60535936

>>60535785
Maybe

>> No.60536995
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60536995

I've written too many Maria scenes. I can't help it, she's a great character

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>> No.60537414
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>>60536995
Iluna in ninnisani scenario??

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>>60537414
Yup. And Lolisex too. Some have more or less scenes than others, but all play a part. Pretty good cast, all things considered. There's only one I'm having trouble finding a role for

>> No.60538224

>>60537678
That sounds like a massive cast. Are the first three gens still going to be the main focus? Because it sounds like you might have trouble with the pacing if there's that many characters.

>> No.60538270

>>60537678
Zaion my beloved

>> No.60538427
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>>60537036
You people couldn't comprehend how hot that hairband in Fubuki's new outfit is to me. There's a lesbian scene in the first porn film I ever saw (L'indécente aux enfers) where the other girl wears a hairband like that.

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>>60538224
It is a massive cast. I don't plan on structured routes for everyone though, it'll be a lot more scattered in most cases, which is easier to work with, even if it does tend to create longer scenes.
In terms of pacing, that won't be a problem. One of the benefits of visual novels is you can alter narrative structure. I have no idea who the players are going to go for, so I might as well let them decide what parts they wanna see.
I think players will like that a lot after the first VN, which had a long common route with some routes having tricky conditions.
All in all, it's a fun little cobweb. I'm a good way through the rough draft, I just need to fill in the gaps, but instead I find myself making more and more Maria scenes as they come to me.

>> No.60538496

>>60538427
I can't get used to her new face. I've tried to like it but I still hate it.

>> No.60538511
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>>60538270
Just you wait

>> No.60538541

>>60538478
Please make the tricky route conditions clear to the player.

>> No.60538606

>>60538496
Dude, you're such a bitch. I think her new model is miles better than the old one.

>> No.60538641

>>60538606
No fucking way. Really? I mean it's subjective but jesus christ her new model is SHIT.

>> No.60538660

>>60538496
>>60538606
>>60538641
I didn't like the initial reveal of Fubuki's new model, but with the new outfit and the fixes to the model and just getting used to it over time it looks great.

>> No.60538685

>>60538641
No, her old model is shit. She's always had hollow, dead eyes in every outfit except for her 3.0 default, and a chin so sharp it could take someone's eye out. No, her new model is softer, cuter and an upgrade across the board.

>> No.60538770

I have WIP about model changes. I should probably finish it now.

>> No.60538828

>>60538770
Title: Fubuki's Plastic Surgery

>> No.60538868

>>60538685
Agree to disagree, I guess. Aside from the wobble in her eyes I think the new one like it was made in 2016. It's like if Miko or Sora went back to their first models.

>> No.60538876

>>60538685
It's probably an upgrade "objectively", but it can be hard to see the flaws in something you have enjoyed for years - and to get used to something new forced upon you.

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>>60538876
Maybe. I've been following her for 3 years and I think the newest model is... I was going to write "best iteration yet", but there was a real charm to her 2.0 default that I liked a lot, so I'm going to say it's just as good. Didn't like her 2.0 secondary outfits and hated her 1.0 model across the board.

I really like her default design so I'm especially happy to see it appearing so frequently. She doesn't seem to like it as much as her other outfits.

>>60538868
Yup, agree to disagree with this one.

>> No.60539192
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60539192

Everything in Fubuki's face kinda just blends into each other. I guess you could fix it with bolder outlines and starker colour contrasts maybe?

>> No.60539210

>>60539192 (me)
and having at least a dot for a nose

>> No.60539287

>>60538770
What is it about? Having Fubuki put on a paper bag over her face (she got it from IRyS) while you get used to her new face?

>> No.60539316

>>60539126
>She doesn't seem to like it as much as her other outfits.
Fubbers' original outfit just doesn't seem very evocative, even if it is aesthetically pleasing. If you think about the kind of person who'd wear something like it, who would that be? If anything it looks like a slutty fanart/cosplay version of a regular shirt+hotpants outfit.

>> No.60539380

>>60539287
It's some dumb action fic where (You) have to capture the old fubuki model before she kills the new one.

>> No.60539639

>>60539192
>Everything in Fubuki's face kinda just blends into each other.
I think that was partially the point of the makeover.

>> No.60539691

>>60539316
It's cute, unassuming, and with a modest helping of lewd. My favourite.

>> No.60540979
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60540979

God damn good Foobs set.
https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/112572876

>> No.60541101

>>60538606
>>60538685
This is a horrible opinion. It feels like someone took a blur tool and merged all her features, plus they ruined her eyes

>> No.60541446

>>60541101
You are wrong. Plain and simple.

>> No.60541801
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ttf3JzaGp7I
>Toko is good at milking
Oh, look, another good idea I'm not gonna do anything with.

>> No.60541910

>>60541801
How do you milk someone's fingers?

>> No.60542119

>>60541910
Have you ever seen a cow udder? Doesn't something look familiar there?

>> No.60542271

>>60542119
Well, I can see it now but I don't think I've ever made that connection before.

>> No.60542588
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>>60539287
>In 2025, five years after a global cataclysm called the Holocaust, Anon is summoned to the futuristic city of Holo City 3 by his estranged father Yagoo, who is the director of the special paramilitary force COVER. Anon witnesses United Vtuber forces battling a SEAmonkey, one of a race of monstrous beings whose awakening was foretold in the Dead Sea Rrats.
It's later revealed to Anon that all the holos fighting alongside her are just replaceable clones.

>> No.60542657

>>60542588
him*

>> No.60542971

>>60539380
This makes me think this is some kind of cyberpunk thing with every model actually being a new consciousness. With old Fubuki going postal on a mission to kill the new Fubuki because she was being replaced.

>> No.60543229

>>60542588
>>60542657
Too late this is a Femanon fic about her learning that her inexplicable command ability over vtubers is because she's a perfect clone of the first vtuber Kizuna Ai ... Or Sora if you just want to keep this holo-centered

>> No.60543396

>>60543229
>if you just want to keep this holo-centered
I'm just shitposting

>> No.60544534
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60544534

>>60518809
>>60519192
>>60519542
I grow more and more convinced by the day that all the NTR/sissification rrats are true and that she's just hiding her true powerlevel. Even through the veil it's obvious she squirms over the thought of having a subby slave to humiliate and I wish it were me

>> No.60544681

>>60544534
Let's make a deal - you put on the dress and kiss Shiori's feet while I breed her.

>> No.60544759

>>60539192
>>60541101
I think you guys perfectly explained one of the main things I dislike about it but was struggling to put my finger on. She seems too blended together.

>> No.60545032
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60545032

So how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: What's a fic idea or prompt that's still stuck in your head?

>> No.60545717

>>60545032
Beautifully. At least for the first part of the story it did.
Here comes the 'Wait, I actually have to finish this?' shitshow.

>> No.60547398
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>>60545032
Inspiration struck me like lightning and I see a great path ahead for my fic. Things are looking great.

>> No.60548342
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>>60423611
You, Anno Yumosu, are an office drone/chuuba slave for the prestigious company Hololive, once a bright-eyed and eager young intern hoping to gain work experience and a potential office job serving the oshis you and everyone else looked up to.
But the glamourous facade didn't last long. Behind closed doors, the seemingly good-natured girls engage in the most cruel degeneracy- blackmail, backstabbing, berating workers in plain sight are all just the tip of the iceberg. Having ben photographed in a compromising position as blackmail during your internship, for more than a year, you've had to keep your lips shut and your eyes turned away as you were subject to sudden loads of extra work, relentless sexual harassment, and overhearing every slur known to man when microphones were off. At least one of the godless hags keeps leaving bottles of breast milk in the fridge and threatens to arrange for pay cuts for those who refuse to drink it. Some interns are made to help Korone with "exercise", then either start coming back to work covered in bruises and nursing bandaged hands, or are quietly let go with a decent severance pay and a signed NDA. You knew at least two people who suddenly and abruptly were found dead after an extended spat with their boss, Calliope Mori (allegedly to heart attacks, at the ages of 24 and 36). And, while you pray to God that it's not true, rumors abound amongst your co-workers of a horrible party held routinely where innocent, unaware, virginal shotas as young as 18 years old (some say even as young as 17.9) are taken to meet their favorite oneechans, and come out hours later, traumatized- if they come out at all. But you're trapped, and you know it, and everyone else knows- so you accept it and tell your family that it's all fine, praying for a day when you can find a better workplace.
Before that day arrives, a disheveled and panicked Amelia greets you first, who insists on taking you on what she insists is important business. And as you're unceremoniously shoved into a car and made to drive for the corrupt detective and her friends, you overhear the details of why you're doing this and just how fucked the company is:
Their private group chat message logs, the one place where their vileness was allowed to be unfiltered, have finally been leaked. Even the DMs. And until the company can find a way to cover up the scandal and/or figure out who's responsible, you'll be forced to help babysit these psychopaths on their surprise vacation. Will you play along and try to get in their good graces for an early retirement, or will you try to escape the bondage you've been put in and even sabotage the corrupt schemes of Yagoo, knowing that doing so risks being buried in a chum jar at the bottom of the sea?

>> No.60548560
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60548560

>>60423611
Aqua starts dating with a fan but gets increasingly frustrated with how effeminate he turns out to be.

>> No.60548579

>>60423611
Zeta has to rely on using her body to infiltrate a high security facility

>> No.60549954

>>60548560
That fan's name Hoshimati Suisei.

>> No.60553031
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>>60549954
Aqua x Suisei would be more like this:
https://files.catbox.moe/j7noi1.jpg

>> No.60553447

>>60545032
There will be no writing for the next two weeks while I finish up this uni semester. After that though, I'm going fucking ham.

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>>60545032
I'm not adding any more new scenes to The Oni's Rebellion so I can focus on copyediting (for real this time).
>bonus
After the discussion here and the 3D debut, an old idea for Zeta resurfaced...she really is perfect for soft femdom BDSM but I'm only kind of into that, and I have other ideas too.

>> No.60556381

>>60554460
Why are you smiling like that Ayame? What are you going to do with that glow stick?

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Hello, I've been ill for the past few days so I haven't kept up with my Shiori Holoctober writing, now that I'm feeling somewhat better I wanna catch up on everything.
That being said, what the hell is retro / vintage? Could anyone give me an idea of what that's supposed to mean in terms of story writing?

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>>60557474
im also swamped with work but retro/vintage could easily be either a story set in old times like
>Shiori is a victorian lady
or could work around an item, something like
>You visit an antique shop with shiori and talk about the stuff it sells

Im pllanning a gag for that one

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>>60557779
Thank you very much Bae holoctober writer!
Second one sounds very much something I could pull off.
>spoiler
Good luck with it, I wanna read all 31 days when they're fully published.

>> No.60557902

>>60557474
I don't know if it could be referring to a writing style, but to me it sounds like the prompt in context of Holoctober is that it's supposed to be the girl in a vintage or retro style outfit. The term is so broad though that it could be almost anything; 80s retro clothing, roaring 20s swing attire, or possibly something more noire in appearance. I think you can kinda run with what you think of when you try to picture something retro or vintage.

>> No.60558504

>>60557902
or you could have her play a ps2 game

>> No.60558712

>>60557474
I always look at the fanart for the Holoctober day in question before I start writing. Never failed to get inspiration there with how many artworks are posted.

>> No.60558811

>>60556381
She's probably thinking about where it might fit.

>> No.60558824

>>60558712
This worked for me until Police day which I also came here to ask about. Not many Police Shiori drawings sadly and I'm seeing only a few Vintage / Retro Shiori unless twixxer users aren't properly using the tags. (Which wouldn't surprise me.)

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>>60558504

>> No.60559257

>>60558824
Fair, if you're limiting yourself to a specific chuuba you have much fewer opportunities.

>> No.60559564

>>60557474
the idea that popped into my head from hearing "vintage" made me think of formatting the fic like an old twilight zone episode, or tales from the crypt. the fic written like. narrator speaks

"this story is about a Young Shiori Novella, such a bright girl, but soon her life flips on her poor little head when she discovers an ancient tome. once she reads its forbidden contents she'll be DYING to share its knowledge!"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F8h8Q7CM93s

>> No.60560272

>>60548560
>>60549954
Instead of making it having an OC with a name similar (but male version) to Suisei why not just make it a story where Suisei never become an idol?

>> No.60560332

>>60560272
That's intruding on alt!Suisei territory :p

>> No.60560766

>>60560332
I know you're shitposting anon, but alt!suisei WAS an idol even if it was the kind she didn't like.
That was until her character got butchered to the point she's no longer interesting. But I'd still rather a "Suisei that never became an idol" rather than a cop out with a male that has a name similar to Suisei.

If I sound aggravated then I apologize.

>> No.60560913

Wtf is an alt Suisei

>> No.60560961

>>60560913
search it in the archive

>> No.60561026

>>60560913
It's a long story.

>> No.60561534

>>60560913
In a way, /wg/ is its own story.

>> No.60562047

>>60560766
It's an issue of not differentiating enough, I think. If there are multiple different concepts they should get their own specific name each.
Maybe you could come up with a more descriptive and unique name than "alt!Suisei", to help everyone understand what idea you fell in love with.

>> No.60562518

>>60560766
>Male with a name similar to suisei
What? I lnow some anon is working on a vn and the other idea floating around is alternative reality menhera but where did a guy pop up in all of this?

>> No.60562874

>>60561534
/wg/ should have its own cinematic universe.

>> No.60563139

>>60562518
See >>60548560 and >>60549954, it has nothing to do with the menhera alt!Suisei or the Ao alt!Suisei. Let's just say it's Suisei as Aqua's boyfriend.

>> No.60563248

>>60562874
You could make a contest that revolves around connecting different /wg/ stories, but I fear a lot of people would have neither ideas of their own nor motivation to write something someone else came up with.

>> No.60563283

>>60563139
But boy Suisei is called Meteor-kun iirc

>> No.60563954

>>60545032
Making some good progress on the Shiori ryona fic.

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>> No.60567255

>>60544681
Doesn't seem like much of a "deal"... there are only upsides for you... okay though

>> No.60567555

>>60567045
I wanna impregnate two hat Samantha

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>>60567555
Already beat you to it

>> No.60569407

>>60563283
Didn't know that, it's a fun name though.

>> No.60570713

>>60569237
Anon...thats Sara Gutenberg...you've been had

>> No.60570907

>>60567255
Letting another man watch while having sex is a decently big downside.

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Call me Juan Diaz Rodriguez de Jesus el corazon cristo because i want to colonize zeta and pump her full of mulatos

>> No.60572111

>>60571845
Why Spanish instead of Dutch?

>> No.60572208

>>60572111
The spanish made the biggest and longest trade route inbetween Philipines-mexico
Also dutch isnt as funny as the word bellaco (evildoer)

>> No.60572344

>>60572208
Fair, but Indonesia was colonized by the Dutch. And they do have very funny names.

>> No.60572422

>>60572344
Whatever the case, i think Zeta should ride me like a fair pony

>> No.60572529

>>60572422
This except I want her to ride on my back and also my dick

>> No.60573186

>>60572208
Dutch is the funniest language because it sounds and looks like an unholy combination of German and English.

>> No.60573653

>>60572529
>you are her spy handler, getting all the missions
>when she comes back, she usually cashes in a reward
>sometimes, instead of headpats or dates she asks for horse rides or a princess carry
And then, seggs

>> No.60574532

>>60570907
You know, in the same situation I'd actually agree myself since a big part of it all's monopolizing (admittedly negative) attention for myself, but I've met several people that are more than eager to have it happen. I guess it like, enhances the power kick of plowing a taken woman to be able to order around/actively deny her SO during the act?

>> No.60577338

Live

>> No.60577445

Its over. Its time to deploy the battle fic

>> No.60577755

>>60574532
I can see that but I'd just feel awkward and a bit bad.

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>>60573653
>Zeta is a pon, slutty and careless girl who is happy to be paid in physical and emotional intimacy with her handler
>nobody understands how it is possible, but she is also the best secret agent in the world

>> No.60579234

>>60577961
i mean, if everyone is looking at your ass and legs, chances is they dont see your face

>> No.60580610

>>60577961
Those are some nice thighs... shame about her status as an indog.

>> No.60580747

>>60580610
She is the whitest Indonesian, at least. Even her orisong is in English

>> No.60581519

>>60580747
At least she knows where the money comes from. Maybe I'll give her a watch, as I know nothing about her

>> No.60582475

>>60562874
We got that with It’s /wg/‘s Birthday.

>> No.60582587

>>60581519
I don't watch her too much, but she has her moments. https://youtu.be/U9qqg9eBsrQ?t=3568

>> No.60583197

>>60563283
Ryuusei would be a better male name if someone actually wants to seriously do Boy!Suisei.

>> No.60583307

>>60580610
I love the ID girls because they are different from EN's tho. And i mean it on the best way posible and not in the threadshitter sense
There's certain edge and quirkyness to them, If i had to put it in an analogy
>JP: Nice friend from school. A bit weird but nice and fun to hang out
>EN: neighbourhood friends. Always up to something fun, even if they can get goofy
>ID: Weirdo Cousin. Things get weird fast but also a great time

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>>60423611
EN's comfort woman doing her duty

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>>60577961
Broooaaad thighs

>> No.60588874

>>60586601
I feel bad for Bae. Every time she has an off collab with the other EN girls, they just end up molesting her and passing her around like a toy

>> No.60588986

>>60588874
Fucking hetero ravegirl
Needs lesbo molestation correction

>> No.60591131

>>60588874
>women love to molest her
>small chest
>12 years old
>Australian
How did I never realize Bae was actually a shota?

>> No.60592684

>>60591131
>She's a shota
>hangs out with mori
nyo...

>> No.60593142

>>60591131
>>60592684
Shota Bae ratboy with huge balls getting a simultaneous blowjob and rimjob from Mori and IRyS

>> No.60595326

It's weirdo hours for /wg/ it seems

>> No.60595511

>>60595326
When isn't it weirdo hours for /wg/?

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OOOO YOU WANNA WRITE ABOUT MIORI SO BAD OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

>> No.60597636

>>60595576
One day I'll finish that WiP.

>> No.60598466

>>60593142
All of Ministry should've been shotas

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>> No.60602957

>>60602617
>it ain't gonna suck itself

>> No.60604488

>>60470358
why does Noel keep being brought back just to get jobbed

>> No.60604609

>>60602617
>My pov crying into A-Chan lap because I'm being forced to stream for 2 hours this fiscal quarter(My name is Gawr Gura)

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>>60602617

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>>60602617

>> No.60609545

>>60608147
Kobo after i throw her down a flight of stairs (she needed correction)

>> No.60610155

>>60423611
>>60602617
>>60608668
A fic where (You) are a Cover Corp employee with a bad habit of tripping in front of different Hololive girls, and their reactions.

>> No.60610756

>>60610155
>Trip in front of Matsuri
>Look up
>See that under her skirt, she's got nothing except a band-aid covering her vagina
>She smiles
>"....want to get a closer look?"

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>>60610155
>"You know, if you wanted me to step on you you could've just asked."
>"What-OW!"

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>>60610155
>Trip in front of Kronii
>Look up.
>See that, under her skirt, she's wearing very frilly blue lingerie.
>"A-Anon, hey! What the hell are you looking at?!"
>"You tripped? Yeah, right! You wanted to take a look!"
>"Why am I not covering myself up? YOU should cover your eyes!"
>"I-It looks good? Of course it looks good! It's my underwear we're talking about here, after all."
>"Actually, I just bought these last week... are you sure it looks good?"
>"Ugh, fiiine... You get a pass. Now take my hand; I'll help you up."

>> No.60611795

WRITE, WRITE, WRITE

GET INSPIRED, GET INSPIRED, GET INSPIRED

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Anybody here ever been hit by a car? What's it like?

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>>60612803
I wouldn't recommend it. I got sent to a fantasy world and couldn't come back until I finished my quest.

>> No.60613385

>>60612803
Yeah, once. It sucked, dude. Took ages for me to get over it - fucking truck killed my pregnant wife. I sometimes hear her laughing in the next room whilst I'm shaving or cooking dinner, and run out into the next room looking for her. Course, she's not there, and I am sorely tempted to just run a blade across my throat then and there.

Wouldn't recommend it.

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>>60613385
You should ask your sister-in-law for a nursing handjob to finally move on

>> No.60613795

>>60613723
I am now tempted to write about Elira.

>> No.60613991

>>60613723
Was Elira the one driving the truck on that fateful day?

>> No.60614022

>>60613723
That's it, I'm writing a paizuri scene. Too temptuous for my blood

>> No.60614099

>>60613723
That comment is really funny.

>> No.60615439

>>60612803
I once HIT a car on my motorbike and went flying, if that might help.

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>> No.60617165

>>60615439
Not specifically what I was asking for, but another fic I've had stewingn in my head might benefit from it

>> No.60617194

Okay, lads, I'll bake something

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>>60617194
All right, it's baked

>>60617287
>>60617287
>>60617287

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>>60617411
>A-chan thread

>> No.60617782

>>60617691
cute rock

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