/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>59971674
Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em.

>>59971674
Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
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Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
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>>59971674
Story recap!
There were 3 stories posted last thread, look at you go!
Pale Blue - Pt. I >>59811585
Tags: SFW, Drama, Incest, Romance, Identity

Balsa Chapter 26: The Birth of Venus >>59863550
Tags: Anon, Mel, Ciyana, multiple chuubas, fantasy

31 days of Shiori based stories for Holoctober! >>59962465
Tags: Holoctober, Shiori Novella, Anthology, multiple stories ranging from Fluff to NSFW, ongoing

>>59971674
Story recap!
There were 3 stories posted last thread, look at you go!

Pale Blue - Pt. I >>59811585
Tags: SFW, Drama, Incest, Romance, Identity

Balsa Chapter 26: The Birth of Venus >>59863550
Tags: Anon, Mel, Ciyana, multiple chuubas, fantasy

31 days of Shiori based stories for Holoctober! >>59962465
Tags: Holoctober, Shiori Novella, Anthology, multiple stories ranging fron Fluff to NSFW, ongoing

>>59971674
>>59971674
Story recap!
There were 3 stories posted last thread, look at you go!

Pale Blue - Pt. I >>59811585
Tags: SFW, Drama, Incest, Romance, Identity

Balsa Chapter 26: The Birth of Venus >>59863550
Tags: Anon, Mel, Ciyana, multiple chuubas, fantasy

31 days of Shiori based stories for Holoctober! >>59962465
Tags: Holoctober, Shiori Novella, Anthology, multiple stories ranging fron Fluff to NSFW, ongoing

anon...

>>59972043
this was my first time baking please forgive me

Thank you for baking, I would have but I'm currently bedridden and doing it from my phone would have been worse than these back spasms

>>59971802
I WANT TO UOH
TO LIVE MY LIFE AND TO BE FREE

>>59972652
it's no problem. hope you feel better soon anon

>>59971802
While im going to,once more, ask for a Fauna fic where she lets a fart and is mortified by it, i also think any chuuba in sport clothes having a massive brapper is valid

>>59973148
You ask for this a lot, but you might need to give someone a little more to go off of or get interested in it if you really want something about a chuuba being embarrassed by their own farts. I'm not even sure if anyone is currently writing something with Fauna as the main focus. You just might need to sell your cause a little more to get some bites.

>>59974197
Well my pitch comes from the angle of how mortifiying is farting for girls in general. I mentioned a while ago that when talking to some girl-friends, they ranked farting as way more embarassing than pissing yourself because everyone knows that pissing yourself is something that happens when you are at your wits end, its something that if it happened, you either have a condition, the stars aligned and/or you are drunk.

Losing control of your body with farting however, is way more mortifiying because not only is grosser (due to not being as tragic) but also because it might forever exist as a funny anecdote (the logic is that you dont go around saying who pissed themselves unless you want to throw dirt, but "hey remember when jenny squatted and ripped one on that party" quickly becomes an anecdote).

So with all of this being said, i think Fauna is a great candidate
>She's prim and proper. she likes childish humor but not outright crass stuff
>she has a huge ass
>her diet makes her more likely for the incident to happen. It leaves to less jumps in logic.
While the prompt can work with anyone, i think a vegan who eats chickpeas all day and takes great pride in being a cute lady creates a nice contrast. The setting could be something like "Fauna finally hits the gym with you and the workout has her so rattled that a squat makes her rip ass" and it could easily leave to an erotic situation.
Otherwise, it could be an erotic situation where that happens and it kinda kills the mod.
Im not picky, so ill take anything , but i like the first idea a bit more because it plays on the vulnerable side.

Thanks for coming to my ted talk

>>59971802
Watermelon Game Day - a Hololive adaptation of the movie Groundhog Day.

>>59975274
since you seem a little more passionate about this, wouldn't it be better if you just...wrote it yourself?

>>59975583
i tried, but i cant get off to my own writing

>>59976078
Try banging your head with something immediately after you finish. Maybe you'll forget that you wrote it.

Ah, yes, Shiori my wife...

>>59976401
i wrote this post

>>59975274
Would you mind if there wasn't a self insert character?

idk if it's seasonal depression but i can' t push myself to write for some odd reason. do any anons here go through the same thing, or have a way to work through it?

>>59979133
never force it. The unfortunate fact is that if the inspiration isn't there, it's not there. Usually walking stimulates the creativity for me but if that doesn't work then I just wait for it to come whenever it decides too.

I've learned that you just have to wait for it to come to you sometimes, otherwise the work you produce will be shit and you'll hate writing it. Also I wish Anya would lose her flat chest debuff

>>59979133
For me, it's kind of the opposite. I write even if it's a token effort. It's maintaining the habit of writing that counts. Even if I feel uninspired, eventually something comes to me after an hour or two.
But everyone has their own methods. It may or may not work for you.

>>59979133
It's 50/50 for me most of the time. Sometimes when I don't want to write, I'm just being lazy and that's when I force myself to start. Other times I would be I would be head empty and won't be able to write anything satisfying so I just leave it. And when that happens, I just do other things, other hobbies, socialising other media etc. Everything and anything can serve as inspiration, just gotta keep an eye out for it.

>>59979133
If I'm depressed or something is emotionally stressing me, it makes it really hard to write. I've also found that there are times where I might be sad but if I tunnel in on my writing, it's a kind of stress relief. Every situation and every flux of emotions is different though. Sometimes diving into your own trenches is the way out, and other times you just need to wait out of the storm. The key can be not to let the idea that you may not be writing get in your own way. Even if you aren't making wordcount and page progress, there's things you can do that will still count as wins towards your own projects. Brainstorming, light outlining, even just an idea for a scene all in your head can be considered great strides. Remember to give yourself the slack and Ws you deserve. It's a long way out of that dark tunnel for some of us, but we'll all get there, just keep at it and take it at your own pace.

>>59979248
>>59979342
>>59979881
>>59980543
thank you anons I appreciate the advice.

>>59979054
nope. i indulge in /u/ stuff and i dont really self insert so i dont have a problem with that

Alright bros, I removed a broken kitchen sink faucet and replaced it with a new one. How many babies does Coco want me to put in her now? Also who else might get super frisky after seeing their man do some basic house handyman acts? Pic possibly related.

>>59984781
Choco's ovaries release every single egg they have (like 2) when she sees a man who can hang a shelve

>>59984781
Ah, the dragon law of equivalent exchange.
>finally fixed the faucet
>Coco's pants start leaking instead

I miss architectbro's smut

>>59986308
>"Gotta plug this one now, Anon!"
>Yeah uh, I think I left my cock in the bedroom.
>Hide
>Coco bangs on the door, but it won't budge
>"... You fixed the locks on the bedroom...?"
>Yeah? Wh-
>OH FUCK
>Sadly for you, the lock isn't strong enough to withstand Coco.

>>59986308
>>59987556
while the married life is fun, i want to see the courting ritual anon has to go in order to woo Coco

>>59987265
I don't.

>>59988858
I'd likely try to come up with dragon society esc things that a man would need to do in order to prove his worth to a prime female dragon.
>Gold hording (need to be rich and provide)
>show of physical strength (need to be able to endure fat dragon ass without your bones breaking, as well as hot temperatures)
>Gift the maybe bride to be a large plot of land for them to raise their eventual children on
>Slay any other potential suitors
Ya know, normal dragon stuff.

>>59990529
>Doing three shots of Everclear for breakfast before robbing a bank and killing a cop to convince Coco that you're marriage material

>>59991094
Damn, now you got me thinking of how far Anon will go just for dragon coochie.
Probably just far enough.

>>59990529
>Your wallet falls from your pocket. Coco sees your well kept checkbook
>Coco sees you lifting with your legs
>She knows you have your own apartment
>That one time you clocked tim from accounting in the jaw? she was there
she's already in love

>>59992263
>Coco becoming your submissive housewife more and more the crazier and more dangerous things you do for her

>>59996018
>getting her submissive enough that she will play number 2 to a sheep.
>she hates this reversal of the food chain, but loves how you made it happen

So how are your wips coming along anon?
Bonus Question: Do you have any wips you've abandoned? Share the idea behind it, or just throw out a snippet of it to let the idea leave your mind.

>>59999488
Seeing Mio pics always makes me think of the story Miso Soup, which in turn always makes me feel hungry.

>>59999488
I dropped this Noel Flare threesome in Juneof last year for reasons I can't specifically remember, so might as well post it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSRGBv7e8i6gCDs2TS2d8p-XC-jvpbU9JZUT63qH4rkI_LglRTbXozVdetCYpuHjspn5ID-YBOZqNOw/pub

>>59999488
I haven't started Balsa chapter 27 yet. Just busy with other stuff.

I've had a number of abandoned projects:

Lemon because I don't know Kiara well enough to write that correctly

What Kind Of Coffee because that's a story I don't think I'm able to write in a way that's interesting. I like the concept but I can't get the execution.

Well of Dreams due to poor audience reception, in fact most all of my adventure stories with the exception of Balsa and Sand Planet have been scrapped because I wasn't good enough at writing those stories.

Nonsense Speaker because people aren't sold on the cross-gender thing.

I think that covers it. I've kept to most of my stuff but unless it's a passion project like Balsa or Building Block Doll, strong amounts of audience distaste usually make me put it on the shelf.

>>59996018
That fits nicely with that prompt of Anon being half dragon and beating her in a fight

>>59999488
working a bit on a mori wip. Its hard to write when im not hard (heh)
>Bonus
I had a comedy idea called "Nerissa finally scores". The idea was that Nerissa begs advent for sex
>"Moco-chan! wanna come to my room and have fun?"
>"Un!"
>Fuwawa peaks her head in the kitchen
>"Moco-chan no! she has peanut butter!"
>"un?"
>"That's how our uncle got his wife!"
>"Oh...sorry Nerissa"
>"Shit...Fuwawa wanna come to my room and play? i have...huuh..natto?"
>"Un!"
>"Fuwawa no! That's how mama puppy got us!"

>Luckily, Nerissa was a master at rizz
>"Biboo...if i dont have sex...i might kill myself"
>Bijou munched her crayons, took a swing of her glue bottle and then wiped her face with the napkin. She wasnt a savage after all
>"sorry rissa, i have a raid today and also Kaela already told me she was going to kill herself if i didnt wear the minecraft armor in her room."

Last but not least, she would desperately crawl to Shiori
>"Shioriiiiiin...pussy...vagana...poonus"
>Shiori closed the book and scratched her chin, deep in thought
>"Sure why not"
>"vulva...coño...manko..labia...wait what?"
>"i said sure. I finished my book and the thread i was baiting got derailed into talking about boring stuff like male self inserts"

I dropped it because i dont really know how to cap the joke, maybe it being that Nerissa finishes in sub one minute but its still acting like she's the best, or maybe she gets cold feet at the last second. Hell i even considered a Cromartie-like gag where when she's about to take Shiori's bra, a meteorite falls and aliens come out

>>60002461
maybe you should also considering dropping the idea called "having bae as your oshi"

>>59999488
Decent enough. Haven't written anything in days but I've been mentally brainstorming a lot. Barring anything coming up, I set aside some time tomorrow to relax and write, so I'm hoping to make good progress then.

>>60002609
you are right. i should listen to you aggroschizo, you always know what to say

>>60000142
What did you have a problem with? The setup or the smut? Because both sides are actually pretty well written. Independent of the other, the setup reads like it would fit perfectly in a romcom thing, meanwhile the smut is pretty good and honestly just needs a little bit of setup to work.

>>60002980
I'm keeping this reaction image kek

>>59971802
Working hard to get Kaela to notice you are courting her with the drama being that grandma ela is slowly diying and she has to take care of her half sister ckia so she doesnt have time for romance

>>59971674
Where the NTR at?

>>60005486
It's in the /ringo/ thread on /d/. You should check it out.

>>60003148
From what I can remember I had no confidence in my plans for a threesome and I have never felt much urge or inspiration to go back to it. Kinda of a shame i won't use my idea of Flare saying the marker wouldn't look good on her skin as a defense for not being marked up, only for Noel to pull the condom you have on off as you fuck Flare, saying something about how a baby-bump would look better.

>>60005486
if you're the shion ntr guy, then give it a week or so.

>>60008753(me)
>>60005486
sorry, Ayame...long day at work

>>59999488
After a long car ride, I have figured out how I want to do an important scene, I'll start actually writing it "soon"

>bonus
It is not a WIP, but I abandoned the prompt "making Suisei cry" that was posted long ago. I have no qualms about suffering fics but I couldn't really find a way to make it believable without being trite. Otherwise, I have never dropped a WIP, my sunk cost fallacy is simply too strong

>>59999488
I wrote more.

>>59999488
Pretty good. I'm about to get busy in the coming weeks so I don't know how much I'll be able to write, but there's plenty of motiviation and inspiration.
>Bonus
Here's a rough, rushed draft of a fic I tried writing for the contest. I dropped it due the time constraint, it having a contrived plot, having no motivation to finish it and overall not liking what I had written.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQtobQirs_8deSlO-sRHC09dut13d3jsPXRjF2CxPQ8qFgQKpuZiAG0Vlv9gZLwghdZr09W4uZDfNM3/pub

>>60015227
Is the HCanon?

>>60015227
Your standards have to be really damn high if this is something you'd abandon. What part of it didbyou not like? Because damn, this seemed like the start of a heartwarming romance fic.

>>59999488
I am writing character monologues about their pasts so I'd have a good idea of how to write the rest of the fic. It's been fun so far. I'm also prepping a couple of other things.
>Bonus question
I have a finished but unedited 15k-word draft and a 30k-word unfinished draft of a Watson fic I have no idea whether I'll be going back to or not, considering how things are currently going.

>>60015260
Yeah, what gave it away?
>>60016789
I'm grateful to hear that. I guess part of it may have been because it seemed too "basic" compared to the other WIPs I have going on, do I didn't have any drive to work on it when there were other more interesting projects. The only reason I started it was because I was hoping to whip up something short for the contest, though as you can see down the bottom, I ended up expanding on the concept too much.
I also have two stories in the oven that feature the gozaru so I didn't want to get bored of writing her.

>>59999488
Realized I had to scrap an entire chapter, and that even then I might not be happy with the final results, but hey, here I am.

>Bonus
Oh boy.
>rrat!Ayame takes revenge on her rival, Marine, by raping her childhood crush
https://rentry.org/4s5ak

>Marine pretends to be a sheriff to get fucked by an outlaw and finally score
I just dropped this out of laziness but I might get back to it one day if I ever write pure smut. Super happy with the start as well.
https://rentry.org/oz7fb

>>60017582
>Yeah, what gave it away?
I've just been here way too fucking long apparently

>>60018214
>Rrat!Ayame
This feels like it could have been an 'interesting' NTR fic, shame it hadn't gone anywhere
>Sheriff Marine
Honestly feels like it blows its load of misunderstanding way too fast. Even if you wanted it as a pure smut piece I feel like having that string of misunderstanding run through it all would have made it work better rather than just dropping the premise halfway so you can have a smut scene in a bandit hideout.

Has any particular part of a fic stuck with you?
For me, its
>Final scene of Sakura Summer
>"You're mine for a year!" In petting your fox 2
>Koyo trying to woo Anon in Match-Made
>The STD talk in Our Cures, as well as the one line "It's the most average dick I've ever seen."

>>60008753
>shion ntr
What fic or idea is this referring to?

>>60021435
See >>60010157

>>60021574
Oh yeah, I do remember that one anon requesting an Ayame NTR fic.
Though speaking of Shion NTR ideas ...
Can't really think of anything too character specific for her.
I guess her being a fantasy witch means you could run that classic fantasy scenario of
>Be Shion's boyfriend
>Warn her of the perils of adventuring
>Brushes you off, and says this goblin mission will be the easiest money she'll ever make.
>Scene of her smugly killing goblins
>Remind yourself that overconfidence is a slow and insidious killer
>She messes up, gets gang raped and mindbroken by goblins.
>Cue epilogue, you chasing after Shion's last whereabouts.
>Get farther than her into the dungeon and find her
>She backstabs and betrays you while revealing she's heavily pregnant.
>You bleed out while she has sex with a goblin she calls darling

That aqua vn is coming in english tomorrow for anyone would wanted to play it
https://store.steampowered.com/app/2515070/AQUARIUM/

>>60023085
Although I kinda want to for FAT PIRATE HAG ASS route, VNs are kinda in that territory of games I can't really play due to
>hey husband, what ya playin? are ya winnin?
and before you say
>but anon, you write chuuba fanfiction, what do you care?
It's a game of pick and choose lads. Some aspects of your power level are better exposed than others.

>>60023485
If it's any consolation, the Marine route is a joke ending that happens right at the beginning of the game.

>>60023485
>FAT PIRATE HAG ASS route
sorry hj anon, that route doesn't really exist. there's a joke choice right at the start where you accept marine's advances and then everyone goes sailing on a pirate boat and that's it, same for fubuki.
Also can't you just play when she's not at home?

>>60023641
Why would they do this to my senchou?

>>60023672
You thought Marine had the ability to score?

>>60023660
>just play when she's not at home
oh that's a good one anon, that slaps me on the knee. She rarely goes out without me.
>>60023713
I had hopes that Marine the head maid had better odds. Someday she will score, I swear it.

>>60023672
Its a vn based on the most boring gen2, what were you expecting

>>60023713
Yeah (with me)

I think I've finally got the inspiration for a Building Block Doll like story. It'll be with Fuwa/Moco to start and other chuubas most likely later.

Question is, should the MC be (you) or another chuuba?

Hello. I need some opinions for today's Holoctober setting (Police) Shiori.
I asked this in her general where I usually reside but wanted some more opinions if you kind anons don't mind.
Give me opinions on what to write for a Police Shiori.
>You're a fellow police officer with Shiori
>You're a criminal she's captured.
>You're a victim of a robbery that she has to rescue
>Your little sister Shiori is a police officer.
Most popular combination seemed to be a mixture of 2 and 4.
Thank you in advance!

>>60024023
I feel like Shiori is better as a forensic police helping you solve a case

>>60024083
Yo, I like this one actually, lemme note that down.

>>60024214
that's what she said

>>60024023
Have her be the the wacky Sherlock style tv detective, with you being their straight laced sidekick.

>>60024083
Maybe she could be the stylometry specialist in the intelligence division.

>>60024023
I gotta go with >>60024083 on this. Shiori is definitely not a beat cop or a jailer. You could go with a "science focused major turned detective" route for her though. Remember, despite what amelia has you believe, a detective on the force is different from whatever silly private eye shit she does. Depending on how you want your piece to go, if she is a detective with specialized forensic skills, you could build your story on how (You) are committing petty crimes at first and eluding arrest, and as time goes on and you attract her attention, you up your game, caught in an addicting game of cat and mouse for both of you. You leave just enough clues for her to follow, but never pin you outright.

>>60024016
I feel like if you're having FuwaMoco be the starter caretaker, it has to be a reader insert due to the teletubbies with tits jokes about them. They don't really have a "junior" partner that feels right for both of them to be 'mommies' for. (I suppose there's bijou but that doesn't really feel right.)

>>60024401
I'm so glad I asked here, I'm in love with specifically this idea and I'm going for it.
Thank you so much.

>>60024866
No problem anon, glad you asked. Give it your all, I'm sure your oshi will be proud of you. Also don't be afraid to ask for any more advice or the like regarding anything you might be unsure about for your work.

>I'm so glad I asked here, I'm in love with specifically this idea and I'm going for it. Thank you so much.
t. second most based Novelite

>at the forefront of western literature
>a modern library of Alexandria
t. Ayame's Korean husband

>>60025546
Soon I'll have all 31 days of Holoctober up on the rentry. Only 24 days to go!

>>60025609
nice job man. You didnt heard from me but there's a chance i also take a crack at a "writetober?" inspired by you.

>>60020873
That scene in Heartbreak Tokyo where the MC greets Polka from across the clubroom was pretty great. A good setup for later that I'm excited to see unfold.
I also liked the scenes in Cover High with the jail guards. I know that seems odd but their antics with transfer student were fun.

>>60024401
>>60025546
Quick opinion while I draft this up.
Is it too 'easy' if (You) are related to Shiori either as an older brother or cousin?
Basically, (You)'re always 1 step ahead of Shiori simply because you've grown up with her your whole life

>bored
>watch mori stream (featuring Kiara from the Kiara may fry series)
>unironically love them as a couple
that's it, the u shit got to me...save yourselves

>>60026287
If you want to go the familial route that's fine, a think a cousin who later became estranged after a while would make Shiori unsure of WHO could be committing all these crimes for a while. A brother might be a hard sell for her to not realize who done it unless she knows from the start and has been trying to tail him for years. If you want to establish a pre-existing relationship, they could have been friends who later lost touch after adult life started to happen, an unrequited love during their teenage years, etc.

>>60028073
Hmmm estranged works, I basically wanted to go for a compelling start-up, something like
>Your life of crime started from a simple wish to get Shiori something nice for her birthday
But at the same time I was thinking that it might have been a bit 'too easy' to evade Shiori?
Either way estranged cousin works. It fits both past and present.
Thank you!

incest is better when they dont know they are related at first (in this case, Shiori is your half sister) but succumb to lust way harder when they learn about the bond

>>59971802
An unironic CBT fic.
Something like getting a handjob from Shion, cumming too early, then getting punished by her kicking you in the balls for 10 minutes.

>>60028545
What if it wasn't born out of you failing her but just something she had planned to do as a surprise?
Like you going in thinking you'd get to manhandle her only to end up with your cock and balls at her mercy (which turns out to be more enjoyable than you thought)?

shiori in moris VC. Morning voice

Early morning Shiori in VC

>>60030994
>>60031040
Thanks for keeping us informed about our archiver

>>60030994
>Late night Mori
>Early Morning Shiori
>Post breakfast Nerissa
Sex voice trio ikuzo

>>60033181
>3 way hand job while blindfolded, the 3 whispering in your ear about how big your dick is

Can anyone give me a chuuni name or title for Iroha? Thanks.

>>60034214
Queen of Bushido?

>>60034214
Blade of the Eastern Wind

>>60034214
>Silent Gust
>Blonde Jetstream
>Susanoo's disciple
>Girl From Nowhere
>A gentle Breeze
>Hurricanes edge
>Noble soul

>>60034214
Cute flat sex goddess!
.....sorry, got distracted by your image.

>>60022911
I got an idea for a Shion NTR fic
>Be Shion's boyfriend
>Shion has to hide her witch status from the religious villagers
>One day she gets found out
>Both you and Shion are captured
>Shion is given a choice
>Either you both get burned at the stake or Shion becomes the town's onahole
>She chooses to be an onahole to protect her first and only love.
>Tearfully say your last goodbyes to Shion as she gets dragged away never to be seen again for a long time.
>The next time you saw her was a glimpse through a neighbour's window after checking it out because you could hear a familiar female voice.
>She was riding Mr. Ugly bastard's dick with a slutty and joyful look on her face.

>>60034214
If she's presenting herself or has the reputation associated with HoloX, maybe something like: The right arm of Her Darkness, or The Laplace's blade.
Her on her own: Owner of Chakimaru, The Lightning Edge, Wandering Leaf

>>60034386
>>60034390
>>60034439
>>60035031
Thanks, I'll be using some of these
>>60034455
I can actually worm this one in.

>>60034684
if I may:
>you say your goodbyes then the vilagers let you leave.
>you promise yourself that you'll become a strong knight one day to save her.
>you train and finally become said knight.
>go back to the village. no one recognizes you anymore so they let you in
>the village looks like its much better off than it used to be, and when you ask about witch burnings the locals tell you that no one does that sorta thing anymore, then tell you where to find the last witch they caught.
>go to a brothel type building and you see Shion in fancy clothes getting railed by several fat rich guys showering her in gifts and cum, >she's beyond recognition. and she no longer recognizes you.

I want to write femanon but I can't decide if she'll be a girl-kisser or if she'll be straight and the guys would be genderswapped girls

>>60035598
I vote for the latter. There's not enough Rule 63 in the archive, especially non-femboys. Futa is also an option.

>>60035598
Towa...
Suisei...
Ao-kun...

>>60035598
you could always have fun with it and make it some isakai thing

>anon goes to bed
>wakes up
>"huh...my chest feels heavier than normal"
>has that moment where they panic now that they turned into a girl
>anon's harem is now a reverse harem

>>60034684
>>60035354
Meh, I prefer a more personal kind of NTR. Moral degeneration type NTR just feels too detached unless the girl is rubbing it in your face, while kicking you in the dick.

>>60034390
I'd put my blade up her eastern wind if you catch my drift

>>60037588
Wouldn't that be the southern wind?

>>60035598
>>60036217
Non-canon genderswap side chapter for HoloJourneys when?

>>60037970
that poor femanon would just become a babyfactory

>>59999488
I just pulled the plug on adding more new scenes to The Hedonist's Rebellion now that I wrote the ending. The story has spontaneously grown longer multiple times, but I'll stop here and just focus on cleaning it up again. Any new ideas will have to go into the sequel or something else entirely if they're good enough.
Bonus: No, not really. Only very rough summaries and inspirations that I wouldn't call WIPs - only recordings of ideas so they don't get distorted or even lost over time. The only one that could be said to be crossing over into WIP territory would be the "Shion as a medieval witch who becomes a knight's prisoner-turned-companion" concept from a while ago.

>>60038016
The side chapter would probably end before pregnancy would play an important role

>>60038405
>Shion as a medieval witch who becomes a knight's prisoner-turned-companion" concept from a while ago.
I barely remember that concept but I distinctly remember the anon pitching that taking it back because they were making it, but not as a chuuba fic.

>>60037905
South-east if I'm looking at her left side

>>59999488
Life and emotions are turbulent and my spark is currently absent so I'm on break for now, I do have the general framework and idea of both my current wips seared into my mind so I just have to wait until the autismo strikes again
>bonus
I did have that 1st person Chloe ghostfucking fic that I was going to make a second part for, but I dropped it because the whole thing was really just an experiment for writing 1st person female perspective smut that I ultimately decided wasn't for me
Other than that, a couple of ideas I had for some series dropped simply because I realized I'm not a smut series writer, one-offs give me more freedom and don't have the same weird sense of pressure and obligation I put upon myself when writing series

>>60038903
Ah, so I take it you're not doing more of that demon lord fic?

>>60039798
Likely not. Mostly just bad memories I want to leave behind now

>>60038689
I ended up incorporating it into a TTRPG adventure, yes. I replaced the knight arriving in the town with the party and let them take it from there. Both the players and their characters got pissed off at not!Shion's attitude and mistrust - understandably, considering they rescued her from the angry townsfolk. But they ended up letting her go free rather than handing her over to a temporal or spiritual authority that would've punished her, both because they're kind-hearted and because a witch's curse is nothing to risk lightly.

>>60037970
Now you got me thinking of which of the harem would rail femanon the hardest. My initial guess is that a genderswapped Watame would be unable to restrain herself and just plow her like there's no tomorrow. Polka with a dick and testosterone might also be very dangerous. Nene and Lamy with cocks will also 100% double team femanon. It's a funny idea to think about at least. Maybe if I'm itching for another side chapter one day, I'll give it a spin.

>>60041511
>>60037970
>have a big orgy planned tonight
>excited to plow a lot of women
>due to some convenient bs (astrology, a magical object etc.) everyone becomes genderswapped for the night
>the whole harem is really excited to try out their temporary (and surprisingly large) cocks
>ohshit.png

>>60039836
What a wuss.

>genderswap talk
I will simply leave this here

as a side note. imagine a fic where femanon gender swaps to anon and with her new cock she ruthlessly fucks her oshis

>>60042325
Sounds like a regular self-insert fic with some extra-steps...

>>60041972
>the rest of the fic is you trying your best to avoid getting fucked and failing miserably as you constantly end up getting caught and having your holes filled up by different holos.

>>60042833
That would make for a fun comedy-smut concept, but otherwise it's too cowardly for me. A man should stay true to his word, even when he's not a man temporarily. And presumably you'd still be heterosexual and have lovers who care for you, so it will be pleasurable once you get into it.

>>60042325
What's the angle there, a femanon who hates male vtuber fans only to learn how they feel firsthand?

someday someone will take the "Anon gets turned into femanon and starts seeing towa and mori as cool and sexy" comedy prompt.

>>60043087
Pretty much. If he was suddenly a girl HJanon would end up being curious and Flare would likely feed him some ideas about how if he goes through with it and lets her stuff her new cock in his mouth, he will figure out how he can better pleasure his ladies in the future. It would also be funny for him to see how the girls handle cumming from a dick.
>Flare passes out after just one orgasm, not so easy is it you smug half-elf?
>Meanwhile anon thinks not having a cooldown time on orgasms is the raddest thing ever, and with his muscles still working in peak form, he can take the extra effort

>>60042211
Cute, but I like her more when she's big.

>>60043306
>>Flare passes out after just one orgasm, not so easy is it you smug half-elf?
Spontaneously, I can see two angles for this kind of plot: One serious where one of the prouder women genuinely thinks being a man in bed is easy mode only to be humbled by issues with getting it up, cumming too early, not hitting the right spots, slipping out etc. and thus gaining more respect for Anon; and one comedic where a silly, overly excited girl just keeps jerking off (or fucking someone or something) before its her turn in the first round of Anon sex, and then holding everyone up while she desperately asks Anon how to reboot the cock because it got stuck at the first part of the soft->hard->cum cycle.

>>60043549
Like this?

>>60043980
Yeeeeees.

>>60043854
There's enough girls for both. You can also have several of the girls having a dick measuring contest while they wait.

>>60044291
Definitely! There's a lot of girls, but probably even more good ideas if you put your mind to it.
And not to go firmly into /ringo/ territory, but I imagine girls who suddenly had a dick would have a lot of fun testing out the greatly improved aim.

>>60044291
Elf dick measuring contest!

>>60044416
I wonder which girls would be the most obsessed with the idea of impregnating anon

>>60045187
>Matsuri
Seems like she'd be right up the allew of creampies and yelling some NTR-protag line like "You're gonna have my babies!"
>Botan
Too lazy to pull out
>Marine
Lost in pleasure, can't pull out
>Korone, Koyori, Polka, Fuwawa, Mococo
they will knot you

>>60045662
What about Mio?

>>60045849
Taiga clawed at her dick to make sure she wouldn't procreate.

>>60045849
Will pull out as not to be rude, unless you leg lock her in which case god help your behind, you're about to get seeded deeper than the mariana's trench

>>60045187
>Lamy
would likely want you to just service her entirely, but do things like stroke your hair tenderly throughout it. Once she gets in though, she's just gonna pump and dump and want a drink.
>Suisei
Will want to straight up fill anon's pussy and ass to the brim as a power move and to assert dominance
>Koyori
Will want to overflow anon's womb with enough researched density and volume to ensure a high chance of pregnancy. Will bring her own methods to keep herself up.
>Flare
Definitely wants Anon to carry her children, will softly make love in the missionary position for this purpose.

>>60046068
>as you're getting plowed by Mio, you notice something's off
>sure, the wolf girl is putting a lot of effort into bringing you pleasure (and is doing a surprisingly good job at it, too)
>however, you can't help but notice the dejected look deep inside her eyes
>it's as if there's something she really, really wants to do
>and yet, Mio's holding herself back, most likely out of consideration for you
>you always loved how caring and kind your lover is towards the others
>but at this very moment, you can't help but hate this part of her, as it is yet again keeping this precious woman from pursuing her own happiness
>you know you can't let it go on like this
>which is why you wrap your legs around her back, locking the two of you together
>you pull surprised Mio in a hug
>and you whisper gently in her cute wolf ears
>"I want to have a biiiiig family with Miosha~"

>>60046933
>Mio begins panting, her thrusts become more rapid
>She moans, her balls are slapping against your ass
>Bring your legs to your sides, Mio places her thighs over yours
>Whisper into her ear again
>M-Make me yours forever~
>Mio bites your neck possesively as she drives herself into you one more time, overflowing you with her seed.

>>60045187
>>60045662
>>60046812
Now which ones go for anal

>>60046933
>>60047295
>another /wg/ thread, another discussion involving painful reminders of how far away my story is from wolf hag bliss and writing her into the life she's always wanted
Back to writing.

>>60047360
Kanade (on accident)

What's a good title for a thief, aka (You).
Anon already being used as a generic name.

>>60048816
The Nameless Nicker

>>60048816
With Shiori as the girl of interest I would make either a play on words or a direct reference to a thief in one of the sherlock books she gushes over.

>>60048816
If its Shiori related, Lupin is an easy one. Its a book reference that can keep her interested
Other could be Goemon, for a deeper pull or even something simple as "the hood"

>>60048816
Some ideas
Incognito - Synonym of Anonymous
Iusene arpine -The Maurice Leblanc style of off brand names

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTGG7X5Hyxqs2rg9VtVMqaCw12LxR2-gAWbQXwfguKlIWWea_bj1k_-COs6pWBV7zYp06-A1zFQkhH1/pub

Thanks to the novellite for the idea and the inspiration! Im gonna anchor it once its done, but for now, i will update/repost once it gets some work done
For now, here's Holoctober prompt day one: Maid, featuring Bae

How many words have you written today anon?

>>60055192
zero

>>60055192
Nothing that sticks.
I've realized if I want to make this story work, I have to scrap around 25k of work and start over a clean slate. I want to take a break, but this fucking story is literally the only thing that's been on my mind for the past few months.

But you know? It's somewhat liberating to know it doesn't work, it just points you in the right direction. I hate this hobby so much, it's the best thing in the world.

>>60055192
Does the n word count?

>>60045662
>Polka will knot you

>>60059932
So while Polka's fennec vagina traps you for four hours, would her dick do the same?

>>60055192
Around 3k. Most of it is schizobabble though.

>>60064090
Sounds like my type of fic.

>>60042211
Gamma's "sister" makes my penis tingle

>>60068853
Imagine meeting her at a rave, getting dragged into the bathroom, then given the fucking craziest, wildest lay of your life

>>59971674
bump

>>60070941
Then several days later you learn you have contracted several stds.

>>60075066
Anime girl pussy is immune to STDs, anon

>>59971802
Cumming on Chama's tits

>>60047360
Ayame, but she's very small so it works out.

>>60062420
>Polka deliriously blabbering into your ear while rutting into you with an already sealed-knot for hours
I'm not into futa.
However...

>>60079811
Rule 63 for both sides is pretty different from futa, anyway m

>Out on the balcony, when Anon kissed Pekora's lips, her knees went weak. Slowly, he pulled her top down, exposing her soft, unyielding breasts. Just the sight of those breasts made Anon's penis very hard. His penis was of considerable size, and now beads of sweat slowly ran down his penis, making it glisten like a strong swimmer, fresh from out of the pool. It was a fantastic penis, that seemed as strong as a horse's leg, yet as delicate as a flower wrapped in silk. What a grand, grand penis. Pekora's nipples...

>Pekora had never slept with another woman before, but it was an erotic thought she often fantasized about, and as Marine's naked body lay before her, Pekora couldn't help but feel aroused. "Go on", Marine said softly, "Touch me." Pekora leaned down slowly and brushed Marine's bare stomach with her fingertips... It felt good. Like a penis. A soft, but sturdy penis that felt warm to the touch. In Marine's mind, she suddenly felt like she was surrounded by penises. They were all around her, flopping all around and slapping her face. It was as if she were in a redwood forest of penises. They presented themselves tall and mighty all around her, with...

>>60080508
This thread right now kek.

What if I want to see a R63 chuuba rail a regular female chuuba instead of a femanon

>>60082285
The normal chuuba fanfic community takes those. We're the gutter trash that takes the weird shit and the self/reader-insert stuff.

>>60082285
You could write it! If you need inspiration let the thread know.

>>60078840
I want to drink from them.

>>60087434
I'd like to settle our differences with my enemy.

>>60087762
I'd like to settle my penis into her vagina, if you catch my drift. And then maybe settle down and start a family with her. She'll settle for me - she's got no one else, and I'll settle for nothing less anyway.

>>60087762
>>60088286
Oh you guys, reminding me what a travesty the latest The Settlers game became...let's just say that Kurokami is the kind of enemy you'd like to fight up close and personal.

>>60088784
>Kurokami is the kind of enemy you'd like to fight up close and personal
With my penis.
And its chief opponent'd be her vagina.

>>60089224
I have a feeling you will fall for her enveloping attack but punch through in the centre.

>>60089270
Whatever else comes, you've got the "fall for her" part spot on

Get a random fic from the archive and share your thoughts on it.
>Ko'one Breastmilk
Cute but short snippet. Not much to say here so reroll.
>COVER Corp. Talent Security Division, Prologue
It feels incomplete without chapter 1 to follow on after it. I get that it's supposed to be the prologue, and it does fulfill the purpose of being an interesting enough hook that you click to the next chapter. I think I vaguely remember this getting released sans first chapter when it first got released and me having this same reaction of 'this feels interesting, but it needs more to it'. Thankfully this does have the next chapter to follow up on it so this train of thought feels a bit pointless now.
Hope the anon writing this comes back to it. This made me reread chapter 1 as well. and I like the setup enough that it's making me wonder how the fic will proceed. i.e whether it's going to for Stalker of the week type cases or go for a big old myth arc for everything.

>>60090368
>Monochrome Christmas
I nearly dropped this one at the beginning because I thought it was a Fubuki story (not that there's anything wrong with Fubuki, but she is a bit oversaturated in the archive) but was pleasantly surprised to find that it was Kurokami-centered. The opening act was quite good, I enjoyed the shopping trip. It was cute and well written. After that though, the characters in the story kinda stop acting like human beings. Anon hears Fubuki say "People close to me will only be friends" and them immediately assumes that:
A. She is not just saying this to appease her fans
B. She is including him in the equation
C. He will never have a chance with her from this one off-hand remark she said during a stream
Like, his mental breakdown over that felt really out of nowhere and overdramatic. If she had properly turned him down I think that would justify it slightly more. Also the moment he convinces himself that Fubuki will never be into him he immediately discards his feelings for her and agrees to be lovers with Kuro. That was a quick fucking 180, jesus. I could see Anon using Kuro as a rebound but slowly falling for her for real, but he just went fucking balls in no hesitation on that.
The overall writing quality and prose is fine, and the dialogue had some nice beats here and there. I can't say a whole lot about the smut since I'm not a connoisieur but it looked hot. The drama, as I've mentioned, could have used some work.
>I buy Sausage
I don't know who any of these people are. I'd like to interview the author of this and ask what he had hoped to achieve or convey by writing this.

>>60092091
>I don't know who any of these people are.
I only know Kirsche is a vtuber friend of Pippa's and similar to her except more crass and unhinged.

>>60090368
>A new Irys
No one ever bought this up. Its just a parody and the joke hinges on if you know the reference and falling for the tags.
There's not a lot to review here but i am a sucker for these bait and switch and i do enjoy that reference, so its fine

>Tower of Tattle
Funny. I already reviewed this story before. I still think the gimmicks are infuriating and just muddle the story, but i still really like everything else and i think femanon and shiori work like a charm together

Stick em up!

Any good feet fics?

>>60096334
Lioness paws.

>>60092091
Oh hey I wrote I buy sausage. That fic in particular was written after someone requested a kirche fic and described her as being based and trad. I knew she was grifter the moment that anon described her in such a way. So I wrote a fic with the whole joke being "kirche would only know surface level 4chan stuff". That's why there's so many old school references. Even the title of the fic is a reference to an often misunderstood lyric in the lucky star opening. Hope this answered some questions.

TL;DR: kirche is a grifter/pickme and to illustrate that point I used a bunch of old ecelebs and an old meme. I'm mocking both the chuuba and the person who requested the fic.

>>60096668
That's pretty a(r/u)tistic of you.

>>60096668
Is that the case with all your fics then cause it doesn't stand out as that compared to them

>>60096244
this town aint big enough for the two o' us!

>>59971723
Light the fire - 01

https://rentry.org/dwkmr

Genre: schizo, horror ,adventure
Characters: advent
Basically Advent was all schizophrenic or mental in their own way, and breaking out a mental asylum.

>>60100005
You should write in your native language.

I'm the sort of person who wouldn't mind having sex with a beautiful girl

>>60100005
Hey this is a marked improvement from last time!. You should work a bit on the formatting of the document and iron some mistakes, with one being dialogue.
Aside from that, i like what you have here even if its unrefined.

>>60102681
What if this beautiful girl was your sister

>>59971802
Few potential story arcs for a fantasy story:

Title: Journey to Pekoland
>Your main quest is to get panties worn by a princess of Pekoland and take them back to your homeland
>The previous panties that your homeland received from Pekoland don't have much magical power remaining
>Your homeland has enjoyed hundreds of years of peace and prosperity thanks to the magic of royal Pekoland panties
Boat Arc (Marine)
>Houshou Pirates attack your ship when you cross the sea and take you as a prisoner
Elven Distillery Arc (Lamy)
>You help a failing distillery

All arcs should of course be solved by sex, including the main quest.

>>60103484
If Suisei was my sister, I would use my penis as a brush and her deliciously flat chest as my canvas to paint the most beautiful starry sky anyone has ever seen. I would shoot so many stars inside her that it would be more fitting to call her Hoshimachi Ginga.

>>60100005
That was a pretty fun, if simple, story. Will you write more?

>>59971802
PekoMari Yuri
>Pekora is at Marine's house for their off-collab
>Marine remarks that there's been a lot of PekoMari yuri fan art recently and shows them to Pekora
>Pekora spits out her tea, turns red and gets all shy
>Pekora's reaction makes Marine embarrassed as well
>They start the collab with this awkward mood still lingering around them
>During the collab they both let out numerous Freudian slips and unintentional innuendos
>Their horniness gradually builds up during the stream and towards the end they're touching each other
>...
>Ending song for the stream is playing
>The mics are muted
>Marine and Pekora are kissing with the sort of intensity that you'd think the world was ending
>While Pekora is stripping Marine, Marine shuts the stream with her toes
>Shukkou~!

Hi, it was suggested to me to submit some of my works here. I write NSFW stuff featuring Jelly Hoshiumi from Phase Connect.

>>59971723

Distress Signal
https://rentry.org/8gduo
Characters: Jelly Hoshiumi
Tags: NSFW, living clothes, corruption
Jelly receives a distress signal from a nearby planet...

Postponed Collab
https://rentry.org/phffm
Characters: Jelly Hoshiumi, Lumi Kaneko
Tags: NSFW, futanari, rape, oviposition, inflation
A planned collab had to be postponed due to a forgotten situation...

A Chef's Dream
https://rentry.org/z8fgrz
Characters: Jelly Hoshiumi
Tags: blueberry inflation
Strangely sick of her meal replacements, Jelly seeks a place to satisfy her hunger...

(Blueberry inflation is that thing from "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory". Does it count as NSFW?)

>>60110464
Why'd it have to be futaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

>>60110464
Welcome! It's always nice to see authors and subjects outside of the usual suspects here (not that I don't love them, but variety is the spice of life). I'll give your stories a read later.

>>60110464
And here I thought this thread was in danger of a lasting story drought. What a downpour

White fox bump

>>60100005
It's a bit rough, but it's the kind of roughness that'll smooth out as you write more and understand how to write in prose better. Is this going to be a "mental asylum interviews with advent" thing with each chapter swapping to the next one?

Okay writebros, no matter how your days have been going so far, tomorrow is the start of a new week. A whole week of new chances for whatever you're doing; writing, reading, planning, and anything else important in your life. Tell me about what you hope to do or see, and you better be ready to give it all you got since ready or not, you're coming.

>>60121582
I've decided to write this fic from the ground up once more. 15k or so words in, a lot less if you don't count the recycled bits. I made a timeline that underlines the major events and the gist of what happens. Need to get to the car sex scene as fast as I can to get this shit out of my system.

>>59975274
I want to stea your idea and do it with Mori.

>>59999488
An SMT-like Suisei fic, that's the one I abandoned a few months back, currently not writing anything Hololive related because I read too much damn SCP all-year and I can't write something without it looking like a site entry, and I hate most of the very new and modern SCP + site moderators (not you Jannies, u good).

>>60124590
>SMT-like Suisei fic,
What was the concept/pitch for it? And if you were doing SMT style alignments which chuubas represent which alignments?

>>60125979
Except the alignments are "Kayfabe" vs "Creative Freedom" with indie tubers in between

>>60121582
Very motivating. I will try to use that.

I'm hoping to finish Balsa within the month. I already brain stormed the coming chapter so all that's left is to put it to paper. After that I'm not sure. I have a dozen works in the oven right now that I haven't given much energy towards. So we'll see.

What if instead Fauna farts you wrote Fauna feet?
yes.Im talking to YOU

>>60121582
I think binge reading the manga Boy's Abyss poisoned me somewhat. Now I have to write my fic extra-tragic no, not really; I felt the manga was a bit too over-the-top all throughout. It did give me a better idea of what overall vibe I want the fic to have, though.

>>60133924
>making fun of Fauna for never wearing shoes
>she gets mad at you
>starts rubbing your dick through your shorts while making fun of how hard you're getting
>the absolute smug face she makes when you cream in your pants
Why would anyone want to write about that?

>>60126956
I... have no goddamn clue how you'd write an SMTesque fic with that premise unless by SMT you meant persona. That sounds like the kind of thing that would either be a complete shitpost, or with the premise abstracted via so many layers of metaphor that you can't tell it was supposed to be kayfabe vs creative freedom unless you squint and remember the talents actual irl stances.

>>60108599
I’ve finished about half of the chapters and plot, but it’s still rough on the edges.
I’ll post it when it’s readable.
>>60118780
I started this work by writing the scenes in my mind, so I’m still working on how to merge them with my ESL.
I aim is an interview gone wrong and you were dragged in to advent’s escape, in the following chapter you will meet other members.
>>60103065
I kinda need some advice or suggestions on my mistake. It will dialogue heavy but I don’t know where should I start fixing or how.
Thanks in advance.

>>60100005
A bit too chuunibyou for my tastes.

>>60135508
well for example

We entered the facility from an empty loading bay, others were filled with army lorries. Stacks of barrels lying around, with only a handful of men moving them.
“It’s our supply day, it costs a fortune to bring those here yet the meal still tastes terrible.”
“ I got styrofoam in my rice once, and they didn’t give me a new one, just took that shit out and told me to eat it.” Another added, these soldiers won’t stop complaining.
“Last week they even gave me a molded bread. Man you better put that in your report.”
“…I’ll see what I can do.” I replied, trying to end the conversation.

here the flavor conversation mixes in a bit with the action, making for an awkard presentation. It took me a double take to realize its the guards scorting you who continue the conversation, and while the superficial dialogue actually paints a nice picture of the asylum, it ultimately doesnt "advance" the plot.
Which leads us to the Shiori scene, where she and the doctor have to dump all the info in one go just so you can get the point across.

Aside from that, i was expecting a bit more of a talk with Shiori before the reveal (also the last stretch of it is a bit too lax)

As i said before, marked improvements. I reccomend reading some books and triying to break down what works for you. When i write dialogue i always think how characters can intercede, how they go back and forth, what stuff they do. Also narrating the actions helps paint a better picture
for example

>Her amber eyes fixate on me, there's a dangerous gleam behind her playful facade
>“You won’t believe me if I deny them, and get nothing new if I admit to them.”
>My grip on the pen tightens, my palms feel sweaty. Then again, i chose to jump in this pit
>she smiles, and starts huming. The melody is weird and distant, almost alien
>I feel compelled to note that down, as she follows the pen with her eyes
>Only when the pen rests, she stops, laying back on the sofa
>“If you truly want to understand me, those reports and files in your hands will only take you so far.”

>>60135300
>Goth fauna footjob after a day of using her heavy boots

>that dumb thing I wrote a year ago and still haven't worked into the actual story just became real

>>60142867
IRyS merging with the rest of Council?

>>60110464
>Postponed Collab
I'm glad it's futa rather than femboy, and bonus points for using a kayfabe-appropriate dick rather than just going with the boring and illogical human one. I'm not big on oviposition in itself but it works well as a sign of dominance and a reason for the rape among aliens.
If there is something to improve I'd say it's the length. More details, dialogue and sex positions could've taken advantage of the well-crafted setup. I don't know about you but I feel like Lumi is perfect for having her mouth and ass ravaged and she could come to like it to give her some character development.

>>60142867
I nearly shit my pants seeing that thread come up, thought IRyS had graduated.

>>59971802
For IRyS' initiation into Promise, she gets dicked down by Bae, Kronii, Mumei, and Fauna.

>>60144273
This, but instead of getting dicked down she gets eaten out and fingered.

>>59975274
With how obsessive you are with it, just do it yourself at this point. No need to shit up the thread with your fetish every time.

>>60141974
I see, thanks for the advice.
For the soldiers conversation part I tried to imply that seeing weird food were hallucinations in the latter of the story, but I did failed to execute the scene properly.
Also I planned to add more talk before the reveal, still working on their dialogue so I left it out for now.
I will try to add more narrations on the action, the books I read have different approach on dialogue so I’m still trying which will work best for me.
Thanks a lot anon, for the advice and example.

>>60145225
NTA but you need to work on your English. I thought the mc was dead when he met that one dude due to poor syntax. Use grammarly.

>>60145773
Noted.

>>60143764
>>60142867
Always nice to see Omega's legacy getting shat on.

>Shiori's doing a yandere sister RP next week
Please please please don't turn out to be a shitpost stream

>>60146362
No, don't just note it, I said work on it.

>>60148898
You will take your tangents and you will like them
Have her other RP streams been shitposts? I don't have a membership

>>60149138
I downloaded Grammarly and currently working on fixing my grammar and syntax errors.
Sorry for the confusion and thank you for your suggestion.

>>60149353
Her duolingo membership had a bit of RP mixed into it.

>>60148898

Someone make a fanfic on this. Shiori yandere sounds pretty nice.

>>60148199
Still mindbroken I see.

>>60152226
While blaming Omega for everything is reductive. There is ample proof that his character's been thrown out, and his policies and projects have been run back.

>>60152381
>"His policies and projects"
Nigga you made up an enemy in your head, we never knew what was his deal and yet you pretend he was a big honcho.

>>60152434
You going through withdrawal from Omega's dick or something now he's gone? That why you're grouchy?

>>60152381
I don't see exactly why he isn't still just be running things behind the scene.

>>60152508
>Inmediatly run a narrative in your head that anyone not condemning your imaginary enemy is worshipping them
You are mindbroken beyond belief and its hilarious to see you go apeshit for an account that has been inactive for a year.
If you at least knew what was Omega's position in the company id get it, but this is rather sad dont you think?

>>60152673
Dude you can suck my dick if you're jonesing for a cock in your mouth that bad

>>60152226
>>60152381
>>60152434
>>60152530
Whatever you believe about Omega behind the scenes, it's a fact that he inserted his grand reveal as the secret and most powerful chuuni character into Council's post-debut collab.
He had a character design, birthday etc. and got a lot of attention and speculation to himself only to end up as a weird vtweeter shill.

>>60142867
You wrote a vtuber fanfic about Hamas invading Israel?

>>60152434
Okay now that's reductive, just in the other direction.
The character was clearly meant to be the 'voice of management' and the consistent writing style meant it was run by one guy. While the rrats have exaggerated him into being behind everything bad in EN, going into the complete opposite and saying he was nothing is just contrarianism. He was at the very least the pseudonym of a higher up in EN management who got credited for IRyS' album, and the policies for EN have clearly changed in between the tempus debuts and advent.

>>60152939
This but add >>60152745
The shameless attentionwhoring during council debut and various HoloENs taking shots at him makes him deserving of being clowned on forever

>>60152939
We literally dont know. He could have been a producer,a manager, a branch manager, a PR person that contributed some lyrics, or even the EN president for all we know.
Its stupid to speculate and point fingers because we know next to nothing and yet that hasnt stopped schizos from declaring war on a twitter account

>>60153208
But what about him stealing part of the Council girls' thunder and dissapointing the fans hyped for another character, and that he can't be wholly irrelevant because multiple Myth members made fun of him over time?
You're right in that the schizos blaming him for everything (especially stars-related) are delusional, but if you don't acknowledge the stronger criticisms at the same time it feels like you're whiteknighting.

Sora bump?

>>60154191
>But what about him stealing part of the Council girls' thunder

They blew their hype on their own by speedrunning Myth's descent into laziness and NOT streaming

So is anyone working on a fic for Halloween?

>>60154191
Again, we dont know. For all we know his reveal was planned by staff and he was supposed to be EN's A-chan. Or he was supposed to be a producer for their music. People just want a face in their pr, doesnt matter if it makes sense, because we barely know things about that jap guy but they are already singing his praises.
Doesnt help that people like our little tourist itt just want something to shitpost with

>>60155886
It IS mandatory

>>60155886
My current WIP is coincidentally has Halloween elements but I don't think I can finish it this month.

>>60155886
my spooky arc might not come into play for a few more arcs, but I have been thinking about it a fair bit and the hagpire sex that's gonna be in it.

>>59971802
Being forcefully strapped to a glory table and mercilessly having your dick drained nonstop by Koyori because shes desperate for a taste of your cum. She won't stop even if it means shes sucked the literal life from your balls.

>>60155886
I’m more worried about what to do for my Christmas special this year. It’s only been two years but it feels like tradition to write one at this point. The only problem is I don’t know which story to write it for.

>>60155886
I have an apocalyptic WIP story about /become/ where some sort of entity turns people into Lamy and (You) try to survive walking dead style.

>>60157862
But why would want to escape?

>>60157811
Can't you just leave it to fate, put your fics on a table and roll for what fic you'll make a christmas special for this year?

>>60158252
I could, but I don't think there'd be much point in writing a Christmas special for one of my shitty earlier fics that everyone has forgotten about. Ideally I'd like to write a Christmas special for a series, but all of the multi-chapter stories I've wrriten either already have a Christmas special or haven't been developed enough to allow for one.
I guess I could just write a Christmas one-shot instead, since that would fulfill the "Christmas story" requirement.

>>60158696
I want to have sex with Korone

>>60155886
No, because I dislike Halloween. Nothing against it in principle, it's probably great fun when you grew up with it in its native form. But in my country Halloween is something that was imported in a warped, commercialised form by corporations so that they can sell more shit. It's replacing native traditions that involve less consumerism and it makes me sad.

Hello anons, I need help once again for my Shiori holoctober.
Does Wizard = Witch?

>>60162227
Witch is pretty versatile. A witch can be anyone who casts spells via their own magic or objects, to someone who specializes in brewed concoctions. Wizards are more primarily associated with spell slinging and less with the use of physical objects or potions and the like. For the intents of what you might be working on though, they are pretty equal, but witch has a little more reach sometimes.

>>60162227
You can treat them as gendered versions of each other, it has been done historically, and in myth and fantasy.
But it's not true in all cases; sometimes witches can be male, and sometimes the closest male equivalent is warlock.

Witches ride brooms, wizards ride carpets.

>>60162496
>>60162513
Witch Shiori that practices healing magic but is misunderstood as the typical stereotype for witches are hexes and curses. Introducing Iroihs that actually performs hexes / curses as a split personality.
Fit's Shiori's tendency to be a healslut and the Shiori general's idea of Iroihs. (Shiori herself makes reference to inner voices in her head and the general seems to think a complete opposite of her personality exists as one, so will incorporate it into writing.)

>>60162995
Which Shiori offers better head?

>>60163081
Iroihs but she has a bf named Rori (who is Shiori's genderbend)

>>60163081
Which witch Shiori?

>>60163081
Executioner Shiori should have some nice heads.

>>60162995
I thought you were horribly misspelling Iroha for a second.

>>60163484
It took me four days to stop seeing Iroihs as Iroha.
The consequences of the Shiori General's 'creativity'

>>60163837
I think you meant brainwash.

>>60163965
You know too much.

>>60163484
What if Iroha just had Shiori as her deranged alternate personality, like a Jekyll and Hyde thing?

I've been too busy to keep up with Shiori's doings lately. What the fuck is she up to now? This sounds like she's making her own schizo arc, not that I'm complaining.

>>60164762
It's been a while since the 4 voices in her mind schizo arc.
We gonna get yandere this week.

>>60165262
Ohhh so her like RP sessions are each with a different voice? That's pretty neat. If she keeps making multiple personalities for herself, it might make for some nice flavor with an interaction sequence where Anon meets with all them throughout her library. All different in their own ways, but still down bad in the most unhinged way for the hero.

>>60164762
>>60165262
Canonically we know of 2.
Unnamed opposite personality that Shiori general has dubbed Iroihs. Yandere RP might stem from Iroihs.
Genderbend personality that Shiori named Rori.

>>60165633
The voices in her head are considered a bit. She does have different role plays, we go imouto, teacher/student, Knight/princess and nurse so far.
One world-building I have in mind is Shiori was an entity made by the Archive, a magical 3D character AI designed to get stories from anyone who wanders in.
She will pick the personality fits her target the most tomake them stay longer.

>>60168777
That's a big ass (&) sword

Bake that bread!

I'll bake, unless someone else is already working on it

>>60168777
I need to do my homework on how to write Ayame. I want to do her cuteness justice