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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://pastebin.com/asvcqDLL

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.
Previous thread:>>5511116

>> No.5621521

>>5621400
>early thread
can't believe we've sunk this low.

>> No.5621539

>>5621400
Don't you niggers already have a thread going? Jesus christ. Even Kiara threads contribute more than fucking fanfiction.

>> No.5621570

this is great guys keep bumping

>> No.5621583
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>>5621400
After much discussion with the my fellow Lamy's, we've finally decided on a general plot we would all like for our first Lamy Transformation doujinshi.
So, without further ado, the Lamy collective is requesting a story about Lamy meeting with a lucky and optimistic viewer, excited to meet his oshi. Lamy slips something in his drink and drugs him so she can experiment with him and brainwash him into becoming Lamy. The story peaks with the revelation that there a plethora of Lamys. It would also be nice to have it end the way it started, with the viewer now being another Lamy seducing another young and optimistic viewer.
The plan for the story is to make it into a roughly 20 page NSFW doujinshi, so lewd scenes are a must, and a short-ish (but not too short!) story would be preferred. Thanks for your consideration!

>> No.5621675

>>5621583
its scary how attentive you are at posting this every thread anon. or do I call you lamy? boss lamy? schizophrenzic?

>> No.5621710

>>5621675
he's obviously a regular poster here now taking his trip off

>> No.5621771 [DELETED] 

>>5621710
one that just begs and never contributes, i should add

>> No.5621789

>>5621583
Didn't someone already say they were writing the story? What happened to him?

>> No.5621827

>>5621771
What crawled up your ass? Anyone can post prompts, even Lamys.

>> No.5621830
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5621830

>>5621583
>with the my fellow Lamy's
Anons...Why did no one tell me I had that mistake 3 threads ago. I've made such a fool of myself and my darling Lamys.
>>5621675
I was unfortunately late to this thread. And just Lamy is fine by me. Some of the newer Lamys have called me Boss Lamy, though I do not mind what name if any you choose.
>>5621771
I have contributed some work to this thread, though I do not do some under the name of the collective. Would you rather I did so?

>> No.5621914

>>5621789
Got fed up and left this shithole for good.

>> No.5622047

>>5621830
on second thought i'd rather not know what you've written so the work isn't associated with you

i deleted my post

>> No.5622084

>>5621830
I wanna know what kind of stories lamys like to write

>> No.5622089

Don't forget your appropriate grammar tags, pseuds.

>> No.5622116

>>5621914

No he didn't, he said he'd write it over the weekend. Was thinking maybe Boss Lamy didn't see his message

>> No.5622164

>>5622116
>Boss Lamy
There's a hierarchy within the Lamys?

>> No.5622194

>>5622164
The pimp.

>> No.5622219

Tell us what you're writing, what's in the works, or just what you feel like you want to write in the future. Anything in particular you want to mention about your stories, some updates, or just hype it up for others. Happy writing/reading anons!

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5622284

>>5622116
Oh, my apologies. I don't believe I saw that message. If this thread hits bump limit before Monday, I'll be sure to not repost the prompt next thread.

>> No.5622301

>>5622164
He's the OP of the Lamy collective thread, yeah

>> No.5622305

>>5622164
give it time and they'll have their own country, anon.

>> No.5622574

>>5622219
Kanata fluff that I'm still workshopping
She's the student council president, you're a no-good delinquent. She's the top of the grade, you barely remember how to spell your name. There's nothing in common between the two of you. Except one. You both are secretly an idolfag and you just happen to share the same oshi as her.

>> No.5623095

>>5622284
What do you Lamys even do as Lamy?

>> No.5623174

>>5623095
Post requests in a fanfiction writing thread.

>> No.5623218

>>5622219
working on an ollie necrophilia story
problem is she's just a corpse and I'm worried that since she isn't an active character it won't be as interesting

>> No.5623266

>>5623218
now that's the kind of forward thinking that put man on the moon, anon
godspeed

>> No.5623485

>>5622219
Writing a second part to the Shion simping story since I didn't intend to end it so short. I wanted to end the first part showing how lonely she was. For other story ideas, working on one of the prompts from the request board. With all the (you) focused tragedies, I do want to write one that's a tragedy for the chuuba.

>> No.5623941

>>5622219
Watame abuse, but I can't stop procrastinating so don't know when I'll finish it

>> No.5624002
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>>5621539

>> No.5624051
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>>5622219
Loli Polka story. I may end up releasing it in two chapters, I'm already bordering 20 pages and nowhere close to the sex scene(s?) or the conclusion I want to the story. I'm not used to writing dramatic or sad stories so the worldbuilding is taking a bit longer than it needed to. I thought about going with the cop-out of her being in heat but I guess one of the few positives or just winging it without a clear outline is that I got a better idea halfway through that fits much better with her codependency habits.

Last thread's Ayame prompt because there's nothing in this world I would like more than to manhandle Ayame's tiny weak body and pound her in the ass.

>> No.5626337

A story about a Holo kidnapping her boyfriend because he's been getting too close to other girls. But instead of the boyfriend freaking out and trying to escape, he just takes in what ever she throws at him and try to show her that he really do love her and try to get her to a better mental state. This story would be a yandere-abused story and a wholesome-fluff story. If anyone could blend those two elements together, you'll have my eternal respect.

>> No.5627286

Trying my hand at the previous thread's Ollie prompt while practicing some semi smut reps.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQ1QUGJpJCa97Vo8Wie9zN0FrzsZufn6LR-QH-ECZRQZeitZTbVn-zw2az8eMt3hQfJQViQQfWs9wTO/pub

Please let me know what you think.

>> No.5627532

>>5627286
Nice! Very nice attention to detail too. Really makes you *feel* like a necrophiliac

>> No.5627994

>>5621400
prompt: molesting mommy marine (incest)

>> No.5629545

>>5627286
Very well done

>> No.5629929

>>5627994
What about Mommy Marine molesting you (horror)

>> No.5630025

>>5629929
Mommy Marine molesting you (Action-Adventure)

>> No.5630106

>>5630025
Mommy Marine molesting you (dystopian)

>> No.5630146

>>5630106
>Mommy Marine molesting you (Comedy)

>> No.5630149

>>5622219
Started working on a story in which futa Coco and Mori fuck Gura and Shion many times. It will be a good way to learn how to write smut better which i can hopefully apply in the future. Also writing the Risu futa "cum jars" story, albeit very slowly. I'm mostly just going back to redo parts of it that i didn't like and then calling it a day.

>> No.5630508

>>5630149
if you don't have a scene where mori and cocock spitroast one of the funnies keeping her suspended in the air with pure cock power I will be severely disappointed

>> No.5631122

>>5630106
i like the idea of a dystopian world where marine found lamy's secret cloning serum and has made billions of clones to milk every male on earth

>> No.5631222

>>5622219
I want to write that prompt where Anon finally sleeps with Marine and the rest of her Gen insist he continues.

>> No.5631304

>>5631222
Go for it!

>> No.5631418

>>5631222
trips means it's a sign. Do it.

>> No.5631644
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5631644

imagine getting cornered by these two in a dark alley

>> No.5631688

>>5631644
What would they do?

>> No.5631697

>>5631644
For some fun times for the three of us (sex) or for some fun times for the both of them (kill)

>> No.5631735

>>5631644
suisei is helping mori finish her reaping quota and you're the only one that managed to fight her off so they decide to reward you

>> No.5631840

>>5631735
Mori deepthroats while Suisei eats (you)r ass.

>> No.5632040
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5632040

Here, I finished another story.

Mori tries to kill Ina, but get's mindbroken and corrupted by her instead.
https://archiveofourown.org/works/32180197

>> No.5632211

>>5631122
Pollinic girls Attack-inspired Marine fanfiction has a nice ring to it.

>> No.5632495

>>5632040
Based

>> No.5632532
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Cover High/Pekora Chapter 3

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTyvgRf3w1ED5bCujLnbnfAv43bvKdD7Re1BakyPACrtMT_QLRzTP3iLJIA9wBp5ow9BMvVdh0hUW3Z/pub

Writing serious scenes is hard.

>> No.5632550
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5632550

Mori Prompt: she's friends-with-benefits with Anon, keeps telling him 'it's only weird if you make it weird' and 'not to get it twisted' only to immediately make it weird herself when he gets a girlfriend and tries to break it off.

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5632598

>>5621521
i've been okay for the past few days without ame. also, just asking for a friend, what was the longest time watson has been gone from streaming?

>> No.5632868

>>5632040
that was pretty good
mori's been showing up a lot lately

>> No.5633186

>>5632598
I haven't been following her since debut but I think the longest was nearly a week back when she was moving.

>> No.5633214

>>5631688
It depends on how old and tall you are. If you're a shounen, it's already too late.

>> No.5633425

>>5632532
Great shit, Anon. I can't wait for these two dopes to get together.

>> No.5633603
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5633603

>>5632532
Great as always, Anon!

>> No.5633708

>>5633603
the smug...too much...

>> No.5634819

>>5632532
Absolute Masterpiece, can't wait for the next part.

“You’re already crying,” she replies.

“No I’m fucking not,” you weakly protest. “Guys don’t cry…”

“Oh really? And what do guys do?”

“I dunno…lie down in the snow and look up at the sky…?”
Hearty laught at this one,

>> No.5635161

>>5634819
The start of Transfer Student's tantrum is based on a scene from the same movie.

>> No.5635629

>>5622219
Holofantasy nonsense. Main story is 80% of the way done, just need post-penultimate confrontation, final confrontation, and aftermath. I've been taking a break and fucking around with the non-canon side stuff for fun (that takes up about four paragraphs so it's not like it fucking matters) and woke up with a mighty need to fuck Marine so I've been debating that as well.

>> No.5635651

>>5635161
Lmao didnt even notice it, even if its the more ironic scene. I associate the "Goddammit" Scene mostly with K kicking the chair, thats what really shows his emotions to me.

>> No.5635784

>"I'm Momosuzu Nene and welcome to Jackass!"
>Proceeds to fucking crash into Polka in a shopping cart loaded with M80s
>Detonates Lamy's several dozen alcohol distilleries for a cool explosive set piece for her slipping on a banana peel
>Sprints away from Botan with a piece of raw steak attached to her ass
>Sneaks in to sheer Watame in her sleep

>> No.5635857

>>5635784
>Beats Yagoo when he's trying to take a shit

>> No.5636010

>>5635629
>and woke up with a mighty need to fuck Marine
how can one man possibly be so based??!!?!

>> No.5638755

>>5632532
That was really nice, anon.

>> No.5640936

>>5635857
>Floods COVERs basement and brings Yagoo and A-Chan in to film their reactions
>Unleashes an alligator into the water

>> No.5644607

>>5631644
oh baby

>> No.5644653
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5644653

What's the general opinion on Ao3 here? I can only see 3 stories in the pastebin that are linked to Ao3. Is there some hidden rule to not upload your stuff there of do most people here just don't want that their stories are read by outsiders?

>> No.5644895

>>5644653
I'm an insecure fag who refuses to save his own stories because I think they're only worth keeping if someone else preserves them

>> No.5645147

>>5644653
Personally no issues with it, just never bothered.

>> No.5645160

>>5644653
>What's the general opinion on Ao3 here?
Self-publishing is for the mediocre.

>> No.5645205

>>5644653
Still trying my best not to remember reading that Kiara architecture fic I read on there.

>> No.5645627

>>5644653
Full of fags and shippers, but it's okay if you want to use it.

>> No.5645861

>>5632040
That was good, hope you make another inamori fanfic

>> No.5646132

I hate to ask but does anyone have that incredibly low res Korone with the "UOHHHH I'M COOMING' under it? It originated here and whenever I see it it makes me laugh.

>> No.5646888

>>5644653
It's full of shippers so it's pretty shit but it's an alright place to upload your stories if you want

>> No.5647488

>>5644653
I can't get an invitation.

>> No.5647575

>>5622219

Does anyone have advice on writing combat scenarios, more specifically sword duels?

I'm working on an Ayame prompt based on the previous thread. My idea is that your clan and Ayame's clan want to settle a rivalry through an arranged marriage. However, the marriage is a ploy to overtake the opposing family because in your tradition, the bride and groom must face each other in a duel. Whoever wins the duel becomes the head of the clan, assimilating the other family under the winner's name, so you and Ayame are dueling each other to see who becomes the head of the family.

>> No.5647891

>>5644653
I don't really upload there because the MC is named anon so it would likely confuse readers who don't know this board. Still nothing wrong with uploading there if you want though.

>> No.5647911

>>5647575
Look up appropriate techniques for a good start. If you want it to be flashy and intense, try to convey the movements in a way that can be visualized.

>> No.5648322

>>5645205
the one where she drinks oil at the end?

>> No.5648485

>>5648322
Yes, but I didn't reach that part. I couldn't take anymore of that story.

>> No.5648685

>>5647575
Personally, I wouldn't focus on sword fights in these chuuba fics. They're pretty difficult to pull off in writing, because a real sword fight is mostly about being unpredictable. You've got parrys, deflects, feints, thrusts, slashes, side steps etc. You could limit the technique to just slashes, thrusts, blocks and dodges, but then your combat may end up looking something like:

He slashes at her, but she dodges it. She retaliated with a thrust, and he barely managed to block it. When he counterattacks this time, his sword lands true and gashes her shoulder.

So I just tend to prefer using magic spells and stuff that's easier to follow, if a swordfight isn't neccesary. You can also get collateral damage with those, like when someone tosses a fireball and it splashes onto a nearby house. Which allows you to write a sentence about the house getting set on fire, or something like that. So maybe with Ayame you could mix in magic with a simple sword fight.

>> No.5648694

>>5647575
Sword duels are almost brutally simplistic in that a realistic one doesn't have anything super flashy. Though sword fights will also involve things like fist fighting too. For example if you and the enemy are close enough in range to grab one another either one will obviously try for the grab. There will also be punching, kicking etc. Parts of the sword will even be used at time for blunt damage, such as smacking the enemy with the pommel. Also most of the time dodging isn't very realistic either since the tip of a sword can accelerate and change direction much more easily than a human body can. Then there's the whole issue of "sword guards"/"stances". The basics of that being: sword held low = more maneuverability. Sword held middle and a little forward = balanced/defensive. And finally sword held high = very powerful swings. That's just the basics though. If you want to see what a really realistic sword fight would look like, look up the video "Adorea longsword fight duel". It's a really well choreographed and realistic duel.

>> No.5648727

>>5648485
it wasn't that bad.

>> No.5648839

>>5647575
Be extra descriptive. The breathing, the movements, the sweat dripping, the shift in weight on footing. Depending on the type of sword fight, then the entertainment is in the tension, the release is the strike. Or perhaps it's an overt show of skill of one over the other, or a declaration thereof.

https://youtu.be/rn4FY_k9FyE
https://youtu.be/iWHAko58EO8
https://youtu.be/PBIyOYbzvxs
https://youtu.be/lmraHsb8yKk

>> No.5648904

>>5648685
Yeah, that seems to be a major challenge since too many details would just drag out a story too long but too little details would make a fight feel arbitrary. I'm definitely writing something out of my comfort zone with this one.

>>5648694
I think it would be difficult but also interesting in writing about stances and reading a body language of a fight. I hope it can be relevant in reading Ayame's personality.

>> No.5649243

>>5648685
>>5648694
The question wasn't should they, but how to.

>> No.5650480

>>5647575
As advised by the other anons, the thing about sword fights is that you need to be descriptive of things pertaining the sword fight itself so that it doesn't appear too simplistic. However, you also need to balance it as over descriptiveness just makes it a drawn out battle with no real progress. It's a bit difficult, but with enough practice/reference I'm sure you'll get there. Let's take for example the sample passage of >>5648685, allow me to give my version of it:

You take the initiative and thrust your sword as an opening strike. Ayame sidesteps your thrust gracefully, and with a spring in her step delivers her counter strike. A powerful overhead slash comes down upon you, but your muscle memory kicks in as you hold your blade horizontally in a guard, both hands supporting your sword to meet the blow. It was indeed a devastating blow, as even through your guard the force of it makes your knees buckle. Ayame tries to bounce back to safety but you don't allow her the opportunity. You close the distance between you two and deliver an upward slash. You see her trying to angle her sword to block it, but your blade strikes true, the red of her blood now coating the tip your blade as it cuts through her shoulder.
"Not bad," she congratulates you as she licks the wound.
"Tch, not deep enough." You reprimand yourself.

This is just how I would write a scene, but of course there's plenty of other variables and applications. Good luck writing!

>> No.5651003

>>5648839
>>5650480
This is really helpful. I really appreciate the help, and I'll do a lot into looking into how a sword fight is written. I think the examples provided are extremely helpful in getting an idea of what to say. Appreciated.

>> No.5652227

>>5645205
i don't use ao3 my man, it's on aryion. text processor there is really nice to my formatting, which is important since i liberally pepper all sorts of text modifications and spacing tricks throughout my work. it's why i dislike sharing via pastes

>> No.5652324

has saviorfag pt3 been posted yet?

>> No.5652387

>>5652324
Yes it has

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vS6k7S78Ibh3jsqlWGGmTSfJdOYacD4xBS4RQS2440LCZTji_N3E6yEnpCyIHM8GO8-gCrdVLPrNBST/pub

>> No.5652543

>>5622574
I really want some Kanata fluff. She comforts me a lot. Thanks for working on that.

>> No.5652936

>>5652387
Anon-chama rrats when?

>> No.5653192

>>5652387
thanks, I like where it's going

>> No.5653397

>>5652936
There's been a couple greentexts some anons (including me) made in the past few threads

>> No.5653438
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5653438

>>5652936
>"Anon, I saw someone mention that you have a girlfriend. I know it's not true but you really should address it and tell people you have enough women in your life already. I-It's only in your best interest as a streamer, I promise! Don't want any other girl getting the wrong impression, right?"

>> No.5653598

>>5652936
>"What the fuck is with this Anon dude? Why the fuck is he inclining so hard?"
"Haven't you heard about Kiara signal boosting the dog shit out of his streams? She's not even trying to hide it. This has to be her boyfriend or some shit."
>"LMAO KFP KUCKS KEEP FUCKING LOSING!!! I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS HAHAHA! ENJOY THE TASTE OF ANOTHER MAN'S CUM FLOWING OUT OF YOUR OSHI!" (USER WAS BANNED FOR THIS POST)

>> No.5653642

>>5653438
>"Hey Anon it probably doesn't mean anything but I saw you reply to *other popular chuuba* what what that about?"
>"WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU WANT TO COLLAB WITH HER?"
>"Anon she's a fuCKING WHO- haha I mean her target audience is probably different from yours haha. You wouldn't want to alienate your fans right?"

>> No.5653727

>>5653598
>"There's fucking nothing on this guys potential roommate."
>"That's the reality of indie chuubas fucking retard. Most of them are literal whos with no presence whatsoever."

>> No.5653750

>>5653598
>"Does anyone else think this AnonChama guy is pretty cute? He's really funny, too and an all around great streamer. I wish he was more popular."
>(USER WAS BANNED FOR REPLY TO THEMSELVES ABOUT 30 TIMES)

>> No.5653868

>>5653598
>"Fucking leech" "I can't believe this asshole thinks he earned this" "Worthless liar"... Anon, have you seen these? Oh man, I don't know what you did but it's getting out of hand. Maybe you should take a break, huh? Let things calm down a little bit.

>> No.5653915

>"Anon why did you tag your latest stream 'cute and funny'?"
>"Oh my viewers told me it's a tag that'll help me reach a wider amount of people, said something about it being a popular tag other vtubers use."

>> No.5653961

>"Rumor has it there was a video uploaded on Kiara's channel called 'Am horny'. It was just a thirty second clip of Kiara with her mouth open and tongue out doing vague cock sucking motions. No one got a screenshot of it and it was only up for like...five seconds before the link all but vanished. Anything have anything about that?"
>"Yeah, sure. No screenshot with something that big of a yab? Whatever. Take your fucking meds, deadbrap."
>Meanwhile, on Twitter
>"Hey, Anon! Want to check out this video? I think it's really funny, haha! It's a German joke so maybe it'll go over your head, but that's okay! Tell me what you think!"

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>>5653915
>she pulls the "I'm a bigger streamer so I know better than you" card, saying there's usually some truth to what these people say
>"Kiara, these people are literally saying I should stop streaming and off myself for mentioning another female streamer."
>"...I'm just saying think about it."

>> No.5654062

>>5653868
>"You're right Kiara, I think I'll stop streaming for a week and get off of social media for a bit."
one day later
>"ANON WHY HAVEN'T YOU CHECKED ANY OF MY MESSAGES IT SAYS YOU HAVEN'T BEEN ON TWITTER FOR 24 HOURS?!?!?"
>"ANON IS EVERYTHING OKAY PLEASE RESPOND OH MY GOD."
>*Kiara makes a schizopost on twitter with the hashtag #isanonokay or #saveanon or some shit, causing Anonchama to incline even further*

>> No.5654114

>anon collabs with a female chuuba (not kiara)
>she freaks out and anti posting reaches new heights
>it's directed towards the larger, female chuuba though
>she's in tears and announces she's going on break
>anon goes on break too in an act of solidarity
>Kiara on full damage control to try and get her sweet little anonchama back

>> No.5654189

>>5653598
>"Let's all raid him and call him a faggot!"
Heavy incline

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5654226

>another Holo EN finds out about you, asks Kiara about you
>She says you're a piece of shit and under no circumstances should they interact with you or watch your streams
>"Haven't you sent him like 3000$ worth of superchats in the last month and a half?"
>"N-No."

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>>5653915
Speaking of, I wrote a short (1.5k words) lewd story on Lily Hopkins, an independent tuber, although I feel the right audience isn't in this thread... !

https://ghostbin.com/paste/gBq9J

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5654273

>>5653868
"I know, why don't we hang out while you're on vacation? It'd be great to finally meet each other in person!"
>"I don't know, Kiara. That seems a little sudden."
>"Oh please, it'll be fine! Besides, I'm already in town so it'd be waste if we didn't!"

>> No.5654343

Are we timelooping? I feel like I've read a bunch of these before.

>> No.5654347

>>5654267
Hey man it doesn't matter what chuuba your writing is about it's always welcome! It probably seems a little off-putting to writers who don't watch/like Holos that much but any and all vtuber works can find a place here.

>> No.5654375

>>5654273
Anonchama better fuck that chicken raw.

>> No.5654387
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5654387

>>5654273
>A knock on anon's door

>> No.5654389

>>5654343
Yeah I recognize some of the greentexts as ones I wrote, someone must have saved a couple of them.

>> No.5654518

>>5654387
>"Haha hey Anon just a hypothetical question but what size condom do you wear?"
>"whu-what?"
>"Haha Anon just answer the question haha."
>"Kiara that's like really personal I don't feel comfortable telling you that."
>"guess we'll have to go raw then-NEVERMIND ANON HAHAHAH THAT WAS SILLY OF ME TO ASK IM SORRY!"

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5654596

>>5654347
Thanks friend! I guess I mean the type of anons that would feel comfortable with lots of cute and funny in an unfiltered way. But that's what makes the world go round, people liking different things!

>> No.5654606
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5654606

>>5654267
>Lily story
Holy shit
>Lewd story
HOLY SHIT
do i archive this or does it run the risk of pastebin hitting it with the hammer of god i already feel like I'm skirting the fucking line

>> No.5654620
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5654620

>"AnonChama gets to collab with us? Yes! I finally get to-"
>"What do you mean 'he's playing Shadowverse with Calli'?"

>> No.5654650

>>5653750
I still gotta find that picture forgot to save it

>> No.5654712

>>5654596
I think most people here are okay with it. There's a Polka cute and funny being worked on that quite a few are excited for

>> No.5654758
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5654758

>You get drunk during some milestone celebration stream and talk about how thankful you are for her taking an interest in you
>She thinks its a confession of love and how you were suicidal before you met her
>starts pretending to be Antis insulting you for being ungrateful when you clarify otherwise

>> No.5654782

>>5654606
Pastebin doesn't allow nsfw stuff? Don't we already have a bagillion lewd stories on there?

>> No.5654809

>>5654518
>"Anon why haven't you responded to me in that past couple of days??"
>"Kiara someone hacked my webcam and got a picture of me from behind."
>"So?? I don't see how that's my fault though?"
>"Kiara you commented 'UOOOOHHHHH SEEEEEXXXXX SEEEEEXXXX SEEEEXXXX' on the post."
>"o-oh..."

>> No.5654824

>>5654782
That's the line skirting. They'd private it, otherwise. I'm more concerned about the particular nature of this NSFW story.

>> No.5654977

holy fuck my sides. thanks for the rrats anons

>> No.5655016

Ame singing in japanese, nnhhhhgggg

>> No.5655594

>>5654824
I'd be honored! I don't want to nuke any pastebins though. The list seems large enough to be fine, but nobody truly knows...

>> No.5655632

>>5654782
They changed this rule pretty recently. It's why I'm looking for another hoster which ain't something like GoogleDocs

>> No.5655833
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5655833

>>5652936
>"These people are saying he has a girlfriend? THAT CANT BE FUCKING TRUE RIGHT?"
>"Holy shit they're so off with his roommate speculation that obviously couldn't be him"
>"What do you mean he's collaborating with a female chuuba?"

>> No.5655842

I had some writing ideas regarding the ttrpg but I'll wait till gura's gets her done too and they all made it past the tutorial.

>> No.5656102

>>5655833
>>"These people are saying he has a girlfriend? THAT CANT BE
This turns out to be true, how would Kiara react.

>> No.5656669

She pulls a Bjork Stalker, except she comes back and has to live with the embarrassment of failing so bad

>> No.5656899

>>5655632
Can you notepad/docx everything and add it to a mega drive?

>> No.5656982

Watame got kidnapped by cultists who think she is a Baphomet, again. It's up to you, her personal Cover Corp Black Ops agent, to save her. Leave no witnesses.

>> No.5657197

>>5655833
>His girlfriend is also a female chuuba that’s from a small rival Vtuber company.
The amount of seething and antipost Kiara would unleash would be legendary.

>> No.5657315

>>5657197
>Kiara goes so far as to push her into graduation
>Anon is heartbroken for her but can't show it because she had to keep the relationship under wraps
>A huge male chuuba from ANOTHER agency offers her a spot
>She leaves Anon and takes the spot
>Broken and defeated, little Anonchama has no one to turn to but Kiara
>There was no popular male chuuba
>Kiara blackmailed Anons gf
>All according to her kikkerikeikaku

>> No.5657349

>>5657197
>"She's a holier-than-thou bitch with no personality! Like seriously, there's nothing going on in that head of hers! All she does is draw and barely talk!"
>"...No offense Ina."

>> No.5657364

someone write a story about fucking suisei in the ass

>> No.5657375
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5657375

>>5656982
You were too late and Watame is corrupted. She's now a sex addict sheep and craves semen.

>> No.5657415

>>5657364
if i knew how to write suisei's character i already would have

>> No.5657438

>>5656899
I figured that would just make it inconvenient for people to read as Pastebin stuff was really easy for pickup and go stuff.

>> No.5657447
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5657447

Hey remember when I said I had a mighty need to fuck Marine rather than work on Holofantasy well I took care of that here you go it's just straight smut that flew from my fingers at a deadly pace if you see any errors please let me know

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSdxkTKnXeT6IE9oFonx5RzcC0PnCuwVDoiQhu1HgwmDg6jlsBAY0nyf-9QlbYsnvlD-AayWxmE06_u/pub

No one reads these right? Ok good I WANNA FUCK MARINE! I WANNA FUCK THE SEXY BOOMER PIRATE SLUT! I WANT TO RAPE HER WOMB FULL OF CUM! UOOOHHHH! GET PREGNANT! GET PREGNANT! GET PREGNANT! HORNY DUMB PIRATE COCK SLEEVE BUILT AND BRED TO PLEASE COCKS UOOOOHGHGH

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5657451

>decide to take a break from Cover High and write some shorter lewd stuff
>all this chickenposting
It must be a sign. I know what I have to do now.

>> No.5657489

>>5657447
UOOOOOHOOHOHOHOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHH SEEEEEEEXXXXXXX SEEEEEEEXXXXXXX ORREEEE WAAAAA SSSSEEEEEEECKKKKUSSSSUUUU

>> No.5657525

>>5657451
bless your heart writeanon

>> No.5657528

>>5657438
i'd just keep it as a failsafe in case pastebin nukes the archive when you don't expect it

>> No.5657563

>>5657447
C-canon??

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5657599

>>5657447
Our little Anon's growing into a real chad.

>> No.5657797

>>5657528
I've had my stuff I've stored on Pastebin get whacked. It doesn't delete em, it just forces them perma privated so it's still there but I can't share it.
Their quality's been going down hill for years with progressively more strict limits on Unlisted stuff so been looking for an alternative.
Still gotta figure out Lamy's personality and 'voice' for the idea I got more as I got outline but not sure if it'd be in character for her. Back to watching the 'recommend' list from the Lamy thread and then YTCing through her backlog. Still not sure where the best streams would be to get solid info for that and / or lore on her.

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5657820

>>5657447
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAA MARINE SEX I WANT I NEED IT

>> No.5657853

>>5657447
You seem to have mixed up sadism and masochism in the story. Masochism is when someone derives pleasure from being hurt and humiliated, whilst sadism is the inverse.

>> No.5657910

>>5657853
See, I knew I'd fuck something up. Thanks for the heads up. I thought I fixed that the first time. I'm gay.

>> No.5658171

>>5632532
I don't really stop by this place often, let alone read as much as I used to, but I'm very much looking forward to what you have in store for the rest of this story, anon.
Started on the third chapter, got hooked and read the first two right after. You've got a clear grasp on descriptions and write everyone really well, definitely looking forward to more.

>> No.5658260

>>5657447
I WANT MARINE TO RUB MY 3 INCH SHOTA WEENER ON HER FLABBY BELLY AND LAUGH AS I PREMATURELY EJACULATE TO HER BOOMER BODY

>> No.5658422

>>5658260
Anon, the woman's desperate. She'll gladly take an inch if it's all she can get.

>> No.5658494
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5658494

I've never really tried writing before but I'm planning to improve anyway with practice like any skill, but /lit/fags don't seem like they would be much help.
Just accidentelied into this thread looking at chuubas, don't really intend to do fanfics but guess it could be an interesting start.
Any websites or stuff you guys would recommend to post shit to? Only know of Wattpad but that's run by horny teen chicks
>tl;dr
gimme a quick run down on your writing processes

>> No.5658554

>>5658494
The tried and true place to post stories you make is G. Docs, using the File > Publish to the Web button to generate a link that can't be traced back to you. Writing process is get an idea, obsessively think about stuff in that idea, flesh out idea, alternate between working and procrastinating, double checking to make sure I'm not being too repetitive (sometimes this one is iffy), then posting it. It varies from person to person.

>> No.5658569

>>5658494
If you're gonna be posting anything here, I'd recommend using Google Docs. It has a "publish" option that lets you put up your stories anonymously.
If you want to put your stories up someplace else, I hear AO3 get mentioned here a lot.

>> No.5658773

>>5658494
the main thing I do is basically workshop the general idea of the story in my head. Once I'm satisfied I write down a preliminary list of the plotpoints/what i want to happen in the story which will be used for reference. After that it becomes more of filling in the blanks and being flexible of what to add/remove to my liking. Also, G docs anon. save yourself the trouble.

Happy writing!

>> No.5658856

>>5658494
>Skim through prompts list to get ideas
>mmm yes this is good
>Figure out how to make the story even better by expanding on the idea
>This will be my magnum opus!
>get horny
>Beat your dick for 6 hours straight

I'M TRYING TO WRITE A CHUUBA FIC BUT I CANT STOP JACKING OFF MAN WHY AM I LIKE THIS

>> No.5658869

>>5658773
Different anon but I've got the problem of when I"m writing it turns out where I get to is off course and the tracks don't line up. Reconciliation of those things is where a lot of my writing dies as I can't tell where I went off course so the question of "Scrap it all and start over or redo later plans from scratch"
Also having zero confidence as a writer is a bitch

>> No.5658987

>>5658856
it's boners that produce the best writing

>> No.5659003

>>5658856
automatic onahole for your cock and then use both hands to write while your cock gets mechanosucked.

>> No.5659091 [DELETED] 

>>5658869
Well I suppose that's where the flexibility of your writing would have to come in. My list is almost always more of a guideline than a flowchart. For me, as long as I fulfill the beginning and the end without straying off the more important plot points, then I would say I did a good job. The real drag is filling in the meat and bones so that the plot feels like it has natural progression rather than abrupt incidents happening together. You'll have to learn that skill in time.

[spolier]in any case, we're all anons here so even if you get railed, that's just expected considering the website we're in[/spoiler]

All the best in writing, anon!

>> No.5659107

I want a handjob from Ollie. ;w;

>> No.5659122

>>5659003
Do you know how hard it is to get a Lamy in this part of the country?!

>> No.5659138

>>5659091
Lets all laugh and rail this Anon for misspelling the spoiler tag

>> No.5659244

>>5659107
>cold corpse hands that make your dick shrivel

>> No.5659271

>>5658494
I was a very avid reader when I was younger. Stephen King, Michael Crichton, various comic books and assorted biographies of notable historical figures (Mussolini and Lincoln stand forefront in my mind).
As I grew up I watched more films and gravitated towards strong dialogue, Tarantino specifically. You could close your eyes and enjoy a Tarantino flick exclusively from the dialogue.
I only started writing (for entertainment) when I found these threads, but I had experience writing in a dry business report sort of way, which didn't help other than to train me in how -not- to write for entertainment, although you still need to keep the reader's interest (even though they would have to read your reports for the sake of their own job).

TL; DR: Watch well written or acted movies. Tarantino is amazing at dialogue so pay attention to that, but if there's amazing actors (Daniel Day Lewis for me) then learn to describe their scenes and notice their subtleties.

>> No.5659302

Someone write a story about fucking someone in the ass, anyone works as long as they're getting their ass pounded

>> No.5659307

>>5658869
redoing this shit because I fucked myself in the ass with that typo.

the list I use is more of a guideline rather than a flowchart, so don't worry about going off track. As long as you fulfill the story's beginning and ending, and maintain the core plot points, you should still be good. It's the filling of the meat and bones which make it a drag since you have to do it in a way that makes your story have natural plot progression.

I don't need to spoiler this anymore but yeah, you get my point that being railed on this site is a daily occurrence

>>5659138
I'm spreading my cheeks anon. Please use lube.
.

>> No.5659360

>>5659302
Futa chuuba fucking this anon in the ass

>> No.5659377

>>5659302
There's a Risu story about that

>> No.5659425

>>5659244
Nah, she'd be enthusiastic and fun about it, even if her hands were a little cold. Besides, I live in a hot climate, cold hands feel good.

>> No.5659432

>>5659107
While she cuddles you, kisses you and calls you a good boy?

>> No.5660016

>>5659432
That doesn't sound bad.

>> No.5660305

>>5659302
there's a fubuki story about that, appropriately named fucking her in the ass

>> No.5660448

>>5658494
Procure Stephen King's book "On Writing", it's fantastic -if- you can identify with it. No one is 100% the same as anyone else, maybe getting drunk and cradling your shotgun is the best way for you to develop ideas.
https://youtu.be/lwhOd65gGoY

>> No.5660617

>>5657447
>UOOOOHGHGH
Based.

>> No.5661072

>>5660305
There's a Fubuki story for everyone. Just like glasses, Fubuki really is versatile!

>> No.5661134

>>5660305
I need more

>> No.5661204

>>5661134
If you want something done right, you gotta do it yourself. -me as i wrote a gigantomachia fic about fucking Prome

>> No.5661241

>>5661204
I've tried it but I always end up feeling to much shame to continue

>> No.5661262

>>5661241
Don't feel shame. Feel horny. Think of all the Anons out there just like you that you'll be helping. Think of all the coom you can extract from yourself by getting research material of your favorite chuuba being fucked in the ass. Think about the long term.

>> No.5661267
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5661267

>Kiara collars with anonchama
>constant flirting and teasing to a point that seems excessive even by her standards
>he just shyly responds or tries to laugh it off
>"Heh, what's the matter anon? Haven't you ever had a girlfriend?"
>"Oh I'm sorry. But well, you don't need one when you have me!"

>> No.5661295

Anon please post more inamori fanfics the shits i've been reading in Ao3 are damn good. Also can i just request it to be fluff or angst?

>> No.5661305

>>5661241
Yeah there is that moment of self-reflection where I look at what I've written and realize that this probably represents what I really desire, deep down.

>> No.5661308

>>5661241
it always feels like that first time smut writing. just do it anyway.

>>5661262
i get the uncomfortable feeling what you're essentially suggesting is he think of all the ways he's indirectly getting other dudes off

>> No.5661338

>>5661308
>just do it anyway.
This. You parents can't be any more ashamed of you than they already are.

>> No.5661358

>>5632532
Thank you man

>> No.5661398

>>5661262
>>5661308
Thanks guys, due to your words of encouragement I have decided to disappoint my parents even more by writing a story about fucking my oshi in the ass

>> No.5661421

>>5661267
>Collars
P-Please...

>> No.5661475

>>5661398
i've got my dick out and i'm waiting for the figurative caress of your prose

>> No.5661634

>>5661475
That is incredibly off-putting

>> No.5661676

Is writing smut gay because you're indirectly helping other guys get off?

>> No.5661691

>>5661676
It is if you word it like >>5661475

>> No.5661709

>>5661634
Just don't imagine us stroking ourselves in anticipation. Our hands gently placed on your knee. Certainly don't think of us sucking on your nipples through your shirt, the sounds of puckering as we tease and pull with just our mouths.

>> No.5661721

>>5661676
The important part is getting yourself off. Getting other guys off is just a byproduct.

>> No.5661723

>>5661709
I'm not that Anon but unless you become Lamy/are Lamy I am not interested.

>> No.5661733

>>5661676
Or if you word it like >>5661709

>> No.5661735

>>5661676
No. I've already got off to everything I write so if someone else jerks off to it, they're the ones that're gay.

>> No.5661737

>>5661676
Take it from the hentai artists, $20 is $20. Except you're not even getting paid here. Yeah, that's pretty gay

>> No.5661738

>>5661721
I can't even get off to smut, I just like writing it

>> No.5661749

>>5661721
are there actually any creators here that can get off to their own smut?

>> No.5661766

>>5661749
>>5661735
well, fuck

>> No.5661771

>>5661749
I have gotten off to my own smut multiple times before. Also helps if you just write it, forget about it for a few months and then come back to it.

>> No.5661781

>>5661723
We could totally wear a wig.

>> No.5661786

Figures that the fastest the thread ever moves is when we're talking about porn.

>> No.5661787

>>5661749
I wrote Late Night Nut Delivery and I've beat my meat to it like ten times.

>> No.5661788

>>5661749
Man I started writing smut because no one else were writing the prompt but I'm literally unable to get off to my own smut fics because I find them cringe as fuck yet some Anons claimed that they 'creamed all over their mouse' reading my smut fics.

>> No.5661815

>>5661781
Jokes on you faggot, I'm into crossdressing too.
>>5661749
Oddly enough, no. It always feels too strange to me.

>> No.5661817

>>5661788
Acquire confidence in your own writing, scrub

>> No.5661854

>>5661788
lol you're replying to that anon.
the smut was real good. i did cringe internally at use of honorifics while the characters are speaking english, but there are things you've gotta compromise on when it comes to fanfiction

besides, as stated, the smut was real good. i burst out laughing at the sudden gut punching though, that was a real tonal shift.

>> No.5661858

>>5661749
I only write shit if it gets me hard, it's actually a problem where i'm slowly conditioning myself to get a hardon just from typing.
It's got to the point where I dread no longer working from home.

>> No.5661866

>>5661749
I get off on what I've written as it sits in my head, not as I've written it. Mostly because I can adjust to what I'm feeling in the moment.
e.g. Meeting Noelle at a gym and "training" her, but not in the way that I wrote it exactly, maybe meeting her back in the locker room, or having her service me manually, etc.

>> No.5661909

>>5661866
>>5661858
>>5661788
>>5661787
>>5661771
i envy you, whenever i try reading my own smut i can't stop cringing, overanalyzing every line and thinking why the fuck did i put this here when i should have done this

>> No.5661945

>>5661909
When i'm writing smut i'm usually too horny to care about the fine details

>> No.5661963

>>5661786
Through dick, unity

>> No.5661988

>>5661963
Now is that gay?

>> No.5662002

>>5661909
The trick is to prioritize visualizing the scene in your head and ignore everything else.

>> No.5662018

>>5661988
It at least doesn't bring to mind images of fat blokes rubbing each other off

>> No.5662028

>>5661988
Something something, evolutionary adaptation to brag about your wife and all the sex you have something something social bonding

>> No.5662340

>>5661786
Let's be frank, Anon. A decent amount of people came here to cum.

>> No.5662393

>>5662340
i personally feel deep gratitude towards any and all smut writers. you've enriched the world, and several of my tissues

>> No.5662437

>>5662393
This is nice to hear. I'm in the same boat as >>5661909 where after the horny fugue wears off I wake up face down in a puddle of bitter tears and lotion wondering what the fuck happened to me when I see a handful of replies going 'UOHHH'

>> No.5662477

>>5662437
>bitter tears
Uhh Anon I don’t know what to tell you, but those may not be tears…

>> No.5662559

>>5621539
Shut up

>> No.5663046

>>5658987
Cumbrain will only be a detriment though. If you can't write clearly when not affected, you won't write well when you are affected
I don't want to write something and then cringe for the rest of my natural and unnatural lifespan

>> No.5663089

looks like smut's back on the menu boys.

Spoilers for the next chapter of the menhera wrangling series, which will be out later today:
UUUUUOOOOOHHHH SUISEI I'M GONNA FUCKING BREED YOU LIKE THE FILTHY WHORE YOU ARE I'M GONNA TURN YOU INSIDE OUT AND THE ONLY THING ON YOUR MIND WILL BE MY COCK INSIDE YOU. I'M GONNA RIP THAT DAINTY LITTLE CHOKER AND GROPE YOUR FLAT CHEST TILL IT'S SWOLLEN

look forward to it :)

>> No.5663206

>>5663089
god bless, anon

>> No.5663276

>>5663089
Looking forward to it. Suisex has very few stories in the archive.

>> No.5663660

>>5663046
Write horny and then when not horny that's when you edit. Repeat as needed until you got what you want. Remember you don't need to upload first draft

>> No.5663720

>>5663660
>Remember you don't need to upload first draft
Don't listen to this guy, upload the first draft and let the cringe mistakes haunt you into never making another mistake again.

>> No.5663821

>>5663720
>reread stories from months prior
>see a mistake
>FUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK

>> No.5665253

>>5663089
As a hoshiyomi, I can't wait. What a way to celebrate the milestone.

>> No.5666813

>>5663089
>chokers
I like the idea of them being loose collars until you grab them from behind and your fingers make them bite tight around the throat.

>> No.5666864

>>5663089
> Choker is just like a black belt, but in blowjobs

>> No.5668746

horny bump

>> No.5668923

>>5661749
I find it hard to write smut because I always nut to it

>> No.5668996

>>5622219
Working on finishing my Choco/Mio discipline fic

>> No.5669027

>>5621830
Just asking, will you also ask some drawanons to draw it on the draw thread?

>> No.5669068

>>5661749
>>5661788
>>5661909
this is such a weird situation. it's the polar opposite of what i've seen in a lot of other writing communities. generally, smut writers are able to get off to their own content moreso than almost anyone else's since they can tailor it to their own preferences.

if you're not feeling it, i think that means either you're focusing too much on what the thread wants rather than what you want, or you're not revising your work enough to meet your personal standards of quality

>> No.5669758

>>5669068
i just think the old adage of one being one's worst critic rings truer for some
i'm honestly surprised there are people here that cab stomach their own work
maybe the validation gained from praise helps

>> No.5669880

>>5669758
Nah I've written and nutted to quite a few smuts that I never have nor will share with anyone, so its not a matter validation. Most probably just that, as you said, some people are just too harsh on themselves. I mean, its fucking smut, why be so analytical about, right? More than anything else, the smut i write gets a free pass from any proper criticism from myself. As long as its coherent enough to make my pp hard, its good.

>> No.5670277

>>5657447
Incredibly based

>> No.5670950

>>5659377
Not yet. Progress on my Risu futa story is pretty slow right now. Though i have started a CocoGura MoriShion futa orgy story, not sure how that will go.

>> No.5670985

>>5661787
Oh is that one of the only two Risu stories? Any plans on more of her?

>> No.5671055

>>5669068
That is very odd to me because in the art world where i come from, artists really cannot jerk off to their own drawings, that is 100% the majority of them. Here, it seems to be the opposite, you jerk off even more to your own stuff. Kinda hard to understand. As an art anon, so far my art and writing can give me boners from imagining the situation but i couldn't nut to it.

>> No.5671147

>>5670985
Maybe someday. I've got a pretty big backlog of ideas to get through, but I definitely wouldn't mind doing more Risu stuff if inspiration strikes. She's fun to write.

>> No.5671241

>>5671055
As a write anon I feel the same but more for the fact I can only look at my work critically. I may think what I've written is hot or needs improving but I can never look at it as something to jerk off to.

>> No.5671286

(You) fuck Marine so thoroughly that she stops acting lewd around anyone but you. This is such a massive change that the rest of gen 3 gets curious about how good it actually was. Now they want a taste of what Marine is getting.

>> No.5671588
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5671588

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRxRmEPlvzx5dW3ZoPemD4-0Nn1aUGeZJhudkyzLKqcxIbkIoyZI4x6iC2K9KIOykoRcPI_cIlVIl_u/pub

Fun Fact! In Call of Duty: World at War, Japanese soldier set on fire will, occasionally, shout things in Indonesian instead of Japanese, hinting that they're forcibly conscripted Heiho soldiers.

All Indonesian is google translated, so forgive me if it doesn't make sense.

>> No.5671680

>>5671055
I feel there's a significant difference between art and writing. Not to shit on myself or other writers here, but the skill ceiling for writing is worlds below art. It probably doesn't take a twentieth the experience or talent to be able to write a high-quality fic as it does a masterpiece of a drawing.
When I release smut, I know for damn sure it's a great piece of work and don't settle for less, because it's realistically possible to aspire to that. Trying for the same with a digital image, however, might take like a decade or two of formal study plus hours upon hours of painstakingly redrawing and brainstorming. Now that I mention it, that's another big difference: remedying a mistake in a fic is as simple as fiddling with a word processor and maybe deleting or adding a large section at worst, but some mistakes in art might require a whole redraw from the ground up. It's unreasonable to be as perfectionist in such cases.

>> No.5671817

>>5623095
Masturbate to Botan cock

>> No.5671883

>>5669758
>maybe the validation gained from praise helps
Actually the opposite in my case.
I have this complex where I assume all praise is disingenuous: whether it's "Nice story bro" or "This rapefic literally changed my life, I was terminally ill but your phenomenal prose gave me the determination and will to pull through so I could forcibly violate my childhood friend" my gut reaction is always "Fuck off!" so I tend to write for my own gratification above all else.

>> No.5672007
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5672007

>>5669027
I will, though I doubt any shall be willing to consider such a project. Some of the drawanons have expressed desire for better requests than the "X but Y is Z" requests they tend to get, so with any luck, perhaps someone will attempt it.
I hold little hope however.

>> No.5672090

>>5671588
good job anon
the ending was cute

>> No.5672141

>>5671680
I disagree on the skill ceiling part, writing on the masterpiece level takes just as much skill and dedication as drawing on the masterpiece level. But we aren't even close to that level, our smut is on the level of making porn sketches. Like maybe minimal coloring and a few fine details, but not much else. If we wanted to take it a step higher to the level of a fairly good looking drawing, we would be writing about 10k+ words worth of character building with a plot before getting into the smut.... But there's also other factors to consider like the fact that we are writing smut about already established characters, which makes it much easier to write about them, but not easier to draw them.

>> No.5672240

>>5671588
Ollie :(

>> No.5672273

>>5660305
This should be like a rule at this point
"If a certain prompt doesn't have a Fubuki version, it will be written."

>> No.5672292

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQblPCd8Uo9A_Z1NW9Nnz0sIhWNWNeR5fTgG8_4PiD0DseUS74nFhJ_goPsvYgc8xknVLh0tuGGZeKA/pub

I think this will be the first and last time I work with necrophilia

>> No.5672353

>>5672141
>we would be writing about 10k+ words worth of character building with a plot before getting into the smut....
I disagree heavily with your perception of what constitutes a high quality fapfic. If your goal is to produce something that makes you hard, and you accomplish that effectively and without extraneous waste, you've made a masterpiece. I think putting "real" writers on such a high pedestal in your mind is a pretty shitty attitude to have; you are entirely capable of matching up to them, and they don't have anything in particular that you don't. It's a medium where the best practice you can do is reading others' works, so a rank amateur can catch up to and surpass a seasoned veteran in a pitifully short amount of time

>> No.5672382
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5672382

>>5654375
>literally has anon by the balls, his dick firmly locked where it belongs
>it still isn't enough for her
>"Um, I was wondering..."
>"Can you call me Mommy?"
>"No no, I don't mean it in like a weird way..."

>

>> No.5672749

>>5671588
Nice and bittersweet. Good job, anon.

The Indonesian part was pretty formal unlike how Ollie usually speaks, but was strangely reminiscent to the first president's speeches. It was probably pretty close to how colonialism era Indonesians speak.

>> No.5672761

>>5672353
I get what you mean, but I recently read through "The Erogamer", and it really pushed the envelope on what I thought was possible for a smut story. Though, yeah, it is leaps and bounds easier to catch up to veteran smut writer than a porn artist.

>> No.5673209
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5673209

Do you have a story like you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

>> No.5673283

>>5673209
Too late for this, don't you think?

>> No.5673305

>>5673283
better late than never

>> No.5673309

>>5673283
better late than never..?

>> No.5673311

>>5672382
>"Anon if you and me had kids together what would their names be?"
>"Kiara isn't it 5 in the morning where you are?"
>"Answer the question Anon."

>> No.5673316

>>5671588
Poor ollie. That was a nice a read, thanks anon.

>> No.5673386

>>5671286
>>5673209
Pinning this just in hopes it doesn't get lost forever

>> No.5673423

>>5673305
>>5673309
I'll rather have never.

>> No.5673744

>>5672007
Yeah i can see that, it's a 20ish page doujin it's a pretty big request and will take a loooot of time, but if nobody else is interested in it maybe I can try. But I'm telling it will take at least a month and a week for it if my job doesn't fuck me up too much

>> No.5674443

>>5673744
The boss Lamy is actually gonna hire an artist for the doujin after commissioning multiple artists for SFW single images and deciding who's best. Though if you feel like making something, go ahead. Gotta say tho, making a 20 page doujin is something I'd rather not have to ever attempt in my life, especially not with only one or two months of deadline. Way too much work, especially for not being paid.

>> No.5674773

>>5673209
I didn't post this for a reason, by the time I woke up the new thread was up early and already flooded with posts. You gotta do this shit early in or not at all

>> No.5674866

I think the archive needs updating

>> No.5674932

>>5674773
I posted it since I wanted the prompts and noticed this was missing but I'll leave to you next time

>> No.5674945

>>5674443
As weird as the Lamys are I gotta respect their dedication to set this whole thing up.

>> No.5675340

>>5674443
Ohhh i see then good for you lamys.
>Gotta say tho, making a 20 page doujin is something I'd rather not have to ever attempt in my life, especially not with only one or two months of deadline. Way too much work, especially for not being paid.
I know but lately I'm always finding myself with less and less input to draw so any project that will have me drawing a lot is more than welcome even if I'm not getting payed

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5675460

>>5675340
ANY... You say...? This one is mine, back off. No requests. Lest you get a crowbar to the face.

>> No.5675567

>>5674866
I usually update it when the thread ends/is at the end of its lifespan, don't worry.
>>5674932
It's fine, that's just part of the issue with new threads cropping up early. I went to sleep thinking it'd be fine only to see another thread popped up essentially 10 minutes after I crashed and it was immediately hit with
>two threads
Shitposting which just tanked it.

>> No.5675602

>>5675460
Hmm, you have a request anon? If yes then quote me in te dreawthread

>> No.5675690

>>5675460
aren't you the one who didn't know about 4chanx last thread?

>> No.5675739

would it be too late for me to post my story? I'm almost about done but I'm just afraid considering this thread is moving faster than it normally does.

>> No.5675764

>>5675739
I'd save it for the next thread.

>> No.5675826

>>5675460
samefag-chama...

>> No.5675863

>>5675690
I'm gonna fucking change the filenames sooner or later. Can't have Lamys stalking me everywhere i go.

>> No.5675865 [DELETED] 

>>5621400
>>5632040
Oi OP, if you prefer to add google docs to the pastebin, I have also uploaded it there
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xGzm3K7rxtVq0xYw6iXow2JeSFHvqZX2gc8w8kxbI10/edit#

>> No.5675884

>>5675764
fair I suppose. I got caught up in writing the Suzy smut although I did promise to have it finished by later today. Let's just consider it as a welcoming gift in the next thread then.

>> No.5675947

>>5675884
>Suzy smut
Never have I ever wanted a thread to die faster than now.

>> No.5676000

>>5675865
anon, your name's attached. you might wanna publish that shit

>> No.5676173

>>5675865
If you can, can you use a Publish to Web link? That'd be a lot better for everyone, I feel.

>> No.5676223

>>5676000
ah, so that's how that works.
I don't care if the name is visible because I only made that account to upload this smut.

>>5621400
>>5632040
Ok, once again.
If OP prefers to add google docs to the pastebin he can use this link.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQIK9QwTfs1iGjaEE7X0AkZ4yphfYE3sQkQ5-asqFIEiSNkaFgvrUoGH4VtTlpKdqyaqZQWENmsGOO2/pub

>> No.5676329

>>5676223
Added. Thank you!

>> No.5676420

man, a single prompt for Ollie effectively doubled(or quadrupled) the amount of stories written for her. The power of the Zoombie is truly frightening.

>> No.5676653

>>5676420
A good prompt at the right time can make all the difference in the world for a character.

>> No.5676768

>>5676329
I will write you an email with the links to the updated versions of my other stories. Took me until now to find out about the publish function.

>> No.5676856

how important is proper characterization to you guys? Do you do research on the chuuba you're writting about?

>> No.5676937

>>5676856
somewhat important, but as long as it has their core characteristics, i would make some tweaks for it to serve my story better. If you are able to fully incorporate their characteristics into your own story, then I salute you.

>> No.5676955 [DELETED] 

>>5676653
Boy does it.

>> No.5676990

>>5676768
Sure. It'll be about an hour before I update it since I'm busy at the moment, but I'll do it!

>> No.5677025

>>5676856
It's really important to me, that's why I only write about the chubas I actively watch.

>> No.5677193

>>5676856
Pretty important, but a lot of the stories posted here fall outside the scope of girls streaming themselves playing games. So naturally some creative liberties have to be taken. As long as it falls within the range of "yeah, that sounds like something she'd do," it's fine.

>> No.5677495

>>5631644
oh no, I hope they don't do anything to me while i'm all alone and defenseless

>> No.5677534

>>5652936
>goes full anti every time you do anything that remotely bothers her
>then brings those posts to your awareness acting like a concerned friend

>> No.5677648

>>5677495
They're going to close in, push you up against the wall, lean in really close and ask if you need directions,

>> No.5677684

>>5677648
hot

>> No.5677760

>>5677648
Mori would absolutely kabedon somebody only to genuinely ask if they were lost

>> No.5678030

>>5661749
>think of something that's attractive to you and would get you off
>put it into story form
>you still get off to it

>> No.5678437

>>5671588
Thank you for fulfilling my request!! It's written well and enjoyable.

>> No.5678604

finally done with the story, now in the final re-readings and some editing. Once this thread dies, I'll post it up in the next one. The latest addition of the menhera wrangling series, now with full on Suisex

>> No.5678672

>>5676856
I enjoy the line the writers here tend to take straddling the line between the character and the personality given by the streamer. If the story subjects were out of character I may as well go read any other story.

>> No.5679024

>>5673209
Last minute prompt idea because I just saw the recent Ollie clip. Ollie chasing after you because you are a kaigai niki (not Indonesian). Could almost be like the opposite to the Ayamex(You) prompt where instead of being disgusted it's extremely endearing to her.

>> No.5679074

>>5673209
Gentlemen, I come to you with a request.
Lolichaama.
That is all.

>> No.5679188

>>5679074
you have to deal with this brat ruining your kitchen with her cooking and getting hyper active from too much sugar
>please lolichaama just take your vitamin gummies

>> No.5679227

>>5679188
I was thinking sex but this sounds funnier.

>> No.5679242

Is this really all you guys want to write? Fanfiction? Don't you want to be the next Faulkner? Proust? Tolstoy? Dostoevsky? Why don't you come to /lit/'s /wg/ to be a real writer?

>> No.5679311

>>5679242
I want to write about Virtual Futa Girls dicking each other, not about some existentialist bullshit

>> No.5679326

>>5679242
you really don't think dostoevsky would've written chuuba fiction?

>> No.5679337

>>5679242
No.

>> No.5679372

>>5679242
>Is this really all you guys want to write?
Yes

>> No.5679374

>>5679188
>>5679227
The true path is to combine them, you fools. Reconcile! Adapt!
>>5679242
no i want to write about the tingle going down my fucking spine as my legs turn to jelly as i ejaculate inside of marine's almost-barren womb in a last ditch attempt to impregnate her

>> No.5679499

>>5679242
where else would you find an equally high demand for impregnating a virtual avatar from a bunch of retarded niggers?

>> No.5679580

i like how mentioning /lit/ has just turned into guaranteed replies

>> No.5679616

>>5679580
I'm pretty sure everyone's replying since were already over the bump limit.

>> No.5679653

>>5679242
Yes. The only thing I wanted to write are good wish-fulfillment for waifu, chuuni fights or soft-scifi.

>> No.5679772

>>5679242
Look I don't want to write something that will be used to bore a high schooler in literature class.

>> No.5679814
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5679814

>>5679242
but I don't want to be the next great writer, I want to make smut about vtubers

>> No.5680046

>>5679242
I prefer writing stories about elegantly ejaculating in Shion's ass rather than some pretentious garbage that /lit/'s pseuds will call bad with big words they googled

>> No.5680221

While I still haven't written I admire you anons' dedication to the craft. Whether here to coom or to enjoy some sweet writing it's all very fun stuff.

>> No.5680308

>>5680046
Has...there been a story about cumming in Shion's ass?

>> No.5680345

>>5680308
I think there's one in the works?

>> No.5680513

>>5680345
Based. That slutty brat needs to be fucked.

>> No.5680569

>>5678604
>spoiler
The new thread can't come fast enough, god bless you anon.

>> No.5681366

>>5679242
penis in chuuba bumhole makes for much better writing, methinks

>> No.5681857

but where is the chuuba armpit sex

>> No.5682733

>>5681857
It's locked in your heart anon. You gotta let it out through your stories. Make the chuuba armpit sex you wanna see in the world.

>> No.5683028

How long will it take for this thread to actually die

>> No.5683082

Oh shit, wait, are we back?

>> No.5683123

>>5683028
Couple of hours. Just post your story.

>> No.5683153

>>5683028
4chan's been down for two hours. Don't know how it'll work.

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