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This is the writing thread, where anons can come together to read and write fanfiction. We’re currently hosting the /vt/ Writing Rumble, a writing contest for anyone who wants to get involved. The info page (and contest archive) can be found here: rentry.org/WGWC

Below is the main archive for everything the thread has put out in its existence, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, greentexts and shitposts alike:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>"Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction?"
Yes.

Previous thread: >>56070774 (Starring intellectual discussions on the breeding of Pekomama and a political uprising against hags)
/wg/ rentry for bakers: https://rentry.org/wgrentry/

>> No.56201287
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STORY ANCHOR
Post your stories here!

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/VT/ WRITING RUMBLE STORY ANCHOR
This is the anchor for contest submissions (closes 08/25).

Rules, stories that have been submitted so far and other information can be found at:
rentry.org/WGWC

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap!
There was one story posted in the last thread.

Yuzuki Veterinary Services-Second Opinion >>56130634
Tags: NSFW, Towa, Choco, Bestiality, Gangbang

>> No.56202752

Have we had any good detective/mystery stories? It doesn’t have to be anything ground-breaking or anything, but something that makes the reader form their own theories and have a satisfying reveal.

>> No.56203508

>>56202752
Nothing comes to mind, but someone has to have done it with Ame
I think the closest is Holoerror

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>Peko bread
My favorite

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>>56202752
Not really, closest thing we've gotten is "A predator's touch' having a bit of mystery in regards to what's happening in it's current arc but time will tell if that turns out satisfying or not.
Closest thing we have in a finished work is "The Girl of Emptiness" having a very well implemented twist halfway through that's less mystery and more plot twist that makes you rethink the first half of the story.

>> No.56206934

What if Shiori’s audition to Cover was just the entirety of Holofantasy

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>> No.56209905

>>56209775
I still remember that prompt where she shows up at your house one day and shows you a butter knife, claiming it's your son.
Next, she could show up with a bolo and tell you that your son has been growing up without you, and a new pen knife is on the way too.

>> No.56210300

>>56202752
There's an abandoned WiP I wrote that I posted to this thread once.

>> No.56211021

15 pages today because I got bored of video games. Honestly, it's better that I get my pages in early in the week, because as soon as the Holocure update drops I'm going to be productively nonfunctional

>> No.56211077

>writing Pekomama getting neglected by Pekopapa through her insane super-heat
>actually feel bad about the dynamic I’m putting these two into
Man I just want to get to the part where she gets her brains slammed out by a little bunny boy with a big schlong I’m not cut out for this drama, fuck

>> No.56211268

>>56202752
>>56210300
Here's the WiP I was talking about. Apparently the prose was too purple which I personally disagree with but whatever.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQOwS4az0VbqxAeLI48jhuV1_jcmi4rSXn_KAx6cf_B_jXb2fTTWpEQ37zrHYxLna3mUlGceVLveaXc/pub

>> No.56211377

>>56211077
There's nothing more emotionally confusing than getting heart broken over the trauma you're inflicting upon your own characters lol

>> No.56211401

I'm making healthy progress on my Gura screenplay that I hope to submit for the contest. The past couple days has mainly been formatting what I've already written to look like a real film script, adding in the proper actions, cues, and descriptions. I know most submissions are gonna be in a traditional novel/short story format so I hope that something unconventional like this would be interesting for people to read.

>> No.56212559

>>56211077
Ah the unintentional NTR fic. Have you ever written something similar? Maybe that's why you're feeling weird about this.

>> No.56212811

>>56212559
No, the scenario is intentional, it’s just a fair bit sadder than I expected
Pekopapa’s daily routine as king is menial and pointless, which leaves him drained at the end of each day with no time for his wife; Pekomama, unable to do anything as a wife and her children having moved away, decides to throw her all into running a classroom for Pekolandian children, which gives her some fulfillment and purpose she never had before. Pekopapa ends up being slightly resentful over it, seeing her enthusiasm and enjoyment of her teaching role and thus labeling it as “not real work” and growing more distant from her, thus pushing her more and more into her teaching to fill the hole in her heart

>> No.56212875

>>56212811
oh...

>> No.56213200

>>56212811
...
Okay that is literally a fucking NTR plot. Literally the only thing missing is that you don't want to write Anon as a big dick sadistic shota.

>> No.56213389

>>56213200
Listen the shota is just experiencing his first mating season and is very enamored with his extremely curvy milf teacher who happens to also be in super-heat due to being neglected for months, or even years(she lost count)
and the shota happens to have a big dick

>> No.56213567

>>56213200
Noone was contesting that it's an NTR plot, the point was that it's not unintentionally so.

>> No.56215370

>>56211401
Experimentation is the best thing you can do in a contest, anon; as long as it's entertaining. Good luck!

>> No.56217161

Clear.

>> No.56218277

God bless those horny ruffians in /baubau/ that backseating greentext is amazing. I'm pretty sure the only way it could get adapted is if AI advances enough that it can get read in their voices since I doubt adapting it to prose would really work.

>> No.56218567

>>56211401
NSFW or SFW?

>> No.56219776

>>56218567
I'm pretty sure this is the guy writing and ai wrangling "Shark in the Screen"
>https://youtube.com/playlist?list=PLZdwW1dn_6Ba1YWu5bvGo0w5xG4pJXA6-
Going by archive dives he has posted here before. Though I'm pretty sure it didn't get archived since he didn't seem familiar with how our system worked.

>> No.56220165

>>56219776
>Shark in the Screen
Aw shit, I'm waiting for the next episode for that one. Writing was interesting, and the music was nice too.

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>> No.56222403

>>56222071
>Replace all instances of Pomu with Fubuki in Holojourneys
Ah finally the fix we've all been waiting form

>> No.56224195
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>finish the sex scene that I've been working on for a good chunk of the week.
Fucking finally...

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>>56222403
You'll get your arc with the white friend you fox fucker. No one is replacing who Pomu is in my heart.

>> No.56226172

>>56224886
Hey HJ anon im procastinating and i havent catchrf up yet.
Does Pomu content, be it actual or future, is gonna take advantage of her fairy size? Also can i like, cum in a teacup and watch her take a bath in it?

>> No.56226445

>>56222403
I like reading about Pomu in HoloJourneys..it's like a memory from the time when NijiEN was still watchable alongside HoloEN. She's a good woman stuck in an unideal situation.

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>>56226172
She has shrunk down a few times so far. It's a skill that'll come in handy as the adventure goes on. As for the second thing, I guess you can? She would probably question what the hell is in that cup, and why it's all thick.

>> No.56226761

>>56226565
You WILL take advantage of how small 9cm Pomu is in relation to Anon's genitals and the amount of cum Anon can produce, right?

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>>56226445
That is Pomu. A girl who will make the best of a bad hand she has been dealt, and then find a way to change her pair of twos into a pair of eights. She'll keep building bridges and help bring about unity.
>>56226761
I don't know. Maybe eventually. The two aren't exactly into each other in that way at the moment. Pomu is more about helping Anon get laid with the ladies that are eagerly waiting for their turn.
I can give you that idea with Bae though.

>> No.56227386

>>56227229
>I don't know. Maybe eventually. The two aren't exactly into each other in that way at the moment. Pomu is more about helping Anon get laid with the ladies that are eagerly waiting for their turn.
But can Anon really live with her spending her time and effort on saving other hags and neglecting herself? The selfless deserve reward most of all!

>> No.56227539

>>56218567
SFW

>>56219776
Yep that's me. Is it possible to archive youtube videos here? I wasn't sure because I only saw text only stories.

>>56220165
I'm actively working on part 2. I'm glad you're looking forward to it!

>> No.56227584

>>56227539
Ultimately it's up to Shiori, but the archive itself only hosts links. Whether that link leads to a text document or a Youtube video doesn't matter much.

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>>56227229
There may or may not be a scene in the far future where Anon is guilt tripped, blackmailed, encouraged, willing to be Pomu's wingman and go on a double date with her so she can get some dragon girl coochie. Pomu will get her Ws, don't you worry.

>> No.56228856

>>56224195
>Can't make two scenes work.
>Finally find a way to make them click
That's the stuff!

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>Pekora's 3.0 buffed her breasts
>she can do this now
That pekoland arc can't come soon enough

>> No.56230079

>>56228856
Yeah, that's the satisfying part. Back then I used to write a scene in advance and leave the scene before it blank, so I'd have to figure out how to connect them like a puzzle, but not make it feel forced.
The proof's in the pudding though; it'll all boil down to how the readers will find it.

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>tfw the grandiose fight scene in a fic starts

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>>56229493
Oh yeah? Tell me more! I didn't catch her 3.0 buff.

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>>56231031
It was an experience

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>>56231100
Dang. They want me to get in there don't they?

>> No.56232572

>>56231100
Given how she is, I'd root for an actually asexual camgirl pekora

>> No.56232948

>>56232572
What does that even mean?
You pull down her leotard and she's just a barbie doll down there?

>> No.56233227

>>56232948
Asexual just means no sexual attraction or desire.

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>>56201413
A dumb action fic about chuubas fusing together for more power.

>> No.56234645

>>56234347
Reminds me of the recent "Anons from all stories fuse together" idea.

>> No.56235690

>>56231100
I think all the holos can do this with their 3.0. Even Botan did it once.

>> No.56235861
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Do you keep the chuuba's heights strictly canonical in your fics or do you think it's okay to change them if it improves your story?

>> No.56236529

>>56234645
>Insanely competent hyperwarrior who's cripplingly autistic, a switch S/M, a mage, a soldier, a hitman, and everything in between
literally how can you compete

>> No.56236582
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>>56235861
If I kept them canonical to the the tiny moon men standards, none of the girls in my story would be able to reach shelves. The most I'm keeping in mind is their heights in relation to one another for example, Nene is taller than Flare, Polka, and Watame, with the sheep being the shortest. I also try to picture height at what would likely be acceptable or believable within the world, like how Botan is pretty tall, even being able to stand a head above anon. While by their canon numbers, she's still a shorty, it just doesn't fit the idea of an alpha lion girl. At the end of the day though, as long as Marine isn't suddenly taller than Botan or Noel, you're fine to change things up as you need to.

>> No.56236608

>>56236529
Only one of them can be the dominant personality at a time, and getting them to agree on anything is next to impossible

>> No.56236805

>>56236529
Compete? I am Anon.

>> No.56236931

>>56236805

Hey, me too!

>> No.56237040

>>56236529
>Demon King Anon conquers the land and takes all the chuubas into his harem
>Level 1 Anon who escaped the fusion must gather allies and overthrow his reign of terror

>> No.56237147

The man who fucks a great number of chuubas in different dimensions? Me.

>> No.56237675
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>>56237040
He must gather a force of weaker fused chuubas if he wants a chance at victory.

>> No.56237807

>>56237675
>Anon fights the demoness fused from all chuubas to try and free his oshi
>HoloJourneys 2: electric boogaloo ensues
This shit practically writes itself

>> No.56238037

>>56237675
>Every girl ever written from any story has all fused into their respective 'Prime'
>Fubuki Prime is a schizophrenic mess

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>>56237807
You know I'm just gonna breed the demoness to free my oshi right?

>> No.56238660

>>56238037
I actually had an idea about this for a stupid ass archive spillover rpg I wanted to see done where a party of 4 Anons had to recover the prime chuubas who were broken off and away from their world. Polka was bipolar as fuck and switched from mania with funny clown hijinks to severe, introspective melancholic depression without missing a beat.

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>>56238660
Isn't that just normal Polka?

>> No.56238928

>>56238779
It was meant to be a lot more pronounced and exacerbated. Also a lot of fellatio jokes she always seemed confused by after she said it like they were intrusive thoughts.

>> No.56239061

>>56238281
>She's got the cunt of a hag and child, and also a cock on top of it because of the futa fics we've gotten
Schrodinger's barren womb?

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>>56239061
>also a cock
Damn, I'm gonna have to tag in Pomu or Kiara to help out with this one then.

>> No.56240645

>>56239469
Ah yes, the cockxperts.

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>>56234645
Reminds me of this trpg

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>>56240645
Well someone is gonna have to suck it, and it's sure as hell not gonna be me.

>> No.56242037

>>56241855
Lesbians who try out sucking girlcock? Sounds hot.

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>>56238660
I always love the idea of alternate selves for characters, that are either their polar opposites, or specific traits they carry magnetized tenfold.

>> No.56246647

>>56244928
Fame-hungry alter Suisei...

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>>56246647
Man I hope someone does something with that, you could really take it anywhere

>> No.56248542

>>56237675
I hate this image

>> No.56250295

>>56248108
As long as it ends up in a battle to the death between both Suiseis.

>> No.56251007

>>56250295
Much like the last time it happened the winner remains Suisei, the loser becomes an Anemachi.

>> No.56252904

>>56248108
I feel like no one wants to take Alt!Suisei because she deserves a series for herself and not a small story.
And many of our authors are fully commited to other projects

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>>56252904
>she deserves a series for herself and not a small story
>authors are committed to other projects
>mfw I'm giving her that series representation in a giant elongated package
>mfw she's going to want MY package at some point too

>> No.56253797

>>56253571
Is she really the kind of woman you should give your package to?

>> No.56253924
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>>56253797
I would say no. In fact I hear some of the older Hololive talents need our packages more.

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>>56253797
>Implying I'll have a choice in the matter

>> No.56254930

>>56253571
>The shiori boom and the Alt suisei package
Im voting for the menhera party!

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>>56254930
Come on in friend! We also have jealous muscle knights who will turn your spine into a fine paste for touching half-elves, princesses, and even sheep! The menhera gets even worse the more you touch.

>> No.56257176

>>56254930
>All the girls i like are good gals
Nyo....

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>>56253997
Oh shit

>> No.56258615

>>56254930
How do I vote for cute women?

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>>56258615
You'll want the fluffy party that's about 2 blocks down.

>> No.56261000

>>56254930
Funny, I'm attending one. Hope the music is good.

>> No.56262877

>>56229493
I guess we know how Pekora in heat looks now.

>> No.56263242

>>56261000
>go to the menhera party
>get pass through the door, a girl offers me a drink
>Its roofied
>wake up in a bdsm room
I love these! catch you all next sunday when i escape this girl

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>>56262877
I may have already cruised the peko thread and got all the reference material I'll need for later.

>> No.56264427

>>56263242
Anon, I don't think they practice Safe, Sane and Consensual.

>> No.56264618

>>56264427
I Know! isnt it fantastic?
Yesterday they left a note in my bathroom telling me im the proud dad of two kids!

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>>56264427
Safe words are standard. Sane and consensual vary.
>Wake up in BDSM room
>see this
>every fucking thursday with this bitch

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Fubunana to the rescue!

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Everyone! Get in here! Tell me how things are going for you today on your writing or reading fronts. If there's anything you want help with, shout it out.

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>>56267297
1.2k words today so far
Past the slightly depressing and frustrating setup, almost at the sexytimes

>> No.56271034

Would all Pekolandians use "peko" as a verbal tic or just the Usadas? Or even just the Usada women?

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>>56271034
I planned on making it an Usada womanly trait, one that they grow out of as they mature. But every so often, it might just come out anyway.
>Pekomama kneels down and whispers in your ear "Give me another three children, peko~"

>> No.56271376

>>56271034
All Pekolanders use 'peko' https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eQRwb06sWg0

>> No.56271659

>>56271376 (me)
As an aside, I also found... this.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8uNRF0ufcA

>> No.56274024

>>56263242
Good on you for reminding me to work on my roofie scene I had planned a while ago

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>>56267297
Currently stuck reading about the pentagram in Japanese culture

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>>56267297
Currently working on some particularly tricky dialogue. Scenes with a large number of characters involved are a bitch and a half to write. But I kind of dug my own grave there when I made the cast this big in the first place.

>> No.56274795

>>56271376
Oh yeah, think about it, the "peko" tic is from Pekolish leaking into Peko's Japanese, because Pekolish is comprised of all "peko"s.
This means that, in a fic that takes place IN Pekoland, they're all saying "peko" all the time, which, by the rules of fiction, means that NONE of the dialogue should have "peko" in it.

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56275052

>>56274598
Are you me? I've found myself hit with that challenge for a little bit now, but I've kinda gotten around it by becoming more conscious of who would have something to contribute and say to the conversation, and who might just give non verbal responses. Don't forget that you can easily bounce 1-2/2-3 people conversations within your group, such as one character asking for the particular opinions of another, and then the two of them have the floor in a sense. It may be a bed we've made for ourselves, but I'm more than happy to lie in it. Especially when it's full of beautiful women.

>> No.56275426
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>>56274795
Due to how the Usada kingdom is gonna be culturally, I was going to write it off as an accent of sorts, while Pekora herself actually enunciates it often enough.

>> No.56279801

>>56274176
...What does it mean?

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>>56279801
They think it's pretty neat.

>> No.56280065

>>56279801
I always assumed Mito just added it because he thinks it's cool.

>> No.56284176
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I need point-75 mils of fanfics, STAT!
Also penis inspection day by Choco-sensei

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>>56267297
I havent written ANYTHING except class notes in a week

>> No.56284532
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56284532

>>56284176
Your Choco's looking a little bloomed there Anon

>> No.56285255

>>56267297
I've been poking around in my wip adding in and changing some shit but I'm still stuck on the same scene I was in when I dropped it earlier this year.

>> No.56285339

>>56284532
She's been giving me daily check-ups, if you catch my drift.
By that, I mean she's been acting as my nutritionist.
She wants my nut to taste better, so she's feeding me pineapples.

>> No.56285421

>>56284176
>>56284532
Dunno why but Choco fits in the "never gets sex" spectrum for me
Her,Reine and Marine can form the femcel alliance

>> No.56285487

>>56285339
I don't understand any of what you just said, but I'm saying that doesn't look much like Choco

>>56285421
>Femcel Alliance
Damn ANOTHER political party!? We really are turning to 90's Eastern Europe with all these governments

>> No.56285511

>>56285421
So... a fic about three girls and their numerous attempts to get fucked?

>> No.56285590

>>56201413
I would love to revisit that "X chuuba dresses as Y chuuba and lets you fuck her because she's in love with you"

I think the original was about Mori dressing as Kiara? but the idea has potential for other girls too

>> No.56285763

>>56285511
That's just making me imagine all of them waiting inside of a windowless white van for any man, woman, or child to fall into the trap they've set outside and grabbing whoever it is into a week-long sex hell.

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>>56285487
>We really are turning to 90's Eastern Europe
Things have never been the same since Holoslavia fell, anon. All vtuber agencies have been privatized, inflation is going through the roof, and gangsters roam the streets to sell black market VODs of streams from the old days...

>> No.56285889

>>56285763
>Be me, walking down the street
>Suddenly, there's a big box held up by a stick
>And below it, there's a beer
>Well shucks, cant say no to a cold one since im a male
>The box falls down and i stay put, like all men do in the dark when startled
>"That seriously worked?"
>"shut it, get the blanket to cover the box and lets move him to the van"

>> No.56286024

If you were reading an abuse fic and horrible, edgy things were happening in it, would second or third person be better? Specifically, would you be more likely to be empathetic with an abusive protagonist if it was third or second person? I'm looking to gather perspectives here.
Second person allows a more intimate look into the thought process of the protag but as an abuse fic, a lot of the thought train comes across as very edgy, angry, and perhaps hard to take seriously. Third person loses that intimacy but might make it easier to empathize.
Assume it's done out of misguided anger or revenge rather than just being torture porn abuse.

>> No.56286313
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>>56285590
Oh hey, I was the one that posted that idea.
The original idea + discussion made it into something like this
>Get into argument with Kiara
>Nearly break up with her
>Then find her wanting to make up, but...
>Something's off about her.
Then the two of you fuck and Mori pulls of the mask while making an impassioned monologue in between kisses.
I think it does have potential with other chuubas but it kind of needs them to have a 'closeness' that makes it feel right. Something like Pekora and Miko or Suisei and Miko.

>> No.56286446

>>56286313
i liked the version where you can clearly tell its Mori on a shitty Kiara cosplay, but you dump your balls in her anyway.
Also it has an strange love triangle aspect to it if Mori is also gunning for Kiara

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>>56201413
Your chuuba secretary finds you way hotter when you look tired and overworked, so she purposely piles on needless tasks to your workload to ensure you get less sleep and remain busy. Could also take the route of your chuuba girlfriend finding you hot when you're tired, so she wakes you up in the middle of the night by "accident" or keeps you up until late on a work night so you get bags under your eyes.

>> No.56287320

/wg/, is the best way to post stories google docs? i can make a new gmail to do a doc if i need to i guess. i'm a novelite who's made some fanfiction because shiori's very heavily into that and she's on a long break. i'll probably end up submitting my story for the writing contest too, because it should be finished by then, but i'm not really sure what the best format is especially because it's a long story.

>> No.56287376

>>56287320
nvm i'm a retard and actually went to the rentry like a functional human being

>> No.56287440

>>56287320
Make sure your formatting doesn't suck.

>> No.56288013

>>56286024
I'm considering this too, though I've commited to first person. Waffling between a named protagonist and keeping it the usual self-insert.
I think people want to self-insert more than they're hesitant of bad stuff happe ing to their self-insert

>> No.56290749

>>56264623
Luna's torture dungeon...

>> No.56290812
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Bae's mom is making me act up. Sadly no one has drawn fanart of her yet

>> No.56291657

>>56290812
Is she the reason Bae is forced to stay in the cuckshed?

>> No.56292219

>>56290812
Did she appear on stream or something?

>> No.56292551

One anon mentioned that the first part of House of Leaves was cute, should I do a ghost hunting fic?

>> No.56292770

>>56292551
In the style of House of Leaves' pre-smut? Yeah, I think that would be cute.
Though genuine question, how the fuck did that fic's smut scenes end up like that? Going by ao3, it's a weirdanon2 fic but like you've written way better smut scenes, multiple times now. How the hell did you fumble it like that?

>> No.56294515

>>56275426
unless the Pekolish is the default in-universe language of your fic it makes sense to appear as a tic

>> No.56294656

>>56287376
Good job. Shiori put the guide on how to publish in the archive for a reason, after all.

>> No.56294797
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56294797

>>56291657
No, that's Papa Rrat.

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>>56292770
idk, I think I was too horny for the advent girls. My main problem is that I write what I consider hot and fill in the gaps with my mind. Hopefully my next 'weird' fic redeems myself a little bit.

>> No.56295722

>>56294797
>"Why won't you die?!?!?!"
>"Hahaha! MATING PRESSES, SON!"

>> No.56295853

>>56286024
I was hoping for more responses by now. Drat.

>>56288013
First-person? Haven't seen too many of those here! I don't self insert so I couldn't say. In my own query though it's the self-insert doing the nasty things to a chuuba.

>> No.56297387

>>56295853
I think I would rather read something like that in third person. I feel like if I know exactly what's going on in Anon's head I'm going to be more judgemental towards him. The more ambiguity the less cringe it'll cause, I imagine. Unless he has a really good reason for beating the chuuba.

>> No.56297438

>>56295853
Being invited to self-insert with an spp while the protagonist is evil is a big turn-off.

>> No.56297616

>>56297387
>Unless he has a really good reason for beating the chuuba.
He really doesn't. He's being deliberately set up as a selfish and misguided in his rage so that the chain can be yanked later when he takes it one step too far and realizes it can't be changed.

You've put into words what I was struggling to. I'm going to go with third person.

>>56297438
Yeah. Being told how you are feeling makes stories harder to get into, especially when said feelings are completely at odds with your own beliefs.

>> No.56297661

>>56297616
I like second person self-inserts, but mainly because I don't want to read about other men fucking the vtubers I like.

>> No.56297731

>>56297661
What about a third-person self insert, like 'Anon'? Or does the nature of being a third party render it impossible for you to impose your essence upon the character, despite the lack of a defining name?

>> No.56297871

>>56297731
The identification is possible, but it's a weird style. Similar to a monarch adressing the person they're speaking to in the third person.

>> No.56297990

>>56297871
The ambiguous name makes the connection fuzzy enough for me that I lack the distaste that comes with having a defined character as the center of attention. I get where you're coming from, though; it's still enough of a label that it remains a grey area.

>> No.56298265

>>56297990
He is correct. But my main concern is that if I buy into his protagonist being me, being addressed in third person is weird.

>> No.56298585

>>56297661
How is second person superior to first person?
Imo, being called (you) feels like I'm being told what to do. Saying I is way more immersive, as if I'm seeing it through their eyes but not necessarily responsible

>> No.56298647

>>56298585
I want to be told that I'm doing something I would love to do rather than having to observe someone else do it.

>> No.56299043

>>56286024
Honestly I don't really have a deeply set opinion on this. I really fucking loved "Lies come to Light" and that is pretty much the best 'evil' second person fic I've read due to how raw everything felt, but I also liked "Brown Black and Blue because I Love You" which while being a limited third person fic centered around the abused one also managed to make some very fucking good scenes of abuse play out.
Honestly go with what feels better to write, due to how the style here is used the second person use preferred here is closer to first person than third person so there's a pretty big difference that's probably worth playing around by writing some scenes and seeing what clicks better with you, the writer.

>> No.56300787

Up you go!

>> No.56301565

>>56235861
please tell down picture

>> No.56301873

>>56235861
It helps that I don't use centimeters for height so when I write I just envision everyone in three boxes of short, normal, and "tall" in relation to the normal height reader insert

>> No.56301906

>>56301873
Who do you write as taller as the reader insert?

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>>56299043
I'm glad you liked brown black and blue. I re-read it and my fucking god I can't believe I wrote something that bleak and depressing lol. I don't remember it being as dark as it was. I'm honestly amazed people enjoyed it and it didn't just make people feel super depressed.

>> No.56302543

>>56235861
Nah, fuck it. I headcanon Lazulight as pretty tall like they should be. Elira is startlingly short and Finana is just a midget.
Companies hate short chuubas for some reason. What's Kiryu's canon height, she's the tallest chuuba around and she's... 5'10. Cool.

>> No.56302592

>>56302086
Oh I mostly enjoyed it for the abuse scenes being really well done in how tense they managed to be.
Everything else was kinda, eh.

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>> No.56304819

>>56302592
Ouch

>> No.56305525

>>56304808
Runa...

>> No.56305560

>>56304808
So this is the Hololive Wrestling Federation's "Mental Matsuri" event, huh...?

>> No.56305817

>>56295722
>STANDING HEEERE I REALIIIZE YOU WERE JUST LIKE MEE TRIED TO MAKE HISTORYYYY

>> No.56305856

>>56304808
I can't believe Luna just fucking died

>> No.56306221
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>>56305817
>ask for Bae's hand in marriage
>only way that'll happen is if you beat her dad...

>BUT WHO'S TO JUUUDGE... FROM RIGHT AND WROOOONG
>WHEN OUR GUARD IS DOWN I THINK WE'LL BOTH AGREEEEE
>THAT VIOOOLENCE BREEDS VIOOOLENCE...
>BUT IN THE EEEEND... IT HAS TO BE THIS WAAAY!

>> No.56306493
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>writing the most chuuni bullshit I've ever written
This is fucking stupid and I love it.

>> No.56306631

>>56306493
Heeell yeah, brother

>> No.56306676

>>56306493
Don't forget to do the title drop when you have the chance.

>> No.56307056

>>56301906
NTA but I switch it up a lot. My anons are all different heights, though most of them are taller than the midgets that are ~150cm.

>> No.56307445
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>>56306221
>Bae's mom rolls her eyes and drags bae into the secret family bunker they built for this very moment
>the battle between you and bae's dad destroys the land around the both of you (with the exception of the family bunker)

>I'VE CARVED MY OWN PAAAAATH YOU FOLLOWED YOUR WRAAATH BUT MAYBE WE'RE BOTH THE SAAAAAAME
>THE WORLD HAS TUUURNED AND SO MANY HAVE BUUUURNED BUT NOBODY IS TO BLAAAAAAME!!!

>> No.56307573

>>56301906
At around Mori, so at around 166cm and 167cm the 5'11" to 6' gap occurs with everyone above that being described as tall enough that their boobs are at head height for the mc.

>> No.56307785

Finish the sentence:
To cum is to ______________.
There are no stupid answers.

>> No.56307798

>>56307785
hope.

>> No.56307884

>>56307445
>Deliver the final blow with the folder containing the marriage documents.
>Tussle with Papa Rrat over it.
>Headbutt him.
>While he's dazed, you take his hand and press his thumb on the spot where he's supposed to put his signature.
>"We're done here... dad."

>> No.56307977

>>56307785
Live

>> No.56308229

>>56307785
It's to cum you stupid fucker
To cum is to cum

>> No.56308237

>>56291657
No, that's her dad who recently called her after she went bungee jumping and pretended he wasnt having a meltdown
>>56292219
Not yet but i find it weird when so many holomem's family already have depictions, like Dadrys
She's pretty much mentioned every 1 or so streams

>> No.56308416 [DELETED] 

>>56307884
>just before you walk away, you feel bae's dad grab your wrist
>he accepts defeat but he looks firmly at you
>"with this act, you too will receive the power that the mating press offers. but know this, one day you too will have a daughter, and you will need to fight to protect your daughter from your daughter--my future grand daughter. you better fight with all your strength, my bloodline will not settle for weaklings..."
>his eyes roll to the back of his skull and he finally passes out

>> No.56308502

>>56307884
>just before you walk away, you feel bae's dad grab your wrist
>he accepts defeat but he looks firmly at you
>"with this act, you too will receive the power that the mating press offers. but know this, one day you too will have a daughter, and you will need to fight to protect your daughter--my future grand daughter from a man she may love. you better fight with all your strength, my bloodline will not settle for weaklings..."
>his eyes roll to the back of his skull and he finally passes out

>> No.56308726

>>56308502
Very kino, anon. This is all going into the ideas list.

>> No.56308961

>>56308726
maybe have a flashback somewhere where Bae's dad was in your position, fighting mama rat's dad for her hand in marriage, and he has a moment where he see's himself in anon

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>>56308961
Like that moment in... RATatouille.

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>>56309054
>how long was it...since I fought like this?
>yes, I remember now...
>about twenty five or so years ago I was the same kid standing before me.
>I can't believe it.
>this little shit is...
>making me enjoy a fight for the first time in ages!

>> No.56309858

>>56309054
That's just making me think both of you have tiny rat pilots on both of your heads that give each other a high five after you reconcile and earn ratdad's approval.

>> No.56309879

>>56309054
>>56309735
>"if you love something...let it go?"
>BOOM
>"HOW DARE YOU? WHO DO YOU THINK LET HER BE FREE??"
>KICK
>"HAVE YOU EVER SEEN YOUR LITTLE GIRL WALK WITH A SMILE AND COMEBACK WITH TEARS?"
>HAYMAKER
>"YOU DONT KNOW THE PAIN OF WATCHING HER STRUGGLE!"
>PUNCH
>"YOU DONT KNOW WHAT'S IT TO SEE HER DRIFT AWAY"
>STOMP
>"DONT YOU DARE TELL ME I DONT LOVE HER"
>LARIAT
>"ALL I DO...IS FOR HER"

>> No.56310299

>>56309879
>gets KICKED
what's going on...
>HAYMAKER
i'm losing...
>PUNCH
is this all my love amounts to...?
>STOMP
I see now...
>LARIOT
if you really love something you...


>Slams his foot on the ground to keep himself from falling
>"i-if...you truely...love something..."
>"you FIGHT WITH EVERYTHING YOU GOT!"

https://youtu.be/h_SxVtf6Nk0?t=124

>RETURNS A PUNCH!
>"WHEN SHE CRIES I'LL BE THERE FOR HER!"
>UPPERCUTS, LAUNCHING BAE'S DAD INTO THE AIR
>"WHEN SHE'S LOST I'LL RETURN HER TO THE RIGHT PATH!"
>LEAPS INTO THE AIR AND GRAPPLES
>"WHEN SHE CAN'T STAND I'LL BE THERE SUPPORT HER! AND MORE IMPORTANTLY!"
>PILEDRIVES BAE'S DAD INTO THE GROUND, CAUSING A MASSIVE CRATER
"WHEN SOMEONE COMES BETWEEN ME AND MY LOVE! I WILL FIGHT WITH ALL MY HEART!!!!!"

>> No.56310448

>>56307573
So I am a short guy in your fics?

>> No.56310526

>>56309858
the mental image of two rats having a human mecha fight is hilarious.

>> No.56310559

>>56310448
No, you're "normal" height. It's just that everyone at or above Mori height gets boosted for fetish reasons.

>> No.56310660
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I feel like Hulking beast Paparat, while cool for chuuni, detracts from the real comedy
and that is him being rat sized but strong to the point that he can lift both his wife and daughter but i dont like the implications of bae's mom fucking a rat

>> No.56310675

Which very short chuuba would be really hot if she was 1,85+ metres tall while keeping her breast size?

>> No.56310740

>>56310675
Bae is the easy answer, since she's a shorstack with killer thighs. Then there's Marine the womanlet
But me? im a pebble guy and i hate when people pretend bijou is a loli

>> No.56310827

>>56279801
It's vaguely associated with Taoism, its invention is credited to a famous onmioh called Abe no Seimei (which I saw some people compare to Merlin), and it is used as a protective symbol

>> No.56310969

>>56310299
Yuuup, this is definitely going into my writing list. I pray my meager talents will do this idea justice.

>> No.56311107

>>56310660
Anon... What if it's a compromise and papa rrat powers up to that like a DBZ character? Call it his Legendary Super Rrat form.

>> No.56311142

>>56309879
>>56310299
>*The shed shakes a bit, Bae looks at her mom*
>"Now you understand why we dont invite grandpa right?"
>*Bae nods*

>> No.56311163

>>56310660
>but i dont like the implications of bae's mom fucking a rat
It reminds me of Gadget

>> No.56311609

>>56310660
>i dont like the implications of bae's mom fucking a rat
Actually thinking about this makes me imagine a fic operating under Murenase! Seton Gakuen rules with all male kemonos literally being the literal animal, while the females are the chuubas we know. Makes me imagine a comedy of having to go diving in a sub in order to get the approval of Chloe's parents or winning a fight with Botan's dad... and by extension winning Botan's mom and aunts.

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>>56310969
god speed anon, you're truly a gift to us all

>> No.56311827

>>56311163
>Gadget
Bugfag's gonna go apeshit if he doesn't know about that already

>> No.56311902

>>56310740
I'm no lolisseur, but Bijou is more like Luna right? A short woman with small mediums

>> No.56311974

>>56311142
>Bae blushing as you scream to the heavens about what you love about her as you counter-attack Paparat

>> No.56311979

>>56311163
>>56311609
>go to visit Fauna's family
>Its a public park with a bunch of trees
>"Here, mom got yousomething you can digest"
>Hands you a bunch of nuts
>Fauna sits on the floor with a blank expression
>"Yes dad, Anon has a job"
>Silence
>"M-Mom! I already told you humans dont have stamens! AND THE PRODUCTION IS NOT SOMETHING YOU CAN ASK!!"
>silence, you eat the nuts. They are a bit plain
>"GRANDMA! IF YOU DONT STOP CALLING ANON A CHLOROPHYLL-LES BALD MONKEY WE ARE LEAVING!"
>A squirrel takes one of your nuts, you just watch it get away
>"HE'S NOT ONE OF THE GOOD ONES! ALL HUMANS ARE GOOD! I FUCKING HATE THIS FAMILY
>She grabs your hand and pulls you away
>Turns back and yell
>"GUESS IM OXYGEN BURNER NOW DAD! LOOK AT YOUR DAUGHTER DATING A HUMMMIE!

>> No.56312067

>>56311902
yeah shes supposed to be a small girl, but chumpedos have new toy syndrome and try to sell her as a loli.
Between that and CGDT spam, they have turned into the worst fanbase in this entire site

>> No.56312246

>>56311979
Fauna is a Kirin who used to be a witch before she usurped the role as Keeper of "Nature" from Princess Nemu (whom she turned into her pet).

>> No.56312344

>>56311979
>can't have a dbz fight with Fauna's tree dad.
>faunanon just gets to listen to a one sided argument with fauna and her family at some public park
makes me wonder how it looks for the other members of council when you seek their parent's blessings

>> No.56312404

>>56312246
Is that real? I know she's a Kirin, but I didn't know about the usurping part.

>> No.56312408

>>56311979
I think it'd be funnier if only half of the family were full on actual trees and the other half are like dryads or something. Would make the full *Tree Silence* gag funnier since the reader would have some context but would still have to make up what her tree dad is saying.

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>>56312344
>seeking parents' blessings
That is gonna be easily five times more complicated when some parents see that the Anon has a harem of multi-race women. He might have to take a more "ask for forgiveness" approach. Some cultures will actually be right on board with the harem, and see it as a sign of a strong and reliable man caring for their daughter.

>> No.56312623

>>56312246
>>56312408
ok lets rework this
>Fauna's dad is a kirin
>Fauna's mom is a dryad (YOU JUST KNOW)
>Fauna's grandma is a tree
>Fauna's grandpa is a extremely racist squirrel
With grandma being the voice of reason, the joke of anon not understanding both that and the furious squeaks can work
But i DEMAND that Oxygen burner remains as a Coal burner joke

>>56312344
Kronii's family is royalty, their great grandfather is the big ben, and Kronii's dad is just an accountant, while her mom is some kind of robotic stopwatch
Mumei's family is just barnowls and a wendigo (uncle larry)

>> No.56312685

>>56312404
It's not treated as an 100% reliable account, but the implication is pretty strong https://youtu.be/Ylwahhz2a_U?t=190

>> No.56312729

>>56312623
>Grandpa is just Ratatoskr
Based

>> No.56312805

>>56312404
Kinda? The Nemu lore video implies Fauna was a witch who tricked the original Keeper of Nature Nemu by way of using her golden apples and whispers in order to seal her... but even in the original stream it was kind of implied that Nemu was embellishing it.

>> No.56312844

>>56312599
oh, my bad, I didn't mean 1 anon has a harem. i meant each member of council with their own anon fiancé

>> No.56312912

>>56312623
>The wendigo comes close, you gulp as it sniffs you
>"ayy what's good my man! come in come in! oh but where are my manners. Im L'ARHG BL'HOG THE RAVAGER OF THE ANCIENTS but you can call me larry! we are family after all"
>"P-pleased to meet you"

>> No.56312986
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>>56312685
I like the idea of Fauna showing off ancient witch knowledge as her interactions with Anon increases. It also allows for a more vindictive side of her to show and makes it more plausible for her to try and steer anon towards being a vengeful protector of nature instead of a person who strives for balance between that and civilization. I could commit to that idea but I wouldn't be sure if the rest of council should also have been people who rose to their own stations, or if Fauna is just a special case. This is fun to think about, thanks for the lead bro.

>> No.56313102
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56313102

>>56312067
Anon she's smaller than Gura and is as childish as Kobo.
At some point you have to accept she's an Oppai Loli.

>> No.56313122

>>56312623
the one I imagined for mumei's parents would be that they both represent midevil civilization.

>mumei's dad looks like any evil preast from any anime ever, think the elder mato from fate/statnight.
>mom looks like a sweet kind hearted woman
>dad kackles evily and everything he says sounds like he's plotting something
>dad is actually insanely nice and loves Anon to death and fully supports you wanting to marry mumei
>it's mom that's the real problem/
>she sets up jigsaw style traps all over the house
>if you trigger one it usually narrowly misses anon and while he tries not to panic mumei and her dad laugh it off as a joke

>> No.56313139
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56313139

>>56312844
Nah I knew what you were going for, I was just chiming in with my own take on receiving the parents' blessings within my own story. Some will be easier to win over than others.
Polka's culture will likely support harems.
Pekomama will endorse it because she got bred by the man herself before her daughter.

>> No.56313304

>>56312986
Mumei is a product of civilization, at least. I imagine she started to awaken once the first cities of Mesopotamia rose.

>> No.56313376

>>56312986
i think only Fauna is an usurper? Bae was literally born from the concept of chaos and was latter contained by Kronii by leap-years
Hell why do people whine about Council Lore? this shit is fun

>> No.56313467

>>56313122
Why as young as medieval? Do you think she inherited being a Guardian of Civilization?

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56313511

>>56313304
Yeah she would likely be the newbie of them all now that you mention it. Which is why she fucks around with it so much.
>>56313376
Yeah I was going to likely keep that the rest are born into their higher being roles. I personally love when I get to include little bits of council in my story. Just you wait till the rat gets her time on stage.

>> No.56313525

>>56313122
>>56313467
Mumei's dad would be Sargon of Akkad. It fits her bloodthirsty nature and is the craddle of civilization
HOWEVER, her uncle is Biggus Dickus

>> No.56313566

>>56312986
I like the idea of "Hakos Baelz" being like Bae's sealed form that represents Chaos as randomness with her unsealed form being her anagram "Khaos Blaze" representing Chaos in the Greek sense.
Maybe she's like a mix of it, she was born to it but she rose up to make it Chaos as randomness rather than as destruction.

>> No.56313620

>>56313376
>Hell why do people whine about Council Lore?
Because it's way more chuuni and complex than previous hololive lore, and can seem too vague and disconnected to be engaging. But the poor presentation of it (from the trailers to Omega shoehorning himself in) certainly didn't help.

>> No.56313708

>>56313511
In terms of age it'd be Bae > Kronii =or> Sana > Fauna > Mumei, I imagine.

>> No.56313733

>>56313467
had the mental image that her family would represent different eras of civilization to fit the theme.

grandparents would be prehistoric civilization

>> No.56313849

>>56313620
>way more chuuni
point taken
>Can seem too vague and disconnected
oh boy, i sure love the angel school which is different from the demon school but there's also a sheep? and a dragon yakuza and then the princess.
All Vtuber lore barely hangs by a thread, which is why they end up being grouped up by design. Miko is supposed to be a normal shrine maiden but she shows up in yamato fantasy as this reimu-like character
>Omega
oh piss off. That account that NO ONE knows whats about, no one understands if they were a producer or manager and that tweeted like three times had nothing to do, you are just mindbroken

>> No.56313888

show me your word count if you dare

>> No.56313901

>>56313733
>Mumei is your uncle literally just Caesar?
>Excuse me that's GAIUS...JULIUS....CAESAR to you

>> No.56313910

>>56313376
>Hell why do people whine about Council Lore?
It was very poorly presented and laid out. There's a reason Advent and by extension HoloX's lore was better received since Council is just way too out there. Like yeah it can be fun to make shit up for both fic and worldbuilding purposes but if you notice it only gets fun once the concept is grounded by other stuff and they aren't just vague godly avatars (that are also streamers). Their initial presentation didn't really have that, and also felt like it fucking powercreeped the entire hololive cast... Even in retrospect it was kind dumb to be pissed about this.

>> No.56313923
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56313923

>>56313102
>barely any tits
>oppai loli

>> No.56313941
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>>56313708
Yeah I think I can vibe with that. I can't wait to write more of my space lady friend soon.
>>56313620
Vague if you're not a writer I guess. Or perhaps, vague enough that it appeals to us.
>>56313566
That's the general idea I had with her once she starts coming more into things. Her chaos is going to be a mix of randomness, and pure destruction. She will likely have moods where she is yearning for some chaotic destruction, and while she interacts with others, the randomness of her power manifests to make things more fun for her.

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56313980

>>56313923
Hey she's at least a bounce ball level 2.

>> No.56313987

>>56313376
Omega probably ruined it for some people
I personally liked it, but it did feel pushed when it got played at the beginning of each debut, and then again when they did their first collab
In terms of legitimacy of roles, Kronii and Sana were probably born/created by the Gods at the dawn of the universe
Fauna's age also implies she didn't usurp Nemu, I took it that it was simply Nemu being salty over being captured and turned into Fauna's pet, and having a grandiose self-view, or perhaps Nemu hijacked the title first and Fauna had to trick her to get it back.
Mumei wasn't created by the Gods if I remember correctly, she simply arose from humanity as the same type of being as the Council.

>> No.56314039

>>56313910
while i agree on the powercreep scale, i think the concepts as pretty easy to follow and blend with the streamers perfectly
The only one from council who doesnt "fullfill" the fantasy is Kronii and that's because time is a hard concept to blend in streams. The rest fits perfectly, with Bae being a wild card, Mumei being unsettling but also aloof and Fauna being a soft spoken vegan that sometimes goes in a rampage

>> No.56314172

>Luna brings you back to her place
>the foreplay quickly starts ramping up
>you lie her down on the bed and slide down her stomach
>pull aside her panties and begin with a few gentle licks while maintaining eye contact
>she clearly starts to enjoy it
>"nnnn"
>you speed up
>"naaa naaa naaa"
>you can tell she's getting close so you start your final move
>bury yourself so deep in her crotch she can't even see your face
>"Naa?"
>she starts looking around the room, confused
>"Where did Anon go?"
>spring your head back up suddenly
>"PEAK A BOO!"
>she cums

>> No.56314213

>>56313849
>oh boy, i sure love the angel school which is different from the demon school but there's also a sheep? and a dragon yakuza and then the princess.
Not necessarily just disconnected from each other - also disconnected from what we're familiar with, to the chuuba's content, or their personality. Watame's design and personality are much more sheep-y than Kronii's are Warden of Time-y, if you get what I'm saying.
>oh piss off. That account that NO ONE knows whats about, no one understands if they were a producer or manager and that tweeted like three times had nothing to do, you are just mindbroken
I'm not dunking on Omega as a vtweeter or manager, I'm dunking on how his reveal had zero follow-up. Omega was quite prominently revealed in the finale of Council's post-debut collab - and all that followed was the twitter account you mentioned. There was so much speculation and hype among lorefags around this new deity and what it meant for Council, but there was zero follow-up with Omega - the deluge of lore from the first teasers to the debuts just dried up suddenly without resolution, and the Council girls were clearly not very into building on their lore either.

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>>56314172
Christ why are you giving me even MORE good ideas for Luna sex when her arc is so far away. In the same vein though.
>remember to incorporate confetti, endless panties, spray bottles, and of course, honking around during sex with Polka

>> No.56314497

HoloJourneys being (almost) completely smut-free for so many pages at the moment but having dozens of wild sex scenes upcoming gives me the best kind of whiplash.

>> No.56314557

>>56314213
I remember when people thought Omega would debut as the hidden 6th member of Council. Good times

>> No.56314611

>>56314497
It really is bringing to mind an old post from here around the first anniversary about how any series that long will eventually consume itself in smut.

>> No.56314728

>>56314557
im glad he didn't debut. it seems like he blew his load too quickly thinking he'd be EN's A-chan

>> No.56314810

>>56314611
It makes sense in the usual contexts, at least. If you're going to write about a group of compatible people, some of them starting a relationship or at least having sex is natural in stories.

>> No.56314978

>>56314213
>and the Council girls were clearly not very into building on their lore either.
Yeah the only ones that seemed to like playing into their lore was Sana and Fauna, and Kronii still occasionally does her narcissistic thing. Bae likes the rat and chaos themes, and Mumei might do stuff? But none of that really built upon the lore in meaningful ways.
>>56314728
The real problem was that Omega didn't actually debut, so they never made a rapport with the community, whether it would have worked or not. It's possible they could have become the EN A-chan, but they put in effort in some areas and like nothing in others.
And we have an EN A-chan now, it's just A-chan speaking English.

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>>56313888
Fucking Christ I'm running outta time to get this done for the contest

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>>56314497
Summer of smut and the fact that anon finally got his first taste of sex is having this first batch come through like a hurricane. I also really strive for what >>56314810 mentions. The natural buildup to the sex is part of the fun for me. I like giving each of the girls their own special thing with Anon that will grow more overtime.

>> No.56316136

>>56315851
What are the upcoming chapters like?

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>>56313888
If every scene I have planned ends up being this long, I may end up splitting this thing into parts.

>> No.56316443

>>56316136
In what sense? Smut? Non smut?

>> No.56316487

>>56316443
Yeah and the chubbas featured if you want to say

>> No.56316855

Is Selen bully here? are you alive buddy?

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>>56315851
AAAAAAAHHHHHH FUREA-SAN PLEASE TAKE MY VIRGINITY

>> No.56317159
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>>56316487
I'm just gonna assume you meant smutty chapters, so here's a list of what I'd like to write within this current arc
>Flare, her fluffy date is coming up, which I might make a 2 parter, the first being the date itself for maximum fluff, and then the next will be the building waking sex they'll have as their sexual tension finally has a true outlet after all this time
>Dinner date with Nene, more fluff with my favorite unga bunga. Might hold off on full penetration and make their next experience oral based.
>Lion gang date marathon, easily a collection of fluffy interactions with each girl trying their hardest to win the approval, and D of anon. Probably gonna work in mud wrestling with Botan, and her later giving anon "the look".
Listing them out, that should PROBABLY be enough for this arc, I want to space the sex itself out a little more.

>> No.56317999

>>56316855
Scope went crazy. Slowly working on it along with other stuff. It's a little dark desu, which is demotivating, but I'm still outputting pages every couple of days, so eventually it will be finished.

>> No.56319312

>>56313923
What's her canonical size? She seems similar to 2023 Anya.

>> No.56322268

>>56317999
>Scope went crazy
You love to see it. Take your time brother

>> No.56323611

>>56322268
Thank you for your understanding.
I think you're going to enjoy it when it's finished. It's pretty legendary stuff I'vegot in there. Please look forward to it.

>> No.56324384

What happened to that anon who said he was going to take benadry?

>> No.56325919
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>>56313888
It took me a bit to break through a few scenes, but I'm finally back in a stride.

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>> No.56327346

>>56327257
>Your cum goes here, Towa's gonna be our surrogate
>Ignore her screaming, she knew what she was signing up for

>> No.56327768

>>56327346
>But Bitan, that's a boy...

>> No.56327992
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>>56327768
A very feminine boy

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>>56327346
>Why can't I just cum in both of you?

>> No.56330178

>>56329673
>Dry womb = no eggs
>Fresh demon pussy = constantly ovulating

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56330310

>>56330178
>Does this look like a woman who is dry to you?

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>>56313888
It's coming along splendidly. What I'm trying to decided now is if I should divide it into two chapters. If it's one, it'll easily hit 25-30 pages.

>> No.56331507

>>56313849
The hell are you getting heated for? Is it THAT important that everyone appreciate council lore? What does it matter if we do or don’t? Seems like an overreaction.

>> No.56331894
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56331894

What do you think of Maple Leaf's comedy stories he sometimes adds to his clips? Is he one of you guys?
https://www.youtube.com/@MapleLeafTranslations

>> No.56332302

>>56331894
What's a story of his that reminded you of works here?

>> No.56332483

>>56330310
god imagine the sex that would happen after she looked at you like that

>> No.56332649
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56332649

>>56332483
I already have, and it's going to be written.

>> No.56333129
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>>56332649
Well consider my interest piqued

>> No.56333237

>>56332302
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNB-RAKP1dI
This is one of my favourites. High-tier shitpost material.

>> No.56334456
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56334456

>>56313888
It is almost done.

>> No.56336963

>>56333237
Not the guy you're responding to but I think that was literally the first fanfic I ever read. Absolutely perfect.

>> No.56336997

>>56334456
>Animachi
Anon...

>> No.56337310

>>56336997
Anon here is Suisei's brother, so I decided on 'Animachi' rather than 'Anemachi.' You know, because Aniki instead of Ane/Aneki
Unless I'm having a biggo retardo moment here

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>>56333129
I can't wait to showcase this predatory power bottom in action. I'm also noting to do that power reversal thing Botan apparently is into.

>> No.56339974
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56339974

>realized I didn't do enough to have Pekomama deliberate about cheating on her husband with an underage boy
>time to insert a whole other 500 words or so earlier in the story
writing believable taboo smut is hard gdi

>> No.56340916

>>56337310
No, you’re correct.

>> No.56341327

>>56339974
See this is why having the shota be sadistic just makes it all flow together faster.

>> No.56341486
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56341486

>>56341327
I REFUSE
Pekomama will have sex with an INNOCENT shota who LOVES HER A LOT and is just VERY, VERY AROUSED
BECAUSE PEKOMAMA DESERVES IT

>> No.56341817
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56341817

>>56341486
That's the spirit lad! Never compromise on your vision! Do the work to make it come true the way your heart knows it was meant to.
Pekomama deserves so many nice things.
Like a dashing human to breed her out of a years long dry spell, thus ending her depression. To be treated like a young princess on her wedding night. She also deserves to watch her only daughter come into adulthood under the care of a gentle but studly young man.

>> No.56342887

>>56341817
Hear, hear!

>> No.56343290

How do I shoehorn males into my plot? I don't really have a place for them, but I want them to be there.

>> No.56343671

>>56343290
I would say if they don't really add anything to the plot, then don't.
But if you really REALLY want them, then you could give them cameo appearances. Describe what they look like, but leave them unnamed and/or make it so that your characters are unfamiliar with them.

>> No.56343763
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>>56343290
So are you trying to create some dude characters for interaction? It seems pretty self explanatory. How did you put your chuubas into the plot? It's just like with any other character.

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>> No.56351787

>>56341486
How much of his arm fits into her?

>> No.56352005
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56352005

>>56351787
NO

>> No.56352174

>>56201413
breast and ass expansion featuring Anya and Bijou, while Gura seethes in the corner

>> No.56353077
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56353077

>>56201413
The Texas Chain Saw Massacre, but instead of murderous psychopaths, it's a bunch of hags desperate for sex. (You) are one of their victims that must escape.
>Botan hunts down victims with her tranquilizer rifle, and is an expert at laying traps to hold down unsuspecting men
>Lui specializes in hearing - she can hear clumsy men around the property, and close in on them with her hawk-like reflexes
>Fubuki's sense of smell helps her find even the cleanest of oji-sans and shotas. Beware her claws, which she'll use to tear off your pants.
>Marine, AKA Boxerface, with hunt you down with a Chainsaw specially designed to rip through wood, steel, and clothing. Try to outrun her at your own peril.
>Ehhh let's have Suisei in there too. She's not really in it for the sex, though she likes hunting down shotas

>> No.56354472

>>56343290
We need more details Anon. For what purpose do you want to bring males into the story? What do you mean by shoehorn?
Anon? ANOOOOON!

>> No.56354482

>>56352005
Shame, I think it'd be cute for her to encourage.

>> No.56355332

>>56343290
The same way you shoehorn in any character. You look at your setting, see who you can conceivably fit in as a cameo then put them in for a scene or two.

>> No.56355364

>>56341817
I can totally see Pekomama asking to get princess carried, like she used to be when she was younger, after seeing Anon carry her daughter.
If Anon's strong enough he could even carry mother and daughter at the same time, if Pekomama holds her daughter tight in her arms.

>> No.56356050

Someone should probably get baking

>> No.56356508

>>56356050
On it

>> No.56357075
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56357075

>>56356508 (me)
>>56356658
New bread

>> No.56359422

>>56357075
Mel is a cute.

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