/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

Story recap! There... was one story posted in the last thread.

Suisei Greentext: tags: short, greentext, Suisei:>>48624163

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Kaela serially harassing you for your wood(penis):>>48565607

Sex and breeding your chuuba wife in the kitchen preferably the hag one:>>48565700

lofi getting mad at you because you didn't realize you were having sex with a robot lofi instead of the real her.:>>48568488

Cheating on your girlfriend with Okayu:>>48588131

Hi there, anons! I was thinking it might be fun to have threadly prompts with a 'word of the thread'. We'll give you guys a few words as inspiration. Use them to create anything from poems to greentexts, to full-on stories – just make sure it somehow relates to chuubas.

The word for the thread is, fittingly enough, "beginning".
Alternatives are "uppity" and "hate".

It's totally up to you whether or not you want to go with the prompt – we won't force anyone. That said, using these words will make it easier for everyone else in the thread to compare and contrast different interpretations of the words and discuss works with each other. Plus, who knows? You might surprise yourself with what you come up with!
So have fun creating! Don't forget that we're all here for good times, so try your best and be respectful towards one another. Reply directly to this post if you came up with a poem or greentext; for anything longer than that, please use the Story Anchor.

>>48625603
Beginning a scatological relationship with your choice of chuuba in an effort to spice up your relationship and realizing you adore the taste of her shit in your mouth.

>>48625981
I'm not a scatman myself, but if that's your jam, anon, then why not? Make it a greentext or something.
You could say it would be a... shit-post. ba-dum
(gets fucking shot)

>>48625603
I might join in on this if a particular word strikes a chord in me. Beginning is too basic for me though, and I think I already have enough WIPs.

>>48625603
What a shit idea. Neat in theory, but in reality your just going to be causing a lot of new prompts to spam the thread which will all be ignored because writers are too focused on themselves.

>>48626352
>writers are too focused on themselves
This, writers should be focusing on writing prompts to prevent the thread from dying instead of bitching about how theres no new blood.

>>48626277
No problem, anon! Thanks for chiming in. Wanting to wait for the perfect word is totally understandable. But if something strikes your fancy, maybe you can crank out some flash fiction. Might be a good bedrock for a future fic! Also, good luck on the WIPs.
>>48626352
I think I shoulda phrased it then as 'Use them to create anything from poems to greentexts, to full-on stories – just make sure it somehow relates to chuubas and is not a prompt (we already have a prompt anchor for that)'.
The point is to help anons jumpstart writing (unless they're already working on WIPs), so ideally the responses ought to be poems, greentexts or full stories. Any sort of literary output
But yeah, thanks for the opinion, anon! Since we're just getting started, there's still some kinks to work out. If there's anything else we can do improve this idea, I'm all ears.

>>48625603
Suisei was beginning to understand why some people did this. She stabbed, and stabbed, though her victim lay limp as a rag, covered in their warm blood, their entrails spilling out. Suisei wanted more. This feeling, it was exhilarating. She got up, then walked on over to the mirror.

"What a mess." She muttered, wondering just how she would clean all of this up. Suisei then looked back to the corpse on the ground, and smiled. "Pekora... Thank you."

With those words, she stepped out of the room, blood-covered as she was. The staff gave her weird looks, some gasped, others screamed in shock. But none of them ever stopped her. She just walked right out.

Miko was standing outside. An idea came to her head as she smirked mischievously. The comet sneaked up behind the shrine maiden, covering her eyes with her hands. "Guess who?" Suisei said.

"Miko hates this sort of thing nye. A-Also, why are you hands so wet?" She asked cluelessly. Suisei couldn't help but chuckle.

"You still haven't answered, you know?" The comet whispered in her ear. Miko shivered to her words.

"S-Sui-Chan."

"Pin-pon! Correct!" Suisei took her hands off of her, then gave the pink maiden a hug from behind. Miko chuckled awkwardly, wondering what was making Suisei act so uppity, but she was still wondering why her face felt wet and smelled weird. Then, as she looked down, she noticed something strange.

>>48626654
Whoops, accidentally hit send. Oh well, that's good enough.

>>48626352
>a lot of new prompts to spam
Don't you mean shorter fics and greentexts? It's effectively meant to be the thread prompt.

>>48626654
>more psycho suisei
Why even write about her. You would know shes got a personality if you watched her streams instead of just clips.

>>48627045
Hm?

>>48627045
>watched her streams instead of just clips.
You answered your own question, people write about japanese chuubas when they don't even know japanese and only watch clips. Of course they're going to believe clips are all there is to her.

>>48626654
I'm curious as to what might be going on in Suisei's head when she realizes that she has a thing for killing. It could be kind of like a 'Black Swan' sort of thing where she's in a rut over what song to make... so starts making songs based on her murders. One song = One dead chuuba
Other than that, I like the prose. When she covered Migo's eyes with those blood-covered hands, I felt that

>>48627077
Do you not understand english? Just google translate my post into indonesian

>>48627224
C'mon, I didn't write that expecting anyone to answer and you know it. If you put in effort to reply to everyone, you're going to come off as too positive and just burn yourself. I just wanted to try the prompts as dialogue practice.

>>48627212
Its so sad writers here are so obsessed with being japanese that they refuse to watch chuubas in the only language they understand.

>>48627285
>you're going to come off as too positive and just burn yourself.
Hey anon, no worries - I'm doing just fine. I just happened to still be around and thought I'd give my two cents. Thanks for the concern, though. I understand that I won't always be here and all that, so I thought I ought to get things started.
So yeah, let's just chill and see how things play out.

*nom nom nom* ... Burgir!

>>48627359
No wonder the thread is dying when people write about chuubas nobody understands, not even themselves.

>>48626654
I have to echo what this anon says >>48627045 the prose and dialogue is solid enough but psycho Suisei is so overplayed in fanworks that making it feel fresh is going to take a some real creativity.

>>48627599
Yummy borgar

I've been wanting to get back on the writing wagon so to speak and was considering doing a dramatization of Bae's most recent Valentine's stream as a quick one, but I'm having doubts. Is that something you guys think would be worthwhile or meaningful? I'm having a hard time shaking the feeling that I wouldn't be altering it in any meaningful way or that I'm just plagiarizing Bae's work.

>>48628896
Who cares. If you want to write it then write it.

>>48628896
The karaoke date? I think it’d be cute so long as it’s not just a 1-to-1 copy of the stream. We could always use more Bae fluff.

>>48628896
Honestly if you have fun writing it I don't think it's really wrong to do it. Yeah it's derivative but we're all making fanfiction here, an adaptation into prose isn't a bad place to make a fic from.

>>48625309
American Psycho but Patrick Bateman is Suisei.

>>48625603
"Uppity" is a very specific word, a bit more difficult to use with a prompt methinks. Like...
"Luna gets uppity after defeating you in a one vs one race in Mario Kart. It's up to you to bring her back down to Earth - with your hand meeting her ass."

I think the prompt of the thread post needs to get reworded for when it gets posted to the next thread.
We've had two people thinking it's 'make a prompt based off of one of these three words' when I'm pretty sure the intent is 'make a fic about chuubas based off of one or more of the words given'.

>>48632023
A fic would be awesome, but I'd be happy with some short snippets or fun greentexts.

>>48632023
Why bother, it's just going to get ignored anyway whether it's a prompt greentext or short fic.

>>48632023
Oh yeah, definitely; I'll have it reworded to make sure that nobody posts prompts and puts those in the prompt anchor

>>48628896
Go for it.

>>48611206
The fuck are you making??

>>48634954
4k isn't that much

>>48636527
He said it was 4k out of 60k before he could get to what he wanted, so I'm curious. That's a lot.

>>48636635
Nvm then

So what are you working on writing today anons?
My heads been consumed by outlining this idea I had before going to bed and I've been trying my damndest to see if I can actually make a fic out of this and not just have it be held up by planning and worldbuilding that goes nowhere.

>>48639275
If that's a problem for you you should really just come up with the major plot points and start writing immediately. World building is a waste of time, you can do it while writing.

>>48639275
>what are you working on
(You) are about to go shopping with Towa.
>Spoiler
I've been workshopping a particular story in my head for over a year now, slowly building up the world, characters and events that would take place. I don't know if I'll ever launch it due to how big the idea is, but it's fun to do regardless. If it never happens, there's no harm done, but if I do decide to start writing it then I already have a good outline of what will happen.

>>48639275
Waiting for the new HoloAlt Comic to come out to try and work on something set in that Magic Academy.

>>48639275
Trying to get a handle on how to write a character I haven’t tried before. It’s proving tricky.

>>48639275
Trying to finish up this current chapter and start editing today. Had some hard stuff to deal with unrelated to writing, so I'm trying to get back into the swing of things.
>Spoiler below is kinda a downer.
Had to put down our oldest cat yesterday. She was with my wife for all 17 years of her life, and I've known her for 11. It was clearly her time, but that didn't make it any easier. I'm trying to deal with the grief by throwing myself back into my story, so we'll see how that goes.

>>48640836
Who?

>>48640166
Yeah honestly I probably should just jump in and start writing the fic using the generic vaguely european fantasy battle school setting rather than trying to worldbuild up something that's going to take a dozen chapters to show off if I wanted to reveal it organically. The vague idea I started the outline out of was basically
>You are a student in a battle school that's having a contest for (insert fancy title here)'s hand in marriage
>You had managed to crawl your way to the top and secure your place as the top duelist.
>Unfortunately for you, the girl that was promised was Miko and after meeting her you have regrets about being first.
>Now your only hope is in getting out of a marriage with Miko is to somehow find a way to lose against Mysterious Transfer Student Suisei and get her to be at the top instead.

>>48641292
Pekomama

>>48625309
(You) confess to Foobs but she insists on remaining friends, soon after you meet Suisei and hit it off rather well. Feeling unpleasant emotions welling up inside her, can Foobs get you back and will Suisei even allow something like that?

>>48641843
Aw hell naw. You don't get to friendzone someone and then decide you want to be more the second someone else might be swoocing in. I've literally had this happen to me a couple times and it only did well to reveal the girl's true nature.

>>48641530
...Whatcha writin' there, Anon?

>>48641530
Is someone actually taking a shot at making a pekoyakodon fic?

>>48642159
The long-overdue CH finale.
>>48642280
…Not yet.

>>48642383
>Involves meeting fucking Pekomama
Oh Jesus Christ. Godspeed.

>>48639275
Taking your pet Haachama for a walk

>>48642099
ultimately, whether she succeeds or not is up to the author, but I just think reverse rape and manipulation would be neat

>>48642527
Did she get her shots? She might be rabid

>>48640836
>>48641530
Based on the few times we’ve seen her on Pekora’s stream, she seems to enjoy teasing her daughter.

>>48628931
>>48628963
>>48629732
>>48633571
I see. Guess I was overthinking things. Thanks fellas.

>>48643492
Oh there’s going to be plenty of that, believe you me.

>>48643918
After all she just has to say one word to make her daughter cringe half to death... peko

>>48642591
They had three nurses to hold her down when she got her shots

>>48642527
This but Haachama is a pig girl.

I have a weird obsession on compiling Holoship headcanon, mostly hetero, but some weird homo included. No this is not based on reality, and I delayed my pain meds for maximum schizo euphoria
> Kiara and Mori is on-off bisexual, though Kiara is too traumatized for dick.
> Reine is hardcore L with mixed success
> Marine keep getting laid with women but really want a dick for once
> Kobo and Ragus really become siblings. They tried kissing once and then vomited.
> Shu and Petra, on the other hand, fucked and hides the fact
> Axel and Zeta had "more than friends, less than lover" bullshit around them
> Gura and Mumei really are separated twins and Gura didn't stream because she got trapped in a Soap Opera plot
> Kronii and Vesper had one unhinged sex and hadn't the courage to get another, still get along as friends
> Bae is actually straight but kept getting molested by other girls
> FBK platonically love Oga but don't want to fuck him
> Risu fucked Oga but think they're just friends
> Oga loved Risu but wanted FBK as a friend
> Kanata is confused why everyone else is a shade of Yabai
> Suisei kept getting her prey stolen by a big-boobed impostor, a St. Louis cosplayer

>>48645568
What the fuck is a Ragus?

>>48643918
God I wish Holofantasy got cute little plushes like that

>>48645714
It's Kobo's petname for Altare

>>48645568
Anon, seek help immediately.

>>48645568
You're legitimately insane. Like >>48647819 said, seek help.

>>48645568
You're legitimately insane. Please write some fanfiction for our archive.

What's the working title for your most recent WIP?

Mines Blood Moridian but I promise you it's serious

>>48625309
Kobo hits the Yoinky Sploinky

>>48655952
Kobo would never hit the Yoinky Sploinky

>>48657445
Let her do it in fiction at least...

>>48657445
>OOOOOH YEAAAAH

does Mathewanon still write here?

>>48658929
who cares

>>48658929
He says he's stuck in WIP hell >>48293831

>>48659205
nrhd
>>48659178
I do, I need to read something like Exposure therapy to feel good inside

>>48659322
there's more than a thousand stories in the archive, stop sucking one guy's dick and read something else

Marine's treasure box makes me too horny. The day they all turn to JAV can't come soon enough...

>>48660293
I NEED Matsuri to masturbate on cam. God, I hope she ends up doing that kind of """ASMR""" some of the others are doing.

>>48627359
>>48627636
/wg/ was doomed as soon as EN started phoning it in. The kind of loon who writes fanfic is exactly the sort of hardcore fan they’ve been pushing away.

I guess that goes for most EN chuubas nowadays but it’s particularly noticeable for HoloEN because early /wg/ was 90% Myth fics.

>>48661417
>early /wg/ was 90% Myth fics
this is why we don't need "new blood"

One order of coconut rice. Keep the change

>>48661417
Back when there wasn't a weird elitism about writing for EN. Ah, the good 'ol days.

>>48625309
Setting is feudal Japan. After your older brother Ping Pong was poisoned by (probably) an enemy, you are now the clan leader, your clan of course is small with little influence. In order to not get wiped out, you will need to either defeat similarly small clans or form political marriages to increase your influence. Polygamy is not unusual and neighboring clan heads are somehow all beautiful girls that can either be seduced by Anon's chiseled body oozing masculinity or be conquered and forcefully taken.

>>48662871
I never really liked EN, not that I hate them or anything, but even I wrote quite a few EN stories myself. Honestly, in diversity of character and lore, EN has JP beat.

This reeks of a desperate ploy to get more EN fics.

>>48663078
Not him, but I think we need a second renaissance of EN fics. The release of EN3 could help in that regard, but even one or two good Myth/Council fics could do it

>>48663298
Eh, debatable. I think Myth/Council have already been explored well enough as a concept. There are plenty of JPs who could use a little more attention, even if they are, in terms of lore explorability, lower than EN. HoloX also added some nice concepts, namely finally having a proper potion brewer/alchemist instead of Shion being the do all, for example. I do hope EN3 keeps the tones and adds more beings of great power with big implications to lore.

>do a count of the number of scenes planned in the outline of my excel spreadsheet
>69
It's destiny... an auspicious number indeed.

>>48663904
I wanna squeeze Millie's head like a stressball

>>48663521
That's why I've been experimenting with ENxHoloX stuff, so at least there's a 'best of both words' thing to it.
As for EN3, I hope they do a better job of telling the talents how to play their roles according to lore. From what I saw, Omega essentially vagueposted Council and hoped they would catch on to the lore somehow

>>48664047
I mean, none of them really play their characters according to lore. Even Luna has already dropped most of it, and she was the shining beacon of not breaking character. The almighty wagahai didn't last long but while she did, it was a good job. That's about it. You can just spin their lore however you want, because the talents themselves, while they'll use it here and there for a gag or two, Don particularly stick to it at all.

>>48664047
If you can't figure out all of a vtubers lore by looking at their name and model they have too much of it.

>>48664008
I wanna tousle her hair. She seems like a girl who would enjoy being fluffed.

>>48666327
>the talents themselves, while they'll use it here and there for a gag or two, Don particularly stick to it at all.
Honestly that's why I've always been of the opinion that vtubing should take at least a few notes from wrestling. Though ideally they ought to perform in a mix of both kayfabe and their own personalities, of course
>>48666547
That's... surprisingly accurate.

>>48667884
Eh, you can't really keep up a character like that if you're streaming. Like if it was still the era of videos the yeah you could absolutely have that kind of lore stuff hell it was the integration of pre-edited videos and acting that made haachama's schizo arc so good since the majority of it got built up via the stream atmosphere intersecting with the pre-edited videos she put up on stream..

Quick question, how is the overlap between this thread and vtwbg?

>>48669075
There is no overlap whatsoever, so go back.

>>48669075
I would agree that there's little overlap. I think vtwbg is more centered around the fanbase of a certain oshi, while /wg/ is centered around the chuubas themselves. The only point of connection between the two generals is that they're both focused on making fan content

>>48669075
Effectively none. We have a guy that says he's a rep for us over there but he hasn't come back here ever except maybe to shill his thread. About a year ago one of them tried putting their works up here but everyone ignored them.
There's effectively no overlap anyway, /vtwbg/ barely has the chuubas themselves in whatever they write for their autistic lore while we write fanfics about chuubas.

>>48668837
Man, I'm waiting for a time when vtubers will pump out both streaming and video content. Though I imagine that would just double the work on their end. Would still be kino though

>>48669892
Watame already does it (did it? I haven't been recommended girigiri warukunai in a long time)

>>48670343
>checks it out
>isreal
Welp, looks like I'm gonna have something to watch for my Japanese immersion class after all. Thanks, anon

>>48663298
I'd say it depends but honestly all it takes is one good fic to change everything. That's pretty much been the only solid rule thats been consistent when it comes to what direction the thread takes.

>>48670554
They're all very good and also have subtitles.

>>48670635
>takes the time and effort to have her videos translated and subtitled for English speakers
fucking kino. I shall watch the sheep

>>48669892
some girls are jumping into it, Watame and now Bae for example.
overall im fine with just streams if they dont have a good idea for a video, which is how i like my yt content, but if they do have a good one i'd be down to watch that content

>>48669892
Try Legend of Polka. I’ve watched almost every episode and while not all the episodes are super entertaining, they’re quite enjoyable if you are a clussy connoisseur.

>>48669892
>>48671227 (me)
And PolDen has English subtitles too.

>>48671281
Well, that's another video series I'll be binging then, Thanks, anon
but seriously Legend of Polka had subtitles??? call me an idiot but what the heck

>>48625309
Your kouhai Zeta catches you doing something gross. She has evidence and uses it to blackmail you. She makes you do more and more embarrassing, degenerate things. She trains you do be the perfect masochistic pig slave.

>>48668837
Makes me miss Ai. Pre-recorded videos were a lot easier to digest due to a restricted format that still portrayed the character in a way that didn't involve sifting through a several hour long VOD for what could have been compressed down.

>>48672153
What's her personality?

If you have a small dick, Ollie may just be the gal you need!
https://streamable.com/mlt3dv

>>48675912
No thanks

>>48677850
Why? Is it because of the maggots? Or just because you're a fag?

>>48675912
>Ollie's pussy is purple inside
Noted.

whoever is the anon behind the koyori match-making story, hat's off to you

>>48678764
Hat's off to all the thread's writers, new blood and veterans alike!

>>48680209
Hear, hear!

>>48675912
Just watched this. Nearly spat out my drink
>>48625309
Explaining to Ollie that, yes, they're that big.
>"Huh?? Seriously anon?! I thought they were 8 centimeters or something!"
>You tell her that they even grow bigger if you get hard.
>"I refuse! I refuse to believe that's the case!"
>Suddenly, she begins tugging at your pants.
>"Ollie, what the--? Woman, what the fuck are you doing?!"
>"Pull these pants down, anon! Stop struggling; I need to see it for myself!"

>>48675015
She seems like just a cute dork at first glance, but she has a hidden S side and loves to tease people.

>>48675912
Ecchi writers please make an Ollie fic.

>>48682784
I hate that, as busy as this outfit is, I really want to fuck her wearing it. Like, that lollipop. I want to cum in her mouth while that's in there too. Just jerk off in there.

>>48675912
>>48683027
I'm planning to write an Ollie cock shock fic. But I have to finish my WIP first.

>>48625309

I want to see an ordinarily perfectly straight-laced and stable chuuba slowly derail into madness. I want to see of it affects their work, their life, their relationships.

>>48685214
NEED an unmedicated schizo bitch

>>48685214
Anon, that's just the normal arc of the vtuber life.

>>48686682

Maybe schizo, maybe not. Maybe they're just overworked, and their mind eventually fractures under the strain of the constant abuse. Maybe they start taking medication, and it triggers some latent schizophrenic gene. Maybe they end up with a brain tumor, and their mind goes haywire as a result. The sky's the limit.

>>48639275
I got three more pages in.

Everybody here needs to kill themselves

>>48639275
>Fledgling reaper Mori finds a bounty hunting cowboys soul after a particularly cruel and brutal death, and feels bad enough about what happened to him to bring him back from the dead
>Only ever meets him when he dies again, finds him cool and charming so she resurrects him time and time again
>Becomes so smitten she ventures into the land of the living to meet him in person
>Finds out he probably deserved every death she saved him from
Can't decide if I want her to take responsibility and not resurrect him after he gets betrayed by his gang trying to get a payday, or to stick by him and become complicit to the awful things that he does.

>>48639275
Still the same fic. Today I managed to crank out a scene I had a hard time writing a multiverse sequence. Tomorrow, I'm going to write the corresponding action scene.
But I'm not good at writing action scenes, so I'll have to see how it goes

>deleted
lol

>>48691417
>deleted
Like your life should be

>>48692017
u mad bro?

>>48689497
Damn, it's like the Mysterious Stranger perk in New Vegas but cooler.
If I were you, I would have her be complicit, just because I like "bad" endings where everything doesn't go back to the status quo

Honestly sounds like a great taken on Mori and a good use of her lore/interests

>>48693538
Yeah, I'm leaning more towards that too. I love the idea of a fucked up power couple, and I plan on her dealing with it for a little bit regardless, so I think there's plenty of room to develop why she'd stick by him

>>48625309
Shion getting raped but in like a fantasy setting.

>>48695983
literally 'credit where it's due'

>>48696014
Not really the kind of fantasy world rape I was looking for. I kind of wanted something more lowbrow/basic.

>>48696014
I wish that story would get continued...

>>48689497
This concept almost feels like a corruption fic. I hope you can nail the buildup and foreshadowing for this then, cause it seems like the 'money shot' for this will be the moment when it becomes clear to Mori that the cowboy wasn't actually as cool and virtuous as he seemed to be.

>>48675912
Imagine being the guy with a 24cm dick showing up to Ollie when she thinks 13-15cm is huge.

Which is better? A break when dialogue ends as well as when it begins (1), or a break only at the beginning of dialogue (2)?
e.g
1.
"That's great," she said.

"I don't think so," you replied, shaking your head.

She proceeded to sit on your face. Though you weren't sure what to do next, you let instincts take over. Outside, a man was being murdered by a murder of crows. The bed began to creak.

"Very nice," she commented.

OR

2.
"That's great," she said.

"I don't think so," you replied, shaking your head. She proceeded to sit on your face. Though you weren't sure what to do next, you let instincts take over. Outside, a man was being murdered by a murder of crows. The bed began to creak.

"Very nice," she commented.

>>48700671
2

>>48700671
The second one, though I would change the “She proceeded to sit on your face” sentence to keep you as the subject of the paragraph. “As she sat on your face, the soft feel of her ass pressed down on you” or something like that. “You could faintly hear the screams of a man being murdered outside.”

>>48700671
2 but with the modifications from >>48700862 having dialogue get split like in 1 just looks worse but the way the combined paragraph is presented in 2 doesn't have a good flow to it due to the changing subjects, so it still needs some changes.

>>48625271
HoloJourneys: (Across Deserts to the Oceans Blue, A Shining Star Debuts) Chapter 28: A Day Softer Than Cotton

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRyDBkFPPs70IeOPiF-_e4Ltgju4Bx8E5JInH0J16UqzgEAThxqiPRl-3JFHBVgDh0xBHzfyiQDkFwt/pub

(Watame, Flare, Polka, Nene, Pomu, Lui, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Fluff)

Time for something with copious amount of fluff. Before embarking on the next part of the adventure, let's have a nice date with our favorite sheep. This chapter has been a massive treat for myself, and I had a lot of fun writing it. It's kinda a doozy length wise, but I feel like a lot of my bridging chapters tend to get that way. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it and I am always happy to read through some feedback.

>>48700703
Danke
>>48700862
>>48701348
That's only an example piece of dialogue for this question specifically. It's not from any of my stories. Thanks though, I always need reminding of show don't tell.

>>48625309
one of the more menhera chuubas suspects that you might be having an affair and she is furious,just who do (You) think you are? She will make sure you know to whom you belong.

>>48701850
It's here!

>>48683027
So would Ollie be fully cold in all the spots that matter? Or because she somehow is able to walk around, talk etc, that her other bits work just enough so that it's not a horrific and dull experience?

>>48704781
Put zombie in very hot water for 20 minutes before penetration.

>>48704781
Depends on the taste of what You, the writer finds hot honestly. There's enough info to argue on both sides of the debate so just go with whatever produces hotter scenes.

>>48705161
Okay that's an interesting angle. It keeps the lore of her actual body chemistry intact but also lets you do the deed without making it the worst lay you've ever had.

>>48704781
It's magic isn't it? I'm assuming she's still slightly warm. She sweats, right?

>>48704781
I would say she's more of a magic zombie, or a Frankenstein's monster, so everything works

>>48705448
Magic is probably the best handwave explanation for any mutually exclusive Ollie facts since it simultaneously accommodates the whole no blood, head can casually fall off thing with fact that she can get tired/has a pulse.

>>48705644
not him, so would it be accurate to say that Ollie is somewhat of a lich?

>>48705644
Magic can also work. It could work as a pleasant surprise since you can go into it thinking it's gonna suck, but Ollie is just too forward for you to refuse. Then her body just kinda works down there, and then you both go to town.

>>48705708
Does she have a phylactery she regenerates at if she dies?

>>48707317
>Does she have a phylactery
I said 'somewhat' of a lich, though that is a good question. Maybe anon ends up fucking Ollie so good that her body falls apart and he has to carry her body parts all the way back to her house for revival
>"Anon! Wh-Where are you putting me?" she asks as you start stuffing her limbs into a bag.
>"This duffle bag's all I got so keep quiet, ok?"
>"What if someone sees the my hands and stuff inside the bag?"
>"They won't, okay?"
>Almost as quickly as you said that, your dad walks into the room.
>"Hey, son! Howd'ya doing? Packing up for a trip, I see!"
>"Uhh... yeah!" you say as you hide Ollie's head behind your back so dad wouldn't see it. "Yeah, it's a... bit of a road trip, yeah."
>"Looks like you're packing a lot of stuff for a road trip," he says as he reaches toward the bag, unzipping it.
>"Wait, dad, DON'T--"
>Too late. Your father had unzipped the bag, revealing its ghastly contents.
>Surprisingly, though, he's not as shocked as you thought he would be. Instead, he has a sort of neutral expression on his face.
>"Son," he began. "How long have you been doing this?"
>Should you... you tell him about your relationship with Ollie? You wanted to tell your parents about it when you felt like you were ready. This was just so abrupt, but... "Um... three months."
>"Three months, huh? I see," he says, before nodding to himself. "How many times?"
>Wait, he's asking about your sexual history just after finding out? Really? "Um... I guess we did it more than a dozen times already, I guess."
>Again, your father, who you always thought was a jolly and excitable guy, nodded sagely. As if there was a problem to solve, and he had a solution. "A dozen bodies, huh?"
>Wait what?
>"Okay, son, here's what we're going to do," your dad says. "A friend of mine has some hydrofluoric acid. We can use it to get rid of these limbs."
>"Wait, dad, no, that wasn't what I was talking about--"
>"Son, let me finish," he says, now with a stern tone. "You point me to where those other bodies are, and we'll get rid of them too. Afterward, you're going to learn Spanish, okay? I'm sending you to Argentina for a few years--"
>Suddenly, you feel Ollie's head jump out of your hands. It lands on the floor just between you and your dad.
>"Mister Anon's father, sir! Your son is not a serial killer!" she cries. "We just had sex!"
>Your father's eyes widen as terror distorts the rest of his face. "AAAAAAGGGHH!"

>>48705283
You gotta lean into the necrophiliac descriptors for undead sex. If it's just effectively a normal warm human, then there's no spice to it.

>>48700671
There isn't a solid answer for this. A break after dialogue sort of gives the impression that the following passage is separate, while narration immediately following dialogue implies the passage is an addition.

In example (2), is it a stylistic choice to have everything use a gerund? It feels at odds with the dialogue when everything is about to happen or is happening. If it's not, then maybe shifting things around to more active words would clear up the distinction about the break.

>>48708681
If anybody ever writes a Reimu smut fic, they better describe a red spankmark on her big pale ass

>>48709755
Isn't reimu a ghost though? Or can she go full poltergeist and interact with anything including people? Just might be hard to spank her if your hand goes right through her.

>>48708681
Oh yeah, isn't she a ghost?

>>48709919
You're a sexorcist who uses a ritual to make her corporeal long enough to sate her pent-up horniness and let her pass on

>>48710076
I really like the idea of the later. Gives a fresh meaning to one and done.

>>48710076
Is there any lesbomancy involved?

>>48625309
Hololive Council but instead of them being the wardens of aspects of the universe they're your trashy British renters.

>>48712250
>Sanner gets evicted

>>48712250
This has potential, but I'd go tenants of the house where you're the landlord.
>kronii: lazy, unmotivated to do any chores, constantly dragging her feet
>fauna: nothing ostensibly wrong, but gives off weird culty vibes; turns super passive-aggressive when around the time of the monthly barbecue
>irys: gambling addict, constantly late on rent and thinks she can get off with a pretty smile
>baelz: party girl, constant loud music, always dragging home random guys who you find half-dressed cooking eggs at 9:30 am on a saturday; pays her rent on time though
>mumei: quiet introverted e-girl; ostensibly nice and a good tenant; you kinda suspect she murdered her last boyfriend
>sana: the previous landlady who left to go start a gold digging operation in australia; let out a sigh of relief as she handed you the keys and ran to her car as fast as possible

>>48712250
Is there sex?

>>48711662
Making (you) female or (you) have a female assistant who keeps Reimu occupied while you recover could work

I don't even watch Council, and yet I had a gachikoi dream with Kronii. My brain is just shooting in random directions at this point and seeing what hits...

>>48713658
How else do you think they pay the rent?

>>48708137
A good start that could work with a little patching up.
Speaking of patching up, I think part of Ollie's physical appeal is is her patchwork Frankenstein body. This greentext does a good job in highlighting the creative possibilities. When it comes to raw smut, the advantage that Frankensteins have over other undead is deatchability, which could make for some funny scenarios in an actual sex scene.
When it comes to Ollie herself, I think a big part of her appeal is her rich bitch personality.
I don't know how you would combine the two, but I bet any attempt would be hilarious

>>48716620
I didnt even know Ollie had a rich bitch personality.

Times like these I wish I could find Ollie sexy. She’s the only member of ID that I DON’T want to fuck senseless.

>>48717931
7 out of 8 is a pretty good quota, at least

>>48717931
Moona - 9.8
Risu - 9.6
Reine - 9.5
Iofi - 9.2
Anya - 9.0
Kaela - 8.6
Kobo - 8.4
Ollie - 8.0
Zeta - ???

Ollie may be the lowest ranking in ID for me but that doesn't mean I'm not going to smash that overtly loud talking dumb zombie

>>48718300
You haven't watched Zeta yet? Her aquatic animal tier list stream with Mumei was awesome!

>>48717806
Ollie's too sweet for rich bitch, spoiled sweet maybe

>>48718675
Kinda, but then what do you call it? Bratty? Trashy?
She's the type of girl that will throw down with other girls over you

Anon and the 3 IDs

Show Ollie your dick
>she absolutely freaks out about your massive 6 incher
>won't fuck you
Show Risu your dick
>she laughs at your pathetic six incher
>won't fuck you
Show Moona your dick
>she is OK with your normal six incher
>have lots of sloppy chubby moon sex

>>48717931
She makes up for her weird appearance with her personality.
https://youtu.be/6Qk5BeLI06A
https://youtu.be/ZrqVUWjoZJg
https://youtu.be/FUAX5uljNLE

>>48718805
>she laughs at your pathetic six incher
Risu's preferred size is 15cm

>>48718913
I don't have the clip but I definitely remember seeing one of her saying 17-21cm is best.

>>48718913
>>48719178
17-20cm is her bare minimum.
https://streamable.com/ggmgyo
https://streamable.com/nzxtpw
https://streamable.com/mlxxbv
https://files.catbox.moe/w9xx7u.mp4

>>48719239
Risu must schlick to typehatena doujins or something

>>48719239
I made it bros.

>>48719239
>Making Risu cum with your 16.9cm cock and throwing her entire life into disarray as she can't believe what's happened

>>48722922
Trick her with a cheat ruler before revealing the truth, to show that it's just a placebo effect.

>>48724649
And poke holes in your condom so she's also pregnant

While I'm at it, here's my archive of ID being lood

https://streamable.com/73dexe Iofi's size preference
https://streamable.com/snt3cc Risu telling you to jerk off
https://files.catbox.moe/onks0i.mp4 Ollie pickup line
https://streamable.com/2hecgt Risu likes to play with toys
https://streamable.com/1tneth Iofi likes to ride
https://streamable.com/a1ztoz Risu 69
https://files.catbox.moe/fth5q2.mp4 Ollie has special request for you
https://files.catbox.moe/ujluk5.mp4 Ollie has special request for you pt.2
https://streamable.com/z1og48 Iofi wants to take you to her home so she can show you something in private

>>48709491
Shouldn’t it be consistent? I feel like editors will lose their shit if you constantly switch between two formats.

>>48719239
>Average penis size of Indonesian men is 11.67 centimetres
She’s going to have to settle.

>>48726009
Why would she need to settle for an average man?

>>48725689
It's not a binary choice, it depends on what you write. If you're inconsistent in application, sure, but the core of it really comes down to style and prose. One way or the other isn't wrong, but it is your responsibility as an author to manage your audience's reading speed to the service of your own pacing, and this choice sort of stems from that line of thought.

>>48726009
It's okay, she can just marry me instead of a small indo.

I'd settle for Ollie, I'd settle for Matsuri, I'd settle for any of them. Just please, god, oh please, give me a chuuba girlfriend before I die...

>>48729261
Go groom an indie

>>48729369
I did and she graduated after being mindbroken by a fan with a cock twice as big as mine

>>48729549
Who?

>>48729549
You picked the wrong indie, try another

>>48730520
No, after that I'm done. I'm never allowing myself to love an indie again. I already suffer enough being an unicorn for Hololive members. Being an unicorn for indies is... true suffering.

>>48729549
Just become a cuck and it's a win win

>>48715461
What was your dream about anon?
Having lewd dreams about chuubas you don't even watch is always weird. I remember having a dream about dating Mito, I barely remember what happened there other than the fact that it somehow ended with me showering with Fubuki before I woke up.

>>48729549
I'm going to use your tragedy in a fic.
Thanks!

>>48715461
>don't watch Subaru
>several dreams involving cuddling her or holding hands
>Oshi nowhere to be seen
YAGOO's mean dream machine is zeroed in on me and I'm not sure why

>>48716620
Oh yeah, imagine having to haul her cum-filled torso across the state line, sweating like a madman while avoiding the cops. Plus points if anon inadvertently has shit on him that screams 'serial killer' like a dark hoodie (he's wearing it because he's cold), a van (it's his parents; had to use it on short notice), and glasses (cause, y'know, anon's eyes are just bad)

>>48726009
I almost feel bad for them.

>>48733040
Well, dreams are nonsensical, but the general concept was that I was in a very intimate, Discord-like call with Kronii and two other friends of her who didn't really have a name or recognizable voice, playing, at first Elden Ring, then Elden Ring mario kart style game later on. Kronii was very comfortable with me and was fine with sharing any details about her day to day life. It was quite comfy. She did admit that she had a daughter though, so it's not entirely a gachikoi dream, more like close friends with Kronii dream. It got really frustrating midway through because my mind refused to let me continue in their call. I fell from a cliff while fighting a boss with them, and from that moment on, I didn't manage to stay in their call, and everytime they started a Elden Ring mario kart match without me I couldn't hear their voices anymore, I could only talk with them through text in my frustration. Coincidentally, they were talking about were they lived in that moment. Maybe my brain just got tired of emulating Kronii's voice and personality, or maybe, since I don't know where they were from, my brain kicked me out of the convo as an excuse. Who knows.

>>48737459
>No scrubs allowed in hololive dream calls
Well that explains it.

>>48737832
I-I was trying a new build. It's not my fault battlemages are so weak early game.

>>48738798
Should have focused on building your relationship with Kronii. Could have got some nice oyakodon down the line but noooooo

>>48729261
>give me a chuuba girlfriend before I die...
You're not going to get them wasting your time here.

>>48701850
It’s absolutely criminal that you never get more than one post as a response. If it makes you feel any better, I enjoyed it.

>>48715461
Yeah dreaming about Kiara one time just casually spending time talking about many thing with her in friendly manner then I got first row seat watching her having lesbian sex with reine

>>48715461
Have you tried finishing any of your wip, or do you start new ones and then bitch about it here? Just want to know if I should even sympathize with you.

>>48742500
Huh?

>>48625309
a story where after many years of being married to suisei, you two grow distant, with signs of her having an affair. Your suspicions are eating away at you, but you are hesitant to confirm them, after all, if you turn out to be right, this marriage that you spent your best years on will be over.

>>48742300
>It’s absolutely criminal that you never get more than one post as a response
I remember it being somewhat popular in the beginning, but then he added Pomu and it died afterwards.

>>48742962
>fic is titled HoloJourneys
>Adds nijisanji characters
Doesn’t shock me that it died.

>>48742300
>It’s absolutely criminal that you never get more than one post as a response
Nobody here reads any fic, it is known.

>>48742300
> enjoyed it.
Stopped reading there

>>48744034
Huh?

>>48744034
>stopped reading at the end of the post
Do you normally hallucinate more text for yourself to read?

>>48744203
>?
stopped reading there

>>48744034
>>48744271
You're annoying

>>48744331
Compared to the inorganic nijisanji whining, this is benign.

>>48744530
What whining?

>>48744530
You might be in the wrong thread, anon, there is no nijisanji whining

>>48703138
I swear, the prompts are becoming very derivative at this point.

>>48707317
>Does she have a phylactery she regenerates at if she dies?
Anon, she's a zombie, not a lich, why would she ever have a phylactery?

>>48742300
That's kind of you to say, thanks for that and the read! It's all about the enjoyment of the game for me. I do this for my hags and the story they're a part of. If other people find some fun in reading it, whether they say anything about it or not, is a great bonus. I'm glad to know a few people at least are along for this wild ride I've created.

>>48747043
That's good to know, I'm more baffled by the fact that you're pretty much the only writer with any consistent release but no one cares.

>>48747043
If it makes you feel any better, I read your story but never comment on them.

>>48747739
I can’t speak for anyone else, but it’s in my backlog for now. I haven’t even gotten caught up on HF yet, and I’d rather finish one massive fantasy story before I get started on a new one.

>>48701850
I forgot to review the last chapter so I'll tell you my thoughts on it now.

I love the downtime in between arcs, simply talking to the gang and meeting new strangers is pretty neat, I thought it was a bit silly that anon was telling Lui about the group's previous experiences but then I realized that if I had one of the physical embodiments of hag sex getting me drunk I'd spill the beans too. I was a bit disappointed that she didn't take us back to her room and turn Anon's pelvis into dust before lettkng him go back to the girls but I understand that this happen later, right? The ending was cute as well, tucking watame and flare in bed was neat and I do love me some clussy so I'm glad the cuddle session with Polka was a thing. I'll try and review this chapter before the thread gets archived especially since it'll be a long read

>>48625309
Who would do this to Aqua?

>>48748818
Do what? Explain what you want.

>>48747739
>>48747776
>>48748334
>>48748412
Stop giving him pity (you), it’s sad to see.

>>48749033
>>48749165
Huh?

>>48748818
Me. If not me than Matsuri probably.

>>48748818
Closest to this is Suisei but I don't think she'd do this even at her worst.

>>48747739
My start was rocky to say the least, and I just kinda never stopped writing. Before I knew it, this story had become over 10 chapters. I also know that long chapters of a primarily fantasy story is not everyone's bag who likes to read fanfiction. Also, all stories here have people like >>48747776 which is cool. You can't expect everyone who reads something to have a comment they want to share about it. I totally respect that aspect since I've done a share of that myself.
>>48748412
>taking the virgin anon back to her run and riding him until the mattress breaks
You don't take over the world by putting all your cards out on the table during the opening play. Lui has her plans for the unsuspecting hero. Thanks for the review and the kind words. I also love writing the downtime and just normal day to day stuff that happens while on an adventure. It's a delightful change of pace after a big action packed segment. Now that I've opened the fennec up in a sense, I seem to be unable to resist writing more fluff with her. God I love that clown. Don't rush yourself to review the next chapter. Just like with writing, you need to do reading at your own enjoyable pace. If it's not fun, why bother?

>>48749403
Suisei has too much confidence in herself to stoop to threats of suicide.

>>48749810
Given what’s written about her here, she would murder people on a whim.

>>48749874
Murder people for a whiff of her brothers cock maybe

>>48750012
Do you even watch streams or know anything about her? She doesn’t have a brother.

>>48750361
>The man is unaware

>>48749554
>Just like with writing, you need to do reading at your own enjoyable pace. If it's not fun, why bother?
That's a good mindset to have.

>>48724955
>Ollie pickup line is basically "If you were a family member I'd rape you"
Hot, but like wtf

>>48749554
>if it's not fun, why bother
Reggie, please, why are you writing v-tuber fanfiction

>>48751893
Yes, and?

>>48749554
Just finished it, here we go.

Anon and sana are such baka gaijin's while talking about suzy and how clearly pissed she probably is about not being so unique. New spell is cool, don't think I'll be able to say the entire thing though. The date with Watame was cute, very soft and cuddly, a small part of my stomach kept hurting the smaller Anon's wallet got, unfortunately for Watame my heart yearns for another blonde and her sexy coffee legs. Lui telling us about the next area was nice, love the little extra tidbits about the pirates there, Marine's gonna show up right? I do wonder what Lui's plotting though. Thanks for the chapter, was a nice read before I head to bed

>>48750361
No and no

>>48748818
I don't understand what you're trying to imply

>>48743957
I read fics.

>>48729261
Having a chuuba girlfriend sounds like some cuck shit given that she’s going to focus on strangers than you.

>>48755705
Isn't that called having a non-monogamous open relationship? If that's what the other anon wants, who are we to judge?

>>48755979
>This is what watching online entertainers does to a person

>>48749554
>I just kinda never stopped writing
Kind of hard not to notice given that you wrote 28 chapters, which makes your fanfiction the longest currently written fics right now

>>48755705
I think it'd feel amazing to watch her streams with the knowledge that you're actually the one getting to fuck her. If I had a chuuba girlfriend I'd be "Yeah, me" posting about her potential relationships on /vt/ and feel schadenfreude about all the anons that are parasocial for her giving her money

>>48757104
>I think it'd feel amazing to watch her streams with the knowledge that you're actually the one getting to fuck her
You and everyone who gives her donations

>>48756616
Let's be real, no woman earning 6 figures will date anyone that browses /vt/. So he can talk all he likes.

>>48747043
Your stories is about hags?

>>48758068
I mean...have you looked at the cast of characters?

>>48748818
>Who would do this to Aqua?
Anyone who you want to write about.

>>48758244
No, which is why I’m asking in the first place.

>>48747043
I'm a bit shy so I only post the HoloJourneys memes instead of giving a lot of feedback, sorry. I really like the story though!

>>48758298
He has Pomu as a character, anon. That should tell you it's hag oriented.

>>48758362
Pomu isn’t a hag though.

>>48758361
>shy
Cute

>>48758298
Have you tried looking at the cast of characters?

>>48758068
Anon the first two characters that got roped into the party were Watame and Flare.

>>48758456
4 months off, close enough

>>48758881
No, she’s just an office lady

>>48758712
Hold up, since when is Flare a hag now?

>>48759366
Since always.

>>48759393
I thought she was viewed as an older Onee-chan figure like Noel

>>48759445
Noel is a hag as well.

>>48759393
>>48759454
Is everyone a fucking hag now? The fuck

>>48759551
They’re not getting any younger, anon. Even Pekora is well on her way to haghood.

>>48759445
>>48759551
Hag just means 30+ years old (though vtubers who act "young" like Luna are usually not talked about as such).

>>48759454
No, not yet but she's getting close.

>>48759596
But she acts like a hag

>>48759793
That’s because she’s a bitter woman who needs to get laid.

>>48759570
>>48759577
Then why do people here always talk about the same hags over and over again?

>>48760241
Some hags are more haggy than others!

>>48760241
Mio does things to a man.

>>48760350
I want to give Mio a third daughter so badly bros...

>>48760241
Maybe those are the only hags they know?

>>48760241
Some just have more hag appeal than others.

>>48760241
They like them, not that hard to understand.

>>48760991
I’ll never understand the appeal of hags, since they can’t have children anymore.

>>48761856
The appeal is that you're not sure if they can have children anymore, but you choose to believe that your seed can still save them from a childless life.

>>48761960
>The appeal is that you're not sure if they can have children anymore
They can’t, Anon, since they hit menopause.

>>48761856
You don’t have to have hit menopause to be a hag.

>>48762021
Most holohags are under 40 still.

>>48641530
I need it

>>48758881
Ill take it

New thread
>>48762351

>>48726635
Would it be fine to have both styles in the same story then? Or even the same segment of a story?

>>48625603
>Doing all of this when you can simply make a interesting prompt, or even write a short fic
Why do you retards always try to reinvent the wheel.

>>48742300
Anon, it's very difficult to keep up with this story. Regardless of how good or bad people think it is, you have to read about ten thousand plus words every week to be up to date. Few people have that much time.

>>48762649
He expects others to do the work and not him, I’ve seen it many times.

>>48762558
>both styles in the same story then?
It depends but as long as you can make it read well then it should work though
>Or even the same segment of a story?
You probably should have it be in separate segments or chapters unless you're deliberately using/playing around with it for effect.

test