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This is the writing thread, for all of your fanfiction needs and desires. Check the archives below for everything the thread has put out so far, ranging from SFW to NSFW, fluff to tragedy, small literary works and shitposts alike!

Collective works so far are available in the archive:
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

>Isn't this just you fuckers writing fanfiction, eh?
Yes.

Previous thread:>>41222401

>> No.41292128
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Story anchor.
Post 'em if you got 'em

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Do you have a story you'd like to see written? Reply to this post with it! Try to be as clear and concise as possible; the better you describe your idea, the more likely it is to be picked up!

Consider forwarding your prompt to the prompt archive to keep your idea safe and alive forever! No information is gathered - it's all completely anonymous. Use the form below:
https://docs.google.com/forms/d/e/1FAIpQLScgcr8y7I9NUta22Ni0gFvS51veG5_7XjJrVD1BvJqDtX5_sQ/viewform

Curious to see the prompt archive? Check it out here if you need a little more inspiration!
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/u/3/d/e/2PACX-1vR5ZggiHWXX_WSqCC5bvPR2QeLFGNMTjlgk6MuxmoVdRUIepkJa7PUlJAQ5RzHkZM_hhthLLXjab9Dt/pubhtml?gid=1162270883&single=true

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Story recap! There... were no stories posted in the last thread.

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Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

(You) are transported to The Lands Between with your oshi, and the only way back to the real world is to claim all the Great Runes and become the new Elden Lord!:>>41224038

Giving Towa banana a shake:>>41234538

After losing all of the Guild's money to Kronii in Monopoly, Vesper and Magni have to think of a way to make the lost cash back fast, or else the Guild Hall will be auctioned off and Altaire will kick both their fucking asses next week:>>41236297

Getting seduced by Mori after she gets turned into a pink fox.:>>41268882

I would like to order one (1) Coco sex and breeding please.:>>41285611

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>>41292110
>you will never be in a situation where Mumei murders people in front of you
You think she tortured them before killing them? Or is she professional about it.

>> No.41293907
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>>41292110
Such a shitty ending.

>> No.41294203

Noel's a whore.

>> No.41294270

>>41292110
If only you made this thread 2 weeks ago...

>> No.41296749
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A question for the writers here, do you write in 2nd person because of this thread or have you always wrote in that perspective?

>> No.41296953

>>41296749
For this thread. The last time I wrote before /wg/ was back in high school.

>> No.41297072

>>41296749
Only started 2nd person because of this thread. I used to write in 3rd person when writing danganronpa fics

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>>41296749
For the thread, but it's not like I have any preference, and second person definitely works best for these types of stories. I have, though, been delving into a little more third person lately with switching perspectives.

>> No.41297163

>>41292110
Yea that tracks for Mumei distressingly well.

>>41296749
I can't do 2nd person at all. So I keep going 3rd

>> No.41297275

>>41296749
>A question for the writers here
Which clearly doesn't include you.

>> No.41297311

>>41296749
For the thread.

>> No.41297392

are there any good kronmei doujins on dynasty?

>> No.41297764

>>41296749
2nd person is great to write in for atmosphere, but I always found it a pain to write in for anything longer than a novella. You can only write 'You' so much until it becomes grating.
At least with third person, you can switch the names around, and with first person you can always just start the sentence with another character instead of 'I'.

>> No.41299299

>>41296749
For the thread. Previously I wrote stuff in 3rd person. It was a little janky to start with, but I actually really like this perspective now.

>> No.41302456

>>41297392
Wrong place?

>> No.41302543

>>41296749
I wrote a little bit in second person because of Homestuck

>> No.41302681
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>>41292153
Choco really wants you to impregnate her

>> No.41304277

>>41296749
For the thread, but my 2nd person is mostly 1st person referring to itself as "You"

>> No.41304602

>>41296749
It's probably because as an ESL writing in second person was initially much easier to manage as far as keeping track of who is doing what in text versus third person where you have to think more carefully about how to properly chain the story's flow together so the reader doesn't get lost.

Like >>41297764 said though it becomes pretty jarring when like 10% of your wordcount is either "you" or "your". But it's still more comfortable for me so I keep doing it.

>> No.41305826

>>41292110
kino

>> No.41307644
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I wish the anon writing first summer memories would come back.

>> No.41308433

>>41246593
>>41247488
Theres very little power bottom content isn't there? A Brat's Punishment is the classic that kind of fits but apart from that only Hedonist's Reckoning comes to my mind.

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>>41308433
You want a power bottom? I'll give you one! Eventually. Name me some of the most likely power bottoms besides Botan.

>> No.41308743

>>41308703
Marine is quite the powerbottom, maybe flare too

>> No.41308980

>>41308703
Suisei, Matsuri, Haachama, Marine, Flare, Nene, Polka, Kiara, Risu

>> No.41309344

>>41308703
Sora...
I can kind of see her fitting the mold once you get past the initial barrier to her heart. By which I mean I can see her pushing you to be rougher and fuck with more oomph once you get her to accept sex.

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>>41296749
I write in second person because a decade of TTRPG's have made it the way im most comfortable with. I've written in third person once for a fic, but I wasn't feeling it all that much.

>> No.41311934

>>41307644
He's not dead?

>> No.41311937

>>41296749
This thread, although I did write a second-person story as a final for a CW class I took back in college. It was pretty popular and well-received among my class IIRC.

>>41308743
>>41308980
I feel like Marine wants to be a power-bottom but is too much of an M to keep it up.

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>>41308980
>Flare, Nene, Polka, Suisei
This list, I like it a lot. I'll keep that in mind.

>> No.41312602

>>41292153
Kronii using Mori as a breeding sow.

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Word Count. Post it.

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>>41314698
For today: 0, dealing with too much car insurance bullshit, but hopefully just gonna get it all done today.
Current chapter that I started this week: 6444
I told myself I wouldn't let the day end without writing some more, so that's how it's gonna be.

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>>41314698
>I know, ill write a small thing to get back into the swing of things.
>haven't touched it in a week.
Father forgive me, for I have been busy playing gacha games.

>> No.41315127

>>41292153
Towa making you cum bucket's by blowing smoke on your dick after she's edged you for over 20 hours.

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>>41314698
Just missing a round of editing

>> No.41315949

>>41315127
The thought of this both disgusts and delights me.

>> No.41316045
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>>41296749
For you.

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>>41314698
To answer my own question. I kinda over did it to set up just an action scene but I'm happy with it so it stays.

>>41314917
Good luck HJAnon!

>>41315056
Well, as long as your rolls were good! They were good...right?

>>41315439
Based Kurochad

>> No.41318188

>>41311934
I think he’s very dead.

>> No.41318839

>>41317932
>Well, as long as your rolls were good! They were good...right?
Well I did get both Swimsuit Nonomi and Wakamo in BA without breaking the bank, but I've mostly been reading through Olympus in FGO and Fixed Point in GFL. Both are on a timer so I've been using my free time on them.
The writing is pretty good in them

I really outta just finish my wip though. I'm basically at the climax and have at most like 6 pages left.

>> No.41319844

What's a good illness / medical issue that could land someone weak in the hospital but doesn't take a long time to cure?

>> No.41319901

>>41319844
A high fever

>> No.41320210

>>41319844
spider/snake bite

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>>41314698
Didn't add much but did some editing and I'm satisfied with first 4000. I think 3 more scenes and this should be done.

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>>41317932
Thanks bro! Best of luck to you too!

>> No.41320817

>>41314698
88.9k words/198 pages after I chopped off 3082 words/7 pages. I've been too distracted these past two days to do more.

>> No.41321047

>>41319844
Cunny deficiency.

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>>41320817
You won't stay that far ahead of me forever! I'll reach your level of skill one day, but for now, I'll kneel.

>> No.41321488

>>41319844
Depends on "how long" is. Something like Fatigue/Anemia can be "cured" in a day max. A minor surgery like getting your appendix removed could last about 2-4 days.

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>>41293907
>open a clip to see what the fuss is about
>the titular Gundam is zooming around separating into different pieces to magically avoid attacks, then joining back together like a transformer
>scene cuts to some hideous groid straight out of a DnD 5e cover art hooting and hollering at the spectacle on a tablet

>change to the big meme scene
>it's some faggot whining at the protagonist over killing a uniformed enemy combatant that was about to open fire

Yeah, not watching this, /m/ was right to sperg out. Series doesn't even have the saving grace of a Sawano OST this time around.

>> No.41321919

>>41320468
There's something off about this polka.

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>>41321919
Looks like a cute hag dressed like a clown to me, Anon.

>> No.41322576

>>41308980
>>41308703
Okayu

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>>41321919
I don't know what you're talking about. She looks just fine to me.

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>>41322149
This man's Polka drawings sold me on the fennec and the way she's looking at me here makes me want to throatfuck her consensually one more time.

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>>41321606
The silver lining is that it validated my concern of Ichiro Okouchi writing for another anime.
I remember during the leadup to the Witch from Mercury people were saying that it was a good thing a write from Code Geass was working on it. Apparently, those people have never watched Code Geass.

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>>41323362
Hos artstyle really does give her the 'cute, but mentally ill so she's dangerous' aura that works for Polka

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>>41323362
Why not double your fun?

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>>41314698
still touching up a few scenes. I hope to get the first chapter out by Sunday

>> No.41324940

>>41323987
I'm always in love with this guy's style for eyes.

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>>41314698
This is after I trashed another 8k words for the rewrite so yeah, at least I'm back to that level
I can assure you 90% of it is unfiltered shit

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>>41314698
I got pretty burned out from writing two 10k drafts of this story that just weren't shaping out the way I want to this past weekend, because I was trying to force it to be a series. I'll get back to it in full tomorrow, but maybe I'll put in a few hours today, and I think I'll leave it as a lengthy oneshot because I got another idea for a story that works as a much better as a series.

>> No.41327417

>>41326766
Is that a Bae NTR fic I spy?

>> No.41327543

>>41327417
Yandere Bae.
Which is much harder to write than it looks because Bae is too sweet and caring to be a typical yandere.

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>>41324265
>>41315439
If these are what I think they are, Kurobros gonna be eating good again soon! Give it your all you two.

>> No.41328132

>>41327601
still a little nervous, but soon kuro bro I'll roll my fic out

>> No.41328516

>>41328132
Don't worry, I'll read it and give you positive attention when it's out.

>> No.41329037

>>41324204
I will, when I get to it. But not with Hurea but a certain coyote.

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How niche is too niche? Would you get filtered by fics that include fetishes like guro necro vore or anything like that?

>> No.41329589

>>41329507
Would I get filtered? Yes. I think there's some people who like that stuff around here

>> No.41329854

>>41329507
We've got a lot of pussies who wouldn't read stuff like that round here

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>>41329589
Understandable

>>41329854
Maybe you'd like it

>> No.41330741

>>41329507
I'd read anything out of academic interest, at least. Honestly I'm more likely to pick up something like that for the feeling of freshness than I am my 80000th generic abuse or fluff fic

>> No.41330816

>>41329507
Honestly I'd probably give it a shot if it's not also chuuba yuri/yaoi, for some reason that just makes me lose all interest if it's a shipping fic.

>> No.41331619

>>41314698
This week: 0 so far.
Today especially I'm incessantly nervous because I'm signing up for the Holofes gaijin lottery so if I end up getting picked, I have 8 weeks to prep for a trip to Japan.
Also fuck the IRS.

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>>41292153
Please, anything with Gura
I beg you!

>> No.41332288

I'm planning to try my hand on the Suicest/Aqua prompt a few threads (or weeks?) ago, any particular thing that you guys wanna see in the fic? And since it's my first fic, please adjust your expectations

>> No.41332312

>>41331968
Anything?

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>>41332288
I feel like the brainstorming with the prompt had the building blocks for something good. The idea that Suisei is fucking seething at her brother lusting for some dummy ass because hes retardsexual is hilarious.

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>>41332288
As long as there's at least one lovey-dovey romantic moment with your sister I'm in

>> No.41332937

>>41331968
Gura fly sex, coming right up

>> No.41333192

>>41332288
Please lean into the forbidden love angle of it. As hot as the concept is, the cherry on top would really be the incest romance
Also this is a bit sacrilegious to the whole 2nd person thing but I think it would be a cool detail if the vague descriptions of (You) make you vaguely shaped like a Male Suisei.

>> No.41333326

>>41331968
Surely one of the 60 Gura fics in the archive can tide chumpedophiles over.

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>>41333192
This egotistical comet would totally try to fuck someone who looks like herself.

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>>41335480

>> No.41338442

>>41335480
>>41337911
Fodder for a Polka Pagliacci fic...?

>> No.41339091

>>41338442
Fodder for a 'Pampering Polka and telling her you love her unconditionally' fic

>> No.41339893

>>41332937
Fly sex isn't viscerally or ideologically repulsive enough to serve as a deterrent anymore, especially now that a collective resistance to it has been built up. You've gotta search the deep psyche for worse, stuff like bara-genderbend-TF, extreme slob, fursuit sex, pozzing, etc.

>> No.41339995 [DELETED] 

>>41339893
Fly ssx is enough

>> No.41340371

>>41339893 #
Fly sex is enough

>> No.41340424

>>41338442
>cuck Polka
>she kills you and the other girl
>the end
Pagliacci actually has an extremely simple plot since as an opera the music is what’s important. I don’t think it translates to text.

>> No.41340512

>>41327417
soon

>> No.41340568

>>41339893
>fursuit sex
I'll be honest, Fubuki's Fursuit Fuckfest is still what I use if I want a quick nut. It's a shameful admission, but it is what it is...

>> No.41340594

>>41340424
Today I learnt that Pagliacci is an opera and not a character Alan Moore invented out of thin air.

>> No.41340720

>>41340594
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pagliacci

>> No.41341191

>>41339893
>especially now that a collective resistance to it has been built up
I actually don't think that's true. I don't think many people have unironically read ST, just troll with it incessantly way past its humour value.

>> No.41341333

>>41340720
It's an Italian opera so I guess that's why I've never heard of it.

>> No.41341542

>>41341191
Shrunken Troubles isn't even that bad. The worst thing about it is how boring and repetitive the sex reads once the novelty wears off.

>> No.41341812

>>41341542
>how boring and repetitive the sex reads
Haha. Well, it was written to cater to a specific fetish, after all. I found it electrifying, in a similar vein to Dammerung. I can absolutely see how you may feel that way, as there's a single change in position and it's otherwise all thrusting with little to no interaction.
I very much enjoyed the slow but deliberate personality shift from unwilling to willing without the use of any sexual stimulants, like aphrodisiacs or hypnosis.

>> No.41342371

>>41341812
Did the overuse of 'slit' bother you?

>> No.41342534

>>41340424
When will one of us write a musical?

>> No.41342588

>>41342371
Not particularly, no. I did poke fun at him for it, though.

>> No.41342801

>>41342371
To elaborate a little bit further, more synonyms are definitely appreciated, but it wasn't an egregious diminishment of quality in my eyes. Not to mention, a push to incorporate a thesaurus into future writings may actually lean too far in the other direction, where every mention of a penis or vagina has a unique, un-sexy and altogether 'whacky' term; once you're describing a woman's nether regions as her "birth cannon", you've definitely gone too far.

>> No.41342970

>>41292153
(You) are a normal everyday manager, but somehow the others have convinced Nene,Aqua, Iroha and Kobo that you are a secret agent.

>> No.41343283

>>41342970
This makes me think of them being convinced that you're killing their antis like it's the cover job but in reality you're just doing normal manager things.

>> No.41343663

>>41342970
>They keep trying to pull your jacket up and your pants down to see the gun you totally have hidden on you

>> No.41344006

>>41343283
>Ayame approaches you one day
>"Hey Anon, people are saying mean things about me on Twitter again, and Akutan told me you could 'take care of it.' How much are the cleaning fees?"
>"The what."

>> No.41346288

>>41342801
>birth cannon
That's definitely up there with 'Wet Weapon' lmao

>> No.41346660

>>41346288
For sure. I've never found bearded clam or shaven clam attractive, either. Meat/beef curtains/drapes/flaps are right out. Axe wound is amusing in how bad it is.

>> No.41347335

>>41346660
>bearded clam
>shaven clam
>meat curtains
>beef curtains
>beef drapes
>meat flaps
Goddamn restaurant menu, Jesus Christ lmao

>> No.41347439

>>41347335
Pussy IS a delicious and nutrient-rich addition to any diet.

Favourite slang for a dick? "Quivering yoghurt-thrower".

>> No.41347546

>>41347335
>>41347439
Those all sound like they'd be the names for creatures in a monster tribal inside of a card game.

>> No.41347549

>>41347439
I must have only had low-grade pussy, because my experience is that the flavor leaves something to be desired.

>> No.41347686

>rubs my member against your mound of venus
>ejaculates semen inside your nether regions

>> No.41347770

>>41347549
Like black tea or oolong, it's an acquired taste.

>>41347546
Definitely a monster, yeah. Slithering Syrup-Slinger of Slaanesh.

>>41347686
Thanks for reminding me - "penis fly trap". That's another weird vag euphemism I've heard.

>> No.41348047

>>41342801
>>41346288
Now I want to see a full smut story with completely retarded synonyms for the sexual organs.

>> No.41348365

>>41348047
aqua is trying to dirty talk to her boyfriend, but she's too retarded

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>>41348714

>> No.41349319

>>41348047
This sounds like it calls for a story-in-a-story with someone like Reine showing you their fanfic, which is filled with smut cliches and increasingly painful synonyms for the vagina.

>> No.41349443

>>41349319
>"Why are you opening a Strong Zero?"
>"Because I'm too sober for this."

>> No.41350295
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Random story time!
>Eriatarka (In Dreams)
I can't believe I missed this, when was it even posted? A huge fan of these types of stories, and Ina is perfect for them. The idea of a greater being trapping you in a constant state of dreaming as you remember and try to break free each time has so much potential to be explored. I really liked the conversation with Ina on the rooftop, and although it works great as a short, seeing this expanded would be amazing. The story reminds me of Girl of Emptiness, despite the premise being somewhat different. There were frequent problems with verb tenses though, with sentences like:
>You bolted awake. Looking around your room in a panic, you try to figure out what’s wrong. Something was there. Your eyes dart around.
making it hard to tell if the fic is in present or past tense. Other than that there aren't any glaring problems. Good shit, would recommend. Makes me wonder what other hidden gems there are in the archive that I've missed.
Now for one more...
>Suisei is Upset
This was... not good. I can tell a beginner wrote this, likely in the early days of /wg/, so I can't give it too much shit, but basically everything needs work and the premise/plot is very basic.

>> No.41351154

>/wg/'s second anniversary is two months away
What the fuck? No, seriously, what the fuck? How has it already been a year since the last anniversary? It feels like it's been a few months at max.

>> No.41351435

>>41351154
Time passes faster the older you get.

>> No.41351576

>>41350295

>All Men Are Dogs

I thought that the gradual degradation of the text, from proper English into total ESL babble, the further the Ui beast rape progressed served as an effective method of mirroring the lust of the MC as he gave into his monstrous form. Furthermore, it provided an almost authorial commentary as, through a close reading of the text, you can see how hard they were masturbating at various points during the composition.

>> No.41351742

>>41343283
>Cover Job
>a year and no chapter 2
It’s over…

>> No.41352237
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>>41351154
>>41351435
Don't live your life as if you're only burning time...

>> No.41352238

>>41351742
At least we have Heartbreak Tokyo.

>> No.41352401

>>41351742
In his defence, the guy came out of nowhere and dropped Our Cures onto us all in one go. He's done well.

>> No.41352405

>>41352237
That's EXACTLY what I'm doing. Waiting to die. Fuck the world.

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>>41352238
NTA but I feel like they're going in entirely different directions with a similar premise, such that they're probably not suitable substitutes for each other so I'm still fiending for more Cover Job.

Heartbreak Tokyo has also gone in a much different direction than even what I originally had in store for it when I started writing it, and there's a few scenes I'm kinda sad I'm not gonna be able to write anymore even though I like where the story's gonna go better overall.

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It's been... so long... since the last Auntie's Little Secret...!

Please, someone...anyone... I'm dying...

>> No.41352749

>>41352727
Anon hasn't only been like a week?

>> No.41352771

>>41352749
A whole week....!? No wonder I feel so drained...

>> No.41352780

>>41352557
Yeah, I agree. While Cover Job is still in the 'intro arc' stage the inherently different tone promises a much different story.
How did it go in a different direction? I thought the idea was Hotline Miami style schizo-ultraviolence combined with a Coco/Kson side plot... Admitedly the last chapter also added some more characters and lot but it hasn't obviously gone off the rails from the initial concept.

>> No.41352793

>>41352727
Yeah, I can't wait for the next instalment either. Every word has had me hooked so far.

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>>41351742
>>41352557
I-I'm sorry...

>>41352401
I think that might have been the only major thing I've written this year. Where did all my speed go...?

>> No.41352935

>>41352869
Everyone can only run at full speed for so long

>> No.41353074

>>41352869
Changing from serial writing to releasing everything all at once changes a man anon.

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>>41352780
The idea was the same but the plot changed a ton. Anon's relationship's with a lot of people were very different, as was a lot of events that would lead up to a different climax. Essentially he was gonna actively work to be a better chuuba and idol, only for his night job and past to keep coming back to bite him in the ass.

Temma was going to be in Mashiro's place, and he was orignally gonna be killing people who were committing copy-cat crimes of (You), leading to him trying to kill you before realizing your the real deal after you beat the shit out of him. Then you'd occasionally bump into each other while trying to help him curb his own mental illness(think all the Dark Knight Temma stuff)

Botan was gonna be someone you knew from your time in the military, and she'd figure out your secret pretty early and blame you for Polka starting to go down the same road as Temma, though Roundtail wouldn't know the truth, mainly because Botan remembers some of the awful shit you both did in the war and thinks you're both terrible people.

Kson was supposed to be much less interested in figuring out what was going on until Nazuna gets kidnapped(Which was actually not part of the bigger plot but just her having bad judgment in men. You kinda see why I'd drop that.) and the two of you happening to meet while raiding the same place that she was in, you going because a few of that guy's buddies had tried to break into one of Noel's apartments.

The boys were all gonna find out after Roberu happens to see you get unmasked during a fight(You'd be trying to help the only way you knew how after overhearing that Mea was being harassed), leading to a scene where they all confront you at your apartment after you panicked and stayed up for like an entire day just pointing a gun at your front door. THAT scene is the particular one I kinda wish to still write, but without all the build up to it I don't think it'd land just writing it outside of it all.

The climax would be a paramilitary squad crashing HoloFes that results in (You) killing them live, and sitting on stage admitting all your crimes as well as your suspicions and evidence of all the weird shit involving chuubas being harrased and what it may mean. It hits the news, the people responsible have you killed before you reach trial but because the public is so hyper focused on potential signs of fuckery, they hold off on doing what they used to do.

The actual ending would be Temma being in your apartment, looking through your shit and morosely talking to himself about how all your work and sacrifice probably only bought everybody a couple months of peace at best, only to have a schizo moment of his own involving him now having (You) as a voice in his head once he finds that rat mask and decides to pick up where you left off.

Obviously now that's all not gonna happen anymore, nowhere close, which is why I'm okay saying it.

>> No.41353569

>>41296749
For the thread. 2nd person enables me to cause the user to self-insert, while objectifying them or keeping the setting an important part of the story.
I will use first person for an intimate connection with the reader, but it's tricky to write for without preventing the reader from suspending disbelief, unless it's being used to tell a story from the POV of someone who isn't the reader, obviously.
Third person is for setting or plot pieces or multiple characters.
That's how I think of it anyway

>> No.41353649

>>41353436
Huh.
Honestly I expected the plot to center more around the Kson/Coco schizophrenia alongside an escalation of the violence until something like WW3 pops off in the background and wipes everything in a nuclear firestorm just as Anon has a moment of clarity about the event of the last few months.

>> No.41353766

Do you guys have tips for writing non-smut for a female audience? Do women like long stories? Fluff pieces? How important is the setting vs focus on the character dynamics?
Lots of dialogue?

>> No.41353789

>>41353766
I think you may be asking the wrong people.

>> No.41353842

>>41353766
>non-smut for a female audience
I think the other bloke's right, mate. You're pretty far from the mark here. Try asking /MANS/ or the /asp/ies, both have a pretty active female audience.

>> No.41353860

>>41353842
Nah, they'll just ignore me or call me a creep.
I'll go look it up.
Thanks anyway

>> No.41353894

>>41353860
>Nah, they'll just ignore me or call me a creep.
I don't think they will. I once went over there looking for advice on writing penetrative sex and how it feels and I got some reasonably serious answers.

>> No.41353896

>>41296749
I've tried writing in second person because of the few times I've taken crack at visual novels, but for the thread I've only really written in third person.

>> No.41353991

>>41353766
Look at fics on AO3 and learn through immersion.

>> No.41354028

>>41353860
/MANS/ is pretty welcome to questions anon, just ask during the dead hours if you're looking for a better chance at a femanon answering you

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>>41353894
I get the impression that women see men who do things for women as having an alterior motive

>>41353991
Ok, I'm going in!

>> No.41354060

>>41354034
You're definitely overthinking it.

>> No.41354070

>>41353766
>non-smut for a female audience?
Anon... That's just called making a good story.
Unless you're specifically writing a fic in a genre with specific appeals you should just focus on writing a good story first and foremost.

>> No.41354106

>>41354070
retard

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>>41353649
Honestly it's closer to that now. Anon's poor mental state was pretty underdeveloped in the original outline which is why I ultimately made it more important, which kind of facilitated changing more and more until I had an entire new vision for it. 'Thug with a heart of gold but occasionally chats up his Id Ego, and Super Ego', was kind of sugercoating what would be a much rougher and harsher person.

>> No.41354448

>>41354214
What chapter of Ajin is this from?

>> No.41354496

>>41354448
That's from Disco Elysium, iirc from around when you're closing in on the chick and she's working you like a pro, your empathy stat turns around and says "yeah we're all horny for her"

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>>41354448
The chapter after Sato turns his hand into fried chicken and puts himself through a woodchiper

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>> No.41357311

>>41351154
>second anniversary
Man.
This reminds of the that anniversary fic I've half converted into twine game/vn thing I've abandoned since scripting it was such a pain in the ass..

>> No.41357371

>>41357311
>half converted into twine game/vn
What in the goddamn was that story even about?

>> No.41357720

>>41357371
It was the Fubuki visits you to celebrate a year of being in her rape dungeon prompt.
I had my own twists on it but since I'm thinking of just releasing it after cleaning it up I won't divulge further.
Do note, this wasn't some full vn thing it was just some text with some fancy interactive effects and stuff.

>> No.41359987

>>41357720
what does she do to you? does she cut your dick off? eat your spleen? plain old kill ya?

>> No.41361363

>>41359987
She gives you your anniversary present, and has sex with you; then the route would split depending on your choice after this point. I'd basically given up on it after the anniversary came and went before I could finish it, only to regain motivation after having fun turning it into a twine game... which I gave up on last year since scripting the timing of the text was tedious as all hell.

>> No.41362662

>>41350295
>Red Jelly
i still laugh my ass off at ''fetus crusher''

>> No.41364576

>>41350295
>Strangeness and Charm
This was adorable, the perfect set up to a Coco fic. I'm honestly wondering why the author of this never bothered to continue it. This fic is incomplete but the potential from this brief snippet really makes me wish the author would somehow continue this.

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>>41350295
>A Brat's Punishment
I've busted so many nuts already that now I just want more

>> No.41366381

>>41350295
>Love Bites
>Deleted URL
T-Thanks.
>Cuddly Fox
Cute and sweet. Pretty nice fluff that lives up to the name.

>> No.41367713

>>41366381
That first fic is still up on the hard archive if you're interested.

>> No.41367959

>>41367713
How can one request stories to be put into the hard archive? Is it enough that they made me hard?

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What chuubas do you want to have an incestous romance with?

>> No.41369924

>>41369523
Suisei. Aqua. Mio. Fubuki. Rushia.

To name a few.

>> No.41370015

>>41369523
I'd rather have a non-incestous romance with them, to be honest. Makes things easier

>> No.41370889

>>41367959
The hard archive scrubs what's in the archive list and Series subdirectory. If it's not there then it doesn't pick it up; would be a real pain in the ass to keep a separate list.

>> No.41370971

>>41369523
Noel

>> No.41371493

>>41370889
I know, I just made a stupid joke

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>>41371493
O-oh

>> No.41372729

>>41369523
All of them except the ones I wouldn't want to.

>> No.41373500

>>41348047
Unrelated to chuubas but holy fuck.
I read this in /a/ a long time ago and I think it's the pinnacle of comedy smut.
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13874444/1/Please-Don-t-Seduce-Me-Nagatoro-san

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>>41369523
Most of them, though recently I've had some ideas for a Bae smut fic and a longer Kiara drama one.

>Bae using you as her boyfriend because your parents would be none the wiser about her brother hanging out in the cuckshed. She's self conscious about it when you seem reluctant, getting the impression your only going along with it for her sake and aren't into Bae as much as she's into you
>You've just been slow and gentle because you're holding back wanting to fold your tiny rat sister in half and utterly fucking destroy her

>Kiara coming back to Austria and having to be around (You), the brother she has increasingly lustful and romantic feelings for from even before she went to Japan.
>She left without ever really telling you she was going because she knew that if (You) had said anything about not wanting her to go, Kiara wouldn't have been able to help herself and would have given up on being an idol to stay with you
>you just spent your time thinking she didn't like you much at all, so you're relationship is kinda strained especially compared to growing up
>Kiara tries to mend it, but starts to fall in love with you all over again

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>>41352727
>>41352793
You really want to fuck your aunt, huh...

It's gonna take a while.

>> No.41373870

>>41369523
All the hags, at least.

>> No.41374868

>>41369523
Toko

>> No.41375696

>>41366381
>>Cuddly Fox
Oh hey, I wrote this one!
Hope you enjoyed it Anon, definitely not my best but I'm still proud of it.

>> No.41375821

>>41375696
What was your best work?

>> No.41376050

>>41375821
Cringe-ass 26 chapters long fanfiction that somehow managed to get 2k follows on FF.net.
It's not my best per say either, I just consider it that because of the large imaginary number on my screen.

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>>41376050
That's inspiring me, not gonna lie. I'm gonna work even harder so that I can get maybe 1/20 of that someday.

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>>41376394
You can definitely get this and much more, Anon! Just remember to have fun while doing it. The best way to improve is to have fun with whatever you're doing.
Good luck Anon, I'll be looking forward to reading your works!

Also here's a Fubuki because I love her so much it's unreal.

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>>41377402
That's kind of you to say. This will likely never stop being fun as long as my brain keeps churning through the story I want to tell. I just hope my writing has improved as much as I like to think it has over the course of all I've written so far. I'll keep going and eventually break into the 2view equivalent of kudos and bookmarks someday.
The white fox is indeed cute with the more I learn about her.

>> No.41378604

>>41377402
I'm convinced friendfags are the nicest guys on this thread.

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i've been playing ENGAGE for 16 hoursyeah im emulating it because every time i open the word document i go ''just one more map''

>> No.41378795

>>41378711
I'm in the same predicament. This game is so much more fun than I expected it to be.

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>>41378795
>Make a dumb cheesy story i can have fun with
>Make a bunch of likeable shmucks
>Make literally Bae 2.0
>Give me the ability to turn an armor knight into a guided missile
>I can cross half map, then airdrop a mage that will rape the enemies and then use vantage to kill anyone that tries to gank her

Im kneeling so hard, this game is perfect

>> No.41379045

>>41378711
What an engage?

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>>41378161
I'm glad you're having fun writing, Anon. As long as the (metaphorical) pen keeps moving and you keep finding inspirations and examples, you'll surely improve! I wish you luck in your endeavors and hope you get the following you strive for, I know you've got it in you!
While on this topic, I assume you've written stories for the thread. If you're comfortable with answering, which stories are they?

>>41378604
I'm glad you think so, friend. I don't know if my oshi being Fubuki has anything to do with it, but it might be the case. I honestly don't know.

Here's another Fubuki picture. I love this fox so much, I can't handle it.

>> No.41379733

>>41379045
It's those gross piercings hipsters get that stretch out their earlobes I think

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>>41379725
Thanks friend, that feels pretty good to hear. I'm the HJ anon, so there's that monster of my own fantasy bullshit, and one of the takes so far on Kurokami's errand boy.
I'm trying my hardest to incorporate some of the feedback I got from errand boy into this current chapter of HJ, and taking my time with scene details. I'm my own worst enemy since I keep listening to music that makes me think of the climax battle for this arc that I'm easily a few chapters away from right now. It's just gonna be damn good to write, but it needs all the little things first to get it there.

>> No.41381921

>>41378604
There's only like two of them

>> No.41381922

>>41379045
The new Fire Emblem

>> No.41382328

>>41380652
Ah, so you're the author for the Kuro Errand Boy chapters! I see, I see, I've been reading them as you post, but since I'm mostly lurking around, I haven't gotten around to reviewing them. I apologize for that.
You're doing great job with them, they're incredibly enjoyable and I can definitely see a big improvement between chapter 2 and 3. Looking forward to reading more of that story, it's really cute so far!
I'm yet to read HJ, but I promise it's going to be one of these days, as soon as I get more free time. I wish you luck with both of your stories, I hope to read them in their entirety!

>>41381921
We're not the greatest in number indeed, friend. But remember, it's not all about numbers.

>> No.41383342

Jannie apps are open and I'm tempted to apply but that would mean I'd have to give up the ability to shitpost, wouldn't it?

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>>41382328
Thanks for the read bro! I'm glad I was able to make visible improvement after the first 2 chapters. I've been slowly outlining where that story will go next, and hopefully be able to wrap it up nicely and get some good fluff going in another chapter or so.
>HJ in its entirety
Uhhhhhhh oh no.
With how things are going and how often Cover keeps giving me new shit to make ideas and lore with, I have no idea how far in the future this story will truly go. There are a set of finite goals achieve, but that list tends to expand a lot as I get more ideas and want to use more characters.

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>>41383489
>I've been slowly outlining where that story will go next, and hopefully be able to wrap it up nicely and get some good fluff going in another chapter or so
I'm glad this is the case and I'm looking forward to it! There can never be enough fluffy goodness with Fubuki or Kuro (or both) or fluffy goodness in general. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Though, don't rush. Take your time, and have fun.

>new shit to make ideas and lore with, I have no idea how far in the future this story will truly go
Ah yes, a concept I, myself, am rather familiar with. My own original stories suffer from the same problem, which is also why none of them has seen the light of day yet (alongside me being busy in general). It's a frustrating feeling, but it's always nice to feel the creative juices flowing. Whenever HJ is finished, I just hope you'll look back at it and feel proud of what you've done.

>> No.41384059

>>41383342
As long as you don't make posts you'd have to delete yourself, you're good - and plenty of shitposts don't get deleted.

>> No.41386557

Quick, post the most kino line in a fic.
>Damn Matsuri! Your pussy is really making me feel a Festival of Sensations!

>> No.41387121

>>41386557
>Flare, I’m so glad I was able to experience my First Summer Memories with you.

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>>41386557
>So that's it huh?
>You're some kind of Menhera Wrangler?

>> No.41387594

>>41386557
>You know Coco, this really was a Holofantasy Ch. 1: A page in shining mail.
AA really earned his chops with that one

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>>41386557
>Congrats! You've been accepted to Cover High/Pekora Ch.1: Quit Pranking Me, You Goddamn Rabbit!

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>>41384024
I feel like its the opposite of frustrating for me. Lately Cover has just been giving me more fuel for some of the ideas I had already when their arc comes
>planned for peko arc in the Usagi kingdom where she's the princess framed for war crimes
>Cover gives me an actual princess outfit for her
>Casino City arc that that gives me a chance to write silly shit in a vibrant and almost modern nightlife that will involve HoloX having their own gacha casino because what's more evil than gambling?
>Recently learn Chloe had a gambling addiction to some degree
Just keep injecting that shit right into my veins, I'll get to it eventually, so the more the better.
As far as pride goes, I feel like anyone should be prideful whenever they finish anything. Every chapter, every page is something you can feel proud of if you gave it your all.

>> No.41388396

>>41387863
That line sounds like Pekora somehow pranked the school dean while they were recording acceptance videos and they didn't bother with recording a second take.

>> No.41389441

>>41386557
>Dammit! You don't understand, Life with a Lion isn't Easy, you know?

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I have to ask, are there any fics here that have unironically done a title drop?

>> No.41390381

>>41386557
>in the end, this really was our HoloFantasy

>> No.41390629

>>41386557
>This was more than just a walk...it was Extrapedestrial!

>> No.41390738

>>41390141
Our Cures, funnily enough. I even thought of quoting Ayame's line about it earlier because it would be funny to interject the other posts with an actual title drop, but that felt a bit mean

>> No.41390992

>>41390141
Sad genuine smile
Our cures

>> No.41393276

>>41390738
Does that ending count as a title drop? She didn’t literally say the two words “our cures”, right?

>> No.41396502

>>41390141
Who is that vtuber?

>> No.41398377

S-Surely another WIP won't hurt, right?

>> No.41398516

>>41398377
Thats hell you're walking into

>> No.41398952

>>41398377
Don't do it, anon! You'll only hurt yourself... Finish stuff first before you release it

>> No.41402622

>>41398377
If you're struggling to find motivation and ideas for your current stories, I'd say go for it. The reason I have so many WIPs open at once is because I can't write more than a few thousand words for one individual story before I run out of drive for it, so by keeping a lot of WIPs stored away I can just move onto another story for when that happens.

>> No.41403671

>>41398377
Have you finish your other WIP?

>> No.41404145

>>41398377
Quote from man who will literally never orgasm again

>> No.41404457

>>41386557
>Turns out, there is still a lot more Exposure to indulge in for the two of you. You hope this Therapy will never end.

>> No.41404675
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I don't completely understand the appeal of writing long series with multiple chapters/parts. I'd much rather just do a short story that's between 1000-5000 words

>> No.41405389

>>41404675
Idk nigga its fun

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>>41404675
It was originally supposed to be much shorter.
But then I just kept coming up with ideas and deciding to throw them in because fuck it, why not, and...things ended up getting a bit out of hand.

>> No.41405769

>>41404675
A short story is like a walk in a park. It's nice, it's sunny, and the grass is green. It brings a smile to your face and you get a little sunshine in your heart.
A novel-length work in the meantime is being stuck in the middle of the jungle with nothing but your wits and the will to survive. You will wonder if you will ever get out of it. But when you do, you will be glad you did and set that fucking forest on fire.
I was supposed to go somewhere with that analogy but yeah, I hope you got what I was getting at, anon

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>>41404675
It's fun. I can't properly explain the pure autistic rush I feel when I get to write the battle for a new arc that brings all the growth and bonds the characters have had so far to new heights and shows how all the hard work is paying off. It's a slow burn, but holy fuck is it satisfying.

>> No.41409561

>>41404675
Both have their place. There are some ideas that simply don't have enough gas in the tank to make into a full series but make an excellent one-shot. Of course, a one-shot can turn into a full series if you can find some hidden potential in its premise. The opposite is true also, don't make a series if you don't quite know how far you can take it.

>> No.41410048

>>41404675
Okay, that’s just your opinion.

>> No.41410414

>>41404675
A series is like several of those short stories though

>> No.41410569

>>41410414
Until it hits several thousand words long

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>>41405389
>>41406018
I'd probably find it fun as well if I had an idea that I was confident I wouldn't lose interest in. I have a few ideas for some short stories and right now that's enough for me

>>41405430
Maybe it'll be the same for me

>>41405769
I understand. Although the short story I have in mind feels kind of intimidating at the moment. I'll be extremely pleased if it gets finished

>>41409561
>>41410414
Yeah. Right now I can't think of a premise that would let me churn out multiple chapters/parts. But maybe that will change.

>>41410048
True

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>>41411397
If you ever want to start a series that might hold your interest, I started mine by outlining a couple arcs worth of stuff, which ended up being 8 chapters worth at first, and then started writing. From there I just kept coming up with more ideas and adding more things I want to see happen as I write. It also helps that I enjoy the world I'm creating within this story and want to see it through to whatever end it has. The sky is never the limit when it comes to writing and the stories you want to create.
It's also okay if short stories are what you want to stick to, everyone's got a preference.
>Captcha: 8Y2HJ
8 years huh....fine....

>> No.41413675

>>41413065
waki...

>> No.41413741

>>41413675
What?

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>>41413741
STUFFY SWEATY SHEEP PITPUSSY!!!

>> No.41414323

>>41413065
Yeah I've already outlined the short story I have in mind. I keep thinking I know how I want it to end but I keep thinking of new scenes I'd want to include. So maybe it'll grow into a short series.

>> No.41414515

>>41386557
>But it was all right, everything was all right, the struggle was finished. He had won the victory over himself. He loved Big Brother.
I like my happy endings.

>> No.41414681

>>41414515
That’s not a happy ending. That’s a downer ending.

>> No.41414780

>>41414515
Yo dude I love Animal Farm

>> No.41414977

>>41414780
Same. I really cried when Old Major died. Thankfully, Napoleon was able to carry out his revolution of Animalism.

>> No.41415309

>>41414977
Nah you got it twisted man that was Coming Up for Air

>> No.41415427

>>41414977
Snowball would have been better leader. Napoleon didn’t go far enough in running the farm.

>> No.41415507

>>41415427
All I remember is that the horse worked really hard and I felt sad when he got turned into glue

>> No.41415825

>>41415507
You talking about Boxer? He wasn’t of any use to the farm and he was becoming baggage. Him going to the glue factory at least helped the farm in getting funds. So I don’t know why you’re sad.

>> No.41416093

>>41415825
Oh shit, it's Futakuchi Mana!

>> No.41416382

>>41414515
The first paragraph of that book and the last sentence are a perfect match.

>> No.41416737

>>41414780
I really hated how the chickens were really selfish and putting their own needs above the needs of the whole. Really fucking stupid if you ask me.

>> No.41418050

>>41416093
Who's that?

>> No.41418142

>>41418050
The only confirmed commie chuuba I can name off-hand

>> No.41418222

>>41418142
So the only good Vtuber in existence

>> No.41418312

>>41292153
One of your lesbian chuuba mom's catches you masturbating.

>> No.41418525

>>41418222
Basically, yes.

>> No.41419816

>>41414515
Honestly with some minor alterations this would probably be a funny way to end an incest mind break fic.

>> No.41420312

>>41418142
Just watch a few clips and I have to say, she's really coming out with those hot takes.

>> No.41420624

>>41418142
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sfp1_ZqivhM

She's seems pretty great

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>>41369523
I'm ashamed of my impure thoughts...

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>>41421313
Same but I want to own little sister Nerd Fauna by forcing her to give me paizuri in the morning before school, wear lewd panties while there while checking if she kept them on between classes and blow me at lunch, then force her to go to the combini and buy condoms after school only to use them all before our parents get home from work.

>> No.41421681

>>41421313
I have to ask, fauna as your sister or fauna as your mom?

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>>41421635
H-hot
>>41421681
Mommy fauna .. .

>> No.41422107

>>41418222
lol the chick's insane.

>> No.41422331

>>41422107
Yeah, but that's literally every women. Including vtubers.

>> No.41422537

>>41422107
You don’t talk to a lot of women do you?

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>>41421635
It's strange how Fauna can fit all three roles of Mom, Big sis, and Little sis. Pretty sure you could make a decent fic about her being your cousin too.

>> No.41422793

>>41422600
Now I want to see a fic where Fauna changes into a loli and then changes back into an onee-san

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>>41422107
Most women are insane. They try to play hard to get but get mad when the men they're interested go with another women who is more straightforward. It's just how it is.

>> No.41423295

>>41422107
Her views on economics and social issues are pretty rational. Don’t know why you think she’s crazy.

>> No.41423819

>>41423295
You're kidding, right?

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>>41423057
That image made me realize something.
In holofantasy, does Coco know Marine and Anon are already fucking? Or is that going to be one of those low random event roll landmines shuffled into the metaphorical deck?

>> No.41424501

>>41423819
I just don’t see the problem of the workers seizing the means of production, introducing self-management, attempting at greater democratization that the bourgeoisie denied them, and the theory of associated labor. She really makes good points.

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>>41424501
I can no longer tell if this a joke anymore. I vaguely remember this all started with some anon said "Yo I love Animal Farm" when someone mentioned Big Brother.

But anyway, that's pretty based

>> No.41424825

>>41424703
I’m being serious and not joking.

>> No.41424924

>>41424356
I haven't read all of Chapter 7 yet, so if it comes up there I'm not sure, but at the end of chapter 6 Polka tells Marine that it's normally not a big deal to dragons, mainly due to the fact by their customs Anon asserted dominance over Coco so she'd be pretty subservient to him as long as she feels she still feels like she's at the top of the pecking order of the women

>> No.41425215

>>41424825
godspeed

>> No.41425809

>>41424825
Tell your dad that you love him.

>> No.41425870

>>41425809
Why?

>> No.41425998

>>41424356
Maybe. Coco stated very early on that dragons have an amazing sense of hearing and smell

>> No.41426133

>>41424501
>>41424825
You do you, anon, but I don't think what you're discussing is allowed.

>> No.41426281

>>41424703
What’s not to love about Animal Farm? It’s a good book.

>> No.41426428

>>41426281
>What’s not to love about Animal Farm?
A lot, if I'm being honest. George Orwell wants to have his cake and eat it.

>> No.41426488

Pseuds are such disgusting creatures.

>> No.41426653

>>41426488
What are you even talking about?

>> No.41426772

>>41426488
Meh, it’s better than other discussions, but that’s not saying much.

>> No.41426822

>>41426488
What's a pseud?

>> No.41426839

>>41426822
Something you can find the definition on google.

>> No.41427054

>>41421927
I feel so bad for Fauna. She doesn't deserve to have such a weird fanbase.

>> No.41427133
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> sit down to write
> watch videos for 6 hours
> sleep
> repeat

>> No.41427231

>>41427133
Thanks for the motivation to write another page.

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>>41427133
I'm trying my best

>> No.41427279

>>41427249
I'm not...

Tomorrow for sure I guess.

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>>41427133
>Sit down to write
>Shit out 500 words
>Get distracted for eight hours
>Shit out another 500 words
>repeat daily until... it's... finished...

>> No.41427622

>>41427312
You wrote a thousand words. How is that bad?

>> No.41427694

>>41427133
Hey, work was long and I wrote some words at least...

>>41424501
She's pretty defensive of communist/state capitalist dictatorships and I'm for a more anarchist bent (no worker's party can be trusted with a lot of authority, lest it becomes just another bad government). But compared to most vtubers she's pretty based, and the music's not bad either.

>> No.41427770

>>41427622
Definitely not bad. It's just that if your projected wordcount is 80-100k, then the task becomes... rather daunting, to say the least

>> No.41427800

>>41427770
It's a minimum of three months. And that's assuming you constantly write only 1k words per day.

>> No.41427804

>>41427622
He could have written more.

>> No.41427871

>>41427800
Yeah. It's my first time writing a novel-length thing, you understand. Up to this point, the longest I've ever written is a 32k word novella, and that was... years ago.
>>41427804
Yep, that too.

>> No.41427914

>>41427871
Writing 1k words is still good. Don't know why you want to rush your work. Take your time.

>> No.41427957

>>41427312
>>41427871
Anon... it's at least better than writing no words at all.
Though if you're writing something that big you really need to embrace a 'this first draft will be shit attitude' and just focus on getting that story out.

>> No.41427967

>>41427871
>>41427312
Stop your self-pitying.

>> No.41428016

>>41427914
I guess it's because I didn't want to spend a considerable amount of time for writing just fanfiction. But in for a penny, in for a pound. It'll prolly take longer including copyediting/proofing, so I just hope I'll be satisfied with it my writing is considerably shittier than back then, and I'm hoping it's just because of a lack of practice
>>41427957
Oh it'll definitely be mostly shit lmao, though that's part of the territory with writing
>>41427967
Yes, I will. I guess I just had to get it out of my system. Apologies.

>> No.41428112

Anyone remember/have a link to that post showing which chuubas have the most fics here?

>> No.41428117

New thread
>>41428009

>> No.41428246

>>41427133
Were you spying on me?

>> No.41429278

>>41428112
It's Fubuki.

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>>41430682
MEL RAPE

>> No.41431387

>>41427133
>Sit down to write
>Get distracted
>Suddenly get a spike in motivation and write 3k in one sitting
>Wait a week and repeat

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POLKA Romance

>> No.41432456

>>41432398
polka only loves her older brother

>> No.41432474

>>41432456
That's what she calls my dick. Her "older brother".

>> No.41432506

god I'd love a nice gen 5 cock worship fic

>> No.41433019

>>41432506
Which of their cocks would you like to worship most?

>> No.41433057

>>41433019
disgusting

>> No.41433062

>>41433019
not what I meant...but If I had to probably either Botan or Lammy

>> No.41433070

>>41433057
>>41433062
The duality of man

>> No.41433171

>>41433070
sad thing is, now I want a gen 5 futa on futa fic...(no anon in it though)

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