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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread

Cold Hands: Tags: Suisei, handholding, SFW?:>>40419037

Cover High/Pekora Chapter 7: Tags: Pekora, Multiple Chuubas, Fluff/Romance, Comedy, Mild Ryona:>>40477980

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

https://streamable.com/qn8r7w :>>40440138

A chuuba contracts you to impregnate her.:>>40457578

San buckbreaks Sana to earn the right to impregnate the other members of the Council:>>40458927

Beating up Fubuki in order to steal her ball.:>>40469695

some kind of story about pic related.:>>40493690

As one of the king's most trusted and renowned knights, you are assigned to be princess Lamy's personal bodyguard.:>>40501467

Getting raped by Mumei after you, all accidentally, repeatedly interrupt her attempts at masturbation:>>40549950

Giving Ina a nice welcome back:>>40608187

Just had a dream. Fuck, I’m goslinging so hard rn.:>>40620373

Mori goes over to Inas hotel expecting to get to hang out and nerd out only to realise by hanging out Ina meant “a week of reshaping Mori’s guts and using her as a onahole for the 2 foot tacock. Bonus points for stomach deformation and mind break.:>>40627977

Marine is my favorite holo because she’s always trying to save our immortal soul, unlike other holos.

>>40635157
I feel like she'd suck my soul out through my dick

>>40636568
what safer place than her stomach?

Just another day anons. A brand new week to get closer to completing those WIPs you're writing or reading. How's it going? Got any roadblocks on paper or otherwise?

>>40636872
The Tokyo sewage system

>>40640324
I haven't written anything in months now...

>>40640324
Major trouble getting anything done lately. Unsure of plot progression. May ask for some peer review at some point but the past two weeks have been the equivalent of a ship grinding against rocks in the most sexual manner imaginable. May just take a break and focus on other stuff for a bit instead of slamming my head into the wall.

>>40640324
I'm taking a breather to watch VODs and spitball ideas before I start working on my next thing.

>>40640324
I picked back up an almost year-old story from my WIP pile. Going nicely so far

>>40640324
I mostly need to keep up my motivation and not worry too much about whether or not my fic will be considered good and go in with my idea.

>>40642081
My best advice that helps keep me going in that department, just write what makes (You) happy. If you're more worried about the structure or your actual writing skills, every completed will help you steadily improve. Don't be afraid of it not being the best or even getting constructive feedback. Everyone's gotta start somewhere.
>>40641049
Peer reviews and getting ideas from an outside source is a great way to help break past those types of roadblocks, but it's also a good idea to give your brain a little break from it and focus on something else like you might be planning.
>>40641276
Cool to hear WIPs get pulled from the abyss!

>>40627842
Half-naked Suisei at the beach...

>>40642081
Something that helps me: The only function of a first draft is to exist. Being good is something you only worry about on second passes

>>40640324
I've settled into a daily pace of slow progress for most of my WIPs, but at least I'm having fun writing them even if they've kind of crept up concept wise.
>>40641049
>May ask for some peer review at some point
Honestly if you have someone close at hand to give a second opinion on your stuff it's probably your best option unless you want to split up your wip into parts and give a part off for criticism and comment.

>>40642517
>>40642720
thank you bros. I'll keep those both in mind and get my fic out

Does anyone have that holonun corruption outline/greentext collection from like a year ago, the thread being sister marine themed naked me remember it.

>>40640324
I write my WIPs at night. Unfortunately I'm too tired and fall asleep after 20 words

I hope the anon working on that suisei spit/kissing fic comes back. The concept they threw out sounded really interesting.

>>40640324
I've slowed down a bit but the little bit I have written I'm pretty proud of so far.

So this Kurokami errand boy thing keeps getting longer. I think I might be incapable of telling a story in just one chapter.

>>40652385
Have a pic for motivation

>>40652763
I'm perfectly motivated to finish this story, it's just going to be longer than I initially planned. Which always seems to happen to me.
>Oh I can probably make something cute in 5-7k words
>11k words later

>>40653063
You say that as if having multiple chapters would be an issue
Just split them up if you feel it's warranted. Plus, it gives you time for feedback between chapters and keeps us looking forward to more stuff.

>>40634037
""Purification ritual"" that's actually just a poorly made excuse for Miko to see what all this heterosexuality hub bub is about.

>>40652385
I get you. Kurokami tends to make things longer

>”You’re not saying I’m weak, are you!?”
>Everyone around the kotatsu giggles at Noel’s half-hearted indignation while you take a long sip from your drink, enjoying the dry cider you were recommended.
>”No no no, I didn’t mean it like that. It’s just…” You pause to try and word your explanation in a way that would actually insult the inebriated girl
>”You don’t exactly look the part.”
>The silver-haired woman squints at you, trying to judge if you had meant it to be a put down, only to be distracted by Marine lifting up one of the knight’s arms to inspect the limb
>”Hmm…” Marine pinches the skin of Noel’s bicep, the latters white sweater tied around her own waist due to the heat of the room
>”Yeah, you’re kinda lacking in ‘definition’ here, Danchou.” Marine muses, only for hands to be lightly smacked away by Noel.
>”Hey!”
>Pekora’s signature laugh rings out in the room, and even Flare chuckles behind her hand.
>”So what!? It doesn’t mean I’m not strong!” Noel cries
>”Again, I’m sure that you are, just usually when someone’s thought of as a musclebrain, they’ve got-” You put your drink down before tugging up the sleeve on one arm and flexing your bicep, proudly displaying one of the rewards your dedication to the gym has given you
>”Something like this!” You beam
>Marine raises her eyebrows, Pekora rolls her eyes, Flare turns to look at Noel’s reaction while the green-eyed girl just looks at your arm with an unreadable expression
>”Is that what this was building up to? What a show off-peko.”
>Noel just sighs before taking a long drink of her beer, a drop of condensation on the glass stein falling into the deep valley of her cleavage, something you pretend you weren’t watching
>”Puah~!....Bet I’m still stronger than you!” Noel declares, getting some bravado from her alcohol while pointing at herself with her thumb
>THAT you’re not too sure of
>”Mmmmm…I don’t know about that one.” You say, taking another drink,
>”Wanna bet!?”
>You just snort, not taking her challenge seriously
>”I don’t know what I’d be betting, but…” You trail off, thinking of the best way to determine who’s the strongest here
>Maybe it’s better we don’t find out? It’d be kind of embarrassing if the woman who’s all about muscles is weaker than the guy who just goes to the gym semi-regularly
>”Actually, Noel, maybe-”
>”WE WRESTLE!” She cuts you off, pointing at you with a determined look on her face
>Arm wrestle?
>...
>Fine
>”Ehhh fuck it, why not?” You shrug, bringing the half-empty can of booze to your lips and downing the rest
>You hear shuffling, presumably Noel properly getting into position
>”Woah! Noel, what are you-Hey!!”

>>40654224
>Flare’s alarm makes you open your eyes and look over to her, noticing Noel isn’t beside her anymore and the half-elf is actually looking to your left
>Wait, where is-
>”Wha-Ack!”
>A pair of dainty, but concerningly stiff arms, wrap around your head
>One of her arms quickly slides under your chin, her forearm across your throat while she grips her opposite bicep and THAT arm’s hand presses against the back of your hand
>The pressure is uncomfortable, sure, but you’re still able to breathe just fine
>Your eyes dart around to the other three watching Noels attempt at choking you, the trio once again wearing different expressions
>Pekora’s clearly finding it odd, looking away with flushed cheeks that are not from her own mild consumption of alcohol, Marine’s staring with rapt attention, while Flare still looks relatively nonplussed despite her initial shock
>Probably about as bothered by it as you are, which is to say not a whole lot
>Really, the most uncomfortable part of this is the fact that Noel’s so close to you. As in, there’s no space between you at all
>Her large breasts are pressed firmly against your back, her hot body feeling extra heated even through the thin fabrics of both her and yours shirts’
>You can feel her chest rise and fall with each breath and the warm air of her exhales on your ear as she leans over your shoulder.
>The smell of Noel’s perfume, something citrusy, mixing with her sweat and natural scent creates something distinctly…womanly
>And kind of hard to pretend isn’t arousing
>Still, you look around and try your best to seem unbothered
>”Wanna take that back now?” She says breathily, almost directly into your ear and you suppress the shudder that runs through you
>”I-It’s not that bad. If this is the best you’ve got, Noel, I’m sorry to say tha-Gah!”
>She flexes her thin arms and your throat is instantly compressed, your ability to breathe being forcibly cut off
>You reflexively grab the arm around your neck, trying to simply tug it off and break her hold
>But her arm doesn’t budge, not even an inch
>”Your loss~.” Noel pushes forward, pressing herself even tighter against you while you’re forced to hunch over
>Twisting to the side, you try and worm your free but the girl choking you remains glued to your back, even wrapping a leg around your waist as you fall sideways
>No amount of writhing is creating any breathing room, and you begin to panic
>You flop around, trying to untangle yourself from her while failing to even wheeze out anything
>In one final effort, you put all your remaining strength into rolling away, but Noel remains latched onto you as spin onto your front
>The knight remains on top of you, panting into your ear from her own work on keeping you as she straddles your back
>Your vision begins to darken, face down on the carpet of Marine’s apartment, and yet…
>Another jolt of excitement runs through you
>The feeling of Noel wrapped around you, she had gotten her other leg around you in your flailing so she‘s completely encircled your body
>Her smell has intensified from the physical exertion of your impromptu wrestling, being the only thing in your nose from your panicked attempts to breathe and being just as dizzying as the oxygen deprivation.
>The three other voices in the room are growing distant, though they only seem to be giggling at your misfortune
>Through the inky blackness of your darkness, you see a flash of silver as NOel leans over your shoulder, resting her temple against yours
>The void grows darker as your fingers, almost numb from being on the edge of consciousness at your side, seek purchase - and find flesh.
>The surface of Noel’s thigh feels flawless and beaded with sweat. Surprisingly soft, inviting.
>You feel the potent strength of the muscle beneath the heat of her skin as your hand slides up, your fingers uselessly trailing past the edge of her ring plaid skirt that’s bunched up higher up her legs and beyond it to the curve of her butt.
>Your grip tightens there, a plea to be released, or maybe even gratitude.
>This may be the dying brain cells talking, but maybe this isn’t the worst way to go

>>40654316
>In an instant, sweet air is able to reach your lungs as Noel lets go
>You taking as many sputtering deep breaths as you can, drinking in the oxygen that’s laden with the humid air coming off the woman who’s still riding your back
>”Woowwww~....” Marine’s apparently enjoyed the last…minute? 5 minutes? You’re not sure
>A pair of small hands press against your shoulder blades, easily keeping you pinned against the floor as Noel leans down to bring her mouth up to your ear once more
>”Well~? Who’s the strongest of us?” She teases, and you need to take a few extra deep breaths to answer
>”I-It’s you, alright? You could have fricking killed me if you wanted.”
>Noel giggles sweetly in your ear, like you had just told her her eyes were pretty and not that she could choke you out easily
>She slides off you, quickly returning to her spot besides Noel, while you still lay on the floor, hoping your erection will go down soon so that nobody sees it
>”And don't you forget it!” She declares triumphantly, taking another long swig of beer
>Though, maybe you wouldn’t mind making her have to show you again

>>40633973
I want to be choked by Noel so fucking bad bros...

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vT59fJIMrGAlPljZXdbxq1BNT_cJCUk0E8UMWh5sU9XSApUbOM0XC26tUMIji_o09_wm_nyX1i-v2F1/pub

Tags: Noel, SFW, Greentext, Mild Abusive Chuuba, Choking

>>40634037
a story about gigastacy fucking all of hololivejp

>>40654579
Fuck you Kiara. I won't just stand by while you steal all the hags from me. You're marrying this other bird and that's final. You can't seduce my previous hags if you're locked into marriage you slut.

>>40654579
>>40654679
we need more Yuri!

>>40654579
Sounds like as punishment for getting too chummy with my oshi I need to write Kiara drinking more piss huh.

>>40634037
Being comforted and cared for by your wife Mio after she brutally raped you nonstop while being in heat and not having had sex in over a month.

>>40642619
Like Suisei wearing dude swimming trunks and nothing else?

>>40653442
>>40653063
I second this. All I want is more Kuro fluff, take as many words as you need

>>40634037
Going on a journey through space with Fubuki and her explaining to you how a black hole is formed and its effects on spacetime.

>>40658346
Exactly that
I don't know if it got abandoned or if it's in WIP hell

>>40659628
Not abandoned, but it's sort of in WIP hell. It's my next target to finish though.

>>40656389
How is that a punishment

I'm writing a Fauna incest fic.
I want to know lads, what would you like to see in it?

>>40664109
Impregnation. Lots of psychological turmoil.

>>40664109
>what would you like to see in it?
Miko instead of Fauna

>>40664109
Fauna's sister or mother or daughter

>>40664109
>>40664288
After the impregnation lots of lactation onegai

>>40664109
lots of love
i need it anon

>>40659753
Good to hear

>>40664109
Paizuri, reverse paizuri especially.
Nursing handjobs with lots of kirin milking.
Anal.

>>40664109
Mumei putting out cigarettes on her randomly throughout the story

>>40664288
>>40664645
I'm adverse to impregnation when incest is involved. But, since is the world of fanfiction...
>>40664311
Great suggestion, I'll make one small change: Fauna instead of Miko
>>40664572
I had a Big sister - Little brother dynamic planned out. Not thinking of involving more characters.
>>40664839
Sure will.
>>40665706
Noted.
>>40665920
Funny, I had a minor babysitter character put out cigarettes on you

Aside from all the obvious Fauna sex, how about something more fluffy? I like to compliment my smut with heart porn.

>>40652385
>someone is actually writing it
Thank you! I've been looking forward to someone writing it!

>>40653442
I second this. Please take as much time and words as you need. I crave more Kuro fluff so much...

>>40666751
What did you think of Monochrome Christmas?

>>40666302
A fluff to build up for the smut is always good, Anon.

>>40666875
I enjoyed it. There were some issues I had with it, mostly about Anon's (or I guess our) reaction to Kuro's feelings and how they were handled. It felt a tad bit rushed, but it was still very cute regardless.
Not a big fan of how Fubuki was handled in that story, though that was mostly due to the way the dialogues were structured. The ending is a bit weird, too

Overall, I had some issues with it, but I still enjoyed it. Kuro was very cute in its latter half.

>>40666751
>>40658903
>>40653442
I hope I can deliver something you all enjoy then. I've completed what will probably be 2 chapters so far, and there's still more to write.
Once I proofread everything, I can split it into 2 docs and post it sometime this week.

>>40633973
Hey i noticed this never got archived >>40261619 so i went back and looked for it
Kudos to the person who wrote it, it gave me a nice giggle

>>40666302
>Aside from all the obvious Fauna sex, how about something more fluffy? I like to compliment my smut with heart porn.
I'd like a fluffy, wholesome take on a domloss scene in which the little brother picks up his irresponsible big sister and carries her to bed, because he wants to take care of her like the strong man he'd like to be.

>>40667079
I strongly agree. The romance buildup did not feel organic in the slightest and as a result it came across as a hasty and contrived confession. I hope MWanon does more Kuro, though.

>>40667370
Godspeed Anon! I'll be looking forward to it!

>>40667750
I agree, but at least we got some fluffy sex scenes with a cute Kuro. Can never have enough of that.
Is MWAnon even still here?

>>40640324
I FINALLY managed to finish the outline and began writing my story
Now I have to throw everything else I've written so far into the trash, save for a few scenes

>>40668071
Didn't he recently publish a story?

>>40668514
Whatcha writing?

>>40668071
>Is MWAnon even still here?
I'm pretty sure he doesn't participate anymore. He pops up every couple months to post whatever I commissioned, but apart from that he hasn't identified himself.
I haven't commissioned anything else from him after Monochrome Christmas so I do wonder if he will come back. He does have a full-time job which he is extremely busy with, so naturally that plus family will take the lion's share of his time.

>>40668630
We were talking about that very fic.

>>40666875
NTA, but I somehow had missed this one. Here's my review, if the author is around:

I liked this fic, particularly Kuro's characterization in the first half. That said, it felt a tad rushed at moments - the second half feels like it missed a scene or three before the smut, particularly with how fast Anon just went along with everything. Anon also acted a bit too dense for my tastes. Fubuki is barely a character here, but that's ok - this fic isn't really about her. I would have preferred to see a bit more of the white fox, but that is mostly due to the type of story I prefer. And talking about preferences, the confession lacks the build up to have a big impact, but you can only do so much with this word count.
Overall good job, even if I felt it could have used a bit more polish at times

>>40668644
I'm that autist a few threads back who was asking about time travel plots
Here's one of the scenes I wrote that will probably have to be trashed

>>40668761
MWAnon wrote Monochrome Christmas?
Man, I honestly couldn't tell. I feel kinda embarrassed now, honestly.

how would you guys get inspiration with barely any free time

>>40633973
https://rentry.org/d8y2s Koyori Collar.
Sorry Collarverse anons, i really wanted this to be less horny but i just cant, Koyori gets me way too hard.
I dunno how to tag this aside from NSFW and Collar, so whatever. Im now going to jerk off to Koyori

>>40669265
Yeah, he sure did. Think he's making it an annual tradition for him to release a Fubuki fic on Christmas, although this was actually Kuro.

>>40652385
I was planning to make it a series whenever I got to it. maybe a tad ambitious but I kept thinking of scenarios and thought it would make a fun episodic series of fics

>>40670434
I eagerly await the threesome this year

>>40670544
I'd love to read a series, too. 2 chapters or 20, I'd read them all.

>>40670434
Based, not gonna lie. Fubuki has always been my oshi so any story featuring her (or Kuro) is always welcome. As long as it's not some gross stuff or rape. Shrunken Trouble still lives in my head rent-free ffs...

>>40671046
>Shrunken Trouble still lives in my head rent-free ffs...
There's a sequel to that coming too, so look forward to it!

>>40671161
Nah, I don't think I will.

>>40671046
My take on this is turning out to be a little more on the chuuni side, so I decided to embrace it and go full weeb and make it 12 chapters long (like a typical anime season) and if I get more ideas I'll make a season 2

>>40668761
i thought you stopped commissioning him after the hoshikawa fic? because the shion rape fic and monochrome christmas don't have "this is a commission" at the bottom

>>40671513
That's completely fine! A bit of chuuni shenanigans sound good! Looking forward to it!

>>40671598
I thought mwanon stopped taking commissions openly since his fics don't have the email at the bottom for like all of them.
>>40668950
I know you're trashing this but the prose is like 90% there towards feeling right as an Ame pov so you're at least on the right track for tone and prose.

>>40671950
the disclaimer is still there for his other commissioned fics like festival of sensations though

>>40670544
Definitely go for it bro. If you're gonna be more chuuni with it, that's great. Mine is pretty grounded without any magical shit going on, I got my main series to satisfy my magical autism. I'll definitely look forward to reading your take on it.

>>40670299
Music is usually how I go about it. You can also just get slapped by inspiration anywhere. Just let your stories live rent free in your head all the time.

>>40671513
I eagerly wait to see how the concept of "Kuro's errand boy" turned out to be chuuni.

and I also hope the thing I'm working on doesn't have too much conceptual overlap

>>40671598
Nah, he dropped the commission disclaimer because it usually resulted in a lot of shitposting or people ignoring it because it was a commission.

>>40672443
>3 different takes on Kurokami's errand boy
>kurolads eating fucking GOOD

>>40671950
Thanks, anon. Right now I have to start all over again from the beginning and I'm trying to figure out how to make it less cringy.
As for Ame, yeah, I'm looking for a good balance between how she is during her streams, and my own interpretation of her character. Glad to see it's going right so far

>>40672548
the three kings

>>40672099
>Mine is pretty grounded without any magical shit going on

mine was going to be grounded but once the gears started turning magic shit just started getting added. haha

>>40672443
I wouldn't worry about it too much, it's all about having fun right?

I eagerly wait for both of your fics, it'd be cool if we could release them at similar times too...I better step up my game

>>40634037
(You), the intern, having hot steamy manager sex with A-chan while trying to keep the relationship between you two secret from the rest of the office

>>40673782
>eating A-chan out under her desk while she tries to hold a conversation with sora

>>40673984
>dicking her down backstage during a live performance at a big venue

>>40670407
Damn, next time jerk off before writing
>Taking the concept of being in heat from the iroha greentext
Is the collarverse gonna keep expanding? depeest lore

>>40674204
>during a collab with one of the girls you hold the remote to an egg vibrator in her and decided to turn it up at random.

>>40673145
Honestly, it might have progressed to some form of magical shit if I wasn't already planning to include Kurokami in my series with magic in it at some point anyway.
>Kurolads gonna be eating a second helping from me at some point.
Fuck the year of the rabbit, this might be HER year.

>>40676561
I just imagined a bunch of anons shoving Pekora out of the way to see what Kuro was doing behind her

>>40676960
Kinda happened to me to be honest.
>Peko MV of turning everyone into rabbits was giving me an urge to outline the Usada kingdom arc for my series
>damn, wouldnt it be cool if I can get the story to this place soonish for the year of the rabbit stuff?
>Hey there's kuro, and she needs an errand boy!

Fanfics up!

>>40679354
haha, it'd be kinda funny if your main series ignores pekora for an entire year now because of kuro

>>40674204
>Marine performing "I'm your treasure."
>Moans reverberate through the speakers
>Wait, that's not Marine's voice
>"Hah, hah, hah, hah, haaaah!"
>A-chan accidentally turned her mic on, and came on time with the music.

>>40634037
Sampling the various Holos milks

>>40676960
Reminded me of this post last thread
>>40573061
>Pekora in a cardboard box looking at the pekoland entrance.
>All the rabbit ears have been replaced with black fox ears.
>Entire park has been renamed Kurokamiland for the entire 'Year of the Fox'
>A disguised Kurokami tries to get her attention to try and fix this.

>>40684798
Polka's tastes like fentanyl

>>40684913
Kurokami getting more and more embarassed as people yell how much they love her and how cute she is to the point she's red and mumbling

>>40685602
>>40684913
>Kurokami kicks Pekora's box, causing it to fly down the sidewalk leaving pakora in the fetal position and following in self pitty
>pekora weakly gazes up at Kurokami and (You), her errand boy
>moona slowly walks out from behind Kuro in Pekora's sight
>"get the fuck up samurai" Kuro commands as Moona tosses Pekora a metal bat
>"we got a theme park to burn"

>Writing a fic
>Sees the fanbase of that chuuba shitting up multiple threads
>Lose any inspiration to continue that story

I wish I wasn't so weak to be this easily swayed by antis and falseflaggers

>>40688353
Have you tried looking at horny fanart?
That's usually what works for the deadbeat writers here.

>>40688353
which chuuba?

>>40688353
I haven't seen a single thread in /vt/ that's good for like 3 weeks now. I need to stop looking at the catalogue, and you should too.
> inb4 haven't seen a good thread ever
There are some cool ones but you do need 30+ filters and a lot of luck to find them

>>40688579
Pic related. Used to never go below 60 but I cleared my cookies 2 days ago and it fucked over all my filters. I specifically selected only cookies from an hour ago. So annoying.

>>40688561
ENhoes. I'll just go back to writing about JP.

>>40688851
Based.

>>40688353
Get the hell out of the catalogue. Seriously. It's all bait, all of it.
You'll be much happier without even so much as looking at that radioactive waste. Stick to generals, and use the search bar to find their current threads, don't look for them manually. If I were to believe the catalogue drivel, I would just hate every fucking chuuba.

speaking of radioactive waste... a STALKER crossover fic... hhhmmmmm...

>>40689048
>a STALKER crossover fic
Botan's the obvious choice for this, but I think that's so safe it's uninteresting. Rather than a chuuba that fits in with the Zone, I'd like to read a crossover about a chuuba that stands out in it. Wouldn't it be more interesting to see Nene or Miko dropped right in the middle of one of the most hostile places in fiction?

>>40689048
>spoiler
traveling around the radio active areas of a destroyed word with robotic/cyborg vtubers by your side sounds like a nice trip

>>40689187
>"SUPA NENE PUNCH!"
>bloodsucker gets sent through the nearest wall

>>40689354
I can imagine Nene turning the depressing 100 Rads into her personal fan club with how energetic and cheerful she is.
How would she interact with the gazillions of bandits that never stop spawning no matter how many bullets to the face their colleagues get?

>>40405046
https://i.imgur.com/FBte1M7.png
Not really a writer but my hand was pushed, this was a mint idea.

>>40689920
It would appear as if Okayu has morphed into some kind of amorphous, Okayu-shaped mass and is in the process of absorbing (You) into her.

>>40689920
THAT'S ONE FATTO CATTO

A little too big for my taste, but still pretty hot. Nice work architect

>>40689920
>okayu hyper pregnant with dozens of your children

b-based?

>>40689920
Now draw Sora punishing Okayu via spanking.

>>40689920
HOLY FUCKIN FATTO
anon I implore you to finish up the details on this one, please

>>40689920
Do you think you could do cover art sometime?

>>40689920
Damn this reminds me to get back to work on some fanart I was doing for a story from here

>>40692023
What story were you making fanart for?

>>40692599
It will be known if it gets done, I don't want to give hope to the writer and then not deliver

>>40659016
This but 'Fubuki' is very clearly just Sana trying to give an Astronology lesson while disguised as a white fox.

>>40692788
>Sana in a Fubuki outfit that is tearing apart at the seams and a pair of obviously fake fox ears on
W-whoa

>>40690414
INCREDIBLY based.

>>40692788
>fubuki you got really tan
>y-yeah that's what happens when you get too close to the sun
>also your accent sounds funny
>I was listening to Australian telly and picked up the accent
>also...your tits and hips got a little bigger
>I-I JUST PUT ON SOME WEIGHT! IM VERY SELFCONCIUS!
>S-Sorry Fubuki!
>you every your gaze and sana sighs in relief

>>40689048
And for some reason /meat/ /ag/ and /ringo/ all get deleted yet bait is allowed to stay.

>>40693540
I blame /become/, but then again I'd blame them for stubbing my fucking toe so who can say

>>40693642
They're to blame and so is /ag/ for posting that picture of Kson which sucks because that picture is on topic.

>>40693642
>but then again I'd blame them for stubbing my fucking toe so who can say
I feel that on a spiritual level. God damn, were they a bunch of schizos. Mostly harmless schizos, at least, but schizos nonetheless.

>>40693540
>>40693642
>>40694128
>Piss and shit lovers? Good
>Cannibals? Excellent
>People who want to be a cute snow elf? Satan incarnate
I don't get it.

>>40694296
Freak.

>>40694296
The fetish threads at least had a collection of chuubas they were soft generals for; /become/ was basically rp for a meme that's barely connected to the original chuuba.

>>40694296
Imagine that annoying ass sapling posting and Risu gay rape responses happened on every Fauna thread. Every single one. That's what /become/ was even when they had their own general

>>40694473
>Imagine that annoying ass sapling posting and Risu gay rape responses happened on every Fauna thread. Every single one.
it more or less already does

>>40684798
>>40685479
>Lamy: white russian
>Noel: Ultra heavy cream
>Fauna: S O Y milk or some other plant based bullshit
>Mio: nothing as she has not given birth yet
>Chaamers: cockroach milk

>>40634037
TakaMori NoeFure swingers party

>>40694749
>Pekora: almond milk

series anons...doko...
cover high and holo journeys were really nice but i havent seen anything from the others

>>40695555
Which "others"?

>>40634037
BHC correction for elf chuubas

>>40696061
Big hugs & cuddles?

>>40696105
Not what I intended but that's fine too!

>>40696061
>>40696183
Man, I wanna make a fic about reassuring Flare that you love her no matter what she thinks about her race or age. I've had this scene in my head for a while about that, but it's basically the climax to a drama so it's not really something I can write on it's own.

>>40696502
I want a fic about you living in a world where everyone hates elves, but you take Flare in anyway, though you treat her badly, like telling her to hide her knife ears at all times with a hat or something when going outside, using contact lenses to hide her inhuman amber colored eyes, etc. You're not raping her or keeping her in collars at home, but when going outside, treating her like a slave so people don't look at you weird.

Abuse where the person has no one else to turn is...ah...

>>40696579
Teaching Feeling but with Flare!

>>40634037
Stealth yandere subtly ruining your life and relationships to weaken you before swooping in on you at your lowest

>>40634037
You and your chuuba gf/wife are happy together, but she can’t satisfy you sexually. So she enlists the help of one of her more experienced friends to coach her while she’s fucking you.

>>40697697
>one of her more experienced friends
Noel?

>>40697697
Subaru slowly getting jealous and feeling inferior when she see's how hard you cum with Choco!

>>40697780
No Marine. Noel is a virgin

>>40698037
>Noel is a virgin

>>40697821
What Subachan doesn't realize in this scenario is that she's the one Choco's actually attracted to.

>>40698247
>he doesnt know

>>40698407

>>40697697
>Pekora riding your dick while Marine plays with her tits and whispers in her ear about what a good job she's doing
>alternatively, Lui and Koyori

>>40698247
Lol you know nothing about her

>>40700549
I know she's a whore.

>>40700549
Have you been sitting there fuming for nearly 2 hours? You gonna be okay, schizochama?

>>40700601
Thanks for proving yoh know nothing about her.
The whores in Hololive are Marine and her bitchy friends.

>>40700642
Only schizos hate Noel. Her colleagues and sane people love her.

>>40700687
Noel masturbates on camera for paying customers. Nobody else in Hololive does that, marineschizo.

Noel's a whore and it's funny to see you reach so hard to defend her. You're a tubby, oily ball of rage and cheeto dust.

>>40700724
Why is Suisei so high? Her dancing is terrible.

>>40700791
All the LSD she takes before each show

>>40700816
She's going to be the next Syd Barret.

>>40700902
Hopefully not the next Amy Winehouse

>>40700791
Appearing in 3D lives keeps the ghost of Anemachi from haunting her.

>>40700746
You just described Marine's best buddy Mel, except Mel also fucks her gross fans in orgies

>>40701188
God I wish she actually did that, I'd pay 5 figures for a holiday in Japan to fuck her brains out in an instant

Mel's way hotter than Noel too

>>40701188
>those fucking arms
literal stick insect

Mel, Aqua, Kanata, Lamy, Chloe, Lui and Mori. Is Marine exclusively friends with awful people?

>>40701257
She actually does do that you retard. Hardly anyone watches Mel or her roommate how do you think Mel supports her luxury lifestyle?

>>40700746
>You're a tubby, oily ball of rage and cheeto dust.
You just described the average Marine and Mel fan

>>40701356
An army of braindead simps like you. 'Course, we all know how Noel supports her own lifestyle of excess...

>>40701356
Marine is a horrible person. Even in her own survey where everyone was sucking up to her, no one called her kind.
So its only natural that she is exclusively friends with horrid bitches

>>40701423
Noel's roommate has 10x more members than Mel's has viewers and Mel lives a much more expensive lifestyle.

>>40701469
I love how even when no one mentions Marine at all, she's the only thing you focus on. It's fucking hilarious.

>>40701533
Marine is a horrible person and so are all her friends.

>>40701517
Damn, that's a lot of people she masturbates for. D'you reckon she makes more as an e-prostitute than she does at Hololive? I reckon she does.

How many times do you think Marine has sucked yagoos dick for all that special treatment?

Why do you fuckers insist on having this exact same goddamn conversation in a fucking writing thread!?
Start up a bait thread and fight it out there, at least you'll get some fuckers in the catalog to watch your retarded shit flinging.

>>40701700
Dunno, but if she does I hope she takes a page out of Noel's book and streams it. I wouldn't PAY to see it, but I would pirate it for sure.

>>40701779
Marinefags have a weird hatred of Noel which is why they brought her up for no reason

>>40689920
I'm the writefag that's currently working on that fic and just wanted to say that your post has me 200% motivated.
Alright lads, give me situations, positions and anything else that you would like to see in the fic.

So far I have
>Slutty Okayu trying to change favors for sex
>Fluffy fatto catto feeding
>Ultimate cuck with Soda
>Bunch of prudish rich girl moments with Soda-chan

>>40654224
Noel, Flare and Pekora would never hang out with Marine willingly, which is why they never hang out with her off stream. Their only interactions with her are on stream.

>>40702298
This is probably super out of scope if you're planning on this just being a one-shot smut thing but I think it would really fucking hammer in the Sora cucking if there was a 'contrasting chemistry' scene for Sora and Okayu. With the one with Sora being awkward and forced while the one with Okayu having the two of you
with naturally great chemistry.
I dunno why but the idea of Sora being completely outdone romantically such that Okayu's even stolen your heart just tickles my fancy.

>>40702650
autism

>>40702298
How about supersized Okayu being eaten by a sexual Tyrannosaurus?

>>40702298
There's that one guy who wants to see Okayu spanked, and he convinced me of its merits. So maybe put that in if it fits

How is it possible to be a Mel anti of all things. She's one of the sweetest people in Hololive.

>>40702817
Noel (according to Marine as well) is considered to be the kindest Holo by her colleagues and that doesn't stop Marinefags from anti'ing her.
Mel isn't actually all that nice.

>>40702817
Sex is a sin, my child. To succumb to the temptations of the flesh is to stray from God's light.

how are your fics coming along anons?

>>40702763
I did have a massive dynamic like that planned. Sora is a goody two shoes, prudish, rich, hardworking girl who wants to be an idol, while Okayu is a lot more relaxed, lazy, and indolent. Fatto Catto and Anon bond over little stuff over time, Anon is impossibly horny but Sora won't put out and Okayu's just too good at fucking for him to stop seeing her
Anon makes it clear to Okayu that what they have isn't love, but soon finds himself buying snacks for her, looking at things that remind him of her, etc.
>>40702789
>Okayu being eaten out by a sexual Anonsaurus
Perfect.
>>40702804
Noted.

>>40703034
I let one of my series chapters simmer overnight. It was longer than I expected and now I'm going to trim the fat.
Should have it ready for this thread or the next.

>>40703079
Good on you anon. hope you're happy with the end result

>>40702922
You say that but she's helped both Ina and Ame with their reps and is also the reason why Koyori got hired.

>>40703042
N-no, I said Tyrannosaurus. Like the dinosaur... wait, it IS the dinosaur. Also, not eaten out, but eaten. One's vital to survival, the other is... not so much? Look, just write her being eaten by a dinosaur, okay?

>>40703042
The final scene for this fic better be Sora, 7 years older and now a successful idol randomly seeing Anon only to have that old trauma be reawakened when he turns around and she sees him holding a little Neko baby with lilac colored hair.

>>40703344
This made me think of the author giving a dumb nod to the dinosaur thing by having (You)r full name be Anon (Insert Dinosaur Species here).
I dunno maybe it'll add to the dynamic between You and Sora by having the relationship be because it's an arranged marriage between a rich and an old family.

>>40694473
>>40694495
between you and me, id rather have a /become/ alien happily rp by himself in a corner than have the sapling niggers shit up another thread
The worse part is that everytime Fauna collabs they will throw a shitfit because she's not paying attention to chat and later they will go and shit on the fanbase of the chuuba

>>40703034
"I'm just about done", I tell myself. "Almost at the end of the chapter", I tell myself.
Yet it keeps fucking growing.
Doesn't help that I'm not the fastest of writers, but holy shit, escalation is real.

>>40703183
So you think she is a good person because she helps the bitchiest EN girls (actually to try and leech off them) and because she gets her buddies into Hololive?

>>40703865
Boooooy is it.

>>40703865
This is why you outline anon, you can't stop shit expanding but it'll help you tell when you're actually going to be close.

Will you two negros shut up already? all your rrat posting leaves ''Miko had a baby'' and ''Kanata hates Suisei'' in the dust.
please stop spend less time coming up with schizo delusions and more time killing yourselves

>>40703034
I wrote more but I'm still not sure of the section in its entirety.
It involves a plot and world relevant force that isn't necessarily chuuba related so I'm slightly worried it'll get skimmed past or eye rolled at while, at the same time, I'm trying to keep it interesting without being a minor exposition dump. Combine this with two+ weeks of my house being on fire and the subsequent lack of sleep involved with that and the answer boils down to "grimly".
But it's coming along. Just very slowly.

>>40670407
it’s quite nice for a short little thing like that, but with a few flaws. The grammar and structure are a bit janky and hard on the eyes. You can definitely tell that your focus was on the smut since everything before and after felt kind of rushed. Smut itself was a bit short and didn’t get to the nitty-gritty either.
There’s also the reference missing for it to really fit into the collarverse. The only thing that matches is that there‘s a collar present, nothing else hints at it playing in the same timeline

>>40704110
...
Would the narrative really be affected if you just skip that scene and only throw it in when it's directly affecting the characters?

>>40703833
What made saplings so mentally ill.

>>40704107
Marine and her friends being shit people is a fact

>>40634037
>>40704107
>Miko had a baby
I know this is a rrat but I want to see a fic about Miko raising a baby. I think it would be funny, though it probably needs either (You) or a blue girl to help anchor Miko trying her best to raise her child.

>>40683448
>YAGOO speaking with a suspiciously out of breath A-chan in the middle of her "snack break"
>he doesn't know that A-chan is sucking you off in the company break room at dead hours
>he doesn't know you two have been fucking around the office since everybody left the building
>he doesn't know about the other interns and staff complaining about why the breakroom tables smell like fish and ammonia
>and he certainly doesn't know why A-chan is speaking as if she ran from the top floor down to ground level, nevermind the very suspicious sucking sounds.

>>40704364
That's what I've been debating. I may just cut it or put it as side content.

>>40672443 (me)
>>40672548
Just to avoid creating false hope, I'm not working on that specific prompt (yet, at least). I have a series planned involving Kuro, but there are a few kinks left to work out

>>40705679
Could you work the kinks into it, instead?

>>40705429
sweet mother of god this sneaky sex A-chan prompt is getting me. I really hope an anon picks this up

Does anyone else ever get that feeling that they're overusing the word 'You' when they're writing in second person?
It's just one of those things that bother me when I'm writing that it slows me down even when I know that first drafts are supposed to be bad.

>>40706407
I've learned to avoid starting every sentence with (You). Just give your paragraphs a look over once you''ve written the scene or interaction, and think about ways you can start the sentence off differently.

>>40704420
literally catalog tards and hlg. Fauna dropped the dommy mommy angle really early on and settled as the soft spoken sister, not to mention she's pretty unity and has good comedic chops, but they dont care they just want her to be an ASMR whore and to never branch out (heh) out of her niche
I,personally, loved her collabs with baelz and showed me that hating the rat is dumb because she also loves all of my oshis

>>40706490
I think one of our writers is also partly responsible for the stereotype existing since Sakura summer writer outed themself as someone who uses fauna streams for their ageplay thing.
Kinda made the sapling stereotype worse since he kinda confirmed the stereotype.

>>40706794
Now I'm imagining him writing with his diapers on and drinking from his baby bottle.

I'm curious and also bored. Let's see how many writefags we've got.
http://poal.me/jxjcrd

>>40706490
Baelz is a piece of shit. She supports animal rapists

>>40707390
I want to mating press her no matter what, so I can't really judge.

>>40707390
i know you are baiting but i find it really funny that since no one uses Bae's full name, there could be a evil bae running around that everyone knows as Baelz

>>40707511
>>40707599
She is friends with Astel a literal furry (aka animal rapist)

>>40707649
uuh anon?, the catalog would be that way

>>40707707
>TEMPISSSSS
>YES, IT IS OKAY WHEN JP DOES IT
>TWITTTTERRRR
>UH OH SISTERSSSSSS
>something something, whores, drama baiting, what did she mean by this????

>>40707599
Unrelated but this reminded me of Bae's full name being an anagram for Khaos Blaze. Which would probably be a better name for her evil twin if someone ever wants to write a fic with that concept.
Though I'm not sure what kind of plot such a concept would even run with.

>>40707897
my fucking sides

>>40665289
I think the problem I'm having with this story is that I personally have zero inclination towards exhibitionism. I don't really find it arousing, so it's not one of those things I feel I can write well. And so there's about 10 thousand words preceding the sex scene where I awkwardly try to write spicy situations where Suisei would feel embarrassed of being topless around people, but because the story is in second person perspective, conveying this to the reader isn't working out.

Might have to severely alter some scenes before I'm satisfied to continue...

>>40707989
this is giving me ideas.
>khaos is the evil side of Bae's power and inhabits her body Yami Bakura style.
>Hakos Baelz is spontaneous creation/altercation
>khaos Blaze are the flames of chaos/ chaotic destruction

>you and Bae have been dating for two years and deep down she knew Khaos would resurface to bring the world to its end as programmed by Omega, but she desperately wanted to cling to her happy-go-lucky life for as long as possible.
>when the time finally comes you desperately do what you must to get your love back lest the entire world is destroyed in the process
could make a good romantic tragedy

>>40708382
Oh man the idea for that tragic ending popped into my head.
>You can't stop Khaos taking over Bae.
>Bae's last act before she's gone is making your home an invincible safe space for the end of the world.
>Witness Baelz destroying the world from the comfort of home, but...
>You see her face.
>She was crying.
>You make a decision stepping out into the storm of chaos you go to her.
>It rips you apart but you hold onto your existence by thinking of her.
>When you reach her you're but a fragment of your former self but...
>It's enough to reach her and give her a hug.
>Bae and Baelz see this.
>They reunite into one being.
>The true Chaos of Creation.

>>40708805
>date bae
>she never tells you of her deity status
>a month before Blaze takes over you notice Bae is acting weird.
>she asks you if you'll always love her
>she starts crying at random
>she never told you that she has a role to fulfill
>she does what she can to fight it. but it's inevitable.
>she asks to spend the night with you and you have sex for the first and only time.
>she traps you in your room forcing you to witness the destruction of the known universe and it's replaced with a vortex world, similar to smt nocturne but more abstract in structure.
>the other members of counsel let themselves be known you and can't interfere directly as this would risk Omega targeting them
>they instead give you boons to stop her and there'll be a possibility to get the world back to its original state.

>>40708271
If the story is about her being embarrassed writing it in second-person-self-insert perspective seems tricky, yeah. Good luck!
Now I'm imagining the story concept told from Suisei's perspective, in a stream of consciousness mode.

>Khaos Blaze is a sloppy tall and flatty onesan

>>40709400
Murasaki...

>>40708271
>>40709302
I mean in theory you could make it work if (You)r perspective is centered around making Suisei embarrassed by way of (un)subtle teasing of your new friend who is totally not a guy. I.e finding ways to grope her under the guise of it being 'male Bonding' and other things in that vein.

Lamy rape?

>>40709838
>'male Bonding'
aka giving each other nipple twisters

>>40710049
Sorry bro. Lamy is for passionate and wild love making while tugging her pointy ears to make her quiver. She is also for getting to to plow Botan when Lamy passes out from sex and being too drunk.

>>40710049
Good idea! But consider the following: consensual lovemaking with Lamy in missionary position with handholding and leglock.

>>40710349
>>40710350
but where are the stories

>>40710349
>>40710350
No. i want to assault lamy on the office, bend her over a desk, rip off her panties and start rutting her as she screams
Lamy is for getting her asshole utterly blasted to the point that when you finish, she accidentally passes gas because she cant control it

>>40710056
Yeah something like that, or 'wrestling' on the beach, or applying sunscreen really really thoroughly on her chest, or helping her piss in a urinal.

>>40709838
>>40709302
There's actually plenty of that, in fact it's most of what the set-up for the story is comprised of. I just don't know that it's written in a way that is arousing or interesting for the reader. Maybe the lack of Suisei perspective is going to force me to make it arousing from (you)r perspective instead.

>>40710492
Nigga did you find my document?

>>40710350
I wish I had the bandwidth and time to write part two of Warmest Elfnogg, for some reason wintertime makes me very horny for this elf.

>>40710049
>>40710350
What's lamy's endgame? why is she always so sexo?

>>40710683
Fucking human men.

>>40710604
Does your document include making her sweat by making it seem like you might pull her trunks down?

>>40710604
I think you're doubting yourself too much anon. First of all, you're writing off a gold-mine of a prompt. You'd have to actively in not making it arousing. Second is if you wrote Warmest Elfnogg, then I have 100% faith in you as a writing to make something hot.

>>40710683
Since she's a halfie, her fertility is low. She wants to bring life into the world, but is unable to.

>>40710458
She's on the list. She will be fugged eventually. You best believe I'm popping that button second from the top and sliding right in there for a clothed pazuri too.

This thread is infested with fujos. Fujos like Marine, Mel and Baelz get defended while anti-fujos like Noel, Pekora and Miko get attacked.

>>40710683
Her endgame is to get me so horny for her that I end up filling her with enough cum to last her for the next 30 years and not stopping filling her up more and more regardless.

>>40711071

>>40711156
Astel, Kuzuha and Vox will all die of AIDS fujoshart.

>>40710953
Very good.

>>40710604
>I wish I had the bandwidth and time to write part two of Warmest Elfnogg
God, I wish you did, too. This story is one of my favorites, and Lamy isn't even my oshi. God, did it make me even hornier for her though.

>>40710733
No I'm not that mean spirited.
>>40710851
Thanks, maybe I am overthinking it. I'll re-read it and see if I still feel that way after a fresh look.
>>40711658
It will eventually make its way out, I'm sure of it. My lust for sweet snow elf milk knows no bounds, I WILL impregnate Wamy.

>>40707215
I'm not clicking your IP grabber

>>40710604
The fuck do you mean bandwidth? Are you using Starlink or some shit?

>>40633973
Kurokami's Errand Boy: Chapter 1

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRCoP98yD9WMXUtmJxUN4P7-96UDHOOJ8NcmwQu0rwyG7oYptoQzHyxFFCkU21NhADTtGgeGLLoFus7/pub

Tags: Kurokami, Korone, Okayu, Mio, SFW

Kurokami's Errand Boy: Chapter 2

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vST0BeCzakOh1Xz8deo_A1ldUPwJTadYqMgXP0Gjs9Mgk37GK1B3_mWqcVqmlq8ZjtCUpWjqfsUlym8/pub

Tags: Kurokami, Korone, Okayu, Mio SFW

Here's the first two chapters I got so far where you become Kurokami's errand boy in an attempt to keep yourself safe from all the other delinquents in school. It was definitely a fun shift from the fantasy stuff I've been exclusively writing, and I look forward to completing this story. Might be one or two more chapters tops. The fluff is coming.
As always, feedback is always appreciated.

>>40716810
>Two chapters at once
You never cease to amaze me. Don't lose that spark.

>>40716810
>2 chapters at once
You're a powerhouse, Anon. Thank you for this!
I'll try to write a review later once I'm done reading them (and finish my Uni assignments). Do keep in mind that it's not my strength, so it's likely gonna be lackluster.
Thank you for the hard work!

>>40716810
pretty nice my dude. I wouldnt object to a bit more..dressing? of the scene, right now you go from point A to point B fairly quickly without stopping and while i dont hate it, i would like the scenes to be described a bit more
Still great, keep up the good work and im also gonna say that these threads have cursed me Because i wanted Anon to fuck Kurokami's sole as she scrolls through her phone, disgusted at how easy she buys his loyalty with just one foot

Yeah yeah can we swerve back to unshaven free-use cumhole slampig Okayu? God that’s hot.

>>40718268
*toses my body over you, moving the wheel so we crash into armpit discourse* get fucked retard

>>40718340
Joke’s on you I love armpits

>>40718268
>>40718340
Bros...we can have both we don't need to fight...

>>40718268
>>40718340
>>40718491
>Anon's first meeting with okayu is her leaving the bathroom, stinking of semen, after an entire class ran a train through her

>>40718697
>Anon is lowkey disgusted by Okayu but can’t resist the allure of having a human pocket pussy on-call
>Okayu does that low-self esteem girl thing where she falls head over heels over the first fuck who treats her like a human being and hugs her after sex.
>Anon is now but disdained and resented as the guy who stole the town bicycle for himself
>Sora watches over all this from a distance, horrified but aroused
I’m a chuuni fuck though so I’m not sure I could write this without eventually Muv-Luving the whole thing.

>>40718491
But I WANT to fight. I can fap after after

>>40719184
more like
>anon and Sora are already dating, but she wont put out/ its way too sensitive so anon never gets to finish outside of a very bad handjob
>He's literally sitting on a cum powderkeg until he comes across okayu
>Anon takes on her offer, thinking she's disgusting but way too horny to think straight
>Sex with Sora is slow, dry and boring with the lights out
>Okayu squeezes three shouts out of him in a nasty bathroom, sweat, saliva and pubes everywhere
>As the days pass, Anon finds more things in common with the whore cat, who he keeps fucking, than with Sora

>>40719627
Well the way I see it this is fixed by turning Sora into a slampig onahole (with a warm fluffy bush). That should liven her up.

>>40716372
My writing bandwidth. I already have like 4 unfinished WIPs already while not doing much writing lately to begin with.

>>40718491
Man I love Deaver, dude just draws the softest girls with the focus on the shit I want to see.

Gross whale chasers

>>40721169
What's wrong with whales?

>>40721205
They are gross

>>40721374
I think whales can be cute

>>40721205
This is picture is so funny.

>>40721169
Neither of those anons, the body type I picture with this Okayu is this one.

>>40721496
I think it's really cute. AI art produces wonderful things sometimes

>>40721496
Why? Is it because Chloe's ghost arc gave birth to such a cute image, or because she looks like a penis?

>>40721205
>>40721474
Oh. I get it now

>>40721058
Then write.

>>40721474
She is not a whale

>>40721882
We know, she's a virtual avatar generated using computer graphics.

>>40721882
>Calls herself an orca
>Has a distinct fishy odour
>Probably wet all the time
Look dude it adds up

>>40721205
>>40721374
>>40721474
Chloe is gross AND cute and I want her to give me a thighjob while she stinks of sweat/semen and has a bunch of filled condoms tied to her underwear.

>>40722033
If you say so.

>>40716810
>As always, feedback is always appreciated.
MWanon??

>>40721474
This Chloe has a very oniusual face.

>>40722033
Orcas aren't whales, theyre dolphins, which means she has dolphin grip. I dont know why youre so intent on slandering her like this

>>40722110
Since when could dolphins grip things?

>>40716810
This was pretty fun, but things felt a bit... Off at times? Like the entire story is being told in zoom out mode, without enough time close to the characters to get to know then.

That said, I do am excited for the next chapter, so good job

>>40722137
Use google.

>>40722110
Dolphins are whales

>>40722189
No they aren't. use google.

>>40722189
What?

>>40722148
Cute Fubuki.

>>40722280
Fubuki is always cute, anon. But that's actually Kurokami.

>>40722076
No, what made you think that?

>>40722214
>>40722269
>"The toothed whales (also called odontocetes, systematic name Odontoceti) are a parvorder of cetaceans that includes dolphins, porpoises, and all other whales possessing teeth, such as the beaked whales and sperm whales."

>>40721474
But she isn’t. She’s smelly and gross.

>>40722105
>oniusual
You mean unusual?

>>40722351
That was what I alluded to, but I changed the spelling to hint at having understood the image.

>>40722316
Anon, her full name is Kurokami Fubuki

>>40721503
This is good for any woman. Fat enough she’s glad you’ll have her and will fuck like a tiger in gratitude, not so fat it’s downright unhealthy or ugly.

>>40721169
I would fucking rape Haato's bellybutton given the chance. That fat bitch gets my dick hard.
>>40721503
Like this Moona. SEX

>>40716810
Hi, I promised you a review, so I'll try my best, despite it possibly being lackluster.

First off, I really enjoyed the story so far. I like the way you incorporate various chuubas into the story, despite many of them not really doing much. It does get the point across that the school is ruled by the girls, though, so that's pretty cool still. It strikes me as a bit odd that no one in the school staff seems to care that their students are being terrorized by so many female delinquents, but I understand it has to be this way for the story and the events to move forward. It's a minor gripe, but I felt like pointing it out regardless.
As far as Kuro and her crew's characterizations go, I'd say you did a good enough job, though outside of Kuro, we still don't really know exactly what kind of people Korone, Okayu and Mio are. I guess that's fine, given that they're supporting characters at best, but a bit of deeper characterization wouldn't hurt. That aside, I love the way you're writing Kurokami. She's pretty close to 'canon' and seeing her gradually warming up to Anon (or us, I guess) is incredibly cute. I hope to see more of this in the future.
The one thing I felt was a bit lacking was probably the descriptions of the places and events. Large chunks of the scenes are simply going from point A to point B with nothing else in between. It's not something I hate, I just feel like I should point it out as I think your future works may benefit from it.

Overall, great job, I enjoyed those first two chapters a lot and hope to see more! Thank you for writing it, it's incredibly enjoyable so far!

>>40722442
do americans really

New thread
>>40722363

>>40722571
Look bro I just like my women with giant tits hips and ass, I cannot stand flatties. Sure every so often you strike diamonds and you get a girl with giant assets and a model’s midsection, but if push comes to shove I’ll take a bit of a belly if it means her tits are huge.

>>40722816
>Bit of stomach poking out of the suit+fat tits
Goddamn you.

>>40722571
Not american, just skinny.
I don't want more bones, and chubby girls are top fucking tier.

>inb4 that not chubby that's fat
Have it be fat then. I would still fuck that until my legs gave out.

>>40722816
>I cannot stand flatties
Flat women are god's given gift upon this world you heathen

>>40722655
should have been Noel's a whore edition

>>40723028
You can keep them. Personally I like my plate stacked with meat.

>>40723295
i agree

>>40722317
Asking for feedback is exclusive to one writer now

>>40724445
Asking for feedback in those exact words has always been an MWanon thing

>>40724521
I'll start doing it too out of spite

>>40716810
>2 chapters when I haven't finished 1
goddamn, you just pushed me to keep going...after I finish reading.

>>40716810
You know, posting two chapters at once kind of defeats the purpose of doing two chapters

>>40725271
I know you can do it bro!
>>40725354
I honestly didn't even think it was going to need chapters at first, but I thought I was at a good breaking point and wanted to get some feedback on how I was doing so far, and I'm glad I did. The word count was also getting a little high, simpler stories like this should be in more digestible chunks I feel.

>>40725223
Nah you wouldn't, you're scared

>>40725542
N-No I'm not

>>40723028
Flat girls with wide hips and short stature are based.
Short girls with huge tits and ass are based.

I guess the only thing I can't get my dick hard for are tall chicks huh.

>>40725893
Based on what?

How is this still here

>>40728710
It's nuts