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Story recap! There... was one stories posted in the last thread.

Abusive sheep: Tags: Watame, SFW, Gore, Abusive Chuuba:>>38129310

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

IRyS teasing you with her feet!:>>38084724

a fic where a male chuuba gets raped:>>38110374

(You), a ****school aged boy, are suddenly afflicted with a strange disease that causes your testicles to swell up to a painful size unless not properly drained every few hours. Your school is made aware of this problem and the school nurse bravely steps up to selflessly help you with your condition!:>>38115590

(You) are the new manager of HoloMyth, however it seems you caught the eye of Mori Calliope, who seems to have missed the ''Do not Sexually Harass coworkers'' book in her homecountry:>>38118609

Watame being brutally gangraped by three black men.:>>38130058

Being abused emotionally and physically by Miko because we don't have a fic about her abusing you yet.:>>38156918

Suisei somehow knows that you've had sexual thoughts about her and she's FUCKING PISSED. So she's hunting you down to ensure that one way or another you won't 'think' about her sexually again.:>>38187519

We've had cheeky brat correction..... We've had desperate hag correction...... It's time..... the world is ready for normal woman the same age as (You) correction.....:>>38192469

Mio triying to fit in her highschool uniform and failing because her ass and tits are massive nowadays:>>38202238

Going on a camping trip with Mumei only for to tell you once you set up that all cryptids are real and that there's actually a bunch in the forest right now:>>38216609

Gura and Bae giving you the scariest double blowjob of your life:>>38217574

>>38233012
Mumei being a serial killer is hot.

>>38233113
Cumming in Okayu's bellybutton

>>38234812
Would make a great murder mystery story.

>>38239012
No it wouldn't.

>>38240592
Yes it would.

>>38233113
A fic about pairs of chuubas in a massive race with a gimmick where one of the pair can turn into a vehicle. I.e Gura can turn into a car, Ayame can turn into a bike, etc.

>>38233113
(You) are a swindler, a scumbag, a charlatan who set's up shop outside the hololive corp building. Under false pretenses you sell miracle drugs of varying effects to many a Holo chuuba. The loli's want to be taller? Or grow bigger breasts? No worries! A sip of this strange green liquid and they'll be right as rain in a few weeks! The hags are worried about their waning youth? Mix this strange blue powder with some water and apply the paste across the entire body and you'll regain that vigor of days past! You honestly know that your miracle drugs don't even work a damn, other than one that is, an aphrodisiac! Sad to say it only works on men, which is why you haven't even bothered to market it towards the ladies. But oh what a doozy it truly is! A jar filled with a milky purple liquid, even a single sniff would be enough to set a man off for the entire day! You think it should be time to pack up shop and find a different location soon, aside from the girls most desperate to change your business has been severely waning these past couple days. Until a group made up of every girl you sold to since you set up shop approaches. The scoundrels restrain you! And one of them, you think it was the pink haired one with the fluffy canine ears. Stayed behind perusing your consumables! Strangely enough the moment she saw the aphrodisiac she snatched it up with a curious yet almost knowledgeable speed, and followed the rest of her coworkers in with a smile that made you nervously sweat!

>>38241962
NTA but you should outline what would make it so “great”, then. Because I agree with the other Anon, it sounds like a very basic, un-detailed prompt and lacks a good twist or premise. What strikes it as “great” to you?

>>38234812
Yandere Mumei...

>>38236720
>Pressing the head of your dick into her belly button and rubbing against it until you burst and fill the little hole before the rest coats her tummy
Fuck you for putting this in my head

Sorry if this is frowned upon, i dont visit this thread since i suck at writing, but I was fucking with ChatGPT a new AI text generator and wanted to post this here.

>>38247073
Non-human created "literature" is not welcome here, especially if it's a screenshot.

We need more goth Fauna and/or goth Moona fics. If I ever finish my WIP perhaps we'll have one.

>>38247073
AI may take over art soon, but looking at this I think organic writing's still got a few years left in it.

>>38247896
Sell me on the concept anon. What's the appeal?

>>38248371
Goth chicks are inherently sexy and can work either as a sadistic character or a tough girl who crumbles immediately when you take the initiative type. They also have the advantage of allowing you to write incredibly cringe edgy dialogue. This is as far as I've gotten.

>>38248536
I know Fauna was a goon but I never realized she was goth.

Moona rubbed her throbbing cock on Pekora's back, thick precum coating her shoulderblades and the nape of her neck. "Please...Pekora...let me fuck your ass! I need it so bad!" Pekora shivered, feeling the huge throbbing girth -almost a meter long- lying on her. She could probably take it fine, but it might just break her... "W-wait Moona, you know I didn't prepare for anal!" "I don't care! I need it!" Pekora's puckered sphincter twitched. "Moona, poop comes from there, you know!" "Yeah, yeah," She said dismissively, "but that doesn't matter to my cock!" "Um...how about this... next time I come to visit I'll let you fuck me in the ass!" "Pekora I NEE-" "IF! If you want to fuck my shithole then you have to love shit too!" "W-what?!" This time Moona was the one who was taken aback. "If you want to fuck my ass the you have to become the type of Moona who can say 'I love shit! Shit is my friend!' ok? Understand?" Moona was silent for a moment. "That's...disgusting Pekora." Moona said quietly, but, the jet of precum and shaking of her cock made her protest into a lie. Pekora's member, not as massive as Moona's but still sizable, began to harden, ripping the thigh-high it was stuffed into. "Maybe... but if you do that then I'll let you have my ass."

Months later, after Pekora had returned to Japan, she got a package from Moona. A huge, refrigerated box and a DVD. On top of the package was written 'THAW' and the DVD was labeled 'Watch First'. Pekora popped it into the player. Moona stood back to the camera fully nude, her huge balls, marbari-covered pussy, and even more huge ass on display. Pekora's jaw dropped, and Moona began to speak. "Hi, Pekora! Peeeeace!" Moona raised her hand to her face, making the v sign, "When are you coming back to play? I miss you soooo much! When you last left you told me to become a Moona that love shit if I want to fuck your supple ass, right? Well I took all these months diligently learning the ways of shit! Every time I took a crap I've thought of you!" Pekora gulped, her cock hardening, slapping her flat chest. She was glad she was naked if this was what she thought it was. "Now look!" Moona pushed a bovine-like fart rocking her ass, then and gaped open, revealing a fore-arm thick crowning turd. "I've been practicing, and my ass has been destroyed by gigantic corkscrew shits, hhhhhhnnnghhHHHHHHNNNGGGG!" Moona let out another tearing fart and pushed, straining, birthing a leg-sized shit on to the floor! "FUCK! Look at that, Pekora! My intestines are crammed full of the shit I've been saving, and now it's going to peek out and say hi!" Another grunt and push, and the turd lengthened, one unbroken piece of waste slithering on the floor like a serpent. Pekora grabbed a condom and slid it on, her balls already churning and cock shaking, she hadn't even touched herself. "No fair, Moona, I want to be there playing with your lovely filth..." "Now, then there's four hours on this battery and I'm going to shit through every one of them!" Pekora squatted, ready to push her own filth out, both hands strangling her cock as she watched the screen, enraptured. "And when I'm done I'll wrap the turd up and send it to you in a refrigerated package so you have something to play with until you can come and see me!" Pekora looked at the enormous cooler thawing. "You mean that thing is her..?" She swallowed hard in excitement and squirted precum into the condom, her pucker winking in excitement. Behind her, on the TV, Moona grunted and farted, shitting and jerking her cock. Pekora turned up the volume and moaned, jerking along with her and flexing her asshole, mouth watering with anticipation. Once she was done here she had to get to Moona's, even if it meant swimming to Indonesia herself. She'd never been so horny in her life.

>>38248823
Yeah, there's some art of it knocking about too. Pretty hot.

>>38248823
She's a very complex individual

>>38249992
I am aggressively horny for this Kirin.

>>38249976
what the fuck

op, please don't archive that, ffs

>>38249976
This is amazing.

AA, please archive it.

>>38249983
I want to pamper a touch-starved doomer goth Fauna!

I kind of want to try writing an abusive chuuba fic, but portraying a girl as evil makes me uncomfortable in a way that portraying them as horny or as comically stupid does not. Anyone else ever feel this?

>>38250763
Try not to look at the abuser as being evil and abusing just for its own sake. Abusive people tend to be flawed and have reasons for being the way they are.

>>38249976
Pekora grabbed a belt and tightened it around her cock and condom, making sure it didn't fall off, the walked over to the once-refrigerated package, now thawed. Inside was the huge spiral of Moona's waste. She opened the cling-wrap that sealed it and inhaled a deep breath. The earthy stench hit her nose like a brick and she came, her condom ballooning and her pussy squirting on the floor Eyes rolling back in her head and her mouth fell open, tongue lulling out like a panting dog. Her balls and shaft seemed to contract and she came, shooting the sticky ropes to the smell alone. Grunting and moaning Pekora gripped the cooler as hard as she could, and allowed herself to fall face first into the massive turd. Her vision went brown and her mouth and nose were filled with excrement as her orgasm intensified. She lost control of her bowels along with her bladder, and baseball-sized rabbit pellets began to fall on the floor, the condom at it's limit bursting. Cumming, shitting, and pissing she lay with her head in the cooler as the first wave finally mellowed. When she was able to think again, Pekora grabbed a chunk of the shit and began to smear it all over her chest, chanting under her breath "Shitty titties, shitty bunny titties, such a filthy girl, dirty bunny girl..." Something her mother used to sing to her when they did scat-play in Pekora's childhood. The memories made her even more horny, made her want Moona's shit even more. Pekora picked a length of the turd up and wrapped it around her cock. "Moona! I'm fucking your shit! I'm going to impregnate your crap, Moona!" She proclaimed using the filth like an onahole. Her hips wildly bucked until her cock spasmed out another load of thick jizz. Pekora spent hours in ecstasy, eventually fucking and cumming until she could no longer move. She felt as if her body was spent. Cuddling up to the still-substantial turd, Pekora went to sleep, the DVD long finished playing.

The next morning Pekora ate a big breakfast with lots of milk and fiber, put a plug in her ass, then packed and took a plane to Indonesia, texting Moona so she didn't catch her off guard. Pekora never did like flying but loved the crowded airport bathrooms and the cramped airplane toilets. She especially loved walking into one unflushed. Hamburgers may be Pekora's food, but the waste of strangers was her most favorite snack. During the flight, and after a few cups of coffee, Pekora's stomach was churning and rumbling. She needed to go so bad it was giving her horrible cramps. Her pussy was so wet it was almost dripping, and her cock was straining against the plastic cage between her legs. She absolutely loved needing to shit! She was going to have such a surprise for Moona when she landed. Much of what Pekora had for breakfast was the waste Moona had sent, Pekora had buttered it like a crumpet and eaten the excreta with eggs and bacon. The memory of it made Pekora's heart flutter. As good as that was Moona was going to make so much more.

When the plane bumped on to the runway Pekora almost pissed herself. Finally in Indonesia she more horny than ever. She looked out through the crowd and spotted Moona and waved. Moona slily smiled when she approached. "Looks like you had a bumpy flight." "God yes, I need to go..." Moona nodded, and took her into the bathroom. Inside, Pekora flipped up her skirt, revealing her cage. Moona raised an eyebrow and smiled then stripped and knelt in front of Pekora, mouth open. "I...I can't aim in this thing..." Moona grabbed Pekora's ass and pulled her close, taking the entire cage inside her mouth. Pekora moaned at the heat engulfing her member and began to piss from both her cock and her pussy, filling Moona's throat and covering her huge tits with hot urine. Moona, for her part, began to stroke her own massive cock, slicking the member with piss and giving herself a titfick. When Peko was done, Moona stood. She was a mess, and she loved it. "I'm so glad you're here, Pekora, this weekend is going to be so much fun!" Moona giggled and put her clothes back on, still soaked in piss. Her cock wouldn't go down, so she just buttoned under her shirt, the phimosis-foreskined head making a bulge between her tits.

>>38250763
I understand what you mean, it's difficult to write a chuuba out of character.

>>38252097
This is actually incredible. Have you written anything else here? It reminds me of Winner Winner Chicken Dinner.

>>38252183
Thank you, and yep, that's me! I've written several other stories too, most discontinued and never will be finished lmao. I love writing but I hate being consistent, I guess.

I've been thinking, since we're approaching the end of the year, I was thinking of doing a sort of "awards" for the stories/writefags here for no reason other than to voice more appreciation for our authors and to have fun at the end of year. What's the criteria? Nothing really, just anons nominating and nonsensically deciding their favourite authors, with their own set of reasons.

I was thinking of naming it /wg/'s Arbitrary Awards, and generally just celebrating this general despite all the things we've gone through in the year(and before). It may or may not go through, but what the hell, right?

>>38252375
Only if it's done as a complete shitpost with nonsensical awards, winners and categories.

>>38252375
It'll fuel pekofags ego no matter what so I'd advise against it.

>>38252810
What you don't want to see the Pekofag sweep that's sure to come out of the awards?

>>38252375
what >>38252493 said. make a joke of it.

>>38252493
>Most Mentally Ill Protagonist Award

>>38252493
>Longest Run-on Sentence
>Largest (You) Harvest
>Most Bullshit Plot Twist
>The One I've Nutted To The Most
>Lamest Protagonist
>Weirdest Fetish
>Most Pretentious Vocabulary
>Least Satisfying Sex Scene
>Stupidest Premise

>>38252493
>Longest comma combo
>Actual correct usage of a semicolon
>Longest time gone without using a proper name
>Most unneeded paragraphs
>Most lost potential

>>38252810
>>38252902
Who cares about thread celebrities? Giving awards to the stories is a good idea, it's not about the authors.

>>38253540
Spoken like someone who knows he won't be getting jack shit.

>>38253578
Which is a better position to speak from than that of someone who wants personal fame on 4chan.

>>38253263
Semicolons aren't that hard desu although this thread does have a lot of ESLs.

>>38253674
Lol, the awards aren't even out yet and you're already so jealous.

>>38253714
No, you're jealous. I'm envious.

>>38253540
>Who cares about thread celebrities?
BB is my beacon in the cesspool of life.

>>38253150
Genuinely difficult to peg beyond on the obvious psychotic murderers like the guy from Heartbreak Tokyo
>>38253171
>The One I've Nutted To The Most
That one guy who fucking ripped his dick off to Festival of Sensations and told the thread about it everytime will come running in on all fours like a dog to develop a poetic epitaph to honor his quintillion lost children. The rest are harder

>>38253867
Haven't heard FoS mentioned in a while. I never understood the praise it got, because it wasn't thought-provoking or written in any significant manner, it was just a coomfic.

>>38253918
Apparently it was a coomfic that was very good at its job.
t. someone who never read it

>>38253918
It was an above average coomfic. That's about it. It's talked about so much because even if you managed to create something worthy of being compared to the Bible in terms of cultural significance it'll always lose to raw smut

>>38254030
>>38254034
Really disheartening to hear. There's a veritable smorgasboard of interesting and emotionally appealing content in the archive and yet rubbing one's dick seems to be more important than feeding one's soul here.

>>38254142
I don't see a big difference, really. It's just a question of what part of the brain a story appeals to.

>>38254142

>>38254142
It's funny anime girl fanfiction.

>>38254142
It is what it is, best not to dwell on it. You're better off to show support to what you've read and liked with the same gusto as they do

>>38253263
>Most lost potential
Pretty sure this would only go to thing like completed series and lengthy one-shots without follow up.
Personally I'd vote brown black and blue because I love you. That was a fic that sacrificed too much of its own plot and character to the fetish and turned itself into 'just a domestic abuse fic' rather than the drama it was building up to be.

>>38252097
With how full and cramping Pekora was the ride home would have been hell for anyone else, but Pekora was in heaven. Her bowels ached, her stomach was cramping, pain was shooting through her body, her face was flushed, and she was covered in sweat. Moona looked at her sidelong, and licked her lips. "You're in so much pain." Pekora nodded, blushing. Had she not been plugged she would have uncontrollably shit hours ago. "You're so hot when you're suffering, you know that?" Moona had intentionally taken long, winding, bumpy backroads just to prolong this. Pekora wouldn't have had it any other way. Each shock and bump sent a wave of nausea and dizziness through her head and pleasure up her plugged ass. Instead of using Moona's inner-city apartment they had rented a cabin in the mountains and the terrain was much rougher. "Moona..." Started Pekora, "I have to pee again." Moona gestured at the seats and floorboard, covered in plastic-leather covers. Trembling, Pekora let go, leaning back in her seat, pissing all over herself and all in the floor. Moona reached over to her and pinched a hardened nipple through the fabric of her top. Pekora moaned and unbuttoned her top, the shirt falling away from her almost-flat chest. Her exposed skin was clammy and beaded with sweat and Moona could see she was panting heavily. Her stomach, now on display, was harshly distended. Moona, ever the sadist, smiled and smacked it. Pekora cut off a small scream. "Moona, please...it's a gift for you..." Peko gasped, "you are a 'Shit is my friend Moona', aren't you?" Moona's cock throbbed, had it been not for the sounding rod stuck deep into her urethra she'd be leaking precum. "I'll show you my love for shit... I'd do anything to fuck your tight shithole, Pekora!"

<I've run out of time, and have to go, so I'm going to cut this here. Ta>

>>38254534
Til next time, scatfag. You'll always be my gold standard for scatfics.

>>38254534
You should give it a title, by the way.

>>38254564
I really do appreciate that anon, thank you!

>>38254577
To be honest, I've never named any of my fics, AA always has. How about 'Tsuki no Usagi: Unkomonogatari' ?

>>38254897
>Tsuki no Usagi: Unkomonogatari' ?
My fucking sides. I love this

>>38254897
The award for best title goes to.....

A-Any updates on the Lui cuck fic?

>>38256532
The Lui cuck fic has no set schedule. The fic is done when it's done and will be released when it's done. Hmmm?

>>38256532
Yeah, it's not getting done for weeks if not a couple months. Your desperation is very cute though, Anon, keep on tugging to NTS like she expects you to

>>38258125
Not incorrect but I am not you, anon

>>38258125
I KNOW! BUT I CAN'T STOP THINKING ABOUT IT!

>>38258198
SORRY FOR PESTERING YOU ABOUT IT BUT DOMMY LUI LIVES RENT-FREE IN MY HEAD, I CAN'T EVEN FAP ANYMORE WITHOUT IMAGINING HER BEATING ME OFF AND WHISPERING IN MY EAR ABOUT ALL THE GUYS SHE'S FUCKED THAT DAY ALONE! I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW I WAS INTO THIS! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH

Instead of word count, share the page count of your current wip.
I'll start
17, Cautiously optimistic that this fic will come out this month.

>>38258721
13, I have no goddamn clue when it will be done.

>>38252493
>>38252957

I am in agreement that the "awards" should be completely absurd and nonsensical. Perhaps we should start with nominating what kind award categories before going into nominating stories? Should this be a proper voting poll, or just anything goes?

>>38258530
This guy wants Lui to tell him about all the big-dicked chads that get to use her holes however they want. Meanwhile he is lying on the ground, forced to pathetically hump his hips upwards to fuck the space inbetween Lui's feet, because she's not moving them an inch for someone as pathetic as him. And then she squeezes his cock right before he cums.

>>38258721
A gorillion because I type in 75 point font, doublespace and use 12cm margins on a5 paper there's a reason for word count and not page count, anon

>>38260637
t. fag who cannot legitimately write more than a single page

>>38260706
I don't know what t. Refers to, but we don't sign our posts here, mister single-letter

>>38260078
Honestly this would basically be a giant circlejerk about how much we like each others work anyway. So it just sounds like the entire thing should be 'gush about fics you liked/found interesting under the guise of an end of the year award show'.
No clue how to turn this into a thread cooperative thing though.

>>38260147
mmm...not so much this one bro. I appreciate the attempt but a lot of what makes the idea hot in my head is her stroking you lovingly while talking about the dudes she's fucking instead of you. being verbally degraded is better than physician degradation.

>>38260832
Seems like our tastes differ a bit then. But that's fine

>>38260861
I respect you nonetheless anon. through cuck unity.

>>38258721
157 and 4 respectively.

this place has turned into a /d/ fetish haven

>>38261437
>>38254233

>>38261437
What, you don't like poo? Get a load of this faggot.

>>38260967
...
AA?

>>38261437
THIS NIGGA HATES DOO-DOO

>>38258721
I'm at 100 at the moment. I'm finally at the wrap up for it though. I might just try to get a nice little bow at the last bit today and spend the next couple days making proof reads and edits.

>>38262211
Yeah, hi.

>>38263112
I'm curious.
What did you think of that one April fool's fanchapter?

>>38263306
I don't remember it at all beyond some /become/ stuff that isn't exactly my favorite. The one thing that really sticks in my memory was "Why would Marine shoot Ina when she was explicitly told that Ina was the one who saved his life beforehand"? That irked me. Marine is a bit conventionally dumb from time to time but there's no way she got dicked so violently it removed what happened not even an hour prior from her mind. Beyond that, for an April Fool's joke there was an incredible amount of effort expended with regards to world building and the implementation of other characters. The fetish content just isn't for me at all and I think I blocked out a good majority of it as a result.

AA you archived the wrong thing from that Ayame thread.
>>1217915 is the fic that was unarchived.
'Post chuubas being abusive' fic posts is just a clone of a link to "Anon's collective writings"

>>38265062
Oh, my bad, then. That's super weird. I remember seeing this fic before. I'll go ahead and get it swapped out/around.

"Mio, have you seen my listener-san coffee c-WAAAAH?!" "Tch, Korone, what's - oh my God, Ayame, go put on some pants!" Ayame giggled, then lifted her arms. "Look, Mrs. Mio, I'm wearing shorts!" "WAAAAH!" Korone recoiled in horror again. "AYAME! Oh, Koro, it's ok. Ayame, go put on something more... appropriate. Before Korone here has a heart attack." "Ugh, fine, whatever!" Ayame slunk back to her room. "Mio, we gotta do something about that girl, she's..." Korone trailed off, making a face. "Oh, I know, Koro, but she's only staying with us a couple more days. Besides, her girlfriend just kicked her out and broke up with her." "I can see why." "Now, Koro we had to do something!" during this conversation Okayu woke up and came out of her room, wearing her pajamas. "Good morning, Koro, good morning Mio! Is this the laundry?" She asked excitedly. "Why yes, dear, it sure is! Just finished." Okayu looked through it and found some of her clothes, then caressed the warm bundle to her cheek. "Mmmm, clean underwear, I just love how warm it is." Korone looked at her and grimaced, but Okayu missed the look, running back to her room to change clothes. "Mio, I swear that girl ain't right!" "That's nice dear." Mio said absently as she read her newspaper. "Oh, look here, Koro! It says they need a substitute teacher at Arlington High, one for sex ed. What do you think, hon?" Korone rose from her chair. "Well, Mio," she said, her tone awkward, "I think it's time for me to head to Strickland. This propane won't sell itself! Heh heh!" She hurriedly kissed Mio on her cheek, made her way to her pickup truck outside, and left. "Hmm, wonder what that was all about? Huh, I got to get Okayu ready for school. OKAYU!"

>>38266582
"Mio, have you seen my listener-san coffee c-WAAAAH?!"
"Tch, Korone, what's - oh my God, Ayame, go put on some pants!"

Ayame giggled, then lifted her arms. "Look, Mrs. Mio, I'm wearing shorts!"
"WAAAAH!" Korone recoiled in horror again.
"AYAME! Oh, Koro, it's ok. Ayame, go put on something more... appropriate. Before Korone here has a heart attack."
"Ugh, fine, whatever!" Ayame slunk back to her room.

"Mio, we gotta do something about that girl, she's..." Korone trailed off, making a face.
"Oh, I know, Koro, but she's only staying with us a couple more days. Besides, her girlfriend just kicked her out and broke up with her."
"I can see why."
"Now, Koro we had to do something!"

During this conversation Okayu woke up and came out of her room, wearing her pajamas. "Good morning, Koro, good morning Mio! Is this the laundry?" She asked excitedly.
"Why yes, dear, it sure is! Just finished."
Okayu looked through it and found some of her clothes, then caressed the warm bundle to her cheek. "Mmmm, clean underwear, I just love how warm it is."

Korone looked at her and grimaced, but Okayu missed the look, running back to her room to change clothes. "Mio, I swear that girl ain't right!"
"That's nice dear." Mio said absently as she read her newspaper. "Oh, look here, Koro! It says they need a substitute teacher at Arlington High, one for sex ed. What do you think, hon?"
Korone rose from her chair. "Well, Mio," she said, her tone awkward, "I think it's time for me to head to Strickland. This propane won't sell itself! Heh heh!" She hurriedly kissed Mio on her cheek, made her way to her pickup truck outside, and left. "Hmm, wonder what that was all about? Huh, I got to get Okayu ready for school. OKAYU!"

>>38266582
Pekora would be Dale, Miko would be Boomhauer.

>>38266888
Checked, and agreed. Also, I have Matsuri pegged as Bill, and Choco as John Redcorn

You can always tell when the amerimutts wake up.

>>38267379
Holy shit, Matsuri as Bill is hilarious. Hoshikawa even kind of looks like a younger Lenore.

>>38269313
>Pekora convincing Matsuri that all her physical and mental problems are because she's actually a military experiment to make a super soldier

>>38233113
Noel blackmialing her teacher for sex

>>38270865
This but her teacher reports her and gets her expelled from school.

>>38272031
this but unironically

>>38233113
(You) are a farmer that owns a small farm that's been in your family for generations. Suddenly one day thousands of acre's near your land were bought up. Quaking (possibly even shitting) in your boots you think this is it, a corporation has come to buy up all the farm land and put you out of business. Imagine your surprise when you learn it was all bought up by a small woman who reminds you of a shark. The next day all kinds of show quality horses are brought to the farm and let loose. Your new neighbor comes by and introduces herself, along with the fact that she knows nothing about farming or taking care of horses and would like your help. Does she seriously expect you to help her out with all of this?

>>38233113
Giving a mating press to IRyS and Bae

>>38233113
Reposting from a couple threads ago

An apocalyptic event has resulted in the deaths of every single male on earth. Every single male other than (You) that is. For some reason mother nature herself chose you to be the male that will help keep life as we know it going. Acting as a sort of guide she intends for you to father the next generation of not only humans but multiple other species as well.

>>38233113
A series of hilarious coincidences and misunderstandings causes Mumei and Selen to go on for months without realising that they joined different vtuber companies.

There once was a vtuber named haato
Who was lethal when she drove her own auto
Her valet called in sick
So she tried to drive sick
And five men ended up castrato

I once knew a lass name Koroni
She was lonely and constantly horny
She talked with a few men
Now her careers at end
And she responds to her chat so forlornly

Beware of Ninomae Ina'nis
Not of her tentacles, no, of her penis
She cares not for gender
When she's on a bender
She'll rape you till her cums intravenous

There once was a man named Gold Roger, who was king of the pirates!
He had fame, power, and wealth beyond your wildest dreams!
Before they hung him from the gallows, these were the final words he said:
“My fortune is yours for the taking, but you'll have to find it first. I left everything I own in one piece.”
ever since, pirates from all over the world set sail for the grand line, searching for One Piece, the treasure that would make their dreams come true.

>>38279591
>>38279748
>>38280129
Nice

>>38274952
This would result in a lot of genetic deformities since the next generation would all be half siblings fucking each other.

>>38285648
I will triumph over Nijisanji, and liberate us all. And we will become the Sons of Hololive.
*ring ring*
Roboco, are you receiving? We're still here.

>>38233056
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSeWWzlBNSK8kFU2C4ISTNz09I2UkQezL0c5_KGpwNuYv_bPJaX3bYRfKHE5owJ07uKskfdZmYWlZyQ/pub
Day Dream Eternal Part 2
Tags: anthology, Lui, non-sexual ageplay, mommy issues

My goodness has it not just been ages?

>>38291463
I'm confused as the fic has two titles.

>>38274952
This but Fauna takes active part in making sure the mating sessions go well, even helping you "convince" the girls who are reluctant.

>>38294401
>Comes down to some as a goddess to try and trick them into thinking it's divinely ordained
>Honeypots some of the more female inclined girls
>>38282508
>Uses nature powers to prevent eventual inbreeding problems
>Gives you stupid stamina boosts when you encounter multiple girls at the same time
>Starts convincing the rest of the council that they should all let you hit as well because "He's already done it with every mortal woman so we might as well."

>>38294401
>Fauna restraining actively crying and screaming women with vines and using them to spread their legs/pussies open for you

>>38301012
>Creepy Pagan Sex God Fauna
I'm into it

>>38302215
>Anon we need to save the world! You need to have sex with this woman! F-for the next generation of course!
>F-Fauna why is she tied up? Oh god she's crying Fauna I don't think I should do this...
>Nonsense Anon! This is to keep humanity alive! Do it.

>>38303504
>every time a woman goes into labour, she's whisked away by Fauna deep into the forest
>She assures you the babies are all well taken care of, just being seperated to 'ensure gene diversity'
>Never see them again, but the forest becomes more populated with healthy animals and trees every time

>>38303504
Wouldn't this be mumei's domain? Or is she just fucked following an apocalypse on half the population

>>38308945
>game expects you to know how to play Shogi

Ame and Gura go camping one day. That night Ame awakes with a start. "Gura, wake up." She whispers hurriedly. Gura's eyes lazily open. "What is it, Ame?" She asks, the cool night air sifting through her hair. "Look up, what do you see?" "Watson, is this really the time for riddles? Let me see. Trees. Branches. The sky. Stars." Ame nods in the darkness. "Exactly. And do you know what this means?" "That we are still a ways from humanity, but not in untamed wilderness?" "No, no, Gura, think more abstract." "The cosmos is infinite and we are but specks of dust on a blue dot in nothingness?" "Gura!" "Watson, I just don't know what you're getting at!" "Damn it, Gura, it means someone stole our tent!"

>>38308951
Since it would include non-human chuuba girls I would assume it would fall more under the whole "mother nature" shtick Fauna has

>>38309366
It was me. I got cold and decided I needed it more than they did.

>>38308951
The ending will reveal (You) were actually Muman the entire time. You just forgot.

>>38310660
>memory wiped for the sake of having no qualms cheating on your oshi

>>38308951
In my personal headcanon, life itself falls under nature, while Mumei is in charge of culture.

>>38309455
Meany

>>38233113
Marine sends some harmless banter in the Sankisei groupchat only to get a flood of videos and pictures of the other three fucking her boyfriend in response.

>>38316987
Man ahaha I would hate that! I mean I'm like, sooo loyal to my girlfriend Marine. I would hate if her three (extremely attractive) genmates took advantage of me during a moment of personal weakness aha.

>>38317512
The inverse of the Lui cuck

>>38317646
>Entire fic is about getting raped by the rest of sankisei while they tell you rrats about marine.

>>38317512
>You and Marine get into a fight over something small and petty
>You both will probably forget about it in like 3 days
>Flare, Noel, and Pekora gaslight you two into thinking it's actually a way bigger deal so they get the chance to have a foursome behind Marine's back

>>38317840
>>38317854
>P: How mean of her Anoon!
>N: I can't believe she did that to you!
>F: She even left the apartment....
>P: Probably to go cheat on you!
>F: Yeah she's probably cheating on you right now Anon!
>P: Since she's cheating on you, it would only be fair that you would cheat right back!
>N: Yeah! But who could you cheat on Marine with....?
Marine actually went crying over to her sisters place

>>38318173
>I Thought You Wanted to Dance: Sankisei Edition
Hmm...

>>38317854
>>38318173
>You break up with Marine and hook up with Pekora.
>It happens again, this time with just Noel and Flare. You hook up with Flare afterwards.
>Then again, with just Noel.
>Cut to the prequel; Marine, Pekora, Noel and Flare raping you just after Rushia was fired.
Who could have possibly caused all of this?

>>38318410
*Record scratch* *freeze-frame* "Yep. That's me. You're probably wondering how I got here. Well...*cue Smash Mouth's "All Star"*

Calliope Mori's a reaper
So old she uses a beeper
But I'm not a fag
I'd still fuck that hag
Even though I know Connor went deeper

Now, Noel she's built like a farmer,
A knight, but no one would harm her.
She's stacked like a pallet,
But you don't need a mallet ,
Just pay and she'll show the 'chink' in her armor!

>>38319089
>>38318801
Thank you poetryfag

A nousagi, a grifter, and a jew,
Walked into a bar in Timbuktu
They asked the barkeep
For the highest proof drink
And he said "Sorry kid, I can't serve you!"

>>38319147
You're welcome, anon, wish I could contribute more substantial stuff right now

>>38258530
You'll end up changing the diapers of other men's children

>>38291463
It's nice to see you back.
As for this FTAK subseries, it's interesting; the plot doesn't really advance much but if you're going to make this a slow burn it feels at about the right pace.

>When they catch me fucking my fleshlight(La+)

>>38320796
>they begin cheering you on

>>38319528
I had to do a to do a double take after reading this because i didn't read the children part and just saw it as
>You'll end up changing the diapers of other men
and wondering what kind of play Lui is doing with those other guys.

>>38321262

>>38304877
I wish there was more Fauna stuff related to the weirder parts of being around a nature deity. It really does lend itself wonderfully to horror. Being exposed to rare and horribly infectious diseases/spores (which exist in nature after all), seemingly random wild animal attacks on someone's home over and over again after doing something stupid and disrespectful in the woods like carving their name into a tree, etc.

>>38319528
there are pretty easy ways to prevent pregnancy anon.

>>38321262
Also If she's being all mommy to another guy and expects me to change his diapers too I think I would leave.

I may be a potential cuck, but I draw the line on diaper shit

>>38324499
>there are pretty easy ways to prevent pregnancy anon.
no stepfathering? shame

>>38324556
nah, not my thing. I get the mentality behind it though so no judge.

>>38322502
It's one of those things that are interesting but don't really work with Fauna. I don't really think her base characterization really fits in such a way as to make her a good 'creepy pagan nature god'.

Ayo? Series writers?

>>38325472
I'm sorry anon, they've all been called up and conscripted to the frontlines.

>>38325577
Turns out all the series writers were from Russia and Ukraine and are currently killing each other. What a pity.

>>38325472
Working on it.

>>38325472
Coming along very slowly. Having fun with other things.

Anyone have any tips for making dialogue sound good? I'm kind of double guesssing every line of dialogue I've written.

>>38327654
What exactly do you dislike about your dialogue? What are you going for when writing it?

>>38327681
Taa...

>>38327654
Try to imagine the conversation audibly in your head. What tone of voice would they have? Would they stumble over their words?

>>38327759
I suppose the main reason I hate my dialogue is because it just feels like info dumping for the scene and I'm not sure if its really interesting.

>>38279591
>>38279748
>>38280129
>>38318801
>>38319089
>>38319234
((12+144+20+(3√4))/7)+(5x11)=92+0

>>38329146
Anon you'd write down "nine squared" in just plain text as 9 ^ 2.

>>38329547
I even put the raised two, 4chan just fucked it over. I fucking hate this website sometimes. Why does 4chan need all this ccs and JavaScript when it can't even display unicode correctly?

>>38329146
I don't get it

>>38233113
Hololive retelling of the Sisyphus myth starring Ayame where her punishment is that she has to do embarrassing ASMR streams for the rest of eternity.

>>38331416
This but it's done in the style of a hologra skit and the in universe writer is implied to not know what the myth of Sisyphus is other than it involving a boulder.

>>38325472
One chapter was posted in this thread and another chapter was posted two threads ago.

>>38325472
Proof reading is underway.

>>38331416
I don't see the analogy to Sisyphus. Even if you deleted the streams afterwards, someone presumably saw and enjoyed them - the boulder is entirely useless on top of the hill, and will always roll down again.

>>38330657
It's supposed to read
((12+144+20+(3√4))/7)+(5x11)=9^2+0
Or
A dozen, a gross, and a score
Plus three times the square root of four
Divided by seven
Plus five times eleven
Is nine squared and not a bit more

>>38334712
I didn't consider it that deeply, but that's true.

>>38335104
If it's not supposed to revolve around futility you could go for punishments that fit the sin à la Dante's Divina Commedia.

>>38334766
Man, you're really good at this. I don't know how you do it but thanks for sharing

>>38334766
Huh, as an ETL I didn't expect to encounter a gross and a score outside of LotR. Hurray for obsure numerical terms

>>38335451
Thank you for your kindness anon, but I can't take credit for the mathematical one. That's by a Mr. Leigh Mercer, a wordplay artist, maths expert, and a gentleman I look up to. He also created the palindrome "A man, a plan, a canal: Panama!"

Test

>>38336561
hello

>>38336793
Gura's really fucking cute in this.

>>38325711
Incredible that the omelas guy was actually from one of those places

>>38233056

The Broken Heartlock.

Marine asks you, her husband, for an open relationship, causing their entire marriage to hang by a little thread.
Anon drowns his sorrows in a bar as he thinks of a way to approach the situation, but figuring there's no easy way out, he decides to go with it.
In a bar, he'd meet with a girl that would light a new spark in his life.

https://rentry.org/hfzebv

Tags: Houshou Marine, Takanae Lui, netorase, drama, romance, slight NSFW.

>>38319531
It's going to be about two chapters more. I've finally got enough inspiration to draw from in a way that could give a satisfying arc.Thank you for sticking with it.

Forgive me for not being around so much. The AI has basically sapped my motivation for literally anything else at all.

>>38338177
>“I used to trust until you asked me if you could cheat.”
>“There’s that word again, it’s not like that!”
>“Because I love you, Marine, I don’t want to do it with anyone else.”
>“But would you do it for me?”
I hate this so fucking much. I'm reluctant to keep reading as this has already turned my stomach, but you regretfully nailed the agony this sort of discussion generates pretty well right off the bat. Good job.

>>38338177
I really like the premise, and the hopelessness anon feels is conveyed pretty well.
I would suggest transitioning from scenes a bit more smoothly though.
Also, you used 'though' instead of 'thought' a couple times.

>>38338517
>I hate this so fucking much.
Thanks.
>>38338825
>I would suggest transitioning from scenes a bit more smoothly though.
I agree. Sometimes I can't think of any worthwhile filler when I just want to change scenes, but it's something I've been trying my best to work on. Compared to my older fics I think it's better.
Also
ESL, please anderstando. I'm still kicking some bad habits.

>>38337067
She's really erotic you mean.

>>38338177
My only hope is that Marine ends up heartbroken and alone. This thoroughly brought me back to a nightmare of a time and pissed me off beyond all belief. Jesus fucking Christ.

>Marine couldn't take it anymore. Her husband left her, her lover left her, and nobody loved her anymore...and she found that she didn't even love herself anymore. She looked up, the splash of realization a bucket of icewater on her face. Before her, in the bathroom where she had been kneeling and sobbing was the mirror. The medicine cabinet. In that moment Marine looked as if a peasant kneeling on a church floor in reverence of God. She finally had purpose. Solemnly she opened the door and found the bottle of oxymorphone the doctor had given her for her back. 'Do not take with alcohol.' was emblazoned on the label. Marine blinked at that. A moment later she was sitting in the living room, a glass of wine in hand, bottle of pills beside her. It was like she was taking some corrupted version of a sacrament: a sip of wine, swallow a pill. Over and over. Soon, her arms became heavy, body warm. She was so, so tired; her eyelids fell to a close and her breathing became more shallow. She drifted into sleep, and finally, as the sun peeked over the horizon, her breath stilled. The clock-radio in her room, ever vigilant, blared to life: "Your cheatin' heart will make you weep
>You'll cry and cry and try to sleep
>But sleep won't come the whole night through
>Your cheatin' heart will tell on you~"
Bold way to end it, didn't expect that at all.

Not spoilers, btw, this is a shitpost.

>>38338177
I like the concept a lot and you make quite a decent argument for it, however i have two gripes
>First one
I know its easy to pin everything on Marine, after all she's the one suggesting the relationship, but she comes off as..way too excited? She pushes way too far for such a sensible topic specially if she's actually sexually active. from my personal experience of being proposed an open relationship the desire to experiment comes from something being stale or the person being way too much of a thrill seeker. I feel like Marine could have floated the idea, then the thing festering in (your) head and then the talk, then add some ''we dont do it like before because we are older'' or even ''she doesnt want kids'' or something that actually prompts her to try an experiment, otherwise she comes off as weird and really eager to cheat on (you), despite that clearly not being your intention
>Two
for such a serious and misserable topic, bringin up manga that lui just happened to be reading in a bar feels really bad. I was able to overlook it at first but then it was brought up and it took me out of there, i know you wanted to make Lui and Anon connect but it feels extremely forced. Something like the TV is on, the world cup is playing and she tries to make conversation about it, you tell her you know nothing about football and she goes ''well neither do it'' and a good laugh. something more organic.
Still, nice job, i think you have a winner here if you can polish those edges

>>38340750
I fucking love Cromartie. I don't how it'd work but Iove a fic based on it.

>>38341232
Read one of those long-ass comedy fics by the dude that just throws random shit together, they kinda feel the same

>>38340750
I have the reasons for Marine written in my head. They become introduced later.

I take the comments about Lui's scene at heart though, I chose manga because in this context Marine is a mangaka, though I must've forgot to show it, thus Anon knows a great deal about it.The idea you proposed with the world cup does sound right, and I'll remember it when writing something different. I appreciate the honest feedback.

Thank you very much anon.

>>38341232
>Mukirose as Freddy
>Lamy taking off her ears like Hayashida
>Towa as Maeda
>Irys as mechazawa, since no one call tell she looks weird
Its a fun concept but cromartie's visual humor could be a nightmare to write about

>>38341348
Not a problem anon, i also find myself writing something,going ''yeah this is pretty clear'' and then re-reading and going ''oh this scene feels weird because i forgot to stablish it''
As i said, keep the good work

>>38341232
I've thought about writing one centered around Shien, Aruran, Oga but as another anon said there's too much visual comedy so it wouldn't really work as a fanfic.

Can you not insert clipart into google docs?

>>38233113
(You) are the scum of society, a lowly Yakuza living your life mugging, dealing drugs and getting into fights. That seems to change once a lonely widow, Ookami Mio moves to the apartment next to you, in dire need of money to send her two teenage daughters into college, she takes your offer to be your company woman every night.
Slowly, but surely, your lives start getting intertwined

>>38341869
That's a very unrealistic premise. Mio would never pay for Subaru's education if she's already struggling to support Ayame's.

>>38341798
You can and images have been used before such as the Risu JOI fic.

>>38341798
You can just copy and paste an image in

>>38342056
>Mio selling you Subaru as a live in whore to pay for ayame's education
>put a third child in Mio and end up paying for Subaru's education
>Subaru becomes a doctor but Mio still cares more about her dropout daughter

>>38342541
Sounds like an eventual duck daughterwife

>Mio getting pregnant
The most unrealistic concept ITT

>>38342669
This thread has a futa scatfic in it, anon.

NOBODY LOOK AT THE ARCHIVE HEADER

>>38342933
its way more believable that someone grows a dick and is into literal shit than Mio's dusty hag eggs getting fertilized

>>38343100
what now, huh? How do you explain this?

>>38342669
>>38343100
Fuck off, Taiga.

>>38343100

>>38343100
Kiss my ass you fat cat cunt

>>38343025
AIIEEEEEEE

>>38233113
A rich anon buys 3 young chuuba slaves
He considers himself sadistic like hell, and once he acquires his chuubas, he feeds them well, because he needs them to have something to grab onto, he dresses them up well, because he won't be seen with girls wearing such pathetic rags, he teaches them to read and write because he will not have sex with stupid women, and so on.
In his own words he's raising them to be perfect slaves, little does he know, the chuubas are going to fall in love with him.

>>38343173
photo montage, the only thing that could compare Mio's dusty barren wom in emptyness is the space inbetween the ears of Minato Aqua
>>38343203
>>38343234
YWNIM

>>38343662
>dusty barren wom
Minor spelling error. I win. Mio WILL be impregnated.

>>38343784

>>38343784
Forced Ovulation-Sama....you are right...i concede

>>38343620

>>38233113
In order to prove Anonymous wrong, Mio gets really mad and forces herself to ovulate and lactate out of pure spite
Then anon kneels and fucks her, as he cries and apologizes

>>38344082
OOKAMI MIO (Forma Fertil)

>>38344082
>You WILL impregnate me anon, there's nothing you can do to stop it.

>>38344082
>>38344218
>>38344306
>W-where is Taiga...?
>Mio I'm sorry.....
>Where is he!
>In you mating rage, when you were raping me, he tried to stop you...
>Anon what do you mean!
>Taiga tried to save me and for that.... MIO YOU KILLED HIM!

There once was an old hag Mio
She had not one egg, zilch, nada, zero
But anon filled her womb
And she began to swoon
Then birthed three triplets in trio

>>38344435
>A trio of three triplets
27 BABIES???????

>>38344386
>Taiga spits blood on the floor, looking at the scenery, his beloved owner, the poor schmuck that was caught by her claws under her
>Taiga always knew of Mio's hidden Hagsex Beast, he tried to protect others
>Anon is alive, although barely.
>He gives you one last meow
>See ya, space meowboy
>Taiga passes away

>>38344218
>>38344306
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lttvfc3ywJs&list=PLFC7776F0C2183335&ab_channel=killer21637
>Anon fleeing from Mio's overly fertile body

>>38344488
And counting!

>>38344435
Limericks are a lot of fun.

Are we returning to Mioposting?

>>38344488
Now Mio, she was no quitter
Once filled her womb was a-titter
Her belly swelled full
Thanks to Anon's jewels
And each birthing she had a litter!

>>38344306
>>38344508
>>38344519
LEAVE MIO TO ME

>>38344595
The spirit of Christmas is alive and well all throughout /wg/!

You could totally write a DBZ Spoof of Super Mio who absorbed a a gaki and that makes her fertile

>>38344595
Nature is healing

>>38335690
A dog, a plan, a canal, pagoda!

>>38344545
Such verse is easier for me
Than other more complex forms
Such things like a sonnet, you see
Leave my mind lost and forlorn
O, how I missed the days of my youth
When my mind was as sharp as a blade
But now dulled by time like a tooth
My wit is beginning to fade
I advise thee, if you still are young, don't dawdle
For the words, they will slip from your mind
Writing is more than a mere bauble
So type, and see what you find
I don't even remember what I've lost anymore
But I know that for it I feel ever so poor.

>>38344919
Rats live on no evil star

Hey hey people. For those of you who actually read HoloFantasy, tell me; what is your opinion on the combat and how it's formatted? Do you actually go and read the rolls sheet for combat at the end? Are you a number enjoyer? And, if you read Pure Black (which if you did, thank you, I hoped you enjoyed it), how did you feel about the 'combat' sections with Noelle therein and how they were resolved, IE a handful of rolls to determine successful counterattack against her and her subsequent defeat?

I ask because I'm considering cutting down a bit of the combat stuff into more of how it played out in PB and during the fight with the Dark Knight when DT was first activated; a handful of rolls as opposed to an entire turn-based fighting system determines what happens, how it happens and ultimately a victor and a way for the story to continue. It's ultimately easier for me to keep track of and to write out, and would help things feel less...samey. I've no doubt that some people have probably had their eyes glaze over during the more protracted engagements. The old (read as: current) system would still probably see use for Big Important Encounters such as final chapter encounters, secret schizoboss encounters, etc. as to not totally phase it out, just make it feel more important.

Part of why 7 has been taking so long has been, on top of the various other occurrences in my life, some burn-out from writing the segments out. There's one last big shit fest that's currently halfway done, but it's really helped to highlight how bogged down and long this can be. For example; it's reached five pages in length, and that's half-done. A significant portion of these documents are just people headbutting each other. It's really quite a lot if you add it all up.

So, I ask you these questions. Do you really enjoy things as they are and would prefer not to see them change, due to how "important" it is to the story's identity/part of the charm of it? Would you be opposed to things being more simplified for the sake of ease of reading? Is that one Anon still pissed at me for allowing that home wrecking hussy Marine to lay hands on Anon, forever robbing him of his purity and innocence before getting him utterly and completely addicted to destroying every hole on her body as monster enjoyers starve to death?

An additional thanks for all the support and critique so far.

>>38345090
racecar

>>38344508
So Taiga was actually trying to protect us this whole time...

This is the perfect being that Mio has turned into thanks to the Ovulation
1. She is invincible!
2. She will never grow old!
3. She will never die!
4. She holds the whole power of the living world concurrently, and moreover surpasses it! And she has the beauty of a Greek sculpture as her basic appearance!
- Goal in Life: For other chuubas, it’s to preserve their numbers, but for Mio, it’s about Mating
- Pussy Grip: 900 kg/cm^2
- Squirt: 18 m
- Pussy: Can Re-shape it to wring all the semen out of a male
- Hearing: Can hear young males wherever they are hiding
- Sight: Same as a space telescope, used to detect prey
- Ears: Can detect heat and air movement
- IQ: 400
- In its mother’s belly and under ten months, the embryo becomes a fully grown human being at the end of a transformation representing roughly nine hundred million years of evolution that is written inside its genes. Mio can rewrite it on the fly as it grows inside her
- Muscles: can transform very quickly at her own will, giving the perfect body type for her partner
- Favorite food: Young men
- Sleep: Useless.
- Sex: Necessary. The younger the life form, the smaller its need to breed. Therefore, a perfect hag craves the need to reproduce
There is but only one summit.

Tea time, anyone?

>>38345208
Wow

>>38345253

>>38345166
>Hey hey people
stopped reading there

>>38345291
Ah yes... Panties from..... January? My my that was a particularly desperate month, the taste must be especially pungent and unique.

>>38346459
>Oh yes my dear, quite pungent indeed

>>38345166
I've always viewed the identity being in HF's use of dice rolls and TTRPG abilities wholesale, rather than the turn based combat specifically. I haven't caught up on Chapter 7 but I did notice particularly during the Mori fight that it felt kind of bloated and repetitive even though it was pretty much a curb stomp, and I think that was kind of due in part to the amount of shit that Anon had in his rolls which felt like information that isn't necessary to show in the middle of the fight, especially since I do take a look at the rolls sheet at the end anyway. I wouldn't mind a bit of information, though PB was great and the combat with Noel flowed way better I found. On a purely subjective opinion I really don't like TTRPG systems where the numbers get fucking huge, I've always found them unwieldy and take away from when someone actually does have like a shocking amount of health or something. Overall if it makes it an easier writing experience for you I say go for it because it still reads very well and I won't miss it that much.

>>38345166
If the long combat writing is getting you down, it would be best to trim that part down. As long as you don't lose that core hook of rolls determining how story progresses I don't see an issue with it.

>>38329056
Try to space out your info dumping across different points in the story and multiple conversations. I guess you could also have your characters react strongly to the information that’s being revealed to indicate their stance/opinions on what’s being said.

>>38345253
Ovulate unto Oblivion

>>38346459
A lot of piss and sweat, with a hint of cum.

>>38351452
it's my cum

>>38338177
Oh damn, this is some good drama with promise of something hot and heartbreaking in the future.
If you're the anon who post on rentry that I'm thinking of this fic has some really good flowing dialogue. Hope the next parts live up to this.

>>38351522
No, this is my Mio tea. I know you love to drink cum, but you'll have to get your own.

>>38351549
>If you're the anon who post on rentry that I'm thinking of this fic has some really good flowing dialogue.
Yeah, it's me. Anonymous

>>38351738
It's alright anon, I know you're in denial but you gotta face the truth. I'm sorry you had to find out this way.

>>38351823
I didn't disagree that it was your cum in the tea. I was implying you were especially eager to drink it.

>>38345166
In all honesty if you're getting bogged down by non-major fights then simplifying it does sound like the answer.
Anyway, the charm of the dice rolls is in it effecting major events anyway. For example, I wouldn't mind 'fodder fights' being relegated to being abstracted dice rolls.

>>38233113
Ayame has always had antis besmirching her name online. But recently there's been a particularly persistent new anti making shitposts with her image on /vt/. The timing of the posts and poor English grammar instantly bring to mind an ESL SEAnig, yet there's something off about the messages posted almost daily.
>"Hololive Ayame with boy friend has sex each night. You all paying for she birth control"
>"Ayame Nakiri back stub other Holomem. She appear when money involved only"
Intrigued and bored, (You) start taking note of the exact times the posts are made. After doing archive reps you find a rough pattern and decide to see if the next post will follow suit. You throw a JP stream on for background noise (you can't understand moonspeak, but it's better than anything in EN) and pull up the catalog. You keep refreshing, keeping an eye out for the image of Ayame looking down at her cell phone, and report any /MANS/ thread that pops up for Pony content like usual. Then you see it!
>"Ayame-chan exclusive Mio Ookami attention. Trick shopping Miosha paying for all"
By god you've cracked the pattern. Maybe you can share this info with the tranny jannies so they can actually do something besides delete /meat/, /ag/ and the other fetish threads. Elated with yourself, you switch tabs to put on your favorite victory music—"Po" by Omaru Polka. It doesn't immediately click why your background noise already went silent until you see the YouTube interface.
>"Thanks for tuning in. Stream ended 2 minutes ago."
Subaru Ch. 大空スバル

>>38354040
It's understandable given how much Mio favours Ayame over her other daughter.

>>38233113
Futa Irys and Futa Mori spitroasting bae

>>38354170
All the more reason for Curse to end on Mio having a miscarriage with Ayame.

>>38354432
Mori, you can't just jerk off IRyS during the podcast. That's unprofessional.

>>38354546
to be fair, IRys tried to put a finger up her ass first

>>38354432
>bae getting spitroasted and not being able to touch the floor

>>38345166
I personally like the amount of rolls as they are with each combat encounter being like a fight in a TTRPG, but if it’s getting you down and becoming harder to write I’d say it’s fine to reduce how much you use the dice. If it does go I’ll miss it, but holofan will always be fantastic.

>>38354531
That would be too sad. Ayame is very cute after all.

Im sorry futabros, i cant get subaru getting her guts rearranged by coco and luna out of my head, its just too good

>>38343205
Why did she do it bros?

>>38233113
Ayame is isekai'd into the body of JK rrat Ayame and becomes horrified at how everyone perceives her

>>38355357
I know she's cute, anon. That's why she has to suffer because of the shit Mio, you and Fubuki put her through because Mio desperately wants to have a child of her own.

>>38355498
Real Ayame is much sluttier than rrat Ayame, so she would be surprised at how few people are lining up to give her cock

>>38355370
>Not Subaru getting her ass rimmed while she fucks luna

>>38355668
Kanata looks impatient to get up there

>>38355593
This isn't the catalog.

>>38356299
Kanata is only allowed to watch

>>38356363
Sounds like she needs someone (me) to save her

>>38355668
Don't mind me just doing my reps.

Luna: いいよ、あつ、あー、あつ

Kanata: ほあ~。。。たつか。。。

Subaru or behind the couch:じやあみさせてよ。。。

Subaru: 何(forgot)の。。。

The rest have kanji so I can't transcribe them.

>>38345166
>Do you really enjoy things as they are and would prefer not to see them change, due to how "important" it is to the story's identity/part of the charm of it?
I personally have no problem with how the combat flows in the story up until now. I know you see the battles as samey and overly-protracted, but once I start reading, the entire scene plays out really nicely in my mind. Even if it is a long battle, I don't really notice, because I get lost in the action.
>Would you be opposed to things being more simplified for the sake of ease of reading?
I wouldn't mind. While I like the turn based battles as they are, I think your writing ability is the part I like more than the specific method you use to determine the actions that will be taken in a battle. So, I wouldn't be opposed to it.
>Is that one Anon still pissed at me for allowing that home wrecking hussy Marine to lay hands on Anon, forever robbing him of his purity and innocence before getting him utterly and completely addicted to destroying every hole on her body as monster enjoyers starve to death?
That was me, and yes, though I'm less annoyed than I was initially. I think a large part of that outburst was the combination of poor timing on my part, and the fact that I'd just finished the chapter, so it was fresh in my mind.

>>38355057
Another kuroinu enjoyer I see.

>>38341348
>I take the comments about Lui's scene at heart though, I chose manga because in this context Marine is a mangaka.
I think the reason that might be jarring is because you had this line in the scene prior
>She quietly left for her PC and began streaming
Which make you think that she's a vtuber as usual and not a mangaka. I think if you wanted to make it less jarring you need to be a bit more blunter about it and have a line about it during the morning scene so it's established earlier.

>>38347271
>>38347863
>>38352643
>>38355155
>>38357105
Thank you for the feedback. I appreciate your honesty. I'll keep important fights as they are now but will have lesser spats be less weighty.

I just realized that Ayame being student council president in Our Cures is a reference to her talent description on the official website.
>Many may not realize it, but she is actually the president of the student council.
What other nods to 'canon' did I miss?

>>38364647
The fact she's in not-England.

>>38351790
The legend...

Speaking of England, Hoshikawa's English accent is very cute

>>38368776
Too bad she's a slut

>>38368776
Good thing she's a slut.

>>38369080
>bad

>>38369080
Unironically one of the best parts of her what is wrong with you

https://youtu.be/EGhJY4itIy0?t=887

>>38354040
This is an interesting concept but I don't see how (You) would really fit into a fic about Subaru being an Ayame anti out of jealousy.
It feels like one of those concepts where the perspective character has to have a 'stake' in the drama in order for it to work as a story.

>>38369829
Enjoy your stds.

are fleshed out protagonists better than blanks or the other way around

>>38372725
Is that real question?

>>38372790
>do preferences and opinions exist

>>38372894
They do not and don't pretend otherwise

>>38372725
I prefer fleshed-out ones.
No names though.

>>38364647
Her birthdate on the STD certificate, maybe? Other than that I’m not sure, I threw in a few things that she mentioned on stream but they aren’t really part of her “lore”.

>>38372725
I don't need a character with a complex backstory and trauma to overcome or anything, but I do prefer a MC to have more personality than a 2008 harem anime protagonist.

>>38372725
Fleshed out. It makes for better interactions and dialogue.

>>38372725
For reader insert stuff, I prefer them to have personality as actual blank slates are boring. It's why the 'in their head' style 2nd person pov fics use here work so much better than the 2nd person pov stuff from wattpad/ao3.
Honestly blanks only really work if you're doing full CYOA stuff ala a gamebook and even then having some character is better than no character.

>>38372953
Why not? They've already got set personalities and act as their own characters, why is that the deal breaker

>>38233113
La+ killing herself.

>>38373696
NTA but reader inserts sort of dodge the inherent cringiness when they're with a generic name like anon rather than with a normal person name.
It's more acceptable if it's shamelessly a self-insert and literally has (author first name) but if you're doing the whole song and dance of it being a reader insert character it's just less weird to have them be 'nameless'.

>>38373696
>why is that the deal breaker
Because then its not us.

>>38374398
This.

>>38372790
Yes.

>>38373696
I can imagine myself as a DND character. I can imagine myself as a super soldier in the apocalypse. I can even imagine myself fucking futa anime girls in the ass. But my name IS NOT FUCKING Jeff.

New thread
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>>38355057
That just awoke something I never knew Existed.

>>38375965

AYAME RAPE

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Bless you pocket janny

>>38373810
Laplus looked around at the rest of the girls. "What?" Lui shared a look with Iroha. The other girls looked down at their feet. "Sorry, Laplus...We just don't think you, well, fit in." Iroha cleared her throat. "The decision has already been made." "Why wasn't I told?" Laplus said indignation painting her face. "Well, um," Koyori chimed in "the last thing we wanted was a power struggle. We've already decided that Lui is taking over." Laplus stood "You can't do this to me! I started HoloX!" The rest of the girls shuffled in discomfort. Laplus' face twisted in anger. "YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I'VE SACRIFICED?!" Chloe looked away, wincing at the sudden outburst. "Lui, please..." Laplus begged, grief in her voice. "Laplus, the vote was unanimous. Hololive is announcing your retirement after Christmas. I'm sorry." "You're out, Laplus." Iroha stated simply, sipping her tea. Laplus ran a hand over her face like recovering from a slap. "Am I?" She said quietly, a mirthless smile spreading on her face. Composing herself, she left the meeting room, called her über, and left.

Days later, after trying to call in a few favors. Seems she didn't even have friends anymore. Laplus realized she really was out. Not just of the company, but out of help. Out of people. Hopeless she sat in her living room half-listening to the TV, staring at nothing in particular. The phone rang, and she picked up, hurriedly, expecting Ayame to tell her some good news. "Hello, Laplus speaking !" "Hi, we've been trying to reach you about your car's extended w-" Laplus hung the phone up carefully and threw it against the wall, screaming. "IT'S NOT FAIR! IT'S NOT FAIRITSNOTFAIRITSNOTFAIRISTNHAWTFHAHAHAHAIR!!" tears streamed down her face and snot dripped from her nose as she bawled. She slid out of the chair and kicked her feet and slammed her hands against the floor, throwing a tantrum like a scorned child "I DON'T WANNA BE KICKED OUT WHY'S IT GOTTA BE ME WHAT DID I DO TO DESERVE THIS IT'S NOT FAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIR!!" Her thrashing about rocked the furniture, items falling off of shelves and over on tables, but Laplus didn't care. Her outstretched limbs battered against furniture until, by accident, she hit the leg of a table hard enough to hear a crack, and to hurt herself. She screamed at the pain and then louder when she realized that on that table was a full bookshelf, falling right toward her. Laying on the floor, on her back, reeling from a freshly broken toe, she didn't have time to move. The bookshelf came slamming down upon her, crushing her. Hours later, as the blood was congealing on the books, her phone rang, and her machine picked up. "Laplus? This is Chloe. I found you a job with Nijisanji. I know it's not much but it's better than just sitting around doing nothing. Call me back and we can talk it over, ok?"