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Basically this rrat but in fanfic format:>>32801957

Someone make a fanfic based on the lyrics to Reine's new song:>>32816681

Sex maid Aqua serving Hololive's sponsors during a business party:>>32819755

hololive babies spinoff:>>32833152

This but with Aqua:>>32850363

Beating up HoloX! Breaking Laplus' Horns!:>>32853233

Cumming on La+'s throat to help heal it:>>32853310

Consensual hypnosis with Ame and or Mori!:>>32861884

More Moona smut:>>32897326

Aqua cuck prompt:>>32937500

Winning a game of pool against Sana and bending her over the table for your reward:>>32945903

>feeling excited thinking about a scene I'll eventually write once I reach that point in the story
>zero motivation to write it once I'm actually there
It fucking happened again, I'm never gonna finish my story at this rate

Did I just do an entire play through of RE8 whilst watching a chuuba playing it as well on second monitor instead of writing? Sure did. Will I do it again tomorrow? You bet.

>>32951563
Drinking chocolate milk from Sana's tits while she gives you a nursing handjob.

>>32952701
Speaking of milk, Pekora gave her own breast milk to her pet monkey. The poor baby thing.

>>32952789
Are you implying that Pekora conducted a transaction in order to acquire ownership of a primate?

>>32952789
At least the cat hasn't eaten it.... yet.

>>32952965
A FUCKING MONKEEEEEE

I didn't care for Sana as a streamer, but that the world will be missing out on 3D choccy milkers is a shame.

>>32951538
A fic about tearfully performing the hit set against your Oshi.

>>32956370
Hit set?

>>32957413
A concert with songs that are very popular

>>32957413
Assassination order.

>>32957413
flawless full-combo K.O.

>>32957777
Checked.

>>32957568
wrecking your oshi and her dreams of becoming a star in the "The Voice" duo battles.

10

>>32952678
I did this too, with Xenoblade Chronicles 3 and Elira. Such a long fucking game. I'm writing now, at least.

So how are your wips turning out anons?

>>32961423
I have been too tired to work on anything. Energy hort.

>>32961423
slow

>>32961423
Very good

>>32961423
I took the day off.

>>32961423
Going really well.

I finally read through the newest chapter of Let Me Feel Your Pain.
Overall I really liked the interaction and character building in this chapter. Also really fucking liked how it felt like it's naturally building up the conflict that the author is setting up.

>>32962802
Thanks so much. That means a lot to me. I'm so glad you're enjoying it.

>>32951511
Holofantasy - Chapter 7, Pt 4 ~ To Save A Burning City
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQIdNKkcWe1BdPAm3CazuHNpjRvAB1De6d-fMbxNYm3KNTWr9Orc1vhtP7ZNtvJjg8FqdwbZsV3KX77/pub

Trying to keep it to the shorter chapters, so it's only a mere 20 pages/sub 10k words. I'm washed up and have lost my touch. 5 should be a lot longer, though, since it'll feature actual combat and probably be the one to wrap up the chapter....and possibly 'Book One'. Regardless, I hope you can enjoy it despite its shorter length and continue to look forward to what comes next. The Halls of Steelheart Keep await.

>>32961423
Heh.

>>32964427
Man, I am so glad the rolls allowed for the emerald key to be used, that shit was epic.

>>32964427
based

>>32963406
Cute

>>32961423
11500 words and I can FINALLY start writing sex. The setup for this story was 4x longer than expected, so I better have enough fuel for a sex scene 4x longer than planned.

>>32970944
what in god's name are you writing

>>32951538
Fic based on this pic
Any chuuba is fine

>>32970944
Is that the topless Suisei prompt?

>>32971130
So Shrunken Troubles but with pigs instead?

>>32971154
Yep. I still need to do some heavy editing in the first half of what I've got so far to make Suisei seem more like herself.

A long buildup might not have been the worst, because I can play on how horny she gets and get away with things a level-headed Sui wouldn't go for.

>>32971751
Take you time pal. I for one am glad you've written a big buildup because it often makes the smut better.

>>32964427

>>32951495
She NEEDS to stop shaving.

>>32971936
>Take you time
That's the problem, I have been...

>>32972893
Sananana's pits will remain forever silky smooth

>>32975085
just the way I like it

>>32973860
No harm in taking more.

>>32976519
based

>>32975085
>>32976519
>>32979016
Based. Girls are at their cutest when the only hair they have is on their heads, their tummies are soft and their personalities are M.

>>32980947
Based. Every woman I write from now into the future, even if not explicitly stated, is 100% smooth and soft all around.
Even Marine, Lui, Pekomama, any of them. Not a hair on their bodies.

>>32980947
>>32982098
God bless you both.

>>32975085
>>32976519
>>32979016
>>32980947
>>32982098
>>32982570
>>>/lgbt/

>>32983680
Women with hair on their bodies are closer to men than actual women, so thanks for showing us your home, but I'll have to politely decline.

>>32983943
Men don't have hair on their bodies. That was a myth meant to make people buy more razors.

>>32980947
That pic reminds me, is the Miko anal story author around? How's that story going?

>>32985503
he's got a habit of writing millions of words and never releasing them

>>32986215
Darn, Miko will remain in anal sex limbo forever then

>>32984696
Can confirm, I fell for the myth and shave full body every time I go out.

>>32986215
Wow, rude, uncalled for and unfortunately accurate...
>>32985503
I've been alternating between that and the Suisei beach story when I run out of gas for the latter, but making slow progress. I wouldn't expect it to come out for a while, to be completely transparent.

Which writers are in most need of correction?

>>32988347
this guy>>32988159

>>32988159
Well I'm looking forward to both of those, so I continue to wait patiently

>>32988347
Definitely this guy >>32964427

>>32970944
Eh, don't aim fora long sex scene, just a good one. If it's still normal length, that's just how things go sometimes.

>>32951538
Towa and Choco try to tempt Kanata into falling by offering her what she wants most: boing-boings!

>>32951538
This

>>32990443
I don't get the appeal of Suisei.

>>32990964
I could just call you gay and leave it at but I want to inquire. What don't you get about her?

>>32991052
She doesn't match the hype.

>>32991732
That's the point anon, the cuteness comes from the fact that she's not actually that hyped up ideal idol but a cute autist chasing her dreams.

>>32991939
Lame. At least, in my opinion.

>>32992458
You should watch Korean idols, they're already (pretending to be) perfect.

>>32993028
Too flat for 3dpd. I'll stick with my holohags and titcows.

>>32961423
Poorly

>>32988347
what did he mean by this

>>32961423
In need of a very thorough pontuation check, but otherwise mostly finished for once

>>32988347
what kind of correction?

>>32999212
A writing correction!

>>32999458
so they get corrected by... making them write?

>>32999458
yes, but how are we correcting them to get them to write? sure, we could force them to write, but we'd have to keep doing it and over time they're become more and more resistant to it. what we need is a permanent correction solution.

>>32999458
elaborate. what correction methods will be used to correct them.

>>32998754
>pontuation check,
I think you're going to need more than just a punctuation check anon.

>>32999458
... Like being made to write or

>>33004449
Nah, by getting fucked in the ass.

>>33004880
____________________hot____________________

> according to Subaru idol training behind the scenes involves learning how to play various instruments
It came to me as a surprise when pretty much everyone on the JP side could play the piano puzzle in RE8 without a single mistake, even Miko and Pekora. So that's how.

>>33006630
I wish Subaru would learn to play the trumpet. Specifically, my trumpet.

>>33006710
Subaru playing the rusty trumpet!

>>33006630
I thought Pekora could already play the piano. Or was that guitar?

Can't believe Subaru would say that the benefit of animal eared beings is that you don't have to worry about human rights with them

>>32954462
Mmmm choccy milk

>>33007656
A fic about bullying/oppressing animal eared chuubas sounds pretty hot desu.

>>33008081
>the animal ear chuubas want to be degraded and bullied
>(You)'re not entirely comfortable with doing it
Might make for a good light comedy

>>33008081
reminds me of this prompt from a while ago. 27000107

>>33008081
reminds me of this prompt from a while ago. >>27000107

>>33008596
Yeah I could see the comedy in it, especially if the animal eared chuuba is REALLY uncomfortably into it.

meaty flaps

>>33011681
The fuck is that supposed to be? Artist should have just drawn a camel toe because right now it looks like she's got the world's thinnest babydick in her panties

>>33011681
Pussies are so disgusting

>>33012219
No they aren't, dicks are disgusting

>>33012274
Dicks are aesthetically pleasing, pussies are like a dog's mouth at best

>>33012383
is that supposed to be a bad thing?

>>33012383
Dicks are aesthetically hideous, little more than extraneous protrusions on an otherwise beautiful form
Pussies are unintrusive on the human form, even accentuating an ideal female form through the additional peaks and troughs of a shapely labia
If you like dicks over pussies, not only are you gay as fuck, but you have scientifically proven shit taste

i like dicks and pussies

>>33012557
Even as a straight guy, you can look at a big cock and go "damn dude, nice cock". That never happens with a pussy. And if you're to talk about protrusions, what about boobs huh? Men don't have it and women do. Sounds like we have a problem here, or your logic is retarded.

why you arguing the aesthetic merits of genitalia
why do you think about this

>>33012651
>Even as a straight guy, you can look at a big cock and go "damn dude, nice cock".
No, not really. If you were talking about a guy being conventionally attractive sure. But to know and think about what makes a dick 'good' is gay as shit.

>>33012651
>Even as a straight guy, you can look at a big cock and go "damn dude, nice cock"
That's gay and you're gay, but thanks for the side-splitting laugh.

>That never happens with a pussy
Pussies can come both hideous and beautiful proportions. The entire existence of the term "roastie" as an insult proves this

>And if you're to talk about protrusions, what about boobs huh?
Aesthetic balance is about gradual change, and a good pair of breasts has a natural slope. Part of the reason fake breasts are immediately unattractive is because they frequently look puffed up where chest ends and breast begins
A dick is literally a fucking spike on an otherwise flat surface, you gaylord

>>33012690
Why think about the existence of life on a faraway planet, or the meaning of it all? Why do anything at all?

>>33012912
The only attractive orifice is the mouth and I would never willingly fuck anything else. If I had a wife, I'd buy the best vibrator in the market and tell her to play with it herself, because I don't want none of that.

>>33013008
>If I had a wife, I'd buy the best vibrator in the market and tell her to play with it herself, because I don't want none of that.
I think Elton John had a similar attitude.

>>33013008
don't worry anon i don't think you'll have to worry about ever having a wife.

>>33013066
I actually came dangerously close to having one a few years back, but the bitch wanted too many kids. Who the fuck actually wants 7 kids?

>>33013105
Holy shit you are so fucking gay stick to /MANS/ you goddamn fruit

>>33013105
My uncle has that many kids now. Stupid old man couldn't keep his willy wrapped. Buying Christmas presents for 'em was always a nightmare for my folk.

>>33013184
Fuck off, retard. Unless you've got the financial stability to provide for 7 fucking kids equally what you could for just 1 (which most people can only dream of) then keep your dick in latex.

>>33013184
Go live in Africa, the women there will love you. But in a civilized country where children actually DO make it past 18 without dying, you don't need more than 2 kids at most.

>>33013281
>not wanting as many kids as possible
This is why the white race is dying. Abe would be sad.

>>33013586
Wanna breed like a chink or a pajeet, go live with them in their slum countries.

>>33013281
>>33013305
I'm gonna have a whole fucking litter with my wife and no actual homosexuals on an Peruvian Guinea Pig Spear-hunting imageboard can convince me there's something wrong with that

>>33013753
Did it take you 10 minutes to think of the anime forum corruption?

>>33013715
>having a lot of kids is le bad
Is the closet big enough for you?

>>33013925
If anything hyperfocusing on your own sexuality to the point of excessive breeding is more a sign of homosexuality and other mental problems. I hope the closet is big enough for your and your family because it sounds like that's where you'll end up keeping them.

>>33013753
No I'm working on a fic why? Do you want another one? Maybe Australian Scorpion Racing? What about Estonian Canoe Building? Botswanan Diamond Mining? How's Spanish Singerie Painting?

>>33014049
What are you working on?

>>33013753
The more babies a woman puts out, the less she will care for you. You're literally cucking yourself by having more kids.

>>33014084
Mumei helps you assassinate the rest of EN

>>33012086
Femboy Aqua?!
...
Ugh.
That one just feels wrong, both from like a character design perspective and a storytelling one as well.

man
I don't know if this was your plan but you guys being hyper autistic about this shit is making me want to get back to writing so this thread has other things to talk about

>>33014189
No, no.

Stay here and talk about dicks.

>>33012219
>>33012383
>>33012651
Gee, I wonder who could be behind these posts.

>>33014468
What's the point in writing so much to stil say nothing

>>33014136
This but instead is assassination it's her helping you execute super chuuni plans about raping all of them

>>33014848
mental problems, always has been

>>33014000
Cope
>>33014138
The opposite is true. The more kids you have, the less she'll be willing to leave them.

>>33014468
Holy schizophrenia, I don’t remember it being this cringe.

>>33015118
>Cope
I accept your concession, and advise against arguing with smarter people online if you don't want to be humiliated again.

>>33014931
The only its murder and not rape was because I had enough nsfw wips as is

>>33015221
Oh nyo, I got "humiliated" whatever shall I do? Kill yourself, faggot.

>>33012651
based and straight

Holy shit there's a massive thunderstorm outside. I can't fucking write with all this noise

>>33016361
Sounds like an excuse. Shut the window
>It's already shut
Wear headphones
>I'm too poor
Sticky-tape a pillow around your head and get a job

>>33016483
I actually can't write because I love lightning so I'm standing outside watching the fireworks. Nature is beautiful.

>>33016567
This is a valid excuse. Make sure to touch some grass out there, too.

>>33016567
Wholesome change the filename next time or people will think you're SEA

>>33016640
The rain weakened and the lightning stopped. I'm sad now. I'll go write my sorrows away.

>>33016673
I don't know what decides the filename, I don't even own Facebook

>>33016726
Huh, that's weird.

>>33016361
>>33016567
do either of you by any chance live in western arizona?

>>33017146
We live really far down of Arizona.

>>32990964
She's an autist that instead of falling into imageboard hell, actually did something.

>>33017310
Man, imagine lucking out and being autistic about something actually useful. Couldn't be me.

>>33017428
I mean in theory at least with writing at present time you could probably make a living writing a serialized royal road series by way of Amazon sales and Patreon bucks but from what I can tell from limited sight of the industry it's basically only a thing with the western equivalent of the Isekai genre (LitRPG and Western Attempts at Xianxia).

>>33017583
I'm not autistic about writing. Autistic about writing would be writing hundreds of thousands of words on Vtuber fan fiction and writing several paragraphs on corrections and writing tips. Unfortunately I just like insects and space. Not very useful.

>>33017745
>Unfortunately I just like insects and space.
Bugfag?

>>33017583
TIL that another genre exists outside of Wuxia.

>>33017822
I like insects, he likes women being fucked by insects. There's a difference

>>33017745
>I just like insects and space
The write about sci-fi insects having sex with chuubas!

>>33017883
Oh, there's bugfag. Figured you wouldn't be far away whenever insects are mentioned.

>>33017880
All I can say is, follow your heart, anon. If you want to pick fruit on a cherry plantation, don't let the meagre paycheck and back-breaking labour stop you.

>>33017883
Where do you draw the line between sci-fi insects and fantasy ones? That they are in space?

>>33017970
Alien species that feature insectoid characteristics.

Xenomorphs would be a prime example of this.

>>33017991
That's not an insect anymore though. Xenomorphs aren't bugs.

>>33017970
Oh fantasy insects would be fantastical concepts, sci-fi insects would also be fantastical but you throw some sci-fi words at the reader to make them think you're writing about some speculative evolution shit rather than just making shit up.

>>33018026
>Xenomorphs aren't bugs.
I hate to break it to you, but if you go on a wiki adventure... they're bugs, anon.

>>33018132
I guess they are grown up face huggers which definitely count as bugs

>>33018132
They took away the biomechanics of the xenomorph?

>>33018369
That’s just an aesthetic. Xenomorphs are purely biological.

>>33018741
That makes sense. Well, time to write a facehugger fic. Sorry Mio but you're getting oviposited again.

>>33019172
You're not sorry. If you were already sorry, you would not begin in the first place.

> Fuwafuwa fuwafuwa fuwafuwari kurukuru kurukuru kurukuru mawaru no fuwafuwa fuyo fuyo fuwafuwari kururu kurukuru fuwafuwa tobidashita no hoyahoya fuyo fuyo fueru a tama fuyo fuyo fuwafuwari tobidasu yo fuyo fuyo fu wa fuwa fu wa fuwa eru a tama fuwafuwa fuwa wa fuwa tobidasu yo

>>33019172
>facehugger
>oviposited
Huh?
I thought the point was for her body to get turned into an unwitting host from the face rape?

>>33018160
>endoparasitoids
>hive structure and internal caste system
>multiple life stages achieved through metamorphosis
Sound like bugs to me

>>33019172
Is this going to end how facehugger implantations usually end? Either way, hot as fuck.

>>33019336
Facehuggers lay eggs bro

>>33019336
It's easier to lay eggs if your host can't get you off before you're done. I'd imagine laying an egg would take a little bit of time, so the face hugging method might be efficient

Really wish I could read Japanese

>>33020829
Wouldn't speaking be more important?

>>33021009
You'll never speak to your oshi though, and even if you could, you wouldn't be able to understand her. No, listening and reading are much more important

>>33021009
How else can I read those spicy JP fanfics anon?

>>33021547
Are there a lot of JP chuuba fanfics?

>>33021342
Speaking and listening are very closely related, learn to do one and you can do the other, especially in the case of learning to speak. It's like how learning to read will help with learning to write, except writing will be more effective at helping you learn to read rather than vice versa.
>you wouldn't be able to understand her
Do you really think someone can learn to speak Japanese but somehow not understand it? Like what, he's not understanding the words coming out of his own mouth?
>>33021547
W-what fics? Where?

>>33021705
inb4 there is also a Japanese forum where someone posts translations of fanfics from /wg/.

>>33021769
>Do you really think someone can learn to speak Japanese but somehow not understand it? Like what, he's not understanding the words coming out of his own mouth?
Listening, speaking, reading and writing are all different skills; as you only mentioned speaking, speaking is all I assumed
Don't be an idiot.

>>33021799
We'd have a collective heart attack if it happens again but... I'm pretty sure we'd have spotted them already since they'd need a link to the archive and I'm reasonably certain that last anon spotted the Korean translation effort by way of egosearching the archive link.

>>33021868
>Listening, speaking, reading and writing are all different skills
Correct, but my point still stands. If someone learnt to speak Japanese, there's no reason he wouldn't be able to understand someone when listening to them speak Japanese.

>>33021958

>>33021799
>the japanese archive is a translation of the korean one
The plot thickens.

>>33022613
I'd actually like to put some of our stories through google translate multiple times and see how fucked they turn out.

>>33021705
I'm honestly not sure.
Like I know they exist by way of pixiv also hosting writing but I'm not really sure how popular chuuba fanfiction over there.

>>33022829
I’ve seen a guy read vtuber fanfiction of himself and another vtuber girl on stream, so I know it exists.

There just isn't enough time in the day, nor vigor in my dick, to get off to all the smut fics I need to... You guys are prolific.

>>32951538
Aqua kidnaps you because she wants someone to take care of her and you genuinely fall for her the longer you stay with her against your will.

>>32966314
I had that scene in my head for awhile, so I'm really, really fucking glad I didn't get cuckolded. Thank you for reading.

Looking forward to that Slut Aqua fic

>>32951538
Setting idea for a chuuba fic:
Vtuber super jail, where all chuubas are imprisoned inside.

>>33029975
Is it mixed gender so you get to sex them, or nah?

>>33029975
>super jail
Like that creepy Adult Swim cartoon?

>>33030124
it's mixed gender so male chuubas get to sex them.

>>33030124
I mean if you want to write about prison sex then it's on you whether it's about (You) being a chuuba's prison bitch or (You) being the corrupt warden that forces them into demeaning (sexual) activities.

>>33029975
>Stone Ocean but chuubas
Sounds interesting

>>33030341
Don't know what that is, but the vague idea I had was it being some magical hypersecure facility built to imprison the various fantastical inmates... Okay that's sounding less hyperjail and more like scp facility.

>>33022613
Absolutely disgusting.

Fellow writers.
How the fuck do you come up with a title?

>>33030802
>Don't know what that is
I wouldn't recommend looking it up, it's one of Adult Swim's cheap shock black comedy cartoons

>>33033121
I look at the themes of the fic I'm writing and I just come up with a title from there personally.

>>33033121
Overly-long light novel title.

>>33030802
>Lobotomy Corp. with chuubas
mite b cool

>>33033121
Most the time I put shit all effort into my titles, other times I might try going for one with a bit of symbolism.
At the moment I’m writing a story with a title that has a double meaning. The first meaning can be found quickly and at the start of the story while the second meaning is a little deeper and requires just a touch of thinking.

>>33033469
Ah, the fuck it the title is also the summary school of title making.

>>33033121
I always use song titles because I'm lazy

I'm thinking about starting another story similar to Building Block Doll. Anything you'd like to see?

>>33036502
like with all the baby stuff?

>>33033121
I dunno, I just use what sounds cool and has something to do with the story.

>>33036555
Yeah. Scenarios, plot elements, etc. anything you may be interested in. I have a few ideas for a starting point but I'm having trouble deciding which to pick. They'll be wildly different stories so I need to know what people are interested in before pulling the trigger

>>33036699
Honestly can't think anything right now but I'm interested in what ideas you have now.

>>33036502
paci in the pussy

>>33033121
I sometimes use ability names from Dota if I can't come up with something cool myself.

>>33036841
A few ideas:

Plot one: adoption of either chuuba or (you) with baby stuff incorporated. It'd be SFW in this instance, no incest or abuse or anything like that.

Plot two: getting involved romantically with a chuuba and discovering in her room has nursery, things transpire. This could be NSFW.

Plot three: Two young friends (either (you) and chuuba or chuuba and chuuba) discovering this together. Could be NSFW or SFW, but won't contain any dark themes like abuse.

>>33037133
If I see a story called 'Blink' it's fucking over for you.
But they do have some really slick ability names...

>>33037133
>there's an author here who play's DOTA

>>33037157
I'm liking plot 1 and 2.

>>33037231
Better than League.

>>33037528
That's like saying vomit is better than shit

>>32951511
Feeding a black fox
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQnY-IHZBeLadG9mxnrLIxM3HwwbhRcLhsKM44A4bF5COqHusev6HafL3py9QNsJykvJJTb6A3rTjdt/pub

Tags: SFW, Kurokami Fubuki, fluff, light gore

As always, feedback is deeply appreciared

>Have idea for porno but know it won't be done anytime soon
Fuck.

>>33037564
Fair enough

>>33039880
What's the idea?

>>33040033
With an all-consuming, morality obscuring NEED to fuck the senses out of the clussy, you use the intoxicating power of your very soul to melt her defenses far quicker than any sweet talking ever could, leading to an almost violent, brain destroying, addiction-feeding fuck fiesta culminating in all of her holes filled to the brim with cm and her as your newest conquest/fuckpet. I had this thought while laying on a couch and waiting for a bagel to cook.

>>33040369
this is AA isn't it

>>33040504
There's only two/three people in this entire thread that are authors who are this horny for the fucking funny clown, it should be obvious. My point stands. Also, 'cum', not 'cm'. What in the fuck happened to the u that was there? Regardless, yes.

>>33040369
DO IT. WRITE THAT SHIT DOWN.

>>33033121
Just think of a title that seems fitting for the story.

>>33038758
>SFW
>light gore
please elaborate before I click.

>>33041414
She amputates your limbs and eats them.

>>33042355
How in god's name is that "light" gore?

>>33042355
Cute.

>>33042499
Isn't it? I wish my oshi would make me a quadruple amputee...

>>33041414
>>33038758
There is blood and a few wounds, but the story is mostly on the fluffy side of nursing someone back to health.
Mostly

>>33043085
Because it's a permanent implementation of a bondage fetish, or because you like gore?

>>33040831
>filename
I would bet on AA to win the Zain Battle Royale with an attitude like that

>>33038758
cute

>>33044957
Battle Royale? I thought it was going to be a standup comedy contest

>>33045068
Things can change at a moment's notice

>>33040831
>There's only two/three people in this entire thread
Curious who the other ones are now.

Also on the subject of animal eared girls, I though PD;PT anon was releasing a Lui chapter last week. Did I miss it?

>>33038758
Neat idea and it was cute, but I don't know if it's the formatting or what but the dialogue feels...clunky? Like sometimes it's hard to tell who's talking. Thanks for helping learn a new word though. 'Nitid'.

tfw you'll be a walking fox battery

>>33045713
About to drop it right now
Real life happenings have distracted me :(

>>33038758
Maybe it's just me but I had a bit of trouble following what exactly was going on in some parts but other than that, this was really cute fic.
I really like the premise of this fic; it deals with the more animalistc and supernatural side to Kurokami, something I believe should be more explored with other chuubas.

>>33045713
One is probably Omarun is Cute and Funny Anon. The other is absolutely POLlatio.

>>32951511
Here's the next chapter of Present Day, Present Time. Sorry for the delay, I really hope the fic turns out to be good enough to bust a nut to. That being said I know that the ending is kind of weak but there's a funny joke when Chloe is introduced so I think it cancels out. Without further ado, please enjoy and give feedback. In particular, I want to know if the anal scene is decently written.


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRhNFo5hWGwFQg8J5uq4VlJDRTgJV6kfXKAx0-ilxj0dqS4oBiNe_fc_bAbR8tf2Yt1UZgkY4e4C85S/pub


Tags: NSFW, Lui, Chloe, Smell, Nakadashi, Anal, Rusty Trombone

>>33046720
Oh, I see, I see...

(They're both me)

>>33046889
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I42usiVlhb4
Most based man in my book.

>>33046745
This chapter was like it was purpose-built for me. From the self-conscious hag breeding to stinky orca giving you a rimjob, it's 90% of my kinks rolled up into one fic. Thank you.

>>33048178
I'm happy you enjoyed it.

>>33046745
Fuck me, this chapter was really good.
Like the setup as well, there was a need for it honestly. Pretty sure if it just went straight to the fucking the series fatigue would have killed my enjoyment of it but the setup gave it a nice push out of it and lets your smut shine.

Bump

You want me to write AND bump? This is ridiculous.

>>33055383
Give me forty minutes.

Report here anonymously if you posted a story that got not attention and how it made you feel.

>>33058185
I got lots of attention for a story I posted, but the wrong kind of attention. The bad kind.

>>33058185
>paying for 4chan

>>33059853
Enjoy sitting through the captcha every post fag

>>32964427
>Mr. Knight of the Wind!

>>33059956

>>33060328
That's you being unable to afford a pass with your indog funny money lol

>>33059853
It's a gift

>>33060453
>paying for something free
Can't tell if you're a newfag or a zoomer. And I don't know which one's worse.

>>33061508
Jealousy is plain as day right there. Got any more buzzwords?

>>33061508
Jesus that's tiny

>>33061682
That's... pft... that's what.... THAT'S WHAT SHE SAID! BWAHAHAHAHA

>>33061682
A few threads ago someone posted one that was a kilobyte big. We can go smaller, we have the technology.

>>33062273
Stupid brat! C'mere. You need correction.

>>32951511
Only wrote this because I saw some interest in a Mio crossover fic with a facehugger. It's kind of retarded but I hope someone gets a good kick out of it. Enjoy!


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vR7ExA9nrSPD69angQjsXunr1b6ZU4FdQJVPpZycPTAv3hmBaaROhqjie5qQLf2rlD_9saqf6cI3Vc3/pub


Tags: nsfw, Ookami Mio, oviposition, alien, facehugger

>>33008081
>>33008596
>>33008953
putting collars on animal girls while they have their brain melt is sadly not as appreciated as it should be

>>33069657
>that ending
Got a chuckle out of me, but on reflection it really dampens the impact of the fic. Much like a good joke, the first time will get you laughing but only once.

>>33060278
At this point we're going to need an entire chapter just to document every reference in Holofantasy

>>33070294
this but with calli becoming your submissive wife in cat cosplay

>>33071773
With so many great animal-eared chuubas to write about it would be a cold day in hell when I'd pick Mori over objectively better choices.

>>33071773
>this but with calli
Stopped reading there.

>>33071902
i get it my dude
but at the same time she has the perfect attitude/persona to make the breakdown into a submissive bitch more satisfiying
That kongou doujin by kongou makes me go feral

>>33038758
Awww... that was nice. A fair few grammar mistakes and as the other anons have said it was a little clunky. Still though, a good, simple read that I enjoyed.

>>33070294
This but it's played for horror and has the animal eared chuuba getting broken portrayed as a bad thing.

>>33012557
Ever since my first girlfriend told me that whenever she got aroused some weird wet globules came out of her pussy I could never get aroused to pussy again. I searched about it and it's apparently something that happens to all women. Some 2D pussies look nice but that's all they are. 2D.

>>33072815
This but the horror enhances the smut and makes it even more depraved.

>>33058185
>that got not attention
Did you mean no attention?
It sucked, because the story I posted was what I thought was my magnum opus. It had a lot of effort and artsy stuff in it but ended up getting kinda ignored.

>>33072901
This is not the first time I've heard of pussy globules, weird.

>>33071902
i agree with you, because it honestly feels like a shame for a non animal chuuba to get the privileg
>H O W E V E R
>O
>W
>E
>V
>E
>R
I also agree with anon because all of the kemono chuubas we have dont fit the degradation angle
>mio, okayu are too soft and chill
>korone and fubuki are too upbeat and happy and probably into fucked up shit
>polka and koyo are pure shitposters and it wouldnt fit them
>botan is too aloof
what im saying is that hololive needs a bratty girl, someone worth breaking. and jackals are available

>>33073022
>It had a lot of effort and artsy stuff in it but ended up getting kinda ignored.
Did you remember to make it interesting?

>>33073154
I tried pretty hard to, obviously it wasn’t enough.

>>33073142
Watch streams.
>>33073262
Name?

>>33073521
>muh stream
fucking face it dude half of korone fanfics are ooc

>>32951511
Ever seen that chapter in the Simpsons where they make a gag with them being played by actors that act nothing like the characters?
make that a fanfic, use whatever gen you want but just make sure someone lights a cigarette because that's funny

>>33073142
>koyo
I dunno that one koyori brain drain outline did make koyori intelligence degradation seem pretty hot. Even with the architecture at the end.

>>33069657
This was littered with jokes and I kept cracking up.
The EDF references, Mio's monologues, the ending, how ridiculously contrived the entire set-up is... it was a very funny fic.
It doesn't have the same pull that Dammerung did, though, I'm sorry to say. Partially because of the many giggles I got, but mostly because there's just one paragraph in the story to really latch onto whilst jerking off, which isn't enough. Also, 'discharge' is the polar opposite of a sexy term.
I'm not entirely sure smut and the collection of nuts was the goal with this fic, though, so if it wasn't then feel free to ignore my criticism.
To summarize - really funny read, but didn't nut.

>>33074130
degradation is a pretty weird fetish because it has several stopping points and a lot of people dont feel the same about it
like you know the guys who like armpits like them, either hairy or smooth, but degradation?
some people think mental degradation and mindfuckery is hot, other think that treating the girl like a stupid bitch and hitting her is hot
i like when the girl becomes crazed around the person for example, but ugly bastard or shit like nose clamps instantly kill my boner in the spot

>>33074050
(Insert joke about this being every /wg/ fic already here)

>>33073521
>Name?
Sorry, I’ll stay anonymous on this one as per the original post.

>>33073142
There is a Jackal in holostars, so I don't see it happening.

>>33074522
Let me guess, you're a yuri writer?
That's like the one thing guaranteed to not get attention here (barring that one pavonashi fic).

>>33074522
Let me guess, you're a futa writer?
That's like the one thing nobody except pekofag will bother reading.

>>33074784
>>33074829
No and no.

>>33075124
Stop being a drama queen and tell us the story you wrote. You wanted attention now you have it.

>>33075124
Tell me what you wrote so I can skim read it then insult while not fully understanding the message.

>>33075238
>>33075520
It sounds like you guys just want to troll me when I'm the one putting effort into writing. Well, I'm not going to tell you what I wrote. I'm smarter than that.

>>33058185
Surprisingly all of my stories have gotten attention, even if I felt they were shit.

Some chapters of some stories have gotten little or no attention and that inspires a small panic attack in me lol. Thankfully though I've always had the next or other chapters get some critique or praise.

>>33074439
Oh, right, almost forgot.
take my $30 god damn it

>>33075238
>You wanted attention now you have it.
Nigga I was just responding to the prompt, you were the one who kept asking questions.

>>33072951
Horror smut seems really fucking hard to pull off.
Do you know any fics that do it well? Doesn't have to be chuuba fic.

>>33076944
NTA, but I think the most horrifying stuff is when something that is really unappealing to you is played straight and in-depth whilst still adhering to conventional horror tropes.
I think one of the best examples is Dammerung. I'm not just saying that because it's one of my favourites, but because it's genuinely written like a horror story but with a focus on an utterly alien fetish that someone who didn't share it would find abhorrent.

>>33076944
Psychoactive Secretions, it's in the archive. Its prequel, House of Tentacles, could also count.
It depends on what you focus on really. What >>33077167 said works better if you're focusing on the horror aspect rather than the smut. If you want the opposite, think of something like being defenseless and stalked/chased by an entity that you know would be more than happy to mindbreak you, keep you captive, harm you, etc. If you were to get caught, you'd be at their mercy and who knows what they would do to you, and those thoughts can be arousing while being in conflict with the part of your brain that's telling you that you're in danger. You know how women love Dead by Daylight because being chased by a serial killer can be exciting as they could either kill you or rape you? It's like that.

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>>33080597
ok here's a topic
heart pupils yes or no?

>>33080775
Cute but I don't know how you illustrate it in text without it being weird

>>33080775
Yes in visuals, no in text? Like >>33080845 said, how do you convey that in text? Heart pupils are a method of immediately conveying information about a character's attitude and emotions at the time in a visual shorthand. The pupils themselves aren't attractive, but rather what they represent. In text you don't need this, so if someone's pupils literally turned into hearts, that just comes off as very strange at best, and at worst, we know what you're trying to emulate, so at worst it becomes CRINGE.

>>33080775
I guess it depends on the execution. Like if it's due to magic or a love potion or whatever, you could draw attention to how weird and unnatural it is. Compare them to cataracts or something.

>>33080775
Nice visual indicator, closest thing in text is using heart emojis in dialogue which from a writing pov I find kind of gauche since it's the 'telling' equivalent of showing arousal via action and description but from a reader pov I like how it enables more laconic 'closer to head' sex scenes without having to do the slow showing of disconnect between character's actions and their words, even if it's a rather cheap typographic trick.

>>33080775
always

different question that I'm curious about
Tildes(~) to indicate sexy/flirty tone, or no?

>>33083235
sexy

>>32951511
I made a quick story about CHAD members being delinquents
>Be salaryanon, working for holosweatshop, the number 1 tshirt company (with dental plan included)
>life fucking sucks, but hey! you finally showed your stupid whore mom and her new boyfriend calvin who is boss
>fuck you calvin you are not my real dad
>as you exit the convenience store, smug as fuck after owning calvin in your mind, you almost crash into a girl
>long pink hair, black and red school uniform, a lot of piercings in her ears
>oh god, its one of those delinquent your chinese cartoons warned you about
>''hey man, watch it'' she says, in a deep voice
>you utter a half assed apology and exit the store
>the cold air of the night passes through your cheap suit, you breath in your hands in an attempt to warn them as you make your way to the parking lot
>there, squatting in the ground like some kind of wannabe russians, there are two girls
>red and white hair and a darker red one? you are not sure, but their uniforms and piercings just confirm what you suspect
>these two are delinquents, like the one inside
the store
>you start walking up faster, hoping they dont notice you.
>let people call you a cuck or a beta male or whatever, you bet your ass one of them has a shank
>as you walk trough the streets, you start to feel anxious
>like somethings... wrong..
>you do a quick look over your shoulder and you have to summon your inner willpower to not squeak
>they are following you, those three girls
>you panic, and do a sharp turn into an alley
>brilliant idea! except somehow this one is a dead end, how strange
>as you look around any way to pass over the brick wall, you hear a soft voice
>''oi... you anon?'''' you turn around and sure enough, the three girls are there
>the horned one, walks to you
>''i asked you if you are anon''
>''what if i am?'' you squeak out, sadly you dont feel very corageous
>the girls share a look among themselves and start approaching you
>you back away, frozen in terror, triying to remember one of your old man's teachings before he left with his new taiwanese wife
>''ah shit, it seems today that all you see
Is violence in movies and sex on TV''
>''Dammit dad'' you think, he was always too hungover on those good old-fashioned values on which we used to rely.
>The girls are closing in, you close your eyes and raise your hands
>''This is yours isnt it?'' says a squeaky voice
>You peak one eye, fully expecting them to punch you in the face, but instead you see the smaller girl holding a wallet
>your wallet
>''you left it in the counter, the guy there asked me to give it back to you'' the pink haired girl says, before stepping closer and grabbing you by the chin
>''OH NO, THEY ARE GONNA MAKE ME PICK UP THE SOAP'' you think, ''I FELL FOR THE OLD TRICK OF THE DICK WALLET''
>''Jeez you are freezing'' the older girl says, before opening her packpack and putting her scarf around you
>the other girl,the horned one, takes your hand
>''where do you live mister? we'll walk you there''
>''Yeah!'' says the smaller one, taking your other hand ''and well buy you a warm drink in the way there, since you seem to need it!''
>you sputter something about vtstreet before they start pulling you, the big one chastizing you for not bringing a sweater
>''im donezo'' you think ''im gonna get raped... and all because i didnt pay attention''
>as you get dragged you remember the last thing your dad ever said
>''Anon...im leaving you and your mom, here's twenty, buy yourself a game at gamestop''

>>33080775
no

>>33080775
In a visual medium, hell yeah.
In a non-visual medium? Hell no. Unless you go with something metaphoric like "she was so excited she might as well had hearts in her eyes" it will just come off as them literally having heart eyes. There are much better options to describe how the eyes express emotions, like pupils expanding or becoming like pinpricks, especially for more animalistic characters.
>>33083235
Yes, although it can also be used for a playful tone in addition to sexy/flirty.

>>33083235
I think that's more of an acquired taste; it has no place whatsoever in a published novel, but is sort of accepted in fanfiction circles and amateur writers groups as an easy way of bringing across a flirtatious or teasing mood.

Ultimately it's up to your own standards, but I think it's perfectly fine here. Don't put it in your novel if you don't want to give your editor a heart attack.

>>33083491
What's this writing elitism autism?

>>33083733
All I can say to that is go ahead and use them freely. I could not give a rat's ass what you do.

New thread
>>33083373

>>33083733
The publishing world. That's the elitism autism.

>>33083491
Just for you anon I'm going to overuse the shit out of the tilde key when I make my 3000 chapter novel on royal road.

>>33083235
Impossible to not use when replicating Japanese speech

>>33083733
It's how it is in the publishing world, it's not like that's that Anon's personal preference.

LUNA RAPE

>>33084988
TEAR AGAPE LUNA'S NAPE

>>33085492
TIE UP HER HANDS WITH SOME TAPE