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Story recap! There... were two stories posted in the last thread.

"Match-Made", Round 2: Tags: Koyori, Suisei, SFW (nudity), Fluff, Drama, Forced Marriage:>>27411789

Rosemi reverse rape: tags: Rosemi, Reverse rape:>>27492862

Prompt recap! Last thread had a lot of new prompts. Here they are in case you missed them:

Mori waking up after the offcollab to find that everybody has stolen all her liquor, done her hair, and replaced all her clothes with more girly stuff:>>27342577

A fic about dealing with an animal chuuba shedding their fur.:>>27351978

This Mumei prompt from /who/:>>27379054

Lui gRoominG Mori through her praise.:>>27381331

Botan taking you with her to the gym.:>>27387735

You get put into the body of one of the Hololive girls. Turns out, everything they talk about that's fantastical is real, and now you have to deal with it.:>>27387852

I don't think we've had a fic about literally skullfucking Fubuki's ear canals and cumming onto her brain yet.:>>27395936

I'm aware of the 2 rapefics and the Kiara reverse saviorfag story in the archive:>>27433727

Taking in stray Fubuki and Kurokami and raising them to be successful adults. Or raising them to be your daughterwives. Whichever you prefer.:>>27445118

A formal scientific log of the observable effects of Koyori's Lactation drug on each Holomem.:>>27451225

Having a date with your Hoshiyomi gf:>>27453269

bump

God I wish Zeta would sit on me

>>27499653
Zeta poses as a honeypot and seduces you

>>27499653
The Penguins of Madagascar run a train on Kaela.

>>27505283
that's... that's actually a really hot idea.

>>27505283
This but she's literally posing as a honeypot.
You go to try and put some honey in your morning tea then, bam. She pops out of the honeypot covered in honey and grabbing your throat.

Bump

>>27499653
Tired of your girlfriend teasing you, you turn the tables on Okayu while she's too occupied to do anything in return

>>27499653
Sneaking into Miko's room to give her a goodnight kiss.

>>27512803
And she doesn't know you

>>27499566
A while ago Pipkin Pippa from Phase Connect made a Vtuber subreddit as a joke on stream. During her hiatus I've been writing stuff and posting it there. I was unaware this general existed, so thoughts and impressions would be appreciated. I apologize in advance for the use of Reddit. I used links to youtube for certain sound clips.

Pipkin Pippa MGR dream fanfiction
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/viud7e

Purple Cat fanfiction
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vjcqh3

Pippa Route - Bad End
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vkpozv

Pippa Route - Interactive Fiction - 01
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vltwda

Pippa Route - Interactive Fiction - 02
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vmhnm1

Pippa Route - Interactive Fiction - 03
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vnbhyf

Pippa Route - Interactive Fiction - 06
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vp9trz

***** Route - (NON)Interactive Fiction - END
https://www.reddit.com/r/chuubas/comments/vrjgne

>>27514585
Kill yourself.

>>27514646
Kill yourself.

>>27514646
Sure. Please list the reasons why you think I should so I may add them to my own exhaustive record.

>>27514865
Is writing vtuber fanfiction that nobody's gonna read on the list?

>>27514585
Word of advice, don’t mention you’re new here or else our resident schizos will come crawling out of the woodwork in an attempt to scare you off.

>>27499653
Saw an anon a few threads back talking about something related to Ready or Not (the SWAT Tactical shooter game) and some elements of it have some cult imagery and that got me thinking:

What about an Ina fic where (You) a SWAT officer that's tasked to breech and clear a suspected eldritch-worshiping cult find yourself trapped within the very same winding halls of a dimension defying interior at the midst of doing your duty. Encountering horrors beyond your comprehension and beating them back as best as you can all the while your sanity is slowly slipping away, a certain priestess and her book of wonders might just be your ticket out of this mess you found yourself in.

>>27515857
>Delta Green introductory session but with Ina
Sounds fun.

>>27515857
Honestly sounds fun even if you go down the 'obvious twist' route for it of:
>Rest of your squad gets killed.
>Only manage to rescue this short asian girl with a book.
>Ultraviolent fights to escape the cult base turned apocalyptic hellscape

>Ina is either intentionally or unintentionally keeping you there either as amusement or as attachment to humanity
>Your actions manage to convince her that maybe the apocalypse isn't that deserved/grant her resolve to fight against her fate
>She lets you escape/pops you out of there with a kiss.
>Mental hospital/asylum ending because of genre conventions.

>>27516661
ah fuck now I want the dude to also have a sequel of sorts with these ideas:

>(You)r association hires you back into the frontline after forcefully dragging your consciousness out of the mental hellscape you're suffering with it's arcane tech.
>Tells you that you're needed on the frontlines once more as the same anomalies have been popping up, and every other agent sent never came back.
>Gears you up with all kinds of prototype tech and weaponry, sends you through some grueling training and hypnoindoctrination for preventative measures, as well as pump you full of various combat drugs in preparation for the final mission.
>By the end of all the training and procedures, you're more weapon than man.
>Your mission is simple. Capture or kill the source of the anomalous activity, and hopefully save the world.
>You're dropped off at the anomalous zone, and is finally confronted by Ina after battling other eldritch beasts.
>Cue mind-bending chasing as she plays a cat and mouse game with you. Hallways that shrink with you, endless loops, doors that open back to hallways you've been(think PT) and Ina taking on many horrendous forms.
>When you finally catch up to her, she asks if you want to save yourself, or save the world, offering you to be by her side until the end of time itself.
>Or you could put a bullet in this poor little girl and then go back to being a tool for the organization.
>Which choice will you make?

>>27516661
alternate conclusion: AO offers to break off its pact with Ina, but only if you become its vessel in her place

>>27516661

Pretty much that with "The Girl of Emptiness" vibe with it

>>27517499
Fight the ancient ones bro you got a gun

>>27515152
I read one...

>>27519615
>>27514585
I don't know much about Pippa so I can't really give any real criticism besides I like your prose, Anon.

>>27519475
1d6 investigators per turn

Thread's been pretty slow these past few days.
>>27512372
>Eating Okayu out under the table while she streams
My dick...!!!

>>27521445
It's how it is.
Shit's usually slow here unless someone post a good/interesting fic or idea that gets the threads talking... Which usually compounds in ot itself and gets other interesting stuff to come out of the woodwork.

>>27521445
[insert doomerpost here]

>>27521445
The BR hasn't had a spergout in a while.

>>27521599
>>27521885
Wasn't a complaint for reference. It's kinda nice.

>>27522197
Cuz he's not even here

>>27522197
please don't jinx it

>>27522340
Is BT3 happening or no? I don't recall.

>>27523871
Will be eventually, he's just stuck into Ark at the moment

What are you working on? Ask for some advice or simply generate some buzz and excitement for your new literary masterpiece!
Bonus Question: Make a prompt with your Oshi and a fetish you have.

>>27524015
This bitch isn't even reading, she's just flipping pages! She's just like me...
Finally actually writing down stuff again after losing myself to the Lands Between, the Temen-Ni-Gru, Fortuna and Elgado all over the span of the last month and a half. Story will be updated Eventually.
Bonus: Polka nervously asks you to finally plow her sizable ass after you keep focusing on squeezing and groping it during your cuddle sessions, pressing it back against your groin eagerly despite the fear leaking clearly through her voice. Will you ravage your slightly tubby fennec's ass with wild abandon now that you've been given the go ahead to unleash your demon within her, or will you take the time to go through all the motions to make sure she learns to love getting some backdoor action? I wish Polka had more porn in general but sweet fuck I want to grab her tummy while fucking her ass.

>>27499653
You are an executive with UMG asking Mori just what she’s willing to do to get this record deal

>>27524015
God, the millions of things I'd do to Fubuki... there's a truckload of thoughts that'd give your grandma a heart attack running through my head right now, but if I had to pick one particular fetish, it'd be more public sex.
There's one fic of enjoying public sex with her in the archive - The Journey Home - featuring a bus. I did enjoy that, but it was made for a public sex prompt yet was still written in a manner that incorporated very little of the exhibitionist thrill. There wasn't any description of just how risky it was, nor any indication of others taking notice. Fucking someone on the bus'd be ripe ground for this - people giving you suspicious looks, fending off the ticket-checkers, slipping on the small puddle of fluids underneath you both as you change positions and bumping into somebody else... it was a good fic, but didn't quite satisfy that itch.
There's other kinds of locales too - there's something attractive about fucking at an abandoned bus stop, a public toilet or in an old tunnel. Even though it's unlikely you'll be seen due to infrequent traffic, the seedy nature of the place - walls covered in graffiti, cigarette butts and glass bottles littering the floor and an odd, damp, dank smell about the place - that gives these locales their own unique charms, especially when juxtaposed with the prim, proper and outright beautiful woman you're servicing.
In short, I'd really like to ream Fubuki's butthole and plaster her rectal walls with my seed in a nasty part of town, soaking in the atmosphere as Fubuki shudders in orgasm over my frantic clit-rubbing and the feeling of her ass being filled with spunk.

>>27522197
Battle Royale?

>>27524015
Thinking about doing that Ina/Swat 4 fic that anons have been talking about.
>bonus question
Mio, Impregnation.

>>27524015
The bad end route Miyuki fic..isn't going so well.
It sounds kinda dumb and ooc for Aqua but I really want to be pampered by my maid wife. Using Aqua's thighs as a lap pillow while her bountiful bosoms lay atop my head while she whispers sweet nothings in my ear and tell me of how I did my best during work is a heaven I'll never be able to reach..

>>27525004
Whatcha having trouble with, anon? Maybe someone here can help.
Please finish it. Please.

>>27515834
Thank you for the advice. I think writing schizophrenic narratives about a pink rabbit Vtuber partially known for her schizophrenic attributes means I may have some of those properties myself.

>>27519615
>>27520316
Thank you. Saying you enjoy my prose is appreciated. I tried writing in slightly different styles for the four stories.

MGR dream - dramatically and elaborately retelling of a dream Pippa had.
Purple Cat - dense, contemplative, and uplifting story about Vtubing after 10 years.
Bad End - Transhumanist science fiction primarily written from the perspective of a dispassionate protagonist.
Interactive Fiction - I thought an escape room setting where I/you/the protagonist is trapped with Pippa would be fun if I added in 4th wall breaking elements. If anybody had suggested 'rape Pippa' or something similar I would have begun the psychological horror sooner.

Looking through the archive of collected works, it seems that most stories are written about Hololive or NijiEN members. Searching 'Pippa' only came up with one result. I think the Purple Cat and Bad End stories are the most easily understandable for someone unfamiliar with the schizophrenic pink rabbit jokingly referred to as Walmart Pekora.

>>27525004
I have to ask, what exactly are you having trouble with? Because the advice that you should take really depends on the exact nature of what you're trying to do and what's going wrong with it.
Without knowing anything else the most advice I can give is pretty much see if you can write out what you think isn't going so well with your current project and see if you yourself can think of a way to fix the current issues, or if there's a way around them.

>>27524015
Finally got back to writing rrat!Ayame after prancing around in WIP hell for a while, but with each sentence I type I grow less confident in how readable this story is. There's a lot of things that I think might be unnecessary for the story or interactions that might seem to sudden and forced. I'll have to do a lot of editing once I finish this shit.
Don't really have an oshi but Towa is among my favourites, and I REALLY want to gently bite Towa's thighs. Like, a lot. I also think it'd be pretty hot if Towa bit me back with her fangs, but much harder, enough to draw blood. Holy shit, I would roast my balls over a bonfire just for a chance at some biting foreplay with Towa.

>>27514585
So is this the ESL who's been making christcuck posts for the past year? https://www.reddit.com/user/RinDialektikos
https://archive.alice.al/vt/search/image/mS21D-4zdkLDvwkWes8Etw/

>>27527974
That post history made me cringe as hard as the first time I watched foam adventure. We'll know if it's him if he deletes his plebbit account.

Hag love!

>>27530948
POV: You're on a date with Mio, but hitting your bowls against each other like an idiot

>>27515857
I don't know why, but the idea of Ina wrangling eldritch horrors to stop tormenting mortals is hilarious to me.

>>27524372
>the Temen-Ni-Gru, Fortuna
Have you ben to Red Grave City yet?

>>27527108
>partially known for her schizophrenic attributes
I thought she was autistic, not schizo?

>>27534639
You're replying to a pippiafag, they're known for being retarded.

>>27534639
>Red Grave City
Going back to 5 after 3 and 4 and using DSD is giving me AIDs, just a little bit. I miss Dance Macabre but basic Rebellion feels so lackluster now, not to mention the charged form of DSD affects ALL weapons.

>>27524015
I'm having fun writing this Hot(lo)lin(v)e Miami(Tokyo) thing that I mentioned last thread.

Going with your sister Mori to Tokyo where nobody knows you're siblings so you can indulge in the passionate incestual relationship you've been keeping secret

>>27542432
>Spoiler
Please. Please...

Bump

>>27550449
Why did Ina make Polka sleep on the couch instead of her queen-sized bed?

>>27550805
So she can have sex with me

>>27542728
If only I had the time man

>>27499653
Getting interrogated by these two or some more horny prompt, they blindfold you and wont let you go until you figure out which one of them is fucking you, figure it out soon because you might cum in one of them if you aren't fast enough at figuring it out

>>27524015
I'm giving a different take to a series I've been working on for some time.

At first I thought I'd just go with what everyone expected to happen with one character, now I'm thinking of giving him some depth and have the conclict resolve mostly peacefully.

>Bonus

Mio takes care of you while sick, ends up giving you a get-well-soon titjob.

>>27555329
>One of them is your gf, you recognize her blowjob skills or something like a mole in her breasts
>You know the answer by now, but curious to see what the other one has to offer.

>>27555340
...What series?

>>27522340
Still here, still watchin', just not participatin'. Did a bit of revision on BT3, added some stuff and decided I need to change a scene to reflect character progression. Slow progress, nearly halted progress, but progress.

>>27557149
To be 17 again.

>>27558069
Curious then.
>>27557986
Fairy blowjob...
There aren't many fairy vtubers are there? Missed chance for size play.

>>27557986
Mmm, fair enough. Looking forward to the finished work.

>>27559620
This one is 9cm tall in fairy form.

>>27559620
Well, there's a lot I wanted to do with bits of fluff, but I sort of wrote myself into a corner as to how do I make the transistion between point A to point B without there being a massive downgrade in quality.
Whatever I write, I'll cringe at it, so I'll just go with whatever I find to work best.

>>27560176
I mean with your series specifically there's only two things that can be done. Either deescalate like you're currently planning or escalate like the text currently implies.
You're in a bit of a fork in the road here.

>>27559620
Seffyna and pomu from niji and that one indie fairy with R cup boobs come to mind.

Tho seffyna is a weird korean fairy, don't look at her lore. it's...... disturbing

>>27565035
>you said your rat wife is extremely silly?
>no I said she's fucking Goofy!

>>27499566
New chapter of Present Day, Present Time. I did my best to implement the criticism I received and I was pretty tired when I wrote this so I apologize if things sound insane. Either way, this will be a good one regardless. Enjoy!

Tags: NSFW, Korone, Okayu, Mio, Lactation, Pregnant, Prostate Play, Nakadashi, Body Writing


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTYf-3upJYrXcUopu0Xhkq64jSXd3i5aYt7SXicllDD7JwrQHKc6oOMD_4IDrmzpzJN3wc6KtOVm1ZN/pub

>>27499566
New chapter of Present Day, Present Time. I did my best to implement the criticism I received and I was pretty tired when I wrote this so I apologize if things sound insane. Either way, this will be a good one regardless. Enjoy!

Tags: NSFW, Korone, Okayu, Mio, Lactation, Pregnant, Prostate Play, Nakadashi, Body Writing


https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTYf-3upJYrXcUopu0Xhkq64jSXd3i5aYt7SXicllDD7JwrQHKc6oOMD_4IDrmzpzJN3wc6KtOVm1ZN/pub

Someone give me creativity

>>27569788
Would you accept motivation instead?

>>27568324
Those tags have got me excited, I'll be checking it out when I get home.

>>27569788
That's not something you can be given, anon. You must first challenge the writers of this thread to a write-off, and steal their creativity power by comboing (You)s in quick succession.

>>27568324
I'm going to slip into something more comfortable to read this. Excited to see what you cookd up this time.

>>27569788
Open the archive and get to work.

>>27563808
>don't look at her lore. it's...... disturbing
I mean, it seems like most chuubas have some disturbing stuff in their lore.

>>27573561
>Would you accept motivation instead?
youtube.com/watch?v=8eT3FJiE_6A

>>27574744
I'm a regular writer here and I've never read a single story posted here, not even once.

>>27580435
PF?

>>27580435
prove it by listing every fic in the archive you haven't read

>>27580435
but why

>>27580435
The anon that posts their blog where they write about indies?

>>27580756
I do a lot of mentally exhausting work so between writing and all the other stuff I do I just don't have the energy for it normally.

I'm not saying that like I'm a huge smart big brain or anything, I just only have so much mental focus I can spend in a day so I usually prefer to put it into making work rather than reading.

>>27580912
Well at least this rules out you being pekofag, but it does bring into question why you would hang out on a chuuba fanfiction writing forum if you don't read much?

>>27581508
I still read, but a lot of my inspiration comes more from movies, anime and games.

I know the key to being a good writer is reading just as much but you know how life is.

>>27558069
So you're fleshing out the husband more? That could be interesting.

>>27580889
He hasn't posted in awhile.

I wanted to write a lot on sunday but i ended up doing research for a character and my dumb little "extra chapter" is turning into some sort of redemption arc for a character. I hope i can get it right and have some time this weekend

>>27583400
Oh husbant...

>>27583459
He hasn't posted much on the blog either from what I can tell from a cursory look.
Either way I was just listing possible writers.
Only other writer I could think of other than him who would come here to write but not read could be that Architecture thread writer that comes here for crossposting and occasionally picking up ideas.

>>27505283
I like this

>>27508019
What am I, fucking Winnie The Pooh?

>>27581508
I rarely finish a /wg/ story because they’re almost always telling without showing because it’s in second person. It’s the isekai light novel of western fanfiction, where the self-inserter has to be instructed on what emotions they should feel. I know there are several writers here who use first or third and are basically never given a chance as a result.

>>27585224
And the fics you've written are?

>>27585224
I don't really understand your point, second person doesn't preclude show any more than first person does.

>>27585575
He's probably just butthurt that nobody reads his fics.

>>27585830
Subjectioncuck deflection post
The only thing more embarrassing than writing a 50-character story of people you don’t watch is writing a 60-character story of people you don’t watch and then aborting it midway because of a discord screenshot.
You would be a significantly less odious person if you spent half the time you use shitting up the thread on something productive.

>>27586766
I'm not him but damn he must live rent free in your head. Next you're going to accuse me of being the earlyfag.

can we go one thread without schizoposting about writefags?

damn it's as if the onus of writing a good story falls on the writer itself regardless of the medium used.

>>27585575
I'd like some clarity on this as well but it looks like they just posted their 'criticism' and ran off.

>>27585224
>I know there are several writers here who use first or third and are basically never given a chance as a result.
...
And those writers and fics are?
I know you're posting vaguely so as to dodge specifics that you can get hammered on but if you like those fics surely you can at least name them.

>>27588599
NTA but the last story I can think of that used first-person was Lotus Festival. Not sure about third-person.

Sex?

>>27589312
With Shion.

>>27589764
On our wedding night

>>27591957
Stop posting here, Guacamole.

>>27589764

>>27588810
If I remember right that anon also footsteps across time, and for the most part that anon's work was pretty respected.
As for third person works here.... I honestly don't remember. Last I remember reading was shrunken troubles at release and that was months ago. I'm pretty sure the indie writer wrote in third person but I'm not reading fanfiction of people I don't know at all

>Too horny to focus on writing
If this was smut it wouldn't be a problem

>>27593168
Have you considered turning it into smut?
Seems like that would solve the problem wouldn't it?

>>27593168
Maybe... jerk off? Or preferably do as >>27593246 suggests, then we can jerk off with you. At the same time. Heard of that old meme question of considering shitting in a public toilet with strangers simultaneously being erotic because of the numerous assholes all winking and shitting in unison? Well, like that, except actually real. With less poo-poo.

>>27593168
Have a wank and drink some water. It's easier to focus in kenja time

>>27593406
This has to be PF. Not even in a bad way, I just hope no one else has this sort of sentence knocking around their skull.

>>27593406
Nothing could've prepared me for the second half of that sentence.

That story you've been putting off reading.
Go read it.

>>27593933
T... There isn't one.

>>27593509
>>27593564
It's not.
Thanks for the giggle, guys.

>>27593933
It depends, is The Girl With Emptiness genuinely scary or is it spoopy?

>>27594436
More eerie if anything.

>>27594436
Writing can't be scary.

>>27594436
Horror is subjective. It exploits some personal fears which makes it stick out in my mind and is executed well, but if you find it truly frightening is up to you. Just don't be like the dumb faggots who say writing isn't scary because they lack the ability to conceptualize things and find them frightening

>>27594436
It's a less in your face kind of scary but it's got the good kind of unease that horror can do. That and it has a really good twist that's really well implemented.

>>27593933
Any recommendations? Preferably something long, I’ve got time.

>>27596256
anything from the series section

>>27596256
A Festival of Sensations 1 and 2

>>27596681
god tier story. the hoshikawa fic and that are like night and day, crazy how that turns out

>>27596479
NTA but there's a lot of stories in the series section that only break several thousand words.

>>27597166
Okay then, anything in the series section with 3 or more entries.

>>27596734
Y'know, I hope you're not thinking less of MWanon's writing capabilities because Hot Like a Star doesn't appeal to everyone; he wrote Hoshikawa like that because I requested it and didn't change it, regardless of the feedback he received, because I asked him not to. It's fair enough if the fic isn't enjoyed, but the idea that people might be thinking worse of his writing skills for it is sitting in my head rent-free.

>>27597513
To be fair he has dropped two fics that really lowered how people view of him at this point, I'd imagine most people just think he excels on some stuff but can fail spectacularly outside of that

>>27597513
I mean client demands can be a part of why that fic kinda sucked but you can't really say it's not the author's fault for it turning out like that. After all they were still the one that wrote that, even if the high level structural failure of the fic doesn't solely lie with them.

>>27597513
I mean sure, the main purpose of that fic was money but he still wants other people to read it as he posted it to the thread and asked for feedback, and if you want others to read it, you should be prepared to receive due criticism if it's a stinker.

>>27597288
That could be a fun exercise I guess. Read something you haven't before and write a review of it. I feel like the series posts end up not getting a lot of real feedback or reviews barring someone fucking up significantly.

>>27597804
Yes, certainly. Nobody's immune to criticism when posting creative works publicly.
I'm just putting it out there that the chief criticism - the characterization - was entirely my fault as I specifically requested as such.
I'm not dying on this hill, but in this particular case, you really should blame me, not him.
That's all I've got to say on this. Watching someone's name dragged through the mud for something I'm directly responsible for is corroding me inside out, like I've chugged a beaker of sulfuric acid.

>>27598022
Can't feel bad for him when he got paid, you know? He delivered something that the people from the thread didn't enjoy, you didn't enjoy and even he himself didn't enjoy, given that he wanted to rewrite it. But he still earned his share, for a fic that, by all means, severely underperformed on what it was meant to be. And I imagine from what MWAnon said, that his rates aren't cheap. All things considered, nobody would ever blame you.

>>27598315
>you didn't enjoy
This part is wrong. I liked it a lot. That's why he didn't rewrite it, and why I feel responsible. From my perspective, he wrote a fic knowing it wouldn't be well-received for my benefit.

Of course, this is purely academic. Nobody here is in the wrong for bemoaning its quality, as the opinion is sacred. But... yeah. I'm gonna take a shower and go to sleep (read: run away) else I'll never shut up over this.

Just pretty please with a cherry on top don't think worse of him for it. It was the asshole bugfag's fault.

>>27598713
it was his fault, you self-absorbed arrogant shitstain. he could have told you to fuck off when he heard your terrible request.

>>27598896
How can someone be this mad because they didn't like a story that was specifically written for someone else?

>>27599034
your obsession with self-sacrifice shits me up the wall. neck yourself

>>27599071
I'm nta.

>>27599079
then neck yourself for defending him

>>27599101

>>27599148
brown Lamy fic when?

>>27599237
I'm pretty sure her audience hasn't reached the age where they can post here yet.

>>27599380
who is she and where can I find lewds of her?

>>27599469
https://www.youtube.com/c/Cookieswirlc/videos
Haven't looked for lewds

>>27599502
I want to nibble on her cookie, if you can ascertain the implication.

>>27599502
>Chuuba will never come to /vt/ and show their L2D nudes by spreading their pussy
Why live

>>27599944
Dustbunny doko... please...

>>27600091
One day.
>9 in 40
That time again.

Just read A Brat's Punishment and enjoyed the mix of thoughts, dialogue and "action" a lot. Consensual BDSM play, beyond just fucking a cumbrain woman, is underrated

Hey you, anon.
Repost a prompt you find interesting.

>>27603040
>Fubuki when she hasn't had a story written about her in a week and is beginning to have a menhera breakdown thinking her cult is abandoning her

>>27603040
>You and Fubuki have been friends since children and often went to each other's homes to play games. You never really saw each other as more than friends, but that changed as you grew older and puberty kicked in.
>On a particular day, while in heat, Fubuki comes over to play games with you. To make things interesting, she turns it into a Punishment game - the loser has to do whatever it is that the winner wants
>(Un)fortunately for (You), Fubuki is pretty good at games, so she ends up winning.
>And oh boy, does she know what does she want to make you do...

>>27603107
That makes me think of Fubuki doing extreme shit to her body to entice the cult to write more.

>>27603217
>And oh boy, does she know what does she want to make you do...
She wants you eat her out while she gives you CBT?

>>27604176
Cock and Behavioural Torture?

>>27604176
cognitive behavioral therapy?

>>27604176
Crash Bandicoot Twinsanity?!

>>27604430
>>27604465
Yes

>>27604176
God, I want Fubuki to drag me around by my balls

>>27603217
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JZ2hnkQ2mO8

>>27603937
She could make another Reddit post, it's been a while

I see that my name is being brought up again for various reasons. I'm not going to deny that the latest commissioned work did not go well at all, but at the same time I'm not going to let it stop me from trying to improve and write better stories. It's all a learning process. I still want to and still will write, so I'll let my stories do the talking instead.

>>27604740
Trying to summon someone huh

>>27563631
That's the thing, whichever option I pick I feel it won't be enough.
>>27583400
Yeah, at first, when the series was meant to be short I just made him a dick because the story needed one, now I took the criticism from other anons and realized I was making a big deal out of a secondary character, which means that he can't remain as a cardboard cutout

>>27607202
It's one schizo who is likely jealous that you found a niche and can make some cash doing what you love, so don't let it get to you.

>>27568324
You still got it. This was hot as hell... Even if the quick pregnancies are really stretching my disbelief when it's happening overnight.
Still, The fic remains hot as hell.
Even if it still feels weirdly loosely connected.

>>27607675
I've been enjoying the series a lot. I hope things work out for the three of them

>>27607202
What are you talking about?
Bunny Trap 2 was pretty good from what I remember of it.

>>27597864
Just used the random story function and read boatload of happiness. Can’t say I like Ayame very much unless it’s her whore variant but this was fluffy and sweet. A bit basic in terms of originality but I thought it was nice.

AA do you have that little skill sheet for Matsuri? I'm reading ch7 part 2 now and I remember a while back you posted a skill sheet for her but I can't find in the the archive or the Holofan directory page. Thanks.

>>27585575
>>27587634
It was late and I didn't want to dig into a new story with the intent to pick at it, but since Hot Like a Star was paid for, I'm sure he can live with a few mean words.
>[...]the self-inserter has to be instructed on what emotions they should feel.
This is a problem inherent to second-person perspective. This is also why there's a lot of cheating using adverbs.
>[Before you realized you were staring at her earnestly, to which she notices and gives you a sly grin.]
Would've worked much better if you were immediately interrupted, opportunity squandered on excess description.
>“It’s been hot all this week,” you say in response, [trying to keep a neutral tone that wouldn’t betray your lecherous stare, except that your eyes stayed on her chest regardless.]
>"Anon," she goes, using her feet to prod at your legs. Your eyebrow twitches, [but you still try to maintain a zen-like state.]
>"Hey! Earth to Anon, do you read me?" She continues, this time essentially kicking at your shins. An internal timer ticks within you as [your patience begins to run out.]
>Once again your neurons spark and fizzle from such feedback, [causing your brain to zip between disgust and arousal,] but with the heat, all you could think about was how fucking horny you were.
>She teases you with a peck to your nose. [Her words still shake you, and you’re petrified from the fear and shock, unable to think or do anything.]
At times, SPP is so limiting that it has resort to things that you wouldn't know.
>"W-What the hell was that?" She squeaks in supposed anger.
Why is it only 'supposed'? How do you know that at the time, it might not have been genuine when you just tied someone up?
There are other examples of knowing things you aren't supposed to know that I've forgotten to list.
And all of those were issues specific to being SPP. Problems that aren't even related to the subject-verb confusion, use of bizarre technical language (corona of the penis), waxing philosophy, characters doing personality 180s several times; not just the domination reversal, as well as other conceptual problems with the writing.
>>27587010
Don't flatter yourself. It's such a cowardly numberfag tactic to accuse someone with a contrary opinion of being jealous, as if there are no possible other reasons to dislike something.

>>27608639
It's attached to the roll sheet at the bottom

>>27499653
Fucking the rabbit after binging all of her stories and stumbling into the bedroom in a drunken haze.

>>27608803
Ah thanks.

>>27608716
NTA but the only problem the thread had with the fic was the characterization fuckery.
The "limits" of spp you're giving are just accepted as a means to have a character for the viewpoint.

>>27608716
Were you the guy that threw a tantrum because you didn’t like the fact that everyone enjoys using second person perspective?
Also, I’m afraid I don’t understand your argument. How is telling and not showing inherent to second person?
“You felt angry” and “you gritted your teeth” is exactly that same as “I felt angry” and “I gritted my teeth” except in a different perspective, I don’t get how that problem is exclusive to second person.

>>27608716
Could you tell me the stories you’ve written in that case? I’d like to see an example of proper fan fiction that users show not tell.

>>27609943
>Also, I’m afraid I don’t understand your argument. How is telling and not showing inherent to second person?
>“You felt angry” and “you gritted your teeth” is exactly that same as “I felt angry” and “I gritted my teeth” except in a different perspective, I don’t get how that problem is exclusive to second person
Playing devil's advocate here, perhaps they're attributing some of the 'bad prose' they're seeing to the perspective used rather than the author using it.

I'm making good progress with the new chapter of Building Block Doll. I've got a question for you though:

Science Museum or Zoo?

>>27610343
Science museum. Zoos are cool but my god the smell is unbearable.

>>27610343
Third option that's sort of a combination of the two.
An aquarium.

>>27610287
>perhaps they're attributing some of the 'bad prose' they're seeing to the perspective used rather than the author using it.
...Yeah? That’s what I don’t get. Why attribute that to second person style when it’s a problem that can occur in first and third?

>>27610716
I guess their grudge against second person perspective might be blinding them to the fact that this is an amateur fanfiction writing thread...
Alternatively they could be a troll that thought they were smelling blood with the jabs thrown at Hot Like a Star and thought they had an "out" with it since it was seemingly mostly disliked.
Honestly hard to tell.

>>27610343
Why is this Sora so sexual

>>27612628
Sora is sex. This is well documented.

>>27612628
seiso idol built for tender lovemaking

>>27612628
That's just how Sora is

>>27611160
>it’s amateur work so quality doesn’t matter
>this example with cited lines hardly even insults the writing
>maybe it’s a troll!!!
Are you a woman?

>>27614347
>>it’s amateur work so quality doesn’t matter
If you want to read a literary masterpiece go buy a fucking book dumbass. Sure, being an amateur isn’t an excuse to be lazy but writing here is a hobby first and foremost, nobody starting out here is going to be at the level of a distinguished author right out of the gate.

>>27499653
Reine decides to reward her favorite author.
https://files.catbox.moe/qjukqd.mp4

>>27615289
So criticizing the direction of that story is bad because the commissioner wanted it that way, and criticizing the quality of any story is bad because it's hobby work. Is proofreading for grammar too big an ask as well?
Why would anyone ever give negative feedback if it'll immediately get drowned out by wagon-circling retards screeching jealousy/post your work/schizo?

>>27499653
Kanata is your assigned nurse while you're in hospice, dying of a terminal illness

>>27620082
Wow I hate this

>>27620499
The original anon said that the story was bad because of limitations inherent to the second-person perspective, while other anons pointed out that 2nd isn't any more limited than 1st and that it comes down to our authors being amateur writers. Criticism is happily accepted here as we want to improve our writing, but the first guy wasn't criticizing the quality of the writing, he was complaining that second-person sucked no matter what.

>>27499653
I saw a clip today that would make for a great story. Mel said that she used to be part of the swim club in high school and she had gotten really close with someone there. They hung out one day and for whatever reason, out of nowhere, this friend forced her down on the bed and tried to kiss her and rip her clothes off. Probably would've raped her had her mom not come in and said that best friend had to go back home. When they went outside, her friend said she wouldn't leave unless Mel kissed her first so she closed her eyes and Mel kissed her back hand and put it to her lips.

Sad and kinda traumatizing for her, but man it'd be a hot story if any author is down for it. Here's the clip to btw: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNsOw6LtVvA&list=PLt7T_K1V_GnGRJrQul0VPqRIPSWoX65TC&index=1

>>27620576
Luckily for you, you're suffering from ACD (accute cunny defficiency) and Kanata might just have what you need.

>>27622416
Didn't she also get assaulted her manager? Yeesh tough break for that girl.

>>27622639
Jesus did she really? Now I'm depressed... poor mel.

>>27622994
I'm not sure about assaulted but stalked, yeah. She had to take a hiatus early 2020 because of it. I didn't follow the story that closely after that but apparently because JP labor laws are whack, Cover wouldn't even fire the guy outright and ended up transferring him to another role altogether. What an awkward situation for her.

>>27620576
Given she's an angel, I have to wonder what sort of "care" she's giving.

>>27622639
What? Sauce? I heard about her getting stalked, and I think there might have been something about it being a former COVER employee, but her manager?

>>27623373
>>27622639
Ok It's not concrete that it was assault but there was confirmed harassment and power abuse. Here's a translated snippet of what Cover said (Cover did delete the page that had the original statement https://cover-corp.com/2020/05/25/弊社所属タレント「夜空メル」の発表と弊社の今/)

As stated from Mel's statement the 16th, Cover corp. has proceeded to confirm the situation after receiving her report of "harassment by someone close to her" "through Twitter and e-mail" since October of last year.

Cover corp. has since identified the perpetrator. He/she, using meetings as an excuse, repeatedly locked Mel in for long periods of time (often until morning) with conversations, often mixed with idle talk unrelated to work. This abuse of power was quickly responded to with the relief of his/her managerial role. However, the perpetrator did not relent, and continued to harass Mel with methods beyond Cover's administration.

>>27624251
>repeatedly locked Mel in for long periods of time (often until morning)

Christ. Poor Mel.

Was the real Gen 0 Gets a Buff was the friends we made along the way?

>>27623201
Dude apparently sent her dick pics too and she even had to move

>>27623201
Worst part is Cover didn't actually do anything about the stalker situation, and after Mel repeatedly asking them to do something, she had to get a lawyer and go to court herself to deal with this. Old Cover, aka until roughly about the time Coco announced her graduation, was REALLY bad at protecting their talents. Losing Coco was a big hit, but also the English audience doesn't tolerate them not helping the talents and losing such a big audience would mean even more money loss. That being said, Cover still doesn't do much

>>27626002
There is no 'old cover', it's the same collective of leeches that pays a now relatively small initial setup fee (economies of scale) when hiring new talent then benefits from their output ad infinitum. I'm still convinced Cover deliberately bullied Coco out.

>>27626324
>I'm still convinced Cover deliberately bullied Coco out.
I keep seeing this thrown around but is there actually any evidence of it? Why would Cover disband CN and get rid of Coco? It would be shooting yourself in both feet for no reason. Surely Cover can't be that stupid, right?

>>27626497
NTA but what he probably means by bullying her out is forbidding her from doing collabs with other members because whoever she collabed with got hit really hard by the chinese, and that likely made her feel really isolated

>>27626497
Because they made stupid decision after stupid decision. They repeatedly put the hammer down on AsaCoco and her other streams, continually limiting what she could put out; repeatedly blocked all collabs with Myth - although rumour has it that it was the EN manager being a cunt scared of chinks. Still, the fact that a manager has the power to block intra-company collabs is stupid to me. Speaking of chinks, Cover did absolutely nothing visible to help her whilst her chat was under the assault of the bugmen, and all of their negative actions towards her would have had their mental damage multiplied several fold because of the situation. On top of this, they actually managed to promote several chinks to moderator status in her chat """by accident""", causing her to break down and cry when said chinks caused pandemonium. That's beyond stupid.
I'm sure there's more I'm forgetting, because there's been so many dumb fucking things they've done over the past couple years, but the gist of it is that you can only assume stupidity so many times before you start to attribute fuck-ups to maliciousness.

>>27627223
Tbf Japanese corpos are really fucking stupid, like they genuinely cannot think like westerns do. Take the makers of Metal gear for example, loved franchise but they never went outside of Japan and are makes games for those arcade machines for the past few years instead of branching out. Or Nintendo and some of their stupid decisions as well.

So...what I'm getting from this is that it's Mel, not Shion, that's the confirmed most rapeable Holo?

>>27627679
Shion is for haterape, Mel is for tender loving rape.

>>27627893
> hate rape
Why would anyone ever rape ever out of hate? Personally I'd love to rape her to help with her depression...

>>27627893
>tender loving rape.

>>27608046
>even if it still feels loosely connected
That feeling is a consequence of writing a series without a plot.

>>27627893
>Haterape
I don't want to rape Shion, I just want to dominate her tiny body like it was bred to be dominated. Just lay my weight on top of her while I pump rope after rope of semen into her womb while she convulses and moans despite difficulty breathing. I want her to try and get away from me and beg for some rest only for me to grab her by the ankle and drag her back towards me and treat her like a flesh onahole until her eyes roll upwards and her tongue does nothing but flop saliva all over the place.

I want to lay her over my lap and finger both her mouth and her asshole while I train her to take my cock that's likely thicker than her wrist, then give her love taps on her butt if she complains or whines. Then prone bone her while keeping her completely immobile under me, biting and licking her ear and holding onto her wrists while all she can do is kick me with the balls of her feet while I rearrange her guts from within, spewing my semen so far up her intestines she's going to feel its taste in her palate.

I want to less rape her, and more bully her with my dick...

>>27630447
that still sounds like rape.

How robotic is too robotic for you?

>>27632748
they gotta be soft. if they ain't soft, then that's a no-fly zone right there.

>>27630813
Well, that poster forgot to add "(with consent)" behind his descriptions.

>>27630813
Well with rape she's mentally and emotionally scared
With bullying she's mad at you for being too rough, and you have to make it up to her

>>27635852
Precisely why rape is better. Really, when you think about it, rape is the optimal solution for any conundrum, isn't it?

Ahh, raping Shion... One of those activities on the top of my bucket list, next to rafting at Tutea falls and going hang gliding in the Swiss mountains.

>>27630813
>>27634156
I mean, I think that's the point.
You don't consent to getting bullied.

>>27636246
I'm pretty sure bully is being used another word for rough sex, not actually bullying

>>27636246
Why can't you consent to getting bullied beforehand? Some people like it

>>27636246
You absolutely can.

>>27636499
I dunno >>27630447 , this is pretty clearly about a long term breaking of Shion into your flesh onahole.

I haven't written in a week, gimme a prompt

>>27637687
No

>>27637687
Piss off racist

>>27637687
Your daughter insists that there's a scary monster in her closet as you're putting her to bed and won't go to sleep until you check. To your surprise you do find a monster -girl chuuba. The only way to defeat her and save your daughter is to tire the monster out with copious amounts of sex! Are you up to the challenge?

>>27637934
at that point i'll be more confused why there is a chubba in my daughter's closet, wait, I don't even have a daughter. oh god I'm going insaneeeee why was ina in that closet ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

>>27637687
Gura keeping the US-Mexico border safe.

>>27638145
>A threesome involving (You), Ina forma tentaculo, and Ina forma de Cunny.
Well that'd be rather spicy.

>>27638145
>Ina mindfucks you into forgetting her and yours daughter, and that she's your wife, for spicy fear sex while your daughter hides in your bedroom for the "monster" to go away

>>27499566
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQgD-UUGLm41IDf2PYAcrZye8kTQJqvCFArOamzXzOyYxnZr18fnIinex4K-O6yecIcPHZKcUhXX6LD/pub

Building Block Doll: Chapter 19
Tags: Suisei, Sora, Romance, Omatsu, Omorashi

Sorry for the wait on this one. Been wanting to get it done for days now but life keeps getting in the way. Hope you enjoy it.

>>27638925
>Sorry for the wait on this one
dude, you are one of the most consistent writers here. I doubt I could keep alive a series for 19 chapters, no less, and on a consistent schedule as well

>>27600091
Wonder what ever happened to her
Think I might have seen her around the board occasionally but that’s it

>>27638925
>“Almost. Let me just get the diaper bag ready. Do you want bottles or sippy cups?”
>“Sippy cups please.”
>“Sippy cups it is.”

>>27639787
think this is her
https://twitter.com/dustbunnyVR

>>27639963
this is a question, not a statement. i missed the all-important question mark

>>27639963
>>27640001
Difficult to tell without any doodles to compare with, but I don't get the same vibe.

All this dustbunny posting is making me miss Robbit even more :(

>>27640418
No, you don't, you fucking moron.

>>27641069
Yes, I do. Robbit is my kamioshi.

>>27600091
Literally who?

>>27642233
Some fraud that wanted some free publicity.

>>27642233
/asp/ chuuba who came by a while back for criticism on the lore she was writing. Eventually anons chased her out for >>27642273. There's some fics in the archive about her you can read if you're curious.

>>27642273
She didn't post vag or even her tits, so that should have been the first clue she wasn't here to do anything productive.

>>27642457
Was she even a Vtuber?

>>27642561
no

>>27642561
She was pre-debut at the time. Not sure what her status is now.

>>27642457
>Eventually anons chased her out for
And we're not wrong for doing that.

>>27642457
wait, some of you actually wrote stuff about a pre debut vtweeter?

>>27643865
nah she wrote her own stuff

>>27621300
>t. Kiara

>>27643865
>>27644120
There was at least one written by someone else.

>>27639807
Don't you look at me all smug like that, Iroha. I know what you did with Chloe last night you dirty whore. I have the audio files.

>>27639553
I always feel bad if I don't post a chapter of something like every 3-4 days. I'm getting impatient because my creativity keeps flying between every single WiP so I'm ending up writing every chapter for every story only paragraphs at a time which is why its going so slow.

>>27643865
Are you really surprised that a few anons were that desperate?

>>27644120
Oh, so it's just some autistic vtuber lore, not that b-
>>27644333
jesas

>>27644501
she even recorded herself reading them and drew doodles for it

>>27644501
Is it worse than EN2's lore?

>>27644919
nowhere near as cringe

>>27644919
less convoluted certainly

>"Okay let's write"
>Three paragraphs in the horny assumes direct control of my body, end up busting three nuts to various holosluts before collapsing, can't focus on writing anymore
i got the order wrong

>>27648900
And you're telling us this, why?

>>27648900
Yeah it do be like that sometimes. Writing while horny is uncomfortable but jerking off removes the urge to write

>>27648900
the trick is to time it after the post-nut clarity has worn off but before you start to feel horny again

>>27648900
Now you can focus on writing during old man time.

>>27648900
This is motivation to write isn't enough. You need to have the disciple to actually do the raw work of writing shit out.

>>27648900
Is this supposed to be sexual? Why am I getting hard to this webm? I'm not the only one right?

>>27652956
>Why am I getting hard to this webm?
Because you're a sick freak.

>>27652956
Because fate is telling you to write PeKunny.

>>27652956
Seek help.

>>27652956
i guess if you imagine that carrot as your dick and that bunny as a human female, then yes

>>27652956
it is a pretty hot rabbit.

>>27652956
You're weird.

>>27652956
>Is this supposed to be sexual?
Is an innocent creature enjoying food somehow sexual now? Jesus Christ, get off the internet, you degenerate low life.

>>27654654
doyouknowwhereweare.jpeg

>>27654858
I don’t think /wg/ finds actual animals sexually attractive.

>>27654858
Not a furry website.

>>27654654
hi earlyfag

>>27654974
what do furries have to do with anything? it's not an anthropomorphic rabbit, just a normal one.

>>27654654
The first thing I thought was that it was posted as an innuendo to Pekora sucking cock since he mentioned blowing loads to Holos, which is what caused this feeling

>>27655303
Nowhere does he imply that.

>>27655303
???

>>27642273
Yeah, that’s pretty much sums it up to a T. Pretty sure there were others, but they weren’t as successful.

>>27655951
>Pretty sure there were others, but they weren’t as successful.
What others? The only one I remember was some artist being annoying on how to find their art on danbooru.

>>27640418
Robbit's return to this place and his growth into a revolted punk after being bullied really was the greatest of character arcs.

>>27524015
The >Suisei goes topless at the beach story right now; spent quite a few hours the last few days on it, but I still simply don't have the ability to be curt and brief when it comes to setup, because I'm 8k words deep with no smut to show for it.

Well, I did take a detour to add a bit of Suipiss but...

>>27656196
He came back? All I remember is his initial shilling when everyone called him a gay pedophile.

>>27656354
>He came back?
yes

>>27656684
When?

>>27657023
Check the archives, I ain't going to spoonfeed you.

>>27657114
Sorry for asking.

>>27657466
He ain't me, I think this whole rep gatekeeping is retarded, but I don't have a link. He came back saying something like "I'm back faggots. Yeah doesn't feel good when it's you right?" and I think he even changed his Live2D to look more punk

>>27657602
2chuuni5me

>>27657602
That's pretty cringe.

>>27657602
Don’t spoon feed.

>>27657602
>"I'm back faggots. Yeah doesn't feel good when it's you right?"
Was he still seething?

New thread
>>27657964

>>27657940
Cry about it.

>>27656273
Oh, hot.
What aspects are you thinking on focusing the story on. Humiliation? Exhibitionism?

What if the balls got hard too?

>>27660400
CBT would be more boring, and on the other side of expectrum, look WAY more extreme