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yep, i'll post in this one

>>19659829
Previous thread:
>>19524468

Dingbat OP.

>>19660640
I did my rather pathetic best, anon. I can't out-autism earlyfag.

Gods above, I want to fuck Sui-chan's ass so bad.

>>19660143
Jacob's Ladder Watame

>>19659829
>Actual Holo Edition
So, is this it? You guys going to ruin a peaceful general just to be tribalistic?

>>19662138
Fuck sake

>>19662138
But why?

>>19659924
Been craving Shion recently. I want her smug, bratty personality to dominate me in bed.

>>19662461
So you want Shion to be sexually aggressive while doing the smug brat routine?

>>19662283
To be perfectly honest, this place should have been called hololive writing general a long time ago, and I’m glad the OP agrees with it since he’s philosophically opposed to writing fics for 1view indies.

>>19662735
Not necessarily sexually aggressive, just in control; she can retain dominance while letting (You) take the lead.

>>19662768
Borelive strikes again

>>19662768
>this place should have been called hololive writing general a long time ago, and I’m glad the OP agrees with it since he’s philosophically opposed to writing fics for 1view indies.
If he's seething because of an OP Pic, then I doubt he even wrote to begin with.

>>19662911
Yeah, that makes more sense for Shion, I think. While brat breaking rape is fun and all, I think something that lets her personality stay intact is probably better.

>>19662283
>not letting the earlyfag shit up the OP because he's an unemployed schizo who can stalk the thread 20 hours a day is the same as tribalfagging against non-Holo stories
What a terrible argument. The Archive is 727 fics, around which 20 of which are Niji-only (as in not-crossovers) and maybe 3 or 4 are indies.

You want to give your 1views exposure? Write about them and post them to the anchor. Putting them in the OP is misleading to the point it's basically trolling.

>>19663319
Stop being tribalistic.

>>19663367
lol, die in a hole earlyfag

>>19663319
I'm more dissapointed by the fact that people would rather be tribalistic than let the Writing General be a place for all writers.

>>19663412
I’m sure if you call anyone who disagrees with you the Earlyfag, then I’m sure you’re bound to be correct some day.

>>19663412
Kill yourself shitskin

>>19663556
remember that time you tried desperately to keep your 2view thread alive against the fubuki thread by writing out a bunch of garbage, then when it got posted to the real thread, you spent hours crying and begging for it to be deleted, and nobody cared?

ahh, good times

>>19663206
On the other hand Shion trying to keep the smug brat facade while you fuck her and tell her you love her sounds amusing also hot.

>>19663662
No, because that wasn’t me.

>>19663412
He must be malding that this is all it took to shut him down.
>>19663556
Give me one argument for how having a 1view over the thread rather than a Holo is good for /wg/.
Give me one argument for how having a Holo instead of a 1view in the OP somehow stops you from writing about 1views.
Give me one argument for how letting a single determined schizophrenic take complete control of making the general benefits /wg/.

>>19663818
How is being tribalistic any better?

>>19663967
How is Noel NOT a whore?

>>19664018
How isn’t Marine a whore?

>>19664073
So marineschizo is the earlyfag...

>>19663967
>>19664018
>>19664073
>number of posters didn't budge
Your fear unmasks you.

>>19664131
Yes, anon. Every schizo is earlyfag.

>Earlyfag having a tantrum
Just what we need, more drama.
Watch for the million people who all of a sudden hate Fubuki come crawling out of the woodwork.

>>19664332
Why do you call anyone who disagree with you the earlyfag?

>>19664332
Weren’t you guys shitposting just so you could be the victims?

>>19664236
>The person who made this was also an earlyfag
Honestly speaking, is the type of shit that makes me think.

>>19664332
it's pathetic the way he samefags and thinks he's invisible

>>19664790
Anon, seething because the OP is not hololive is even more pathetic. I don't know why you guys think you're better than him.

>>19664408
Not him but a million posts with the same recognizable one-line shitpost, while the number of posters doesn't budge? Makes you think. And anyway, I'd rather believe it's one seriously disturbed schizo than a dedicated group of genetic rejects dedicated to fucking up the thread. The latter possibility is just too sad for words.

Anyway, I'm glad it worked out. If we hit the post limit and the earlyfag makes a thread while I'm awake, it's good to know we can just make a proper OP regardless.

>>19664872
Give me one argument for how having a 1view over the thread rather than a Holo is good for /wg/.
Give me one argument for how having a Holo instead of a 1view in the OP somehow stops you from writing about 1views.
Give me one argument for how letting a single determined schizophrenic take complete control of making the general benefits /wg/.

This is Towa bouncing up and down on my cock I don't really care about anything else

>>19664962
Why not just rename it to Hololive writing general while you’re at it.

SHUT THE FUCK UP FAGGOTS

>>19665060
So, no arguments? Not one?

>>19665055
What are you, a fucking giraffe?

>>19665060
Bingo, there it is! Earlyfag is the same fag who demands the change to hololive writing general.

>>19664962
>dedicated group of genetic rejects dedicated to fucking up the thread.
You're in /vt/, this is more likely.

>>19665055
>>19665155
Towa sex... Towa pregnancy...

>>19665159
Already said I’m not the earlyfag, but at the very least you guys can just drop the pretenses.

>>19665238
Understandable. Carry on.

>>19664962
Literally what was wrong with the other thread that you had to make this tribalistic thread?

>>19665055
Romantic Date and Tender Love Making with Towa!

>>19665285
It wasn’t Hololive.

>>19665285
Boohoo QQ Noel's a whore

>>19665285
Refer to >>19663319 for my reasoning.

>>19664962
Kill yourself nigger

>>19665055
>>19665416
How is Tower so sexy

>>19665322
But why does it matter if it isn't Hololive? Isn't this just a place to write chuubas? Why make it Tribalistic?

>>19665325
Okay?

>>19665374
Why does it matter how many stories are written?

>>19665325
Anon, everyone knows Noel is a whore.

Heading out, hope to come back to a lot of delicious earlyfag seething.

>>19665468
It's the actual gap moe.

>>19665838
Nobody is seething.

>>19665869
You'd never think this level of cuteness and smoker's lung could describe the same body.

>>19665639
>But why does it matter if it isn't Hololive?
Because it’s a tribal thing.

>>19665982
Why make a place that writes chuubas tribalistic?

>>19665940
I want to suck towa’s cock so bad

>>19666215
>>19663319

>>19664962
>1view
They have names, stop being a numberfag.

>>19666240
> I want to suck towa’s cock so bad
Slight agree. Slight. Depends on the size. Can't be huge in those shorts she has.

>>19659924
So I've been thinking about this, in light of me liking the idea of the Mythbreakers streams and of their being fucking dead...

(You) are Anon, Spear of the Church, Prótos Exorkistís, Breaker of Witches, Killer of Demons, with at least three confirmed elder vampire kills in the service of Christ... and currently working undercover as an errand boy and low-level staff at COVER Corporation, Japan.

The job of carrying the Holo girls' coffee and printing out paperwork is rather low-skill and humiliating all by itself, never mind for a foreign man pushing 30, but you've kept at it for several months now, using your position to hide in plain sight as you attempt to uncover a nest of vampires in Tokyo. Nevertheless, your investigation has seriously stalled as time ground down, and you consider quitting - until one evening, while working late, Aqua bursts into the lobby in a state of heart-stopping panic. She's clutching her neck, covered in blood, and is ranting about how some psycho stalker just tried to bite a chunk out of her...

The idea would be a sort of Hololive/World of Darkness thing, where there's a deep underworld of supernatural evil in the fringes of society. The Holos could be just streamers, or they could somehow be supernatural themselves - i.e. Shion could secretly be a witch and Flare could secretly be an elf refugee.

>>19666617
But that’s the whole point of being a Hololive fan.

>>19667042
>Instantly tries to stake Mel

>>19667169
I did briefly consider villain!Mel or Choco, but thinking of them as evil struck me as kind of silly. Ultimately, if I were to write this, I think I would make it a tropey 'mysterious stranger' fic where (You) try to save your Holos from rampant supernatural depredation while keeping your cover intact.

>>19659924
A terrible storm sinks the ship, leaving Anon as the only human survivor. However, Anon is not alone; a fearsome white leon(Botan) accompanies him in the lifeboat. Days turn into weeks and months, and Anon and the Leon must learn to trust each other in order to survive.
Botan's character should be written like in Lion's Den

>>19667449
Keep your cover within COVER...
The adventures of Anon Belmondo sounds genuinely interesting me, if only because it has a mystery angle in a sense while you work to figure out what's going on. If you do pick it up, that'd be sweet.

I wrote a fanfic awhile back because a 2view i watched wanted to read some for a stream. It's mostly a shitpost with a lot of inside jokes, but do you guys still want it?

>>19667877
No

>>19667877
May overlap. Go for it.

>>19667877
Why not? Though with all 2view fics, assume you'll get a lower than normal hit count.

In this case though, anon, don't ask if we want it - ask yourself if you want it to be archived. For better or worse, everything posted here goes in the archive - as long as it's about chuubas.

>>19667589
Hag survival sex... hag survival pregnancy...
>>19667662
I like the idea because it seems like a good way to play with the more supernatural chuuba lore (Shion being a real witch, Mio being a literal fortune teller, Fubuki being a real kitsune, etc) without the burden of having to worldbuild an actual fantasy setting.

>>19667877
Sure, just reply to the anchor with it.

>>19659829
>mfw reading stolen dreams again

This masterpiece deserves a sequel.

>>19668582
It's fantastic. It sort of ends on a pretty final note, but you could easily make a series out of it if instead of timeskipping to an unspecified future you just continued from Anon's point of view after he gets kidnapped.

>>19668023
I dont really care about who reads it or not, i just did it for fun (this was also my first time writing a fanfic).

>>19659860
Anyway here it is. Chuuba is Nia Suzune from Prism Project. I hope i did this right lol

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSuN4bWqFm6fOlK8cW1LWDfzyaoC0DjT1fWhi5s55t0tU1mQ-o73aKdZnHmZKP9dO_DWB4XpTkOk_FO/pub

Also she did read it on stream so if you're a curious/rather listen than read it here's a timestamp for it
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TafECS84PJI&t=4315s

>>19668786
Also note, it is an entire shitpost, it isnt meant to be taken seriously. I wrote this all in like 2 hours

>>19668786
>>19669058
Don’t worry. People won’t care nor read it since it’s not from Hololive.

>>19669197
Eh, you're probably right, but she read and liked it and that's all that really matters in the end

>>19669564
Please don't reply to bait, anon.

>>19669564
Btw just as a heads up, there's a thread shitter here, much like any other general, and he preys on new writers like you. Sorry if this is a bad first impression even after being warned, but no one here who is legit would ever shit on a new writer, just keep that in mind

>>19669667
How is it bait if this entire thread was created because you guys couldn’t stand in your eyes, 1views?

>>19669564
That's a good mindset to have, but please ignore these two, >>19669667 >>19669760 this anon has it right >>19669764

>>19669764
The actual reasoning has been explained multiple times throughout the thread. You deliberately ignored it, then went to your 1view thread to try to bump it up. Nobody bit, so now you're back here.

If you care about 1views so much, the prompt and story anchor are right there. Post a short prompt if you won't write a story.

>>19670001
Yes, yes, Muh tribal mindset. Muh, Hololive. I’ll respect if you just stop pretending and just outright said it already.

>>19670078
For someone so supposedly interested in unity you seem terribly upset that there's a Holo in the OP pic.

>>19670237
I’m more disgusted by the tribalfaggotry.

>>19670237
Didn't you make this thread because a "1view" was in the OP Pic?

>>19670286
Why are you being a tribalfag, then?

>>19670318
Post a 1view prompt or write a 1view fic and the suffering will end, earlyfag.

This is the ULTIMATE and FINAL way the threads should be made.
No thread before one 404s and the OP should feature whoever was used in a story posted in that thread. There, both of you (most accurately probably one of you) shut the fuck up.

>>19670325
Anon, I didn’t make this tribal thread because of a “1view” in the OP.

>>19667042
>>19667449
You know another angle I could see behind done with this is like doing it in a comedic angle.
For some reason (You) can't seem to grasp that they aren't actually in kayfabe and need to get it pointed beyond even the shadow of a doubt that they are supernatural creatures. Even if in this universe on stream Shion openly talks shop about magic, Mel complains that her "Acerola Juice" is coagulating, Flare reminisces about the Elfen homeland.

>>19670469
>>19663319

>>19670473
You're still bitching about the choice of chuuba in the OP. You're no different, earlyfag.

>>19670620
Not the earlyfag, and no matter how many times if you call me that, it will never be true.

>>19670666
Post a 1view prompt or write a 1view fic and the suffering will end.

>>19670666
Having another holo thread after this, btw.

>>19670769
Yes, because tribalfaggotry would end so easily.

>>19670830
So, /wg/ will just be another tribal thread?

>>19670877
Pretty much.

>>19670877
Your 1views are no longer welcome.

>>19670976
Not with your tribalfaggotry.

>>19670976
I don't know why you're so insistent in killing /wg/ with this tribal bullshit.

>>19671260
We know Noel is a whore, anon, you don’t need to post a picture about it.

>>19671262
We can't control the way the earlyfag acts. He just hates Hololive.

I might try writing an actual prism project fanfic tomorrow that isnt a shitpost. Don't know who yet though. I'm probably just gonna wing it but I'll take any advice/prompt idea if you guys have any.

>>19671398
Nobody cares about your 1views.

>>19671398
I don't watch any of them, but I always thought Luto was cute.

>>19671398
It can't be Shiki, since they made this thread in response to her.

>>19671398
Seconding Luto

>>19671469
>>19671529
Don’t give him false hope. There was a prism project in the Op and you guys made this instead.

Get motivated. Stay motivated. Stay strong.

>>19671262
>16 IPs at 10:37 CST, on the 2nd fastest board on 4chan
You ALREADY killed it. You and all the other obsessive, mentally ill shitters who stalked this thread to make the OP with a 1view, to spam the shit out of the last 100 posts to force autosage, to shitpost 1 line insults at new updates, to lurk waiting for new writers to announce themselves so you could try to scare them away. So you'll have to forgive me for not caring that the sight of a Holo girl in the OP upsets you.

>>19671710
Thread was dead the second it was nothing more than tribal bullshit. Tribal threads are nothing if not full of shitposts. So I don’t know why you’re blaming him

>>19671398
Just looked at a wiki for them, and yeah. I've never heard of any of them, but Luto's pretty cute, so I'll just go and back the popular opinion.

>>19671710
It's a genuine unmedicated autist. I don't think it's a troll, I think he is genuinely developmentally challenged and uses this thread as a coping mechanism. Just ignore and keep making holo threads.

>>19671710
Seriously, why did you make this thread? What was wrong with the Shiki one?

>>19672023
>What was wrong with the Shiki one?
Wasn't from Hololive apparently. Don't know it has to be from hololive since this general is writing about all chuubas.

>>19672023
Made too early

>>19672111
So was this. So what was really wrong with it?

>>19672139
The OP wasn't a Hololive chuuba, that's it.

>>19671469
>>19671529
>>19671828
I'm probably not gonna go with this, but an idea i have for rn luto is a story about (You) escaping from her sex slave dungeon that she held you captive in for the past 2 months (since that's was about how long she was on unexpected break for). But that might be too much of a shitpost lol

>>19672139
>>19672179
Nope, the later thread is the better one

>>19672221
Yes, we get it tribalfaggotry.

Question to the anons from last thread. Do you want Luna sex in spite of her personality or due to it?

>>19672320
Because of. There's plenty of pink women but only one Luna

>>19672213
Hey, that just gives it credence bro. And it depends on how you write it; it could be smut, could not be. And even then, there's nothing wrong with shitposts, they're fun.
>>19672320
Due to it, are you crazy?

>>19672213
>But that might be too much of a shitpost lol
I mean, the shitpost ones are the funniest. Check out "The Enslaven" in the archive.

>>19671710
Shut up shitskin

>>19672179
>>19672221
I expect more, so it’s all tribal bullshit?

>>19672492
>tribal bullshit?
Yes. It's that simple and sad.

>>19672382
Personally, I find Luna's shtick kinda hot because she's so clearly an adult woman pretending to be a loli. If you were to play it straight to her lore it wouldn't be particularly appealing to me.

>>19672659
So you like it in an age play sort of way, but with an expectation that she can/will break character due to (You)?

>>19672659
I strongly agree with this, mostly because the idea of adhering to lore and believing she's mentally almost as young as the earlyfag would utterly turn me off. On the other hand, when it's an adult woman acting like a spoiled child... diamonds.

>>19672801
>when it's an adult woman acting like a spoiled child.
Shout out to Disciplining Nene for giving me that, which I didn't even know I wanted.

>>19672659
Then why write her at all if you’re not going to adhere to lore?

>>19672801
You seem obsessed about the earlyfag.

>>19672801
Both you and earlyfag are the same. Jesus Christ, all this over a fucking OP pic.

>>19672761
Yes, essentially. See >>19672801 and >>19672895.

>>19672908
As opposed to adhering to how she actually is on stream, which is literally (and obviously) an adult woman pretending to be a loli?

>>19672465
I dunno a 'good' shitpost seems like it would take more thought and care put into it to the point of going past ironically doing it. Such that doing it genuinely from the start seems like it'd be easier.

>>19672895

>>19671323
Marine is a whore.

>>19672908
Anon vtubers have two lores their character lore from their bios and debut, and their stream lore made from their persona shown on stream. If you haven't noticed by now the writers here mainly use stream lore as the base then add in details from character lore for flavor.

>>19673528
>Implying people here even watch streams.
Very few speak Japanese, at best, they’ll watch clips and that’s it.

>>19673528
It has been demonstrated over and over that several of the writers here don’t use either.

>>19672382
Impregnation Sex with Luna.
Getting her to shape up to be a Mom.
Seeing her take Child rearing seriously.
Still have sex where she regressed back to being a spoiled princess.

>>19673655
Fuck you, I watch the King.

>>19674510
>King
A-Anon...does Fubuki have a secret?

>>19674510
Who?

>>19674510
With the way she's written in fics, I doubt it.

>>19674563
A friend.

>>19674553
How do you think Fubuki's gotten so much of her friends into hololive. The Premium Fox Cock is too strong.

>>19674510
she's the best

>>19663206
Mind-breaking rape is fun but yeah your idea is good too, anon.

Let's bring it back a little bit. What inspires you to write fics? Do you morph ideas into v-tuber themes? Do you watch streams and get motivated? Do you see fanart and write about it?

>>19674510
No you don’t if all the Fubuki fics are any indication.

>>19675658
All of the above. I like writing and I like creating content people enjoy. I like vtubers. I like /wg/. I combine all this into creating stories.

>>19675658
Music, games, fanart and porn. Streams are important but they're less an inspiration than they are a parasocial fuel that keeps me going.

>>19675720
>>19673759

>>19673759
Honestly, why even write someone if you don’t watch them or even know them? At that point, isn’t that just an original character wearing their skins.

Tourist here, somehow it feels weird writing fanfics for vtubers since many of them don't even bother playing into their kayfabe; they're mostly just regular streamers with avatars, so it feels more like I'm writing fanfics of actual people rather than fictional characters.

>>19675658
Music. Games. Fanart. Visual novels. Inspiration can come from anywhere, really.

>>19675658
I get half of my drive to write from the creative challenge of writing and the other half from wanting to make the kind of stuff I want to read. Other than that the thread's pretty helpful since I do enjoy shooting ideas, discussing them and trying to write them.

>>19675859
Nah, you’re okay, no one else writes them in-character.

>>19675859
Just embrace the cringe, anon. Nobody cares it's silly. Actual chuubas have admitted to reading fanfic of themselves and their genmates.

>>19675720
Ah yes everyone here should know how fbk would react if someone shat down her mouth or if she got raped by a pack of niggers.

>>19675859
That's just a mindset issue that you'll have to tackle if you wanna write/read fanfics about chuubas. I'm watching the person when they stream, but I'm reading/writing about the character in fanfics.

>>19675859
Yeah that's kind of the grey line that's at the core of thinking of them as characters separate from the actor. Makes it much easier to actually write them since it means real life bullshit doesn't take you down.

>>19675972
Yes. Stop trying to defend shit writing.

>>19676030
>he's still seething

>>19676001
>as characters separate from the actor.
I feel like you've been saying this for a few threads now but there really isn't a big example I can think of where somebody is really so different from how they portray themselves on-stream.

>>19675972
>Ah yes everyone here should know how fbk would react if someone shat down her mouth
She's not into scat, so she would be repulse by it.

>or if she got raped by a pack of niggers.
Unless you're implying women can't be raped, I don't understand what you mean. Rape is traumatic, especially if done by a group of men.

>>19676161
I think it’s a cope from Rushia.

>>19676167

>>19676167
How do you know? She's never mentioned scat on stream. You puttin' words into her mouth there, eh, buddy?

>>19676240
The point you made was terrible since almost all people would react how normal people would act.

>>19676267
Because Coprophilia is rare, and Coprophagia even rarer.

>>19676425
And what if she's one of those rare few who likes it, eh?

>>19676161
A human is complex, a character is by necessity simpler.
That other anon used it as an example with Rushia but genuinely I don't think the person behind is as fucking insane as the character she represents. Not denying she's got problems there but you know it's an act, a character. It's a distilled version of the streamer that presents a character with certain characteristics.
>inb4 image post that's just a Rushia cuck meme

>>19676526

>>19676516
Anon, just stop. You know she’s not into it and the point you tried to make was terrible.

>>19676579
I accept your concession.

>>19676279
The point is that no one knows how people react to traumatic/strange things.

>>19676579
>source: just trust me bro
I feel weird for arguing about scat but you're still a faggot.

>>19676526
Rushia is a terrible example for your point because the whole problem was that she went to great lengths to reject the idea that she was just a character. A lot of why she was so popular and had so many dedicated fans was even because she would act in "private" much the same, and still does. It's up to you ultimately whether or not you believe that, but for quite a few of them the "character" is just themselves.

>>19676860
Yeah and so is wrestling. Modern Kayfabe theory is to just act as yourself but amped up to 11.
They may no longer wear 'masks' that are so different from their 'faces' but the 'mask' is still a character of its own.

>>19677009
>Bro it's just like wrestling ya know
Nevermind, didn't realize I was arguing with a redditor

>>19677432
Just because they act real to themselves doesn't mean they aren't playing a character.
Everyone wears a mask in every social situation, the mask they wear is but one that's suited for them.

>>19677684
You got any other quotes from a 13 year olds Deviantart profile you want spit at me or can we just call you autistic and be done with it

>>19659924
(You) just hardcore eating a chuuba out. Like just going down on munching vag while she screams out in pleasure. Feeling her nails rake through your hair as you absolutely abuse her clit with your tongue. Or something like that maybe idk.

>>19678359
Shaved or No?

>>19678475
please don't

>>19678475
How is that even a question? Unshaved of course.

>>19678548
Unfathomably based.

>>19678475
Shaved.

>>19659860
Hololive: Subjection, Chapter 4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSfsqZv1Tw8-LVWYGtGQRTScfwB8Rx8Q8MVx772EEoNVTE5x6i4IFYY1i2u1gJ3WsdFTbCMLFaXj2eQ/pub

Holy FUCK, this was a bitch and a half to write. Not to mention a good bit longer than the other chapters, I think. I hope you guys enjoy it. I somehow still didn't make it to any NSFW scenes yet.

Also - some time ago, an anon recommended that I come up with a proper blurb for the series section now that the fic is archived. Somehow this makes me even more self-conscious than actually writing the story, but whatever, here goes:

"(You) are Anon, hero of a blood-soaked war between the Hololive Kingdom and the Nijisanji Imperium. After the wholesale sacking of Cover City, with most of the Hololive Talents imprisoned, you get first pick of the spoils - choice slavegirls bound to your every desire. But the secrecy and depravity of a false peace may prove to be your greatest challenge yet."

>>19678475
Still trying to reignite that stupid fight?

>>19659860
Hololive: Subjection, Chapter 4

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vSfsqZv1Tw8-LVWYGtGQRTScfwB8Rx8Q8MVx772EEoNVTE5x6i4IFYY1i2u1gJ3WsdFTbCMLFaXj2eQ/pub

Holy FUCK, this was a bitch and a half to write. Not to mention a good bit longer than the other chapters, I think. I hope you guys enjoy it. I somehow still didn't make it to any NSFW scenes yet.

Also - some time ago, an anon recommended that I come up with a proper blurb for the series section now that the fic is archived. Somehow this makes me even more self-conscious than actually writing the story, but whatever, here goes:

"(You) are Anon, hero of a blood-soaked war between the Hololive Kingdom and the Nijisanji Imperium. After the wholesale sacking of Cover City, with most of the Hololive Talents imprisoned, you get first pick of the spoils - choice slavegirls bound to your every desire. But the secrecy and depravity of a false peace may prove to be your greatest challenge yet."

>>19678475
https://www.strawpoll.me/45983989/r

>>19679395
>>19679550
You don’t need to post it twice, especially just to namefag.

>>19679550
Also! Since there's a lot of Holomems and it's going to get a bit onerous to keep track of them all, I thought I'd post the post-wartime status of the girls (You) know, or are at least aware of.

ENSLAVED BY YOU
- Shirakami Fubuki, Tokoyami Towa, and Hoshimachi Suisei are prisoners in your manor, bound to you by their slave collars. None of the three girls seems particularly happy about her situation, but at least you're aware that Fubuki, though personally strong, can be easily cowed if she thinks obedience will spare her friends further pain.

Whether you will use this against your slaves remains to be seen.

PRISONERS OF WAR
- Inugami Korone and Nekomata Okayu, the Twin Fangs: Last seen being auctioned off in the Slave Market. They're known for being inseparable, and in Korone's case exceedingly violent. You hope whoever collared them is in a position to handle them.
- Takanashi Kiara, the Phoenix: Also seen at the auction, buyer unknown. A powerful long-range fighter with control over fire, she could probably torch the entire capital if her slave collar did not suppress her powers. As she is now, she seems almost pitifully broken.
- Natsuhiro Matsuri, the Poisoner: Also seen at the auction. Renowned for her beauty and backhanded subterfuge, but not particularly powerful by the standards of Hololive Talents. That said, you hope whoever controls her collar has eyes on the back of their head, since Matsuri is possibly the Talent who least needs her powers to kill somebody.

IN OPEN REBELLION
- Houshou Marine, Fleet Admiral: Very much alive and kicking, Captain Marine withdrew the Hololive Kingdom's shattered fleet when Cover City fell - a tactical decision to preserve her ships and men instead of fighting a doomed last stand. Has been sighted multiple times since the end of the war, raiding the Imperium's shoreline for supplies. Currently under the pursuit of the Imperium's fleet under Admiral Ban Hada, who to date has not been able to corner her.

- An unknown, but worryingly large number of Talents holed up in the ruins of the city of INNK.

MISSING
- Mori Calliope, the Reaper: Brutally wounded by you when she dropped her guard during the siege of Cover City, Calliope was withdrawn from the battlefield by a horde of her servant skeletons. She has not been seen since - but you know what you did could not have actually killed her.
- Murasaki Shion, the Black Witch: Wounded in a skirmish in the final year of the war, she disappeared and has not been sighted yet. A prime target.

KILLED IN ACTION
- ??????

>>19680343
Couldn’t this serve as a separate chapter in google docs?

>>19680390
I thought about that, but I don't want it archived since this info is only going to get updated every 3 or 4 chapters, or so, tops. So I think it works better as an addendum posted here.

>>19659924
I wanna see this tanned elf goddess split Rushia in half on her gigantic futa cock.
I'm so into the idea of Flare having 0 hesitation when it comes to giving her former genmate the punishment she deserves by demolishing her cunny.

>>19680343
I gotta say, you've really set up an interesting world. Not too many things deal with the immediate aftermath of war on a personal level, like when all those feelings are still white hot, so this is definitely fascinating on that front.

I do also like the dilemma you've set up of Anon wanting to be a sturdy reliable rock to the people around who are all fucked up from the war, but he's in not much better shape. I'm still interested in the grander intrigue but I think regardless of where you take it the characters will be great.

Rise!

>>19682135
There’s nothing to rise from a tribal thread.

>>19682135
You bumped the thread, now what? You going to just keep bumping it whenever it reaches to page 10?

>>19679550

I'm enjoying this series so far, i really don't have any constructive criticism though.

keep em coming

>>19682129
Looks about right.

>>19682135
I'm busy beating my cock for the fifth time to Festival of Sensations, sorry.

>>19682129
Aw damn, you bumped it. The curse of hololive subjection was about to become real.

>>19682194
Most likely.

>>19682176
Post a 1view prompt or story and the suffering will end.

>>19682405
Just stop being a tribalfaggot.

>>19659924
Helping Arisaka with her back pain after a rigorous gaming session by any means necessary. Mostly just using your hands give her a a back massage while she complains about Yugioh.

>>19682606
Whoa, whose this? I like her design

>>19682729
A 1view, doubt worry yourself about it. No one is going to write the prompt.

>>19682729
Indie chick. She's cute and I've been watching her for a while. She's live right now, too.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hy58_py1mPU

>>19682762
Your autocorrect is showing, nightshiftfag. Get back to work.

>>19682606
>>19682763
Anon, I'm sorry to tell you this, but no one is going to write the prompt, since it's not a hololive character.

>>19682796
>nightshiftfag
Oh, hey, do we have another bogeyman I'm not aware of? I thought it was just the earlyfag being up 24/7 because his entire life revolves around shitposting on 4chan.

>>19680597
Why is this Flare ripped with giant hips??

>>19683149
>Oh, hey, do we have another bogeyman I'm not aware of?
How new are you?

>>19683190
So we don't, then?

>>19683255
>We
Lurk more.

>>19683294
Riiiiiiiiiiight, gotta know about Anon's imaginary friends or he'll throw a fit... You, uh, take care of yourself, buddy.

>>19680343
>Shion
Please don't kill her off when the story gets there

>>19683402
Use the archive instead of expecting to be spoonfed.

>>19683663
https://youtu.be/2HJxya0CWco

>>19683779
Ah, just another threadshitter.

>>19683801

>>19682307
I have to ask why you find it so good that you've come back to it that many times. Like don't get me wrong there are a couple of really good fics in the archive I come back to but I wonder why you'd come back to that one specifically.
Is it the scenario, the fantasy or is the writing just that damn good?

>>19683964
Do you really care or are you just trying desperately to create some sort of discussion?

>>19684005
First one actually.
I'm always interested in seeing how people think about fics here since I want to know how people think about smut.

>>19683964
Not him but I liked it because it was incredibly lewd, yes, but also because Matsuri is one of my favorite Holos to read. You can do so much with her because her on-stream persona is juuust unhinged enough to leave a lot of blanks for your imagination to fill in a fic. So for me it's always a joy to see a new Matsuri fic because I never quite know what I'm going to get, but I do know that it will rarely feel OOC. She ends up being a kind of Joker card in that regard - see how different she is in Festival of Sensations vs Menhera Wrangler vs Lies Come to Light, and yet all three of those are well-liked stories.

>>19682307
There'll be a part two some time in the future! Save some libido for that.

>>19683175
It really helps in raping people to death, you see.

>>19683175
I thought flare having thick hips was a meme from that image that had flare's default arm position making it seem like she had divine hips.

>>19683964
I don't enjoy smut that thoroughly. It's rare for me to feel that way about a fic. I really, really find find Matsuri incredibly attractive, and the corruption aspect gets my blood pumping. Particularly the idea of the power play. Not reporting your blatant molestation out of a desire for more, or Matsuri teasing you about the idea of you two getting caught but knowing only you would get in trouble, etc. Put simply, it turns me the fuck on and I like to fantasize a bit while reading it.

>>19684477
So you're saying the appeal comes from the fact that it's a smut fic that hits your fetish buttons perfectly.
I can symphatize Pekofag's Rushia NTR is a bit too short for me to jack it to the text but the fantasy presented is really fucking hot that I can finish from imagination. I've come back to that fic like 3 times already.

>>19684607
Maybe, but I feel like that's a little reductive. I do genuinely enjoy the story itself; the plot, dialog, all of that really is enjoyable, but the sexual content within and the fact that it's one of the chuubas I want to rape into submission the most all create a perfect storm centered entirely upon my cock which then sucks me to completion. Either way, props to the author.

>>19684716
So it hits your fetish buttons perfectly.

>>19684396
The fuck is with that flare muscle art.

>>19685834
Her mid-torso actually kinda looks like the underside of a dick

>>19685856
FUCK

>>19685856
Well I can't unsee it now.
Thanks.

>>19673501
and Marine doesn't stream. Probably too busy fucking Nigerians she met in Roppongi.

>>19684359
It's kind of ironic how Matsuri and Fubuki have that same trait in fanfics here then. Of their characters varying wildly yet still seeming in character.

>>19659924
Rape.

>>19667042
I'm actually writing a somewhat similar story to this right now, except instead of vampires its a whole lot of other mythical creatures like werewolves, fairies, the kraken, phoenixes, demons, etc.

>>19671665
Aye sir

>>19687843
What other kind of Shigure Ui rape correction can be done?

>>19688451
Public humilation in stockades where you rape her infront of a crowd (with some of her children inside) as you make her list off the crimes with which she's atoning for with her body.

>>19667589
This is just that one pajeet movie featuring a tiger.

>>19679550
Fucking based for posting a story in this nightmare of a thread. I think Towa's a little OOC but other than that no complaints. I liked the ending with Enna and I'm looking forward to how Anon deals with the slaves. Personally hoping for fluff because I'm a fluff fag but abuse works too.

>>19682796
You're a full on retard. Why would you reply to the most obvious fucking bait?

>>19688605
Are those children also yours or would they just be Subaru and the others that call Ui mama.

>>19688451
Forcing her to act like a dog and walking her through the park, on a leash, naked.

>>19689310
The latter. Really just defile her in front of everyone.

>>19688451
Locking her in the basement and leaving her in total isolation except for her nightly mealtime when you force her to suck out the protein straight from your dick!

>>19684359
>>19684716

Thanks for the kind words and enjoying the story. As mentioned by another, I'm currently writing a sequel for this and intend to have Matsuri figuratively tighten the noose over you so that you get some mind breaking sex, both figuratively and literally.

>>19688451
Ui getting tired of being teased with rape threats that never get followed up on, so she rapes you as punishment.

>>19689500
Yeah? This one gonna have more nigger rape in it? She gonna force you to get fucked by Jamal while she watches?

>>19689679
Shigure Ui giving (You) a rape correction and corrupting you with such mind breaking sex that you can't control yourself around her in the future; finally giving her the rape she has always wanted.

>>19689897
Just punching Ui out and fisting her after she wakes up. Pulling out her ovaries and taking a bite out of them, like candied apples.

>>19690470
Anon this isn't /meat/

How do you write a story that focuses on angst while trying to make the character not sound like an edgy deadbeat? I'm trying to remake one of my fics because of how disappointed I was with myself for rushing it out and not getting the intended effect that I wanted out of it.

>>19690737
Make the issues relatable and give the protag a pragmatic perspective

>>19689743
If you want that you can always commission me, you know? If something else is to your fancy we can work something out. My email's in the usual place.

>>19690770
Not everyone is so retarded as to waste money on fucking writing. Then again, not everyone is so retarded as to spend hundreds on nigger rape. Takes a special kind of retard to write that, too.

>>19690770
Just ignore the retard. I, for one, am looking forward to your next work.

>tfw you anchored your story last thread and it didn't get archived

>>19691162
which

>>19691162
If it was that Aqua bully rrat one AA said he wasn't really able to compile fics rn

>>19690737
Try and get stuff to contrast the angst, unopposed/constant angst has a tendency to keep lowering the mood and eventually becoming edgy.
Other than that see if reading it aloud can give you another perspective on the angst, I assume you don't have a beta reader to give you a second opinion on stuff so tricks like these are the next best thing since it's like the flipping canvas trick for drawing; it forces your brain to reevaluate what you've written down.

>>19691162
No one's got archived. Dude's probably asleep.

>>19691445
Dreaming an endless dream.

Words are so much better than images, don't you think?

>>19691445
I think this thread's beaten this year's record. Pretty sure the hell thread was faster but I think the only time we've gotten a thread in a day was from that marineschizo v noelschizo spat during the mori yab.

>>19691746
Noel's still a whore, by the way.

>>19691806
I'd be more convinced if you write some hot smut about it.

>>19691806
Nah, all of Gen 3 now are nothing but sweethearts

>>19691806
ogey

>>19692398
It's fact.

>>19692053
Sankisei having an orgy with (You) to make sure you start to forget about her.

>>19691090
You're a disgusting nigger sympathizer.

Ignore the bait and don't use the earlyfag's thread. Goodnight all.

>>19691806
Marine is a whore.

>>19693112
Noel's a whore.

>>19693194
Noel actually streams and has real hobbies unlike Marine

>>19687990
Based, interested to see your take on a modern fantasy world.

>>19676167
>Shirakami "Scatman" Fubuki
https://youtu.be/TYNSB9qYY5A

>>19693604
Well that's fucking nostalgic.

>>19693289
Marine doesn't shake her T&A around for others on NND or suck her brother's cock like Noel.

>>19693289
>Noel actually streams and has real hobbies unlike Marine
Noel is amazing, Marine is shit.

>>19693639
Marine is amazing, Noel is shit.

>>19693639
>>19693648
Jesus christ you two should get a room with how much you suck each others dicks off everytime

>>19693721
Marine a shit and you know it.

>>19693721
Anon you should fucking know what those two are doing now with how close it is at this point right.

>>19693721
Sole people just hate Noel for no reason.

>>19693721
Noel is literal shit you step in while walking through the park.

New thread
>>19693941

>>19693924
nice to see you noelschizo, still seething at Noel for no reason?

Both Marine and Noel are shit and Pekora is the only one that’s carrying the third generation.

someone (not me) should make a new thread.

>>19694226
New thread is already made >>19694042

>>19694172
>Pekora is the only one that’s carrying the third generation.
Nah, Pekora has lost her spark, Flare is where it's at.

y'all niggas really need to give this a listen and think on it
https://youtu.be/d-diB65scQU

Noel's tits and ass are so fucking huge holy shit

>>19694953
All the better to pleasure her brother with.