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>>15540968
A dramatization of Ollie and the finger.

>>15540968
A dramatization of Ollie and the finger.

>>15540901
Here's a short poem about Ollie and the finger, with some creative liberties taken. I'm a bit dry on original ideas so bear with it.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vQkif5-lmJeJtjVrF2lTM_6X0NXFSuP7mDp-H2_nnftqMnnaHEAMDfr5gZ7YNOE5kb2gixtJsASCz3J/pub

>>15545380
I'm halfway through this thing and laughing like a fucking Hyena. Can I just say, before I go back to finish, I thoroughly appreciate the time you took to put in the rhymes. Did you model it against The Raven?

>>15545684
Glad to hear it's getting a laugh out of someone. It's basically an exact copy. I just changed out some words and only rewrote sentences that would've felt forced. Honestly forgot it was supposed to be about a finger until I finished.

>>15545380
>>15545793

And finished. This was incredible. I've made a personal backup of this as I never want to see it lost. It just got better and fucking better, even introducing Connor though he had no part in the original rrat.

>Honestly forgot it was supposed to be about a finger until I finished.
The finger rrat started it off, but by the end it was a whole collection of rumours, including a supposed boyfriend, so frankly it's not losing anything.

Thanks for the read anon. Bravo.

>>15545380
Holy shit this was fantastic. The fact that you used The Raven as a template is hilarious.

>>15545380
This is so stupid in all the good ways. Nice shit.

friend safety bump

Grammar books:

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=61F0DD27576B63D920C39B77985C849F

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=7CFD283C1A58A7362DB9A0B0422844B4

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=0D6830A65F04546BDC2B22529F917A97

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=06B91995E6EFAE373DC6301B82AFEFC5

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=8FF821DDA1590297826250A5FF19118C

https://libgen.rs/book/index.php?md5=4B8676612C78DDB7F81B875C38B0FCEB

>>15545380
LMAO

>>15540901
Being viciously beaten by Sister Marine in the name of the Lord to cleanse the sin from your body. Your crime? Glancing at a television. Everyone knows such things are the work of the devil.

>>15556918
Not a story retard

>>15557964
Damn me
>>15540968
Being viciously beaten by Sister Marine in the name of the Lord to cleanse the sin from your body. Your crime? Glancing at a television. Everyone knows such things are the work of the devil.

Ironically, writing stories actually gets me to watch chuubas less, I guess it's obvious since I don't have infinite time. But also the slight disparity between how they are in the story and how they are irl can be pretty jarring sometimes.

>>15558164
To be honest, I don’t even watch any vtubers outside of my oshi anymore, and she only streams like once or twice a week. She and this thread are the only thing keeping me into vtubers.

>>15558244
Who's your oshi?

>>15559638
Aqua

>>15559913
Good taste. You probably feel the pain of the Holocaust more than most.

>>15540968
Spending New Year's with Reine

Which chuuba is best for dom loss? Thinking of trying my hand at writing smut, my interest is pretty unorthodox so it'll include some heavy shit. Which chuuba is arrogant and fun to see mind broken? And what fetishes? No futa shit please

>>15564305
Susiei is perfect for that

>>15564305
Shion
immobilization

>>15540901
A little bit early, but the year end has somehow given me a lot of writing motivation, so here's the special New Year's chapter for the Menhera Wrangler series.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRnBVdzM6lWAe9BWzHsy5WCm3YqzL59mBWxFtiGyC6YegA6IQq0VC6AhnZMF3Duh31ucjSOzevUbBRD/pub

Tags: Fubuki, SFW

A bittersweet epilogue of sorts, and one that I hope to be the conclusive end for this series. As always, let me know what you think, and I wish you all a happy new year. Keep writing, keep reading anons.

>>15564305
KRONII PLEASE
KRONII PLEASE
KRONII PLEASE
KRONII PLEASE
KRONII PLEASE
KRONII PLEASE

>>15564305
It's like she's ASKING to be broken.

>>15564305
Theres Shion of course but if you ask me the kusogaki is played out. Pekora would be the next closest kusogaki. Maybe Chloe? I know shes pretty new so there might not be enough information out there.

If you're looking for more of an "initially overpowers you" type of setup, Ayame. Choco, and Okayu could work.

>>15565293
This feeling of emptiness is simply sublime.

>>15566546
That panel is me after I read the last chapter of Berserk.

>>15565293

>>15564305
Laplus is made for dom loss with that kusogaki attitude that rivals Shion's

>>15565293
this was like a cold shower except with liquid nitrogen instead of water. i said i didn't think it'd have the same emotional impact due to the feelings from reading MW having faded over time; i was dead wrong and, for the first time in the series, i was actually fighting back tears.

kinda reminds me of the first time i read steins;gate, this fucking abyss of emptiness inside. was a fantastic read, anon, thank you.

also check your email

>>15568811
Please tell me you sent a fat dick pic.

>>15565293
I stare into the abyss as it stares right back at me. Thank you Anon, this is probably one of my favorite if not the best fanfiction I've had the pleasure of reading.

>>15545380
Sent my sides into orbit, kek.

>>15565293
This feels cold as fuck. Like a punch straight to the heart.
Also love the fucking detail that Fubuki has a very fucking rose tinted view on Anon.
For a conclusive end, this was really fucking good; another punch added to the great ending that MW landed. Honestly wish the in between arcs had landed as good as this. It kind of feels weird that something that had landed an ending this hard had some honestly kind of mediocre chapters in retrospect.

>>15569352
the fattest

>>15540901

When Amelia yanked the clothespin off, pain jolted up her abdomen like a rocket. Her entire body folded in two as her pelvis spasmed backwards in the opposite direction of the pain. Her legs trembled violently then collapsed underneath her. Something felt like it must have been snipped or torn off, surely there was blood all over. But there wasn't any damage to her clit. It was just red as a fireplace poker, quivering obscenely, swollen, burning and protruding from her vulva like a blister.

Ame's post-stream ritual had been escalating for months. There's only so much stress a human can take before something goes haywire. It's standard for any livestreamer to masturbate right after the end of a stream to release all the pent up tension from their performance. For Ame, what started as her usual masturbation escalated to a vibrator, then a dildo, then two dildos at once, one in her mouth and one in her pussy as she self-inserted as the woman having a threesome on her phone's screen. Sometimes Ame would be unable to orgasm for several hours straight, simply passing out from fatigue drenched in gritty, grimy sweat.

She'd wake up the next morning with a dull ache below her stomach, a numb spot on her clit, and shooting pain in her legs. This just made it harder to deal with her stream the next day, leading to a cycle of deleterious sexual frustration. Human bodies simply aren't equipped to livestream for hours on a regular basis. Nor are human bodies equipped to go years without a vigorous fucking. Women's bodies, as much as men's, need to fuck, they absolutely require it, and their bodies will tell them something's wrong when they do not get it.

The only way Ame's been able to orgasm lately is by violently rubbing her pussy as fast as she's physically able. The friction, pain and warmth from this method of masturbation is the only thing that's able to clear her head of the recent stress, insecurities and frustrations. Afterwards, her flesh is raw and red, and weeping an oily fluid, and extraordinarily painful, like someone's hooked up a car battery to her labia. But it's preferable to waking up in the bathtub with a dry, painful dildo still stuck in your pussy after an unsuccessful eight hours of masturbation the night before.

Even this hasn't been enough lately. Ame's been looking for something, anything, to push her over the edge again. She's run out of hairs on her groin to pluck while masturbating, and her entire pubic region is bumpy and swollen from the constant abuse. There's simply nothing more to do there. Although she normally finds the clit too painful to punish, she's desperate for something that will give her the release she needs for a sleep that isn't fitful and unsatisfying.

Ame enters her bathroom and lays down on the tile floor. Experimenting, she first tries pinching her unhooded clit between the pads of her fingers. She feels a severe pain all the way from her clit to deep inside her abdomen, and her pussy starts flushing with fluid. She tries pinching it directly with her fingernails, and the pain is so intense her pelvis and anus spasm uncontrollably for a moment. It's so intense that her hand refuses to maintain the pressure for more than a mere moment.

As if in a dream, eyes burning, trailing a thin stream behind her as she walks, Ame retrieves a clothespin from the drawer in her closet. She lies back down on the floor of her bathroom, and the cool tiles soother her back as her front rages hot with arousal.

With a quivering hand, Ame at first fails to pinch her clit with the clothespin, grabbing her labia instead. When she's stopped testing the waters and finally grabs her clit between the clothespin's wooden teeth, the pain is so intense she blacks out. Hitting her head on the tile floor, she jolts back to consciousness to see her legs twitching like the severed limbs of a frog, involuntarily fighting to escape the pain.

Ame begins to dissociate and panic. Unaware of how brutal a punishment a woman's clit can actually take before lasting damage is inflicted, her mind floods with visions of the hospital or even the surgery room. With a spasming arm she tries to remove the clothespin but merely brushing it with her hand sends her into another wave of torment that makes her entire body flop like a fish.

Clenching her teeth, Ame finally manages to grab the clothespin. Disengaging it from her clit sets her brain on fire, clouding her vision with blotches of white and red. Ame's pussy is drenched, dripping fluid, and her vaginal tract contracts in a deep-body orgasm. Ame grips the bathroom rug in her teeth, clenching so that her ecstatic orgasm won't be heard from the neighboring apartment. Her mind swims as she lies panting, cheek pressed against the cold porcelain of the tub, legs and pussy numb, a salty mixture of sweat and tears leaking into the corner of her mouth and dribbling down the soft inside of her cheek towards her throat.

bump

>>15572779
i'll bump these nuts against your chin, fag

Nightshift again...

>>15565293
I didn't think another MW installment could hurt me, but lo and behold - you proved me wrong.
It hurt me. It hurt me in such a deep, good way. It's scary, really. You're WAY too good at this. I'm impressed, Anon. This feeling of emptiness is something I haven't felt in a very, very long time. Kudos for that!
Anyways, great chapter as always. I definitely enjoyed it and the suffering it brought me. It's a nice side-story and it really adds on to the Epilogue you wrote. I read the Epilogue right after this chapter and it felt even more touching than it did the first time I read it. Rather than breaking it apart, you somehow made it even better. Great job!
Happy New Year, Anon! Thank you for writing such fantastic works!

>>15571206
This is a really tightly written scene, a bit too short to really get anywhere but credit where it's due the description and feeling present here is good.

>>15576433
Just let it die.

>>15576523
MWAnon always gets this sort of response doesn't he? It's enough to make a man jealous, but that just means they're good at their job if they can get so many people deep in the feelings

>>15579350
Maybe so. From the other end of the spectrum, perhaps he'll end up comparing all of his future works to the MW series, and consider them coming up short. Lightning almost never strikes twice in the same spot, after all.

I prefer just to celebrate its existence, and it is damn good.

>>15579634
I bet you think you sound so wise and cool
You're just another jealous cunt trying to hide it
Makes me sick

Quick bunp before sleep.

Zoom

>>15564305
The kusogakis would be all very nice to see mind broken and a mess of sexual fluids and slurred words. The naturally assertive ones like Botan or Choco starting out dominant and pushing you around but quickly [Losing to the Cock] and becoming putty in your hands have their charms.

Someone mentioned Chloe and I feel like she gives off similar energy to Matsuri in this regard where

>Big pervert behind closed doors
>Thinks she's great at sex and pleasuring (you)
>Once she starts getting groped and touched she starts having second thoughts
>Absolutely broken from being manhandled

As far as fetishes go, there's nothing better to make a girl submit than pet play in my opinion so I vote for that.

Imagine putting a collar around a defiant but highly aroused Botan's neck! Training her to give paw and roll on her back while stark naked! Make her squirt from petting her head, ears and chin alone!

>>15586208
>Imagine putting a collar around a defiant but highly aroused Botan's neck!
Shout out to Botan's artist drawing a picture of her with a muzzle on

>>15566546
>>15566848
>>15569684
Thank you for reading and enjoying this chapter, and I am glad it still manages to hold up to the standard of this series you guys have come to expect.

>>15568811
Done. I can't believe you sent me a pic of your butthole. Thanks for giving it a read as well.

>>15570248
Sometimes I wonder how certain parts hit so well and others not so much. All I can say is that writing is muzukashi.

>>15576523
Thanks for reading and noticing how it relates back to the Epilogue chapter. If you noticed, I did make references to Foxfriend Wedding as well, but that's more tongue in cheek than anything.

Have a great new year, everyone!

>>15540968
Koyori proving to you that she's the undisputed throat goat of HoloX

>>15540968
A spin off to MW series but it's what if Dr strange episode

>hey, you know all that light-hearted fluff you were looking forward to writing?
>well throw that shit in the trash, my guy. you got the big sad now
fuck you, brain

>>15584938
NEED Pekoyakodon

>>15592681
>half the story is just Pekomama making her daughter cringe herself to death for shits and giggles
>and the sex is good too you guess

>>15594117
>She keeps throwing out a "-peko" right when Pekora starts to relax and get into it

>>15596297
God that sounds great

In theory, should a NTR fic be made from the POV of the cucked or the cucker for maximum impact? With the idea of it being more smut than emotional baggage

>>15599761
Depends on the feeling you want to evoke. Both can be used for smut, but obviously there's different sides of the power dynamic to explore. Personally if I had to choose I'd go for mysterious door number 3: the person getting railed.

>>15599761
it depends on if you're writing it for an audience who would prefer the pov of the cucked, or the pov of the cucker.

>>15599761
If the aim is pure smut then cucker as they have less investment in the "relationship". Although if you really wanted it to be hot smut you'd go with >>15600139

>>15599761
Honestly (You) being the unabashed NTR villain is a cool idea.

I had an idea for a Fauna NTR fic where the bait-and-switch was that you were the bull but I've never gotten around to doing anything with it

>>15600139
>>15600226
>>15600231
>>15600317
I kind of assumed "cucker" would be clear as "the one who does the cucking" aka the one fucking someone else while in a relationship. I generally view the one who fucks as the homebreaker, and not necessarily part of the act, or as the cucker, so to speak.

I'll most likely do the one getting railed then. Just need to make sure I'm picking the right chuuba for this one.

>>15601148
Use Suisei cucking you

>>15540968
Raping all the holos who don't like to be sexualized. Cumming inside a screaming Suisei, fucking a restrained Anya's tits, etc.

>>15604244
Don't think there are many of those. Maybe Flare, Sora and Azki at most and even then it's a bit far fetched.

>>15604371
Fubuki doesn't like it either, even muting R18 artists if they appear on her tag. Says she's totally okay with people... you know... but doesn't want to hear about it.

Wow. I'm spending new year's alone writing a NTR fic. Never even expected such a scenario to happen. Hopefully I can ruin some people's entrance to the new year at least.

>>15599761
Depends on the 'spice' you want to evoke.
Going purely by genre it should be the cuck PoV as otherwise the cuck is 'baggage' since you'd have a spiced up sex scene with an uninvolved crying dude, but that fully depends on how you handle the actual fucking.
Honestly I think the unconsidered option here is the target's PoV but that one absolutely needs third person writing to be hot otherwise the emotional baggage aspect comes up... Unless it's like a mind break/ corruption thing.

>>15610712
I wouldn't worry so much about "spending New Year's alone". That's just a normie concern, and normies are autists who freak out if they're asked to stay inside for a couple months due to a fucking epidemic.
Do what you enjoy doing, because life really ain't long enough to do otherwise.

>>15610712
Is it actual NTR?

>>15610712
you may be a bit late on that front, chief

>>15610530
Thank you for this image, you've lit a fire under my ass to continue writing after family happenings derailed my plans.

>>15611107
yes

>>15613000
Have to ask. What PoV are you going with?

>>15611107
Who's the chuuba gonna be?

>>15613158
The one getting fucked.

>>15613304
You'll see soon enough.

>>15614009
you seem to be going for the shock angle here but so long as 'she' ain't actually a 'he', imma be jerking off to it anonchama

>>15614962
Not really a shock angle, it's first and foremost smut, but with the NTR part of it included. Should probably stop answering and hyping it up just in case though.

>>15540968
Ina binging on KFP employess since Kiara keeps offering.

>>15617104
Everytime i see this image, i'm tempted to draw Ina, makes me wonder how many anons know the truth behind it.

>>15617561
Is it a futa Ina?

>>15623091
Probably vore or something nastier. If it was futa I'd know. I think...

>>15623091
It's actually a chimera Gura, with the head of Cowiope straddled on her back and a tail that ends in the face of Ina.

>>15624604
I don't believe you.

>>15625156
If you weren't going to believe me, why did you ask?

>>15624493
yup, vore. artist is actually friend of mine we are talking in vc celebrating the new years

>>15564388
>>15565354
>>15565422
>>15565704
>>15568619
>>15586208
>>15565082
I'm go with Kronii for the smut, she's the one I've watched the most out of the list, sorry to all the other requests. I'm an EoP and I don't really watch some of the chuubas. I don't care for Shino, Choco, Laplus and Chloe. And some of them already have a bunch of works. If the story ends up being good, then I'll write other chuubas

>>15626494
Minimal of 2k words, challenge yourself. Don't be like the kronii general guys. Lazy fucks.

>>15626494
>Council
Anon...

>>15626494
Kronii is a pretty good choice for domination play too, so I'm totally OK with that choice. I get people enjoy the fantasy of her being dominant, that's why it'd be so great to break her.

Wtf I just wrote 3.1k words without even blinking an eye. Guess this NTR fic is bigger than I expected. Probably will be done by the 4 or 5k. Definitely will release it tonight.

Give me a holo which you think would do some depraved shit in any sense. I got an idea for something.

>>15629461
Haachama, easily

>>15629461
Matsuri or Chloe

>>15629461
>depraved shit in any sense
Marine or Choco. Matsuri might. Aki, Mel and Noel are yab but I don't think depraved. Chammers is loopy.

>>15630022
Marine is an innocent girl with fetishes that are way over her head. She wouldn't do anything depraved. Matsuri though, fucking dirty whore.

>>15630092
Marine absolutely would try out depraved shit purely out of interest, as long as it was roleplaying. She is 'pure of heart', though - they're not mutually exclusive.
Matsuri... I dunno. I get the feeling she'd be really willing to try out some weird shit, but I also get the feeling that she's got boundaries.
I just... whereas the faintest inkling of hope might exist in Marine's case, I just...


I don't think Matsuri would agree to be a seedbed.

It's a travesty.

>>15631064
Matsuri has drank her own infected piss and said she wanted to do it again with someone else, I think she's pretty far gone.

>>15632127
Yeah, I know, I should have worded it differently, but I'm going purely through gut instinct here over what I've seen (clipfag tho) the last couple years.
I dunno. She's into some weird kinky shit already - have seen that collab with Chaika - but I've always gotten the feeling from her that she's not as depraved as she lets on.

To reiterate, purely gut instinct. Struggling to find the words to explain this instinct, but they just won't come.

>>15629946
>>15629950
>>15630022
>>15630092
>>15631064
Ok I wanted to know because I really wanted the right girl for this.

(You) are a burglar and you broke into (Holo girl's) house. Things go wrong and you end up getting stabbed by a kitchen knife. The girl in hand decides to take judgement in their own hands and punishes you with reverse ryona.
I know not many people are gonna be into in but it struck me recently and I wanted to write about it.

>>15632665
If that's the case then Rushia, she'd stab you with a knife and rape you while gaslighting you to be her lover.

>>15632665
That sounds like Suisei, and I'm not even thinking of her Suicopath persona here.
Could well be Korone too; whilst there are a handful of girls whom I think would fight back fiercely, I don't think there's many the post-stabbing reverse ryona would apply to.

Could go for the easy road and choose Rushia, because that's more-or-less the exact character she's set herself up as.

Happy new year east coast friends.

GOD I want to drink Bae's breast milk so damn bad. Those deceptively full breasts of hers make me go wild. Imagine her [moans in australian] while she completely melts under your touch. The slight hint of taste of coffee leftover and the caffeine rush you get afterward with which to fuck her. Breedable rrat.

>>15632653
You probably get that impression about Matsuri off all the times she teases people, but absolutely falls apart when she gets teased back thus why everyone calls her a glass cannon.

I think Matsuri would be down for a lot of really depraved things as long as it's in private, with someone she trusts as opposed to, say, the kind of idea >>15632665 is explaining. That's definitely not her at all.

>>15540901
A nice story about going out on a date with Pekora, to start the new year with some wholesome stuff. Things naturally escalated from there... and got a bit steamy. Tight bunny cunny is served. Hope you enjoy it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTjqWQgadVQrcatQhJzY1OGG1_Z-vjjRbVNviJod6wQJ-H4T5gGswHThCCPr8IfSmJk_YiczFzhmWoy/pub

Tags: NSFW, Pekora

>>15635873
DON'T LOOK IT'S NTR

>>15635873
That's pretty hot.

>>15635873
Missed chance to label them Mikopi. Other than that, solid fucking A.

>>15635873
Tag your ntr shit properly faggot

>>15635873
You motherfucker.

>>15635873
Your mother will die in her sleep tonight

Happy new year fellas. To another year of chuubas in increasingly nonsensical, tear-and-cum jerking situations.

>>15635873
Talk about trite. This was like watching a shitty horror film and correctly predicting every jump scare before they happen.

>>15635873
Can you do Watame next?

>>15643197

>>15643197
With boobas like these and a personality as sweet as sugar, you would think she's the perfect NTR bait

>>15645235
Cease your faggotry

>>15645235
Yeah, IMHO she's the ideal candidate for an NTR story.

>>15645235
>>15647681
Go and eat your fucking slop pigs, she's already got one.

>>15643197
Didn't we literally get a fucking Watame NTR story a while back.
Admitedly it was bad-mediocre, but still.

>>15648078
>>15648193

And? More is always good.

>>15648398
Our NTR writers have no goddamn idea how this genre works and just goes off of the story structure of erodoujins.
They have no clue how to actually apply the spice save superficially in the sense that they're copying and hoping it works..

>>15649181
You are right. However, I do not mind. I'm not sure anyone who has written an NTR story thus far is actually into NTR, and are making baby steps into an unfamiliar zone purely for fun or self-challenge. Mistakes are natural, and they're still good stories nonetheless.

happy new year you fucks

>>15651222
NYD is actually already almost over.

>>15652754
If that Anon's west coast, it just became 2022 less than half an hour ago.

>>15652882
West coast? Of Antarctica?

>>15653009
does antarctica even have a west coast?

>>15653475
No, it's completely lacking in a cardinal direction. If you ever find yourself in Antarctica for whatever reason, make sure you never look west - or even spin 360 degrees, for that matter, as your vision will distort and reality will cave in.

>>15653546
i mean, isn't it all north coast?

>>15540968
Laplus purposefully riling you up in the hopes of making you snap and rape her.

>>15655316
this but you never do becuase hentai isn't real.

>>15540968
You can't help but get a feeling something is off when talking to Kronni. Like something keeps jumping around at little bit while you're walking with her.
Until she suddenly has a tit hanging out of her outfit. Turns out she's got so much bounce she has to stop time to stuff it back into her top. But this time she fucked up.

Then you fuck them tits.

>3k words into the Kronii dom fic and not even the tittes are out
Damn, I wasn't gonna jump straight to seggs but this buildup is a bit long even by my standards. I guess I'll make the actual smut long as well to balance the pacing.

>>15540968
Futa Towa and Laplus (or Futa Laplus and Towa that fine too)

Laplus get the chance to visit her oshi and want to spent time with Towa and with some magic stuff happend Towa have banana

>>15658504
It sounds like your chief interest point in this prompt is the dong.
Have you considered checking out the gay section of Pornhub? There's lots of dicks there, more than you could ever imagine yourself sucking.

>>15658560
I want a interaction of kouhai that is a big fan of her senpai
I just think it will be funny seeing both of them trying to get rid of the problem but non Futa Towa Laplus is great too

>>15635873
Honestly you should have just stuck to one PoV.
Either (You) watching her from the closet to keep the 2nd person consistent or go with an in her head 1st person/3rd person for pekora. The PoV switch really doesn't work out for making it 'satisfying'.

>>15656095
Damn that could be a good comedy
Laplus repeatedly trying to get you to rail her by pissing you off like in her hentai doujins and being flabbergasted over and over by the fact that it doesn't work because the real world isn't like that

>>15660345
it should end with you filing a restraining order.

>>15660585
this, but instead of filing a restraining order, it's filing your dick in her mouth

>>15660926
a visionary has entered our midst gentlemen, best heed his wise words

>>15660345
This but it ends with her going full fucking anime and breaking her locks out of sheer frustration of you not playing her game.

>>15635936
You're quick. Did you just guess or did you actually skim through 10 seconds after posting it?

>>15636166
>>15637887
Roger roger

>>15640917
>>15641652
>>15641952
Don't care, see pic related.

>>15642652
NTR is trite.

>>15643197
When I do another NTR fic, I won't announce it. Watame has been on my list, just not now.

>>15660313
If you were to be present, that'd stop being NTR and would just be cuckery. Don't really like that stuff desu. If I went first person it would literally just read like PF, talking about stuffing bunny cunny and all.

I wrote it smut as the priority. Quick, cheap, not much shock value to not bore but just enough to annoy. Though I'm not seeing any nuts, I suppose it just comes with the genre. Kinda wanted to have her getting fucked raw too but in spirit of keeping it short, I didn't. Maybe next time.

>>15661705
>wrote it smut as the priority
>hamstrings the smut at every opportunity

>>15661705
Anon.
I think you might not really get the whole gist of NTR.
The whole point that separates it from regular cuckoldry is the that feeling of 'losing her'. I realize this might be biased from my own tastes but that's generally the consistent aspect I see in the works I see tagged as such on the erodoujin sites I see it used as a tag on.
The artist I'll use as an example here would be Terasu MC where his short sets pretty much embody that NTR hit, setting up the concept and landing the concept fully all within like 3 pages.
Your use of PoV here kind of hamstrings itself since you're aping the form but not really using the spice. Also I have to say it. The use of hearts is a bit gauche. It's kinda lazily implies it without really describing it.

>>15540968
Being in a relationship with futa Kronii and being depressed she isn’t the dom sadist you wanted, and seeking out Fauna for advice - only to lose to the kirin’s superior horsecock and tell Kronii she can’t satisfy you anymore as your mind slips away whilst Fauna fucks you
Planning on writing this myself eventually. Alternate version:
Giving Kronii a passionate deep kiss after blowing her Kirin coworker’s fat cock behind her back!
Cuddling with Kronii after Fauna fucks you in the ass!
Holding hands with Kronii after jerking Fauna’s horsecock under the desk!
Talking to Kronii over the phone whilst listening to the kirin’s whispers in your ear and bouncing on her dick!
Going on a date with Kronii and having sex with Fauna afterwards!
Kronii!
Fauna!

>>15662868
wait a minute… there’s only one anon on this entire board who’d hornypost like this

>>15662868
Why not just go Threesome route with them. Both Kronii and (YOU) are made to be Fauna's fucktoys?

>>15662868
Hang on, are you the dom futa anon who has Fauna as his oshi?

this was asked last thread, but I would like to know further, what exactly do you look for in smut/sex scenes? Is it long drawn out scenes of foreplay, with detailed depictions of the actions? The type of smut going on(be it vanilla/dom/rape/hardcore/etc)? Or the dialogue and vocalization of the involved parties that really get you up and going?

>>15666190
My oshi is technically Kronii as I watch her more and am mostly active in her split. /uuu/ is comfy sometimes but it’s too anti-horny for me. I like IRyS as well.
I like the idea of losing to the clock, but also of being bred and fucked by futa Fauna, softly, harshly etc. Any dom futa works for me.
>>15664374
Tbh that could work but I was going more for a Fauna steals (you) angle maybe with an implication Kronii could join. Kronii recieving weird texts from you and Fauna, like one from Fauna with her dick planted on your face saying “Sorry Kronii I had to borrow your boyfriend for a bit, I think he likes me haha”
>>15664139
fug :-DD

>>15666357
In order of importance I guess it'd be actions, then descriptions, then dialogue. If I'm not interested in what's happening itself, I won't particularly care whether it's well written or not.

>>15666357
Assplay
If the story involves pounding a chuuba's asshole, then odds are I'll read it

>>15666357
This might be different for everyone based on their tastes and fetishes but I look at it less as a 1-2-3 list of priorities and more like a pie chart, where things like attention to detail, setting/fetish covered and dirty talk would occupy the same space, but I'd be willing to overlook deficiencies in one area if I get lots of something else.

I'll pick on the recent Watame lactation story here since it was the first real prompt I posted that got filled - but in terms of subject matter it was very much in line with my fetishes, the setting and progression was perfect for the length of the story and the attention to detail was in that goldlocks zone between making you fill in too many blanks and leaving something to be desired, and getting caught in minutiae and finally Watame's dialogue was in line with what I would expect out of her in such a situation as well. If I use the pie chart analogy again, it was extremely balanced.

I did mention it was sadly too short (by design) to be used as spank material for an entire session, but length by itself can't save a story that's wonky, lacking in the three categories you mentioned. I remember there was one fanfiction series I read for some time that was incredibly long, but the writing was repetitive and uninspired; it did have a bunch of my fetishes though so it was fappable, but not a great read.

I guess to summarize is: all of them. A good smut story can't exist without balance. Depending on your subject matter (not everyone's into Insect oviposition or NTR) a great story will lose readers who aren't into that - but a mediocre story will make lots of people happy who are. But a normal smutfic needs a good balance of all three.

>>15666357
There has not been a smut story with more than 6 positive (You)'s in the past 4 months that wasn't about Fubuki. So start with that. You'll figure out the rest eventually.

>>15671203
Why would you lie about something so easily disproven?

>>15671466
If you looked through the archives you'd realize there's a whole lot less of those than you think.

>>15671799
Well, any fic getting more than 6 (You)'s in general is kinda rare, but I don't even need to check the archive to remember my Ayame smut fic got 11

>>15672386
Nice

>>15672559
Thank you.

I ego search like a fiend in case people are talking about my fics outside these threads, So I usually remember the reception to my stuff

>>15540968
Fubuki hatefucking you after she finds out you got LASIK!

Any good IRyS fanfic? asking for a friend

>>15675024
Here? No, but I imagine clockgen has a few

>>15675513
I went there and there seems to be missing a bunch of fics that were not archived here either

>>15675859
> I went there and there seems to be missing a bunch of fics that were not archived here either
Find the links for them, clockgen manages their own archive but AA said if he missed something posted here to just post it again and say as such

>>15675024
The one irys fic we have archived was decently cute fluff from what I remember.
Other than that you might want to see if clockgen has something.
If you're a shipper I think AO3 may have some stuff as well.

>>15661705
>You're quick. Did you just guess or did you actually skim through 10 seconds after posting it?
Someone discussing an NTR fic all thread, discusses how fast it's being made, and miraculously a new fic is posted which describes itself as 'wholesome' when one of the first few things you can see is the phrase 'I have a boyfriend'? Y'aint slick, dick(sucker)

For the archive should we change it to a google doc that only AA has access to but make it so that suggestions from anyone can be made? Like /infinity/ does. I feel like that would kill two birds with one stone because of the current Rentry problems we’re having.

>>15679372
sounds like a colossal pain in the ass conversion job due to how URL embedding and the like that rentry has works differently and can't be batch-done

>>15679732
I mean, I'd be happy to do it. It'd obviously take a while but I've been awake for 30 hours and have only written about 500 words towards my current story, so a change of pace might be nice.

>>15680123
How about you go and make a list of every single tag we have in the archive, and how many of each so we can start doing some clean up? There's some tools out there that can probably help you with the sorting. Personally I think this would be better use of your time.

>>15680316
By tools do you mean ctrl + F? Because that's all I know...

>>15680123
I dunno, I really don't think it's that big of a deal to click 'Embed' on the pastebin up top and copy/paste a URL.

>>15680123
Give me some time, I might have a solution and if it works I'll share it with AA, same as I did with the Prompt archive/Form.

Happy late new year friends

>>15680488
>same as I did with the Prompt archive/Form
elaborate

>>15680757
A few months back I shared the steps on how to create a public form to submit into a Google Sheets document and then publish the results publicly, which is the pair of documents linked in the same post as the prompt anchor.

Back then I had looked at doing a similar thing for the archive, but Rentry seemed to work and did work fine, so didn't feel the need to spend much time trying to fix what's not broken. Well, it's broken now, so I might have some ideas.

>>15681028
Is it really broken though? It's just an extra step to get to the same result, which isn't even that different from what the original archive used to be back on PB

>>15681105
Well, it's not broken in the same way I could walk 4000 miles to California, but if it's a lot more convenient to fly there instead.

>>15680709
oh my fucking god i want to lick her out

>>15681332

>>15680488
Good luck with whatever improvement it is, just don't fuck anything up

Is there a way to make the owner of a google doc anonymous without publishing it?

>>15680709
>Fubuki showing off the lewd underwear she said she didn't like when you got them for her

>>15682245
Use a burner account.

>>15682265
Yeeeaaaah I'm too retarded to figure out how those work. Oh well.

>>15682882
There's nothing to figure out. Literally just make a new google account and use that one to write your fics. Bam, you have a burner account.

p10 after 40 mins. Board's zoomin'.

>>15680709
Still saving my nut for a certain incest fic!

>30 minutes
What the fuck is going on out there?

>>15685779
RW3. Rrat War 3. Take cover.

>>15686051
>Take Cover
Already have. You should too

Live, dammit!

>>15686108
>Take Yagoo's hand and become the next STAR
>Every ten threads see someone requesting a story about you getting raped

>>15682245
Why would you need to that? Honest question.

What's going on out there? Board is super fast atm

>>15687543
Unironically want to see a story like this. You're hololive's newest member but your design is so SEX that your fans have more interest in fucking you than actually watching you. You have a mental breakdown but a chuuba who's been in the same boat as you (Shion, Gura etc) comforts you

>>15687595
Anon do you not realize the date?
Pretty much everyone's free to shitpost right now so shit'll be zooming till the end of the weekend.

I can't think straight with all this fucking noise peko. The itching doesn't stop, it just doesn't stop.

>>15687771
>Then they force themselves on you

>>15687543
Now that you mention it though...

>>15540968
Raping Miyabi!

>>15688435
I'd do anything to see this dumb fucking twink getting gangbanged.

>>15688435
After seeing Hanasaki forest, I feel he'd be the the one to turn the tables.

>>15688531
I'd rather just do it myself then gaslight him into thinking he deserved it and that we should be a couple so he could save face.

>>15680488
>>15680123

https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbyWbguJ5hvDp3RwxlYJX66XcdJkdVhqBzjOLw6sTKyEnHve7Zxf5xoP36SlCQMt-7ou/exec

Check it out. The HTML is a bit wonky because I half-assed copied it from the Rentry page but that's the simplest thing to resolve and I didn't want to spend too much time in case it's a wash. This basically pulls data from three columns in a Google Sheets document (Title, Link, Tags) and automatically renders a table that updates on refresh. What took the longest was messing around with the DataTables settings which is something I had never used before.

There's a ton of cool stuff you could do but I think the immediate improvement is the instant search so you can look up a tag very quickly.

>>15690800
Well this seems like some fucking magic.

>>15690800
Holy shit you're a genius

>>15690800
DON'T DOWNLOAD IT IT'S A VIRUS!

>>15690800
Well isn't this fucking impressive. If I were to update the archive would this still work?

>>15691340
Guess we'll never know...

>>15693031
Just put a test in at the bottom. Will check the script here in a few minutes to see what happens.

>>15691340
I think you need access to the new document if you want to add something to this given that I'm pretty sure it's not actually grabbing it from the rentry page.

>>15691340
I spent the last hour or so playing with various ways of embedding the main page at Rentry as a way of letting Google do the heavy lifting while still leveraging the ease of use of editing pages with Rentry, but it didn't quite work without using iFrame, so it is a bit wonky, you can see here:

https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbzdYe7aI-dlY6dSrLWkzoUkl-XMmRwiGY9HhvW9dddfec8Q6FhS17iEtZUjKy9QnrTL/exec

So basically you would remove anything past "Series Subdirectory" here, and let the script build the table from the spreadsheet.

And then from here on out you'd only have to copy/paste the title, link and tags into a new row in the spreadsheet and the page will essentially update the table automatically.

The benefit of doing a split way like this is you can still manually add content if you'd like on Rentry. I don't know how familiar you are with HTML (though there are a few good, free open source WYSIWYG editors to install) but the way this is built in Google, every change needs to be redeployed. It's three clicks so not a big deal but a bit annoying when you're trying tons of changes to see what they look like.

>>15693873
Admittedly I have no idea about any of that kind of stuff, but even I can understand the basic premise of the cell system. I'm embarrassed to say this took me more then a few reads to really grasp the concept, but it sounds cool/easy enough provided the cells don't erupt/there's a wrapping problem, especially if I can still manually add things via Rentry since I'd still need to update the recently added section either way. I'll look more into it/read up on the stuff associated

>>15694518
I'm about to pass out, but I'll email you the step-by-step and code examples in the morning and share the repository with the changes I had to make. There's no way of breaking the page like what happened when that entire story was posted using the prompt form unless you paste something else accidentally, the page will wrap the text to stay in the confines of its cell. Honestly, it should be a set-it-and-forget-it thing if we use the iFrame.

I haven't tested this yet though, but if you don't want to edit the "recently added" section, I imagine I can create another table altogether and either:

1) Include only the latest X-number of stories (so not exactly 100% the stories from the latest thread)

2) Add a column to the spreadsheet named "Latest" or something similar that can be either True or False; if True, it will show up in the separate table. This will take some finesse to get working but I think it's doable.

Though both options would require abandoning the Rentry main page entirely, and using it only to manage the series subdirectory.

>>15695090
>Though both options would require abandoning the Rentry main page entirely, and using it only to manage the series subdirectory.
Not sure how I feel about that personally, but that's ultimately just sentimentality I suppose.

>>15683172
Ah, I thought you were talking about those websites you go onto to get a fake email that only lasts 10 minutes or a google alias.

>>15687546
I was thinking of posting the archive that I had put into a google doc where anyone could add suggestions, and obviously I can’t publish it if I want that feature to be there

>>15690800
Oh wow, scrap my idea, this is good.

>>15674473
Does she at least claw at your eyes before strangling you?

>>15690800

what's the white whale story
something you're waiting for for along time

>>15699167
The white whale of the thread will forever be an accurate to character Anya story. If anyone says anything else they're either lying or stupid.

>>15699167
another fubuki story

>>15699167
Risu nut jars.

>>15699359
I'm still working on it. It's pretty slow work, being my first attempt at smut, but I'll get there eventually.
It'll be interesting to see how people criticise my characterisation of her though. I'm trying to have her treat (You) how she does her senpais, rather than how she treats her viewers, since I imagine that's closer to how she would treat a significant other.
Worst case, it's a garbage story that no-one ever reads.

>>15699167
I'll answer the other curse of /wg/.
An actual realistic rape story.

>>15701209
What about that one greentext about Suzy shounen rape and Sora's retirement?

>>15699167
Series updates...

>>15702137
one day...

What are some synonyms for words like breast, vagina, anal, butt, penis and all that sex phrases? I know I can Google it but I'm looking for words in the context of smut
Also, is there a technical term for chaining someone up by their arms through two chains to the ceiling?

>>15702285
Tits, boobs, chest
Anal, assfucking, surfing the Hershey highway
Ass, rear, rump, behind
Cock, dick, member, boner of my sword

>>15702285
the real art is knowing which of the synonyms to use. While too much repetitive usage of the same word can get boring, you need to get a feel of which word fits best. Compare between "she sucked my cock", and "she lovingly fellated my erect member".

Also I don't know if there is a technical term for what you're looking for.

>>15702285
>Also, is there a technical term for chaining someone up by their arms through two chains to the ceiling?
uhhh, torture?
manacles are a torture device

>>15699167
Being Reine's incredibly oblivious servant who she constantly flirts with.
Either that or another Fubuki story written by MatthewAnon.

>>15699167
AA's Matsuri child abuse outline. That thing was fucking amazing.

I wish I saved it.

>>15702137
Any in particular or just wild wishing

>>15701806
The original curse/prompt was kind of based on the idea of (You) raping a chuuba. Since the original wish came out of one Anon getting disappointed that a haachama anal rape.
Also that one doesn't really follow the unsaid, realistic characterization expectation. Suisei isn't really herself there

>>15702535
Thanks, I'll remember those
>>15702658
I definitely agree, the word use depends on the context of the scene and the mood it tries to convey
>>15704374
The word I'm looking for is spread-eagle, in a BDSM sense.

>>15706338
That Haachama anal rape fic was great though... Gods, if Chammers body wasn't meant to be used as a breeding sow...

>>15540968
Fleeing from Matsuri, who is currently wearing another chuuba's face to try and win your favor. Could be literal or a kigurumi

>>15704980
I got you, anon.

>The story begins with a journal entry - there are several throughout the story, indicating the passage of time. Anon, a Xnd grader, aged X, is to write a journal over the summer vacation.
>Anon excitedly writes that he’s very glad that summer is here, as it means he gets to spend much more time with ‘big sis’ Matsuri, his highschool-aged caretaker who often babysits him due to his parents working long, long hours. He more or less lives with her, at that point.
>He describes in awkward, innocent detail about how happy she makes him. He even sheepishly admits that one day he'd like to marry her. He told her as such and she said okay.
>The entries go on to describe Anon's days with Matsuri. Playing, sleeping together, bathing together. He even got to kiss her. It was an 'adults kiss', she said.
>The journal entries abruptly stop a few days after that, after Matsuri had gotten more and more handsy, as indicated by his entries. They pick up three weeks past, the only hint being one phrase.
>"Matsuri did a bad thing"
>Cut to the day of said bad thing. Matsuri asks Anon if he wants to play a game called 'rope escape'. Anon is of course interested in a game, especially if it's with his lovely big sis!
>Anon is taken to his bedroom, where Matsuri hurriedly ties him down to the mattress by his wrists and ankles. Anon gets to work trying to escape them, but finds the ropes far too tight. He insists Matsuri is cheating...and is stumped when he sees her beginning to disrobe.
>As he questions what she's doing and why she's getting naked, Matsuri roughly lunges at the boy, kissing him deeply. Violent, violent /ss/ occurs. For three hours, Anon is subject to the whims of Matsuri - every single dark desire she's ever harbored is unloaded upon the boy, using him as a dummy with which to pleasure herself. His cries of confusion and anguish eventually go silent. She continues to abuse him long past this. It isn't until she's caught in the act by Anon's mother that she finally ceases.
>Matsuri is sentenced to fourteen years in prison for her crimes. Anon, mercifully, is given access to a therapist to try and work through his feelings, and is given back his journal. It was confiscated and copied for use in court against Matsuri.
>Life proceeds. Anon's grown quiet and terrified of the world. But, luckily, he's finally made a new friend. Her name's Aqua. She's nice...and what's better, the niceness feels genuine. He can relax around her.
>Cut to early highschool. Aqua has finally confessed her feelings to Anon, who awkwardly reciprocates them. He admits that he does love her in the same way she loves him, even though he has trouble expressing it and letting her in. His heart has been closed off since Matsuri. Gradually, he learns to open up more and let her in, feeling a genuine attachment to the girl.
>Everything is fine until they have sex.
>Despite his best efforts, Aqua simply cannot make Anon cum. Everything just reminds him of Matsuri, though he keeps this to himself. Months and months of railing Aqua mercilessly without proper, soothing release begins to grate on him. She's too submissive. She's too quiet, she's too...willing. Something is missing. He begins to think he has a problem, sexually. Matsuri crosses his mind.
>It isn't until he thinks of Matsuri's attack on him during sex with Aqua that he's finally able to cum; a breathtaking, leg-shaking orgasm at that. Aqua is glad.
>Except he said Matsuri's name at the climax.
>Aqua knows exactly who Matsuri is. When confronted with what he's done - what he's said - Anon has a breakdown. In the arms of his lover, he goes over every excruciating, nightmarish detail of what he's been dealing with, his struggles, and finally his perceived impotency. Aqua quickly becomes overwhelmed. At a loss for words, she merely holds the crying boy in her arms, which only makes him feel worse.
>Aqua desperately attempts to become more dominant in the bedroom, but fails miserably. When Anon realizes it's her attempt at trying to appease him despite it not being at all in her nature, he feels sickened to his stomach.

>>15708395
Eventually, he resolves to break up with her. Aqua is adamant that she can do better for him, that they don't have to separate, but in his heart, Anon knows that this is for the best. That she doesn't deserve to need to do this for someone.
>Rumors spread throughout the school of the break up. How Aqua was inconsolable for weeks. It doesn't take much thought to peg you as an abuser, even if Aqua always rushes to your defense. The rest of high school is a nightmare.
>Move on to college. Anon has become estranged from his parents, living in an apartment a city over to attend school. Deep down, he resents his mother for finding him that night. If she hadn't, Matsuri would still be out. What's more, he's become the sort of 'college bicycle', turning to cheap flings to try and find anything resembling an emotional or sexual connection. Nothing clicks. It always comes back to Matsuri.
>The idea strikes him, then. Matsuri. It's been years and years since she was incarcerated. He never once thought to try and find her.
>He uses his connections as the victim of the crime to track the woman down. Uses the excuse that he wants to confront her in prison as a way of closure, some stupid shit like that. With the address to the prison she's in, he quickly makes his way there. At the visiting area, he waits patiently as she's called and brought out.
>Natsuiro Matsuri - notably more mature - is brought to her end of the plexiglass, escorted by two guards. She looks tired. More than tired - the spark in her eye that she had as a teenager has all but been snuffed out completely. When she sees exactly who's there to visit her, it takes a moment or two of processing to realize exactly who she's looking at. The clarity washes across her face in waves of deep horror. She sits, and shakily reaches for the receiver. She has trouble meeting Anon's eye.
>Expecting to be berated, Matsuri is instead spoken to in a soft, gentle voice, much to her surprise. Anon asks her how she's been. The response she gives comes out as an agitated whisper, something along the lines of 'what do you think?'. Still too scared to be fully angry. It isn't until Anon mentions how beautiful she still is that she becomes completely flabbergasted.
>Confused, she asks him what he actually wants. She expected him to just yell at her for twenty minutes then leave, like his mother does every so often. Anon, having already come this far and having dedicated himself to this path, quietly and carefully explains how badly he needs her. He tells her of his relationship struggles. His inability to connect with others, his inability to cum...everything leading back to her in his mind. He tells her how he thinks about what she did to him every single day, and how he hates her - not for what she did, but for showing him a glimpse of heaven before leaving his life forever. Matsuri sits in silent shock as Anon continues to explain his feelings towards her - for her - until he finally, for the first time in years, feels at peace. He asks her when she'll be released. She tells him it's a manner of months away - she's managed to get some of her sentence reduced for good behavior.
>Anon makes her a promise. He renews his promise to marry her - much to her furthered confusion - and tells her that when the time comes, when she's free, he'll be there for her, to take her away from this nightmare. Matsuri agrees in a daze.

>>15707359
This but halfway through Haachama's face starts to fuse with Matsuri, the two menheras becoming one being. As reality starts to collapse under the combined schizophrenic menhera power of Haachamatsuri; (You) are caught bearing witness to the end of the world, your mind fraying at the seams as Haachamatsuri's pussy begins to milk your cock.

>>15708425
>The months fly by. The day of Matsuri's release comes. Her own parents abandoned her long ago - no one besides Anon is there to greet her. Shuffling out in boring plainclothes, far from the orange she donned in her youth, Matsuri is swooped off her feet by Anon, who brings her into a tight embrace almost immediately. The girl lets out a confused yelp as she pounds at his back in embarrassment, and as he lowers her, he can catch a tiny glint of life back in the girl's eyes. He offers to let her live with him, should she want, until she can find a place on her own. Matsuri reluctantly agrees, and the two depart.
>Anon, however, cannot wait that long. He stops at a hotel roughly halfway between his home and the city and beckons Matsuri inside. Confused - and admittedly a little afraid that this will be her (in her mind deserved) end - she follows him in. As soon as they entire the room, Anon attacks Matsuri, pulling her into a deep kiss that mimics the first one he ever shared with the woman. Though Matsuri makes an attempt to fight it, to tell Anon what she did was wrong and that he should hate her, he questions her own feelings. When faced with the prospect that she's been imagining it since that day as well, Matsuri freezes on the spot, unable to defend herself against the claim.
>Almost step for step, Anon and Matsuri take their time, carefully recreating their shared 'romance' from years past with no mistakes - the acts burned into their mind so clearly they don't need reminding. For hours, the pair of them are able to vent their years and years of frustration in one another's arms.
>The story ends with one final journal entry a year after Matsuri's release. He wonders if it would be in poor taste to send Aqua a wedding invitation.
Fin.

sex?

>>15708395
>>15708425
>>15708453
>getting cucked by your boyfriends childhood rapist
Poor Onion

>>15700570
I heard some really useful information somewhere about her, basically saying that even to her friends, she ends up being rude by accident through her jokes. I remember one of the examples being her talking to Risu and saying "you're treerrat, lazy... Why you even live?" Or something like that.

Hope it helps.

>>15710226
>the hidden kusogaki

>>15690800
I assume that for now, we'll still be using the rentry archive until this(or the completed version) is up?

>>15708395
Cheers.

>>15713750
https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbzF_7TkRRwi1jeikUG3O5ObrEg4giRqHSF0pdvxGCCkemiBQs5HR7ukCCENhwMJgpEc/exec

I had some other ideas overnight I thought would be cool to implement, check it out.

I didn't spend a lot of time on an automated "Latest stories" function, if you want to maintain the manual selection in the Rentry page that's totally fine. I spent some time with an HTML editor today to design this, it's not a big deal but it was a bit annoying, so it might save you some time on doing certain things manually, but add a bit more time trying to figure it out...

>>15715497
That's pretty cool

>>15717963
>Rushia creeping on your Christmas party trying to figure out who's family and who's not

>>15699167
A Nene corruption story that isn't just greentext

>>15718334
You know, I have thought about doing it because I do sincerely struggle with writing long-from greentext that feels acceptable to me. But, on the other hand I remember somebody saying that the style adds to it, so I'm not sure.

Having another unfinished "real" fic in progress would probably drive me crazy too, because I'm so scatterbrained that focusing on an individual fic to finish is almost impossible.

>>15500739
You grabbed her by the wrists, pinning her against the wall. Marine was tiny, she was maybe 1,50cm tall at most. She had to look up to meet your eyes.

"Y-you brute! What are you going to do to me?" She looked away, trying her best to fake an angry face, but failing terribly with a big grin on her blushing cheeks.

You could feel her cock poking your thighs, she was unbelievably hard, and at this point, so were you. You unbuckled your belt and dropped your pants to the ground, holding her by the chest with your forearm. She gasped at your size, much bigger and thicker than hers. You could see her dripping precum on the ground from how excited she was.

"W-what are you going to do with that thing?" She said as she resisted the urge to touch herself right then and there.

"I'm going to teach you your place in this ship. Stop resisting or I'll make you walk the plank!" You roleplayed as well, why not. It was hot.

Your cock was poking her above her navel, right against her soft, chubby tummy through her thin silky leotard.

"I'd r-rather die than let you take my ship, or m-me!"

"Yeah? Well, I... will uh... " You were terrible at this improv stuff. She stood there in silence, waiting for your answer. You could feel her cock going soft against your leg.

"Fuck this, turn around. I'm going to fuck the shit out of you and you're going to like it." You grabbed her by the wrists and turned her around forcibly. She put up a fake struggle until you slammed her against the table, her ass pointing to you.

"No~ I'm going to get fucked~" You could see her legs trembling with excitement.

You grabbed her leotard and ripped it apart, revealing her sopping wet slit and tiny little leaking cock dangling below it.

"H-hey, these clothes were expensive!" She whispered to you.

"S-sorry..."

You put your cock between her asscheeks, grinding yourself on them. Marine immediately went back into roleplaying.

"Kya~ somebody please help me~"

"Help isn't coming, only I am." That was... not great. But it didn't matter anymore.

You positioned your cock on her lower lips, getting ready to break in. You grabbed her wrists and held them in a lock behind her back.

"O-ouch! Ouch ouch ouch t-that hurts!" She whispered in pain.

"Fuck my bad." You instantly let go. You figured it looked better on porn than in real life.

You grabbed both her hips with both your hands, spread your legs apart, and with a small delay to let her prepare for it, you slid your cock inside her soft entrance. It went in without any resistance at all. Marine let out a muffled "hmm~" as you filled her insides with your cock.

"Ah~ it's in! N-no!~" She struggled to keep roleplaying.

You ignored her and just began fucking her senseless. You started slow for a couple of seconds, but as you noticed there was no need for foreplay, you started picking up the speed quite rapidly. Her pussy was warm and relatively tight, her walls were surrounding your cock, almost not wanting to let go. Every time you thrusted inside, Marine let out a shaky moan as a bit of her juices splashed out from the impact. Whenever your hips made contact, it made a slap against her fat voluptuous ass which you just couldn't help but grope with both hands. It was like playing with dough, and she seemed to enjoy it as well. Suddenly, Marine let out a loud strained moan as you started feeling something warm and sticky dripping on your feet. You looked around and saw her cock pumping out small droplets of cum, falling onto the ground from her ass being pounded. Her cock was quivering and her balls were pulsating. She had just came hands free.

"You just came without even touching yourself? What kind of slutty captain are you?!"

"I-I'm sOrrYy~" She could barely speak with her trembling voice, the bitch was still orgasming hard.

"I'll show you something to be sorry for!" As you continued to pound her, you reached around and groped her balls with force. You could feel them tightening from the surprise as her wet cock slapped around your hand from the back and forth movement.

"No, please~ don't p-play with them!" She moaned out in a sensual voice.

"I'll do much more than playing."

You started massaging her testicles around, playing with them, sometimes squeezing them too, applying enough force to hurt. Despite all this, her cock was already hard again.

"You're enjoying this? You dirty fucking masochist!" You slapped her ass with your other hand, hard enough to leave a mark.

"That's not-"

She moaned out in pain as you interrupted her by pounding her slit with your cock with more intensity, slower but harder thrusts, really going deep inside.

"Don't try to deny it. Tell me, you like this don't you? The rough stuff?"

"... I... I do! I love it! I'm a d-dirty little pervert!! " She screamed out with a disgusting voice. You slapped her ass again.

"M-more! ~ yes, please, more!!" She continued begging for it, and you complied. Smacking her over and over.

>>15720111
Aww yeah, thats the stuff

>>15720111
Grabbing her balls with more strength, squeezing them hard. Marine was almost squealing like a pig, her juices were all over your hips from how wet she was. Her moans started growing louder and louder with each thrust until again, her cock started leaking out her pathetically small loads of cum. You grabbed her cock and began to milk it with your hand while squeezing her balls with the other, much like milking a cow.

"S-stop! I-it's too much!" She stammered out between her loud moans.

She shut her thighs together around your arms, her legs tensing up from the pleasure, but you continued. Her sensitive cock was sending wave after wave of pleasure into her as you gripped her cock tightly with your fingers joined as a ring, really milking her with force. You could feel yourself getting close as well.

"AaH!~ don't stop, don't stop!" She screamed, changing her mind from her previous statement, the pleasure frying her brain as you didn't let go from her cock even after she finished cumming.

You leaned against her back and pulled her by her pigtails, yanking her head forward. Then, you stopped playing with her cock and with your other hard, you wrapped it around her neck and squeezed tight.

"F-fuck, Marine. I'm cumming!" You groaned as she started choking from your squeezing.

Then, with one final hard thrust, you punched your cock against her womb and shot directly inside, squeezing her neck harder and harder, pulling her head by the hair even further. You could feel her spraying your hips with her juices as she started cumming with her cock against, convulsing from the pleasure. You filled her tiny little womb with spurt after spurt of your hot load, finally letting go from her neck and hair as your ejaculation finished.

Marine coughed and hacked, struggling to catch her breath. As you pulled your hips back, popping your cock from inside her cunt, she fell to the floor, completely exhausted, shaking, quivering, still cumming. Laying on a puddle of her own making.

"Whew, that was..." You let yourself fall onto the couch, taking a moment to relax.

Marine was mumbling incoherently, laughing, moaning, panting. She was a mess, and so you were you, covered by all kinds of fluids.

You got up and took her in your arms, cleaning her up and putting her on the couch with a blanket over her to rest. Despite having passed several minutes from the rough fucking, her cunt was still leaking out your cum and hers as well, dirtying the couch. You just sighed, turned off the lights and stepped outside, closing the door behind you.

A couple hours later she woke up, you sitting next to her reading a book about pirate terms. For children.

"Y-you're still here?" She asked meekly.

"Of course I am. What, was I supposed to abandon you?"

"I-I thought you'd... leave me after seeing the real me."

"Why would I do that? That was great."

She sat up on the couch and then went on to snuggle up against your chest, taking deep breaths to calm herself, before looking up to you with a smile.

"I'm glad~"

"Anyway, when do we sail?" You asked her.

"When all of the crew gets here, of course!"

"How many are we missing?"

"Well... " She twirled her fingers around.

"Right now it's just uhm... me and you..."

"Y-you serious?" You asked, she nodded timidly.

You took a deep breath and sighed.

"Let's go then, we have a long day ahead of us, aye captain?"

She looked up to you, processing for a second before giving you a big beautiful smile.

"Yes!"

...And so began the adventures of you and the captain.

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Title: Every ship needs a captain
Tags: NSFW, Marine, futanari

>>15720111
>>15721111
>digits bless the based ending
It's a sign!

>>15699167
An Okayu story that isnt ryona or chuuba abuse
Also maybe some more nijisanji stuff, with either Inui Toko or Fumino Tamaki

>>15702285
There are probably not many synonyms for those words, unless it's slang.
Although slang may add salaciousness, if you don't want to sound vulgar or retarded because of it, be creative and use metaphors. Neither breasts nor tits, but mountains, valleys, hills, pyramids, or ice cream cones, pair of bowls, etc.
Try to make sure the metaphor is appropriate, neither out of place nor too far-fetched.

>>15708395
>>15708425
>>15708453
My kokoro...

>>15723920
One day we'll get the thrilling drama of shotanon getting his weiner worked and mind broken

>>15723712
Example:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8cKvvmPwgP4
In this song, Canserbero, one of the most well-known and influential Spanish-speaking rappers, sings about sensual sex through a series of wonderful metaphors and other devices.
Examples:
>I used clouds as trampolines, and made sharks into dolphins
>And a rainbow into a toboggan whereon I let myself slide, until I fell into a river of peace.
>The sounds were like chants of angels from heaven
>And it's not that I've been there, but that here nothing sounds so good...
>I was freefalling onto the springboard clouds, and I used your breasts as cushions and pillows...
Etc.

>>15724427
LMAO

>>15715497
This only gets more impressive - and serves as a great reminder to remove the errant -s I must've missed when batch converting everything to the Rentry format. This is pretty cool.

>>15713750
Email sent. I'm pretty comfortable with what it looks like now in terms of design and functionality at this point to look like what I posted here: >>15715497

Added a couple of extra nice-to-haves like total number of entries and the last time the spreadsheet was modified - "scroll to bottom/top" buttons for ease of navigation. Also found a suspiciously relatable picture to use as banner.

>>15726294
There's something I've noticed as a bug the tag column has. Compare, for example, Miko's Gamer Moment. The closed (?) seems to cause an issue with the tags and forces a ^ to appear.

>>15726336
Ops, fixed. I already did a lot of small fixes on the Tag potion in the Sheets file - what happened is I had to make some substitutions to extract the data from Rentry and in the process ended up replacing ")" for "^", but it ended up affecting unintended right parenthesis elsewhere in the tags column.

Should be good now.

>>15726575
Alright. Got your Email and am set to commence tinkering with it, though it seems Google is throwing an error at me when I attempt to open up the script portion.

>>15726575
Alright, managed to get everything up and running. This is pretty nice. I think I'll keep updating the Rentry as a hard-hard copy simply out of habit (in the same way I back up all of the Rentry to a series of hidden Pastebins every so often) and since the series subdirectory still needs maintaining, but I think this effectively solves the problem of finding something with integrated tag searching. Thank you very much!

The URL generated is: https://script.google.com/macros/s/AKfycbxZVzygb0QjJ6hksAEYzCbLCegxsjhui97BB73qzPvU7GgJv6fXdAPmmIv6Qt9H5d5Fzg/exec

I'm very pleased with how quickly it rips stuff from the sheet and updates it. This is really impressive stuff to me, so pardon me if I'm gushing, but thanks again; I didn't know Google was capable of hosting stuff like this. I was originally meaning to email this but I figured it'd be better to just get it all in one big post and drop the link while I was at it, but while I'm here, what's the 'Y' in the D column of the spreadsheet meant for?

Can you not do all this through emails? No one has been talking at all since this stuff started

writebros… I‘m upset. I bought a light novel. My first. With actual money. All that just to realise that it‘s not good. Like, I never gave much about elaborate prose, but this one‘s as if written by a grade schooler. The characters are one dimensional and I care about none of them. There’s barely any dialogue. And thats the offical TL – not some backwater SEA fan translation!
I‘m serious: a good chunk of stories on here are better written, regardless of their theme. Why does this nip get so much clout for his shit – an anime even – while we suffer as shunned artists?

Tl;dr: Light novels are gay, might write for this board again out of pure frustration. Thanks for reading my blog.

>>15728094
Light novels are total crap besides the plot when translated into English. Japanese isn't as easy to read as English, and so the very simplistic grammar and vocabulary used in light novels are actually pretty good in Japanese.
I remember trying to read Japanese from reknown authors: I barely understood anything. What a clusterfuck that was.

Also, why don't you just pirate that shit? Those big companies don't need your filthy couple of bucks, but one of the chuubas might.

>>15728094
whats the ln title

>>15727890
Threads have been exceptionally slow recently so I don't think that's the cause.

>>15727828
Awesome, glad to help. It was a fun project for me to do, it's been a real long time since I worked with this stuff. My suggestion for the archive is to move it to another document if only to reduce the amount of dead scroll space in the iFrame but up to you. Column D is what I was using to build another table to display the recently updated stories - but if you'll keep updating that section manually and don't mind it then you can ignore or delete the column altogether.

>>15728094
I had a similar reaction when the Shakugan no Shana LNs became available and I bought one to read. It was pretty painful...

Ko'one!

>>15731248
FUCKING MOOOOTTT that's not what I posted fix your shit

I wonder where my Korone post went to...

>>15727828
This effectively solves the issue of the rentry link being classed as spam, too.

Sui-Chan wa...

>>15736218
I have to ask. Artist?

>>15736218
Where can I find Suisei oneshota? For some reason artists always seem to draw the opposite of what holos say they like: Suisei says she likes shounen/shota, and she gets drawn with grown men instead; meanwhile, Sora says she likes muscular men, and I've seen a bunch of oneshota with her.

>>15736478
pukara

>>15727890
Personally I’d prefer they do it in the thread because it’s slow and so that I can look at the progress and check out the links.

>>15738238
Most łudzi prefer dominating a kobieta rather than being the one dominated, so they just draw muscular mężczyźni to do it. A shota can't dominate someone.

>>15738238
Artists naturally draw what they like instead of what the talent likes

>>15728094
Anon. Genuinely why didn't you 'try' it first via piracy before shilling out actual money.

>>15728560
>>15729928
The Spice & Wolf TLs were pretty good - or, at least, read well in English. Might have been one of the lucky ones.

>>15699582
Sorry.

I did promise to finish it before November ended, huh...

I don't remember why I stopped. But during December I was indeed busy. The story is currently at 7K words, and I'm probably not working on it because I feel like it's going to be disappointing or something stupid like that. I don't even know where I want to take the whole futa x male thing into, but it will most definitely be Risu dom. I'm just not sure how to differentiate it from my other futa works, is the build up of 7 thousand fucking words worth for reading some smut I probably already put out there in better forms? Typical artist self doubt. Anyway, I'll probably release one or two more fics still before I finish the Risu one, sorry bout that. It's my first ever fic, so there's a lot of pressure to get it right, it's my baby. I can't fuck around with it, you get it? Please undastando...

>>15744713
Bro, I just like giving you shit when I get the opportunity. Take all the time you need.

>>15744008
Yes, some official English translation are indeed good or good enough.
Adding to that, some fan translations are good as well: e.g., Maruyama Kugane's Overlord by Skythewood / Nigel. I really liked this one.

>>15736218
boobs too big :(

>>15746033
>"For someone who's usually spouting stuff like 'Sui-chan is small today too~' or 'A cup~'..."
>"Your face sure is turning pretty red, you know?"

>>15744713
Anon. Don't pressure yourself into releasing it unless it's the only way you can get your ass to write it.

>>15746267
Sexually aggressive Suisei...

>>15747714
I want Suzy Housemacher to use her position as a famous idol to force sexual acts on me.

Forgot how good "A Brat's Punishment" was and I'm not even into that kind of SM play. Thanks for the nut

>>15748515
Based nutdealer

>>15748954
>Iofi and Moona hear six men all say "Thanks for the nut" in Risu's room while she just giggles
>They stare in abject horror as they all leave
>Until the two see the last man cradling an acorn like it's a baby bird.

>>15748515
You're welcome!

>>15662160
NTR is cheating, and has many categories. The other party doesn't necessarily have to be involved unless you want the gut punch factor that really pisses people off. I knew I couldn't manage that so I just didn't go for it. Not this time at least. If I try again I'll go for that feeling if possible.

Not sure what was wrong with the POV, there's no other way to show what was happening to Pekora without you being present as far as I'm aware.

> hearts
I was copying AA. His Matsuri fic is a pretty big inspiration to me, the part with the hearts was the hottest. In hindsight, it may be cheating, using emojis in writing and all that. Had to try.

>>15662052
Wasn't most of the story fucking? I guess I have a preference for dialogue over purely description but as far as I'm concerned, it's smut. What do you mean?

>>15678300
I'll be more subtle next time.

>>15750039
>NTR is cheating,
It's specific though?

>>15750039
The fuck is going on that webm?

New thread
>>15750279

>>15750255
Why are you afraid? Is this not what you wanted?

>>15750255
Sometimes it's hot. I'm not sure.

>>15750709
My god I'd facefuck that KiguKoro so hard it isn't even funny. What the fuck.

>>15750039
>What do you mean?
I meant I don't understand why you would use a topic you admit is trite, and keep relating back to it enough to 'annoy', and then say your focus was actually on the thing actively being hampered by all that.

>Ohh You're getting cucked but not really because it doesn't matter cause I just needed a PoV because I let a schizo set up public housing in my head but don't forget she's cheating on you even though I'm saying it doesn't really matter

Just write a fucking MMF threesome in a vacuum next time, you'll be better off for it.

>>15751124
You fool I'm the PF, how do you people not recognize my style yet? I'm saying it would feel too much like PF because I literally wrote it, of course it would feel the same, it's exactly the same descriptions except this Pekora doesn't have a cock. Is the cheating not worse if you don't know about it? I surely would think so. The lie is what really makes cheating bad. The gut punch from finding out. You actually being there is a completely different genre that doesn't even happen IRL. Most people who find their partner in the act just go out on a rage and commit double homicide. It's still cucking, and it still matters, I just didn't write the You actually being a cuck and staying there to witness it, because that's just not relatable. Being cheated on without your knowledge is, but if you actually know you're being cheated on and you chose to not do anything, that makes you a cuck. People don't relate to that.

>>15751389
tl;dr

>>15751124
And I now realize I didn't comment on the actual important stuff so. I wrote cheating just like I wrote a lot of other fics, as an experiment. I like trying out new styles, and seeing what gets a reaction out of people. I also like to see my own limitations and the difficulties people go through that I'm not aware of. I wrote it because I simply wanted to try it out, despite believing the genre to be cliche, cheesy and other names. I also wrote it because that one Matsuri cuck engraved into my mind the idea of wondering what would writing a NTR fic feel like. The "annoy" stuff can mostly be translated as "i want to see if people will react to this at all".

>>15751537
Wrote NTR as experiment. Didn't go first person because I wrote PF and it would feel the same, except no trap Pekora.

>>15751653
>The "annoy" stuff can mostly be translated as "i want to see if people will react to this at all".
so seeing as you're ignored in the thread, you've now taken to shitposting via writing

i'm all for it, but sad to see you're still a shitposter. some people never change, i guess

>>15751736
what are you fucking saying

>>15751736
What a weird thing to say. Am I a shitposter for wanting to see the joy in a homeless man's face after feeding him food?

>>15751389
>how do you people not recognize my style yet?

I know your ego won't accept the idea but I genuinely just don't think about you. It's really easy. You can say that things are or not relatable with all the certainty that you'd like, but at the end of the day it's not a set in stone thing.

Then again, asking a confirmed schizo to understand basic human behavior is asking a little much.

>>15752098
Yes, I'm aware that you do not think about me. I took note of that maybe after the 4th or 5th time you said how much you don't care about me.

I could ramble on about recognizable writing styles or human behavior, but It's late, and it's past bump limit. Let's just go to sleep, ye?

Impregnating Luna.

>>15750039
>>Not sure what was wrong with the POV, there's no other way to show what was happening to Pekora without you being present as far as I'm aware.
I think I said it earlier in thread.
It's aping the style of an NTR erodoujin, but not actually landing the hit. The PoV switch takes the reader out of it and doesn't really get them back in since this is prose and moving the 'camera' does that.