/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>72798139
well, I'm a bit late, but here to offer my praises anyways!
It was a nice read, certainly love myself some Kuro-chan! (not to mention as of late there has been a severe lack of her white cousin in here as well)
I can't say much that the other anon's haven't already stated. The dynamic with Lui is good, although sometimes a bit too comically over-the-top for my tastes. Some sentences feel a bit choppy, but not to the point where it vastly subtracts from the reading enjoyment.
I'm looking forward to where you're going with this!
A little side note maybe: Try not to introduce too many characters at once. You've already hinted at a whole bunch of them to come, and adding too many often comes at the cost of none of them being well fleshed out.
Keep up the good work!