/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>73708143
Meemen was better

>no electricity now
this phone has like 20 minutes left what do i with my time

too many kwabs...

>>70614593
microtansactions for 2kb of space are the future
wellme to dystopia

>>70277424
no regrets
also i wonder if m*gu remembers me from the time i was in her chat

im gonna eat a ban if i go into a niji stream with a luna related name and a pfp

>>69961506
I always though ruffians would be the most likely EN fanbase to harm/straight up murder one of their own or fwmc themselves, there is too much mental illness concentrated around them. I guess time will tell

stay hard

so its all up to us then

>>67526614
you stupid motherfucker, just you wait

>>66029684
Himemori Luna armed and ready

>>65990281

If those faggot hackers in GTAO weren't a thing, some holos might still be playing today.

>>60362377
>>60362382
oh jesas I've already closed it twice

>>58712424
You get what you fucking deserve.

Did Luna plan on playing Snake Eater next?

FWMC should play Army of Two next.

will luna naruhodo kojima's pretentious rambling of an ending?

>>55437082
She's trying to copy Luna
FUCKING WHORE

I will never get a Holo that does guitar covers of Hendrix songs and that is NOT fine.

>>54278807
One firebomb. That's all it would take to set your entire region ablaze.

>>53190812
>Upon Reading Song and Dance + Awakening
I am some ways into this and I am hit with the sense that this is written with quality befitting of a novelized work or at minimum, the draft of one.
Anyways, before I finish reading this I ought to give two critiques, one being that there are too many links to different sources and sub documents, it's not actually all that bad since clicking a link and learning something new is pretty cool but it comes at the cost of pacing if I'm not already familiar with the subject of the wiki and certain links are almost redundant and are already inferred by the topic (link about the spinal columns and phantom pains come to mind as examples). Some sections you do real good at letting imagination take hold so that meaning can be inferred and others it seems like you might be hesitant to trust that the reader will comprehend or understand the specifics of what you're saying.
I said I ought to give two, truth is I don't actually have another. Shill your work more brazenly since this is absolute kino, in fact, I honestly think you should try reposting this in /wg/ to see what kind of response it gets and if my words are backed up by other peers.
>Upon reading Insertion + Infusion
My biggest critique here is that the dialogue is somewhat hard to follow due to the heavy accent, there aren't alot of ways in order to do accents in written works and having a part where Tuval explicitly describes what Ailbhe's accent is like would probably have taken away from your intended depiction of it so I can understand why it was done the way it was, I'm curious as to if you had a kind of translation of what Ailbhe was saying or if you'd written it directly as the accented form. I'd also add that Ailbhe is kind of a hard to understand in terms of pronunciation.
Anyways, holy shit this is fantastic. This would have much less effect if I was not aware of previously discussed sapling lore or of the kind of blanket info that exists through lots of open discussions but you're intertwining of the Cradle concept in order to act as a means of progressing the plot while also characterizing Tuval and Ailbhe is some real gourmet shit. I feel like the depiction of chuubanite as a magic crystal/rock is horrendously overdone and making Faunanite appear in the form of tea leaves is a great idea, not just for switching common perception up but also for attaining a level of imagery without the specific need for description, I can imagine the smell of these leaves without it needing to be described to me and in my mind as I'm reading, I'm also mentally understanding the idea of how enticing Ailbhe is towards this kind of deal. Alec's situation also doesn't need to be spelled out for me to understand it although that might just be my own background knowledge on Sapling development and the nature of Morinium radiation. This is phenomenal in terms of incorporating lore in a narrative sense
>Inception
Based pink supremacy nanora.
This chapter introduces many interesting concepts and I think it balances just enough on the line of letting the reader make their own assumptions as to what a definition might mean while allowing enough direct links to heighten the enjoyment and intrigue of the set piece. Despite remembering alot of these discussions and I believe being a part of some of them myself, I'm surprised and delighted by the creativity of the concepts you use here. The Daemon's IQ being a factor in how much strain is put on a pilot is based as fuck. So much of this is based as fuck that I can only really say again, if you're not already working on writing to publish, absolutely consider it.
I have no real critique's this chapter outside of having a bit of an issue visualizing everything on the battlefield in specifics however that might just be my coffee and not the fault of the work itself.
To conclude: This shit is amazing and is gonna be my example of what to strive for should I make a serious attempt at writing a sci-fi narrative for /ctv40k/ and my biggest criticism is that you're not violently shilling this in the thread. It might actually be my favorite story for the thread in recent memory although it relies somewhat on a bit of background info beforehand to fully appreciate all the small details peppered in. Kudos nanora.

>>52220163
>devastating
We're the ones peddling