/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>74457162
>Suisei finding out the reason for her a lot of her sucess wasn't due to her talent and hardwork but because you'd blackmail, threaten, and kill execs to get her opportunities

>fotm
so we have people who never touched a game in their entire life and just heard about this word?

>>70718493
>making shit up on the fly
take your meds

>>70262327
I was doing something else, speak for yourself enfag

>>69824197
ew

>>68273720
Real men love every part of their oshi. You hear me? EVERY part.

>>66136136
Eeeeeeeh it's a children's game anon

>>61291168
Suisei literally played a recording of her dad trying to play guitar in her member stream before, wtf are you talking about

>>61052337
Hmm, I guess it would be useful for the plot to have someone (or multiple girls) as her shield in high school so that Anon's intentions don't become immediately clear to Aqua. Suisei for example would go full Suicopath whenever you try to approach Aqua.

>>60217422
If anything Suisei would make you HER slut.

>boy
>breeding

>>59811585
I expected this to just be the first half of your contest fic with expanded scenes and fixes to some of the issues raised, this.... isn't that, but I still like it.
Anyway, here's my loosely structed thoughts like last time
I liked the worldbuilding set up here better. Its just structured better, with the musical cut-ins just adding that extra kick; honestly surprised you didn't put up more blue links to music.
Also loved the expanded (pre)incest buildup with the flashback scenes. Though I do have to agree with the other anon, the contest version did the "The First Take" scene better. In fact the cut-in with the contest prose almost seems like an acknowledgement that this isn't going to be the same kind of story.
For lack of a better word, this felt like the second route in a VN where they assume you already know the set up from the first route so they just pop right into the story with the altered set-up.
>That emoticon
How the fuck did Sora become your ex?

>>58608347
i don't remember seeing a fanart like that. there's a couple of her looking disgustingly at the viewer

>What the fuck is this trash?

>>57384374
Eh?

>>55672997
Wait, are you ping ponging between multiple scenes? Some not directly connected to one another? It's no wonder you're going nuts. You just gotta finish one, and start from the earliest one.

Just do everyone a favour and contribute to killing this thread.
Never had to read so much pointless shite in my life.

>>52655170
>using suisei for your shitty bait
fuck off, and for the record

a mixed gen would destroy hololive. fuck you OP. eat the biggest cock you find.

>>52145625
phaseshills this is embarrassing

>miko and suisei two of my favorite streamers
>didn't know kyou mo kawaii
i got beef with this rat

Why is she such a sore loser?

>>47525196
>reading
What are you? A nerd? A loser? Bet you were bullied in school four eyes. Go take a shower before you come to school stinky.

>>45125457
Something that hits her ego and contains stuff Suisei could easily misconstrue as put-downs and insults to her handwork and talent

Maybe something like she meets them in person and asks about doing something together only for them to not know who she is, and like after a week of Suisei hyping herself up for them to have the same reaction to her as she did to them after they said they'd do their research, she asks again and they politely say that they probably wouldn't mesh well and stop talking to her. A mix of her fame not helping her in the slightest, what she could take as a dig at her skills as a musician, and then getting ghosted like she's not worth their time I could see really getting under her skin.

>>44995918
>>44996043
California was a fucking mistake.