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>> No.73679614 [View]
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At what point is a girl unfixable?

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>>71736988
Well that's a given. It kicks ass.

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This thread only exists because the mods allow it

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>>70051066
Japanese people

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pol

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>>69848067
So there's much I love about this funky fennec. Hearing her voice is such a nice treat.

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>>69055778
Got a specific chuuba you'd like to read some fluff on? There's surely a few good ones in the archive to help ease your soul a bit.

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how long in total did it stay up?

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Going by the cooldown of his posts, it looks like he bought at least three (3) passes and devices just to spam.

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>>68072970
The first time you post something you wrote is always the hardest. It's best to just take the plunge and get it out there. We try to do a good job at delivering feedback that is constructive. We all just enjoy this hobby after all and will do what we can to help each other get better.
We all start from somewhere, so try not to let that stop you from taking your own first steps.

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>>68055478
Thoughts on canon fats?

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>>67158835
and yet they welcome getting thoroughly "cucked" (entire arm in vagina levels of cucked) by female chuubas

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>>66867664
He made it up.

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>>65973470
Sorry for the confusion. I should make a better habit about mentioning if something I'm talking about writing is for my current series or not. What you said though has some good food for thought though, so I appreciate the ideas.

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>65199047
>65199069
>65199113
>65199113
>65199215
>65199258
>He's doing this on Christmas Eve instead time with family (implying they want to be around him)
Bruh

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>>65002897
Preach bro. That second perspective is so helpful it's unreal. Shout outs to all the anons out there that offer their second set of eyes to the writers. I'll always be thankful I met mine, not only for how much he's helped me grow, but for what a good friend he's been to me.

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>>64125195
It doesn't necessarily mean anything one way or the other. I could have enjoyed the content but couldn't think of any insightful feedback or scenes that I would want to shout out. It's also like another anon said, if other reviews basically cover the same ideas I had, I may not have anything to add to the conversation.

>> No.64093462 [SPOILER]  [View]
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>>64093166
>Topic is brought up
>I respond
>Get incorrectly accused of samefagging
>called /pol/
>told to go away.
We live in a society

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>>62331803
I think what matters is what YOU want. Write what speaks to you and what you might enjoy putting into words.

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>>61153848
>listening to this right now
Damn, she's literally cumming.

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>>60689868
I ate it

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>>59058663
Are you trying to foreshadow multiple things within bridges that are back to back? If so you might benefit from letting yourself focus on one singular thing you want the reader to have little tastes of to put questions in their head. You can still have your other things in motion and in the air, but it might help to narrow your planning to one path at a time as far as what you present to the reader at the current moment.
>>59058552
Just from what I know so far, I can say that might be a near impossible sell. The girl who was basically kidnapped and forced to watch people she liked get killed has 0 reason to have a legit and fluffy bonding moment with her captors. If she was showing some real Stockholm syndrome up to this point it might be easier to weave, but I'm just not sure I'd be buying any of it unless you got for a pure "a mother and daughter's bond will always be true." kinda thing. Which, ehh alright, but it would almost seem jarring to include given the potential context.

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>>58589028
say it again without crying

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>>58376566
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