/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>26974387
They reply to themselves, it's a feedback loop

>>26651746 (me)
>>26644125
Okay, I just caught up. I really enjoyed it. I think on a purely objective feedback standpoint, your pieces would benefit from a re-read. Obviously 4chinz fiction doesn't need perfect grammar, far from it, but there's a couple sentences where a word was misplaced or missing and that kind of interrupts the flow of reading while the readers processes it as what you intended. A quick re-read to fix up those minor mistakes would help a lot I think.
I think your work with Pomerlane is a good representation of what someone who idolizes Pomerlane would write about him in-universe, and perhaps you gravitate towards that because a lot of historical texts you might be familiar with (Roman generals loved doing this) did this. In this respect, I think you are successful.
On the other hand, a modern reader can come into media with certain expectations, expectations which this type of story doesn't attempt to meet. After all, some very engaging stories are the ones where the hero's success is in question until the very end, suspense. If you write for historical realism, these two goals can sometimes be at odds with each other, since indeed in IRL battles, decisive, straightforward victories of one side over the other are a perfectly plausible occurrence. This is why novels often gloss over battles where the result is expected, and put more emphasis on fights that result in tension or character development. I don't think there is an easy way to reconcile those two aspects.
Anyway, long story short this is for sure a propaganda piece, a couple hundred cannons, forming the largest artillery battery in the world? Pffffft the Deadbeat fleets at that time had dozens of ships with over a hundred cannons each come at us Pomerlane we're waiting. I think you're doing really interesting work in this thread, and using this specific style of storytelling sets you apart and adds variety to our body of works. Based on the in-thread response, I think plenty of people enjoy it as well, and I would give no mind to your dedicated nijishitter.

>>26543035
I will make my post and say my mind politely, and then proceed to ignore every shitposter that latches onto it and discuss calmly with other people that are willing or otherwise leave it at that

>>26362645
>>26362651
she'll be in VC, supposedly

>>26362663
Speak of the Devil with Mouse

>>26362669
AmaLee, the album is releasing

>>25970910
Day 1 is still available, bonehead, just VPN to Japan

>>25957296
He's a gray schizo that's been in Mori's chat for some time. >we suspect it's Zoki again.

>>25886804
>>25886860
https://www.google.com/maps/@33.8580587,-118.0848389,3a,75y,95.31h,73.8t/data=!3m6!1e1!3m4!1sp01T_E1XHZ9Rjy9RMkK92A!2e0!7i16384!8i8192

>>25278759
>I think it's just her being fame-hungry
This to be honest. And it's ironic that it's exactly that attitude which turns people away from her and stunts her growth. She's doing most of the damage herself.
Reminds me of someone...

>>25050468
Oh, I just got an idea. Would Lunaitos be open to hosting a team of Deadbeat scientists specializing in Arctic Schizo Studies? /luna/ would be an ideal point to begin an expedition towards the schizo wastelands.

>>25011553
Ha, I don't have to worry about that anymore (for now)

>>24699643
You should be able to condense it down to the required parts

>>24234302
really settled into a pace after Mori climaxed, she was too wound up initially/10

>>24076940
>MERA MERA was RIP II
Back to the drawing board

>>23793492
Great question! There are two aspects to deadbeatification: the anatomical adaptations, and the chuubanite accumulation. Given enough time, the chuubanite stored in the deadbeat's bones will decay completely. From there, some things would change faster, hair growth speed and melanin levels in the skin would be the quickest to return to normal, taking about a year or less. The other changes would take more time, the decalcification of the muscles would take a few years to be noticeable, and at least a decade to be complete, similar for the calcification of the inner organs. The skeleton itself goes through a slow cellular turnover, and would likely remain deadbeat-like for the lifetime of the person.
The decay of the chuubanite would also take a long time though. Crystallized into the deadbeat skeleton, its decay is pretty slow, deadbeats can spend a decades abroad without depleting it completely. Things like straining (or Death forbid, breaking) your skeleton would deplete your chuubanite reserves faster due to microfractures.
Thankfully, skeletal chuubanite can be replenished by simply eating /morig/ food, drinking /morig/ water, and breathing /morig/ air, so even a complete depletion can be treated in less than a year.
Children are particularly vulnerable to chuubanite deficiency, since their growing skeleton quickly depletes it. Thus, it's unadvisable to allow prolonged travel of youths outside of the island.

>>23272395
I fucking love Mori even more goddamnit

>>23207598
>You'll never experience Mori calling you only to star screaming and cussing you out over the phone

Why am i sad i will never experience this?

>>23157115
Technically, it would be east

>>23078569
In order to start shit, you have to pass an English literacy test.

>>22976756
it's actually more likely that 'Morgott' is the false name
it wouldn't be a first time someone wishing to be Elden Lord and a worthy consort to Marika changed a name they considered dishonorable/below the status
Horah Loux was a name tied to a barbaric chieftain, so he instead became Godfrey
Margit was a name attached to an accursed and isolated Omen, so he instead became Morgott

>God-frey
>Mor-Gott
both include a part that refers to godliness or divinity

I only watched Holo ER content so I'm pulling this completely out of my ass

>>22744522
I firmly believe she's too dumb to memorize a game's keymapping. In essence, a keyboard would literally be too confusing for her.

>>22737134
To clarify: it's not that she "likes it" here, she just views it as the most tolerable compared to others. So, she's like most of us in that regard.

>>22600996
No, but are we just going to wait around until she does?

>>21878821
Yeah, that's a good plan and location! You can be the landowner, but the Admiralcy would likely require that a Black Fleet official be in a leadership position in the installation, with some authority with regards to management, construction and military matters. The exact split of responsibilities can be hashed out in a lease that would satisfy both parties I think.
I took a cryptography course in uni, but all I remember is how SHA-256 hash functions work desu.

>>21827710
>500 words
Bruh, you can do that in 5 minutes