/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>43006603
Im interested in how this will play out, despite rushia not being someone i like.
I do have some problems with it. The first is the setting being a little fuzzy? I dont know how to explain it but it feels like you had the characters and then kept adding the backstories on top?
Maybe its just me, but it feels kinda weird that Marine is her pirate-cosplaying self...which is also a pirate that works for the mafia? is a bit too much but it can easily be my autism speaking
the other thing i wanna touch on is anon's writing? i know that you want to keep everything under wraps and i dont have a problem with him being kind of a wuss, but the way you ''close the doors'' as he opens them in order to not spill the beans is kinda jarring and makes him unlikeable, since he's constantly going NOPE at the plot
Last and Least, i love shitty silly romance movies with handcuffs so im a bit dissapointed you got rid of them so fast, but hey, i can get it.
Overall, nice work man, waiting for that next chapter.