/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>43629926
I'm glad you like the mystery, I suppose it's just my worries over whether people view it as an actual mystery a problem with the plot.

>>43637936
I've always been proud of the action in this series, and the stairway brawl is probably my favourite of the one's I've done so far. Like I said earlier, I was a bit worried about the scene transitions so I'll be sure to give them some more consideration next chapter. Though there probably will be less of them next chapter anyway based off of what I'm planning.

I knew there's a few people from the U.K around here, and I was wondering if any of them would catch on to that. Billy's a reference to a very specific person and I've always gotten mixed answers on if how often that guy says it is deliberate overuse or not. I was actually gonna have him use La' originally instead, but writing that would genuinely annoy the shit out of me and I don't wanna write things that I would not enjoy writing.

>>43642193
That's better than bad!

>>43646571
Thank you! I'm glad you like the action so much to use it for inspiration! The club scene actually was one of the first ones I had in my head after I decided take the story in a different direction and make Polka more important, so it's nice to hear that seems to be all well and good.

That's probably my biggest worry involving the mysteries in this story and my skills as an author is being able to properly get across what I want the audience to know, compared to what I already know and also what the character's already know. I suppose that's just something I'll have to work on but looking back now I can see how Anon hearing about Toru and making the link that it was the same guy who tried to mug Astel was a little unclear, as well as the sort of 'reveal' that Anon knows of Kson just not via her being a streamer, I'll be sure to keep that in mind going forward.