/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>72856566
I definitely think the fight scene has been improved. It works better that their first actual interaction comes later on at the school anyway, so to me this is a positive change. I also think the ending is more nicely wrapped while getting your readers ready for the next part. Also try to keep in mind when you use the same words back to back, using a synonym makes the reading flow a little better.
Way to take the feedback and turn it into your stomping ground.

Fuwawa save me from Kuro-sama trying to steal my cum.
https://www.youtube.com/live/pphwn2a63wA?si=irvZMRULe5--E3Dz

>>63352004
You're a cool dude. We all help each other make it!
>>63352285
Would Fubuki take it a step further and get herself cosplay props to use during the fucking?

>>62905355
It's still on my radar and I slowly think of what the next scenes will be every so often. I won't leave the story unfinished, I promise you that. It wasn't really that I hit a wall or anything with it, I just really wanted to get back to HJ at the time and that hasn't stopped. When I finish this current arc I might give myself a little breathing room and try and bang out the next installment of Errand Boy.
>>62910050
Botan is already added though? The start of the next chapter is already planned out more or less.

So A-chan is going to do a Karaoke for ReGloss. She's really going all in on this.
https://youtu.be/SkjK78I3s0k

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