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>>68786921
Ok, I think I can work with that. I wanted to make it more of a "perfect match" scenario, but I can still get across some of the feelings I wanted to convey with that setup.

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>>67790644
Really? Even in color? Because the idea of having her jet-black pelvis with a pair of peachy pink labia in the middle seems off-putting to me.

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>>64200637
Not to try and derail what you've got going, but with the angle they're at, shouldn't the horse's sack be visible? Right now it looks like the shaft isn't connected to the body at all.

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Question about writing anal stuff, especially things like rimming:
Do people find it necessary(or, at the least, more enjoyable) for there to be a line about the girl's butt being clean, or is it just assumed that it's clean without being stated?
Following that, if there IS a line, should there also be an explanation as to why the girl cleaned it, or is it ok to simply leave it as "it's clean because it is"?

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>>59632696
Hold on, I realize I could've clarified further for a more comprehensive view on the subject.
"Whose" refers to the owner of possessions, either physical(shoes, computer, book) or metaphysical(whose opinion, turn, actions).
"Who's" refers to gathering more information concerning a person themselves.

For a more reliable method, when you're not sure which one to use, try typing the sentence with "who is" or "who has", and if it sounds right, it's "who's", and if it sounds wrong, it's probably "whose".

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>>58054744
Hm, alright, that's something I didn't think about too much.
Sex toys aren't my thing, but exhibitionism seems like I could roll with it.
I'm getting a LOT of fun ideas with exhibitionism+blindfold though so I'll probably run in that direction.

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Would it be strange to post a drawing from drawthread that I received from a request I made based on one of my fics, but isn't actually a 1-to-1 scene in said fic as I couldn't fit the scene in the fic itself?

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>edit Matsuri card shaders
>only realize after the fact that the fact that she doesn't have a tan on her face doesn't make any sense
Anyone got a newer, better Matsuri card than mine? I feel like mine's older and there's probably a better one out there.

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>>53846762
i got a 31 but most of that stuff happened in like high school and doesn't reflect the current me
also some of these are pretty dumb and i don't think they would reflect on someone's purity

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>>53447448
Going by this analogy, GFE and CGDCT streams are horribly addictive, give everyone who watches them cancer, and make people throw their money away toward something that's killing them

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>>49993311
AS IF YOU COULD STOP ME

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>page 9
Have we learned nothing?

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>>46005806
Korone also did a Pekora smoking joke...

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>>42488830
It's really fucking good, but I am slightly confused: why give a loli bush?

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>Thread talking about Kemono seggs
>Realize the Holos I find to be seggs tend to be non-kemonos
huh

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Would it be weird to use a very Japanese onomatopoeia for laughing like "fufufu" in an English fic? The problem is that English ones are way too fucking limited and don't really fit for what it's supposed to convey, but I'm always wary about putting in too many Japanese-isms for fear of it sounding awkward.

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>>38370016
Curious about something: other than the obvious(San), do you have other Shota/Femboy cards? Not even necessarily chuubas, although those would obviously be better. Also, ones that I couldn't get just by looking on Bepis.

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>>37280714
By...writing a story about Fubuki?

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>>34272505
Now you've got me second-guessing the size in the first place.
It's definitely going to be huge, that's non-negotiable; some of the scenes I have in mind won't work otherwise.
>>34272843
I think I'll settle for 2 feet long, and somewhere around 5 inches thick. That way it still counts as huge but I can still work it in the holes somehow.

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Out of curiosity: in a primarily smut story, what do you think the ratio of setup to smut should be? And how long do you think it should focus on one sexual act before moving onto the next? One of the trickiest things I'm finding about writing smut is finding out how long I should be writing "and then the sex happens".

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>>31086760
>>31087497
>>31087572
surely, it's just a coincidence

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