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>>72708770
Pocky game reminds me of this.

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>>65197376
Too much chocolate and candy.

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So, did Ame pull an all nighter to do whatever the fuck she had to get done on some deadline?

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>>52337381
She wants to be punched and people just want to make her happy.

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>>51321993
As expected of a teamate.

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>>51065769
She also loves it when the famous purple stuffed worm in flap-jaw space with the tuning fork does a raw blink on Hari Kiri Rock.
She needs scissors! Sixty one!

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Weiner Strasse

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>>48193730
Improve yourself goes both ways, I guess.
I kind of respect it.

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>>37109031
Thank you for reading my work! As much as I think there are other, better writers here, I still feel honoured to see others enjoying what I wrote.

>Ch. 1 to 3
You are not wrong in that observation since that is about the time I start seriously writing it. The first two chapters are basically polished greentext I wrote based on some talks about /meat/ conspiracy in /kfp/. It was around the end of chapter 3 that I realised it is not something I can easily finish quickly.

>Ch. 5 to 6
I guess you can say I was indulging myself a little too much in that scene. Apparently the change in quality is quite noticeable if comfydant's feedback was of any indication. I was also trying to focus more on more intricate sensations and internal thoughts with that scene, since others told me that I was pretty bad at showing how my characters feel and think. For a while I toyed with the idea of presenting the possibility of Melisende actually dying there, but it would be ridiculous that a skilled detective would die somewhere named Rychenbach, eh?

>Ch. 7 to 8
I did have a lot of fun writing the action scene. Originally my approach was meant to parody the Film Noir genre but I ended up liking how that approach worked it basically became my default. While Melisende resisting and besting the deadbeat was important to the plot, I suppose I also wanted to throw her a bone given all the crap she had gone through that night.

>Ch. 9 & Epilogue
The obfuscation was partly intentional, since there would be no fun in a mystery if everything was laid bare. Melisende's vocal deductions were supposed to be guides to let readers catch up to what had transpired but it was never the full picture. I did leave some details that were never pointed out in the story and some of you actually found out. That said, I do admit that the ending could be more refined.

I think the confusion was a result of my not being very good at giving personal pronouns and descriptors varieties (the fact that most main characters are female did not help), and my persistent problem of not being very good at giving characters, well, characters, so they can blend together relatively easily.
As for the year, I do not really know, to be honest. It was written early enough that timeline was not really a thing back then, and everything was basically concurrent-ish (I think it was like ~1120 back in the vote?). I suppose it did not really matter that much as long as the elements at play (/meat/-/morig/ tension, /morig/-/kfp/ cooperation, and /kfp/-/meat/ under-the-table deals, and so forth) coincide.

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>Reine live translating for the audience
>Ame ??????

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>>32065504
what I should I post about then? blogposting is gay and I don't feel like it maybe some vidya discussion would make me want to join in

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>>31195811
Naming aside, the differences between oceanic climate (Cfb) and subtropical monsoon climate (Cwa) are:
>Oceanic climate has an overall wet weather, while subtropical monsoon climate has distinct wet and dry season (f vs w), although in this case the difference might not be significant due to the island being, well, an island. You can probably even make an argument that the island should be humid subtropical (Cfa) instead.
>Oceanic climate is somewhat colder than subtropical monsoon, with the former having no months warmer than 22°C, while the latter does (b vs a)
The rainfall pattern is fairly similar so either could work, although if it's the temperature that concerns you, then it might be harder to justify.

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>>30506955
unfathomably based

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>>30374877
Yes

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Space Jam was literally the cheap corporate soulless attempt to do what Roger Rabbit did

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>>28317626
Using vtubers for escapism, so business as usual for me

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