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Hagpost. The only Linkin Park songs I know are In the End and Numb.
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Hagbump. Two big floppy ones.

>>27276040
>That spoiler
I see you really didn't see the draft, then...

I do take the comments about Mio's husband at heart, thought. Looking at him from the outside he's a dick for the sake of being a dick, he was supposed to be a deadbeat husband who didn't make Mio happy, while in his life he has his own stuff going on that made him prone to his way of being. Then again, I never went too deep into him as a character. He was cheating on Mio from chapter one and set up a bunch of stuff that point at him being a dick.

As for the interactions in bed, the purpose they served was to show an inner change in Mio, as the first time she gets out of it by lying, and now she downright refuses him without explaining why.

As for the ending, I thought it was implied that he had been frecuenting those kind of spots regularly, but that only shows me I failed at portraying it in a subtle way. That's on me and I apprecciate your comments.

Next chapter might take longer than these, thought, since what comes next was meant to be Ch.5 originally and the ending of the series, but now I want it to be a bridge between the past and the future, between drama and wholesome family interactions. How I'm gonna get there maintaining some degree of quality is the real question, I do feel I wrote myself into a corner here, but alas said "fuck it" and just went with it. My storytelling will improve with time.

Thanks for your comments, anon.

>>22495595
Very cute relationship building here, and a nice passionate sex scene, I liked it.

>>22009867
>ywn never save Mio from her loveless marriage
bros...I can't live like this much longer