/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>42906553
...Thanks I guess? My dialogue still feels weird in my native language tho

>>42916963
Thanks!

>>42928733
Thank you for the feedback! Grammar and in general using words are the great bane of my existence. I made a conscious effort when writing this chapter, and it still ended out weird. But oh well. Little by little we figure stuff out.

Anon absolutely has some background, but I felt like I had no good time to explore it, and that it wasn't strictly needed given what happened so far. That's almost certainly going to be touched on in the next chapter.

As for the background - I have the severe problem of a point of view character that knows more about the setting than my audience. I'm trying to avoid infodumps by adding in little pieces within the narration itself, which at times just feels like I'm throwing information at the reader. Hopefully I can make things clearer from now on.