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The first one maybe, the second feels flat though. I agree with the idea that that your whole schtick should be non-permanent pain and humiliation, but at least give her something to think about for the rest of the day.

If not I think you leave readers with the fetish and without going "okay and?" waiting for some sort of conclusion. I feel like a lot of the things I've seen in this realm are desperately calling for a Looney Tunes esque that's-all-folks black circle closeout sequence.

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