/vt/ - Virtual Youtubers

>>75523351
This is a pretty good way to do a sequel. I really liked the mental wrestling you incorporated into this one, and the internal tension was practically visible.
The sex itself was pretty easy and enjoyable to read. It doesn't do anything for me since it is in fact incest this time, but the way you describe the exploring of bodies and your reactions to them are pretty good. I'm sure people who are into this will get quite a bit of mileage from it. Nice work and major props to your quickness on it.

>>73437166
I will be joining you in editing hell soon. I have at least several scenes and sections to refine, but I know in my heart they are necessary and will make the story even better, so don't shirk from the effort even though it might prolong things! Live without regrets!
>>73437826
We've all been there at least once. On the bright side, the practice of that foreshadowing will help you to include those types of things sooner rather than later, and your outlining process will continue to get polished from it. You can keep doing this, the fennec believes in you.

>>72697625
>Spoiler
My heart goes out to you brother. I have a similar situation with my own SO. She's come a long way over the years, but there are still aspects of herself that she has a lot of trouble with accepting. It's a hell of a mountain to climb, but I choose to believe the view from the top is unlike anything else. Keep doing your best. We're all gonna make it.

>>71346791
It's only cringe if you let it be that way. Be proud of your work, no matter who sees it. At the end of the day you made something and had the guts to put it out there for others to see.

>>69539094
Thanks for reading! I hear you loud and clear on the slower subject chapters. I love reading and writing those myself, which is why I found a good opportunity to give myself a little of that with this with this installment. Sometimes you gotta reward yourself as a writer and give yourself something you need, and I definitely needed a little mixup in the mist of the current chapters. Back to back action chapters can be a little taxing, so getting some slowly building fluff in there really refreshed me.
As for the questions, I can only guess which you might have due to what I've been planting, but the answers will come.

>>66949863
The desire alone to be good does more than you think. I know it's hard and sometimes it's easier to just give up, but you can persevere and some seemingly minuscule thing you did will inspire someone else to do another small good thing, and then that small thing becomes another, and eventually becomes lots of good things. You get the point.