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>>53728798
>Last Thread:
oops
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>>53729000
Hmm... Hadn't considered that just yet. I mean Scarlatina mentions having plastered your face all over her walls and Suri's been watching you for a couple weeks.
I think it's fair to say that the ones who don't know what you look like will at least be able to sense you and tell who you are when they see you.
Because Zodiac Magic.
>>53729040
I like it!
Hope it all works out for you, Anon!

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>>53729183
Left Door

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>>53729202
Right Door

>> No.53729449

>>53729183
I just noticed the typo.
>. . . accepting the alchemist's off will . . .
That "off" there should be "offer".

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>>53729449
Fuck.
This bitch is filled with typos.
I'll probably go through again after I finish the thing I'm making with Celt.

>> No.53729711

>>53729172
Having a strange feeling today...

The first time I saw Scarlatina, I felt she was a typical boring yandere, so I ignored her.

The second time I saw her, I honestly thought that, of all the brides, she alone needed to die in order for me to have a happy life with my waifu afterward.

Today, however, I think again. I ask myself if I have treated her unjustly, that her fearful passion is simply her writing too strongly, that in truth she could be the kind of person I can live with, even the one who would be the best waifu for me.

But do I risk it? If I choose her now despite my earlier convictions, I know that one day the truth will come out and she will know that I once thought she ought to die. Would she forgive such a sin? Is it right to reconsider my choice of waifu?

>> No.53729719

>>53729673
Mm. Noticed some more on other pages, but mang. Such a hassle to list them all out.

>> No.53729874

>No mom cyoa

>> No.53729926
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>>53729711
Only time will, Anon.
Scorpios are intense and all about emotions, romance, and sex. I should know, I am one.
I'm sure she wouldn't hold it against you.
Your hers now and that's all that matters. If enough time has passed, she may even laugh it off and say she doesn't blame you.
She can actually be fairly chill when she's content and has gotten what she wants.
>>53729719
I know, I'm sorry.
Like I said, I'll try to go through it thoroughly once I finish what I'm working on now and attempt to fix all I see.
I'll also try to fix that bit about B-03 increasing your lifespan since it doesn't help when it's just a temporary thing until you get your full powerset.

>> No.53730028

>>53729711
Obviously the only reasonable choice is to catch them all.
If any of them have any problems, you should just dick them hard enough for them to reconsider.

>>53729926
>Leona
ironic

>> No.53730050

>>53728798
ZBG, is there anything (other than the fact that the Brides are all more powerful than you starting out) preventing you from killing all twelve and ascending to the throne without a Bride?
The Mystery Boxes don't count, given that they just provide you with additional options.

I just want to dissolve the Houses and end this needless division, uniting Zodiac under the absolute rule of the King.

>> No.53730063

I've honestly spent way too much time thinking about this:

>take B-02, M-06, and S-09
>learn illusion magic as fast as I can before the war.
>create a massive illusion in front of the moon so that it's never full.
>war is stalled
>keep learning magic
>eventually the jig is up
>everyone is mad at me
>don't pick any brides to ally with
>everyone is mad at me
>before war starts, go out to the open plains where no one is around
>As soon as war starts, point a big illusion arrow above my head, visible from all directions for miles
>wait
>wait
>one by one, they'll show up.
>as soon as I see them, place a gun to my head.
>tell them I'll explain once they're all here. If someone kills anyone before then, I'll shoot myself in the fucking head.
>They're all like "Oh, fuck, if this guy dies, Zodiac will probably crash into the old earth and destroy everything.
>Everyone is mad at me
>Hopefully they all agree to that shit, because I'll fucking do it. I'm not in a good enough mental place where people can kill each other over me.
>Hopefully they're all sitting there, alive.
>I explain how upset I am that they took me out of my old life on earth to make me play favorites while they murder each other. This whole tradition is fucking insane.
>Here's how it's gonna be: Any of them can marry me if they want; I don't care. I don't know any of them, one page of writing and a picture isn't enough to make that decision. And you can all share me.
>And we're all gonna be grown-ups and no one is going to kill each other to marry me because if you think that's a good idea, you can't be in charge of anything.
>I don't know what they do next
>possibly everyone is mad at me

>> No.53730128

>>53729172
>I think it's fair to say that the ones who don't know what you look like will at least be able to sense you and tell who you are when they see you.
well, that's stealth out of the window
probably just demand that my neighborhood or at least house be exempt from the whole war thing, in that case

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1/3

>> No.53730143

>>53730063
>I don't know what they do next
Sex

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>>53730130
2/3

>> No.53730156

>>53730143
"Nothing turns us on more than a crazy guy with a gun to his head."

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>>53730145
3/3

Now with reduced file size.

>> No.53730190

>>53730050
First of all, there is nothing stopping you from building your harem and being absolute ruler forever/changing the system after becoming king.

If you don't have any interest in waifus, I don't even get why you would bother with a waifu cyoa. Just seems kind of pointless.

>> No.53730205

>>53730130
Are you the creator? I posted some more corrections here
>>53727905

>> No.53730231

>>53730050
>>53730190
Adding to what he said, the powers section is rather minimal, so... The main draw really is the waifu section of the CYOA. I mean, go ahead and fantasize about being king after killing all your would-be wives, but since you'll be getting all the powers listed and at an even more powerful level, there really aren't many customization possibilities.

>> No.53730237

>>53730145
Powered Hull Plates, does the last sentence end half way thro?

>> No.53730293

>>53730237
There's nothing wrong, is there? It's just saying that the maximum amount of damage it can absorb is equal to how much of it you bought. So if you only bought it once, it can only take 1 toughness point worth of damage, with its maximum bonus being equal to the ship's own natural durability.

>> No.53730314

>>53730130
Lunar Cruiser is so expensive that after filling the weapon slots, you can barely afford anything else.

>> No.53730328

>>53730231
For me, that part takes away from the whole thing, since it doesn't matter "who wins" because you end up ascending to god-hood anyway.

Also, if you're immortal from being king, why are there other previous kings? What happened there?

All that said, Zodiac Guy, I love this shit, it's the best CYOA I've seen in a while.

>> No.53730346

>>53730293
"Split damage 1-1 between power-plates and hull until the bonus from the plates."

bonus from the plates what

>> No.53730349

>>53730328
Some of them just will themselves to die. The ones who didn't just decided to step away from it all and do their own thing.

>> No.53730362

Are there any CYOAs that AREN'T complete shit?

>> No.53730380

>>53730346
The bonus.
>Increase Hull Toughness by 1
Buy it multiple times to increase the bonus even more to a maximum of what your ship's base toughness is, essentially doubling it in the end.

>> No.53730411

>>53730362
Go outside?

>> No.53730423

>>53730362
Excellent question. Unfortunately none have dared to find the answer lying deep within the depths of evil known as The Archives, for there is much shit to be found there. Perhaps you will be the first to recover a good CYOA from that wretched place, if you so dare.

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>>53730050
>killing all twelve and ascending to the throne without a Bride
I mean... not technically, but Jesus anon...
Way to take the most drastic course of action imaginable...
>pic related
>>53730063
Daaaaaamn Anon. You seriously ain't having none of this shit, huh?
Also, they'll know what phase the moon is in regardless of how convincing your illusion is.
Really like the idea though, so I'll let you have it.

>>53730128
You could probably still stealth about.
They'll have an idea you're nearby, but they won't be able to know exactly where until they have eyes on you.
>>53730156
Only Scarlatina.
>>53730190
This guy knows what's up.
>>53730231
The Elixirs are mainly there to add a bit more to the CYOA.
I was considering making a sequel/DLC where you customize how you rule and what you do with the power.
>>53730328
>why are there other previous kings? What happened there?
I addressed this a while ago, but since of them are multiple thousands of years old, they either chose to die or stepped down from the Throne and decided to just live out in the middle of nowhere to have a sort of quiet retirement.
Also, I love you too, Anon! I hope you like my future projects just as much.

>> No.53730467

>>53730411
Please put on a tripcode so I can filter you.

>> No.53730488

>>53730460
>and what you do with the power.
What do you mean? That'd be nice.

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>>53730362
>>53730423
Have this, you big babies

>> No.53730509

>>53730467
Please put on your own.

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>>53730460
Hey, so you've probably been asked this before, but what would YOU do in your CYOA?

>> No.53730602

>>53730502
space cop = best cop

>> No.53730632

>>53730145
Lance batteries are pretty accurate on long ranges. That is the advantage they have over macro batteries.

>> No.53730696

>>53728798
I might be forced to murder an elf who has seen too much.

None of the Brides seem capable of taking you out if you have Vitality. Of course, they could drop a building on you but other than that.

I guess Vitality, Beauty, Skill could work? Spend the time leading to war training up your charisma and arguments. Then during war wrestle the girls until you get a solid hold, only the elf seems like she could be immune to arm lock. Then just let full body contact, pheromones and sweet talking to convince them to come with you.

I think switching Vitality for Grace would be more effective since it would allow you to get to the girls faster and you could probably put them in hold before they could react but it's risker tactic since single ricochet could take you out.

>> No.53730722

>>53730130
Are you planning on doing other 40k cyoas?

>> No.53730734

>>53730602
You spelled Time cop wrong.

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>>53729874

>> No.53730776

>>53730696
>None of the Brides seem capable of taking you out if you have Vitality. Of course, they could drop a building on you but other than that.
I believe they win if they take out all the other Brides. So taking you out isn't really as important as being the last one standing.

>> No.53730781

>>53730314
Then don't do that ya dummy.

>>53730380
Yes but, "Until the bonus from the hull plates" is an incomplete sentence. Until the bonus does what. It should probably just say something like, "Split damage 1:1 between power-plates and the hull."

>> No.53730801

>>53730380
Also it might be nice to be able to buy a power-source upgrade since almost nobody is ever going to be able to actually double their hull strength with power-plates.

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>>53730696
Anon, if a girl has seen all the sick shit you're into and not only is fine with it, but still thinks you're a sexy beast and her dream husbando, then she's a fucker keeper.

>> No.53730825

>>53730781
Change the phrase to "until the hull plates bonus" or "up to the hull plates bonus". Does it make sense to you if it's like that?

FYI, I'm not the author.

>> No.53730852

>>53730807
>she's a fucker keeper

There's a joke about trapper keepers somewhere in there, I'm sure of it.

>> No.53730925

>>53730825
I think it's fairly reasonable to expect people to be able to figure out that the power-plates can't prevent more damage than the number of times they've been bought. It might need to be phrased like that.

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>>53730205
Thanks. Hopefully that's most of them. Now I have to wonder if my grammar has always been that bad or it's just because I'm rushing to get something out after getting sick of looking at it.

>>53730237
I've edited that. It should be a bit more clear now.

>>53730314
It's supposed to be expensive. It represents the highest end option you can reasonably afford.

>>53730632
It's been a while since I've looked at BFG. I was remembering it as 'use cannons to wear down shields, then hit them with the lances'. I'll change it if it's a problem.

>>53730722
Not at the moment, no.

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>> No.53731060

>>53730767
Mystery Box: You are the mom.

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>>53730510
>Left Door
>Spend a month adjusting to Elixirs and fucking Oriadne's brains out
>Go into battle completely overpowered
>Defeat every other girl
>Declare that each one who falls before me shall become my wife
>Focus on taking out each of the other girls in the following order:
1. Lucianna (To have her as soon as possible to power up the other girls)
2. Vignette (To make sure she's safe and she can build us some hardcore vegetable fortifications)
3. Talisa (Because she'll be easiest to convince now that we have Vignette on our side)
4-6. Abirathi/Lizette/Gwendolyn & Gracia (These three will be fairly middle of the road in terms difficulty to convince)
7. Angelica (With these numbers we can finally take on her Holy Berserker mode)
8. Suri (Could honestly be recruited at any point because of her personality and general flexibility when it comes to her goals)
9. Catherine (Because we can now reliably take her and spirits)
10. Persephone (Again, probably could have grabbed her earlier, better safe than sorry when dealing with robots)
11. Catherine (Finally have enough people to overwhelm her)
12. Scarlatina (Because she's the most dangerous and will be hardest to convince)
>Declare that each one who falls before me shall become my wife
>Harem End+Trap=Total Victory

>> No.53731352

>>53731263
>Feminine Penis Lover
You're a dirty boy, ZBG.

>> No.53731369

>>53730460
>I was considering making a sequel/DLC where you customize how you rule and what you do with the power.
I want this.

>> No.53731388

>>53731352
Why do you think I love working with him?

>> No.53731390

>>53731263
>harem
Into the McTrash he goes !

>> No.53731436

>>53731388
Because he does your work for you??

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>>53731436
Fuck, you figured it out.
He's genuinely fun to work with. Plus he makes great waifus and I wanted quality.

>> No.53731486

>>53731013
>It's been a while since I've looked at BFG. I was remembering it as 'use cannons to wear down shields, then hit them with the lances'. I'll change it if it's a problem.
Rogue Trader gives Macrocannons and Lance Batteries about equal ranges.

Ship combat in it is complete ass tho, so who knows.

>> No.53731510

>>53731263
I see you have such concerns about Catherine that you need to deal with her twice. Big breasted, motherly mature girls are your weakness?

>> No.53731559

>>53730460
>The Elixirs are mainly there to add a bit more to the CYOA.

Even in harem exist a first wife, so it's possible to get a benefit based on which of the twelve is chosen. The simplest thing would be making the king capable of using a fourth elixir whose effect match the hereditary skill of his wife. If he already posses such skill then gets an updgrade. B-04 Beauty, for example, could allow minor shapeshifting so is possible match any aesthetic standar.

If one of the twelve wins this benefit is not obtained and the harem option vanish.Or, at most, the king will be able to marry a "representative" of the other three regions... if his queen allows it.

>> No.53731640

>>53730130
Standard Warrant (90)
2 sword Frigates (70)
civilian voidmen (68)
twin torpedo tubes (60)
light lances (56)
heavy void shields (46)
warp shields (36)
Fitted crew quarters (32)
guard regiments (30)
high power auger (25)
Manufactorums (9)
juvenat gland (4)
cogitation implant (1)
gene sculpting (0)
Adeptus Ministorum, Sainthood

Based on my "what I'd do if I were a rogue trader" build
>I regard the strange creature before me
>:"Inquisitor, your concern is understandable. You are of course welcom to invite a black ship to this colony. But they would be going far out of their way, and I intend to bring any dangerous descendents of these ones with me when I return to imperial space. So it would be best for humanity if we did not duplicate our efforts"
>He hesitates. "The Eldar..."
>"Is here as an ambassador of her people. You are aware I speak for the emperor here?"
>he nods and his eyes widen as the words replay in his mind
>"Then I would suggest you turn your gaze to matters of more importance than the eccentricities of a minor saint. There is heresy in the imperium more troubling than a few witch-children on a remote world, and the emperor needs you where it is strongest."
>I watch him bow and scuttle off, more purposeful than cowed. Every inquisitor knows where heresy is strongest. they're easier to motivate than my own troops.
>I spare a glance at my ship, glad I have a spare and that I didn't arrive on it. the cargo there would have been decidedly harder to explain than what it's paying for...

>> No.53731660

>>53729202
>Manipulative as fuck
>Very eager to kill or torture people
>Rigged everything for their own desires
Good thing I didn't pick this, I'm not smart enough to come up with a convincing accident.

>> No.53731664

>>53731559
The King gets all twelve elixirs at a much higher potential.

>> No.53731675

>>53728798
B-02: To combine with:
M-07: The Flash has taught me how useful these two are together.
S-10: I like Jojo's and Persona.
>>53729079
>Cassandra
Came on a bit strong, and power doesn't seem to mesh well. Rockin' tits, though. Pass.
>Talisa
I love animals, and despite my last comment, don't really care about breast size. Not wanting to hurt the others is a big plus, but I'm iffy on the personality. I'm much calmer, I wouldn't want us to annoy each other. Maybe, leaning towards yes.
>Vignette
Powers aren't great, and I'm not big on wallflowers. Sweet, though. I wouldn't let my partner hurt her. Maybe we could be friends. Pass.
>>53729100
>Lizette
Psycho, so many red flags. My IRL gf and best friend are Libras, which is basically all she has going for her. Pass.
>Abirathi
Great powers, nice girl, my monster girl fetish, and an excuse to ditch court when it gets too boring. Strong maybe.
>Gwendolyn and Gracia
Holy shit. Gamers, A+. Awesome magic, A+. Twins, willing to share, A+. The only thing I'm worried about is not being able to keep up with them. As I said, I'm a calm man. Strong maybe here, too.
>>53729115
>Angelica
"I always get what I want" and "We can't trust anyone to actually fix problems" make her feel like a younger, less incestuous Cersei Lannister. Pass.
>Lucianna
Fucking amazing power. Great personality. We'd get on like Bonnie and Clyde if she can put up with me acting out of character for a King. She'd be a great Queen. Strong maybe.
>Suri
Enigmatic. I'm not sure I can trust her. Deceptive appearance and deliberately moving behind my Right Hand isn't a great first impression, but if she's being honest in her letter, then we'd be great. The question is, is she telling the truth? Unlike all my other maybe's (who are compared to each other), this one I'm just unsure about on her own.
>>53729172
>Catherine
The nonviolent approach is a plus. I get the impression that she's a bit manipulative. Don't trust her, pass.

>> No.53731807

>>53730190
>why bother with a waifu cyoa if you don't care for waifus

I'm willing to wade through shit to find some golden nuggets.

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Anyone else too much self-respect to pick waifus?

>> No.53731882

>>53731675
Cont.
>>53729172
>Scarlatina
My own sign, and Alchemy is a great talent. She's way too quick to kill, but deferring to me on operating procedure is nice, so I guess it cancels out. I'm not fucking any of them until someone wins, though, so she'll have to grit her teeth for a bit longer. Strong maybe.
>Persephone
Automatons are great. Computer knowledge is cool, and I'm not really bothered by the invasion of privacy. I have no secrets. I do like the minigun, and her goals are nice and coincide with my own. A bit lacking in confidence, but if she's as bad as she thinks she is, it doesn't really matter. I'll pick up whatever slack there is.
>>53729183
No secret doors, thank you.

So, my candidates are: Talisa, Abirathi, the Twins, Lucianna, Scarletina, and Sephy.

It's hard to argue that between Sephy and Talisa, robots beat animals. The twins and Scarletina honestly intimidate me, and I'm worried that they won't stop if I tell them not to kill. Abirathi's magic doesn't top the twins, in my mind. So it's between Lucianna's army of men and Sephy's army of robots.

Which is kinda gross, because Leo is my dad's sign and Pisces is my sister's.

Anyway, I guess I have to go with Lucianna. I've always been a big proponent of "HFY," and it seems as though she's based around it. She'd make a great queen, and I think we could beat the rest of them without killing them, since our men will follow our orders.

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Which did you pick?

>> No.53731924

>>53731858
>ideal waifu expects the player to shower once a week
>fuck off whore I have self-respect

>> No.53731949

>>53731858
I made a build for Zodiac that involved just watching the waifus fight each other and letting them pick me by winning without my help.

I ended up being passed around like a parcel and being glad I took the Vitality elixer to not die.

>> No.53731972

>>53731924
More like me having no interest in imaginary cringeworthy girls because I'm not a virgin NEET.

I like cyoas for the adventures but the waifus are just embarrassing.

>> No.53731983

>tfw all waifu cyoas are about how a waifu will do anything you want and lick your toes
>No waifu cyoas where You do things for your waifu out of love instead.

>> No.53731986

>>53719583
Picking Harbinger. Swapping out Humans for Demons sounds fun. Especially if no one knows everyone else is a Demon.

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Did Quiet end up finishing Modern Fantasy or did he just get to page 30 and die?

>> No.53732031

>>53731983
Cause you're a cuck and we're not. A girl who doesn't worship the ground you walk on us just an expensive live-in whore. Do you think Chad does nice things? Nope, he beats up his gfs and they all love him for it. That's what a waifu should be. That's what you should be looking for in cyoas. A waifu who thanks you for cumming in her eyes.

>> No.53732035

>>53728798
Elixirs: All of them
"Bride": Oriadne

I'm not a waifu guy, but I am a power guy (in the personal sense, not political). Made choosing a bride rather simple. Though if the power were a given, or there were another option for it, I'd still probably pick the trap out of them all.

>> No.53732042

>>53731986
They all know they're demons. You just decide if they look humanish or not.
You also get two girls.

>> No.53732057

>>53732001
The plot section for this is a bit dated now that GW is finally allowing the fucking clock to move.

>> No.53732063
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53732063

>>53731972

Yes, yes, very good...

More adventure, less waifu-shit incoming...

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53732092

>>53731983
Women were made to serve men and continue their line.

>> No.53732105
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53732105

>>53731896
I choose none

Nice try Mephisto

>> No.53732114

>>53732042
>They all know they're demons.
That is less fun. It would be fun to see each Demon pull a sweatinggirl.jpeg when they try to "act Human" and convince everyone that yes they are also Human and do Human things haha we are all Humans here.
>spoiler
Ah. I thought it was a waifu cyoa so I skipped to read the mystery box. I'll have to read the cyoa to know who else to pick.

>> No.53732124

>>53728798
>Elixirs
Magic because magic is the shit
Beauty because i am vain as fuck
And Analysis to help me in combat and persuasion
>Chosen one
Angelica
In the end it does not matter because i am going to get them all but she will be able to pummel the others in to submision while i cast stuff in the distance so i can end up convincing them to join me

>> No.53732135

>>53732063
This cyoa has always bothered me.

Going;
>Power
>Blood
>City
>Swarmx5

This build is pretty much insta-win. In a big city, no one is going to miss a bunch of sleeping hobos being devoured by swarms of rat-like monsters at night.

It kind of bothers me when cyoas punish creativity like this.

>> No.53732152
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53732152

>>53732001
He's in his grave now.

>> No.53732204

>>53732152

Anon you reminded me of Hibiki, Hibiki I miss you where ever you are

>> No.53732224

>>53728798
>Elixirs
Skill
Grace
Beauty

>Betrothed
Cassandra Capricorn

However, greedy as I am, I also desire Abirathi Aquarius, Gwendolyn and Gracia Gemini, Lucianna Leo, Suri Sagittarius, Catherine Cancer, and Sephy Pisces. And as King I see no reason why they shouldn't be mine. I will make it very clear to all the girls that any who submit will be rewarded and given an option as to their future. The other girls could convince me to take them as a wife but it doesn't seem particularly likely from their profiles. Maybe Vignette, though. She'll certainly be the first one I visit after the fighting starts and give her the option to submit.

Lizette and Scarlatina will be two of the biggest problems, and as much as I don't want to kill any of them I can't really see a way to leave Scarlatina alive. Frankly the two of them seem to take this whole thing a lot more seriously than some of the others and expect to take my hand in marriage by killing all the others. I will not allow that to happen. Among my chosen suitors I expect Lucianna will be the dissenter. It does not seem likely that I could convince her to take an equal place among my brides but I will try. To her I will grant the opportunity to fight for my hand. I don't imagine I could offer her any greater gift and if she somehow does defeat all the other women I deemed worthy then she certainly is the best of them all and I would be glad to marry her alone. Cassandra may also be a similar problem, but to a lesser degree I believe. She may not be exactly "submissive" in a sexual sense (which I can be very into as well) and she is certainly a very driven and aspirational woman but I get the feeling she can be made to understand the situation. Plus that's partially why I chose her as my betrothed, to hopefully mollify her somewhat.

>> No.53732238

>>53731896
I'm in the cyoa thread, genius.
What do you think?

>> No.53732244

>>53732224
The other girls I've chosen seem to be suitably submissive to their King, though the Gemini twins and perhaps to a lesser extent Suri do seem to be relishing the possibility of combat. I see no reason why they shouldn't take the chance to indulge themselves since they have the opportunity, as long as they understand and abide by my wishes. Either way I'll be getting the hell out of my city and finding a somewhat more wild and deserted area for these maniacs to unleash their carnage.

One thing I almost overlooked is the political implication of marrying members of some houses and not those of others. That is quite definitely more of an insult to those not chosen than if I just choose one wife. Unfortunately, that is simply the reality of the situation given the suitors those families provided. I hope to soften the blow somewhat by granting boons and positions of power to those not chosen but ultimately it's tough tits for them if they don't like it. We don't really get much of an indication of the political situation from the CYOA but hopefully I'll be able to smooth things over.

>> No.53732309
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53732309

>>53731352
>pic related
I cannot lie, I would a fuck guy(female.)
>>53731369
Priority:
>CYOA Celt and I are making
>Go back and try to clean up the typos and errors in WotZB
>Guardian Spirit
>That One maybe
>>53731388
>>53731477
You're gonna have to speak up, Celt. I can't understand you with my dick so deep in your mouth.
>>53731510
Fuck. The second one was supposed to be Cassandra.
But also yes. I lick my ladies thicc and my titties and asses big enough smother me to death.
>>53731559
>Even in harem exist a first wife
Good point.
Also, you naturally begin to develope your wife/wives' hereditary skill as you grow closer and your love deepens.
>>53731660
She(male) would burn the world for you.
>>53731675
>I like Jojo's and Persona
Mah nig-
>Cersei Lannister
I am deeply offended by this comparison. I had no idea any of my waifus could be compared to any character that terrible...
That being said, I love seeing people reviewing each waifu! I'm glad you found them all interesting enough to write about!
>>53731882
>not fucking any of them until someone wins
>"Scarlatina rocks back and forth in the corner of the shelter and biting her knuckles. You feel her lustful stare burning into your back as it has been for the last 12 hours."
Before the end of this. She's just going to be hanging off you dry humping your arm as she struggles to hold onto her sanity.
>>53731858
I don't understand how that would prevent you from fantasizing about have an idealized animu girlfriend.
>>53732035
>I'd still probably pick the trap out of them all.
Mah nigga!
>>53732124
>Angelica
I'm always happy when anyone picks her. She seems to be the least popular.

>> No.53732363

>>53731062
>>53731034
>>53731013
So what would it take to get a Retribution class Battleship?

>> No.53732381

>>53731924
How can anyone stand to not shower at least twice a week? After a certain point you just start smelling terrible.

>>53732001
He got honor killed for trap porn again

>> No.53732414

>>53731013
text is still too small.

>> No.53732420
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53732420

>>53732309
>I can't understand you with my dick so deep in your mouth.
Fite me

>> No.53732430
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53732430

>>53732135

> Punish creativity

What?

You could always just not do the combination you described and try to make something else instead...

...

Also, have more Cyoas...

>> No.53732433

>>53732381
Your body adjusts to the frequency of your showers. I used to shower once per 2-3 days and was totally fine after 2 days of not showering. Then I switched to showering everyday and now I feel "dirty" after 30 hours of not showering.

>> No.53732553

>>53730767
>>53731060
No DLC?

>> No.53732554

>>53732430

What's the story behind this one? Maybe I'm reading too much into it, but I can't help but feel like the being granting you these choices has ulterior motives.

For instance, why does he need your help, if "there is nothing [they] cannot bring to bear against [your] kin"? Who is this being, which wants us to assume it's God?

Also, judging by the boons the various options grants, it seems like he desires death & chaos over any kind of redeemed world.

All in all, it's very suspicious, isn't it?

>> No.53732581

>>53730460
>they either chose to die or stepped down from the Throne and decided to just live out in the middle of nowhere to have a sort of quiet retirement.
>chose to die
Seriously, this is why imma getting all twelve waifus. You think I'll have TIME to get bored with thirtreen wives to fuck in literally hundreds of possible combinations? Can you imagine how complex the bedroom politics will get?
Has anyone here ever played Crusader Kings 2? This is like that, only with thirteen wives who are each ALSO queens in charge of their own large regions and personal demense, all of whom are having children in numbers mortals can never handle.
It's all the fun parts of CK2 plus sex-with-superhuman-stamina plus superpowers plus cute dates with thirteen hot chicks. (Yes, I count the cute dates and hot sex as different perks.)
I can't see getting bored for... like, ever.
>>53731263
Didn't realize Scarlatina would be the hardest to convince. Huh. Ah, well, if I HAD to choose one... it would be Best Saber, but Scarlatina is a close second.

>> No.53732637
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53732637

>>53732554

Man, I don't know. I'm just a nerd on the Internet...

>> No.53732653

>>53732581
>I can't see getting bored for... like, ever.
Whatever by disease, iron or accidents, your waifus will one by one eventually die and so will your children, until only kin you have left are grandchildren so removed that any resemble to you or your waifu has more to do with coincidence than genetics.

>> No.53732709

>>53732653
What aren't they immortal also? Also can't we make our whole kingdom immortal?

>> No.53732726

>>53732653
...wait, they CAN be killed after I become king? That changes my calculations slightly...

...because that means marrying my Great(x)-grandchildren, because the goal is to literally go Ghengis Khan up in here and eventually be the common ancestor of every single person in this fantasy kingdom.

>> No.53732769
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53732769

>>53732637

>demon with demonic magic
>respawn
>media

>magical defense
>remarkable looks
>temptation
>human form
>illusion
>unseen force
>paralysis

>nocturnal
>religion

Basically be a succubus who feeds on lonely people who visit my website. Pretty much lure them with sexy succubus bait and then terrorize them to feed on their fear. Temptation will make sure people keep finding my site.

>> No.53732795

>>53732769
you don't wanna get caught making references like that around here, anon

>> No.53732820

>>53732309
Angelica is the least popular? but how? she loves slaying dragons and shit that is fucking metal

>> No.53732921

Will Italics ever make new original content or is it eternal updates of old cyoas?

>> No.53732926

>>53732820
because she's retarded and that's basically all she wants

wasted character potential

>> No.53732933
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53732933

>>53731896

>> No.53732943

>>53732820
As someone who didn't pick Angelica, she's very close to an ideal girl for me. She just seemed quite a bit too pushy and maybe even desperate for me. I'd quite like to go on adventures with her, but for her it seems like an obsession. She seems incapable of considering any other topic and wants to go non-stop. I'm not a non-stop kinda guy. Not even in a lazy NEET kinda way (although, yeah kinda). There's just more to life, and relaxation is great.

>> No.53732944
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53732944

>>53732769

I swear that somebody makes this build every time I post that cyoa...

>> No.53732945

>>53732820
Yeah, who doesn't wanna fuck Angelica on top of the hoard of a dragon we slayed together, both of us still slightly sticky with its blood?
"And that, son, is how you were conceived. We'd just slayed the dragon, so we fucked in celebration atop all its treasures. Here, take one of them! It's a neat magic sword. It kept sticking into your mom's hip while I was ploughing her."

>> No.53732952

>>53732795

References like what?

>> No.53732992

>>53732945
And with that i just got another fetish

>> No.53733106

>>53732944
It's Angel. Just hide her.

>> No.53733173

>>53732992
Now to see if Suri can transform into a dragon and convince Angelica to LAY the dragon... while I watch.

>> No.53733191

>>53733173
Oh my...

>> No.53733253

>>53733106
>hide someone who doesn't namefag

>> No.53733261

>>53733191
Unrelated, ZBG has pointed out that Vignette can go all Evil Dead with the plants and roots and stuff. All one needs to do is teach her to tentacle rape one of the other girls... actually, I imagine that's like, item 3 on Scarlatina's "corrupt Vignette" plan.

>> No.53733268

>>53732637
Form: Spirit; electronic interference

Immortality: Respawn

Location: Nature

Powers

Illusion
Insanity
Trapped
Voices
Magical defense
Mind control
Presence

Weaknesses: Nocturnal and rare material

>> No.53733292

>>53733173
Convince Suri to transform into the hoard

>> No.53733306

>>53732637
Can you pick a power more than once to stack it?

>> No.53733317

>>53732637
>Spirit(Possession)
>Regeneration
>Artifact


>Illusion
>Mind Control
>Magical Defense
>Pursuit
>Temptation
>Unseen Force
>Voices

>Rare Material
>True Name

>Some poor schmuck finds my artifact, takes it home
>Has a sudden inexplicable run of good luck(Masterminded by me possessing and mind-controlling people)
>One day, he hears a mysterious voice, asking recompense for his recent successes
>If he agrees, start off asking for small sacrifices and eventually ramp it up to the point where he'll have to start hurting others or seriously damage himself just to keep his luck going and past that point start demanding human lives in sacrifice
>If he refuses, immediately turn all the good shit I've been doing for him around, again starting small but eventually ramping up to the point where I'm mind-controlling/possessing people around him to harm him or themselves.
>By the time he goes crazy or dies, I should have enough fear stored up to just wait it out 'til the next poor schmuck finds my artifact and is tempted to take it home

I'd probably watch an actual horror movie like this, are there any?

>> No.53733346
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53733346

>>53732581
>Didn't realize Scarlatina would be the hardest to convince.
I mainly saved her for last because I want to be prepared considering I unintentionally made Alchemy ridiculously powerful in the setting.
The reason she'd probably be the hardest convince is based mainly on myself. I absolutely hate the idea of sharing my lover with anyone and would probably murder the shit out of anyone who tried. So with that in mind, I wrote her as being pretty fucking possessive and not liking the idea of sharing you at all.
>Best Saber
There's so much good taste in this thread.
>>53732653
>>53732709
>>53732726
Your wife does gain "Perfect Immortality" along with you.
Same situation as you inheriting their powers.
>>53732820
I mean >>53731675 flat out compared her to Cersei fucking Lannister, so he must really not fucking like her.
She's nowhere near my favorite waifu I've written, but I never see her picked.
>>53732926
Well, that's just mean...
>>53732943
I can see your point here. I wrote her a with the intention of making her fairly genki and kind of immature.
Well, I did when I rewrote her anyway...
Let's all try to forget about her first draft.

>>53732945
...why the fuck is that so hot?
>>53732992
I know what you mean.
>>53733173
I applaud your creativity. Little much for me though...
>>53733261
>item 3 on Scarlatina's "corrupt Vignette" plan
>implying Scarlatina would put something that hardcore on step 3 of what is most likely an at leas 25 step plan

>> No.53733357

>>53733261
>Corrupt Vignette
I am conflicted now

>> No.53733376

>>53733261
I like to imagine telling Vignette how to use vines to tie up the other girls in a more 'effective' manner during the War, and then watching her innocent face as she wonders why they're squirming so much in their bondage.

>> No.53733390

>>53733346
So can you marry the whole kingdom to give everyone immortality?

>> No.53733399

>>53733346
You have no idea what the next 22 steps are like. Be afraid of what you created. Be very afraid.

>> No.53733407

>>53733306

Unless it is explicitly forbade then you can...

>> No.53733431

>>53733106

Rude.

>> No.53733458

>>53733346
I would like to point out that I made the Cersei comparison because she seems very power hungry, wants to be a warrior, is convinced of her own beauty (and let's be fair, she's not wrong), considers her subordinates incompetent and is blonde. I don't hate her or think she's evil because I don't hate Cersei or think she's evil. I pity her, more than anything else, which is how I feel about Angelica. Then again, Cersei doesn't want to sex me up, so I suppose pity quickly turns into a stronger aversion, which may have given the impression of hatred.

>> No.53733493

>>53733346
How does Talisa's shapeshifting ability compare to Suri's? Does 'animals' extend to birds, insects and mythical creatures like dragons? Or is she furries only? Can she change size?

>> No.53733524
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53733524

>>53732637
>Spirit with possession
>Regeneration
>Person

>Magical Defense
>Strength
>Unseen Force
>Speed
>Paralysis
>Illusion
>Elemental magic: Fire

>True name
>Rare material

I am a spirit who possesses individuals and then sacrifices nearly the entire area of control to maximize my hosts power, after taking control thats when things become a slasher film and I go around torturing and maiming people with my hosts body spreading fear and havoc until the police or someone else puts them down. Then I just find a new host and the whole process repeats again. All I need to be careful about is to avoid my host being killed with the rare material or my true name being discovered and getting banished and keep moving the locations I do my anarchy sprees to minimize that chance.

And maybe every now and then I will return consciousness and control to my host right after some of the more malicious actions and let them see what they have done, just to spice things up.

>> No.53733573

>>53733253
She usually uses the same images with the same filenames for her reposted builds, so it's not at all difficult.

>> No.53733597

>>53733346
>There's so much good taste in this thread.
>...why the fuck is that so hot?
>I applaud your creativity. Little much for me though...
>item 3 on Scarlatina's "corrupt Vignette" plan
>implying Scarlatina would put something that hardcore on step 3 of what is most likely an at leas 25 step plan
I'm gonna have to write a goddamn CYOA to be allowed to namefag so I can make you realize they're all just me being awesome, aren't I?
But what to make...
>>53733357
>>53733376
Here's my view on the matter: Vignette is young and innocent. She WILL have sex, WILL have children, and the hope for such a delicate beauty is that she enjoys it a great deal. Yes, I expect she'd be shy about it even for years to come, but that's okay. Getting her to blush every time you flirt with her, teasing her by making her stammer out what she wants, specifically, in order to see how shy she is, and finally gently playing over her body until she's in heaven? Sounds like fun. But eventually she'd get used to it, and it'd be normal for her. I doubt Scarlatina would succeed to the extent she plans, but I definitely bet she'd eventually understand exactly why the other girls start squirming when she starts the tentacle bondage. She'd just be hiding behind me and squeaking when a pair of the other wives start making out during a foursome.

>> No.53733611

>>53733346
>>53733597
Also, speaking of the picture: Hail the empress! Also, hail her adorable panty shot!

>> No.53733625

>>53733597
I dislike you immensely.

>> No.53733634

>>53733458
Anyone who thinks any comparison to Cersei is only an insult is an idiot to begin with.

>> No.53733635

>>53733625
This

>> No.53733740

>>53733573
that would be like filtering SDA based on reaction faces

>> No.53733751
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53733751

>>53733346
>Your wife does gain "Perfect Immortality" along with you.
Previous King's wife died, no?

>IMMORTALITY IS ONLY A WORD. ALL THAT EXISTS CAN DIE. EVERY LIVING THING HAS A WEAPON AGAINST WHICH IT HAS NO DEFENSE. TIME. DISEASE. IRON. GUILT.

>> No.53733801

>>53733751
Oh it is you again

>> No.53733828

>>53733801
?

>> No.53733856
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53733856

>>53733346
>...why the fuck is that so hot?

Marriage and baby-making are wonderful things.

>> No.53733904

>>53733828
I remember you talking about entropy decay and shit also
>Letting entropy to win instead tell it to fuck off

>> No.53733942

>>53733856
The real challenge will be to get Gwen and Gracia pregnant at the same time. I wonder if they ovulate on the same days...

>> No.53733978

>>53733904
Wasn't me.
Coaxmetal's pretty memorable character tho so I'm not surprised if it has come up before when talking about immortality and/or entropy.
Never gave him the cube personally, altho he's not completely wrong about what he talks about.

>> No.53733985
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53733985

>>53733407
Neat.
>>53732637
>Form:
Brute - Unlimited Endurance
>Immortality:
Rebirth
>Location:
Person
>Powers:
Durability x2
Magical Defense
Speed
Strength x2
Vanishing
>Weakness:
Nemesis
Hunter

Pic related, sans goofy skull kneepads.

>> No.53733994

>>53733978
Oh

>> No.53734003

>>53732637
>Beastman (Fish Version, don't care which power)

>Respawn

>Ancient Monument

>Cult
>Durability
>Magical Defense
>Paralysis
>Presence
>Pursuit
>Temptation

>Common Material (Glass)

>> No.53734018

>>53734003
>a fish that is defeated by glass
Into the aquarium you go.

>> No.53734049

>>53734018
>a fishman who is defeated by glass
Have fun getting me in there.

>> No.53734142
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53734142

>>53733390
No. If they're not at least minor nobles, they won't resonate with the Royal Blood.
>>53733399
>pic related
>>53733458
>considers her subordinates incompetent
I'm not sure how you got that impression, but I didn't intend to imply that. She's just the kind of girl that likes to take care of things herself rather than letting others take the burden.
And okay, I see your point when you put it like that. To be fair, I just pretty much despise almost every single character in the A Song of Ice and Fire series.
>>53733493
Talisa can turn herself into anything from the size of small bird to the size of a dragon. Excluding insects, if it can be considered an animal, she can turn into it. Though she prefers turning into mammals because she likes to be fuzzy.
As far as Suri goes... She can pretty much make herself look like anything she can imagine. It should be noted though that while Tali literally turns into animals, Suri only makes it look like she's something else. She can fool the other senses just as easily so you can touch her without your hand going through her arm or something, but she's only wearing a kind of "fae costume."
Maybe after at least of a century of being together, she'll let you see her true form. But that would make you the first person to ever see a fae's actual appearance, so I wouldn't count on it.
Which is less about trust and more about her nature as a fae.
They're whimsical and shit.
>>53733597
I'm sorry for not realizing, Anon! It's difficult to pick out an individual in these threads without a name or distinct style of writing. I do love you now if that is all you, though.
And I like the way you think about Vignette and sex. She's still pretty young, so I could see her coming into her own over the years.
>>53733634
Well, fuck you too, guy.
>>53733751
>Previous King's wife died
The last King was never married.

>> No.53734153
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53734153

>>53732637
>Everyman
>Regeneration
>Island

>Unbound; Alignment of the planets counting Pluto
>Voices
>Temptation
>Vanishing
>Illusion
>Infectious
>Cult
100 or so is loyal for my plans. I'll have them build a party/spa resort to lure in college kids and honeymooners. Their I will steal their sanity and turn them into my followers to be sent back out into the world as my envoys. Preparing it for my return. I guess the island can have a couple small towns for tourist sites, but I'll make sure they don't scare them away.

>Rare Material
Wood of a tree that someone was hung on.
>Nocturnal

I am the Eldritch Man. On my Island is where I am.
A place for college kids to come and play, I do hope you enjoy your stay.
Come visit my resort, I'll hear no retort.
At the end of the day, I'll drag you away.
A part of the Mad Family you will be, and one day I shall walk free.

>> No.53734212

>>53730432
I like it!

>> No.53734237

>>53734142
And now i want to see suri "naked" i bet she looks cute

>> No.53734253

>>53734237
I mean more than likely it's horrifying, but in a way that's cute after you've been married over a century.

>> No.53734275

>>53734253
Nonsense there is no way that suri looks horrifying

>> No.53734279
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>>53734142
>The last King was never married.
I'm remembering that the reason you gave for last king deciding to die is because his wife died but maybe I'm just remembering wrong.

>> No.53734305

>>53733346
Why
I made my personal goal to hate all namefags, and you are a fucking tripfag as well. Why must you be so fucking likeable.


>>53728798
Since you asked for it, waifu tier list.
Original build: Pick Beauty, HUD and Domination; turn the war into a dating show and on each date insert suggestions that makes them happy when obeying my will. Then declare everyone the winner because I am the rules and happy harem end. Afterwards, a couple of months to settle down as a King and learn the basic ropes, putting each girl who wants in a good place

Tier list:
Waifu: Gwendolying and Gracia
SS: Suri, Scarlatina
Greatest: Abirathi, Luciana, Angelica, Lizzette
Great: Catherine, Talissa, Cassandra
Meh, but cool enough: Virginette, Persephone

Cassandra: Cute, reliable and sexy. But honestly, she feels a tad bland both in powers and personality compared to the other girls. Oficial army commander tho.
Talissa: 100% bully material, would tease constantly. Not fond of animals unfortunately. Cute Imouto to take along for the most part.
Vignette: I just wanna hold her and take care of her, but she seems more daughter to me than a wife unfortunately. Group daughteru for everyone to tease and teach, but probably end up sending her with Catherine most of the time.
Lizette:
Abirathi: Mixed feelings, but the idea of showing her the other world is adorable. A mixture between a dork, a devoted wife and a strong fighters is better than expected. Probably another travel companions to explore Zodiac.
Gwendolyn and Gracia: YES! I blind picked them back when you were posting WIPs and builds started showing up. Perfect girls, perfect everything, and they compliment my entire "Let's turn the war into a dating contest" plan that you approved. Best girls, best sign.
Angelica: Best travel partner, and mostly because of her and Abiranthy gonna spend between a third and half the time roaming around having adventures. She will still get bullied.

>> No.53734339

>>53734305
Lucianna: Makes me wanna bully her, but she is kind and strong, perfect to make her the diplomatic queen in charge of maintaining most of the country. Probably also spend time learning from her how to do it myself too.
Suri: Adorable, cute, and our first contact in private would be me fulfilling her fantasies. Almost made me regret picking the twins, almost. Personal bodyguard and Spymaster.
Catherine: Cute "christmas cake", 10/10 would give 20 children. She will have to help raise most of the kids of the other girls too tho.
Scarlatina: Yes. Would make her wait as much as possible to give her what she wants, until she breaks down and begs me on her knees. That won't stop me from doing it very loudly with everyone else until she does so. After that, she is free to do as she pleases, as long as she asks for permission first to me.
Persephone: I... don't really feel like the letter says anything about her other than her hobbies, so I honestly can't say that I like her. No idea about what to do with her honestly. Good taste in clothing tho.

I liked the CYOA very much, don't stop making them.

>> No.53734342

>>53734279
i remeber it being the king died of depression, then the queen died

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Could someone please post the newest version of that Choice of Amenities CYOA?

>> No.53734353

Post cyoas that activate your almonds.

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>>53734353

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>>53734347

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>>53734353

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>>53734373

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>>53734142
>pick Suri
>win the Zodiac War
>Suri shows her true form in the bedroom
>it's the same as normal
>but with a bulge and a flat chest
>mfw

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>>53734403

>> No.53734439

>>53734416
The most horrifying option.

>> No.53734443

>>53734416
Filthy Franku is truly a global treasure.

>> No.53734465

>>53734369
Blue > Black >>>>>>>>>>>>>>> White

Slaves should be the colour of bruises.

>> No.53734511

>>53734379
>Gloryhole
Gay as balls but I have spent many hours carrying heavy furniture up many stairs and that gives plenty of time to think what else I would rather be doing. And who really can turn down stable source of income in today's economy? Also, as long as you are any good at it at all, it's easily day's wages in about hour and you can work at home. Still gay tho.

>Love doll
Emotional fulfillment AND less time spent sleeping. I'm hoping it doesn't murder the cashier at the store I go to.

>Apprenticeship
Despite all warning signs, I feel like this might hopefully lead to something resembling employment. That doesn't involve the gloryhole.

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>>53734511
I like you anon. Willing to do gay shit, but admitting it's gay. Keep it up.

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contributing to this thread with an old favorite

>>53730432
Hey, there are more options here than I remember! Option #4 is some good shit. I'd like to thank the anon who updated this.

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>>53734416
>pick Suri and Vignette
>win the Zodiac War
>Suri shows her true form in the bedroom
>it's the same as normal
>but with a bulge and a flat chest
>Vignette lifts her dress
>a bulge and a flat chest
>mfw

>> No.53734598

Guardian Spirit when

>> No.53734614
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More Cyoas!

>> No.53734633

>>53732553
DLC: you have two moms

>> No.53734687

>>53733634
Agreed, Cersei is a well written character. Now, her waifu qualities are dubious, but if you scrub out her more sociopathic tendencies you end up with an ojou variant. I'd be cool with that.

>> No.53734697 [DELETED] 

>>53734633
get out fujoshit

>> No.53734719

>>53734697
Wouldn't it be two dads?

>> No.53734720

>>53734614
I love this CYOA but the Minor and Moderate powers are pretty much worthless and never picked when the Major Powers are soo powerful.

>> No.53734721

>>53734697
>Fujoshi
>2 moms
Pick one

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>>53734579
>pick Catherine
>win the Zodiac War
>lift up her dress in the bedroom
>it's the same as normal
>but with a bulge that puts most men to shame
>mfw

>> No.53734775

>>53734719
>>53734721
get out reverse fujoshit

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>>53734379
>Wizardchan account
>Grimy note with phone number
Least favorite means the last monster girl that's my favorite before getting to monster girls I hate. Words motherfucker.
>Meme Machine
I will manipulate this into getting dumps to actual magic so I can learn more pratical wizard shit
>Five Year Apprenticeship
Let's fuck shit up.

>> No.53734791

>>53734775
No

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>>53734775

Does this offend you?

>> No.53734826

>>53734142
So nobles are genetically superior? And the peasants have no powers?

>> No.53734842

>>53734810
No. I like swimsuits like that because they cover my waifu's hairy snatch.

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>>53734770
>Pick Oriadne
>Win the Zodiac War
>Tease off his knickers in the bedroom
>It's the same as normal
>But the bulge was just an enormous puffy vulva

>> No.53734953

>>53729183
>your power will make gods cower
How strong are we talking?

>> No.53734964

>>53734614
Elemental control; sound(3)
Telepath (6)
Superhuman speed (9)
Superhuman senses (12)
Superhuman mind (15)
Superhuman strength (18)
Superhuman durability (21)
Superhuman healing (24)
Danger sense (25)

>> No.53735110

>>53731664
>The King gets all twelve elixirs at a much higher potential.
I'm so accustomed to not get all the stuff a CYOA offers that I totally forgot this.

>>53732309
>Also, you naturally begin to develope your wife/wives' hereditary skill as you grow closer and your love deepens.
I like the idea of getting the hereditary skills. Not so sure about the king's power up; makes sprout too many questions, like why a king with so much knowledge and analysis capacity would create such a war-like contest for his hand in marriage.
Btw, the lifespane x5 (B-03 Vitality) never comes into play.

>>53734416
>I cannot lie, I would a fuck guy(female.)
>>53732309
>>53734579
can this be true, please?

>> No.53735114

>>53733346
Also let me just say, I'll always regret not being in the thread where you asked which picture you should use for the Pisces girl. Everyone but one guy chose the clearly worst one.

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>>53734279
>the reason you gave for last king deciding to die is because his wife died
Fuck! You're right! This is why I should actually write this stuff down.
>>53734305
I'm sorry. I never meant to be a tripfag, but some motherfucker was pretending to be me claimed I was making fujoshibate and I refuse to have anyone use my name to spread such lies.
>turn the war into a dating show
Okay, now I want to see this shit...
>Lizette:
Was that left blank intentionally or...?
>Scarlatina:
>until she breaks down and begs me on her knees.
You would not be waiting long.
Also, why do you want to bully everyone?
And don't worry, you guys wouldn't let me stop even if I wanted to.
>>53734416
>Implying Suri's true form would be anywhere near that simple
Don't have a specific image in mind, but I think of her as being sort or overwhelmingly beautiful, but so different from anything you've ever seen before that you can't really describe her. Not eldritch, just very, very... different.
>>53734598
After the one I'm making with Celt.
So probably about a month.
>>53734826
Yes.
>>53734579
>>53734770
Oriadne can help you achieve these dreams.
>>53734862
>Oriadne
>The Court's Head Alchemist
She(male) could wip up a potion to change her(male) as easily as you make chocolate milk even if that was the case.
>>53734953
>gods cower
I don't know how to make it any clearer than that...

>> No.53735183

>>53735171
>She(male) could wip up a potion to change her(male) as easily as you make chocolate milk even if that was the case.
It's a joke you mong

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>>53735183

>> No.53735229

>>53735171
I don't know, unbearable beauty sounds pretty eldritch to me. Her unbearable charm, her unbearable smile that lingers for a while ...

>> No.53735275

>>53735171
>I'd never make fujoshibait
>makes traps
Also, wait, I thought Guardian Spirit was the one you were making with Celt?
Shit. I really wish you'd hurry up. I don't think I'll be around in a month.

>> No.53735344

>>53735275
rip

>> No.53735366

>>53731013
The one negative thing I have to say about this CYOA is that it's pretty easy to get just about everything I want. The hard decision making came down to which Boon I wanted and fiddling over the exact final numbers on my defences. The simplest way to "fix" this, if that's even something you desire, would be to just remove the Dauntless Cruiser. It seems to too easily let you fit everything on one ship and it would be more challenging if people who wanted a ship in that role had to choose between two Sword Frigates or a stripped down Lunar Cruiser. Again, I don't actually know that that would be a better design for you and I am biased as the Dauntless perfectly suited my wants.

>Warrant
No Warrant

>Hulls
Dauntless Cruiser

>Crew Type
Naval Veterans

>Armaments and Defences
Macrocannon Battery
Combat Hangar
Powered Hull Plates x11
Extra Point-Defences
Heavy Void Shield x2

>Other Ship Systems
Warp Shield
High Power Auger
Auger Screen
Fitted Crew Quarters
Guard Regiment x3
Palace Fortress
Cloning Vats
Ministorum Temple
Luxury Yacht

>Personal Purchases
Juvenant Gland
Combat Augmentation
Cogitation Implant
Battle Harem x2
Gene-sculpting

>Boon
Sainthood

Ship Stats:
Acceleration: 4g
Hull Toughness: 25+11
Shield Strength: 12
Weapons: Macrocannon Battery Forward, Combat Hangar Side, 3 Free Side
Power Output: 3 Remaining

The main thing I'm going for with my initial purchases is survivability. That includes crew survival/replaceability with the crew quarters and cloning vats and religious defense with the temple and my sainthood. Not technically having a warrant is a bit of an issue but I'm hoping to lean on the fact that *everybody* knows I *should* have one and who's gonna stop a charming Hero of the Imperium like me?

Only one boon seems super harsh because there's a lot of them I would really like to have, but it does fit in with my earlier argument in favor of stricter choices. But I'll miss the Power Armour, The Xeno, and the Adepta Sororitas.

>> No.53735370

>>53735275
Don't worry comrade, where you are going, the cyoas are real there.

>> No.53735384

>>53735171
>Was that left blank intentionally or...?
Whoops. She was something among the lines of "sexy, crazy and fun and in charge of entertainment for the entire kingdom"
And bullying is something I must do, I there is something about making people conflicted, her bodies and their minds sending them mixed signals as they find themselves out of control as something takes over them, regardless of what emotion takes over. I don't really hurt anyone, but if it comes close to that I'll reward the good little girls that can handle some rough love.
Also sexual bullying is best fetish.
Also, making girls pout, angry and offended is too cute.

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>>53735275
>I don't think I'll be around in a month.
Rip

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>>53735110
>why a king with so much knowledge and analysis capacity would create such a war-like contest for his hand in marriage
He was called the "Eccentric" for a reason. Motherfucker was bonkers.
>Btw, the lifespane x5 (B-03 Vitality) never comes into play
I know, that's been pointed out countless times. I plan to fix it when I eventually get around to fixing all the spelling errors and missing words too.
>can this be true, please?
Oriadne.
Alchemy is ridiculous.
Also
>fuck a guy(female)*
I never noticed how much I fucked up that statement.
>>53735114
Really? The majority seemed to think it was too aggressive and I like both personally. But that may just be because I love that character's design.
>>53735183
I don't believe in jokes.
They're nothing but fairytales.
>>53735229
I just meant she's not some crazy tentacle monster.
>>53735275
>fujoshibait=traps
I have no words for how deeply I disagree with this.
No, the one I'm working on with Celt is the one that I've posted little snippets of Chinese Waifu previews for.
And try to come back soon Anon. I'll miss you.
>>53735384
I do not condone bullying.
But the way you describe it is kind of hot...

>> No.53735483

>>53735370
Amen.

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>>53735542
another version, this one with more typical classes

>> No.53735601

>>53735464
>I do not condone bullying.
But think about it. To truly bully someone without hurting them, you must understand them, you need to know them even better than themselves. Then, you start to push their buttons slowly, making body, mind and morals/pride/desires clash against eachother, you slowly mold them to your like. They learn how to act in a way you like, and when you reward them they start to enjoy being bullied, since they know they will be rewarded if they survive... And that slowly turns into enjoying the bullying act on it's own, since they can feel all the emotion, time and attention you pour into every bit of them in order to understand them, take care of them, and make them happy. And there is always a new way to bully someone, but since it comes from a place of mutual love, they are comfortable showing their weakness, showing the most hidden parts of their own selves. No girl, or even waifu, is a boring slate, and they all have small things inside of them that require a lot of trust and time to even think they exist... Except when you bully, because since you constantly push buttons you can easily find the ones that lead you to learning more and more... And how to push those same buttons better and better.

Bullying is loving

>> No.53735653

>>53735464
>responds to literally every Zodiac Bride comment
>except my build
I feel like I'm in elementary school again but I am a little bit jealous.

>> No.53735700

can it be posted on blue boards? Doesn't have nipples or genitals but has like 3 bare butts
>>>/d/7470207

>> No.53735736

>>53728798
Strength, Vitality and Skill should make me a formidable force on the battlefield. Nothing to fancy.
>>53729079
Cassandra: Ehh, I am not a fan of femdom or stick in the muds 3/10
Talisa: Much better, likeable, interesting powers and who does not like cowgirls ? 7/10
Vignette: Really, really cute, activates all my protective instincts 8/10
>>53729100
Lizette: Not appealing, I do not quite know why 2/10
Abirathi: Interesting region and hot, I am not quite sold on the personality though 6/10
Gwendolyn/Gracia: Quirky and likeable, but they feel a little standard as far as twins go 6/10
>>53729115
Angelica: Endearing as fuck, cool region and the horns and blond/white colors make her adoreable 9/10
Lucianna: Nice, but bland 4/10
Suri: Sounds great, plus awesome power 9/10
>>53729172
Catherine: Comfy,sexy and nurturing 9/10
Scarlatina: Hot and yandere done right 9,5/10
Persephone: Endearing, unique and twintails 9,5/10
No clear winner here, but the West Brides are generally the best. I would try to get together with Persephone and Catherine, I think they would compliment each other really nicely, maybe also Suri and Angelica, Scarlatina could become a problem though.

>> No.53735758

I want to make CYOAs for different kinds of complex systems. A CYOA where you're a human, a cyoa where you're just a neuron, a cyoa where you're a tulpa, a cyoa where you're a computer, a cyoa where you're an entire civilization, etc.

http://lesswrong.com/lw/mb0/agency_is_bugs_and_uncertainty/

http://www.meltingasphalt.com/neurons-gone-wild/

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>>53735758

>> No.53735941

>>53729202
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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>>53732637
>>53732637
>Spirit Form, Possession variant.
>Replacement Immortality.

>Single Person Haunt

>Durability
>Magical Defense
>Speed
>Strength
>Vanishing
>Refuge
>Extra Sustenance (Elation)

I am a legacy of sorts; an unbroken line of warriors, terrors, and would-be heroes each in turn. I feed on the fears of those who I've granted my powers, and on my host's own appreciation of the newfound joys of wrath and vindication.

Of course, it is a Chain of hosts; each was able to usurp the previous owner's hold on my contract. I can grant a great deal of opportunity and ability, but at the end of the day I'm not particularly picky about who acts as my client.

>Very Specific Victims
Those who my Host has seen fit to intimidate and terrorize, as well as the Host themselves.

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>>53735601
>pic related
Stop it, anon...
I don't need any more fetishes that are so hard to satisfy...
>>53735653
Wait, I missed you? I'm sorry anon! Which one was yours? I'll make sure to give you my thoughts!
>>53735736
I like your Elixir picks. Fairly simple theory, but you could become ridiculously powerful based on how you use it.
>Angelica
>9/10
She's getting a lot of love this thread! I'm happy for her.
>the West Brides are generally the best
Well, I'm really fucking glad you think so! Those were the last ones I wrote so I was worried I'd be burning out on good personalities by then. Seems my waifus only got better with time!
>>53735941
You... Uh... You okay, anon?

>> No.53736053

>>53735464
Could we try to make Zodiac into a communist paradise?

>> No.53736058

>>53729172
>using a young girl for the "old woman" choice
As much as I like DIANA, Persephone is better.
Though I'll be the absolute madman and try for the all 12 route.
Also, Knowledge-Skill-Vitality.

>> No.53736110

>>53736053
Sure. You can try, but it won't be real communism.

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>>53735987

ZBG, Suri says in her letter that she has been stalking you for a while and is there with you and Sebas.
Is there any way to contact her before the war starts?

>> No.53736139

>>53735700
I would say no.

>> No.53736180

>>53728798
>Elixirs
M-06
M-07
S-11
For perfect control of everything going on around me.
>>53729079
>Cassandra
While femdom is not my thing, I like a practical woman, and she seems like she'd be capable at governance. I think she'd be capable of taking my ideas and making them viable. On top of all that, I enjoy talking with intellectuals.
>Tali
I don't really like being around animals, so that's a 'no'. Nothing against the girl though, seems like a cool person. I'll try and make sure she doesn't get killed.
>Vignette
Not really selling it to me. Being out in nature is unsettling to me, and she's not leader material. That said, I'm straight up telling whichever girl I go with that Vignette is allowed to sit out, or I'm out.
>>53729100
>Lizette
Kill it with fire.
>Abirathi
Irresponsible personality would chafe with mine. Too careless and impulsive. I think if I get to her soon enough, though, I can talk her out of this. Being Queen seems like something that would just get in the way of her adventures.
>G & G
It was all well and good until they started planning to blast destructive storm magic around MY city. Not happening.

This entire page are high priority targets.
>>53729115
>Angelica
Way too self-centered and sure of herself. I don't like immature brats. That said, she sounds like a decent person, so she's on my good list.

>> No.53736195

>>53730502
I'd choose time cop, but I want to prove a human space cop can fuck anything.

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>>53736110


>>53735987
>Which one was yours?
>>53732224

>> No.53736205

>>53736180
>Lucianna
So far the only competition to Cassandra. Her 'interests' align the most with mine, and she's both responsible and driven. The fact that the people she already rules approve of her is another plus.
>Suri
Her friendship with psycho up there is an immediate warning sign, even without the obsessive stalking. On top of that, I don't trust fae. They're too fickle and alien.
I'm going to have to keep an eye on this one.
>>53729172
>Cathy
Very likeable as a person, but I'm not into cougars, and I don't want more than one or two kids. I feel like we'd both be happier with other people, and she's only set on me because of tradition.
>Scarlatina
I don't like yanderes, and she's only really interested in fucking. Obsession isn't love. She's at the top of the take-down list, beside Lizette.
>Sephy
She's very likeable, and she has low self-esteem, so it makes me feel bad that I don't really like her.

The only real competition here is between Lucianna and Cassandra. It's a tough choice, but Cassandra is my final pick. We can be cynical sticks in the mud together.

>> No.53736214

>>53735987
Thanks, I figured Vitality is the most important, it does not matter what powers you have when your knocked out and as long as you can stay in the fight there is a chance that things will turn to your advantage. Strength and Skill do not seem all that useful individually but they enhance each others usefulness exponentially.

>> No.53736235

>>53735878
Something wrong, bucko?

>> No.53736306

>>53736110
Why won't it be real communism?

>> No.53736314

>>53735987
Just picture yourself, and the girl you wanna bully. You enjoy making her conflicted, when she tries to push you away when you bully but not enough to really push you away. Then you have two options, either keep going until she either gives in, or her frustration takes over and she walks away on her own. And the second option, only leads to you compensating her, with she guilty of making you work this hard to make her happy because of her silly emotions. So with time, she will either give in, or tell you to stop, in her heart hoping you push her harder and harder until she can ask whatever she wants from you without guilt.

And then, day after day, the bullying becomes a small routine, where you get your stress off and she gets rewarded, either for giving you the reaction you want which are all of them or for taking pride in whatever it is you are teasing her with, growing and showing the true colors she kept deep inside of her. And the routine keeps going, to the point she looks forwards to the time you will bully her next, since she knows one way or another you will make her happy.

You can even spice it up! If you feel she is being too strict, when she pushes you away you leave her, saying any phrase that leaves her with a bit of guilt inside of her heart. She will say she is sorry, and only ask you to be gentler when you bully her... Or she won't say anything, letting the guilt grow with each day you don't bully her until she comes to you and says that she was sorry and to not pull away form her so much... And she loves everything you do to her regardless of what her pride, body or whatever it is, that deep in her heart there is a love that just is crazy about you. So never stop teasing her, so she knows how much attention you pay her, and how much of her you wanna see.

That's why being bulliable is a top tier waifu quality.

>> No.53736406

>>53736314
I never knew there could be taste this patrician!

>> No.53736409

>>53729172
Scarlatina is totally down with drugging the other competitors and turning them into my harem, right?

>> No.53736426

>>53734373
Money, Tier 3
Health, Tier 3
Soul, Tier 3
Bodymorph, Tier 1
Powers, Tier 2

The last one is all that's strictly necessary, though, because "omnipotent" is a word and there's no rule against writing things on yourself.

TLDR become God

>> No.53736451

>>53732152
Shota is good

>> No.53736668

>>53734142
Wasn't lying, and not your fault for not knowing.
>I do love you now
Feeling's mutual, if platonic as hell manly "go out and drink beers like men" love is your thing.

Now it's time to think... what sort of CYOA hasn't been well served? Hell, what do I want to do? Also, shit, I suck at this kind of art. Put me behind a camera and it's a different story, but I'm a writer, not a graphic artist.

>> No.53736762

>>53728798
Well, since I have to fight for my future queen, Grace (B-02), Vitality (B-03), and Beauty (B-04) would be my best bet. It's only fair if we fight together that I can pick up some slack.
Now THIS was a hard choice.
It came down to Cassandra, Vignette, or Catherine.
I couldn't say no to such a sweet girl like Vignette.
All in all, this was hands down the best CYOA I've played. I'm excited to see your future works.

>> No.53736790

>>53736762
I dunno, I'd say the awesome genie one that gets more disturbing the longer you think is better, but this one's definitely second place!

>> No.53736867

>>53736762
Why pick only one? Choose the suitors you want and discard the others. You're the king.

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>>53736053
...Probably? But why would you want to?
>>53736058
>Implying that is in anyway a faithful depiction of Diana
I like your choices! Between your Knowledge and Skill, I'd like to see how you can improve how you can improve her Autos!
Also, Luna>Diana.
>>53736136
Considering she left after writing her letter, unfortunately no.
The real question is: What the hell was she pretending to be in your room? Or, she wasn't disguised, where was she hiding?
>>53736180
I don't think I've ever actually seen that Elixir combination before. You're going to be a powerhouse, just make sure you don't let them get too close to you!
>>53736205
I haven't seen Cassandra picked in a while.
>"ALL HAIL KING AND QUEEN NO FUN ALLOWED!"
>>53736200
>Those Elixirs
You're going to be a glorious motherfucking King. Like, too bright to look directly at glorious.
>Cassandra
Wow, two in one thread! I also like how you're the first person to ever call them by their full names.
By the way, the Houses all accept the results of the War and if you wind up marrying other girls besides the winner, they'll be a tad put off, but they'll respect your decisions. Though the boons and gifts would definitely endear you to them all the quicker.
I really like how you're approaching this whole thing.
You have a really distinct personality in your descriptions and I could absolutely see you as a King.
Really easily come to think of it...
Hold on, are you...?
>pic related
>>53736214
A while ago someone brought up how anime the whole CYOA is and pointed out the MC taking Vitality would explain how harem protagonists always seem to survive ridiculous amount of punishment.
It makes even more sense in this setting than most, so I always approve of people taking it.
>>53736314
Stop it, Anon! I'm doing shit. I don't have time to fap!
>>53736409
Yes. As is Oriadne.
>>53736668
Holy shit that was you?
I remember you! Glad to see you're still around.

>> No.53737004

>>53736912
I'll stop when you admit that bullying is one of the best ways to show affection!

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>>53736668
Also, yes. We share a manly love like brothers. Wouldn't dream of trying to come between you and your waifus.
>I'm a writer, not a graphic artist
So am I. I just dicked around enough with Paint.net that I was able to make something vaguely resembling good looking.
Follow your heart in terms of what to make. Zodiac Brides was just a weird idea I had a long time ago because I degenerate who thinks the idea of a bunch of superpowered waifus fighting to the death over me is fucking hot.
Make what you want to make. If you try your best, I'm sure it'll be great regardless of how it looks!
>>53736762
>hands down the best CYOA I've played
>>53736790
>but this one's definitely second place!
I... I feel so loved...
>>53737004
>one of the best ways to show affection
What... What are the other best ways?

>> No.53737209

>>53737149
Saying 'I love you' when they finally give in from all your bullying as a reward.
I love you.

>> No.53737230

>>53736912
>You're going to be a powerhouse, just make sure you don't let them get too close to you!
With Perception that won't be easy for them to do. I think Scarlatina is the most dangerous in this situation, since she could create knockout gas, and probably make it undetectable. I can't use my powers if I'm in dreamland.

In any other situation where someone tries to restrain me, I could just use telekinesis to disassemble their arms on molecular level. And then reassemble them if they're someone I like.

>"ALL HAIL KING AND QUEEN NO FUN ALLOWED!"
It's not my fault they're having fun wrong.

>> No.53737261

>>53737209

gay

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>>53737209
>pic related
>>53737230
>I could just use telekinesis to disassemble their arms on molecular level
Words can describe how scared I am that you were able to type that so matter-of-factly.
That's fucking brutal, man.
I never even realized, but you could totally pull that off.

>> No.53737362

>>53737004
'Strong teasing' would probably be a better name. Bullying just sounds ... unfortunate. Like you'd dunk her in the dumpster or something.

>> No.53737367

>>53737261
Not if he wears a skirt

>> No.53737397

>>53737367

still gay

>> No.53737414
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>>53728798
>Elixirs
B-03 Vitality
M-06: Skill
S-09: Magic

Going with the mystery box for Oriadne. I wouldn't take all the injections because of the risks (maybe take one extra, beauty or knowledge). All of the other girls would have similar trouble but Oriadne created the elixirs that gave me powers and also I know it's a power grab but so would marrying any other girl. It's not in his best interest to tell about his fibs or betray me because it throws out all of his plans and screw him out of everything he's worked for. The only problem would be that he could betray me after winning the war sure but by that time I would have researched countermeasures to his shit if I suspected foul play or fucked him silly to the point he couldn't live without my cock. Since he has potion knowlege and I have spells I'd gladly turn him into a real girl or even a futa to fuck him silly while he fucks another one of the girls I've defeated.
>>53734416
>>53734579
>>53734770
It's like you guys never learned the teachings of the master. Pic related is what anyone should aspire to be in the troubled times of the Zodiac War.

>> No.53737424

>>53737350
Truly creative TK users are terrifying.

>> No.53737488

>>53736912
>Luna>Diana
My man, you have excellent taste.

>> No.53737502

>>53736867
That is a good question. As for my answer, well, this was just my first build. I just wanted to go through and chose one then go through to make my haram build.

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>>53736912
>Hold on, are you...?
>>pic related

Gosh I hope not, but actually now I can totally see how he came through in my writing. I hope to at least be a deal more magnanimous than he is. I'd much rather think of myself as pic related though.

I'm glad to hear the houses will accept my decision pretty easily. Seems like a decently cushy gig, especially with those of my wives who want to help out there helping.

Honestly, I've been thinking and imagining a lot and I kinda want to writefag up a bit about discussing my ideas and preferences with Cassandra in my shitty Accord as we drive to somewhere that I'd rather the War take place. Probably won't ever reach any level of completion but I especially like CYOAs that breed imagination and stories like that. Though, and this is frankly rather disappointing, the more I put my ideas into words the more they sound especially selfish and jealousy-inducing. All my stuff about being King and that being all that matters only counts for a certain amount. It may serve me well to figure out a diplomatic manner of expressing my thoughts instead of being purely matter of fact, though I hope and think Cassandra could understand my wishes well enough. The Beauty elixir will be of some help as well of course.

>> No.53737566

>>53737414
Thats a hot comic.

>> No.53737644
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53737644

Pokemon Personified Plus+ when?

>> No.53737701

>>53737644
I fucking hate skeleposters. You're in every thread.

Piss off

>> No.53737707

>>53737644
Rub your but hole three times fast then cum in the mirror. when you wipe it off the cyoa you desire will be there.

>> No.53737740

>>53737362
But bullying is about doing bad things to the people you love, it's not a good thing. But it's done in such a way, with a certain understanding, that it can lead to good things. And calling it something else will simply detract from the impact, the pleasure of the bully and the conflict of the target. There rush when she says "You are a bully" trying to stop you from going on, and answering with a smile filled with mischievousness "Yes. And you wouldn't have any other way" is one of the biggest reasons for doing it.

>> No.53737741

>>53737707
Skeletons don't have buttholes. Nor do they produce jizz.

Idiot.

>> No.53737765

>>53737701
You know who else are in every thread?

Posters.

>> No.53737778

>>53737741
Then i guess you have our answer

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>>53737765

Go to bed, you're drunk

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>>53737765
Skeletons are far worse then posters.

Skeleton war when?

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>>53737740
Remember, its not bullying if it's done out of love.

>> No.53737836

>>53737817
Skeletons are sexy

>> No.53737855

>>53735590
what if I marry a dead dog at the age of 30? Can't consent none either.

>> No.53737903
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>>53737414
>implying Ori would ever betray you
>implying his love for you isn't the purest of all
>implying he tipped the scales in your favor for any other reason than because he fell in love with you when he started researching the Royal Bloodline
>implying he couldn't have taken power for himself by now if it was all he wanted
>implying he's ever wanted anything else as much as he wants you
>implying he doesn't accept and adore you for who you are
He's sly, scheming, and conniving, but he'd never do anything to actually cause you harm or hurt you
Sorry about the autism.
I get protective of my favorite child.
>>53737488
They're both by waifu-tier voice actresses in the dubs, though.
>>53737559
>Archer's charisma and confidence
>Rider's brave and loyal heart
Like I said, too bright to look directly at. I would gladly follow you into battle, Anon.
>I kinda want to writefag
I'd fucking read it. Don't second guess yourself so, I still think you'll be a glorious King.

>> No.53737927

why is this place so gay

>> No.53737975
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53737975

Yo, I come bearing another piece from my new CYOA. Criticisms and shit welcome before I get back to work.

>> No.53737999

>>53737975
go drink more fuckhead

>> No.53738009

>>53737903
I would have him executed for what he did to the real heir.

>> No.53738020

>>53737975
>Lear
>non-romanceable

I hate you

>> No.53738029

>>53737999
I fucking will ya cunt.

>> No.53738043

>>53738020
Aye, I'm prolly changing him to female romanceable if that helps?

>> No.53738055

>>53738043
I don't give a shit

Make him Bi for all I care

>> No.53738166

>>53736912
>What the hell was she pretending to be in your room? Or, she wasn't disguised, where was she hiding?
In my room, probably "a spider" and "in my closet," respectively. She better hope it was the closet, though. I stomp spiders like a motherfucker. Stick 'em to my shoe on the first stomp, then go outside so I can grind them into the pavement.

>> No.53738168

>>53731640
The Emprah admires the cut of your jib.

>> No.53738260

>>53728798
>Elixirs
B03 - Vitality (long live the king)
M05 - Knowledge (the art of war, psychology, Zodiac history, city planes, arcane lore, etc, etc.)
S09 - Magic (at least a few spells, for control and support)

>Bride
Lucianna - awesome skill, excellent background, assertive, brave, beautiful, charismatic, focused, reliable. Furthermore, her experience leading others and in combat complements my knowledge perfectly. In this war she will be the sword and I will be the shield (vitality + magic, I suppose the other girls don't want to hurt me so a spell to exchange places with Lucianna will mess their táctics).

-Vignette and Catherine. Not too focused on becoming queen and surely not suited for combat. My first objective would be ensure their safety. Also, their personalities make me think they will accept the "harem route" without trouble. Adding a controler and a healer to the team.

-Suri. Similar case to the previous two, except that she can be safe by means of hiding. She would be the spy/explorer of the team. (In my mind she is in fact a boy)

-Persephone. Cute, adorable, lovely, intelligent. After my team take down his automatons I'll ask she to join us.

-Abirathi. I like almost everything about her, and she doesn't have problems with unusual situations; so, harem route please. Damage dealer of the team.

>> No.53738284

>>53737975
>Lear.
>Prior pic was Hazama.
>Current pic is SUSAN.

DEEPEST LORE but what about Terumi?

>> No.53738298
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>>53737903

Pff, everyone knows that Scarlatina and Suri are best ZBG.

>> No.53738352

>>53738284
>tfw picking Lear.
>tfw MUST DIE.

>> No.53738396

>>53737927
go to jumpchain if you want gay

>> No.53738401

>>53738352
>Hear it for the first time.
>Think it's fucking weird and have no idea what the hell is happening.
>Keep listening again and again.
>It's now my favorite song from the series.

I really just want a damned translation already. Parts of the song make him sound almost regretful.

>> No.53738431

>>53737975
So we can bang the goddess and she is also into chicks? Does that mean fagotry and sodomy aren't sins?

>> No.53738514

>>53738401
A translation would be great. There are parts that sound like they're in English, which makes it only more confusing.

For instance, there's the part where people say it sounds like he's saying "Let's give in to pain" but I hear it as either "Words can't (unintelligible) the pain" or "We're still in the pain."

>> No.53738558

>>53733985
>Gets shit on by All Might

>> No.53738569
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>>53737975
Okay, now I'm hyped.
Also
>Red
>"Didn't we just get drunk together in some weird spirit bar?"
>>53738009
Well, that's a shitty way to thank you...
>>53738166
She'd probably have picked up on your spider hatred by now, so she's probably in your closet then. Well was...
She's probably gone now, but you can check just to be sure.
>>53738260
>All of this waifu praise
It's so nice to see people compliment the girls I worked so hard to make...
I wish I could get my other shit fast enough to show you guys how much I appreciate you.
>>53738298
I love all the girls equally.
Okay, honestly, I don't but I am proud of them all of them.
Mostly... Oriadne is legitimately my favorite. I never intended to like him as much as I do, but I wound up essentially creating my ideal woman(male).

Scarlatina is very near and dear to my heart since we're the same sign. Suri is pretty up there too.

>> No.53738570

>>53730130
Can I have a clipper? A fast cargo ship for Rogue Trading in valuable commodities.

>> No.53738636

>>53738284
I really wish that Terumi had a kid simply because of how hilariously fucked that family tree would be.

>> No.53738669

>>53738636
You know, he technically had at least two kids with Relius.

Kazuma Kval and Hazama.

>> No.53738681

>>53738569
Is Oriadne willing to use alchemy to become a proper woman, assuming I ask nicely?

>> No.53738683

>>53738284
In another Cyoa that spoiler will be relevant.
>>53738431
She loves humanity, even the things she views as its faults.

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>>53738683
>In another Cyoa that spoiler will be relevant.

I CAN'T HANDLE THE PLOT AAAAAAA

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>>53738707

>> No.53738735

>>53738683
You can't tease and not deliver dammit

>> No.53738743

I'm trying my first CYOA so be gentle. I still have to add more goddesses and gussy it up a bit. Feel free to fix my shitty writing.

>> No.53738792

>>53737149
>>53736912
Yup, that was me. I try not to namefag, but seeing as I'll be making one of these things soon enough, I figure I'd use it more. You've talked to me several times since I used this name last, I think. Though I've been spending more time on The Witcher 3 than on here.

Hmm... yeah, definitely gonna make one of my own then. Gonna spend some time thinking on the premise, that's the important thing.

>> No.53738814

>>53738709
>>53738735
No worries, mates, I got plans and shit. Will do my best to deliver and not fuck things up.

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>>53728798
>Skill, Magic, Telekinesis
Fuck them all
With swords that is

Cancer best girl and probably not horrible queen
Otherwise while Vignette would be great wife she would be shitty queen
Also it's shame that house of Leo got Nero, she's going to ruin them

By the way is it just me is skill + magic OP?
Especially considering we got home field advantage

>> No.53738881

>>53738743
>pdf

Y u do diz

>> No.53738902

>>53738814
No, do fuck shit up. Fuck all the shit up. It's what SUSAN would have wanted.

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>>53738743

If Victoria isn't in this then you might as well just give up this worthless sacrilege. Also she better have huge Bitties and still be caring

>> No.53738945

>>53737975
Ilias was always right
Also best girl on that image

>> No.53738953

>>53738569
The dude committed treason, after he is executed, I would step down and put the real heir on the throne. You have to follow the law and tradition.

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>>53738707
>Church of Nyos
I have a soft spot for crazy religious cults that actually end up being the most morally well adjusted group in their setting.

>Arms Training
>Diplomacy (Free)

>FN FALAS
I thought about the Ion, but it seemed a bit impractical with that potential reload time.

>Gel Mines
>Nanoneedles
Much like the Church I'm only looking at taking down actually bounties, this should cut down on collateral damage.

>Tendai and Hal
Even though we're in different Syndicate, Tendai looks like good CQC back up and Hal should be handy for hauling in bounties I've subdued nonlethally.

I've always dug the way this one lets you choose as many companions as you want in exchange for them getting a cut of the profits; its a neat mechanic.

>> No.53738971

>>53738683
So gays are sinners but she still loves them?

>> No.53738972

>>53738743
Cute, I like it. How many pages are you going for? If it's not much I would really advise just using pngs instead of a PDF.

>> No.53738982

>>53728798
(continuation)

-Angelica. I love horned girls. Her personality makes me have mixed feelings, particularly her stubbornness. If she really wants me will have to learn that caring is sharing. The second attacker of the team.

-Talisa. At this point, if everything goes according to the plan, she will surrender to prevent any damage to her animal companions. However, her "mine and only mine" attitude will be an obstacle to my harem dream. If I fail at this moment then I'll try again after the war ends.

-Lizette and the twins. I foresee lots of problems but i like them anyway. That being said, I'm not too concerned if they refuse becoming part of my harem. I'll try again later. However, I'll try recruit the twins for the rest of the war. I know they want blast the other girls and I have the perfect objective in mind.

-Scarlatina. She will get a beating. And will become one of my wives only when she learns perfectly that the one in charge is me. I'm don't like bullying but in this case a exception may be necessary.

-Cassandra. I really like her, but his hereditary skill and knowledge would be somewhat redundant to me (for the elixirs) and his fendom fetish is definitively not my cup of tea. I think she can get important insight from Scarlatine's fate.

Of course I would avoid opponents that I don´t want to face yet. Some changes and improvisations will be needed.

>> No.53738989

>>53738743
Looks cute. Unless its going to be huge is the pdf necessary?

minor typo with Hel
>but seriously but brother is a dog

>> No.53739004

>>53738945
>Ilias was always right
>Also best girl on that image

Excellent taste anon Just as in the game and all the cyoas featuring her she is best girl

>> No.53739033

>>53733751
>>53734142
>>53734279


The wife commited suicide because she was unable to give the king heirs. Then without his wife, the king allowed himself to die. "Jeremiah the defeated".

Or at least this was what was said by ZBG at the time.

>> No.53739115

>>53739033
Here:

>>http://archive.4plebs.org/tg/thread/53379406/#q53384099

And since we are talking about Zodiac Brides, would the bribes objetc to killing my family and perhaps the government of my country?

>ib edgelord etc.

>> No.53739223

>>53738743
>Hwaet, Ēostre
>Norse

Unfortunately, you decided to post this in the presence of someone autistic enough to pick up on your playing fast-and-loose with Germanic mythology.

Actually, I don't care that much about the Hwaet because it's a good way to open the CYOA, but the inclusion of Ēostre bothers me more. Regardless, I do like the design. Keep on going, you waifu-making madman.

>> No.53739230

>>53734574
>virtuous spirit
>improvement embodiment
[Ubermensch Intensifies]

>> No.53739238

>>53737975
>using Jumpchain namefags

>> No.53739241

>>53738569
Been thinking after having my questions answered earlier today, and I figured I'd just go to a nice wide open space I found on google maps for the fight, and focus on simply finding the few brides I know I wouldn't feel too compatible with an try to break up with them peacefully.

Use vitality, magic, and telekinesis, so I can manage all the eventual fighting anyone who takes offense when I fail to charisma my way out of a relationship, and also hopefully break free when I get captured by the ones I'm not focused on trying to break up with while I'm flying around trying to do that.

I don't think I'd be a good match for Talisa, Vignette, or Abirathi, and I'd have to talk to Angelica and Cassandra before I could make a decision either way. Scarlatina, Catherine, and Lucianna are my three "favorites" thus far but I don't have any objections to the Gemini twins, Lizette, Suri, and Persephone and I think I could get along with them too if they won.

Basically as they defeat each other I'll observe and defeat anyone I decide I don't really want to marry, as I like too many of them to tip things too far in any one's favor by choosing them, and also don't know any of them enough to feel secure in making such a decision. This should hopefully let things occur a little more naturally, and we'll go from there.

Main interests and concerns for each though, for the heck of it.

>Cassandra
>Intelligent, Ambitious, LIKES TO READ (all great things)
>Might be more focused on her own learning and ambitions than the ridiculous amounts of fiction I love to read and watch, and while I really like her letter compared to the others I feel uncertain as to whether or not we'd really enjoy spending time together or just be mildly pleasant with each other's company while doing our own things. In general, a nice choice, but I can't tell if she has a personality and interests I'd really connect with. Would certainly make a good Queen however.

More in other posts.

>> No.53739244

>>53738743
Withholding judgement until more waifus are added but keep going.

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>>53737817
No anon, YOU are the skeleton.

>> No.53739280

>>53739238
Go back to your containment thread please we don't need you flooding over here.

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>>53737975
>Illias

>> No.53739315

>>53738743
minor typos
Eir - I can jewelry
Eostre - ractically worships it
Hel - but seriously but brother

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>>53737644
B-but that's my job.

>> No.53739329

>>53738743
It needs lolis.

>> No.53739334

>>53738743
Why isn't Hel literally rotten in half

>> No.53739348

>>53738707
>Freelance
>Melee Training
>Data

>Ion
>Dragonfly Vest; Grey
>Roundhead

>Richardson
>Harper

>Cyberfortress

>> No.53739417

>>53737975
So, are there any other parts to this that I missed? What's the overarching idea here?

>> No.53739419

>>53738743
Loving it dude, please add Frigg as on option though!

>> No.53739440

>>53739241
>Talisa
>Enjoy her casual tone as much as I enjoyed Cassandra's formal tone, and she certainly would care a lot about the people she would rule over.
>My physical preferences in a woman are pretty contradictory to what she has/is, and even with immortality I doubt I'd ever really enjoy the company of her animals. First person I'd try to get to drop out, and first person I'd try to hook up with my best friend. Hopefully the awkwardness this whole ordeal will create will eventually die down, and she'll realize I'm not what she's looking for anyway.

>Vignette
>Precious sweet cinnamon roll I want to hug and protect from the world for forever.
>The above really isn't what I think would make a good Queen, and ultimately, isn't what I feel I need in a partner. I'm already a pretty timid and anxious person, and I'm attracted to and motivated by more ambitious and outgoing people. Plus, she's younger than my little sister, or about the same age, and that just makes things weird for me. Second person I'd try to convince to drop out.

>Lizette
>Hot, like dang, I wish I wasn't attracted to women who also scare me just a bit. I'm curious as to what her definition of beauty is and how that would apply to me.
>I really don't actually know what she thinks of me, and I'm not really into much about her home town or her family's power/culture. I feel like ultimately there are better choices out there, but I can't quite say no without knowing a bit more, I'm drawn in as much as I'm warded away. I might end up trying to get her to drop out just so I can get this feeling out of me. Drop out order ultimately pending based on who is closest to me at the time after other priorities are taken care of.

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>>53738743
>You are the first and most worthy of any of the Goddesses.
...
Am I the only one who showed up?
Joking excited, I like it a lot! Can't wait to see the other girls.
>>53738792
I namefag to avoid being impersonated since I don't know how to do crazy art letters like SDA.
I'm fucking pumped for whatever you wind up making!
>>53738852
>is it just me is skill + magic OP?
It's not just you.
I didn't exactly make the CYOA with balance in mind.
>>53738953
I'm taking >>53737230 's crown away and giving it to you.
You are officially the new king of "No Fun Allowed."
>>53738982
>I love horned girls.
pic related
>her "mine and only mine" attitude will be an obstacle to my harem dream.
Vignette is the key to convincing her.
>when she learns perfectly that the one in charge is me.
Just say that with enough force and confidence and she'll probably be licking your feet in reverence by the end of the day.
>>53739033
The fact that you remember that and I don't is kind of terrifying. I'm gonna go on book as saying this is the correct answer.
>>53739115
>would the bribes objetc to killing my family and perhaps the government of my country?
Why not just organize Zodiac to invade and conquer it?
Considering what they're capable of, I'm sure you could make it happen.

>> No.53739532

>>53738743

Eir: Seems fine, though I'm not really into piercings.

Eostre: Another fair god, vanilla.

Fulla: Cold Domme. That's kinda niche, I'm not sure how many people are into neglect play.

Hel: You've got room to improve on the writing here, I'm not sure how well it reflects her personality. On paper I'd pick her, loner and all that. And the fetish is crazy. Crazy good.

You've got potential, just pay attention to the writing and try not to focus too much on fetishes. At least, that's what I think.

Good work!

Good work!

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>> No.53739602

>>53737903
Crucial writefaggotry question: If, while driving along the highway, Cassandra and I stopped in a gas station to refuel and pick up some refreshments, what drink would she choose to bring along? Is she experienced enough with Earth and specifically American culture to have a favorite drink? Would she have the experience with our junk food to tolerate the incredible cloying sweetness of just about anything on offer? Would she choose an alcoholic beverage? I'm honestly not too concerned about open container laws given the circumstances.

I see her as a bottled-water type, though that might just be me typecasting her in the "boring" role.

>> No.53739611

>>53739440
>Abirathi
>I enjoy the tone of her letter. She's attractive, and I think I could enjoy exploring the world with her a bit. I'm immensely curious as to how her city works.
>I'm far more a fan of consistency and staying indoors. I wouldn't object to her flying around the world, but I don't think I'd enjoy it as much or accompany her as often as she'd prefer. I think there would be a small amount of friction caused by my inherent avoidance of spontaneity. Likely the third person I'd try to convince to drop out.

>Gwendolyn and Gracia
>I like games, and their sense of humor. I feel like there would be plenty of entertaining days spent with them as my Queen.
>I'm pretty monogamous, and while I'd make an exception with these two due to how close they are with each other and the fact that they're already here as one candidate, I'm apprehensive as to how well the relationship would go. Also, I worry I might need to be a bit more serious and make sure they don't make any too outlandish customs or laws, or start trying to entertain themselves at the expense of others, and I don't really like the idea of having to sort of watch out for that like I'm babysitting my younger brother. Can't really tell how well we'd get along until I spent more time with them though. Drop out order pending.

>Angelica
>Knight of JUSTICE! Can't deny I like it. I have no problem with the horns or anything, and she's pretty cute.
>A little wary with that crossed out "I get what I want" line, manages to avoid the attractive intimidation factor and go straight to me fearing she might have a bit of a bossy personality. Also, Dragons may be evil, but I don't know that yet and I really like dragons as a concept. I feel like I subconsciously deducted a lot of points from her just because she's so eager to get me to kill a dragon. Any other fantasy monster and I doubt I would feel as uncomfortable, though similarly to Abirathi, I don't know if I'd enjoy travelling and fighting an awful lot.

>> No.53739702

>>53739486
My favorite bride is Angelica, though I think her biggest problem is a matter of overlap. She's pretty similar to Lucianna and Talisa. She's kinda pushy compared to the other two and I'm sure a tonna people find that offputting instead of appealing. Just my two cents.

>> No.53739728

>>53739486
Stannis did nothing wrong, if I was King I'd make sure I followed the law always.

>> No.53739729

>>53738743
Don't we have a goddess waifu cyoa?

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>>53739545
>Magical
>Average
>The Agency

I find the idea the government uses black magic super soldier operatives pretty cool

>Enhanced Senses 2
>Stealth 2
>Reflexes 3
>Natural Toxin 3
>Familiar 2
>Self Improvement 2
>Remote Viewing 2

I'm going to be some kind of secret police, as I'm going to be very good at finding and "disappearing" people that need to go away for the greater good. Having my doggo around gives me a little more combat bite for tough targets as well as someone to keep watch while I'm astrally searching for dissidents.

>Rival
Look at that smug dick smile. I'll try use my powers to find some dirt on him which probably will backfire.

>> No.53739750

>>53739417
a couple parts done currently and here's a summary/overarching idea behind this

The story behind it is mainly based upon three factions within the world; Law, Chaos, and Neutral a la Shin Megami Tensei.

Anon, anons possibly, were summoned here by a God that is Chaos aligned who wants to change the current situation in the world through whatever means necessary. That's where anon comes into play.

Due to your unusual circumstances, you have enough power to be a mover and shaker if you try hard enough. Chaos God doesn't care if you align with the Lawful Gods or Chaos Gods, but more that you do something, and unlocks your power.

From there you'll be able to choose how your power manifests, what minor/average and major powers your manifestation grants you, what faction if any you side with and the boons that come with it, your companions, additional quests that give more points, and more shit if I end up making this more complicated. Depending on certain options, you'll end up being locked outta certain options while other options will open.

End goal is whatever anon thinks they can accomplish, whether that be becoming a righteous hero, fighting for true freedom, becoming an evil mastermind, staying the fuck out of dodge, or just getting themselves a harem.

>> No.53739826

>>53739611
Well fuck it I just lost all I wrote for my next post and I'm getting really flipping tired so I'm done.

>> No.53739846

MAKE A NEW THREAD YOU KEKS

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>>53739241
>Scarlatina, Catherine, and Lucianna are my three "favorites"
Mine too
I like your approach. It's an interesting tactic to simply try and eliminate the girls you don't want to be with while allowing the ones you'd be alright with to figure it amongst themselves.
>>53739602
>Crucial writefaggotry question
Oh shit! I have hype!
I had never considered that...
Hmm, that's a really entertaining idea I'd never considered before...
I imagine her prefer something mild like Arizona or Arnold Palmers, but she'd still probably be pretty put off by sweet even those are.
She's probably not used to combination either, so you could really turn that into an adorable scene with her being fascinated by all of the drinks and junk food. And then promptly horrified when she flips anything over and sees the ingredients and nutritional values.
Cassandra's the kind of girl who'd probably avoid any alcohol they'd sell at a gas station. She's the kind of girl who loves a good wine.
>>53739702
Angelica was probably the one that I struggled the most to write. As similar as she may feel to Luci and Tali, she's still much better now than her first draft. I still have no idea what the hell I was thinking.
>>53739826
Awww... I was really enjoying reading your posts, Anon... Get some sleep, buddy. If you feel like it, I'd love to read the rest in another thread.

>> No.53740110

AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO WANTS PURE LOVE WITH VIGNETTE

>> No.53740134

>>53740110
Yes, which really just makes it all the more pure for you.

>> No.53740143

>>53740110
Is that you Gilgamesh?

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>>53740110

A-anon, please don't say those things in public.

>> No.53740154

Can someone post the last version of the necromancer CYOA?

>> No.53740188

>>53740154
no

>> No.53740289

>>53740134
fuck this is true.
>>53740143
NO
>>53740146
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Y-bd3aDMGA

>> No.53740306

>>53739996
It's gonna be more of a throwaway bit than a part of the story but that does give me ideas.
>Cassandra's the kind of girl who'd probably avoid any alcohol they'd sell at a gas station. She's the kind of girl who loves a good wine.
That's pretty much exactly what I expected.

Also, rewatching the Banquet of Kings for a specific Rider quote, this is the very first time I've watched this scene and not been entirely on Saber's side. It's kind of odd just how much this story has changed my point of view, at least in this one hypothetical.

>> No.53740355

>>53728798
>M-07: Perception
>B-02: Grace
>B-04: Beauty
Ah yes. My endless quest to look and feel great has finally been achieved. And I can see more than three feet in front of my face again, yay.

My first bit of commentary on the girls is: What the fuck is wrong with them? Why are they perfectly fine with murdering good friends? Ignoring that, I pick Abirathi. Exactly as yandere as I like, and monster girls are cute. Should that plan fail, i'm considering either Lucianna or Scarlatina. Lucianna is classy, and sounds like she'll make a wonderful queen. But Scarlatina is a hell of a freak, exactly what I like. I considered marrying all three, but that sounds like a way to make me feel incredibly guilty.

Though I swear to god I will throw myself in front of their weapons if any of them try to kill each other. Especially if anyone tries to kill vignette. Who had the great idea of involving someone as pure as her in this war?

>> No.53740423

>>53740154

>> No.53740440

>>53736306
Communism doesn't work.
Communism that doesn't work isn't real.
Therefore, any instance of communism isn't real.

>> No.53740447

>>53740423

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>>53740423
>>53740447
Thanks!

>> No.53740588

Did I miss anything cool this week?

>> No.53740738

>>53739486
>I'm fucking pumped for whatever you wind up making!
Great to hear! I can't wait to see your next one, too.
As for mine... how about an isekai CYOA? Summoned to another world, you must choose a party, follow three quests you must choose, and once you're done gaining the powers, solutions, and cool items, will find out how you fare against the Dark Lord? Instead of a mystery box, a mystery... conclusion?
Does that seem fun?
Either that or a monster hunter Bad End CYOA. Though that one might be less complex.

>> No.53740751

What is with all the namefags lately?

>> No.53740779

>>53740751
Self-named authorfags want to replace Given-named authorfags.

>> No.53740816

>>53740751
It's gotten awful only in the past few months and it sucks but this is what you get when you start sucking author cock and it's been a long time coming.

>> No.53740818

>>53740779
Most authors are self-named. I can think of, like, three people that were given their names.

>> No.53740855

>>53738707
>The Legion
>Melee Training

>Reso Knife
>Kaifeng Fan

>Shadowboots
>Roundhead

>N/A
>Cyberfortress

>> No.53740873

>>53740779
At least the given-named ones have generally earned some degree of notoriety

>>53740816
I know this gets thrown around a lot, but this is one time I think that telling someone to go to reddit actually makes sense

that community is defined by namefagging, I really don't know why people feel the need to do it here

>> No.53740876

>>53740818
I think a significant difference is that most authors didn't name themselves before they even created one CYOA.

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>>53740816
>>53740779
>>53740751
>B-bu-but I don't WANNA recognize authors at a convenient glance! Everyone should be Anon, that's what the site is FOR!

>> No.53740919

>>53740885
I don't give a shit if you use a name or if you gave yourself a name, but authors who name themselves also tend to be huge fucking faggots who type like they just came off the boat from reddit.

I don't give a shit about your life. I'm not here to be your friend. Post your fucking CYOA and a few responses/replies to questions asked and clarifications needed. If you want to make friends or whatever go to the discord where namefagging and /soc/ is the standard.

>> No.53740957

>>53740885
Unless they're actually answering specific queries about their work, there just isn't any reason for it aside from them needing attention.

So which namefag are you, or are you just a fan?

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>>53740919
People like this are why I post with a name.

>> No.53740972

>>53740961
We already know you're a shitposter, it doesn't make a difference. Plus you're mildly self aware and entertaining so I don't feel like gouging my eyes out whenever I read your specific brand of autism.

I'm DSA by the way.

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>>53740972
>I'm DSA by the way.
Nobody is really "assigned" a name here; this has only really "happened" like two or three times. Even so, those people willingly put the name in the name field, still.

I don't tack my name onto my posts to make it easier to find me.

And funnily enough, there are people who post without a name but seek other ways of attracting attention.

>> No.53741073

>>53741065
>And funnily enough, there are people who post without a name but seek other ways of attracting attention.

Its a case by case thing, but I honestly prefer the fujofat poster to some of the more reddit namefags we have right now. At least the former makes me laugh sometimes, and they tend to not reply to every single post in the fucking thread.

>> No.53741075

>>53741065
>seek other ways of attracting attention.
Making cyoas?

>> No.53741094

>>53741075
No, posting the same builds to the same CYOAs over and over of course.

>> No.53741103

>>53741073
>>53741075
There are the prevalent shitposters like fujo/fatposter, but there's others.

For example, Angel doesn't post with her name/trip anymore but you can still pick her out most of the time. Same goes for Bliss, especially when he blatantly states in his post something along the lines of "by the way, I made this CYOA so that makes my point relevant." Not to call him out or anything (I like all of his CYOAs), but really?

>> No.53741107

>>53740919
>Being an authorfag without using your name when you post.
We Italics now?

>> No.53741134

>>53741065
I'm not saying that putting your name is the be all end all (is that how that phrase works?) of being a fag. But generally speaking people who do so are also the kind to seek attention. The given-name/chosen-name is just another part of it but honestly it's not very relevant.

I mean, lets be clear here I can't stop anybody from doing anything they want to do as long as they don't break the rules and even then it's not particularly rare for a /pol/ discussion to go on for an entire thread with nothing come of it. But I do feel that some of the recent namefags are just straight up cancerous and act in ways that would get you ignored or made fun of in most other threads and are tolerated here because of the author worship culture that has taken root.

And again, there are namefags I don't hate like yourself and a few authors. Mostly the ones who make themselves scarce enough that I feel they justify their name usage or are otherwise entertaining or use it for good reasons.

There is no solid rulebook of when and how to namefag and there are no consequences attached from doing so indiscriminately other than that it makes me personally no longer want to browse these threads. I just think that the recent rampant namefagging has been indicative of a drop in posting quality and that the way authors are treated has in some way influenced it.

>> No.53741150

>>53739334
She is, but horizontally, not vertically. It's in the text.

>> No.53741151

>>53741134
The idolisation that a couple of them seem to thrive on is definitely the biggest problem. I don't even think it's all that many posters that indulge them, but it's enough to turn a thread into a circle jerk alright.

>> No.53741158

>>53741134
>some of the recent namefags are just straight up cancerous
Are you talking about ZBG, StonedCelt, SDA (SlightlyDrunkAnon), or TokHaar? I'll give you TokHaar but for the most part, these guys -are- the currently active authors who are creating content. Some of them may be slightly annoying but what they're doing is nothing inherently new; we've always had authors post with or without names here and discussions of their OC goes on for awhile until they do something else or someone replaces them. And yes, some of these guys are from other websites like Reddit or SB, but that's always been a thing here, too. Someone probably had the same opinion of you when you were actively creating content. It doesn't matter that you had a name or were "assigned" it.

I'm not condoning cocksucking but whining about it isn't going to change anything, nor has this ever changed.

>> No.53741191

>>53741158
No, you're right. I'm just cranky. In the end even if I don't like it personally there's nothing I can do about it and I really shouldn't be throwing stones other than at the national guard considering my glass house status.

>> No.53741193

>>53741158
Yeah, but we've got authors in same time frame doing comparable levels of work who don't feel the need to constantly seek attention. There isn't any need for it.

You're right in that it's not new and it's not going away, but that doesn't mean people shouldn't be called out on being faggots.

>> No.53741202

>>53741158
Also selesia is a dork.

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>>53741191
I always look at it from a positive light and post anonymously when engaging in normal discussions. I would rather have TokHaar or ZBG do a "shameless self-promotion" than /pol/ discussion, or worse.

In fact I think we're in another gold rush of CYOAs. I'm exaggerating a bit but I did predict that this would be the dry time of year, and yet we have a lot of active authors right now.

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>>53741202

>> No.53741235

>>53732430
this is a hard choice but I did the math and well humanity will survive at least the us gets 3 million left that's enough for me

>99%
>red death
cause this seems like it will be less likely to destroy cities I would like it if humanity keeps its technology after surviving plus the research might help kill other diseases or make a machine that does the bodys stuff for us, and since there isnt anything he cant do im gonna alter it so it can only go after the sinful people who will wish to spread it and show no signs when it affect good people (cause that 99% arent all bad) and for bad people the signs are a slow shut down for the body and have signs like coughing up blood feeling weak (having them start praying at church for a chance of redemption if they get redeemed it wont hurt as much) while the good people the signs for them are a small control over the brain telling them that they are ill and need to start saying goodbye to love ones and make them not be able to tell anyone that they have it or that its contiguous then it will start to slowly shut down the body where they die in their sleep (painless),
>A Canticle For
honestly, its probably gonna be more like civil war like states against other states than town vs town, so better chance of keeping some books about science in making shit alive so through all of this shit no one will forget about how to make electricity so we down go backward in civilization
time for gifts
>primordial Lifespan
>The Mystery Recurs
>A Garden for Man
>The Ark Narrative

so words spreads out about the plague people start to die off, yet it's a slow burn so communication won't completely halt so people can still communicate with one another and find out where all the survivors are at and still be a civilization
Meanwhile, I get my family and friends out of harms way and after the fall I get magic and can watch civilization begin a new become king or something that will let them know im not bsing them about god

>> No.53741241

>>53741207
>I would rather have TokHaar or ZBG do a "shameless self-promotion" than /pol/ discussion, or worse.

I'd prefer neither, but yes I concede the latter is worse

>> No.53741244

I have never used a name on 4chan but I don't really see the problem with it. Even if it's some form of getting attention in some cases, so what?
It's not particulary problematic, specially in when you consider the legion of "cuck" posters and similar.

>> No.53741266

>>53741244
I think it bothers people because there's just no need for it. It's some actively going out of their way to highlight themselves for attention. It's not the end of the world, better than cuck posting for sure, but it's still generally the mark of an attention whore

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>>53741235
>did the math and well humanity will survive at least the us

>> No.53741282

>>53741266
I understand, but if the act of attention whoring... or whatever is not making tha thread worse, I don't see the problem.

I would say some times is even useful when many people engane in the same discussion to help define who said what.

>> No.53741316

>>53741282
>I understand, but if the act of attention whoring... or whatever is not making tha thread worse, I don't see the problem

It generally does hurt a thread, just not to the extent of other issues. It never makes one better, that's for sure.

Keeping track of who said what isn't hard, even in a thread with anonymous posters ie most threads

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>90% of authors are giants faggots by default
>"hey guys, 90% of named authors are faggots! fuck names!"

>> No.53741365

>>53741352
God I love Chaika. I want to raise her as my autistic daughter.

>> No.53741397

>>53741352
Technically correct is the best kind of correct

>> No.53741404

Someone post that postapoc cyoa with way too many equipment options.

>> No.53741411

>>53741352
That may be true, but if they don't have a name I don't have to be aware of their faggotry. It's an elephant but it has a blanket.

>>53741404
I want to see this too.

>> No.53741482

>>53741411
Honestly this general is already better with namefags than some of the other ones on /tg/

>> No.53741494

>>53741482
True, but further indulgence shouldn't be encouraged.

>> No.53741512

>>53741494
It'll fade, and when people do get really annoying while namefagging they tend to get slapped anyways.

>> No.53741563

>>53739996
I would have liked if there was more to lizette's profile

>> No.53741566

>>53732430
>99% (+3 gifts)
Assuming a population of 7.5 billion people; 75 million will survive (as reference, the estimation for 1000 BCE is 50 million).
>Ring of Fire
>Chaos Reigns (+3 gifts)
Survivors still remember, and maintain, most of his ideological differences and now fight as well for food and the better places to live. Or they just let out the worst of them.

>Powers/Gifts
Rewind senescence
The ark narrative
Th mystery recurs
Nephilim ancestry
Holy nourishment
God's accomplice

>> No.53741703

>>53730130
Personal: (17pts)
Actual Warrant (-10)
Juvenat Gland (-5)
Combat Augs (-1)
Gene Sculpting (-1)

Ship: 72pts
Dauntless (-20)
Civilian Voidmen (-1)
>These are just temporary, don't worry
3 Lance Batteries (-18)
3 Heavy Void Shields (-15)
Extra Point-Defence (-2)
High-Power Auger (-5)
Auger Array (-5)
Crew Quarters (-2)
3 Guard Regiments (-3)
Luxury Yacht (-1)

Boon:
Warp Drive
>Gotta go fast!

And now to obtain my proper crew. Navigator, set course for Carlos McConnell.

>> No.53741979

>>53738743
I am not into Fulla, but the others are cute so a pretty good start for a first CYOA. Hel is best girl, I like how she has a significant drawback with her lower body being a skeleton.

>> No.53742005

>>53741998
go hog wild

>> No.53742775

>>53734614
Molecular telekinesis
Imaginary constructs
God mind
Alpha genius
Elemental mastery; electricity

>> No.53742789

>>53735464
Gimme dat snek. Right now.

>> No.53742795

>>53735464
>I don't believe in jokes.
You liked that one about the Virgo and the Leo too much to have me believe that.

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