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Are you new? Do you want to make a CYOA? http://pastebin.com/MhAQAJiw
Old thread: >>38429045

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NSFW version: http://imgur.com/a/DrBWD

>> No.38451952

Why the sodden hell would you do that?

>> No.38451970

You should do one that uses the generals now. I want fugg Douglas MacArthur and Erwin Rommel

>> No.38451992

Shitty puns ruin everything.

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It would be great if someone could give me a link to the Viking World cyoa.

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Here you go, bud.

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>> No.38452197

Skadi best.

Skadi always best.

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>> No.38452231

You're great anon, thanks. I don't have anything to give in return, I'm afraid.

>> No.38452232
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Why not instead of "Pimp" you have a job listed for "Idol" instead. That would fit into the cyoa much better, I think.

>> No.38452476

It would, and maybe I'll put that in too.

The reason "Pimp" is there is because it made me laugh when I was brainstorming job ideas.

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>> No.38452855

Let's think of it this way then. Join the Chernovy but never take the Cherny shell. Take the Suraja. They get three essence forms out of it. A familiar, whatever essence form you want and the Chernovy essence form. Beyond that you can achieve any lifespan from a tarot focus user that can trade in lifeforce. The Cherny potentially gets a single extra essence level than you can get but you get three essence forms and everything else that comes rolled in.

I say you because I wouldn't be as interested in the really long lifespan. It's all about the power that I can wield, the ability to affect change. Suraja allows that beyond any other shell. Pure power and not bad longevity either if someone cares about that.

Going with the Chernovy makes sense for essence form reasons anyways. Hei Lian are absolutely necessary and provide cyber parts and cyber brains. More importantly without their tech submissions in the alliance the Chernovy wouldn't have much of any ground to stand on. Sure the Chernovy supply the pilots, but the Hei Lian supply the tech.

The choice isn't cut or clear for me. Both are needed if their effort is to find a new place for people to live. You can't do without the Cordat, their medical prowess or their law enforcement presence. The Inu are just as required to get things off the ground, they're supplying the power for all the factions to even pursue their ends via the Inu means.

I just can't see this as a simple choice. They all seem absoltuely necessary. Even the ones without the long term goals with the Chernovy gate are still required to keep the peace and keep the city powered.

The Suraja and the stuff I'd take for one I'm sure of, but where I'd go? I just don't know.

>> No.38452920

No thanks. I'm not gambling like that.

I want to hit up the tarots for Essence levels anyway.

>> No.38453022

Oh, and you are dumb for thinking Cordat or Inu would help anyone. Both factions are completely antipathic towards Cherny shells, which both Chernovey and to a lesser extenct Hei Lan are supportive of and generally support to some degree. The Inu don't care about anyone else because they'll get their spirit forms and be eternal, and the Cordat are their strong arm.

>> No.38453173

The Cordat and Inu are only trying to get the mindless shells back under control. Their issue isn't with the Cherny shells, it's the mindless shells that are going berserk. Coming up with some weird tech to put artificial thoughts where previously there was only obedience only causes problems, and it's fake. They aren't real or people, they need put back in their place or wiped out with new mindless shells replacing them.

That is helping. It's for the good of all. You don't want the shell equivalent of berserk AIs running around causing chaos and killing people and you don't want people defending them claiming artificial constructs are sentient. You wouldn't defend your PC if it got up and tried to fight for its free will. You'd smash it on the spot to save Humanity from an inevitable Skynet situation.

>> No.38453352

Seriously. I was hoping the mystery box was going to be a qt3.14 FDR-chan in wheelchair.

>> No.38453379

Oh, this is some propaganda shit right here. Did you read the same page I did? The mindless Cherny are becoming fully sapient. Humans. People. Just like the ones with souls that the Beings drove humanity to extinction to get their hands on. Every indication is that they're sapient, otherwise they wouldn't be capable of building up resistance cells.

Shells have all the equipment to be functional people, they're just lacking in a soul. They're not constructed robots, they're sapient human clones. That's why it was the Cherny shells, they're basically just humans altered slightly so they stay perma-lolis and can live 1440 years so the Beings and Hybrids can have super cute pets. The Sleeper/Chernovey's departure gave them something, that awarded them sapience.

And don't you think for a minute that Inu wouldn't leash an inhabited Cherny out of suspicion and paranoia.

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>> No.38453776

That's just rabble rousing. The Beings didn't wipe out Humanity. There's no proof of anything like that. You're just listening to the crazy tinfoil hat brigade that thinks their mouthwash is trying to calcify vital parts of their brain.

Things don't just suddenly become sentient, sapient things capable of emotion. All you're witnessing is a malfunction that's severely dangerous to the public.

The Inu are just interesting in restoring peace. Finding new ways to put the berserk shells back under control isn't a bad thing. It will save lives. They know the difference between a malfunctioning construct and a truly thinking being. The only agenda they have is to round up any potentially dangerous shell designations and ensure they're no longer a risk to the public. It's only the rabble rousers that would have you believe they'd round up anyone truly alive.

>> No.38453853

I think the options that used to give Bimbo points should be worth more/cost less.

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I gave up porn for lent, so I'm posting some non-lewd ones so I don't have to feel bad for being in this thread.

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>> No.38453944

The beings did wipe out humanity, the CYOA states it pointblank. They didn't do it on purpose, so I'm not saying I unilaterally hate the Beings, though the mindless shells as pets gives me some weird feelings. I mean, after all, while I'm pretty sure Chernovy lacks Beings, Hei Lan is headed by a small group of them. If I was hostile to Beings I'd have to be hostile to Hei Lan, and that'd be stupid.

You say that, but people don't suddenly switch the color and nature of their essence and aura, gain a level of essence, a never before seen essence form, ten times the lifespan, and have their familiars turn into Cthulhi either. But what do you know, all that's happened with Chernovy.

Putting sapient beings under control is wrong, again, no evidence really points to them being berserk. And no, I don't think the Cordat and Inu lowlevels know or care, and I doubt the higher ups would lose any sleep, over an incarnated Cherny getting leashed by accident or 'accident', And once that's happened, you've doomed an actual person to working as a slave like the mindless.

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Have some OC.

Hypothetically if one of these was expanded into a Sissy Life or Perverted Wizard type CYOA where you earn points through service and degradation to split between freedoms and powers, which would be best to expand?

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Nice choice.

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Oops. that's an older version. Here's a better one.

>> No.38454066

Good for you, Anon.

>> No.38454108

Oh, I wanted to ask a question about this. I did up my servants or whatever they called them, and got a bunch of Material Points. The CYOA says I can spend them in the next section, but nothing anywhere else says anything about Material Points. What are they for then?

>> No.38454123

it also states you have no knowledge of any of those facts

>> No.38454178 [DELETED] 

Wait shit, is it Lent already?

>> No.38454181

Underground cavern one seems most flexible, given the diverse ecology.

Also, goo girl scenario for me. Seems pretty good.

>> No.38454203

Where's the option to slap a bitch?

>> No.38454235

Ha, you're a bad Catholic.

The creator hasn't finished that part yet, although I think I saw him post again last week, so hope lives on.

>> No.38454254

Yeah but I'm not being entirely in character here. I don't know if you're trying for that or not because I'm a bit drunk and can't think 100% straight so I have no idea what I'm doing.

>> No.38454303

This CYOA is weird, but a bit hilarious. Especially when I really looked at my build and noticed I had become the breakfast loli, capable of generating a fresh, healthy, and mildly addictive full breakfast every morning.

>> No.38454340

>Goo Girls
That is oddly cute, though I'm curious about the rest of their world, how the goo meals taste, and if goo girls can get jealous of each other.
Nope nope nope.
>Beast purgatory
Nope nope.
Nope nope.
Ehhh... Nope.

So Goo girls it is for being the only option that still treats me like a thinking being and possible equal. If I ended up in any of the rest I think that I'd try my luck out in the world/become a serial killer soon enough.

>> No.38454342

Hah. Take a break anon. Get some snooze time in. And hydrate. No more alcohol. Hydrate.

>> No.38454369

Yeah even if I was submissive it seems to me like a permanently life treated dehumanized would be horrible, so the goo girls win out since at least they like you/care.

>> No.38454373

Where did you get the drow girl image?

>> No.38454406

>Implying this isn't exactly as offensive as it would be if the sexes were swapped.

>> No.38454442

Only difference is that one has historical evidence and context, the other is genderswaped.

>> No.38454499

Are you seriously making that kind of argument, that just because one happened less in real life the whole thing still isn't stupid?

>> No.38454502

It's an interesting lens to help people notice things they wouldn't normally.

>> No.38454561

I don't think so, I'm not sure where you're getting that logic from.

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Not trying any arugment, just stating that if you swap the genders, a good chunk of that has happened in the past.
Blame the tyranny of genetics and evolution.

>> No.38454581

lets run though this.

Vampire: No. I like not being anything with that. Prissy assholes, low chance of becoming anything good.

Goo: weird but okay? little bit too explorative for me though.

Orc: Too much potential for forced gayness.

Beast-race: not a furry

Kitsune: too gay

Monster-girl: would be okay if you didn't have to work up to something good and i wasn't afraid of spider-women.

Drow: nope nope nope

Elf: its okay.

So goo or elf. It all depends on if the goo people explore everywhere or not.

Also, for fucks sake anon, expand all of them and combine them into a pdf. or combine them all in some way.

>> No.38454595

I doubt the futa part has, cause goodlord if it aint shoehorned into this one.

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>> No.38454706

>you were trolling some feminist wiccan forum
That doesn't sound like something I'd do. One of the nicest girls I know is a wiccan

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>> No.38454714

The options I wrote earliest all have "what happens if you don't play along," but I started getting more verbose and cutting things for length.
goo girls don't get jealous of each other. Couple things got cut from this: you may become an ambassador to nearby civilizations that use language. Orcs, humans, etc. Assume all the options are one world. Also, there's no crime because nothing is considered a crime. This includes raping you, so be sure not to keep them pent up.
grognard booru. http://grognard.booru.org/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2043
I came up with the narrative last, and just tacked on something simple. I wasn't trying to make social commentary, I was just coming up with an excuse to string together my fetish.

>> No.38454736

Your fetish a shit, especially the really shoehorned futa part.

Also 'not playing along' isn't the same as a slap a bitch option. I want to keep my pimp hand strong.

>> No.38454812

Why is the "I'm not into femdom" option always a legshark? What if I want to be a regular shark with a laser?

>> No.38454828

Legshark is a clear upgrade to regular shark.

>> No.38454858

Because it's a completely retarded and unattractive option that still somehow manages to be better than the other options in the CYOA. It illustrates the badness of the CYOA through it's own badness.

>> No.38454877

Nothing is shoehorned because they're all just fetish scenarios. Admittedly the Drow and non-humanoid stuff are not *my* fetish, but I though I'd be generous. The orc futas are inspired by an Incase piece that I can't post here. The Yandere futa Kitsune who publicly humiliates you was inspired by something the CoC forum was working on.
I laughed. I can only offer in my defense that I was appealing to fetishes that don't appeal to me for some options.
Yeah, that imposed action is sort of a weakness but I was getting lazy at that point.

>> No.38454881

>retarded and unattractive
speak for yourself

Gamma Worlds CYOA when?

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>Goo Girls
I will learn their strange alchemy, their states of being, pick up some of the obviously there magic, and then go all Jordan Bojar on things.

I can't have been the only person to be sad that you couldn't talk with him and get him on your side. He was brilliant and only not a murderhobo because he was better at organizing things.

>> No.38454937

Oh so you play shitty games too. And those scenarios do feel shoerhorned because it's suddenly a dick, like in your shitty game.

Also your fetish is mainly being called a shit by me because of that and the dehumanization elements. Liking being dominated is one thing but liking being a pet with nothing resembling care or consideration towards you makes you pretty low in my book.

>> No.38455022

Pardon me for taking the bait, but I find it pretty sexy either way. If you want to get offended go do it somewhere I'm not fapping to the subtle tradeoffs of being gangbanged by various types of mythical creatures.

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I guess most of them beat you up, and some kill you. Maybe a couple eat you.

If you want, we can say it was all a dream meant to teach you a lesson and you wake up upon death. Then you can go smack some wiccans.

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Alright time to flood the page with old cyoa. Lets start with the best on ever. Of all time.

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so many different types of trapped on an island

>> No.38455130

>Yeah, that imposed action is sort of a weakness but I was getting lazy at that point.
Just go with the usual, "You turn a corner and bump into a witch, causing her to drop her book. With that she curses you, later that night when you go to sleep you wake up in the shadow realm" something generic like that

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broquest VILLIANS

>> No.38455177

Want some of the femdom options, but fighting the crabs seems like best life. Tough choice.

>> No.38455182

Man, why witches got to be such bitches?

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One of my personal favs.

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And option for those who don't want to be an all powerful mage.

>> No.38455232

Seems legit.

>> No.38455240

The only one that's sort of acceptable is the one with the goos, but there are some serious issues with it anyway. If it wasn't for SURPRISE FUTA then the kitsune would be fine.

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>> No.38455328

The kitsune thing might be more acceptable if you included something about how she uses her magic to transform me into an attractive female. That somehow makes it less gay.

>> No.38455338

It makes you pretty gay for wanting to be a woman.

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Is it a bird?
Is it a plane?
Its your superhero waifu!

>> No.38455377

>not wanting to be gay
You some kind of faggot, son?

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Best mystery box of all time.

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>> No.38455419

I'd take her if it was minus the humiliation and drunkenness. I mean, there is shape shifting out there.

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>Wanting to be a smoking 10/10 grill where you can literally act out all of your fetishes on yourself and use your own body as fap (schlick) fuel makes you gay

Okay, anon

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and I'm done. For now.

>> No.38455446

This is my response to /d/ in general. fucking futa spammers.

>> No.38455500

God Emperor is the only choice, prove me wrong.

>> No.38455519

Fuck yeah leg shark!

All of this for the most part is incredibly rapey.

This is coming from a massive fetishist.

>> No.38455627

Excelsior! Once I finish my training montage those fucking crabs wont know what hit them

>> No.38455636

Leg Shark is best option. Who would pick anything else?

>> No.38455679
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Made Kitsune ambiguously futa. Made it a png to make text less blurry. Kept the narrative for now because it's one of the only non-generic elements.

The collar is based on Pervy Armorsmith. If you want to transform, just assume you can get an appropriately fetishy collar made in that CYOA.

>> No.38455703

Why did you remove the only good option and leave the 8 shitty ones

>> No.38455726

The best option is missing, but there was no good option.

>> No.38455770

I want the best option back.

>> No.38455798

Well you can't have it unless you put it in or get someone else to do it. I don't feel like making that edit more than once.

>> No.38455842

I don't think you know what that word means.

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>> No.38455984

Irregardless that's defiantly no reason to be viscous and make others discomfortable by making them the centre of attraction.

>> No.38456015

Yay! I get to be an awesome shark and then an awesome war veteran and get /all/ the bitches again!

>> No.38456022

This is almost enough to make me bust out the ol' uniform and get the ovens ready.

>> No.38456055


it's a doggy dog world, anon

>> No.38456274

Fuck yeah Paladin quest.
Order of Life
Powers; Lay on hands, Exorcism and Consecration
Gimme that sweet, sweet sword.
Inconspicuous clothing for my armor, Always loved the image of the downtrodden, wandering paladin.
Holy Tome, so that I may spread the word of righteousness
A sanctuary out in the borderlands, where people will need me most
Shaman, because fuck yeah nature
How the fuck could I not choose a Death Knight as my nemesis?
Finally, go Arch-Paladin and take Protection as my additional power

>> No.38456402

Perhaps you should make a Language Nazi CYOA.

>> No.38456622

> Not picking the Emperor makes you a heretic tho

>> No.38456686

Did that guy ever finish the MC CYOA?

>> No.38457081
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Model (+2) 2
Large Breasts (+2) 4
Static Body type: Weak (+3) 7
No penis, Vagina (+4) 11
Selective Depilation (+1) 12
Activity Wear
Sexy Cosplay (-1) 11
NEET (-6) 5
Raise (-5) 0
Penthouse (-5) -5
Fem (+1) -4
Photo ID (+3) -1
Essay x 2 (+6) 3
New Identity (+2) 5
Immortality (-1) 4
Student (-2) 2
Tuition (-2) 0

I don’t exactly get a whole lot of mail, so your letter isn’t exactly how I expected to start my day. Regardless, I believe that we can come to an understanding that both I and the reality can live with given the forms that I’ve filled out. Regarding Form 63.01: Body, the decision regarding body type, breast size, facial structure, and genitalia were made with the intention to ensure that no consequences occur in the physical realm. That it netted me a fair amount of karmic points and an incredibly attractive new body were wholly coincidental. Regarding Form 63.02: New Clothing, Pink/Frilly clothing was chosen as I believe it will aid me in accepting the changes to my life in the short term while Activity clothing was chosen strictly in the event to help me should any unpredicted events arise on short notice. The lingerie option was taken for the support provided to my new assets, while Sexy Cosplay was taken ultimately for my own personal amusement. Regarding Form 63.03: Job Offers, NEET and raise were both taken for so that I may have a steady income while still pursuing other life goals. Regarding Form 63.04: subsidized housing was taken for personal comfort while hypno conditioning Fem was taken to prevent any sort of mistakes that would be made on my end that would cause any social misunderstandings. I opted to take immortality so that I can witness all that is going to be developed by mankind first hand. My new name is Rachel Hughes and my family is now incredibly wealthy having made a fortune on stock speculation. I receive a fair amount of money every year out of their trust fund.

>> No.38457238

Erk, meant.

>> No.38457343

>joseph stalin
>has the smallest bust size


>> No.38457393

Bust size is proportional to penis size

>> No.38457652

So does that mean Hitler only has one breast?

>> No.38457711

Don't pick on poor Hitler-chan!

>> No.38457914

doesnt mao zedong have a smaller bust?

>> No.38457979

Mao Zedong is A MAAAAAAAAN

>> No.38458159

mao zeDONG just wants to be the little girl

>> No.38458168

Neet costs -10, not -6/autism

>> No.38458242

The Goebbels DLC will include the flat chest option.

The Rommel mystery box will have all the breasts you ever wanted.

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Static Agile
No Penis + Vagina
Selective Depilation

Activitywear, Frilly

Model, Administrative Assistant

Fem, Student

Photo ID. Essayx2

Essay: Well, the all female thing was pretty damn easy to decide on. If I'm going to do this I might as well go for it fully, rather than resisting and costing myself heavily. That just seemed like a stupid idea as it would cost me all to make my life harder after it was done. Selective Depilation also just seemed like a good idea. It's easy to deal with and I'm terrible at shaving at the best of times.

I skimped a bit on the clothing as I figured that what I picked up would be enough to start off and I didn't take the disadvantage to prevent me buying more. Especially when how bloody expensive casual wear is. That's something that can easily be obtained with money post start.

As for jobs...well, I went straight for Admin Assistant. Why would I not? Sure, it cost me the vast majority of my earned points (And then some) but it seems fascinating to learn about that sort of thing. However, since that job doesn't actually earn me any real money and I'd rather not abuse the celestial bureau more than is reasonable, I went for model. The face choice helps there already and the fact that my body is static rather than plastic means that I'll have a lot of free time that would otherwise be spend maintaining the look I can use for the other job.

No subsidized housing hurt a bit but all the choices are terrible (Seriously, no option for a normal apartment that isn't a penthouse?) so I figured I'll just requisition something or use my real income to rent something.

>> No.38458383

I think that build is including the four free points you get for that page.

>> No.38458432

Didn't realize you got points for that page. All is well in autismland.

>> No.38458622

Enjoy trying to explain yourself to your friends and parents

>> No.38458642

Just tell them an angel or something came down and said they fucked up the paperwork. That should clear up everything.

>> No.38458659


I figured that part of it would be 'Yeah, people have always thought you female'. If not? I'll chuck new ID onto that for 'Myself but female'.

I mean, new ID gains you points, not loses.

>> No.38458665

never change tg

>> No.38458701

eight sexy waifus - sometimes with associated harems - and faggots in here choose legsharks. This board is gayer than/d/.

>> No.38458750

Except all of the choices are horrible. No, I don't want to become a slave or brutally raped or be with a futa.

>> No.38458768

>Sexy waifus.
>Bitch that treats you worse than a dog.
>Weird slimes.
>Bitch that treats you worse than a dog and expects you to suck dicks.
>Bitches that treat you worse than a dog.
>Bitch that treats you worse than a dog and expects you to suck dicks. Also an alcoholic.
>More bitches that treat you worse than a dog
>Bitches that treat you like a sex slave. To everyone, no choice.
>Bitches that treat you like a domestic servant/sex slave. To everyone, no choice.

No, they're all shit.

>> No.38458775

You forget the important part. Legsharks with frickin laser beams attached to their heads!

>> No.38458818

You know your cyoa is bad when the most appealing option is to suck a girls dick for the rest of your life

>> No.38458866

I'd honestly rather go with the slimes. They're the only ones that seem to actually care about how you feel, even slightly. If Legshark wasn't an option, anyway. Thankfully, Legshark is, and is obviously the best.

>> No.38458934

Feminine +1
Medium +2
Weak +3
None +2/Vagina +2
Erogenous Body +2/Selective Depilation +1

Nudity OK 2-2/Pink/Frilly -1
Sexy Cosplay 1-1
Sex Toys 1-1/BDSM -1
Leashed +1
Restricted Shopping +5

Prostitute -1/Public Use -1
NEET -10
Masked -5
Electronics -2//tg/ -1

Penthouse -5
Feminine +1/Sub +4
Immortality -1

Might as well go whole hog, I'm pretty sure I got the points cost right. Also, writing fluff is effort.

>> No.38459099

i just want to know what the goo girl food is

>> No.38459122

it's goo

>> No.38459170

is it lime goo?

>> No.38459222

Lime is shit tier.

>> No.38459236
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I just realized I actually have a lot more points than I thought I previously had. Let me just fix that.

>Model +2
>Medium +4
>Static Bodytype: Weak +7
>No penis w/ vagina +11
>Selective Depilation +12

>Casualwear +9
>Activitywear +8
>Sexy Cosplay +8

>Accessories +8
>Restricted Shopping +13

>NEET +7
>Only Offer +12

>Electronics +10
>/tg/ +9

>Penthouse +4
>Photo ID +7
>Essay +9
>Essay x2 +11
>New Identity +13

>Immortality +12
>Raise 0 50k +7
>Call me Queen 0

You've put me in quite a bit of a pickle. I've done my best to work with what is provided. Of course I intend to change my identity. Once news gets out that some fat guy transformed into a cute girl over night, any hope of me leading a "normal" life goes out the window. My new name is Samantha Rook, Sam for short. For all the world knows, I'm just some girl who inherited a fortune from a deceased relative and now lives out her days in peaceful quiet. I'm not likely to get bored for a long time with all of these electronics, plus a nearby game club to go to play Pathfinder at. As the years go by my fortune only continues to grow, I'll probably travel the world and see it all has to offer. Once I've seen everything maybe I might just settle down and look for someone to share in my fortune with me. With the points I suddenly had garnered I've elected to take the "Call me Queen" power. I have no intention of abusing such powers but should I ever have to defend myself it's the only thing I've got.

>> No.38459395

them's fightin words

>> No.38459513

>Except all of the choices are horrible
No they're not. Look at Femdom CYOA for an example of that.

>They're all shit
>Most he can say about the slimes is that they're weird
Shit man, they're the best option. You're not treated like dogshit, get to fuck slime girls all day, and become immortal. You won't even be raped if you keep them satisfied. Second best is the vampire if only because you AREN'T treated like a dog but a servant. Which is a hell of a lot better than the other ones.

>> No.38459537

>they're the best option
Legshark is. If we're discounting Legshark, then I agree with you. That doesn't mean they're good, just that they're the best of a bad situation.

>> No.38459562

All the choices are terrible. All.

>You won't even be raped if

>> No.38459589

Compared to the other one of these I saw, I actually like this one. I can understand why people don't like them, but I tend to think of it as a cyoa were you don't choose the best situation, but the worst, except that slime option is completely dope.

I get minor super powers and also get to hang out with some freaky mind melded goo girls. The entire community shall be my waifu.

I also like vampire and to a lesser extent elf, but they kind of cramp my monogamous style. Monster girls aren't too bad and I might be able to Bicentennial Man myself some rights, but it seems like waaay to much work just to get a good owner.

>> No.38459626

>they're the best of a bad situation.
Wow. Now I'm starting to understand those guys who complain about the current /cyoa/ crowd being unable to do just that because they're too spoiled on infinite power and perfect waifus.

Then I guess that means the CYOA just isn't for you.

>> No.38459639

Yeah it kinda loses the point when you add futa into it.

the other options are still iffy without futa, and even the Orcs part isn't any better without it (see: snu-snu)

As for the Kitsune part you can just change "she's a futa" with "she will sexually humiliate you with magic"

I myself would choose goo-girls probably try to convince them to travel with me since they're a hivemind.

>> No.38459643

>Infinite power.
I'm not asking for any power here.

>Perfect waifus.
I don't even want one, but I don't consider a communal organism that makes me eat parts of it, traps me in its cave, and forces me to have sex with it or I'm forcefully abused to be a 'waifu' of any stretch, not even a flawed one.

>> No.38459762

I'm not talking about this case in particular, I was referring to the argument those people made when they complained about stuff like this. Anyway,
>parts of it
Creator still hasn't explained what the goo food things are.
>traps me in its cave
What are you talking about? That section outright says that they invite you in. It's entirely your choice to join them and you are welcomed if you do so. It doesn't say anything about how hostile they'll react to you trying to leave and considering how hospitable they are, I doubt they'd force you to stay.
>forces me to have sex with it or I'm forcefully abused
Are we reading the same thing here? It sounds like you have a grudge against slime girls.

>> No.38459809

I'm pretty sure it's meant to be more good.

You're not allowed to leave, or that's the feeling I get there. Especially with how clingy it gets.

I like slime girls. Not keen on this situation. And yes we're reading the same thing. If you don't have sex with it enough it rapes you. Rape is a kind of sexual abuse.

But good lord do I not care enough right now to argue over minor points, I'm finishing the laundry and going to sleep.

>> No.38459814

It doesn't need to be a garish fantasy, but it does need to have some reason for me to like it, anon.

Fantasizing about shitty situations is pointless. I already have them in real life.

>> No.38459883

>fantasizing about shitty situations

this, you shouldn't have to downgrade period.
fantasy is fantasy, why are you forcing yourself into a nightmare for the heck of it?

of course this still has the whole issue of some people liking some parts of this.

>> No.38459888

wrong. bad. not every cyoa is for everyone and some people love making the best/being the worst or fantazising about bad situations.

this one just ain't for ya friend.

>> No.38459891
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I kinda forgot about the page points, that makes things easier:

>Face: Model (2)
>Breasts: Large (5)
>Bodytype: Agile (5)
>Genitals: No penis, vagina (9)
>Other: Erogenous Body (11), Selective Depilation (12)

>Clothing Page Points (15)
>Clothes[Decent]: Activitywear (14), Frilly (13)
>Clothes[Indecent]: Cosplay (12), Lingerie (11)
>Special Rules: Choice Pleroma (9)

>Jobs Page Points (13)
>Job: Model (10) [$100k/yr]
>Mods: Only Offer (15), Raise (10), Volunteer (15)
>Signing Bonus: Megadosh (5), Electronics (3)

>Housing: Penthouse (-2)
>Hypno-conditioning: Fem (-1)
>Super-powers: Immortality (-2)
>Other: New ID (0), Photo ID (3), Share the gift (0)

So I'm going to be a hot woman, right? I might as well capitalize on it and be a lingerie model. I'd have to make up some new name, I can't be like Ranma Saotome and announce my name to everyone in this new body and expect them not to put two-and-two together. Maybe "Rachael O'hara". That's about as far from my real name as I can get, outside of some ethnic African name. I can quit my boring, mundane, low-paying job and live the good life. See the world, maybe meet a few fanboys?

So impressed are these agencies that they nearly literally just throw money at me. One million bucks up front, and quadruple a starting model's pay? In the first year alone, I'll have $1,200,000 for strutting my stuff. With my immortality, modeling's the only job I'll ever really need.

Best of all, during my off-hours, I just veg out in front of my home entertainment system. Due to celestial metabolism, I never have to worry about dieting or working out. I might have gone on enough about this incredible offer to give somebody else a chance at this kind of life. Maybe you?

>> No.38459899


>> No.38459908

Most people like fantasizing about escaping or working out of bad situations. This one hardly gives you that. Very few people indulge in "THIS SUCKS FOREVER ALWAYS".

>> No.38459966

Wouldn't Volunteer limit your cash somewhat?

Hate to be picky about rules, but figured I'd point it out so you knew.

>> No.38459993

In regards to fantasizing about shitty situations: I don't do that and I don't think anyone should. It's not like I'd dream about how I'd be in agonizing pain after getting my ass torn in two by a futa. But I will weigh my options and see where my priorities lie. Where do yours, anon? This was an easy choice for me because I find the slime option appealing. If I couldn't go for slime, then I would've gone for the vampire, as I'd have immortality and potential vampiric abilities which I'm fine trading some of my freedom for.

>> No.38460046

I did give my answer before. I agree that the slime one is probably the best even though it's very disturbing and unrecognizable as a real life. I would like the kitsune if she wasn't a bitch and didn't have a dick.

Both of those are still equal to the legshark, which is a shit choice in itself. There is no happy ending and no pleasant fantasy in this CYOA.

>> No.38460052

But you get a freakin laser beam on your head.

>> No.38460059

Yes, that's nice as a joke, anon.

>> No.38460082

Then I guess it's a matter of personal taste. I don't mind the slime option just like there are probably people who don't mind taking 30 futa orc dicks up the ass. What WOULD your preferred type of CYOA be?

>> No.38460121

It's not like the slime girls wouldn't fuck you in the ass. They want to "explore" you.

My preferred type of CYOA? I don't know, I like a lot of CYOAs. I think what would improve this one would be if all of the options didn't follow the same theme of slavery and humiliation.

>> No.38460138

i'd be okay with most of the kitsune, but i don't like drunks

>> No.38460160

Lose the dick and the public aspect and I could handle the horny drunk.

>> No.38460187

Yeah, this.

>> No.38460220

Hah, I knew I'd make a mistake somewhere. Let's see... I'll substitute Sub and Sexual Harassment. It fits with the erogenous body.

>> No.38460247

/tg/ why do you like dicks so much?

>> No.38460266

General consensus seems to be against them in this case.

>> No.38460276

/tg/ is /d/lite in a number of cases.

I just want my harpies and lamias.

>> No.38460282

/tg/ = totally gay
/tg/ = /d/lite

>> No.38460293

Do you like fantasy or scifi CYOAs better?

>> No.38460296


>> No.38460314

Yeah but it'd be all soft and slimy and pain-free. I don't wanna have to take a 30cm solid rod of pure raw pain in there.

I'd agree with cutting back on the slavery/humiliation aspects. The main problem seems to lie there. It's not exactly Femdom CYOA level but the options are still extreme enough that people are turned off by them.

>> No.38460349

>It's not exactly Femdom CYOA level
It's not?

>> No.38460358

Probably because these are hardcore futas in this case. The other day had a filename thread and anons were being encouraged to write about a trap healslut having lots of healing sessions with the strong manly barbarian.

>> No.38460368

Traps aint futas, so don't conflate them. Call them similar if you want (I disagree), but they're not the same things. Traps are males, biologically.

>> No.38460397

So are futas.

>> No.38460410

No, they've got got both genitals. Are you that guy that confused them with shemales a few days ago and had like, nobody supporting you?

>> No.38460436

I wouldn't say so. The femdom cyoa involved the girls being interested in some really sadistic stuff. It was more Femdom/Masochist CYOA if anything.

Not saying they are, anon. /tg/'s ranking of "things with dicks that I like" seem to depend on
>how feminine they are
>whether they're submissive or dominant
>how big their dicks are
Thus hyper feminine submissive trap will be a favorite while the masculine dominant futa with the 30cm dick will most likely not.

>> No.38460443


And you didn't actually give a counterargument. If they've got both genitals they still fulfill every male function.

Sure, that would make them female too, but in the end all they are is annoying and disgusting.

>> No.38460445


Please, let him think he's right. That shit took up like half the fucking thread last time.

>> No.38460457

>No, they've got got both genitals
Not that guy, but I thought futa wasn't much of a recognised term outside of porn. So you have shemales and hemaphrodites.

>> No.38460458

It makes em hermaphrodites.

I agree they're disgusting though.

Sorry, this is my last post. I'm going to sleep anyway.

>> No.38460481

Modern only. Fuck you.

>> No.38460495

futanari is a japanese word for hermaphrodite pretty much

>> No.38460511
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>> No.38460516

Waitin on that version 2

>> No.38460530

It's coming man, it's coming. I've done all the bases and most of the baddies but I'm still writing quests. And I just remembered that I wanted to put in modes of transport.

>> No.38460540

I tend to make fantasy CYOAs better than anything else i've made.

>> No.38460642


Too wide, didn't read.

>> No.38460665

You didn't read them!? Anon, don't say things like that, I can't sleep at night for weeks when you do.

>> No.38460667


That fucking slime wrecked me so hard first time I fought it. The solution seems to be spamming mass AoE spells.

>> No.38460671
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>won't even try based paladin CYOA
Well I know which anon is no longer on my christmas list.

>> No.38460791


CYOAs that are too wide are a PITA. Make them narrow or they will be ignored.

>> No.38460803


> Make them narrow

Do you have any idea how old Paladin CYOA is?

>> No.38460817

>CYOAs that are too wide are a PITA
Not really. It's 1-2 more clicks and anyone with half a brain without ADD can handle that.

>Make them narrow or they will be ignored.
You must be new here. This is a factually disproven statement. Old CYOAs that were wide were still popular.

It's not the size that matters, it's what you do with it.

>> No.38460826

These CYOAs are all really old and have seen a lot of responses. The fact that you feel like ignoring them isn't consequential at this point.

Everybody already gets advised to not make CYOAs wider than 1200 to 1600 if they ask, there's nothing more your whining can do.

>> No.38460827


Do I look like I give a shit?


Whatever faggot, I'm telling you straight up that people skip past wide CYOAs. You keep telling yourself I'm wrong, tho.

>> No.38460843


Fuck you kike. I stated my point, take it as a suggestion if you like, suck my cock if you don't.

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>they will be ignored.
Son, I know you're knew but you should probably hold off on ultimatums. Paladin CYOA is, what, a year or two old and one that constantly gets replies.

Did Paladin CYOA kill your parents or something?

>> No.38460849

Judging by the huge amount of responses that they got back when they were newer, you're completely wrong.

>> No.38460852

I'm telling you that what you are saying is wrong based on empirical evidence from past threads.
Your opinion is wrong and you should feel bad.
Stop digging yourself in a hole, child.

>> No.38460855


Nice b8, m8.

>> No.38460860

>whine whine whine


At this point you're just retarded. How many times have you been told that the people who made that aren't here?

>> No.38460872


That's nice, morons.

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>> No.38460892

Ok i'm going to stop responding to you now.

I'm unhooking myself.

>> No.38460896
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Okay babby, I know you're angry that everyone didn't jump up and agree with your opinions, but I think it's time to admit you were just trying to seem smart by saying what you've heard other people say and you botched it.

We were new once (sure, most of us weren't as dickish when we were new) but there's a time to admit you were wrong.

And posting
With your epic meme arrows isn't helping the stench of newness on you dissipate.

>> No.38461070
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I've never seen this posted here but I picked it up on Grognard Booru.

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>> No.38461104

I let go of the hook. Your bait has no longer has power here.

>> No.38461275
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Any special request for the Arena?

>> No.38461283

Remove the gladiators and make it about something that isn't an arena.

>> No.38461296

...red isn't fire? Blue isn't water? I'M SO CONFUSED

>> No.38461349

Yeah, I think the colours need shifted one to the left.

>> No.38461421

Nah bby its looking good

>> No.38461431

"combat" is an odd skill to have seperate from ranged, defense, etc

>> No.38461454

Combat = Melee (Unarmed too)
Ranged = Bows, Crossbows, Slings
Defense = Your defensive attitude in general

i should rename it to melee maybe.


I don't think I can do that, sorry :(

>> No.38461472

You can, you just don't want to.

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>> No.38461831

Personally I'd make earth yellow, fire red, green air and blue water but that's the eastern idea of green colors being associated with wind or air affecting my view of it.

>> No.38461951

yeah that bugged me too

>> No.38461967
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Ayy lmao

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Someone should combine this cyoa with domain master, paladin and fallen paladin cyoas for a fun time

>> No.38461996
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>> No.38461997

I'm looking forward to seeing your work, anon.

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>> No.38462030

Then it wouldn't be Arena anymore
whats the point

>> No.38462044

That's the point.

>> No.38462088

What, you don't want an Arena CYOA? Why?

>> No.38462108

You expect absolutely everyone to want it?

>> No.38462150

No. However, when someone is asking how they can improve their work, it's impolite to tell them to discard it and work on something else.

>> No.38462174


>> No.38462190

I tend to prefer magic when I can get ahold of it, but I always like to see off the wall magic types that aren't typical. I saw the version you already did, and liked it, but I'd love to see some strange magic forms available, but that's just me. Not even a thing if it's not there.

I really like being able to go into detail on how I build a character though, it's why I like Stardust, you can build your character and ship, the ship especially you can customize to an idiotic degree. Being able to do something like that with your Gladiator and their Weapons/Armor and team would be really awesome.

>> No.38462313

Tfw no oc

>> No.38462349

The OP post was OC. That femdom waifu CYOA one was OC.
go home spongebob

>> No.38462395

Tfw no oc I like

>> No.38462444

Maybe you should m a k e s o m e, h m m?

>> No.38462505

More items would be awesome (special arrows?). I think a basic, medium quality weapon and armor should be given for free as well - you can spend a point to make it high quality.

Perhaps completing the special challenges gives you a title or extra fame.

Keep up the good work.

>> No.38462543

>choosing NEET+raise
Pick one of the 1-point options, volunteer and only offer, then MegaDosh x 2, and quit day one. If you can't make more than $50K/yr by passively investing $10M, you're doing it wrong.

>> No.38462597

Eh, water and air kinda makes sense. There's a lot of green water around, but not a lot of green sky. Fire and earth is weird, but I guess it also works - outside of beaches there's much more red earth than yellow, and yellow fire is hotter than red.

>> No.38462617

Fire should be blue. Blue fire is hotter than yellow.

>> No.38462682

Only whiny faggits make cyoas...

I am a true anon.

>> No.38462695

Yeah, but it's very rare to see a natural fire hit blue, and this is a Druid's orb. Also, what would air be in that case? Air's blue, so fire's gotta pick something else.

>> No.38462704

Air is green.

>> No.38462741

NEET + Volunteer + Only Offer seems too good.

>> No.38462795

How so? Volunteer means you're not going to get paid at all. Food, health care, and a uniform - and that's it. Forever.

>> No.38462806

You ever see a green sky? Ever?

>> No.38462829

Yes. The sky can be any color, just like fire. Actually now that I think about it, all four elements can be any color by the standards we've been going by until now (algae in the water = water is green).

>> No.38463151


>> No.38463647
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So is this ever going to get that promised update or not?

>> No.38463714
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So is this ever going to get that promised update or not?

>> No.38463755 [SPOILER] 
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It's a little late, but here's the mystery box.

>> No.38463778

Reading between the lines, it seems SDA has just had enough with Stardust. He's updated Battlemage and made a couple of photoshop guides since he promised to update stardust.
Which is fine, because 1.02 is the best version.

>> No.38463784
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So is this ever going to get that promised update or not?

>> No.38463905

We do not need this new meme.

>> No.38463922

All memes are old.

>> No.38463935

You're old.

>> No.38463956

Not really.

>> No.38463966

SDA's version of this would've been cooler. Level designer with a sense of theme and the idea that your defeat, like any villain in fantasy or vidya, was inevitable.

Instead we got Overlord + power wank to the max.

>> No.38464052
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So is this ever going to get that promised update or not?

>> No.38464308

>Add "Idol" job
>NEET bad

Are there any other suggestions for >>38451946 ?

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Thats been updated for a while man

>> No.38464329
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>> No.38464386
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>> No.38464406

jesus do you guys not have the current version? everytime i come to a cyoa thread someone posts the beta version.

>> No.38464475

>> No.38464492

This was not SDA's. It isn't an update, it's a spinoff.

>> No.38464527

its still good

>> No.38464529

Something like this?
>You're a paladin, do paladin cyoa. Then you fall, do fallen paladin. After that, do Overlord. Next, you're a domain master, so do that one.
What are some other CYOAs with this style? Arch-demon and Empress? Any others? Those two could be slotted in between fallen paladin and domain master if we're going whole hog with it.

Also, does anyone have the Fallen Paladin one? I can't seem to find it in my folder.

>> No.38464544

People think NEET is bad? Because I certainly have no quarrel with getting 50k a year for doing nothing

>> No.38464558

I disagree, so I suppose we will just have to glare at each other silently until you give up.

>> No.38464578
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>Xin Li
China =/= Japan.

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>> No.38464593

there's a land called Fareast and it's china+japan and there they train samurai and have names similar to china =)

don't post this, i'm updating it at the moment

>> No.38464608

Start with: 0
Face: Model +2(2)
Breasts: Large +3(5)
Body: Plastic(Feminine) +1(6)
Junk: No Penis+NON-FERTILE vagina +4(10)
Other: Selective Depilation+Achillies Hypertension +4(14)
Decent: Suit -3+2(13)
Indecent: Lingerie(13)
Add-Ons: Jewelery (13)
Punishment: Corset +2(15)
Special Rules: N/A
Vanilla Jobs: Model[*2 Salary at 200k] -3{+4}(16)
Lewd Job: N/A
Other Jobs: N/A
Mods: Only Offer, Raise[200k Salary], Sexual Harassment +3(19)
Signing Bonus:/tg/{-1}, Tuition -2(17)
Housing: Vac-Bed -1(16)
Conditioning: Femme +1(17), Student-2(15), Kong-Fu -5(10)
Superpowers: Call me Queen -7(3), Shapeshifting -5(-2), Immortality -1(-3)
Companions: Hentai +3(0)

>> No.38464622

maybe this one? >>38461620 >>38461629

>> No.38464630

Post it. I want to see.

>> No.38464634
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That said the beta version is three pages of five. I'm not even sure how complete those beta pages are but the missing two pages make it pretty hard to play it at all.

I'd rather people give us nothing than an incomplete something. Picture related.

>> No.38464648

Can I suggest you give out more points? I mean, jesus, 15 seems so little when there's so much cool stuff to buy.

>> No.38464689


Could work, but the more 'classes' you stick in the weirder it gets.

>> No.38464728

I'm making character creation the focus, don't worry. That was my first CYOA to be honest, and it all started for fun "describing gladiators". Gimme some days and I'll post the full 2.0

>> No.38464919
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Something like this?

>> No.38464933

Yeah, that looks like it works out.

>> No.38464992
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>Top tiers are good/lawful=Magical Realm and Evil/chaotic=Domain Master
>Magical Realm can make you way more powerful
>Good/Lawful is superior
I always knew it, yet now there is proof.

>> No.38465035

>design supermagical angel for fantasy cyoa
>go full fighter mode for paladin
>choose beastmaster, get dragon
>design a cool empire
>make it the size of jupiter and everyone is a hot wizard with magical realm

>> No.38465057

Where does Necromancer CYOA fit into this?

>> No.38465060

That's pretty cool, will try.

>> No.38465079

What power level is it, and does it assume evil?

>> No.38465128

>Doesn't know about NCYOA
You lucky dog, wish I could approach it as a newfriend again. It's getting an update soon, my erection threatens to escape and take control every time I think about it.

>> No.38465209

So domain master is straight evil if you choose archdemon and just chaotic if you choose overlord?

>> No.38465229

Alright, I have most of these uploaded. I'll have a look for magical realm and archdemon as well.


>> No.38465306

>magical realm
Why would you add that to anything?

>> No.38465339

Some people like things you don't. Surprising, I know.

>> No.38465465
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>inb4 you ascend to godhood from domain master evil or chaos

>> No.38465932

But there is only one build. Pick the ascendancy stuff and then make your own reality.
Even ignoring that, there is no chance of failure because nothing can threaten your realm. Unless, you intentionally make it and yourself weak. Don't know what you would with all the points though.

>> No.38465952

Sometimes people make builds for fun instead of just trying to make the most overpowered one.

>> No.38466195

>But there is only one build. Pick the ascendancy stuff
I've done multiple builds, and don't even remember taking ascendancy.

It sounds to me like you're a victim of powergaming.

>> No.38466274

The premise is that you are being given something. One of the things on offer is the ability to get more of the same by yourself.
Why wouldn't you take it?
Maybe if points were scarce.

>> No.38466294

Because you want other things more or it doesn't fit your vision.

>> No.38466318

Because I'm focusing on creating something fun? You're claiming that there's only one build, to which I replied that there is if the only thing you're interested in is being the most powerful.

>> No.38466352

You think this is a game?

>> No.38466384


>> No.38466417
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>He can't have fun
Take a look at this man. Take a look at this man, and laugh.

>> No.38466823

>No Pinochet option
You forgot to add the best option to your CYOA

>> No.38466862

It seems a lot of people just flat out convert to female for the points...

>> No.38466892
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Think its 2 different people, and no, I don't think so

>> No.38466912

Well, look, when the celestial bureaucracy tells me I'm supposed to be female, who am I to argue? Plus from their perspective it only makes sense to give you incentives for fixing reality.

>> No.38466936

Most recent version of Battlemage? I have 0.5.2.

>> No.38466970

What was it?

>> No.38466996

Wait, nevermind.

>> No.38467012

Can't complain - it's what I do as well. My build looks a lot like
Just seems a bit cheesy, is all.

>> No.38467015

So? They want points, let them have them. Isn't being female pretty much the point of the CYOA?

>> No.38467900

Not him but then what's the point of having the male options in the first place?

>> No.38467957

Model [+2]
Large [+3]

Feminine [+1]
Weak [+3]

None [+2]
Vagina [+2]
Erogenous Body [+2]
Selective Depilation [+1]

Activitywear [-1]
Pink/Frilly [-1]

Lingerie [-1]

Jewelry [-1]
Corset [+2]

Model [-3]
Only Offer [+5]
Raise [-5]

Girly Apartment [-3]

Call Me Queen [-7]
Shapeshifting [-5]

How does Raise work with other bonuses? Does my model job pay 200k or 150k?

>> No.38467995

For people who want to fight their destiny.

>> No.38468011

Three reasons I can think of:
1: If it doesn't include them, it is necessary to make it clearer that you can't just not select an option and default to that.
2: Because if you don't have the option to get/keep it, you're not giving it up.
3: Legacy mechanic

>> No.38468043

I don't recognize the Ranger CYOA

>> No.38468320
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Here ya go

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>> No.38468414

If Envy has no way of stealing powers from other Chosen, aren't they limited to peek human in everything at best, since nobdoy beyond them can get better? Which is neat if you're just a regular human, but when you're competing with a bunch of people who have at least one, sometimes several, superhuman abilities or powers with combat applications, aren't you pretty fucked? Like if Wrath starts throwing buildings around there's not a lot you can do to survive.

>> No.38468542

New thread: >>38468534

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